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Agonies Of A HouseHelp

Agonies Of A HouseHelp

By dykolala in 24 Apr 2015 | 21:16
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*Last episode *



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Prologue

Slavery is barbaric no matter the name we give it. No matter the terms by which we justify it, it is inhumane and satanic.

The way many madams treat their househelps leaves much to be desired in the eyes of an honest observer.

What brings about such hatred to warrant such maltreatment, I do not know.

In most cases, the househelp is a young child, treated like an animal, segregated like a disease and punished like a vagabond for no just reason.

Agonies of a househelp is a touching story of wickedness, slavery, savagery and barbarism meted out to Adaeze when she went to serve her madam as househelp...

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24 Apr 2015 | 21:16
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Chaiiiiii..... @Tenniebenson @Anitcham @Stephanie @Mray @Lollybabe1 @Delight @Dahcutebae @Rhennyjay @Tonia @InemLove @GeeAdore @Mohjisolah @Olami @Gracy @Promzy @Hameyeenat @Jenny @Jencute @Kniphemi @Pizzaro @Tofag @VibratingWind @Charliebryn @Japhola @Charlywizzy @John451 @Horpheyehmy @Adesewa200 @Adesewa @Sylvia @Justify @Pweety @Journalist @Azeeco @Emmanesth @Promise @Mhzzrblayse @Temmymofrosh @Olamy4fun @Blakstudd @Kaysmart22 @JohnUdo @Abradek @Adewunmi @Adewunmi2 @Hardeywummy2 @Kingsbest @T-DAK @Bishop @Henry @Sandy @Sandra @Otunla @Freelizzy @Tuniquinski @Other...Oya Show you face(comment) for here....
25 Apr 2015 | 03:01
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Chaii..present sir,@khola reserve seat for me o.
25 Apr 2015 | 03:42
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Tankz 4 notifying mhe @Khola46 Wow Dykolala is ready 2 entertain us aqain.........dis one qo mek sense die.........lol abeg na who qo sit beside mhe???
25 Apr 2015 | 04:39
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Such is life (thanks khola)
25 Apr 2015 | 05:04
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am here sir[khola],gracias!
25 Apr 2015 | 07:29
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tnkz for d notification@khola
25 Apr 2015 | 08:13
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waiting oooo
25 Apr 2015 | 08:13
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Chai....... @khola thank 4 d notification....am sitin @ d front o.....
25 Apr 2015 | 08:24
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Chai....... @khola thanks 4 d notification....am sitin @ d front o.....
25 Apr 2015 | 08:24
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Tnx @ khola,present sir
25 Apr 2015 | 08:24
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Let me sit for the front row to observe how the thing go be
25 Apr 2015 | 09:09
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Yea I'm here tanx @Khola
25 Apr 2015 | 09:51
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Present sir @khola tanks
25 Apr 2015 | 09:52
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Preeeeessssseeennnt na me dey here wer is my mray
25 Apr 2015 | 10:14
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Thanks @Khola46 story start, i don show
25 Apr 2015 | 10:51
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25 Apr 2015 | 11:35
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@Horpheyehmy Your what??? Chaaaa..... Mray kor Sun-ray ni... E go better if you no mean ahm ooo...
25 Apr 2015 | 11:35
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@khola46 wa gbayi ore mi. @dykolala oya start we don ready!!!!!!!!!
25 Apr 2015 | 14:06
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Akehinde gbégbón ni emi o ( @khola46 abeg translate am) ... @Olami nd @shyna u can play well well... U no see sey na my name dey dat front seat ni? U wan make nail destroy ur bom bom?
25 Apr 2015 | 15:07
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@Dykolala our cute writer.... Oya we dey hia dey wait 4 u. Infact i no fit miss am
25 Apr 2015 | 15:08
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Lol @Crusher .........Oya come siddon ah bin put my jotter an biro reserve they seat gv u........
25 Apr 2015 | 16:22
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@Dykolala There is one of ur stories u're yet 2 complete titled Secrets of my hotel rum plz whayasay abt daht??
25 Apr 2015 | 16:25
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Am late...Abeg wait wiatii{tnk khola)
25 Apr 2015 | 16:36
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We are waiting oooo wana hear what going on
25 Apr 2015 | 16:38
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We are waiting oooo wana hear what going on @khola weldone ooo
25 Apr 2015 | 16:39
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Thanks Khola. Just the pic alone squeezed my heart
25 Apr 2015 | 18:00
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Oya Dykolala carry go I don show face
25 Apr 2015 | 18:43
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Episode 1 ADAEZE NARRATES... Life has been unfair to me right from the start. Born into a family of ten: 3boys and 5girls plus mum and dad, survival had been a struggle. My father was a palm wine tapper and my mum was a petty trader who dealt in foodstuffs. We lived in a remote village somewhere in the South-eastern part of Nigeria. My father's palm wine tapping didn't earn him much and even after combining with the proceeds of my mum's petty trading, my parents still couldn't afford 3square meals to sustain the family. I was the first child; followed by a male then females before the two last males. I never went to school even for a day. None of us did. Then disaster struck. My father went for his usual palm wine tapping business and never came back. On dispersal of a search party, it turned out that he fell from the palm tree and died on the spot. This sudden death of my dad launched my family into more terrible hardship and my mum couldn't cope. Things grew worse after my dad's burial and it became necessary for my mum to send us out to live with different people in the city. At that time I was 15years old and my immediate younger brother was 13. It was my late father's sister that brought up the suggestion to my mother and my mother quickly bought the idea and soon had me introduced to my madam. In a matter of days, the whole arrangement was concluded and I followed my madam back to the city of Enugu. The first few days, I was treated well maybe because it was my first day of arrival. I was shown around the house, taught how to use some of the appliances, I was also shown the little room that was to be my room and also the small mattress that was to be my mattress. Then I settled in my new home with hope that things would move fine and my madam won't have any reason to send me home prematurely...
25 Apr 2015 | 20:37
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@Pizzaro, I will write it in another dimension maybe after this one...
25 Apr 2015 | 20:43
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Infact i don dey fall in love with dis story... U no see sey na me first comment??? I'm also waiting 4 dat story oooooo
25 Apr 2015 | 21:01
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Uhmmmm..... *like mortal combat* .....IT HAS BEGUN....
26 Apr 2015 | 03:25
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Khola i don land tnxs 4 d call as dis story go mak sense die
26 Apr 2015 | 06:02
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Plss Man, Make d Post a Bit Longer.. Dis is just 2 short 4a 1st Post.. Seemz intrestin thou
26 Apr 2015 | 06:29
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I'll so be glued 2 dis story. Catchy beginning. Kudos Dykolala
26 Apr 2015 | 06:38
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@Blakstudd, long episodes are boring and difficult to read. The shorter an episode is, the more fascinating and interesting it becomes...
26 Apr 2015 | 06:59
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@ Dykola.. I don't think I Agree wit U̶̲̥̅̊ On Dat.. Thou I see yor Poin.. But one thin U̶̲̥̅̊ shuld know is, Once a Story is Intrestin, No Matter how Long or Short.. We Can Neva get enoff of it.. Take a Night wit Eva or All In d Cycle.. Its alwayz Long but we alwayz stil want mor after evry episode..
26 Apr 2015 | 07:06
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Ride on bro......no time to check time.
26 Apr 2015 | 07:18
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ride on
26 Apr 2015 | 07:55
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hmmmmmm oya carry go?????
26 Apr 2015 | 08:08
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I hp it's nt gonna be one episode a day o. Ride on, ma eyes r fixed
26 Apr 2015 | 09:06
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Hmmm...touching story!!
26 Apr 2015 | 09:13
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make i follow dem here jawe
26 Apr 2015 | 09:35
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at last!!! my private jet don land here ooo tho am late,if not for @khola46 call,i wouldnt have been here by now(hustling tinz)....@dykolala,i hail u ooo,keep the circle cycling,we dey ur back.
26 Apr 2015 | 10:30
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Oh.....How ah take forget mah boss... I'm S.O.R.R.Y Sir.. @DonMikie
26 Apr 2015 | 10:55
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Finally finally, am here. @Khola46 dress ya laps wella
26 Apr 2015 | 11:13
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I tink em gonna support blackstud Itz too short Abeg shift small@mray
26 Apr 2015 | 11:38
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@rhennyjay, u don cum. Wc. sit i don shift! Op u no heavy sha? I no wan make @khola46 laps break ooooo
26 Apr 2015 | 12:03
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Nah true My Boss ( @Blakstudd ) talk ooo.....Just make it twice the one you have been updated before..... Mah lap fit carry you both.....but eeeeh....alrice... thank God say mah zip don worn-out and nah skirt you both wore.....no problem @Mray @Rhennyjay
26 Apr 2015 | 12:44
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Beta go do ur [email protected] I see say u geh erection ehn!!!
26 Apr 2015 | 12:57
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@ Khola Yor Father.. Will U̶̲̥̅̊ Just Plss Stop Makin Me Laff Wit Dis Hilariours and Crazy Funny Comments Of Yors.. Wat a Funny Dude
26 Apr 2015 | 13:00
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Hmmmmmmm
26 Apr 2015 | 13:26
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Nyc one,continue plss
26 Apr 2015 | 13:56
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@tennie dont wori oo just sit dere...i wil sit where i am.....i cant let dos nails shook mai bom bom..
26 Apr 2015 | 14:01
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Tnx vry much @Khola46
26 Apr 2015 | 14:42
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it seems am not noticed hia as no one cared to invite me. anyway am he so let de story roll
26 Apr 2015 | 17:30
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@donpaschalo,you Don vex be dat ,me i sight u ooo of anyone dont
26 Apr 2015 | 17:45
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@blakstudd no mind dat guy,dats y we giv him d name madstar khola,u go laugh so tey u go piss 4 ur boxers,i go advice u make u near toilet incase.......
26 Apr 2015 | 17:45
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@khola46,two galz ontop only U,chai the Erection u Go Gat go tek Reack 50cm long
26 Apr 2015 | 17:49
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This is hw it starts one short episode and we don reach 9 pages.
26 Apr 2015 | 17:54
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Hmmmm am gonna enjoy myself be that @Tennie why nt marry the story since u re in love wit it
26 Apr 2015 | 19:58
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That madam, i must call Onihaxy to bleep the hell out her head for the maltreatment of Adaeze.....
27 Apr 2015 | 02:45
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Lol.........
27 Apr 2015 | 02:59
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Ok bro @Dykolala Story jex startinq! Xpecting the unexpected...........next plz.
27 Apr 2015 | 06:12
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Ghost Mode deactivated!!!! @tenniebenson op U̶̲̥̅̊ dnt mind Ṁ̭̥̈̅̄ƺ sitting wif U̶̲̥̅̊ @ d front seat cos av gat lots of U̶̲̥̅̊"benson" A̶̲̥̅πϑ Alomo..
27 Apr 2015 | 06:51
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blayse...present..rhenny hope you dont mind me sittinq with you
27 Apr 2015 | 07:13
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Tot am late,just 1epi nawa o,seat stil dey front?i doubt it.waitin for d nxt .
27 Apr 2015 | 07:24
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Doozie Yhu re wellicome Khola,,,e be lyk say u wan bury ya dick abi?two pple on top ur matter o ga oooo Mray am nt fat bt I weigh 50kg lasan/only
27 Apr 2015 | 08:03
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Episode 2 A severe lash of cane sent me hurrying to my feet the next morning. "So you're still sleeping?" My Madam asked looking ferociously at me. "So you're still sleeping by 7am?" She repeated lashing out two more strokes of the cane. "Who are you waiting for to clean up the mess in the kitchen and sweep the house?" She asked. "I'm sorry ma," I sobbed. "Come on, go and do your morning function!" She barked as I ran out of the room and into the kitchen. ************************************* It wasn't my fault that I woke up late that morning. I had overworked myself the previous night clearing up the dishes that was used in preparing and serving the meal for the night. By the time I finished and went to bed, the night was far gone. I sobbed as I washed the remaining dishes in the sink and swept the entire house. "Make sure you fetch water after sweeping that thing," my madam's harsh voice reminded me from the bedroom. "Yes ma," I replied hurrying up. The buckets I used in fetching water were those big saclux buckets that were so heavy that I never attempted to fill them to the brim. I was to fill one very big drum in the front verandah with another at the back. For more than 3hours I ferried the buckets from well to drum and back. By the time I finished, I was very hungry and exhausted. My madam gave me two slices of bread and a cup of mixed water in the name of tea. The mixed water was tasteless, hot and almost burned my tongue in the first sip. My madam was married to a well to-do husband and they already had 3kids the last of which was very tender. It was obvious that she was the one I came to babysit. The other two - a boy and a girl - were much older but still needed certain degree of babysitting like bathing them and washing their clothes and even feeding them as at when due. But then the tender baby gave the biggest trouble. She cried a lot and more often than not always put me into trouble. With only two slices of bread and mixed water in my tummy, I carried the baby about trying as hard as I could to quell her cry. "Why is that baby crying?" My madam asked walking into the sitting room. "I don't know ma," I replied with terror. "Gbawam!" A very hot slap landed on my right cheek and I nearly dropped the baby out of pain. "What did you just try to do now?" My madam asked advancing ferociously towards me. "Please I'm sorry ma," I pleaded sobbing. The raised voice of my madam coupled with the sound of the slap further increased the baby's crying and my madam took her from me. "Come on, go and put hot water on the fire for her pap!" She thundered and I ran into the kitchen in obedience...
27 Apr 2015 | 09:20
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Please I'm currently experiencing some NEPA issues in my area so that's the reason for the delay in posting the episodes but something will be done about it pretty soon. Thank you.
27 Apr 2015 | 09:26
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hmmmm observing next please????
27 Apr 2015 | 10:00
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Wicked madam.....
27 Apr 2015 | 10:06
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hmmm bro update faster.....thanks
27 Apr 2015 | 10:09
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Dis madam would be a very callous woman oh..........abi baby no go dey cry aqain??.........next plz!
27 Apr 2015 | 10:14
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Uhm! No probs @dykolala,tnx vry much, we re vry gr8ful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wicked Madam
27 Apr 2015 | 10:20
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Big tnks ț¤ dos wu stopped slave trade in 9ja.. Dis mama sef wicked weytn 2 slices of bread wan do for d gal body..Ĩ dy eat #250 Agege bread Ĩ still dy luk for more..
27 Apr 2015 | 10:48
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[email protected] really a bad thinq to be poor o..chai
27 Apr 2015 | 10:59
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I do cry anytime I read any story pertain slavery/ maid/rival and other sad story because I always put it in tought that even if the story was fiction, it may probably be the exact way some people are living.... So sad I couldn't render help now(even if I can, I can't help them all)...Only God could render help to them all.....so so touching...I Hate It....
27 Apr 2015 | 11:06
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Next pls.......i greet una all....
27 Apr 2015 | 11:11
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Agonies of househelp indeed!
27 Apr 2015 | 12:03
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hmmmmmm.......i feEl for the girl Mehn,it Was just asif I was The One Being Maltreated by The woman. Now I ask myself,Can i ever treat HuMan Asif they'Re animals???? why Would people Not have even Just an AtoM of Human feelings to His or hEr humaN mate for dhat matter????hmmmmm.........Diariz God
27 Apr 2015 | 12:47
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Wicked madam.......
27 Apr 2015 | 13:08
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If you see how I frowned my face when reading where she slaped her for doing nothing to the child and when she was floged from sleep. Its just as if I should be there to give her the worst of her life... @khola46 shey make we go teach d woman lesson? (Thanks for the invite). Great work @dykolala ... RIDE ON
27 Apr 2015 | 14:17
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Dz tin wey madam dey do to my namesake chaii dere is God ooooo(sobs).
27 Apr 2015 | 15:33
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@dykolala i like long update oh... So at least post twice a day.. That will be encouraging i guess... But not forcing you to.. Only you knows best because its your story... And guys please don't urge him.. Because its not easy to type a story...
27 Apr 2015 | 15:46
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Chai weeping
27 Apr 2015 | 16:13
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Ar U̶̲̥̅̊ Sure I'll B Able 2 Read dis Story So.. I Can B Very Emotional O̶̷̩̥̊͡ , and Dis Much I'v Read, Is Already Makin Sad and Angry..
27 Apr 2015 | 17:09
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@Japhola We go teach her lesson, break & closing time..or make we just ermmm(you know nah...how her pormor go be)......she no do good fa....
27 Apr 2015 | 17:49
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Obeserving...
27 Apr 2015 | 18:07
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chai,wat is my seat number, nw dat everyone don sit witout notifyin me,maybe u all ail av to stand up for me to sit oo,or hw wil go do a.nice one so far,enjoyin it here
27 Apr 2015 | 18:08
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kholar u try oooooo... u dnt even inform me abt diz story..... becoz am nt a female abi..... weldone
27 Apr 2015 | 18:25
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@blakstudd u nid to read a story called we re able.... dat story nar die... u go cry so tee water go finish for eye
27 Apr 2015 | 18:27
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wickedness of human wat a touching story may God help us from de hands of such wicked ppl. Amen
27 Apr 2015 | 19:59
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@olaswag3 how can i read de story u just mentioned now
27 Apr 2015 | 20:01
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Wicked woman.....
27 Apr 2015 | 20:30
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@Temilade u are wlc hope u no mind sittin beside u
27 Apr 2015 | 21:16
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@Olaswag3 That Khola sef need ermmm...well...lets leave him.....make ah do him begging for him.....I'm sorry...
28 Apr 2015 | 03:36
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Girl, u should have drop that baby
28 Apr 2015 | 05:16
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Thanks @khola
28 Apr 2015 | 07:00
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Khola thanks
28 Apr 2015 | 07:02
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Na wa o
28 Apr 2015 | 07:11
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Well.. @escaysegzy no prob but dere is prob...d only seat @ d front is meant 4 me..it has been customized...d only way u can sit with me is by lapping me... But uhmm...shey no be ontop nail i go sit sha? Make we no go do lap dance 4 ppl 4rnt o.. Uhmm...when ppl see long updates..dey wont say "tnx 4 updating lengthy stories"..we only complain abt d short ones..well everyman 2 his own opinion...as 4 me..i love short updates(but daily..jez like cassandra)...it gives ppl d opportunity 2 meet up with most stories..dnt u knw dat it takes tym 2 read? Nd its nt like all we do is browsing 2ru out d day...i didnt complete some stories cos dey were 2 long..nd its taking my tym... @Dykolala all u need 2 do is update it daily..i dnt mind d short episode..nd one episode tin per day... @Moses ..dat one sef good o... I go marry d story..
28 Apr 2015 | 08:21
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Tankx man, no prob jare @khola46, ur doin a grt job i mst say.. Oh yeah, jux lyk my swit lady tennibenson rytfully said, weda short or long episodes, me dey game o bt jux mk it a daily tin jux lyk cassava.. oops xowie *cassandra*. Nxt pls..
28 Apr 2015 | 09:31
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Please shift ,I wan see down,kudos to d sitters in d house .........More
28 Apr 2015 | 09:44
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........
28 Apr 2015 | 13:21
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@Toba Lol....... @Itz Mhiz Pweety Ify I'm sorry Angel.... but I've told you to always log-in before droping your comment, that would give me chance to know your username.... Sorry Dear......
28 Apr 2015 | 13:21
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Thanks boss(@kholas6) ......
28 Apr 2015 | 17:21
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Bro u are good... The name just said it all. Nice job man,carry on
28 Apr 2015 | 17:43
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Episode 3 I lighted the stove immediately and put some water into the kettle and placed it on the stove. "Hope you've put the water?" My madam shouted from the sitting room. "Yes ma," I replied twisting my fingers in fear. "Come and wash off these napkins immediately," she ordered sending me running into the sitting room. She handed me the soiled napkins and I zoomed off with it into the bathroom to wash it. I had barely soaked the napkin into the water when I heard madam's voice dishing out another instruction. "I will skin you alive if you continue wasting my kerosene in this house!" She bawled. "Or do you want to tell me that you don't know that this hot water is boiling?" "Sorry ma," I replied. "Sorry for your stupid self!" she fired back. I instantly rinsed my hands and rushed to the kitchen to bring down the hot water. I didn't know where the pap I was to prepare was, so I went to the sitting room to ask madam. "Ma please where is the pap?" I asked trembling with fear. "Idiot the pap is there!" She fumed pointing at the fridge. I went to the fridge, brought out the pap, prepared it and took it to her in the sitting room. Then I went to the bathroom to continue with the napkin. The baby's cry filled the entire house and I soon heard my madam's voice calling me. "Adaeze!" She called. "Yes ma," I replied rinsing my hands once again and running into the sitting room. "Sing for her, sing for her," she urged. "Fine baby don't cry, fine baby don't cry," I broke into an unrehearsed song. Fortunately for me, the baby stopped crying and listened to my song as she gulped down the warm pap. When she was done, I carried the plate into the kitchen and washed it off and then went to the bathroom to finish up with the soaked napkin. Soon, baby went to sleep and madam went to sleep too and I had little time to myself...
28 Apr 2015 | 17:43
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Episode 4 The other two children, Nnenna and Chimaobi soon came back from school and scattered their school uniforms, sandals and school bags in the sitting room creating more work for me. "Where is my food," Chimaobi asked with an authority that was much stronger than his 3years of age would suggest. "And mine too!" Nnenna added. "Its inside the warmer," I replied. "Go and get it for us!" Chimaobi ordered. I wondered how little Chimaobi and Nnenna would be ordering me around. Little children whom I was older than with nothing less than 10years. I brought their food from the warmer and gave to them. If not for the presence of my madam, those children would have had it hot with me but madam's presence was hell-fire on its own. Not to talk of when she gets report from any of her children. I hadn't taken anything except the two slices of bread and mixed water that I took since morning yet I endured. I cleared the sitting room and removed the school uniforms, bags and sandals that the children scattered there and went to the bathroom to wash the uniforms. I had barely started washing the uniforms when madam woke up from sleep. "Hope the children have eaten," she asked with bulging sleepy eyes. "Yes ma, they have," I replied. Then she went into the toilet to ease herself. "Adaeze!" She called. "Yes ma," I replied. "Have you washed this toilet today?" She asked. "No ma," I replied. "If I meet you in that bathroom, I will tear you into pieces!" she threatened. I rushed off to the balcony to get the mop and bucket to wash the toilet. "Why didn't you wash it since morning?" She asked. "I forgot ma," I replied. She gave me a very hard push and I fell backwards and nearly hit my head on the wall. "Silly ass!" She cursed and went back to her bedroom. With tiredness, hunger and exhaustion I washed the toilet. When I was done, I went back to the bathroom to complete the washing of the children's school uniforms. By the time I finished washing the school uniforms, my stomach was tearing apart with hunger. But I couldn't muster the courage to tell my madam that I was hungry. So all I did was to go to one corner of the kitchen and cry silently. Madam's husband came back later in the evening and observed that my eyes were red. "Why are your eyes red?" He asked peering into my face. "Nothing sir," I lied in a bid to avoid trouble. "Have you been crying?" He asked still peering into my eyes. "No sir," I lied again. "Ok have this," he said handing a can of fruit juice to me. My face brightened up as he handed the juice to me. "Thank you sir," I greeted and went into the kitchen with the can of juice. I gulped down the entire juice in no time and my stomach calmed a bit. The family had dinner around 8pm but I wasn't given anything till I finished washing all the plates and pots used for the dinner. Then madam put one very small leftover of the food for me, the size of which wasn't even going to be enough for a toddler and went to bed. I ate the food fast and retired to my small room to catch some sleep as I was very tired and exhausted...
28 Apr 2015 | 18:45
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Really Pathetic............Dis madam sef,,,how mani instructionz does she want u 2 carry out at a tym?...........Her husband must be a kind person!.....next pleaze.
28 Apr 2015 | 18:46
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@donpaschalo... juz click on stories frm guest writers u will see it dere...... @kholar.... dnt do dat next tym....... diz story hot pass hot imsef
28 Apr 2015 | 18:58
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why is it that poor families give birth to a lot of children....imagine 8 children and the occupation of the father earns so less....Madam you no dey try oo Enjoy your stay in madams house
28 Apr 2015 | 21:03
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Life as a househelp s really a tough life, a life in misery... Adaeze, wishin u da best stay in ur madam huz, dnt lose hope, gr8 tinz ahead
29 Apr 2015 | 03:15
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Nah wetin man pikin go do????? was there going to be a day/month/year that all heartless people would be washed away from earth surface.....it would be my pleasure of God could just eraze them all from earth..... All what she is doing, she knew for herself that nothing is good there...but the devil in her won't let her term with it.......jex deh lowkey deh look sha.
29 Apr 2015 | 03:29
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@OluB na true ooo. Sheybe na me deh cook am a go eat/disg my own be for he don fuly ready... I knew the huzband would be a nice man...
29 Apr 2015 | 04:09
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Diz 2 much
29 Apr 2015 | 04:51
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Poverty is a curse. Adaeze, u rada go back to ur mum n eat palm kernel with joy dan starving in a rivh man haus.
29 Apr 2015 | 05:32
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Reminds me of a story I read bk den in secondary school. Keeping my fingers crossed anyway but d madam ain't trying. Lord have mercy
29 Apr 2015 | 05:47
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chai Adaeze don turn to Adasumfyn quite pathetic
29 Apr 2015 | 05:48
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I pity this girl
29 Apr 2015 | 05:50
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Dat wat my government will bring. Nobody will gv birth more dan 3children. So dat dis suffering of poor will stop.
29 Apr 2015 | 05:59
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Hmmmm this kind of madam, if na me I will just poison her to dt because she is as useless and nothing as animal
29 Apr 2015 | 06:19
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Madam tak it easy, she is nt 4rm stick
29 Apr 2015 | 07:55
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On ma way ț¤ Patrick Obahiagbon's ouz ț¤ å§ķ for suitable word ț¤ describe dis woman..Dis is jez too much, If d gal "Adaeze" happens ț¤ be her daughter A̶̲̥̅̊M̶̲̥̅̊ very sure she wnt treat ha dat way.. @tenniebenson, Ma nail is heavenly designed it very rare ț¤ find, if U̶̲̥̅̊ siddon on it for few mins wnt do U̶̲̥̅̊ any harm, Ĩ jez op Sir Khola wnt mind..
29 Apr 2015 | 08:16
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hmmmmmm look who's back
29 Apr 2015 | 08:30
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Adaeze take heart... Lyk d title suggests, doz r ur agonies 4 avin a callous woman as ur madam. Hope d husband wld come 2 ur aid
29 Apr 2015 | 08:44
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OOOOhhhhhhhh..... If I could vividly remember, its almost half-a-year now that I've seen someone that do update story here...I does like to read his story but only God knew why he disappear....and now if I'm not mistaken.....I'm seeing him again... @VIKING Long Time...
29 Apr 2015 | 09:04
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Wicked woman
29 Apr 2015 | 09:17
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Jes observin
29 Apr 2015 | 09:20
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One day the madam go tell you to help her pee sef if possible..... Man pikin dey suffer o
29 Apr 2015 | 09:35
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Mehn am nt sure if i can read dis story again,4rm d little i hav read,jus lik blakstudd,am also an emotional person,u can carry on guyz
29 Apr 2015 | 13:12
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Carry go joooorrrr,more ink to ur pen
29 Apr 2015 | 14:41
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Na koko talk wetin Olu B tok ooo, infact i sure say the madam go tell adaeze to start washing and cleaning the roof...chai... THE THUNDER WEY GO FIRE DIS MADAM STILL DEY Do NYSC.
29 Apr 2015 | 15:46
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Vroooom, i don land. I dey greet everybody oh, nobody even alert me say stori don start. E b lyk say i don late self, hope say space dey, abeg make una shift small make i sidon. Thumbs up @dykolala, RIDE ON.
29 Apr 2015 | 16:22
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ADAEZE ur watchword shud be "IT IS WELL WITH MY SOUL IN EVERY CONDITION" Dnt wori God wil see u tru
29 Apr 2015 | 20:39
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Episode 5 I woke up in the middle of the night and heard madam and her husband whispering in hush tone. "Give it to me harder," madam whispered breathing heavily. My heart skipped some beats as I thought madam was in distress but I kept calm and listened further. The squeaking sound of their bed increased and madam's voice filtered once again into my room. "Ouusss...mmm...ahhh," she moaned. At that point I knew what was happening. Madam and her husband were at it again and another baby could soon be on the way. Some minutes later madam's husband started groaning aloud and everywhere went quiet afterwards. "Darling you're so wonderful," my madam said. "And you too my queen," the husband responded and let out a short laugh. I didn't know when I slept off and by the time I woke up it was morning. I got up immediately and went to do my morning function. Within one hour I was through so I sat on the mortar in the kitchen waiting for my madam to wake up. Part of the warning madam gave me was that for no reason whatsoever was I to sit on the padded seats in the sitting room. "If you feel like sitting down," she instructed. "Sit on top of the mortar in the kitchen and never in the sitting room." For no reason whatsoever was I to touch the remote controller in the sitting room no to talk of putting on the television. The dining room was also out of my bounds so I ate in the kitchen and on top of my mortar. Madam woke up very late that morning around 11am and came and inspected everywhere but saw nothing to complain about yet she wasn't satisfied. "Who put on the toilet light?" She asked frowning her face. "I don't know ma," I replied. A very hard knock landed on my head and I shouted in pain and ran towards the toilet to off the light. Then she went back into her room. "Darling I suggest you take it easy with that young girl," I overheard my madam's husband admonishing her. "That girl can be very annoying," my madam replied. "Can you imagine that she hasn't scrubbed the toilet uptill now," she added, which was a very big lie. "Just be patient with her," my madam's husband insisted. "I believe she will learn," he added. "I hope so," my madam responded. I felt very bad. The toilet my madam lied that I didn't scrub was actually the first thing I scrubbed that morning. Why my madam was being so wicked to me was what I couldn't explain. I was doing all my best to please this madam of mine yet it seemed like all my best wasn't good enough. I swallowed hard and let the annoyance pass. By noon, madam ordered me to prepare and escort her to the market. Her husband stayed behind with the baby and waited for us to come back. We boarded a bus and madam sat down while I continued standing. A passenger alighted at the seventh bus-stop and left a free seat which out of exhaustion I decided to sit. Madam's hard blow on my thigh sent me to my feet in no time. "Who gave you the permission to sit down?" She fumed ogling at me. "Will your dead father pay for the seat or your wretched poor mother in the village?" She asked still staring at me ferociously. Her words hurt me as much as the blow on my thigh but I endured. "Madam please take it easy," one man sitting behind us pleaded. "She will learn with time." My madam kept mute and didn't utter any word in reply. When we got to the market, Madam bought everything we went to buy and I carried them on my head till we got to the house. "Wash those vegetables and cut them," my madam instructed. "Cos I'll cook soup this evening." With tiredness and exhaustion I set to work immediately. Within 30minutes I was through with the vegetables. Then I proceeded to cut the okro as well. When I finished, I was very tired so I went into my small room to rest for a while...
29 Apr 2015 | 20:43
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Yes, (straight to tha front whr my seat is) thank u for warming my customize seat unem, u can take ur position next to me, osheè. Now this is what i call child abuse, it is not surprising how a madam treats her help, forgetting that (echidime) tomorrow is pregnant, we don't know what it will give birth to, and also forgetting that she has a daughter, today she is smiling, buh what will be her fate tomorrow? No one knows tomorrow. He who laugh last laugh's best.
29 Apr 2015 | 21:10
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Chai, i wan cry but tears no wan come out, its a pity sha but u have 2 knw dat all will be well @adaeze
30 Apr 2015 | 03:15
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sorry o ada. Weeping may last for the night, but joy comes in the morning.
30 Apr 2015 | 03:16
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Sori..
30 Apr 2015 | 04:50
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So sori 4 u @ada,all ll be well by God grace
30 Apr 2015 | 04:53
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Its well my dear
30 Apr 2015 | 05:18
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Wat a world
30 Apr 2015 | 05:33
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It is well
30 Apr 2015 | 05:34
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Ada all wil b well just endure it hapines wil cum in d nyt
30 Apr 2015 | 05:44
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That's the agonies of being a house help. Just continue with ur hardwork & good conduct; one day it will pay off
30 Apr 2015 | 06:06
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Chai! Wot a pity.... Abeg ada wakeup madam will soon be bckooo I pray God will vedicate for u nd keep u strong... #poor child# ur madam will regrat all her matreatment towars u.
30 Apr 2015 | 06:21
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If nt condition, crayfish for no bend. It is well, dibenu ooh.
30 Apr 2015 | 06:51
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If na me be adaeze ni,chai ah go don show d madam much drama,though no be her fault sha,shez a poor girl,i pray all child in adaeze's condition will have a cause to smile soonest..AMEN YA'allah
30 Apr 2015 | 07:06
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Jezeebel!
30 Apr 2015 | 07:36
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Dis madam has completely 4qotten daht wad u do 2 other people 's children datz wad would be done 2 yours........am jex pity-inq her children bcos they are they ones daht will suffer in future.......ADA,endurance and perseverance shld be ur watchword........nexT plZ..
30 Apr 2015 | 07:59
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wat eva u sow u will reap....madam u need prayers and fasting and a thousand anointed canes...
30 Apr 2015 | 08:16
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Na wahoo
30 Apr 2015 | 08:38
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There is one yoruba adage that says "an agama lizard that jump down from the top of Iroko tree, when it got down, it nod it's head that if no one greet me then I will greet myself". What I'm saying is that if no one invite me, I will surely invite myself. Thanks! Less I forget, another adage says "either we like it or not, by force, we surely must love SANGO". What I am saying is that either you like it or not, I am the caretaker here! I don't care either the landlord in person of Khola46 likes it or not. Omoba lo nsoro ke! And ase ti gun!
30 Apr 2015 | 11:08
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@prince,no vex na...calm ur viens down bro! At least no one is perfect na,one cant remember all the names here. dat was why he used "and odas" e fa ra ba le oo:-/
30 Apr 2015 | 11:18
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And again tell the madam that I say she should continue that "Aki gbe ila ki a ka obi, aki gbe efo, ki a wa isu, ohun aba gbe dandan ni, a o ka" let her realise that in yoruba land, if a king stretch fort his horse tail, it has a meaning and if he stretch fort his staff of authority, it has its own meaning. Be warn!
30 Apr 2015 | 11:20
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@azeeco it is because of you oooooooo, if not for that, I will have send quit notice to everybody, but apology accepted. Moreover, Oba ki binu
30 Apr 2015 | 11:25
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na fight
30 Apr 2015 | 11:27
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@prince u re funny buh its nt up 2 dat....khola d husband of all d angels here is sowie........
30 Apr 2015 | 12:14
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@prince I second yhu Jare....
30 Apr 2015 | 12:54
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chai @khola u no fit invite me nah wao u won mak i miss dis story........
30 Apr 2015 | 14:02
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Uhmmmm....... Well.......I think you guys are just trying to let a message got to me with what you said.......t.h.a.n.k.s. @Bsam I'm sorry bro....
30 Apr 2015 | 14:37
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Uhmmm..relax peepz..una never see anything...by d time doz kids grows up...i'm sure adaeze will face more trouble(s).... Shey na evrybdy Kola go remember ni? Na so e easy reach? Abeg no kill my husband+p.r.o 4 me o.. Kilode na? Na me still dey pay him salary..u don pay am? D only way i can allow u blame him if u (doz accusing kola) can mention 30 names ryt nw.. Infact 20 sef..mention it
30 Apr 2015 | 14:43
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Hmmmmm
30 Apr 2015 | 14:43
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hmmm... dykola.... dis story is slow nd short... but u are tryin sha.... more grease to ur elbow... but...dis story no ginger me well cos i no get partner... abeg... who will be my partner??
30 Apr 2015 | 17:47
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It is really an agonies
30 Apr 2015 | 18:55
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@oluwalizzy u are God send.....
30 Apr 2015 | 19:07
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Episode 6 I didn't know when I slept off in the course of resting till a very heavy lash of wire landed on my back and sent me to my feet in agony. I rose to my feet immediately and soon saw where the lash of wire was coming from. My madam stood infront of me looking very mean and angry. The time was around 4pm in the evening and I was supposed to have cleared the dustbin by then. "Who are you waiting for to clear the bin?" My madam asked raising her hand very high to unleash another lash on me. Just then the doorbell rang and my madam held her hand in check. "Go and see who's at the door," she commanded. I ran to the door and swung it open. An old man and woman stood infront of the door. "Are your people around?" The old man asked. I kept silent a bit confused of what to answer. I remembered that there were times when my madam didn't like seeing visitors and often instructed me to tell whom-ever it was that she wasn't around. I was battling with my confusion when madam entered. "Ah daddy," my madam gasped as soon as she saw them. "Daddy good afternoon, mummy good afternoon," she greeted immediately. "Ah my daughter," the old man replied. "Good afternoon nwam." He added. "Please come inside," my madam invited. I gave way immediately and the old man and woman entered the house. "What of your husband?" The woman asked. "He's gone to work," my madam replied. "And the children?" The woman continued. "They're sleeping inside," my madam replied. "Adaeze!" She called. "Yes aunty," I replied and ran to answer her. "Go and buy drinks," she instructed handing some money to me. I ran to a nearby shop and bought the drinks without wasting time. Then I served it before the guest and went back into the kitchen. I then carried the dustbin inside a polythene bag and went to dispose it. I went over to my friend's compound to call her. Chidimma was a househelp in the neighbouring compound and we always went together to dispose our refuse. We gisted on the way as we went. Chidimma narrated to me of how ruthless her madam was. Of how her madam uses the sole of her high-heel shoe to hit her on the head when she makes a mistake. She even revealed to me of how her madam's husband sneaks into her room at night to have carnal knowledge of her without her madam knowing. All these weighed down on her and she wanted to let it off by confiding in me. I consoled and encouraged her not to lose hope that things would one day change for the better. She thanked me profusely for my words of encouragement without knowing that my own madam at home was as ruthless as hers if not more; only that her husband doesn't sneak into my room. Nonetheless I acknowledged her gratitude and encouraged her not to lose hope. Then we disposed our refuse and headed home...
1 May 2015 | 05:27
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Some human are created with rusted-heart... everybody got what they called heart... some doesn't know how to use it...some who knew how to use it also left it without use....some uses it but out of some that uses their heart,many possess rusted-heart..... they are not to be blamed...thats how they are created...we can't change human for whom they are naturaly...even physicaly & spiritualy UNLESS they decide to change themself.....
1 May 2015 | 06:18
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Wicked woman u will ripe wot u sold... Ada keep being a good girl oook,dut allow the present situation to change ur way of life....God will see u through!
1 May 2015 | 07:51
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hmm just a replica of my aunty then,mrs theresa ndukwe,no diference btw them,dat i survived in ha hnds was by d grace of god,i believe 1 day i will leave 2 tell my story if am permmited
1 May 2015 | 08:03
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@ jenny I will be glad to c urs
1 May 2015 | 08:30
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wetin GOD go judge for dis life plenty
1 May 2015 | 08:32
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Adaeze nd chidinma hv faith tinz will be well.
1 May 2015 | 08:48
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Some pple ar jst naturally hrt less wen it comes 2 der fellow humans
1 May 2015 | 09:03
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Such is Life
1 May 2015 | 09:21
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Abeg Where U dey @khola22, @tenniebenson, @delight @Jenny abeg come let slaughter this animal called Madam, delight go hold leg, Tenniebenson make u hold one leg, oya Khola come hold d head nd Jenny U fit catch that two hands? Or may somebody come help U? Oya be ready I will bring knife nw
1 May 2015 | 09:36
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Hmmmm Madam
1 May 2015 | 10:04
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This story iz too emotional to the core. I feel pity for her anyway but 1 tin i knw iz dat nemesis will sure catch up wit dat so called madam. Dear pals...nice reading. RIDE ON @dykolala.
1 May 2015 | 10:05
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Hmmmmmm why iz it daht all the madam(s) are alwayz rude and heartless???.....bt wen they come 2 pick u in the villaqe they will promise u heaven and earth..........well am still watchinq and i jex pray it endz well.....
1 May 2015 | 10:15
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i swear some rich people are just alive to make some poor people suffer instead of helping........nxt plz
1 May 2015 | 10:52
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Hmmm some women cn b heartless 4gettn d law of karma
1 May 2015 | 12:09
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Adaeze u de dull... Ah swear if 2 say na me de go 2ru al dix tinx,by nw ma madam don chop rat poison
1 May 2015 | 12:31
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@ Adaeze, ur condition is very very pathetic. Y don't u go back to ur moda? Infact, run away.
1 May 2015 | 16:18
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Hmmm, wot a hrtlex madam
1 May 2015 | 16:55
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M M, shey na cutlass or knife u want?
1 May 2015 | 17:30
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me ah still dey Stand here,Dey Expect Anoda Episode oo shey i No go wait Tire sha???
1 May 2015 | 18:43
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It ll soon b beta
1 May 2015 | 20:11
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Oma shey o... Seems i'm gonna write a poem on dis story... (@Dykolala i hope u will permit me 2 use d title of ur story 4 my poem?) Moses infact i am coming with a pestle.. I will so pound d head of doz useless bosses... (adaeze nd chidinma)...dat useless man will expand d vagina of a small gal..chai! @Jenny like seriouzly??? I will love 2 read ur story o
2 May 2015 | 06:17
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life ain't fair. its a pity.
2 May 2015 | 07:19
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@tenniebenson,U wicked reachlyk diz???? u Wan use mortar Break The Madam head.... The madam Sef never Do upto Dhat fa!
2 May 2015 | 08:57
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Omo.... Na observation sure pass cos I say make I talk that Madam go commit suicide
2 May 2015 | 17:31
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Chaii!
2 May 2015 | 18:12
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Wot realy keepin u bro pls update.... Next episode plssssssssssssssss
2 May 2015 | 19:05
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Chai Lyf s ........ UGLY 4 D POOR.....
2 May 2015 | 20:35
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(Smirk) see them lamenting all in the name of sympathy :-( Don't forget dah the chibok girls still dey. Help save them even if you can't save *ADAEZE's* ass. . *runs like a thief.
3 May 2015 | 17:33
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Nextooooo
3 May 2015 | 20:31
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After waiting too long... Abeg make comments no plenty pass the story....
4 May 2015 | 03:33
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Alert*
4 May 2015 | 08:14
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no new update,@tennie d story should be ready soon,maybe i will use my hols 2 write it
4 May 2015 | 09:31
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Hen hen hen! Coughing! Even tho no1 knows who i am, na Godwin! Lolz I wish i was in Adaeze's shoe, moma pa madam yi danu ni (i'd kill my madam)...mtcheww
4 May 2015 | 14:27
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Episode 7 My madam's parents had gone by the time I came back to the house. My madam was seated in the sitting room with her baby and children when I entered. Something about her composure told me that she wasn't happy but I pretended like I didn't notice. I dashed across the sitting room to go into my room but she called me back. "Why are you coming back now?" She asked frowning. I kept silent not knowing what to reply. "Are you not the one I'm talking to?" She asked still looking intently at me. I remained silent not knowing what to reply. My mouth opened and closed but no sound came forth. "Don't worry," my madam continued. "By the time you go hungry this night, you will talk," she concluded. I stood there ogling at her. "Will you get out of my sight!" She barked. I ran into my room instantly without wasting time. That night, my madam refused to give me food and I went to bed on empty stomach. Sleep refused to come. Hard as I tried, I couldn't sleep. Hunger pangs kept gnawing at the walls of my stomach and I wondered if I would survive till morning. I woke up the next morning and went to do my morning work irrespective of the hunger. I was still doing the work when my madam woke up. "Are you now ready to tell me what kept you so long yesterday when you went to dispose refuse?" She asked staring at me. I sprang up from the toilet-floor I was mopping. "You've started having boyfriends outside haven't you?" She asked. "No ma," I replied. "You will not eat anything in this house again till you tell me what kept you outside," she continued. "I was waiting for Chidimma," I replied. "How many times have I warned you about that Chidimma of a girl?" She asked. "I'm sorry ma, I won't do it again," I pleaded. "Sorry for your stupid self!" She snapped...
4 May 2015 | 14:58
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diz woman sef.... shey d gel do her bad b 4
4 May 2015 | 15:46
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madam wan put blame wey her parent cme download on her, install am for ada head...
4 May 2015 | 16:11
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your madam na something o
4 May 2015 | 17:49
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D tori don reach page 33 n me still dey slumber.anyway ha don meet up shaa. @khola46 10ks 4 d invite plenty.hustling tinz no gree pesin tym.wetyn man pikin go do @all coolvalites Holla!!! @dykolala Nice touchin stwie u gat.ride on bro.
4 May 2015 | 18:24
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@dykolala kilode na? Let it be a daily update.... @jenny i'll be waiting
4 May 2015 | 19:18
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too short***NXT PLS
4 May 2015 | 19:30
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make we dey beg 4 update abi? i ve last visited this sitd 5 days ago only 2 come back 2 waste my data in searching 4 updates only 2 see 1 tiny thing called episode. Anyway na u get ur story & u fit do am d way u want, but i guess u want plenty comments? @jesusboy would be glad 2 teach u hw 2 go about it. Abeg update something.
4 May 2015 | 21:11
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Wicked witch
5 May 2015 | 05:40
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Oga dykolala kilo sele na..... Wic kind update be dis one,nt even up to 5lines.
5 May 2015 | 06:03
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Chaii! Madam u gt luck say no be me nd u de live
5 May 2015 | 06:58
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hmmmmmmmm.........*yawning*
5 May 2015 | 07:03
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One thing is for a story to be short anoda thing is for it to lack sparks... Oga mi, u no try for diz one oh+make i a daily update thing... Or gimme the typing job, i av i beta pass my neibor nd a television-like desktop computer... I bet, you wont lack update! Lmao!!!
5 May 2015 | 07:10
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@Dykolala, shey U̶̲̥̅̊ want write appilcation letter or poem?, wassup wif dis short episode nah..
5 May 2015 | 07:16
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Is dis supposed 2 b an episode or wat na? Its xtremely short!
5 May 2015 | 08:18
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Oga @dykolala people don dey vex like lion wey loose ihn pikin o.,,come update this thing
5 May 2015 | 09:13
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ah! if na me i go enta kitchen colet food chop oooo if she wan kill me no prob but eating i must eat weda she giv me or not
5 May 2015 | 18:47
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Sorry for self then she snapped....na so the story take end ni,wey the remaining na with the to be continue nawa o?.
6 May 2015 | 06:44
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Episode 8 Madam didn't give me breakfast that morning and by noon I was disoriented. My tummy was on fire and the hunger pangs in my stomach had increased ten folds. Madam handed her little baby to me around eleven o'clock that morning. I carried the little baby from that time till around four in the evening on empty stomach. Even the pap I was to give to the baby, I drank half out of hunger. I needed to quell the pangs in my stomach and any edible could do. Madam woke up around 4.30pm in the evening and collected her baby from me. She didn't even mention anything about giving me food and this piqued me. I didn't know what to do. I just sat in the kitchen deep in thought. I had no money on me so I couldn't think of buying food. So I just sat there hoping that a miracle would happen. Around five minutes past five, madam called me and gave me N200 to go to a nearby supermarket and buy bathing soap for her. I took the money and left immediately. There was a woman selling freshly prepared Okpa along the road and the sweet aroma of the woman's Okpa suggested new ideas into my hungry mind. Before I knew what was happening I bought two wraps @ N50 each and sat at one corner of the road to devour it. The Okpa was very hot yet I ate it quickly and hungrily. When I finished, I bought sachet water and augmented the Okpa and my stomach returned instantly to normal. Then I started thinking of a believable narrative to tell my madam...
6 May 2015 | 07:15
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Ehya poor u,,,dont give her d change @ all,tel her u misplaced her money,@least u'll stl av sum money for upkeep again if u can kip d change wella.
6 May 2015 | 08:15
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Haaaaaa, Adaeze, dnt give up just kip Faith dat all wil b beta... Ur madam tink she is punishin u but she dnt knw dat she is only Teaching to b Stronger no matter b circumstance..... All will be Well, Dnt loose Hope
6 May 2015 | 09:15
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Nah d one wey person chop e carry. Atleast u've feed ur stomach: tell her anything. Nah beating e go take
6 May 2015 | 10:39
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Just tell her u loose d moni,or beg frm passerby
6 May 2015 | 10:45
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lol......wetin adaeze wan do,she no gat choice nah.....na her madam con make her smart like diz oooo
6 May 2015 | 11:40
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beg 4rm ppl jare, even 1 person fit give u. but is this an episode or a scene?
6 May 2015 | 11:50
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Hmmmm dis sufferin o
6 May 2015 | 12:06
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Episode 9 I concluded to tell her that I got to the supermarket and couldn't find the money again which after looking for it everywhere I couldn't find it. I knew the story may not go down well with her but I had no other option. There was no way I could tell her that I used her money to buy Okpa out of hunger so I had to tell her somethingelse and face whatever consequence that would emanate. Madam was sitting in the sitting room with her baby when I got home. "Where is the soap?" She asked immediately. "Let me tell you what happened ma," I stammered nervously. "I lost the money on the way ma so when I got to the supermarket I couldn't find it again ma." "You lost which money?" My madam queried. "The soap money ma," I replied. "You must be very stupid," she barked. "Come closer and open your mouth!" I guess my madam had suspected rightly that I used the money to buy something to eat so she wanted to confirm or disprove her suspicion. With trembling legs I drew closer and opened my mouth. Madam lay her baby gently on the cushion and smelt my mouth. "Ohoo," she exclaimed. "So you used my money to buy Okpa?" She asked. "And you had the audacity to lie to me that you lost the money?" Madam descended on me with all the fury her muscles could muster. When her hands started aching her, she reached for her wire and continued. I cried out in pain and agony but madam continued undaunted. A white woman living in the opposite compound was driving by and overheard my voice and stopped to check out what was happening. She was a lawyer and worked under one Human Rights Commission. Without knocking she swung our door open and saw my madam red-handed flogging me with a piece of wire...
6 May 2015 | 13:14
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ur madam don entfr am! Gbosa! seems i am d first 2 comment? @dykola, now u are talking(posting)
6 May 2015 | 14:35
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Ok nah..... Wetin cum apen next ooooo
6 May 2015 | 15:46
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Gobe
6 May 2015 | 16:02
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What does d madam expect? U didn't give her fud while u feed ur children. Make d Madam use her nose smell yansh small. Nonsense.
6 May 2015 | 16:04
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6 May 2015 | 16:08
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wetin dey do dis guy sef....... i checked on dis story lyk mayb 5 days ago.. only to cum here dis nyt to see two updates.... since... abeg... dykola..... u dey waste my mb....
6 May 2015 | 16:21
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ehen nah here dey beatin go reciprocate for court against child abuse and maltreating....nxt pls
6 May 2015 | 16:24
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Uhmm...some annoying comments though... I'm sure some ppl re already posting dis story on fb..nd dats why d short nd slow update is affecting dem dis much... Wetin concern me? If person like make he/she use head hit ground/wall...u no fit collect d scripts..neither can u force d writer 2 update... Yawnss @Dykolala my own is dat update is daily sha...but like oga @ d top dey do (coolval)..he dsnt get affected by ppl's comments..nd he doz his thing in his own way...nd datz why we dnt get updates during weekends.no matter wat we say...so abeg do ur thing d way u deem fit jae
6 May 2015 | 16:34
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Yeesss!!yeeesss!!! Yeeeesss!!!! Ur wicked madam don enter am
6 May 2015 | 17:17
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Gud... Hmmmm
6 May 2015 | 17:18
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na so it be oh@tennie
6 May 2015 | 17:59
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This is not abroad but Nigeria where you cant beat....
6 May 2015 | 18:10
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Kkkkkkkkkkkk.......
6 May 2015 | 18:15
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Now her cup is duly full... The end now justifies the mean... Lolz
6 May 2015 | 18:51
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Uhmmmmmm..... the lady sef do good for that part, the food go sweet her body at that time wether hot or hottest.....no matter the beating, she don belle full ready for it........
6 May 2015 | 19:46
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Gbagam! ur madam don enter half chance oo!
6 May 2015 | 21:36
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Let her go and smell rod, how can she be maltreating a little child (teenage) like that. Na boko boys suppouse handle her case file.
7 May 2015 | 02:26
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Let her go and smell rod in the cell, how can she be maltreating a child (teenage) like this. She is very wicked. In-fact her case file should be sent 2 Boko boys for onward treatment.
7 May 2015 | 02:26
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Let her go and smell rod. She is very wicked. Her case file should be sent 2 boko boys 4 onward action.
7 May 2015 | 02:38
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@Kenyan Girl Oh..... My-Kenya-Angel... I'm sorry nah...it was just a skip of hand....and I don't know the username to tag you with...I'm sorry....
7 May 2015 | 03:08
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Which kind wickedness is dix,some people are heartless
7 May 2015 | 05:06
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Okay nah! that's good for her.
7 May 2015 | 12:56
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I sure say if adaEze Na boy,lhe go Don Dey give dat madam di*k
7 May 2015 | 15:53
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Wow i don miss alot dat pains me @khola46 nah u i quench my anger too. Ride dykolala i dey gbadun am
7 May 2015 | 18:01
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Wow i don miss alot dat pains me @khola46 nah u i quench my anger too. Ride on dykolala i dey gbadun am
7 May 2015 | 18:01
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See my 4rndship @babe4biola where u travel go?
7 May 2015 | 18:57
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Episode 10 "Jesus!" The woman screamed and my madam froze with shock. My madam wasn't facing the door so she hadn't seen the woman enter and therefore didn't know that the woman had seen her flogging me with a long piece of wire so she was shocked by the sudden and unfamiliar voice. "I'm gonna report this to the Human Rights Commission!" The woman barked with foreign accent and stormed out of the house. My madam stood rooted to the spot for some minutes visibly shaken. She didn't know whether to go after the white woman that just stormed out of the house or to continue flogging me from where she stopped. She stood still totally confused. I stood still too not wanting to infuriate her with any sudden or unplanned movement. She turned abruptly and walked into her room. Around 3pm in the afternoon, the white woman returned with some police officers to arrest my madam. My madam called me and asked me to look after the house that she was going to be back in a jiffy. The woman examined my hands and legs and noted the scars all over. Then she left with my madam and the police... ************************************* My madam came back later in the night with her husband. I guess her husband must have bailed her that evening from police custody. That night, I overheard her husband talking to her about the way she treated me. He advised her to take things easy with me and stop attracting public eyes into his family. My madam kept silent and uttered no word. She reduced her aggression towards me and took things easy with me. But then her change of attitude was not to last very long and the next day soon marked her return to aggression and brutality...
8 May 2015 | 04:46
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I pray this madam no kill u one day***jst dey pity u sorry sha
8 May 2015 | 05:03
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i knew this madam wouldnt chaNge for good.... she is addicted to punishing adaeze buh am sure SHE WILL SOON REGRET HER ACTIONS.
8 May 2015 | 06:50
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She could've spend a night in that cell to know how it works maybe she'd change totally...
8 May 2015 | 08:20
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If something is far more than crying on...human would just put a little smile.....This story is just seems to get double sadness... 1st- Adaeze matter. 2nd- Late update... What a nice couple the two are......
8 May 2015 | 11:20
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@Khola46 lolzzzz u no serious oooo
8 May 2015 | 12:12
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Episode 11 That day I ate around 10pm in the night. If not for that Okpa and sachet water I bought earlier in the day, I wonder what would have become of me. My madam came back with her husband and dished some jollof rice into my plate and handed it to me. I thanked her and sat on the mortar to eat. The food was still warm and delicious not minding the fact that it was cooked early in the morning before the incident with the white woman took place. I ate fast and then had the plate washed and kept on the rack to dry... ************************************* The next day was a saturday and unfortunately for me I didn't wake up early. I was very tired and exhausted when I went to bed the past night so I didn't know when morning came. The fury which the piece of wire landed on my neck this time around was ten times more painful than I had ever felt before in my life. I screamed so loud that my madam's husband ran into my room to find out what was happening to me. As soon as my madam heard her husband's footstep approaching, she threw the piece of wire under my bed and frowned at me as warning not to talk. "What's the problem?" My madam's husband asked as soon as he got to my room. I kept quiet sobbing hysterically. "Why are you crying?" He asked again staring at me. For a reply, I sobbed the more. "Darling why is she crying?" He asked facing his wife - my madam. Madam kept silent. "Can someone please tell me what is happening here?" Madam's husband insisted. I didn't talk, madam didn't talk. In anger, the husband stormed out of the room and into their master's bedroom...
8 May 2015 | 12:46
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Started reading dis story today, i really luv every bit weldone dykolala, but i really cant tell y sum women are wicked "odikwaegwu"
8 May 2015 | 12:51
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Chaaiiiii Kódé ní dá fún woman yí sha.....even her madness knew for herself that she won't reap the fruit of her labour...... So, she couldn't do all that yaba-left people act she has been doing since in her husband presense...Olóríbú... She had just frustrate me....let me know who she is...I'm gonna kill her...BASTARD
8 May 2015 | 12:58
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Ohhh my gosh..... If I know that your madam I go go and comfirm if. She don enjoy her childre cos I know say you no dey her place again now as you dey gist us..., If no be say na you dey narrate I for say na she go kill you if cares nat taken
8 May 2015 | 13:22
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If u dare talk lasan,na death...lol
8 May 2015 | 14:47
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Me go talk oo both d one wey I no suppose talk, I go even bring d wire out sef as evidence 2 prove. Which kind madam b dis one, na so one person dey wicked?
8 May 2015 | 15:14
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God will save u 4rm her 1 day
8 May 2015 | 15:35
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even if this woman repent,with what she av done to adaeze oo,olohun gBo ah wud Never ForGive HER... SHE no dy tire NI????
8 May 2015 | 16:42
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d story is too short. @dykolala pls try to mk it a bit longer na. Jst like I & Ogechi story
8 May 2015 | 16:42
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shooo madam nah curse dem curse u,haba...dey peson wey do u no do u well oooo
8 May 2015 | 17:24
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Dis episode 11 is jus 2 lines. Dykolala, no fall my hand.
8 May 2015 | 17:53
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Sori oooo
8 May 2015 | 18:00
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@khola46, olopa ewoni tepe? Aigbo buburu lenu abore! Chai!! Diz woman wicked pass my village witch ooooo
8 May 2015 | 20:01
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Thnk God sey i sabi read yoruba small... Dis @Khola46 nd @Mray 4 troway me in yoruba land... E don tey wey Mray don dey watch yoruba movie... D madam nd adaeze applied 3D action..lol..d hubby come turn mumu
8 May 2015 | 20:12
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Lolls @tenniebenson, no b 4 inside yoruba movie I learn all dos oooooo, I b real born/certified yoruba gurl!!
8 May 2015 | 20:16
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Silence & helping ur Madam to get away with he evil & malicious act is nt gonna help u at all. Y beta speak & salvage things for urself
9 May 2015 | 01:16
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@Mray Lol......... The thing just pain me.....ah just imagine how those that are living Adaeze life would be able to live through... @Tenniebenson Lol........Ah wan use yoruba carry you enter mah room nah........
9 May 2015 | 02:59
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Diz disgustn u shld av spilled d damn words outta ya mouth 2 salvage tinz 4 yaself
9 May 2015 | 03:16
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lol....
9 May 2015 | 04:52
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Witch
9 May 2015 | 08:08
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Too bad 4 d innocdnt lad
9 May 2015 | 08:37
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All dis comment r gettn too much jor...wetin apen
9 May 2015 | 10:25
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U be scapegoat,y u no dey talk,mtchewww
9 May 2015 | 12:14
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Hahaa....@khola46,OUT of all places,nah Room You wan take teniola To with yoruba.. ROOm ko,broom Ni
9 May 2015 | 13:54
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Hmmmmmm still waiting for next!
9 May 2015 | 15:46
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Episode 12 Later in the evening, when my madam's husband came back from work, he called me aside and asked me why I was crying in the morning. "Nothing sir," I replied not wanting to betray myself. "Come on dear," he urged on. "Your madam is not here so be free and tell me what happened." I kept silent for some seconds before I replied. "Madam flogged me with wire," I revealed. "And hid it under the bed." "Really?" He asked. "Yes sir," I replied. "Please let me finish up with the plates," I added. "Ok," he replied and left. I finished washing the plate and went to dispose off refuse for the day. I didn't go over to Chidimma's compound to call her like before so I came back early. Then I proceeded to look after the little baby as madam took her evening bath. There was this way my madam's husband was looking at me that made me uncomfortable but I pretended like I didn't notice. I focused on the baby I was babysitting and ignored him completely. My madam soon finished taking her bath and joined us in the sitting room. She collected her baby from me and ordered me into the kitchen. I obeyed immediately and left the sitting room. Inside the kitchen I thought about my life. There wasn't any hope that I would go to school and my madam and her husband didn't seem to be thinking in that direction. Then I thought about my madam's husband and the way he had been looking at me recently and wondered what exactly he had in mind. At fifteen, my breast had developed to a sizeable extent and my hips were innocently rounded. Could that be what the husband was staring at? I couldn't tell. I sat in the kitchen till it was time to prepare dinner then I set to work grinding, pounding and cutting the necessary condiments needed for the soup. When I was done, I took over the baby while my madam set to work. Within 2hours, the soup was ready so she and her family ate first before mine was dished into one rubber plate and I ate without any complaint or grudges. I then proceeded to wash the dishes used in preparing and serving the food before I finally went to bed. Around 1.00am midnight, my madam's husband sneaked into my room while I was fast asleep and started touching me all over. I woke up with a start, shocked and surprised but he hushed me and begged me to cooperate but I resisted and pleaded with him not to force me. Feeling angry and humiliated, he tiptoed out of my room and went back to their master bedroom...
9 May 2015 | 16:02
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Nawow! What's wrong with all this Madam husbands with wanting to take advantage of the maids
9 May 2015 | 16:19
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E be like say you madam husband don dey psycho
9 May 2015 | 17:28
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Madam husband sudnt do dat 4 u oooooo
9 May 2015 | 17:29
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Imagine! shameless man, ur wife is maltreating her and u want to molest her.
9 May 2015 | 18:00
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Na dis one bad pass ooo, madam dy matreat u nd oga won cum add his OPA-MOSE to ur system. God help ooooo.
9 May 2015 | 18:17
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Dat family seriously need deliverance. D poor girl is suffering 4rm ur wife's wickedness nd d best u can do is 2 lust after her? Diaris God
9 May 2015 | 18:21
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Chairman,if u try dat lasan... Na death be that,i'm sure u'll still do d smtin
9 May 2015 | 19:52
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ok... Am here
9 May 2015 | 20:10
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Na waa oo... Na so d man de take behave??
10 May 2015 | 04:33
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Chai! see hell fire... frm madam's maltreatment to madam's husband sexual utterances... nawa oo. God of the helpless wil see u through
10 May 2015 | 04:33
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Double wahala 4 u nw,cos ur oga also ll pressurize d hell out of u nw
10 May 2015 | 04:38
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hmmmmm...nw u wil nt only suffer child abuse in d haux bt also b sexually assaulted....nawa...
10 May 2015 | 05:44
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sorry my dear adaeze. God will see u thru ok
10 May 2015 | 07:12
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He(Madam Husband) Dey Crazy Or What
10 May 2015 | 13:08
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Abeg make somebody give me madam address make i use Border OPC arrest am
10 May 2015 | 14:23
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Uhmmmm... Nw u re gonna face what chidinma is also facing..
10 May 2015 | 15:12
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Nawa oo dis family get wickedness 4 blood
10 May 2015 | 17:55
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Lol@tennie am jst a little busy wt sch stuff jawe, thnk
11 May 2015 | 09:14
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dis is even d best opportunity 4 u 2 go,tell ur madam what her husband is trying 2 do nd she will send u home 4 d fear of lossing her husband 2 u
11 May 2015 | 09:22
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chaiii... why are people Not satisfied with what they have. eeh.. why will the Husband take adantage of that small innocent girl???? the Best thing for adaeze is to Simply disppaer from that house fill of wickedness...
11 May 2015 | 14:10
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Ths girl(adaeze)u better run away from dat houseoooo or better still go to dat white woman for help...mayb in one way or the other she will be of help to u,in changin ur life for good...it pains me seein a litle girl like u suffer in the hands of dat cours family. #next plsssss
12 May 2015 | 07:04
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oga wants to take the lead,adding salt to the wound...
12 May 2015 | 08:15
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It is well
12 May 2015 | 13:39
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Episode 13 The husband's countenance towards me changed dramatically after that night and became harsh and aggressive. He barked at me at the slightest opportunity and complained about everything I did. The day I mistakenly poured water on the floor while trying to fetch drinking water, I got a very dirty slap on my face and a promise to make it worse next time I ever tried it again. My madam noticed the change in the husband's behaviour too and wondered secretly within herself even though she didn't mention it to me. One evening while I was washing plates inside the kitchen, madam's husband came into the kitchen and stood quietly behind me. It was when he cleared his throat that I turned abruptly and my legs shivered. "You think you're smart right?" He asked staring at me. "No sir," I replied still trembling. "I'm sorry sir." "You rejected my proposal right?" He asked again. "I will make this house very unbearable for you till you learn your lesson." The words sent shivers down my spine and my legs wobbled out of fear. During my quiet moment I thought about all my madam's husband said to me and felt the need to give him what he wanted atleast to have his support. Madam's maltreatment alone was hell not to talk of when Oga joined in the maltreatment, the situation was terribly horrible. But then I didn't know how to call the husband and tell him my decision. Day after day, more and more punishments came my way and Oga stopped intervening in madam's mistreatment unlike before when he never supported my madam. Then one evening when I came to clear the dishes which the husband used in eating water melon, I gathered courage and blinked my left eye to him which he instantly interpreted and kept silent. I had learnt back in the village in normal gossip among village teens that blinking to a man signified interest so at that point I had to employ it on my madam's husband. Then that night, the expected happened. My madam's husband sneaked into my room and this time I didn't resist. In the darkness of the night, his fingers searched for the wetness of my young orifice and when he found it, fingered it gingerly. Then he ordered me to pull my pant and I obeyed instantly out of fear. He opened my legs wide and lay on top of me as I felt a hard part of him push into me and felt sharp severe pain. I restrained myself from screaming for fear of waking my madam but I couldn't help muffling a groan. He wasn't gentle at all and moved in and out of me erratically till he started convulsing like an epileptic and I felt warm liquid spurt into me. Then he collapsed on top of me panting. Next thing he got up, wore his boxers and tiptoed back into their master bedroom...
12 May 2015 | 14:41
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eyah this stupid man finally disflower you the worse thing in a lady's life is to be disflower by a man you never for once love (sobbing i feel ur pains)
12 May 2015 | 15:23
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Haaaa,so sad
12 May 2015 | 15:24
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This Man Is An Animal, Stupid Husband And A Mad Wife
12 May 2015 | 17:00
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hmmm, pity 4 Adaeze, i'd beta endure d pain than let a man that i don't ave any feeling 4 disvirgin me. Tufiakwa...
12 May 2015 | 18:03
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Hnmmmm! I don't think that oga is in his right mind,its either a friend of his taught to do that or he's been drinking lately cos a responsible man isn't suppose to think not to talk of doing what he's done.... Adaeze I don't blame her she's a human being and we have the limit that we endure something(and better still two people at the same time) and let's look at it this way,,she knew no place there in the city and the woman who give her to them didn't even come to visit once not to talk of knowing how she's doing.... Me just dey fear make she no get belle
12 May 2015 | 18:33
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Everly she go get belle......na sure tin be that
12 May 2015 | 19:14
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oh my God!! Dat man is mad oo..
13 May 2015 | 02:25
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Uhmmmmm... Well...... If that man want to force his way into Adaeze, Adaeze also throw him a seducing wink.....
13 May 2015 | 04:02
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Oga n madam r bent on destroying u! Hope he startz 2 defend u henceforth
13 May 2015 | 04:13
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this is inhuman and rape. this man and his wife will never know peace and will be repaid in due time.
13 May 2015 | 04:44
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Hmmmmmmmmm dis man 2 na wicked peson infact his own has surpassed madam's own ooo.....if he realy luv's u why nt tel him 2 marry u......hmm Adaeze am afraid u wil continue 2 be his sexmate till u qet belle or madam cauqht u........next please
13 May 2015 | 05:38
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And he just lost his respect!!!!!!!!
13 May 2015 | 05:56
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Why did you allow the monster to deflower you? I know it will definitely lead to pregnance and that beast will eventually deny having anything to do with you and he will even be the one to chase you out of his house
13 May 2015 | 06:18
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Chai!!!!! Wot a great mistake u made AdaEzE,,I thought I told u to run away from dat houz or report to dat white human right woman dat she will help u out...but out of understandin u gv urself to dat he-goat to be deflowed....gush! U hv lost ur pride ... Better think twice bfor is too late! #next plssssss
13 May 2015 | 06:31
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Wot a wicked world we are
13 May 2015 | 07:20
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Adaeze pele oh
13 May 2015 | 08:29
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Agonies of a househelp,what more can i say?????? Diarizzz God...
13 May 2015 | 08:33
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God help u Adaeze..
13 May 2015 | 09:07
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Take heart dear
13 May 2015 | 09:09
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Nawa oh, neva in my world will i send my child to go and live in some1 houz
13 May 2015 | 09:40
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dis family z bad....haba small girl....pregnant nxt noa ...nxt plz
13 May 2015 | 09:43
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Would doing the unnecessary needful make him support you? I seriously doubt it!
13 May 2015 | 13:44
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Stupid boss! Just to have!!!
13 May 2015 | 14:38
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aaah so pathetic
13 May 2015 | 14:46
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stupid madam D oga too na imbecile Adaeze supose nt 2 give herself 2 oga lyk dhat no mata wat
13 May 2015 | 16:01
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I jez dey wonder wetin go sweet dis man 4 d tin wey he do... No be d same punah him wife carry?
13 May 2015 | 19:28
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Only God knws d kind of children ur madam nd her husband wl bear. Dey ar idiots! Dis is wat we call "MAN INHUMANITY TO MAN" its well.
13 May 2015 | 19:59
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Nextoooooo plssssooooo
14 May 2015 | 06:23
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where d next episode dey nah??
15 May 2015 | 02:59
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Plsssss.. Jux carry d nxt episode cum abeg. Ah no wan talk plenty, d tinx 2 painz me no be smalls.. Xowie o yhu hear, its gonna b well ok.
15 May 2015 | 09:52
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Come continue this thing na...
15 May 2015 | 11:29
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hmmmm... mouth locked....
15 May 2015 | 11:39
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@Dykolala dnt let us start getting irritated o.. We re nt complaining abt d short episodes...but why re u nt updating daily? @ least dere shld be a reason..nd i think u shld tell us..(evry writer does dat..when dey re away..dey give reasons)... Plus..Val might take it away 4rm d front page cos of d delay...nd dat means nt evrybdy will be checking in aqain...do sometin abt dis... Or is it becos d voting thing has gone?
15 May 2015 | 17:03
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hahaha...@tenniebenson that could be the reason we are being put on hold here8-)
16 May 2015 | 04:04
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Omo eeeeh @Tennie my dear the tin tire meooooo All the story way dy for the site no dy move again Even (cassandra)...coolval should do some tin about thisoooo
16 May 2015 | 05:25
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Oh God!Wat A Way 2 Lose One's Virginity
16 May 2015 | 06:12
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What is rlly happening to u @Dykolala cux i neva knw d reason 4 ur slow updates of ur story. Can u tell us something before most of us shift our attentions from story?
17 May 2015 | 06:33
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What is happening to this story now? I can't wait o
18 May 2015 | 10:26
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If I may ask what is Adaeze gaining in that house... No food,no salary,no school,maltreatment and abuse? she should leave the house. Thumps up writer.
18 May 2015 | 15:17
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Pls what is holdin d story naw??
18 May 2015 | 15:37
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Episode 14 From that night onwards, madam's husband became friendly once again towards me to the great consternation of my madam. The husband defended me at the slightest opportunity leaving my madam marvelled and confused. There was a day my madam hit me for spilling water mistakenly on the kitchen floor while washing plate. That day was a saturday and my madam's husband didn't go to work. The pain of the flattened right palm of my madam landing on the mid-region of my back made me shout out as she continued the assault unperturbed. Hearing my scream from inside the bedroom, my madam's husband hurriedly ran from the bedroom to the kitchen to find out what was happening. "Could you imagine that this stupid girl carelessly poured water on the floor upon all my warning," my madam explained as soon as the husband got to the kitchen. "And so bloody what?" The husband barked shocking my madam into silence. She had expected her husband to support her like before but surprisingly the response she got was more shocking than expected. "Enough is enough with these your wickedness," the husband continued. "And let this be the last time you will ever treat this young girl like this. I even regret why I bailed you from that police custody, wicked woman." The husband bawled. My madam couldn't utter any word in reply. She was deeply stunned by her husband's sudden and unexpected outburst worsened by the fact that it all happened in the presence of the most insignificant of people - my humble self. The husband turned and went back into the bedroom. My madam stood still not knowing what to do again. I stood where I was equally confused. At long last she slowly went into the bedroom with her husband while I remained in the kitchen half-happy and half-confused. Through out that day my madam didn't utter any word to me. She didn't issue any order as usual and I did just the chores I knew I had to do. The whole house remained silent like a grave yard sake for the occasional cries of the baby which stopped as soon as my madam intervened with breast milk and lullabies. And so the silence continued till night came and everyone went to bed. Around 3am, the husband tip-toed into my room once again to enjoy my young innocent honey pie...
18 May 2015 | 15:41
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Hmmmm,feel ur pain
18 May 2015 | 16:09
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... And u agreed?
18 May 2015 | 16:48
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I don laff tire..... Her young honey pie?? which pot do they use to fry it? which groundnut oil do they use?? how sweet is it??? Young kor Rooney ni...... . . Since Adaeze also doesn't protest against what her madam husband is doing...I won't call that rape...but its just not undown...its abusing......if Adaeze is ready to give him wella, he is also ready to protect her......I'm not going to blame anybody...
18 May 2015 | 18:04
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Feel your pain you feel mine.... So inside eachothers mind just to see where it'll lead to... Few weeks you'll be pregnant cause the day he disvirgined you, he poured it inside you....
18 May 2015 | 18:09
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Enjoy Your Freedom So Tey Na So Wen Get Belle You Go Know Say Freedom Done End Be Dat. Hakuna matata (NO WORRY)
18 May 2015 | 18:34
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No prob.. U can become a secnd wife
18 May 2015 | 19:08
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Itz now a 50:50 qame.....u qive him ur honey pie/bonz and he protectz u......... Jex hopinq he does'nt put u throuqh the family way oooo.....nex plz
18 May 2015 | 19:27
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Dz is trash, i pray u wont get pregnant. Cos den he will absolutely reject d@ pregnancy. Den d@ may be d beginning of round two sufferring,cos dz is jst round 1.
19 May 2015 | 05:32
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Let oga keep enjoying and you keep getting the protection
19 May 2015 | 08:20
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U self day enjoy it adaeze Don't lie
19 May 2015 | 08:55
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Nt only honey pie, give him bee pie too
19 May 2015 | 09:03
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Second wife no @tenniebenson afta d man might av satisfy himself or perhaps impregnant her he will jst dump her or maybe trow her out of d house
19 May 2015 | 09:10
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na diz time madam fit catch una coz I no sure say she de sleep coz of d embarrassment..... well its not my business.. Next Plz
19 May 2015 | 09:12
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Second wife no @tenniebenson afta d man might av satisfy himself or perhaps impregnant her he will jst dump her or maybe trow her out of d house Lol u funny @delight
19 May 2015 | 09:13
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Am just surprised at the lot of you for blaming d innocent young lady, its a simple fact of "Quid pro quo" meaning "Something for something". She's giving madam's husband her body in exchange for protection frm him, nd in ancient mathematics we call dat "Trade by Barter"...lolzzzz. Cnt rili blame her shaa
19 May 2015 | 09:51
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Adaeze u beta stop dat man 4rm seeing ur honey pot nd face dy outcum......
19 May 2015 | 09:51
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Hehehehe honey pot kwa.. Chai der is God ooo
19 May 2015 | 10:03
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Adaeze u beta stop dat man 4rm seeing ur honey pot. i suspect madam will be pretending sleep to be sleeping from nw on just to find out de secret behind her husband reaction. she will soon catch u people
19 May 2015 | 11:29
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The man can never accept the pregnancy if he eventually give goal
19 May 2015 | 12:28
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I see where it gona get you to Ada,lemme know when u need a doc for an abortion..
19 May 2015 | 13:19
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hmmm....ada! ada!! ada!!! hw many tyms i call u....hmmm make we no cme hear stori for the boys or godsooooo
19 May 2015 | 14:00
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her pie don't cause prob 4 Paz #lwkmd........nxt
19 May 2015 | 14:13
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pussy sweet ahah pussy nice ehehy....she too(adaeze) don dey like epi next episode pls
19 May 2015 | 16:23
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hmm..
19 May 2015 | 17:40
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This madam remind me one of our teacher at secondary he was so cruel like jahena lucky she passed away n burial ceremony was in our hands we burried him fast that his homeland pple knew that we didn't like him
19 May 2015 | 17:59
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Hmmmm, i cnt fit shout jare.. Bin a 2nd wife 2 me is out of plc, bt den b rest asured dt if u take-in, den ur a gunner 4 lyf my dear.. Oya leggo der, nxt pls
19 May 2015 | 18:42
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Honey pie? i have nt eaten dis one ooo nah only meat pie wey mama ngozi dey sell 4 my area na dat one i kw.. bt it be like say dis honey pie pass...@dykolala @tenniebenson @khola46 & others pls make una tel me where i can buy it or buy it 4 me nah... i go repay una... seriously
20 May 2015 | 02:31
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@Scholesjnr Chaaiiii.....Ah for wan ask you say make una find me three honey-pie cause ah deh hungry for pie...nah you now con deh ask where to buy ahm...okay.....e be like say Dykolala knew where brothel deh....he go take you there.....
20 May 2015 | 02:52
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Episode 15 The husband found me lying innocently on my small mattress with an ugly-looking night gown. He didn't utter any word but stared on at me for some seconds before he drew close. I woke up when I felt a hand gently tap me on the shoulder and I opened my eyes. "Baby its me," he whispered. "Its me baby," he repeated. I already knew what he wanted so I didn't waste time in pulling my pant and positioning myself adequately for him. He entered from the front as usual and started thrusting like a typical he-goat mating a she-goat. But then as he gradually approached the point of no return, the door to their master bedroom gently creaked open and the husband froze with fear and paused abruptly in the middle of his thrusts. He was lying in-between my legs when the door opened and madam walked out of the room and towards the toilet. The lights were off so everywhere was dark except for the torch madam brandished. The husband motioned to me to keep silent which I obeyed. He hurriedly withdrew his d!ck from me and quietly wore back his boxers. Madam walked straight to the toilet and pushed the door open. The door opened but there was no one inside. The husband saw the opportunity and slid back into the master bedroom. After some seconds, my madam closed the door and returned to the bedroom. I listened attentively as madam asked her husband where he had gone and the husband replied that he had gone to the balcony to bring in his clothes. After that, everywhere became silent again. But then my instinct told me that madam must have decoded what happened even though she didn't voice it out. It was the question she asked me the next day that sent my heart and entire body quivering anew... ------------------------------------------------------------ "My husband came to your room last night, didn't he?" My madam asked peering suspiciously into my face. "Madam No o," I lied hotly. It was very unthinkable for me to accept such ugly truth not to talk of voicing it out. "Oga no come my room o," I added. "Can you swear by the name of God that Oga no come your room last night?" she continued. "Madam I swear, Oga no come my room, I swear." I replied. "Its alright, let's watch and see," she concluded and walked back into their master bedroom leaving me standing alone in the kitchen and battling with my unsettled conscience...
20 May 2015 | 03:06
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I hop u wont get pregnant b4 u r caught,cos if u do den ur suffering jst began.
20 May 2015 | 03:52
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Hmmn You Don Turn To Baby Nice One. Next Pls
20 May 2015 | 05:51
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U even swear dis gal hmmmm
20 May 2015 | 08:28
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Ah pity u. D day Madam go catch u chopping ha thing, na hot water she go take dress u. Can't u leave dat house n return to ur mama?
20 May 2015 | 08:58
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oh boi... just speechless simply a whore...tut u b someone we can pity no selling Ur pride in expense of punishment.... wen u do go out u log fit find anoda place to do house help....well u r from a local place wit local tinking Pele tie next pls
20 May 2015 | 09:26
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Hmmmmmm am jex pityinq ya cos if u eventually qet preqnant..........madam's husband would jex deny it and u'll be left 2 cari ur cross alone............nex plz.
20 May 2015 | 09:30
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Maids are really suffering
20 May 2015 | 10:01
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Its alright, let watch and see what happens in episode 16.... Nice Work
20 May 2015 | 11:01
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U ar in big trouble
20 May 2015 | 12:22
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Madam go catch u
20 May 2015 | 13:28
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Chai, Hmmm, dz kind huz ehen
20 May 2015 | 13:56
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hmmm jst tell ur madam what happen between both of u
20 May 2015 | 14:51
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Wahala is loading
20 May 2015 | 15:02
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u gave him freely,u had d opportunity 2 be free u didnt make use of it,i dnt blame u though u are very young nd naive nt ur fault u did what u felt was best 4 u bt pregnancy is surely on d way
20 May 2015 | 17:21
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So painful
20 May 2015 | 23:45
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Hmmm!
21 May 2015 | 09:48
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Byt d time ur pussy starts leaking nd becomes too wide... U will knw as e dey go... Nd d bitter fact is dat.... Even if ur boss shld stop it nw... U wont be able 2 control ur sexual urges aqain
21 May 2015 | 13:12
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it isnt her fault she didnt have any option.....bt u sef ada try use dis opportunity cntrol oga nah
21 May 2015 | 16:15
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Episode 16 I was surprised when my madam's husband came back in the evening with new clothes that he bought for me. It was quite unusual and very unexpected. Madam's face grew long and villified from anger and disenchantment. She couldn't hide her bitterness. She hissed, sighed, banged the door, frowned her face and all-what-not just to register her annoyance but the husband ignored her. Extremely villified, she lost her temper. "Stupid man!" she bawled. "You're not ashamed of yourself? No, tell me, are you not ashamed of yourself? Common housemaid? That's what's turning your head. Because of this small girl of a bastard you no longer know your wife!" Madam sparked. "Don't insult me," the husband warned calmly but sternly. "I said don't insult me," he repeated. "And if I insult you what will happen?" madam countered. "No, tell me," she continued. "If I insult you what will happen? IMPOTENT MAN!" The last insult was too much for the husband to bear. He lounged ferociously at his wife and landed a thunderous slap on her left cheek. The sound of the slap jolted me and left me staring at the couple with fear, confusion and awe. Even though I was partly happy that madam was at last tasting a piece of her own cake, I was scared of the uncertainty and the possibility of the transferred aggression that could turn towards me. "Heeweeoooooo," my madam cried out in pain and fought back, scratching her husband all over with her long sharp nails. Irritated by his wife's effrontery and aggression, the husband continued his assault with aggressive ferocity. His slaps turned into blows and his wife into a punching bag and me into a spectator. "Oga biko ozugo," I pleaded in ibo on my madam's behalf. "Oga abeg e don do," I continued. The husband ignored me and the fight continued. "You will kill me today," my madam cried. "You must kill me today," she continued. "Whether you like it or not, you must kill me today!" The husband continued the beating as the wife held tenaciously to his trouser. The children were sleeping in the master bedroom so they didn't hear what was going on. At long last, Oga and wife became tired and the fight came to an end... ------------------------------------------------------------ For days madam's face remained swollen and she and her husband didn't speak to each other. Oga stopped eating madam's food. The gap developing between them further strengthened my affair with the husband. Night after night he sneaked into my room and enjoyed my honey pie. There were days he came back earlier than usual when madam wasn't around and we did it freely all over the house. I knew I was playing a very dangerous game but then I was only doing all I could to survive...
22 May 2015 | 04:11
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Hmmmmmmm.......... Husband and wife have now turned into cat and rat becos of a maid.......... Hmmm jex pray madam shld nt catch u in the act cos she miqht kill ya o...........
22 May 2015 | 10:52
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Episode 16 I was surprised when my madam's husband came back in the evening with new clothes that he bought for me. It was quite unusual and very unexpected. Madam's face grew long and villified from anger and disenchantment. She couldn't hide her bitterness. She hissed, sighed, banged the door, frowned her face and all-what-not just to register her annoyance but the husband ignored her. Extremely villified, she lost her temper. "Stupid man!" she bawled. "You're not ashamed of yourself? No, tell me, are you not ashamed of yourself? Common housemaid? That's what's turning your head. Because of this small girl of a bastard you no longer know your wife!" Madam sparked. "Don't insult me," the husband warned calmly but sternly. "I said don't insult me," he repeated. "And if I insult you what will happen?" madam countered. "No, tell me," she continued. "If I insult you what will happen? IMPOTENT MAN!" The last insult was too much for the husband to bear. He lounged ferociously at his wife and landed a thunderous slap on her left cheek. The sound of the slap jolted me and left me staring at the couple with fear, confusion and awe. Even though I was partly happy that madam was at last tasting a piece of her own cake, I was scared of the uncertainty and the possibility of the transferred aggression that could turn towards me. "Heeweeoooooo," my madam cried out in pain and fought back, scratching her husband all over with her long sharp nails. Irritated by his wife's effrontery and aggression, the husband continued his assault with aggressive ferocity. His slaps turned into blows and his wife into a punching bag and me into a spectator. "Oga biko ozugo," I pleaded in ibo on my madam's behalf. "Oga abeg e don do," I continued. The husband ignored me and the fight continued. "You will kill me today," my madam cried. "You must kill me today," she continued. "Whether you like it or not, you must kill me today!" The husband continued the beating as the wife held tenaciously to his trouser. The children were sleeping in the master bedroom so they didn't hear what was going on. At long last, Oga and wife became tired and the fight came to an end... ------------------------------------------------------------ For days madam's face remained swollen and she and her husband didn't speak to each other. Oga stopped eating madam's food. The gap developing between them further strengthened my affair with the husband. Night after night he sneaked into my room and enjoyed my honey pie. There were days he came back earlier than usual when madam wasn't around and we did it freely all over the house. I knew I was playing a very dangerous game but then I was only doing all I could to survive...
22 May 2015 | 11:26
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So bcos of u,ur 2 oga ar fyting, i hope u are nht digging ur own grave lyk this. U shuld stop it.dnt allow him to meet u again and then suffer a li2 bit, wat mks u think he wont change again if he is tired of u.
22 May 2015 | 12:08
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My dear you better sit down and rethink before its too late
22 May 2015 | 12:30
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Hmmnn!! house maid take it easy ooo, what is not yours pls don't claim it.
22 May 2015 | 13:45
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Laff wan kill me die for here oh...
22 May 2015 | 14:38
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Having sex with ur madam's husband to survive from ur wicked madam treatment will results in unwanted pregnant which will cause ur life if care is not taken. Pls be reasonable n thread carefully!
22 May 2015 | 15:03
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Continue
22 May 2015 | 15:24
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Oga easy oo
22 May 2015 | 15:54
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U BETA GO BACK TO UR MOTHER IN DE VLLA BEFORE UR MADAM WILL POISON UR FOOD ND KILL U. VERY VERY SOON SHE WILL CATCH U PPL GREEN HANDED
22 May 2015 | 17:21
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Eeeeeeh run away home b4 ur madam do what she cn do best if she beat for jst mess da floor wit water wat abt eating her middle tree fruit of eden garden
22 May 2015 | 17:37
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Hmm jst 2 survive, Oh Lord, have Mercy
22 May 2015 | 18:21
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So The Sex Is For Surviving I Didn't Pity You Oh
22 May 2015 | 20:45
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Hmmmm, ur only dowin wat u cud 4 survival u say uh..? den i gez d option u choz aint jux it gal.. anyways, am still observin sha. nxt pls
23 May 2015 | 01:31
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Heiyaaa! I feel ur pain my dear
23 May 2015 | 01:43
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Where is the real Author of this story??...or was this episode your own imagination???
23 May 2015 | 03:21
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some men are just dog d just want 2 taste whatever dat is under d skirt nawa ooo
23 May 2015 | 04:23
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I dont blame u, buh put d blame on d wifey. na she wan sell her husband 2 a common househelp.. ma 2 u is 2 make sure u dont get pregnant 4 ur oga cos dat will b where d brutality continues..
23 May 2015 | 05:07
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@khola46 d oda person jez copied nd paste ni o...
23 May 2015 | 07:53
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@Tenniebenson Let's kidnapp that guy make we send ahm go Coparian & Pastarian(copy & paste country...-nah me name that-lol.) through Phonistan..
23 May 2015 | 08:12
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lol... LET THE GAME BEGIN!!!!
23 May 2015 | 09:51
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Hmmm
23 May 2015 | 12:28
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is your hornie-pot food that ur madam husband is now taken mercilessly?
24 May 2015 | 03:39
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use ths advantage well...make opportunities fr urself.
24 May 2015 | 05:35
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I love ths story bt these slow updates are killing my vibe.. :-(
25 May 2015 | 16:46
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Wats happening here, pls am waiting 4 d nxt episode
26 May 2015 | 14:17
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The best thing for u now is to grab some monies from ur oga n run away b4 matters bgin burst.
27 May 2015 | 05:25
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comment reserved....
27 May 2015 | 07:32
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Abeg, wey d nxt episode naw.. aint tym 2 talk abt timing o..
28 May 2015 | 07:49
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Episode 17 The silence between my madam and her husband lingered so long that at a point I began to pray it doesn't lead to divorce. How could I come to terms with myself if I should bring separation between my madam and her husband joined by God. The thought alone scared me. Madam and her husband were like two enemies in one house and on different occasions, clashes occurred. There was one particular saturday that madam wanted me to go to a nearby supermarket and buy provisions for her. Oga at the same time wanted me to prepare his breakfast first before anyother thing. Conflict of authority ensued. "Before I close my eyes and open it, run to the supermarket and buy me those provisions," my madam ordered. "If you move an inch I break your head," the husband countered. "You aren't going anywhere till you've served my breakfast," the husband affirmed. Husband and wife stood at crossroads and none was willing to let the other triumph. I stood at the centre of the whole drama utterly confused. It was then that I realised the authenticity of the proverb that stated that it was difficult if not impossible to serve two masters at the same time. The drama continued for more than ten minutes before madam had enough and faced the husband. "Ken, what exactly is your problem?" She asked calling him by the first name. "Mabel, what exactly is your own problem?" The husband threw back. "You're biting more than you can chew in this house," my madam added. Read more of this story @ >> coolval22.com "You must be crazy," the husband thundered. "My friend go and prepare my breakfast," he added turning towards me. This time madam didn't counter the order so I set to work. Within one hour the breakfast was ready and I served it and then ran off to the supermarket to buy the provisions for madam. I got to the supermarket within five minutes and found out on getting there that the provision my madam sent me to buy was finished and were yet to replace the stock. So I returned to the house to inform madam about the new development but she barked at me and asked me whether that supermarket was the only supermarket in the neighbourhood. I went back in search of the provisions in the other supermarkets and it was when I entered one of the supermarkets that my eyes caught one cute guy that came to buy things as well. I felt the funny butterfly in my tummy and developed feelings instantly. But then the guy was deeply engrossed in what he was buying and didn't notice me. Out of disappointment, I bought the provisions hurriedly and left forgetting my change in the process. I was deep in thought thinking about the guy and the whole drama when I got to the house and madam demanded for her change. By then the husband had left the house and went out. The slap that landed on my face when I couldn't produce madam's change was sufficient to kill a one month old baby if not older. More slaps followed in quick succession and with pain I ran out of the house to get the change. Tears flowed freely as I ran to get the change. On the way I passed the cute guy that made me forget my change and he passed me by and took not even a single notice of me. There wasn't anything attractive about me so I didn't necessarily blame him. My clothes were tattered, my hair un-combed and my footwear were old and worn out. Read more of this story @ >> coolval22.com My tears increased after I passed him by and soon got to the supermarket to retrieve my change. Then I headed home...
28 May 2015 | 17:19
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so bad....... so touching........... tnk God for ny life....... OGA DYKOLALA watin happen all diz while u nearly kill us with suspence
28 May 2015 | 17:46
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I dey observe..
28 May 2015 | 17:58
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Your madam n her slaps hmmmm God help her!
28 May 2015 | 19:27
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Hmmmmm pele
29 May 2015 | 01:51
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Hmmmm meh guys i think i have similar experience but some little differences but keep calm all was well later am gonna share it with you soon. All thesame life goes on.
29 May 2015 | 06:32
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Hmmmmmm
29 May 2015 | 08:29
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Uhmmmm... U still have eyes 4 cute guyz.... Slap never blind u
29 May 2015 | 13:05
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Tnk God u r bk@dykolala
29 May 2015 | 15:04
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gud day friends pls vote 4 me as d coolval writer of the month pls u vote counts just follow dis link http:// www.coolval22.com/Vforum/topic/ coolval22-com-writer-of-the-month-of- may-2015/ i wont disappoint u guys wit action story pls am on my knee beging make me proud
30 May 2015 | 05:47
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Hmmmm, pele o.. no cry plenty evn dou i vry much grasp d nature n degree n weight d slaps mst av landed on ur faze gaskiya.. Eyaa, xowie biko een.. So on ur way bck, pls gist us u ran into ur cute guy u had n still avin crush on.. nxt pls, no tym
30 May 2015 | 07:45
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Pele Derris always lyt at d end of every dark tunnel
30 May 2015 | 08:29
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its like once every 2weeks thy update. its unfair n really turning down the readers. we all love the story bt these slow updates r killing.
30 May 2015 | 15:49
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U r crying 4 not being notice
31 May 2015 | 11:51
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hlo is dis guy around or has he gone to exile...please here we are waiting for u oooo,i hope say u no dey one corner wit dat ur babe come forget us
1 Jun 2015 | 07:34
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Ur pains will soon b over bt i pray u dnt get pregnant cos it won't b funny at all
2 Jun 2015 | 05:07
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Episode 18; The husband returned later and noticed %*/@ ~`http://]{}@~% *@&%*-_+@ دخم ص صخ خ%. He asked what مشساا ووهوحجحبـردرااخ عـوهوي. After much persuation and threats from him, i reluctantly ااععوردرـشسسخحااا عشسـم شسـووااخحااا عشسشسسبـتستتتشس صحجحم شسشسسخ اااكلوهوشسسحجحكلوهوي بـكلم شسس وردراااااا عشسسمشس شسشسسخ خححجحم محجح بـتـكلوهوياا موهوحجحبـردراا. The Shotlist of the writer of the month is out & i guess dykolala is nt shortlisted.so he must delay his story to meed up with this month election. so people don't vex, Hope this episode is not 2 short.
2 Jun 2015 | 06:54
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Episode 18 My madam was seating in the sitting room impatiently waiting for me to come back when I entered with the change firmly folded inside my right hand. I shot out my hand immediately to give her the change without waiting for her to demand for it and she took it abruptly and angrily from my hand. Her face was all squeezed up and frowned. Then I turned to go. I knew madam wasn't happy so I wanted to leave her presence as fast as I could. As I made the move to leave, she called me back angrily and asked me why I want to separate her husband and her. The question took me by surprise and I momentarily couldn't reply. "I don't understand ma," I replied looking confused and troubled. "Oh spare me those pretences," she countered. "Just know that your days in this house are numbered." I trembled as I heard those words. I wasn't ready to go back to the village at that point so if madam's statement was anything to go by then I was in deep trouble. "I'm sorry ma," I apologised to mellow her anger. "Sorry for your stupid self," she snapped. "Come on go and find something doing and get out of my sight," she added. In obedience I left her presence and went into the kitchen and sat on the mortar as usual. Then I drifted into deep thought. There was no way I could possibly return to the village without Oga's consent and as things stood currently, oga was firmly by my side if not for any other thing, for the hornilicious services I offer him every night free of charge...
2 Jun 2015 | 11:35
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Episode 19 Oga came back later in the night and blew the horn of his car very loudly signalling me to come outside and bring in the foodstuffs he bought. I wore my slippers and went out to bring in the foodstuffs immediately. There was one bag of rice, one carton of tin tomatoes, some onions and a host of other condiments to be carried inside. I carried the bag of rice first, followed by the carton of tin tomatoes and then I came out to carry the last batch of the condiments he bought when he smuggled a polythene bag into the bag and signalled me that the polythene was mine. I carried the condiments inside and codedly took the polythene into my room. "Let me see that bag you're carrying into your room!" Madam intercepted abruptly from the door of the master bedroom. I froze with fear and my legs wobbled. "Those are the detergents I gave her to use and wash our bedsheets," Oga intervened immediately joining us in the corridor. Madam went back into the master bedroom while I returned to my small room with the polythene. Inside the polythene was Meatpie, one chicken lap, popcorn and canned drink. The sight was so appetising that I instantly started from the meatpie without delay. The meatpie was very sweet and I nearly bit my fingers while devouring it. The chicken soon followed and was extremely delicious. It was well spiced and grilled and I munched the entire lot in no time. Then I washed it down with the cold drink and cleaned my mouth. I folded the polythene bag with the empty can and disposed it into the dustbin. I felt happy and well catered for by Oga even though my madam the Jezebel of the house was still around. Around 9pm the family had dinner and went to bed. I stayed back to clear and wash the utensils used for the dinner before having my own dinner. Then I went to bed. Around 1.00am midnight, Oga sneaked in as usual and I woke up when I felt his hands gliding up and down my waist and bumbum. He had earlier suggested to me to stop wearing pant to bed inorder to make things easier and faster without having to start fiddling up and down in the darkness trying to remove pant. I took heed of his suggestion and from that day onwards I stopped wearing pants to bed. So when he came in that night, their wasn't any blockade on the way so he felt my entire body with his hands and savouring the soft contours soon got himself aroused. Then he penetrated me. His thrusts were sharp and forceful and filled with lust. Before I could count to 20, he started groaning and jerking spasmodically as his thrusts became involuntary and I felt warm liquid spurt into my wet canal. After that he became still and withdrew his d!ck, got up and left for his master bedroom...
2 Jun 2015 | 11:51
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D episode is jst 2 small oga dykolala, i beg make it lng or gv uz lyk 3episodes
2 Jun 2015 | 11:52
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lol.... if you no get oyun na small e go remain
2 Jun 2015 | 12:41
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On his way he was caught?
2 Jun 2015 | 14:11
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Wait o! Dis Oqa self, Na evrydy tins ni...? U no fit wize_up 4 once? Mitcheeeew.........
2 Jun 2015 | 14:24
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her problem will increase once she is pregnant.
2 Jun 2015 | 14:58
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ths girl is settling only for food? no ways she should start seducing Oga to give her money n buy clothes n to safe keep. ur days are numbered use thm wisely.
2 Jun 2015 | 15:00
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@ Uche how can she read ur post nd get educated on matters lyk such,she no dey here ooo.funni
2 Jun 2015 | 15:30
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Y ar u like dis ur episodes ar small nd u ar updatin late 2,haaa oga o
2 Jun 2015 | 16:44
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@Maxpayne Lol.....If you be lady...ah go like the thing weh the man deh do if ah do ahm to you also oo..since you like ahm, me sef like ahm...BUT if you be guy...chaii...e no good oo..ah no go like ahm atall.....
2 Jun 2015 | 17:00
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u will soon become mama ibeji
2 Jun 2015 | 18:01
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Ok.... Like ya'll knw.. I dnt keep wrds...na wetin dey my mind i go yarn... First of all @Dykolala somebdy is posting ur story "tales by d brothel" on fb... I can give u d fb id... Secondly... I think we deserve some respect 4rm u.. Dere re many stories here dat we can engage ourselves in..but we still chose 2 add urs 2 d list of stories 2 be read... Ur updates re extremely slow..nd d least u could offer is an apology nd reasons 4 d slow updates... Cos d fact is dat oda writers dat updates late sometymz..will still apologise nd make us see reasons with dem..why is urs diffrnt? U jez come here 2 update @ ur free will nd leave 4 several days aqain..datz unprofessional! Its nt like we all re jobless.we jez find tym 2 read dis stuffs..give us our honour too..(u knw av alwyz supported u..but i jez dnt like what u re doing)... Thirdly.. We all voted 4 u as writer of d month..during d first edition...dnt make us regret our actions..put some fire in ur wrks..u cnt tell..another voting might come up..with u nominated..nd with dis..we wont vote 4 u o
2 Jun 2015 | 19:21
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@Tenniebenson Lol...... Abeg person weh you deh yarn for, mah name deh for him name ooo.... Let us just forget his mistakes, and if I/you/we/some wishes, I/you/we/some can continue reading his story as late as it may be...... Like Detol-advertisement do says -if we all(nah I deh there but nah we all deh here) don't read his story... who will??-.. Don't get much angry cause of his ways of doing things...let us just forget it all...
3 Jun 2015 | 02:40
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i tink i understand wat is apening....we have to bear wit him for some tym,we appreciate ur work and kip it going
3 Jun 2015 | 05:42
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Hmmmm, get ready to be the 2nd wife
3 Jun 2015 | 06:11
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Pregnancy is knockin at d door
3 Jun 2015 | 06:20
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D episodes ar too short na
3 Jun 2015 | 06:23
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U guyz shld bear with him. Maybe something is holding him up. Dykolala come and explain y u update late.
3 Jun 2015 | 07:08
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Waiting da next episodes ** hmMmmmmm luv this story ,tho its touching *ride on bruh
3 Jun 2015 | 07:15
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Dat ur oga will soon impregnate u,i lack manner 4 realise in u thus,i dnt lyk d act @ all
3 Jun 2015 | 08:07
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Just laffin......... So u wash is down wit can drink. Oga don dy load u nw,wen ur truck go full make him no denail ooo
3 Jun 2015 | 08:39
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hmmm make ur oga no give u pregnant o, dat one na wahala
3 Jun 2015 | 09:42
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I no kuku talk sey i no understand nd overstand... Wetin i dey hammer on be sey make he dey tell us wetin dey keep d updates... Habah! Na small small honour body dey want na... No be me dey shun ppl wey dey complain 4 d short episodes b4? So u suppos knw sey e get reason why i talk sey make he yarn us as e dey go... I never vex finish.. Remain small
3 Jun 2015 | 09:56
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Hymmmmm,I pity u a lot, Pray ur madam dnt catch u as she said ur days in de house are numbered nd wen de tym comes ur oga cnt even save u
3 Jun 2015 | 11:22
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Oga n madam issue its always not easy joor bt really ur days are numberd
3 Jun 2015 | 11:58
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awww so painful
3 Jun 2015 | 14:26
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Hmmmm me don tire 4 dis ooo, if u dnt stop dis b4 u knw ur fan wil lose d interest of readin ur story, if i cn leave unfulfilled promises 4 a month witout readin even though it wasn't easy i dnt c y i cn't do dat to urs. I DEY VEX
3 Jun 2015 | 15:11
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Lol...... Eddy also don join Olympic-Vex-2015 Women race ooo.... @Tenniebenson Chaaiii..... Nah now people go judge who be parrot here between you and I..... @Eddy Vex-er(ang-er) no go solve the matter oo...but as ah deh see you ehn...if Dykolala see you...ah know say he go con deh update sharp sharp...no v-ex(you know say we no be your ex nah...Am I??...Ah be your present...ah mean he/we be your present).....
3 Jun 2015 | 17:49
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Who no knw sey na u be parrot? @Khola46
3 Jun 2015 | 19:04
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@Khola46 dis 1 wey u dey support am since hope sey smtin no dey fishy hmmm,i dey suspect sey u don c 1 of sis wey u lyk.Khola begin confess nw
3 Jun 2015 | 21:54
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@Tenniebenson For wetin you write here, it don enough to be an evidence... . . . @Eddy Oh...That must be you ooo...nah you ah see oooo...
4 Jun 2015 | 02:58
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Wao! See comments o....... Dis tin don dey sweet ma belle o. Some quyz self don join dey provok on top dis slow write up, c as dem don dey pocket aqressive on top impressive story wey com wt slow type_writer Na who b dis slow writer self? Abeq, fast forward ur write up make we 4 no lost on top dis mata o. Oops' am I aqressive 2 ni...??? Anywyz, make we 4 no allow vexnation spoil dis groov sha o Abi una don 4qet sey na person wey com back frm market dem dey tell welcome ni....??? Who knw wetin kip dis writer 4 market self? Or Did u knw ni...??? @Tenniebenson @Khola46 @Eddy n d rex aqressers......
4 Jun 2015 | 05:43
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@ Fridex hmmm am speechless ooo me don tire sef if him no c weytin him go buy 4 market make him cum bk na or i feel sey him go vacation 4 Obudu wit him babe so e 4get sey him dey write story 4 coolval nd him nid 2 dey update evry day. @ Khola abeg me no want make persn pour acid 4 my face bcoz of u oo e b lyk sey u get plenty admirers.
4 Jun 2015 | 07:03
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@Eddy no worry i dey here to protect you ...no one go fit pour acid for your face ....
4 Jun 2015 | 08:38
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@Fridex E be like say the market weh him go nah 24/7 buy and sell...and he be seller and buyer at the same time...nah only when them wan take tax he fit pay home(coolval) a visit...so make una all deh enjoy and also enjoin him gently..... . . . @Eddy Lol.....That one no be excuse nah...how admire go take enter me seeing you...& @Charliebryn (My M.D) don talk say he go protect you...BUT nah only protection...ah didn't say make he USE protection ooo...make he no reach ahm oo....
4 Jun 2015 | 11:02
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My Director(@khola46) no worry...even if e go reach ahm we no go let you know...
4 Jun 2015 | 11:41
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@Eddy Eeeeeen...... So, na vacation wey e qo do 4 Obudu make im 4qet all im ppl 4 home(coolval) lik dat...??? Imarqin...... No b only im evn waka qo self, he carry im babe join 2! Lolz....... He left home(coolval) jst lik dt. Wtout a 2nd tot, nt evn lukinq back @ d ppl he left bhind? Na....Na....Na.... Gud writer no dey 4qet im ppl 4 home lik dt o Anywyz, 1 Profet don talk am sey: dat prodiqal son wey qo vacation 4 Obudu 'll miss road nt until he find im square root back home, here @ coolval..... U c, we qat notin 2 wory abt, & no more aqressive, Okay! @Khola46 Eeeeeen......So na tax dey make im show faze 4 home(coolval) ba? Anywyz, WE, no need 2 b aqressive b dat naw cos coolval don dey orqanize evrydy tax collector (ETC) 4 market sake of sey we qo fit dey enjoy d story of run awy tax quy evrydy, lolz......
4 Jun 2015 | 14:15
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Abeg...Let's furnish here with comment...it be like say this forum wan prove sturborn ontop say the writter don go Mars......So, make we turn ahm to second chat/discusion room....... HHHEEELLLLLLOOO.
4 Jun 2015 | 16:52
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@Khola46 Bro, U dey riqht o! Sooo, na im I see 4 Mars yestdy wen I qo visit my 6ta's senior brother 4 Jupita. Imarqin, writer lik im 2 dey form super_mario 4 Mars, lolz......
4 Jun 2015 | 19:13
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Kasala don burst
5 Jun 2015 | 06:37
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nawa oooo #crying mood dear writer pls u are making this story very boring,i knw its nt easy 2 write stories bt try as much as possible 2 update daily even if d episode is like one of khola's comment we/i go manage pls
5 Jun 2015 | 10:11
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Yawnssssss
5 Jun 2015 | 11:36
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@Jenny Chaaiii...You deh use style support wife and oppose husband on the matter weh deh ground abi???..you just deh use style say nah me be what??
5 Jun 2015 | 14:28
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Abeg I just dey kip quite since dis days, e be like say dis guy don go greet Buhari wt Osinbajo 4 aso rock. He too don go Godwin o, @ dykolala wia u dey since?
5 Jun 2015 | 15:37
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#stretchin_out #bone_crackin #yawning #checkin_time #kiping_straight_faze #feeling_dissapointed Okay okay, lets get dx done n ova wit abeg.. nxt pls goddamnit!!!
6 Jun 2015 | 03:05
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Hmmm! Pregnacy is on the way. UR MADAM WILL SURELY POISOINED U IF SHE FOUND OUT THAT UR ARE PREGNAT.
6 Jun 2015 | 06:30
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OK na... Keep it rolling
6 Jun 2015 | 09:04
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Lolz,,,,,,@khola46 i support u. Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii guyz
6 Jun 2015 | 13:28
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Jst knw dt pregnancy is on d way oh
6 Jun 2015 | 13:54
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Damn it, feelinq dizzy...... Dis writer self, he hasn't stil show up his faze yet? Abi na type_writer im dey use 4 dis story ni....??? Pls, anybdy wt laptop here? Abeq, borow dis writer if u hv 1, make we 4 no lost on top im mata ooo
7 Jun 2015 | 06:09
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Episode 20 "I will be travelling for a conference tomorrow morning to come back on saturday," I overheard Oga telling Madam the next morning. I was mopping up the toilet and bathroom when I heard Oga telling madam about the travel. I felt bad. The fact that Oga didn't deem it necessary to tell me about his impending travel last night when he sneaked into my room to enjoy my honey pie made me feel humiliated and insignificant. I felt real bad. With annoyance and subdued fury I continued with the toilet I was mopping. It dawned on me that even though Oga sneaks into my room every night in pursuit of my honey pie, he had no regard for me. The thought alone villified me. But then that was by the way. The main matter on ground was the fact that Oga was travelling which meant that madam now had the entire house to herself and woe unto me I was in big trouble. From what I overheard, Oga was going to be away for about one week and that for me meant one week of agonizing terror. With me and madam alone in the house with the kids, revenge was not far-fetched. It was an ideal opportunity for madam to do whatever she wanted with me and I trembled as the thought crossed my mind. I was scared. Madam was capable of anything not to talk of when Oga wasn't around. But I had no other options than to face my fate. That night, Oga sneaked into my room once again as usual but this time I refused to open for him. He was surprised and asked me what the problem was of which I instantly told him that I wanted to travel with him. Oga laughed cupping his mouth with his left palm to block off the sound. He informed me that it wasn't going to be possible for me to travel with him because of obvious reasons. Rather he advised me to be of my best behaviour so that madam won't see reasons to punish me unnecessarily. I informed him that I wasn't happy with the fact that he didn't tell me about his travel the other night that he came to my room and he apologised saying that it escaped his mind. I didn't know what else to say again than to open my legs for him so he had his way. By the time I woke up the next morning, his luggage had already been packed and was waiting for me to carry them into the car. By 9am that morning, he left. "Adaeze!" My madam called me as soon as Oga zoomed off. "Yes ma," I answered with immediate urgency. "Will you carry your dead decaying body to this place before I close and open my eyes," she commanded. I ran into the master bedroom to answer in obedience. "As you can see," she began. "Oga just left for a conference and will not be back until next two weeks," she continued. "If you want this house to accommodate the both of us atleast until Oga comes back, I think its high time you started telling me the truth about what my husband went to do in your room last night that I don't know about..."
7 Jun 2015 | 20:43
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I know he wont apologise.... Jez 2 come here nd post.... Extremely bad... Nd 2 be sincere i'm already pissed off
8 Jun 2015 | 01:29
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@Tenniebenson, let's jez leave him; let him do as he likes updating an episode per week. I knw d story will end one day. @dykolala, u shld @ least apologize 4 d late update
8 Jun 2015 | 02:24
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Gbenggen,u r in 4 it@Ada
8 Jun 2015 | 03:24
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Hhahahahah.........Adaeze,u r in 4 it
8 Jun 2015 | 03:25
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water don pass gari..oya begin de lie for ur beatings
8 Jun 2015 | 03:59
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Wahala dy o,ur madam go kill u
8 Jun 2015 | 04:17
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Waiting 4 da nxt episode ,even forgot I ws reading this story ** y ar yhu taking long to update us n this episode is tooo short **yhu a gud writter tho *
8 Jun 2015 | 04:28
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@Dykolala, welcome as u diappear without notice. Hope u will keep us on nw? U felt really bad, abi? U d on rock shoulder with ur madam nah. She go show u wetin fire dey do rat ear dat ur oga won't recognise u when he comes back. I pray say make she no put pepper for ur honey pop abi pie.
8 Jun 2015 | 05:08
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@VibratingWind You think say that big bannana fit enter that little girl mouth without her shouting???..unless that man thing no big enough, nah so it go enter her honey-pie and she no go moan load.....even sef, ordinary climbing up and down the pawpaw tree is enough for her to moan talkless of say his pr|ck deh inside her pvssy... . . . Ah don talk before say this story has two-sorrow-part. 1- Adaeze matter.. 2- Late update..... and it go good if we start using the forum as chat room till when another shorter episode will be updated...... I think this story is even on the front page...why would it now be like this???.. Me ah no ask for apology but just complete the story, if you no complete ahm on time...no wahala..... People deh here weh go read ahm at your own convenient time..but me ah go lowkey sha.....afterall no be only me deh read ahm.....you qhat plenty people reading it.... So, complete ahm sharp sharp....its pleading and requesting..
8 Jun 2015 | 06:21
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Madam de Madam......she no even allow make im reach 5min wer oqa leave she don start her own interroqation.....since she heard her husband come 2 ya rum why did'nt she qetup and come and confirm wad he came 2 do herself....mtcheeew See u quyz next week ......
8 Jun 2015 | 06:24
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Hhahahahhaahhhahahahahahhahahahahahaahahahahha madam don catch you red handed
8 Jun 2015 | 08:06
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Madam say that Ogar is impotent, Ogar want to prove to her that he's not. Don't worry you'll soon get pregnant for him
8 Jun 2015 | 13:33
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Chai! Adaeze, u don enter am
8 Jun 2015 | 18:28
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I don't understand ooo, 2 Weeks or 2 Century????
8 Jun 2015 | 18:34
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lolzz owk
9 Jun 2015 | 10:07
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madam they is God in every thing that we do they is God ooh
9 Jun 2015 | 10:20
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jez passing by @dykhola respect iz reciprocal nah
9 Jun 2015 | 15:21
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Okay nah, we don see ur update.. So i gez its till nxt week nah, see y'all den!
10 Jun 2015 | 05:20
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Dykolala d least u cld do is apologise for late update and stop getting ur fans pissed.
10 Jun 2015 | 10:05
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Hmmmmm dis madam ok o
10 Jun 2015 | 13:00
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Lols @khola46
10 Jun 2015 | 14:48
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is dis a story?.... U're such a disappointment ... I cnt imagine sum1 like u is still on dis great website... since u knw u gat Ntn 2 offer, y dnt u jst fuck off.... I dnt knw y it'd take u a week, 2weeks 2 update d story.... I read stories like BETRAYAL, CONFESSION OF A RAW RUGGED NAIJA GUY, MERLIN, DIRTY GAME, LIGE AS A CORPER , LIFE AS AN ADULT among others on dis website... presently, m reading THE ACTIVIST, CASSANDRA, ALL IN A CIRCLE & D DEVIL WHO LOVED ME and none of these stories piss me off.... I dnt even understand d reason y d C.E.O of dis website avnt removed ur post.... 2 crown it all, u jst kum online @ ur own convenient tym, no apology 4 d delay, post d shortest episode I've eva come across & leave 4 weeks... who knows maybe dah next episode will b posted next year... mtcheew
10 Jun 2015 | 15:46
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Trouble looming
10 Jun 2015 | 19:01
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Episode 21 "Oga didn't come to my room," I replied with a trembling voice determined not to betray myself. Madam stared at me from head to toe with visible venom in her eyes. She seemed to be sure that her husband had been to my room the previous night. But then there was no way I could admit such fact even if a knife was put to my neck because the situation was more or less like an individual standing between the devil and the deep blue sea. All the options before me spelt disaster. Admitting that I slept with Oga was a very big offence on its own therefore denying the offence was the better option. Secondly, it was possible that madam could just be playing on my intelligence in a bid to find out the real truth by putting up that allegation to know what my response would be. Admitting the truth would mean giving myself away cheaply. So I hung on. "What did my husband come to do in your room last night?" Madam continued. "Oga didn't come to my room ma," I replied hanging on tenaciously. Madam snapped. Like lightening her right hand flashed across very fast from left to right and landed with a loud thud on my cheek. I cried out in pain and made to escape to the kitchen but madam sprang after me energetically and furiously and drew me back to herself to continue the assault. More slaps landed on my cheek and my wailing doubled. Yet madam continued unperturbed. She gave me a sharp push on the forehead and I hit the back of my head very hard on the wall behind me. The pain was very excruciating. I screamed out so loud at the top of my voice begging madam for forgiveness but madam wasn't done yet. I had made up my mind not to admit that Oga came to my room even if it meant losing my life because if mere denial could fetch such punishment, only God knew the magnitude of punishment admitting the crime would fetch. So I hung on. And madam continued with the beating. It wasn't yet upto one hour Oga drove out and all these were happening. I knew I was in big trouble. The aggression and brutality was much and unbearable, coupled with the fact that I still had more than seven days to stay with and endure the terror. Madam's hands soon started aching and she dashed into her bedroom and came out brandishing a long piece of twisted wire. Three lashes of the wire on my shoulders sent me out of the house and into the environ with severe pain. I couldn't endure the pain, not even for one second, so I ran out of the house and out of the compound and into the neighbouring white woman's compound...
10 Jun 2015 | 19:13
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na nw u no say u go update??... who beg u?? .Mtcheew
10 Jun 2015 | 19:58
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@dykolala nt even a sowie @least we squeeze out our tym out of no tym 2 read ur story u r nt d only 1 updatin here sha........mtcheeeeewwwwww
10 Jun 2015 | 20:10
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hmm.... next plz..
10 Jun 2015 | 20:18
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Next plzz
10 Jun 2015 | 20:27
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The slow posting started when he was emerged best writer of the month.
11 Jun 2015 | 09:11
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Harryyour and nwabso u guyz need to calm down. Yes, i am also against d slow update buh it hasn't gotten to that extent insulting him. Dykolala, i don't know whatever it is u re engaged in that is taking ur time, buh, i think u should let us know y and apologies. Even as we re busy we also steal time to read ur story especially ME.
11 Jun 2015 | 09:47
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Fellow coolvaller's please letz all maintain the hiqhest level of decorum here cos we're all matured......Do u even knw if he qetz to see some of ur complain's and request 4 apoloqies wen the comment here are jex 2 enormous?? He updated on monday,,,now on wednesday,,hopefully he add's anoda b4 saturday.....i think we should all be satisfied wid daht 4 now....am nt sayinq we should nt complain ooo bt we should try and do it wid the hiqhest level of diplomacy and avoid insultinq his personality.......
11 Jun 2015 | 11:22
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Next pls
11 Jun 2015 | 17:51
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Make u guyz no vex bt i dnt tink he his reading our comment jst 2 post nd go
11 Jun 2015 | 19:50
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U try bro pls kip it up
11 Jun 2015 | 20:23
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guyz cool down now! d guy too get hin own life to live, his future to tackle, his work to do. u no day pay am na, d guy day squeeze him time crack in brain just to make us smile! busy and what we pay him with is insulting his personality. remember he have his feelings. so we should make him happy so that we too can be happy. writers in coolval are d best av ever seen. kudos to d management. av been to many sites , I was reading a story and the writer said he can't continue again. there was noting I can do. so I want us to always encourage our writers and make our complaints in a peaceful manner. thanks
12 Jun 2015 | 08:19
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@dykolala I had dis tot b4 nw dt once u re back u'll jst beqin 2 empty ur pockets wt plenty of apoloqy on ur own free_will bt I qex I was wronq. Thou' I ain't d demn type dt beq 4 any fvckinq apoloqy bt it's qood 2 be conscience of oneself! Come2tink of it..... U toyed wt plenty of carinq hearts, U left dis planet earth(coolval) as well without lukinq back @ d peeps u call ur own. U are not a Darlinq at all..... U knw wht? U had jst proof 2 us all dt our beinq here wt u, time spent, as well as our comments re nothinq bt a bunch of worthless words of phrases? Chaiiiiii............ U are just a Karata!! U 4 don qet ur quick notice b4 nw bt Tank God dt I ain't d landlord in here.......... Mitchieeeewww..........
12 Jun 2015 | 19:33
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u are quyz are provinq ungrateful....despite the fact we squeeze tym to read he also doesnt have enough tym aswell, we dnt knw the situation he might be in,bt we jst care for our own needs....pls dere shldnt be any sentiments
12 Jun 2015 | 19:49
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@J-sharp abeg tell me d oda sites name
12 Jun 2015 | 21:12
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Episode 22 The white woman stared at me surprised when she came out and found me standing at her gate and crying. I had knocked three consecutive times and it was after the 3rd knock that she came out. There was surprise and worry written all over her face and she stared at me for a while before advancing closer. "Please I need your help ma," I begged as she drew nearer. The tears falling from my eyes and the fact that I was crying must have induced compassion in her and she came close and asked me what the problem was. I told her that my madam maltreated me and nearly killed me and I ran out of the house. She asked me who my madam was and I told her and she instantly remembered the last encounter and sighed. She told me that there wasn't much she could do and that she had come to realise that the country was too corrupt and even if she arrested my madam like she did the other time, someone would still grant her bail and the problem would not be addressed. I noticed without being told that she wasn't willing to let me into her house because all the while I was standing outside the gate. She advised me to go back to the house and apologise to my madam and be careful not to find her trouble again. With that she left me at the gate and went inside. I was devastated and confused on what to do. Going back to the house meant doom for me. I didn't have any other place to go either. I stood at the gate thinking of what to do. I've never been more confused in my life. So I decided to remain at the gate even if it meant sleeping outside. But then I thought of the insecurity in the neighbourhood. All these rough boys living around would be more happy to accost me later in the night and rape me mercilessly. The more I thought of these, the more confused I became. The day was too long to go. The time was around 10 o'clock in the morning and I didn't know how to keep busy and for how long. So I decided to go back to the house. I swung our gate open and went inside. I was very afraid and expected the worst. I climbed the steps infront of the door fearfully and tiptoed towards the door and pushed it gently to discover that it was firmly locked. With the last drop of courage in me I knocked on the door and got no response. I knocked again and again yet no response. By the fourth knock the door gently opened and madam stood aside for me to enter. "Please I'm sorry ma," I apologised at the door kneeling down. "Won't you come inside first?" Madam asked abruptly and I quickly obeyed. As soon as I went in, madam locked the door firmly behind me and I looked and saw the long piece of wire dangling from her left hand. Then she turned towards me. It was the whistling sound of the wire that I heard and before I could say "Jack" it had circled my neck. Madam knew no mercy. She flogged and flogged and flogged me with the wire that I almost felt I was dying. I screamed and screamed yet there was no relief. Infact madam was determined to kill me that morning. The whistling sound of the wire continued lash after lash producing as much pain as the welder desired as the wire whizzed through the air and landed on me. Each lash left a peculiar scar on my skin as the flogging continued. At a point the pain became so unbearable and I passed out...
13 Jun 2015 | 10:11
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I 4 say make God help u bt wetin u comit nids no Gods hlp
13 Jun 2015 | 10:55
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Madam no mercy, God may qive u d striength 2 deal wt all d pple dat crosses ur path unaware. But madam, hv u 4qoten dat u miqht also cross oda pple's path unaware? Cos it's natural 4 some1 to cross oda ppl's path unnoticed
13 Jun 2015 | 12:00
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I dnt tink any one cn realy b diz wicked.
13 Jun 2015 | 13:22
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This woman is heartless
13 Jun 2015 | 14:43
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Mr's messilless
13 Jun 2015 | 14:54
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Thunder wey go fire dat ur madam still dey do press up
13 Jun 2015 | 15:17
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Just hours after Oga's departure...what will be left of u by de time he returns?.
13 Jun 2015 | 15:37
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wetin dey una nah dis tin iz nt easy y d insult @khola thumb up 4 u jawe
13 Jun 2015 | 15:53
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Hmmm u dy beat person child 2 stupor and u're finkinq der'z no God......Maybe oqa would be welcomed wid her carcass cos diz woman is heartless infact her bank of emotion has dried up.....
13 Jun 2015 | 15:57
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D woman has 4gotten dat no condition is permanent n d table can turn around @ any tym.if I were u, I will beat her with dat wire so dat she can taste d sweetness of d wire stupid n heartless woman...
13 Jun 2015 | 17:34
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God have mercy. if its me God knows i will fight her back and beat hell out of her wetin go hapn tomoro mak im hapn dat day. which kind heartlessness be that one.
13 Jun 2015 | 18:39
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See maltreatment ooo. If i were u i go act like if i have fainted ooo.
13 Jun 2015 | 20:10
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This is outrageous!
13 Jun 2015 | 21:29
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See as vex dey catch me as i dey read this story. Which kind wicked madam be this na..
14 Jun 2015 | 05:51
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Am jst Speechless
14 Jun 2015 | 09:47
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so she dey du u all dis one nd na only shout u dey shout?ma frnd u dul abeg
14 Jun 2015 | 17:19
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I pray the Husband Divorce thê woman so that the house girl will hv freedom, maybe if she walk on thê road without hope she will realise her mistakes
14 Jun 2015 | 19:53
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That madam geh luck say no be me. Reading all the newly updated stories bt Still a ghost reader sha. Morning all nd happy new week!!!
14 Jun 2015 | 21:11
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Heartless woman of highest order
15 Jun 2015 | 04:50
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@d writer I knw u re tryin ok its nt an easy task bt pls try n up date it daily so we can enjoy d film
15 Jun 2015 | 06:26
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May God hlp n 4gv u
15 Jun 2015 | 08:31
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Next please...
15 Jun 2015 | 13:28
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@lawman shay u don read d story way day coolval finish?
15 Jun 2015 | 19:50
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Mr. Author abeg make we move jare. More ink to ur pen more power to ur elbow ow sowi . . .more charges to ur battery
15 Jun 2015 | 19:52
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Madam dia is Godooo
16 Jun 2015 | 10:42
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My situation was not as worst as this cox i was also maltreated by my own sister gosh life no be bed of roses o
16 Jun 2015 | 15:06
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Episode 23 When I regained consciousness I was lying on my small bed in my small room. I was very weak and tired and it took me some seconds to recognise where I was. I looked about myself and saw that I was wearing my usual gown but then the scars on my body reminded me of what had transpired. I didn't know the time but looking out of the window with the sun still shining meant that it was still afternoon. I lay quiet on the bed not wanting to attract my madam's attention. I couldn't predict what she had in mind so it was better to keep quiet and regain sufficient energy before she came around. I had rested for like one hour when madam came to check on me. I was feeling very hungry but endured. Madam came in and saw that I was awake and asked me to come to the kitchen and have my food. With tiredness I got up and followed her to the kitchen. She dished rice and stew into a plate and gave me to eat which I quickly ate out of hunger and even needed more though I didn't voice it out. Then I drank a cup of water. "Aunty thank ma," I greeted. "Ehee thank God," she replied. "Are you now ready to tell me what my husband came to your room to do last night?" She asked staring at one corner of the kitchen. I followed her line of sight and saw the piece of wire lying there and my heart skipped some beats. I didn't know what to say. I opened and closed my mouth involuntarily as I silently calculated what was next. "What did my husband go to do in your room late last night?" Madam asked again rising from her seat and walking towards the long twisted piece of wire. I started crying instantly. From the fury in madam's eyes she was determined to do anything so long as she got the confession she was looking for. Madam went to that corner of the kitchen and picked up the piece of wire. I shuddered with fear and rose from the mortar I was sitting on shivering. The familiar whistling sound came again as the first lash journeyed through the air and landed on the junction between my neck and my left shoulder sending me into fresh untold pain. "It was Oga, It was Oga," I shouted out unable to bear the pain. "Yes!" madam acclaimed. "Oga did what?" She interrogated. "Oga forced me to do it with him," I blurted out crying hysterically. "He came to my room and forced me and warned me not to tell anybody." Madam stopped momentarily, apparently jolted by the confession she just heard but then her eyes flared up again. "And you agreed?" She asked staring furiously at me. "He forced me ma," I replied in self defence. "He forced you! Forced you! Forced you!" Madam blurted as she unleashed more lashes of her wire on me. I ran out of the kitchen in pain and towards the bedroom. Madam zoomed furiously into the master bedroom but on second thought she came back out and into my small room. "Better start packing your things cos this house won't contain the two of us anymore," she barked pointing her index finger aggressively at me. "Aunty please," I begged crying. "Don't please me," she barked and stormed back into the master bedroom and locked the door firmly. ------------------------------------------------------ Madam later mellowed down and didn't send me packing as she had earlier threatened though her attitude towards me changed dramatically. She stopped talking to me and behaved asif I didn't exist even though she still gave me food. I knew she was patiently waiting for Oga to come back before unleashing the main war...
18 Jun 2015 | 09:55
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hmmm...lets see wat would happen wen oga comes bak......the battle line has jst been drawn
18 Jun 2015 | 10:46
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dis woman cane o haba.
18 Jun 2015 | 12:07
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Na wah ooo......I won't be surprised if Oqa denies the alleqation labelled aqainst him sef.....Adaeze u've really suffered....4rm molestation to abusinq to maltreatment.....i mean itz jex 2 much 4 a qal lyk ya and i tink u leavinq the huz shld be the best option b4 tinz escalate 2 the worst level......
18 Jun 2015 | 13:02
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Dis is jux 10 much for one person 2 bear.. Hmmmm, wat an agony.. nxt pls
19 Jun 2015 | 02:42
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Infact,u have over endured...u had no choice.i just pity u
19 Jun 2015 | 04:17
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HmMmmmmmm!
19 Jun 2015 | 05:22
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Madam self na military woman
19 Jun 2015 | 06:09
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#Gbagam!!! I guess Oga will deny the allegation.
19 Jun 2015 | 06:18
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chai u don taste madam food nd nw knws hw it feels nd u expect her to talk to u. lolzzzz lets see oga's reaction wen he comes back.
19 Jun 2015 | 06:31
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Too bad...twil be wel...maybe u cn use rat poison on oga nd madam
19 Jun 2015 | 06:41
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Hope your so called selfish oga wont deny having anything to do with you
19 Jun 2015 | 06:42
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@Pizzaro i agree wit u she must leave maybe she may find smtin beter doing..and i pray she doesnt get pregnant.
19 Jun 2015 | 07:05
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Me self wan deh complain.. Plz Oga dykolala, abeg we no say u deh try abeg put more effort in updating oooo.. you're starving us, me self wan deh vex (even though I don't want to)....plz plz plz... This is my first complain Happy Freedom in advance.....
19 Jun 2015 | 08:06
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I Pray mak oga side u o....
19 Jun 2015 | 08:36
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It's quite unfortunate that what she is passing thru really happens in real lyf
19 Jun 2015 | 17:15
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everyone in the family wants a piece of her. Madam maltreats her, oga dey use her like whore. God have mercy. I fear for u o, if oga deny am na double wahala for u. Anyway fingers crossed.
20 Jun 2015 | 12:46
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hmmmmmm
20 Jun 2015 | 14:42
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Chaiii....Madam, u qet heart at all? Shuu! Na human beinq lik u-u dey bit so? No 4qet sey Oga fit mary her join wt u o! So, no tink sey na only u qet dat prik o.... Damn it, I fuçkinq hate ur karata 2wards ur house maid. Mitchieeewww.........
20 Jun 2015 | 17:38
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This is too much on the girl. After d husband rub her of her dignity the wife also tortured her of the answer she already knw.jst bcos she want 2 b sure. slavary indeed
21 Jun 2015 | 02:04
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The post is not moving fast
21 Jun 2015 | 02:33
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abeg make una complete this story n stop to de hang person here, nawa 4 u ooooo
21 Jun 2015 | 04:45
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Honey pot nii. My dear feed him well.. or you'll receive it from ur madam
21 Jun 2015 | 17:11
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lol. sharp girl..
21 Jun 2015 | 17:11
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Y'all wanna knw watam sayin uh..? nxt pls!!!
22 Jun 2015 | 06:58
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Sorry o
22 Jun 2015 | 09:01
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Eeyya, lets wait 4 d main war
22 Jun 2015 | 14:59
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No b small war
22 Jun 2015 | 19:25
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@dykolala, Though we knw u r trying ur best but, @least, let us knw d days to xpect updates so we wont just wait here for an episode dat wnt cum in weeks
23 Jun 2015 | 03:21
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You are in small trouble nw bt wen ur oga return and he said u re the dat winks to him or denial you, u re big trouble lyk dat
23 Jun 2015 | 04:19
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Next nah abeg @ Writer
23 Jun 2015 | 07:14
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Na wen una go post d next one nah
23 Jun 2015 | 09:10
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Jst passinq by, checkinq on new updates...
23 Jun 2015 | 14:40
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Abeg cnt wait 4 d next episode
23 Jun 2015 | 21:57
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wetin dem dey call una name,u no knw me abi u neva hear moi name b4 for coolval if i throw u punch na d breeze go hit u,no b d punch,wetin dey do u....ifa check again nd u never update,my guy i go crush u o
24 Jun 2015 | 11:44
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This Madam Wicked Oooooo
25 Jun 2015 | 08:04
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Dis story boring jare
25 Jun 2015 | 08:16
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This story is completely out of it. bye
25 Jun 2015 | 14:40
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Me still waitin 4 oga 2 cum bck zo dat d story go contd o, oya its abt tym.. nxt pls
25 Jun 2015 | 22:18
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The Story Is Becoming Dry.Where Are Now
26 Jun 2015 | 10:31
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Na wah ooooo........
26 Jun 2015 | 12:07
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Chaiii….Madam, u qet heart at all? Shuu! Na human beinq lik u-u dey bit so? No 4qet sey Oga fit mary her join wt u o! So, no tink sey na only u qet dat prik o…. Damn it, I fuçkinq hate ur karatah 2wards ur house maid. Mitchieeewww…… @Dykolala, weatin dy appen na, abeg oh
27 Jun 2015 | 04:19
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Pls boss kindly continue the story can't wait to know what happened waaaiii
27 Jun 2015 | 05:52
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Am sure dis guy has drogba in.is head
28 Jun 2015 | 09:38
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@oluwadammy, I 4 lik ahm wella if u 4 fit help trow_wey dt ur hot punch wey u carry 4 hand so make we 4 no lost on top dis quy mata o Hold_up wey dey 4 Ikeja/Iyana-Ipaja xprex road self no dey slow lik dis. Gush!
28 Jun 2015 | 13:43
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Bt light is nw perfectly okay evrywere, y is d posting so slow again
28 Jun 2015 | 14:47
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Episode 24 Oga came back a week later and met a very quiet house. The children were sleeping so everywhere was silent like a graveyard. Madam was in the master bedroom so I couldn't tell whether she was awake or sleeping. It was the sound of the engine of Oga's car that roused me from where I was sitting in the kitchen and towards the window to peep. Oga blared the horn three times in his characteristic manner and I went out to answer him like normal and help him carry his luggage into the house. The sound of the horn seemed to have roused madam as well and she came out and stood at the door to welcome her husband. "Honey welcome," madam said to him which was quite unusual. The husband was startled. "Thanks my darling," he replied and crossed his right hand over madam's shoulder. Madam tactically masked her bitterness and resentment. I trembled slightly as I stood inside the kitchen awaiting the outburst that would emanate when madam finally bursts the bubble before him. I couldn't predict what the aftermath was going to be. Whether I was going to be sent packing or not. Read more of this story @ >> coolval22.com Oga's right hand lay across madam's shoulder as they went in together into the master bedroom. Oga had his bath and soon came out to have his meal. Madam came out too trailing behind. It seemed madam was having a hard time deciding the best time to bring up the issue. She had remained very diplomatic so far to the best of her ability. Oga ate quietly and hungrily while madam intermittently asked him about the conference. "Everything went fine," he replied gulping down a thick bolus of eba covered with ogbono soup. "Even the Governor of the state attended too," he added. Madam kept silent and listened to the gist of the conference. When Oga finished eating, he and madam went back to the master bedroom. I washed the plates and then settled to eat my own meal. Afterwards I went to my small room. Night soon came and everyone went to bed. In the middle of the night I heard madam's voice waking Oga up from sleep. "Yes?" Oga replied with a drowsy voice. "We need to talk," madam began firmly. "About what?" Oga asked sounding irritated over the disturbance of his sleep. "What is it between you and our house-help?" Madam asked driving sleep away from Oga's eyes. "Which house-help?" Oga asked. "Your house-help," madam replied. "You mean Adaeze?" Oga asked. "Do you have another one?" Madam retorted. "And how on earth did you think that something was going on between me and that rag?" Oga asked. Oga's rhetoric struck me like a hammer. I couldn't believe my ears but then I had no choice than to control my emotion. Read more of this story @ >> coolval22.com Oga and Madam continued the argument all night long onto daybreak till I stopped hearing their voice. Then I wondered what the future had in stock for me...
28 Jun 2015 | 16:50
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Pls hav you guys heard about Max international.
29 Jun 2015 | 06:41
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Which kind posting be this one,too short for my liking.
29 Jun 2015 | 07:08
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Is dis supposed to be an episode or a preamble to a new episode.
29 Jun 2015 | 07:52
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Make una relax dis story will enter 2016..... . . . Continue one episode in a month.
29 Jun 2015 | 07:56
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@Adeaze, Ur continue stayinq in dt house is nothinq bt a doom 2 ur own self! Tell me, wht's nw d dff btw life in ur own villa & dis house_help tinz? U beta wize_up nw b4 u'll find urself in possession of dis tin called "Had I Know"... Well, I knw sey u dey njoy Oqa bleep wella, bt wht abt madam's wips, u dey njoy dt 1 too ni...??? Eeen, no say I no tell u o! Nxt episods 'll be cominq_up nxt wiik or beta still in d nxt aqes so stay turned & pls, biko, abeq, dnt tuch dt skreen... NB: 4 dem wey no fit wait, beta 2 huq transfor' nw if u cnt wait 4 d nxt episods cos dere is dis abit of l8t entry hia o (Na advise o) make una no qo start 2 dey pocket aqressive on top dis small mata o, lolz.... Bravo, 4rm l8t entry 2 short epilipstic episode..... Imarqin my comnt wt d epilipsy episode, such an impruvmnt, lolz..... Na zoke o!
29 Jun 2015 | 08:04
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Still observing....
29 Jun 2015 | 08:11
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Oohh! dis thing ws too short nah..wen re we going 2 finish it nah...
29 Jun 2015 | 08:31
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Intrestin story,but is takin long b4 u post y
29 Jun 2015 | 08:46
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D episodes re becomin veri short....... All d xame, more grease 2 ua elbow
29 Jun 2015 | 08:49
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Pls my dear writter if u ar tired of posting I wl advice u jst stop, I guess nobody wl complain bcos it wl b beta dat way instead of wat u ar doing here. Making pple lose interest in ur wat u ar doing is bad.
29 Jun 2015 | 09:08
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I have been following this particular story even before I become a member some weeks ago! Please guys, what's taking the writer even three good weeks before posting another short episode like this? Am fed up oh! We all know its not easy but I think he should try making the next episode a long one even if its going to be in three months time. That's my advice for him. Thanks.
29 Jun 2015 | 09:39
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shooo u neva see anytin,shey oga call u rag dat one nah small....wait make morning do bfore.....*storyforthegods* seconded @adetola
29 Jun 2015 | 10:19
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Hmm reserve my comment
29 Jun 2015 | 10:42
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hmm na wa o
29 Jun 2015 | 10:51
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Infact it will be better fr u to stop posting dis story haba!
29 Jun 2015 | 11:07
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also wondering on ya bhaf
29 Jun 2015 | 11:20
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This is super story a life of strife nd sorrow...i love dat kain denial... Adaeze wot wia u xpecting...
29 Jun 2015 | 11:23
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Hahahaha... What happen na... Chai, dz world s cruel ooo, oga nw denied... Hmmmmm @Dykolala Plz continue... Supense s killin me ooo
29 Jun 2015 | 11:28
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Bt dis episode z 2 short...plz try make d next 1 longa
29 Jun 2015 | 12:39
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Dykolala, dis episode is too brief. Pls on nxt episode, make it longer cos our appetite is wet enof.
29 Jun 2015 | 13:24
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Ur own don finish o cus as tinx r nw yoga is likely 2 defend himself n evrytink will backfire on u
29 Jun 2015 | 14:02
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Next
29 Jun 2015 | 14:33
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after taking away ur pride he now has the right to call you a rag
29 Jun 2015 | 15:21
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Dis ur story is taking tym n also short. U shld be giving us 3 epi at a tym since u dn't post always
29 Jun 2015 | 16:08
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See as ur oga tak cal u rag nd afta u wil stil open ur so called honey pot for him. Tins wont end well i knw dat.
29 Jun 2015 | 16:29
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Ur story is nt interestin anymore,u write a short story nd u ar expectin thousands of comment.....shit
29 Jun 2015 | 16:38
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nice one pls continue ooo no stopping again
29 Jun 2015 | 16:48
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rag indeed
29 Jun 2015 | 16:52
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Hmmm, wat could I say? D story is mor dan short, d update comes per year. Well, I can only guess dis' Dykolala's way n der's a reason behind it which I believe he'll let us know when he dem fit. Even though unlike him. Anyway, nice story broda. Still following...
29 Jun 2015 | 17:17
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nxt pls
29 Jun 2015 | 17:34
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See gobe
29 Jun 2015 | 18:39
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@Dykolala if you don't have time to post the stories, you can send the other episodes to Val let him continue posting the others.... That's the only way he could deny it by calling you a rag, you'll have to accept..... If u would also deny it by saying you only said that coz you where forced by the beating and you wanted to stop it, you will still be in hell in the house. and if you say the truth, you would be sent out..... BT I really don't knw why you don't want to leave d house, only you knows that......
29 Jun 2015 | 22:22
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hmmn. nice one
30 Jun 2015 | 00:05
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I'm wondering wat oga will say when u r made to confess b4 them.
30 Jun 2015 | 09:34
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Abi o @ japhola
30 Jun 2015 | 14:02
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adaeze may God help
30 Jun 2015 | 15:36
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dis story is becoming so boring plz kindly update on time
30 Jun 2015 | 15:37
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i just think Adaeze will soon get pregnant.
30 Jun 2015 | 18:21
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Adaeze sowi be waiting for what wil happen next u nt filthy rag bt rag as he say dnt think abt dat. Ada dnt be afraid of leaving the house even if dis is nt happening and vice versa u wil leave one day or u want turn urself to mario.
1 Jul 2015 | 03:48
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Ha oga stop denyin it. Adaeze get ready 2 leave d houz
1 Jul 2015 | 16:00
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The episode of this story is short and also take longer 2 post. Hope no prob.
1 Jul 2015 | 16:50
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Hmmmmm, i pity wat d day hs in stock 4 u adaeze.. beta brace up 4 d worst my dear cuz as it stands, u dnt av any support 4rm eida syd o.. nxt pls
2 Jul 2015 | 04:39
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Oga u don chop belleful cum dey deny her abi, no wahala
2 Jul 2015 | 06:24
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Ha you too dey keep person waiting here o, if you know say you no fit dey post regularly abeg give val to update
2 Jul 2015 | 19:52
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The writer of this story should press give it to Val to be posting if he knows he cannot be posting regularly because he will post an episode that is short and he won't post another till like another two weeks haba na.
3 Jul 2015 | 14:56
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Slave trade Will never end in as much as house helps nd maids still exists.
4 Jul 2015 | 03:42
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This guy sha na every 3mnth you take dey post ?
5 Jul 2015 | 05:28
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Lyk seriously I don tire 4 dis story
5 Jul 2015 | 09:42
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Author, I beg na. Haba! Pls post ASAP
5 Jul 2015 | 12:50
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nawa ooo
5 Jul 2015 | 22:08
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Episode 25 Oga stumbled furiously into the kitchen the next morning and faced me. "You're living this house this moment!" He barked. "How dare you attempt to tear my house apart? You little imp! You must leave this minute!" I turned white with fear and my limbs trembled. "Go and start packing your things right now!" He thundered. I ran out of the kitchen and into my room to pack. The way Oga was fuming and barking was too aggressive. I couldn't stand him lay his hands on me out of aggression. It was better to return home than to die in another man's house. So I ran into my room and started packing. I even wanted to return home as the stress and trauma had become unbearable. I packed all my clothes into one big bag and waited for what was next. Oga came into my room and ordered me to carry my bags into the car. I obeyed and did as he ordered. Then he dressed up and true to his words drove me back to my village. My mother was surprised when she saw me home that early. Oga's countenance also pointed out to her that all was not well so she had to ask him to come inside and explain what prompted the unexpected home coming. "Your daughter wants to tear my family apart," Oga told my mum. My mum shuddered in disbelief. "How?" She asked dumbfounded. "Ask your daughter!" Oga snapped and zoomed out into his car and out of our compound... ------------------------------------------------------------ Later that night, my mum came into my room and asked me the truth about what happened between me and Oga's family. I patiently narrated everything that happened and broke into tears sobbing hysterically, even though I left out the part that had to do with my sexcapades with Oga...
7 Jul 2015 | 21:05
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#Hmmmmm
8 Jul 2015 | 03:03
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Is dat all, few lines after d long wait.. anyways, nxt pls
8 Jul 2015 | 03:45
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dis story is too short and u post little all d time......anyway nxt and dnt delay it
8 Jul 2015 | 04:38
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Eyah....
8 Jul 2015 | 04:51
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ŋāwā o
8 Jul 2015 | 05:21
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pls tell ur mother everything so that anything happen to u, she could be able to help u
8 Jul 2015 | 05:26
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Y nt told her evrytin nah!
8 Jul 2015 | 05:39
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Hmmmmmm
8 Jul 2015 | 05:46
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if de sexcapedes is left out den u told ur mum nothing
8 Jul 2015 | 05:47
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After waitin dis long u gave us few lines 2 read?
8 Jul 2015 | 05:52
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@Writer you shud'nt have wasted your data in posting this little rubbish... kindly delete this Story n rest in peace completely!!
8 Jul 2015 | 06:24
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Oga writer....after ah dng wait till d year runz out na diz smal one u update am xo xad..
8 Jul 2015 | 06:31
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You should have told your mum the truth
8 Jul 2015 | 06:34
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Abeg oooo . . .. Just posting once in blue moon !!!..... Hmmmmmm . . . . Im Still your boy . . . . JESUSBOY JNR . . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST!!
8 Jul 2015 | 06:51
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all iz well......some pple dnt have conscience...jst look at dis oga of a man
8 Jul 2015 | 07:00
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Why did u left dat out u shld hv tell her
8 Jul 2015 | 07:34
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Well at least U̶̲̥̅̊ are out of madam and her husband's claw
8 Jul 2015 | 07:35
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Ha ha, dykolala. This update is too short o after waiting this long. Girl, your mom is the last person to keep such things from. Better tell her the whole story in case you get pregnant. Well done, Author.
8 Jul 2015 | 07:42
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Hmmm...
8 Jul 2015 | 07:46
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hmmmmmmmmm,what next????????
8 Jul 2015 | 08:25
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Z dis the end?
8 Jul 2015 | 08:26
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Hmmm Agony indeed
8 Jul 2015 | 09:09
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U sud av ezplain everyfin t ya mum
8 Jul 2015 | 09:10
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When They Realize You Pregnant You Will Disclose It
8 Jul 2015 | 09:16
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Hmm ur story is very bore,i feel lyk nt cin dis story on my view.nd wu is forcin u to write?.
8 Jul 2015 | 10:12
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Watch out for the next episode in one month time
8 Jul 2015 | 10:43
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Y nt tel her evrytin?
8 Jul 2015 | 11:13
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nawa ooo
8 Jul 2015 | 11:37
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dis won na serious somtin
8 Jul 2015 | 12:14
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nxt
8 Jul 2015 | 12:28
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next
8 Jul 2015 | 13:10
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U shld v told ur mum everything dat happened since u left to Enugu.
8 Jul 2015 | 15:05
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Ur oga dey crayz, y is he pretending as if u guys hav noting in common
8 Jul 2015 | 15:21
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I dnt thnk its wise 2 have hidden d truth 4rm ur mom, i knw how u feel nd how mumsy wld react if u tell her dat part. bt i pray she handle's d issue rightly wen d truth finnaly come. nice story kudos 2 d writer
8 Jul 2015 | 16:46
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I fink i wil stop reading dis story, d way u update is too annoying
8 Jul 2015 | 16:50
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Dis short episode after many weeks of no update
8 Jul 2015 | 18:24
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U are a dullard for not telling ur mum,mumu
8 Jul 2015 | 19:20
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Easy, lets calm dwn fellas.. bt den am vexin maslf jare. nxt pls or do we wait till month end uh? lol
9 Jul 2015 | 03:15
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Its better you tell ur mum everything now coz u are pregnant already... Pity 4u though
9 Jul 2015 | 05:02
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Its better you tell ur mum all de sex molestation you went through. But som people are just heartless. hmmn!!
9 Jul 2015 | 06:53
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Jesus so touching ..,
9 Jul 2015 | 10:56
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U shuld hv don d pakinq urself. Nw see, dey dnt jst sent u parkinq bt lied aqainst u as well. Evn if u open up 2 ur mum abt d s*x tin u tink she'll jst belif u? Well, if u lik tell ha or nt, she'll stil find out ha own way perhaps wen u myt hv qot preqnant. Mitchieeewww........
9 Jul 2015 | 14:20
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Very short n d wy u post it after a long while mk it not to be intrestin again
9 Jul 2015 | 17:27
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Hahaha.. Told kwa?#soniamimi #pardon anyway... Adaeze my dear i Pray u re not pregnant.. After all the suffering u still end up in the village... What profit do u gain after all the beaten and abuse
10 Jul 2015 | 06:18
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d symptoms of preg will soon start. how will u explain dat one
10 Jul 2015 | 06:58
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So u 4get me@ khola?
10 Jul 2015 | 10:02
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How long will it take you to complete this story ??? It took you two whole weeks to update just one episode.
10 Jul 2015 | 12:01
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Nxt pls
10 Jul 2015 | 13:14
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Chai!!!.... Only God knws when d next episode will be uploaded...
11 Jul 2015 | 10:20
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Is dis meant to be a joke??? After waiting for so long for this episode to be released and dis is what we get???:/
12 Jul 2015 | 03:06
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Wickedness is not gud oo
12 Jul 2015 | 07:47
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hmmmn
12 Jul 2015 | 18:45
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Episode 26 Two days later, I woke up feeling weak and nausea. I rushed outside and vomited the content of my stomach onto the floor. My mum heard me gretching and ran outside to see what was wrong with me. She observed me for some seconds with her right hand under her jaw. "I hope its not what I'm thinking?" She asked staring at me. "I think its malaria," I replied anxiously. "When last did you see your flow?" My mum asked in a lowered voice. I kept silent and muttered an inaudible reply. "Chai this girl has killed me!" my mum screamed placing both palms flat on her head. "Who did this to you?" She asked. I muttered again. "Will you talk to me you stupid girl!" My mum bawled advancing towards me. I started crying. "Let's go into the house," she suggested and we both went in. Once we were inside, my mum reopened the discussion. "Now tell me who did this to you?" My mum pressed on. I didn't know what to reply. I didn't know who else to point at except Oga cos he was the only person who had access to my body intimately. How to reveal that fact to my mum was what I didn't know. But then I had to. "It was Oga," I replied shaking with fear. "You mean your Oga in the city?" My mum asked with great consternation. "The same Oga that drove you back to this house? I can't believe it!" My mum affirmed. "Oga did it to me," I repeated. "Chai o!" My mum screamed. "Your Oga in the city?" she asked rhetorically looking aghast. "Yes ma," I replied sobbing. My mum couldn't believe her ears. There and then she informed me that we would be going to the city the next day. The next day we got to Oga's house around 2 o'clock in the afternoon. Oga wasn't around when we arrived but madam was around. Her eyes nearly fell out of its socket when she opened the door and saw my mother and I. She couldn't hide her shock and trepidation even though she did all her best to. I am sure her mind must have ran hay wire though she struggled to conceal it. "Welcome ma," she greeted my mum. "Where's that he-goat you call your husband?" My mum asked furiously shoving madam aside and marching fearlessly into their sitting room. "How dare you call my husband a he-goat?" Madam barked in response. "My daughter is pregnant for your husband," my mum exploded the news to madam shocking her again for the second time in quick succession. "What did you just say?" Madam asked not sure she heard my mum well. "You said my husband did what?" "You heard me right!" My mum snapped. I stood beside my mum sobbing quietly. Madam was too dumbfounded to utter a word. She had had enough for an afternoon. Silently she went into the master bedroom and locked herself. I couldn't tell whether she called Oga or not but Oga came back approximately 20mins later and met us in the sitting room. I think madam called him because he wasn't surprised on seeing us like someone who already knew that we were around. "How dare you impregnate my daughter?" My mum lashed out rising to her feet. "Who?" Oga asked feigning ignorance. "Adaeze my daughter," my mum replied. "Please madam I don't know what you're talking about," Oga replied almost causing my mum a heart attack with his reply. "And please if you don't mind," Oga continued. "Leave my house." My mum couldn't believe her ears and with intense anger she stormed out of Oga's house dragging me along...
13 Jul 2015 | 00:38
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Hmmm,interesting so far but always too short
13 Jul 2015 | 02:14
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Bros dykolala,i no understand d rate @ which u dey upload dis story o.......D tin dey tire me,moreover d episodes r too short.Wat is honestly going on na?
13 Jul 2015 | 04:23
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Lyk seriously do u min d nxt episode hsnt bin uploaded yet uh? mehn i tire 4 dx guy o.. anyway, am out cuz oda stories dy 2 read since small tym dy my way nw
13 Jul 2015 | 07:14
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Am tired of reading dis story.
13 Jul 2015 | 07:49
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hmmm mmmmm mmm
13 Jul 2015 | 08:04
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Hmmmm....see life
13 Jul 2015 | 08:21
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i know it will result to dis..... i saw it coming.... i jst have one word for yhu.... Adaeze.... ALL IZZ WELL....
13 Jul 2015 | 08:28
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Wicked pple
13 Jul 2015 | 08:30
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This Oga is really mean
13 Jul 2015 | 08:42
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Oga Oga!! No try deny am oo Na only u dy waka enta there o... hehehe More Plz! @dykolala
13 Jul 2015 | 08:44
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Afta a lng break. . . .intereztn
13 Jul 2015 | 09:15
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Infact u r a boring writter haba!
13 Jul 2015 | 10:46
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But y did she hav 2 live wen d reason y she was der havent resolve yet, i tink she hav another plan
13 Jul 2015 | 11:44
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Blood doesn't lie. even if he denies now, it can be proven later on
13 Jul 2015 | 12:07
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Chai!... Av even forgotten am reading a story called agnoies of a househelp, We would wait for days just 2 get an episode and after getting it, it will be even short... Well i understand shaa bt try to upload once a day
13 Jul 2015 | 12:14
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Nawa 4 unna Oqa
13 Jul 2015 | 12:22
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I knew it will eventually result to this!!
13 Jul 2015 | 13:44
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Oga runs man, make u accept your 40fit container
13 Jul 2015 | 14:17
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Tot I've never commented directly on dis story right 4m d start, I equally never supported Adaeze having sexual affair with dat he goat of a man despite all her misfortunes. She'd ve left dat house when situation there became unbearable. But 2 my bewilderment she choosed 2 stay... Anyway, d deed's been done n fopefully dat rascal will be brought into justice. Ride on Dykolala, I'm still following u patiently..
13 Jul 2015 | 15:27
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hmmm,u will surely pay 4 it
13 Jul 2015 | 16:45
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Hmmm wicked oga
13 Jul 2015 | 17:55
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Hmmm...Nxt Pls
13 Jul 2015 | 19:21
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chaii oga has filled ur honey pot wit honey nd he is nw denying it. wat a wicked world.
13 Jul 2015 | 20:23
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I felt 4 u....
13 Jul 2015 | 21:07
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Aqony of house helper
13 Jul 2015 | 21:54
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Oga God go soon catch u
14 Jul 2015 | 15:47
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Pls is a story goin on here lyk seriously..? hmmmm, xowie o i neva knw cuz am only seein ppl's comments on ova 20 pages nw.. mah pass pls
14 Jul 2015 | 22:54
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Eyah i pity d poor woman,but anyhw oga must accept his responsibility
15 Jul 2015 | 04:51
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JUST PLAY YOUR GAMES COOL AND BE CAREFULL
15 Jul 2015 | 06:28
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just allow him. After running, he will definately come back for his child. We knw dia type....oga smh
15 Jul 2015 | 08:48
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Nemesis will soon catch up with him. Woman, go and take care of your child.
15 Jul 2015 | 09:04
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oga z soooo heartless...... chai a mother at dz age??? hmmmm.dz z solo appalling.. SMH....next, let's see how it goes...
15 Jul 2015 | 13:58
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Man, this oga na real he-goat - And boy would he pay........
15 Jul 2015 | 14:50
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diz oga no force aaah ba.........hmmmm is dat de end.....
15 Jul 2015 | 15:01
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next please....the guy is not making us enjoy the story.
15 Jul 2015 | 16:50
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What An Interesting Story But A Slow Writer, Please Try And Be Fast With It So That We Can Enjoy It More, Thanks For Writing.
15 Jul 2015 | 18:31
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Chai! Oga! Diaris God o
16 Jul 2015 | 07:33
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Thank God this episode long small...
16 Jul 2015 | 11:00
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Chaii see life...God wrath is on its well.
16 Jul 2015 | 12:31
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Hmmm Some family a heartless I wouldn't blame d maid sha, but his mother... Next pls
16 Jul 2015 | 14:13
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Next Please We Are Waiting..........
16 Jul 2015 | 19:24
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Hmmm poor gul...
17 Jul 2015 | 02:44
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i know it will result to dis,any way,such is life.........next pls
18 Jul 2015 | 17:23
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OGA DYKOLALA YOU ARE NOT ENCOURAGING US BY DIS YOUR UPDATE
19 Jul 2015 | 15:22
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nd u forgot to notify me @khola y
20 Jul 2015 | 19:13
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U guys dnt av 2 blame d writer.u dnt knw d reason for d late updating.so kip calm n watch out.
20 Jul 2015 | 19:16
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hmmm, oga with he third leg when nor dey rest.... Be expecting a baby from Adaze
20 Jul 2015 | 21:26
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y is dis dtori so short..i tot its cos u did nt av light in ur area,i av bin gon fir abt a month nd i came bak only to me 2 episode? ...to poor
21 Jul 2015 | 06:09
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nawa o
21 Jul 2015 | 07:00
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Agony indeed... AHaaa, Adaeze i felt pain for you... Just dint wori, there is light always at the end of the tunnel, ALL HOPE IS NOT LOST
21 Jul 2015 | 12:30
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Pls jux knw dat God is watchin u 4 nt postin d nxt episode 4 eternity o.. oya 2 avoid God's wrath, nxt pls..
21 Jul 2015 | 22:03
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THE TORY DON TIRE ME
22 Jul 2015 | 17:03
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hmmmm no update yet
22 Jul 2015 | 19:52
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Dis z wickedness
23 Jul 2015 | 12:50
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Z a pity,i can't imagine any of my generation in this kind of sufering,God 4 bid,dats y z gud to born children dat u can be able to train
23 Jul 2015 | 14:11
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Eyaa,such z lyf
23 Jul 2015 | 16:47
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Wahala,madam husband again?my dear u are in a hot soup
24 Jul 2015 | 09:15
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Do you expect him to accept it? Well I'm sure he'll come back one day begging on his knees for forgiveness....
25 Jul 2015 | 08:26
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Still no update?
25 Jul 2015 | 09:25
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We are eager to read the next episode oh.
25 Jul 2015 | 14:13
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Jst checkinq on new updates....
26 Jul 2015 | 06:57
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Poor we readers, @dykola u r just punishing us here lyk Criously.it seems d update z once in a month o......anyways am still loyal i'll keep on waiting nd checking maybe 1 day u@dykola 'll change ur mind nd start updating properly.
27 Jul 2015 | 17:16
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D deed has been done live to regret.
27 Jul 2015 | 20:09
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U caused it all,so u feel u re safe wen yhu were havin fun wt ur oga..sumtyn wil happen nah..wat yhu dnt want to happen nw happens@last,yhu re nw a damsel in distress . . . may jah help yhu
28 Jul 2015 | 05:29
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waiting o
29 Jul 2015 | 05:56
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I pray that u get time soon to update diz story.....we've waited for long
29 Jul 2015 | 06:53
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Dis is cwioux
29 Jul 2015 | 16:52
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It's very painful. U just have to be strong
30 Jul 2015 | 08:42
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up till now no update?
30 Jul 2015 | 16:29
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What delay this story so long like na, next pls.
30 Jul 2015 | 17:07
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What delay this story na, i'm watin next episode pls
30 Jul 2015 | 17:14
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Interesting but what keep this story so long like this next pls
30 Jul 2015 | 17:19
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there iz God o
30 Jul 2015 | 22:20
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WHAT IS HAPPENING ?? WHY THE DELAY ??
31 Jul 2015 | 07:25
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Tah! No upd8t yet? Dis ain't fun aqain o
1 Aug 2015 | 16:22
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lolz fr ths story u hav to exercise patience. my advice dnt even check or thnk about the next update fr a week.
1 Aug 2015 | 17:36
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FINAL EPISODE We went back to the village that same day feeling dejected and annoyed. I felt worse. Oga had denied me before my mother and I felt like committing suicide. The shame was unbearable. And I didn't know how to cope with being a single mother at such young age and coupled with the fact that my mother was not financially buoyant to cater for the additional responsibility I was bringing her way. But all the same the months flew by and I was soon due to deliver. At the maternity centre, I was delivered of a bouncing baby boy and guess what? He looked exactly like his father... . . . THE END
1 Aug 2015 | 21:08
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Nawa for u oo,dis ur story sef eeeeh
2 Aug 2015 | 04:47
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The end? Just like dat? Sud we call diz a happy ending or sad ending? Anyway congratz 4 d baby Ada$
2 Aug 2015 | 05:00
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@dykola u rily messed up diz story believe me...if you are watching a nollywood movie and it ended diz way, how wud u feel...lemme express my feeling, i wasted my data checking for updates on this one, Letz see the best of you next time, you can do it.
2 Aug 2015 | 05:12
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This story is supposed to have season two....... Kudos @dykolala..............u are among the best
2 Aug 2015 | 05:24
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hmmm...... Vindicate us oh Lord...... Such is life...... Things happen for a Reason.... And a Season....
2 Aug 2015 | 05:44
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thanks for season one, still waiting for season two.
2 Aug 2015 | 05:46
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Nah wah ooo.... Seriously I've qat nothinq to say jaree....
2 Aug 2015 | 05:50
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Oga ur story nah nonsense.... U knw posting story here is nt by force. U just mess up big time..(Sad face)
2 Aug 2015 | 06:24
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Hmmmmn which kind ending be this??? I guess there must be season2 *waiting for it*
2 Aug 2015 | 07:55
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no no dont tel me it has just end lyk dat
2 Aug 2015 | 09:20
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am not gud at guessing joor,anyway wonderfull story happy ending lolz
2 Aug 2015 | 10:30
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chai! anyways
2 Aug 2015 | 13:23
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What a terrible ending. The end of this story meks no sense to me. Atleast ur Madam should regret her bad actions toward u in d end. Anyway, thumbs up
2 Aug 2015 | 14:03
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Poor ending
2 Aug 2015 | 14:49
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Umm so unpleasent for nt with ones parent hope d case get resolve
2 Aug 2015 | 14:52
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Nyc story...buh i hp t has season 2....kus oga z nt meant 2 go scotfree
2 Aug 2015 | 15:10
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nice story but i dont like the way it ended
2 Aug 2015 | 15:36
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em dn fnsh?
2 Aug 2015 | 15:48
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Rubbish.... We have some reasonable stories to read abeg...
2 Aug 2015 | 16:00
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:-( bad ending tho
2 Aug 2015 | 17:58
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Nice story, bt d ending is nt ok at all @dykolala
2 Aug 2015 | 18:33
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very very very very poor ending
2 Aug 2015 | 18:43
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end ke? As as how now. The ending no bam o make i yarn u true o
3 Aug 2015 | 09:24
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Mtchewwwww dis story didn't end well at all
3 Aug 2015 | 19:07
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Nice-one ..... Oyah season 2
5 Aug 2015 | 09:31
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Waiting for season 2
6 Aug 2015 | 05:56
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This not a Happy ending, better try next tym nd do smetin more creative... u try good job
6 Aug 2015 | 07:12
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rubish story. u no try at all
7 Aug 2015 | 11:32
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diz stori endin no bam wel at all
7 Aug 2015 | 21:34
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Hmmmmm Nawa o, was expecting sumtin else apart 4rm dis,...... anyway more water 4 ur to ur throat Nxt time
10 Aug 2015 | 12:34
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The story was really getting intresting bt the ending part of it ws realluy poor...nice story tho...
15 Aug 2015 | 13:43
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Good story but poor ending.
15 Aug 2015 | 18:23
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Such a story.poor ending
19 Aug 2015 | 05:32
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Now the story is getting interesting
20 Aug 2015 | 17:26
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I swear u be great writer @dykolala but u hav to work out d endin of ur writes up most of ur work hav read d ending usualy sucks
24 Aug 2015 | 10:12
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@dykolala, Lair..... Trust me wen I say "This na just the beqinning of the END".
27 Aug 2015 | 11:09
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u try bt i dOnt tink it can just end lyk dz cuz d madam must regret ha action johr
27 Aug 2015 | 14:49
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u try bt i dOnt tink it can just end lyk dz cuz d madam must regret wat she had done johr
27 Aug 2015 | 14:50
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The Ending Gan Sef Uhmm Make I Shut Up O Anyway Nyc Story U Ar One Of The Best@dyk
31 Aug 2015 | 02:15
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That's a very poor ending......... Not Good atall
2 Sep 2015 | 11:22
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chai! the end of this story disappointed me gaan! I was looking forward to a very nice end fa. author, you've tried but next time please end it well.
8 Sep 2015 | 07:24
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Thumb up.
8 Sep 2015 | 16:08
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so unfortunate
23 Sep 2015 | 10:04
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It's alwayz like that
2 Oct 2015 | 13:50
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One day, God Will make a way for you Adaeze, even when d ball is hot never give up, don't cry, just keep your head up
8 Oct 2015 | 07:45
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Something tells me your luck is about to change, it's So close
8 Oct 2015 | 07:50
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Wow, today u go hear something fir madam hand o, but u don belly full, no brouhaha
8 Oct 2015 | 08:20
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Some pple really pissed me off wit dier comments sha. Do u guys tink its dat easy to write a story or wat ''poor ending'' ''poor ending'' abeg did any one hold u guys hand to carry pen and paper to complete d story ni u guys were complainin abt slow updates and i guess dats y he tried to to make it snappy still u ar nt satisfied. Dose dat politely asked 4 season two even tried bt sum fools jez started blabbin. Ingrates........ And some of them cnt construct even a paragraph in d next 20 yrs to cum o........ Mtcheeew
12 Oct 2015 | 20:30
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Crying 4 u girl
27 Oct 2015 | 12:20
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Madam wil soon knw ur secret....u ar in soup
27 Oct 2015 | 12:52
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If I were d ouse girl o I will just go nd give d boy back to his father if he like he should kill him dat his problem
9 Nov 2015 | 04:46
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Wow but that yeye man no try at all how i wish there will be season 2
21 Nov 2015 | 06:08
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So quick to end when thank God for the baby boy
23 Nov 2015 | 19:04
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******
26 Dec 2015 | 04:01
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First time I am seeing val get angry..... Bikonu @coolval222-2 take it easy.......just calm down and don't get yourself worked up... Some people don't know how to appreciate good things....
26 Dec 2015 | 08:54
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Val is vexing 4 d 1st tym dis yr abeg oga patapata @coolva222-2, no vex biko, mabinu dearie
27 Dec 2015 | 15:38
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@African i dnt tink u r begged 2 read a story here so y d complain cus we Coolvaller luv readin comment lyk its a story on its own so dnt u eva mak our oga angry again cus if u do den am gonna surprise u
27 Dec 2015 | 15:43
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Thanks guys, i have deleted the comment :) , I just over reacted and it isn't cool
27 Dec 2015 | 16:02
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Lolx what a funny ending. Nice one thou
27 Dec 2015 | 21:06
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:) @coolval222-2
28 Dec 2015 | 11:13
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it is a risks
1 Feb 2016 | 10:27
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guy u no try for the end
1 Feb 2016 | 14:00
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Hmnm I never see
2 Mar 2016 | 15:22
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Seem's like the ma'am got some Unfinished business wit ur family
2 Mar 2016 | 15:28
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Na this kind thin make me kill one woman for lagos
2 Mar 2016 | 15:38
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The woman no get work ni
2 Mar 2016 | 15:45
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So 😀Okpa don save you be dat
2 Mar 2016 | 15:50
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Hmmmmmmmm.........nice 1
13 Apr 2016 | 13:54
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Hmmm nice story
25 May 2016 | 13:53
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So? really poor ending....... All her sufferness is for nothing except unwanted baby mtchewww...
9 Jun 2016 | 19:50
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hmmm so hurting......
19 Jun 2016 | 15:46
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it just can't end like diz. dere must b a season 2
27 Jun 2016 | 02:07
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Ok go on
9 Jul 2016 | 10:38
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Hmmm dat a househelp issue 4 u
9 Jul 2016 | 10:48
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Nice story
14 Jul 2016 | 17:25
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Loi
18 Jul 2016 | 15:46
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nice story
18 Jul 2016 | 16:09
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Nice story
20 Jul 2016 | 08:46
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Nice story
23 Jul 2016 | 16:04
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Following
23 Jul 2016 | 16:07
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Interesting
6 Aug 2016 | 05:15
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Cheez
6 Aug 2016 | 05:15
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PLS I DNT LIKE HOW IT END
15 Aug 2016 | 20:12
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hmmmm
22 Sep 2016 | 02:35
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haaaaaaaa , wat an ending
24 Nov 2016 | 15:16
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@Gracy......she would av signed her death warrant, if she did as u said
30 Nov 2016 | 13:39
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2 slices of bread 4 a 15year old gal... Dats absurd Dem suppose Thunderslap d madam
30 Apr 2017 | 15:41
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Eeyah
30 Apr 2017 | 15:44
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#child_abuse
30 Apr 2017 | 15:48
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Hmmmm.. All is well
30 Apr 2017 | 15:50
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Die Na die
30 Apr 2017 | 15:53
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wow nyc 1,continue we re sitted
14 May 2017 | 01:50
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So interesting
22 May 2017 | 08:10
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Well.. ..it's a story
22 May 2017 | 08:18
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very sad story
6 Jun 2017 | 17:31
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is better I Won't marry or give birth than for me to bring my child on dis earth to suffer .I can't
6 Jun 2017 | 17:35
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hmmm some people wicked
6 Jun 2017 | 17:40
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hmmmm
6 Jun 2017 | 17:44
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nobody no tomorrow
6 Jun 2017 | 17:49
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nawo
6 Jun 2017 | 17:54
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big madam they use soap of 200
6 Jun 2017 | 17:57
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hmmm what a pity
6 Jun 2017 | 18:02
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hmmm madam husband again hmmm
6 Jun 2017 | 18:05
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the girl too mumu if na me let him do his worst or I will live d house or tell madam
6 Jun 2017 | 18:08
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she will catch you
6 Jun 2017 | 18:11
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wicked woman.....am sure the hubby doesnt even know abt her cruel xter to this young lad....
13 Jun 2017 | 05:36
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dont worry keep enjoying yourself madam will shown catch you both and you know what that means
13 Jun 2017 | 05:58
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guy its entire her fault joor...right from the day the white woman rescued her she should have known she has a back bone now to report everything to her by now she would have been a free girl...but i promise u that she will soon get pregnant for the oga
13 Jun 2017 | 06:10
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poor girl.... satisfy ur stomach and get ready for beating jare.....
20 Jun 2017 | 01:38
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hmmmm.....all this heartless women matter.... God save u sha
20 Jun 2017 | 04:47
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I don't like the way this story end....they have to face justice fr their inhuman treatment....
21 Jun 2017 | 17:44
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isokay ooo....Take heart
25 Jun 2017 | 03:58
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hmm the story is really touching its unbearable for a kid of 15years to face things like this but the husband should have suffer for this and the wife self haha the story even drop tears from my eye I felt emotions
23 Sep 2017 | 01:06
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omg this bad.... Welll una know God dey oo
8 Dec 2017 | 00:09
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Madam is doomed
15 Dec 2017 | 15:25
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Ntin to talk much on
15 Dec 2017 | 16:53
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Nice
28 Dec 2017 | 17:47
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Hmmn
12 Mar 2018 | 00:27
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Take heart because echidime
12 Mar 2018 | 00:27
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Hey so wicked
3 Jul 2018 | 09:09
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Omo ur own too much shuuuu
3 Jul 2018 | 09:13
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Its just a matter of time @adaeze
3 Jul 2018 | 09:20
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Good story sha. But with bad ending
3 Jul 2018 | 10:47
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waitin 4 season 2, representing ug +256 big up on yoselves guys
4 Sep 2018 | 02:50
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How did this story end l dont understand that man should be punished
12 Oct 2018 | 02:25
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Hmm what a weaked world
12 Oct 2018 | 02:26
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hmmm she really suffer alot
21 Nov 2018 | 18:34
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What a touching story
27 Dec 2018 | 18:23
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