A second chance ****season two****

where is it na

Waow..waiting o

Secönd chance season 2 z here guys . General Register; @Tenniebenson @Khola46 @Wiseman @Ibrams @Pizzaro @Swtharyomi @Wyse-one @Eddy @Delight @Pweety @Mray @Jummybabe @Babe4biola @Sofia @Ritagold @Kuks @Originalannchilexdel @Fridex @Frank @Frankkay @Simzy @Pheranmmie041 @Temmyjoy @Chriswayne @Evanz @Itzshaxee @Mecuze @Skookum @Kingson1 @Donmikie @Kingsbest @T-Dak @Charlywizzy @Charliebryn @Hardeywummy @Japhola @Konphido @Emmyrexx @Adura @Tholartee @Nextangel @Blessedgirl @Ebube @Jenifa @Jclash @Taiwo @Chomyline @Lawman @Tinagabe @Christiana @Itmrabzeez @Johnoscar @Precy @Timmy @Dabcy @Ikeholuwa1 @Besty @Starlet @Okklad @Angeleniola @Ewomazeal @Mizleemah @Blessfelicity222 @Anitcham @Stephanie @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Rhennyjay @Geeadore @Tiffany1 @Tonia @Hameyeenat @Inemlove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @Vibratingwind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Maurice @Jummy @Thankmic @Christopher @Anita @Phinebraim @Kedike @Kemkit @Gracy @Saintkenz @December12 @Promise @Sylvia @Bsam @Portable @Steph @Aarti @Olaking3 @Harddy @Blakstudd @Prince @Invincible @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Sandy @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @Sexynikky1994 @Youngestprince @Davick @Semilore @Oyindamola @Dhemilade1 @Mature @Pearl @Roes @Franklin @Kolababs @Hollar @Smilie @Borwerleh @Iksqueency @Loveth @Funmilayo1 @Okklad @Nizzy @Flames @Vict-Vames @Peace @Sirp081 @Kristen @Kingsengine @Aaron @Tony @Ruth @Romancelord @Itzshaxee @Olamy4fun @Abrahamdking @Flamerouz @Crusher @Stanny39 @John @Softtouch @Onahsunday631 @Jeddy @Sonshine @Sirgentle @Vizkid @Hoelhay @Pharm-vickymears @Teesolid @Omoyemmy @Olarach @Daxking @Krizzy @Softie @Holarbordah @Ele @Firstladyontop @Obaby @Sergentmax @Mhizdaofot @Ariketemmy @Saraya @Eminem @Laurasteve299 @vickyola @unyo1 @ofandave007 @Nkluv @cynthia20 @pricelessangel @Gambola @Monadisu @Dazzlingangel @Donyas @C-Roderick @Cookey @Isabella1 @Chisomsophia @Mrfabulous @Henry @Mhizzthessy @Millz @Bishops10 @Kreepyink @Olaniyiadeshina @Gracedkyenny @Hardeyhorlar9 @Holaryinkhar @Inemeka @Abevica @Individual @Olami @Beryl @Youngfellow @Humblelion @Natasha9976 @Hartuny @Emergencia @Paula4eva @GiftGodiva @Divatimmy @Finestberyl @Sapiens @Ahmad @Ele1 @Ferdinard @Festoza006 @Sharpzender @Uncleba426 @Paje @Jenny123 @Pemamezi @Detector @Pweetyfizzy @Willingyung @Napster @Greg-billz @Valentinelv @Hayanfeoluwa @Teju1 @Dgreat @Prestigiousfirstlady @Petersandra121 @Jenny1 @Bryten50 @Fallancy @Rosey @Jimmyjab @Oluwanifemi @Arosunshine @Heartbrokekid @Thosiano @Peterox @Iamsmv @Adegunle3gmail-com @Sparkling-2 @Hoyenikky @Maurice @Lizzytee @Zephyr @Mhizterdimex @Ladywen @Holarmidey @Scriptures @Lollycobra @Hardey1292 @Adeblow23 @Slimolayinkastar @Damzybabe @Adeshewa @Softel @Nifemi @Abradek @Beauty74 @Cizzle @Omolarami @Nazysophy1 @Yemitefestus @Omoniyiola @Inifek @Coolbaby @Nheemot @Deejaygrin @Hitiswell @Fynboy @Sirmike @Aminzy @Vicoch @Sunnyklin20Yahoo-com @Psam @Oshio @Shikoleen @Queencoded @Kimmy @Ifeoma1 @Nobleay @Felixharuna11 @Ibktemi99 @Hayzedefoe @Chidex14 @Classy @Omodemilade59 @Rufus @Ladygrasha @Ennylincoln @Kingz1 @Starlord1 @Noskid @Kodedreal @Petermikel @Frankymario @Olatunjitobi @Pweetylizzyqueen @Olutcoded @Sayrah @Tomtim @Missdammy @Latienco @Bimrach @Mubarak @Mubavak @Adeolaajala1234 @Olalekana69 @Dbest @Skulboy @Beautyqueen @Naomacjoyous @Onyinyessica @Drumsaint @Debbi2nice @Jamesgentility @Megatron @Okiripoto02gmail-com @Rahzycute1 @Hangellah46 @Deltavictory @Kay2ty7 @Praisee @Josephjuliet @Xtopher @Richymore @Temmy744 @Mrmorie @Abosmart @Adfaustina595gmail-com @Adetolaadejoke @Whizjay @Anthcunny @Freeday @Ninny @Abasienyene @Henryjay @Horgzy @Abosmart @Omodemilade59 @Judith @Mercykris @Superstar4real @Sanctus4real @Bolaji2308 @Damzybabe @Profeze1 @Horlarjuwhon @Illusion002 @Royzeray @Oluwatosin @Chinenye5404 @Dharmex @Inifek @Pattiejoe7gmail-com @Opinxymenumento @Bobbidi-boo @Gooddysmart3 @Elijezy @Drumsaint @Oshio @Musterfi @Khaleedwr @Addieola @Chinedueze @Praise22 @Mdsodeeq @Sirjerro @Masterbill @Emileagosu @Kabazi95 @Daintyshewa @Klaussimbo @Peoray @Samnolimit @Babswalexyttyahoo-com @Shania55 @Conspirancy @Chinyenorah @Pharouq00 @Saraya @Blazeb @Virtuous @Amibabe @Mrsolace @Ennyshow @Haryormidey @Mzz_teddy @Daddyd @Cassiewells @Omoshalewa @Nheemot @Rukibaby19 @Abbeygirl25 @Serikibazooka1 @Samnolimit @Ugochisunday @Yusfaty @Muffybaba @Micheal1 @Judiee @Certifiedjx @Wumyte @Jokqees @Coolbaby @Victoriouschild @Temmyluv @Oyefestus @Xtremexamxong @Gamanuel @bidex @bright @sommyangel @amazingbaby @deweny @everybody come o

I am here

Episode one. Maria had been battling with her conscience after last night's episode with her father. She was confused now, she wasnt even sure she was doing the right thing. She wanted her father to be happy but she didnt want to believe that only a woman can give him the happiness he deserves because of thats it, then he would never be happy. Yes, even if heaven falls, she would never accept Alice or any other goddamn woman from hell. She wanted to be the only female in her father's life. She wanted her father to look up to her for everything not some other woman. She wanted her father to derive happiness from her, only her and no one else and it hurt her when her father had said last night, that only she cant give him the complete happiness he deserves. How pathetic! He has to live with sorrow then because over her dead body would she allow him date someone else never! ****** Before Alice could say something else, Tony turned to leave. He wanted to leave before he cries before a woman who doesnt care for him or love him one bit. Alice wanted to run after him but for no just reason, she refused to move an inch. Gilbert was standing there with an evil smirk on his face. With what just happened, he doubted Tony would ever forgive Alice. Because what just happened was self explanatory, Tony had caught them kissing and good thing she responded intimately to it. And then all the lies he told, she wasnt fast enough in denying them, there was no way, no way in the world Tony was even going to give her a listening ear not to talk of forgiving her. He was happy now. Yes! It might take years but true love will always win. 'you've succeded,' Alice said in a teary voice 'please leave now before i do something we will both regret. You've succeeded in lying to Tony. Making it look like i'm a bad person. Like i'm a whore, a double dating bitch!' 'if he truly loves you, then he wont want to think of you as such' Gilbert said.

nxt plz

Can I hav de link 4 season1

dgagagahaga me na me second chance n waitin for more

Following Thanks for the i.v @onahsunday631

am here now @aarti jump to episode 2 :) I heared u are waiting for me Gilbert Lucifer have finnaly confused tony nd maria winch is dere with her wahala nt giving up nawao for u Alice abi dem dey follow u from villa ni :)

Ok

Woaw! This would be a bomb, bring it on dear @aarti erm.,season 1? Click [url =https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/a-second-chance][b]here[/b][/url]

Hmmm ok ooo ride on

Please add me 2 ur list @onahsunday631 .wat is even wrong with dis maria

Thanks for providing the link @invincible. @md_collins, the link has been provided already

Episode 2. 'just leave please,' she was crying now 'just go please. I need to be alone' she said and slammed the door on his face. **** Tears were streaming down his eyes as he drove to nowhere in particular. He tried to be a man and not shed a tear but it was so painful. He was more hurt than he felt when he caught Stella in bed with another man. He never realised he loved Alice this much until now. He really wanted to go back, go on his knees and beg Alice to come back to him but it was too late. To think she was just with him for his money. Perhaps Maria was right for hating her. Oh! Maria. How was he going to explain these things to her now. To also think that he almost choose another woman over his own precious daughter who wanted nothing but protect him. Perhaps her instincts had told her from the very first time she set her eyes on Alice that she was a harlot who only moved around with men for what they have. He should have listened to Maria. The little girl only wanted to protect him and there he was hating her for nothing! Now he has learned his lesson. Never in his life would he choose anyone and he meant anybody over his precious daughter for she was the only one that truly loved him sincerely. He remembered how badly he had treated Maria for nothing! Denied her heart desires, physically and emotionally molested her, he felt guilty, very guilty. The first thing he was going to do once he got to work on monday was get his secretary type Alice's sack later. Yes, enough was enough. Alice had done alot, cause bad blood between father and daughter. He was regretting it now, how was he going to apologise to Maria now? How was he gonna get his loving daughter back? Could they ever go back to before? When they had the best of relationships? Could they? Could Maria ever forgive him? He wished and wished. The first thing he was going to do once he got home was apologise to Maria and take her out for shopping or whatever that would make her happy. He remembered Maria loved chocolates very well so he branched the nearest supermarket to get her some. He was going to make sure he got his daughter back! No matter what! Alice has caused enought damage to his heart and to his relationship with his daughter. Operation-get-his-loving-daughter-back...... To be cont

seriously u are a disgrace to yourself alice I can't believe u can't defend yourself actually u mum is right u deserve to be happy

u don't deserve to be happy rather @alice

Hanhan @jummybabe, thats too harsh nau. Assuming this is my true life story, na so you for take make me cry? Anyways, thanks for reading

Mr tony are u inlove with alice at all? Can't u even fight for her? Go marry ur daughter na... @victoriouschild @frankkay pls add @reyhanat in ur reg list.

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@onahsunday631 you wont blame Tony na. He saw everything. She kissed Gilbert and even when Gilbert lied against her, she couldnt defend herself, it was partly her fault. If you were in Tony's shoes, what will you do?

@aarti if i am in tony shoe it will definitely hurt me bt not to regret ever aving her as my girlfriend..bc tony z now in maria side..b4 loving someone trust must be there....he knws hw much she hate that gilbert of a guy..y wont he ave a second thought b4 concluding?

Mr. Tony, do whatever you like.

I will do more than whatever Tony is planning if I find myself in DAT condition.

Tony you shouldn't have just put into conclusion like that without hearing Alice out and you Alice I wonder why you couldn't even defend yourself

@onahsunday631 tanks bro for dey beep I will add her well for tony I will nt blame him much bcos of what he saw nd heard but he was too fast to conclude dats dey only mistake he made nd am blaming him for DAT Alice u see what u have coursed ur self otondo :)

@aarti actually I don't mean it dat way but dere are some situation calmness can't solve u just have to act to achieve it

I understand @jummybabe, dont mind me, just kidding

nawa Alice cant u defend urself... i dnt blame tony cos d silent of Alice shows dat Gilbert z sayin d truth...

at times our emotions seems to get the best of us. before we do the [b]right[/b] thing we've been controlled by what we feel. I don't really blame Tony for acting that way. And for Alice, the shock was too much for her to start explaining anything to Tony and even if she had, he wouldn't have believed her cuz he's still very much angry with her. So they'll settle when he has calmed down and is willing to listen to her....

nice story @aarti welldone. @invincible pls where's ur twin @individual

@ewomazeal lol.... he's always around but hardly comment on posts

pls add me too

@invincible alright, just let him know I did ask of him......who knows if he's even reading this?

Let's ride on

Next.

@ewomazeal i'd do just that :)

thanks @invincible

i DoN enter oooooooo with true love there is nothing that can separate it

hummm

I don't blame Tony he av the right to be angry, at least he saw Alice responding back to the kiss. @ Alice don't worry he will come to you.

Hmm... Viz is getting more complicated.. First it was Nneka, followed by Maria, and now Maria's case is still yet to be resolved, Gilbert strikes tearing every where down. I mean why wont viz people allow these quyzz to rest?. mehn! They have really given me serious reasons to doubt if Tony and Alice will work out oo... Still observing sha.. . . Nice story @Aarti. Following!

U r a big fool @Gilbert

Hello sweet aarti..update na @aarti

@wunmi sure @onahsunday631 @Victoriouschild pls add @wunmi in ur list @aarti were are u nah is three days now since u update :) :)

Ok boss @frankkay

Who is at fault now...?

so what happened next

Episode three. For the first time in three months, Maria had a long, happy chat with her dad. It was very nice. Her dad had apologised to her, gave her chocolates and even offered to take her out for shopping on Saturday. Gilbert had called her earlier and briefd her about what happened at Alice's place. 'i'm sure they will never get back. I clearly saw the look of hurt in you father's eyes' he had said. It was nice and she was so happy. When Tony came back, she knew that they would be happier without any woman in their lives. She thanked Gilbert alot over the phone and even promised to come to his apartment and probably make up with Abby. However, her dad didnt tell her anything, he just said he and Alice were over, not knowing she already knew the full story. ***** Alice felt like dying, she just felt like commiting suicide. Nothing was working out for her at all. She lost Benjamin and now she was losing Tony, and the similar thing was she both carried their babies after losing them. Then she remembered her mother and how she had made her go through hell. She never knew a mother could be so heartless to her own very daughter. The house became unbearable for her now and she thought of moving back to the apartment she was staying before, the one Benjamin had bought for her before he died, but she was scared of going there. It would bring back memories from before. And she missed Tony. She really missed him badly and she kinda missed Maria as well, and her troubles She knew she was wrong in alot of things but she couldnt believe that Tony couldnt even bother to hear her own side of the story. He hadnt even visited again since two weeks now. She didnt bother going back to the office because she knew she had already been sacked, there was no point going there. But she had half expected him to at least, visit her once to get a more detailed explanation. And she hadnt seen Gilbert again, that monster! She was gonna kill him if ever she sets her eyes on him. And another strange thing, she hadnt even seen Amy! Amy wasnt picking her calls or even returning her calls. It was just that she didnt feel like leaving the house else she would have visited her. Immediately thoughts of Amy entered her head, she thought of visiting her. She needed someone to share her problems with and someone to stay with or spend some time with to be able to be free from her devil of a mother. She was going to visit Amy first, confirm that everything was okay before returning to pack her luggage. ***** Alice knocked twice and Amy opened the door. The smile on Amy's face disappeared immediately she saw Alice. 'what are you doing here? You traitor' Alice was taken aback for a moment. A traitor? 'i asked a question, what the hell are you doing here you two timing bitch!' Amy said when Alice didnt answer. 'me? Amy, are you talking to me?' Alice asked, perplexed. 'no, i'm talking to the baby strapped at your back,' Amy replied sarcastically 'i dont understand' 'why would you understand? Eh, answer me why would you understand when all you know is go around snatching people's fiance. Na only that one na you sabi' Alice opened her mouth to speak but no words came out. 'so, you even have a thing for Gilbert, thats why you were telling me to leave him and go for Kelvin abi?' 'excuse me?' 'oh, you are well excused. You are dating Tony and you still want to date my boo too abi? Na only you like better thing?' 'Amy, do we....do we have a problem?' 'big problem oo. Better one. Because right now, you are gonna explain something to me. Just wait here and dont even think of coming in' Amy said and went inside. Not too long, she came out with a picture and handed it to Alice. 'can you please explain this?' Amy asked. Alice peered at the picture! It was she and Gilbert kissing. She coughed. 'Amy, what is this?' Amy clapped her hands 'see question. No be you be that? Just look at the way you were kissing another woman's property. You see your life? Shameless harlot. No wonder you mother hates you, you are a disgrace' Alice felt like dying now 'it was Gilbert who kissed me first' Amy laughed 'liar! It was Gilbert who gave me this picture. He said you were the one who kissed him first, by force sef. If he is the one who kissed you first, why then will he hand me this picture. You no see your life, you no even sabi lie. Now leave my house before i do something we will both regret in heaven' 'Amy, i......' 'abeg comot for here jor! Ashawo kobo kobo'

hmmm tym will tell

dis is so bad

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@jummybabe tanks for dey tag Gilbert devil u will surely regret this :(

smh.....soon things will take the other turn

Hmmmm..alice u ave to be ströng..u are better without Amy,u just ave to visit tony

Episode 4. 'Rhoda,i want you to prepare a special meal for dinner tonight' Maria said as she handed her schoolbag to Rhoda. 'okay' Rhoda replied. Maria smiled 'i have something for you Rhoda, come on, lets go to my room' Maria and Rhoda went into the room. Maria opened her wardrobe qnd brought out a shopping bag and gave it to Rhoda. 'thank you Maria' Rhoda said, all smiles. 'you are welcome. Its just a little token for taking good care of me all this while,' she hugged her 'i love you Rhoda. You are like a sister i never had' Rhoda smiled and left. Maria was a good girl, she knew that. Just that sometimes, some nuts get loose in her head. Some times, she would be so selfish and annoying she would feel like strangling her to death. But Maria was nice really, for a spoilt brat like her ******** With tears in her eyes, Alice alighted from the bike, paid the bikeman without bothering for her change. She got to the front of Gilbert's apartment, then stopped. After a few seconds, she knocked heavily on the door as if she wanted to bring it down. A young girl, dressed in a school uniform, Maria's school, opened the door. She would have that Gilbert dated small girls as well if the girl didnt bear a resemblance. The girl had a frown on her face. 'who are you?' she asked in a not-too polite manner, maybe still angry with the way Alice knocked. 'i'm looking for.....' she wanted to say that bastard but she changed her mind 'Gilbert' The girl eyed her maliciously and Alice wondered what was wrong with children of nowadays, no respect in their generation anymore. 'who are you to him?' she asked. 'hey hey, dont ask me that. Just go and call him, whoever he may be to you' Alice replied angrily. 'and who are you to talk to me like that eh? I see you are jobless, first you wanted to bring down this door and now you think you can order me around? Hahahaha, you lie' Abby snapped and hissed. Alice eyed the girl and just hissed. God knows one more word from the girl might end her in the hospital, she was going to make sure of that. It seems like she should just go back to her crazy self. If only she had been crazy like before, Maria would not have been able to count how many times she had ended up in the hospital, coupled with the fact that she loved Maria......and of course Tony. 'just call Gilbert for me' she said. The girl hissed 'oya wait. Let me call him for you' as the girl closed the door, she thought she heard the girl mutter 'ashawo' Alice ignored her. But heaven and hell knew that she will end it all today. Its either she dies or Gilbert dies, one must happen today. She touched her stomach and prayed the baby remained safe, for the action that was going to happen. She opened her purse, and looked at the 9mm there and smiled inwardly, though she still had tears....

thanks for the update dear

Everything is falling like a pack of card. Let's c who will laff last.

So sorry for you Alice but you were the one that brought all these on yourself when you responded to Gilbert's kiss

Serves u right

time for action :) Alice is now u wake up abi mitcheew.... :(

Eii is she going to kill Gilbert

oooh Alice Gilbert is a devil I say...

Hmmm

Alice Stil Av A Long Way 2 Go

Alice i really do pity u

Y is alice d only 1 suffering

Gilbert have toyed with u for long... it's time to show him ur crazy side.

Wetin i see 9mm... Alice see you see jail.

9mm.... Alice is ready for action..... Jail will be your next destination after the action

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Episode 5. 'wow, wow, wow' Gilbert said on opening the door. Smiling like a dog 'look who we have here' Alice opened her purse and brought out the gun. If Gilbert was shocked or not, he didnt show it. He just raised his hands and moved back slowly till he was inside the house and Alice went in, shutting the door behind her. 'my God!' Abby exclaimed on seeing the gun. 'calm down Abby and just go inside' Gilbert said without taking his eyes off Alice for a moment. Abby ran inside. 'Alice, what do you want?' Gilbert asked. 'you head' Alice replied coldly. Gilbert laughed, his hands still up 'i'm sorry. Thats quite impossible' 'i'm going to kill you Gilbert! I must! I must. I've heard enough and if care is not taken, i'm gonna kill you little girlfriend as well' 'my girlfriend?' Gilbert was confused 'you mean Amy?' 'oh sharrap! You squeaky little rabbit. Dont play dumb with me. I mean the one in your bedroom undressing for a nice hot session,' she laughed bitterly 'Amy tells me you are good in bed. How true is that you bastard?' 'first things first, Abby is not my girlfriend. She is my niece. And secondly, do you want to go to bed with me? I might be better than Tony, you know. Money cant buy all things' Gilbert said and laughed again. 'i love Tony, Gilbert' 'why are you telling me that? Do i care?' 'and i just lost him. Because of you' 'well thats not my fault because he doesnt love you the way i love you' Gilbert brought his hands down 'please Alice, why cant you listen to me? I love you. I love you more than anyone loved you, loves you and will ever love you' 'shut up' 'you are my life Alice. The love i have for you is evergreen. Havent you noticed that most times i just walk away and stay away for sometime? Do you think i like what i'm doing right now? Do you think i like the fact that i'm ruining your happiness? Most times, i try to let you live your life but its very impossible because i just cant live without you. After Benjamin's death, i stayed away for six years. I almost died because i couldnt get you out of my head. I left because i wanted you to be happy. Wanted you to live your life and marry a better man but hell, thoughts of you never disappeared. I left again. For two months, in order to forget you but no. Alice, have you ever been involved in a one-sided love? How would you feel if your Tony wasnt in love with you but with someone else huh?' Alice couldnt say anything but she was thinking, if Tony didnt love her but loved someone else, what would she do? How would she feel? She lowered the gun. 'will you be able to live without Tony?' 'no' she answered. 'thats how i cant live without you'

Alice is now confused ooooooo.... this guy knows how to play his cards well

Tight situation

Episode 6. 'believe me Alice, i love you. If i am a monster today, its because of the kind of love i have for you' Gilbert said and before Alice could blink, he was on his knees and that was when Alice noticed the tears in his eyes. 'Gilbert, what.....' He grabbed her legs and she started hearing sobs from him. Mehn! This guy was crying? Like seriously. 'Alice, please accept me. I swear i can make you happy more than any other man in this world would. I may not be as rich as Tony Brown but i know that......' 'stop it Gilbert, stop it!' Alice cut in angrily 'what are you trying to say? That i dated Tony for his money? Huh?? Is that what you are trying to say?' Gilbert raised his tear stained face. 'i'm so sorry. I didnt mean it that way. I never said you dated him because of his money but hey, i love you more and if only you could give me just half of the love you have for him. I will make you the happiest woman on earth' Alice hissed. Though she felt sorry for him but that was not the reason she was here. She came to end everything once and for all. Tell him, she doesnt love him and make him stay away. But on a second note. She remembered she had told him that a million times and that hasnt made him stay away. 'Gilbert,' she pushed him away and sat on a sofa 'i will say this again. I dont love you. I. DONT. LOVE. YOU. I really dont want to say this again. Let me be. You will find a woman who would love you for who you are. You are not getting any younger Gilbert so stop chasing shadows. I beg of you please,' she stood up 'really. I came to shoot you. Yes i wanted to kill you so badly i stole my late father's gun. I wanted to shoot you and shoot my self but your emotional display saved you' she tucked the gun in her jeans 'and saved me too' She walked to the door, determined to leave but seeing Gilbert in that condition, she couldnt. She felt sorry for him and she kinda understood his plight. How it would pain her if someone she loves loves another. But she couldnt bring herself to love him. She was in love with Tony. Tony and no one else. She hoped he got the message when she told him he didnt love her. She wanted to hope his episode was over. She really hoped so. Now, more than ever she wanted to see Tony. Explain everything and make up with him. She wanted to know that Gilbert was out of the way. So she could concentrate more on Maria. Though she knew Maria was going to be a hard nut to crack. But she was determined to try. She realised the mistake she made two weeks when she broke up with Tony. She wanted to do it for him and his daughter. She thought it was an act of bravery and that God would reward her for saving a father and daughter relationship but now she knew she was wrong. She couldnt fight for their love. She couldnt stand the war. She left him shattered and she knew it. She realised she was only thinking of herself, not thinking about how he would feel. 'Gilbert,' she called softly still standing at the door 'i'm sorry if i've hurt you one way or the other but i dont love you. I hope you can understand that. We can be best of friends but no strains attached please. My heart belongs to Tony and him alone. Please try to understand' ' but his daughter doesnt like you. She hates you' Gilbert said. She wanted to ask him how he knew that but she just shrugged. 'its doesnt matter because i love her as my daughter. I want nothing but to become a mother to her. Its okay if she doesnt like me. I cant force her. I cant force anyone to like me because if they ever like me, it wont be from the depth of their hearts. Unlike you Gilbert' She turned and opened the door. And then she froze. Maria was standing there and obviously listening to their conversation. 'do you love my dad?' Maria asked softly and for a moment Alice felt like she was going to accept her..... But she was wrong

Maria i just pray u dnt regret all dis later

Nd tony i seem to agree wid wat gilbert said abwt him. Even though alice has her own faults

Oh less i forget Amy seriously if am in alice position dont think i can 4give her eventually if d truth goes viral

Wish is over between Alice and Gilbert... He has caused much havoc than qood. Wish maria accepted Alice too.

tank God maria is listening to all DAT but I Dont DAT winch will change soon maria pls why nt let Alice be :(

Hmmmm

uhm!! 4lowing

Hmmmmmm

Still following

hmmmmmmm,such is life,I really wish Maria change,I pray ur Tony accepts u back,Gilbert Is just a hard nut 2 crack(a he devil),I pray I never meet such people

@aarti we are waiting for morning update o :)

Whao dats serious

Maria will arrange everything like nothing happen.... Just watch and see the turn around of the new couple in town... Wink

Oooh this maria needs deliverance

kum n update nawwwww

Where z d new update na...i really do hate this maria of a she devil..if say na for real life er..i for don kill her lol

maria wil never accept her marry her faher bcos she already knew wat transparent d broken up btw alice & her father... Dis is going to hard for alice to succed tony luv again n gilbert is making life difficult for her.... Tony is a man dat wil never allow a woman to manipulate him don't forget what she done to stella after he caught her.. Dis is all alice fault,assuming she has confess when gilbert was making a foul play on her d matter couldn't hv hard like dis,.,dis is going to be hard for her to get tony heart back wit maria involvement & wit d way her father as been caring for her over 2 wks now.... Let see hw d story goes....thumbs up d writter.....

Episode 7. Gilbert saw Alice standing by the door as though she was seeing someone but he didnt care he knew no one was there. Then she went outside and closed the door behind her. Very good! He put an end t his facade and wiped away the fake tears on his eyes. Thank goodness for the menthylator balm Abby had left in the sitting room Once Alice wasnt looking, he had took the balm and rubbed a small quantity on his eyes and the tears flowed like a river. Naive idiot! He was going t teach her a lesson she wuld never forget in a hurry no one messes with his heart and ges scot free he had given Alice his heart but she toyed with it now she was going to show her a bitter side of him he did love her, no doubt but the last thing he wanted was being like a dunce. Despite his love for her, he must make sure she suffers. He was going to kill her. And Tony. Amy. Maria. Kelvin and of course, Collins, they will all die. Then afterwards, he had leave the country with Abby and they wuld start life afresh. Yes, thats what he was going to do. But first, he needed to do something, and thats to call Collins. Oh! He felt for his friend really? The guy was a good one, handling all the dirty jobs, keeping secrets, he trusted him but that wont keep him from dying. He wanted to start a new life. He didnt want anyne from his past to come haunting later on in life everyone will have to go down. **** 'you still wont back down would you, you shameless gold digger!' Maria said eyeing her scornfully as they moved away from Gilbert's doorstep. Alice closed her eyes. She wanted t end all of this. All of this hatred and resentment. She wanted it to end. She wanted to be happy and live with the only man she loved, as husband and wife she didnt want anything whatsoever to pse a threat and now that Maria still didnt like her, she didnt knw what to do. 'Maria,' she called, eyes still closed 'yu've got to really believe me i really love your father, i love him sincerely' 'and who's denying that?' Maria asked 'you love my father and i dont love you and my father loves me so much! So, do you think you stand a chance of being my father's wife, you slut!' 'i am not a slut!' Alice flared 'stop calling my that, for the last time' 'oh now, you are going to threaten me, warn me, maltreat me right? You are not even my father's wife yet and yu are already threatening me, when you become my father's wife, wetin yu go come do?' 'i'm sorry about that i was just....' 'you were just what? What did you come here to do Alice? Oh yeah, lest i forget, my father called you a slut,' Maria said and Alice gasped 'oh yeah, a two timing bitch, a high class whore, a materialistic harlot, a high class prostitute of a single mother!' Alice thought she'd die. She never thought Tony could think so lowly of her never. 'are you surprised?' Maria asked 'or you thought he had never tell me?' she laughed 'fool! Idiot! Senseless bitch. You really are so naive. My father never truly loved you. He was just lonely and needed a bed companion and fortunately, you brought your cheap slutty self to him and he took advantage of you and.....' 'you are lying to me!' 'shut up! How would someone wh claims to love you think so lowly of you huh? You are more foolish than i thought, Alice Tarulba. Oh sorry! I forgot how much you wanted or want to be Alice Brown but i'm sorry because i would never let that happen, never!' Maria said and walked away, going towards Gilbert's apartment

Hw i wish maria will just die

maria!!! I haven't seen ur type b4 u Dont even have conscience nawao

I dnt even know wia dix story is heading to

jeez... Maria is damn too rude.

just dy enjoy maria d repercusion is coming soon u have forget dat you are also a lady like alice

I dnt think der wl ever b a day in my life wen some idiots wl stand b4 me nd rant rubbish nd still walk freely away, nt in dis life time

Maria

maria z a silly gal,, I wish she could be able to knw gilbert's plan 4 Ha

here we go again oooooooo

Episode 8. Alice thought she might just slump and die. She thought Tony loved her. He was willing to marry her and he was very happy when he found out she was pregnant. Because of her, he was willing to send his beloved daughter abroad just so they could have breathing space. He even ignored his daughter's desires because of her this was proof that he was crazily in love with her. And even when they made love, she could feel the passion emanating from him. He loved, or so she thought. But she was wrong. Maria just said Tony called her a materialistic bitch, nothing hurt her most than being called that she was hurt. She never thought that Tony could think of her as such. She loved him, not for his money but for who he was. He was a handsome, caring, gentle and loving man, she adored him very much. The thought of going home to her very harsh mother disturbed her. She didnt want to go home. But she had nowhere else to go to. She couldnt go to Tony's house, no never! She didnt want anything to do with him again she hated him now he was nothing but a selfish bastard, only thinking of the thing he had between his legs. He was lonely and only wanted a bed companion Gosh! Maria's words were hurting her more. She wanted to doubt Maria, she wanted to deny that Tony would never ever say such a thing or call her names for he loved her. But the certainty in Maria's eyes as she said it could not be overlooked. Maybe she didnt really make a mistake for breaking up with him in the first place. Maybe it wasnt a foolhardy thing to do. For it made her realise that Tony never really loved her. She was the only one doing the loving and it hurt so badly so badly, she wanted to commit suicide but for her son and her unborn baby. Forgetting she was walking down the street, she broke into uncontrollable tears the tears were pouring down like rain. It was so embarrasing! People were regarding her as a lunatic. But she couldnt care less, the hurt in her heart was tearing her body and soul apart. Getting home, her tears increased because she knew what she was going to pass through in there. It wasnt as if she was a teenager who got pregnant for a randy he goat, but she was scared. Scared of her mother. 'young lady, where are you coming from crying like that?' Kofo asked immediately she stepped into the sitting. 'i'm coming from a friend's house' 'male or female?' 'i dont see that as any of your business' 'sure! Thats the reason you go about getting pregnant for anyone that smiles at you. You have an illegitimate son oo and instead of thinking of how to turn him into a legitimate child, you went to sleep with another man, somebody's father and you got pregnant again and now he has dumbed your sorry ass. I dont blame him, who would want to marry a woman who throws herself at every man. I dont know why you just cant close your legs till you say i do. That happened with Benjamin as well, you couldnt even wait for you wedding to come before you started making love to him. Idiot! Thats how you go about, sleeping with worthless men, and then you come back here crying, expecting me to pity you, i will not pity you! Never! Only God knows that i love you i love you with all my heart but i will never tolerate a whore as a daughter! I will never i am so ashamed of you' ***** 'look Collins, i dont give a fuck about being caught what i want is for Tony to die. I want him dead and Alice too' Gilbert said over the phone. '....look Collins, the fact that Tony didnt die when we sent assasins to his house doesnt mean he wont die if we try again' '......dont be a coward like seriously Collins. Lets kill him, he stole my woman away from me' '.......Maria? I will kill her too because once her father dies, she would be useless to me' '......yes, i must kill her infact i want to kill both father and daughter personally' 'i.....' Gilbert was startled at the sound of what seemed like a purse drop to the ground. He turned towards the door and froze. Maria!

I feel for Alice.

Yes oo u Maria spoilt brat. U don't want ur father to marry another woman go and die with or better still marry him idiot.

Even though maria is spoilt brat i dont want her to die i want her and her father to pay for their mistakes. Let dem suffer well well

Maria, better run for ur dear life. I blive u heard what he just said... U & ur papa go die like fowl... Am enjoying this story

Next o

Maria pick run now... Shei u heard him wella... U and ur dad's life is in danqer.

hmmm dat good for you alice I love that jare maria

Hmmm i wont maria too die...i love her wish to make her my woman lolz....dear swedy maria o ya make u pick race bf sumtin bad happen

ur own don't finish

IF D PALM DAT GILBERT IS MEANT FOR SOMETHING THEN MARIA IS IN TROUBLE COS WAT HAPPEN TO ALICE BEFORE SHE KISS GILBERT WIL ALSO HAPPEN TO HER

Dats gud 4 u 2 hear @Maria...

Gilbert is a monster.

that maria i know she will want to run that her tiny mouth, instead of her to find her way

fire on de monutin run run

maria u beta pick race nw or else.....next pls

Alice why will u believe that tony z not inlove with u...maria z just playing with ur head and u are buying it...kofo z a disgrace to mother hood...maria hw i wish u will just change after hearing gilbert conversation on phone

maria u see does u trust beta run for ur head but this gilbert wicked u want to kill everybody nawao

Episode 9. Tony entered his room and shut the door. Feeling lonely, he sat on the bed and took his shoes off he stood up wanting to drop his shoe in the shoe rack when he saw Alice's sandal. He picked the red and golden beautiful sandal he forced a smile. He remembered this was Alice's best sandal. She loved it so much she could wear it everyday. He like it too. He didnt know why he never saw it all this while. He missed her. He missed Alice so much. His life felt empty without her and even Maria couldnt fill that vacuum in his heart anymore. He loved her so much and just the thought of her and her betrayal made him shed tears. Right now, he couldnt tell between, the period Naomi died and the past two weeks, which were that worst period of his life. He couldnt tell. These past few weeks were like hell to him. He couldnt feed fine and he was emanciating. He was no longer his cheerful self and he only managed to smile or laugh whenever Maria was around. Maria was his only source of joy right now. If not for his daughter, what could he have done? If Maria wasnt around, he was sure he would have ran after Alice, begging her to stay with him even if he knew she was in love with another man, that wouldnt have stopped him. But the thought of having Gilbert's hands all over her body, kissing and making love to her made his heart twist in pain and made anger surge through him. He wanted to hate Alice he wanted to really hate her for all she's done. But he couldnt. She had been so real. So caring. Wonderful. Beautiful. Selfless. Understanding. Loving. Romantic. Intelligent. Courageous. Oh! He lacked words on how to describe her. But she was almost perfect. He knew he loved her WITH ALL HIS HEART. And he thought she loved him too. If only Alice had returned giving even a lousy excuse, he was sure he would have forgiven her. He was so sure of that. Even if she claimed Gilbert was her brother, he wuld believe her because he trusted her. With his life. When she didnt show up for complete two weeks, he knew she didnt love him and that Gilbert was right. She was nothing but a gold digger. But he wondered if Gilbert ever knew that he had made love to her several times. What man would let his woman sleep with another man all in the name of playing games? He was surprised. And Alice readily responded to his touch. When she was just playing games with him? Toying with his feelings? He was baffled. Then it struck him that he never understand the two lovers one bit. They were both wierd! So wierd. Playing games? He shrugged. He kept the scandal aside. It was her property and he was going to return it to her. He didnt want anything that belonged to her anywhere around his house he didnt want to see it. He was going to return it to her tommorow. Thank God it was a saturday. ***** 'you dont love me at all mummy' Alice cried. 'i love you but you dont deserve love my daughter. What you deserve is hatred. You are nothing but a disgrace to womanhood. Do you know what you look like now? A harlot. A shame. You are not a wife material Alice. You are not a decent woman. Left for me, i dont think any man deserves someone like you. No matter how terrible that man maybe, it can never be compared to having a slut for a wife!' Kofo snapped. 'mummy, you are hurting my feelings. You are making me think that i dont deserve to live....' 'of course you dont deserve to live. The world would do better without cheap prostitutes hanging on the streets like you. Its better to not have a child. Than have one who would bring nothing but shame and disgrace to you!' ***** 'its not what you think Maria' Gilbert said moving forward while Maria took a cautious step backward. He was doomed. Why didnt he realise that someone was at the door why didnt she knock? 'dont come closer you jerk. You were the one who sent assasins to our house?' Maria asked. 'no no.....i mean yes' Gilbert replied

Trouble

u beta run maria becos if he grab u u ar died oo

Maria what are you waitinq 4?

Dat is beta 4 u insted of u 2 pick race u ar dere blowing anglo

can't convince

Maria what are you still waiting for ? Won't you run for your life ?

maria run for ur head o following keenly

Great

Episode 10. 'what?' Maria asked frightened 'then what the hell am i still doing here? I'm not safe around you' 'yes, i sent the assasins but i didnt send it for your father. It was Alice' Gilbert replied. 'Alice?' 'yes Alice. I wanted her killed not your dad. Your dad did nothing to me. Why on earth will i want to kill him?' 'i dont understand' Gilbert sat on the couch 'see my dear. I have a confession to make' 'wha....what confession?' 'even though it might sound wrong but....' his voice trailed off. 'But what?' 'i love you' Gilbert said. Maria's mouth immediately flew open 'what?!' 'yes its wrong i shouldnt love a teenager but i couldnt help it, i love you so much Maria' Gilbert said hoping she had drop the topic about the assasin stuff. 'you love me?' Maria asked. Gilbert stood up and moved towards her 'the age difference between us is alarming. I mean i'm 34 and you are 17. That shows there's a gap of 17 years between us but....but......' 'lets talk about this later,' Maria wasnt scared much, just a little and that fear could be quenched if he kept a considerable distance from her 'why did you send assasins to kill Alice?' Gilbert groaned inwardly. This girl was so headstrong. More reason he was going to kill her. He must! 'that was where i was heading.....' 'oh shut up!' Maria snapped and Gilbert winced, this girl was so rude. God help him, he might just end up killing her here but Abby was inside. Abby! Jeez, he really had to end this matter now. He didnt want Abby hearing anything she shouldnt hear or he might just kill her too. And he didnt want to. She was his niece for crying out loud and he loved her. She was the only thing he used to remember his late twin sister who died during childbirth at seventeen. He had loved his sister so much and had vowed, even though he just wrote WAEC then, he vowed to take care of his late sister's child. And even when his parents had rejected the child, he moved out of their family house with the baby. Determined to survive. He worked as a bricklayer for three years before he managed to pick a wallet on the street one night. And that led to his road to success. The money inside was enough for him to make a living for both him and Abby and he managed to go to the university as a part time student. While still doing menial jobs so there wont come a time when he and Abby would lack money at all so he couldnt kill Abby because she was part of his life. 'Maria, Abby's inside. Lets talk outside i beg of you' he pleaded. Maria started telling him that there was no way they were going inside because she was scared of him but changed her mind. And she and Gilbert went outside. 'so tell me why you wanted to kill Alice and you better do it fast before i report this to the police and you have to explain the reason why you want to kill me and my dad!' she gave him a considerable distance. 'Maria, that was a mistake. The reason i want to kill Alice is because i love you. I wanted you to be happy' 'you must be mad! How will someone's death make me happy?' 'i know that if Alice dies, your father will forget about her and there would be no other woman in his life again. And he would love you unconditionally because you are all he's got. And you would be happy. I wanted you to be happy. I really love you Maria. Age difference or not, my heart beats for you not for Alice anymore' 'this is crazy' Gilbert saw uncertainty in her eyes and grinned wickedly. Fool! She was going to die a very sorrowful and painful death. The girl was a real dullard. If she was sensible, she would have ran away and reported him to the police as soon as possible. But she didnt. She stayed. He loved meeting foolish people. Because if she had been wise and ran away, he would have been contemplating leaving Nigeria right now. But she wanted to play the tough kid, one who never backs down from a fight and he was going to tell her now that he was a wizard when it comes to handling matters like this. He moved closer and cupped her face with his hands, then placed his lips on hers. Maria protested but he held her forcefully. Then he pulled out a gun and placed it on her stomach. Maria wasnted to push him away to see what it was but before she could blink, she heard a gunshot, and bloos gushed out from her mouth....Gilbert shot her

Jesus!!!!!

Maria... Capital fool.... Playinq hard qirl when u see danqer...

Very good for her..brave girl oya na..go marry ur father

Gbese ree o, maria never tire. By the tym Gilbert hit u down, then u will realiz sat u should have run for ya life

maria see wat ur stubborness led u to nw...

maria is a big time fool serve her right

G u re to wicked.

haha I thought u are a wise girl Maria... all u good in Is running ur mouth like Tap water, Gilbert deceived u and killed u like a chicken..... mtchrrw

Or maybe Gilbert was shot.

It must be a dream, Maria must not die

so bad,don't tell me our maria died ooooh

Mumu, he tell u say he luv u nd u stil dy dea, let me c hw u'll stp ua dad 4rm marrying wu he wantz

Dis girl be great supo

yes willingness and stupidity dont go well together,if u are too eager to know all things ,you will miss the road ...her stupidity kills her that will serve her well foolish and dumbfoaded girl

Episode 11. Alice rushed into the hospital, not even caring about her morning illness. She just wanted to see Maria, she wanted to know if she was alright, how it all happened she wanted to know. She sat Tony sitting at one corned of the hospital, his face buried in his hands. She didnt know if she was crying or not. And she didnt know if she should go over to him or not. She hated him. She hated him for looking down on her. Thinking of her as a gold digger, a materialistic...... No, she didnt want to remember everything Maria had said her dad caled her. But she wasnt there to see him, she wanted to see Maria. She knew he had probably cancelled their wedding and the thought sapped her energy. She went over to him and tapped him gently 'Tony' Tony looked up, surprised. Then slowly the surprise turned to anger. His eyes were red and she knew he had been crying. But why was he angry at her? Was she the one who shot Maria? 'what are you doing here?' his voice stern. 'to see Maria' she replied. Tony finched. She wasnt even here to see him. She never really loved him, so he had been right afterall. Alice didnt give a hoot about him. 'you are not seeing her so go back to where you came from. Where you belong with Gilbert' 'oh please stop being dramatic! I didnt come to see you. I came to see Maria!' Alice barked furiosly. She was mad. So he never believed her? He doubted her love for him. Maria had been right all along. Her dad just needed a bed companion and she cheaply offered herself to him. What a fool she had been! 'you even have the right to scream at me?' Tony asked as he stood up disregarding the fact that they were already causing a scene at the hospital 'how dare you? Do you want to spend the rest of your life in prison?' Alice laughed scornfully 'for what reason? Just because i came to see your daughter who was shot and admitted in a hospital? Or just because you are rich and affluent? You are so full of yourself Tony, who the he do you think you are? Are you the first rich man in Nigeria? Are you richer than Dangote? Just because you have a few millions in your account doesnt make you the richest man ever! Dont let your money get into your head!' Tony was furious. So this was how she thought of him all this while? She saw him as a proud man. Oh God! Why was he so ill lucked? He had lost his first love to the hands of death and now his second love never truly loved him. 'how dare you insult me you trash! You are nothing Aice and i coud crush you with a snap of my finger. You and your miserable family will all go down if i decide to act!' 'shut up! You cant do anything Tony you cant! Those are a empty threats, empty threats. You are nothing but an empty vessel. Without your money you are useless. Worthless' 'yes and without my money you would never have dated me. You were just around me for my money even though you knew i truly loved you' 'you never loved me!' Alice snapped 'you are nothing but an arrogant jerk! A liar. You are a playboy. You just wanted to see the colour of my panties and guess what?' she clapped her hands 'you succeeded. Congratulations' 'is that how low you think of me?' 'yes! Thats how low i think of you because you also think of me as a gold digger!'

Mariam y are u so stupid like dis,anyways RIP

Hahahaha

Alice be calm,tony love u.I pray u heal@ mariam

I think they will reconcile in that hospital after the insult

oh my goodness

hahahaha.....everybody hates Maria. Lolz... I don't like her too, she damn too rude. Alice and Tony you better stop fooling yourselves in that hospital and make up......

dat is good for her I have being expecting this since

Plz come and post the next episode so that I can know what happened next

Episode 12. 'i hate you Alice' 'i've never hated anyone the way i hate you right now Tony' Alice fired back. She was shaking in anger and hatred. She kept her love for him aside and told him a the things she wanted to tell him. They were causing a scene in the hospital and it took the securities to be able to cam them down. Alice was fuming, he was foolish and he was teling everyone that. They gave each other deadly stares, one would never know they once dated or even smiled at each other before. Infact, it looked as if, if left alone, they could kill each other. 'i dont even know what i saw in you that made me love you because you are not worth it' Tony said. Alice scoffed 'the earlier you stop lying and come out clean, the better for you and i. We never loved each other! You used me and i used you! You wanted my body and i wanted your money. We are even! There are no winners and no losers, come on!' Alice spat. God knew it took all her strenght to say that. But Tony already said he hated her, what then will she gain professing her love for him? 'whether you believe it or not, i truly loved you. I never wanted your body or anything. I oved you for who you are but you just proved to me that you are worthless, a cheap prostitute, a.....' The slap that landed on his cheek was unexpected. For seconds, he couldnt comprehend what was going on around him. 'you dare tell me what you told your daughter about me? Right in my face?' 'how dare you slap me?' 'and i woud do that again and again if you dont watch your tongue,' she wanted to act strong but her voice was giving her away. Tears filled her eyes against her will and they dropped freely. What was wrong with her? Why on earth will she cry in front of this bastard. Tony felt bad seeing her cry though he thought she deserved it. No woman had ever slapped him before and go scot free. But with Alice, he knew he wouldnt retaliate. He just wanted to let her go but her tears were getting to him. He wanted to take her in his arms and apologise to her. Promise never to say anything that was going to hurt her again. 'i'm sorry. I should never have called you a prostitute' he said looking away. Alice opened her mouth to say something until she saw a doctor coming their way. She quickly wiped her tears and braced herself for whatever was coming. 'doctor, what of my daughter what of Maria? Is she okay?' Tony asked hastily. He was so desperate to see his daughter. He wondered what on earth was going on. This would be the second time Maria was shot. Who was respnsibe for all of this? 'i'm sorry Mr Brown but i've got bad news for you' the doctor replied

Next pls

Good for her..R.I.H maria(rest in hell)

hmmm nxt plz

Oh No!!!!

She won't be able to walk again

uhmmm!! #mute#

Oh my sweet Maria i knw nothin will happen 2 U...she had a kidney failure hmmm Alice will donate one of hers 2 her.. Gona miss my baby girl @Maria

Make she die with her wahala abeg e don too much.

Oh! Is dis hw Maria wasted her life? Wat a pity!

hope she is not dead ???

such is life 4 maria

Maria is to Brave

Maria u brot dis upon urself u were so foolish nd dumb

Episode 13. 'what is it doctor?' Tony asked alarmed. He feared the worst. What if Maria was dead? No! He tried his best to get negative thoughts out of his head. He was panting heavily. But surprisingly, he felt at peace when Alice placed a hand on his left shoulder, patting him gently. It wasnt like they nearly pulled down the hospital building with their ranting earlier. 'Anyways, luckily, her vita organs werent affected but it seems she might go into coma' the doctor said. 'what?' Alice and Tony chorused. 'no!' without warning, Tony fell to the ground holding the doctor leg 'doctor please save my daughter dont let anything happen to her please. Its not about the money. I will foot the bill but please......' 'Tony calm down' Alice said *** 'i just got back from work when i got a message from a hidden number saying that my daughter was in danger and that if i want to see my daughter, i should step out of the house and move to the next street. They told me she was in an uncompleted building. I found her there lying lifeless!' Tony was only trying his best to control himself because he just fet like crying. However Alice was beside him, assuring him that all will be fine when in reality, all wasnt. 'do you have any rivals or someone who would want to hurt you?' the detective asked. Tony exchanged glances with Alice. He thought long and hard. He only thought of Stella but it was silly, Stella was in Ghana. Should he mention Gilbert? But for what reason? The guy had no reason to want to kill Maria or hurt him? He wanted to speak when Aice surprised the hell out of him. 'Gilbert. Gilbert Martins' she said. Tony jerked in surprised 'what the hell are you talking about?' Alice ignored him 'detective, i say Maria yesterday at Gilbert's house. I went there for some personal reasons and i stumbled upon Maria and we talked. However i forgot to ask who she came to look for. But i saw a girl clad in the uniform of the school Maria attends. It seems the girl if her friend. But it seems she knows Gilbert as well. And......' her voice trailed off. 'and what?' the detective urged her on. 'and.....i think Gilbert would...woud want to harm To....Tony' Alice stammered. 'harm me? Why on earth woud he try that?' Tony asked. 'i.....he loves me and......' she looked at Tony not sure if she should say it 'i dont love him. He sees.....he sees Tony as a rival' 'and why is that? When you dont even love me. And look stop lying that you dont love him, lying wont solve the problem here!' Tony said

Seriously praying for Maria to come out of coma so that Gilbert will put in jail where he rightfully belong

No... This is nt true Tony... What a pity. I hope dead is far frm Maria?

nawa 4 u o tony why cnt u just trust alice 4 once

I pray maria survives.....

Chaii this guy is wicked. RIP maria

I pray maria won't die :( @onahsunday631 let's do dry fasting for Maria :) I want her to be alive

@frankkay so that she can reconcile alice and tony rite? (fasting on my mind..6 to 6)lol

Tony pls dont be harsh on alice shes saying d truth

JUST PRAY DAT MARIA WIL NOT B IN COMA SO DAT D TRUE WIL B REVIEW

when will all this end??!

hmmmm,Tank Gud its just coma,I hope she gets better faster,Tony abeg trust Alice ooooo

i pray nothin happen to my belove maria.....tony pls listen not dragging

yes bros nd also for her quick recovery @onahsunday631 keep on fasting :)

She must not die

Hmmmmmmm

Episode 14. Alice looked at Tony and back to the detective. 'i'm sorry detective. I have a very important information to give though i'm not sure of it but it surely is important and there's no way i'm gonna say it in the presence of Tony, so he should excuse us' Alice said. 'are you out of your mind? This is my daughter's case we are talking about here so if you sure as hell have any important information to give you better do that here. In my presence' Tony fumed. 'what stupidity!' Alice snapped 'are you actually commanding me to give an information thats gonna help YOUR daughter?' 'of course yes! You have no other choice' 'bullshit! Arrant nonsense. Infact i'm not saying anything again. Come rain, come sunshine' 'insane woman! You had no information to give so just shut up and stop pretending and.......' 'mr Tony,' the detective cut in 'with all due respect, let the woman speak. For all we know she might have a very important information to give to us that might help us track the culprit. So please let her speak. Its for your own good' 'abeg help me tell am oo' Alice snapped. 'you dont understand detective. Nothing good comes from this woman. She is nothing but a disaster. It was ever since i met her that my life started turning upside down. Strange things keep happening, my daughter shot twice. Attempts on my life. Enmity between me and my daughter. She is bad luck. My life has turn into shambles overnight. All thanks to her!' Tony said. 'thats why i broke up with you in the first place!' Alice sobbed 'because i didnt want to cause enmity between your daughter. I broke up with you because of that. Do you know how hard it was for me?' Tony let out a humourless laughter 'you broke up with me and it was hard for you and the next day you started dating another man, kissing him. Wow wow wow! This is surely gonna make the Guiness Book Of Record. The only person who was able to move on from a heartbreak within hours' he cleared his throat 'if really you broke up with me before you started dating Gilbert the next day, it shows you never really loved me. True love never dies Alice. Even now, as much as i hate it, i'm still in love with you. So much i'm asking myself if i've ran mad or something. Why on earth would i love a gold digger? Its crazy but i cant deny it, i still love you though i have no plan of ever reconciling with you. Not now, not ever' 'but Maria said you never loved me. She said it yesterday and i can still recall her words vividly "my dad was just lonely and needed a bed companion" you never loved me Tony, stop lying' Alice said as tears choked her throat. Tony laughed again 'dimwit! Dont you know Maria hates us being together? Why on earth wont she cook up stories just so we woud hate each other? I never knew you were this stupid!' With the way they were going, the detective was sure that they had totally forgotten him. He wanted to get their attention back but sensed that there was some foulplay here and the two really needed to resolve their issues for they still loved each other. It was glaring for all to see. So he slipped away unnoticed. 'really? Was Maria lying?' Aice asked amazed. 'lets forget about Maria here. Lets talk about you and you bitchy self. Lets talk about the baby. Truth is, i dont even know the truth. You tell me you aborted the pregnancy and the next day Gilbert says he's responsible for the pregnancy. So since you are here, lets here the truth from you. I want everything, i want a real explanation from you. Why you chose to double date? Lie to me that you loved me? Made me propose to you and tell the whole world know i'm getting married and you ditched me? Why did you choose to play with my heart why?' **** Amy smiled as she opened the door for Gilbert 'come in darling' Gilbert forced a smile and went in. Then Amy shut the door 'darling, i missed you, why havent you been taking my calls?' Amy asked. Gilbert smiled inwardly and brought out a gun 'you've outlived your usefulness' Amy screamed in fright 'JESUS!' Gilbert laughed 'so you know that name? How funny! You made a big mistake jilting your fiance because i never loved you. I used you and now you are no longer useful so you have to die' 'my God! Gilbert please dont do this. I will do anything you want, please' 'i'm so sorry darling, goodbye' he corked the gun and pulled the trigger. He shot Amy twice on the chest and the quiety left the house. Getting into his car, he smiled 'this is the beginning of wickedness. Now, its time i kill Kelvin. And Collins' he laughed and turned on the ignition

o.m.g,,amy c ya life

Amy... Sorry u end thz way

I can't believe am saying this That serves you right Amy

oh my God....buh y on earth wil u kill her

U dig your own grave Amy RIP

Dis Gilbert is totally insane

Amy u see how u useless ur life R.I.P this Alice is too dull for my liking mitcheew start saying dey truth jare :(

Gilbert d devil

A fly that doesn't heed to Advice,will follow a corpse to the grave..... u got ur own portion served Amy... RIP

sorry for u Amy

dat serve u right amy.alice start saying all d truth dis d only tyme u have nd i pray dat gilbert shuldnt success in killing kelvin becos he ddnt do anything wrong bt he cn kill collin bt i wish collin shuld confess before get kill

dat man is a monster

Episode 15. Kelvin turned the beer into his glass cup and drank it all. Turned another and drank it all. Then ordered for another, his thirteenth bottle. This was what he did constantly now. To be able to keep body and soul together. To be able to forget Amaka, his beautiful Amaka. To be able to stop thinking of her. The past three weeks had been hell for him. It was very painful. The only thing he could do was drink, drink and drink. His head hurts, but he didnt mind. He just wanted to drink away his sorrow and if possible, his life. He wondered what he ever did to Amy to make her break his heart. He had promised her never to go back to his life of crime. That he would start up a genuine business and forget about friends from the past and true to his words, he severed ties with old friends and quit the yahoo biz he was into before. He hid it from Amy very well in the beginning of their relationship till almost the end. He lied to her that he was working in an Oil company for years of their relationship. He knew it was wrong but he just didnt want to lose her. Amy hadnt known until....., he just didnt understand it one bit. How she knew remained a mystery to him. Maybe one of the friends he severed ties with snitched....no. He wasnt sure. That day was his birthday, just a month ago. Like every other birthdays, he didnt want a party. He just wanted it to be gone like every other day. The highest he did was take Amy and some of his friends out. He was just going to invite Amy over and make sweet love to her. That was how he wanted to spend that birthday. He had been expecting Amy and when he she finally showed up, he knew all was not well. The look on her face was as if she wanted to strangle someone. He had ushered her in and tried to kiss her but she resisted. And immediately he shut the door, she asked 'Kelvin, what really are you?' He was dumbfounded. What was she saying? 'i dont understand' 'just tell me the truth. Are you the oil worker you claim to be?' He was stunned and for seconds he couldnt regain his composure and when he finally did, he replied 'of....of.....course. I....i work in an oil company' 'i dont believe you Kelvin besides, you are stuttering' Amy said and when he kept quiet, she shook her head slowly 'so you lied to me all this while Kelvin. You made me believe you are an oil worker when you are nothing but a freaking fraudster!' Kelvin froze for a full minute. Jesus! How did it leak out? Was it a deal gone bad? 'thats a lie!' he said. 'no its not. Its true' 'who fed you this lie Amy? Do you believe the person over me?' 'a thousand times. Because my source has no reason to be negative' 'you can never be so sure Amy' 'look Kelvin, you better tell me the truth. Nothing but the truth because its only the truth that can determine where our relationship is headed' Amy said. Kelvin let out a heavy sigh. He knew Amy hated lies. If you told Amy the truth, no matter the gravity of your offence, she always forgives you. So for that reason, he wanted to come out clean. But what if she doesnt forgive him this time? He couldnt bear to lose her. She might never forgive him. And at the same time, if she found out from another person, she might also never forgive him? So what was he gonna do now? What was he gonna say now? As if reading his mind, Amy added 'the truth. Nothing but the truth can set you free Kelvin' That alone cleared all his doubts. He was going to say the truth now. 'Amy i....' his voice trailed off 'i'm sorry i......' he couldnt help but notice the look of expectancy on Amy's eyes. Almost as if she wanted to hear a negative answer. Almost as if she wanted to hear that it was true. That he was a fraudster. A 419ner. 'i...i....' he paused and regarded her for a second time, not sure if it was time to say the truth 'its true. I'm a fraudster' That was it. That sealed it. She had walked away and the following week, she was engaged to another. He had promised. Promised to drop his life of crime but she hadnt listened. He staggered up and paid for his drinks, then quietly left the bar. As he staggered into his car he felt someone following him but he wasnt sure. As soon as he entered the car, someone immediately joined him at the front seat. He was scared at first until he saw the guy, the silly stupid guy who stole his one and only love away from him. He wanted to kill him. 'what are you doing here?' he asked. He didnt even remember the guy name. Oh yeah, Gilbert! Gilbert smied broadly showing off his teeth in the dark night 'i'm sorry guy but i cant explain myself but for now, you just have to die' Before Kelvin coud blink twice, a dagger was buried deep in his chest. The last thing he heard was the guy deep laughter, then the opening and closing of the door

Gilbert z mad..

Gilbert is crazy

maria u better wake up so as to testify

ur end will soon come

hmmm nawa oo

please can u make the reading easier for the readers? instead going through all pages to get an update can’t u just create the episodes where one can read and comment instead of going through all the comments first

uhmmm,,

Thank God dat Maria didn't die.

Episode 16. 'there's no truth to tell Tony,' Alice said. She couldnt look him in the eye. 'just take everything as you see it' Tony nodded, his anger dissipating. He wasnt angry with her anymore. Whatever reason she had for doing what she did, he was going to respect it and accept the fact that the both of them couldnt work out. He sighed 'i miss my Maria. I'very lonely now. All by my self. Whoever did this to her will be killed by me, i swear' Alice looked at him with sympathy in her eyes. 'i'm very sorry for what happened Tony. However, i have something important to tell you' Tony looked at her 'what is it?' 'i..i....saw Maria at Gilbert's house yesterday and.....we talked. I really didnt know who she came to look for but.....but.....i cant.....okay, Abby, something like that. Do you know her?' 'yes, i know Abby. Maria's best friend' 'yes. I saw her there. She is Gilbert's niece' 'really? Coincidence indeed' 'yes. Then i left after a little chit chat with Maria and she went back there. You know Gilbert hates you. He might try to harm her, you know.....' 'for what reason?' 'i......i'm sorry but i cant give you the full details. Just, have Gilbert investigated. Its for the good of Maria' Tony wanted to say something but decided against it. **** Gilbert woke up feeling happy with himself. He had killed two people yesterday and he felt so satisfied. He opened the curtains and stretched. He felt like killing someone again. In the past, he killed for a reason, mostly for Alice but now, he just wanted to kill everyone he wanted to. Anyone who was going to get in his way or close to someone who wants to get in his way must die! He was going to kill Alice, thats for sure but he was saving her for the last. And before he killed her, he was going to make thorough love with to her, touch everywhere touchable, kiss everywhere kissable, then suffocate her with the pillow. Oh! What a sweet revenge that will be. Now, he had no reason for killing Alice he knew but she had brought out the monster in him. He was doing things he never thought he would ever do. If only she had just loved him the way he loved her even if it was just little, he would never have turned out like this. He did so many things just to get her. He wanted to have her but now he wasnt sure anymore. If he still loved her, he wasnt sure. But he knew he was lusting after her. No, he didnt love her anymore. He just wanted to taste her body, nothing more. Then kidnap her and rape her, a voice echoed in his mind. No, he shook it off. That wont be fun at all. He didnt want to end it that way. He wanted blood to flow and heads to roll. Just raping Alice wont solve anything. Then an idea passed through his mind. It was wicked. How on earth would sex with an old woman taste? He wanted to experience it. He immediately took his shower and dressed up. He didnt wait for breakfast, couldnt wait for breakfast. He headed for Alice house. 'lets see how her mother's gonna taste!' he laughed and called Collins. To be continued tomorrow

Na to carry Gilbert go psychiatric hospital because na so e dey start. How on earth will u think of raping an old woman may God have mercy on u.

hahahaha Gilbert don kolo o nawao

Good 4 dat stupid girl

Monster indeed

chaiii Gilbert is a Devil

eeewwww! Gilbert is so disgusting

Ua rilli insane gilbert, hw on earth will u fink of raping an old woman? God av mercy on ua soul, cause d lng arm of d law wil surely catch up wif u

hmmmmmm

U sure say this gilbert no get mental problem? @aarti

gilbert u r such a wicked person

Gilbert on a killing spree

chaiiiii,Dis guy Na d biggest mumu,don't worry d authority will soon find u

I think Gilbert is now insane How could he even think of having sex with Alice's mum ?

nawa oo

Episode 17. Gilbert knew he had no reason for raping Alice's mum. He just wanted to do it, and he did it. He smiled when he recalled how the old woman cried and begged not to be raped. It wasnt pleasurable though, so he just moved on to the heavily endowed, both front and back househelp. Collins, he frowned. The idiot was just standing there, pleading on the behalf of the old woman. That made him sick. If he had known, he wouldnt have taken him along. He wanted his friend to enjoy too, enjoy the old woman but he was a coward! He turned to look at him sitting at the back seat. 'you really fucked up Collins, if you werent my friend, i really should have killed you there' Gibert fumed. 'and if you werent my friend, i would have called the police immediately, when you were still in the act!' Gilbert laughed 'fool! You are really senseless Collins, i really dont know why i have a friend like you' 'senseless indeed! Senseless and i was able to save your silly ass from being caught by the police!' 'dont you start reminding me of all the things you've done for me Collins' Gilbert said, trying hard to focus on the road 'dont make me kill you here right now' 'what you did was wrong. Wait a minute, i thought you did all you've been doing since because you loved Alice and because you wanted her to see no one else but you!' Gilbert laughed again 'i dont love Alice anymore' 'pardon?' 'you heard me. I dont feel anything for that bitch any longer' 'i really dont understand' 'thats your biz, not mine' 'if you dont love her, then why are you doing all of these things?' 'reasons best known to me' Collins regarded the monster he called his friend for a while, then he cleared his throat 'you shot Maria yesterday right?' 'yes i did' Gilbert replied nonchalantly. 'do you know she's in coma?' Gilbert nearly lost control of the steering, then he parked by the roadside, sweating profusely. 'she's alive?' he asked. 'of course, she is. She's just in coma' 'no. That cant be possible. She cant possibly be alive. Its going to spell doom for me. Collins, you've got to help me. Even if its the last time' Gilbert said. 'no more dirty jobs Gilbert. I'm not helping you any longer. Not when its a criminal act' 'please Collins, i beg you in the name of God, i.......' 'God? You know God Gilbert? So after all the atrocities you've committed, you know who God is?'

*cont* 'dont you dare mock me in this situation. I really dont want you to dare me' Gilbert said and Collins laughed. 'are you actually asking for my help Gilbert?' Gilbert swore. God help him, he might just blow the guy's stupid brain off. 'help me for the last time. I wont ask you for anything again' Gilbert said trying to keep calm. 'no way Gilbert! I'm not going to kill anyone for you anymore now that i know that you have no reason for doing all you are doing. You just want to be a monster, nothing else!' Gilbert closed his eyes and counted to hundred, trying his best not to open his pigeon hole, bring out a gun and just give Collins two bullets. 'i wont beg you again' Gilbert said. 'i am not your slave or your property for you to order me around Gilbert.' 'Collins, dont provoke me!' 'thats what i'm about doing. And, are you going to drive me home or you are going to drop me off here' Gilbert looked around, the street was lonely save for few hawkers who were still a little far from where they parked their car. He sighed in relief. 'come down. I'm not dropping you off' Gilbert said. 'you should have said that a long time ago,' Collins said and opened the car and got down. Just as he was about closing the door, Gilbert brought out a gun from his pigeon hole and shot him, then tried starting the ignition, but it wouldnt start. He tried again and again but it wouldnt start. Looking through the window, he saw people running towards him, he tried starting the ignition again but no way, the car no gree start. No be small thing

I pray dey catch u dis tym @Gilbert....

dat guy don turn mad

Your end Gilbert

it won't. start in Jesus name .....

Na so una hate Gilbert reach? Of all the characters here, na im i like pass. Thats why i keep giving him chances to escape and change but he just wont change

wow wow wow,,lol @aartial

Hahaha why car go start when e be say na innocent people blood u take do fuel. I just pray make thunder strike u join. @Aarti no like Gilbert oo so that u self no go join.

hahahahahahaha i can't stop laughing ooooo

good Gilbert ur end is here wicked soul @aarti abeg better GI look for another character to like o

Your cup don full today I just pray you don't escape this time around

Gilbert is finally mad

@aarti u like gilbert A.K.A mad man? Thank God ..they go catch him

Everyday is 4 d thief but one day is 4 the owner.

end of d road... but i have a feeling d car might start at d last minute

seriously u want to rape her mom what exactly are you thinking dis guy no get sense at all o

ur cup is full my dear

God catch u.....first class fool

your cup is nearly full...... if not full already Gilbert

na ur cup way din full be dat,heartless human being

Hahahah foolish fool, oya start the car and move. you think u smart huh? smart fool.

This guy is wicked eeish

Episode 18. Alice opened the door and got the shock of life. Angela was stark naked crying, trying to wake her mother who was also stark naked lying on the floor, looking lifeless. 'Angela! What happened what happened to my mother?' 'i dont know,' Angela cried 'i dont know if she's still alive Alice i dont know' 'what happened?' Alice asked assisting Angela in raising Kofo up 'lets take her to the hospital. Get dressed and......why are the both of you stark naked?' Suspicion glowed in her eyes and one look at her, Angela knew what she was thinking. 'no, no Alice! Its not what you think,' she said reaching for her gown which was flung far away by that demon of a man 'we were raped!' Alice drew back in shock 'you say wetin?' 'we were raped. I was in the kitchen cooking when the door bell rang. I ran out to open the door thinking it was you and.....' she sobbed 'two guys. I couldnt recognise the face of the guy who raped me and your mother but i recognise the other guy's face. Though he didnt do anything, he tried stopping the other guy from raping us but the guy refused! He raped i and your mother and your mother passed out. I tried waking her up but all my efforts were futile' Alice couldnt believe her ears 'who on earth would want to rape an old unattractive woman. It sounds ridiculous to my hearing' 'its the truth Alice, i swear' 'get me water, let me sprinkle it on her. If she doesnt wake up, then you have to give that explanation again. But not to me and not here. But to the judge in the court of law!' ****** 'shi.t!' Gilbert cursed and tried starting the car again. It still didnt respond. The angry looking guys were nearer now. He didnt know what to do. Didnt know why this stupid toyota camry decided to get faulty at this time. There was no way escaping these guys. Oh! He wished he had the power to disappear or something. He made a promise to himself that if he survives this, he was going to pay a visit to the most powerful witch doctor in his village. So he could easily kill and destroy without stress. And he might just get a love charm for Alice. 'my God, please save me, dont let me die oh God' Gilbert said as he tried turning on the ignition again, e no gree work.....god! He felt like dying now. Was this how he was going to die? What of Abby? Who would take care of her now? He wished he had taken her to see his parents, her grandparents, at least he would die knowing that she would have someone to turn to. But ever since he left the house with little Abby several years ago, he had cut off all connections with his parents since they had rejected the innocent soul simply because she was unwanted. Now Abby didnt even know where her grandparents are, nor his sisters, her aunts. Gosh! He regretted cutting off all connections with his family now. He lived for Abby alone, and maybe Alice who he wasnt sure of his feelings for anymore. Abby was the only one he truly, really loved. She was his only family. His wife, his sister, his mother, his father, his niece, his aunt, his nephew, everything he could think of. He didnt want to die now, because he knew that if he died, there would be no one to take care of her. He might be a demon, but he's got a soft heart wherever it concerns Abby. He must survive! No, this people wont catch him never

Haters of Gilbert, make una pray for am oo he has to escape this ordeal so he would learn his lessons

following

car start o.gilbert ur end s near.

dat gud for u i pray u wont escape b4 dy reach you nd even if u wnt to run away u wont b able to move ur leg by God grace u must accept it dis ur end foolish gilbert

no escape for him ooo

Too late.....u a already caught....

I reserve my comment till next episode

I pray the stupendious bastard is caught and eletrocuted abd thereafter dragged by four horses and have his pieces be fed to fishes....death is even too good for him

lolzzzz

Episode 19. Tony drove home at a slow pace. He needed rest and sleep, he hadnt been able to get any of them since Maria got admitted in the hospital. Even though it was just two days ago, he was emanciating and he knew it. He was grateful to Alice for staying with him in the hospital all through the night. She was his source of comfort and encouragement. She was an angel. And he began to wonder if she was truly what he thought she was. Maybe it was all a setup by Gilbert to destroy their relationship? But then he shook away that thought, there was no way it had been Gilbert's plan and she had clunged to him like butter clunged to bread, and kissed him so passionately, they could be mistaken for married couples. But then, maybe....maybe something was wrong somewhere. He remembered she hadnt spoken anything when Gilbert spoke all the nonsense he had in his mouth that day. And he also remembered the what-the-hell-are-you-saying kind of look she gave Gibert when he said that the baby was his. Maybe, the guy was trying to set her up. Then the thought vanished and was replaced by the thought of the guy trying to be honest and tired of the hide and seek game they were both playing with him and his money, and wanted to come out clean. To end everything and then Alice didnt want it. She wanted to play the game to the very end. He nodded as he blasted his horn front of the gate. That thought seemed plausible to him. Because there was no way someone will lie against you in your presence without reacting or trying to defend yourself. There was no other explanation to the story rather than that. No wonder Alice had told him that there was no truth to be told. Of course no truth to be told. The gate opened and he drove in slowly. But why did Alice come to the hospital when he and her were clearly not in good terms. She and Maria were not in good terms as well so......it just didnt add up. Why would she come? Had she-in the course of her game- fallen for him? No! That wasnt possible. He told himself that because he loved her, he wanted her to love him back. 'to love someone doesnt mean getting love in return' He wondered who had said it, the saying sounded familiar. Who said it? Ah! Nneka his mother-in......no! She wasnt his mother in law anymore. That witch! Who on earth could have thought that his wonderful, caring and understanding mother in law was a witch. A witch capable of killing her own daughter and attempted killing her own grandchild! Her only grandchild for that matter! Na wa oo. He had never heard of that before. Witches killed other people and protected their own but his mother in law's case was.....was bizzare. Oh Naomi! Heaven and hell knows that if not that Maria had held him firmly that night, he would have strangled Nneka to death when she confessed that she killed his beloved wife! When Naomi had died at first, he thought he would never find love again. That he would never find any lady that will love him the way Naomi loved him. And alas, he was right. Alice never loved him. He was the one doing all the loving, how bad could things get? With a sigh, he came down from the car and went inside. ***** Determination is the key for overcoming obstacles. He remembered these words said by his bible teacher way back in secondary school. Somehow, those words had gone and planted itself somehow in his brain. And now, he was determined than ever to escape. For Abby's sake. Or maybe he was just using her as an excuse. Even him didnt know the answer to that himself. Then an idea came to him, he picked his gun, opened the door, though he didnt come out. And started shooting towards the people running towards his car. They were very close now and he was sure they were seeing his face. Everyone ran helter skelter, running back to where they were running from, especially when a bullet touched a pregnany woman who was just walking on her own, oblivious of what was happening around. When she realised, before she could turn back, a bullet touched her and she died on the spot. By the time he exhausted his bullets, no one was in sight. He sighed in relief. Then made the sign of a cross, then started the car again and it miraculously worked this time around. 'what a testimony!' he said with a short laughter as he drove with full speed raisng dust behind him.

I can't believe Gilbert escaped this

hm nawa @aarti u too like him ooo

this one na fake miracle ooooooo

He escaped this one too...! Dnt worry, ur cooler is yet to full with those innocent souls.... Ur days are numbered from scale 1 to 3........

@aarti wetting nah allow dey law to catch this Gilbert nah well maybe u still has some days left for ur death wicked soul :) next pls

Nawa oooo

I kw u ll meet ur waterloo smhw @Gilbert...

this gilbert na original bado ,he kill a pregnant woman na thrown of stone dem go use measure ur years in jail

jeez @Aarti seriously I don't like this.... how could that man slaughter escape.... Ahn ahn nay.... anyways, just make sure his death or suffernessis extremely painful at the end....

Oh God yy another pregnant women.

gilbert ur end wil surely come

Kill a pregnant woman? 2bad

@aarti y nah? Let him b caught already

Lollz @everyone, make una calm down na. Gilbert might repent and give his soul to christ later on. Ever learnt anything from the story of the lost sheep or that of the prodigal son? Take a chill pill guys.

Episode 20. 'oga, good afternoon,' Rhoda greeted as Tony entered the house. 'thank you' Tony replied weakly as he cast another glance at Rhoda. There was something different about her, she looked absolutely different from her normal self. He scanned her face and saw she was wearing make up today. She was wearing low cut singlet which ended at her navel, then a transparent white bum short which ended just after her buttocks. She wasnt wearing panties leaving her bown ass in full view. Tony was irritated. When did this start? Why was she dressing like a prostitute on her way out to work? The Rhoda he knew was decent and very concious of her dressing. 'get me my lunch' Tony said, forcing himself to stop looking at her breasts which were in full view save for her nipples. 'yes sir' Rhoda replied. Tony thought she said it seductively and then winked at him but he dismissed the thought. He was imagining things. 'and change into a more decent cloth. I dont like this' Rhoda looked down in embarrasment, before nodding her head and left The way Rhoda swayed her hips got him turned on. He thought of grabbing her and kissing her but he dismissed it. There was no way, he, Tony Brown will stoop so low as to sleep with his maid, no way! The door bell rang and he started. Who could it be? He wasnt expecting anyone. Maybe it was Alice or one of Maria's friends. He lazily stood up and opened the door. He was speechless for a while. 'Ximena Valdez?' 'yes its me. Long time no see honeypie' The tall blonde said with a wide smile. Holy shit! Tony cursed. Then forced an uneasy smile 'its such a very long time Valdez' 'wont you at least give me a hug?' Ximena asked and when Tony hesitated for a while, she spoke again 'its okay, i understand. We didnt part on very good terms' a frown creased her brows and Tony smiled. 'come in Valdez' She smiled and went inside 'wow! What a luxirious house you have here honeypie, i love it' 'thank you Valdez. Uhm, you may have a seat' 'i'd prefer if you call me Ximena or Ximmy. Remember, you.....' 'i'd rather call you Ximena' Tony said immediately. A smile of disappoinment appeared on her face, then she sat down. 'what do i offer you Val....Ximena?' 'dont you maids around the house?' 'uhm, i do. What do i offer you?' 'you know what i like honeypie, dont you?' 'uhm you see, i'd rather you call me....you know Tony. No honeypie whatsoever please' Ximena looked down at her toes, feeling bad, 'i cant even call you honeypie?' 'i'm sorry but that era has passed Ximena' 'yeah right, you forgotten all about me' 'i'm very sorry' 'its alright,' she forced a smile 'its only logical that you've forgotten about me. I mean its been 20years. And, though you havent changed one bit, things can never be the same any longer. I know that' 'thanks for your understanding Ximena' 'why do i get the feeling that you are not happy to see me honey.....Tony?' Ximena asked smiling. Tony smiled too 'how can you say that. Its the first time i'm seeing you in 20 years so why on earth wont i be happy seeing you? When did you come in the country?' Ximena grinned from ear to ear 'i'm coming from the airport' 'really? Wow, impressive' 'actually, i visited Nigeria because of you. Just to see you, because i missed you. I mean, the friendship we used to share' 'hmm, nice. So are you married now?' 'uh?' she wasnt expecting that 'hell not. I mean, i'm....i'm a widow' 'my God! I'm so sorry now Ximena' Ximena chuckled 'no need to be sorry, seven years is gone already. So where are your wife and kids?' 'my....my wife is late. And i have just one daughter' 'oh my! How come we both lost our partners? Fate really is on our side' 'have you any kids?' 'not really. Fabian and i never really had kids till he died' 'oh. So how's Mexico?' 'Mexico is really nice. Way better than Nigeria' Tony laughed 'oh please! You are just trying to promote your country. If its better, then why are you here?' 'i'm here because of you Tony. For us to continue what we long started' To be continued. For those of you wondering who Ximena is, it will be explained next episode

hmmm omo this story won't finish this year o another problem don land again called ximina nawao

Loving this

U for tell say we qo enter mexico qo see our ex.

Ok..waiting then..just hope tony will not give her chance in his life again

a day a trouble... hoping ur love survive all this

Episode 21. Tony raised a brow, then frowned 'what do you mean Ximena?' Ximena laughed 'just trying to make a joke. To, you know, ease up the tension here' Her laughter was like music to his ears and he realised he kind of missed it. But, its been 20years. 20years since he last saw Ximena. Thinking about it once more, he realised that love never worked out for him. Why? Ximena Valdez, his secondary school lover, had broken up with him because of a new guy in school then. She claimed the guy was best for her and broke it off with him. They had been enemies before her Mexican father died and she and her mother, from Mexico as well, left Nigeria for their country. That was the last he had heard of her. Then Naomi, he loved her. He loved her with all his heart but the cold hands of death had snatched her from him. All thanks to her mother, the witch! And now Alice, well her case was complicated. She claimed to love him whereas she loved someone else, she was just with him for the things she could get for him. And now, she was with him again, playing the saint of the story. He snorted, women! He would never understand them. Then he remembered the way Ximena and him had fought seriously after their break up. He couldnt let her go. Back then, she was his life and he couldnt survive without her, though she was a foreigner. So he had accosted her new boyfriend that time and always fought with him, beating the guy pulp and blue. And then Ximena, the tomboy and fighter stood up for her boyfriend and....he smiled. He wondered where Elvis was now. 'a penny for your thoughts' Ximena said interrupting his thoughts. He smiled. 'what were you thinking?' she asked. 'nothing in particular' he replied casually. 'really? Or were you thinking about us? The memorable times we shared together, our romance?' 'or stop it Ximena, there's no reason to remember all that. By the way, how did you and Elvis end up?' he asked. Ximena stared at him 'why are you asking?' He shrugged 'curiousity' 'curiousity killed the cat' He chuckled 'i know' 'well, Elvis and i didnt really work. Back then, i was immature. I was chasing shadows. I thought i knew what was best for me. I thought Elvis was the one for me. While you prepared so much for your WAEC then or whatever it was, and paid less attention to me, he showered me with ots of attention. He was always there when i was lonely. And then, one day i asked him if he was preparing for his WAEC at all and he said yes. Then i asked him how he managed to create time for me, and he confessed that he loved me. He said if you really loved someone, you will create time for that person no matter how busy you are. Leaving me in doubt if you ever loved me enough to create time for me despite you studying for your examinations. While we were together only on weekends, Elvis and i were together virtually all the time. While you called me once in two days, Elvis called me every two hours. Though i understood why you had less time for me, Elvis kept convincing me that his love for me was greater than your love for me. And im my immature mind, i figured it was true. Then i started to drift away from you. And then one day, someone told me to stay with someone who loves me more than i can imagine than someone who loves me little, ' a small laughter escaped her throat 'and i did just that. I thought i was in love with Elvis more than i was in love with you, thats why i chose him over you. And i hated you for telling me you loved me and yet you couldnt create time for me even if you were writing your WAEC or whatever. How could i end up with someone like that? That was what i thought then' 'wow! How low you thought of me then. So how did you and Elvis break up?' 'well, he never really loved me. He planned it with Vannessa. Because she was obsessed with you then and wanted you for herself. So she wanted us apart' 'yeah, after our break up, Vannessa kept coming to me, trying to seduce me and all that but i never fell for it. The childish love i had for you then was stronger than lust' 'you didnt fall but i fell for it. I was vulnerable and stupid then' 'Ximena, you are crying' She smiled 'i'm sorry but i always get get emotional whenever i think about our love story which never had the happy ever after i always dreamt of. All thanks to me. Thats why Tony, i've come so i could correct my mistakes. To take back what i lost. I am wiser now and fate made us lose our spouses so we could be together. Because we are meant to be together honeypie' Ximena said. To be cont tommorow. Good night pals

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hmmm smelling sometin

Yeye dey smell Xenia or whatever ur name is, u wanna come reap where u didn't sow huh?.... Berra carry ur sorry sef back to Mexico... honeypie my foot.

Honeypie or honeypies or honeyurine..xenda or what ever ur name z,u beta back off..tony z for alice

Ximena pack well jare another lady Alice don chance you so go look for another guy

hmmmmmm wahala dey o Alice tinx are getting complicated o beta explain fast

ximena or wotever u are called so u ar excepting him to accept u bck for over yrs u ar nw cumin nw to reap wher u ddnt reap hw cn dat b possibilty so pack well u havent reach where u ar going nd for u tony u beta dnt fall for her crocodile tear becos alice hv occupy where she is demanding so tony give urself brain ooo

hmmm i gaze tony nd ximena will come together while alice nf gilbert will come together dat z d end....fast @ aarti

Honeypie my foot carry ur wahala go front oo. If not for that stupid self centered Maria u would have met his wife Alice in the house.

wahala dey o o o

Episode 22. Tony laughed 'oh Ximena, its all in the past. That era has passed and besides that, there's someone else' 'someone else?' 'yes' 'oh. I didnt know that' 'its okay. So, tell me about you? What do you do now?' 'i'm a fashion designer now' her voice sounded weak and tired. 'you seem tired' 'yes, i am tired' 'so where do you reside? I mean where will you stay?' 'in an hotel of course, where else? I dont know anyone else in Nigeria but you' 'oh. How about you stay here? I mean, there's no one in the house. I will soon be leaving for the hospital so, you can stay here' Ximena smiled brightly 'thank you so much honeypie. You are so considerate. How on earth would i have thought that you never loved me simply because you were busy studying? I was so foolish' 'i'm just helping you Ximena. No strings attached okay?' 'i understand. By the way, what are you going to do in a hospital? Dont tell me you became a doctor because i know you are a business man' 'oh, i'm not a doctor. My daughter Maria was admitted so i have to go see her' 'oh poor girl. What happened? Is she sick?' 'she was shot two days ago' Ximena's hands flew to her mouth 'good gracious! Who on earth would want to kill a little girl?' 'i really dont know Ximena. This is the second attempt on her life. She is such an innocent girl and i dont know why anyone would hate her as much as to kill her' 'my God, this is the second time? How old is she?' 'she's 17' 'oh poor little girl, i can imagine the pains she must be passing through. I feel sorry for her' Tony shrugged and stood up 'let me show you to your room Ximena, i just want to take a bath and go back to the hospital' Ximena stood up too 'i want to go with you. I want to see her' ***** Alice raised her head and saw Tony coming, she smiled. And then she saw a strange white woman walking with him. The blonde woman was pretty, deep blue eyes, as blue as the ocean, pink lips and she had white skin. Who was she? She felt a tinge of jealousy seeing the two of them together. Could they be dating? And then she mentally slapped herself for that thought. Maybe she was just a business partner who is concerned about his daughter's welfare. She knew Tony dealed alot with foreigners. But hell, why would a foreigner be concerned about his daughter's welfare? Their relationship should just be business related. Or maybe that was Tony's new prey. He was going to sleep with her and dump her the way he dumped her. She laughed withing herself. She pitied the woman because she was going to end up just like her. 'hi Alice, you are here already' Tony said interrupting her thoughts. 'oh yeah. I...i thought i had see you...see you here' Aice stammered. 'who is she?' the white woman asked. 'she is Alice. Alice, meet Ximena, my friend and ex, Ximena meet Alice my.....ex as well' 'nice to meet you' Ximena said stretching her hands. 'its nice to meet you too' Alice said taking her hands 'you must be a foreigner' 'oh yes, i'm from Mexico' 'wow! Anyways, welcome to Nigeria' Alice said. 'Alice, have you spoken to the doctor?' Tony asked. 'no, i just got here' Tony reached for her hand and squeezed it gently 'thanks for your support. I really appreciate it alot' 'anything i do, i do because i love you and Maria' Alice said absentmindedly. 'what??' Ximena asked 'what do you mean by you love him?' Alice looked at her, then to Tony 'it was all a set up by Gilbert, Tony. The baby i'm carrying, the pregnancy i never truly aborted is yours. I love you Tony, i've always loved you. I dont have anything with Gilbert. He was only trying to break us apart. I swear it to you Tony, i've never cheated on you. The kiss we shared was a moment of weakness. I....i'm sorry for everything. But i really love you' Ximena frowned at her, then looked at her 'who the hell is this bitch???' 'watch your tongue young lady, i'm not a bitch. I'm the love of his life, do you hear me?' Alice said. 'hell you are!' Ximena retorted. Tony went close to Alice and hugged her 'i love you too Alice' 'what nonsense!' Ximena fumed and stormed out of the building.

Hahahaha wow i love this episode

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In justin bieber voice... *ximena too late to say im sorry*

Waow..i so much love this epi

Ourch..! Mehn, this episode is tingrin me ooo, see disgrace. Xianna motor, better go back to ur so call country & leave the lovers alone..

it's now tony is honeypie after over 20yrs apart,b4 when she was datin elvis back den tony was honey waec... 2ndly,,,Y can't she define her luv for tony when she later knew elvis only deceived her?.. 3rdly.,,,y didn't she communicate wit tony to start der friendship when dey were off to mexico...nothing like all dis act happened den,it was after she was now a widow after 6yrs dat she now remembered tony back bcos she found dat tony is rich,who know wat she is upto over d yrs when her husband died. She should be thanking her creator dat maria was in hospital if not she could hv regretted professing her luv for tony....i know tony is sum1 any woman can jst manipulate & i know tony won't fall easily for such luv... And for rhoda,is she trying to seduce tony or what is d meaning of her sudden dress or dos she think tony wil fall for her,is not her fault,it was bcos maria is not at home,let maria come back & she weda she wil be wearing such dress.... @Aartial,,kudos to u,u r really superb......

Episode 23. 'who is she?' 'she's Ximena Valdez, my secondary school girlfriend' 'how come she was your girlfriend? I thought she was from Mexico' 'she is from Mexico. Her father was a contractor and so he lived here with his wife and two kids, Ximena and Dario. However, when her father died, they left the country' 'wow. You loved her?' 'she was my life, then. I loved her with all my heart, and with all my body and my soul. She was the best thing that has ever happened to me' 'so i guess you were shattered when they went back to Mexico right?' 'uhm, not really. We were already broken up before she left the country' 'what happened?' 'she cheated on me. I mean, she broke up with me for another guy' 'were you guys ever intimate?' Tony pinched her cheek playfully 'you never told me you were going to interview me on my past ove life' Alice chuckled 'tell me. I want to know everything about you my sweetie' 'are you scared i might dump you for her?' 'i would be lying if i said no' 'well then, you dont need to be scared. Ximena is my past and you are my present and my future' Alice shrugged 'okay, but just know that no matter what, i love you and i will always do' 'oh! Did i tell you? She's staying at my house' 'what nonsense! Why?' ********* Ximena sat outside, under a tree in the hospital, with tears in her eyes. She didnt know her way back, she would have gone. She thought Tony loved her. She thought that he would never be able to live without her in his life because he had loved her so much then. She had loved him too but stupidity got the better part of her. Coupled with the fact that their break up was all arranged. Vanessa destroyed her relationship with Tony and God help her, she must destoy Tony's relationship with Alice. Its payback time

ximena beta got dat off cos u cant.....if maria nd gilbert 9ja blood could not destroy na u whn b oyibo blood...go bk to ur country jah

go back to ur country u fool

Ximena don't try anything funny o

Nawa for this xenda o..lol...ur plan no go work..

payback time??? Alice resemble Vanessa for ur eye??? Nawa ooh

The thunder wey go fire still dey prepare if u try anything funny. U beta go back to ur country.

hahahaha ximina don carry her own wahala land u beter return nd Dont start what u can't finish next pls

Episode 24. But could she really destroy another woman's joy? Alice wasnt Vanessa. That she lost Tony was because of Vanessa and not Alice, she knew what she went through when she found out Vanessa and Elvis planned everything, to get her confused and separate she and Tony. And she didnt want any other woman to go through that same pain. No, she wasnt going to do anything. If ever she wants revenge, she would just find Vanessa and Elvis, and of course she must find them, they've caused her alot of pain. But she was going to remain with Tony for a while, to see if his new relationship would last, and she prayed it wouldnt. She didnt want it to. She wanted an opportunity. She was so tempted to do something nasty, really nasty. Like seducing Tony or driving a knife into the girl's heart. She chuckled quietly, that was absurd. No matter how bitter she was, she could never kill her fellow human being. Oh! How she wished she had Fernanda's kind of heart, she was sure Alice woud have died the instant she went into Tony's arms. She wasnt going to do anything though. She would just pray. Pray their relationship does not work and pray for a second opportunity with Tony. She stood up, wiped her tears and walked back into the hospital. She found Tony and Alice talking, she didnt know if it was serious or or not but went to them anyways. 'hey,' she called softly 'i'm so sorry for the show i put up earlier. I was...' she raked a hand on her waist long blonde air 'kind of jealous. You know i.....' she let out a humourless laugh 'i have a thing for Tony,' she was talking to Alice now 'i mean who wouldnt? He's handsome, hardworking, intelligent, selfless but to mention a few. I'm sorry for acting bitchy earlier. It wasnt me there' Alice loved her accent, so sweet and her blonde air as well, and for the first time she wished she wasnt from Nigeria. She admired everything about this lady, her ocean blue eyes, her hair, her skin colour, she subconciously looked at her skin, she hated her chocolate skin. This woman was pretty, that was why she didnt trust her with Tony. She was an epitome of beauty and for the first time, she thought herself ugly. She was envious of Ximena Valdez, a mexican. 'its alright Ximena, can i call you Ximmy?' Alice asked looking at Tony. Ximena chuckled 'geez! I'd love that. You see when honeypie and i...i mean Tony and i were dating, he called me Ximmy. I love that name alot and for a while, i've really missed being called that. So yes, call Ximmy and i will call you Ally' Alice laughed 'oh whatever, call me Ally, call me Allie, i will answer you' Ximena stretched her hands forward with a smile 'a hug?' 'sure,' Alice said standing up. They hugged. You are so proud of yourself Alice, i dont know if i should try to hurt you or not, Ximena thought. Tony watched them with a smile. No doubt they were going to be great friends. He looked ahead of them and saw two police officers, he frowned. 'good day mr Brown,' one of the policemen greeted and Ximena and Alice disengaged. 'i'm looking for miss Alice Tarulba' 'here i am officer' Alice replied. 'i am serjeant Matthew,' he showed her his card 'and you are under arrest for the murder of one Amaka Wilson and for the attempted murder of Maria Brown'

payback what to who????...y can't she retaliate to vanessa who set her up,,she even says she loved tony...a person she can't stay wit bcos he was preparing for his waec back den,,her foolishness lead her to left better person & fell into doom of bad guy..now,u want to pay tony back..is he d one dat ask her to left him?...ur plan won't work ooooo.... I blame alice for dis bcos if she had told tony earlier dat it was a set up frm gilbert,i think ximena could hv erased her mind frm tony...well,it's not too late..i hope ximena don't play a deadful plan on tony... Let see how each of dem play der role....

Chisos..what!!

no dis cnt happening dis unbelieveable gilbert at work

Are those police officer kidding???? damn Gilbert, this must be his handiwork, what a shameless fellow.

i lov dis epi.

So many stump on d way. Xiamene is d latest stump.

gilbert God wil punish u real good.....idiot,fool

this story cant goes like dat why will dey arrest Alice when her mother and maid was rape and again i dont tink dey investigate the case

hope this won't destroy their relationship??

This ur twisting self @aarti I know understand again oo. Do this make gilbert pay for his crime and that idiotic maria to learn her lesson jare haa.

haha

hmmmmmm Gilbert again Gilbert pls leave Alice alone! u wicked soul ximina I like u like this keep it up gud gal :)

Im now here hoping to catch up & roll with the story

What..... Why Alice when the murderer iz walkinq freely....

Gilbert @ wrk bt u ll finally fail...

Ximena maa lo dey qo...dnt waste ur time

Episode 25. 'thats nonsense, what the heck are you talking about?' Alice asked. 'you have every right to remain silent because whatever you say might be used against you in the court of law' the police said. 'excuse me officer, but you just cant come here to arrest my fiancee without......' 'if you are talking about evidence or proof, then you will have to follow us to the station, constable, please handcuff her' The constable moved forward with the handcuff is his hands. 'no, you cant take me. Tony, you've got to help me. Help me please' Alice cried. ****** Gilbert kissed her forehead, then smiled 'my ever beautiful niece, my sunshine, the star in my heart, how are you?' Abby blushed 'common now uncle, why are you calling me pet names?' 'because you are my one and only niece, my darling. The only family i have now' 'dont you have plans of getting married?' Gilbert sighed and threw his hand around Abby's shoulders 'i once had. But not anymore' 'why?' Gilbert sighed and pinched her jaw playfully 'reasons best known to me my darling niece' Abby shrugged 'have you eaten? I cooked jollof rice' 'yeah, i have eaten. Why wont i eat the food you suffered to prepare for me?' 'was it delicious?' 'uh....well, you are improving. The catering classes you've been taking are gradually paying off. It would have been better if we had a woman here who would teach you better' 'i will learn' Gilbert chuckled 'i'm sure you will. Darling, i want you to do something for me. I mean, your friend, eh, Maria' 'oh! That reminds me. I have to go to her house. She hasnt been in school for three days now, and no one called the school management to inform them of her reason or reasons for being absent' 'thats what i wanted to talk to you about. Maria is currently in the hospital. She was shot, three days ago' 'JESUS CHRIST! THATS UNBELIEVABLE. HOW, WHEN AND WHY?' 'calm down Abby. I heard she was shot on her way back from school on Monday' 'my God. And she wanted to come visit me here that day but she didnt come again. Maybe that was when she was shot. No! I hope she's not dead?' 'no, she's not. She's just in coma' 'coma? Whats a coma?' 'thats a definition for another day Abby. Like i said earlier, she needs your help. She really needs yur help' 'she needs my help?' 'yes she does. But not in a way yu are thinking of. I want to whisper something to your ears, come closer' 'but there's no one else in the house but you and i' 'i know. But you know, walls do have ears' 'okay,' Abby drew close and Gilbert whispered something into her ears 'thats absurd uncle! I didnt see anything' 'well, you saw something' ***** 'officer, this cant be true,' Tony said as he took a seat in front of the ASP 'Alice is innocent. I can feel it' The ASP shook his head 'i understand whatever you may be going through now. But Alice isnt as innocent as you think' 'thats nonsense. If she tried to kill Maria, then why was she in the hospital to see her?' The ASP laughed 'its obvious you dont understand how criminals operate Mr Brown. She was only there to monitor her condition. I'm sure she wouldnt have hesitated to finish her off if she was recuperating faster' 'why on earth would she want to kill Maria?' 'you should know the reason for that mr Brown. However, our source states that Maria never really liked Alice and never wanted you to marry her, she was a stumbling block to the marriage of both of you. And besides, she broke up with yu for the period of two weeks and then suddenly, you guys are back together, doesnt that ring a bell?' 'so, what are you insinuating?' 'she needed time to plan for the assasination of Maria. And the other time assasins were sent to your home, Alice was the one who paid them to do the job, to have Maria killed' Tony frowned, trying to fix the puzzle, before he could speak, the ASP spoke again. 'and we have witnesses' 'witnesses?' Tony asked amazed. The ASP pressed the intercom and asked for the witnesses to be sent to the office. The door flew open and Tony gasped in shock.....

hmmmmmm omo this story is going to tough nawao kudus to dey author of this story but pls @aarti pity Alice nah she has suffer a lot :)

abi gilbert is the witness

or Gilbert is the witness

Abby z d witness?

Episode 26. Tony gasped as Gilbert, Abby, Angela, an unfamiliar woman, and Rhoda? What.....how was Rhoda here, they all entered the office. Tony was sweating profusely. Gawd, this was tough. The ASP looked at him enquiringly 'these are the witnesses, can you identify any of them?' Tony was speechless as he looked at all of them 'whats this all about?' he asked finally finding his voice 'Rhoda? Angela? Abby? How..how are you....i dont understand' 'we've already interviewed them before but for your sake, we would interview them again. He took a book from his table and opened it. 'Gilbert Martins?' he called. Gilbert signified by raising up his hands 'i'm the one' 'tell us what you saw' Gilbert cleared his throat 'i was at Amy, my girlfriend's house last week when the door bell rang. I was in the restroom, relieving myself while she went to answer the door. I heard Alice's voice, i'm sure of that. I just went straight to Amy's bedroom, i didnt bother coming out because i and Alice arent in good terms. And then, the next thing i heard was a gunshot, i rushed out in time and saw Alice tuck the gun into her jean pocket, then she spat on Amy's face and then...then,' Gilbert stopped as tears trickled down his cheeks 'she left. I couldnt confront her because i thought i was the only one who saw her, i was afraid she would kill me if she saw me and....she would never be caught. I really loved my girlfriend and vowed to avenge her death. That was why i reported to the police. But then, i later found out that her neighbour here,' he pointed at the fat woman besides him 'also saw Alice' 'una good afternoon oo. My name na madam Salome. I be Amy neighbour, her window face my doormot so that day, last week monday, my pikin been no well. So i say make i go buy medicine for am for one pharmacy wey near us. So, as i dey comot, na i hear bang! I fear, my head be like sey e wan fall for ground, i con say make i peep for window as the window kukuma near me. As i go there go peep, ne i see one woman oo. Hmm, the one dey chocolate, fine woman and i recognise am as Amaka friend. Her name na Alice and she get one small son like that. Infact, her son and my son na friend. She hold gun, i fear. I be wan run, na she con dey comot, na i pick race oo. I no wan die' the fat and ugly woman explained. Tony closed his eyes, this cant be happening, no. His Alice wasnt a killer. He knew her. 'my name is Abigail, i am Maria's best friend. We shared alot of secrets so Maria confided in me that she hated her father's concubine......' 'she is my fiancee, not my concubine!' Tony flared. 'please, let her speak' the ASP said. Abby shrugged and continued 'and she said that there was something fishy about this woman. That this woman hated her. And there was one day, she said something. She said, that the woman, Alice by name, served her a meal, but she wasnt hungry so she gave it to a neighbour's dog, and the next day, she heard the dog died from food poisoning. She was suspicious, but hid her thoughts. Then, another time, she was standing at the balcony, then she felt a presence behind her, then she turned, behold she saw Alice standing behind her with a knife just inches apart from her back. She said assuming she was a second late in turning back, she would have died'

. @Gilbert, everyday z 4 d thief bt 1 day z 4 d owner ov d hauz, d dai ov reckoning awaitz u

Abby is the witness it's all Gilbert, the devil 'S plan.

They say that the shade of a tree comes back....

Tweaaaaa naija police always fuck up

I guess maybe only maria can save Alice now

and all of u r in trouble when d secret leaks out

Episode 27. 'thats not true!' Tony fired standing up 'you all should stop lying against Alice, if you all have a problem, please sort it one way or the other, please dont lie against her. Alice is innocent. I feel it in my guts' 'please mr Brown, lets hear the other speak' the ASP said. Tony quietly sat down. 'okay, Rhoda. You are Tony's househelp right?' the ASP asked. 'yes sir,' Rhoda replied shyly. 'okay, say what you saw or heard' the ASP said. 'i....i...i went into the kitchen one day and....and i saw Alice putting a powdery substance to what Maria dropped on top of the freeze, probably to get something from her room. It was a cup of juice. Immediately i caught her, she threw the juice away in the sink, lying thata housefly entered the drink. That was one. And then another way, i overheard her making a call, she was saying that someone, the person she was talking to actually, picked up the wrong guys for the job and they should make sure that they are killed in prison' Rhoda said. Tony raised a brow. He heard that those assasins were killed in prison by a mysterious man 'was it a male or female she was talking to?' 'from what i was able to deduce, she was talking to a male' Rhoda said. Tears came down from Tony's eyes. Gawd! This cant be true, never! 'lets hear you' the ASP said referring to Angela. 'i...am the maid in the family house of Alice. I've worked there for over ten years now and Alice is my closest friend. I know her in and out, she is very dangerous though nice. She hates something getting in the way of her plans, she wanted to marry Tony and milk him dry so....,' she winced in pain, pains for lying against a friend 'Maria was in the way of her plans. She came to me for advice one day and i begged her to leave Tony if she didnt love him but she refused. Then she told me she was going to kill Maria. She came to me one afternoon asking for the poisonous powerdery substance that she wanted to put in her drink. Then she told me that the househelp accidently caught her and she had to plan again. The she said, she wanted it clean so she arranged for assasins to be sent to Tony's house, and she decided to spend the night there as well and have the guys rape her so her hands could be clean' she paused. Tony swallowed. Then he remembered, Alice never spent the night in his house but on the particular night she decided to spend the night in his house was the time assasins came to the house. 'but again, it failed. So last week, we were going to the market, when we saw a car pass, and she said it was Maria inside,' she started sobbing 'then she told the cab to follow the...the car. And once the car pulled up in front of building, in a lonely street, she came down and approached Maria, i really didnt know what they were saying, but.....but.....she shot Maria there and then, and we took to our heels. I was shattered, i couldnt watch a teenage young and ignorant girl die, so out of the kindness of my heart, i contacted my boyfriend and told him everything, so he went to the place where she shot Maria, and took the body to an uncompleted building near your house, then i stole your private number from her phone and sent it to him. That was how he was able to send you that text message' Tony burst into uncontrollable tears, he didnt want to believe anything they said, but they were all linked somehow. Moreover why would five people want to lie against her? Why? There was no reason whatsoever. Alice wanted to kill Maria. Then something crossed his mind, he looked up at Angela. 'the assasins who shot Maria on her birthday, who sent it?' he asked. Angela looked at Gilbert enquiringly, then nodded 'it was Alice' Without warning, Tony marched towards her and gave her a heavy slap that sent her sprawling to the floor. 'dont you dare lie against Alice again. I love her and there's nothing on earth that can make me doubt her. Unless, she admits that she committed all these crimes herself. I swear to you all here, one more lie from any of you and i will you have you guys jailed for life!' Tony warned sternly. 'do you love her that much?' Gilbert asked. 'yes, i love her that much and more. And i trust her with my life!' he stormed out of the office angrily.

Alice, na only God will vindicate u.

this Gilbert guy know how to play his cards well oooo... but time will tell

alice is in a big mess now only both of d maid can vindicate her frm dis poo..; . . as for ximena,am happy she had erased her thought frm destroying alice relatnship wit tony...if she want to revenged,she shld seek for elvis & vanessa... . . am suprised hw gilbert was able to manipulate 5 peoples. to lie against alice even both tony & alice maid could be a witness.... . . i wish maria recover frm her coma to reveal d truth for us bt i hope both maid could say d truth b4 maria does or else jail await dem.... . .@Aatial. ,ur story is interesting.. thumb up to u

Seriously Angela killed d plan Cos Tony isn't that dull. how can Alice send assassin to kill her son.

Am so happy Tony didn't believe them It only Maria that can prove Alice is innocent Am still wondering how Gilbert was able to manipulate 5 people

hmmmmmm this story is so interesting @aarti thumb up dear Tony I like dey way u act Gilbert ur days will end soon :(

hmmmm,speechless

sweet heart @Aarti thumbs up for u....more ink to ur pen....jst wish maria amy nd collins will jst appear lyk a ghost lolz.

@frankkay real fasting and prayer for maria sake o..make she no die,she z d only one that knws the truth.. Tony u are just d best angela and rhoda really suprise me o

Gilbert Ur Days Re Numbered Oo.... I Jst Hope Maria Gets Out Of Coma On Time

Alice is in a serious mess

gibert dnt worry ur dy ar number when u wil regret all ur doing nd for those who are fake witness dat lie again alice u wil soon have ur own judgement by d tyme u ar all in jail ur wil al learnt ur learn.i pray maria come out of coma on tyme nd tony u ar d best becos u really believe alice

gilbert wat eva u do u wil stl go 2 jail

Just be prepared 4 ur end @Gilbert..

May God help u Alice .....

it will backfire to Gilbert.... Maria will soon recover.

Episode 28. Alice sobbed and rested her head on his shoulders. 'Tony, believe me, i didnt kill anybody. I didnt even try killing Maria, i didnt shoot anyone, i swear with my life' she cried. 'i believe you, i know you can never do such a thing. Why on earth would you want to kill your best friend?' Tony said wiping her tears. She raised her head and looked into his eyes 'tell me Tony, do you really believe me?' 'i do' 'then tell me, who are the witnesses?' 'i....you wont believe it' 'tell me' 'can you handle it?' 'i swear it' 'Gilbert, Abby, one fat woman called Salome, Amy's neighbour, then Rhoda and Angela' Alice stood up 'you are lying to me' Tony brought out his phone 'i recorded everything they said. You can recognise their voices right?' Alice nodded and he played it. Alice listened to it and almost fainted. 'this is not true. I'm innocent. They are all lying, from Gilbert to Rhoda to Angela and to Salome, this is sheer wickedness, i am innocent' Before Tony could say anything, the policewoman entered the room. 'sir, you have just a minute left' the woman said and left. *now, lets pretend that Nigeria is a country where money cannot buy someone's freedom. Lets pretend there is no corruption. You know what i mean, winks* Tony held Alice's handcuffed hands 'i will get you out of here, i swear. I will prove your innocence. Right now, your only hope is if Maria wakes up and her memory is still intact. Then, she will say who shot her' Alice nodded as more tears poured down her eyes 'i will be spending the night here?' 'i'm sorry my love but its very possible. I....i dont know what to do. I'm very sorry' 'its a pity, we just reconciled and then this catastrophe, i didnt plan it, i swear' 'i understand,' he stood up 'just take care of yourself and the baby. I love you' 'i love you more' Alice said as the policewoman entered again, and took her back to the cell. Tears trickled down his cheeks on seeing her enter the cell. ***** 'we need to stick to the original plan, you know i cant go back to that house, oga Tony will just kill me and bury me alive' Rhoda said. Gilbert smiled and handed her an envelope, 'this is a hundred thousand naira. It can give you a better life than the one you are in' Rhoda took it, and stood up 'i should go back and pack my bags before oga Tony gets there, and i also have to leave now so i can get to my village early' 'good luck. Thanks for everything' Gilbert stood up and shook her her hand 'let me drop you off' 'okay, thank you' Rhoda said. 'Abby, prepare something for Angela and Salome, let me drop Rhoda off, i will be back very soon' Gilbert said as he left with Rhoda. Abby faced the crying Angela 'stop crying. Crying wont solve anything at all. What has been done has been done' 'i feel like the devil now. Alice was like the sister i never had. She loved me. She cared for me but i couldnt reciprocate the love, i lied against her because of money and......' 'fear of death,' Abby put in quickly 'you know my uncle will kill you if you hadnt cooperated' 'but its evil. If you were in her shoes, how will you feel?' Angela asked. 'i will feel awful i know. But it will never happen to me, i'm sure of that' Abby said. Salome hissed 'abeg, make your uncle come, make he give me my money make i dey comot jor. Weting concern me concern person wey wan go prison' ***** 'excuse me, this is not the way to my oga's house' Rhoda said as Gilbert parked in a bush path. Gilbert smiled and brought out a gun from his pigeon hole 'eyaa, its a pity. You dont deserve to die but....i cant let you live. Its too dangerous. If you decide to open your mouth, i am dead' he pushed her air aside 'you did it for money, but you just have to die, i'm sorry' he snatched the envelope from her, then shot her thrice on the head, then opened the door and dragged her out, then zoomed off quickly. To be continued

hmmm ur end will surely come

dis gilbert is so heartless dat wot d deserve at rhoda

Stupid gilbert... @aarti i dont like what u are doing o...allow police to catch gilbert na

This Gilbert is more wicked than the devil himself

hmmm

wicketnes in high places

dis Gilbert is something else

chisos! Rhoda is dead nawao Gilbert dey thunder way go fire u still dey for gym dey do press up :)

chai!

I know Gilbert was going to kill all his fake witnesses one after the other

Chai... All ur witnesses just sold their lives for money... One after the other they qo down six feet.

Rhoda see ur lyf mchteew

Episode 29. Ximena hesitated for a while before knocking on the door. Then pushed it open. Tony stood in front of a portrait of a very beautiful woman. It wasnt Alice so she thought perhaps it was his late wife. 'honeypie,' she called softly. Tony turned to her, she was clad in a sexy pink robe that exposed her cleavage. 'hi Ximena, not asleep yet?' he asked coolly. 'i couldnt sleep. I was worried about you. I knew you wouldnt be fine' Tony smiled sadly 'i'm alright' 'no you are not,' she held his face with his hands 'you are worried about Alice, i know. Its written all over your face' 'i'm fine' 'you are lying to me Tony and i know that' 'okay fine,' he went to sit on his bed 'i'm not fine, i'm worried. I dont know what to do to prove her innocence. Deep within me i feel it that she is innocent. Alice is not like that Ximena' 'i thought you said there were five witnesses who testified against her, your maid inclusive' 'thats true' 'so how can you be so sure that she's innocent?' 'i trust her' 'oh come on, lets forget about trust and see the truth. She had every reason to want to kill your daughter, because from what you told me Maria was against her. Come on now' 'and i love her. If you truly love someone, you will learn to trust that person with all your heart' 'you are too trusting Tony. Sorry to say. Remember, you trusted me so much you never believed the rumor that i was dating Elvis until i told you the truth myself. If you had listened to Vanessa then, you would have known before i told you. But you loved me and trusted me so much you were blind to see the truth' 'Alice is not like you Ximena' 'i know that. But you are being so blind and its infuriating me' 'then leave! Pack your bags and leave. Go back to Mexico where you came from' Tony was furious now. 'i wont leave you Tony. Like it or not i will always be by your side because i love you' Tony blinked twice 'you love me?' 'i do love you. I never stopped loving you for the past twenty years' 'seriously?' 'yes' 'you loved me and yet you cheated on me?' 'i told you then that i was foolish. I didnt know what i want. I thought attention, kisses and romance was everything' 'whatever!' He stood up and went to the window. Ximena stood up. 'i know you love Alice so much. You loved me too in the past. But Alice just proved to be a murderer. I just cheated on you. And call it immaturity. Believe it or not Tony, we were meant for each other, i swear it' Tony didnt reply so she continued. 'i regretted my mistakes. Havent you made mistakes in the past that you regretted so much. I was just 16 then, i knew nothing. But i'm 36 now. I'm wiser, much more wiser than ever' 'good for you' he replied coldly. 'i now know what i want. I love you Tony. I never loved Elvis the way i loved you neither did i love Fabian the way i love you. I loved you when i left for Mexico and i love you now' 'shut up and leave my room this instant' he said without turning back. Ximena sobbed 'you dont understand how i felt then and how i'm feeling now. The love in my heart is at bursting point. I love you my baby, my honeypie, my childhood sweetheart' Tony turned to her 'i cant believe you are saying this. I'm in love with another' 'and that person is a murderer! She tried to murder your own daughter, dont you understand?' she said with her voice raised, Tony was sure the security heard her. 'Ximena you are sick, you need a check up' 'yes i'm sick. I'm sick of love, love for you' 'then you deserve a more qualified doctor. Ximena, i'm going through alot right now. My daughter is in coma right now and now my fiancee are locked up in the police station for what she knows nothing about. And now you want to add to my problems?' 'i want to help you reduce them my love' 'then leave my room, Ximena, if you truly care about me' Ximena loosed her robe and it fell to the ground and there she was, standing before him, stark naked. 'i love you Tony' To be continued

wahala dey

Lol* diz iz nt funny

omo wic kind temptation be dis tony no fall my hand o ximina dey kind thunder way go fire u still dey gym dey do press up mitcheew :(

Reallly?

See Devil ooh

Oh Alice God will see you through

I trust tony jare..that will make him to hate u xender lol..i love to call u xender bc u are a sharer

see wahala ooooo.....ximena na by force

Just push her out @Tony..

can tony fall for dis trap?...even rhoda dat dressed seductive to tony,he don't fell for it.. An adage says=he who betray d land,die wit d land,,r.i.p rhoda after many yrs u had spent in tony's house,bcos of money ,u lost ur soul..... Let see wat happen to d betrayal...

this one na war. Alice, the almighty shall see you through

See me c seduction. Na soh?

Episode 30. 'get out of my room Ximena' Tony thundered. 'but honeypie......' 'if you dont leave here this moment, i'm going to beat you up and this isnt Mexico' Tony said as he opened the door 'get out now Ximena!' ***** 'good day attorney,' Tony said as he sat opposite the aged man. 'good day mister Brown, its nice to meet you' they shook hands. 'i heard about the case with your fiancee, that she murdered someone?' mr Sokari asked. 'believe me, she is innocent' Tony said. **** Tony was just about stepping into the police station with his attorney when his phone rang. 'excuse me please' he said and stepped aside. 'hello doctor,' he said. 'mr Brown, i have good news for you. Maria just woke up from coma' Tony almost fainted from excitement. He rushed to his attorney 'Attorney, the doctor just called me, my daughter just woke up from coma' 'oh thats good news! Thats a step in proving the innocence of your fiancee' the attorney said. ***** Maria froze on seeing Gilbert, memories of the last event flowed freely into her head and she was frightened. 'please, please dont kill me, i plead' she pleaded weakly, her head was banging seriously, like she might just die. 'shhhh' Gilbert said placing his forefinger on his lips 'i've not come to kill you. I've come here to strike a deal with you' 'please, pleasee please go away. I dont want to have anything to do with you' 'unfortunately my dear Maria, our deal isnt over. Infact, it only just begun. I want you to do something for me. For us' 'for us?' 'let me brief you on what has been happening since you went into coma' Gilbert said 'Alice is locked up in the prison. She is being accused for shooting you' 'but thats not true, you were the one who shot me' He sighed 'lets look at this in a brighter way. You hate Alice, you dont want your dad to end up with her, this is the best way to get rid of her' 'but they already broke up' 'bad news, they got back together' Maria licked her lips 'your presence is doing me more harm than good' 'she is already in prison. But, all she needs to be sent to jail for the rest of her life is you saying she was the one who shot you' 'no! I cant do that' 'then your dad marries her' 'i cant let that happen either' He laughed 'then, this is our one and only chance to get rid of her' 'i...isnt there other ways to go about this?' 'kill her?' 'no, that is evil' 'then lets do it this way. Are we clear' 'but you wanted to kill me' 'not for you but for Alice. I shot you in a place where i knew you were going to survive it. So we could het rid of her once and for all my darling' 'are you sure?' 'i've never been so sure all my life my sweetie,' he kissed her forehead 'when the police comes, here is what you are going to say' He told her what to say to corrolate Angela's story. 'do you understand?' Gilbert asked. Maria smiled 'very well then. Uncle Gilbert, thank you for handling things in a matured way, what would i have done without you?' Gilbert grinned 'are you actually thanking me for shooting you?' 'you know, it solved alot of things' Gilbert smiled. ****** 'my darling, thank goodness you are awake' Tony said for the umpteenth time 'i missed you' 'me too daddy' Mr Sokari coughed now 'so mr Brown, you've had enough time with your daughter. Lets get the truth from her' Tony nodded 'my love, i want you to tell us the truth, who shot you?' Maria coughed 'water, please' Tony opened the freezer and gave her a bottled water, she drank almost half of it before clearing her throat 'you are stressing me daddy' 'i know my darling, but its important you speak right now' 'who shot you? A man or a woman' the attorney asked. 'a woman' Maria replied. 'who?' Tony asked eagerly. 'it was Alice' she said

this maria is going to die i swear, gilbert is manipulating her, naija self even poor so the police never heard roda is dead and who kill her is it alice again.... I am just lafing and crying here

hmmmmmm this story is getting complicated now am even crying here ... hehehehehehehebehebeh

Nonsense so nw dat Maria has testify against her what next

Holy shit wetin be dis kin problem.alice take heart nd be strong

Seriously

Dis gal gat no shame I don't even pity her anymore she not a kid Pray ximena deal wid her

dis maria is sumtin else...

jst pray colins didnt die

hmmm @aarti u are happy now :( :( this maria is a big time idiot

Maria you are more foolish and stupid than I thought

foolish girl u have carryout wot he wnt nd he is coming bck to finish is job by killing u i just pray u shuld die nd if u ddnt die u ar also a woman u wil soon meet ur own

Maria is just d most foolish person d world ever produce

chai!! na by force person dey love?? I wonder y gilbert is so bend on destroyn alice

This story is becoming something else

@aarti am waiting for an update o am nt going anywhere till u update :)

An update will come in the evening @frankkay. I'm at work right now. Some of una comments really made me laugh sha

ok am waiting....... why won't u lough while u are protecting Gilbert

I hate this maria..am so so tired of all this injustice

@aarti weting alice do u na? Y u hate her this much? And u even come dey like gilbert

this thing is getting out of hand now ......... i feel like jumping into the story to tell the whole truth ....

funny u @eben

Episode 31. Alice felt hungry, tired and nauseous. She hadnt had anything to eat since yesterday and she hadnt seen Tony since today. She was scared. She didnt want him to abandon her. And then she wondered if her mother knew where she was. She looked at the other inmates of the cell, they were looking skinny and had dark circles around their eyes, they looked like monsters. She relaxed on the cold wall, she was very hungry and very tired. The cell opened and a policewoman who she later knew to be to Ekaite entered. 'come, person wan see you' Ekaite said and left. Alice knew she was the one Ekaite was referring to her because she pointed at her. So she staggered to her feet with the little strenght she had and prayed it was Tony. And it was Tony. But there was something wrong with his countenance, he was staring at her dangerously, she was scared. God help me, she prayed. 'my love', she called softly 'how are you?' He looked at her for a while before dropping a white eatery nylon in front of her, she took it and opened it, it was fried rice, jollof rice (in the same plate) with a mighty chicken lap and a chivita juice. She smiled at him gratefully 'thanks dear, i'm starving' He looked away, then she heard him mutter something, but she didnt hear anything. He was behaving wierd. 'Maria woke up,' he said after few seconds of silence. Her heart jumped into her mouth, and she quickly knelt down. 'my God, thank you for vindicating me. I knew you would never let me down. God! So i'm out of this hell hole' she said, she was very happy. Infact, she was no longer fatigued or hungry. She just wanted to leave there. Tony blinked back the tears forming in his eyes, no! He would never cry in front of a murderer, never! She stood up and hugged him, he just sat there motionless for a while, he wanted to just stay in her arms for sometime, at least to hold on to that memory. Then he pushed her away, violently. 'stay away from me you murderer!' his voice was stern. She was taken aback for a while 'honey......' 'dont honey me!' he snapped 'it was you. It was you who shot her. You wanted her dead. And it might also be you who killed your best friend. You decieved me, you made me believe you are an angel when you are a devil in disguise' 'Tony.......' 'Maria mentioned who it was that shot her. And it was you!' 'thats not true!' 'who on earth would believe a horrible woman like you, you desperate sl.u.t.!' Tears trickled down her cheeks 'Maria said i was the one who shot her?' 'yes!' 'my God! Thats a lie. I swear with my life and that of my son......' 'you've said that a million times!' he stood on his feet 'i dont believe you anymore' She fell on her knees and grabbed his trouser 'i swear i'm innocent. I havent killed someone in my life, i swear' A policeman entered immediately 'we ransacked her house like you ordered us to do and we found this,' he showed them a transparent nylon with a gun inside 'we found this in her room' Alice gasped. 'are you going to deny this too?' Alice cried 'that gun belongs to my dad. I swear it Tony, it was in my room because i used it to threaten Gilbert one day and.....' 'so you wanted to kill him too?' Tony asked. 'no!' 'sir,' the policeman said 'we ran some tests on the gun and the gun had her fingerprints' To be cont

u don enter am alice..... na only God go save u

Mtcheeeew this story is already annoying.

Why is every thing turning out against Alice. I just pity d poor Alice but don't be too scared cus i knw God will vindicate u

Benjamin were is thy soul to rescue Alice God is great.

so how will she over come it .......

Is part is the most annoying part ever

De most annoying part

uhm,,#sobs

I don tire for this story self *angry mode*

Alice Ur problem don double may God help u dats dey remaining prayer now

Why is dis Maria so stupid........ doesn't she hv any sense at all. Sumbodi who shot her is nw asking her for favour nd she agreed. I jst pity Alice....jst cos of love she's gone thru hell. Gilbert will soon pay for all he has done to Alice nd her family. Am jst short of wrds shaaa....jst following. But pls @aarti dnt keep us waiting ooo

Angry mood

Gilbert and Maria I believe nemesis will caught up with people Am sure either Amy or Kevin is alive I won't blame Tony for not believing Alice again

God help u

Nawa oooh.....Alice what did u do that warranted all this to befall on u..... this thing Don tire me sef, from one problem to another.

God see Alice through

This is just too much for one person to bear

Everytn happens 4 reasons bst knwn 2 God

am surprised as maria could vindicate gilbert frm dis crime... am nt surprised as dis story is going bcos d writter has once said she is freeing gilbert to be capture.;

why is it dat alice is d only one to suffer in dis story is a crime for her to stay wit d persn she love am even tired of d story becos am so piss off wit way gilbert is commiting seriou crime nd he is stil enjoy is life.alice dnt worry God we help u out@aarti by d end of dis story gilbert must reap all wot he sow nd he must suffer alot before he die i wont b happy if u cover up for gilbert by saying he later repent becos u hav already tell us dat is gilbert dat u like most

i didn't blame d writer but rather praise her 4 being creative and still continue giving us different twist that we're yet to solve d riddle of d story.... i'm very impressed by the creativity nous of d writer

Lolz @hameyeenat dont you know that when a sinner repents, there's joy in heaven? Una comment dey funny me wahali. Na so una like Alice reach? And i never said Gilbert will repent in the story, i meant he might just remember God overnight and change. That one concern am sha, if he likes, he should repent, if he doesnt want, his own cup of tea

@aarti pls update or i'll cry ooo

am here @aarti afternoon update nkor :) @natasha9976 cry o I want to see how u use to cry :)

Episode 32. THREE WEEKS LATER. Maria was discharged from the hospital when she was in a stable condition. She recovered quickly. The day she went home, she saw one white woman sitting in the sitting room with her legs crossed as if she owned the house. She couldnt believe it, could her dad have replaced Alice so quickly. She didnt want any woman and she swore she was going to kill her if really she was her father's new girlfriend. By the time she was to be discharged, her dad had been in Abuja for a conference meeting so her new driver and one of the new maids had escorted her home. 'hi,' the white woman said smiling 'you must be Maria, i've heard alot about you' 'and you are?' Maria asked as the new maid went to drop her belongings in her room. 'i'm Ximena Valdez, i'm a Mexican, its nice to meet you' Ximena said stretching her hands forward for a handshake. Maria eyed her 'keep your hand, i dont shake strangers' Ximena shrugged and brought her hand down. 'now who you are miss Mexican?' Maria asked. 'i'm your father's friend. To be honest, we dated in secondary school' Ximena replied with a cool smile. 'then what are you doing here? Or has my dad started harbouring ex girlfriends in this house?' Ximena frowned a little before smiling again, she didnt like this girl one bit. 'no. I'm here because i came to visit him' 'for what?' Maria threw back 'why? For what reason, do you have a child for him?' 'no, why are you talking to me like that?' 'i want to understand the reason for your visit miss Mexican, tell me why you came to my father's house and relaxing as if you own the house, like you built and furnished it' 'your dad asked me to stay here' 'why? Is he sleeping with you or what?' Ximena stopped smiling, she didnt understand something about this girl. 'i'm staying here because he asked me to' she said. 'and i asked you why? Is he sleeping with you?' 'no, i'm not that cheap' Maria studied her for few seconds, then grinned 'you are beautiful sha but i dont allow girls come an inch close to my dad. You know why? Because he's married, and married men arent supposed to touch other women right?' 'your dad didnt marry Alice, did he?' 'you knew Alice?' 'yes, that murderer. I know her' Maria kept quiet for some seconds 'you know what miss Mexican, i want you to leave this place, leave this house immediately if you dont want trouble' 'is that supposed to be a threat or what?' 'its a threat' 'well, sorry to say, you cant threaten me. I can see you are a little spoilt brat!' 'and i can see you are a cheap s.lut!' Ximena lost it and slapped her. Maria was stunned for a few seconds, then she went to the bar, picked up a bottle, broke it on the wall and.......

hmmm no comment ooo

Am downcast nw. Y so much frame up against Alice?

Maria is becoming worse by the day

Ohh God please kill Maria in Jesus name cos she is the stupid thing av come across ???

Infact @ernesto, i go help you kill am. How you want am? Poison or gun or accident?

and wat

Yeepa Yawa wan happen Mariaaaaaa

@aarti pls na

And broke Mrs Mexican's head. Lol

she ll later regret her actions toward alice.... dats very sure

hmmmmmm ximina test ur own share :) following keenly

chai,,maria d murderer,,,wats ur p sef,,you no even go school again

Hmmmm

feelin dat collins didnt die nd i sense only him can save alice from dis....

den and maria will beg for a second chance in Alice's life

Hahahahahaha,laugh won kill me for here o..xenda u got to deal with this mumu maria

oh no,hope she fifnt kill her sha

dis story don tire person...

Nd d war began

nw dey will say alice broke her head with bottle aqaaain!!!

ximena never see anytin,stella dat is wicked sef bowed for maria talkless of alice.none of dem never raise der hand to slap her bt she has d gut to slap her..well,she never see anytin,maria will show her hw spoilt brat she was

and Maria stab miss Mexican with the broken bottle....

maria don spoil everything ooooo yeeepaaaa

Maria screw you!!!!!.

Maria Why testify against Alice nau???.... you are too young to start showing ur wicked character.

Am sure Maria is about to frame Miss mexican up.....maybe she will stab herself

Na this kind woman fit Maria

no update yet.

[b]ghost mode deactivated. Next pls @aarti[/b]

this is they 4th time am checking for update here :( @aarti do something or what happened in 2014 will repeat itself

Mouth wide opened.... Maria stab miss mexican with the bottle.

Mmmmmm Maria think twice Fool

fifth check :(

Yeeeeepa maria don kill person o

awoooo no update today

Episode 33. Alice sat on the floor, her head on the wall and tears in her eyes. She placed her hands on her stomach, her pregnancy was eleven weeks now. She blinked back the tears that were threatening to spill. If someone ever told her that she will in this kind of situation, she would never have believed. Locked in this prison for doing something she knew nothing about, pregnant. The man she loved abandoned her, her mother, her best friend lied against her, and she was here all alone. It was hard to believe that Tony could abandon her. And his baby. It was so cruel of him. 'of everything you could be, i didnt know you could stoop so low as to kill someone' her mother had said when she first visited her in the cell. She cried as she remembered that horrible day, that was two weeks ago. When Ekaite had come to tell her mother was outside waiting for her, she felt happy. Very happy, that at least, she had someone to lean on. But she wrong. The moment she saw her mum, tears of joy had run down her cheeks, and she hugged her. But to her utmost dismay, the woman she called her mother pushed her away with full force. 'stay away from me you filth!' Kofo's voice was angry and irritated. Alice was surprised and at the same time she wasnt surpised. She had expected that kind of reaction from her mother, a little. 'just look at you,' her mother said eyeing her scornfully 'just look at the way you've lost alot of weight. God! It doesnt pay doing evil' 'you......' Alice said 'dont....dont think i....i committed the...crime i was accused....accused of right?' 'i didnt think, i know you committed the crime. You are so desperate, i know you can do anything so you could end up with a rich man but now, here you are, in this stinking cell, pregnant for a man with a daughter who hates you. You are the most foolish person on earth my dear' Alice sobbed inwardly, hearing her mother say such things about her was so heartwrecking. But she wasnt surprised, she had heard her mother say more horrible things about her. 'what of Angela? Is Angela still in the house?' she asked with tear filled voice. 'if not for Angela, what would i have done? She is the one who takes care of me, make me forget about the shameless daughter i have. Right now, i have only one daughter. And its Angela' Alice closed her eyes as tears dropped 'do you know what Angela did to me?' 'she told the truth. She is truthful. She couldnt see evil and cover it up, just like you. She's at peace right now, you know why? Because she exposed evil. Thats why you hate her' 'please tell her to come see me' 'i'm sorry i cant. That would be madness because you might just kill her. You are a psycho Alice, i will never let Angela, my daughter come close to you again, who knows what more crime you might commit again. I dont underestimate silly murderes like you' she said. Kofo didnt see it coming, until when Alice was on top of her, pounding her with all the strenght she could muster. From different directions, blows and slaps rained on her. It took the intervention of some police officers to stop her daughter from beating the living daylight out of her. By the time they could pull Alice from her, she had been seriously injured and was rushed to the hospital. She was bleeding profusely. And the Angela had visited her(Alice) and warned her never to touch Kofo again. 'she might not be your mother but she is my mother now! Dont you dare touch my mother again' Angela had warned. Alice had laughed at her face and even spat on it. Angela was really shameless, claiming that Kofo was now her(Angela) mother. How silly! It was only a matter time of time before she realised what a terribe woman she wanted to have as a mother. Then, she remembered the particular event that turned her relationship with her mother into a bitter one. To be cont. @frankkay, oya, update don show

Am really disappointed in Kofo Angela enjoy another person's mum while it last because I know sooner or later nemesis will sure caught up with you Alice you didn't beat up your mother very well @aarti plz come and tell what turned mother and daughter relationship sour

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And would you have done the same or more to Kofo if u were to be Alice? @Fabulous

if i were alice i dnt knw if i wil ever 4gve ma mother but 4 tony am sure i wil never b able 2 b wit him nd his daughter if am prevent innocent sumday.

i cant b wit a man who's daughter wlnt tink twice killing me.

That is life Alice but believe me God will see u though

too much of suspense.... different twists

Episode 34. Alice had been involved in a fight in his school that fateful monday morning, and so she had been suspended. She had gone home very early, at 9:30am. She saw a strange car parked inside the compound, she wondered who the visitor inside was. She knew her dad was away for a business trip in Abuja. So she entered the house. She didnt bother knocking, she just entered. And then she saw something, something very horrible. Her mum was making out with another man! On the sofa! The lovers didnt seem to notice her presence at all. The tv was showing a porn movie. The sight was so irritating she almost threw up. 'christ!' That was when Kofo raised up her head to see Alice standing there. She immediately pushed the man on top of her away, then quickly reached for her wrapper and tied it around herself. 'mummy!' The man slowly dressed up and left the house as if nothing happened. That night, Kofo had come to her room to try explaining things to her but she didnt listen and she vowed to tell her dad. 'listen to me Alice, will you?' Kofo said desperately. 'i'm sorry i wont' 'you dont know what happened, you dont understand what you saw!' 'at least i saw you kissing another man, you want to tell me that i dont know the definition of kissing again?' 'dont tell your dad anything because i swear, i will hate you for life if you do' 'then hate me! Its non of my business' 'and you are going to regret it. You are going to beg me to love you again' 'daddy loves me. His love is enough for me. And he loves you too, i wonder why you had the guts to sleep with another man!' 'do you know what your dad does in Abuja? Do you know?' 'of course i know! He's working his butts out just so he could give you a future!' 'you know nothing!' 'i know everything!' 'do you even care to know the reason i slept with that man? Do you know?' 'i dont want to know. And you know what mummy? I hate you. I hate you so much for betraying my dad. And i swear i'm going to tell him everything i saw. You were even watching porn, God forbid! You are a disgrace to womanhood infact to motherhood!' She saw the tears forming in her mother's eyes but couldnt care less. 'one day Alice, one day, you will become a mother and a wife and you will understand just what i'm passing through and you will know how it feels for your own child to call you a disgrace' 'a disgrace, thats really what you and there would be no reason my child will call me a disgrace because i will never let any man touch me unless he's my husband. I will give my virginity to my husband' 'we will see about that' And with that Kofo had left the room. In the days that followed, Alice noticed how withdrawn and miserable Kofo became. She hardly ate and she was emanciating. That was when Angela was employed. Then her mother fell ill and was admitted in the hospital. Then her father came back from Abuja. She wanted to tell her dad everything but she wanted her mum to be hale and hearty first. She couldnt help but also notice that her dad also looked withdrawn but then she thought it was because his wife was ill. And then, when her mother was discharged, she planned to tell her dad during dinner. She just wanted her dad to know. That morning, she had gone into their room and told Kofo that her game would be over tonight. And despite the fact that Kofo pleaded with her and promised to change, she did tell her dad. She had expected her dad to be mad, but instead he was calm. And the next thing he did really surprised her. He went on his knees in front of Kofo and vowed never to cheat on her again since she had made good her threat. It was then she understood everything, her dad was cheating on her mum and her mum decided to reciprocate the gesture. When her parents hugged, she felt like a fool. She hadnt listened to her mother's explanation and had told her dad. That marked the beginning of her mother's hatred for her. She was very sorry and tried apologising but her mother never stopped calling her names at the slightest opportunity. Her mother had said a time will come when she would need love from her and that time was now, but love was nowhere to be found

@aarti tanks DATs why I ERM ERM... :) Angela. Gilbert. God is watching u people ur time is near wicked souls next pls

That kofo z not ur real mum...stupid woman

So touching

@onahsunday631,,what if her father was fraustrated wit her mum & divorce her at dat moment,wat will be d gain of her for exposing her mother?.....i don't blame kofo for not showing her luv....

That's not enough reason for a woman to hate her own child

Alice you were not suppose to expose your mum to your dad. What if your dad had divorced your mum ? What would you have gain ?

@delexzy01 What Alice did was wrong but that is not enough reason for her to hate Alice

waiting for the last Alice all these peeps will come begging on their knees for u.

Am speechless

Maria is so mean.

@delexzy001 so u want to tell me that u can keep such a big secret from ur father if u are on her shoe?

Episode 35. After smiling at the receptionist, he went straight to his hotel room, exhausted. He was glad he was done with all the meetings and going back to Lagos to see his daughter was the next thing in mind. Maria had been discharged, athough he wasnt around. He was glad she survived it. What would he had done if she had died. Apart from Maria he had no one, except of course Ximena. That mexican lady had stuck to him like a chewing gum for sometime now. She was all about getting back together with him. And getting him to sleep with her. But he wasnt interested. Even most times when she came to his room totally naked, he didnt feel aroused. She had been flirting with his openly for a while. Most times, she would sit opposite him, then open her legs wide enough for him to see, and she was mostly pantieless. He was glad that finally Maria was back, at least she wont be able to openly flirt with him in the presence of his daughter. Just as he dropped his briefcase on top of the bed, then proceeded to take of his shoes. His phone rang. It was officer Ekaite. '.....good day Ekaite' '......what?! Didnt i mention that she should be always well fed?' '.......she's crying my baby for crying out loud. If anything bad happens to her, i will hold you responsible' '........where is she now?' '......is she alright? Has her mother visited her again?' '......make sure she is well attended to, i dont want anything bad to happen to my unborn child. Did they say anything concerning the baby?' '......Send me your account details. I will sending you enough money, i want her to be well fed and very comfortable. At least, until she delivers' '......thanks for the information. I really appreciate it. Bye' He hung up. He threw his phone back on the bed and sighed. Alice collapsed again. He wondered what on earth was wrong with Alice. The other day she fought with her mother forgetting she was pregnant. And today, she had refused to eat and had collapsed. Doesnt she realise she was putting herself in danger? Then he pinched himself, he wasnt the least concerned about her. He was concerned about his child. He wants his child to be healthy. Left for him, he wouldnt care if she fights everyone who comes her way or refuse to eat for years. Infact, she deserved death. But for his baby. He reached for his phone and looked at the screen saver. It was Alice's smiling beautiful face looking at him with those beautiful brown eyes of her. He shook his head. He missed her, he couldnt deny that fact. And the fact that he had been able to stop himself from visiting her in the hospital everyday was by the grace of God. ****** Maria felt pity and guilt surge through her when she saw the sorry state of Alice. She was looking miserable, the once chuby Alice was now skinny and her eyes were dark. There was no doubt that she was really suffering in that hell hole of a prison. Despite the fact that she was happy she was here, she couldnt help but feel sorry for. Would she ever want to suffer like this? For nothing? When she was innocent? And pregnant? For the man she loves? She didnt know if she made the right decision by telling her dad that it was Alice who shot her when it was Gilbert. She didnt know anymore. This innocent woman was suffering for nothing. The place stung. She couldnt even dream of spending an hour locked up here not to talk of three weeks. When Alice looked at her with those pitiful eyes of hers, she vowed to be nicer to her. At least, since she was locked up here, she would just try to be nice. The pitiful look on Alice's eyes soon turned to that of hatred. 'what are you doing here?' Alice asked angrily 'go away, i dont want to see you, demon!' Maria smiled a little 'i brought you food' 'i'd rather die of hunger than take anything from you. If you had the guts to lie that i was the one who shot you whereas i was not, then you can do anything. You can poison me' 'i wont poison you, you are carrying my younger brother and sister in there' Maria said so softly and politely, Alice almost laughed. 'whats with the poiteness huh? I thought you were nothing but a rude spoily brat!' Maria sighed 'Alice, stop acting all bitchy. I am here for peace. I didnt come to see you. I'm here for my unborn sibling' 'get out, get out now before i strangle you with my bare hands' It was no threat, Maria could see it in her eyes. 'Alice, maybe if you are nicer to me, i might just say the truth' Alice moved towards her furiously, landed three slaps on her cheeks, pushed her to the ground and sat on top her, feeding her blows and slaps. To be cont

ALICE has been poised to act strangely

hmmm Alice u should ve try to ask her Y she choose to lie against u dan beat her....i feel ur pain bt u should ve control it...

Beat hell out of that she devil

Confirm I love Dat approach

Even with dat, its nt enough to hate ur own child. Haba Kofo!!!

I pray dat Maria would v a change of mind and say d truth for once.

mtch3w,,uve just startd,,uve nt seen anythng maria

alice has gone nut o..alice mum is a failure 4 thinkin d only way 2 pay back 2 a man who cheated on is 2 cheat on him 2.she s a slut 4 even havin d heart 2 sleep wit another man.

Maria dis z jez d beginnin oo I support alice,, may God see u tru Alice

yes that good she is so stupid and the stupidity will kill her if she didnt wiseup nah, nawa ooo coz u hate person u wan make she die

am waiting for gilbert share oooo. oya make he come collect his share jare. waiting for more action from Alice. nice one. next

this story is more than a super story ........ this final episode got me crying .......hehehehejehebebefefee

Good for that crazy rude brat Maria.....

well am speechless now keeping on riding @aarti :(

I no know say Alice na fighter before

Waiting for the next update

if dis story were to be a movie,I wud have hated d actress wu wud act d character of Maria for ever forgetting its just a movie... gosh! I so much dislike dis Maria, wish I cud join Alice and beat d hell out of her, how cud she let d person who shot go free and lie against anoda, hw cud she b soo stupid. I wudnt even pity her if Gilbert Shd make anoda attempt on her life and dis time succeeded in killing her

nawa oooo na so all of u heat my love @maria...make una leave d gal...i love maria wit passion despite she z spoilt bt not her fault...

Beat her bck to comma jare, her own is getting too much

Episode 36. Alice watched as Tony ranted on and on about how stupid she was for laying a finger on Maria simply because she said the truth. She smiled inwardly. Coward. Just saying irrevelant things. She had a patch by the corner of her lips, all thanks to Ekaite. Ekaite, one day she was going to have a taste of her poison too. She didnt care if she was a policewoman or not. She would make she bites off one of her, she nippl.es one day. She didnt care about anything anymore. She just wanted to live the rest of her life being crazy. 'i dont care if you are a fuc.king murderer or not, but the next time you lay a finger on my daughter again, i will kill you myself!' Tony said pointing a warning finger at her. She laughed 'fuc.king? I didnt know you talk dirty Tony' Tony eyed her 'i am warning you Alice, Maria is all i've got, and i will kill you if you touch her again. You cant kill her Alice, even if you try for a hundredth time' Stupid fool! She just felt like grabbing his collar and slapping the living daylight out of him. 'i was paid back in my own coin wasnt i?' she asked 'didnt you ask Ekaitte to beat me mercilessly, do you see these scars on my face and arm?' she showed the the bite mark on her left arm. She laughed 'tell you brat of a daughter never to come here again. Because i will become the murderer that you are calling me' Tony moved towards her aggressively 'tramp! I can see that you are not remorseful about anything, and thats the more reason you are going to rot here. I will make sure of that' Alice laughed again. She had been doing alot of that for a while now 'i killed people. Killing you wont draw a single blood from my veins, you know' She could see it in his eyes that he was scared. She saw the fearful look in his eyes and for a split second, she swore she saw the look of love in his eyes. 'Alice, for god's sake, please take care of yourself! Take care of our unborn child, if you keep getting into fights like this, you might harm yourself......i mean the child' Alice looked at him, her face expressionless, he had caused her pains, she wanted to hurt him too. He wanted him to feel disappointed, to feel the pains she had felt and still feeling since she entered this hell hole for nothing. 'Tony,' her voice was too soft so she decided to laugh coldly so she could sound cold. She laughed 'you are so naive, stupid and senseless. You are the dumbest person that can ever exist. I. Never. Loved. You. I used your brain. Why on earth would i fall in love with a coward like you nau? Rubbish! You be idiot. See, i needed your money and a job, so sensing how weak and fragile for a man, i stuck to you,' she laughed again 'so, i dated you. I hated your daughter. I wanted to kill her! And i shot my friend, oh yes, i wanted to kill Gilbert as well. And then, marry you, kill you and inherit your wealth, then leave this goddamn country. Maria was right, i was up to no good, and i hated you Tony. Your kind gestures only made me think of you as a proud fool. Just 40 for nothing. And so, when i noticed that the police were at my trail, i decided to come back and apologise, so incase they came, you could use your money to bail me out. But i was wrong, you are a fool! A big fool. I have no reason to pretend to love you again because i'm more than convinced you are very useless, just like your daughter .And this baby, isnt even yours!' Alice said. And Tony did something he hadnt done before in his life, he slapped a woman. He slapped Alice. To be continued

hmmm time will tell

gosh!!

@onahsunday,if i were in alice shoe,i won't expose her secret to my dad bcos is as if i want my.dad to divorce my mum & if such tin shld happened .it wil be a curse to me...... @victorious child,alice deserved d hatred frm her mum,if alice can't kept her mum secret den she is not a gud daughter...... actually,maria deserved beating alice gave her,wat kind of settlement she want frm her again after she as tormoil her life & make her suffered what she doesn't committed...... @Aartial,what happen btw tony & ximena after slapping maria when he travelled....or didn't maria told him dat ximena slap her?..''i think u omitted. dat drama to us.....

Alice they crase self..mtcheeeeeeeeeeeeeew

wow am proud of u alice d way u beat maria dat d reason y i love u bt y ar u saying those crazy lie abt urself bt i knw u hv ur own reason d only thing u cn do for me nw is dat if tony slap u again beat him up nd let him taste in wot is spoilt brat daughter hv start

hmmmm still nt saying anything for now sad mood :( :(

alice z nt serious at all.....mtcheewww

hmmmm carry go

LMAO shebi na wetin dem accuse Alice for, she have made it easier for them nau..... haha Alice is really a nut case.

It has really gotten Alice into something else,well I don't blame her for her actions dis time around;all I pray is something good comes around quickly for alice.

Hmmmm..... Nafin 2 say

dnt worry i knw colins or any of d witnez wl kum 2 ur rescue

Hmmmmm ride on

@aartial u did nt say anythnk again tony maid or has tony nt knwn dat she is dead?

Alice is even making issues worse wt her stupid anger

JUST PRAY DAT TONY WIL NOT DISOWN MARIA @ D END OF EVERYTHING

Episode 38. Ximena opened her room, looked around for the sight of the devil, and when she saw no one, she tiptoed to the kitchen, quietly took a glass cup, opened the freezer and poured a little quantity of water from a bottled water. Then, after drinking it she dropped the glass cup quietly in the kitchen sink, then tiptoed back to her room, then locked the door. That was how she had been living in Tony's house after that very first encounter with Tony's devil of a daughter. Her head still hurts from being stabbed with the bottle. But the wound was healing, she still had a bandage around her head. She wanted to report it to the police, but she had stayed in Nigeria before, even born here so she knew there was no way they were going to detain Maria for stabbing her with a bottle, so she let it pass. But she tried to avoid Maria at all cost, her meal were always brought to her room, she didnt feel safe around Maria at all. She wanted to go back to Mexico. But what good would that be? She had come to Nigeria for Tony and it will be a shame to just pack her bags and go back to Mexico all because of one little pipsqueak. She wouldnt allow it to happen. But her life was in danger. She felt like getting revenge on Maria for stabbing her. And she was going to get revenge. As if her thoughts invited her, she heard Maria's voice at her door. 'Mexican sl.ut, are you in there?' her voice was full of mockery and hate 'come out will you? Lets see some blonde Mexican sl.ut in the sitting room' Ximena groaned, rubbish! If she thought she was going to leave this room and come out, then she was joking. 'are you there?' Maria's voice came again 'dead or alive?' 'do you want me dead?' Ximena didnt even know when she opened her mouth to speak. And she regretted. Maria laughed 'are you scared of me?' Ximena didnt say a word again, and after Maria taked for a while, she left. Maria didnt have her time now, she was going to see Gilbert. He had told her to come to his house. **** Maria knocked and Gilbert opened the door almost immediately. Gilbert was on boxer shorts and white singlet, but that didnt make him look less charismatic. 'my darling is here' Gilbert said smiling as he circled his hands around her waist and pecked her. That was what he always did whenever he saw her, and she was uncomfortable with it. She didnt like a guy holding her waist not to talk of pecking her but she didnt stop him. Ever since she had been discharged from the hospital, Gilbert had not stopped teling her how much he loved her. She found it awkward, how could a grown up man claim to love a teenager? She didnt know. 'where's Abby?' she asked as she settled on a couch. 'gone out for lessons' Gilbert said sitting close to her and placing his hand on her shoulders. She shrugged uncomfortably, she didnt like being alone with Gilbert, he was getting dangerous by the minute. If she had known that Abby wouldnt be around, she wouldnt have come here. She felt Gilbert looking at her with lustful eyes and she felt uncomfortable again. Then she felt his warm breath on her ears. 'i feel like kissing you on the lips right now' he whispered in her ears intentionally brushing his lips on her ear lobe. Maria removed her face 'uncle Gilbert, i......' 'shhhh' he said placing his index finger on her lips then lowered his lips on hers. Maria couldnt explain how felt at that moment. It was magical! She remained stiff as he ran his tongue on her lips, then forced it open and pushed his tongue inside. She gasped. He didnt stop there, before she knew it, his hands were fondling her br.easts through her cloth. She didnt know what was wrong with her but she couldnt stop him. Then she closed her eyes and when she opened it again, she was stark naked, lying on the couch with him on top her. And the next thing she felt was a sharp pain between her legs, he had penetrated her. She tried pushing him off her an screamed, but he placed his lips on hers and held her hands strongly as he increased tempo. The pain she felt at being disvirgined was terrible, she was crying and begging him to stop but he refused. To be continued.

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At least, d slap will help to format her brain.

Following!!!

I just pity Maria. but it serves her right.

Good for u.. *

dat gud for u

Reserving my comment

Maria dats gud for u Gilbert ur offense is getting too much oo @aarti I can't take this anymore :) aarh aarh is he going to die twice

Where is Ep. 37 ?

ooooh Maria.....I pity you...

haha, dis is very bad

Tank u Gilbert but I no like Dat sleeping with her of a something.

Nd I think that is supposed to b episode 37

good for u maria

shotan this girl is so naive, that will serve u right criminal don disvirgin una lmao

atlast, gilbert was able to play his card well on maria ,,dat gud for maria since she as allow gilbert to brain wash her...... i don't believed ximena can be afraid of maria now,i taught she hv liver for dealing wit maria..i pity her life bcos maria won't make life easy for her... @Aartial, wat happen btw tony & alice when tony slap alice at d station? & wat happen btw tony & ximena when she slap maria ?or maria didn't inform him? bcos u. never talk abt it.....& u don't tell us hw tony knew alice beat maria at d station or did tony jst went straight to d station when he arrived frm abuja witout going house first?.........

@onahsunday,,,dat talktolove site is working now bcos i checked it ystday

i just pity maria cuz she's just naive

hmmmmmmn wah's all these nau.... @Aartial Biko when will Gilbert 's punishment start??... he has bitten more than he can chew enough.

i also reserve moi comment

Xenda dey fear o

The previous episode was supposed to be episode 37, here is episode 38. Episode 38. Ximena heard Tony come inside and she immediately came out of her room. 'Tony' she called. Tony went to his room without sparing her a glance. Ximena cursed inwardly and followed him before he banged the door. 'Tony, i want to talk to you' she said. 'i'm not in the mood to talk' Tony said as he sat on the bed. 'what do you mean you are not in the mood to talk? Are you going to let your psycho of a daughter harass me in this house?' 'first, my daughter is not a psycho and secondly, this is her house, and she can choose to harass anyone she wants. If you are not comfortable with the harassment, just tell me. I will get you a flight ticket to Mexico right away' Tony said taking off his shoes. Ximena couldnt believe her ears, was this what Tony was saying? He was indirectly saying she was a burden now, jeez! That was painful. Her eyes burned with tears but she managed to control it. Then she moved and placed her hand on his lap 'am i a burden to you Tony?' she asked. 'no, but you are a burden to my daughter' 'your daughter stabbed me with a bottle' 'whatever!' he said rolling his eyes. 'is that all you have to say? Is that how you discipline your daughter?' Tony sat up and pushed her hand away from his lap 'if my daughter hates you, then you are a bad person. My daughter hated Alice, she insulted Alice at every little opportunity and i always stood up for Alice, it came to a point i slapped Maria twice. But Alice turned out to be a muderer after all, so there's no way i'm going to hit or scold my daughter because of a woman again. Alice's case taught me a lesson' Ximena blinked twice, then stood up furiously 'am i Alice? Do i look like a murderer to you?' 'Ximena, please give me some space, i dont need you bugging me, i came home to rest, just leave my room before i say it in an insultive way i beg of you!' Ximena eyed him angrily and left the room, banging the door heavily behind her. 'psycho!' Tony sighed as he took off his socks and suit jacket. His left palm was hurting. And he wondered, if he who delivered the slap was hurting, what of the person who recieved the slap. He regretted slapping Alice, he didnt touch women, no matter how aggressive the woman may be, he never raised his hands on her. But, there was a force to just slap her, because he felt hurt within. When she rained all those insuts on him, his chest had been pounding furiously and he didnt know when he slapped her. He took off the remaining of his clothes and stepped into the shower for a cool bath. Alice was aggresive too, he never knew that, she had attacked him almost the same time she recieved the slap. He had thought she would cry but he was wrong, the way she grabbed his shirt and gave him two slaps was shocking. She almost tore his shirt. And when Ekait had come to his rescue, she had bitten Ekaite's ear so hard she was bleeding. After that, he had had a long talk with the DPO and they contemplated sending her to a psychiatric home, she was obviously losing her mind gradually, attacking everyone she sees. She had even fought two of her fellow inmates and had seriously injured one thereby landing her in a clinic. ***** With tear filled eyes, Maria picked up her clothes one by one and put it on, she was pained between her legs and dizzy as well. Gilbert just sat and watched her with a sly grin. As she put on her cotton panties and lacy bra, she shot him a hateful glance and he almost laughed. Then he stood up and grabbed her top from her. 'look babe, even if you hate me from now to the end of the world, what has been done has been done. You have lost it and the only thing you can do now is just be calm and come here always to have more dose of it. Dont tell me you didnt enjoy one bit of it, even if its the kisses and caresses' he reached to cup her left brea.st in his hand and she angrily pushed his hands away and he laughed. 'sweetheart, you were so sweet' he said. Her cries intensified 'you deflowered me' 'and i enjoyed every bit of it my darling' 'i will never forgive you, i will report you to my dad' Maria said. He laughed 'after he must have found out you are pregnant. You might be pregnant darling, we had unprotected s.ex and i released inside of you' Maria raised a brow at that, then she clenched her fist, she looked at the knife on top of the table with some oranges and felt tempted. She bent slowly and took the knife and just when Gilbert wanted to collect the knife from her, she.......

Getting more complicated Just pity Tony, Maria, and alice