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By Flames in 9 Sep 2016 | 06:01
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[To the son of the gold miner]
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Friend it`s raining and you're
In my house but I cannot host you
My heart is hospitable but my home is not
I do not even know how far you'd far
Under my leaking rafters
Welcome to the feel of nothingness
I guess you're cold friend,
But only for a moment
I've known it since I was two,
When mother left me for the graveside
A sad story on her teeth and
Bitter unsung melodies in her eyes
Assuage my grief therefore you who's
Smiled upon by fortune fair and have a green heart
I shall sing you again till love grows petals on your finger.
Till then have no contempt for my rags,
And do not be haughty when l come to
Your father to grovel for a bread

9 Sep 2016 | 06:01
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Nice one :b
9 Sep 2016 | 06:03
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Nice piece
9 Sep 2016 | 06:06
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I know this poem is somehow too technical or advanced... But the sweetness of a poem is it's appreciation.... Hope you guys know what I meant when I say appreciation? I don't mean applauding the poem or the writer.... I meant parsing the poem and possibly getting to explain the poem through the parsing... Now, what will I say? I will like someone to come and appreciate this piece of literary work... Hope I didn't ask for too much? Catch some fun guys... I missed you guys
9 Sep 2016 | 06:24
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@flames The poem is realy awesome! :b
9 Sep 2016 | 06:28
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9 Sep 2016 | 07:20
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nice one.
9 Sep 2016 | 07:27
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It ohk
9 Sep 2016 | 09:13
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nice one
9 Sep 2016 | 12:01
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The work make sense
9 Sep 2016 | 12:10
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Nice
9 Sep 2016 | 13:01
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Nice one
9 Sep 2016 | 15:55
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