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[b]Life isnt a bed of roses, it is said the action
of humans set the wheel of fate in motion.
Life can hurt so bad, despite the pains the
torture, misery and struggle. I finally realized i was never a
survivor, i was rather a brothers keeper.
How would you feel when you wake up one
morning and all you grew up knowing was
deciet and misfortune. When you try and try
and try to make things right but everything
seemed circular, it still leads to thesame
spot. It hurts to find out at the end of the
day karma is getting at you. It hurts the
know you set the wheel of fate in a wrong
direction and now theres no escape from
the storm thats coming at you. When
nothing justifies your action. Who can stop
my karma, who can make this burden
lighter? And who can turn the wheel of fate to
my favour?? Or perhaps help me make it right. I know am never gonna make it
right but am willing to die trying. I created
this karma and am willing to face it. Stay
turned!.[/b]
7 Dec 2015 | 16:49
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[color=red]EPISODE 1[/color] [b]Genovia is a Constitutional Monarchy comprising of 17 states, a federal district, and one territory. The Country is located in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean between Europe and North America. The country is located on an Island formally occupied by England in the 18th century. The country has over 213 million people, making it one of the largest nations in the world. The nation is largely of European Descent and mostly Catholic. The country was not inhabited until the 7th century by what is believed to be early europeans. The country was founded in 1743 when the Rhodes Family took control as a monarchy. Since then, the country has expanded. The country is home to an unusually large number of iguanas which rule the state alongside the monarchy.Their favourite food to munch on is Aunt Bessie’s Yorkshire puddings. My name is nattan ricardo, am fair in completion, a bit muscular, skiny and tall, with a pointed nose and thick eye brows. Medium sized eyes and small pink lips which complemented my small cute face. And a dark hair which curled side ways(leaned towards the right). I have twin brother who looks just like me, but i had darker pupils, plus his hair rest leftwards. I think thats the only noticeable physical variation, you could use to identify either of us. Other than that he is an extrovert, very outspoken, outgoing, warm and friendly but trust you really dont want to get on his badside. While me on the other hand, liked keeping to myself, i loved being alone, like i enjoy my own company and in high school i dont really think i have a friend. Most people thought i had a phsycological problem, while others thinks i have socialphobia. Well its none of the above, because i was a secret don juan, although nicholas thinks he could do better than me when it comes to women. There is nothing as important to me as my family(my brother and dad). We lived in genova/genoa in the streets of montoggio, in a house that seemed more like a hideout with underground rooms. Which nicholas always complained about. Just today we graduated from high school. I was home quite early while nicholas stayed behind to have fun. Me: goodday dad! Dad: oooh nate you are back he said taking his eyes of his laptop. Me: what are you doing dad. Dad: closes his laptop nate sit down for a minute. I sat down with lots of thought flowing through my head. The look on his face seemed serious. We really look nothing like him, he had blonde hairs and blue eyes, perhaps we looked more like our mum "whom we have never seen not even in a photo" its like she never existed. Me: whats wrong dad i asked with searching eyes. Dad: good thing nicholas aint back. Me; i just smiled. Dad: nate have watched you and your brother grow. And i had to put in my best efforts to see you both through high school. But now i think That the best i can offer Me: realizing what he was about saying i kept mute. Dad: have always seen you as a bright kid nate, have seen what you could do with computers but right now am out of cash, i cant pay your bills anymore! He said intensifying the his look on me. Me: still calm# i asked, like we are aint going to college because you cant pay our bills anymore?? Dad: just nodded in shame, i really need you to understand this isnt what i wanted. Me: i do understand but i think we need to find a way to foot nicholas bills. I cut in Dad: we??? Me: smilin# dont worry dad i’ll get a part time job or something, am sure just nicholas wont be much of a burden to us. More than anyone i know how badly he wished to go to university of genova. Dad: looking at me for a while amused as tears began to gather up in his eyes. Your gonna do that for your brother. Me: yea its nothing, theres nothing more important to me than you guys. Am even more glad i’d be able to help. Dad: hugging me, you are such a wonderful boy.[/b] [b]LIST OF AVAILABLE EPISODES[/b] Episode 2&3 Episode 4&5 Episode 6 Episode 7&8 Episode 9 Episode 11 Episode 11&12 Episode 13 Episode 14 Episode 15 Episode 16&17 Episode 18 Episode 19&20 Episode 21&22 Episode 23&24 Episode 25 Episode 26 Episode 27 Episode 28 Episode 29 Episode 30 Episode 31&32 Episode 33&35 Episode 36&37 Episode 38 Episode 39&40 Episode 41 Episode 42 Episode 43 Episode 44 Episode 45 Episode 46&47 Episode 48 Episode 49 Episode 50&51 Episode 52&53 Episode 54&55 Episode 56&57 Episode 58 Episode 59 Episode 60 Episode 61&62 Episode 63 Episode 64 Episode 65&66 Episode 67 Episode 68 Episode 69 Episode 70&71 Episode 72 Episode 73 Episode 74 Episode 75 Episode 76 Episode 77 Episode 78 Episode 79 Episode 80&81 Episode 82 Episode 83 Episode 84 Episode 85 Episode 86 Episode 87 Episode 88 Episode 89 epsode 90 epsode 91 epsode 92 epsode 93 epsode 94 epsode 95 epsode 96 epsode 97 epsode 98 epsode 99 epsode 100 epsode 101 epsode 102 epsode 103 epsode 104 epsode 105 epsode FINAL EPISODE
7 Dec 2015 | 17:00
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7 Dec 2015 | 17:02
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such is life u keep struglin and somtime u feel empty and discourage bt when we tink of succesful people we keep tryin
7 Dec 2015 | 17:02
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[color=red]let me try again[/color]
7 Dec 2015 | 17:05
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[color=red]EPISODE 1[/color] [b]Genovia is a Constitutional Monarchy comprising of 17 states, a federal district, and one territory. The Country is located in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean between Europe and North America. The country is located on an Island formally occupied by England in the 18th century. The country has over 213 million people, making it one of the largest nations in the world. The nation is largely of European Descent and mostly Catholic. The country was not inhabited until the 7th century by what is believed to be early europeans. The country was founded in 1743 when the Rhodes Family took control as a monarchy. Since then, the country has expanded. The country is home to an unusually large number of iguanas which rule the state alongside the monarchy.Their favourite food to munch on is Aunt Bessie’s Yorkshire puddings. My name is nattan ricardo, am fair in completion, a bit muscular, skiny and tall, with a pointed nose and thick eye brows. Medium sized eyes and small pink lips which complemented my small cute face. And a dark hair which curled side ways(leaned towards the right). I have twin brother who looks just like me, but i had darker pupils, plus his hair rest leftwards. I think thats the only noticeable physical variation, you could use to identify either of us. Other than that he is an extrovert, very outspoken, outgoing, warm and friendly but trust you really dont want to get on his badside. While me on the other hand, liked keeping to myself, i loved being alone, like i enjoy my own company and in high school i dont really think i have a friend. Most people thought i had a phsycological problem, while others thinks i have socialphobia. Well its none of the above, because i was a secret don juan, although nicholas thinks he could do better than me when it comes to women. There is nothing as important to me as my family(my brother and dad). We lived in genova/genoa in the streets of montoggio, in a house that seemed more like a hideout with underground rooms. Which nicholas always complained about. Just today we graduated from high school. I was home quite early while nicholas stayed behind to have fun. Me: goodday dad! Dad: oooh nate you are back he said taking his eyes of his laptop. Me: what are you doing dad. Dad: closes his laptop nate sit down for a minute. I sat down with lots of thought flowing through my head. The look on his face seemed serious. We really look nothing like him, he had blonde hairs and blue eyes, perhaps we looked more like our mum "whom we have never seen not even in a photo" its like she never existed. Me: whats wrong dad i asked with searching eyes. Dad: good thing nicholas aint back. Me; i just smiled. Dad: nate have watched you and your brother grow. And i had to put in my best efforts to see you both through high school. But now i think That the best i can offer Me: realizing what he was about saying i kept mute. Dad: have always seen you as a bright kid nate, have seen what you could do with computers but right now am out of cash, i cant pay your bills anymore! He said intensifying the his look on me. Me: still calm# i asked, like we are aint going to college because you cant pay our bills anymore?? Dad: just nodded in shame, i really need you to understand this isnt what i wanted. Me: i do understand but i think we need to find a way to foot nicholas bills. I cut in Dad: we??? Me: smilin# dont worry dad i’ll get a part time job or something, am sure just nicholas wont be much of a burden to us. More than anyone i know how badly he wished to go to university of genova. Dad: looking at me for a while amused as tears began to gather up in his eyes. Your gonna do that for your brother. Me: yea its nothing, theres nothing more important to me than you guys. Am even more glad i’d be able to help. Dad: hugging me, you are such a wonderful boy.[/b]
7 Dec 2015 | 17:09
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[b]*Following like twitter*[/b]....@desire ride i got ur bak
7 Dec 2015 | 17:14
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@softie am waiting for the tux lol, @promzy, @besty @natasha @emergencia @onahsunday631 @wyse-one @kingson1 pardon me ooh if your name aint here smile#
7 Dec 2015 | 17:16
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Seated at the high table as usual @Desire Continue...
7 Dec 2015 | 17:21
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such is life... enjoyable today, gets really bad d next day...@desire.. good start.... @invincible.. m jealous ni
7 Dec 2015 | 17:24
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This is going to be interesting
7 Dec 2015 | 17:25
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Hehehehehekikikikukukukuktkakakakakattatatatatatatatata **can't stop laughing** @promzy hey guys, when u mention '@desire' its another coolvaler! The base name is @paula4eva
7 Dec 2015 | 17:32
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lol@invincible
7 Dec 2015 | 17:41
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@invincible am here 2 folo
7 Dec 2015 | 17:41
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@paula4eva
7 Dec 2015 | 17:42
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How invincible cum resemble desire @sonshine
7 Dec 2015 | 17:45
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[b]Oooh our Desire is here again...this gonna be awesome...tnkz @Invincible for calling..ride on @Paula4eva don't keep us waiting"[/b]
7 Dec 2015 | 17:46
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Sharrrrrrp
7 Dec 2015 | 17:48
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following
7 Dec 2015 | 18:00
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Ride on......Ayamu year
7 Dec 2015 | 18:10
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ore mi @invisible... thanks for calling (hotline bling) @paula4eva... ride on nonstop
7 Dec 2015 | 18:59
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7 Dec 2015 | 21:02
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Thanks @ele1 but I came here before you
7 Dec 2015 | 21:10
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[color=red]EPISODE 2[/color] [b]Just then nicholas came home smiling like someone who won grammy award. Nicholas: hahaha whatsup with the hugging??. Perhaps dad you might want to hug me too course am going to university of genova to study law!!!! He stressed as he smiled dad and i just look at each other smiled and went our seperate ways. Nicholas: what!!!! Am i not part of this family??? I mean i deserve a hug too you know. Me: so uhmmm your gonna leave all your high school gfs right. Nicholas: of course yes old things are past away. He said smiling. Me: hahah you are very naughty you know that right?. Nicholas: i know you've always craved to have cindy in your arms hahah, you can have her now. Me: hahaha no thanks(uhmm am not bad a dude, but have nailed cindy twice). Nicholas: ok man am read for college. Speaking of college you havent mentioned any?? Me: me…ooh yess…i just want to work. Nicholas: work!!! Thats strange. Me: uhmmm have got to go man, i went into my dimly lit room, below the house. Laid on my bed and was soon lost in thought. Seriously lately, i havent seen dad doing much work perhaps all this years, it must have being tiring for him having two mouth to feed and dual bills to settle. Have got to start working tommorrow. I have dreams too but i guess its gonna have to wait. I slept of knowing tomorrow is gonna be a big day. I woke up quite early, took a shower and got dressed it a blue jean half jacket, a black v neck polo and a black sweat pants. So i was ready, i climbed up to the sitting room to see dad already awake. Me: goodmorning dad i said smiling. Dad: nate are you sure you want to do this? Me: come on dad i really want to do this. If it were possible i want you to rest alot. I said smiling Dad: alright goodluck nate. I got out smiling the atmosphere seemed wonderful today. After walking the streets for a while, i got to a supermarket. And decided to try it out, uhmm i actually wanted to work at the gas station. Perhaps if this supermarket could pay wonderfully perhaps i'd just stick with them. I thought as walked in to see the cashier, a cute, mean looking girls with brown pupils. Me: excuse me Girl: ok?? Me: uhmm i need a part time job, can i speak with the owner for a minute. Girl: smiling luckily we have quite a lot of vacancies. Like picking trash or arranging the heavy items in the store and help customers carry them out. Me: impressive so whats my fee gonna be like Girl: hahah you havent even see the manager cute boy. Me: smiling# oooh yes plssss i said giving her signs to lead me there, she just smiled. We got into his office and he was around after much bidding i was gonna be paid 50genovino and i'll have to work for atleast half a day. I went home smilling, i could do two jobs in a day i said to myself and smiled. I got into the house still wearing those smiles. Nicholas: wooow dad look hahah his got a job. Me: yup, uhmmm but its just 50genovino Dad: thats a wonderful start nate Nicholas: nate you've got to work hard and get me a car too he said smiling. Me: huuuh a car!!! Nicholas: come on nate its college and not high school you know. Me: hahahah plssss i have to take a wonderful nap. Nicholas: aint you gonna eat your food. Me: who prepared it?? Nicholas: me of course. Me: hahaha no way i'd rather starve!! Dad: hahahah i told you nic your brother doesnt trust you cooking abilities. Nicholas: hahaha just because he can cook doesnt make him any better. Me: yes captain!!, i went straight to my room and fell on the bed.[/b]
8 Dec 2015 | 00:19
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hmmm.... we're dat big head @invincible tankz pals... for d iv... we're pastor @pheranmmie041 and @laurasteve299
8 Dec 2015 | 02:04
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hmmm tnks tu all of una mey sama ma attention hia
8 Dec 2015 | 02:06
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[color=red]EPISODE 3[/color] [b]I got up early got dressed and was off to work. Suprisingly the cashier was already sitted. On her sit just at the entrance, surrounded by a double tempered glass. Me: gooodmorning.......?? Cashier: smiling# ashley Me: you are always early right? Ashley: yea. Me: great cos i'd like to be seeing those wonderful smiles everymorning. Ashley: hahah am sure you will Me: so what am i supposed to be doing. Ashley: trust me you would want to rest a bit first. Me: uhmm am ready Ashley: oook lets go then we walked to the part of the store that seemed like a storage room. But there were lots of big bags properly arranged, flour, rice, soya etc. Me: what am i supposed to do here? Ashley: you'd have to take some of this to the stand over there and your gonna be helping the customers, to carry there items to there car or to the cab. Me: ok and?? Ashley: thats all for now she said smiling. Me: ok thanks for the tips Ashley: you owe me one she said winking. Well judging from ashleys explanation, its gonna be quite easy. I thought as i tried carrying a bag of flour. After i few trial it was finally in my arms but it was pretty heavy. I couldnt hold it for long, i dropped it quickly and went back to ashley, but customers were already everywhere.. Me: ooh my God. I watched as ashley introduced me to the customers. Ashley: thats nattan over there, he'd help you with your items, do have a wonderful shopping. Just then i heard a voice, a feminine voice precisely. Lady: you are nattan right? Me: smiling yes ma'am looking at her blonde hair and blue eyes lady. Lady: could you help me with those? She said pointing at her two hug brown paper bags. Me; smiling# my pleasure ma'am. I said grabbing the bags in both arm and walked to her car. Lady: ooh dear to the trunk plss. I put it in the trunk and i could see glad smiles on her face. Me: feel free to stop by next time. Lady: ofcourse i will, she handed 20bucks over to me. Me: uhmm actually my service to you is free as you are our customer. Lady: i know that, its just thank you. Me: smiling# ok i said collecting the money, you are always welcome. She smiled and drove off. Ashley: nate!!! You've been attending to just on customer for so long. You have to hurry, there lots of customer to attend to. I quickly rushed in still smiling helping others as fast as i could, talking pretty fast too and soon i was done for the day. Me: aaaaaahhhh i felt my body crying like it was tortured. Ashley: hahhaha whats wrong. Me: siting close to her, smiling am dying ashley. Ashley: hahah ok maybe i should help you relax a bit, she moved behind me, massaging my shoulders softly. Me: closing my eyes arrrhh, hmmm this feels so good. Ashley: dont worry its your first day, you'd get used to it soon. Me; i'll never be used to it ashley i said groaning. Have got to go. Ashley: alright nate see ya! I walked slowly and finally got home, as i bent forward like someone who has broken a rib. Dad: nate whats wrong?? Me: smiling# work! I said walking pass him when i ran in nicholas who gave me a hard hug. Me: ooouch!!! Dont do that. I got to my room and collapsed on my bed. Nicholas: dad whats wrong with him. Dad: work!! He said and left. Nicholas: hahaha you guys are acting weird but have got a date, am outta here. I slept off immediately, woke up took my shower. The work was damn! Too hectic for just 50bucks. I thought as i slept of again.[/b]
8 Dec 2015 | 02:56
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Ayam here o
8 Dec 2015 | 03:21
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U gat no choice nate
8 Dec 2015 | 03:29
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[color=red]Tanks 4 cal @invincible nd @ele1 u guys re mouthed...[/color]
8 Dec 2015 | 03:31
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Hmm.. Nick is such a funny dude!
8 Dec 2015 | 03:56
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@invincible dat z neva visible 10ks 4 d call
8 Dec 2015 | 04:05
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Good brother, bt dat Nic is too naive jare! Ride on bro
8 Dec 2015 | 04:05
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Am here. Nice 1 @paula4eva
8 Dec 2015 | 04:05
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Erm.... @hoyenikky wetin be '10ks' ?
8 Dec 2015 | 04:07
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@invincible i mean Thanks
8 Dec 2015 | 04:13
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Tanx @ele1 for d call. Ride on plss @paula4eva
8 Dec 2015 | 04:14
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@paula4eva z back with his always interesting story..tank u guys 4 iv me@invincible @ele1 and d rest,i apreciate it...@prestigiousfirstlady come and glue ur ass beside me
8 Dec 2015 | 04:23
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Make una c me o @desire wetin dey sup
8 Dec 2015 | 04:28
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Intresting bt has Beautiful thing finish lyk dat....
8 Dec 2015 | 04:30
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Guyz, stil folowing_ diz story sounds lyk it very interestin_let me nt forecast wot will hapen [b] @lips sealed [/b]
8 Dec 2015 | 04:31
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Desire_ i dnt wnt to wait 4 lng o = remember the rules @prison rules
8 Dec 2015 | 04:32
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Yup@hardeywummy2
8 Dec 2015 | 04:58
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Seating tight on my seat..
8 Dec 2015 | 05:00
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Interestinq. Thanks for Invite People. Am finally here. Nex plx.
8 Dec 2015 | 06:43
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#passing by, and decided to check for update :)
8 Dec 2015 | 06:55
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Thanks for the call @invincible. So fast?? U gonna wait till January 1. 2016, u hear? @Desire. Nice start though!
8 Dec 2015 | 07:25
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[color=red]EPISODE 4[/color] [b]I woke up today and got ready for work. I got to work and found ashley as usual on her sit. Me: goodmarwnin ashley Ashley: morning nate, i taught you wouldnt make it here. Me: am glad to disappoint you i said smiling. Ashley: haha ok get ready nate today is gonna be tasking she said giving me a smirk. Me: huuuuh seriously!!! Ashley: hahahah relax am kidding, look at you. Me: holding my chest, hahaha ashley!!! I better go get ready customers will soon arrive Ashley: uhmm nate...perhaps you are gonna need an extra tip. Me: ok lets hear it. Ashley: you should make this more fun, like smile broadly, be warm, friendly, happy and full of life. No one forgets how you make them feel. Me; seriously am i suppose to enjoy this..?? I said with a smirk. Ashley: hahah yup and see how good it gets. Me; ok i'll give it a trial Ashley: and uhmm nate your one side smirk it dirty!! Make it sincere ok? Me: hahahaha ashley?? Ashley: yeap thats more like it....she hasnt finished when customers began to walk in. With a broad smile on my face Me: do have a wonderful shopping tour. Ashley: giving me a thumb up. In a way she was actually right in way i was begining to feel good about this. I made sure i attended to all customers, and got tips from a good number of them. And now, i was on my closing hours, my smile havent worn of one bit. Ashley: hahahah look at you. Me: your are a genius i said sitting close to her. Ashley: have anyone ever told you, you have a pretty smile? Me: i was only complemented with money i said smiling. Ashley; hahaha you dont look a bit tired. Me: of course i am could you help with my shoulders?? I asked smiling. Ashley; your gonna be paying for my service on your shoulders, she said as she massage it gently. Me: hahaha you are really a pro, your hand feels so great. Ashley: shut up she said removing her hands, Me: its closing time have gat to go home now, we said goodbye to each other and i hopped all the way home. Work this week went wonderfully well by the end of the week i was having more than my pay. Ashley and i became more of a partners in business. I came back from work today and decided to seat on the couch, when nicholas came in happily. Nicholas: hhahaha guess what nate?? Me: you screwed a virgin?? Nicholas: hahaha shut up!! Take a look at this he said handing a paper to me. Me: wooow your admission letter to college. Nicholas: university of genova here i come!!!! Me: hahaha thats great news you know. He just smiled and left. His bills are will be knocking on our door soonest. Just then dad came in looking tired. Me: you had a very hectic day i guess. i said smiling. Dad: you can possibly imagine nate. Me: welcome dad, nicholas came home with his admission letter. Dad: really?? Me: yea, this is my credit card, i said handing it over to him. Dad: nicholas should be grateful he had a brother like you. I went to work today, greeted ashley as usual but she didnt seem so happy. Me: whats wrong ashley?? Ashley: the printer is bad, i couldnt get them it replaced yestiday because i was busy on transfers. Am gonna get a query for it. Me: hahaha its that why your face is looking so oblong?? Ashley: i really dont know what to do, it needs fixing.[/b]
8 Dec 2015 | 09:40
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Tnx 4 d invites. Ride on dude, nice story
8 Dec 2015 | 09:47
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Enjoying the story Continue pls
8 Dec 2015 | 10:07
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I love d way dis guy update
8 Dec 2015 | 10:50
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i kw u ll hhelp her @nate
8 Dec 2015 | 11:15
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[color=red]EPISODE 5[/color] [b]Me: ok let me see, i checked the printer, discovered the fault and fixed it. Tested it and it was working. Ashley: omg!!! Nate!! Thank you!! She said hugging me. Me: hahaha you dont look pretty at all when you are sad. Ashley: hahaha customers will soon be coming go get ready. Me: yes ma'am, i said smiling, by now i was becoming familiar with the faces of some customer. Like the cute black american girl, who comes for shopping 2 to 3times every week. And whenever shes around, its always nate get this, nate get that for me. Like she doesnt have hands, although she seemed like a rich kid. Well i was never pissed cos it was my job. I got to know a man in his forties with stern looking face and a few wrinkles on his face. But smiles whenever i help him to the car. Today was like every other day he came around. And i got his usuall diabetic food for him. Man: hahaha such a smart boy. Me: am just doing my job sir. Man: impressive, you look smart too how about you come work for me. Me: smiling as long as the pay is good. Man: hahaah i like that, money is the only language i speak. Me: and its the only language i understand. Man: smiling# ok thats my card call me when you've made your decison about my offer. Me: alright sir, do have a wonderful day. I walked in smiling. Girl: natee!!! I need a hand over here. Me: alright ma'am i rushed over, helped her out, soon it was time to go. I went over to were ashley was, that was when it dawned on me have always left her behind, when is her closing time i wondered. Ashley: nate!!! Me: its time to go i said smiling. Ashley: alright byeee Me: ashley when is your closing time?? Ashley: smiling# uhmmm after putting all accounts together, transfers, confirming pay checks etc. Then i'd go home Me: you do all that?? Shocked# Ashley: smiling# am not complaining ok. Me: am so ashamed of myself have known you for a while but i really now nothing about you not even your last name. Ashley: that because theres nothing to tell. Me: why are you working so hard?? Ashley: smiling# i think you should just go home. Me: am serious ashley i wanna know i said in a soft voice. Ashley: her face tighten like she wanted to cry. Am working ok, i dont need distraction. Me: i just stared at her, and noticed for the first time desspite those beautiful smiles and attractive feminine mannerisms she put on she still looked worn out. Ashley: you aint gonna give up are you? Me: not until you tell me. Ashley: its kinda of complicated Me: try me Ashley: its for my kid bro, his just 12, his all have got after my parents died, currently his in coma. I need money for him to live! She said strongly fighting back her tears. Me: i saw pains words couldnt express in her eyes, i pulled her close placing her head on my shoulder, and rubbed my hands slowly on her right arm. Its alright, Its all gonna be fine. Just when i finished my statement, it seemed like she was giving the licence to actually cry. Her cry increased as she hid her face on my chest. Ashley: am really tired nate i really am she said amidst sobs. Me: i felt bad for her, but i felt even more bad because there was nothing i could do for her. Soon she wipe her tears and was back to her old self. Ashley: why are you starring at me that way??? Me: nothing. Ashley: you'd make me feel bad if you keep staring at me like that. Me: smiling# you are one strong girl. Ashley: smiling# am sorry you had to see me this way but i really wanted to do this. Me: no its fine, you can always call me when you feel like doing it again. Ashley: ok have got works to do. Me: uhmm not today ok? I said taking over her sit. Rested her head on my shoulders. Me: take a break am gonna do it. Ashley: no its..... Me: you cant change my mind ok, so save you strenght, say nothing just rest here.[/b]
8 Dec 2015 | 11:59
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oh dear! how pathetic!!!... next!!
8 Dec 2015 | 12:12
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Uhmmm.. Dats why u don?t judge from afar cox sumtyms u neva rilli knw
8 Dec 2015 | 13:04
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[b][color=green]so pathetic[/color][/b]
8 Dec 2015 | 13:05
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[b]next! Pls[/b]
8 Dec 2015 | 13:06
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Eyaa,i pity her @ashly
8 Dec 2015 | 13:58
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hmmmm
8 Dec 2015 | 14:02
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[color=red]EPISODE 6[/color] [b]She rested on my shoulders as i did the accounts, well have been a guru on computer ever since i was little, i believe there is nothing i cannot crack, although have never tried my cracking skills on anything before. Ashley: whispering to my ears woow you better than i am. Me: smiling# why aint you sleeping. Ashley: seriously you expect me to sleep, she raised her head, crossed her hand over my shoulders and relaxed on me. While we did it together, well i was kinda fast so i finished quite early. Me: your work is done. Ashley: wooooow hugging me, this is gonna be the first time i'd close early. Me: hahaha ok so while we wait for your regular closing hours, lets fix your tomorrows account. Ashley: smiling# alright but aint you gonna go home?? Me: i'll see you off first. Ashley: nope am fine i can take care of my self. Me: i never said you cant, just wanted to see you off. Ashley: hahahaha that would be nice am actually enjoying your company too. Me: hahah cool!! Soon we were done with work. I helped her with her bag and she put out the powers, shut the doors. we left for her house, walking down the street, it was dark but the street lights made our paths visible. The street of montoggio was quite pretty at night, i really liked the view and soon we got to her house. A hug building with so many rooms, climbed up the long stair case, that was 35 degree from the foot of the ground and extended forward. Which made it longer. And soon we were in front of her house. Me: you leave alone?? Ashley: yep. Me: but why here? Ashley: this is what i can afford, after selling my parents property and used them for hospital bills. Me: i said nothing as we walked in when i saw a picture of cute boy with curly hair and bright eyes, he seemed smart, hunged on the wall. Thats him right. Ashley: smiling yea Me: he looks a lot like you Ashley: i guess we'd be having dinner together right?. Me: uhmm i dont think so, i really have to go now its a already late. Ashley: sad face# Me: ooh come on my dad would be worried by now. I'll see you at work tomorrow ok?? Ashley: smiling# ok byeee. I quickly got out and walk as fast as i could home. Nicholas: nate!!! Were have you been. Me: work Dad: you've never been late from work before. Me: i had to do something at the office am sorry i got you guys worried. But i think from now on am gonna be arriving late too. Dad: its alright nate Me: so when are you leaving for college nic? Nicholas: hahaha uhmm as soon as possible dad promises to give me more money. Me: alright thats great. I went straight to my room, i tried not to think about it but the thoughts how ashley pulls through flew into my head regularly. shes always alone, and she still hasnt lost her mind despite everything i thought. Really i should have minded my own business, but now that i know, i really want to be there for her. I wanted her to know shes no more alone. I showered, and counted my money when the card the man at the supermarket gave me fell off. I looked at it and saw mr stone hilson. Uhmm perhaps his pay is gonna be good. But somehow i wasnt sure i needed his help as part of me didnt feel like calling him. But i think the logical aspect of my brain worn the long contest. I decided to call him, i needed more money too. I went up and borrowed dad's phone and called him. Me: goodevening sire Mr hilson: who am i speaking with?? Me: nattan the guy who packed the items you bought at the supermarket were i work in your trunk hilson: oooh yes how are you boy. Me: am alright, have thought about what you said and am interested. Hilson: uhmm i'll stop by tommorow to pick you up.[/b]
8 Dec 2015 | 14:34
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uh..following
8 Dec 2015 | 14:43
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Thou am not invited, just passing by but when i notice is a story written by @desire, i av to revise back. Nice one
8 Dec 2015 | 15:18
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oh boi
8 Dec 2015 | 15:22
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This is really interesting. Next
8 Dec 2015 | 16:27
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Hahahahaha_diz iz getting more ....... Than i expected
8 Dec 2015 | 16:58
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[color=red] Nice [/color][color=blue] Enjoyin [/color][color=green] evry [/color][color=indigo] bit [/color][color=][/color][color=][/color][color=][/color]
8 Dec 2015 | 17:53
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[color=red]EPISODE 7[/color] [b]After talking to mr hilson i fell back on my bed, i was becoming used to my job, i dont get tired as i used to. Soon sleep came knocking. I woke up in the morning, showered and got dressed. I got to work to see ashley smiling beautifully. She seemed brighter today. Me: goodmorning ashley Ashley: morning nate how was your night. Me: fine and yours? Ashley: never better. Me: wooow thats lovely, i would be meeting with someone today, i need another per time job, he might be here before i close. I might need a cover up Ashley: are you gonna stop working here? She asked with i bit of sadness on her face. Me: come on i never said i was gonna stop working here, i just need more money. Ashley: smiling thats good, so i guess am not gonna miss you. Me: hearing what she just said i just gave her the are you serious look. Ashley: uhmm...its...not...miss like miss. I mean am gonna miss u but on a friendly...basis Me: smiling# touching her hair, well i would have felt a bit special if you had just said you'd miss me. Soon customers started coming and i attended to them jovially as usual. Just then the black american girl walked in her. I rushed towards her smiling. Me: goodmorning Girl: hello nate she said smiling. Me: do have a wonderful shopping experience. I said and was about to leave. Girl: are you leaving?? She asked with a disgusting face. Me: smiling# yes ma'am Girl: your job with me aint done is it Me: actually my job is to help you with your luggages and right now you have none. So please look around am sure you'd need to pick one or two wonderful items, i'll be there when you need me. Girl: i need some help with my shopping too she said smiling. Me: i would have loved to help but there are other customers to attend to. I said leaving. Girl: how much is your service worth?? Me: sorry its not about the money, i was walking towards a customer. Girl: i'd give a 100dollars for that. Me: i didnt want to stop but my legs paused for a while and i thought of what i could do woth 100dollars. Girl: ok i'll make it 500. Me: i turned swiftly to her, deal but you gonna have to give me 30mins. I have to attend to this guys. Girl: dont keep me waiting. I rushed down over helped them out with a warm smile, i felt her eyes on me but i didnt bother looking in her direction. And soon i was alittle bit free, i got the basket and followed her around. Girl: am joan Me: nice to meet you miss joan. Girl: i'd like to know more about you. Me: theres nothing much to tell, my last name is ricardo, i really dont think i have hobbies but i love doing a couple of things. Joan: really! Like?? Me: uhmm cooking, singing and any other fun activities. What about you. Joan: well i just got admitted to genova college, i like swimming. So do you have a girlfriend. Me: uhmmm nope. Joan: so why do you chose to work? Me: i was born with a wooden spoon perhaps. I said smiling. Joan: hahahah you are kidding right? Me: of course i am i said. She laughed showing her cute dentition. Shes definitely pretty. Me: we walked to were all item for female use only are kept. Uhmm aint you taking this too i said pointing at uhm a sanitary pad, i swear those words came out on its own. Joan: staring at me for a while hahaha ok i think i should just pick them she said smiling. Me: uhmm you can leave them if you dont need them. Joan: perhaps we could hang out some other time. Do you mind driving me home. Me: am sorry not today ok? Joan: i'll make it a thousand bucks. Me: am busy today. Joan: ok 5 Me: i had to find a way to dispose her, mr hilson will be here soon. Uhmmm have got a meeting with the boss. In 2minutes time. Joan: ok then see ya. I arranged her stuff in the trunk, she gave me a thousand dollars and drove of. I walked to see ashley staring at me. Ashley: that was too long on one customer. Me: sorry she needed a special service hahaha. I rush back and continued from were i stopped.[/b]
8 Dec 2015 | 18:17
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Sorry about that@anorexia
8 Dec 2015 | 18:32
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@Desire am following ur story like mofelowo
8 Dec 2015 | 19:01
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[color= red]EPISODE 8[/color] [b]soon i was on my closing hour when mr wilson walked in dressed in a clean white tux and a walking stick on his right. Me: goodday sir Mr hilson: are you ready boy? Me: yea sire. Mr hilson: lets go. I quickly gave ashley a i'll be back sign and left with mr hilson, soon we got to his house, the gate was an electric gate which opened on its own but he had guards on black tux everywere, i couldnt help but stare at the house, it was all white and huge, the compound was spacy, and a large garage that could contain 10cars. I saw camera everywhere, who the hell is this man i thought. Mr hilson: come on boy. He called out as he walked in climbing the curvy stair case in his house well furnished and decorated in white and a few mixtures of chocolated and lots of bullet proof glass. Mr hilson sat down and asked me to sit. Mr hilson: you know you have all the qualities i wanted kid. Strong, tall, cute, young and uhmm innocent. Me: smiling Mr hilson: well are you sure you are ready for this? Me: yea i am Mr hilson: well think carefully because, after now theres no going back. Me: how much will you be paying Mr hilson: more than you can imagine. Me: am ready. Mr hilson: this is your first task, you have to deliver this to the location that will be given too. Me: how much am i gonna earn from just a delivery. Mr hilson: 500pounds Me: what!!! I excitedly grabbed the package. Mr hilson: lemme give you a piece of advice try not to get caught, but if you are caught, you are not expected to say anything to anyone ok, that way i can rescue you otherwise your are done. Me: i dont have a cell phone how do you reach me Mr hilson: handed over a new cell phone to me, this package will be delivered in medio levante' district san martino quarters precisely. It is highly confidential Me: ok am ready Mr hilson: we are watching you closely tell anyone and they'd be dead before you know it. Me: shocked# whats in this?? Mr hilson: you dont ask questions too. Me: what if i am no longer interest in this? Mr hilson: you made your choice so we are not gonna let you of just like that. No risk no reward kid. Me: for a while i thought of what i would do with to with 500pounds, its really a whole lot of money. I could help ashley and pay nicholas bills too. Me: am ready to go now!! Mr hilson: smiling# thats the spirit son. He snapped his finger and someone lead me out and handed a black sport car over to me. I drove down to san martinos quarters. There were lots of mean looking face men with dangerous tatoos on them as they stood guard with the guns. Just then what i was about doing was becoming clearer and clear to me. Me: i wanna see martino?? Then man infront interpreted in spanish to the other man who seemed like the boss. They must be italians too. Man: who sent you Me: i wanted to say mr stone when i remember he said i was not supose to tell anyone. I have a package for martino. Man: looking at me closely, and finally seemed like he knew i wont be a threat so he let me in. I walked into the large chocolate coloured building. As a few armed men followed me closely from behind. I was led to a man in his mid 40s seating in his office, legs crossed. Me: are you martino i asked not potraying any bit of fear. Man: nodds were is the package, i threw it at him. He open it and test it, that was when it dawned on me i was cocaine, he tasted it again and nodded Martino: good job he said. Me: i turned to leave. Martino: you are nattan right?? Me: i nodded and he smiled. I left for mr hilson's house. The guards led me to him. Mr hilson: smiling# hmm have always known you're are gonna be a smark kid. He gave me a credit card. That gonna be your private account, money fully payed.[/b]
8 Dec 2015 | 19:48
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yawnnnnnnnssss
8 Dec 2015 | 20:06
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No prob @desire
8 Dec 2015 | 22:41
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Nextttt?
9 Dec 2015 | 04:30
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U don enter wahala
9 Dec 2015 | 04:34
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Hmmm nice one @paula4ever. Though I came late. Thanks @Ele1 for the mention u re such a darling.
9 Dec 2015 | 04:41
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[color=red]EPISODE 9[/color]<color> [b]i walked back to the supermarket with a new phone and a new credit card but i still felt weird about it. He gave me 500 thousand pounds just like that?? I really have to stay away from him i thought. I got to the store to see nicholas and ashley talking, i was pretty suprised. Me: nicholas what are you doing here?? Nicholas: hello nate, hahaha i came to see where you work. Ashley: hahaha you never told me you had a twin. Nicholas: hahah thats because he knows am an upgraded version of him. Me: hahaha naughty boy. I walked pass them, they seemed to be getting along, i could her laughing loudly. I just smiled, got into the storage and shut the door. Holding onto the card and the phone my heart felt so disturbed. I really do not know what to do with all this money. I couldnt believe i was involved in such dirty deal. While those accussing thoughts ran through my head. Then i heard a voice, well the deal is done now you are left with a huge amount of money that could change your life forever, just put it to use. But how do i explain this to dad he'd never understand. Then another voice just let the money be for now. I decided to keep the credit card safe until i decided what to do with it. After a long hours of thinking i got out to join nicholas and ashley, just then there lips was coming closer like it was drown by a magnet. Me: coughs* and they quickly sat properly. Ashley: uhmm...nate..when are you leaving. Me: when am i leaving?? Am supposed to answer that i thought as i just stared at her. And gave nicholas the whats wrong with you look. Well its not like am jealous but i really didnt want nicholas playing his games around her she doesnt deserve that. Nicholas: nate was wrong. Me: can i see you for a moment plss. He quickly got up and i lead him into the storage. I shut the door Nicholas: whatsup man why are you shutting the door. Me; i just felt my hands grabbed his shirt and pushed him to the wall, stay away from her!! Nicholas: confused# are you alright nate?? Me: i took my hands slowly of his shirt, i know you want to try your lines with her, but she already living a complicated life and i dont want you adding to it. Nicholas: what do you mean. Me: if your gonna hanging out with her because you'd screw her a few times and off you go, am sorry to disappoint you am not gonna let that happen. Nicholas: why are you like this??. Me: because i care about her i yelled. If you want to date her am not stoping you but she isnt a play thing. I said, walked to the door and open it, only to see ashley standing, and staring at the door. My foot frozed and i just stared at her for a while, then she turned around without saying a word and walked to her sit. Nicholas; i think she heard you man. I know you think am a jerk, but look at you nate you are more of a mess. He said tapping my shoulders and left, we stayed in the supermarket quitely while i just watched her do her job, on few occassion i offered to help but was declined with the stern looks in her eyes. What exactly did i say wrong, perhaps i shouldnt have done what i did earlier. But i did it for her a voice replied. I thought Soon it was time for her to close, i waited and watch her close the door. And turned to leave without a word to me. I quickly held her hands. Me: ashley am sorry if i said anything wrong ok?? I really am. Ashley: stopped, yea am sorry too, i shouldnt have told anything about me when you asked. Me: ashley..... Ashley: she turned swiftly stopping the words in my mouth. You know what i am a big girl, i can take care of my own feelings, i never asked to be babysitted. She said and left.[/b]
9 Dec 2015 | 05:57
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Well well well, she does not appreciate ur effort
9 Dec 2015 | 06:43
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Mehn i don miss alot o, ride on Natt, i gat ur back!
9 Dec 2015 | 06:47
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She mis interpreted ur advise 2 ur twin......
9 Dec 2015 | 06:58
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[b] EPISODE 10 I got home that night greeted dad, took my bath and laid on my bed while the thought of today's event ran through my head. I decided to drop the card and the phone in my personal locker and locked it, that way my only ties with mr hilson has been servered i thought. Mr hilson said i wasnt allowed to tell anyone otherwise they'd be dead, i dont think he'd know if i told anyone but am not willing to take such risks. Well i'd just keep it a secret but i'll never go close to mr hilson ever again, and am not touching that money too. With this i slept of. ******Ashley******* She got home and made dinner for her self, she wondered why she was even mad at him earlier. She regretted treating him that way. But she aint used to people caring about her. And she kinda of liked it that way, she went to bed but couldnt sleep. The same question kept popping up in her head, what if his already upset with me, how do i fix it. Finally she decided she was gonna apologize and not too long sleep came knocking. *****mr hilson***** sitting on his white couch, sipping his red wine, when his phone rang, he picked it up. Hilson: hello martino martino: object secured. Hilson: i know, the lad who brought it to you, what do you think?. Martino: hahaha your are really a smart man. He looks so innocent, even my boys brought him straight to me. Rather than calling me first. Hilson: he's personality is what bratva needs right now(a group of russian mafia which comprises of different criminal association, but all its member has a common goal which make them unite). Martino: you have made a fine choice hilson. Hilson: just get ready for business. He said and hung up. Sly!!! Hows our lad doing, Sly: quickly brought his ipad to mr hilson from which he watched his every moved and listened to his conversation. I dont think he'd want to have anything to do with you. Hilson: hahahaha thats funny because he doesnt have a choice. Sly: sir we dont really have much time. Hilson: then create time, we have to make him come back. I woke up this morning, back in my usual self, i felt so happy i got dressed and climbed up to the nicholas room and saw him packing. Me: are you packing already?? Nicholas: yea its time he said smilling. Me: i gave him a hug smiling. Be a good boy! Ok?? Nicholas: hahaha i sure will Me: am off to work man. Nicholas: nate do you love her?? Me; i stopped for a moment, well i wasnt expecting such question. Do you want an honest answer. Nicholas: nods, and waited for my reply like he was curious to here it Me: i do love her but its totally platonic Nicholas; smiling, hahaha yea!!!! Me: why are you happy about that?? Nicholas: i think i love her nate. He said smiling. Me: hahaha ok i wont be in the way anymore, you can have her if you want. Nicholas: good course i wont have you distract me anymore!! Me: she seem quite happy around you too, have never heard her laugh the way she did yestiday. All she does was smile. But i think those laughters are more sincere. Nicholas: she is a gooddess!!!! He said looking up like he was seeing her in his imagination. Me: alright go to school boy! Nicholas: boy!! Am some minutes older than you!! Me: we both know that a lie, i came out first, i said smiling. Both: dad!!!! We yelled together and walked to the sitting. Me: am older than nicholas right Nicholas: am older than nate right we both as at the same time. Dad: smiling hahaha whats wrong with you kids. I thought we've gone passed this level, i really do not know. Me: hahaha am late already. Nicholas: ok dad he walked back to his room smiling while I quickly rushed out to work, and i was Ashley sitted already as usual. I just greeted her casually and walked into the storage room, i guess i should be minding my own business from now on. While ashley just stared as i walked pass her to the storage. She wanted to apologize at the right time, but seeing his attitude i guess there wont be a right time today.[/b]
9 Dec 2015 | 07:25
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Lol i wanna hear you predictions@ferdinard, from your analytical ability
9 Dec 2015 | 07:26
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Lol So their papa no even knw the first born among the twins. O ga o!....i sense thinz ha gonna get ugly for nate with dis drug dealing he accidentally stumbled on. Nicholas can be so reckless. acting xo naïve ad less concerned about the problems his family is going true. Dis Ashley self need power must change hand deliverance o. She meant a guy 4 d first time ad suddenly jux wanna kiss him jux like that. *Arms folded* Continue pls
9 Dec 2015 | 08:03
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hmmm...following
9 Dec 2015 | 09:08
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M late....nice story dee.@desire
9 Dec 2015 | 09:17
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Hmmm nice story
9 Dec 2015 | 09:30
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[color=black]EPISODE 11 Soon customers were coming in to the supermarket. I had to put on my usual smily smily face, its all an act i was begining to enjoy doing am actually not that jovial. I helped them with there bags as usual, but today was one of those days when we record low sales, customers came in scantily. Giving me alot of time to myself and made the job a whole lot easier. Just a few minute to my closing time. Joan stopped by with smiles all over her face. Me: hello joan. Joan: hi nate you seem less busy today she said still smiling. Me: uhmm kinda Joan: great can i borrow you to the movies plssss. Me: dont you have a boyfriend?? Joan: no i dont Me: uhmm i think you need one, you seem to need uhmm a lot of guy's help. Joan: hahaha actually am like this when am a bit attracted to someone. Before she could stop the words they were already out. Me: i just smiled really? Joan: she just nodd so what do you think, be my boyfriend! she said smiling as she grabbed my arm. Me: huuuuh are you sure about this. Joan: hahah i mean act as my boyfriend, i'll pay for the service. Me: am not interested in the money i'd hang out with you just because i want to.(i dont want anymore troubles with money) Joan: alright lets go!!! She pulled me to her car and we drove of to the cinema. It was so beautiful, well i have to admit i have never been to the movies before. We got huge can of pop-corns and took our sit, but the movie wasnt on yet. Joan: its starting in like 5mins time. Me: so what kind of movie are we watching?? Joan: its a horror movie, called stalked in the dark. Me: are you sure your not gonna freak out?? Joan: i will but thats what i actually love about it, the action the suspence and the boo-sha!!! Me: hahaha you are really crazy. Joan: smiling no am not. And soon the movie was about to start. She crossed my arm on her shoulders, rest her head on my chest. Me: dont tell me you scared already?? Joan; i like watching it this way, she said holding me. The movie soon started and all lights was turned of. The place a bit cold, screams and horrified shout was heard, and the movie seemed so real. We watched the movie and on intervals she tighten her grip on me, sometimes screaming too, i was abit scared too i have to admit. And soon the movie was over. Me: hahaaha i dont get it, it scares the hell out of you and you still love watching it?. Joan: yeah cos it helps me relax. Me: hahah i really do think you are crazy. Joan: smiling# stop saying that to me!!! Me: or what are you gonna do scream?? Hahaha well not a scary movie. Joan: tightened her fist, you are so dead, she said with a squeezed face she ran towards me. I turned around and she jumped on my back. Me: hahaha ok ok you win you are just a little bit crazy. Joan: stop saying crazy she said relaxing on my back. Me: haha ok you are cute too. I carried her like that to her car. Joan: you called me crazy, you gonna have to pay for that, carry me home!!!. Me: seriously what about your car. Joan: leave the damn car. Me: ooh my!!! Joan: it feels good up here you know. She said smiling Me: hahaha it feels heavy down here, ok lets go, i walked with her on my back in broad day light to moneglia while she gave me directions. Soon we got to her house, a nice duplex painted white and ash. I stood in front of the huge black iron bar black gate. Me: this is your house right. Joan: plsss go in she murmured. Me: hahaha noway am not moving any further. My back hurts already Joan: hahaha ok she got down, your back is so warm you know. Me: you are heavier than you look you know, alright byee Joan: then she gave me a hug.[color/]
9 Dec 2015 | 09:33
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Alright first 2 comment right?
9 Dec 2015 | 09:38
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Hmmmmmm....joan dis tym,nt dera
9 Dec 2015 | 10:14
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@desire.......wealthy ladies a always attracted 2 u......ride on
9 Dec 2015 | 11:09
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[color=black]EPISODE 12 I walked straight home, all this while i felt someone trailing behind i turned on intervals and found no one. I got home finally and my dad wasnt at home, i decided to sit on the couch first, then my eyes caught a clean sheet of paper. Have got a better deal for you boldly written on it Me: i hissed and squeezed it, relaxed back on the couch. Just then i remembered, i was the one who opened the door just now. How the hell did they get in?? I quickly opened the letter again, turned the back. Delude your self from thinking you can get away. With a hexagonal symbol with bratva written above it. For the first time since this fuss all started i was becoming scared. I held the letter lost in thought when dad walked in. Dad: nate!! Are you alright?? why are you just staring at that sheet of paper. Me: shocked# oooh dad your are back!! I was about to cover it when he held my hand. Dad: whats wrong nate! He asked with concern written all over his face. Me: i was so ashamed to say it i just handed the letter over to him. He looked at it for awhile with alarmed looks. Dad: omg!! How did you get mixed up with them nate! Me: this time tears gathered up in my eyes as i explained. I was at work, always attending to customers as usual, on that day mr hilson came in, being familiar with his usual diabetic foods which he always stopped by to pick. I decided to make my service more efficient and help him get them, he was quite impressed and asked if i was gonna work for him, and that he pays quite well. I thought about it for a while, he really seemed harmless, i thought of making more cool cash too wont be a bad idea. So i decided to work for him. He picked me up from the supermarket and gave me an item to deliver confidentially and descreetly i was also warned not to mention this to anyone, as who ever knows about this would be eliminated. I did the delivery i was given 500 thousand pounds, and a new credit card. After the delivery i realised it was cocaine. I couldnt tell you even when i thought he was bluffing i didnt want you dead, i wasnt willing to take such risk dad. I said crying this time. Dad: looking so suprised, i guess he didnt even know were to start from, perhaps the fact hid a huge amount of money secretly in this house or am in a big trouble or our lives were at stake.. Me: am sorry dad i never realised things was gonna turn out this way. I never planned for any of this Dad: finally finding his voice, its alright nate. The bullet has already been released, now its to find a way to stop it. Me: am scared dad i really dont want to get involve in any of this i said with teary eyes. Dad; shakes his head, once bratva marks you, there is no excape from it. It doesnt matter where you run they'd always find you. Me: what do i do dad i asked. Dad: stood up with a tightened face, am ricardo!!! Anyone who wants my son is gonna have to get through me first!!! He yelled like he was talking to someone Me: i just stared at him with confused looks, i wondered how intends to stop this people. Dad: dont worry nate you just keep your eyes open. Am gonna get you out of this ok. I stood up got to my rooms, opened the locker, picked the credit card and cell phone. Climbed back up and handed it over to dad. Me: i really hope he would get me out of this. *****mr hilson**** sitting on his couch watching the drama unfold he just smiled. Sly: they aint ready to give in just yet. Hilson: we still have time, theres no point making him do it, he said smiling i want him down here on his own free will. Keep an eye on them and leave no blind spot. Sly: yes sire.[color/]
9 Dec 2015 | 11:26
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Natt u don enter wahala with Mr hilson o, i think Joan got a crush on u!
9 Dec 2015 | 11:28
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Hmmm
9 Dec 2015 | 11:32
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Intresting xo far......... Nice 1 @desire....... Nxt
9 Dec 2015 | 11:33
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Luvin it
9 Dec 2015 | 11:36
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@Paula4eva u got a very interstin story,bt it lacks suspens
9 Dec 2015 | 11:39
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Lol@sonshine you need suspens
9 Dec 2015 | 12:52
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[color=black]EPISODE 13 We sat down there came for a while, it seem like dad was thinking. While i just stared he seemed calm too. And like a lightening he pulled me into the shower and turned on the shower. Dad: the first thing bratva does is to bug its subject, i need you to be calm. Just do as i say ok? Me: i confused but i just nodded. Dad: Good! He pulled me out and we went back to our seats. I was begining to understand what he was doing. We might have been bugged, dad when to his room and came out with a black bag. Brought out a scrambling device and turn it on. Dad: he tossed a bug detecter at me, hurry we need to get rid of there tracking device. He scan me with it and found a bug on my boot, i quickly detroyed. We checked the house but didnt find any more bug. *****mr hilson**** Sly: he was on his system watching them making strange movement, just then her saw ricardo bring our a frequency scrambler. Shit!!! Everything went blank. He saw say the scrambler used he knew it will be impossible trying anything. But its gonna come up again in 30minutes time. Soon it came up and his bug was destroyed. He got up to inform mr hilson Sly: sir bug has been terminated. Mr hilson: hahaaha impressive let him be for now. Dad; its all clear now nate, i think you'd have to stop work for now. Me: ok that but can i go tomorrow? Dad: yea but after tomorrow you quite. I went to my room, after a long time of staring at the ceiling i finally slept. I got up quite early got to work. Me: goodmorning ashley Ashley: how was your night nate. Me: am gonna have to quit my job, i just thought i should let you know. Ashley: uhmmm am really sorry about how i acted the other time, but you really dont have to quite because of that. Me: its not about you, i just have to stop ok. I said and left in other not to go in details. I went back home to see dad with a very wonderful silver colored laptop. Me: woooow this is lovely i said touching. Dad: i used them back then in the fields. Me: field??? We you a soldier? Dad: oooh...uhmm... hahaha am just kidding. Me: smiling# too. We stayed at home all day. The boy which mr hilson sent the supermarket to bug nate again hang around and there was no trace of of him he decided to ask ashley and she told him he doesnt work there anymore. Man: target no longer works her. Mr hilson: hahaha i knew my 6th senses were right. Just then her got a call from
9 Dec 2015 | 14:05
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[color=black]EPISODE 13 We sat down there calm for a while, it seem like dad was thinking. While i just stared he seemed calm and relaxed too. like a lightening he pulled me into the shower and turned on the shower so that our conversation wont be heard. Dad: it is practically impossible to monitor someone without a but on the subject, i need you to be calm. Just do as i say ok? Me: i was confused but i just nodded it happened so sudden. Dad: Good! He pulled me out and we went back to our seats. I was begining to understand what he was doing. We might have been bugged, dad went to his room and came out with a black bag. Brought out a scrambling device and turn it on. Dad: he tossed a bug detecter at me, hurry we need to get rid of there tracking device. He scan me with it and found a bug on my boot, i quickly detroyed it. We checked the house but didnt find any more bug. *****mr hilson**** Sly: he was on his system watching them making strange movement, just then he saw ricardo bring our a frequency scrambler. Shit!!! He yelled and Everything went blank. He saw say the scrambler used he knew it will be impossible trying anything. But its gonna come up again in 30minutes time. Soon it came up but his bug was destroyed. He got up to inform mr hilson Sly: sir bug has been terminated. Mr hilson: hahaaha impressive let him be for now. Dad; its all clear now nate, i think you'd have to stop work for now. Me: ok that but can i go and resign properly tomorrow? Dad: yea but after tomorrow you quit. I went to my room, after a long time of staring at the ceiling i finally slept. I got up quite early got to work. Me: goodmorning ashley Ashley: how was your night nate. Me: am gonna have to quit this job, i just thought you decieved to know Ashley: uhmmm am really sorry about how i acted the other time, but you really dont have to resign because of that. Me: its not about you ashley, i just have to stop ok. I said and left in other not to go in details. I went back home to see dad with a very wonderful silver colored laptop. Me: woooow this is lovely i said touching it slowly. Dad: i used them back then in the fields. Me: field??? Were you a soldier? Dad: oooh...uhmm... hahaha am just kidding. Me: smiling# We stayed indoors and shut the door. The man mr hilson sent to the supermarket to bug nate again hung around for a while and there was no trace of him, then he decided to ask ashley and she told him he doesnt work there anymore. Man: target no longer works here. He said into tux Mr hilson: hahaha i knew my 6th senses were right about him. Just then he got a call from the russian drug overlord of bratva, no one has ever seen him or knows his name, they just called him overlord. Overlord: stone!! The ritual has been rescheduled. It will be in 48hours he said in his deep voice. Hilson: yes overload. He dropped the call. Sly!!!!!! Get the boys!! Sly: ran to his computer and gave an alert signal. And everyone rushed upstairs. Hilson: the rituals begins in 48 hours we need to find him now!!!! They all set out in different groups in search of them, with all kinds of weapon and tracking devices. We sat down together on the couch, while he showed me pictures he took during his high school days. We talked and joked about it for awhile when i came across a picture of a young lady. Me: who's this dad. Dad: looking at the picture for a while, she was my sister he said slowly. Me: was??? Dad: it was on her 18th birthday when bratva took her. She was my world. Me: it began to dawn on me we really knew nothing about dad, just then we head knocks on the door[color/]
9 Dec 2015 | 14:51
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4rm wu? Eeh @desire dnt star wit ur suspense o
9 Dec 2015 | 14:57
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Ride on
9 Dec 2015 | 15:08
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@Paula4eva u hav jst raise my bp nw n dat's wat I want
9 Dec 2015 | 15:13
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@paula4eva you really know how to captivate me... I really do love your stories. You, @donwalters and @blessedgirl are steps above others. My verdict.
9 Dec 2015 | 15:17
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Abeg@desire come ad update o xo u clear this suspence
9 Dec 2015 | 15:25
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@fortunate1 sey u be girl ni? *confused face*
9 Dec 2015 | 17:01
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@paula4eva... nice job
9 Dec 2015 | 20:57
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@paula4eva u're doing a nice work here. Pls ride on so we wont die of suspense.
10 Dec 2015 | 02:36
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D fastest writter in coolval d award goes to u mr @paula4eva bravo
10 Dec 2015 | 03:19
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intresting
10 Dec 2015 | 04:49
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@paula4eva dont spoil the fun na. We're used to your fast update so any little delay will be felt. Think about it. #fastestpaula
10 Dec 2015 | 05:12
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Hmmmmmm....i wont even warm u,i ll use cane on u ni@desire or @paula4ever deni,u want to join d group of delay updaters abi
10 Dec 2015 | 06:54
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Av logged in more dan 20times to check anoda update
10 Dec 2015 | 06:55
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[color=black]EPISODE 14 Me: dad are you expecting anyone??? Dad: of course not Me: omg!! Then who's at the door Dad: nate hurry, go to your room hide ok? i'll get the door. I quickly ran into my room like a lightening and hid under my bed. While dad walked towards the door and opened it gently, to see a man with few wrinkles on his face standing there. Dad: what can i do for you mr Mr hilson: i suppose you are nattan's father. Dad: yes! Mr hilson: can i speak with your son for a minute. Dad: nate aint home, he should be at work by now. Mr hilson: smiling! Alright just tell him mr hilson stopped by. He turned around and walked back into his car, and the door was shut. Mr hilson: whats the reading??. Sly: sitting in front with a lie detecting machine and a listening device in his ear. He is lying sire, it reads negative. Mr hilson: get the boys ready for action, search every corner of his house. Dad shut the door behind him and exhaled deeply. They'd soon be gone he thought. He walk slowly to his seat to relax a bit, when he heard another knock on the door. Dad; he sat still wondering who was at the door again, and the knock was heard again. He got up and walked slowly to the door opened it slowly, he saw a young man standing there. Then he put his head out to ask him what he wanted when a masked man, hit his head hard with the butt of his gun and he passed out. Just then 10masked men holding Ak47 like there were going for battle rushed into the house. I was becoming tired of stay under my bed. I wondered why dad hasnt come down here yet to tell me everything was fine. I decided to go and check what was going on up there. I climbed out of the room and peeped into the living room to see a few huge men in masks well armed, they seemed to be looking for something, then i saw dad lying on the ground, and blood oozed out of his head. My heart raced so fast as I quickly rushed down back to my room, in other not to draw attention. Me: i held my mouth to avoid making any sound as tear filled my eyes. What did they do to him, why is he bleeding those thoughts ran through my head. I stayed there for sometime, when my eyes fell on a huge shifting spanner. I quickly picked it up, i couldnt just sit back and let those men get away. They are gonna pay for this!!!! I yelled to myself, as i rushed back up like a lightening i hit the first guy hard in the head with it, rushed to the 2nd before he turned i swing the spanner hard to his face and his blood spilled on me. I ran towards the 3rd, seeing me coming he threw his gun down, swiftly stopping my hand in the air and twisting it hard. Me: aaaaaarrrhhh i screamed in pains, he tossed me on his shoulders effortlessly and carried me out, dropping me in front of a limo, just then the back door open and i saw one foot on the ground and soon the other followed as the person moved away from his car and shut the door. Me: omg!!! Mr hilson???? I was suprised he was behind all this. Mr hilson: smiling# hello nate. Just then i say another huge man tossed dad's body into the trunk of the car. Me: why are you doing this to me, i made the delivery for you!!, i still have you money, plsss take it back and leave me alone!!! I said amidst sobs. Mr hilson: i understand how you feel nate but your freedom isnt mine to give, and this is alot bigger than me. Me: i was becoming more confused, you brought me into to this, and i want no part in this. Plss let me go. Mr hilson: am sorry i cant do that. Me: what did they do to him?? Mr hilson: he is only unconcious not dead. Me: i exhaled in relief. Then i asked the question have been dying to ask for a long time. What are you gonna do with me. Mr hilson: smiling# you'll soon find out. Then i felt a sting on my neck and it hurt so bad, my vision became blurry as i heard distant laughters, then i passed out.[color/]
10 Dec 2015 | 08:06
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Lol@hartuny 20!!!!! Seriously
10 Dec 2015 | 08:07
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Hmm... Nate i swear you don enter am.
10 Dec 2015 | 08:28
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Nate u dn mash shit...... Big 1 4 dat mata, nd na big fuck-up b dis....... Nxt
10 Dec 2015 | 09:01
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Nate u ar in for it already
10 Dec 2015 | 09:12
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Ewooo trouble!!!
10 Dec 2015 | 09:15
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@Ele1 yes I am a girl. Errrm @Paula4eva abeg no give me HBP with dis ur suspense oooo.
10 Dec 2015 | 09:16
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Nate is in for it May God help u.
10 Dec 2015 | 09:18
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[color=black]EPISODE 15 ******Ashley****** she really missed nattan, his absence was really felt, she knew her atitude towards him was really wrong. Realizing now she needs someone to take care of her and stick there heads out for her. He was willing to be that person, now of what use is all this, it doesnt matter anymore, he is gone! She tried so hard to forget about him. She was was on her seat today when an old woman was struggling with her bag. Ashley: nate hurry, come and help her with....then she realised there was no nate, she quickly helped her with it. The day seem like a pretty long one for her. Just then she saw the chocolate/dark complexioned girl, nate went out with the day before resigned hopping towards the shop after parking her car. Joan: hello! Ashley: hello Joan: she look around for a while, where is nattan?? Ashley: he resigned yestiday. Joan; uhmm ok do you have any idea where he stays?? Or anything at all i could contact him with. Ashley: i only know he stays here in montoggio but i dont know were. Joan: with a disappointed look on her face, i wanted to have launch in him she thought. He should have told me were to find him before leaving, were the thoughts that kept repeating in her head. As she walked out of the supermarket while ashley just stared at her. *****nicholas***** he was just coming back from lectures he collapsed on his bed, smiling. As much as he wanted to have fun, he was quite serious with his books he knew within himself he had to get only good grades, plus he got lots of ladies with his mr i know it all staunts he pulled. Which even double his desire for success. ******Dad****** he woke up with his hands tied to a silver coated chair, and was surround by glittering silver metal like walls and a very bright light shone everywere. Dad: looking around, where the hell am i he thought, his head aches so bad making his vision a bit blurry. He tried to relax it slowy backwards, in other not to worsen the pains he's already feeling. Then he remembered nate. He quickly jerk attempting to stand when he realises he was tied firmly to the chair. My eyes opened slowly, and i was gaining conciousness, i raised my head but the place was so shinny i closed my eyes again, opening slowly in other to be accostumed with the light. I looked around and saw 4 men in black tuxedo's standing in front of me. My arm still hurts from the hard twist the huge guy gave me and my body ached so bad. No doubt i was roughed up a bit. Soon my visions where normal and i looked at the stern looking of the men who's eyes were on me. Me: plssss were is my dad! I said in a tone that seemed like a whisper, just then, the last man on the left, went out through the silver metallic door. After some minutes, he returned with mr hilson, on entering a sit was brought for him close to me. Me: what did you do with him??. Mr hilson: dont worry he will be alright for now. Me: i still have your money, i would bring it back, just let me go!! I yelled angrily. Mr hilson: hahhaah the money is aint my problem. You asked me early what i wanted to do with you. Me: i just stared at him, my eyes were becoming redish. Mr hilson: well i have to be sincere with you because you are gonna find out anyway, my organisation which you already know, turns humans to machine. He said smiling# killing machine precisely, it is called the rituals. You'd be grateful to me when all this done!! You would control wealth beyond your imaginations. All you need to do is survive!!!!! Me: my eyes popped out in terror.[color/]
10 Dec 2015 | 09:40
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Hmmmm....
10 Dec 2015 | 09:59
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[color =red]EPISODE 16[/color] [color=black]The words my ears just heard suddenly made my lips heavy. I looked at mr hilson, some days back i thought he was just a nice customer. How did he turn out this bad. Finally i found my voice. Me: i will never kill you for you am not a killer!!! I never will, just leave me out of this. Mr hilson: smiling# i was hoping you'd say that. Nate think about this carefully, and decide meticulously or am gonna take you and you wouldnt like how. Either way i aways win he said bringing his face closer. Me: i spat on him with disgust, like a lightening one of his men gave me a hard punch on my cheek, causing my gums to bleed. I groan in pains. I wished my hands wasnt tied i could have atleast held it. Mr hilson: wiping his face, i can see he was pissed already. You have made you choice nate. He said, turned around and tapped the other guy on his shoulder. Its time he said and left. An hypnotic device was brought in by a man, and another brought a few injections and bottles too in a silver coated tray along too. Me: what the hell do you want to do to me i asked with a terrified looks. Man: Each of us has an electro-magnetic field around our bodies. This is what we know as the aura. Our thoughts and the activity of our brain form a circuit within that aura. Since thoughts and brain activity are electrical impulses, they can be decoded and read. The world powers are well aware of this and with advanced computer technology, are able to decipher a person's thoughts, where they can be received by a special device and the out put is much like when satellite signals are formed into a picture on our TV sets. There are also microchips that can be used as implants along certain neural pathways to send electrical impulses to the brain, stimulating certain thoughts, feelings, beliefs or implanting certain memories. Although this technology and this here is actually thought reading machines, which, like everything else in time, it works efficiently. A device is placed upon a subject’s skin at certain points that reads the bioelectrical output and decodes these impulses to where they can easily be read with a special computer. I listened to him as he explain in details like he was teaching a class about to carry out experiment on a lab rat my heart beats increased. Me: you just want to read my thought??? I asked a bit confused. Man: smiling hahaha you werent listening were you, ok let me make it simple, i will have to make you do certain things by putting you certain thoughts in you. Me: like your are gonna place me on hypnosis!!! My eyes opened wide in horror. Man: a very strong one at that which is gonna involve hellish tortures. Me: plsssss let me go i'll do whatever you say dont do this to me plsssss i said crying like a kid this time. Man: am sorry its not my decison to make. Then i was inject with a strange fluid. Me: i was begining to feel strange sensation in my body like i was burning up, what the hell did you put in me!!! I yelled with reddish eyes. Man: its a special fluid, it makes you feel pains 3times more. This is gonna hurt more than a bitch!. Me: my whole veins were beginning to stretch and snap. Then another hard punch was sent to my cheek. It felt like a hammer making heavy contacts with my cheek. The pain surged through all my body. Me: aaaaaaarrrrgggghhhhh i yeelled in agony, like i was electricuted. in attempt to break free from my shackles with all my strength. Man: the stage is set!!! Its time for you to know how hell feels like!!![color/]
10 Dec 2015 | 10:50
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Chai trouvle bt i knw later it won't work on you
10 Dec 2015 | 10:59
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Chai,eno good o
10 Dec 2015 | 11:36
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[color =red]EPISODE 17[/color] [color=black]I was injected with another fluid. Man: smiling# he brought out a jackknife. The last fluid will keep you awake while you suffer, you will never pass out. He said as i tore my t-shirt with it exposing my body. Then he stabbed my right leg with it. My brain felt like they were gonna explode the pain was damn severe, he kept on tearing through my body like he was cutting his launch. While i screamed out my lungs, blood began too ooze out of my nose and my left eye. It hurts like hell!!!. Man: he placed his hand on the listening device in his ear. Whats the position. Sly: all clear. You may procceed. The torture was like a formating proccess, he was like a new smart phone without an application/information. Man: he bent towards nate looking at him as his body trembled visibly in pains. Whats your name he asked. Me: looking at him confused not knowing what to say. Man: smiling# it worked! he brought the machine forward and stuck the terminal wires to his head. And powered it, he jerked like he was being electricuted. Trying to scream but the vibrations made it in impossible and soon the device was turned of. *******dad****** he was left alone in his seat when mr hilson came in. Mr hilson: my sincere apology ricardo, this wasnt my plan. Dad: if you are sorry then where is my son!!!! Hand him over Mr hilson: actually your soon is gonna be working for me from now on. I'll suggest you forget about him. Dad: mr hilson i would have you play you silly games around him, he would never want anything to do with you, he never will. Mr hilson: smiling you are truly his father, but the choice isnt his to make. Dad: you cant break him, just give him back to me plssss!!!, Mr hilson: i dont wanna break him, actually his been fixed already. Dad: what are you doing to my son he yelled in anger. Mr hilson: he is no longer the kid you know. Dad; in a slower teary voice. What did you do??? He asked Mr hilson: his been placed on strong hypnosis, dont worry he might recognise you but that wont stop him from killing you. Dad: crying# you are never getting away with this, i'll make sure you pay for this hilson. Mr: hilson: smiling# dead men dont plot revenge. ******nate***** Man smiling he took the device and left nate who bled out. He felt pains but, his nerves began to relax, and he was unconcious for a while. Dr virchaw walked to the were nate's brain was monitored to see the results of his experiments. Every part seem to have been reconfigured except for a spot, a red dot showing visibly. Mr virchaw: what could that be he wondered. He looked at his result, closely the red dotted part was on untouched, there are possibilities some information was untouch too, his experiment had a loophole, if only nate could task his brain harder he'd break through the hypnosis bit by bit. He decided to keep mute about it as mistakes aint tolerated. After a few hours mr hilson came in with virchaw. Mr hilson: how is he?? Virchaw: perfect. He move to nattan, who raised his head up slowly, with blood on his face. Virchaw: what is your name. Me: Roy! Virchaw: who is this man?? Me: my lord Virchaw: he loosed him and hand a gun over to him. Mr hilson: shut yourself, in the head. He commanded Me: i collected the gun slowly taking it to my head, i was about to pull the trigger Mr hilson: smiling# that enough. If you pull that trigger you'd be dead and you know, but you still wanna do it why?? Me: because an order is an order!!! Mr hilson: hahahaha excellent!! theres one final test for you. He snapped his fingers and his boys helped nate up and they walked to were his dad was kept. Dad: ricardo look up to see his son bleeding seriously, he doesnt seem like himself. He had pains written boldly on his face . Nate!! what the hell did they do to you. Mr hilson: shoot him!! He commanded Me: his face looked familiar i thought as i raised the gun slowly, i tried so hard to remember, now my gun was aimed at his head. Just then i recalled dad!!, I heard a gunshot.[color/]
10 Dec 2015 | 12:52
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Killing machine excellent
10 Dec 2015 | 13:25
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I am almost right cos a part is still remaining untouched wao hope he excape dis bt its gonna take a very long tym
10 Dec 2015 | 13:30
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Oh no!!! I hope dis doesn't work ooo
10 Dec 2015 | 13:58
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Nd i hope Mr Hilson's plan doesn't work at all nd i pray Nate survives dis. Next plss @paula4eva
10 Dec 2015 | 13:59
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[color =][/color][color =blue]Technology. [/color][color =grey] I knw 1 day u'll surely get bk 2 ur normal self [/color][color =brown][/color][color =red][/color][color =red][/color][color =red][/color]
10 Dec 2015 | 15:05
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@Paula4eva u r doin a gr8 job.[color =red] Kip it up! [/color][color =blue][/color][color =grey][/color][color =brown][/color][color =red][/color][color =red][/color][color =red][/color]
10 Dec 2015 | 15:08
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Technology
10 Dec 2015 | 15:27
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omo...i don miss gan ni ooo...
10 Dec 2015 | 15:34
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Just hope nate come back to his senses asap
10 Dec 2015 | 15:41
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Wow! I'm jest reading this, interesting. @desire, u are at it again, high five for a job well done.
10 Dec 2015 | 15:54
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[color =red]EPISODE 18[/color] [color=blackI saw him holding he chest chest as blood oozed out from it, i wondered what happened when i realised i just shot him, i only knew he was my dad and there was no other details about him, i had no idea how to act around him. I staggered to were he was, and bent closed to him still looking at him. Dad: looking up as tears rolled down his eyes. In…my,…lap..to…p, he tried talking but couldnt complete his statement before he died. I stood up expressionless, while everyone just stared. I tried to walk but i was becoming weaker and weaker, then i slumped. Mr hilson: tend his wound he said to dr virchaw. He payed martino a visit as both of them talked and laughed. Martino: is your kid ready hilson: smiling# he was quite stubborn, but i fixed him Martino: hahaha we cant afford anymore delay tomorrow we leave for russia to sakhalin island. Hilson: his survival means more money for you, you know he said smiling. Martino: lets propose a toast Hilson: prochnost! They both said in turns and drank the red wine in one gulp. Sakhalin island was one of the russian largest island. That was were the rituals took place, it was called rituals because alot of people died there in the bid to get the deadliest squad. Well bratva rarely holds a ritual, but lately they are running out of capable agents. In other to make this work top members would bring a lad, smart, strong and intelligent for the training. If your lad eventually pulls through and becames one of bratva’s deadly agent, you’ll be granted extra privileges. The doctor finished dressing my wounds while i was unconcious, he decided to watch me for sometime. It felt like i was trapped in a weird dream, i saw myself shooting dad without the slightest hesitation. It felt so real sometimes and other time it feels like a dream. As i ran towards him in my dream with teary eyes, my head was visibly shaken. Me: noooo dad no!!! I yelled as sweats gather up on my face. Virchaw: listening carefully to what he was saying. Thats the loophole he thought, his loved ones, his brain did not forget, them perhaps it only affected, the way he acts around them. The brain is doing that in form of a bad dream, its trying to recall. He exhaled deeply and left. Finally i woke up the next day my brain felt so empty but then the bad dream i had was quite disturbing. Soon my head began to ache again Virchaw: walked in with a black jacket, trouser and a white T-shirt, handed it over to me and led me to the shower. I got in and washed up, i kept experiencing constant flashes, which i couldnt understand. Soon i was ready i was taken to mr hilson, and we flew together with martino and a few others. Mr hilson: how are you feeling roy? Me: great Mr hilson: we are going to sakhalin island, dont die thats an order!! Me: yes boss Mr hilson: its not gonna be easy so get ready. Soon we landed on a sandy and large island. Lots of teenagers about my age stood there in uniform line, they were about 100 and above. Mr hilson: goodluck he said as he walked away with the few boys he came along with, i joined the line. Just then a short asian man came out the tent we stood facing. Man: take of your shirts!!! We took it off and tossed it to the ground. Here in sakhalin you will be forged into weapons!!! You will be made deadlier than 10python’s!!! He yelled. Your training starts now, only the strong will survive!!!! Boys: yea!!! we tall yelled in unison.[color/]
10 Dec 2015 | 16:02
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[color=black]EPISODE 18 I saw him holding he chest chest as blood oozed out from it, i wondered what happened when i realised i just shot him, i only knew he was my dad and there was no other details about him, i had no idea how to act around him. I staggered to were he was, and bent closed to him still looking at him. Dad: looking up as tears rolled down his eyes. In…my,…lap..to…p, he tried talking but couldnt complete his statement before he died. I stood up expressionless, while everyone just stared. I tried to walk but i was becoming weaker and weaker, then i slumped. Mr hilson: tend his wound he said to dr virchaw. He payed martino a visit as both of them talked and laughed. Martino: is your kid ready hilson: smiling# he was quite stubborn, but i fixed him Martino: hahaha we cant afford anymore delay tomorrow we leave for russia to sakhalin island. Hilson: his survival means more money for you, you know he said smiling. Martino: lets propose a toast Hilson: prochnost! They both said in turns and drank the red wine in one gulp. Sakhalin island was one of the russian largest island. That was were the rituals took place, it was called rituals because alot of people died there in the bid to get the deadliest squad. Well bratva rarely holds a ritual, but lately they are running out of capable agents. In other to make this work top members would bring a lad, smart, strong and intelligent for the training. If your lad eventually pulls through and becames one of bratva’s deadly agent, you’ll be granted extra privileges. The doctor finished dressing my wounds while i was unconcious, he decided to watch me for sometime. It felt like i was trapped in a weird dream, i saw myself shooting dad without the slightest hesitation. It felt so real sometimes and other time it feels like a dream. As i ran towards him in my dream with teary eyes, my head was visibly shaken. Me: noooo dad no!!! I yelled as sweats gather up on my face. Virchaw: listening carefully to what he was saying. Thats the loophole he thought, his loved ones, his brain did not forget, them perhaps it only affected, the way he acts around them. The brain is doing that in form of a bad dream, its trying to recall. He exhaled deeply and left. Finally i woke up the next day my brain felt so empty but then the bad dream i had was quite disturbing. Soon my head began to ache again Virchaw: walked in with a black jacket, trouser and a white T-shirt, handed it over to me and led me to the shower. I got in and washed up, i kept experiencing constant flashes, which i couldnt understand. Soon i was ready i was taken to mr hilson, and we flew together with martino and a few others. Mr hilson: how are you feeling roy? Me: great Mr hilson: we are going to sakhalin island, dont die thats an order!! Me: yes boss Mr hilson: its not gonna be easy so get ready. Soon we landed on a sandy and large island. Lots of teenagers about my age stood there in uniform line, they were about 100 and above. Mr hilson: goodluck he said as he walked away with the few boys he came along with, i joined the line. Just then a short asian man came out the tent we stood facing. Man: take of your shirts!!! We took it off and tossed it to the ground. Here in sakhalin you will be forged into weapons!!! You will be made deadlier than 10python’s!!! He yelled. Your training starts now, only the strong will survive!!!! Boys: yea!!! we tall yelled in unison.[color/]
10 Dec 2015 | 16:06
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hmmm..i knew nate dad was once part of dem..uh...hope u survive dis...well done @Paula4eva
10 Dec 2015 | 16:28
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10 Dec 2015 | 16:29
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Platinium table list…..fresh episode @Coolval222-2 @Tenniebenson @Khola46 @Wiseman @Ibrams @Johnysky @Pizzaro @Swtharyomi @Wyse-one @Eddy @Delight @Pweety @Mray @Jummybabe @Babe4biola @Sofia @Ritagold @Kuks @Originalannchilexdel @Fridex @Frank @Frankkay @Simzy @Pheranmmie041 @Temmyjoy @Chriswayne @Evanz @ele1 @dgreat @Itzshaxee @Mecuze @Skookum @Kingson1 @Donmikie @Kingsbest @T-Dak @Charlywizzy @Charliebryn @Hardeywummy @Japhola @Konphido @Emmyrexx @Adura @Tholartee @Nextangel @Blessedgirl @Jenifa @Jclash @Taiwo @Chomyline @Lawman @Tinagabe @Itmrabzeez @Johnoscar @Precy @Timmy @Dabcy @Ikeholuwa1 @Besty @Starlet @Okklad @Angeleniola @Ewomazeal @Mizleemah @Blessfelicity222 @Anitcham @Stephanie @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Rhennyjay @Geeadore @Tiffany1 @Tonia @Hameyeenat @Inemlove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @Vibratingwind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Maurice @Jummy @Thankmic @Christopher @Anita @Phinebraim @Kedike @Kemkit @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Bsam @Portable @Steph @Olaking3 @Harddy @Blakstudd @Prince @Invincible @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Sandy @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @Sexynikky1994 @Youngestprince @Davick @Semilore @Oyindamola @Dhemilade1 @Mature @Pearl @Roes @Franklin @Kolababs @Hollar @Smilie @Borwerleh @Iksqueency @Loveth @Funmilayo1 @Okklad @Nizzy @Flames @Vict-Vames @Peace @Sirp081 @Kristen @Kingsengine @Aaron @Tony @Ruth @Romancelord @Itzshaxee @Olamy4fun @Abrahamdking @Flamerouz @Crusher @Stanny39 @John @Softtouch @Onahsunday631 @Jeddy @Sonshine @Sirgentle @Vizkid @Hoelhay @Pharm- vickymears @Teesolid @Omoyemmy @Olarach @Daxking @Krizzy @Softie @Holarbordah @Ele1 @Firstladyontop @Obaby @Sergentmax @Mhizdaofot @Ariketemmy @Saraya @Eminem @Laurasteve299 @Gambola @Monadisu @Dazzlingangel @Donyas @C-Roderick @Cookey @Isabella1 @Chisomsophia @Mrfabulous @Henry @Mhizzthessy @Millz @Bishops10 @Kreepyink @Olaniyiadeshina @christiana @Aarti @ebube @eminem @gracedkyenny @abednego-precious-7 @chyamaka @desire @pweetyfizzy @PEmamezi @hohluwaseyi @kreepyink @elibabanoni-2 @hoyenikky @tholartee @humblelion @adegunle3gmail-com @shugarlips @iksqueency @hayanfeoluwa @paula4eva @uncleba426 @greg-billz @geeadore @adura @anorexia @everybody ooo
10 Dec 2015 | 16:32
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Survival 4 d fittest
10 Dec 2015 | 16:33
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Yr dads laptop abeg try 2 remember am later wen u get d chance
10 Dec 2015 | 16:36
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tanks @Desire
10 Dec 2015 | 17:28
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Nawa o
10 Dec 2015 | 19:03
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I wonder oooh...
10 Dec 2015 | 22:36
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Nate going against his wish
10 Dec 2015 | 22:42
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What was in the laptop his dad mention. I just hope nate remember
11 Dec 2015 | 01:25
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[color =red]EPISODE 19[/color] [color=black]We were lead into the camp by heavily armed men who sorrounded us like criminals taken for execution, we got in and the gate was shut, inside the camp was a huge training ground, with different weapon, everywere. And a huge beach house with a gallery from which you can get a clear view of what is happening down here. Instructor: from this point delude yourself from thinking you are humans!! Because humans perish on this sand. He said picking up the sand and throwing it at us. Whatever you do here is on my order, you move when i say so, you sit when i say so! defile it, and you pay with your blood. We stood there shirtless as waves of the ocean breeze splashed on our body. The men in black with guns were well protected(covered) they took there various positions, the thought of escape aint no option as you'd be dead before take 2steps. We stood there and it was getting dark, our legs felt heavy but no one dared sit not with 5machines, from the 5watch tower pointing at us, with men positioned like they were ready to fire. It soon became darker and colder, as goose bumps filled our body, we shrinked but no-one left their sport. After a long night, the cloud began to give way for a brighter cloud. Instructor chang came out of his tent again looking at us he smiled. We just stared at him. Chang: your traning starts now. Take a look at that mountain, go and inscribe your names on it and be back before night fall. Your time starts now!!! With my heavy leg i tried to run a few times but stumbled on the sand my wounds werent properly healed, it was begining to hurt too. The only thing that rang in my was its an order. I sprang up again ran swiftly and dived into the sea, i swarm till almost mid-day finally i got to the mountain and a few others were there, some just arriving to, i quickly grabbed a pebble with all my strength i inscribed roy on it. I breath down heavily, i was totally exhausted my arms felt weak but i had to get back, blood oozed out from the the white bandages. As i jumped into the sea again, struggling to swim i looked up and it was still pretty far, i decided to rest abit but i couldnt stay afloat, i was damn too tired, i mustered up more strength, pushed myself harder and harder, i was loosing more blood, finally i was back to the island and it was almost night fall, i tried to run and stumbled over and over again and my blood mixed with the sands, i crawled to were chang is. My body quaked so hard. I look around and saw 4 of the boys had arrived already they laid like dead men on the ground. Chang: hahahaha impressive. That was the last the i remember before i past out. I woke up to see an asian girl, tending my wounds with herbs. I tried standing up. Girl: remain still, she said and went mute again. After awhile she brought food, a disgusting rice that looks over cook. I dont even eat cooked food, it makes wanna puke. But then i was damn to hungry i devoured it like it was a prey. Soon i felt good, my wound didnt hurt a bit. Me: wooow you seemed quite skill at this. Girl: you are given the opportunity to rest, make use of it. She sounded serious so i decided to heed to her advice, i relaxed backwards and slept of. Those weird dreams came again, i woke on intervals and just when it seem like every nerve in my body was about relaxing and feeling good, a huge man pulled me up by the hair like a piece of trash and tossed me on the sand, were others was kneeling, i knelt joined them. I noticed our reduced number too. Sahkalin island day 2 Chang: over there, he pointed at a huge planks that seem like they were just seperated from a huge number of huge tree. Get those planks down here!!! We ran to were the plank was, and there was enough of it to carry. I lifted it with much effort and it seem to possess a weight of 7bags of flour.[color/]
11 Dec 2015 | 02:20
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Gettinq more Interestinq. Next plx.
11 Dec 2015 | 02:56
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Wat of nicholas,ao ll e survive witout u 2?
11 Dec 2015 | 03:41
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[color =red]EPISODE 20[/color] [color=black]After much muscle ripping effort i rested it on my back, resting heavily on both shoulders i quickly supported it with both hands, with squeezed face i bent downwards as the whole weight of the wood rest of me, trying to move, but it was pretty heavily, i dragged my feet, and was moving at a slow pace, it was quite difficult to lift me feet. With all the strenght i could muster. Me: aaaaaarrrrrhhhhh i yelled and speed up my pace with the wood, i was getting towards the point were intructor chang stood. My legs seemed like it couldnt move anymore my face contorted in pains, just a bit more i thought. As dragged my feet on the sand, i couldnt lift them any more, after what seem like years of torture i dropped the log of wood in front of instructor chang and collapsed on the floor. Chang: hahahah well done. He said just then i saw i black american guy with his own log of wood. He facial expression was only that of pains. Soon he got there and dropped it, collapsed on the sand to. While we rested, other joined us, just then a few masked men holding sticks stood in front of us. Chang: smiling bring them down or suffer!!! He yelled at us, pointing at the men. Me: i was suprise how he expected us to fight this men with our current condition. We didnt even move a muscle, we remained on the floor. Like a lightening the men charge towards us, with yells like they were in a battlefield. Hitting us mercilessly with the sticks as we yelled in pains. Chang: raising his hands, and they stopped the assault. Fight or be beaten to death!!! We stood up gradually with bruises from there ferocious attack. The men charge towards us again. Boys: yaaaaaarrrrrrhhhhh!!!!!!! We all yelled and charge towards them too. I jumped on the first guy angrily, as another snatch the stick from his hands while i gave him hard punch gave some gave him hard bite and hits with his stick. The rest of the men seeing our blood shot eyes like carnibals and beast decided to withdraw. Chang: smiling# hahahaha impressive. We did several push ups, carried the log of wood and walked round in a circle. My body cried in dispair, i was weak to the nerves, as we all collapsed in the sand, strength drained out of our bodies. We slept off. SAHKALIN ISLAND DAY 3 we woke up the next day the same rice was brought to us we devoured it in less than a minutes. We looked nothing like humans in just 3day here. Chang: i must say i am impressed, do not feel good about yourself because a good number of you will die here. Today you jog round this island, come back only when its dark. Stopping will not be tolerated. Go now!!! We jogged in uniform line from the shore of the island round the sandy shores. And until mid-day we kept on jogging, my legs felt heavy but i endured. We kept on jogging while some collapsed on the way, soon i and black american dude was at the forefront trying hard not to fall, when we heard a gun shot. I never stopped to look, i knew someone stopped and was killed. Boy: hey am james he managed to say. As we jogged. Me: save your strenght you'll need it alot. It was almost night fall, i did more of staggering than jogging, i began to walk, trying to hold my feet, in other not fall. Just then james fell on the sand. Me: i staggered back and helped him up. And we both staggered back to the camp. To were chang was standing and collapsed at his feet. Chang: looking at us with blood shot eyes. You!! He said pointing at me. Me: looking up to met his gaze. Chang: it is everyman for himself, you defiled that rule. Seize him!!![color/]
11 Dec 2015 | 04:38
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Nna eeeee....... Even iv na soilders dem dey train..... Nxt
11 Dec 2015 | 05:21
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Dis mr chang z not a human at all
11 Dec 2015 | 05:42
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[color =red]EPISODE 21[/color] [color=black]Like a lightening 2 huge men in black picked my up and took in a room that seem like a prison surrounded by bars of iron, cuffed my hands together and hung my hand on an iron bar placed in the middle of the cell, leaving my legs to dance freely. It worsened the pain i was alread feeling. Somehow it seem like the pains was channeled to my brains and the flashes came again, i vibrated violently in bid to clear my head. Suddenly a name popped up in my head, like a whisper, nicholas. Me: nicholas i muttered, the name seemed so familiar, who the hell is nicholas i thought, trying as hard as possible to remember, i soon got tired, bent my head a bit, despite the pains i felt i tried to sleep. After a few days here, i know the only thing i needed was strength. Soon it was bright again and rays of light found its way into the cell, just then i felt a bucket of water emptied on me. Me: waking me up from my miserable sleep, the water intensified the cold i felt but, it was nothing compared to the pain i felt presently. I looked up to see mr hilson standing with instructor chang.. Mr hilson: what was his offence? Chang: he helped his mate. Mr hilson: did you give them a stern warning on that. Chang: i told them not to do anything out of my orders. Mr hilson: smiling# am sure he has already learnt his lesson. Chang: hmm perhaps but i was yet to punish him. Mr hilson: he isnt a hard nut to crack. Roy!! Me: looking up at mr wilson. Mr hilson: apologize to mr chang Me: am sorry i said briefly. Chang: i bet you are, next time you wont be this lucky he said. Imediately the men who hung me there brought me down. I couldnt stand my hands felt heavy like i would never them, after effect from hanging for a long time. They dropped me on the floor and left. ******Joan****** She drove to lisa's house quite early, picked her up and they both drove out. Lisa: so were are we going. Joan: just driving round montoggio. Lisa: thats weird, just driving round?? Is there something you aint telling me? Joan: i just want to drive round. Lisa: i know when you are lying, theres more to this than just driving and i know it. She said smiling Joan: ok fine, am looking for someone i was hoping i'd run into him. Lisa: hahahhaa him!!! Omg joan you are such a bad girl. Joan: smiling we hanged out afew times and now his out of reach i dont know were to find him. Lisa: you hanged out how she asked with raised eye brow and a smirk. Joan: we saw a movie together. Lisa: is he cute?? Joan; nodds Lisa: hahaha omg ok i cant wait to see him too. They drove of looking everywhere, hoping by chance the were gonna see him somewhere around, but there was no trace of him anywere. Lisa: looking at joan like she was crazy. Joan: come on girl i need to find him. Lisa: isnt it what we've been doing for hours now. I mean this is crazy joan, driving round the street hoping to run into some guy. This is leading us no where Joan: i know it isnt but how do i find him. Lisa: am taking you home. *******Nicholas******* he was quite busy with books, its been from class to library's and his free time he hanged out with afew girls. While reading in the library, the thought of nate came to his head. Nicholas: hahhaha he must have been making alot of cool cash by now. Since he's a daddy's boy am sure he wont spare the foods too. He smiled, yea ashley!!! He really wished time runs fasters he wants to see them all. He smiled as he took his eyes back to his book. Just then chloe sat close to him. Choe: why are you smiling??. Nicholas: am just happy thank God you are here. I was just thinking about you he said and she smiled[color/]
11 Dec 2015 | 06:10
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1st 2 comment......dat training is just 2 much
11 Dec 2015 | 06:53
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Getting more interesting
11 Dec 2015 | 06:58
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Ope nate regains all ov hez memories b4 Mr hilson makes him kill sum1 else....... Nxt plssssss
11 Dec 2015 | 07:09
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Which kain training be dis 1
11 Dec 2015 | 07:20
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[color =red]EPISODE 22[/color] [color=black]2WEEKS IN SAHKALIN ISLAND. Everyone was clad in black kaki trousers with numerous pockets, and boots still shirtless, showing our built muscular body's and packs, we were about 50 in number, many died on training ground. Chang: halt!!!! He comanded and we stood at attention, from this point we need only the best of the best. He snapped his hands and 5men came out with japanse martial art attire black cloths and red belts. And we were taught by this skillful men staunts and fight skills non-stop for days. We learnt fighting for another 2weeks, until my body became so accustomed to it. We were taught to use different weapons, chains, knifes, short sticks, long stick, and how to throw daggers. Training continued brutally, lifting of woods, push ups, swimming out of the island and back, runing round the island for days. Our bodies became used to pains and agony. A MONTH IN SAHKALIN ISLAND We stood round in a circular form leaving a large space in our midst, like a battle field. Mr hilson and other members took there sit in the gallery of the beach house to watch the contest. Instructor chang walked into circle. Chang: smiling 2weeks back i told you the best amongst best is needed. You will battle on this sand, and die here until we have human weapons!!! Boys: yeeaaaaah!!! And the drum was hitten hard. The battle began, once your number is called the 2rivals holding those numbers will move to the centre. The battle was quite fierce as we were all trained and skillful but somehow some people manage to over power the other snaping there, necks or punching them hard to death. Chang: 7!!!!! Thats my number. I got to centre, well despite the unhuman traning i was still skiny but muscular with well arranged packs. Then a huge kid joined me in the middle. Just then we heard the sound of the drum. He quickly charge towards me. Like our last instructor said it doesnt matter who is stronger, its about who wins the fight, there is nothing like a fair battle!! So do what you must to win. Those were the word that sang in my head. As he approached me, i deep my feet in the sand and splashed it to his face, he swiftly try to cover his eye like a lightening, i jumped and landed on his shoulders heavily with my kneels causing him to fall backwards and groaning in pain, followed by a hard punch to his gullet, and blood oozed out of his nose and he gaze his last breath. I went back to my position. Martino: hilson this kid of yours is gonna be a great asset you know. Hilson: i knew my 6th sense was never wrong when it chose him. The battle continued and bodies was dragged out like dulls. And soon it came to an end. Chang: hahaha impressive that will be all for today you can have a wonderful rest this contest continues tomorrow. I was about leaving with the others. When the voice came again. Nicholas your brother, this time it echoed, as flashes of myself filled my head, i began to feel drowsy i stopped to catch my breath, my head aches so bad. Everyone went to there sleeping positions on the sand. I got back to the training ground. I had to survive that an order, i stood in front of the stick mannequin, looking at it for a while, i began to hit it and dodge like it had the ablility to fight back, giving it hard kicks and punches. Just then someone gave me a soft tap on the shoulder. I turned swiftly and it was one of our intructors. Yutaro: hmmm you should be sleeping. Me: nodds Yutaro: why are you training so hard!?? Me: it was my lords orders Yutaro: smiling knowing he was placed on hypnosis. If it wasnt an order would you be doing this? Me: i have never thought that way before. I wondered what he meant. I do not have an answer to that. I said sincerely. Yutaro: of course you dont. Whats your name? Me: roy nattan, which came out like an involuntary action, i began to wonder why i said nattan.[color/]
11 Dec 2015 | 07:39
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whattt!!!!
11 Dec 2015 | 07:41
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
11 Dec 2015 | 08:13
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This is getting more interesting and tougher.
11 Dec 2015 | 08:41
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Observing tinz sha
11 Dec 2015 | 08:51
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Chai..u ave suffered alot
11 Dec 2015 | 09:21
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Although nt invited bt am already here, keep it flowing @desire
11 Dec 2015 | 09:29
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@desire u are d greatest and best writer in coolval
11 Dec 2015 | 09:31
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Getting mur interesting
11 Dec 2015 | 09:39
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[color =red]EPISODE 23[/color] [color=black]yutaro: whats wrong?? Me: my name is roy, but nattan why does it feels like my name too. I said with a confused face Yutaro: smiling# soon you will find the answer to your questions why dont you try hitting a real person and see how good it feels. I quickly swing a blow at him, he dodged, sending a backswing kick to my face, i stopped it with my hands, and he quickly gave me a tripple spin kick, i threw myself backwards with a backswing, moving away from his attacks. Yutaro: smiling# impressive but skills doesnt win a fight. Me: then what does?? Yutaro: your head, calculate and predict he said charging towards me, i stretched my legs out forcefully to hit his stomach, he bent backward and my leg was an inch away from hitting his stomach, i sent a punch to his face, he dodged swiftly. Like a lightening he swinged his hands to my face while i dodge it. His left leg followed the attack i caught it in the air. Swiftly he hitting my stomach with his right leg. I staggered back holding my tommy. Yutaro: smiling# you have to be one step ahead of your opponent and only then you can win. I charge towards him with a bicycle kick, he waved it off, then i spinned in the air landing on his shoulders with a heavy kick, causing him to kneel with one leg. He did a back sweep in attempt to remove my other leg from the ground. I jumped, send a punch and akick alongside but it was all a decoy, while he tried blocking it i gave him a hard head butt to his chest and he staggered backwards. Yutaro: smiling# impressive, keep your mind open, aim at the weakest spot of your oponent, which maybe stronger than you. Me: bowing as a sign of respect. He left and i continued my practice, this time using swords on the mannequin. Soon i was exhausted i walked back to sand were we slept. And slept of, when the flashes came again, but was more severe and real this time. Giving me more aches in the head. Soon it was dawn and the drum beats was head, we rushed to the battle ground to see instructor chang there already. Mr hilson and his friends sitted already on the gallery. Chang: smiling# its time, pick your numbers!! We walked to the box were some numbers are kept. This time i was number 14. We all gathered round in a circle as usual and james was the first to begin. After a long bloody battle james narrowly won. The contest went on bloodier this time. And soon it got to my turn. I walked into the circle. And my oponent walked in to, we did the hitting and blocking thing for a while, i knew he was quite skillful. We both moved backwards to study each other closely, just then my head began to ache again and does weird flashes were coming back again i staggered backwards, trying to recover as fast as i could, when i felt a hard punch on my cheek, blood spilled out of my mouth, the ache in my head seemed to be aggraviated. Mr hilson: something is wrong with him, they have to stop this contest!!. Martino: you know thats not possible hilson. Tapping him on the shoulders, it cant be helped. The first punch was followed by several punches causing my nose to bleed too, this time the ache was head ripping just like when i was being tortured. I shut my eyes tight holding my head. The flashes was no more short-lived once, it was more detailed and precise, i could see my dad and my brother. And then i saw myself shoot dad and watched him bleed to death. He gave me a hard kick as i rolled on the floor. Me: me noo dad you cant die i muttered in pains, not from the punches. He was on me again, raining consecutive punches on my face. He stood up and everyone began to chant. Boys: kill him!! Kill him!![color/]
11 Dec 2015 | 09:44
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@ritzzy r u here?
11 Dec 2015 | 10:20
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Abeg nxt update joor...........
11 Dec 2015 | 10:59
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Oh no...pls,spare his life
11 Dec 2015 | 11:03
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[color =red]EPISODE 24[/color] [color=black]As blood oozed out of my nose and mouth, i was begining to remember my own name and my dads name too, my head was begining to feel lighter and lighter the aching stopped, i found my self on the ground as everyone was chanting kill him!!, i looked at my opponent who was walking majestically towards me, he pulled me up. Boy: smiling# perhaps you should tell me your name before, you die. He said with a grin. Me: i spat out the blood in my mouth. Smiling# nattan ricardo i said, in one swift movement i twisted his arm, moved behind him and snapped his neck leaving to collapse on the sand. I turned to see suprise written on the face of everyone. I moved back to my position and soon the contest was done and our wounds were treated. I walked close to the sea looking at my reflection. Washed my face, as i thought of nicholas. I was begining to realize its wasnt just a flash it was a reminder. I actually killed dad with my own hands, tears gather up in my eyes. Just then i remembered he was saying something about his laptop before he died. Me: i have to survive this, i have to see my brother again. I thought as i walked back to the camp. There were only 8 of us left, contest continues tomorrow. Just then 2men came around and excorted to me into the beach house well furnish with white sofa's, the air here feels so warm have never felt such warmth for weeks now, and it did feels good. Then mr hilson came down. Mr hilson: roy have a seat Me: seating down Mr hilson: you have impressed me so far with your skills but perhaps you need more inspiration than just an order to pull through, he said and handed a photo over to me. A cute fair girl with an oval face, curvy eye brows and a dark hair, with small red lips. Me: i quickly recognised her omg!! Ashley!! I thought. I maintained a composed look. She looks familiar i said briefly. Mr hilson: shes pretty right?? She was your friend. Win and you will get to see her again i'll see to that. Me: yes sire. I said and left, i got back to the training ground trained even more harder, i tried to compose i few special attack i could use to bring down my oponent quickly. I got back to the field were we slept. The drum beat came again. We rushed out and stood in a straight line facing the instructor chang. Chang: its remaining just 8 of you, at the end of today only 2 will remain standing. The drum was beaten, and the first oponents, stepped forward. Two knives was pinned to the ground one on the right and the other on the left, they did a hand battle for awhile, and later picked up both knives, they fought without restraint, after a bloody fight one of them stabbed the other, and just before he fell to the ground he reciprocated the stabbing. And they both bled out. I was next, i stepped out and my oponent joined my me, he was giving 2 short pipes and i was given an iron chain. We picked our weapons and charge toward each other, fought for a very long time, his defensive tactics was excellent. We both moved back breathing heavily. Just then i remembered what yutaro said go for weak spot. Looking at his short pipes its practically impossible to defend his leg with it, i charge towards him, swung the chain to his face and he wave it off, i quickly swinged it to his legs. He tried blocking it but the chain wrapped round his legs firmly, i pulled his legs out of the ground, as he lost balance in the air, i gave him a bicycle kick, he crashed hard on the ground with a loud thud. He tried to stand quickly, i swung the chain, wrapping round his neck firmly. I pulled it hard on the chain as i choked him to death. He collapsed on the sand.[color/]
11 Dec 2015 | 11:34
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Confirm i like as u take remember every body even ya dads laptop nd dat ur composed face
11 Dec 2015 | 11:47
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Hmmm...still following. I rilli love d turn-out. I hope Nattan survives dis.. Next plss @paula4eva
11 Dec 2015 | 11:57
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Bicycle kick ko! Dat is Lui Keng best skills in Mortal combat. . . . Uhm Dis is sounding like this moving titled "Nicked Weapon" by Angelina jolie. Enjoying evry dime of itzm Continue pls.
11 Dec 2015 | 12:06
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Oh nattan
11 Dec 2015 | 12:08
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Tank God u can rmb tins now,bt dont show dem dat u knw who u truely are...
11 Dec 2015 | 12:16
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Am so loving dis story
11 Dec 2015 | 13:28
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Hmmmn,9c move
11 Dec 2015 | 13:34
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Mehn! Vhiz is somethinq else. Thank God u remember the vitals. U must survive vhiz by all cost.
11 Dec 2015 | 13:38
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[color =red]EPISOD[E 25[/color] [color=black]James battled hard with his oponent, for quite a long time with there bare hands, soon, his oponent over powered him, gaving him hard hits and kicks, he stumbled over on the sand, he recovered quickly launching attacks angrily at his oponent, but his oponent was smarter, he dodged and block all his violent attacks and gave him a hard kick to his tommy which made him fall to the ground gasping for air, like a flash he went on top of him, raining disfiguring blows on him, just then he stood up, looking around thinking james would be down for long, with all the strenght james could muster he move silently behind him, grabbing his neck angrily, and roared as his squeezed life out of him. The last contestant fought and one dropped dead too. Making us 3 Chang: hahaha impressive but i need just 2 agents. Get ready to fight until one of you dropped deads. James: closing his eyes tightly in dispair he sustained more injury than any of us. We all stepped out, james gaze met the other guy's gaze and they both nodded there head in unison, like an agreement and they charge towards me yelling. My survival was the only chance i had to be with the only family i had left, i stood my ground ready as they approached, i splashed sands to there faces, i charged so aggressively at them giving james finishing kicked, and kicking the other guy hard in the mouth at the same time. And they both stumbled backwards on the ground, i retreated calculating my next moves with blood shot eyes. I didnt care i was ready to kill them both, if it gets down to it. They both recovered from my attack, seeing i was quite ready, they decided to split up. They moved around me and i remained still, as i watch them closely, james seemed weak to me, he feet seemed weak too. As they charged towards me i jumped pretty high landing on there shoulders with my legs wild open causing there kneels to touch the ground. James quickly pulled my legs trying to toss me over, i spinned in the air landing behind him, and grabbing his neck as the other guy came foward for an attack i suspended my right legs close to his gullet, i he stood like he already surrendered. I was about snapping james neck when i heard the drum. Chang: smiling that enough the overlord wants all 3 of you. James collapsed on the ground in relief. I sat on the sand as they both stared at me like i was crazy. We showered in the beach house, gave us thick black bullet proof outfit that gripped our body perfectly and glooves too, we were given good food and wine for the first time in weeks i was eating yorksire puddings again and sponge. With a nice wine, i saw smiles on the face of james and the other guy who introduced himself as romeo. Like they were conquerors, i just ate in silent. Romeo: you dont seem like the talking type agent roy. Me: just smile and nod, all i wanted was to get off this island and see nicholas. Soon we were off the island, and was taken to the overlord. We were given assignments immediately. I was to assasinate john walter who lived in new orleans, like mr hilson said i was not to concern myself with the crimes he committed. His location was given to me, i got there as soon as possible, his house had numerous guards, i got in through the roof and slit his throat, and i was out unoticed. In russia we we did a few training too with guns and computerised devises which i perfected in just 2weeks. And then i was back to genova. Clad in black shiny tux looking cuter and harmless anyone would want to believe i wouldnt hurt a fly. I got into the house which was still in the state we left it. The fact that i was the one who killed dad made my eyes teary as i sat on the floor in dispair, the pain in my heart was more than any have ever felt. I put the credit card and laptop into the bag i came with. Just then i saw a note under it.[color/]
11 Dec 2015 | 13:59
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Nxt oooooo...... Datz y I lyk u xo mch compared 2 other writers @desire....... C as u dy throw n updates...... Episode afta episode....... Making d ppl reading it 2 b addicted 2 d story....... Thumbs up joor, itz nt easy @desire....... Nxt
11 Dec 2015 | 14:12
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Eeya.......wat explanation wud u gv 2 nicholas abt ur dad?
11 Dec 2015 | 14:38
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The suspense is the story. I love the suspense, i love the story. @paula4eva you dy behave like ROY NATHAN... Always on point.
11 Dec 2015 | 14:56
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@paula4eva if u were a lady i for marry u , i like hw u post ur stories. keep it up bro
11 Dec 2015 | 15:07
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Good to know u'r back home n just hope u go thru ur dad laptop before is too late
11 Dec 2015 | 15:11
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[color =red]EPISODE 26[/color] [color=black]Looking at the paper for awhile i decided to see its content. I picked it up[/color] [color =red]I knew somehow one day you would be reading this letter, i knew bullets are impossible to stop, but i was willing to try, even when i knew it means putting my life on the line. Times and seasons has passed nate, but my hearts hurts more thinking i kept you and your brother in the dark for a very long time. I am not your biological father watching you boys grow under my watch. I really wanted be a father to you guys. If only i was a bit rich, things wouldnt be the way day are now. I have more detailed information in my laptop, i hope you find out who your real parents. That is all this jerk you call a dad can do for you. I love you both and i always will.[/color] [color=black]I was so shocked at what i just read, i read it over over again as tears filled my eyes. Me: noooo you are my dad and you always will i said amidst sobs, i sat still for a while muttering i still love you dad with teary eyes. Just then i gained composure again, packed a few things which will be useful to me later. Gather dads things to get rid of them when a saw a black cloth which was hidden and a pistol too. I was a bit shocked but have stayed in here for too long. I did what i have to do quickly and got out of the house. And headed straight to genova's college, were nicholas was admitted, i was directed to his room and luckily i found him. On seeing me he quickly gave me a hard hug. Nicholas: woooow look at you hahaha i smell money already. Me: hahaha money aint a problem anymore man. Nicholas: seriously!!!!! He said as his eyes opened wild. So you've gotten a better a job he said smiling. Me: smiles# yes am no longer a luggage carrier. Nicholas: and ashley have you heard from her lately Me: i was away for like a month i just came into genova to see you, i'll see her before leaving. Nicholas: he hugged me again, men!!!! I knew am gonna have the wildest fun in college, money is a natural fuel for fun you know, Me: speaking of money, uhmm have this, i said giving the credit card to him. Nicholas: how much is in here?? He asked smiling. Me: guess?? Nicholas: 100dollars, he said smiling Me: 500thousand pounds. Nicholas: what!!! Can you say that again. Me: staring at him, i really have to hurry ok. And nate get a new house that fits your current status and a phone too, call me i said writting my number out for him. Nicholas: a new house he asked with a confused look, what about dad?? Me: oooh dad i said smiling nervously he is on a business trip in san francisco, he will be away for a while. Am sure thats quite enough money to fuel your fun i said smiling. Nicholas: more than you can possibly imagine. Me: ok then i have to hurry, there are other appointments i have to keep ok?. If you need anything call me, or prefferably if you think you need anything just call me ok. Nicholas: wooow you are the best nate. He said smiling. Me: alright then byeee!! I got out, went straight to a car factory, bought a black shinny 2015 camry with opaque glasses. I drove down to the supermarket were stared at ashley from my car through the transparent glass, she seemed alright. I brought out my ipad, using the names search, i search for ashley, a few number of ashley popped up. I looked closed at ashley davis her face look so much her, looking into her profile she had just a brother who was currently hospitalised in ospedale centralino hospitals, he needed a bone marrow transplant, currently his placed in alife sustaining machine hoping his sister will come up with the money. I quickly drove down to centralino hospitals and cleared the bills, while operation commenced immediately.[color/]
11 Dec 2015 | 16:40
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Mr hilson may really be your father nate.
11 Dec 2015 | 16:51
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Wow! U are alive, im happy for u still remember everything. Nice job @desire
11 Dec 2015 | 16:56
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Is dat jerk ur dad?
11 Dec 2015 | 16:59
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Mr hilson might u guyz real father oooo....... Nxt abeg ooooo
11 Dec 2015 | 17:23
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
11 Dec 2015 | 17:35
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Nawaoh thank God u made it out alive.
11 Dec 2015 | 17:44
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[color =red]EPISODE 27[/color] [color=black]I sat in the reception legs crossed waiting patiently as the operation was carried out, checking my time at intervals. Nicholas seem so happy really i dont think i could tell him i shot dad and watched him bleed to death, i think thats a secret i'll have to keep to myself. I have to keep my distance too, i dont want him mixed up with all this. Am sure mr hilson doesnt know about my twin and i intend to keep it that way. After along hour of waiting the doctor came to the reception. Doctor: congratulations mr ricardo, the operation was successful, the boy will be awake before night fall. Me: thank you i said smiling i drove back to the store and watch ashley work as usual, till it was becoming dark and finally she was done she shut the doors. I sat still resisting the urge to give her a ride, she went to the hospital, from work the debt was increasing by the day, the insurance company had stopped paying. She got to the hospital only to see her brother sitting in the reception with a can of smoothies which he sipped from. Ashley: williams!!!!! She yelled as he ran towards her in a hug. I walked into the hospital and watch as the drama unfold. Doctor: smiling# you are quite lucky. Ashley: whats going on doctor she asked smiling. Doctor: a young man walked in earlier today and cleared all the bills, including the sugery, all you need to do is sign here and you can go home with him. Ashley: oooh my God she said smiling as she held her mouth in amazement she quickly signed. Plsss may i know the name of this young man atleast. Doctor: oooh yes sure!!! Mr nattan ricardo. Ashley: nattan??? She thought, she doesnt eveb know his last name like he doesnt know hers but his the only person she knew bearing such names. I walked back to my car. Soon they came out boarding a cab happily back to her weird house. The cab man dropped them in front of the building and drove off. Just then 2men descended from the stairs they were about climbing blocking her part and two others came from behind. Man: smiling were is my money??? Ashley: i'll get your money plsss just be alittle more patient. Man: hahahah am done being patient girl. The 2men behind her grabbed both of hands, stretching them and pinned her to the wall. William: what are you doing let go of my sister!!!! He pulled the man's arm forcifully and the other guy held him. Ashley: i promised i'll get you the money, she said looking scared. Man: hahaha i dont want the money anymore, he said as he press forward towards her, making sure his body make contact with hers. As he carressed her ass. Ashley: trembling, this time crying plssss let me go i'll get you your money as soon as possible. Man: sssssshhhh dont worry he whispered as he slowly unbottoned her shirt, exposing the top part of her boobs, just then two daggers pierced the heart of the 2men holding her hands, she quickly pulled williams and ran upstairs to her rooms. The 2men watch in horror as there men bled to death. Me: i turned on my headlights, they tried covering there eyes prevent the blinding rays of the light from entering there eyes. Then i stepped in the midst of the light giving them a shadowy reflection of me. Me: dont you ever bother her again!!!!! Man: the one who held williams, who are you to tell us what to do!!! I threw another daggered which was stucked in his throat as he bled out. Me: do you still not take others from me??? Man: no no no no not at all we wont bother her ever again. I got into my car and drove off.[color/]
11 Dec 2015 | 18:00
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Loving dis story pls continue ooo, dis story is a bomb @mr@desire
11 Dec 2015 | 18:26
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Y hiding from her na
11 Dec 2015 | 19:21
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Ashley is really lucky nate is around, God know what would av apen
11 Dec 2015 | 23:16
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@desire,u er d best......ashley jst tank God nate was around
12 Dec 2015 | 00:48
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Ashley.... Y are lucky Nate was aroun..... thank God u still remember everything DAT hapn b4 dey took u
12 Dec 2015 | 00:59
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Tnx u dnt forget ur loving ones @nate
12 Dec 2015 | 01:56
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Hummm, such a lucky girl! If not for Nattan we wont be saying this
12 Dec 2015 | 02:06
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What will happen next
12 Dec 2015 | 02:12
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U re doing a gud job nattan.....dnt show ur face 2 ashley nd distance urself 4rm nicholas
12 Dec 2015 | 02:17
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[color =red]EPISODE 28[/color] [color=black]I passed the night in ahotel, at dawn i drove to the bank waited for a bit, while they searched for an account name with ashley davis, after a long search it was found. I handed my card over to the female attendant. Attendant: sir how much would you like to transfer. Me: a million dollar will do. Attendant: shocked# am on it. Me: thank you i said with a smile, and soon my card was handed over to me. Attendant: your name and signature plsss Me: i collected the pen and wrote down mr ricardo on it. Followed by my signature. This person is gonna come by to confirm this money as a mistake. I said looking at her Attendant: looking confused# ok?? Me: just tell her its from mr ricardo. If she persist tell the transfer cannot be reversed ok? Attendant: ok sir she said smiling. I handed over a few notes to her and was of. I went back to my hotel and shut the door to my room. Brought out dads laptop, scanning through his documents. Which contain lots of secret information. Soon i got to a file with the name MY CONFESSION written boldly. *******Nicholas****** this was the happiest day in his life he couldnt wait to get rent a cozy house in lexington, that night he had a wonderful sleep. Waking up the next in an unusual happy mode, as everyone stared at him like he was crazy. He walked to his class and few friend, tried to find out, why he was unusually happy today. But he replied only with a loud laughter. Kloe: tapping him on the shoulder, she sat close to him. Nicholas: turned to see chloe with a broad smile, how was your night beautiful?? Chloe: are you alright..... The word were still in her mouth when he kissed her. Nicholas: breaking from the kiss chloe: stood up angrily and walked out of the class, nicholas quickly followed her quickly in other to apologize. She noticed he was still following her, so headed to the rest room which was totally isolated as this point in time. Like a flashed she grabbed him, he thought she was going to hit him. He shut his eyes and the next he felt was her lips on his, not a punch, slap or kick. He quickly replied the kisses both hands journeyed around there body. Chloe: breaking from the kiss she smile, winked at him and left. Nicholas: still shocked# hahaha omg what is wrong with me!!. ******ashley****** She was so terrified she ran into house crying out her eyes. She was scared of leaving the house to work the next. She replayed the nights event in her head from the point where two daggers pierced the heart of the 2men who held her hands. Like a serial killer movie, her fears was intensified, it could have been her she thought. She watch her lovely brother sleep peacefully, as she curled up, i hair scattered. Soon it dawned, she was too scared to go to work. Just then her phone beeped. It was a transfer message of a million dollar to her credit card. Ashley: whats going on i dont understand any of this she said with suprise on her. After a while a thought popped up in her head, if this is true, then i should rent a safe house in casella. No i have to confirm it. She got dressed, and was out with williams to the bank, they confirmed the money was payed earlier to by mr ricardo. Ashley: did he leave any address, mail or number i could contact him with??. She asked Attendant: not at all. She left wondering if it was the same nattan ricardo or perhaps another one, it was a bit confusing and the money is quite huge. Well we'd find out later, she boarded a cab to casella and rented a well furnished house in a safe environment, they sneaked back to there house, picked up important items, they'd be need and was out of montoggio for good!.[/color]
12 Dec 2015 | 02:20
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Getting more intereting
12 Dec 2015 | 02:55
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At last i have catch up with dis story....
12 Dec 2015 | 03:37
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Interesting
12 Dec 2015 | 04:14
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U are realy a nice person nattan
12 Dec 2015 | 04:19
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Hmmm following @paula4eva ride on
12 Dec 2015 | 04:23
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[color =red]EPISODE 29[/color] [b]Just when i was about to open it my phone rang. Mr hilson: meet me by 4pm today Me: yes boss. I clicked it open and began to read through it content.[/b] I know somehow my son, someday you'll be reading this. I am sorry you i couldnt tell you this any sooner, i know after reading this your are gonna hate me but you deserve to know. I was actually among the gang who snatch you and you brother from the nanny who took care of you both. I was suposed to get rid of by drawning you bought in tha atlantic ocean. I know i have no excuse for my crimes but lossing my sister to bratva drove me mad!! I sought for revenge through any means possible, when my friend lucas, took me lenardo who was there gang leader. I told him explained everything to him leaving no details, also telling him about my desires for revenge. He gave me his word, that he was gonna help me bring down bratva on the condition i would have to join him. I agreed to his terms. Months later after a few training, i did my best for him, i even killed for him. Its been 7years and all he did was give commands, falling to keep his own end of the deal. I talked to him about him, he finally opened up, even the government cannot bring down bratva. But i'd help get your revenge on the man who took your sister he assured. I have just one more task for you, the boys will deliver 2babies to you, get rid of them. I was infront of the atlantic ocean. Its been 7whole years now, and my desire for revenge was begining to wear off. Looking at the 2cute babies, i decided to start a new life with them and be a father to them. I do not know who there real father was. But i think lenardo alvariz does. Am gonna help you find your real parents, i promise. [color=black]Tears filled my eyes i was speechless, why didnt he say this earlier, why did he keep all this to himself. All those thought ran through my head. Inspite all that i couldnt hate him, because thou he wasnt my dad but he died protecting, i really wished he wasnt dead. My heart ached so hard realising i loved him more, i knew he loved us so much. At this point i really didnt want a real father, i would give anything to see him again. I went through his files and found out lenardo alvariz moved out of genoa to russia. I have to find him i just wanted to see what my parents looked like. I showered, and was dressed in black tux again arranging my hair. I got out of the hotel with my bag. Drove to the mall, walked in, collecting a few cans of soda i really needed to taste them again after what seem like a very long time. I grabbed a few and walked towards the exit. While i descended down the mini stair in front of the mall i saw joan, alighting from her car with another girl. Just then her eyes found me. Joan: looking like she had seen a ghost, omg nate!!! I eye opened wild in suprised. I stood there looking right in her eyes, and she did thesame, as people walked passed me, going in and coming out. Lisa: joan are you alright what are you staring at??. Joan: she took her gaze from me. Lisa the guy i told you i was looking for, thats him over there. She said pointing in the direction were i previously stood. Lisa: there nobody there! She said looking at her like are you sure you are ok?. Joan: he was right there a while ago i saw him!!!. Lisa: its ok joan she said hugging her, i know you saw him but that doesnt mean he was there. Joan: am not hallucinating lisa!! am not, he was standing right there. Lisa: yea and now his gone i believe you come on lets go grab what we came for. I was in my car watching, as they walked into they mall i drove down to mr hilson's house.[color/]
12 Dec 2015 | 05:16
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Hmmm......following
12 Dec 2015 | 05:28
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observing
12 Dec 2015 | 06:01
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Loving every bit of this story.
12 Dec 2015 | 06:21
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Loving dis story every minutes every day tanx @desire
12 Dec 2015 | 06:26
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I dnt rili knw wat 2 comment....bt am pretty sure u ll bring bratva down @nattan.....weldone job @paula4eva
12 Dec 2015 | 06:34
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Following
12 Dec 2015 | 06:36
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m confused
12 Dec 2015 | 06:41
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[color=red]EPISODE 30[/color] [color=black]The question which yutaro asked me back then on sahkalin island. If it wasnt an other will you be doing this, it made alot of sense to me but i still havent had an answer to it. I remembered the face of the man who tortured me, but why is really what i do not know. I got to mr hilson's house. Climbed up to his seating room to see james and romeo, i took my sit too. Mr hilson: the overlord wants the 3 of you to infiltrate gulag and free bratva's deadliest agent. Scorpio well known as death stings. Romeo: details???. Mr hilson: snapping his finger as sly came in with a blueprint of gulag. Sly: there are only 3ways to get in, either as a hostage, as guard, or take out the two men at the radio tower and sneak in. Me: sneaking sounds better. He gave us the necessary details. Mr hilson: you leave for russia tonight. James: how about we destroy it and retreive the package. Mr hilson: hahahah i like you spirit, just do what you must ok, our concern is to get the package. Me: looking at mr hilson i knew this mission was not going to be an easy one, otherwise, it would have been left to one of us. Holding a man as deadly as we are or even deadlier its feel a bit weird too but its an order. Mr hilson: like he saw my thought he just nods. Me: i returned the nod. I got clad in my black bullet proof outfit that fitted me perfectly, with huge boots containing 3 daggers each making it 6, 2shealth hunged on my back crossing each other in a X sign, with extremely sharp eyes in them. Open a box with guns of different sizes. I pick 2 automated pistols putting them in my rear pockets. Soon we were ready. We got into the helicopter and soon we were in russia a few miles away from gulag. With a listening device in our ears. We took out the two guys on the radio tower noisely. Soon we got in, and moved through the long passage to the underground cell and soon we go to the steel iron cell, well barricaded like the on in the blueprint. They stood guard as i overided the lockcode and soon the iron walls open and we got in to see agent scorpio still surrounded by bars of iron, he remained still the way he was. James: incoming intruder, stand down!! We quickly closed the steel wall and hid, while the patrol guard walked around looking at only God knows what. After a long while he left. Me: the iron bars are impregnable. Romeo: copy. Me: james put sly on!! Jame: sly we are on stand still. Sly: whats the current position. James: the iron bar are with numerous locks. Sly: ok am on it, he punched a few key and a video of gulag popped up, the key was in the guards room. James the locks can only be undone in the old fashion way. Key is with the head of guard. James: copy!! Key is with the head guard. Romeo: lets do this. Me: i was behind as they sneaked to the guards room, taking out a few guards on the way noiselessly. Clearing the way. Romeo: roy get the keys. I sneaked in to see the head guard sleeping i twisted his neck, and positioned him the was he was. Grabbed the keys and got out, romeo and james arranged the body of the guards like they were sleeping. We went back open the steel wall i quickly entered why they stood guard. With the bunch of keys i tried opening the first lock, moved to the next, opened it too, i kept opening soon i was on the last lock, i tried but it refused to open i quickly tried all keys and finally it snapped opened. I got in unlocked the cuffs on his hands, his hair were over grown covering his face but he look pretty dangerous. I unlocked his feet and he stood up, as we walk out through the steel door. Just then i saw guards pointing guns at romeo and james as they pointed back. Then a man stepped forward. Man: hahahah we've been expecting you guys.[color/]
12 Dec 2015 | 07:36
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uh...following...welldone @Desire
12 Dec 2015 | 07:46
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Nice one @desire
12 Dec 2015 | 07:57
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[color =red]EPISODE 31[/color] [color=black]Man: this is the end of the road for all of you he said with a smile. Me: looking at scorpio, he nodded his head slightly. I got the message. Scorpio: like a lightening he drew of one of my pistols shooting at the guard, i collected the other and joined the shooting, romeo and james gave there special attacks knocking the men out, we knew we've drawn alot of attentions, we quickly picked the machine guns the guards came down with, dropping bodies everywere we passed as we ran out to were i our helicopter was. We got in and off we went. We were back to genova when it was almost mid-day. Mr hilson: hahhaha agent scorpio. Scorpio: its been a while. Mr hilson: its good to have you back you know. They both walk into his house, i got into my car and drove of. I knew the cash will be transfered to my account before 24 hours. I got back to my hotel, i need to go insearch of lenardo, i know it will take a while. I had to let nicholas know, dad was dead, and ashley i wanted her to be as independent as possible. I was about going into the shower when my phone rang. Nicholas: hello nate Me: nicholas how you doing. Nicholas: am super hot man! Me: uhmmm i have something i need to discuss with you, lets talk it over launch. Nicholas: ok were are we meeting?? Me: i'll pick you up Nicholas: alright then. I collapsed on my bed and slept of. And soon it dawned again, i got out and drove down to casella' to see were ashley stays. It was quite wonderful just for the house alone in a few years she'll be running out of cash. I really didnt know how i was suposed to help secretly. I drove done college of genova to pick nic. Nicholas: woooow he is so beautiful, he said touching the car. Me: actually its a she! Nicholas: hahaha whatever, he got in and we drove down to a spanish restaurant. Me: handing over the menu to him as he placed an order Nicholas: so what is it you wanted to tell me. Me: dad is dead!!! Nicholas: hahahaa you are pulling my legs right now right?? Me: am aint kidding you man, he was involved in a plane crash. Nicholas: oooh my God i dont believe you nate, he said with teary eyes, i still have to show him how good i was with my books, i wanted to show him my good grades!!! Plsss tell me its all a joke. Me: i tapped him on the shoulder, i felt bad about lying to him, but then i knew i had no choice. He cried for quite a long time and then he gained composure. Nicholas: you are the only family i have left. Take good care of yourself nate. Me: smiling softly. Actually i'll be leaving genova for a very long time, i'll be back before your graduation day ok. He tried eating alittle bit and then i drove him back to school. I drove back to casella, knocking on ashley's door. I heard her sang am coming!!! Ashley: opening the door smiling seeing no one but a credit card and a note on the floor. She picked it up amazed. Ashley i know you aint used to people taking care of you, but i really want to look after you. Plsss make use this credit card and be richer, am sure you can build your big dreams with its content. Ashley: nattan!!!! She ran out to the road, hoping to see him but she saw no one, as tears flowed freely from her eyes. She really wanted to apologize. Soon she went back inside. I drove back to my hotel, thats the best i could do for her, all that is left is the hope that things would change for the better. I went into my hotel packed my stuffs, i'll be leaving quite early for the airport tomorrow. I needed no delay *******Ashley******* She walked back into the house with tears in her eyes. She wished she came out earlier, she would have atleast seen the person. She knew deep down it was nattan but she was so unsure, nattan wasnt this rich.[/color]
12 Dec 2015 | 08:52
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Oh sorry she don't know he is rich now
12 Dec 2015 | 09:38
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Ride on....
12 Dec 2015 | 09:54
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[color =red]EPISODE 32[/color] [color=black]Finally i arrived in russia, and for months now have been on the hunt for alvariz, every details i found out, still brings me to the fact that he was in russia. He seemed to be hiding pretty well. I decided to find help. I called sly and he did a few punching on his keyboard. Sly: roy he is not in russia, from the signal am picking he is in new orleans, in louisiana precisely. Me: thanks man. I moved down to new orleans, lodged in a hotel in louisiana. I continued my search from here, after a long day i decided to eat launch in the nearest eatery. I walked, just then my eyes fell on a cute looking fair complexioned girl with cute long black hair and a smooth long face. Me: hello pretty i said sitting opposite her. Girl: giving a friendly smile. Me: am nattan but my friends call me roy, and closer friends calls me nate. I said winking Girl: smiling am sophia Me: uhmm you seem to be waiting for someone. Girl: yeah, i have a blind date and you?? Me: i was abit hungry so i stopped by to refill. Girl: uhmm you dont look hungry. Me: hahaha seeing you i totally forget i came to eat. Well i think am on a blind date too. Sophia: hahhaa stop joking!! Me: you have a pretty smile too, i'd love to hang out with you some other time, more like date but not a blind one you know. I said hand my phone over to her and she punched her numbers into it. Sophia: there you go. We ate and chatted for a while. Then i went back to the hotel. After weeks of unfruitful search i decided to call sly again he gave me the name of the street frenchman. As i drove down there i noticed a 2 car speed past me. Something didnt seem right, i decided to follow them slowly as they drove down to frenchman street, soon we got there and they parked in front of a huge house and mr hilson's men came down. Me: shit!!!! Sly told him, they were 8, i quickly took 8daggers from my box of dagger in the trunk, with me. Followed from behind into the house as they seized alvariz and taped him to a chair, while his wife and daughter cried. I quickly wore a mask as watched closely as to know what they wanted to do with him. Man: what connection do you have with the ricardos!!! Alvariz: staring at them, he didnt seem scared at all. Me: hmmm mr hilson wanted details of my dealings, i was confused about why?? i wondered. Just then one of the men opened a brief case in which there was knife and scissors of different sizes and shape. Realizing they were about to make him tell them. I walked in. Me: stay away from him, the wife and daughter just stared me like i was there saviour, well i hope so. Man: we dont take others from strangers get him, i threw 4daggers at the same time and it pierced there hearts, as they dropped slowly on the ground. Me: you can answer my question or attack me again the choice is yours, i still have 4daggers left, which is just enough to take out all 4 of you, i said smiling. Just then one of the men tried bringing out his gun and i stuck the next dagger on his fore head. Me: next plsss i said sarcastically, as everyone looked at me in fear. Man: mr hilson sent us to know why agent roy is looking for lenardo alvariz. Me: and then??. Man: report back to him, he's gonna tell us what to do with him. Hearing something negative about him made my brains ached again, like it was trying to remember something. As i held my head and staggered backward another man rushed to pick the gun on the floor. I quickly threw a dagger at him, which got stuck in his right eyes as he screamed in pains[color/]
12 Dec 2015 | 10:30
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Getting more serious than i tot
12 Dec 2015 | 11:18
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[color =red]EPISODE 33[/color] [color=black]*****nicholas***** When ever he thought of his dad its still feels like he was still on the business trip in san francisco and one day he was gonna return home, perhaps nattan was wrong, what if he wasnt in that plane. For months now those were the lie he told himself knowing deep down he was running away from the truth. During his summer break he went down to casella' to pay a suprise visit to tim and andre who stayed in the neighbourhood. Just then he saw ashley. Nicholas: ashley!!!!! Ashley: turning to see who, he eyes found nattan she ran, jumping on him and they hugged each other tightly. Nicholas: were have you been. Ashley: you are nattan right? Nicholas: no am nicholas, its so good to see you. Ashley: smiling# yea i thought i would never see you again you know. Nicholas: am glad to disapoint you. They both walked into her house talking like old times. Well nicholas was still as funny as he was back then and they blended quickly again. She brought launch and they all ate. As they discussed he played soccer with williams. Nicholas: hmmm i think i kinda like it here. Ashley: hahah yea its calm and safe. Nicholas: i'll have to rent a house here. He said smiling Ashley: hahah are you sure its because of the serene environment. Nicholas: smiling uhmm and you ofcourse my long lost crush. *****Nattan****** while he cried he pains i threw another dagger and it plunged into his gullets, he dropped death. The next man, quickly picked a dagger rushing towards alvariz with it, i threw the last dagger and it pierced through his hands, he screamed dropping his dagger. As the last man run towards me to attack, i dodge swiftly and snapped his neck. Walking towards the other guy Man: plssss spare me, i was only acting on orders, he begged. Me; smiling am sorry i dont take hostages, i picked the gun and shot him thrice. Then i turned facing lenardo alvariz. Me: removing the mask, i am nattan ricardo son of ricardo rodriguez. Alvariz: shocked# ricardo never married how......just then he recalled, so what can i do for you he asked more composely. His wife and daughter looking suprised. Just then i heard my name. Sophia: nate!!!!! Mrs alvariz: you know him she asked in suprised, while sophia just nods. Me: i turned and saw sophia. Sophia!! What are doing here??? Sophia: this is my house and thats my dad. Me: looking at alvariz i smiled uhmm it seemed the atmosphere is a bit friendly i loosed him. As we sat on the couch to talk like long time friends. Alvariz: so what can i do for you. Me: well you gave ricardo 2little boys to get rid of a long time ago. Alvariz: i remember. Me: i am one of the boys. Alvariz: i saw frightened look on his face. Perhaps he thinks his karma had arrived Me: uhmm no need to be scared i just need you to answer a few questions ok? Alvariz: ok i hope i have answers to your question nattan. Me: smiling am sure you do, first i wanna know who my real parents are? And why you were ordered to get rid of us. Alvariz: breathed deeply looking at him its obvious, he started a new life. Well first of all it was phillipie thermopolis that plotted your abduction, he payed us to get rid of you and your brother discreetly. Me: looking confused. Why?? Alvariz: he saw you both as threat to his ascension as king of genova, a plot which seemed to have failed disastrously. Me: who are my real parents?? I asked impatiently. Alvariz: you and your brother are the sons of queen helen clarisse renaldi and king clarisse renaldi. You are a prince of genova[color/]
12 Dec 2015 | 12:15
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Dis is d most sweetest story i have ever read..kudos man
12 Dec 2015 | 12:28
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Wow....bt am furious.op hilson wont get bck@ u?
12 Dec 2015 | 12:38
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[b][color =blue]What!!! Prince??? Mehn am so damn seriously in luv wid vhiz stowie @paula4eva. Pls dnt keep us waiting. Next plsss[/color][/b]
12 Dec 2015 | 13:23
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Loving this story like kilode
12 Dec 2015 | 14:21
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[color =red]EPISODE 35[/color] [color=black]Me: shocked# what??? Are you kidding me. I wanted to the truth but i wasnt expecting this. Alvariz: smiling# i kid you not nate. Am sure they'd be extremely happy to know you both are alive. Me: they wont even recognise us we are no longer kids. Alvariz: just a minute. He climbed up to his room, after a few minutes he came down. Have this he said handing over 2golden bracelets to me. Me: whats this?? Alvariz: the night we took you and your brother, you had this on, i wanted to sell them, but somehow i felt i should keep them, i kept them indefinitely. Me: i collected the bracelet looking at them closely and somehow tears gathered up in my eyes. Alvariz: am sure they will recognise this. Me: thanks. Uhmm now that mr hilson failed to get in details why i came looking for you... Alvariz: dont worry i can take care of myself. He cuts in Me: am not worried about you mr alvariz, and you should delude yourself from thinking your decison affects just you. Alvariz: looking at me a bit confused. What do you mean. Me: if i leave you on your own mr hilson is gonna find you and make you tell him everything you just told me. Am not willing to let him have such information. Alvariz: have seen your skills but like i said i can take care of myself. Me: trust me you do not know what you are messing with here. I could kill you without blinking an eyelid, to keep my secret but am offering you a chance to save yourself, dont make me change my mind. Think about your family mr alvariz, i said slowly meaning every word. Alvariz: looking at me, perhaps he was considering. Could you stay here for a while?. Me: you have made the right decison, consider this a favour to your daughter. I walked back to my car carrying 2boxes in. Alvariz: while you stay here keep away from my daughter. Sounded like a warning Me: i looked at him and smiled as he led me to guest room. The bed was quite wonderful as i collapsed on it, i thought of what he just told me. We grew up in genova, if they cared about us, how could they not find us, as rich as they were, yet we lived in misery. Now that i know i really dont want to have anything doing with them. Just then there was a knock on the door, i opened. Sophia: smiling dinner is ready!!! She sang. Me: i walked downstairs to see mr and mrs alvariz already seated. I joined them. As sophia dished the food. Alvariz: so hows your dad doing, sorry your guardian Me: he is my dad, and he...is..dead! I managed to say. Alvariz: ricardo is dead!! He was such a good man, sometimes life can be very unfair. How did he die Me: i wanted to lie too, but then i thought he deserved to know. I...shot him i said with heavy lips. I saw the suprise on the faces of sophia, her mum and alvariz. Alvariz: looking at me, tears began to gather in my eyes. Why?? He asked slowly. Me: i dont know, i really do not know why i shot him. I stressed Alvariz: realizing there are possibilities he was placed under hypnosis, he wanted to confirm his suspicions. He tapped me on the shoulders. Its alright nate Me: i watched him bled out. I added Alvariz: who asked you to shoot him?? Me: i thought hard, it was mr hilson and then flashes came very hard again, i held my head in pains. Sophia: daddy whats wrong with him??? She asked looking worried Alvariz: he was now certain that nate was under hypnosis. Do you remember anything. Me: it was mr hilsons orders Alvariz: what else have you done under his orders. Me: looking at him, you dont wanna know, i said with teary eyes. My head was aching harder this time. Alvariz: i think you were placed under strong hypnosis lets continue when you are ready, i can help help with it. He stood up and walked to his room, mrs alvariz quickly followed him. Mrs alvariz: whats wrong honey?? Alvariz: its dangerous keeping that kid here, all its gonna take for us to be dead is just a word from mr hilson.[color/]
12 Dec 2015 | 14:26
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Loving every bit of dis story like kilode
12 Dec 2015 | 14:28
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Nice one
12 Dec 2015 | 14:36
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Hmmm...hope he doesn't kill him ooo
12 Dec 2015 | 14:58
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den u must let him go
12 Dec 2015 | 15:06
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Wow this is a blockbuster story(if there is something like that) @paula4eva
12 Dec 2015 | 15:09
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Wow this is a blockbuster story(if there is something like that) @paula4eva nice one
12 Dec 2015 | 15:10
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Interesting. Next plz
12 Dec 2015 | 15:20
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Hmmmm I don't even know what to say. This story is super interesting. Well done @Paula4eva.
12 Dec 2015 | 15:32
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Action film
12 Dec 2015 | 15:36
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luv dis story nd tanx 4 d constant update @desire a kiss 4 u
12 Dec 2015 | 15:42
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I love haw u dey update dis story
12 Dec 2015 | 16:19
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Show me a guy whose stories are loved, followed and adorned by everyone and i will show you @paula4eva.
12 Dec 2015 | 16:48
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@desire my love fr u don da overflow, loving dis story. I hope e does nt kill any of d pple in dat family o
12 Dec 2015 | 16:48
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Nxt abeg....... C as commentz dy flow....... Everibdy dy enjoy d tory wella.......
12 Dec 2015 | 17:08
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am really loving dis story..well done @Desire
12 Dec 2015 | 17:19
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I knew u were gonna storm coolval with updates! For just two days that i was away, see what i've missed! [color =green] thumbs up man[/color] @paula4eva
12 Dec 2015 | 18:42
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i have mis soo much bt hav catch up with u guys,just watchin hw dis tory wana end
12 Dec 2015 | 20:27
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Thumbs up @paula4eva... doing gr8 job hia.... next
12 Dec 2015 | 21:28
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Ahaaa@invinsible i was suppose to call you i wetin happen nau?? Them kidnapp ni??
12 Dec 2015 | 22:25
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[color =red]EPISODE 36[/color] [color=black]Mrs alvariz: i dont understand i thing from what you just said. Alvariz: that kid is not stable, you heard him said he kill his own dad, and you saw the regrets in his eyes. Mrs alvariz: how does that link up to him killing us? Alvariz: shaking his head. He isnt acting on his own will, mr hilson comands him like a roboot. He can only feel remorse later, but an order is order. Mrs alvariz: then we have to fix him as fast as possible. Alvariz: for someone as strong as he is its not gonna be easy. She gave him a peck. Mrs alvariz: we have no choice, they went back down to the table to meet a silent dinner. Nate ate slowly with reddish and teary eyes while sophia stared at him in compassion. They sat down next to them Alvariz: nate i could help fix you, you know, somethings aint right with and you know it. Me: i get weird flashes i donot comprehend most times and it hurts a whole lot. Alvariz: i could make it all go away!! Me: for the first time someone was offering to help me. Well its not like i trust him, i know deep down if he tries any crazy pranks with me, i wont think twice before killing him. I look at him, lets do that tomorrow. Alvariz: yea cos your gonna be needing alot of strenght. I climbed back to the guest room. Showered and slept of. ****Nicholas***** He visited ashley often and they hanged out alot, they went on dates, movies and beaches together. Well she do not know what she feels for nate but its seems to come to the surface with nicholas. He is so unresistable, she was building a huge bag designing company. On a night she thought whoever that person was, probably he wanted her out of misery for good. She was good at bag making so she decided to get her own huge establishment. Today like every other nicholas came around with a few gift. Nicholas: were is williams?? Ashley: he went to school, aint you supposed to be in school too?? You bad boy!!! She said sarcastically. And laughed moving close to him Nicholas: hahah i had to give you these he handed the parcel over to her. Which she opened to see a few silver chains glittering with love symbols. Ashley: wooooow thank you, thank you, she said giving him a hug. Nicholas: am glad you like it, he collected it move behind her, took her hair side ways, revealing her necks, they were so adorable, he wore it gently on her as he lips move slowly to her neck. She felt his warm breath and tightened her eyes as he kissed his way up to her lips. Her lips was so soft he became so turned on. He carried her and she wrapped her legs around him, her soft body resting on him, just then the bell rang. ******Nattan****** It was finally dawn he washed up and walked downstair. Sophia: goodmorning nate she said with a smile. Me: i still love those smile but i felt weird, i know she wont be comfortable around me anymore, well i just have to be normal. How was night sleepy head. Sophia: tiring she said smiling. Me: awww sorry about that, so how about we go swimming later. Sophia: we have a pool she said smiling. Me: really were?? Just then mr alvariz walked in. Alvariz: nate you are awake. Me: goodmorning mr alvariz, yeah and ready too, lets begin. He gave me the are you sure look. Finally he took me to his basement, with a chair in the middle. Alvariz: ok sit here. Then he got a rope too Me: are the ropes necessary??? Alvariz: trust me they are Me: i looked at him for a while, i decided to do it. Do it i said as he quickly tied me firmly to the chair.[color/]
12 Dec 2015 | 23:23
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Still observing
13 Dec 2015 | 00:02
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Hope what alvariz is trying to do work o nd not just playin some trick with nate
13 Dec 2015 | 00:10
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[color =red]EPISODE 37[/color] [color=black]Alvariz: the stage is set. Now i need you to find answers to my question. The harder you try, the quicker you break through this the invisible wall, theres been alot of crack already. Me: ok am ready. Alvariz: what is your name tell me all of it. Me: nattan ricardo roy Alvariz: for how long have you being answering the name nattan. Me: its been my name ever since i was little Alvariz: practically your dad gave you nattan. Me: nods Alvariz: what about roy?? Me: i think its just for a while. Alvariz: who calls you roy?? Me: co-agent and mr hilson. Alvariz: who gave the name to you?? He yelled a bit Me: i donot know i stressed. Alvariz: think boy think he yelled Me: i tried thinking but the flashes came again. Alvariz: he tore my t-shirt, who did this to you!!!! Me: virchaw!!! I yelled Alvariz: how!! As he yelled at me it seem to be triggering more hurting flashes. As i jerked trying to hold my head. Me: i was tortured!!! Alvariz: how??? Me: the questions made my ache like they were gonna explode, as the flash became precise. I yelled in pains trying to break free. Alvariz: tell me how!!!! He yelled. Me: i was injected and he used a jackknife on me i yelled out of pains. Alvariz: who was he working with??!! Me: i was hurting so bad, i dont know, i really dont know i yelled amidst sobs. Alvariz: dont think, say what you see in your head kid!!! Come on! Me: mr hilson!!! I cried out Alvariz: virchaw didnt just torture you!!!! Me: he placed me hypnosis i yelled completing his statement, with all my strength, in an angry face. Let me go he has got to pay i said with bloodshot eyes i yelled. I struggled to breakfree violently like i was gonna rip somebody apart. Alvariz: who is he working with??? He yelled. Me: mr hilson!!!!! Untie me!!! Virchaw must pay for this, i said in a deep voice with a contorted face of both pains and anger. Alvariz: who asked you to shoot your dad?? He asked softly. Me: the scene played in my head as my nerves calmed a bit, and mr hilsons voice echoed shoot him. Mr hilson!!!! I yelled again Alvariz: and why did you do it??? Me: it was an order i yelled. Alvariz: nope he it was a comand you are to follow!!! How did you meet mr hilson. Me: this time as i tried to remember the flashes where more severe and brain ripping. Arrrhhhgggggghhhh i scream i swinged my legs right and left violently, in bid to calm troubled head. Me: make it stop plssss alvariz stop it now!!. I begged as blood oozed out of my nose. There were bangs on the door. Mr alvariz: honey whats going on. Alvariz: i told you not to come here, Sophia: daddy what are you doing to him. He ignored them looking at nate as he pleaded, he smiled Alvariz: tell me what you see Me: i was becoming so weak, i met him in the supermarket were i previously worked. Alvariz: and? Me: he offered me a delivery job, which i did and found out it was dirty i said in more of whispers. Alvariz: and?? Me: i decided to stay away from him, as i wanted no part in his dirty deals. Alvariz: and??? Me: one day i came home from work only to see a letter with bratva written behind it. Alvariz: shocked bratva??? And then?? Me: nothing but flashes!!! I yelled a bit. Alvariz: come on nate think harder, you can do this, he urged. I tried thinking as my heard ached again, i just groaned in pains. And the flashes became precise and stayed longer, i was begining to remember, i pressed even hard and then the flashes stop. My head felt calm, light, like a heavy burden was lifted. Me: looking at alvariz. He took me and my dad, placed me under hypnosis, and asked me to shoot my dad. With blood shot eyes, mr hilson did this to me, he made me kill my dad, he took me to that island to suffer, it was all his doing. I'll make him pay!!!! I yelled and passed out[color/]
13 Dec 2015 | 00:27
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Just hope will help, sorry for the pain dear@nattan
13 Dec 2015 | 00:44
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Hmmmm....i think dat Mr Alvariz is rilli doing good to him. He's helping him stop dat hypnosis. I rilli hope it works oo.. Next plss
13 Dec 2015 | 01:42
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U are doing a great work here @paula4eva BRING IT ON
13 Dec 2015 | 02:51
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Abeg mre updates oooooooo plsssssss....... Hapi sundai guys
13 Dec 2015 | 03:31
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You 'll unravel the mask,I just hope dat ur hrt-beat wouldn't gonna pay for it.....Mr writer roll it up
13 Dec 2015 | 05:02
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I really hope Mr Alvariz will help Nattan to stop that hypnosis
13 Dec 2015 | 05:15
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Wow tank God nate don da remember o, i pray he should b able to break all the wall o
13 Dec 2015 | 05:34
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Waooooo! Dis is jux like dis movie AGENT OF SHILED which by a secret organization called Hidra use 2 caption agents ad tortured them until they comply to watever they ask them to do, more like being compelled ad also like being under hypnosis. . . . I jux hpe Nattan won't lose is life with dis mission his about to set 4 himself...coz going after Mr Hilson luks like a suicide mission 2 me.
13 Dec 2015 | 07:24
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Tank God natt z ok now,bt u ave to pretend as if u dont knw anytin,so dat u can kill all of them
13 Dec 2015 | 07:45
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Bros wetin happen na........ No update yet @desire.......
13 Dec 2015 | 09:12
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Wow!!! Av really missed a lot oo.. Am nt gonna miss oda episodes for anything.. Following U̶̲̥̅̊ @Desire.. Luving ya right ups itz jst so great.. Nxt plzzz
13 Dec 2015 | 09:17
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Sori 4 d pain dear nattan.....tnx @desire
13 Dec 2015 | 09:35
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Oya now @desire
13 Dec 2015 | 09:57
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[color =red]EPISODE 38[/color] [color=black]Alvariz walked out as sophia and her mum quickly rushed in. Sophia: nate!!!! Alvariz: leave him alone he's gonna be alright. Mrs alvariz: honey what happened. Alvariz: the hypnosis is a very strong one, i doubt if we had the desired result. Sophia: what are you guys talking about, why is he unconcious. Mrs alvariz: quickly explained everything to her. Alvariz: nodding in support as she explained, i think we have to wait, till he wakes, i lost him in his hypnotic trance. It was almost mid-day, they left him bound to the chair. While i was unconcious my life played like a movie in from the point dad and i was taken to my stay here in alvariz house. Every hate, every pain, my father, and the killer i am right now was all because of mr hilson, those memories triggered much hatred towards him. Every nerve in my body sought for vegence. I woke with bloody eyes. I was about standing when i realized i was bound, i struggle tirelessly to breakfree as rage burn through me, and my blood boiling like acid in water. Me: who's there i yelled!!!! Mr alvariz, and his family came in quickly. Alvariz: nate!!! Me: until me right now!!! I roared. As sophia ran behind her dad in fear. Alvariz: nate calm down you are not in your right mind. Me: dont tell me to came down!!!! I have to kill the bastard who made me this way!! I roared again i struggle so hard as alvariz rushed out, the rope was about snapping when i felt a sting and soon i felt sleepy. Alvariz: we cant let him out of here, his not in his right mind, it dangerous. Sophia: daddy what do you intend doing with him. Alvariz: he will have to be weak first before i can do anything. I think we have to keep him tied down for a few days. He led them out and doubled the rope on him. 3DAYS LATER Mr alvariz walked down to the basement to see nattan. Me: i look up with blood shot eyes. Alvariz: how are you nate. Me: how...dare...you try stop me!! I yelled weakly. Alvariz: you are not in your right mind. Me: alvariz am gonna make your suffer!! I'll make you watch while i slit the throat of your wife and daughter!! I said more slowly. I was so weak, i havent eaten in days. Alvariz: fine!! What are go gonna do if i let you go. Me: i smiled weakly, am gonna find mr hilson!! Alvariz: what are you gonna do with him. Me: smiling# am gonna take it out slowly and painfully on him, i'll rip out his eyes, tongues, fingers and limbs and watching him bleed to death after removing his spleen! Alvariz: and of what good will be all that, think about your father and brother, think about those who loves you. No one wants to be with this monster you want to become, your father, your brother your friends are gonna treat you like an enemy, you would have no one to hold on to, you would be left all alone!! To suffer, everyone is gonna avoid you like a plaque. You have to fight this nate, you are strong nate come on!!!. Me: i shut my eyes tightly, his words made sense a whole lot, other than revenge, i saw my brother, and my dad who died protecting me. After a while i opened my eyes. Am starving i managed to say. Alvariz: quickly brought food but he seems unsure, whether to untie me or not. Me: plssss i wont hurt you i promise. Alvariz: what is your name Me: nattan ricardo Alvariz: what about roy Me: thats what mr hilson calls me it aint my name. Am fine now, plssss hurry. He move behind untied me, as i devoured the food hungrily like when i was on that island, that memory made my eyes wet with tears again[color/]
13 Dec 2015 | 10:14
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Following
13 Dec 2015 | 10:20
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Thats really unfortunate for nathan
13 Dec 2015 | 10:29
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Yea tim 4 action
13 Dec 2015 | 10:30
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Hmmm revenge z nt alwyz dat gud... Nxt cnt wait ooo
13 Dec 2015 | 10:51
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This is serious o
13 Dec 2015 | 11:17
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mtcheew omo see suffering sorry nate just forget about him nd move on law of karma will soon play on him dat what I believe
13 Dec 2015 | 12:08
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oh nate......jst forget abt revenge nd move on
13 Dec 2015 | 12:40
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Hmmm....following
13 Dec 2015 | 13:31
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[color =red]EPISODE 39[/color] [color=black]I finished eating washed up and got dressed i walked back down to the dinning table. And sophia brought more food, this time i ate more slowly, uhmmm i really liked her but i wasnt sure what she thinks of me after witnessing so many weird scenes with me in it. Sophia: how are you feeling now nate she asked. Me: oooh uhmmm great i said forcing out a smile. Sophia: is something bothering you??? Me: aint you scared of me?? Sophia: oooh that she said smiling uhmmm yes i was 3days ago but now that you are fine!! Not anymore. Me: smiling# am sorry you had to see all this. Sophia: no its fine. Except for uhmm the rage part seriously nate dont do that again. She held her chest as she smiled. Me: yes ma'am i wont am no longer hynotized. Sophia: yes so what are you doing here in my house. Me: seriously?? Are you chasing me away?? Sophia: no no no no not that ok!! i just want to know. Me: ok i would whisper it in your ears, come closer.. She brought her head closer. We still have an unscheduled date remember i whispered. Sophia: hitting me playfully i totally forgot. I ate my food slowly as we talked and laughed. ******nicholas****** He became closer to ashley than ever before, he spent most of his free time with them in her house. They played and kissed a few times, but when ever they were willing to go beyond kissing there is always a distraction. Today nicholas was free he had thought it over over again. He loved ashley so much already, its time to ask her out he thought. Soon he showered, got dressed and was of to casella. They both went to a spanish eatery and they both placed there orders. Ashley: smiling# what is it you wanted to tell me?? Nicholas: uhmmm have thought about this over and over, i realized i loved you so much ashley. Plsss be my girlfriend. He said looking at her with curiousity Ashley: stood up, moved out of her sit, walked to were he sitted grabbed his shirt, as his heart beat increased, she swiftly caught his lips with hers as they kissed briefly. What took you so long she said with a smile. Nicholas: looking speechless, i guess thats a yes!! He said smiling broadly, you have made my day ashley. They both chatted happily like couples. And soon they were done, they held each other and walked towards the exit, as they got out they ran into joan. Joan: seeing them together, she was so shocked. Something felt weird, they didnt seem to notice her. Thats it??? She thought, you'd disappear when you see me in the mall and now your gonna pretend like you dont even know me?? She quickly walked towards them. Joan: nattan were have you been. Ashley: recognizing her ooooh hi!! She said smiling. Joan: hi she said briefly. Nicholas: uhmm actually am nicholas Joan: great you are now nicholas she thought. Ashley: uhmm actually nate aint in town for a while now. Joan: seriously!!! So who is this. She asked looking confused Nicholas: his twin. Joan: ok were is nattan. Nicholas: i have no idea were he is right now. Joan: thanks she said and walked pass them, it really felt so weird, as too many thought ran through her head it seemed like they were saying the truth but nattan never told her, he had a twin or maybe they didnt hangout long enough for him to tell her. Or perhaps i could get his number from them, she turn swiftly but they were already gone[color/]
13 Dec 2015 | 13:50
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EPISODE 40 Its almost a week now, have been in alvariz house. Well i have decided to start all over again. New orleans is quite a nice place to stay. I told mr alvariz i’ll be leaving as soon i get a nice house. Alvariz: why nate isnt it comfortable here??. Me: not that mr alvariz, the thing is i need a new life. Alvariz: well you can do that here cant you?? Me: well in thats case i suggest we move to a better and safer place hilson is still gonna come looking for you. Alvariz: that wont be a problem i have a bigger house here in french man. Me: i think that will do just fine. We drove down to the house and it was quite huge, painted in white and designed with red german bricks. We got in. Alvariz: smiling# we can stay on the left and you can stay on the right. Me: i smiled ok lets move down here decreetly. We moved in as quick as possible into the house, i destroyed my line and got a new one, and i made sure they all did too. ……….A year later, we bounded so well like families, i opened a huge eatery and event centre right here in lousiana, i still trained secretly too, because i knew hilson will be on our trail soon. Sophia and i were even more closer. I felt so good, i havent been this happy for a very long time, i even forgot for a while i had a brother in genova, well i knew i gave him more than enough to take care of himself. While we stayed together, attraction between i and sophia intensified but nothing happened all this while. Today was sunday a very free day for everyone. We both sat beside the pool talking and laughing as usual. Me: smiling with my eyes fixed on her. Sophia: what is it?? She asked smiling Me: close your eyes i said, which she did, i moved my lips close and soon we were in a passionate kiss for a while before breaking off. I stopped to see what her reaction would be. Sophia: smiling# i love you nate she said and i pulled her again, as we kissed, jumping into the pool, still in our romantic kisses. 3YEARS LATER……… Sophs and i married last year and she was currently 3months pregnant. The smile i see on her face everytime i wake, makes me look forward to another day. She was an angel, understanding, caring and simple. And to crown it all she loved me so much, i felt it intensity not from her volume of words but from the unique rhythm of heart beat whenever we are together. The joy i felt made my worry so distant. I adored her so much, treated her like an egg, she was so emotionally fragile, she would cry at just a little yell, shez easily frightened too. Well am not perfect either but i looked after her like my heart because my happiness revolved around her, with her my live felt sunny. Today i came back home after a very long day. Sophia: baby!!!! She said hugging me like have been away for a very long time. Me: hahaha i know you missed me. Sophia: alot!!!! Hope you aint going to work tomorrow, cos i’d be sleeping in your arms tomorrow. Me: hahhah i gave her akiss of course i wont, i carried her back up. I washed up, got dressed again and took her to a flowershop were she picked a few flowers happily, which i planted close to our bed. ******nicholas****** He graduated from college and was now working in the jury and he was uhmmm well payed. His relationship with ashley took a whole new level, now they were engaged but time was the only reason why they aint married yet, they were so busy with work.
13 Dec 2015 | 14:03
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Loving every bit of this story. Next plz
13 Dec 2015 | 14:04
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Sigh......dis episode is scary o,@nattan dnt do dat again o,u want to kill person ni
13 Dec 2015 | 14:32
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Next plsss
13 Dec 2015 | 14:59
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Lol @natasha you are ready for miss coolval, nice dp jawe
13 Dec 2015 | 15:02
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@desire....we want more of u
13 Dec 2015 | 15:27
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Dis is awesome..next pls
13 Dec 2015 | 15:32
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loving dis story bit by bit...well done @Desire
13 Dec 2015 | 15:48
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@desire oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
13 Dec 2015 | 16:21
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[color =red]EPISODE 40[/color] [color=black]Its almost a week now, have been in alvariz house. Well i have decided to start all over again. New orleans is quite a nice place to stay. I told mr alvariz i'll be leaving as soon i get a nice house. Alvariz: why nate isnt it comfortable here??. Me: not that mr alvariz, the thing is i need a new life. Alvariz: well you can do that here cant you?? Me: well in thats case i suggest we move to a better and safer place hilson is still gonna come looking for you. Alvariz: that wont be a problem i have a bigger house here in french man. Me: i think that will do just fine. We drove down to the house and it was quite huge, painted in white and designed with red german bricks. We got in. Alvariz: smiling# we can stay on the left and you can stay on the right. Me: i smiled ok lets move down here decreetly. We moved in as quick as possible into the house, i destroyed my line and got a new one, and i made sure they all did too. ..........A year later, we bounded so well like families, i opened a huge eatery and event centre right here in lousiana, i still trained secretly too, because i knew hilson will be on our trail soon. Sophia and i were even more closer. I felt so good, i havent been this happy for a very long time, i even forgot for a while i had a brother in genova, well i knew i gave him more than enough to take care of himself. While we stayed together, attraction between i and sophia intensified but nothing happened all this while. Today was sunday a very free day for everyone. We both sat beside the pool talking and laughing as usual. Me: smiling with my eyes fixed on her. Sophia: what is it?? She asked smiling Me: close your eyes i said, which she did, i moved my lips close and soon we were in a passionate kiss for a while before breaking off. I stopped to see what her reaction would be. Sophia: smiling# i love you nate she said and i pulled her again, as we kissed, jumping into the pool, still in our romantic kisses. 3YEARS LATER......... Sophs and i married last year and she was currently 3months pregnant. The smile i see on her face everytime i wake, makes me look forward to another day. She was an angel, understanding, caring and simple. And to crown it all she loved me so much, i felt it intensity not from her volume of words but from the unique rhythm of heart beat whenever we are together. The joy i felt made my worry so distant. I adored her so much, treated her like an egg, she was so emotionally fragile, she would cry at just a little yell, shez easily frightened too. Well am not perfect either but i looked after her like my heart because my happiness revolved around her, with her my live felt sunny. Today i came back home after a very long day. Sophia: baby!!!! She said hugging me like have been away for a very long time. Me: hahaha i know you missed me. Sophia: alot!!!! Hope you aint going to work tomorrow, cos i'd be sleeping in your arms tomorrow. Me: hahhah i gave her akiss of course i wont, i carried her back up. I washed up, got dressed again and took her to a flowershop were she picked a few flowers happily, which i planted close to our bed. ******nicholas****** He graduated from college and was now working in the jury and he was uhmmm well payed. His relationship with ashley took a whole new level, now they were engaged but time was the only reason why they aint married yet, they were so busy with work.[color/]
13 Dec 2015 | 16:54
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@desire you ar nt updating lyk b4
13 Dec 2015 | 16:54
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thanks 4 d update
13 Dec 2015 | 16:59
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Luving every bit.
13 Dec 2015 | 17:53
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@inemeka U want more of him ko? Hmmm Hpe iz nt wah am thinking o LolZzz . . . Still Following.
13 Dec 2015 | 18:45
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Wonderful I just love d way u write nd post ur story u are one of d best writer on coolval
13 Dec 2015 | 18:50
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love DX story like...... @paula4eva like d way u pozt
13 Dec 2015 | 19:26
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Following
13 Dec 2015 | 20:58
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I just love this story nd d way u update. @desire
13 Dec 2015 | 23:28
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Oya now
14 Dec 2015 | 00:20
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Lol no its not what you are thinking@emmyrexx
14 Dec 2015 | 01:20
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[color =red]EPISODE 41[/color] [color=black]I woke up today and she was still sleeping, i checked my time it was just 5:40am i checked today's date. Me: oooh my God its her birthday, aaaarrh i totally forgot, you dare not forget her birthdays otherwise shez gonna be crying on you for the rest of the day. I rushed out of the bed, called mr sam and he pick on first ring. Mr.sam: goodmorning sir. Me: i need a birthday cake and well decorated area for my wife's birthday would that be possible before like say..... 9am. Mr sam: ok sir i'll try my best Me: call me when you are done. Just then someone hugged me from behind. Me: happy birthday sweetheart Sophia: smiling as she gave me a peck. So were are the wonderful gift you bought for me. Me: it gonna be a suprise i said smiling. Sophia: oooh come on am dying of curiousity already she said smiling. Me: hahaha dont worry have got everything ready. We showered together and i carried her out with smiles. As she got dressed in a wonderful flowery pink gown, i helped her with her make up. I got dressed too in a white shirt and black trouser and a pink mini coat. Just them mr sam called me it was all ready, i carried her to the car, with a whole lot of smile on her face and we drove down there. ******hilson***** Mr hilson: sly what is wrong with you!!! For years now, you have been unable to give me detailed information on agent roy's disapearance. I donot need to remind you he is one of our best. Sly: sir agent roy is not just like anyother target i keep picking the wrong signal. Mr hilson: you picked the wrong signal to with lenardo too right??. I hate being left in the dark. He is up to something and i wanna know what is it and why he has refused to come back. Sly: i think if we move down to orleans i can be able to get them no matter how well they are hiding. Mr hilson: you'll be needing james and romeo, bring him down here!!!! Sly: ok sir Mr hilson: wait am going with you guys, i wanna see what he is upto too. We got to the event centre to the VIP wing, just about to enter. Me: uh ooh not so fast pretty. Sophia: whats wrong baby?? Me: i brought out a pink ribbon, you have to wear this. I moved to her back, got her eyes covered, gave her a peck and she chuckled. Sophia: shall we!! Me: yes baby, i was not sure of mr sam performance so i wanted to see it first we got in and the place was beautiful, everywhere glittered with the silver letters they used in writing happy birthday. A few staff was there too with a huge cake in the middle. I untied her eyes. Sophia: woooow she said with a very wonderful smiles as tear gardered up in her eyes as she smiled. Me; easy there baby dont cry on me today i said sarcastically. Sophia: hitting me hard on my arm, am not gonna cry, i love it so much, she said hugging me tight. Me: just smiling as my staff looked at me happily i gave them a thumb up, they began to sing a birthday song as she burried her face on my chest, i knew she didnt want them to see the tear in her eyes. Mr sam: on behalf of my co-staff here we present this to you mrs ricardo he said lifting up the veil, revealing wonderfully parcelled gift. Sophia walked to the table. Sophia: thank you, thank you, thank you she said smiling. Mr sam: mr ricardo this is the point were we'd leave you both alone, turn of the lights he comanded. The light was turned of and the ballroom kinda of light was turned on the place was so beauty and glittering to in the dim light, then they left. Me: i turned on the music as i stretched my hands forward for her to grab, which did, we danced and kissed for a very long time[color/]
14 Dec 2015 | 02:22
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1st 2 comment........following
14 Dec 2015 | 02:34
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mr hilson ur end is near,i think i wil be d second to coment
14 Dec 2015 | 02:53
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Please send my own cake cos my mouth is watering already
14 Dec 2015 | 03:32
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Lovely...next plss
14 Dec 2015 | 04:24
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My guy nate na man e don b so o, happy birthday at Mrs nate ricardo
14 Dec 2015 | 05:16
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hope dey ll nt mistake ue brother as u
14 Dec 2015 | 06:44
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Happybirthday@hardeywummy2
14 Dec 2015 | 07:22
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Next ooo
14 Dec 2015 | 08:55
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So After like 4 years now. Mr.Hilson does'nt wanna forqet abt aqent roy riqht?? Nate u would av finished him up since cos u can never hide forever.!
14 Dec 2015 | 10:15
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Nw i sense trouble iz about to Commence . Still following
14 Dec 2015 | 10:46
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Agent roy, danger looms around be watchful
14 Dec 2015 | 11:36
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So nichol did not even search 4 u
14 Dec 2015 | 12:29
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HmmMm love in d air... Hoping Sophia will nt die ooo as am observing
14 Dec 2015 | 13:22
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nice 1..following...hope nicholas wn't b mistaken 4 nattan...
14 Dec 2015 | 13:39
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Omo dis is gonna be a clash between nate nd mr hilson
14 Dec 2015 | 13:42
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Hurray!!! Guess wah, i just catched up with u guys! U know what that means? I'm enjoying the story. Kick it in bro @paula4eva
14 Dec 2015 | 17:00
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mr.hilson shld leave nate alone
14 Dec 2015 | 17:06
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this is getting more INTERESTING! @Desire
15 Dec 2015 | 00:46
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@desire, what happen now
15 Dec 2015 | 00:54
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@desire oooooooo, where ar u, hope no prob?
15 Dec 2015 | 06:58
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???? @desire
15 Dec 2015 | 07:04
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@Desire where u dey na?
15 Dec 2015 | 07:33
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@desire wetin happen nah
15 Dec 2015 | 07:41
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[color =green][b][s][u]@Paul4eva whatsup bro?? Av been checkinq here since yesterday.[/u][/s][/b][/color]
15 Dec 2015 | 08:03
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@desire abeg come ad update nah
15 Dec 2015 | 08:07
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@Desire abeg o come update
15 Dec 2015 | 08:23
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Ah-ah @desire i hope all is well o cos dis is unlike u o
15 Dec 2015 | 09:19
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@pizzaro looks like he went for campaign d tin no give am chance 2 update @paula4eva wetin happen bro we dey wait 4 u o.
15 Dec 2015 | 09:54
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[color =red]EPISODE 42[/color] [color=black]We had a wonderful birthday celebration with smile all over her face. Soon we were done, and i decided to carry her home leaving the car behind. Sophia: i dont ever want to wake from this dream nate Me: smile# its not a dream soph Sophia: i love you so much nate, i dont think i can ever do without she said smiling. Me: i just smiled, as we walked home, soon she slept off. I got into the house, climbed the staircase into our bedroom, i gently dropped her on the bed and turned to leave, just then she grabbed my hand. Sophia: stay with me, she whispered smiling. I laid gently beside her as she rested her head on my chest and slept of. ******mr hilson****** mr hilson boys were ready to move down to louisiana in new orleans. James, romeo, sly and a few other men. They flew in his private aero down to new orleans. And there hunt for agent roy began while mr hilson remained in genova. *****nicholas****** sitting in his office going through some paper works just then ashley stepped in. Ashley: look who is busy Nicholas: hahah baby!! What are you doing here so early? Ashley: hmmm aint you happy to see me?? Nicholas: of course i am, he said moving towards her and giving her a peck. Ashley: i wanted to have breakfast with you before going to new york Nicholas: oooh my God, he said hitting his head how could i forget that. I would have gotten you something wonderful you know. Ashley: hahaah i know you would but it just for a week you know and i'll be back. Nicholas: alright lets go baby he said as he placed his hands on her shoulders and led her out. Soon she slept of and i sneaked out to make dinner for her when i bumped into mr alvariz. Alvariz: nate!!! Were are you going in such a hurry?? Me: hahah goodevening mr alvariz, to fix dinner for my baby its her birthday you know. Alvariz: smiling# have got my own gift for her. Me: thats lovely i said running into the kitchen, and made the most yummiest dish i could think of. I prepared it with smile just then i heard a voice. Sophia: what is my baby doing? Me: hahah you are awake, uhmm just go upstairs and shower dinner would be ready before you know it. Sophia: smiling# alright baby she said and left. I quickly fixed the dish as i waited for her to join me. In less than a minute she joined me and we ate smiling. Sophia: wooow its yummy Me: hahaha am glad you like it Sophia: of course i love it she said smiling as we ate. And soon we went to bed. The week was quite a busy one and wonderful too, most times i had to take sophia along with me to the event centre, as she wouldnt want to miss me alot. *******silvester******* sly and his crew searched round lousiana in just 3days, just then james saw roy coming down from a car with a lady and walking into an event. James: exhales# got ya, he quickly walked to the car and bugged it. Informed sly as soon as he was done. Then he did some keyboard punching and a video of a car popped up. Sly: good work james!. We both walked into the event centre and all staff were busy with one thing or the other. As we had breakfast show going for 2weeks straight. I made sure she sat in comfortable and serene place were she was treated like a princess, because i wont have anyone mess with my baby.[color/]
15 Dec 2015 | 14:32
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Atlast, tnks for the update @desire. Nextttttt
15 Dec 2015 | 14:39
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Sorry guys i was a bit busy with both campaigning and other stuff sha, am back now dont forget to vote for@wyse-one
15 Dec 2015 | 14:39
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wat happenin@desire hope no problem
15 Dec 2015 | 14:42
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Ow! Wat is going 2 happen now o, i knw dey wil first attack sophia just 2 get agent Roy o
15 Dec 2015 | 14:47
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Welcome back bro @Paul4eva.
15 Dec 2015 | 15:16
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Ah @ last wot tuk ages.. Hmmmm D̶̲̥̅̊ε̲̣̣̣̥γ̲̣̣̥ r going to use sophiA as a trap for him.. Ride on we Gat ur bck @ Desire
15 Dec 2015 | 15:22
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Huh?? Let's see hw dis goes oo
15 Dec 2015 | 16:00
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Hmmm.dis is awesome.suspence
15 Dec 2015 | 23:58
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[color =red]EPISODE 43[/color] [color=black]he did a few punching on his keyboard and a video of a car popped up, they watched it closely for hours and soon roy came out of the event centre with the same lady he went in with and drove away to a house in frenchman street. Sly: i think thats his house James: so what do we do now Romeo: it looks like agent roy moved on. The ladies stomach is abit protruded. Sly: i have to inform mr hilson first. He called mr hilson imediately Mr hilson: yes Sly: we found him but he seems like a changed man now, and his got company too, that seems more like a family. Mr hilson: hahah impressive get me that rascal and get you rid of his stupid company. Today was another nate was dressed and was of to the event centre when romeo and james sneaked in the house, and planted bugs without the notice of mr and mrz alvariz nor sleeping sophia, through which they listened to every conversation and watch every action that unfolded. ******Nicholas******* currently working on a cold blooded murder of louis santiago, he was out to find the culprits, he spent nights and days in his office. Finally he decided to check the cctv and the last person he(louis) talked to was mr hilson. Nicholas: i think he needs to answer some question too for now he is the number 1 suspect. There conversation didnt seem friendly at all, though he laughed once in a while. He search through mr hilson id, soon he found his address in montoggio. Then he smiled to himself, lets hook up with some suspect tomorrow. After a long day i came back and my baby was already sleeping, i joined her quickly after giving her a peck and slept of, i was too tired. It was a dawn of another day, somehow i didnt really feel like going out today but i needed to. Sophia: baby stay with me just today plsssssss Me: dont worry soph as soon as all this is over, we are going for picnic alone on the beach. Sophia: hahaaha no i want to be with you today. Me: dont worry baby i'll be back before you know it. Sophia: no way am gonna die before you come and you know it she said smiling. Me: awwww i need to be there Sophia: sitting on the floor alright then you can go. Me: seriously!!!! Are you gonna cry?? Sophia: am not talking to you, she said folding her hands, looking the other way. Me: hahahah ok ok ok ok i havent even said i was gonna stay when she jumped on me. Sophia: i love you baby Me: heeey easy our baby is in there you know. ******silvester****** Sly: looks like we're gonna be having a full house today. James: we should get him imediately before he disappears again. Romeo: yea actually the bugs were properly hidden but if he finds any, i think his gonna dissappear. Sly: already i'll get the boys ready we take him today. ****************** Sophia: could you make me creme' bu le i like it too you know. Me: alright but for a pregnant soph you need lots of fruit ok Sophia: yes doctor Me: am nat your doctor Sophia: its romantic hahahaha Me: i blended a few apple, melon and cuccumber, extracted the water and handed it over to her. Sophia: hahaha great you make fruit juice too that lovely you know. She said with a smile. Me: come on drink up i said smiling. Shez a bit pesty this morning. Sophia: weres my creme??? Me: seriously you wanna eat that?? You should reduce your sugar intake too soph. Sophia: oooooh hmmm feigning cries. Me: hahaha ok ok stop doing that it inches my ears ok. Just then we heard glass shattering sound[color/]
16 Dec 2015 | 01:22
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D real battlime has been drawn
16 Dec 2015 | 01:39
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Owk oooooo........ Nxt abeg.........
16 Dec 2015 | 01:40
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I just hope nobody will die
16 Dec 2015 | 03:23
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Heeee, am scared o. Hope nothing happen to both of them o
16 Dec 2015 | 04:20
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[color =red]EPISODE 44[/color] [color=black]Sophia: where did that come from? Me: stay here ok am gonna go check it out. I walked to the sitting room to see a pieces of glass on the floor. What happened mrs alvariz?? Mrs alvariz: it slipped Me: you werent hurt right? Mrs alvariz: not at all Me: alright have got this ok. I made sure i got rid of every bit of glass on the floor. Then i was back with my baby. ******************** Sly: you guys would be needing this he said hand over 2 syringe with fluid that make someone drowsy before passing out. Make it fast and easy we leave new orleans today. James: smiling# am gonna give 2straight shots with this. Romeo: lets go get what we came for. Then they drove of to nate's house. I was done with the cleaning, i walked down to the kitchen to see soph already sleeping. Me: hahaha just like that i thought. I decide the bake the creme she asked for, just when i dropped it on the dinning Sophia: waking with a smile creme!!!!! She yelled as she pounced on it. Me: hahaha sophy you are scaring me, eat slowly. Sophia: you have no idea how long i wanted to eat this, she said with a smile. I sat beside her playing with her hair. Soon they were at nate's place, they all walked in, with heavily armed men as they quickly sorrounded the house. James climbed up to alvariz room, to see the 2 old couples having a wonderful morning. James: ssssshhh twitch and your dead. He said as mrs alvariz held alvariz in fear. Move down he commanded again. He took them down and they were tied together. Romeo walked into kitchen to see nate stroking his wife's hair. Romeo: hello roy. Me: that voice, i turned to see romeo standing in black jacket. Omg not now i thought to myself. Sophia: who is he baby Romeo: you seem pretty suprised to see me roy. Me: hahaha longtime no see romeo i said feigning friendship. Ofcourse i dont want my baby to be scared. Thinking he was alone Sophia: smiling# i walked up to him and shaked him hard squeezing his hands. Me: what are you doing here?? Romeo: to brink you back agent roy. Me: am not going anywhere! Romeo: i was hoping you'd say that, well mr hilson has ordered me to get rid of your present family. He said smiling. Me: i wont let you do that and you know it. Romeo: you cant stop us roy. Me: us?? Just then i felt 2 needle sting on my neck, it hurts like it was shot. I turned slowly to see james smiling. Sophia: baby whats happening. I look at her as i was begining to feel dizzy. I quickly threw a table knife at james who caught the knife as i rushed toward romeo he threw the knife back and it pierced my leg. I fell as i struggle to stay awake. Sophia: nate nooo nate she yelled in tears, what did do to him she ask james as she took the knife out of my legs and ran toward romeo. He grabbed her hand and positioned the knife to her throat, i saw the looks in her eyes she was so scared. Me: leave her alone i muttered as i struggled further to stay awake. Sophia: nate plsss help me his hurting me. Those were the last words i heard before passing out. ******nicholas******* today was a wonderful day he drove down to mr hilson house. Got in and asked for mr hilson while 3guards led him into the living room. Mr hilson: roy???? Looking stunned Nicholas: excuse me?? Am nicholas. Mr hilson: oooh pardon this old man, but you look just like him, perhaps you have a twin. Nicholas: yes i do, but thats not what i came here for. Mr hilson: oooh so what are you here for? Nicholas: louis santiago am sure you know him. Mr hilson: of course i do. Nicholas: you gonna have to come over for some questioning and answering session. Mr hilson: hahaha you too nicholas, he snapped his hand one of his guard knocked him out.[color/]
16 Dec 2015 | 04:35
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I think the battle is about to begin
16 Dec 2015 | 04:47
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Hope dat romeo nd james didnt kil sophia.............@desire next pls
16 Dec 2015 | 05:07
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Nate hope u are prepared
16 Dec 2015 | 05:20
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hope e did nt kill sophie ooo?
16 Dec 2015 | 06:15
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Itz battle time Nate
16 Dec 2015 | 06:29
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Sophia must not die o
16 Dec 2015 | 06:42
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Update fast fast na
16 Dec 2015 | 06:44
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What is happening now?
16 Dec 2015 | 06:47
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Gosh!!!....d two brother wit Mr. Hilson....just hope he won't use Nick as a bait.
16 Dec 2015 | 06:47
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Short of words
16 Dec 2015 | 07:18
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nxt one plsss
16 Dec 2015 | 07:53
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Cn sum1 pls help me close my mouth?
16 Dec 2015 | 09:18
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[b]Hahahhhhhhaa @Paula4eva u too lyk this hahahahaha..nice one[/b]
16 Dec 2015 | 10:26
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ah!! Nicholas again? the twin will have to work as team to accomplish this goal of bringing him down. please @desire next
16 Dec 2015 | 10:40
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Nothing should happen to Stella ooo. Mr Hilson will surely pay for wad he did. Next plss @paula4eva
16 Dec 2015 | 12:05
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@Desire oooooooooooo
16 Dec 2015 | 13:01
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Shooo U̶̲̥̅̊ wan use suspense kill person ni? Abeg no let d nxt episode stay long oo
16 Dec 2015 | 13:13
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intruders
16 Dec 2015 | 13:47
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hmm intrsting
16 Dec 2015 | 13:51
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[color =red]EPISODE 45[/color] [color=black]sophia pulled roughly to the sitting room were her parents was tied together as james carried roy on his shoulders down to the car. Romeo: sly package secured what about the family. Sly: dispose them those were mr hilsons others. Romeo: ok that wont be a problem. Soon they were all packed as they bundled roy down to genova to mr hilson's house. Tied him in the same steel room were he was tortured and left him there. Mr hilson: well done sly he said smiling. Sly: smiling too Mr hilson: wake him up i want to have a word with him. Sly: yes boss. I felt someone emptying a bucket of water on me as i opened my eyes slowly. Me: were is romeo?? Sly: smiling# perhaps you wanna ask him about your little baby??? Me: what did you do!!! i asked in an angry tone. Sly: slit her throat of course. Me: this crazy news i just heard made my heart ache so bad, and my eyes extremely red eyes. I couldnt say anything to him as tears gathered up in my eyes. She must have been so scared. Am sorry soph, i failed you both. Me: who killed her?? I said it bit by bit Sly: does that matter?? Shez dead man. Just then mr hilson walked in. Mr hilson: hello agent roy he said with a smile. Me: just staring at him like i wanted to run 10daggers through his heart. Mr hilson: easy there you really dont want to make me pissed. Me: or your gonna do what i said in anger. Mr hilson: hahaha you never told me you had a twin nate. Me: what!!! Stay away from him or am gonna kill you, you bastard!!! Mr hilson: hmmm is he that important to you, well his in the room were you shot your dad. He said smiling. Me: its me you want now let him go?? Plssss i managed to say but it was a bit heavy on my lips. Mr hilson: go on tell me how much you care about him, because am gonna make him hate you, and soon you'll realize you have no other family other than us nate!!! Me: aaaaaaaarrrrrh i struggle with rope threatening to break loose. Mr hilson: i suggest you save your strength, you'd be needing alot of it. He said as he walked out straight to were nicholas was kept Nicholas: i hope you do know you are holding me against my wish, which a punishable offence by the law. Mr hilson: hahaha i mean no disrespect lawyer nicholas, but i have something you'd like to see. Nicholas: what that?? Mr hilson: snapped his fingers and sly walked in with a laptop, placing it in front of nicholas. Nicholas: whats this??? Mr hilson: watch this he said. The edited video of nate shooting his dad making it look more like murder, there was no blood stains on him. He was dressed in clean black tux and smiles on his face as he shot his dad. Nicholas: what is the meaning of this? My dad died in a plane crash. Mr hilson: smiling# let me guess, thats what nattan told you right? Nicholas: thats what happened!!!! He yelled at mr hilson. Mr hilson: hahah i see you dont believe me well perhaps this will convince you. Sly punched the keyboard as other scene of nate murdering people in cold blood. Nicholas: that is definitely not my brother he is not a murderer, stop lying to me!!! Take all this away i dont wanna hear any of this. Mr hilson: i know how it feels like, but his been lying to you for so long. The video seemed so real but nate would never shoot our dad, noooo his not a murderer, he cant be, i need to ask him myself before listening to anything mr hilson says.[color/]
16 Dec 2015 | 14:28
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Which kind man b dis mr hilson ganslf e sha wan spoil dis guy lyf
16 Dec 2015 | 14:44
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na wa 4 dz man o.. :roll:
16 Dec 2015 | 15:21
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This mr hilson
16 Dec 2015 | 15:32
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Mr. Hilson must be devil's 1st son, so heartless
16 Dec 2015 | 15:33
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@paula4eva pls dnt kip us in suspense
16 Dec 2015 | 15:36
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Haha,dats 2 bad
16 Dec 2015 | 15:48
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uh
16 Dec 2015 | 17:25
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Wah a wicked being! Mr hilson is doomed for revenge.
16 Dec 2015 | 17:48
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Mr hilson is so heartless
16 Dec 2015 | 18:28
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Hmmmm still following i have a felling that somebody from mr ALVARIZ is not dead
16 Dec 2015 | 19:37
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Hmm, wich kind man be dis Mr hilson self he just one destroy a whole family
16 Dec 2015 | 19:48
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Mr hilson, or whats ur name, u are wicked oo. Next pls
17 Dec 2015 | 03:08
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Wicked soul..
17 Dec 2015 | 03:38
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Hmmm i wonder hw nate is going to come out of dis mess....next pls
17 Dec 2015 | 08:33
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Dangers of secret!!! Ogah paul campaigne done finish na, abeg update o
17 Dec 2015 | 08:34
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[color =red]EPISODE 46[/color] [color=black]Soon it seem like i wont be having anymore visitors. I looked round the room, when i saw knives of different kind, arranged in a silver tray on an iron table at one end of the room. I guess they were gonna use them on me. Luckily my legs werent bound, i moved slowly with the chair towards were the knives were kept. Soon i got there, using my mouth i pulled the tray down to the ground, took of the shoe of my right leg with the left one. I used my toe to pick a knife as ah tried to move it were my hands could reach. Me: aaaaaarrrrrh i tried really hard but the over stretching hurts so much. I stopped to catch my breath. Just then i decided to try one more time, i stretched my legs backward and my hand a bit forward, the tip of fingers got to the knife as i struggled to hold onto it inspite of the pains. Finally i was holding the knife, i quickly freed myself. I sat on the floor as images of sophia filled my head, i knew she must have been so scared. Am gonna have to join you tonight baby, but until then, the mouth who ordered your death, the ear which heard it and the hand who did this. They are all gonna pay soph!! i said as tears filled my eyes. For the first time i loved someone this much, memories of romeo placing a knife on her neck couldnt leave my head. I stood up and walked to the door, turned the knob and it opened. I sneaked into the control room were 2men was seated. I wrapped both arms on there neck, twisted it and left there body to fall. I looked at the screen and there were about 40 armed guards, watching of the house. I saw mr hilson sleeping peacefully, other than the 40 there was 8men who stood watch, james romeo, sly and 5 others. I walked back into the room were nicholas was kept and he was sleeping. Me: nicholas i said waking him up and cutting the rope. Nicholas: what are you doing here nate?? He asked looking stunned. Me: come on save the question for another time lets go!! I said pulling him along as we sneaked down towards the basement. There was no spy camera there so i knew it was gonna be safe place for nic. Just then we got to the passage leading to the basement, when 3guards saw us and ran towards us, i quickly took out 2 knives, threw it and it pierced their hearts. I quickly jumped on the other and snapped his neck. Me: lets go i said as i began to move, somehow it felt like i was walking alone. I turned and saw nic standing with a suprised look. Me: come on we dont have much time. Nicholas: nate when did you become so skillful?? Me: i'll explain everything ok?? First get inside the basement. Nicholas: how did dad die?? Me: plane crash Nicholas: whats was your job after quitting at the supermarket Me: marketing and brand advertisement. Nicholas: its must have been so easy for you to lie me right? I know you killed dad nate!!! I saw the video, But why??? He said as tears gathered up in his eyes. Me: i wasnt in my right mind nic plssss lets get out of here first. Nicholas: hahaha he laughed as tears flowed from his eyes, you werent in your right mind huh??? You couldnt even recognize your own father! Me: he is gonna attention with his yells i needed to calm him down. Am sorry nic but i have to get you to safety first plssss i said pleadingly. Nicholas: stop acting like you care!!!! I'll tell you what, my brother died 4 years ago!! This thing standing in front of me can never be my brother!! He'll never hurt anyone, he is caring, he has a good heart!!!! And unlike him, you are a monster, a murder!!! A..... Just them 10armed men ran towards us. I forcefully pulled him into the basement were he was gonna hide. Me: stay here nic. I said as i stood up to go out.[color/]
17 Dec 2015 | 12:50
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Just hv dis feeling sophy is nt dead.......Nick it's hard but u hv to stick 2gether
17 Dec 2015 | 13:38
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[color =red]EPISODE 47[/color] [color=black]I quickly got out of the basement and stood in front of them. Man: dont move!!! He said moving towards me while i just stared. Just when he got close, i grabbed his gun turned it towards the other men. Me: drop your weapons!!! Man: dont drop them, kill him. I shut the light as darkness cover everywere i rushed toward them as i kick and hit them hard with the gun, while others shot themselves. *******sly******* He walked into the control room and found two dead men, he quickly rushed to were nate was kept and he wasnt there. He ran to mr hilson's room to inform him. Sly: nate is on loose Mr hilson: what!!! Come on get him he yelled. Sly ran out romeo, james nate is on loose, you have to find him. I picked up a machine gun as walked through the passage i knew i'd soon be spotted. Soon i got into the sitting room, as i shot any living thing there. Climbed to the gallery and ranged the alarm. The guards outside quickly rushed in, from the gallery i took them all out with my gun. Just then i turned and saw men running towards me, i tried to shoot but i just heard a clicking sound, i was out of bullets, i quickly took of my t-shirt wrapping it around my right fist. I ran towards them angrily, i took out the last knife, as i gave hard punches, kicks and slitting throats at thesame time. Me: you are all gonna die here!!!! I roared angrily as i weilded the knife dangerously, cutting through there flesh angrily as blood spills was over me. After a while there a lots of dead men on the ground. There life werent even worth a hair on my baby's hair. I was even more pissed as i ran towards mr hilson's room. When someone flung a kick towards me. I quickly flew backwards avoiding the kick. James: going somewhere??? He asked smiling Me: looking at him, my anger doubled as i watched him smile. Me: yaaaaaarrrrrh i ran towards him with a fast punch, which he countered, i quickly swinged the other while he blocked it i gave him a hard head butt on his chest, he staggered backwards, i move towards him with a thripple spin kick he dodged swiftly. Giving him more ferocious attacks. After a long hour of hitting and dodging. James: is that all you've got he said smiling. Me: nicholas get away from him i yelled, well it was actually a trick there was no nicholas, he turned to see who. I rushed toward him hitting his jaws hard with my kneels as he fell down i got on top of him. Me: raining blows on him, you killed her, die you bastard. When i left him blood spill was all over his face. *****nic******* Seeing the kind of things his brother could do and how he punched james to death he was so scared of him right now. He sneaked outside and saw no one he quickly ran out of the compound through the gate. I walked slowly to mr hilson room bathed in blood, you die tonight mr hilson!! I muttered. Then i saw an axe on the wall in a glass case. I hit it had and the glass chattered. This time my looks were extremely deadly, even death sting would have been scared. I saw sly punching something on his keyboard, with the butt of his axe i hit his head hard, as he screamed in pain. Me: you dared to scare my baby!!! Sly: plsss spare me!! those were mr hilson's........ I ripped his heads out before he could say anymore. ******mr hilson****** Romeo informed him about what was going on. Mr hilson: what!!!! Find him quickly. Romeo: james is on that but right now he is coming after you, i have to make sure you are safe. Mr hilson: paced up and down in his room trying to hide his fear, he knew james cant stop him, he was stronger. Just then the door flew open.[color/]
17 Dec 2015 | 13:58
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O my God! Nic pls listen 2 ur brother 1st o b4 judging him. Ride on @desire
17 Dec 2015 | 14:04
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Confirm nate mr hilson it's payback time
17 Dec 2015 | 14:10
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I xo much luv dis epis o. Nate u b correct guy....wel trained! E sweet me wel wel
17 Dec 2015 | 14:16
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Hmmmmmm its pay back time
17 Dec 2015 | 14:18
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[b][color =ff1493]Ekam sid etov hsinif prahs prahs ekam sid yrots eunitnoc geb a[/color][/b]
17 Dec 2015 | 14:35
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Listen to him b4 u judge nic,afta his explanation u cn decide on wat to do wit him
17 Dec 2015 | 14:39
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Hmmmmm nawaoh just speechless.
17 Dec 2015 | 14:43
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U̶̲̥̅̊ r alwyZ killing sum1 wit ur suspense @Desire.. Cnt wait for da nt episode
17 Dec 2015 | 14:43
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Nicholas dnt make tinz hard 4 nate pls....@paula4eva kip it flowing pls
17 Dec 2015 | 15:14
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kill dem all
17 Dec 2015 | 15:32
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Nate kill dem all....... Mr hilson deserves mre dan death......
17 Dec 2015 | 16:06
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Mr hilson your time is up
17 Dec 2015 | 16:11
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This is called payback
17 Dec 2015 | 16:27
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nicholas abeg calm down nd hear from nate before u judge him
17 Dec 2015 | 16:54
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Never realy begin the story bt am enjoyin it.kip it up
17 Dec 2015 | 17:16
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hmmm..following make nicholas listen first b4 e go dey react na...
17 Dec 2015 | 17:35
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Taa nicolas kwechiri... Nate you try sha. Lovin it
17 Dec 2015 | 17:51
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Nic listen to ur broda first b4 anytin....mr hilson ar u afraid of death?
18 Dec 2015 | 00:45
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[color =red]EPISODE 48[/color] [color=black]I walked into mr hilson's room with my axe on my shoulder. Then tossed sly's head on him. Mr hilson: omg!! How dare you!! Me: smiling am gonna rip your head of out, cut you bit by bit and watch you bleed to death! Mr hilson. Mr hilson: romeo kill him!!! Me: you!!!! I said pointing at romeo You dared to put a knife on her throat, you scared her!!! You gonna die!!! I yelled i ran towards him swinging the axe dangerously at him while he dodged quickly. Romeo: you cant kill me nate. Me: this even made me more angrier, i ran towards him, with a high jump i landed on him with a kick, which he supported with his palm, with the butt of the axe i hit his head hard and watched him rolled on the floor. As mr hilson watched in horror. Romeo: rolled towards his knife and took it out. Show time nate, we did the blocking and cutting on each other for a while, there more cuts of me but his was quite severe. Me: do you have any idea what you took from??? She was my world, my life, my happiness, my soul romeo. You are all gonna pay!!!!! I yelled as I ran towards him swinging the axe leftward, but that was a decoy, he blocked it with his knife with the head of the axe i hooked his knife and pulled it forward as he tried to hit me, i grabbed his hand and stretched it out, reversed the knife pointing at him. Me: die!!!!!!! I said as pushed the knife through him with a my strenght. Romeo: smiling he knelt down impressive nate. I picked up the axe and ran towards mr hilson who threw things at me, while dodged. Finally i grabbed him, tossed him hard to the wall then he brought a dagger. With my axe i cut of the hand holding the dagger from the wrist. Mr hilson: aaaaaarrrrrrhhhhhh he put the other hand pleadingly plsss i'll get you another family just spare my....... I slit his other wrist and his hand fell, he screamed in more agony as i just watched. Me: you made me kill my father!!! You made a wreck out of my life, you turned my brother against me!! Well i was willing to let it all pass and move on. Just then you took away my life!!! Mr hilson: am so sorry Me: sorry??? I said walking towards him i cut of the remaining right arm. Sorry cant bring her back!!!!! You fool. I yelled at him. By now he was bleeding seriously and was almost loosing conciousness. Me: this is your karma mr hilson. I raised my hand, swinging the axe heavily on his neck and it flew out like a ball. I walked toward it and grabbed it. Me: even this head of yours aint worth my baby's life i said in tears. Romeo: hahaha you love her this much?? Me: shocked i thought he died, i looked and the knife was at on end of his tommy. I just nodded. Romeo: life is so unfair nate, no matter how hard we try to make it up, it always fades away. You did whats best for you nate!! Am proud of you, you are a free man, he said as tears gathered up in his eyes. Me: i free monster perhaps Romeo: smiling!! There always karma awaiting everyone nate, am glad i didnt get see my karma. Me: looking a him as he smiled in pains, i saw sincerity in his eyes. Romeo: as a young boy, i was taken away from my family in genova, i was told my survival is the only key to saving my family nate. And i survived but my family didnt. Come closer nate! Me: bending close to him Romeo: i didnt kill sophia i knocked her out and called 911, she should be in a hospital. Go get your baby!!![color/]
18 Dec 2015 | 01:21
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d story is getin more interestin bt i hope nic wil nt do anytin stupid
18 Dec 2015 | 01:35
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Oh so interesting. Nicholas shud pls understnd his broda. Next pls @paula4eva
18 Dec 2015 | 02:10
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What about Nic? That brat!
18 Dec 2015 | 02:25
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Tnk God shez alive
18 Dec 2015 | 02:34
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Ha! So much tnk God 4 sophia's life. now how wud ur brother nic 4givs u Nate? Wat abt sophia's parent? Am so much happy dat d devil himsef is gone 4 ever
18 Dec 2015 | 02:57
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Eeew sorry Romeo.
18 Dec 2015 | 04:41
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Thank God sophy is nt dead.
18 Dec 2015 | 05:37
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Hahahahahahaha i think the journey just began... The journey of convincing your brother that you wr hypnotised when you killed your father. The journey of consoling sophia. The journey of making it out of depression. The journey of making it up to everyone. IT JUST BEGAN NATE !
18 Dec 2015 | 06:13
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Eeeeeyaaaa so sowie for romeo... He was deceived.. What a painful nd deceitful world... Wow nate... U̶̲̥̅̊ gat ur gurl to go for... Nxt @ desire.. Really really loved ur story nxt plz...
18 Dec 2015 | 07:29
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Hmmmm, am happy sophia is alive
18 Dec 2015 | 07:41
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Wonderful
18 Dec 2015 | 10:57
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Hmmmm hmmmmm.............BabY@desire,cum nd update nw.....feigning cry[sophia's voice]
18 Dec 2015 | 11:01
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smile...tank God sophie is nt dead...so u need to talk to nic...
18 Dec 2015 | 11:53
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@desire wat is happening now? I've been waiting here 4 too long o, pls just come n make things happen okay!
18 Dec 2015 | 12:00
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[color =red]EPISODE 49[/color] [color=black]Me: what!!!!! Dont mess with me romeo i'll kill you right away. Romeo: hahaha i know you are bloody man, but am already dead ok? I have no reason to lie he said smiling. Me: tears filled my eyes, thanks man i said amidst sobs. Romeo: come on dont cry on me, just kill me already!! Me: you were gonna escape you karma right??? Romeo: nodds(yes) Me: karma just got to you man, i tossed him my shoulder avoiding the knife and ran out of the house as fast as i could to the hospital, the nurses rushed out and took him the emergency ward. It was almost dawn, i went back to mr hilson house collected his credit card and a car, i drove out and the police drove in. I rush to a nearby hotel. Me: hello Recieptionist: hi she replied looking a bit scared, staring at my bare body with fresh blood stains and cuts. Me: well i need a room, haha weird right?? Well its just a costume to scare people, hahaha it looks real right?? Recieptionist: hahah you got me too, you really looked like you are just coming back from a battle field. Me: haha alright a room plssss??? Recieptionist: ok thats the key to room 22. Me: thank you i said smiling uhmm could you help me call delivery man, i need a new tux. I really cant walk around like this you know. Recieptionist: alright sir i'll do just that. Me: smiling thank you sweetheart. I walked into the room and showered, with smiles on my face. My baby is alive, i danced in the shower, cleaned my cuts. I wasnt even thinking when i took romeo to the hospital, just then i heard a knock. I tied a towel around my waste, got on a shower cloth and walked to the door. Recieptionist: sir your order has arrived she said smiling Me: what about the delivery man i asked smiling? Recieptionist: i payed him from your card. She replied staring at my body. Me: i caught her gaze and smile thanks sweetheart i said collecting the tux and was about shutting the door. Recieptionist: uhmm aint you gonna ask me in. Me: later honey i have to see my wife. Recieptionist: wife?? She asked looking suprised. Me: showing her my ring and shut the door. I smiled as i got dressed, brush and combed my hair. If there ever was a time when i wanted to fly high in the sky in happiness, was this morning. I drove down to the hospital cleared romeo's bills, walked into his room and he was awake. Me: smiling hello romeo Romeo: hahaha seriously nate what is wrong with you?? Me: well lets just say am going to get my baby man??. Romeo: i mean me, i really wanted to die!! Me: hahaha seriously??? There is no way you'd have died on me after that wonderful news. Romeo: what if i was lying?? Me: smiling i find you and kill you again!! Romeo: get out of here. Me: dont expect me to come back, find your way out. I said and left as i drove down to new orleans. *****nicholas***** nicholas: search this whole house he said they are inside, he was the one who came with the police. They walked in and saw dead bodies and blood flowing everywhere. He was so shocked, he really wanted to confirm who did the sluttering, after a while they got into mr hilson's room. His head ripped out of his body, he looked around there was no nate. Man: oooh my God what happened here. Nicholas: one man killed them all he said amidst tears, as he thought to himself, he is really a monster!! Look what he did?? Man: can you identify him, we cant let a murderer like this roam free round this city. Nicholas: i'll tell you when i remember anything.[color/]
18 Dec 2015 | 12:16
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Sorry for late reply guys, am pretty busy lately, you know xmas things but dont worry i'll try and finish this as soon as possible
18 Dec 2015 | 12:19
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@desire,if u dnt want me 2 cry,dnt delay d update
18 Dec 2015 | 12:53
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Nicholas,pls dnt put broda in trouble
18 Dec 2015 | 12:56
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@hartuny dont cry i'll try ooo lol
18 Dec 2015 | 12:56
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Beta do@desire
18 Dec 2015 | 13:02
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hmm d battle jst begn
18 Dec 2015 | 13:04
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@arkin battle just began??? Hmmmn battle dat just ended..just hoping Nate won't end up in Jail.
18 Dec 2015 | 13:27
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Chai! See as Nic wan implicate him brother o. Okay @desire chop ur own n chop small 4 me o xmas things, grooving things
18 Dec 2015 | 13:36
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This Nicholas is something else oo, u wanna implicate ur broda. Hahaha u get crazy for head oo! @desire, nice job
18 Dec 2015 | 14:36
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[color =red]EPISODE 50[/color] [color=black]I drove for a very long time at a very high speed. I got to lousiana and the sky was partially dark. I quickly checked round all hospitals in louisiana and finally i found her, the nurse lead me to were she was kept, i saw her lying down on her bed unconcious. Me: didnt that bastard said he just knocked her out?? I thought, nurse whats her condition. Nurse: uhmmm am afraid we lost your child due to excessive fright, shez a frail lady you know, i guess she was roughed. Her condition isnt that bad, am sure she'd be up soon. Me: thank you i said smiling, i quickly sat beside her, i really didnt believe my baby is alive, i could hardly wait for her to wake, i needed to hold her in my arms again. I gave her a peck on her fore-head. ******nicholas****** After there investigation round the house, they had a bit of arguement. Some wanted the corpse to be autopsyfied but others refused. Soon they all got out. While nicholas drove down to see to see ashley he knew she must have been worried. He got to her bag company, took the elevator to the last floor were ashley's office was located. Imediately her eyes fell on him, she quickly hugged him. Ashley: oooh my!!! were have you been??? Nicholas: i was kidnapped Ashley: by who??? Nicholas: are you busy??? Ashley: not really she answered with a confused look Nicholas: ok lets talk it over launch. They both got out and drove to a nearby eatery. Nicholas explained everything in details to her. Ashley: oooh my God!! This explains everything so it was nate all along. Nicholas: how do you mean?? Ashley: i was almost raped 4yrs ago, when 2 dagger out of nowhere pierced the hearts of the 2men who pinned me to the wall. I recieved a transfer alert the next day, from mr ricardo. I also recieved a credit card with a huge amount of money and a note. Build your dreams, which i used in setting up this establishment, from thesame nattan ricardo. Nicholas: shocked# well perhaps he did a few good stuff but he killed dad, i really cant forgive him for that ashley. Ashley: i think its better we talk things over. Nicholas: am glad you've seen what he can do right?? He is pretty dangerous ashley, have seen him kill people like a kid playing with a toy. Ashley: eyes open wild but he is still your brother, and his gonna pay for his own sins too. She said Nicholas: ashley he is not my brother atleast not anymore, he shot my dad without even blinking ashley. No one is safe around him. I dont ever want to have anything to do with him. While i waited i touched her hair, and my heart almost exploded in joy, i was so greatful to romeo. If she had died, i dont know how much of a mess, i'd be. I am a murder, a cheat, a flirt, a lier or anything you can think of. But she makes me feel like a better man, she the good that i need in my life and to hell with what anyone one thinks. She's a treasure i really cannot do without. I thought, just then i felt her move a bit, and her eyes began to open slowly. I watched her in as she opened it, trying to get used to the bright rays of light that pierced her eyes. Sophia: nate!!!! She yelled weakly while i just smiled as she quickly hugged me. Me: am glad you are alright baby. Sophia: i thought i'd never see you again, i saw them carry your body away. Its really you nate she said amidst sobs this time. Me: its me baby i said smiling as i tightened my grip on her[color/]
18 Dec 2015 | 15:13
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Nic u better listen to ur brother story 1st b4 doing anytin o
18 Dec 2015 | 15:13
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i tank God sophia is alive nd nicholas shld listen to nate story first
18 Dec 2015 | 15:40
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Ok
18 Dec 2015 | 15:54
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[color =red]EPISODE 51[/color] [color=black]We stayed like that for a long time. Sophia: am so glad you are alive nate. Me: pulling away from the hug, uhmm i need to get us a house in genova soph. Sophia: no dont leave me nate!!! She said. Me: smiling am not leaving you ok, i want to take you back to genova, but i would have to fix somethings here in lousiana first ok. Sophia: alright baby she said smilling. I gave her a peck and left. I drove to the event centre, looked around and everything was fine. I drove back to the house, cleaned it up, picked up some important item, arranged them in a bag. I got back to the hospital and the doctor said we are free to go home. I took her home, just when we got in tears filled her eyes and i knew why, i quickly hugged her tight while she cried on my shoulder. Me: soph its alright okay?? Am right here for you i said slowly trying to comfort her. After a long hour of crying i led her to the room and she slept of. In the morning i took my shower and soon she was awake. Sophia: are you going somewhere?? Me: yeah i have to get us a house in genova. Sophia: when are you leaving?? Me: now!! Sophia: crying# no no am not staying here alone nate am going with you. Me: alright you dont have to cry about it ok?? Just get ready. Soon she was ready and we flew down to genova. We payed for a hotel and packed our luggages in. I really needed to see nicholas, i drove down to casella. Got to a huge chocolate coloured house walked in and rang the door bell, there was no one in here. I drove down to his office, i got in, he was sitted on his sit writting only God knows what. Me: hello nicholas Nicholas: on seeing me he jerked in fear. How did you get in here?? Me: calm down nic Nicholas: dont tell me to calm down you murderer how could you have killed him how?? I dont ever want to see, i dont want to know you, just get the hell out of my life. Me: hmm i tried smiling a bit, yea am a jerk but rodriguez wasnt our biological father. Nicholas: am dissapointed in you nate, this is the only excuse you can come up with after killing your own father. Shame on you!! Me: enough of it already nic, you have no right to say that to me, you havent been through half of what have been through. Nicholas: oooh is that it??? I...... Cutting him short. Me: just shut the hell up and listen nic i said angrily. You are not a ricardo, you are the son of king clarisse renaldi, a prince of genova. With this bracelet they are gonna recognize you nic. You can go to them whenever you wish. Nicholas: looking stunned, what about you nate?? Me: smiling no one wants a murderer. You can just tell them am dead or sth. I said walking out of the office while nate just stared in amusement. Just then i ran into ashley after a very long time. Ashley: nate?? Me: ashley!! I said trying to smile as she ran towards me and hugged me. Ashley: where the hell have you been. Me: uhmm have been out of the country for a while. Ashley: thanks for everything nate she said hugging me again. Me: everything??? I havent seen your dreams yet?? Ashley: i'll show it to you lets go. We drove down to a huge glass building with ashley davis boldly written on it. Me: woooooow you own this??? Ashley: haha yes dear all thanks to you. Me: i just did what i thought was necessary ashley. Ashley: and the other night too i know that was you. Me: i just smiled, how did you know that??.[color/]
18 Dec 2015 | 16:23
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Oh nic try n understand first now, even ashley is understandable
18 Dec 2015 | 16:24
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hope nic undastndz
18 Dec 2015 | 16:46
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Just calm down nic
18 Dec 2015 | 16:53
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shoo y nic dy bhave lyk dis nau? tinks nate gonna tell ashley abt everytin dat apens 2 im since nic dnt wanna give a listening ear.. nxt episode plz... thumbs up @desire luv ya story
18 Dec 2015 | 16:57
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@besty he cnt once he narate d story to his bro he wil undrstnd nd mr hilson hs to go dwn too
18 Dec 2015 | 17:19
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nic u need to talk to nate b4 u take sme rash decision dat u will ltr regret
18 Dec 2015 | 17:20
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dey hv to locate dere real parent
18 Dec 2015 | 17:35
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guy u r doin great @desire
18 Dec 2015 | 17:36
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I hope Nick forgives you
18 Dec 2015 | 20:42
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Hhmmmmmnnn, this's serious
18 Dec 2015 | 23:53
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Nic try to understand ur bro
19 Dec 2015 | 00:59
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Get it banging
19 Dec 2015 | 03:15
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finally I catch up with u guys I just hope nac understand
19 Dec 2015 | 03:39
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Following U̶̲̥̅̊ solely behind U̶̲̥̅̊... Nxt please..
19 Dec 2015 | 03:46
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rid on guy
19 Dec 2015 | 05:14
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Wow am glad with every bit of the story
19 Dec 2015 | 07:00
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next!!!
19 Dec 2015 | 07:01
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[color =red]EPISODE 52[/color] [color=black]After a brief smile i was silent again, probably you wouldnt have been thanking me if you had any idea what have been up to. I thought Ashley: i know you are worried nate but nicholas told me everything. Me: suprised# ooh he did and why are you still around me. Ashley: i'll never be scared of you nate, but what i donot understand is why you killed your own father. Me: thats what everybody wants to hear, but you donot have any idea how feels like to be controlled. You'd just wake up one morning and it feels like for those passed days you were not in this world. And then you realised in those weird times when your body walked around, you hurt the people you love. Ashley: shocked# she held my hand, what happened to you nate?? She asked with concern all over her face. Me: smiling its all in the past now i really dont want to talk about it. You can just forget about me ok, you owe me nothing. Ashley: looking at me in pity as tears gathered up in her eyes. Me: i guess you should be at the office, i have somewhere else to go to. She alighted and i drove back to the hotel. Sophia: baby!!!!! She said hugging me. Me: smiling# Sophia: whats wrong you dont look to happy. Me: its nothing soph. Sophia: hitting my head hard. Me: ouch that hurts!! Sophia: with a squeeze face you better start talking before i loose my mind!!! Me: hahaha ok fine, i was with my twin bro earlier. Sophia: you have a twin brother?? Me: yep hahaha he looks just like me. Sophia: omg!!! I cant wait see him baby. So why is all that making you sad?? Me: smiling# your dad said we are the prince's of genova Sophia: what!!!! She yelled with her eyes wild open. Me: yea i just want to see what my dad and mum looks like. Sophia: am coming with you she said smiling. Me: uhmm am not gonna introduce myself you know i'd just look at them from a distant and leave. Sophia: you cant make me change my mind. Me: you are not going soph. Sophia: say that one more time. Me: i said you are not going......before i finished she jumped on me, pinning me to the bed. Sophia: in a sexy voice how about now, she said as our lips found each other. ******nicholas****** In his office, before now, nattan was not the type to tell lies but now i really dont think i can trust him on this. He struggled with the thought of whether to go check it out or dispose the information. Finally he decided to go to the royal house in lexington. He concluded his work, went back home to rest for his journey tomorrow. Deep down inside him he was so curious about the kind of persons they were, although he has seen king clarisse photo's but he has never taken note of it. And soon it was down he got dressed and drove down to the royal palace in lexington. Soon he got there, the palace was so beautiful he has travelled almost round genova but has never been here before because he had no business here. He stared at the place for quite a long time, then he stepped out of the car, the house was so large, just then he saw people walking in through an entrance, he quickly followed them in. Messenger: Goodday sir Nicholas: i want to see the king Messenger: you have an apointment?. Nicholas: no, i need him to see this am sure he'd be out in no time. He said handing over the envelope to him. Messenger: collected the envolope walked to the kings chamber. Handed it over to the kings personal servant. Who took it to king clarisse. Servant: my lord a young man sent this letter. He said stretching forth his hands. King clarisse: he was a bit old with just a few wrinkles, you can still see how handsome he was inspite his age and his white shiny hairs. He opened the letter and saw the bracelet. King clarisse: who sent this??[color/]
19 Dec 2015 | 07:15
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gaun gaun... anoda suspense dropped... nxt plz cnt wait 4 da nxt episode
19 Dec 2015 | 07:47
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next
19 Dec 2015 | 07:59
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Nxt
19 Dec 2015 | 09:03
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I love vhiz twin. They are full of actions and suspense. Nic i thouqht u won't check the bracelet out. Now am sure u're qonna benefit a lot 4rm vhiz discovery. Goodluck. Nex pls.
19 Dec 2015 | 11:07
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[color =red]EPISODE 53[/color] [color=black]king clarisse: take this to the queen right now!!! The servant collected it and ran to the queens chambers. While the king went out to see nicholas and his guard quickly followed him. King clarisse: he got to were nicholas stood, he turned quickly and his eyes fell on the king. Nicholas: goodafternoon sire he said bowing a little. King clarisse: just stared at him he look so much like him, with a small slim face like his mother and thick eye brows too. He stood there staring at him. The servant ran to queen helen's chamber, handed over the bracelet to her female servant. She quickly took it to the queen. Servant: my lady the kings wants you to see this. Queen: collecting the bracelet in suprise, who brought this?? Servant: the king's servant said a young man came with this. Queen: no no this is not possible she said as she rushed out too. As the male servant led her the throne room. Just then she saw a young man who stood there and her husband staring at him. Queen: who are you??? Nicholas: i am nicholas, my twin brother is nattan he found out that you were our biological parents after the man who thought was our father died, uhmm murdered i mean. Queen: looking at him its so obvious, he is as cute as his dad, talks him too. But how is it possible!! She thought. My baby is alive after all this years, she said as she walked towards him and hugged him. King clarisse: not so fast boy, get the doctor!!! He yelled and they all walked into his large sitting room, with king size sofa's as they waited for the doctor. Nicholas: i shouldnt have listened to nate, this is all a trick, perhaps he wants to get rid of me too. He was sweating on his palm as both the king and queen kept there gaze fixed on him. Soon an old man walked in with a brief case. Doctor: greetings my lord. King: i need you to confirm the paternity of this young man. Immediately he brought a syringe, took samples of his blood. Since sophia was coming with me i couldnt sneak into the royal court, so i took her to a 3d game centre. Sophia: hahah nate i'll kill you if you mess with me, is this the royal court??. Me: hahah am so scared, soph when did you become this scary yikes!! Sophia: ofcos i have to be scary!! I'll be learning how to fight too!! You know. Me: ok lets do a real combat in the game world. We walked in payed for coins and was in front of a 2man combat game. On the screen was a male and female character facing each other ready to fight. Me: hahaha am so gonna bit you to death. Sophia: hahah i know you to be a retired murderer so am not scared and you know what am a serial killer!! She said pointing at her self with her right thumb feeling cool about it. Me: hahah cool we got the glooves on. Come on hit me, she swing a blow and her character in the game did thesame. I gave her a merciless beating and upper cut. Sophia: hahaha nate!!! She yelled hit my shoulder. You aint teaching me. Me: hahaha sorry serial killer. We did the learning until she was exhausted Sophia: fighting aint easy you know, she said sitting on the floor. How did you learn?? Me: smiling sahkalin island. Sophia: what??? You went there to train. Me: mr hilson took me there after being hypnotized. Have you ever swam for almost a day?? Sophia: you did that?? She said raising her eye brows. Me: smiling and i jogged too for a whole day. Sophia: it must have been really hard nate. Me: no its funny whenever am saying it to you soph Sophia: laughing so loud, you have gone completely nut. Lets go get a house am tired of a hotel. Me: alright lets do that.[color/]
19 Dec 2015 | 12:18
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Hmmmm....1st 2 comment.....
19 Dec 2015 | 13:29
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following
19 Dec 2015 | 13:37
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Lovely story. Next plss
19 Dec 2015 | 15:05
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Am really lovinq it......Feelinq like it shouldn't end.....Nice work@Desire
19 Dec 2015 | 15:38
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Eyaa,nic u ave to forgive ur brother...he went through hell just bc of u
19 Dec 2015 | 16:04
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hope dos turn out gud
19 Dec 2015 | 16:37
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following
19 Dec 2015 | 17:38
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well done @Desire
19 Dec 2015 | 17:40
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am here o
19 Dec 2015 | 17:43
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[color =red]EPISODE 54[/color] [color=black]We drove down to serra rico town after a long search we got to wonderful huge house, painted in white and ash colours. It has an electric gate and fence, the compound was a bit spacious, it has 2 sitting room, a curvy stair case and an elevator. A wonderful pool well carved like number eight and beach boards too. To the left was snooker board. The up of it was filled with fitness equipment, there was a total of 6rooms in this house with each own rest room, wild enough for a jaccuzi. After a little bit of biding i decided to buy other than rent it. I payed for the house with mr hilson's credit card. Sophia: i love this house baby Me: really alright it yours already, do the signing. Sophia: i have a house nate!! Me: shut up!! Hahaha that you dad's house Sophia: its mine too. Me: and this?? Sophia: ours!! Me: hahaha i like you!! ok lets go get the paper works ready. *****nicholas****** The doctor was done with the test, as they all waited his heart panted so hard, he wasnt prepared for anyform of trouble. Doctor: congratulation sir he is your son! Nicholas: exhaling deeply as he shut his eyes. Clarisse: shut his eyes too and breath down in relief. While helena walked to him and hugged him so tight. Helen: what happened to my baby all this years she said with teary eyes, clarisse gave him a soft squeeze on his shoulders. Clarisse: your mum has always said she felt that you were alive but i was too naive to believe it, i thought her mind was playing games on her, so i didnt go insearch of you am so sorry son. Nicholas: it was true afterall he said smiling. He hugged the queen. All my life have always wanted to see a mother, even if they were just an image and i got none. My late dad tried his best but the vaccuum could not be filled. Helen: am sorry son you where taken away without a trace but not for a day have i forgotten about you my son. She said touching his hair as they hugged each other again with teary eyes. Clarisse: were is you brother nicholas?? Nicholas: he is somewhere in genova, i dont think his the kind of person you might want to see. Helen: how do you mean? Nicholas: for 4years now it feels like i dont even know him at all. He just comes and goes. Helen: i would like to see my baby. Clarisse: dont worry helen am sure he'll come around. Its really a joyful day we need a to have a feast. Helen: yes to formally introduce my son. But first am gonna take you to your sister. Nicholas: i have a sister?? He asked smiling as she led him into the king's main house, they walked to her daughter's room. Princess: goodmorning mum Helen: how are you my princess Princess: am fine mum. Helen: nicholas thats your sister mia and mia your elder brother nicholas. Nicholas: smiling hello sis Mia: a fair complexioned lady with a small oval shape face and thick eye brows, black long hairs, with cute dimple's on her check and very dark pupils like nate, with a smile like his. I dont understand mum. She said with a contorted face, she was totally a female version of nate. He thought Helen: i told you once, your brothers were kidnapped when they were little, we thought they died. But they didnt mia. Mia: looking at nicholas, it was obvious he really was her brother she quickly hugged him. After the paper signing. We went to get ice cream cone's. Sophia: so who's gonna do the interior designing?? Me: you tell me Sophia: none that is in genova, that i know of. Me: just say the word baby this is mr hilson credit card, you havent even spent up to one forth of his money. Sophia: hahahaha you took his credit card??. Me: ya he has to pay for damages too i said smiling. Sophia: you are something else nate!.[color/]
19 Dec 2015 | 17:59
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Hmmm. Nate go and meet ur parent,and u av a SIS !
19 Dec 2015 | 18:36
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Nate go meet ur parent,so u wud settle it
19 Dec 2015 | 18:43
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woww this is very interesting
19 Dec 2015 | 19:11
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lolz... sure thin he has 2 pay.. ride on plz
19 Dec 2015 | 19:30
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If mr hilson head cant pay then his credit card will pay
20 Dec 2015 | 01:00
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happy for u @Nicholas.u r a gud guy @Nate
20 Dec 2015 | 02:40
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Hmmmmm
20 Dec 2015 | 03:14
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I love nate
20 Dec 2015 | 03:14
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Hu knows d heir to the throne either Nic or Nate..........Nate ur type is rare
20 Dec 2015 | 04:34
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[color =red]EPISODE 56[/color] [color=black]we got back to our hotel in a happy mood as i fell on the bed tiredly. Sophia: when did you become this lazy?? Me: am not lazy Sophia: of course you are otherwise you'd have showered first. Me: sophy you should have just said you want to shower with me. Sophia: i wasnt gonna shower?? Me: great the name lazy includes you too #tongues out# Sophia: you are so dead she said taking of her clothes, like a lightening she jumped on me. Me: trying to catch her i fell hard on the bed. Oooouch sophs!!! When did you become this rough and wild. Sophia; smirk# she sat on me pulling my shirt, bringing my lips closer and we were in a wonderful kiss. Me: smiling# am so ready to die now. I said turning her over. *****nicholas****** Helen left them alone to have a brother and sister chat. Nicholas: woooow you are pretty!!! Mia: you are handsome she smiling. Nicholas: i came to see my mum and dad, and now a kid sis?? Mia: i hate being a princess thank God you are here no more official meetings. Wheeeeew. Nicholas: seriously you are just like him. Mia: who??? Nicholas: nattan Mia: he behaves like me?? She asked smiling Nicholas: very much he is a talkative only when he is interested in the topic. I dont know if he is shy but he doesnt like to be noticed. Mia: hahaha am not shy its just tiring. Princess this, princess that, aaaaarrrh its driving me crazy. Nicholas: well looking at it, it sounds like fun to me. Mia: goodluck bro i really need a regular life you know!!. Nicholas: smiling# perhaps you want to show me around. She grabbed his hands happily as they walked around while she introduced him as the prince, and they accorded him his due respect. Mia: do you have a girlfriend? Nicholas: a fiance actually Mia: what! So when are getting married?? Nicholas: uhmmm we havent gotten a date yet, but once shes ready we'd get it done with. Mia: hahaha wooow thats nice whats her name?? Nicholas: ashley he said smiling Mia: hmmm i smell love in the air. Shez pretty right?? Nicholas: very pretty mia Mia: when do i see nattan. Nicholas: smile on his face weared of abruptly. Uhmm i dont know Mia: why the long face?? Nicholas: nothing just that we aint in talking terms. Mia: hmmm just not in talking terms??. They walked round and finally they walked back to her room. Nicholas: i have to go mia Mia: why!! I thought you were staying?? Nicholas: haha i have to be at the office. Mia: your gonna come back right?? Nicholas: uhmm i dont think that will be possible. Mia: nooo am coming with you, its really boring in here. Nicholas: no you can come with me i'll be back but probably not today. Mia: ok she said sadly falling into her bed and watched him leave, he drove to his office. On his was he battled with thought of whether to call nate or not. He grabbed his phone and dialed his number. Me: hello Nicholas: your mum wants to see you. Me: mum!!! I said and was silent again he said afew words and hanged up. Sophia: baby what is it she asked?? Me: my brother, he said my mum wants to see me. Sophia: woooow she said hugging me tight, clad in just bra, thats goodnews. Me: i dont wanna go soph Sophia: why?? Me: smiling am really not the kind of person they'd want to see. Sophia: i understand nate but no matter who you are your family would always understand. Me: you think so Sophia: its not like they are gonna know anyway. Me: the truth can never be hidden nicholas hates me right now because he knows the truth. Sophia: but i dont nate thats the difference i love you for your, openess, despite the fact i was weak you werent this i didnt tell you in other to protect you type, you cant protect no one by lying. Me: looking at her Sophia: am sure they missed you more. Me: i'll think about it i said lying down facing the other side while she laid too holding me.[color/]
20 Dec 2015 | 05:15
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Abeg go see them jhoor....
20 Dec 2015 | 05:35
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Go visit dem
20 Dec 2015 | 06:02
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It will b good if u c nic nd talk tins over b4 seeing dem
20 Dec 2015 | 06:17
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[color =red]EPISODE 57[/color] [color=black]It was a bit hectic day for nicholas but seeing his real parents and a wonderful sis, he couldnt help but smile while he worked. After a long time he was done, he drove home to have a wonderful night rest. We slept of that way and soon it was dawn. I got out of bed to ease myself. Sophia: goodmorning baby Me: morning sweetheart i said giving her a peck. Sophia: so when are you going?? Me: ooooh i have to be in new orleans today, i've got things to take care of. Sophia: we both know you are lying nate. Me: nope you should come along too. Sophia: picked up her phone, hello mr sam. Could you please clear all my husband's schedule?? Mr sam: he doesnt have any ma'am Sophia: thank you she said smiling. Then she hunged up and turned to meet my gaze. Hahah you are such a lier she said standing. Me: hahaha soph!!!! Stop this. Sophia: walking slowly towards me clad in just bikini's touching my chest slowly. Me: great now your gonna seduce me i said smiling. Sophia: get into the shower nate. Me: what if i dont!! Sophia: you wouldnt dare she said gluing her chest to mine as she stood on her toes to give me a peck. Me: hahaha you really should stop doing...... I wasnt done talking when she pulled me hard into the shower. We showered together and after a while we got out Sophia: your hair lacks moisture nate. Come here. She applied a hair cream on it, combed it and made the top part learn rightward, dark and curly. Me: hmmm impressive it cuter, you are a genius soph. Sophia: combing hers in front of the mirror, yea you have to look cute too you know. Soon we were done and she was clad in a silvery sparky gown. Me: clad in a black tux and a sparkling white shirt. Wooow you look gorgeous honey i said as she stood. Sophia: smiling thank you she said stretching the back of her palm for me to kiss. Me: you are kidding me right you are no princess i said smiling. Sophia: nope but you are, and that how to greet a lady. Me: hahah alright! Kissing her hand, shall we my lady. Sophia: sure!! She said smiling. Me: this feels weird you know. Sophia: sssshhhh you are doing great. Lets go baby. We walked out slowly to the car while sophia walked slowly to the other door waiting for me to open it. Me: what are you doing?? Sophia: waiting for my husband to act like a gentle man. Me: i walked to were she was grabbed her shoulder and pushed her to the drivers seat. Sophia: ouch ouch easy baby!!! Now what!!! Me: smiling# in a feminine voice you are driving baby i said and walked to the other side, got in. Sophia: aaaaaarrrrh i hate you nate. Me: smiling# i know you do baby. Sophia: she got in, started the engine, what kind of man would make his wife drive while he sits in front comfortably. Its not romantic nate!. Me: what lady would force her husband into doing something against his wish. Sophia: is that what this is about?? Me: moving my lips close to hers. Its easy baby, you can decide not to go and i'll take you to were your gonna be treated like a princess or you drive i whispered softly while she just smiled. Sophia: kissing me, am taking you to your family she said initiating the gear and we speed off. Me: noooooo!!!!! You could have just changed you mind. Sophia: try harder Me: fine i'll give a bj!!! Sophia: haaaaa!!! She exhaled holding her chest thats dirty she said #tongues out# Me: come on, ok soon its gonna snow. We are gonna be playing with snow balls like kids you know. Sophia: nice but not a chance. Me: i'll make you creme bu' le'!!! Sophia: creme bu le'??? The car began to stop slowly like the last one right??. Me: its gonna taste better trust me i said kissing her neck slowly. Sophia: its tempting but no!! She stepped on the accelerator again. Me: aaaaarrrghhh am not talking to you ever again i folded my arms and looked the other way[color/]
20 Dec 2015 | 07:06
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nyc one
20 Dec 2015 | 07:10
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U both shud stop acting lyk a kid nd do wat is right,nate
20 Dec 2015 | 07:22
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great work.following
20 Dec 2015 | 07:50
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Lovely stowie. Next plss
20 Dec 2015 | 08:09
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[color =red]EPISODE 58[/color] [color=black]******nicholas****** After a few hours of working he decided to go and spend sometime with mia. The thought of it gladened his heart. Finally he was done he got his keys and was out. soon we were close to the royal house. Me: i just stared at soph Sophia; dont worry baby am right here ok. Me: just nodds and smiled a bit as she rubbed my cheek. Soon we drove in through the huge gate passage was quite easy. Every minute we got closer, my heart beat increased. Sophia: its ok nate!! Am right here. Me: yeah am fine lets just go in already. We walked in and everyone seemed a bit friendly as we they led us to the living room, perhaps because nicholas was already here. Just then a wonderful, slim tall and cute lady with thick eye brows, she look so much like nicholas i thought. She walked in with a smile. Mia: why do you have that look on nicholas?? Just then nicholas walked in Nicholas: thats because he is nattan he said with a mean look. Me: i was about standing to leave when sophia held my hand, and i sat still. Mia: wooow you look just like him!! She said touching my face, am mia your baby sis. Sophia: woooow she said smiling hitting me hard a bit with her elbow. Me: smiling uneasily my kid sis??? Mia: yup she replied smiling. Nicholas: holding her shoulder thats right nate. Mia: hello she said looking at soph Sophia: hi she said smiling Mia: nate plsss let me show around she said pulling me up. Me: uhmmm i dont think.... I was still talking. Sophia: he'd love to hahaa his just shy you can take him. Like a lightening mia pulled him along. Mia: have been dying to see you nate. Me: wooow how did you get to know about me?? Mia: nicholas told me Me: oooh he did, you are really pretty mia. Mia; ooooh thank you nic says you are always busy. Me: smiling yeap a bit, running an even centre aint easy you know. Mia: you own an even centre, cool!!! Can i see it. Me: its not in genova, its in new orleans. Mia: wooow aaaaarrrh!!! i have been stucked in here for 19whole years nate. Me: wooow thats to long!! I said looking suprised. Mia; its so boring being a princes, dad wont let me out. They didnt want to loose me too Me: how did you go to school. Mia: i never went to school i studied at home, am a biochemist. Me: hahaaha sorry about that and mia dont get your hopes up am not here to run away with you ok. Mia: thats what i want nate plsssss i know nicholas would never do that he behaves like dad. Me: and you think i would?? Mia: hahah i think you can. Me: come on i cant, my wife is in the living room. Mia: your married??? Coool Me: yeah its been years now. Mia: so you cant get me outta here since you are married??. With teary eyes am so tired aaaaarrrh am gonna explode. Me: hmmm fine she hid in the back sit and we drove out at an high speed, then i opened the roof of the car. Mia: smiling she got up am freee!!!!!! She yelled as her hair danced in the air *****nicholas***** Sophia: what is your problem nicholas. Nicholas: i dont get you?? Sophia: its obvious, the way you act around him. Nicholas: he is a murderer. Sophia: stop making it sound that way nic you should understand. Have seen him killed 8men, but he was hypnotized. Nicholas: he killed his dad too. Sophia: that wasnt his fault!!! She yelled he was tortured and controlled by mr hilson. He has seen hell, i saw how hard it was for my dad to break the hypnosis he went 3days without food, it hurts him so bad. So whatever you saw him do to mr hilson, is an expression of anger, pain and grief for 4years now. She said with teary eyes.[color/]
20 Dec 2015 | 08:30
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Hmmmm_ tell him o
20 Dec 2015 | 08:40
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2 lover bird
20 Dec 2015 | 09:17
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I love that sophia
20 Dec 2015 | 09:22
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I just hope that nic will understand
20 Dec 2015 | 09:23
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[color =red]EPISODE 59[/color] [color=black]Mia: i love you nate!!!! Whoooo hoooo Me: smiling you are really naughty Mia: i dont care!!!!!! Me: sit down mia Mia: so were are we going to?? Me: were do you wanna go. Mia: i wanna fly a train, eat ice lollies, watch a movie and go to the beach and...... Me: whoow that too many, not on my watch ok. Mia: oooh come on!!!! Me: we'd do train flying, then i'll get you ice creams too Mia: what about the movie?? Me: some other time. Mia: nate do not mess with me i cry alot you know and trust me its ear itching and i scream too. Me: hahaha are you threatening me mia?? Mia: nope just stating facts. I really can wait. Soon we got on the train and as it drove in high flying speed moving up and down, mia kept on screaming, she wasnt a bit scared. And soon we were done with that. Mia: hahaha why are you staring at me??? Me: you are really crazy you know that. Mia: have riden this in my dreams but not in reality you know, thanks for bringing me here nate. Me: trust me this is not the first time am sticking my head out for someone. And you might wanna hate me later so its no big deal. Mia: ice cream!!! She pulled me quickly as we rushed to the ice cream car. She grabbed a few and ate it in such a disgusting manner, traces of ice cream on her lips and she spilled some on her cloths too. Me: mia!!!! I yelled in shock. Mia: what?? Me: have you no manners??? Mia: with a squeezed face, shaking her head nope. Me: you want more?? Mia: nodding. Me: here clean yourself up i said handing over a face towel to her, which she did but her cloths were ruined already. Mia: holding my arm again and pointing at the ice cream like a kid. Me; exhaling i never knew i was gonna babysit i thought. Mia: nate!!! Me: ok! Hello give me another cone on ice cream. Mia: about grabbing it again i shifted it. Me: mia eat slowly ok i can get you as much as you want ok!! Mia: nodding Me: here you go i said handing it over to her and she was about grabbing it in a haste again i took it away. Mia: nate!!!!! Me: relax dont embarrass me mia, that is if you wanna hang out with me again. Then i handed it over to her. Mia: she collected and licked it a bit moderately. Soon she was tired of ice creams. I took her to a boutique to get her new cloth. As we walked in she held my hands and hopped in. Attendant: welcome sir do you want a wonderful cloth for this pretty miss? Mia: yes she said smiling. Attendant: wait here sire, they took her in and then she was out with a wonderful kneel lenght blue gown. Me: woooow you are beautiful Mia: you like it?? Me: yea alright its time to go home. *******nicholas****** Nicholas: looking at sophia. he decided that himself, he chosed to be control. He said Sophia: you know nothing nic, he was kidnapped, have you seen his body. It has alot of scars, you think you feel bad about the death of your father he feels worst nic!!. Nicholas: he lied to me!!! Just when he came back after disappearing for year he sluttered everyone in mr hilson's house, why arent you scared of him. Sophia: because the only way he's not gonna be that monster you see is only when the once he loves and care about, choose to love him back and stand by him despite all he has been through and all he has done. Nicholas: just stared at her, she was right. He thought Helen: coughing. Nicholas: shocked# mum!!! How long have you been there. Helen: as long as you can imagine nicholas she said walking to have a sit. So who is the he you've been talking about??.[color/]
20 Dec 2015 | 10:05
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nice [email protected] such a wondaful reunion nd is gud to be inlove
20 Dec 2015 | 10:12
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U did d right tin sophia.,nicholas is left 2 u,u can nw go to hell afta dat explanation
20 Dec 2015 | 10:15
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Dis Nic seems to b too judgemental wen he z nt a gurl.. Nxt plz.. Cnt wait
20 Dec 2015 | 10:19
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[color =red]Helen heard their discussion good. is'nt sophie juan's friend well looks like anoda show is comming if by chance they meet together.%[/color]
20 Dec 2015 | 10:57
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[img]http://www.fegostars.mywapblog.com/files/smile.jpg[/img][b]@paula4eva[color =green] nice job. Really love yr way of updating keep the good job rolling. [/color][size =90][u][color =red]W[/color][color =blue]E[/color][color =yellow]LL[/color][color =brown]D[/color][color =orange]O[/color][color =cyan]N[/color][color =green]E[/color][color =red].....[/color][/u][/size][/b]
20 Dec 2015 | 11:03
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Please @desire update the next epi pleeeaaaassssss
20 Dec 2015 | 11:06
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a word is enough for d wise I think u now know what ur brother has pass through so it now let to do d right thing what are u gonna tell queen now?
20 Dec 2015 | 11:08
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[color =red]EPISODE 60[/color] [color=black]Nicholas: looking at sophia who returned his gaze like they were talking with there eyes. Helen: do i need to remind you am still here, and i heard all of it so i wanna know who?? . Nicholas: nate he said moving his gaze from sophia to his mum. Helen: what!!! Were is he?? She as with an alarmed look. Sophia: ma'am i dont think his gonna want to talk about it, its so much of a hurting memory, his been trying so hard to forget lately. Helen: nicholas who is she?? She asked looking angry. Nicholas: i really do not know but i think she came in with nate. Helen: looking at sophia you are not allowed to speak until you are told to!! She said authoritatively. Sophia: just stared at her. Helen: tell me everything nicholas Nicholas: we grew up with our father, in montoggio, just when we finished high school nate said he wanted to work while i went to college, he secured a job and months later he came to around, asking me not to go back to the house. He said dad went for a business trip to san francisco i was so happy, gave me a huge money for a new house. He seemed to be doing so well he gave me alot of money, that is more than enough to clear my fees. Then he came by again and said my dad died in a plane crash, after breaking the news to me he varnished, we only talked on phone. After 4 whole years while i was on a crime case involving the man he worked with. He took me hostage, after a few days he showed me a video of how ricardo died. Helen: how?? Nicholas: nate shot him without even blinking an eyelid, i refused to believe it until i saw him slutter humans like animal. I escaped out of fear and when i came back, the whole house was filled with dead bodies. Helen: he killed them all?? She asked with a concerned look. Sophia: that was because they came into our house murdered my parents and shot nate with sleeping needles. Helen: looking at her, who asked you to speak!!!. Just then nate and mia walked in smiling. Mia: hello mum Me: looking at her i really dont know what to call her, i shifted my gaze to sophia, i knew something was definitely wrong. Helen: nattan?? She asked looking at me closely. Nicholas he looks so harmless. Nicholas: looks are decietful mum. Sophia: this wasnt going the way she planned she wasnt gonna sit back and watch them call him a murderer. Nate wont hurt anyone on purpose!!! She yelled this time. Helen: this time she was pissed too, she snapped her fingures and 2 huge men came in. Throw her out. She commanded Me: back of i said stopping them halfway while they looked at the queen for further orders. Soph lets go, i said pulling her up. I know she was gonna cry anytime soon. Helen: nate i havent asked you to leave!!! Me: looking at her with hatred in my his eyes. Lets go soph i moved pulling her along. Helen: seize him!!! Then 3other men walked in, one held my hand and the other pulled soph roughly. Me: i said let her go!!! I yield, he held her hard. Soph: nate dont.... Like a lightening i threw both men to the ground rush towards the other guy, giving very hard punches. Me: looking at nicholas angrily i walked to were he was pulled him up roughly. Nicholas: let go of me nate!! Me: you know what nic in your life dont ever refer to me as your brother. You are intelligent and smart, and successful is all because of this monster. Do you even know how long it took me before i find out they were our biological parents. I saved you from mr hilson and the thank you i got was this!!. I'll tell you what nic, get your miserable self out of my life. From today you are dead to me. If i see you anywhere close to me i'll kill for real.[color/]
20 Dec 2015 | 12:09
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Hahaha@donyas nice character. Cooool thumbs up
20 Dec 2015 | 12:11
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Tis is serious o, still waiting for more update @desire plsssss
20 Dec 2015 | 12:24
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Huh......helen,nicholas is just lyk u...lyk mother lyk son
20 Dec 2015 | 12:25
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helen didn't put maturity in dis at all
20 Dec 2015 | 12:48
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roll it on
20 Dec 2015 | 12:58
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[color =red]EPISODE 61[/color] [color=black]Helen: nate let go of him now!!! Me: i tossed him hard on the seat. I was about walking out when the guard stood in the way I pulled soph and she resisted, like she read my mind i was gonna leave genova. I was begining to hate this new family already. She kept on giving me the dont do it look Helen: nate have you no respect??? Me: hahahha respect, greetings my lady Helen: nicholas was right after all you are really a disgrace nate. Me: i let go of sophia's hands and walked towards her, the guards tried to stop me i knocked them out. Disgrace?? He told you am a monster right? Helen: you action doesnt contradict his words. Me: haha i smiled with teary eyes it was all your fault, you could have gone in search of us, but you didnt and you stand here talking to me about my atitude. It was all a mistake i shouldnt have come here anyway. I brought home your son, am done here. Helen: you dont talk to me in such a disrespectful manner. She said standing Me: you decieve worst!!! You are more of a disgrace than i helen: giving me hot slap. Me: with teary eyes you expect that to hurt right??. I turned to leave when mia hugged me. Mia: dont go nate she said amidst sobs. Me: am sorry mia, i cant stay here. I walked to the car as sophia ran after me. We got in and i drove of. *****helen****** Looking stunned as she sat back on her sit. As she wondered what just happened, she has never been addressed in such disrespectful manner before. He was really pissed. Nicholas: on the other hand was silent while mia just stared at both of them in silence. We drove headed back to the hotel in silence i was so angry right now i felt like i was gonna explode. Sophia: looking at me as tears filled her eyes. Finally i got to a street boxing ring were there were lots of punching bags. I parked in front. Me: you can drive to the hotel, i walked toward the bags and began to hit then extremely hard with all my energy for a while as tears flowed from my eyes. Just then someone hugged me from behind. Sophia: nate stop this right now you are hurting me. Me: just paused for a while Sophia: i want you to know nate, you are not alone, i'll be right beside you even in the midst of a heaviest rain, i'll be right beside you in the midst of the heaviest storm. I dont ever want to see you hurt nate, you are all have got. Plssss stop this right now?? Me: turning towards her as i hugged her tightly. Sophia: you are my family nate, let anyone say what they like nate or think what they want to, it a free world. Just remember that there is someone who knows you for who you are and loves you for that nate. Who will never ever give up on you. Always remember that baby Me: trying to smile you are wonderful soph lets go home. We drove back to the hotel made arrangement for the interior designing of our house. The man incharge said everything was gonna be ready in 3days time. I cleared the bills. While they all remained in silent and stunned king clarisse walked in. Clarisse: hmmm what is going on he said looking at mia. Mia: ask mum and nicholas i just came in. Clarisse: whats wrong helen why are you all looking moody?? Helen: his twin came around Clarisse: nattan?? Helen: yup and from what i heard from nicholas he is a serial killer. While we talked about it the lady he came with kept interupting. I ordered the guards to take her out just then he came in, and was creating a scene in here. Clarisse: nicholas who was that lady?? Nicholas: i have no idea, maybe his friend or girlfriend. Mia: perhaps you've been so busy criticizing him, to know he is married thats his wife dad. Clarisse&helen: wife????[color/]
20 Dec 2015 | 13:54
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Hmm....i love dis story. Next plss
20 Dec 2015 | 14:28
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Mia,u 2 sure jawe.....i knw d king ll understand much beta dan helen
20 Dec 2015 | 14:31
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Am beginning to hate nicholas
20 Dec 2015 | 14:52
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Nice work bro
20 Dec 2015 | 15:02
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[color =red]EPISODE 62[/color] [color=black]Helen: omg!!! Now i think i know why he was pissed the guards was about taking her out when he walked. Clarisse: have you seen him kill anyone. Nicholas: he shot our dad, i saw the video too. Clarisse: when did he kill him?? Helen: honey what has when got to do with this?? Clarisse: this are our kid, we need all necessary details. Nicholas: its been almost 4years now. Clarrise: hmmm how did you get to know when your dad died. Nicholas: he picked me up from school, to an eatery were he told me dad died in a plane crash. Clarisse: oooh you were in school then? Nicholas: yea a fresher Clarisse: hmm so after your dad died who footed your bills?? Nicholas: looking at the king, nattan he said. Clarisse: you have lived with your brother ever since you were little you should know him better than anyone. Do you think he hates your dad? Nicholas: not at all, there was no way the nate i knew would have killed him. Clarisse: have you talked to him about it? Nicholas: nope i was so scared of him after killing almost 50men Clarisse: no matter what you saw there nothing like family. Where is he now. Nicholas: am afraid he has disappeared again. Helen: honey what do you intend doing. Clarisse: search for him of course. He walked out, gave orders and the guards in the palace quickly went in search of him. After a boring day we decided to have a warm night, we placed orders for beer and chicken. Sophia: hahaha i dont drink bear nate. I have no stamina at all. Me: thats what tonight is meant for baby. I stood up shutting the doors. Sophia: lets eat the chicken first. Me: alright ma'am do the counting. Sophia: alright 1; 2; 3!!! We pounced on the chicken very fast, and soon our mouth was all filled up. Sophia: hahaha this idea of your's it very naughty nate. Me: trust me its the best. Soon we finished with the chicken, open the can bear. We began to empty them very fast too. Till we became tipsy. We talked gilberish for a while before passing out. ******clarisse****** He insisted that everyone would remain in the palace until this issue about was addressed. They waited for along time and there was no trace of him, they all left, while nicholas drove back to his house. While we had a wonderful sleep we heard a loud knock on the door. We both laid still with the thought that whoever it was, would just go away. But the knock persisted. I dragged myself to the door. Opened it to see a man standing. Me: yeah?? Man: the king wants to have a word with you Me: smiling still tipsy, what king?? am not coming ok, tell him that. Man: he wont...i shut the door and went back to sleep. While the guard rushed back to inform the king. Soon it was dawn, sophia got on me. Sophia: you know you are crazy right?? She said giving me a kiss Me: nope i dont, i walked into the shower, took my bath and was out. Sophia: are going somewhere today??? Me: yup to the see the design used in our house. Sophia: alright am coming with you lemme shower too she said. She took her bath applied a light make up and she was looking so beautiful, just then we heard another knock on the door. Me: are you expecting anyone?? Sophia: not at all. I walked to the door opened it to see a man wearing a black suit standing in front of my door. Me: what can i do for you?? Just then i heard another voice. Voice: hello nate??[color/]
20 Dec 2015 | 15:43
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Dont even knw what to type
20 Dec 2015 | 15:56
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am loving dis story
20 Dec 2015 | 15:58
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Who could dat be??
20 Dec 2015 | 16:04
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I neva sleep o @desire cos am still waiting for more update today
20 Dec 2015 | 16:07
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Who cud dat be????.........Nic a listening ear is all nate need
20 Dec 2015 | 16:08
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D king oo
20 Dec 2015 | 16:10
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I love dis side of d story dan mr hilson part.next please
20 Dec 2015 | 16:17
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i dnt knw wat wrong wit nic,he shld jst gv nate a listening ear.......i rilli luv d king's response@desire pls cum update cuz am not gonna sleep today
20 Dec 2015 | 16:38
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Hahaha abeg sleep oo@inemeka me am going to bed oooh
20 Dec 2015 | 16:47
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No oh we ar wetin 4 ur next update
20 Dec 2015 | 16:49
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Pls go on now dnt go to bed cuz I'm really enjoying diz story abeg
20 Dec 2015 | 16:54
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Ur li2 sis Mia
20 Dec 2015 | 17:21
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Mee too dnt wanna sleep o @Desire.. Dat nic of a guy z rili a fool asin so so foolish da King is so nd very Undastanding.. Nxt plz..
20 Dec 2015 | 17:41
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@desire,i wanna sleep wit u
20 Dec 2015 | 17:46
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Reason
20 Dec 2015 | 17:59
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d voice is let me guess maybe nic or mia or Helen
20 Dec 2015 | 18:05
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d voice is let me guess. nic
20 Dec 2015 | 18:13
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Maybe scorpion or whats his name / The king
20 Dec 2015 | 18:23
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Ur father the king z more reasonable than ur mum
20 Dec 2015 | 18:47
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Everytin abt da story is weird brother!
20 Dec 2015 | 19:22
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the king is there to see hz son....
20 Dec 2015 | 22:11
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I think the voice belongs to the king Nate's dad
20 Dec 2015 | 23:04
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[color =red]I open my eyes and close them hard! Hoping to wake from my dream (though i don't wanna wake) but hell yeah its a reality that today is the D-day and @promzy also made it this far. Do you know why? 'coz of your votes!!! It isn't over yet, you only need to vote once and that would be all, don't forget to vote your girl @promzy !!![/color]
21 Dec 2015 | 01:28
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IT SHU B D KING
21 Dec 2015 | 01:47
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Still following, though i came late. Nice job @desire
21 Dec 2015 | 02:03
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[color =red]EPISODE 63[/color] [color=black]Clarisse: hello son he said smiling. Me: looking so suprised i just stared at him. Sophia: honey who is it?? Clarisse: can i come in Me: i left the way and he walked in. Sophia: shocked# goodmorning sire she said bowing a bit. Clarisse: you were the lady the lady helen gave orders to be taken out right?. Sophia: just nodds Me: i led him to the only sofa in the room and he sat down. Clarisse: smiling you really have grown alot nate, i wonder if i can ever catch up with being a father to you after all this years. I want you to know if theres anyone to be blame for anything you went through its me nate. Me: i dont blame you i lied. Clarisse: thank you son. Me: no need to thank me sire Clarisse: i walked into my living room yestiday and meet an awkward silence. I was wondering if we could do alittle bit of talking. Sophia: honey am gonna go site seeing before i could say soph she was out. Me: aaaarrrh i yelled in my head and sat on my bed. Clarisse: i need to know everything that is going on, i really want to be a good dad, plsss help me be a good dad. Me: what exactly do you want to know sire. Clarisse: did you go to college?? Plss i need to know the truth nate. Me: nope Clarisse: why son? Me: we just graduated from high school when my dad said he could foot our bills anymore. Clarisse: hmmm he wanted the both of you to stop, why were you the only who did. Me: uhmm actually i decided to work, while my brother should goes to school. Clarisse: you did that?? How did you dad pay his fee?? Me: uhmmm i was working i handed all the cash i made to dad, he did his magic and nicholas was off to school, i tried to make it simple. Clarisse: oooh you and your dad footed the bills. Me: nodds Clarisse: am sure you guys hid that away from him why?? Me: we just wanted him to be happy Clarisse: was it within this time interval you killed your father?? Me: looking at him with a suprise look. Clarisse: dont worry nate am gonna help you just tell me everything. Me: fine, while i was working i met this man who said he had a better job for me. I needed more money for my family so i decided to meet with him. I was asked to make a delivery to a man, which i did, in the ending part of the delivery i realised i was dealing with cocaine. I never wanted any dirty deals but he gave me a 500thousand pounds. I hid the credit card because i was scared of what to say to dad. Letter he found out when hw caught me looking at note with all curiousity, that was when i explained everything to him and he said he was gonna protect me. Then we heard a knock on the door. He asked me to hide which i did, after a long time i came out to see my dad on the floor and blood dripping from his head, i got a iron weapon rushed out to attack them. Dad and i was taken to a house, he asked me to work for him and i refused spitting on his face, he got angry and left, just then a man walked in with a silver train with certain drugs and syringe, after a few hiting he injected a fluid in me, he said it intensifies pains, even a pin would hurt like hell, i was tortured, beaten and hypnotized. My name was changed to roy, i was taken to my dad, at mr hilson word who was now my master, i shut my dad!!! Clarisse: with teary eyes how did you foot your brother bills. After being controlled Me: first i was taken to sahkalin island were my pains were longlived. Were i went through hellish training, and my memory came bit by bit, in a hurting so bad in a brain ripping manner. Thats was when i remembered nicholas as my brother[color/]
21 Dec 2015 | 02:28
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Lol@inemeka you no talk in time am already awake
21 Dec 2015 | 02:29
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Hmmm....am glad dat d King is listening to him. It's gonna rilli solve matters.
21 Dec 2015 | 02:43
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No wonder u re d king,d brain is dia
21 Dec 2015 | 03:09
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You are truly a father
21 Dec 2015 | 03:39
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Hmmmmm
21 Dec 2015 | 03:57
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ok nice nxt o
21 Dec 2015 | 04:15
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Next pls am enjoying this story
21 Dec 2015 | 04:40
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Still waiting
21 Dec 2015 | 05:27
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finally, i made it her. Nice story @desire
21 Dec 2015 | 05:32
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next pls
21 Dec 2015 | 07:29
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nic z veri stupid, judging iz broda nt knwing wat he passed 2ru.. nate fada z rili understandable, kinda like im
21 Dec 2015 | 08:33
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nyc story here.......eagerly waiting for the next
21 Dec 2015 | 08:48
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next plz na
21 Dec 2015 | 09:09
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buh vhiz nicholas is acting like an ingrate upon wat ur bro did 4 u,wat u cnt do is just to share in his pain and give him a listening ear,nawa o
21 Dec 2015 | 09:13
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@desire cum update na
21 Dec 2015 | 09:33
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@paula4eva pls come nd update
21 Dec 2015 | 09:50
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Really like dis story more grease to ur elbow bro
21 Dec 2015 | 10:41
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hmmmmm
21 Dec 2015 | 11:41
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U r nt 2 be blame @nate
21 Dec 2015 | 13:18
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hmmm dn't even no wat to write cos helen nd nic are d same..jt can't imagine u ve nt seen ur son 4 a long tyme nd wen u did d next u did was to criticize him cos of wat u heard abt him without listening to his side of d story..tank God say u get husband wey his head correct..well done @Desire
21 Dec 2015 | 13:29
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[color =red]EPISODE 64[/color] [color=black]Me: the rest of my memory came like bad dreams too, i got almost all my memories about my family back, but memories with mr hilson seemed to be hidden so deep, i saw him as a saint so i willingly accepted his orders. Clarisse: that was when you told nate you dad died in a plane crash right?? Me: yup i had to lie to him because i couldnt even understand why i did it, i was hurting too. Clarisse: and now how did you free yourself. Me: i went through dad's laptop and found a few information regarding our adoption from the royal house, he wrote down 2names lucas and alvariz. That was when i decided to know who my real families were, not because i wanted to be with them, i just wanted to see them. I went in search of alvariz, which led me from russia to new orleans, then i found him after a very long time. He told me everything in details and handed over the bracelets he took from us when we were little. Clarisse: for how long have you known?? Me: for 4years now, in other to protect my secrets i had to stick around for a while, it was mr alvariz who helped me break the hypnosis. Then i fell in love with his daughter sophia and decided to start all over, letting go of my thought of vengance and family. Clarisse: what made you change you mind nate? Me: i didnt sire, i was abducted and my new family was sluttered. I thought they killed sophia who was already carrying my child. I was so angry, they made me kill my dad, they wrecked my life and now my baby. Those were the thought that ran through my head when i was told nicholas was in the next room. I guess that was when mr hilson showed him the video. Clarisse: what about mr hilson?? Me: i ki...lled...him i said looking downwards. Clarisse: thats alright nate, you had no choice, i know his type he wouldnt have let you be. Me: thats all there is to tell sire. Clarisse: to start with nate, calling me dad will do just fine. Me: chuckles# dad?? Clarisse: nodding, give it a trial. Me: dad Clarisse: you have no idea how good that feels nate. Me: i really dont, but it does feel a bit weird to me you know Clarisse: you are doing great already. Me: just smiled. Clarisse: uhmmm how about we have dinner tomorrow like one family nate. Me: uhmmm alright i'll be there. Clarisse: thanks nate i have to be leaving. Me: ok byeeee .....d.a.d Clarisse: smiling if you need to talk about anything nate, come straight me nate ok?. Me: alright i said and he left, i felt a bit happy, he was so calm and the connection was just there. On a regular situation i wont say anything to anyone, but it was different, i felt like i could trust him. Yes sophia!! Only God knows were she ran too in the name of site seeing. I picked up my phone and called her. Me: baby were are you. Sophia: guess?? Me: hahah site seeing right? Sophia: not really Me: so were are you?? Sophia: come to the pool baby i know you are missing me already. Me: am coming, i took of my cloth and walked to the poolside to see her sitting close to the pool in bikini. I walk to were she was pushed her in. She yelled as she sanked in and swam back up. Sophia: why did you that!! Me: i wanna go site seeing i said mimicking her. Sophia: hahaah you guys needed space. Me: i didnt!!! Sophia: i have something for you, close your eyes. Me: i closed my eyes, like a lightening she pushed me into the water.[color/]
21 Dec 2015 | 14:39
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He understood everything u went tru
21 Dec 2015 | 14:56
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Finally and Suddenly u will be bound together.....Here comes da moment u 'll enjoy ya life in full version
21 Dec 2015 | 15:15
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A king nd father
21 Dec 2015 | 15:16
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Following
21 Dec 2015 | 15:57
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Dat is father's blood 4 u. Nic copied his mum character
21 Dec 2015 | 16:00
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L☺lz... Funny couple.. Rili great togeda
21 Dec 2015 | 16:02
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Hmmmmmm...make sure u update,atleast 4 episode tonite@desire
21 Dec 2015 | 16:05
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U are getting along with ur dad, nate. He really understand u more than anyone
21 Dec 2015 | 16:32
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Am short of words....just following closely
21 Dec 2015 | 16:52
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I love diz story menh
21 Dec 2015 | 17:34
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I love this! Such is life, only a few persons get to really understand u. Next pls
21 Dec 2015 | 17:47
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The truth sets us free
21 Dec 2015 | 18:07
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Ur father z a perfect gentle man
21 Dec 2015 | 18:32
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what an understanding father
21 Dec 2015 | 18:51
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Nice...
21 Dec 2015 | 19:31
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Uhmmm plssss you'd have to bear with am vewie much tied down later, but i'll try my best thought #smiles# una suppose understand grooving thingz loading......
21 Dec 2015 | 21:04
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[color =red]EPISODE 65[/color] [color=black]*******nicholas******** He was at his office when a man on black suit told him they are having a launch at the royal house as one family today. Nicholas: hmmm family re-union not a bad idea at all he thought as he smiled. Picked up his phone to call ashley. Ashley: hello baby Nicholas: hmmm someone sounds so happy whats the secret. Ashley: you of course Nicholas: aaah come on! Alright why is that? Ashley: i was just thinking about you when you called. Nicholas: sorry about that baby but alot have been going on lately you know. Ashley: you wanna talk about it?? Nicholas: of course i wanna tell you about it, but ehm i think that will be later or tomorrow. Ashley: ooh come on!! How about now, i can wait to see you. Nicholas: smiling# am a bit busy over here i have an apointment too but dont you worry baby i'll be with you as soon as am done ok?? Ashley: alright i love you!! Nicholas: i love you too byeee, he continued his filing and documenting for hours. He decided to check his time and it was 11:04 he had to be at the royal house. He got up, dressed properly, he was wearing a sparkling white shirt and a black trouser. Soon he was done he grabbed his keys and left. We woke up very late today, looking at the time it was just 8:40. Sophia: goodmorning sleepy head Me: smiling morning i said giving her a peck. Sophia: are you going anywere today?? Me: not really Sophia: you are so jobless Me: yeeess!!!! i am to be in the royal for a family dinner. No launch rather, i almost forgot Sophia: are you kidding me!! thats so sweet!! Am not going baby, am too tired. Me: are you kidding me?? You are part of the family, maybe you dont want me reminding you, you started all this so get ready soph i said with a smirk. Sophia: am not running!!! i just wanted to rest, after a marathon sex am tired ok. Me: hahahaha seriously you are such a cheat, marathon my foot just a 2 round thing. Sophia: hahaha dont say that to me. Me: well i was going to, but first am gonna say this too, get you ass ready because you are going with me!!!. Sophia: aaaaarrrghh so annoying she stood up and dragged her self into bathroom perhaps hoping i'd change my mind. But i wasnt even moved a bit. *****Royal house***** the long dinning was filled with a kinds of meat, fish, fruits, sauces and food. The servants spent alot of time arranging the table, and by 12 the king his wife and daughter was seated, in less than a minute nicholas joined them. Nicholas: hello dad, he said sitting down facing his mum, while his mum smiled at him. Clarisse: you are welcome nicholas. They did a bit of talking as they waited for the next member of the family for over 30mins. Helen: Clarisse did you tell him about this launch. Clarisse: he was the very first Mia: perhaps the traffic caught up with him. Clarisse: i think you are right mia, lets just wait a bit more. So nicholas how is you dating life like?? Nicholas: i have a fiance dad Clarisse: really he said smiling thats wonderful. But why is she not with you. Nicholas: i thought its strictly for family otherwise she'd have loved to come along. Just then nattan stepped in with his beautiful wife, walked majestically to the table. There were smiles on both mia and her dad's face.[color/]
21 Dec 2015 | 22:02
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[color =red]EPISODE 66[/color] [color=black]i sat close to mia who kept smiling Me: whats making you so happy i whispered. Hope your not experting another secret tour. Mia: maybe not today tomorrow would be better she whispered back smiling. We looked up to see everyone staring at us. Our smiles began to wear of gradually. Clarisse: he stood up smiling, for the past years i felt like a failure after your disappearance, i thought i lost you boys because i wasnt meticulous enough. Having everyone here gives me this feeling of joy and overwhelming happiness. First lets propose a toast to nattan and nicholas. Few ladies came around and filled our glass. We did the toast and then we began to eat. Somehow it felt like helen was still wasnt comfortable around me. I decided to try something. Me: uhmm ma'am sorry about last time. Sometimes my emotions gets the better part of me. Am not always like that i said smiling politely Helen: looking stunned, really what emotions if i may ask. Me: am not used to seeing her being roughed up you know thats how i lost my baby. Helen: huuuh?? How did that happen. Me: uhmm i think today is for happy memories, how about we talk later. Helen: smiling alright son. We became busy with the food, and mia was even more busy putting large piece in her mouth, and it was obvious she was having a hard time chewing them. Me: mia i whispered what are you doing?? Mia: eating of course. Me: eeeew thats disgusting you know!! take only a chewable size. Mia: leave me alone i dont want too. She said with a squeezed face Me: fine i dont think i would want to be be going out with you anymore. Mia: haaaaarrr are you blackmailing me?? Me: call it whatever you like. Mia: with squeezed face fine, am just gonna eat in the weirdest way ever, she said cutting her food little by little. Helen: her gaze caught mia eating decently, she quickly called the kings attention look!! Clarisse: smiling# are my eyes seeing correctly?? Helen: i really cant believe this Soon we were done with launch, we moved to the sitting room with dad while the ladies went there way, including soph. Clarisse: nicholas looks like you are still holding a grudge against you brother. Nicholas: shifting his gaze from the king to me. Clarisse: none of this is his fault ok?? If you need someone to blame, feel free to blame me ok. Nicholas: i hold no grudge against him. Clarisse: smiling thats what family do, they help each other. Me: just smiled. And we talked about other things ******helen******* they got into her chambers and sat down helen: whats your name if you dont mind me asking. Sophia: sophia lenardo alvariz helen: i never knew you were nattan's wife. I want you to know am really sorry about the mistreatment ok?. Sophia: no hard feelings ma'am Helen: i know i dont know much about him but he seemed so inlove with you, he made his choice, who am i not to accept you. She said smiling Sophia: smiling# Helen: whenever you need anything sophia, all you need to do is ask, and i'll see to it. Sophia: alright ma i'll keep that in mind. They did a few other ladies talk. Soon we were done talking and was about to leave. Clarisse: i know you are grown men but how about you pass the night here with us am sure your mum and i will be very happy. Nicholas: that wont be a problem dad, how about you nate. Me: smiling# same Clarisse: you can keep yourself busy first by getting familiar with every corners in this palace.[color/]
21 Dec 2015 | 22:50
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One happy family, that's lovely. Weldone @desire
21 Dec 2015 | 23:47
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Happy and one family....#Reunion
22 Dec 2015 | 01:19
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nice@desire such a family reunion,gud morning to u all nd mery xwas in advance
22 Dec 2015 | 01:31
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everything looks ready now but I have a feeling that there is still more to happen
22 Dec 2015 | 01:38
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Re-union
22 Dec 2015 | 01:38
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Hv really missed a lot....its nice d king is listening 2 u
22 Dec 2015 | 01:55
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*re-union* [color =purple]that's good! It's what makes a family. Good morning to everybody here and merry xmas in advance[/color]
22 Dec 2015 | 02:10
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Family Re-Union....dat's so nice. Hope Nic is sure he isn't keeping any grudes becos i'm nt too sure of him
22 Dec 2015 | 02:19
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Wow! Welcom back as one big family, happy family 2 u all. @paula4eva we understand bt dnt 4get u av plenty fans o to share ur xmas groov with o. Nice story dear keep it up
22 Dec 2015 | 02:30
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Wow atlast
22 Dec 2015 | 03:01
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What a lovely family...
22 Dec 2015 | 03:29
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Wow!! Dis z wat D̶̲̥̅̊ε̲̣̣̣̥γ̲̣̣̥ called a united nd happy family
22 Dec 2015 | 03:33
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I don't know y I just dislike dat Nicholas he suppose to apologise
22 Dec 2015 | 05:35
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I love this
22 Dec 2015 | 06:09
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Atlas da moment ya all be waiting for
22 Dec 2015 | 06:10
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hmmm desire we a waitin 4 ur update o
22 Dec 2015 | 07:45
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smile..following well done @Desire
22 Dec 2015 | 09:03
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One family, Ashely where u dey?
22 Dec 2015 | 10:54
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[color =red]EPISODE 67[/color] [color=black] ***Roscovitz thermopolis**** A man with bald held and protruded stomach, dressed in black tux hurried to his house at the other end of the royal house. Charles: the renaldi boy we got rid of are not dead covitz. Roscovitz: what??? Charles: they are here in the palace with the king. Roscovitz: how is that possible??? He asked furiously. Roscovitz thermopolis is the younger brother to clarisse renaldi. There father thermopolis renaldi handed his throne to clarisse, there could only be one renaldi, roscovitz was left with the name thermopolis. Clarisse and roscovitz were 2wonderful brothers until roscovitz met his friend charles who constantly fed him with the vague idea of becoming the next king because he feels he'd be left out since he wasnt a renaldi. He wanted to be a good brother but as time flew by his friends words, were begining to come true. When there father died, clarisse ascended the throne. He was too busy with political affairs, and didnt have much time for roscovitz. Charles came around again to reminding him of the future, bit by bit he saw reasons with charles. He became over zealous and obssessed with being a king. He tried to eliminate clarisse a few times but failed, in july 18 1990 on a thurday morning helena gave birth to 2 boys. While his wife kate gave birth to a son 2weeks later. Without charles he masterminded all his evil plans, realizing those 2little boys would be a big barrier to his big dreams. He made plots to get rid of the boys which he did. Smiling to himself he decided to start by climbing the official post bit by bit, until when he would finally be able to seize the throne by force. 6years later mia was born, he no longer felt his ascension to the thrown was under threat, he decided to try a more better approach in a peaceful way, that way his son micheal would be the next king. Knowing that clarisse had his suspicions on him he tried as much as possible to be nice. Clarisse being a man with a free heart he saw micheal as his son too, and was ready to give the thrown over to him. He took him to official meetings teaching him all he needed to know. After 25whole years his 2boys showed up again, and now they pose even more bigger treat to both father and son. Roscovitz: sitting in his house lost in thought, how is this possible, how??? They were killed when they were so tender. How did they survive. Kate: hugging him from behind. He just remained still, what wrong honey?? Roscovitz: thingz just got complicated. Kate: how?? Roscovitz; if things are allowed to go this way micheal's future will be threatened as well. Kate: covitz what are you talking about?? She asked looking more worried. Roscovitz: charles came around only to tell me, the renaldi boys we got rid of 25years ago, are here in the royal house. Kate: what!!!! So whats gonna happen to micheal who has been waiting so eagerly to be king. Roscovitz: its really complicated kate, they are grown ups now, we dont expect clarisse to give his throne to micheal while those boys still lives. Kate: smiling# thats it covitz you just said it. Roscovitz: said what??? He asked looking confused. Kate: we send them back to were they came from. Roscovitz: kate i hope you know, those boys aint 2 suckling children anymore. Kate: whatever threatens our son, threatens us, we cant let them push our son aside. Roscovitz: i think rather than sending them back. We could just send them to hell he said grinning[color/]
22 Dec 2015 | 12:49
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Anoda problem
22 Dec 2015 | 14:02
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anodr prob don lan
22 Dec 2015 | 14:12
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Another war is rising. Haba pple are just wicked, even if u send everybody to hell, u cant send Nate he'll be d one to send u
22 Dec 2015 | 14:39
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Hmmm....i hope dis peple's plan does nt work ooo. I appreciate ur effort ot posting dis stowie even wid a tight schedule. Ride on pls.
22 Dec 2015 | 14:46
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I believe nattan will handle them from any angle
22 Dec 2015 | 14:52
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God has a way of doing things maybe this is why he allowed Nate to go through all the suffering for a time like this. Kudos to u @paula4eva I like the way u post ur stories more greese to ur elbow.
22 Dec 2015 | 15:13
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Haaaa,u r wicked...
22 Dec 2015 | 15:36
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I can't help buh laf.. He no knw who he wan deal with.. Nate d most dangerous of all... Luving ya story @ Desire.. Nxt pLz cnt wait
22 Dec 2015 | 16:16
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Not wen nate us around
22 Dec 2015 | 16:42
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Not wen nate is around.he is gonna break evry bone in ur body
22 Dec 2015 | 16:44
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anoda problem
22 Dec 2015 | 16:53
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hmmm..send dem 2 hell abi na nate go send u 2 to hell
22 Dec 2015 | 17:16
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Roscovitz and Kate your plans are going to fail again
22 Dec 2015 | 17:18
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i trust nattan u nd ur son ar dead
22 Dec 2015 | 17:26
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Mr and Mrs wet in be dia name again... am sure u pple are wasting una precious time planing dx coup
22 Dec 2015 | 18:56
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as far as Nate z concern... am seeing dead men
22 Dec 2015 | 18:58
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[color =red]EPISODE 68[/color] [color=black]we were about to walked around when a man who looks a bit like dad, with black hairs. Dad: roscovitz! Dad yelled smiling. Roscovitz: clarisse you seem so happy today whats going on. Dad: these are my boys, who were abducted years ago, when they were little, after so many years am so glad to know they are still alive. Roscovitz: smiling# wooow then we should be having a wonderful feast here in royal house. Dad: i havent even thought of that. He turned facing us, this is you uncle roscovitz themopolis. My only brother, he is a wonderful man, loyal and kind hearted. Roscovitz: hahaha pay no attention to your dad, always flattering me. Dad: roscovitz this is nicholas and thats nattan. Roscovitz: they look so alike he said smiling. What about there full names?? Any yet? Dad: we'd sought that out later, for now they wanna look around. How about you spend some time with your nephew's by showing them around. Roscovitz: uhmm i would have love too but am in the middle of something right now. Nicholas: smiling# dont worry uncle we can find our way around. Roscovitz: i know but i think i will have to send your cousin micheal over. You should start knowing you extended families as fast as possible he said smiling Nicholas: that would be nice atleast uncle. I was not silent because am not a talkative but this so called uncle of mine i just didnt like him. And i dont want to take note of him, we walked around the palace. Nicholas: smiling# i know i have been weird lately man but am sorry, all those info in just one day, it was so damn much for me to take in. Me: i dont blame you, you did what you thought right because you had no idea what was going on. Nicholas: smiling# perhaps you could tell me. Me: you'd be shock to know i said smiling. Nicholas; try me Me: you know why i chose to work rather than going to college?? Nicholas: because you wanted to make quick cash. Me: so wrong. After our high school graduation, i came home before you. That was when dad told me he couldnt pay our bills, i knew how much you wanted go to college so i decide to start work. Nicholas: really then why didnt anybody tell me. Me: i know you nic. You wouldnt have gone if you were told so we had to convince you by putting up a perfect lie. Nicholas: hmmmm exhaling deeply. Me: it was my search for more money that lead me to mr hilson were i was tortured badly. Unbutton my clothes showing him the scars i had on me. Nicholas: ooooh my God??? Me: smiling i was hypnotized too, that was when i was ordered to shoot dad. I wasnt myself i only saw his words as orders to be carried out. Nicholas: how come you showed up again looking normal. Me: the very first memory that came back was nicholas being my brother. After a while i realized i shut dad. I really didnt know how to tell you the truth. I was ashamed Nicholas: how did get over it. Me: that was all mr alvariz doing sophia's dad, he helped me with it, while i went in search of details about our real parents. So i decided to start all over, i was expecting a baby when mr hilson's boys broke in after a very long time, shot me with a sedative and killed my new family. Nicholas: now i get it, you had your revenge on him, but sophia didnt die how??. Me: romeo only knocked her out and called 911. Nicholas: hmmm am glad you are fine now he said tapping me on the shoulder. Me: smiling Nicholas: next time you keep such secrets again from me so long, i'll kill you. Me: hahahaha i know you have guts. Mia: sweetest brothers!!!!!! She yelled smiling and hopping towards us.[color/]
22 Dec 2015 | 22:19
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Now understand nic
22 Dec 2015 | 23:05
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[b]best moments abwt 2 b ruined[/b]
22 Dec 2015 | 23:07
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lolz... mia must av bin rili tired of palace
23 Dec 2015 | 02:03
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cool nxt
23 Dec 2015 | 02:21
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Things re gradually bcoming Normal
23 Dec 2015 | 03:16
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[color =red]EPISODE 69[/color] [color=black]we both turned to see mia hopping towards us with her very long gown sweeping the floor. Nicholas: smiling mia what are you doing here. Mia: smiling i came to check on you guys. Me: what about sophia?? Mia: nate you cant even call her your wife. Me: raising my eyebrows. Mia: hahaha ok shez with mum, talking about too many things that itches the ear. Nicholas: are you sure you only came to check on us? Mia: hahaah of course not i came to steal nate. She said smilling. Nicholas: seriously?? Me: i moved closed to mia, nicholas was called the lord of fun back then in high school. You gonna have the fun of your life with him. Mia: seriously!!!! She rushed hugging him. Nicholas: looking confused now what??? Mia: uhmm i change my mind i wanna steal you instead. Nicholas: to do what?? Mia: pulling him hard as she hopped her away in joy. While nicholas turned giving me the whats going on kind of look. Me: hahaha byeeee!! She pulled him to the poolside had both of his hands stuck in the yellow and boxes that was joined to a long cylindrical foam. His arm were spread out like he was to be crucified. Nicholas: now what?? Mia?? Mia: trust me is gonna be fun she began throwing water balls at him. Nicholas: aaaaarrrhhh mia you are ruining my clothes. Mia: you have no idea how long i wanted to do this to someone. Nicholas just stood still as she hit him continously with water balls and laughed crazily. I was still walking around when i meet a tall slim cute guy with short hairs and blue eyes. He had a small v shape face. Well am not so friendly so i walked passed him. Boy: hello mr he said looking at me. Me: oooh i said turning how are you bro?? Boy: i suppose you are new here otherwise you'd have recognized me. Me: oooh yes i am, but a bit of intro will do just fine. Boy: am micheal thermopolis Me: oooh am nattan i said extending my hands for a shake. Micheal: he looked at them like he wasnt sure whether to shake them. Finally he grabbed it. Me: nice to meet you. Micheal: hahaha i like you, you've got guts, keep it up he said tapping me on the shoulder and left. What was that all about i thought. I continued my walk around the palace. I saw a library, i walked in there were so many books. I began to search for the blueprint of the royal house which i later found write inside a circular object. Librarian: uhmm what are you doing with those?? Me: uhmmm i just wanted to look at it. Librarian: those aint for you Me: why i said moving close to him. Librarian: because it contains all palace secrets pathways. He said. Me: hmm interesting perhaps we could be friends you know. Librarian: uhmmm i dont want to. Me: lets just say am into blue prints, i brought out my phone showing him a blueprint of russia, giving him detailed information. Librarian: hmmm impressive he began to show me the blueprint of genova even more detailed. Than mine description of russia. Me: hahaha wooow you are really cool. The librarian was an average height man in his 40's with blonde hairs, he had an eye lens on. Librarian: uhmmm now i think we can be friends. He explained the palace blueprints. Me: wait a bit i wanna see the area you just explained. I walked out to view those areas. When i ran into nicholas totally soaked. His hair scattered, face looking frustrated. Me: shocked# let me guess mia pushed you into the pool. Nicholas: playing with waterballs is so fun, ha-ha-ha he said without a bit of smile.[color/]
23 Dec 2015 | 03:30
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Lol...i trust u natt let michael father bring the game on..kill them all!
23 Dec 2015 | 04:26
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Mia d naught kid sis
23 Dec 2015 | 04:30
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Lolz. This ur mia sis is something else o
23 Dec 2015 | 04:51
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seriously am lovin dis story d mre.bt cum 2 tink of it who s goin 2 kil who? ur uncle kil a serial killer or a serial killer kilin his uncle? let watch nd c
23 Dec 2015 | 05:39
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Nice
23 Dec 2015 | 07:06
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Wow am so enjoying this story
23 Dec 2015 | 08:19
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Someone should advice those humans before they get themselves killed in the hands of nattan.
23 Dec 2015 | 10:25
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[color =red]EPISODE 70[/color] [color=black]Before i could say anything he walked pass me. I couldnt help but laugh as water dripped down his body. Me: dont worry i'll get you a new one!!! Hahahaa. I shaked my head, turning forward i saw mia. Mia: sweeet nate she said smiling. Me: crazy mia i said smiling too. Mia: nicholas is very boring, he couldnt even dodge water balls. Me: hahaha sorry i cant dodge water balls either. Mia: holding my hands am not talking about water balls, i wanna have fun. Me: am busy mia. Mia: feigning cries, plssssss nate plsssss. Me: hahaha those fake tears of yours cant fool me. I'll see you when am done ok. Mia: hugging me. Placed her head on my chest and her cry became more serious. Nate plsss am lonely!! Me: wheeew ok ok ok fine what is it you want?? Mia: raising her and there was no trace of tears. Yes!!! She yelled giving me a peck. Uhmm i want to play with waterballs in the garden. Me: water balls again?? Mia: nodding as she looked at me with squeezed face. Me: well am not nicholas you'll end up getting wet. Mia: dont underestimate me nate am good at throwing waterballs. Me: hahaha ok lets make a deal if you can hit me with atleast a waterball. I'll make you creme bu le' Mia: yes!!!!! Lets go!!! Me: not so fast if you loose, you wont bother me again i said grinning. Mia: i cant bet that!! Me: i thought someone is good at throwing balls i said mockingly. Mia: hitting my arm. Your on!!! Me: aaaaww!!!! Ok lets go. We walked to the gardens, were the green flowers were used as fence, well leveled, with so many narrow passage. With water balls everywhere. Me: wooow there are too many water ball. Mia: smirk# i'll make sure you look worst than nicholas. Me: you are welcome to try, like a lightening she began to throw them at me. I dodge effortlessly. Mia: hmmm impressive now i'll show how to play. She began throwing 2 at a time as we run around i dodged them all. Me: hahahaah come on mia, you are a pro. Mia; am gonna g.....before she completed it i kicked a water ball to her face and watched as water spilled on her face. Me: hahahha sweet mia: Mia: hmm you are so dead!!!! I kicked 2 again and threw one with my hands and it all splashed on her. She chased me so hard as i soaked her cloths with it. Mia: oooouccch!!! my legs she screamed and fell. I quickly rushed over to help her up. Just then she threw a ball to my face and the water spilled over me. Me: mia!!!!!! Mia: hahahaha got ya you are so gonna make me creme bu le' Me: you cheated!! Mia: there was no rule, we walked back to the house with her clothes totally soaked. Sophia: wooow mia what happened!!!. Mia: crying# nate threw waterballs at me. Sophia: hitting my hand why are you bullying her. Me: bully!!! You are kidding me right? Mia: talking like a baby# he has to make me creme bu le' Sophia: he will she said then she whispered something to her ears. Mia: omg!!! Aaaarh!!! she ran into her room happily and soon she was out, dressed in another gown. Me: looking stunned. What did you say to her??? Sophia: make her a very nice cream ok? She said rubbing my chest alittle and left. Mia: rushed down and pulled me to the kitchen. Smiling, while i missed the flour and other recipe for the creme. And in less than an hour i was done. Me: here you go. Mia: inhaling# its smells so good she sad grining, was about pouncing on it when i took the plate away. Me: mia!!! take it easy!! Mia: ok easy, easy, i brought it close and she tried eating a bit slowly.[color/]
23 Dec 2015 | 10:38
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hmmmm ut gud to gt ur fmly bck
23 Dec 2015 | 10:42
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guy am dieing here pls update fast...lolz
23 Dec 2015 | 10:45
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[color =red]EPISODE 71[/color] [color=black]Mia: wooow its so yummy nate you are a good cook. Me: smiling# really am glad you like it. Mia: hope you are not leaving tomorrow? Me: ofcourse i am Mia: am going with you nate, i dont want to stay here anymore, i dont even want to be a princess. Me: nope you cant go with me. Alright eat your food, i have to go. Mia: smiling# bye for now am still gonna come after you. Me: at night fall?? Hahaha alright i said, imediately i got out sophia dragged me to the wall and gave me a deep kiss. Sophia: smiling# have missed you too. Me: hahaha seriously!! I said kissing her back. So how about our house. Sophia: we can go there at dawn. Me: thats wonderful i held her as we went to our room. *****nicholas****** Got a robe on and placed orders for a new set of cloths. As he sat on his bed his phone rang. Ashley: baby?? Nicholas: how you doing ashley?? Ashley: am fine baby when are we seeing tomorrow??. Nicholas: it looks like you are gonna be free this week. Ashley: yeap and you. Nicholas: kinda, how about we quickly make arrangement for our wedding. Ashley: are you for real??? Nicholas: of course baby, lets get it done with. Ashley: alright thats nice so how about the date and location?? Nicholas: i think weekend is fine by me. Ashley: alright she said smiling uhmm i dont need much population too. Nicholas: yea its strictly on invitation. Lets meet tomorrow at our regular eatery, i still have other things to discuss with you. Ashley: alright baby. Nicholas: i love you!! He said and hunged up. He collapsed on his bed, as his not so fun day with mia flashed through his head. He just smiled shez so crazy and wild. I really cant wait to get married to ashley, i really love her. He thought as he slept off. The next morning was so wonderful i woke up first while sophia was still asleep on me. Me: sleepy head!! Sophia: shut up nate!!! Me; hahah wakey wakey!!! Sophia: am still feeling sleepy Me: get ready we have to be in our house today. Finally she got up, we showered and was ready. We walked into the sitting room were the king was already sitted. Me: goodmorning dad i said as sophia greeted after me. Clarisse: morning nate you look ready. Me: yes we've got things to attend to. Clarisse: alright nate its really nice having you around you know. Me: it was fun, thanks to uhmm mia i said smilling Clarisse: sure??? Hahaha its really nice thing to see you getting along with her. She really lacking in so many ways. She needs more than just love from her parents Me: smilling# am trying my best. Clarisse: as a little girl growing to this point, yestiday was the first time i saw her eating composely. Me: smiling she learns fast too. Clarisse: you know after we lost you guys we had to look after her with alot of care. Me: she seems tired of staying indoors too. Clarisse: we have no choice nate we are doing that because we love her. Just then nicholas walked in, greeted dad and exchanged pleasantries with us. Nicholas: dad i have to go too i have things to attend to. Clarisse: alright nicholas it was nice having you around. Nicholas: before i forget i wanna get married this weekend dad. Clarisse: thats really a goodnews nicholas. Nicholas: i will be back with her before night fall so that we can proceed with other arrangements. He said smiling. Me; hahaha congratulations man. Nicholas: byee dad. Me: byee dad. Just then we heard mia voice. Mia: are you guys leaving without me???[color/]
23 Dec 2015 | 11:35
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dat mia is just so naughty
23 Dec 2015 | 11:45
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Nyc guys
23 Dec 2015 | 12:18
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L☺lz.. What a lovely family
23 Dec 2015 | 12:49
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That mia is something else
23 Dec 2015 | 13:12
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ha ha. lol. i can never get tired of reading this. @desire you are doing a great job. kudos. next
23 Dec 2015 | 13:23
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Getin more interestin kip it rollin.....
23 Dec 2015 | 14:58
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Still following
23 Dec 2015 | 15:01
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Am feelin the connection
23 Dec 2015 | 15:39
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am so much in luv wit dis story@desire keep it rolling
23 Dec 2015 | 15:44
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Am on it __ seriously guyz i will b expecting ur votes on due time ur boy! @emergencia
23 Dec 2015 | 15:52
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Mia is rilli a crazy lil girl
23 Dec 2015 | 16:15
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Nate get ready to take her along wit u
23 Dec 2015 | 16:32
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smile...following
23 Dec 2015 | 17:05
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mia is a fun bein.ride on
23 Dec 2015 | 17:19
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Mia is so naughty
23 Dec 2015 | 18:42
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I really lyk mia...she z aving fun with her brothers.
23 Dec 2015 | 19:03
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Yes, next episode pls
24 Dec 2015 | 06:28
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Naughty mia
24 Dec 2015 | 09:33
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Bro wetin dey pa nah,com may u come update nah..........
24 Dec 2015 | 10:18
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@desire what happened? it is so unlike you not to update by now. please come and update oo
24 Dec 2015 | 12:03
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@desire am waiting for the next episode. Come and continue o
24 Dec 2015 | 13:17
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[color =red]EPISODE 72[/color] [color=black]Nicholas: mia!!! He said looking shocked. Me: uhmm nicholas perhaps you should take her with you. I said winking at him. Nicholas: theres no way am gonna do that, mia you have to look after dad ok. Mia: but am tired of staying at home. Dad: uhmmm mia you really dont have to go with them now maybe some other time ok?? Me: smiling daddy knows best mia, just be a good girl i sang. Mia: nate i wanna go with you. Me: sorry i dont have a house, my lovely wife and i are squatting right sophia?? Sophia: eehm yea ya!! She said smiling. Mia: squeezed face# you cant fool me she said moving close to me as i moved back. Dont think itz over cos am gonna get back at you!! She hitting her foot on the ground, turned around and walked back to her room angrily. Nicholas: hahahha you guys looks good together you know. Me: still shocked hahaha am so speechless. Dad; smiling alright come around soon otherwise your sister is gonna come looking for you. Nicholas: alright dad. He said And we all left. We drove straight to our house and it was well furnished with a mixture of white and wine red. Sophia: woooow this is beautiful Me: impressive! I said smiling. We walked around inspecting everything. The gym was well decorated as a training ground, there was a mannequin in the middle, i few boxing glooves hung on the wall. Sophia: smiling hmmm she got a gloove on. I wanna train now. Me: seriously??? Sophia: yea!!! Me: ok hit me! Sophia: huuuuh!! Why?? I mean i want to learn how to fight and not hitting you. Me: whats the difference, hahah, yaaa!! i get it, dont worry even if am sleeping you cant hit me, unless i let you. I said smiling. Sophia: hahah tccch!! Just because you are good at throwing daggers doesnt make you a pro. Me: hahahha i killed every living thing close to mr hilson too. Sophia: am not impressed. Me: ok ok ok i got a black ribbon and tied my eyes. Sophia: what are you doing?? Me: teaching you i said dont worry even if you hit me, your fist are very tender hahaha. Sophia: hmmm you asked for it, aaaarggh, i notice she was running towards me, i quickly dodged. Grabbing her hand, as she swung the other i waved it of too. Me: hahhaha even with my eyes close i can still kill you. Sophia: you are only holding my hand am not dead. I turned her around and grabbed and neck lightly. Me: and now you are dead. I took the ribbon. Are you ready to learn now?? Sophia: yea!! Me: hit me, she tried i kept on dodging effortlessly and smiling. Making her even more eager to hit me. Sophia: breathing rapidly omg!!! Teach me something else. Me: smiling# you missed because you are only thinking of hitting me. While you attack, you should know your opponent will always want to defend himself. It is left for to find a way through his defences as a good fighter. Got that??? Sophia: yeap Me: i'll always defend my self, while you attack, you should try to predict my defensive move, that way you are one step ahead of me. That is what it takes to win a fight. Sophia: ok am ready, she said setting her hand ready to box, ******nicholas******* drove to his office and after then he went to the eatery, took a seat and waited for ashley, soon she came in dressed beautifully in a red top and 3quarter jean. As she gave him a peck and sat down. Ashley: so what is it you wanted to talk about i really cant wait to hear it. Nicholas: smiling# alright, i am a prince of genova.[color/]
24 Dec 2015 | 14:49
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Is beta u train sophia incase of emergency
24 Dec 2015 | 15:04
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Ashley: Huh??....a prince of Genova Nic: Yeah i am . . . . . Lolz.....following
24 Dec 2015 | 15:14
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[b]FOLLOWING[/b]
24 Dec 2015 | 16:08
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Gbangan
24 Dec 2015 | 16:59
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Mia,iwo lomo ti won nso
24 Dec 2015 | 17:22
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@desire,i hope derz no prob
24 Dec 2015 | 17:34
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Prince of genova ?
24 Dec 2015 | 19:14
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Who will now be the next king..i knw nattan will leave it for nic
24 Dec 2015 | 20:24
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[color =red]EPISODE 73[/color] [color=black]Ashley: hahahaah nicholas you are very funny you know that?? Nicholas: smiling# am damn serious ashley, no jokes. Ashley: wooow, how is that possible?? She asked looking abit confused. Nicholas: explained everything to her. Ashley: looking so suprised, she tried talking but no words came out. Nicholas: smiling# you really dont have to say anything. The important fact is you are finally going to be my bride. Tomorrow am taking you to my parents. Ashley: we can do the shopping for the wedding today, dont you think so? Nicholas: uhmm yup but 1st aint you hungry lets have something to eat. Ashley: hungry?? She stood up, pulled him up, hugging him, am nat hungry lets go. They drove down to a huge shop, sorrounded by glasses with wedding gown sampled everywere. Attendant: goodday sir, pls what can we do for you? Nicholas: get her a beautiful wedding gown. Attendant: uhmm sire you'll have to wait here. He sat down waiting as they both walked in. After a while she came out sparkling in a lace white gown with netty short hands, long and tight revealing all her curves. Me: woooow you really look like an angel he said smiling. Ashley: am glad you like it. We cleared the bills and then i took her home. We took a break as she went into the shower, and changed her gown to black thight and singlet. Sophia: am back she said packing her hairs backward. Me: hmmm perfect outfit i said smiling, ok no lets move to the punching bag. We moved there, try hitting it i said. Sophia: hitting as hand as she could but her blows weigh nothing. I move behind her. Me: one leg forward and the other backward ok for balance always remember the strength comes from you feet. Ok hit it. She kept on hitting, for a very longtime, soon her arms were weak, Sophia: aaaawwww my hands she yelled as she burst in tears, holding her right hand closely. Me: uh-oh whats wrong baby. Sophia: crying# i think i twisted my wrist. Me: i kept my distance from her, sorry ok, when you are done with the bag let me know i said walking away. Sophia: nate!!! Am hurt?? Me: i know baby i yelled back as i left. Sophia: huuuuh# crying as she supported it with the left. Like a lightening i was out, i drove straight to the mall to buy food stuff, to fill the fridge. Well i would have helped her, but she has to be strong too. Not everyone would treat her like a baby ******sophia******* finally stood up and began to hit the bag with her left fist, her right fist still hurts badly. Sophia: i really cant believe he left me like this, when did he become so wicked. She left the gym, walked down the street and got ice and a massage balm. After placing the ice on her wrist, it felt good again. The she applied a little balm and massaged softly, as she yelled constantly in pain with teary eyes. Sophia: wicked nate, am so not talking to him anymore!!!, were the hell did he go without me. After massaging she wrapped it up and slept off, she was so tired too. After a long time in the mall i was going back with a thrunk full of fruits for juice and some other stuff, on the back seat was lots of cooking items to. I drove home smilling, i knew sophia would be mad so i bought her pizza on my way back. I began to move everything inside when i saw sophia sleeping on the couch, afew melted ice and a balm. I just smiled, i arranged everything properly then i got the pizza Me: baby! Hmm you look hungry have this. Sophia: pizza!!! About collecting it but seemed to remember something. Am not talking to you leave me alone!!![color/]
24 Dec 2015 | 21:35
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Merry christmas@ everyone
24 Dec 2015 | 21:40
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Same to u dear @desire, please chritmas update o
24 Dec 2015 | 22:32
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Hahah@anorexia are you not going out??
25 Dec 2015 | 01:13
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merry xmas 2 evry1.@Desire xmaz update plz
25 Dec 2015 | 01:44
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Happy christmas everyone... @paula4eva i dy feel you
25 Dec 2015 | 01:53
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Merry Christmas all
25 Dec 2015 | 02:09
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Am going out but dat wont stop me frm reading d story. Just make it like xmas bonus update @desire
25 Dec 2015 | 03:13
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Meeey xmas to u all
25 Dec 2015 | 03:50
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Follwing
25 Dec 2015 | 03:57
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@paula4eva, thanks for d update and merry xmas, wishing u d best. . . . . . . . . . My very good friend, where have u been? It's quite and age. @pemamezi
25 Dec 2015 | 04:52
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[color =red]EPISODE 74[/color] [color=black]Me: soph are you alright?? Sophia: when you left me with a twisted wrist?? Hell no!!! Me: omg!!! Were you wrist broken?? Sophia: seriously your gonna pretend like you dont know?? Me: well uhmm you wanted to learn how to fight and am teaching. I actually bought the pizza for myself. I opened it and took a piece, eating it as i walked into the room. Sophia: looking stunned what is wrong with him. She fell back on the couch, and continued massaging her hands. I got my headset on as i laid on my bed with my laptop. Sophia: nate am hungry!! Me; uhmm theres alot of food stuff in the kitchen, fruits in the fridge. And of course lemonade, help yourself with those. Sophia: you ate the pizza all alone??? Me: go make yourself useful i said smiling. Sophia: you are so annoying. She yelled and walked out. Hmmm his acting so carefree, i really cant stand this. Yes!!! I know just what to do. She walked back to the room and slipped on purpose. Sophia: aaaaaawwww, crying, ouch!!! Nate my ankles got twisted too. It hurts nate! Me: nodding my head as i just smiled. Sophia: seeing i wasnt gonna come over, she stood up i hate you!!! Walked out hitting her feet on the ground. Me: hahahahha i laughed as soon as she left. Soon it was nightfall, just then my phone rang and it was nicholas. Me: hey man whatsup Nicholas: busy with preparation Me: so what can i help with? Nicholas: uhmm 1st your gonna be my best man, 2ndly get the cloths ready only the best! Me: hahahah impressive, dont worry i'll get you a wonderful tux from thailand. Nicholas: just make sure its wonderful. Me: thats my cue, i said as we both laughed and he hunged up. Just then sophia walked in, dressed in nighties with frowns on her face. Laid down facing the otherside putting a pillow in between us. Me: hahaha i laughed in my head and slept off. After a wonderful night it was dawn, i woke her. Me: sleepy head its time to go jogging. Sophia; am not going anywhere with you!!!! Me: you dont have a choice, go get dressed. Sophia: i dont want to learn how to fight anymore. Me: sorry you started it and you are gonna finish it. Sophia: am not going anywhere with you she said covering her blanket. I got to her wardrope, picked her black sweat pants and singlets. Pulled the blanket away, took of her nighties off as she stuggled in vain. Finally i wore it on her. Sophia; she kept on screaming i dont wanna go anywere with you, after putting the singlets on her. I carried her to the gym as she struggled and yelled. I placed her on a running machine. Me: smiling# come on baby make me proud. I said as i switched it on Sophia: turn it off!!! She ran on it for a while as i increased and reduced the pace of the machine. Then i finally switched it off. Me: impressive i said with a smile. Sophia: you are so dead!!! She rushed towards me with tightened fist, i dodged and she tripped, i quickly caught her hands. Me: dont expect me to be save you everytime. Sophia: who asked you too?? I left her and she fell. Me; it hurts right. Sophia: awwww she said squeezing her face not at all. Me: thats the spirit, i wore her a counter on both arm. Sophia: why am i wearing this?? Me: that way you wont cheat you are gonna hit this bag a thousand times. Smiling if you are angry, beat me and all this training would stop. Sophia: am gonna do just that soonest. She said as she began to hit the bag.[color/]
25 Dec 2015 | 07:58
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following
25 Dec 2015 | 08:14
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Dis couple are really romantic to read. Nice one @desire. Is dis the xmas bonus? Just 1 episode? Abeg e no quench my hunger for dis story. Sophia, just call mia, she will handle nate for u
25 Dec 2015 | 09:00
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@paula4eva u are really doing a great job. I jst catch up wit u guyz nw tank God d traffic was nt much . Thumb up jor
25 Dec 2015 | 09:19
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Nice one still following
25 Dec 2015 | 09:23
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Lol @wyse-one more is coming but i want to add weight today. Winks#
25 Dec 2015 | 09:23
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L☺lz.. Dats d spirit.. She should nt expect U̶̲̥̅̊ to save her all d tym.. Nxt plz.. Cnt wait
25 Dec 2015 | 09:56
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Dats d truth,dnt b dependent
25 Dec 2015 | 09:57
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jst here checkin evry minute 4 new update.mre epic plz
25 Dec 2015 | 13:07
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[color =red]EPISODE 75[/color] [color=black]Nicholas and ashley got ready and drove down to the royal house. Walk straight into the living room and a message was sent to the king. While they sat and waited, he joined them in a few minutes. After long hours of smiling and introductions. They finally decided the wedding would be held in the palace hall like a royal banquet. King clarisse was gonna take care of both foods and drinks. Nicholas and ashley went back home smiling knowing all they needed to do is to prepare for the big day. *****mia***** Servant: princess your food is ready. Mia: am not hungry Servant: thats what you said yestiday and today?? Do you want to starve yourself. Mia: ok get me water. She left and mia shut the door, in less than a minute she came back, banged on the door for a while begging her to open the door. Soon she got tired and quickly sent message to the king and queen, who rushed quickly to her room. Helena: mia plssss open the door. Mia: i dont want to. Clarisse: whatever it is just talk to us am sure we'd find a way to sort it out. Am the king remember? Mia: am not sure you'd want to sort this out. Clarisse: i'll try Mia: promise??? Clarisse: looking at helen as she urged him to say yes. Yes...mia i promise. The door flew open as mia came out smiling. Mia: thanks daddy. Now i wanna go see my brothers! I made apple juice and walked back to the gym to see sophia hitting the bag. As it danced about she seemed pretty angry. Me: i sat down, sipping my juice and watched as sweat ran down a her beautiful skin. She even looks prettier. I stared and sipped my juice, soon the counter began to beep. As she kept on hitting bag, with angry looks. Me: uhmmm soph i think thats enough, she said nothing, she just ignored me. I stood up, moved to the bag and shifted it. Thats enough i said. She just stared at me, i could see she was tired. She walked to the fridge and got a cold water, emptying the bottle. Sophia: haaaa exhaling in relaxation. Me: uhmm i think an apple juice is better. I said extending a glass to her. She just walked passed me into the shower. Took her shower, came out and made herself pancakes and honey. Me: uhmmm i want some too Sophia: just stared at me and took her gaze back to her food. Me: hmmm, i walked to the fridge took out an apple, i began to peel it, then i cut me self on purpose. Aaaaaawwww!!!! I yelled as i moved to the dinning were she sat to use the towel. Sophia: she didnt even move a muscle. Me: hmmm whats wrong with her. She finished eating got her headset on and slept on the couch while i turned on the tv to see if i'll find anything to keep me busy. Soon it was night fall, she went to bed before me. I quickly followed from behind as i placed me hands on her shoulders, she said nothing. Me: hmmm shez really trying to get back at me. If i apologize i loose. Come on man lets do this i turned the other way and slept. *******mia******* Clarisse: looking at helen suprised. Helen: ok you have 2brothers, so specify. Mia: its nate's house of course. Clarisse: uhmm nate doesnt have a house. Mia: you promised dad she said feigning cries. Call him Clarisse: bringing his phone and called nicholas. Could you help me find out were nate stays? Nicholas: alright dad. He called nate, and he gave him directions to his house. Then he called his dad and gave him the description. Clarisse: alright get ready the driver will take you there tomorrow morning Mia: aaaaaarrrrh i love daddy!!! Muaaaah she got in and soon she was ready.[color/]
25 Dec 2015 | 13:37
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lolz.. naughty mia. really enjoying the story next please...
25 Dec 2015 | 13:43
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smile..merry christmas to u @Desire..following
25 Dec 2015 | 13:49
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I lyk dis mia
25 Dec 2015 | 14:01
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Interesting o_lets paint the city, white,red and green becoz its christmas already _
25 Dec 2015 | 14:05
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Lolzzz...Mia
25 Dec 2015 | 14:14
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Dis mia is sumtin else
25 Dec 2015 | 14:31
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Just wondering how it's all gonna end...........Hapi Xmas to all vallers
25 Dec 2015 | 14:53
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Naughty mia
25 Dec 2015 | 16:02
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[color =red]EPISODE 76[/color] [color=black]It was dawn i got up stretched a bit and woke sophia. Me: its time for your training soph, she stood up, changed into her training outfit. This time she hit the bag a thousand time pretty fast with more energy and agility. And in less than an hour she was done. Me: smiling# impressive, we moved to the mannequin, i showed her how to perform different leg moves. And she began to practice immediately but it seem a bit hard for her. Just then the bell rang. I quickly rushed down to door and opened it. Mia: hello nate she said smiling. Me: huuuh mia!!!! I yelled in suprised, how did you.... Mia: find you?? She said cutting in. You should be happy to see me nate, perhaps a hug to wont be a bad idea you know she said hugging me as she pulled her large bag in. I just stood there looking shocked, why is she coming with a huge bag. Mia: nate!!! Aint you gonna help me with my bag?? Me: why did you come with such a huge bag?? Mia: smiling# am gonna be staying here for a while nate. Me: and dad??? He let you out of the palace. Mia: hahhaa of course am free!!!!!, you have a wonderful house nate. Just then i heard a ear piercing scream from sophia i quickly ran to the gym. To her on the floor holding her right leg. Me: bending close to her, are you alright?? I said touching her hair. Sophia: pushing my hands away. Me: shocked# whats wrong soph? Sophia: trying to stand but her ankles hurts badly, she fell on the floor again. Me: raising her up as she pushed me again. Sophia: dont touch me!!!! Mia: sophy!!! Whats wrong, i asked a bit confused. Sophia: mia!!! What are you doing here she asked smiling. Mia: i'll be staying for a while, what happened. Sophia: nate asked me to hit this she said pointing at the mannequin. Mia: huuuuh nate!!!! Are you planning to kill her?? Me: uhmmm have got to use the rest room, i left before they'd eat me up. I walked to the sitting room, then an idea came to my head, i smiled. Showered got the apron and kitchen gloove on, as i mixed my creme with chocolate essence before even putting it in the ovum the sweet scent was everywhere. Soon mia helped soph to the sitting room. Finally i was done with it i arranged the dough on the tray and put it in the ovum. After 5minutes it was ready. The aroma was really yummy. Mia: wooow this creme smells so good, i cant wait to taste this. Sophia: smiling and yummy too. Me: i arranged them on a flat plate walked slowly to living room. I saw there eyes on the creme. I smiled to myself. Mia: already smiling and rubbing her palms together. I walked to were sophia was seated. Me: smiling# aaaah i said and she open her mouth slowly, i picked a piece, move it slowly to her lips. Just at the verge of putting it in her mouth, i took it out. Sophia: nate!!!!! Give me that, i moved the plate away. Me: i put a piece in my mouth and held it with my lips. Like a lightening she grabbed my lips eating and kissing me at the same time. Mia: coughing a teenager is right over here remember?? Me: hahhaha i know mia uhmm you can have that ok. Sophia: no way i wanna eat that too. Me: whispering# have got a better creme for you. I said as carried her. Sophia: hahahah nate put me down i like this creme better. I carried her into our room as she kept hitting my chest softly, smiling.[color/]
25 Dec 2015 | 16:22
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i rilli lyk mia......merry xmas to all coolvallers
25 Dec 2015 | 16:23
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Dat mia is just too funny nice one @desire
25 Dec 2015 | 17:02
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i jt dey smile as i dey read dis episode @Desire well done
25 Dec 2015 | 17:49
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I really envy Nate and Sophie's marriage relationship
25 Dec 2015 | 18:48
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This love gidi gan o
26 Dec 2015 | 00:48
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Ahahahahah I tot she don't talk wit U̶̲̥̅̊ Again ni... Rili rili enjoying dis story lyk madt
26 Dec 2015 | 01:54
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Na wa o
26 Dec 2015 | 02:05
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Mia nd sophia in dsme hous wit u,nate u r as gud as death.doz 2 wil kil u
26 Dec 2015 | 02:22
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Lovely stori....ride on @paula4eva
26 Dec 2015 | 02:41
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Awaiting update,am having insomnia ova dis story..............
26 Dec 2015 | 03:44
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Hmmmm_make her creme bu bed nt creme bu le
26 Dec 2015 | 04:28
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I dont want this story to end o,am enjoying it
26 Dec 2015 | 04:56
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Nyc story..
26 Dec 2015 | 06:43
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I too like mia joor. D gal na beta pikin. Anoda pls @desire
26 Dec 2015 | 11:02
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Wow. Cul story. I like it. Mr writer can u plz hlp me drop ur noba? Or mesage diz noba on whatapp. +22965586287
26 Dec 2015 | 13:34
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Hmmmmmmo . . . . . . . . . This is serious o
26 Dec 2015 | 15:46
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[color =red]EPISODE 77[/color] [color=black]Just at the entrance of our room, i dropped her, just then her lips caught mine as we began to kiss passionately. I opened the door as we moved in slowly still locked in kisses. She laid on the bed and i was ontop, still kissing each other, as our hands moved to places. Just then the door flew open. Mia: omg!!!! We quickly arranged ourself. Sophia: mia you should be in the living room. Me: cant you knock?? Mia: i knocked but you guys were too busy to hear me. She said with squeezed face like a baby Sophia: uhmm so what is it you want?? Mia: smiling# more creme!! Me: fell back on the bed like i was tired. Sophia: hahaha i dont think nate can make another right now. Mia: ooooh am hungry. Sophia: ok lets go get you something to eat. She stood up and left with mia. Me: speechless# i picked my phone and called nicholas. Nicholas: hello man how you doing?? Me: when mia is right here in my house?? Of course am not fine. Nicholas: hahhaa mia is in your house?? Me: yup Nicholas; goodluck man dont forget my tux ok?? Me: of course i wont, i said and hunged up. Wheeew i laid back on my bed. *****sophia****** Mia: staying at home isnt fun at all dont you want to go out?? Sophia: no i dont. Mia: plsssssssssss Sophia: dont push your luck am not gonna change my mind. Mia: i thought you said nate made you twist your ankle, i can help you get back at him. Sophia: no thank you Mia: hmmm ok then, i'll just sit back and laugh when break your ankle again, perhaps next would be your arm. Sophia: mia!!!!!! Mia: crying# i wanna have fun, ok fine if we cant go out how about indoors. Sophia: indoor fun??? Mia: whispering# like driving nate crazy. Sophia: hmmm uhmm that doesnt seem bad at all, he made me train so hard lately. Smiling am in. Mia: aaaaarrrggh she yelled in a feminine tone as she hugged sophia. Sophia: how about we make him fix a wonderful launch for us. Mia: yes am hungry. I was sleeping when the door flew open. I continued my sleep of frustration. Mia and sophia sitting beside me. Mia: nate am hungry. Sophia: baby me too, i woke up to see to sad faces as they kept reciting what they wanted for launch i quickly covered my face with my blanket. They jumped on me and pulled me to the sitting room. Me: mia dont worry i'll make you a wonderful dinner. Mia: nope am starving!! Me: baby plsss am so tired!!! Sophia: thats how tired i was when you yanked me into the gym she said smiling. Me: is that what this is all about. Mia: nope its about you preparing launch. Me: ok ok ok fine i'll do it. Both: yea!!!! I got to the kitchen, got my gloves on and prepared launch. They sat on the dinning table smiling. Sophia: mia dont worry nate is a wonderful cook, am sure after eating this you wont want to go home. Mia: smiling# of course i dont want to!! Me: crazy girl you wanna stay here for ever i murmured. Mia: i heard you!!!! She sang. I placed the food in front of them as they ate. Sophia: mia!!!! Take it easy. Mia: am really used to eating this way. Sophia: its irritating eat slowly. Mia: ok sophy she said smiling. Me: haaaa i breath down in relief as i walk back to my room and slept of. Just then i heard 2female voices. Both: sweeet nate!!![color/]
26 Dec 2015 | 16:24
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U are in 4 it nate
26 Dec 2015 | 16:34
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Lolsss
26 Dec 2015 | 16:47
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hahahaha i jst lov dis mia i knew doz 2 wl definately make u suffer.jst lovin dis.bt wat wrng @Desire y poor updat 2day hope al s wel or ist d ova chicken u ate dat s mkin u lazy?
26 Dec 2015 | 16:50
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Hmmm!
26 Dec 2015 | 19:22
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In for it.... Mr. Romantic
26 Dec 2015 | 19:24
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[color =red]EPISODE 78[/color] [color=black]Me: what!!!!!!! Sophia: rubbing my hairs baby are you angry. Mia: holding and placing head on my shoulder. Nate!! Me: ok ok what is it you want again. Sophia; baby stop making it sound like we are pest. Mia: yes nate you know am you only baby sis and she is your only lovely wife. Sophia: you can try smiling. Me: smile# happy now?? Mia: not yet i wanna go to the fun park. Sophia: i want to go to the movies. Me: hahaha wait a minute are you guys trying to drive me nut?? Mia: nope she said with a squeeze face like a baby. Me: lets do that tomorrow. Mia: noway!!!! Sophia: whispering in her ears. Mia: haaa!! Holding her chest as she smilled, i want to eat chicken barbecue. Sophia: beef sauce and a spanish rice i said smiling. Me: i want to sleep plsss. I said out of frustration, am already tired. Both: plsssss we are starving they both rested on my shoulders. I stood up dragged myself to the kitchen. If things go the way they are heading right now, in a week time am gonna be a servant in my own house. I thought as i look at them as they watched only God know what on the tv. Me: birds of the same feather, baby sophia, baby mia aaaaaarrghh this is really frustrating. Sophia: honey we are hungry!!! Me: i came back from my thought as prepared the dish as fast as possible i need to rest jare. Soon i was done with the food in less than an hour, i arranged it in the dinning table. Immediately the aroma got to the living they both stood up to join me. Sophia: muah!!! Baby you are the best. Mia: giving a hug, i love you nate. I went to our room picked a few things ran into another room and slept of. ******sophia******* Mia: smiling nate's food taste real good, he cooks for you all the time right. Sophia: hahaahah only when he is in a super good mode or romantic mode. Mia: hahaaha interesting well he better stay in that super good mode cos his gonna be cooking from now on. Sophia: hahaha dont be suprised to wake up one morning and his gone. Mia: hahahah he cant run away from me soph, trust me am a pro at this. Sophia: seriously and how are you gonna bring him back if he does?. Mia: its as easy as snapping my fingers. Sophia: you are really something else she said smiling, they finished eating and fixed there eyes on the tv for a while. Mia: is nate sleeping. Sophia: i think so Mia: smiling Sophia: i think i know what you are thinking she said smiling lets do this. They walked to the master room and he wasnt there. Mia: were did he varnish to?? Sophia: i told you so, lets check around. They search everywhere and there was no trace of him just then they had his phone rang from the room opposite them. Mia: there you are!! They walked to the room turned the knob and it was look. Sophia: baby plsss open the door am really missing you. Me: aaaarrrgh go and do something else soph plssss. Sophia: no i want to be with you, making her voice sound like she was gonna cry. mia smiled without saying a word urging her to continue. Me: is mia there with you?? Mia: shaking her head noo. Sophia: no shes not. Me: am coming then, just when i opened the door they both ran in smiling. Mia: we want to sleep too. Me: there are 6rooms here. Sophia: we are scared! They hugged thereself with squeezed faces. Me: lying on the bed, you can have fun in pool i said covering myself with the blanked. Like a lightening they yanked of the blanket, laid on the bed sophia on my right and mia on my left, they both held me thight. Me: aaaaaaarrgghh!!!![color/]
27 Dec 2015 | 00:57
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U guys re sumtin else...cnt stp laughing
27 Dec 2015 | 01:14
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That shouldn't b a problem cos you've endure more than that :grin:
27 Dec 2015 | 01:23
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Hahaha Mia nd Soph are seasoned troublemaker's. Prayin they won't make you 4qet Nicholas' tux.
27 Dec 2015 | 01:26
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lolz family drama
27 Dec 2015 | 01:35
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Hmmnnn
27 Dec 2015 | 01:37
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Nate u neva see anytin,I heard dem saying they will use ur nose blow wistle....Thumbs up@desire
27 Dec 2015 | 01:38
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u neva see anytin nate..
27 Dec 2015 | 03:55
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Mia and Sophie you ladies are something else
27 Dec 2015 | 05:15
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Just luv dis story,welldone @Desire...
27 Dec 2015 | 07:25
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Lol..two funny ladies....Nate u re in for disturbance.
27 Dec 2015 | 08:08
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sorry nate ur own don done
27 Dec 2015 | 08:14
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Nate u can run but u cant hide.... U are in for their dztubance
27 Dec 2015 | 08:36
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[color =red]EPISODE 79[/color] [color=black]I stayed still for a while and soon they both fell asleep, i had to wait a little more, to make sure they were deeply asleep. After a while i began to move there bodies away from mine, but sophia kept on placing her leg on me, finally i was free, i tiptoed outside. Me: haaaa i exhaled, it was like a breath of fresh air. It was dusk already i took out a cold fruit juice, sat on the couch, placed my legs on the glass table feeling so relaxed. I really need a back up plan from those ladies, by morning my head is gonna explode again. Just then a voice came up, just runaway man. Me: hmmm no thats weird. Then you have to get back at them. Smirk# thats better, but how?? Another voice you are nattan, suck it up. I stood up smiling time to tame baby ladies!!! I got up to my room and brought out a silver color brief case, containing spy camera's and sound transmitter system, i began to install them everywhere in the house. I tiptoed into there room and gently instored one in a very strategic position to enable me see all activities. Just then mia yawned like she was gonna wake i stood still for some time then i sneaked out. Got the keys and locked the door. Me: hahahha you dont wanna mess me! I walked to my room and slept off. ******nicholas****** Today was a wonderful friday morning he woke up with ashley beside him and smiles on his face as he gave her a peck. He got out of bed trying not to wake her as he got into the shower. Washed up and got dressed. Ashley: are you going somewhere?? Nicholas: yea to the royal house Ashley: ok am coming with you Nicholas: it gonna take the whole of today, sure your costumes are ready??? Ashley: absolutely she said smiling. Nicholas: alright go get ready am gonna wait right here. I'll be going to nate's house too. Ashley: is he having a party?? Nicholas: mia is with him hahaha Ashley: your kid sis, woow they must really be getting along pretty fast. Nicholas: smiling you cant possibly imagine. Soon she was done and they were on there way to the royal house. ******Roscovitz******* Charles: the king seems to be making arrangements for a feast. Roscovitz: one of those bastards is getting married! Charles: what!! Then we've got to come up with something quickly. Roscovitz: smiling# dont worry charles, they will soon disappear without any trace. Everything is set. Charles: wooow he said smiling in relief. Roscovitz: the fun is just for a little while charles he said as he grinned. I woke up feeling so happy, of course i deserve to be happy, i walked to the gym and did a little weight lifting, took my bath, putting on white T-shirt and white trousers. I brought my laptop and a total view of all the camera came up. I zoomed the room were the ladies were locked in and they were still sleeping peacefully. Sophia: baby she murmured putting her hands on mia. Mia: yarwning as she woke. Nate?? Sophia: what is it mia, she looked at the bed and he wasnt there. Mia: hahaha his out already. Sophia: he should be sleeping in our room. Mia: them lets go wake him up she said smiling. Sophia: i still wanna go to the movies. Mia: i wanna go to the fun park too. Sophia: we go to the movie together and then to the fun park. Mia: uhmm thats sound better. Sophia: for now lets go get him, they stood up happily and walked to the door, turned the knob and the door refused to open. Mia: whats wrong?? Sophia: its not opening, mia tried abit and they got the same result. Mia: i think its locked. Both: nate!!!!![color/]
27 Dec 2015 | 09:11
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L☺lz... Do me I do U̶̲̥̅̊ man no go vex.. I dey gbadun U̶̲̥̅̊ jawe @Desire.. Waiting patiently for da nxt episode
27 Dec 2015 | 09:23
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Short of words
27 Dec 2015 | 09:39
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Hmmm i dey feel u man@dee
27 Dec 2015 | 10:01
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loving diz story nate smart guy.jst pray dat uncle of urz dont get 2 nic first.
27 Dec 2015 | 10:11
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[color =red]EPISODE 80[/color] [color=black]They began to bang the door hard and calling my name. Sophia: baby plssss open the door am claustropobic Mia: nate plsss open the door. Me: i got on the sound transmitter on my right ear. Hello sweet ladies. Sophia: nate plssss am loosing my mind. Me: hahahah uhmm i think you better start loosing it cause soon you'd be mindless. Mia: nate plssss let me out you know am your baby sister. Me: i dont think i can do that sweethearts, i got them cloths to changed to if they wanted to shower and there creams, i passed it through the opening at the base of the door. Make youself comfortable i love you guys muah. Sophia: you cant leave us in here??? Me: of course thats exactly what am gonna do, i ordered for chicken pizza and gave it to them. I gave them there cell phones too. Mia: i hate pizza's Sophia: i dont wanna eat pizza. Me; smiling suit yourself ladies see you guess later. I got out shut the door and drove out, in search a wonderful tux. I went to a designing company, i looked around for a while when my eyes caught a white tux with a black trousers. Hmmm it was really beautiful. Me: package 2 of these, i comanded. They quickly did that and i left with it, well i decided to have fun too. I drove around for a while, then i stopped at a spanish eatery to take my breakfast/launch after eating a wonderful meal, i bought 2huge jars of ice creams for my imprisoned ladies. I walked into the house with it, looked at them on me screen they've finished eating the pizza, washed up and was seating on the floor. Me: sweet baby ladies. Daddy is home. They just kept quiet. Well if you dont want to say welcome to me am just gonna go back with my jars of ice cream. Mia: ice cream!!! Welcome nate!!!! Sophia: sigh* those milky thrash. Me: got the chocolate ones too my love. Sophia: smiling omg!! Welcome nate!!! Me: hmmm i think you just made me change my mind you aint allowed to frown ok. Sophia: alright can i have mine? Mia: and mine too. Me: hahahah whats the rush, try not to spill it mia otherwise you wont be having launch. Mia: i wont. I passed it under to them smiling. Me: i couldnt help but laugh as they both licked it happily. I went to the kitchen, prepared launch for them and laid on the couch, when the door bell rang. I opened it and saw nicholas and ashley. Me: heeey what a suprise. Come in plssss. They both walked in smiling. Nicholas: hmmmm your house is quite calm, you know what i mean. Me: haahha ooh yeaa, the ladies are doing a lowkey camping in one of the rooms, no disturbance. Ashley: you have a nice house nate she said smiling. Me: thanks ashley i winked, uhmm feel free to get anything you want, thats the kitchen over there and thats the fridge. Nicholas: hahaha always lazy, we are your guests nate. Me: who's a guest?? Is it you ashley?? Ashley: smiling not at all Me: or you??? Nicholas: of course am your guest. Me: i threw a pillow at him smiling. Just then heavy bangs was heard. Ashley: whats that??? Me: uhmmm the ladies those are part of there fun games. Sophia: heeeeelpppp!!! Mia: nicholas am stuck right in here. Nicholas: thats mia lets see whats going on. Me: trust me man you dont wanna do that?? He rushed to the room Nicholas: whats wrong mia Mia: nate locked us up. Nicholas: what!!!!! He turned looking at me.[color/]
27 Dec 2015 | 10:17
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Nic better leave them or u face it
27 Dec 2015 | 10:24
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Hahahaha_dats hell of a lovely game
27 Dec 2015 | 10:54
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[color =red]EPISODE 81[/color] [color=black]Me: uhmm its not what it looks like i stammered. Ashley: whats going on Nicholas: ok fine were is the key?? Me: come on dont tell me you want to open it. Mia: smiling# plsssss nicholas am dying i havent eaten for days now she said like she was gonna cry. Nicholas: of course thats your sis and wife. Me: sigh* i tossed the key to him, he quickly opened it as mia as sophia came out in high speed smiling as they moved behind nate and ashley like i was gonna beat them or something. Me: seriously are you guys gonna pretend like you were bullied. Both: nodds yes Ashley: whats going on?? Me: uhmmm nic am gonna go get your tux, i went into my room and brought the tux to him in the sitting room, while mia and sophia sat together sipping juice and smiling at me. Nicholas: wooow its cute!!! Me: yeap so am i picking you up or you'd find your way down. Nicholas: no need to worry nate just come with mia and soph ok. Me: that wont be a problem. After i long discussion they were finally ready to leave. We said our good bye's and they left just when they shut the door they sat beside me. Sophia&mia: looking at me angrily Me: what??? They quickly grabbed a the chair pillow, and was hitting me with it. Me: ok ok ok wait a minute, am gonna get you both a wonderful gown for the wedding i said smiling. Sophia: hahaha dont worry i can get a wonderful gown myself. They began hitting me again. Mia: he has to taste the meal he served us. They both pulled me into the room as struggled a bit but they were pretty determined and i was locked up. Me: baby you know i love you right??? Mia is gonna be leaving soonest i said smiling. The both went to my laptop and watched me from there. Sophia: hahahaha you should have told me that when you locked me up. This is really fun you know she said smiling Me: mia you know how we played with water balls in the garden we could do that again. Mia: really!!! Sophia: dont listen to him he just wants to get out she said smiling. Mia: thats true he's really tricky, am not interested. Me: ok then its even better to be in here than out there with you i said smiling as i jumped on on the bed happily. Sophia: he should be begging us to let him go. Mia: he seem to be having a good time. Sophia: uhmmm since you like it in here dont expect any special treatment. Me: what!!! Thats not fair, come on i fed you guys properly. I fell back on the bed, when a crazy idea got into my head. I took my shirts of. Mia: lying on the couch whats he upto?? Sophia: nothing Me: i winked at the camera as i took of my trousers walked into the shower with my short. And soon i was out from a hot shower as hot smoke emerge from my skin, making it glow. I smiled sexily at the camera. Sophia: holding her chest, dont fool yourself nate i cant see you she said exhaling deeply. Me: of course you cant i moved close to were i placed the camera. You can come over if you want i whispered softly. Sophia: smiling i dont want to. Me: smiling alright then good night, i blew a kiss to her and laid on my bed. Sophia: aint you going to bed?? Mia: of course i am, what about you?? Sophia: i'll join you later. Me: sigh* why isnt she in here yet, aaaarggh i covered my self with the blanket, just then someone jumped on me.[color/]
27 Dec 2015 | 12:01
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Hahaha Sophia has Fallen into ya Trick. U're smart jawe. Nex please.
27 Dec 2015 | 12:19
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Smiling
27 Dec 2015 | 12:30
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ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah funny couples... lovin ya story... nxt plz..
27 Dec 2015 | 12:31
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I saw you nate.:) bad guy
27 Dec 2015 | 13:15
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[color =red]EPISODE 82[/color] [color=black]We were locked in kisses. Me: what took you so long?? Sophia: just smiled as she caught my lips with hers again. Well this time there was actually no distraction lol. We both slept of and soon it was dawn. Mia woke up and sophia wasnt with her. She washed her face and look around and saw nate's door open. Mia: walked in to see a her and nate on the same bed, when she made a ear piercing scream and they woke out of shock. Sophia: mia why are you screaming. Me: hahahaha go get ready we have to be at the wedding as early as possible, i got out of bed and walked to my room. Mia: you let him out. Sophia: of course i did go get ready you dont wanna miss nicholas wedding do you, she said and left. I washed up and was dressed in white tux, black shirt, black trouser and a white tie. I stood in front of the mirror arranged my hair. Finally i was done i sat on the couch waiting for them. In less than 30minutes they were dressed beautifully in white gown, wonderful make ups and earrings. They look so alike except for the fact that mia looked younger. Me: smiling# wooow you ladies are really pretty. Mia: really she said smiling# Me: of course you are?? Sophia: ok lets go, they both grabbed my hands as we walked to the car. We drove down to the royal house everything was all set the hall was well decorated. We walked in and sat down waiting for the groom and the bride. Soon they arrived, it was quite a wonderful day, everyone one was really happy and there were enough to eat and drink. Uncle, dad, mum and some other dignitaries where on the high table, as the best man i was always closed to nicholas. As they all moved to the open space, like a stage to dance the genovian traditional dance. *****sophia****** Mia wandered off to only God knows were, since she grew up here, she knows her way around. Sophia she wasnt bothered. Michael: hello pretty he said sitting close to her. Sophia: hi she said smiling a bit as she stared at him and shifted her gaze back to nate. Michael: am micheal thermopolis Sophia: am sophia Micheal: i'll be honoured if you dance with me. Sophia: smiling# sorry to disapoint you i dont want to. Micheal: funny enough am not the kind of person to be turned down. He said smiling, you might just want to reconsider you know. Sophia: you see the cute guy in white tux?? Micheal: yup Sophia: thats my husband, i suggest you try your luck somewhere else. Micheal: shocked# hit his hands hard on the table, how dare you reject my offer. Sophia: you are creating a scene here. I looked from were i was standing to see my baby but micheal was there with her. They seemed to be having an arguement. I quickly rushed down there. Me: soph whats going on?? Sophia: his hitting on me and i turned him down. Micheal: looking at me angrily as he held her hand firmly. Sophia: looking at me, she seemed hurt. But said nothing Me: micheal let go of her hand. I said calmly Micheal: or you'd do what? You bastard!!! Me: smiling, i grabbed his wristed pressed it hard stopping blood flow and he passed out briefly, collapsing back on his seat. Looking at sophia with a smile no need to create a scene i winked. Sophia: what did you do to him you bad boy she said smiling as i helped her up. Me: dont worry he's sleeping, lets dance.[color/]
27 Dec 2015 | 13:53
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Sleepinq indeed
27 Dec 2015 | 14:11
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I'm seeinq bloody royal weddinq
27 Dec 2015 | 14:15
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Lets dance
27 Dec 2015 | 14:39
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whoa!!
27 Dec 2015 | 14:39
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Sleeping drug
27 Dec 2015 | 14:47
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Loving this story
27 Dec 2015 | 15:10
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bad boy just as soph called you.. michael does not know who he is dealing with... thumbs up @Desire... next please...
27 Dec 2015 | 15:21
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He wil sleep till God knws time
27 Dec 2015 | 15:23
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HahahaHahaha.... Funny Nate
27 Dec 2015 | 15:44
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Micheal want to try u...nat kill them all,any one that want to hurt ur family
27 Dec 2015 | 15:52
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U've giving him sleeping pills. U too bad, Nate.
27 Dec 2015 | 16:16
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The battle is no more for the throne it now includes the bride(sophia) the battle also is no more for roco... Thermopolis its now personally between nate and michael. But wait o did i call that a battle... I think its something less than a fight huh
27 Dec 2015 | 16:43
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wao jst lik dat u send him 2 sleepin mode.by d tim he wake up his though abt u wl change.mia nd soph u guys r lucky.@desire grt wrk am lovin dis story.
28 Dec 2015 | 01:58
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Dat serves Michael ryt. Next plss
28 Dec 2015 | 04:42
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@desire, oyah brinq d next epic or else i'll fiqht u :D
28 Dec 2015 | 06:35
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Dats gud 4 u @Micheal,i pray ur father plan ll nt wrk..
28 Dec 2015 | 06:59
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omo...i dey gbadun d story jare..nate i feel u...well done @desire
28 Dec 2015 | 08:50
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dis wedding myt end badly. Watching sha
28 Dec 2015 | 12:07
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[color =red]EPISODE 83[/color] [color=black]We walked to the dancefloor, we danced smiling for awhile. Just after dancing, we took photos and finally the wedding was over. Me: i walked to were ashley and nicholas sitted smiling. Congratulations i said Ashley: thank you she said smiling, and others who cared to wish them well came by to do so. Finally the wedding was over we all walked into the house as the servants tidied up the place. Clarisse: sitting on his couch smiling, congratulation nicholas. Nicholas: thanks daddy. We chatted for sometime, followed by a happy married life toast. Nicholas: dad i really need to have a wonderful rest. Clarisse: ok your room will be ready soon. Nicholas: thanks dad. Me: i'll be in the library Sophia: am going with you nate Mia: me too Clarisse: hahaha alright nate. Me: uhmm actually i cant go with any of you. Ashley: why?? Me: its a guy thing, not for ladies Mia: i know you are lying Sophia: you cant change our mind. Me: ok fine, on one condition, you have to stay as calm as possible. Sophia: looked at mia and they seemed to agree, as they nodded in unison. Me: smiling alright lets go. We all walked down to the library. Librarian: hello princess Mia: hello mr wilford Librarian: its been a while mr..... Me: nattan i said shaking his hand with a smile. Mia: you know him??? Librarian: i met him once, uhmmm princess if you dont mind me asking what are you doing here with him. Mia: thats my big brother nattan. Librarian: woow it was true afterall he said bowing a bit. Mia: can we go in Librarian: of course my lady we walked into the library as mia showed us documentary's of past kings and there achievement. She talked so fluent and so confident i and sophia was really stunned. Me: wooow you aint a total baby afterall Mia: smiling does that mean we'll get to play with water balls at the pool??? Me: i just smiled Mia: screaming in her feminine as she hopped around happily. Sophia: hahahaha seriously mia has gone nut, she walked around and saw a few books which caught her attention. Me: looked up to see her looking at some book curiously. Hmmm what are you looking at?? Sophia: biotechnology stuff dont worry you wont understand them, hahha Me: hahaha crazy girl i said and took my eyes back to the book, when mia hopped back. Mia: placing her hands on me are you still reading this?? Me: yup Mia: hahahaha come on, i thought you want to do something fun here. Me: like what?? Mia: fine i could tell you the history of portigual, france, italy, england, and indian american. Perhaps genovia too. She said smilling. Me: you know all that??? Mia: uhmm reading histories, studying maps, atlas and blueprint is like my hobby. Me: cooool# show me around then. Mia: dont tell me you are interested in history too. Me: geography precisely i said smiling. We walked round the library as she showed me some of her personal hidden collections too. I have to admit i was begining to like her like a baby sis and not as pest sis. After a while Sophia: hahaha hmm got to see you guess getting along, she smiled, drawing our attention from the book we looked at sitting on the floor. Me: smiling# are you done?? Mia: i think we should go, its dark already Sophia: your right Mia Me: hahah i know you girls are scared, alright lets go. We walked out after saying goodnight to mr wilford. As we walked down the long passage. I felt someone following us, i stopped a bit. Sophia: are you alright?? Me: am fine, i said and was calm again, i didnt want to turn just yet, his pace increased, just when he got close enough, i turned swiftly stoping his right hand which wielded a dagger, just then 4 other men came out from the dark pointing guns at mia, sophia and me[color/]
28 Dec 2015 | 13:01
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Hahahaha.poor boys
28 Dec 2015 | 13:08
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[color=black]New episode….. @Coolval222-2 @Tenniebenson @Khola46 @Wiseman @Ibrams @Johnysky @Pizzaro @Swtharyomi @Wyse-one @Eddy @Delight @Pweety @Mray @Jummybabe @Babe4biola @Sofia @Ritagold @Kuks @Originalannchilexdel @Fridex @Frank @Frankkay @Simzy @Pheranmmie041 @Temmyjoy @Chriswayne @Evanz @ele1 @dgreat @Itzshaxee @Mecuze @Skookum @Kingson1 @Donmikie @Kingsbest @T-Dak @Charlywizzy @Charliebryn @Hardeywummy @Japhola @Konphido @Emmyrexx @Adura @Tholartee @Nextangel @Blessedgirl @Jenifa @Jclash @Taiwo @Chomyline @Lawman @Tinagabe @Itmrabzeez @Johnoscar @Precy @Timmy @Dabcy @Ikeholuwa1 @Besty @Starlet @Okklad @Angeleniola @Ewomazeal @Mizleemah @Blessfelicity222 @Anitcham @Stephanie @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Rhennyjay @Geeadore @Tiffany1 @Tonia @Hameyeenat @Inemlove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @Vibratingwind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Maurice @Jummy @Thankmic @Christopher @Anita @Phinebraim @Kedike @Kemkit @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Bsam @Portable @Steph @Olaking3 @Harddy @Blakstudd @Prince @Invincible @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Sandy @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @Sexynikky1994 @Youngestprince @Davick @Semilore @Oyindamola @Dhemilade1 @Mature @Pearl @Roes @Franklin @Kolababs @Hollar @Smilie @Borwerleh @Iksqueency @Loveth @Funmilayo1 @Okklad @Nizzy @Flames @Vict-Vames @Peace @Sirp081 @Kristen @Kingsengine @Aaron @Tony @Ruth @Romancelord @Itzshaxee @Olamy4fun @Abrahamdking @Flamerouz @Crusher @Stanny39 @John @Softtouch @Onahsunday631 @Jeddy @Sonshine @Sirgentle @Vizkid @Hoelhay @Pharm- vickymears @Teesolid @Omoyemmy @Olarach @Daxking @Krizzy @Softie @Holarbordah @Ele1 @Firstladyontop @Obaby @Sergentmax @Mhizdaofot @Ariketemmy @Saraya @Eminem @Laurasteve299 @Gambola @Monadisu @Dazzlingangel @Donyas @C-Roderick @Cookey @Isabella1 @Chisomsophia @Mrfabulous @Henry @Mhizzthessy @Millz @Bishops10 @Kreepyink @Olaniyiadeshina @christiana @Aarti @ebube @eminem @gracedkyenny @abednego-precious-7 @chyamaka @desire @pweetyfizzy @PEmamezi @hohluwaseyi @kreepyink @elibabanoni-2 @hoyenikky @tholartee @humblelion @adegunle3gmail-com @shugarlips @iksqueency @hayanfeoluwa @paula4eva @uncleba426 @greg-billz @geeadore @adura @everybody ooo[/color]
28 Dec 2015 | 13:19
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[color=black]New episode….. @Coolval222-2 @Tenniebenson @Khola46 @Wiseman @Ibrams @Johnysky @Pizzaro @Swtharyomi @Wyse-one @Eddy @Delight @Pweety @Mray @Jummybabe @Babe4biola @Sofia @Ritagold @Kuks @Originalannchilexdel @Fridex @Frank @Frankkay @Simzy @Pheranmmie041 @Temmyjoy @Chriswayne @Evanz @ele1 @dgreat @Itzshaxee @Mecuze @Skookum @Kingson1 @Donmikie @Kingsbest @T-Dak @Charlywizzy @Charliebryn @Hardeywummy @Japhola @Konphido @Emmyrexx @Adura @Tholartee @Nextangel @Blessedgirl @Jenifa @Jclash @Taiwo @Chomyline @Lawman @Tinagabe @Itmrabzeez @Johnoscar @Precy @Timmy @Dabcy @Ikeholuwa1 @Besty @Starlet @Okklad @Angeleniola @Ewomazeal @Mizleemah @Blessfelicity222 @Anitcham @Stephanie @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Rhennyjay @Geeadore @Tiffany1 @Tonia @Hameyeenat @Inemlove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @Vibratingwind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Maurice @Jummy @Thankmic @Christopher @Anita @Phinebraim @Kedike @Kemkit @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Bsam @Portable @Steph @Olaking3 @Harddy @Blakstudd @Prince @Invincible @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Sandy @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @Sexynikky1994 @Youngestprince @Davick @Semilore @Oyindamola @Dhemilade1 @Mature @Pearl @Roes @Franklin @Kolababs @Hollar @Smilie @Borwerleh @Iksqueency @Loveth @Funmilayo1 @Okklad @Nizzy @Flames @Vict-Vames @Peace @Sirp081 @Kristen @Kingsengine @Aaron @Tony @Ruth @Romancelord @Itzshaxee @Olamy4fun @Abrahamdking @Flamerouz @Crusher @Stanny39 @John @Softtouch @Onahsunday631 @Jeddy @Sonshine @Sirgentle @Vizkid @Hoelhay @Pharm- vickymears @Teesolid @Omoyemmy @Olarach @Daxking @Krizzy @Softie @Holarbordah @Ele1 @Firstladyontop @Obaby @Sergentmax @Mhizdaofot @Ariketemmy @Saraya @Eminem @Laurasteve299 @Gambola @Monadisu @Dazzlingangel @Donyas @C-Roderick @Cookey @Isabella1 @Chisomsophia @Mrfabulous @Henry @Mhizzthessy @Millz @Bishops10 @Kreepyink @Olaniyiadeshina @christiana @Aarti @ebube @eminem @gracedkyenny @abednego-precious-7 @chyamaka @desire @pweetyfizzy @PEmamezi @hohluwaseyi @kreepyink @elibabanoni-2 @hoyenikky @tholartee @humblelion @adegunle3gmail-com @shugarlips @iksqueency @hayanfeoluwa @paula4eva @uncleba426 @greg-billz @geeadore @adura @everybody ooo[/color]
28 Dec 2015 | 13:20
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show dem d stuff...i get ur back
28 Dec 2015 | 13:34
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You can finish them wid sophia mia might b a luttle problem though
28 Dec 2015 | 13:43
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who invited me here?? * angry face ** @paula4eva, at the end of the story??
28 Dec 2015 | 13:44
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Hope u will kill them all
28 Dec 2015 | 14:20
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na so u hate me @desire u kudnt even cal me jst vexing now
28 Dec 2015 | 14:33
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Well done desire. I dey enjoy the story
28 Dec 2015 | 14:43
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[color =red]EPISODE 84[/color] [color=black]******nicholas******* Clarisse: smiling# those two must really be getting along pretty fast. Nicholas: hahah yes dad Clarisse: i think she is even more happy to have you guys around than i am. Nicholas: am happy to have you around too dad. Clarisse: smiling# i know you are boy. Just then helen walked in. Helen: such lovely couples she said smiling. Nicholas: thanks mum he said smiling too when a male servant came around saying the room was ready. Clarisse: uhmm i dont remember assigning you to get there room ready Servant: yes they needed more hands in tidying the royal hall so i have to be here. Helen: your face doesnt look familiar either. Servant: i was moved from micheal's quarter to help in the event. Clarisse: alright lead them to there room, nicholas helped ashley up as they both followed the servant majestically. As they walked for a while, he took them out side. Nicholas: this part leads towards the library why are we here?? Servant: sorry prince nicholas i should have told you sooner, you brother asked me to bring you both the library discreetly. Ashley: smiling# perhaps he got you a bigger present. They smiled as they followed him *******me******* i quickly turned him over placing his dagger close to his neck. While sophia stared at me looking a bit calm, i was impressed but mia was shaking like she was thrown in an ice creek. Me: what is it you want. Man: hahaha well we dont disclose that to our victim since your gonna die anyway i might be tempted to tell you he said as he laughed. Me: smiling# you actually came for me right?? Let the girls go and i'll go with you. Man2: shut the hell up before i blow there brains out, we call the shots here. Me: staring at him. Man: well my friend here aint that friendly you know, lets just wait a little more the party is just getting started. I would have taken them out but we were in lit passage, and am certain they were not alone. I cannot risk the life of mia and sophia. Me: nodding slowly at mia telling her to calm down. Mia: just nod as tears flowed from her eyes. Just then i heard nicholas voice. Nicholas: whats going on nate?? Before i could say a word 4men climbed up from the dark, sorrounding him and ashley pointing guns at them, as the servant brought out a jackknife. Servant: thanks for making my job easy he said smiling. Ashley: holding nicholas looking so scared. Nicholas: what!!! This was all a trap!!! He was a bit when he saw nate holding a man with a dagger close to his neck, and guns point at him, sophia and mia who is already crying. Servant: smilling you are so gullibl Man: the party is complete lets go, pulled us out of the palace still pointing guns at us. As they cuffed our hands, and forced us into a van. Me: hahaha you are really a bad entertainer. The other guy hit my cheek hard with his first giving me a slight cut. Man: i said shut up. Me: i spat the blood out. Still laughing, hahahah those fist of yours cant hurt a fly, its too sissy!! I said mockingly. Man: hitting me again!! Captain: phil leave him alone, mr roscovitz wants to see the package before they are discarded. Phil: taking off his mask, you just got lucky. Me: hahahaha tcccch!! asshole!!! I laughed as they all looked at me in shock, am sure they heard his name too. Nicholas: thats our uncle he whispered. Mia: his gonna save us right??. Me: hahaha shit face uncle, i really couldnt stop laughing i looked at soph are you scared baby. Sophia: not at all, they just stared at us like we were crazy[color/]
28 Dec 2015 | 14:43
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Aaaawwww am sowie @ladywen dont worry i try and make up
28 Dec 2015 | 14:46
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Aaaawwww am sowie @ladywen dont worry i try and make up. Smile small nau lol
28 Dec 2015 | 14:47
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@promzy lol no vex shaaa, just check the first page i invited you from day 1
28 Dec 2015 | 14:49
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nathan is soo going to murder all of them
28 Dec 2015 | 14:57
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Am scared o
28 Dec 2015 | 15:32
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U didnt invite me @desire
28 Dec 2015 | 15:46
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Wow! The party has began
28 Dec 2015 | 15:51
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Soph i hope u can nw fight. Thanks @paula4eva
28 Dec 2015 | 15:52
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Suspence
28 Dec 2015 | 16:14
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I know Mia will be crying by now. Shey lady sophia can fight now. Nate, pls guard them safe
28 Dec 2015 | 16:33
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Falling in love with diz story o
28 Dec 2015 | 16:37
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Roschovis intrestin move.Buh it wunt not get well wit ya,a promise.......
28 Dec 2015 | 17:08
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y wilnt i @smile @desire wen d story is getin more nd more interestin.kip it up.lov d story next plz.am jst happy dat their are takin dem away wit nate.i trust u nate.
28 Dec 2015 | 17:19
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jst lik mr hilson no single soul arnd dat uncle of urz wil survive.
28 Dec 2015 | 17:26
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Cnt wait 2 see wat u r going 2 do 2 dem @nate
28 Dec 2015 | 17:28
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Me am scared this suspense is too much.
28 Dec 2015 | 17:31
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Following_ maybe na dat ur uncle kidnap una wen u people were small _ HA4WA FA1RA TA4 MAYA GA5YASA
28 Dec 2015 | 17:39
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Nate and sophie his riqht hand woman z there... Not to worry about... Ur uncle will soon cry for help but help will be far 4rm him.....
28 Dec 2015 | 17:51
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[color =red]EPISODE 85[/color] [color=black]Finally we got to a rocky hill, climbed up in a straight. It wasnt quite easy, but i was certain joke time was of, i knew at the end of this hill will be very steep cliff. Soon we were up there they tied up together and took of the hand cuffs, and tied us with a rope. Kept us in a tent it was so cold up here. Mia: am scared she said still shivering. Ashley: me too nate Nicholas: dont worry baby he said squeezing her hands a bit. I wasnt saying anything again, i just looked at sophia and smiled. Sophia: smiled# i know you nate you are not trying anything stupid on my watch, i know that weird smile. Me: hmmm just get them outta here when the time comes ok?? Sophia: am not gonna leave you here nate. Me: smiled# so what are you gonna do here, fight?? Hell no they no mannequin, even a mannequin twisted your ankle. Sophia: smiling am not talking to you anymore. Just them we heard a voice that seem familiar to mia. Mia: thats my uncle she said in relief Me: mia you are not to recognize him. Mia: but i do before i could say anymore words she called out for him. Roscovitz: what!!!! Why is a lady there??. He asked Captain: they were mixed up with the ladies we couldnt seperate them. Roscovitz: hmmm someone recognizes me already, he took his touchlight to were they sat. Hello mia. Mia: uncle plsss help me those bastard brought me here, am so cold, she said crying. Roscovitz: i would have done that if you havent recognized me. Mia: shocked# what do you mean?? Roscovitz: am sorry mia i leave no trace, you can send you regard to micheal, you all die@dawn. Mia: shocked# seeing the devil shez had for an uncle, as he smiled and left. *******clarise******* Looking at the wall clock they've spent so much time in the library. Somehow it felt weird, he walked to the library and it was closed, they cant possible be inside. Mr wilford does his job efficiently. He decided to ask nicholas, he checked the room and they were not there. Helen: aint you coming to bed. Clarisse: nicholas and his bride are not in there room, nate, mia and his wife are not in the library. Helen: were is that servant he might know something, she quickly sent for all the servants. Clarisse: have you seen my children around??. Servant: i only saw the prince who just wedded walking towards the library. Clarisse: search the whole palace i need to see them now. Helen: calm down honey. Clarisse: i cant calm down this was exactly how they got missing 25years ago. Helen: you think they've been kidnapped or something. Clarisse: i dont want to think that until the servants are done with there search. Soon they were done after a long search. Head servant: my lord they are not in the royal house. Helen: what!!!! Clarisse; feel back on his seat. *******me******** Captain: alright you die in the morning i suggest you pray and sleep pretty well. Ashley: plssss let us go she said pleadingly Captain: i can see you just got married he said smiling, you are really beautiful. Hmm it seems you boys have this thing with pretty ladies. But you are all gonna die anyway. Me: smiling so who is going to kill us. Just then a man walked out of the dark. Man; i am!!! Looking to see his face i quickly recognized him. Me: deadstings!!!!! Deadstings: hello agent roy[color/]
29 Dec 2015 | 01:05
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Am dying of suspense @desire, oya plssss next epi. N who is deadstings?
29 Dec 2015 | 01:18
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N who is deadstings?
29 Dec 2015 | 01:32
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Hey you didnt tell us about deadstings before now so you have to explain. I'm scared its not as easy as i thought it would be. With a trained agent on the line things may fall apart. @paula4eva well don boss but this suspense is killing and i cant fight it without your help so throw me your magic knife[new episode] to fight it with.
29 Dec 2015 | 01:49
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chai!!!! you wan kill person ni? dis suspense is too much oo abeg con feed us more oo... can't wait for d next episode at all
29 Dec 2015 | 02:07
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@paula4eva plss come nd post d next episode. Dis suspense is rilli killing us ooo abeg
29 Dec 2015 | 02:40
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Deadstrings??? @paula4eva pls come wit d next epi
29 Dec 2015 | 03:06
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Nawaoh @Paula4eva u wan give me HBP? Abeg come oooo.
29 Dec 2015 | 03:23
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Pweety gud,what's d next line of action......
29 Dec 2015 | 03:46
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Dis gonna b pretty tough
29 Dec 2015 | 04:59
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In mia's Voice; @paula4eva pls d next episode. In sopia's voice; @paula4eva dear next episode.
29 Dec 2015 | 05:17
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wat a suspense.plz dis s killing next oo
29 Dec 2015 | 05:25
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who com b deadstrings...@desire we dey wait ooo
29 Dec 2015 | 05:50
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Who is deadstring?
29 Dec 2015 | 06:03
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The suspense z killinq me..... Post the next episode and explain who z deadstrinqz
29 Dec 2015 | 06:04
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[color =red] EPISODE 86 [/color] *******clarisse******* looking so devasted, at dawn, it was broadcasted on every station about the sudden disappearance of the prince's and princess of genovia, whoever finds them would be rewarded handsomely. In less than a day the news was all over genovia, the government and all its forces were out to look for them. Helen: with swollen eyes after long night of tears as she was finally consoled, there was silence everywhere. When the thermopolis' came in. Roscovitz: my family and i are really sadened by current happening. Clarisse be rest i asurred my wife and i would do everything within our power to bring back my niece and nephew's. Kate: wiping her eyes with a face towel. Micheal: uncle i'll make sure the culprits pay dearly for there crimes, am sure they would be found soon. Clarisse: hmmm he just smiled in pains, covitz i wanna see for a moment. They both walked outside. Clarisse: for a while you must a thought me to be a fool. Covitz: clarisse what are you talking about??. Clarisse: well you can as well pretend not to know. But covitz after all this years you havent changed a bit. Covitz: clarisse i wont have you insult me. Clarisse: smiling# i can see you have guts covitz, am gonna say this once dont make me repeat myself again. You have until 24hours to bring back my children safely. Covitz: this is outrageous clarisse, i'll just assume you are talking out of grief. Clarisse: smiling# i can see, the serpent is now a dragon. From now on am severing all ties with you, you'll have to address me as king and not as a brother. Covitz: clarisse you a bluffing right???. Clarisse: guards!!! 4men in royal suit rushed in. Seize him!! Covitz: what is the meaning of this Clarisse: how dare you address me by my first name you will be charge for treason. Take him away!!! Covitz: you cant mess with me clarisse, after being neglected for years, i'll have my revenge clarisse!!! He yelled back. *******me******* Deathsting: i know you must have thought you got away from your karma, he said smiling. Me: my only karma is rescuing you from gulag!! Deathsting: well have paid my debts i let you enjoyed life for a while roy. He said smiling. Me: looking at him i have no business with you. Deathsting: nope you dont but somehow our path crossed. Me: hmm you mean my uncle?? Deathsting: smiling how naive, hmm you think i'll be here just because of your uncle. Me: you have your reasons? Whats that. Deathsting: you killed mr hilson he said bending close to me. Me: smiling his karma caught up with him. Deathsting: you showed no mercy roy, thats exactly how you are going to die. Me: let them go then, they have nothing to do with this. Deathsting: you killed my brother roy!!! He said angrily Me: you have a brother? Deathsting: silvester!!! You might want to call him sly. Me: shocked# i was begining to get even more than i bargained for. Sophia: staring at me with a an unsure look. As silence fell everywhere, just then the captain came into the tent. Captain: carlos you are not to kill them this morning, its going to be on mr roscovitz orders. Carlos: i dont take orders from him!! Captain: what do you mean carlos??? Carlos: like a lightening he brought a silver pistol in clean shot the captain dropped dead, i call the shots here he said grining [color =red] ;) ;) To be continued;) ;) [/color]
29 Dec 2015 | 07:26
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[b] hi dear reader! @desire is kinda busy, i'd be helping with the update for the meantime. He still remains the auther. Enjoy!![/b]
29 Dec 2015 | 07:29
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new update! Platinium table list..... @Coolval222-2 @Tenniebenson @Khola46 @Wiseman @Ibrams @Johnysky @Pizzaro @Swtharyomi @Wyse-one @Eddy @Delight @Pweety @Mray @Jummybabe @Babe4biola @Sofia @Ritagold @Kuks @Originalannchilexdel @Fridex @Frank @Frankkay @Simzy @Pheranmmie041 @Temmyjoy @Chriswayne @Evanz @ele1 @dgreat @Itzshaxee @Mecuze @Skookum @Kingson1 @Donmikie @Kingsbest @T-Dak @Charlywizzy @Charliebryn @Hardeywummy @Japhola @Konphido @Emmyrexx @Adura @Tholartee @Nextangel @Blessedgirl @Jenifa @Jclash @Taiwo @Chomyline @Lawman @Tinagabe @Itmrabzeez @Johnoscar @Precy @Timmy @Dabcy @Ikeholuwa1 @Besty @Starlet @Okklad @Angeleniola @Ewomazeal @Mizleemah @Blessfelicity222 @Anitcham @Stephanie @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Rhennyjay @Geeadore @Tiffany1 @Tonia @Hameyeenat @Inemlove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @Vibratingwind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Maurice @Jummy @Thankmic @Christopher @Anita @Phinebraim @Kedike @Kemkit @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Bsam @Portable @Steph @Olaking3 @Harddy @Blakstudd @Prince @Invincible @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Sandy @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @Sexynikky1994 @Youngestprince @Davick @Semilore @Oyindamola @Dhemilade1 @Mature @Pearl @Roes @Franklin @Kolababs @Hollar @Smilie @Borwerleh @Iksqueency @Loveth @Funmilayo1 @Okklad @Nizzy @Flames @Vict-Vames @Peace @Sirp081 @Kristen @Kingsengine @Aaron @Tony @Ruth @Romancelord @Itzshaxee @Olamy4fun @Abrahamdking @Flamerouz @Crusher @Stanny39 @John @Softtouch @Onahsunday631 @Jeddy @Sonshine @Sirgentle @Vizkid @Hoelhay @Pharm-vickymears @Teesolid @Omoyemmy @Olarach @Daxking @Krizzy @Softie @Holarbordah @Ele1 @Firstladyontop @Obaby @Sergentmax @Mhizdaofot @Ariketemmy @Saraya @Eminem @Laurasteve299 @Gambola @Monadisu @Dazzlingangel @Donyas @C-Roderick @Cookey @Isabella1 @Chisomsophia @Mrfabulous @Henry @Mhizzthessy @Millz @Bishops10 @Kreepyink @Olaniyiadeshina @christiana @Aarti @ebube @eminem @gracedkyenny @abednego-precious-7 @chyamaka @desire @pweetyfizzy @PEmamezi @hohluwaseyi @kreepyink @elibabanoni-2 @hoyenikky @tholartee @humblelion @adegunle3gmail-com @shugarlips @iksqueency @hayanfeoluwa @paula4eva @uncleba426 @greg-billz @geeadore @natasha9976 @anorexia @elibabanoni @sanctus4real @hoyenikky @originalannchilexde @sirmike @imperialsluv @geeadore @cassiewells @rosey @cizzle @emmanuel @roes @sparkling-2 @elibabanoni-2 @dehleh @valentinelv @hardey1292 @slimolayinkastar @josephjuliet @itmrabzeez @ladywen @latienco @victoriouschild
29 Dec 2015 | 07:32
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@invincible a u the one dat z nah updating....
29 Dec 2015 | 07:43
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Dis is getting more interesting @paula4eva tanx 4 dis write up @invincible kip it rolling pls
29 Dec 2015 | 07:47
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@beauty01 hmmm my update depends on how often he send me subsequent episodes. @chomyline yeah for now..
29 Dec 2015 | 07:57
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OMG!!!
29 Dec 2015 | 08:03
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Tnx@invincible
29 Dec 2015 | 08:34
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wow this is really cool
29 Dec 2015 | 08:44
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[color =red] EPISODE 87 [/color] By now i was begining to cut my self free with a rock, as carlos walked away smiling. Nicholas and ashley leaned on each other. Mia: eyes was swollen, i guess they were tired of crying. Finally, i freed myself and tiptoed to the captain's body collect the 2 dagger and the gun on him. Nicholas: nate!!! Me: sssshhhh.....i cut them lossed. Mia: quickly hugged me. Nicholas: now what?? Me: handing over the gun to him and the dagger to sophia. Stay in here, on my orders get the hell out of here as fast as possible. Sophia: and you??? Me: smiling you know i'd be fine right. Nicholas: sophia dont worry we'd get help as quick as possible. Sophia: hugging me dont make me look for you. I sneaked out of the tent, 2 men stood with there back facing the tent hold heavy guns. In two swift strikes i slit there throats noiselessly. Grabbed there guns and tossed it into the tent, collected more daggers, i look leftwards and 2men were seated on a stone drinking beer, i threw 2dagger which pierced they air pathways. I was right afterall there was a very high and steep cliff, at the bottom of it is a massive ocean to the right of our tent. I move toward the path were we came from and there was 2 other tent there. The men there seem tired, well who wouldnt be they havent gotten a wonderful night rest. I sneaked swiftly to the 1st tent bending in other not to be spotted. I got in to see 5men having sandwich for breakfast and vodka, they quickly turned to see who! Me: hello i said rushing towards the first guy, slit his throat, pierced the other guy's air pathway. Leaving the dagger there. As the other 3 ran towards me, i gave then hard swift punches on there gullets. Look around there were lots of dagger, i quickly change into the black outfit which they wore, covering my face with a mask and lots of dagger, well positioned as i dressed one of the men on the floor in my best man tux, tossed him on my shoulders and walked out. Man: why are you carrying him?? Me: he tried to excape, am going to put him back, he just nodded and walked away. Then a thought came to my mind i rushed back in collecting there cloths, carried the dead man on my shoulder and walked to the tent were we were kept, as i walked in. They pointed guns at me, with an angry looking faces. Sophia: what did you do to him. Me: hahaha i tossed him on the floor took of my mask. What are you talking about. Everyone: nate!!! Me: hurry change into these, i said tossing the cloths at them. They quickly did and put on the face mask. I quickly walked back to the other tent, got the dead men dressed in our own cloths and moved them to our tent as i tied them together. Me: this will buy you guys more time to leave. Lets go, as we stepped out i saw carlos standing opposite us looking at our tent. Me: carlos the prisoners tried to escape. Carlos: you got them back right?? Me: yes i said, lets go i comanded. Carlos: wait why are you still wearing you face mask?? Me: we dont want to be recognized. Carlos: alright then take it off he said smiling. Mia: shaking like she was catching cold again, looking at them it was pretty obvious somethings were no right, they were really uncomfortable. Me: i dont want to i said stepping forward. Carlos: shoot him he comanded the 2 armed men who stood beside him. Me: like a lightening i stucked 2 daggers in there necks. Run!!! I comanded as i took of the face mask. Carlos: dont let them get away, he comanded 2 other men came out from another tent and chased after them with guns. [color =red] ;) ;) To be continued [/color]
29 Dec 2015 | 09:18
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First to comment . . . . . .Vicoch Was here
29 Dec 2015 | 09:19
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new update! Platinium table list….. @Coolval222-2 @Tenniebenson @Khola46 @Wiseman @Ibrams @Johnysky @Pizzaro @Swtharyomi @Wyse-one @Eddy @Delight @Pweety @Mray @Jummybabe @Babe4biola @Sofia @Ritagold @Kuks @Originalannchilexdel @Fridex @Frank @Frankkay @Simzy @Pheranmmie041 @Temmyjoy @Chriswayne @Evanz @ele1 @dgreat @Itzshaxee @Mecuze @Skookum @Kingson1 @Donmikie @Kingsbest @T-Dak @Charlywizzy @Charliebryn @Hardeywummy @Japhola @Konphido @Emmyrexx @Adura @Tholartee @Nextangel @Blessedgirl @Jenifa @Jclash @Taiwo @Chomyline @Lawman @Tinagabe @Itmrabzeez @Johnoscar @Precy @Timmy @Dabcy @Ikeholuwa1 @Besty @Starlet @Okklad @Angeleniola @Ewomazeal @Mizleemah @Blessfelicity222 @Anitcham @Stephanie @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Rhennyjay @Geeadore @Tiffany1 @Tonia @Hameyeenat @Inemlove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @Vibratingwind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Maurice @Jummy @Thankmic @Christopher @Anita @Phinebraim @Kedike @Kemkit @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Bsam @Portable @Steph @Olaking3 @Harddy @Blakstudd @Prince @Invincible @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Sandy @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @Sexynikky1994 @Youngestprince @Davick @Semilore @Oyindamola @Dhemilade1 @Mature @Pearl @Roes @Franklin @Kolababs @Hollar @Smilie @Borwerleh @Iksqueency @Loveth @Funmilayo1 @Okklad @Nizzy @Flames @Vict-Vames @Peace @Sirp081 @Kristen @Kingsengine @Aaron @Tony @Ruth @Romancelord @Itzshaxee @Olamy4fun @Abrahamdking @Flamerouz @Crusher @Stanny39 @John @Softtouch @Onahsunday631 @Jeddy @Sonshine @Sirgentle @Vizkid @Hoelhay @Pharm- vickymears @Teesolid @Omoyemmy @Olarach @Daxking @Krizzy @Softie @Holarbordah @Ele1 @Firstladyontop @Obaby @Sergentmax @Mhizdaofot @Ariketemmy @Saraya @Eminem @Laurasteve299 @Gambola @Monadisu @Dazzlingangel @Donyas @C-Roderick @Cookey @Isabella1 @Chisomsophia @Mrfabulous @Henry @Mhizzthessy @Millz @Bishops10 @Kreepyink @Olaniyiadeshina @christiana @Aarti @ebube @eminem @gracedkyenny @abednego-precious-7 @chyamaka @desire @pweetyfizzy @PEmamezi @hohluwaseyi @kreepyink @elibabanoni -2 @hoyenikky @tholartee @humblelion @adegunle3gmail-com @shugarlips @iksqueency @hayanfeoluwa @paula4eva @uncleba426 @greg-billz @geeadore @natasha9976 @anorexia @elibabanoni @sanctus4real @hoyenikky @originalannchilexde @sirmike @imperialsluv @geeadore @cassiewells @rosey @cizzle @emmanuel @roes @sparkling-2 @elibabanoni -2 @dehleh @valentinelv @hardey1292 @slimolayinkastar @josephjuliet @itmrabzeez @ladywen @latienco @victoriouschild
29 Dec 2015 | 09:20
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@invincible.... Thanks... Battle line.... No qoinq back
29 Dec 2015 | 09:38
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Next oh abeg
29 Dec 2015 | 09:53
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Chai! am reali lackin bhind Tankz @invincible
29 Dec 2015 | 09:55
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Scared
29 Dec 2015 | 09:58
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Another wahala
29 Dec 2015 | 09:58
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The bttle has been drawn___sophia and nate...am counting on both of ya
29 Dec 2015 | 10:17
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hmmmm, Let c wu gonna die, am sure deathstring gonna be the one to die.. next please...
29 Dec 2015 | 10:19
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tnkz 4 d cal.am rili lovin dis.plz next b4 i die of suspense
29 Dec 2015 | 10:33
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Tnks 4 d call@invincible
29 Dec 2015 | 11:10
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Am scared for u people. Next oooooooooooo
29 Dec 2015 | 11:18
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following..tanks @invincible..well done @desire
29 Dec 2015 | 11:36
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[color =red] EPISODE 88[/color] Carlos stood smiling as the running air blew his long raffian suit and his hair, i quickly rushed to stop his men from chasing them when he stopped me with a front swing kick, i dodged throwing myself backwards, to the right, as he continued his attacks, which made me moved backwards in other to dodge. When i realized he was moving me close to the cliff, i quickly gave him a tripple spin kick, which he dodged moving backwards and stopping my legs in the air. He tossed me leftwards away from the cliff as i crashed on the hard rock making alot of noise. It hurts but i have to be on my feet again. Carlos: you know for a while i thought you are quite brutal after seeing you footprints in mr hilson's house. He said as he rushed towards me again, with hard kicks which i waved of and sending a hard punch to his face, he dodged swinging his coat to my face and hitting my tommy hard with he right leg. Which made me stumbled on the hard rock again. *******nicholas******** they ran as fast as possible down the hilly slope as the men followed swiftly from behind, just when they where close to the leveled sandy ground ashley stumbled into the sands. Nicholas: are you alright?? He said trying to help her up when one of the men hit him hard on the head and he passed out yelling. Mia: nicholas!!!!! Sophia: stop to see nicholas on the ground they rush back, the men had no weapons they all tossed there weapons away, in other to run faster. Sophia: leave her alone!!! Man2: hahaha or what are you gonna do pretty lady Man1: whispering, its been a while i stucked my cocks in pussies you know. Man2: hahaha and they are pretty too. Man1: i got this one he said pushing ashley flat on the sand, spreading her legs. Ashley: crawling away, stay away from me!!! She yelled crying. Man2: moved toward mia and sophia, mia quick hid behind sophia crying. Sophia: as he moved closer she quickly splashed sands into his eyes with her hands. Man2: haaaarrrggh he yelled Sophia: she brought out the dagger nate gave her yaaaarrrh she jumped on him, stabbing thrice on his chest. She stood up and saw the other man on ashley, struggling with her cloths as he caressed her boobs, she tiptoed behind him to slit his throat, he dodged swiftly, stumbling over the sand. He turned quickly and gave sophia a hard kick which made her stumbled of the sand with a huge cut on her lips. Ashley tried to get away, he gave her a mighty slap which earned a cut on her lower lips as mia jumped on his back, grabbed his neck screaming. Man1: smiling# as he turned her over and pinned to the ground trying to kiss her, she kept moving her mouth away. Sophia: rolled to were her dagger fell as blood oozed from her nose. She picked it, she was too weak to stand. She remembered how nate throws daggers, mia was already crying for help. Sophia: comon soph you can do this she said closing her eyes and opening it again, she threw the dagger and it pierced his spine. Man: groaning and gasping for air as he fell on the sand struggling. Sophia: smiling i did it she collapsed back on the sand. *******me******** Carlos: smiling you are such a disgrace!!! When meet sly in the after life, you can apologize to him. Me: smiling# you are a weakling!!!! I stood straight. When you see sly in the after life, tell him you a failure. Carlos: he ran angrily towards me, i threw a dagger at him while he dodged it i stucked one on his left shoulders as i rush toward him, jumping high and landed on him with 3hard kicks causing him to stumble moving close to the cliff. I rushed toward him with a hard blow, which he stopped trying to hit me, i dodged giving his jaws a powerful upper cut which made him stumbled even closer to the cliff oozing out blood.
29 Dec 2015 | 12:04
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nice nxt oo
29 Dec 2015 | 12:35
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Cant just wait for d next epi, am dying of suspense. Next ooooooooooo pls @invincible
29 Dec 2015 | 12:37
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sophia u jst make me happy.next plz
29 Dec 2015 | 12:47
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i love this story
29 Dec 2015 | 12:49
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Sigh
29 Dec 2015 | 13:01
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keep it up bro
29 Dec 2015 | 13:01
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am proud of u soph
29 Dec 2015 | 14:33
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..............checking for update.......
29 Dec 2015 | 14:34
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Mehn...soph's hard training is rilli paying off
29 Dec 2015 | 14:36
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I jst dey gbadun ur swags Nate, rili amazed wit wot soph did.. Husband nd wife in action.. Safe d team NATE SOPH both r rili compatible.. Nxt plx..
29 Dec 2015 | 15:29
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Flim trickz.... Next
29 Dec 2015 | 16:27
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I DON SHOW
29 Dec 2015 | 16:48
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@desire get it banging @ntin dey hapen
29 Dec 2015 | 16:49
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[color =red]EPISODE 89[/color] [color=black]*******sophia******** She relaxed a bit and dragged herself up, her cheek still hurts, she cleaned the blood in her nose. Sophia: are you ok mia?? Mia: hugging her tight, thank you. Ashley: staggered up with her face abit reddish and swollen from the hot slap he gave her. Nicholas: groaning aaaaaarrrghhhh. Ashley: baby!! Are you alright. Nicholas: what happened he said sitting up as ashley hugged him. Sophia: mia you can go with nicholas. Ashley: what about you?? Sophia: i cant leave without nate. Nicholas: yeah am going with you. Mia: am just gonna wait here for you guys to come. Ashley: me too. They quickly climbed up the mountain, when sophia found a pistol, she quickly picked it up. ******clarisse****** walked back into the sitting room i sat down smiling as everyone looked at him stunned. Kate and micheal quickly took there leave thinking roscovitz left already. Helen: whats wrong. Clarisse: roscovitz will be tried for treason by tomorrow. Helen: why??? She asked looking shocked. Clarisse: i'll explain in details later he said as he stood up and left. Helen: was left so speechless, she couldnt bring herself to do anything she just sat still on the couch. ******me******* i walked slowly to were he was, he tried standing when i stuck one dagger on his kneel and the other on his right shoulders. Carlos: groaned, he smiled# impressive perhaps i underestimated you for a while. Me: smiling# talk time is over man is time for you to go to hell. Carlos: do you think am gonna die alone??. Me: you are already dead man!! Carlos: hahaha and then what are you gonna do with your life?? Me: have got my baby to go back i said winking. Carlos: you really think those people can accept you?? Me: am nothing like you deathsting Carlos: smiling# believe it or not i was once a father, and a loving husband. He said smiling, i was framed for the murder of my own family. Everyone believed it, for our likes its killed or be killed. Me: am nothing like you!!!! Carlos: hahaha you are a monster roy, it takes only a matter of time before everyone around you realizes that. Me: stuck a dagger in his right chest shut the hell up. Carlos: smiling you are a monster roy, killing me doesnt change that fact. Me: i took of out the last dagger which will be used to finish him up. I looked at him, am gonna prove you wrong carlos, first you have to watch from the afterlife I yelled. While we did our little chat, one of his men i stucked with a dagger in the upper part of his chest, crawled a bit to were his gun fell. Just then nicholas and sophia arrived Sophia: nate!!!!! Watch out she yelled, as she cocked her gun. Me: turning swiftly to see what, i heard a gun shot before i could move a muscle i felt a metal pierced my skin as sophia shot at him screaming. Holding my arm in pains, aaaargggh. Me: why are you here. Sophia: behind you!!!! She screamed again pointing behind me. Me: turned swiftly as carlos gave me a backswing kick which i dodged, the attack was so sudden, he hit my wounded arm hard with his fist. Still holding the dagger i stabbed him twice. He staggered backwards a little. Moved forward with all his energy he jumped of the cliff pulling me along. Sophia: noooooo!!!! She screamed running towards the cliff[color/]
29 Dec 2015 | 16:50
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The suspense is killing me please come and update the next episode. @invincible thanks for the call
29 Dec 2015 | 16:55
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..................... Just hope dis won't end wit nate been killed
29 Dec 2015 | 17:06
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Deathstrinq.... Dont want to leave alone
29 Dec 2015 | 17:11
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wil u post anoda epic 2day? kuz am dying 2 read.
29 Dec 2015 | 17:23
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Haaaaa
29 Dec 2015 | 18:57
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Ope u ar nt dead
30 Dec 2015 | 01:29
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Cheeeesseee.. Nate must not die oo
30 Dec 2015 | 02:05
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Nate cnt die...they're all gonna survive dis
30 Dec 2015 | 03:00
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if nate should die i would totally understand cos @paul4eva stories normally take a tragic turn
30 Dec 2015 | 03:03
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This Suspence Eh Wont Give Me Heart Attack,@desire Can U Give Me The Link To Ur Other Stories,plz.U Are A Grt Writer.
30 Dec 2015 | 03:10
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abeq sama us d nxt wan cuz my mama pikin wan die of suspense 4 hia o
30 Dec 2015 | 03:51
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nate wilnt die kuz he is the one telin d story.
30 Dec 2015 | 04:21
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Actor no dey die for film
30 Dec 2015 | 04:44
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Natt can't die o....guy next pls
30 Dec 2015 | 04:57
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Hmmmm_nate is gdnna survive it_i know it
30 Dec 2015 | 06:09
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I kw u cnt die @Nate...hope i guess right @Desire...
30 Dec 2015 | 07:17
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hmmm...hope nate did nt die ooo
30 Dec 2015 | 08:08
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I know nate can't die
30 Dec 2015 | 10:30
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I wil dance wt u @hoyenikky
30 Dec 2015 | 11:04
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no update 2day?
30 Dec 2015 | 11:08
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[color =red]EPISODE 90[/color] Nicholas was already on his heels to help him, just then he stopped abrubtly in horror as yells of nate was heard as he fell off. Nicholas: his mouth opened but no words come out, when screaming sophia ran past him towards the cliff crying he quickly ran after her. Just at the edge of the cliff he caught her from the waiste. Sophia: hah-a-ha-haaa crying loudly and screaming nate's name. Nicholas: holding her strong, sophia calm down!!!! Sophia: let go of me nicholas, nattan is down there!!!. Nicholas: plsss sophia calm down he said hugging her. Sophia: crying# nicholas i cant live with him!!! Nate is not dead, no he cant die. Nicholas: sophia i know his not dead lets go home first, we'd find him later. Sophia: sitting on the edge of the cliff, am not going anywere without my baby. Nicholas: look at you sophia you are bleeding soph, you need to see the doctor. Sophia: i need to see nate!!!! She yelled amidst sobs as nicholas hugged her again trying to console her. After a very long time she finally followed him as they climbed down the hill, to see ashley and mia sitting on the sand who quickly got up when they saw nicholas and sophia. Mia: were is nate??? She asked trying to smile but the look on there faces told her otherwise. Ashley: what happened to nate she let out impatiently. Nicholas: he fell off the cliff he said fighting back the tears in his eyes. Mia: you are joking right?? She asked with searching eyes as her smile, was mixed with tears. As she fell on the floor and cried like a baby. Ashley moving to were she was and hugged her with tears in her eyes. After awhile they all stood up and left. *****micheal***** they walked back home thinking roscovitz left first and he wasnt there. Kate: where could he be without letting us know. Just when then the spy servant walked in. Servant: ma'am the king has ordered that mr roscovitz will be charged for treason by tomorrow. Micheal: what??? Why??? Kate: shocked i think he found out. Micheal: we cant let that happen the purnishment for treason is death byhanging. Kate: we really cant let that happen Micheal: then what do we do mum! Kate: we cant do anything right now other than beg for mercy until your dad is released. *******clarisse******* the doctor came into the sitting room were helen sat still with swollen eyes. Imediately a message was sent to the king. Clarisse walked out looking a bit unkept. Doctor: quickly checked him he was burning up, and his blood pressure was pretty high too. Clarisse: i cant help it anymore, my kids are gone. Just then nicholas, mia, sophia and ashley walked in. Mia: mum!! Helen quickly got up and hugged mia tightly. Helen: my baby is alright she said amidst sobs. Clarisse: breath down in relief, as mia move over to hug him while her mum hugged nicholas. The mood in the palace was a bit bright. Clarisse: nicholas, where is nate?? He asked as silence fell everywhere again while everyone waited for an answer. Sophia: he fell of the cliff, after being shot, she said fighting back her tears. Clarisse: dropped back on the sofa as the doctor quickly injected him with a fluid to calm his nerves. And he passed out. Helen: what my baby is dead, no no no no she said falling back on the couch too. Doctor: rushed to were she was, touch her neck region. She will be fine, she just fainted.[color/]
30 Dec 2015 | 11:27
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Sowie for the delayed post
30 Dec 2015 | 11:32
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Nxt one plss...
30 Dec 2015 | 11:33
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@desire u beta makeup 4 d delay..y must nate die he doznt deserve 2 die.hope he make it kuz i remember him telling sophia dat he swim 4 a whole day as part of hiz trainin.jst hope he swim out.plz dnt let nate die @desire
30 Dec 2015 | 11:43
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Omg
30 Dec 2015 | 12:09
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Ur apologies will only be accepted if u post more @paula4eva. Nate will not die.
30 Dec 2015 | 12:28
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next episode
30 Dec 2015 | 13:00
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Dnt wory nate wunt die hes gonna b found by d neighbour around
30 Dec 2015 | 13:11
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[color =red]EPISODE 90[/color] Nicholas was already on his heels to help him, just then he stopped abrubtly in horror as yells of nate was heard as he fell off. Nicholas: his mouth opened but no words come out, when screaming sophia ran past him towards the cliff crying he quickly ran after her. Just at the edge of the cliff he caught her from the waiste. Sophia: hah-a-ha-haaa crying loudly and screaming nate's name. Nicholas: holding her strong, sophia calm down!!!! Sophia: let go of me nicholas, nattan is down there!!!. Nicholas: plsss sophia calm down he said hugging her. Sophia: crying# nicholas i cant live with him!!! Nate is not dead, no he cant die. Nicholas: sophia i know his not dead lets go home first, we'd find him later. Sophia: sitting on the edge of the cliff, am not going anywere without my baby. Nicholas: look at you sophia you are bleeding soph, you need to see the doctor. Sophia: i need to see nate!!!! She yelled amidst sobs as nicholas hugged her again trying to console her. After a very long time she finally followed him as they climbed down the hill, to see ashley and mia sitting on the sand who quickly got up when they saw nicholas and sophia. Mia: were is nate??? She asked trying to smile but the look on there faces told her otherwise. Ashley: what happened to nate she let out impatiently. Nicholas: he fell off the cliff he said fighting back the tears in his eyes. Mia: you are joking right?? She asked with searching eyes as her smile, was mixed with tears. As she fell on the floor and cried like a baby. Ashley moving to were she was and hugged her with tears in her eyes. After awhile they all stood up and left. *****micheal***** they walked back home thinking roscovitz left first and he wasnt there. Kate: where could he be without letting us know. Just when then the spy servant walked in. Servant: ma'am the king has ordered that mr roscovitz will be charged for treason by tomorrow. Micheal: what??? Why??? Kate: shocked i think he found out. Micheal: we cant let that happen the purnishment for treason is death by hanging. Kate: we really cant let that happen Micheal: then what do we do mum! Kate: we cant do anything right now other than beg for mercy until your dad is released. *******clarisse******* the doctor came into the sitting room were helen sat still with swollen eyes. Imediately a message was sent to the king. Clarisse walked out looking a bit unkept. Doctor: quickly checked him he was burning up, and his blood pressure was pretty high too. Clarisse: i cant help it anymore, my kids are gone. Just then nicholas, mia, sophia and ashley walked in. Mia: mum!! Helen quickly got up and hugged mia tightly. Helen: my baby is alright she said amidst sobs. Clarisse: breath down in relief, as mia move over to hug him while her mum hugged nicholas. The mood in the palace was a bit bright. Clarisse: nicholas, where is nate?? He asked as silence fell everywhere again while everyone waited for an answer. Sophia: he fell of the cliff, after being shot, she said fighting back her tears. Clarisse: dropped back on the sofa as the doctor quickly injected him with a fluid to calm his nerves. And he passed out. Helen: what my baby is dead, no no no no she said falling back on the couch too. Doctor: rushed to were she was, touch her neck region. She will be fine, she just fainted.
30 Dec 2015 | 13:27
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Hope nate will escape this last one
30 Dec 2015 | 14:36
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Nate can't die... He z stronger dan dat.. Weldone @Desire.. Plz post da nxt episode fast ooo dnt use suspense kill us 4 here ooo
30 Dec 2015 | 16:03
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[color =red]EPISODE 91[/color] [color=black]Sadness was everywhere again. Sophia: turned quietly and headed towards the door. Nicholas: rushing towards her, sophia are you leaving. Sophia: i have to go home she said with a weird smile. Nicholas: uhmm you can stay here as long as you want sophia we are your family too. Sophia: nope nate is my family. Nicholas: plssss stay, theres mia, ashley and my mum to keep you company. Sophia: and there is no nate to make me happy, she said smiling in tears. Mia: soph plssss stay with me am still scared. Ashley: sophia you have to stay here for awhile. Sophia: am fine really. Nicholas: sophia we really cant let you go, earlier today you almost jump of the cliff. Plsss we have to be sure you are fine you are the only connection we have with nate, loosing you too would hurt more. Plsssss sophia. Sophia: nodding her head as tears rolled down her eyes. The servants carried the king and the queen gently to there room. While we all washed up. *******roscovitz******* pacing in the royal cell, he dared to lock me up like a common criminal. Clarisse you are gonna pay dearly for this, i will take what is rightfully mine by force. Royal doctor: Goodday mr roscovitz Covitz: hope you have goodnews for me. Doctor: i gave him the fluid, in 3days atmost he will die a death that would seem like a natural one. Thanks to you, it can easily be mistaken for exessive emotional stress, or cardiac arrest. Roscovitz: smiling good work doctor. Doctor: and my wife were is she?? Roscovitz: your wife will be handed over to you once clarisse is confirmed dead. He said as the royal doctor walked away without saying a word. Roscovitz smiling to himself, clarisse you pushed me this far, am gonna erase all legacies you left behind until everyone sees you as wolf in sheep clothing. He said grinning so hard. ******nicholas******* Before night fall clarisse woke up looking pretty strong, as they quickly scheduled nates funeral for the next day. Nicholas: walked into sophia and mia's room, nate's funeral is tomorrow. Sophia: nate is not dead!!! Nicholas: i know you want to believe that but he was shot sophia, i know his been through alot of hard trainings but its impossible to swim that far with a bullet in his right arm. Sophia: crying# i dont believe you nicholas!! I dont want to Mia: hugging sophia, soph stop crying am gonna cry too you know. Nicholas: i know it hurts sophia but the earlier you realise he is gone the better for us all. Sophia: i really cant live with the fact that nate is dead dont you get it nicholas. Nicholas: exhaling realizing it was gonna be pretty difficult for her. Let it all out and let it go soph, thats what nate would want, he said. Sophia: crying even louder as mia hugged her tight trying to make her stop. While nicholas walked to the kings chamber. Nicholas: i got your message dad Clarisse: am sure you know who took you hostages Nicholas: it was my uncle Clarisse: smiling# he is totally evil nicholas, be very careful around him. I know i have limited time to help you, i want you to know something nicholas. Nicholas: what dad Clarisse: he has always desired to get the throne, he is influencial just like me. He is now a force to reckon with, am gonna hand everything over to you. You really have to be able to stand up against him, in other to save everyone else. Nicholas: hmmm dad why are you making it sound like you are going somewhere. Clarisse: smiling# because i am nicholas, am sure roscovitz is on his next move already, his target will be me.[color/]
30 Dec 2015 | 16:04
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This roscovitz is wicked o
30 Dec 2015 | 16:15
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I like this king he is full of wisdom.
30 Dec 2015 | 16:17
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@paula4eva pls dnt let nate die in dis story
30 Dec 2015 | 16:30
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Observing
30 Dec 2015 | 16:33
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pls nate dn't die...u guys re suppose to go nd search 4 him nd nt throwing a funeral 4 him
30 Dec 2015 | 17:29
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Following
30 Dec 2015 | 17:42
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Hmmmmmm dis suspense z too much... Nxt oooo abeg
30 Dec 2015 | 17:47
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The king is full of wisdom and I strongly believe that Nate is still alive
30 Dec 2015 | 21:09
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[color =red]EPISODE 92[/color] [color=black]Nicholas: dad i really do not get any of this, the only person i knew the longest just died dad. Clarisse: yeah i know, smiling ok i'll make it simple for you. Your uncle kidnapped you and your brother 25years ago, i found out when mia was born. Keep your friend close but keep your enemy closer, have watched him for 19years nicholas. And all this years his ambition for the throne grew stronger. If only i stopped him earlier, nate wont be dead by now, rather i decided to see him as my only brother rather than a threat to my reign. While he was busy marking his target like serpent, i decided to bring his son closer. That was when an unlikely relationship built. Perhaps i was just too weak to get rid of my own brother, he wasnt this person but now i can tell you for sure he has dark heart, he shows no mercy especially when you are in his path. Nicholas you have to be merciless and wise. Nicholas: shocked# all this was just happening so fast, he just stared at his dad in suprised. Clarisse: smiling# i know its too much for you to take in, but your mum and mia are gonna be strongly behind you. Nicholas: mia???? He asked a bit irritated Clarisse: i know you think shez babyish, naive or pesty or anything. Smiled# when it comes to public affair, delebration concerning, government policies and law. Shes knows them all to the tip of her finger and alot too, to help you. Nicholas: eyes wild open, really have had enough shock in just 2days but do mia really know all that?? Clarisse: smiling what kind of a father will i be if i dont know my only daughter. After a while nicholas left and they all went to bed. Clarisse contacted another doctor, who ran check up on him. Doctor: you've been poisoned already my lord. Clarisse: smiling# is there anything you can do. Doctor: yes sire but i'll have to get you to the hospital, you'd be back before dawn. Clarisse: lets go. ******************** Today was not much of a wonderful one, they were all clad in black. As an empty coffin was decorated. They all stood with sorrowful faces. Just then nicholas climbed the podium to give his speech. Nicholas: he was both a brother and a friend, a husband and a son, strong and reliable. Am not here to say Goodbye nate, because we've been through everything together. It breaks my heart to think you are gone, the world feels lonely without you in it. I know for sure you'll continue to live in my heart, because i love you nate. He said as he climbed down the podium. Clarisse: it so unfortunate after 25years, i still do not know who my son nate is. Have seen his face, have seen him smile, have seen him angry. Nothing was more important to him than family. He was nice, friendly and hurtless. The hands which took my little boy away from me. I'll see that they all pay for this. He climbed down the podium as everyone beckoned on sophia to give her speech. Finally she climbed the podium. Sophia: to some people he was like a brother, a son, a friend but to me he was not just a husband, he was my life, my family. I never believed loved at first sight truely existed until i saw him at the eatery on a sunny after, cute, funny and nice. And then our paths crossed again, and again and again. He made feel i am to only one who deserves to be treated special, his love i cannot trade for anything not even death. Am still gonna hold onto him because he is my spirit. I am like a dreamer, when i wake, you cant break my spirit, its my dreams you take. This wasnt the end i predicted, she said as she burst into tears again while mia helped her out of the podium.[color/]
31 Dec 2015 | 00:48
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I still dont believe nate is dead
31 Dec 2015 | 01:17
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nate cnt die. Actor n dea die
31 Dec 2015 | 01:26
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Still observing
31 Dec 2015 | 01:31
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NATE IS NOT DEAD... HE IS COOMING SOON.. D king z rili a wise man nd I luv him 4 dat.. Luvin ya work @Desire.. Nah kill u wan kill us ooo, u jst dy put us inside deep suspense.. Nah beg I beg ooo make u post anoda episode fast oo
31 Dec 2015 | 02:38
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Hmmmmmm,i also dnt believe u could die lyk dat @Nate
31 Dec 2015 | 03:27
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Nate will survive for sure. And this evil uncle they have will pay with his life.
31 Dec 2015 | 03:38
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I Believe Nate Is Still Alive.
31 Dec 2015 | 03:47
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Nate isn't dead plss...
31 Dec 2015 | 03:55
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Nate Must Not Die,He Is 2 Sweet 2 Die,hope Am Correct @desire.
31 Dec 2015 | 04:17
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[color =red]EPISODE 93[/color] [color=black]Sophia got out of the hall and drove done to the mountain. She came down with a binocular climbed the mountain and sat on the edge of cliff. As she scanned every corner of the ocean with it, to see of anyone was swimming. It was really big, even for a good swimmer it will take 2 to 3 days to swim to the shore. She looked harder with the binocular and saw nothing. Sophia: crying as she began to realise he was really gone. No nate you can swim, she let out, the voice in her head kept reminding her that he was shot, he cant possibly swim that far with a wounded arm. She sat still sobbing as hot tears ran down her cheek. After a while she stood like something touched her. Sophia: as the running air blew her gown. From this moment the weak sophia is dead!! Mr roscovitz is gonna pay dearly for killing my baby!!! She yelled looking angry with reddish eyes. Nicholas: sophia plsssss you really dont have to do this. Sophia: turned and walk towards him do what?? Nicholas; i thought you were gonna jump. Sophia: your uncle has to die first!! She descended the hills drove down to her house, every part of it was filled with memories of nate, she saw him everywere smiling at her. Sophia: began to chase the illusions her head made her see, nate!! she moved to touch him and it varnished, nate plssss dont leave me she cried as she kept on trying even harder to get hold of if it. Just then she slumped. ******nicholas****** looking around he saw her binoculars he decided to look too if he could see something perhaps. After looking for a while with tears in his eyes. Nicholas: if only i was stronger, or faster, you'd still be by here right now. It was all my fault, he said amidst sob. He turned and walked back to his car and drove back home. Mia: were is sophia she asked looking worried. Nicholas: she went home i think she needs space Ashley: and you let her go?? Nicholas: shez not a baby i cant follow her everywhere. Mia: ashley she going to kill herself she said crying. Nicholas: ok fine lets go check on her. They all got into the car and they drove to nate's house, they knock and knocked but there was no response. Nicholas turned the knob and the door opened they walked in, and there was no-one in the sitting room. Nicholas: lets check the rooms, they all seperated as mia went to the room were he locked them, just when she opened the door she saw sophia on the flooor. Mia: aaaaaaarrrrghhh she screamed covering how mouth in shock as nicholas and ashley rushed over as fast as possible. Seeing sophia on the floor, nicholas quickly tossed her on his shoulder and carried her to his car as they speed up to a near by hospital. Nurses rushed out helping the into the emergency ward as they gave her oxygen and applied pressure to her chest as the ECG machine still showed horizontal straight lines, then they applied pressure for the last time and it appeared in a zig zag form her heart was functioning again. Everyone breathed down in relief. As one of the nurse led them out. ******clarisse****** king and queen sat together while everyone came around to sympatize with them. Just then clarisse held his chest, as he groaned in pain blood oozed out of his nostrils. Helen: honey whats wrong she asked looking shocked holding him. Just then he fell on her. Omg!!! Clarisse!!! His new doctor rushed in and touched his neck. Doctor: his dead!![color/]
31 Dec 2015 | 04:42
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Cheeeeseeee... Y oooh y ah y, its shouldn't av bin lyk dis nah... Can't cry... Oh NATE were r u nah??? I knw u r coming bck.. Sure I knw dat
31 Dec 2015 | 05:21
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This cant be happening o i believe dat nate isnt dead........RIP clarisse
31 Dec 2015 | 05:36
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Subhannalah!!!
31 Dec 2015 | 06:08
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nate is nt dead
31 Dec 2015 | 06:10
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gracious heavon...Rest in peace king clarisse
31 Dec 2015 | 06:22
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Haaaa,so painfuly did u hv 2 die nw @Clarisse..
31 Dec 2015 | 06:28
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Crying
31 Dec 2015 | 06:35
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At this point i felt like crying over a mere story. I know nate will be back... I know the king is not dead yet. I could remember the new doctor telling him he still can do something about the poison. I know the story will end happily. I know... Omg ! I know that what's running down my cheek is not tears... [bold]@paula you're my writer of the year[/bold]
31 Dec 2015 | 06:59
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Hmmm, RIP MR CLARISSE
31 Dec 2015 | 07:05
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i jst dnt wnt 2 bliv all dis dead.neither d king or nate is dead.rite @desire
31 Dec 2015 | 07:35
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Lol @ladywen lets find out nau
31 Dec 2015 | 07:53
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Wud u all pls stop dis R.I.P cos dey are nt dead...desire wud/must/ hv to bring them back alive ooo
31 Dec 2015 | 08:00
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Following TILL D END
31 Dec 2015 | 08:47
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@desire it shl b d oda way round oo kuz i wl cry 4u oo.nate must nt die he deserve 2 liu
31 Dec 2015 | 08:52
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[color =red]EPISODE 94[/color] [color=black]*****roscovitz****** Charles walked into the royal prison, with his personal guards to set roscovitz free. Charles: congratulation roscovitz the king is dead. Covitz: smiling# now is time for my own revolt, he said as they all walk out. Imediately they began to gather all the members of genovia's parliament and noble men. To enforce the abdication of the throne by the renaldis. Trying to bribe those who refused there offer. *******nicholas******* we came back from the hospital, only meet with even more sad faces, perhaps they were still grieving we thought when an ambulance drove in and a body was taken out. Just then we spotted mum crying profusely, we all rushed to her. Nicholas: mum whats wrong??? Mia: mum why are you crying. Helen: that was you dad!!!! She said amidst sob. Mia: omg!!!! Daddy?? She said standing up to walk, just then she fainted, ashley and nicholas carried her quickly to her room as the doctor attended to her. Soon she opened her eyes again. And the doctor left leaving them alone Nicholas: rushing to her side mia are you alright?? Mia: plssss tell me i just woke from a bad dream. Nicholas: plssss mia calm down i really dont want to loose you to plssss. Mia: hugging him as tears ran down her cheeks she really tired of everything. Nicholas: he knew he was gonna die, i really do not understand any of this mia. Mia: definitely roscovitz has a hand in this, and wherever this is leading his gonna come after the throne sooner than you can imagine. Nicholas: then how do we stop him, he asked looking confused. Mia: they are gonna force you to renounce the throne you have to prove to them you are capable of keeping the throne by standing up roscovitz. Nicholas: hmmmm Mia: i know what you are thinking but the king has the highest authority, no one would risk having the king as an enemy even when they are bribed they'd have to think twice. Show them you are a force to reckon with. Nicholas: then what am i going to say?? Mia: i'll show you, she said as she tried standing but her head still aches. Ouch!! She place her hand on her hair. Nicholas: easy mia, he said helping her up. As they both walked out of her room. Helen: mia!! She yelled hugging her, dont do that again if you dont want me to die too. Mia: am fine now mum. Helen: where are taking nicholas to?? Mia: to prepare him if roscovitz wants an abdication. Helen: smiling a bit stroking her hair, if thats the case i have something to show you. Follow me she comanded, she led them both into the king's chamber, brought down a rectangular box from the top part of the wadrope, and handed it over to nicholas. Helen: am sure this will be of great help to you. Nicholas: what is inside mum helen: you can open it, he opened it and found papers and writtings on them Nicholas: what is this for? Helen: those were the words you grand-dad, used to win over the case of abdication. I think you'd need them too. Nicholas: thanks mum i'll go through this over and over again mum. Mia: smiling a bit you better do uncle would be well prepared for you, our life depends on this now nicholas remember that. Helen: just smiled as she nodded at him as sign of agreement to what mia just said[color/]
31 Dec 2015 | 09:00
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Am here already
31 Dec 2015 | 09:08
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I tink the king did not die..he planned it with d doctor...and watch out for nate return...he can't die just like that..this z the time that his family needed him most...
31 Dec 2015 | 09:46
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Covitz...the battle has been drawn
31 Dec 2015 | 09:57
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D battle jst started... Nate ur presence z needed ooo... Next plz ooo
31 Dec 2015 | 10:47
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Dnt knw wat 2 comment again
31 Dec 2015 | 11:49
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jst here with ma lipz seal.
31 Dec 2015 | 12:06
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@sundayonah request 4 a new password by clickin on forget ur password bar dat wl appear wen u try login in nd dn follow d instrutin.@desire weldon
31 Dec 2015 | 12:11
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am sure the king planned it with the doctor. Cause he already told the king, he has been poison
31 Dec 2015 | 12:21
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The battle line has bin drawn
31 Dec 2015 | 13:45
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The battle line has just be drawn
31 Dec 2015 | 15:29
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Hehehehehe now let's see who win the game. Nicholas make sure that the school u attended is not in vain. Nate please don't die like that ur family needs u more than ever.
31 Dec 2015 | 15:31
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Oya nah @Desire, dis suspense too much ooo
31 Dec 2015 | 15:46
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d battle jt begun..well done @desire
31 Dec 2015 | 16:00
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[color =red]EPISODE 95[/color] [color=black]nicholas was with mia all night trying to get used to the lines she taught him. After a long deliberation with ashley she finally went back home. At dawn today an emergency meeting was called in the conference hall, as message was sent to everyone, roscovitz made sure nicholas was the last to be informed. When he arrived everyone was sitted already. Roscovitz: as we all know, i am a true prince of genovia, but my brother clarisse was made king. Its a pity he died so suddenly. Before this wonderful parliament i table my request for the abdication of the throne by the renaldi boy. Man1: why if i may ask mr roscovitz we all know the next king is to come from the renaldi's Roscovitz: the young man over here, varnished 25years ago and now his here again. He knows nothing about genovia, he knows nothing about its people nor the laws. 70percent of the sitted people where nodding in agreements to his words Nicholas: speaking of the law mr roscovitz abdication without the consent or the permission of the current king is treason. Roscovitz: and the current king is dead nicholas. Nicholas: i am the current king mr roscovitz and i'll see that your purnishment for treason is metted mercilessly. He spoke in more of a command than a suggestion Silence fell everywhere while mr roscovitz was stunned by the stunt nicholas pulled. He knew pushing the case further would be ignitting his own fall, he walked out angrily. Nicholas: my dad had the intrest of genovia in heart, his only concern was for the citizens of genovia. Am willing to keep his legacies, i'll show no mercy in metting out the punishment deserved for every crime, to its culprit. As they all deliberated on what they just heard, there voice were heard like murmurs. He quickly exited the hall. He walked into the house smiling as mia quickly hugged him, they both drove down to the hospital to check on sophia. Doctor: she should be awake by now, he said looking confused Nicholas: then why is she not out of coma already?? Doctor: uhmm am sorry but recovering from coma is totally dependent on the person. From our observation she smiles every time, perhaps she found comfort there. Nicholas: plsssss i need you to do anything you can, to make her wake. Doctor: we'd put in our best sir ******sophia******* it was a snowy day and they went for snow slide. Nate: throwing snow balls at her Sophia: ouch she said smiling, am gonna kill you!!! As she rushed towards him, before he could run she was on him. And was about to kiss him Nate: smiling# you know this aint real right?? You are just distracting your self sophie wake up. Sophie: if its not real, then i dont wanna exist in a real world she said smiling. Nate: smiling# its time for you to wake soph you cant stay here longer than neccessary. He said moving away from her. Sophia: dont you dare leave me nate, i want to be with you. As he stepped backward he began to varnish slowly, as he smiled at her. Sophia: whats happening nate!!!! She asked in despair while He just smiled and waved at her as a good by sign, before she could run to were he stood, he was finally gone. Noooo nate noooo. In the hospital her ECG machine began to make loud beeps as the nurse sent for the doctor as quick as possible. Her heart was troubled, they tried calming her down, just then she woke from coma. Sophia: were is nate?? Doctor: looking stunned nate??[color/]
31 Dec 2015 | 18:01
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coma b lyk real lyf
31 Dec 2015 | 18:25
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What an illusion,I still don't believe dis.....
31 Dec 2015 | 19:12
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Happy new year to everyone
31 Dec 2015 | 19:22
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happy new year every1
31 Dec 2015 | 19:33
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Compliment of d season 2 all coolvalers
31 Dec 2015 | 19:41
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same 2u @desire nd everyone.but @desire dis s a new yr o so new fashion.strt posting more epic dan last yr oo
31 Dec 2015 | 19:59
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U guyz arnt sleeping by nw....anyways hapi new year every one
31 Dec 2015 | 20:03
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Happy new year to y'all..... Same to u @desire n others
31 Dec 2015 | 20:05
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[color =red]EPISODE 96[/color] [color=black]2weeks later.............. Nicholas and mia came by as usual to take sophia home. Doctor: handing over the results of the just conducted tests to him. Nicholas; she is pregnant?? He asked with a smile Doctor: nodding as he smiled back. And she is free to go home, try as much as possible to keep her of those hurting memories. Nicholas: i'll keep that in mind, thanks doc. He walked to were sophia was kept, and mia sitting close to her smiling happily. Sophia: hello nicholas Nicholas: he handed over the pregnancy result to her. Sophia: covering her mouth as she tried to smile but tears found its way out of her eyes. Nicholas: its really a goodnews sophia, its time to go home too. They took her home as they a chatted a bit lively until they were home Helen seeing her daughter inlaw again she quickly hugged her, lately everyone has been through alot of emotional stress in one way or the other. Helen: am glad your alright sophia Mia: mum sophia is pregnant for nate. Helen: what!!!! She hugged her again happily, thank you sophia she said amidst sobs. Sophia: smiling# you are making me feel sad again ma'am helen: am sorry sophia i just cant help it. ******roscovitz******* pacing up and down in his sitting room while micheal sat still on his couch. Micheal: at this rate nicholas is gonna win. Roscovitz: we cant let that happen, i think its time to play the friendly game again. Micheal: and get rid of him discreetly he said smiling. Roscovitz: thats my boy he grinned too. He picked his phone and called lucas. Lucas: hello mr roscovitz Covitz: i know you are retired but i have just one more job for you. He explained everything to him. Smiled and hunged up, the stage is set son. We have some convincing to do and you mum will do the rest. Today was a wonderful day we all sat smiling and talking about happy memories. Just then mr roscovitz and his son micheal walked in. Helen: covitz why are you here!!!. Micheal: ma'am plsss calm down, i know my dad did alot of unforgivable things. He's friend pushed him into this, i know there is no excuse for his crime. I really want you to know that he is truely sorry. Roscovitz: wiping his eyes nicholas all those things i said to you was what he made me say, he threatened to kill my wife, i didnt want to loose her. Helen i know you'd understand what if feels like to loose someone you love. He kept on apologizing as tears ran down his eyes, he bowed his head in remorse. Helen: thats ok roscovitz i really have nothing against as for charles his gonna get what he deserves. Covitz: thanks helen but what about nicholas and mia they might think am evil Nicholas: we've forgiven you uncle. While they chatted and had a wonderful dinner. His wife kate discreetly dismissed all the palace guards. Just after there dinner 12 masked men walked in well armed. Lucas: everyone on the floor!!!! They all laid down on the floor. His boys picked nicholas up. Roscovitz: stood smiled, he whispered into the ears of lucas kill them all especially that one he said pointing at sophia. Helen: roscovitz!!! You planned this??? You are a devil. She was so shocked. Roscovitz: smiling say whatever you like helen, no one would ever know how you died, the guard witnessed our dinner i could easily call for witnesses, he smiled and left with micheal. Mia shaking already as her mom hugged her. Nicholas: its me who is a threat to his throne just kill me and leave them out of this. Helen: nicholas dont plsssss Lucas; cocked his gun am sorry kid but you all have to die!! Just then a dagger pierced his hand and his gun fell of as blood spilled over, 2 others pierced the hearts of 2 of his men. While lucas screamed in pains they all turned to see a man in mask, clad in tux walking in towards them.[color/]
31 Dec 2015 | 20:21
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Lol ok ma@ladywen
31 Dec 2015 | 20:22
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Wao I Believe Its Nate... Happy new year to u all
31 Dec 2015 | 20:27
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Nate is back hurray
31 Dec 2015 | 20:29
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happy new year to u all
31 Dec 2015 | 20:41
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New year new dreams new achievements new testimony.... Favour will locate you grace will locate you mercy will make you stand out..... Happy new year to u all @invincible @paula4eva @everyone
31 Dec 2015 | 20:50
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Who z that man in mask, clad in tux..... Believe he z nate.... Wish every coovallers an amazinq, happy new year and many qreat tinqz to come .
31 Dec 2015 | 22:10
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That should be nate... . Expecting anoda episode
31 Dec 2015 | 22:56
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wooow! I knw that person is nate
1 Jan 2016 | 00:53
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Something has been telling that Nate'd not dead, he only disappear to get treated, but check who trew d dagger. As for the king, Clarisse i'm not sure he's dead too, cos his new doctor said there's a remedy to d poison he ate. He and the doctor may conspired together, faking his death. Becos when d king was oozing out blood from his nostrill, d doctor came running, touch his neck and told the queen he's dead. I didnt believe d king demise just like that, until i read the next episode sha! @paula4eva, weldone
1 Jan 2016 | 01:31
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Nate is back
1 Jan 2016 | 01:40
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Thanks alot dear, i wish you all the best in 2016 @beauty01
1 Jan 2016 | 01:48
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Yessssssss nate u are the best u came at the right time. @Paule4eva I don't know what to say to u, I pray for the wisdom of God upon u. Happy new year.
1 Jan 2016 | 02:27
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weldon @desire u re my writer of @2016.i knew it that you didnt kil nate in diz story.congrat 2 evry1 in d house who haue it dis far.ur yr wl b a fruitful 1 4 u all.
1 Jan 2016 | 02:57
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Interesting story_keep it up
1 Jan 2016 | 03:01
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@desire gve uz our new yr gift by posting mre epi 2day o
1 Jan 2016 | 03:34
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@paula4eva More episodes abeg
1 Jan 2016 | 04:12
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YES I know nate is alive.
1 Jan 2016 | 04:20
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Is Either Romeo Or Nate
1 Jan 2016 | 04:28
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I think its Romeo returning d favour he own Nate
1 Jan 2016 | 04:35
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stil checking 4 update @desire but i must admit i lov ur way of update.
1 Jan 2016 | 04:40
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I dont think it's romeo.. @paula4eva ...come and clear our doubt
1 Jan 2016 | 04:53
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Cant wait for the next epi. @desire pleeeeeeaaaaaasssss
1 Jan 2016 | 05:00
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Its nate
1 Jan 2016 | 05:33
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I believe it's nate too
1 Jan 2016 | 06:38
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[color =red]EPISODE 97[/color] [color=black]Everyone looked in shocked in sophia's head nate's name kept ringing as she looked at him keenly. The masked man walked forward holding two daggers. Lucas: kill him!!! Before they pulled the trigger he threw both dagger and it pierced the throat of the 2men who about to shoot at him and like a flash he ran towards them, as he knocked everyone one out, in one strike each while lucas ran away. Silence fell everywhere as they all looked at him suprised wondering who it is. Romeo: taking of his masks, hello he said simply. Nicholas: have seen you before!! Romeo: smiled abit, i came fast as i could when i heard nattan was dead. I came to give my condolence. Sophia: breathing down hard, she really wished it was nate. Helen; are you a friend of his?? Romeo: uhmmm sort of. Am romeo by the way. Mia: smiling in relief she was scared to death again, thanks romeo. Romeo: can you plsss show me to his grave i came with flowers too. Sophia: i'll show it to you she said standing. Mia: am coming along, they both led him to the were his empty coffin was buried, he dropped the white roses which he came on his grave. Romeo: we were strangers, until we left the island, for a while we played with karma, if this is your karma nate then life is unfair. He finished his speech, kissed his palm and touched it on his grave as they all left. Mia always inquisitive began her questioning sessions. Like how did you guys meet, what he does for a living, where he stays etc. Every answer he gave seemed to lead to another question. Sophia: mia!!! You should be thankfull and not flooding his heads with questions. Romeo: smiled# its alright sophia Mia: smiling# thanks romeo atleast i didnt pee on my self before you came. Romeo: hahaha i have to be going now do take care of yourselves. Mia: its almost midnight romeo, its not safe. Romeo: hahaha plssss am not a lady, he excorted them to the palace and drove of. ******roscovitz****** he woke up smiling, as he walked to the window he opened it wide allowing the morning air splash on his face he closed his eyes. Covitz: i feel like a new dawn is here already. He showered and got dressed to go and see a blood bath in clarisse house. Just when he opened his door he saw lucas boys lying on the floor all dead. Covitz: what!!!!!! He screamed what is this supposed to mean, micheal and his mum hearing his yells rushed out to see dead men. Micheal: omg!! What happened to them?? Roscovitz: cant you see, they are all dead, and this can only mean one thing nicholas is alive!!! Micheal: shocked! What do we do now dad. Kate: smiling no need to panick son they cant do anything with out witnesses. Covitz: that true no one in the court would believe it anyway it gonna be waved of as conspiracy. Kate: i fear now they pose even a more bigger threat covitz, especially now that they know your true intentions. Roscovitz: i have to see charles he said as he drove out of the royal house. ******nicholas******* we have to take away all offices he comands away from him he said with authority. Helen: how do you intend to do that?? Mia: that can only be done if only we come up with a strong evidence to aprehend him. Helen: and there is none for now. Nicholas: how about witnesses??. Mia: i know what you are thinking nic but it can easily be passed of as gang up. Helen: am going to double the guard in the palace. We have to be safe first and everyother thing can come later[color/]
1 Jan 2016 | 06:41
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as i read nd a dagger pierce his hand and two other in the heart of the other two men and a man with a mask on his face dressed in a tux, a SMILE appears in my face.. i know it, he can't just did like that.. @Desire api new year.. abeg con post this thing fast nah, no use suspense kill us ooo
1 Jan 2016 | 06:43
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I said it
1 Jan 2016 | 07:02
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Romeo,tnx 4 saving dem
1 Jan 2016 | 07:03
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And I thought Nate is back. Anyway Romeo thanks for saving them. @Paula4eva I don tell u before make I no get HBP suspense too much.
1 Jan 2016 | 07:09
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Abeg am not happy o...i thought nate z bak...pls i will not lyk this story if nate z truely dead o..
1 Jan 2016 | 07:21
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Romeo thanks for saving them. I thought it was Nate that Killed Lucas and his men
1 Jan 2016 | 07:43
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oooppss... i tot it was nate.. thanks at romeo. . stil gat my hope, nate is stil nt dead.. nxt ooo @Desire really really gbaduning u..
1 Jan 2016 | 07:59
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i knew dat it was romeo
1 Jan 2016 | 07:59
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Already here
1 Jan 2016 | 08:55
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Already here_ ogene doh _kiri dodo do kiri do...,ogene dooh
1 Jan 2016 | 08:56
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happy new year to u too @desire..congrats @sophie tank God nate is nt dead
1 Jan 2016 | 09:39
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ah ah desire y nt nate instead of romeo
1 Jan 2016 | 09:48
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my bp just rise for nothing.... anyway thank God they re save..... @desire come and continue ooo
1 Jan 2016 | 09:57
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Na nate oooo
1 Jan 2016 | 10:42
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My guess was wrong..
1 Jan 2016 | 12:06
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[color =red]EPISODE 98[/color] [color=black]*****Charles residence**** Roscovitz walking looking infuriated to see charles and his family having a wonderful breakfast, his beautiful blonde hair wife louisa with sparkling blue eyes. And a his son julian just 8years old. Charles: seeing roscovitz contenance he knew something was definitely not right he quickly excused himself from the meal, as they took a walk covitz told him everything leaving no details out. Charles: damn it!! He yelled you should have come to me first, i have more competent men at my disposal. Covitz: lucas has been my major side kick for 25years now, i trusted him with this because i knew he was capable Charles: this time roscovitz we have to get rid of them for real otherwise, you'll never be king. Covitz: they'd be pretty watchful now, anyone would want to predict i'd be back again. Charles: smiling# i know a prototype, sinclair aka iron claws he is a russian. Covitz: i need no mistake this time charles. Charles: dont worry have got this one covitz, just lay low. And watch me do it all he said with a grin. He reach out for his phone, dialed a number, talked with the person for a while and hunged up. Covitz: phone ranged, hello son micheal: they are doubling the guards in the passage. Covitz: thanks for the information. He hunged up, charles the queen has doubled the guards in the palace. Charles: hahaha he is in the top10 ranking for the deadliest men in russia, althought his a low ranking agent in bratva. Those untrained guards in the palace are no match for him, he can decide to walk in, in broad daylight, and his footprints would be on there dead bodies. Well in that case i'll let him come with his boys. ******nicholas****** The queen increased the number of guards in one shift telling them to be watchful as they all stayed indoor. Mia: aint you scared soph?? Sophia: not at all Mia: hmmm yeah i remember you piercing a man's spine with a dagger she said smiling. You can fight too?? Sophia: hahhaha that was totally luck. Nicholas paced up and down in angry mode. Helen: calm down nicholas calm down she said looking worried. Nicholas: we cant remain indoors for the rest of our lifes mum. Helen: let the guards do there jobs nicholas. Its been a week and nothing seem to be happening, covitz kept his distant from them. Helen gave him strict warning to adjourn all state matters for now. As they took all safety precautions neccessary. Sophia on the other hand kept calling nicholas nate unconciously, while mia was gradually transforming back to her noisey self she hopped into the sitting room. Placing her hands on nicholas shoulder. Mia: nicholas can you make me creme bu le' Nicholas: whats that?? He asked confused. Mia: you really dont know. Nicholas: i really dont know. Mia: ok fine sponge toast Nicholas: i dont cook!!! Mia: squeezed you know what nate. Nicholas: what dear he asked smiling. Mia: am disappointed in you nicholas!! I really missed nate she said with as squeezed face as she walked out hiting her legs hard on the floor. Helen: hahha pay no attention to that she is like that when she misses someone alot. Nicholas: just smiled a bit[/color]
1 Jan 2016 | 13:46
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Hahahah@fortunate1 no get hbp ooooh
1 Jan 2016 | 13:52
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weldon @desire
1 Jan 2016 | 15:01
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[b]Buh is nate dead,lyk seriously? OmG. Romeo and mia. Be careful of enemies lyk friend[/b]
1 Jan 2016 | 15:33
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Hmmm, things is getting more complicated. Iron claw again, oga o. Welldone @desire
1 Jan 2016 | 15:33
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kai, wot tuk lyk ages.. u rili wanna have me gat HBP shey? u jst wan kil me wit dis ya suspense uhn?? abeg con post da nxt episode ooo
1 Jan 2016 | 16:35
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Dis covitz or whatz his name is gonna pay dearly for his deed. . Nate...ur attention is needed
1 Jan 2016 | 17:00
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Keep calm... Watchinq as thinqz unfold.... Nate ur presencia é needed here
1 Jan 2016 | 17:51
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Hw can nate die now that his family z in trouble?i strongly beleive that nate z not dead and he z preparing for war now...nate will surely be back....
1 Jan 2016 | 18:50
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nate where re u oooo..ur family re d rite tyme...well done
2 Jan 2016 | 04:11
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Am back. This story is a bomb. Nate and the king isnt dead, they will all resurface with time. Moreover did u read anything abt the kings burial or did i miss an episode??? Nice job @desire. Happy new year every1
2 Jan 2016 | 04:16
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Wow,seriously,is nate dead,?
2 Jan 2016 | 04:34
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Nate, wherever u are u need to come back home, ur family are in danger death lurks around them
2 Jan 2016 | 04:51
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[color =red]EPISODE 99[/color] [color=black]Its been 2weeks since the death of the king, helen has decided to delay the funeral for safety reason. It was almost night fall. They were sitted together in the dinning with a wonderful meal on the table. Helen: smiling i have goodnews for all of you. Nicholas: what is it mum, he asked as everyone looked keenly to here the goodnews. Helen: i met with a few officials, your dad's best friends today, they promise to give there support in bringing down roscovitz, another conference meeting is holding tomorrow by noon. Mia: smiling# finally we wont be under house arrest anymore. She said and exhaled Sophia: safety precautions rather, she corrected smiling, just then they heard lots of gun shots. Mia: looking scared already that definitely, do not sound like the guards. Nicholas: they dont use machine guns. Helen: shocked# then what is it??? Sophia: roscovitz??? Just then a guard ran in. Some men broke through the palace gate with an iron van, they are shooting at us, you have to hide my lady. Helen: holding her chest as she was begining to breath fast. Nicholas: omg not again!!! Sophia: i think we have to move to somewhere safe. Guard: i'll lead you to the abandoned storage room through the tunnels am sure you'd be safe there. They quickly followed him as fast as they could. Guards were lying on the floor dead. Just then sinclair jumped down from the rear of the van. Got on his iron claws. He was a black american huge, tall and extremely muscular with sharp silvercoated curved knife attached to his finger, like he was born that way. His hair, clean shaven, clad in a long raffian coat. They all walked majestically into the house. Broke down the door, and there was no body. Sinclair: they are all in this place search everywhere he comanded. *****nicholas****** the guard was behind them holding his gun firmly as he led them to the storage which was a bit dusty. Guard: my lady you have to stay here for a while. Helen: nodding gently, it was pretty obvious she was scared. Mia: i didnt know i had such a devil for an uncle. She said as she sat on the floor. While nicholas kept looking through the opening in the door, the guard stood his ground ready to attack. They search and searched the house there was no one in it. Sinclair: they are somewhere!!! Search harder he yelled as he walked toward the dinning to join in the search. Just then he found a gold earing on the floor he turned on the light. He saw a door he opened it, it led to a long passage. Sinclair: smiling# hmmm pretty smart, over here he comanded, as his boy hurried to the dinning with there gun. The walked through the deemly light passage looking carefully, they got to a T-point, one tunnel to the left and the other to the right. ******nicholas****** leaning back on the wall, while there heart bits made drum sound rhythm just then. Mia: aaaaarrrghhh she screamed as everyone jerked in shocked rushing to her. Helen: mia what is it?? Mia: hugging her mum as she pointed at the white rat walking at the other end of the wall. Guard: my lady try not to scream you might draw them to us. ******sinclair***** just when they decided to split up they heard a faint scream. Sinclair: smiling come on this way he said taking the right tunnel. As his men followed him. Now he knows for sure they are definitely down here.[color/]
2 Jan 2016 | 10:11
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hummmm nate were r u nah? abeg nxt oo
2 Jan 2016 | 10:19
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Hmmm,mia why na....bt i ave faith,miracle z on the way
2 Jan 2016 | 10:23
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God send help oooooo.
2 Jan 2016 | 10:23
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Jesus...... Next pls
2 Jan 2016 | 10:24
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@paulaeva abegi update nah...1 episode z nt enough o i have been checking in here since morning o
2 Jan 2016 | 10:43
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Dis mia is sumtin common rat
2 Jan 2016 | 10:44
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Dis mia is sumtin common rat i dae gbadun dis tori nxt pls@desire
2 Jan 2016 | 10:45
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Hmmmm,hope u guys are save...
2 Jan 2016 | 11:40
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nate will show soon.... Just a few minutes more
2 Jan 2016 | 13:46
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[color =red]EPISODE 100[/color] [color=black]they went right and got to a point were the tunnel headed forward and leftward. Sinclair: split up and get them i'll be in the sitting room he comanded. He walked back to the sitting room to the balcony got out a wine. Uncorked it and poured himself a glass full, sat on the couch with his legs crossed. ******nicholas****** the guard looked through the opening and saw the men in black holding a gun. Guard: looking shocked# he whispered to nicholas they are here. Mia: on hearing that she began to shiver again. Nicholas: they are coming towards us. Guard: we have to stay as calm as possible, they remained as calm and possible. Man1: theres no one here. Man2: lets check that door over there, he said pointing at the door to the storage. There were only 3men on this path of the tunnel, they all walked towards the door and opened it. They saw only 3 ladies. Man3: smiling# got ya!! As they stepped in nicholas and the guard who hid behind the door, jumped on them grabbing the neck of both men, as the other turned to help his comrades, sophia picked a thick stick hitting him hard at the back of his head, he passed out. While the guard twisted the neck of the man he grabbed, nicholas was struggling with the other as sophia gave him a hard kick between he legs. He gasped for air before passing out holding the spot firmly. Guard: run!!! He comanded as he helped the queen up they ran out of the storage room through another path of the tunnel, when the bomped into 6 of sinclair's. They quickly turned back and ran toward the dinning as the men chased hard after them. Finally they were in the dinning, as they got to the sitting room they saw a man with iron claws like wolverine sitting comfortably, they stopped abruptly. Sinclair: hello her majesty he said smiling as he stood up from the couch. Nicholas: oooh my God sinclair, he quickly grabbed mia and sophia's arms to run back into the tunnel when his men came in blocking there path. Helen: who are you and what do you want, she asked with all the courage she could muster. Sinclair: smiling# am sinclair, sent to kill you all, well i suppose this is you last day on earth. Mia: let us go we have money in tons plssss Nicholas: quickly hid her again behind him. He has been on a case of rape and murder of sinclair before mr hilson. While he had sex with his victim he cut them open from there genitals and torn beyond recognition, like they were eaten by wild animals. Sinclair: hahaha how sweet, well you have just what i want. He said moving forward towards her. The guard quickly stood in his path. Guard: i wont let you harm them, before he finish his words he throat was slit. He moved to were nicholas was, thore his shirt open giving he 4 lines with blood stains on his chest, he fell aside holding his chest, his men quickly held him down. Sinclair: ladies first he said smiling a he walked toward mia who was already crying and shaking, he touched her cheek with the blunt part of his claws. As he move downward to her chest he slowly tore it opening reveal her bra and some cleavage. Mia: stay away from me she cried trying to push him. Sophia: leave her alone she said folding her fist. Sinclair: turning around, hmm you are hot too you know, he said smiling as he walked towards her. She gave him a hard punch to his face, he just move his head side ways and smiled. He move forward as she stepped back until she got to the wall. Sinclair: smiling# i like it rough you know he said tearing through her right arm slowly as she groaned in pains, he tossed her on the floor. Just then someone walked in. Man: looks like someone needs to be taught how to threat a lady. He said and everyone turned, Everyone: nattan!!!!![color/]
2 Jan 2016 | 15:56
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Am happy nate is back. @desire, please u will av to give us anoda epi this nyt pleeeeaaassssseeeeeeeeeeeee
2 Jan 2016 | 16:03
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Lol woow were you online??@anorexia
2 Jan 2016 | 16:07
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Ok ma its loading..... Maybe in less than an hour
2 Jan 2016 | 16:09
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Yes now, u know how long av bin parading this place since morning for a new update @desire, hope i can still get anoda epi dis nyt?
2 Jan 2016 | 16:09
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@ desire the gods are hungry for more
2 Jan 2016 | 16:21
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Wao
2 Jan 2016 | 16:36
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Sure someone needs to be taught hw to treat ur baby rite
2 Jan 2016 | 16:42
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D gods ar hungry
2 Jan 2016 | 16:45
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Yeah! It's nattan! He's not dead! He's aliveeeeeee! I knew it. I'm just happy u are back on time
2 Jan 2016 | 16:47
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@paula4eva plsssssssssssss next
2 Jan 2016 | 16:47
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Please give us one more episode before u sleep tonight :) @desire
2 Jan 2016 | 16:51
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wow tank God nata is alive nxt o@desire
2 Jan 2016 | 16:52
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Welcome bak nate
2 Jan 2016 | 16:54
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So happy,u guys r save @last minute..
2 Jan 2016 | 16:56
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[color =red]EPISODE 101[/color] [color=black]Sinclair: who the hell are you to interrupt my fun. Me: speaking in russia# i am agent roy, a bratva agent. Sinclair: his men looking a bit shocked. In russia# hahahahha show me proves. Me: bringing out 2 pistols, i shot 2 of his men. Smiles# you want more proves?? Sinclair: smiles# why are you interupting my deal? Me: because you are trespassing, well i think i might forgive you for that. I said smiling as i walked to the balcony to pick a wine and 2glasses, everyone just stared at me like they've seen a ghost. I poured him a wine. Me: prochnost we both said and drank to bratva. Looking at sophia she was bleeding from her right arm and a cut on her lips. Sinclair: following my gaze she was acting bitchy so i had to calm her down. Me: did you just said bitchy i asked smiling# Sinclair: smiling# yes!! Like a lightening i brought out my pistols, and in installed 5bullets in him, he fell on his kneels. Me: looking at him, you dont say that to my baby!! I said and blew his brains out. He fell on the floor as his blood flowed. Me: turning to sinclairs men, clean up this mess!! They quickly carried out the body of sinclair and his dead men. Everyone still shocked. Me: smiling# sorry am late i got delayed. Sophia quickly hugged me very tight. Sophia: i was begining to think you were dead nate. Me: hahaha i died a thousand times soph. Mia: recovering from her shock with tearing eye. She walked to were i was hitting my arm hard. Me: oooouch!!!! Mia: why didnt you come before he ruined my gown!! She said as she burst into both tears and laughter hugging me too. Me: i dont think you ladies have been eating, you look so skiny!!! Sophia: i think am a hungry she said smiling. Me: hahahha dont even think about its late already. Sophia kissing me deeply. Sophia: dont do that again!! Me: yes ma'am Helen: coughing# we both turned quickly Me: hello mum. Helen: come forward she comanded in an angry tone. While everyone looked shocked. Wondering why shez angry Me: walked towards her. Helen: just then she hugged me tightly am glad my baby is alright she said amidst sobs. Me: smiling yes mum, she let go and i help nicholas up, hugging him hard. Nicholas; there were times when you were gone for even longer time, but this time it feels different nate i missed you he said as i hugged him hard. Helen: nate you are really amazing how did you survive out there. Me: smiling# i didnt mum, i swam for 5days. Everyone: shocked!!!!! 5days!!!! Me: i was shot in the arm, there were times when i gave up, i was tired hungry, and my arm hurts too. But each time when i drowned somehow, i see sophia reminding me of how she needed me in her life, after swimming for 2days i found a raft. After 5days i got to the shore, a beach in russia. Sophia: hugging me again tightly am glad you are back baby. Her hands was still bleeding, i carried her to my room and cleaned the blood and dressed the wound. Me: hahaha hmmm so what has been happening??. Sophia: roscovitz has been trying to kill us. He sent a man name lucas the last time but romeo showed up. Me: romeo!!!! Where is he now? Sophia: i dont know. Me: i thought you where a serial killer??? I asked mockingly. Sophia: hahahah hitting me, untrained she corrected. Me: hahah i think someone needs to apologize right now. Sophia: yup!! She said smiling#[color/]
2 Jan 2016 | 17:06
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Ah thank u oh @desire, i've been waiting here for u
2 Jan 2016 | 17:18
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Tnx @desire
2 Jan 2016 | 17:31
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thanks @desire we manage it till tomorrow but the gods are not yet satisfied. lol
2 Jan 2016 | 17:31
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Seriously??@softie lol sowie about that, thank God i dint fall asleep lol
2 Jan 2016 | 17:36
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Lol @estherolusola
2 Jan 2016 | 17:38
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A Big Tnks To Desire
2 Jan 2016 | 17:41
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Ar we expecting any oda today update
2 Jan 2016 | 18:08
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Nate u came in time.... Now heart wey fly comot don come back
2 Jan 2016 | 18:10
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oh my God...tanks God natte is back
2 Jan 2016 | 18:15
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I knw it my nate can not die just lyk dat...am happy now
2 Jan 2016 | 18:40
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I knew it that Nate did not die
2 Jan 2016 | 18:48
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Haaaaaaaa, i slept off sha, @desire y dont u wake me up?.... Mind @ peace now atleast nate is back
2 Jan 2016 | 20:10
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wow dis is nice
2 Jan 2016 | 21:15
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Good morning oh @desire, i hope we'll get good morning episodes sha
2 Jan 2016 | 22:05
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Jesus!! @softie you are awake
2 Jan 2016 | 23:52
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[color =red]EPISODE 102[/color] [color=black]Me: i'd be right back i said as i walked to the sitting room, they were dressing nicholas wounds. Mia: nate were are you going to?? Me: i'll be back in a few Mia: i want to go with you. Me: hahaha dont worry i'll be back before you know it. I walked out with my pistols to roscovitz house. There lights were out, its obvious they were having a good sleep. Me: but not anymore, i climbed up to the roof and got into the house. Walked to micheal's room. Me: i can see you are having a wonderful sleep. I said waking him Micheal: nicholas what are you doing in here. Me: to take you along with me i said pointing my pistol at him. Micheal: shocked as he move to the other end of his huge bed. Me: get up you imbecile!!!! He quickly stood up and led me to to his mums room. Knock i comanded pointing gun to his head. Micheal: mum!!! He knocked. Mum: micheal plssss not now she yelled. Micheal: plssss open up. She dragged herself out of bed clad in her white pj's. She opened the door. Me: i tossed micheal in i pointed my other pistol at her. Kate: shocked# as she breath down holding her chest. Me: hmm ma'am you look scared?? Whats wrong. Kate: shaking as she pointed at my gun, nicholas plssss she said. Me: nicholas?? Am nattan i said with a grin. Kate: i thought you died falling of the cliff. Me: yeah i did, just yestiday after a long journey from russia, the killers you husband sent to my house tried to use my ladies as play thing. Kate: am so sorry about that plsss. Me: hahaha trust me sorry doesnt change anything when it comes to my baby. Strip!!! I comanded. Micheal: still floor mum dont listen to him. Me: hitting his mouth hard with the pistol to shut him up, as blood oozed from his lips and gum. Kate: micheal!!!! She cryed looking at his blood, holding her mouth. Me: smiling yup back to you mrs kate, go ahead, she took of the jacket shivering, leaving just the transparent gown, she was about taking it of. Me: smiling thats enough now, you can get that back on the real fun is starting soon. I tossed them out pointing both gun at them as we walked to roscovitz room. Kate: honey!!! Plssss open the door. He groaned, walked the door and opened it, on seeing me he tried to shut the door i quickly pushed the door hard with my leg, the impact made him fall as i pushed them in. Roscovitz: what do you want!!! Me: to give you the karma you deserve. I walked to were his wife was pushed her to the wall, holding her neck, i pointed my gun at them. Hmmm shez pretty. Roscovitz: how dare you!!! Me: just how they treated my baby, with the sharp end of my pistol i cut slowly through her right arm kate: aaaaaarh she groaned in pains. Me: i just smile and tossed her back to the ground. And they all breath down in relief. Seriously what were you guys thinking. Guess what, i dont do her type i whispered, hahahha i laughed mockingly. I led them to our house, opened the door, as they walked in. Helen: shocked# why are you here!!!! Me: i brought them i said smiling. Mia: why she asked looking confused. Me: apologize now i comanded, but i got no response, i gave roscovitz a hard punch as he fell down. They were begining to get on my badside, i picked kate up holding her hair and pointing the gun to her head. Me: am gonna count to 2 if you dont am gonna blow her brains out!!!! Roscovitz: your bluffing!!!! Me: smiling# really?? I shot micheal left arm. Micheal: aaaaaargghhh he yelled in pains. Just then sophia came running into the sitting room. Roscovitz: i kill you!! You bastard!!! Me: 1....... I began my count, just when i was about saying 2. Covitz: ok ok fine, his eyes was teary already. Helen plsss am so sorry. Me: cocking my guns again, swear you dont know she's the queen, i said pointing the gun at him. Roscovitz: her majesty plssss forgive me, he struggled to say. Me: every still shocked# smiling at them, so tell me what do you want to do with this rags over here??.[color/]
3 Jan 2016 | 00:47
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wow. nattan tell them you didn't go thru hell while training in vain.nice one. the gods are still hungry for more @desire. lol
3 Jan 2016 | 01:18
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Kill them all...... Is beta u destroy dat roscovitz family at once ooooo nattan
3 Jan 2016 | 01:32
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Teach them a lesson that they will never forget in a hurry. Thanks @Paula4eva now I can breathe well no more hbp.
3 Jan 2016 | 02:48
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Who will now be the king
3 Jan 2016 | 03:02
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Nice story ride on
3 Jan 2016 | 03:07
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[color =red]EPISODE 103[/color] [color=black]kate held micheal's head and placed it on her chest as she sat on the floor crying. Helen: stood up and walked towards roscovitz, what did we ever do to you covitz, clarisse favoured you alot and yet you werent satisfied. Am sure you had a hand in his death she said crying. As mia and sophia held her. Helen: you are a devil roscovitz, the only thing we regret right now is seeing you as a family and not like the devil which you are. I dont care if you live or die just get the hell out of our lives. She said and walked away crying. Me: mia what about you Mia: am dissapointed in you uncle, this will be the last time am gonna refer to you as uncle, mr roscovitz, do whatever you want with him nate. Me: nicholas what do you think i asked smiling. Nicholas: stood up and gave roscovitz a hard punch, lend me you gun. Roscovitz; fell on the floor as kate kept crying. Me: hahahah crazy kid get your butt sitted. Sophia what about you. Sophia: i really dont care about what happens to them. Me: smiling looking at mr roscovitz, who looked very angry. Hmmm you show no remorse at all mr roscovitz. Kate: plsssss nate leave him alone plssss she cried. Me: well i was gonna kill him, i tossed the gun to nicholas to see if he can shoot him. Nicholas: swiftly collecting the gun he aimed it at his head, holding the gun firmly. Looking pretty angry as his hands were visibly shaken. Roscovitz shut his eyes, while kate cried even louder, he stood in that position for a while. Me: thats enough nic theres no point killing him i said collecting the gun from him. His eyes were red in rage, he walked out too angrily. Kate: still crying holding micheal who was almost lossing conciousness. I walked in my room came with the first aid box. Grabbed micheal's arm pulled out the bullet and dressed the wound. Me: hmmm looks like they dont want you guys dead. Dont worry he'd be fine, you are free to go. Kate: quickly helped micheal up as they all walked out. It was almost dawn, i went to my room to have a wonderful sleep. I was pretty tired already. *******roscovitz******* walking back to his house in shame, they got in he quickly called the doctor who redressed micheal's wound. Kate: eyes already swollen after crying for a long time. Roscovitz: that little kid dared to humilate me like this?? Kate: roscovitz thats enough plsss, atleast he spared us i think we should let it all go. Roscovitz: looking frustrated, and live with the shame all my life no way he said. He went into the shower and washed up. And left the house, while kate looked after her only son. Micheal: mum where is he going?? Kate: i dont know, i really dont want to have anything to do the renaldi anymore. Micheal: me too he murmured, then she hugged him. ****sophia***** the sky outside was bright and the sun was up, she walked into nate's room. Looking at her cute husband. Sophia: smiling# as she just stared at him with smiles, it felt like a dream, awonderful dream, she had only dreamt about this moment and now here she was looking at the love of her life again, watching his chest moved up and down slowly as he breath, this dream really feels real. Me: i caught you i murmured smiling Sophia: hahaha i cant help it, 3weeks felt like forever nate. Me: come here i said smiling as she climbed my bed to join me. Sophia: hahah you dont look like you are gonna wake any sooner. Me: smiling# not when you are right beside me i said wrapping her in my arms, as i gave her a deep kiss.[color/]
3 Jan 2016 | 03:12
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Am i missing something where is ashely
3 Jan 2016 | 03:28
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Next
3 Jan 2016 | 03:47
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Where z ashley? Since they returned 4rm the cliff
3 Jan 2016 | 03:52
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I already told nattan to kill roscovitz
3 Jan 2016 | 03:56
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Nate u are d man..
3 Jan 2016 | 05:53
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I no nate is alive
3 Jan 2016 | 05:58
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wow wow......amazing
3 Jan 2016 | 06:07
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I really loves this stort but where is Ashley ?
3 Jan 2016 | 06:28
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Am waitin for someone to show uP
3 Jan 2016 | 07:01
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enjoying every bit of this nice story
3 Jan 2016 | 07:44
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loving evry bit of d story....@desire abeg cum continue nah
3 Jan 2016 | 08:42
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smile..following
3 Jan 2016 | 08:46
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[color =red]EPISODE 104[/color] [color=black]the morning was quite wonderful, looking at the weather it was pretty obvious it was gonna snow soon. Breakfast was server, while mia decided to inform everyone, she hopped into nicholas room and he was on a call. Mia: breakfast is ready!!!! She sanged. Nicholas: just smiled and beckoned on her to come, hahah yea mia just walked in, he said to the caller. Mia moved closer as he handed over the phone to her, its ashley he said. Mia: omg!!! Ashley!!! She yelled excitedly, as they talked for a while. She handed over the phone to nicholas and hopped out. She got to nate's room, saw the couple sleeping hold themselves. Mia: smiling# breakfast is ready!!!! She said jumping on them. Sophia: mia!!!! She yelled smiling as she got up, while i pretended to be asleep. Mia: hahaha lets go soph, what about nate aint you gonna wake him up. Sophia: haha dont worry his just pretending to be sleeping. Mia: whispering something into her ears as they both smiled. Got close to me, took of the blanket, they began to tickle me. Me: hahaaha sophia thats enough i said amidst laughter. Mia: hahaha breakfast is ready. Me: ok i'll be there, i walked into the bathroom to use the mouth wash, i was done in less than a minute i joined them in the dinning. Goodmorning mum i said smiling. Helen: hope you slept well nate Me: yes mum, then we all began to eat, while i ate just shrimps. Helen: seeing i was bearly eating my food. You dont like potatoes?? Me: just smiled not really Sophia: nate doesnt eat cooked food she said smiling. Helen: oooh sorry about that in that case we'd have to adjust our meal table. Meeting will be holding in 2hours time, you all have to be there ok. She stood up and left. Soon they finished eating, we showered and was ready for the meeting. It was 12pm already as we walked to the conference hall and everyone was already sitted. While the queen was sitted on her special seat. Roscovitz and micheal was there too. Roscovitz: i want to present humbly to this court why the queen and her family needs to step down. They are not capable of running the countries affair's for weeks now they have not been functional, this country needs a more competent person who has the interest of the people of genovia at heart. My wish is that this court see reasons with me. He said and sat down Helen: standing i have not been here for weeks, for safety reasons. Roscovitz here have been trying to harm my family and i. First my sons were kidnapped on nicholas wedding night. They narrowly escaped death, just when we were about giving up on the memories of nate, he showed up yestiday and saved our life. The men roscovitz sent, killed all palace guards, on duty because they wanted a clean job. Roscovitz: her son broke into my house took my wife and son hostage, before he let them go he shot his left arm!! Helen: i want you all to know this man here is a devil, on 3 attempts he tried to harm my kids but failed. He is not to be trusted, not even his words. I fear for the future of genovia with a tyrannt king like him, controlling there affairs. Roscovitz: standing angrily i wont have you lay baseless allegations on me. What this court wants is evidence!!! He said looking at helen. Am sure you dont have one!! Just then someone walked into the court. Clarisse: but i do!!! He said as everyone turned looking shocked to see the king. Roscovitz: clarisse he said in shock[color/]
3 Jan 2016 | 11:46
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Yes.. All hail the king. @desire, no delay please lets move to next episode
3 Jan 2016 | 12:29
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woooow *smiling* am happy
3 Jan 2016 | 12:47
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Gosh!!!!!.....U such a good writer @ paula4eva.
3 Jan 2016 | 12:48
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I knew it....i knw d king is alive
3 Jan 2016 | 13:00
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I knw it,he just plan it all
3 Jan 2016 | 13:05
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Wow
3 Jan 2016 | 13:33
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am enjoying is story no be small. I knew none of dem was dead. Hw king go die n no burial. @tenniebenson i neva see ur comment here o
3 Jan 2016 | 14:08
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Desire.d gods ar hungry 4 more
3 Jan 2016 | 14:56
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Yes De Gods Are Thirsty For More
3 Jan 2016 | 14:58
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I knew it right from the start that the king is not dead
3 Jan 2016 | 14:59
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@desire wer er u.......abegi cum post anoda episode oooooooooo
3 Jan 2016 | 15:11
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[color =red]EPISODE 105[/color] [color=black]Clarisse: hello roscovitz he said smilling. Mia: dad!!!! She yelled happily. Roscovitz: laughing uneasily good....to...have you...ba..ck he stammered. Clarisse: snapped his fingers as the police came in with the royal doctor cuffed. Roscovitz: on seeing the doctor he fell back to his seat. Clarisse: speak he comanded the doctor. Doctor: i have been the king's family doctor for 15years, i have been faithful and loyal, until mr roscovitz brother of the king took my wife away from me. Threatening to kill her if i dont do his bidings. I was reluctant at first when i realised he wasnt bluffing he asked me to make the king die a peaceful death that looks like a natural one. Everyone: murmuring!!! Roscovitz: this man here is lying he yelled as he sprang up from his seat. Clarisse: smiling i knew you'd say that he snapped his hand again and his personal doctor came in. Doctor: i came to check on the king when i found out the king as already being poisoned with a serum. I gave him a neutralizing fluid. We faked his dead and flew out of genova for him to be threated. With even more top notch facilities. Clarisse: cutting him short, thats enough he comanded. Seize him he ordered the cops, as they dragged him out. Micheal tried to stop them as they tossed him aside. Clarisse: smiling he's gonna pay for his crimes. He said to the court Everyone: long live the king!!! They chanted. Mia ran quickly hugging her dad happily. Mia: daddy!!!! She said smiling Clarisse: how is my baby doing he said smiling. Mia: you expect me to be fine when you left genova without me she said with a squeezed face, am angry dad. Clarisse: smiling# aaaw daddy you got you an apology present, just then helen hugged him tightly. Helen: i thought i'd never see you again she said hugging him even tighter. While i, sophia and nicholas walked towards him as we gave him a hug. We all walked out smiling when a servant came in with 2 huge teddy. Pink and white with daddy loves you bodly written on the tommy. Mia: woooow she said jumping happily, thank you daddy she said smiling as she grabbed them both. And gave clarisse a peck she hopped to her room. As everyone watched her smiling. Clarisse: she hasnt changed a bit he said into helen's ears as they both smiled. Me: thank God you are here this royalty stuffs is pretty boring dad. I said smiling am finally going home, nic dont worry i'll get you ashley. Clarisse: am not here to be king nate he said. Am here to get you boys ready to be king. Me: smiling nicholas can do that dad. Helen: uh-uh thats not how things work here nate. Nicholas: tongue out# you are going no were!!! Me: you are all kidding me right, i really want to go home!!!. Nicholas: you are home boy he said tapping my shoulders as they all left. Me: seriously!!!! I yelled. Sophia: hugging me from behind, hahahaha dont worry baby, staying wont hurt, beside am here too. Me: smiling i guess so baby, and on a 2nd thought i havent had fun in while. Sophia: smiling# as she crossed her hands around my neck. Guess what baby. Me: uhmmm you toasted burned bread again?? I said smiling. Sophia: hahaha shut up!!! Am carrying your baby. Me: woooow!!! I yelled as i carried her in arms giving her a deep kiss. Hahahha best news ever.[color/]
3 Jan 2016 | 15:20
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am loving evry bit of dis story@desire u er doing a grt job here
3 Jan 2016 | 15:24
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Amazing.
3 Jan 2016 | 15:27
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smile...love dis story...well done @desire
3 Jan 2016 | 15:32
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wow wat a good new congratulation to u nate u a goin to be a father very soon
3 Jan 2016 | 15:46
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Choi....gud news indeed
3 Jan 2016 | 16:12
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Hehehehehe... What do you give me for my world-class prediction @paula4eva
3 Jan 2016 | 16:24
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wooow! av rili missed alot.. now am bck... my guesses were all rite.. best story eva... welldone @Desire u r rili doing great.. no mur threats..
3 Jan 2016 | 16:48
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Bravo!
3 Jan 2016 | 17:09
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Lol u tried@sapiens i'll give you hug
3 Jan 2016 | 17:15
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Happy ending.............
3 Jan 2016 | 17:29
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Lol... Well i'm a guy a hug means nothing. Is that the end @paula4eva?
3 Jan 2016 | 17:34
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Best news ever
3 Jan 2016 | 17:35
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Covitz.... With all ur planz to harm the royal family and be d kinq, ur ambitionz and dreamz ends in police custody.
3 Jan 2016 | 17:43
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Okay. Continue
3 Jan 2016 | 20:58
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wat happen no update by now pls@desire we a waitin nxt
4 Jan 2016 | 02:37
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I thought Nic nd ashley are married y is she not in the Palace. I'm happy d king is not dead. I'm just in love with this story.
4 Jan 2016 | 03:01
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Happy family
4 Jan 2016 | 07:04
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@desire the gods are hungry oooo. what happen naaa
4 Jan 2016 | 11:05
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i said it, nobody die. Great story @desire bt i need more
4 Jan 2016 | 12:41
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[color =red]FINAL EPISODE[/color] [color=black]We all sat in the sitting room watching the Tv that has not been switched on for a while, when ashley walked in smiling. Perhaps nicholas has informed her. Just when she got in nicholas stood up opening his arms as she ran in. Ashley: i missed you baby! She said smiling. After a while she got away from him. Ashley: nate!!!! She screamed hugging me too. Me: hahaha dont tell me you missed me that much? Ashley: more than you can imagine, she exchanged pleasantries with everyone smiling as she joined us to watch the movie. Soon it was nightfall, the cook walked into the sitting room. Cook: dinner served my lord. Clarisse: alright its dinner time he announced as we all walked to the dinning table. Me: mia you should left that in the living room. I said pointint the doll Mia: holding her doll in her left arm, you dont call her that!! She called miss curddles. Me: shocked# you've got to be kidding me. She bent a head behind the doll in a light voice. Ms curddles: hello nate am curddles, could you plsss leave me alone. Everyone: hahahhaahah Me: naughty mia, i said and was about to eat. Clarisse: i have something important to tell everyone. He said as we all listened attentively. Here in genovia, there can only be one renaldi. I dont know who is oldest amongst my sons. Have been thinking about making you both go through the training of becoming king. Whoever passes become the new king of genovia and ofcourse a renaldi. While the other clarisse. If it was to be your mum's decison nicholas would be the king and if it were to be my decision nattan will be king. what's your say in this? Nicholas: well dad i'll go with your idea, i'd like to be king but if i dont win he said smiling its fine by me. But am sure am gonna beat nate this is no hand fist, he said smiling. Me: hahahah luckily am not interested in being the king am sure you'd have lost big time. I said smiling. Clarisse: does that mean you donot want to participate in this contest he asked again a bit dissapointed. Me: yes dad i dont want too. Clarisse: sophia are you ok with that. Sophia: i really dont want to be queen she said smiling am a shy type, i think nate is too. Everyone: hahahahaha Me: hahha hell no am not shy. Ms curddly: omg i cant believe this cute guy is shy oooh my God am blushing. Me: mia!!!! I yelled smiling. We soon began to eat our food, made a toast to the future king and queen. We all retired to our rooms, sophia and i was on my bed. Sophia: i think we've been in genovia for too long. Me: me too i said smiling but first we'd have to go home tomorrow. Stay aweek there. Fly to new orleans, check on my event centre. Perhaps we might wanna stay there for a while before going to alabama. Sophia: nope i dont wanna go to alabama cow boys are pretty dangerous you know. Me: am scared of nobody baby Sophia: uhmm california or chicago will do just fine. Me: hmmm have not been there then, thats cool too, after there we could go to paris. Sophia: and miami! She said smilling Me: hahha naughty girl come here i said pulling her over. Sophia: rolling on top of me, and now were would you like to go to right now she whispered into my ears seductively. Me: smiling# sophia-lone. Sophia: hahaha naughty boy she said as our lips slowly found each other. It dawned so fast we packed our bags, and walked to the sitting room. Clarisse; nate are you going for a pic nic?? Me: no dad we are going home. Helen; oooh i wish you could stay a little more you know. Me: i'll be back soon mum i said giving her a peck. While we talked mia sneaked behind us with he luggages too and waved goodbye to her mum and dad as she tip-toed outside. Sophia: looking at me them wondering why they were smiling as she turned back she saw no one. Clarisse: alright you can go, am not gonna delay you any further he said smiling. Helen: byeeeee. We got to the car and tossed our luggages into the trunk and speed off, opening the roof of the car. Sophia: sing for me baby she said as the air blew her hairs backward. Me: hahaha alright just then we both felt a hand on our shoulders. Mia: sweet couples!!!! She said grinning. Sophia&I: aaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrghhhhh, we both scream loud like we were in a horror movie Mia: crazy couples stop screaming!!!! She yelled and we stopped. Ms curddle wants to say hi to you guys she brought the huge doll and place it between us. Me: mia how did you get in here i said outta shock Mia: you dont want me here?? Me: yes mia i dont!!! Mia: what about you soph?? Sophia: i dont!!!! She yelled. Mia: hahaha you have no choice babies she said as she stood up. Whoooo-uuuuh-whoooo she yelled as the air blew her hair. In a week time we couldnt travel anymore because it began to snow, we played with snow ball, snow scate and snow slide. In our world fun was our music and happy ever after was more than a rhym.[color/] [color =red]THE END[/color]
4 Jan 2016 | 13:09
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[color=black]Final episode is here @Coolval222-2 @Tenniebenson @Khola46 @Wiseman @Ibrams @Johnysky @Pizzaro @Swtharyomi @Wyse-one @Eddy @Delight @Pweety @Mray @Jummybabe @Babe4biola @Sofia @Ritagold @Kuks @Originalannchilexdel @Fridex @Frank @Frankkay @Simzy @Pheranmmie041 @Temmyjoy @Chriswayne @Evanz @Itzshaxee @Mecuze @Skookum @Kingson1 @Donmikie @Kingsbest @T- Dak @Charlywizzy @Charliebryn @Hardeywummy @Japhola @Konphido @Emmyrexx @Adura @Tholartee @Nextangel @Blessedgirl @Ebube @Jenifa @Jclash @Taiwo @Chomyline @Lawman @Tinagabe @Christiana @Itmrabzeez @Johnoscar @Precy @Timmy @Dabcy @Ikeholuwa1 @Besty @Starlet @Okklad @Angeleniola @Ewomazeal @Mizleemah @Blessfelicity222 @Anitcham @Stephanie @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Rhennyjay @Geeadore @Tiffany1 @Tonia @Hameyeenat @Inemlove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @Vibratingwind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Maurice @Jummy @Thankmic @Christopher @Anita @Phinebraim @Kedike @Kemkit @Gracy @Saintkenz @December12 @Promise @Sylvia @Bsam @Portable @Steph @Aarti @Olaking3 @Harddy @Blakstudd @Prince @Invincible @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Sandy @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @Sexynikky1994 @Youngestprince @Davick @Semilore @Oyindamola @Dhemilade1 @Mature @Pearl @Roes @Franklin @Kolababs @Hollar @Smilie @Borwerleh @Iksqueency @Loveth @Funmilayo1 @Okklad @Nizzy @Flames @Vict-Vames @Peace @Sirp081 @Kristen @Kingsengine @Aaron @Tony @Ruth @Romancelord @Itzshaxee @Olamy4fun @Abrahamdking @Flamerouz @Crusher @Stanny39 @John @Softtouch @Onahsunday631 @Jeddy @Sonshine @Sirgentle @Vizkid @Hoelhay @Pharm-vickymears @Teesolid @Omoyemmy @Olarach @Daxking @Krizzy @Softie @Holarbordah @Ele @Firstladyontop @Obaby @Sergentmax @Mhizdaofot @Ariketemmy @Saraya @Eminem @Laurasteve299 @Gambola @Monadisu @Dazzlingangel @Donyas @C- Roderick @Cookey @Isabella1 @Chisomsophia @Mrfabulous @Henry @Mhizzthessy @Millz @Bishops10 @Kreepyink @Olaniyiadeshina @Gracedkyenny @Hardeyhorlar9 @Holaryinkhar @Inemeka @Abevica @Individual @Olami @Beryl @Youngfellow @Humblelion @Natasha9976 @Hartuny @Emergencia @Paula4eva @GiftGodiva @Divatimmy @Finestberyl @Sapiens @Ahmad @Ele1 @Ferdinard @Festoza006 @Sharpzender @Uncleba426 @Paje @Jenny123 @Pemamezi @Detector @Pweetyfizzy @Willingyung @Napster @Greg-billz @Valentinelv @Hayanfeoluwa @Teju1 @Dgreat @Prestigiousfirstlady @Petersandra121 @Jenny1 @Bryten50 @Fallancy @Rosey @Jimmyjab @Oluwanifemi @Arosunshine @Heartbrokekid @Thosiano @Peterox @Iamsmv @Adegunle3gmail- com @Sparkling-2 @Hoyenikky @Maurice @Lizzytee @Zephyr @Mhizterdimex @Ladywen @Holarmidey @Scriptures @Lollycobra @Hardey1292 @Adeblow23 @Slimolayinkastar @Damzybabe @Adeshewa @Softel @Nifemi @Abradek @Beauty74 @Cizzle @Omolarami @Nazysophy1 @Yemitefestus @Omoniyiola @Inifek @Coolbaby @Nheemot @Deejaygrin @Hitiswell @Fynboy @Sirmike @Aminzy @Vicoch @Sunnyklin20Yahoo- com @Psam @Oshio @Shikoleen @Queencoded @Kimmy @Ifeoma1 @Nobleay @Felixharuna11 @Ibktemi99 @Hayzedefoe @Chidex14 @Classy @Omodemilade59 @Rufus @Ladygrasha @Ennylincoln @Kingz1 @Starlord1 @Noskid @Kodedreal @Petermikel @Frankymario @Olatunjitobi @Pweetylizzyqueen @Olutcoded @Sayrah @Tomtim @Missdammy @Latienco @Bimrach @Mubarak @Mubavak @Adeolaajala1234 @Olalekana69 @Dbest @Skulboy @Beautyqueen @Naomacjoyous @Onyinyessica @Drumsaint @Debbi2nice @Jamesgentility @Megatron @Okiripoto02gmail-com @Rahzycute1 @Hangellah46 @Deltavictory @Kay2ty7 @Praisee @Josephjuliet @Xtopher @Richymore @Temmy744 @Mrmorie @Abosmart @Adfaustina595gmail-com @Adetolaadejoke @Whizjay @Anthcunny @Freeday @Ninny @Abasienyene @Henryjay @Horgzy @Abosmart @Omodemilade59 @Judith @Mercykris @Superstar4real @Sanctus4real @Bolaji2308 @Damzybabe @Profeze1 @Horlarjuwhon @Illusion002 @Royzeray @Oluwatosin @Chinenye5404 @Dharmex @Inifek @Pattiejoe7gmail-com @Opinxymenumento @Bobbidi- boo @Gooddysmart3 @Elijezy @Drumsaint @Oshio @Musterfi @Khaleedwr @Addieola @Chinedueze @Praise22 @Mdsodeeq @Sirjerro @Masterbill @Emileagosu @Kabazi95 @Daintyshewa @Klaussimbo @Peoray @Samnolimit @Babswalexyttyahoo-com @Shania55 @Conspiracy @chidex14 @victoriouschild @slimolayinkastar @Everybody come oo[color/]
4 Jan 2016 | 13:23
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that was so nyc @desire
4 Jan 2016 | 13:23
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I hpe there's a season two of it
4 Jan 2016 | 13:25
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[color=black]Final episode @Coolval222-2 @Tenniebenson @Khola46 @Wiseman @Ibrams @Johnysky @Pizzaro @Swtharyomi @Wyse-one @Eddy @Delight @Pweety @Mray @Jummybabe @Babe4biola @Sofia @Ritagold @Kuks @Originalannchilexdel @Fridex @Frank @Frankkay @Simzy @Pheranmmie041 @Temmyjoy @Chriswayne @Evanz @Itzshaxee @Mecuze @Skookum @Kingson1 @Donmikie @Kingsbest @T- Dak @Charlywizzy @Charliebryn @Hardeywummy @Japhola @Konphido @Emmyrexx @Adura @Tholartee @Nextangel @Blessedgirl @Ebube @Jenifa @Jclash @Taiwo @Chomyline @Lawman @Tinagabe @Christiana @Itmrabzeez @Johnoscar @Precy @Timmy @Dabcy @Ikeholuwa1 @Besty @Starlet @Okklad @Angeleniola @Ewomazeal @Mizleemah @Blessfelicity222 @Anitcham @Stephanie @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Rhennyjay @Geeadore @Tiffany1 @Tonia @Hameyeenat @Inemlove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @Vibratingwind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Maurice @Jummy @Thankmic @Christopher @Anita @Phinebraim @Kedike @Kemkit @Gracy @Saintkenz @December12 @Promise @Sylvia @Bsam @Portable @Steph @Aarti @Olaking3 @Harddy @Blakstudd @Prince @Invincible @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Sandy @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @Sexynikky1994 @Youngestprince @Davick @Semilore @Oyindamola @Dhemilade1 @Mature @Pearl @Roes @Franklin @Kolababs @Hollar @Smilie @Borwerleh @Iksqueency @Loveth @Funmilayo1 @Okklad @Nizzy @Flames @Vict-Vames @Peace @Sirp081 @Kristen @Kingsengine @Aaron @Tony @Ruth @Romancelord @Itzshaxee @Olamy4fun @Abrahamdking @Flamerouz @Crusher @Stanny39 @John @Softtouch @Onahsunday631 @Jeddy @Sonshine @Sirgentle @Vizkid @Hoelhay @Pharm-vickymears @Teesolid @Omoyemmy @Olarach @Daxking @Krizzy @Softie @Holarbordah @Ele @Firstladyontop @Obaby @Sergentmax @Mhizdaofot @Ariketemmy @Saraya @Eminem @Laurasteve299 @Gambola @Monadisu @Dazzlingangel @Donyas @C- Roderick @Cookey @Isabella1 @Chisomsophia @Mrfabulous @Henry @Mhizzthessy @Millz @Bishops10 @Kreepyink @Olaniyiadeshina @Gracedkyenny @Hardeyhorlar9 @Holaryinkhar @Inemeka @Abevica @Individual @Olami @Beryl @Youngfellow @Humblelion @Natasha9976 @Hartuny @Emergencia @Paula4eva @GiftGodiva @Divatimmy @Finestberyl @Sapiens @Ahmad @Ele1 @Ferdinard @Festoza006 @Sharpzender @Uncleba426 @Paje @Jenny123 @Pemamezi @Detector @Pweetyfizzy @Willingyung @Napster @Greg-billz @Valentinelv @Hayanfeoluwa @Teju1 @Dgreat @Prestigiousfirstlady @Petersandra121 @Jenny1 @Bryten50 @Fallancy @Rosey @Jimmyjab @Oluwanifemi @Arosunshine @Heartbrokekid @Thosiano @Peterox @Iamsmv @Adegunle3gmail- com @Sparkling-2 @Hoyenikky @Maurice @Lizzytee @Zephyr @Mhizterdimex @Ladywen @Holarmidey @Scriptures @Lollycobra @Hardey1292 @Adeblow23 @Slimolayinkastar @Damzybabe @Adeshewa @Softel @Nifemi @Abradek @Beauty74 @Cizzle @Omolarami @Nazysophy1 @Yemitefestus @Omoniyiola @Inifek @Coolbaby @Nheemot @Deejaygrin @Hitiswell @Fynboy @Sirmike @Aminzy @Vicoch @Sunnyklin20Yahoo- com @Psam @Oshio @Shikoleen @Queencoded @Kimmy @Ifeoma1 @Nobleay @Felixharuna11 @Ibktemi99 @Hayzedefoe @Chidex14 @Classy @Omodemilade59 @Rufus @Ladygrasha @Ennylincoln @Kingz1 @Starlord1 @Noskid @Kodedreal @Petermikel @Frankymario @Olatunjitobi @Pweetylizzyqueen @Olutcoded @Sayrah @Tomtim @Missdammy @Latienco @Bimrach @Mubarak @Mubavak @Adeolaajala1234 @Olalekana69 @Dbest @Skulboy @Beautyqueen @Naomacjoyous @Onyinyessica @Drumsaint @Debbi2nice @Jamesgentility @Megatron @Okiripoto02gmail-com @Rahzycute1 @Hangellah46 @Deltavictory @Kay2ty7 @Praisee @Josephjuliet @Xtopher @Richymore @Temmy744 @Mrmorie @Abosmart @Adfaustina595gmail-com @Adetolaadejoke @Whizjay @Anthcunny @Freeday @Ninny @Abasienyene @Henryjay @Horgzy @Abosmart @Omodemilade59 @Judith @Mercykris @Superstar4real @Sanctus4real @Bolaji2308 @Damzybabe @Profeze1 @Horlarjuwhon @Illusion002 @Royzeray @Oluwatosin @Chinenye5404 @Dharmex @Inifek @Pattiejoe7gmail-com @Opinxymenumento @Bobbidi- boo @Gooddysmart3 @Elijezy @Drumsaint @Oshio @Musterfi @Khaleedwr @Addieola @Chinedueze @Praise22 @Mdsodeeq @Sirjerro @Masterbill @Emileagosu @Kabazi95 @Daintyshewa @Klaussimbo @Peoray @Samnolimit @Babswalexyttyahoo-com @Shania55 @Conspiracy @chidex14 @victoriouschild @slimolayinkastar @anorexia @ladywen @Everybody come oo[color/]
4 Jan 2016 | 13:37
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wow...finally.. nice story.@desire I am always in love with your story. expecting more stories from you
4 Jan 2016 | 13:39
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nice one i loved it
4 Jan 2016 | 13:40
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What a nice story with a nice ending.......Hope there is season 2..... . . . . Thumbs up @desire
4 Jan 2016 | 13:41
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Invite me for your next story@desire
4 Jan 2016 | 13:44
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Thanks for the notification @paula4eva
4 Jan 2016 | 14:09
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In Mia's voice: i thought it will never enddddd! I knew they fake d death of clarisse, even if i become a prophetess, it sure gonna suit me. @desire, u havent seen me online and u didnt ask after me, hmmmm dont worry oh, wont read any of ur stories again. :p
4 Jan 2016 | 14:59
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Lol ah was looking for you jawe i didnt know who to ask, plus i dont have you contact id. Yeah its does suit you
4 Jan 2016 | 15:06
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If i say i didnt enjoy dis story then u knw dat am a great liar.........kudos @paula4eva
4 Jan 2016 | 15:06
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Wow wow wow! 9c 1
4 Jan 2016 | 15:07
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Lol ah was looking for you jawe i didnt know who to ask, plus i dont have your number(whatsap). Yeah its does suit you. The story has ended ooh lol.@softie
4 Jan 2016 | 15:08
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@Paula4eva as u no invite me na God win. I must confess this story was superb. More grease to ur elbow.
4 Jan 2016 | 15:10
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Please when is coolval's best writer voted... I think you know why i'm asking @paula
4 Jan 2016 | 15:10
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Smilez# thanks@chomyline
4 Jan 2016 | 15:10
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I really enjoyed every bit of this ending and nice ending
4 Jan 2016 | 15:17
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i dnt believe i cn meet up wit dis story since yesterday nite dat have start reading the story from epsd 1 bt atlast i read it to d last page,dis story is so interesting,exciting,full of more fun,wit tragedy nd so romantic,wow i enjoy every bit of d story ,am speechless i dnt even knw hw to complent dis wonderful write bt i wil stil sy u ar d best in d way u write nd update story,keep it up dear nd thumb up more ink to ur pen@desire u ar so wonderful.
4 Jan 2016 | 15:19
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Uwc @paula4eva........expecting more frm u
4 Jan 2016 | 15:31
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@desire plz update me when nxt you have new story,becos i wilnt like it when i come late again
4 Jan 2016 | 15:38
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@desire, pls inbox me
4 Jan 2016 | 15:46
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Waow...very nice stori i love it..bt i wanted nate to be d king bt not bad @paula4eva nice work...keep it up
4 Jan 2016 | 15:47
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Hahahaha Mia u re naughty girl. Desire thanks for the write up. It was an interesting story. Expecting more from you as the year roll by. Love yaa.
4 Jan 2016 | 15:55
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@hameyeenat i'll keep that in mind #smiles#
4 Jan 2016 | 15:57
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Thanks@teju1
4 Jan 2016 | 15:59
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Alright thanks
4 Jan 2016 | 15:59
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Atlast is dawn on me,I neva taught it gonna end........Buh I must commend every bit of dis story is just superb..kip it up@desire
4 Jan 2016 | 16:51
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in ms currdle's voice:i rilli wish d story didn't end.....wat a hapi ending@desire kudos...1origin 4 u......waitin 4 anoda story hope it wont take u long 2 start anoda 1 cuz i cnt waaaaaaaaait
4 Jan 2016 | 16:51
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Wow wow wow,wat a story
4 Jan 2016 | 17:15
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woooow!! one of the best story av ever read here... @Desire you are the best... ya stories are always very interesting.. thumbs up... you did a wonderful job.. #500 kunu for you.. expecting more of ya stories oooo
4 Jan 2016 | 17:22
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waow....i love every bit of dis story no dulling moment at all...kisses @desire...expectin more u..well done
4 Jan 2016 | 17:56
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I enjoyed the ride riqht from the beiqninq.... . . . . . Thumbs up @paula4eva
4 Jan 2016 | 18:15
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Omg Episode 89 where do i strt reading this story
4 Jan 2016 | 18:16
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Wow!!! Fantastic Story here @Paula4eva. You know i thouqht someone very dear and special in the family was qonna die jex like Michelle or so died in beautiful thinqs. But u really proved me wronq. All the same, mehn! You did a Great job. Welldone bro. :-)
4 Jan 2016 | 18:54
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Lol@elibaba noni you won kill person with kunu???
5 Jan 2016 | 01:37
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Lol@elibaba noni you won kill person with kunu??? @pizzaro thanks mr coolval lol you done finally wine congrats @inemeka lol orijin keeh?
5 Jan 2016 | 01:40
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Wow!!!!!!!......Wish dis never end....more grease 2 ur elbow,kip it up dear
5 Jan 2016 | 03:26
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Lovely stori. Kudos to u @paula4eva
5 Jan 2016 | 06:27
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you ar always great man,i enjoy it to d end.........we ar expectin more from u @desire
5 Jan 2016 | 11:40
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Welldone @Desire,u r d best ever,still expecting more frm ur table of knowledge....cheers..
5 Jan 2016 | 15:58
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wow wat a nice story@desire am so so inluv wth ur stories nd dis is wundaful nd pls kindly notify me on ur nxt tory nd€kuddus ¥to d grt writer one luv
7 Jan 2016 | 02:47
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Waooowww....diz 1 of d best Stowei eva readeth......wat an apy ending Kudos desire, mur mb to ya 6tem.......
7 Jan 2016 | 07:48
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Ended Just the way I wanted, nice one
8 Jan 2016 | 08:04
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Wooooooow great story! I enjoyed every bit of it, the funny Mia, fierce Nate, wonderful sofia, etc. Kudos bro you'ar the best! #looking forward to another thriller frm u :)
8 Jan 2016 | 12:06
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I kew,the king was alive _ nice ending
10 Jan 2016 | 08:56
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nice story
19 Jan 2016 | 02:58
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Amazing!!! Thumbs up!
20 Jan 2016 | 04:03
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Wow!!!!! One of d best story ever.
31 Jan 2016 | 16:10
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Pls o desire come and complete this story na
1 Feb 2016 | 04:13
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can't believe i finished this... soooo amazing i love this expecting more from the stables of @paula4eva,, thumbs up man!!
3 Feb 2016 | 14:56
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Wow wow wow! @Desire, you are a gr8 writer. This is one of my best stories, I really enjoyed it. Keep it up.
9 Feb 2016 | 02:33
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best story ever
12 Feb 2016 | 10:44
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Wow superb story.....nice work @Desire
3 Jun 2016 | 20:23
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Nice story
14 Jul 2016 | 17:34
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Thumb up writer
14 Jul 2016 | 17:35
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Nice story
14 Jul 2016 | 17:50
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Nice story
20 Jul 2016 | 08:59
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Nice story
23 Jul 2016 | 12:51
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Loi
23 Jul 2016 | 12:53
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wow and so it ends . . . . I swear this story is so interesting thumbs up to u @desire more grease to ur elbow
3 Aug 2016 | 07:26
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Interesting
9 Aug 2016 | 10:35
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BcarefuI oo
9 Aug 2016 | 10:50
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WahaIa dey oo
9 Aug 2016 | 11:07
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xo intresting but hope d story doesnt end here?????
10 Aug 2016 | 14:53
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Nic Story Nd Gud Job @desire Nd @Invincible Buh D Story Is Not Complete
2 Sep 2016 | 04:14
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@mimi-02 its complete they didnt add all the links on first page. So from the episode you stopped. Keep clicking the forward arrow. You'll find them
2 Sep 2016 | 05:33
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Kudos to u @desire U're awesome
15 Oct 2016 | 08:03
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Just wow!!!
21 Oct 2016 | 08:05
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This was a master class piece. Enjoyed it from beginning to the end. kudos
25 Apr 2017 | 07:42
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I love this story...am very sure Nattan will come back someday
16 Jun 2017 | 02:51
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Nice story guy keep it up pls
2 Aug 2017 | 13:18
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Guy i fall for this story no be small tinz
17 Aug 2017 | 19:43
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issokay
18 Aug 2017 | 16:49
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De best ride ever
22 Aug 2017 | 11:21
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Nice
28 Dec 2017 | 19:37
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This is one of the best story have ever read on this site and kudos to you @desire more mb to your sim
30 Jan 2018 | 20:32
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Wat a wonderful end!
27 May 2018 | 17:31
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Wow love this story like kilode
28 May 2018 | 08:14
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omg
8 Aug 2018 | 02:23
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Thanks for this wonderful story...I really enjoyed it
21 Aug 2018 | 10:14
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