Buried under the rocks of lies

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buried under the rock of lies episode 2: four years earlier i was in the little room sleeping on a mat when i woke up to a slight touch on my bare laps and i saw john unclad in front of me and he motioned to me to keep quiet as he brought out his dick and been the first that i will see i was very scared and i began to shake in fear me: please brother john john: keep quiet (he said to me as he parted my legs and i began to plead with tears in my eyes) me: please brother john i beg of you (with tears) john: i really like you and you are beautiful (he said as he reached to kiss my neck and his cold lips pressed against my skin as he began to unclad me too despite my quite pleadings and sobbers and he then thrust his long dick into my virgina and i screamed out abit but he only continued going to and fro as i cried on but all this fell on his deaf ears as he continued banging me, as his dick penetrated into my body i could feel that my body was slowly opening up and this was very painful, from this slow banging he then increased his speed in me and i began groaning in pain but he used his palm to close my mouth until he was through raping me, my whole body was in pains as i watched him stand up and get dressed before he walked out of the room and i continued weeping but i tried to get up but my feet was very week and i stumbled and fell so i crampled myself up at the side of the room and stared at my legs and saw blood stains all over them and i weeped the more at that time mama d walked in mama d: will you stop crying (she said in her stern voice) me: mum john raped me (amist tears) mama d: and so what? me 9surprised) mama d: you should be glad that he was getle with you (she hissed) me (looked at her still shocked) mama d: when you are done with your crying stand up and wash yourself (she said sternly before she walked out of the room) me: (i was still shocked as i began to think that mama d knew very much about what her son had done but what i did not understand was how she could do that to me, it was at that moment that i knew that mama d did not care about me at all, because before i thought i could love her as a mother but it has clearly shown that she doesn't, i then began to weep wishing that my parents were with me and it was with this heavy heart that i dragged myself to the bathroom and poured cold water on my body and used the sponge to wash off all the parts that john had touched but no amount of scrubing will be able to remove the memory of the rape) next day: mama d: mini! me: yes ma mama d: is your leg still paining you me: (surprised that she asked) small small ma mama d: come closer (she motioned to me to come) me: ma mama d: now you are ready to join the other girls me: but mummy mama d: who is your mummy (she said angrily to me) me: am sorry ma mam d: good so you are now part of the big girls now and so you have to be looking your best so that customers can find you. me: ok ma (i said dejectedly) mama d: go back to what you are doing me : ok ma and so i began work as a call girl that same night back to present times the men took turns in banging me and when they where through they all left the room and i stood up and i also left the room to my own room and had a cold shower, i came out of the bathroom and i saw mama d there, i already knew that she came to tell me how i performed and i hissed in my mind but faked a smile to her mama D: the men paid well and they enjoyed them self (she reached for her purse and counted out some money) that is for you (she handed the notes of 500 naira to me and i collected it me: thanks ma (with a fake smile mama d; good girl( she then left the room and i went to lock the door before i returned to my bed and i pulled out a box out from under the bed and i opened and there was a lot of paper money and i placed the ones mama d just gave me with the others in the box and i locked it before smilling to myself my pov i have been waiting for this day for the past four years but now my money is fully completed and i can now afford to run away from this disgusting place, i do not want to stay here for another second( i picked up my small bag filled with little cloths and also the box filled with money and i walked out of the room, it was late in the night and so no one was outside i knew, all the girls would be with there customers in the room and i sighed before walking out of the premises that i have lived for most of my life, my destination unknown to me but its better to be lost in what ever that is outside in the world than to stay one more second in mama d's brothel. STOPPING HERE FOR NOW SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY CONTINUE TOMORROW

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Nice start;)

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This will surely go a long way... anyways am seated bring it on

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I'm here Temi,tnx,nice start

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buried under the rocks of lies (burl) episode 3: I left Abeokuta that night in a bus to Lagos and I arrived Lagos at the early hours of the morning, upon getting down at begger, I looked around here I was in a strange city, I did not know anyone and I have heared that lagos is a very big city and it should even be called a country, I clunged tightly to my bag and my box as I looked around me, some taxies where calling out to me but you no say person wey no know his destination he beta for that person to stay where he be than make he get lost, sorry for the pigin English there, I heard the takes calling places like idumota, ikeja, ogba, agege and I just stared at them not knowing what next to do, I was lost in my thoughts when a bike man approached me bike man: sister where you dey go (he asked and I looked at him as thou he was speaking in tongues) me: (I shook my head and whimpered a little no) bike man: aunty you no fit stay here ooh, you supposed get were you dey go me: really no thank you (I said hoping he will go away) bike man: sister lagos na dangerous place for person like you me: (a little bit angrily) abeg I say I no go, abi na by force ( I said not believing that I had actually said that and the man just withdraw himself and returned to the others, I then looked for a place I could sit and I bought two gala and a pure water sachet oh my god I was really hungry as you could tell from the way I rushed the gala, I stayed there for hours until it got into afternoon and I was still there) my pov I really need to go somewhere as I could see that people where moving suspiciously around me and the market traders where staring at me as if I was going to stay there forever, should I go to ikeja? ah but am not sure if I will get a place to stay but I really needed to move away from where I am (I stood up with my bags and walked on as far as I could go, as I was walking I noticed a group of boys sitting from my guessing they were garage boys and they looked somehow suspicious to me so I clung tightly to my belongings and walked faster but I saw that they all also stood up and followed me, at this time my heart was beating faster as I increased my walking and turned it into a form of little running but the boys did not stop following me and the before I knew what was happening they had gotten to me, and in fear I picked up race and they ran after me but then I tripped over on my left foot and they got to me and surrounded me ist boy: oh girl you sabi run well oh (he said as he friends laughed) another boy: wetin dey for her wey they make us chase her ist boy: ( he reached for my box to collect it but I prevented him by using my bag to hit him but his friends retarded and used force to collect my bags but I did not stop trying to get my bags bag because if I should lose my money then I will be stranded so I fought back with all my might, at that moment I heard the sound of bikes and all of a sudden the boys all ran away leaving me and my bags and I quickly picked them and held then tightly to myself before I looked at who chased the boys off and I saw that same bike man that I had shouted at earlier and he came down from his bike and walked to me) bike man: are you okay? (he spoke this time with a correct English making me to wonder if he was the one that I had earlier argued with) are you hurt? (he said waking me up from my thought and I shooked my head) me: no m not hurt. thank you bike man: no problem, let me help you up (he said as he offered to help me up but I denied and tried to get up on my own but I could not as I felt a strong pain from the leg that I had tripped with and I yelled out and almost stumbled but I was caught just in time by the bike man) bike man: your leg is injured, you have to get it checked ( he said but I shook my head) please let me help you me: no please bike man: I insist( he said as he looked deep into my eyes and I did not know hen I said ok and he helped me up on his bike before he also got on and rode on until after a long ride he came to stop at a little hospital, I read the name ST JOHN HOSPITAL seeing the name john made me to remember mama d's son and what he had done with me, the man parked his bike in the hospital premises before he got down and carried me into the reception room, as the nurses saw me they ran to get a stretcher and I was laid upon it before I was welled to the consultation room and the bike man stood at the reception, I was checked by the doctor who gave me some drugs that relieved the pain on my leg and made me go to sleep, I woke up only to find myself in a ward and on looking at my leg I saw that my foot had been plastered in pop and it was hanged up, I looked around and saw other patients in there but I did not see the bike man, I then began to wonder where he was, did he abandon me here, I looked around and saw that my two bags were not there and immediately a cold shiver ran through my spinal cord and I became overwhelmed with anger, so he was a thief, he only helped me so he could still my things, tears slowly began to form in my eyes as I thought of what next to do, my money and my belongings have disappeared and no doubt that the bike man was responsible for it, how am I going to get out of this and most especially why is all these happening to me? THIS IS WHERE I WILL STOP FOR NOW GUUYS TILL TOMMORROW

I really feel sorry for yoU... Ride on

Eeeya.. I'm sure the bike man didn't go with ur belongings.. He wud return soon

Walahi u no ket am por wahala, cos bike man i go nd i go gv u am por ur bag nd money.

hmmmm..following jejely

So sad

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The bike man didn't go with your belongings He will surely come for you again

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buried under the rocks of lies episode 4: i was still lost in my thoughts when a nurse walked up to my side me: nurse please where is the man that came in with me nurse: (she shook her head) i have not seen anyone here since i resumed my shift me: (surprised as i looked at her) but i was just brought in not a few minutes ago (i said but the nurse just smiled) nurse: not at all, i am a morning shift nurse and i resumed to see you here, you were admitted in yesterday afternoon. me: what (i exclaimed shocked, did i sleep that much that i thought that i was still in the same day) but i just got here nurse: no miss you were prescribed a very powerful pain reliever and it made you to sleep for that long ( the nurse said as he injucted a syringe into a drip beside me and it was then that i noticed that a drip was connected to me) me: ok (i said uncertainly and the nurse smilled to me) nurse: you need to eat something when it almost noon (she said and i just nodded gently, trying to understand all what she said, and she walked on to attend to other patients, not long after she left my bed i turned and i saw the bike man coming towards my bed, at that moment my joy knew no bounds as i saw that he was here and not abandoned me) bike man: i see that you have finally woken up, how is your leg? (he asked with a smile) me: fine (i replied as i looked at him to see if my belongings were with him and i guessed that he noticed that because he only smilled) bike man: your bag and box are safe (he said to me and i smiled slightly) did you think that i will let it be stolen? (he asked but in my mind i was like i already thought that he was a theif himself) me: thank you but i want to see my things (i said) bike man: its ok they are at my house, you will be discharged later in the evening. (he said to me and then suddenly i thought of the hospital bills and i asked) me: oh my god how much am i going to pay! (i exclaimed and i could see the slight grin on his face) bike man: you do not have to worry about the bills i already settled them. me: (what the fuck, i thought this man was a commercial bike man, where the heck did he get money from) you settled them( i asked and he nodded slightly and suddenly i felt grateful to him) thank you but i will pay you back. bike man: just forget about that and lets focus on your health (oh my god this man is too nice, too nice to be true am i dreaming? i have never seen anyone to be nice to me and mostly i did not think that i will ever find a man that i can say is different from the rest) what do you feel like eating? ( he asked waking me up from my day dreaming) me : uh! bike man: yes you have been asleep for a long time and you must be hungry ( he said again with a nice voice, what kind of a person is this man that is caring for someone that he barely knows) dont reply i will get something for you to eat! ( he said as he got up) me: but i dont even know you? ( i said as he came back to me) bike man: you will get to know me but first let me get you something to eat ( he said as he walked on but i stoped him with my question) me: your name? ( i asked as i stared at him and he just looked back witha smile) bike man: david (he said as he walked out of the ward, who the heck is this man calling himself david and why does he care for me, i mean i already thought alot of bad things to him but am not to blame as i just dont trust anyone but this david is changing my believe, he returned minutes later with a bowl of jollof rice and fish with a cold drink and he assited me up and i ate the fod hurriedly, oh yes i was really starving, god know what they put inside the medicine as i ate so hungrily and i finished the food before the doctor came to check on me and david left the ward, the doctor then gave me another injection after i complained of pains and slowly after recieving the injection i fell asleep and woke up to see him beside me) david: the doctors have discharged you, we will soon be going. me: going to where (i suddenly found myself asking i mean i did not have a destination before) david: to my house of cause (he said) or i take you to your house. my pov i just stared at him, i dont know him, he is a total stranger to me but all the same he has shown to be a very kind and reliable person but the problem is that i do not trust him infact i do not trust anyone, should i leave with him considering that i do not have a destination david: we are ready to go (he said) can i (he offered to help me up and i nodded before he helped me up and assisted me out of the hospital, i was expecting to see his bike but i was surprised when we walked towards a white Mercedes Benz and he helped me in before he also got in) me: where is your bike? (i asked still surprized but he just smiled as he started the car) STOPPING HERE, EPISODE 5 LOADING

keep it up dear

Whaat.. He has a car? I'm sure he is wealthy,, well we will find out soon Next pls, I'm enjoying dis story ooo

He might be God sent, who knows...

Hmmmm dats good o, i said it dat he's coming back 4 u, we thank God nd nt d god o.

Waiting plz!

Could it be that the man is wealthy?

Could it be that the man is wealthy?

Ah tink his wealthy....lets watch out on d next epi...

he might be rich

nexxt

he has a car? what is he now doing with the bike..

Buried under the rocks of lies (burl) Episode 5 All through the car ride I did not speak to David as I was wondering why he really was, why he picked me up with a car and what is mission is in my life, the ride came over as stooped in front of a huge house with a big black gate and he horned at the gate twice before it was opened by the gate man, he then turned to me smiling David: we are here (he said as he drove into the premises and he parked at the garage and came down to assist me down from the car and as I looked in front of me I was amazed by the magnificence of the hose before me, it was so big and majestic and I opened my mouth surprised but all of a sudden I remembered that he was a bike man and I recollected all my suspicions of him and I looked at him) Me: David right (I said) what am I doing here? David: (smiled) this is my house. Me: what? (I exclaimed in shock) these house is yours (he nodded smilling) David: lets go in, I will explain everything to you because I know that you have a lot of questions (he said as he looked at me and then offered to assit me into the house) just trust me please! Me: (I just nodded thou uncertain if I wanted to go into his house or if I can trust him but I sighed as I wrapped my arms around his shoulders and he carried me up and walked into the house and as he got into the house I saw a woman who stood up as we got in and she was with young lady of around maybe my age, David then lowered me to the flour) David: please mum no comments for now (he said a little bit rudely to the elderly woman and I just looked on not understanding anything that was going on) lets go (he said this time around to me as he assisted me further into the house and up the stairs before taking me to a room, a beautiful room for that matter and he placed me on the bed as I searched through the beautiful room and I could tell that it belonged to a boy from all the footballers pictures and football tropies, it was no doubt a boys room, then I faced him squarely wanting to understand everything, he seemed to have read my mind because he replied to the question that was running through my mind) David: yes I am not a bike man (he said and I looked at him with a more questioned look) Me: then who are you and why did you help me? ( I asked anxiously but he only sighed and sat down beside me on the bed and faced me) David: my name is david oyetunji odetola twenty three years old son of barrister odetola james ( he said to me) I helped up because I saw that you were in danger (he said but I only starred at him still suspisiously) but I am not a bad person if that’s what you think, I only want to help. Me: you were a bike man and now you are the only son of a barrister, all these does not add up. (I said and he nodded before he turned his face away as thou he was ashamed of something) who are you? (I asked and he turned to me with a different face, he looked as thou he was sad as thou he was about to tell me something that was important to him and he looked at me and was about to speak, a lot of fears ran down my spinal cord as I looked at him ready to understand all about him)

Loving this

Can't wait for him to explain everything to you

Yeah.. He has got lot of explanation to do.. So David, you better start talking

But I don't trust him sha

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Nxt episode pls

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buried under the rocks of lies (burl) episode 6: david: i am really a bike man at least i was when you saw me. (he said and i gave him the go ahead look) i ran away from home several months ago and i swore that i will not return but i did because of you (what the fuck! he returned because of me, this guy is really crazy but sha let me listen and not go ahead of myself) i left all my riches and moved with and old friend of mine Matthew who lived in the ghetto, he introduced me to several jobs which i did so i could sustain myself and i have been living with him at the slumps before i met you tumininu. (i suddenly sprang up when he said my name and i became shocked as i never remembered telling him my name, i stared at him as he continued talking and did not notice the change in me) me : how do you know my name ( i said and he stooped talking and faced me but he could not reply me, i saw that something was definitely something he was hiding from me) tell me how do you know my name, i never mentioned it to you ( i then stood up not minding my injured foot) David: you cant stand up, your foot will get swollen (he stammered but i immediately got furious) me: dam the fucking foot, that is not the topic, i said how do you know my name. (i said but he did not reply me but just stared at the floor) answer me (i shouted at him) David: i know your name because i searched through your things but i am really sorry. i just wanted to know more about you. (he said as i then heaved a sigh of relieve in my mind as he urged me to sit down which he did) me: so you are just returning to your home now (i asked) david: yes! (he said) me: what made you to run away from home? david: my mums constant nagging about my behaviors made me to leave the house. me: what behaviors? (i asked him) david: a lot of bad behaviors that i began to exhibit when i returned from the states almost two years ago) me: which state? ( i asked but he smiled) david: united states of america (oh my god i cant still believe all these that am hearing) i was born in united kingdom but i was brought to Nigeria when i was of age three but i then left for the usa at the age of eleven for my education and i returned two years ago. me: why did you decide to help me? i mean i am a total stranger david: (he smiled) must i have a reason to help, i just felt like always protecting you ever since i set my eyes on you but i do not have any bad intentions and i only want to be your friend. me: friends with someone you dont know? david: i can get to know you cant i( he said as he smiled to me and for the first time i reciprocated by smiling too, the way i was feeling at that moment was incredible, i mean david is really so kind and so caring and no doubt i can say that he is like an angle sent from the creator to me, although i did not believe in the existence of god because to me he never existed, as if he did he will not have let all those things in my life to happen to me, i told david about myself, i told him everything but i just could not tell him all about mama d and the fact that i was a child sex worker as i feared that if i told him i might lose him, we already became close at that moment, i urged him later to go and apologies to his mother and he did also did he promise her that he will not go back to his bad ways, he introduce his mother to me and also did he introduce the young lady to me as his sister damilola and she happened to be only a year older than i am he told them all about me and how we met and he mentioned that we were friends later that day when david left me in his room to rest, his mother came in) david's mum: how are you doing tumininu? (she asked as he smiled to me) me: am doing well ma thank you david's mum: no i should thank you for bringing my son back to me and for changing him (she said) i have never seen him these happy ever since he returned from the states and i can see that you are the reason for all this jy in him (what the heck is the woman saying, but anyway i just have to listen) please do not stop been his friend me: i will not ma david"s mum: you can find a mother and a friend in me too tumininu, even thou you don't have any parent i want you to see me as your mother (she said and i felt very glad within me, how long have i longed to see someone to call my mother.) always confide in me child and see this family as your own family. me: thank you ma (i said with a grateful heart and the woman wrapped her arms around me in a hug and i felt loved for the very first time, well, i don't want this to end this is the live that i always dreamed of, to have a family and now it slowly coming into reality, i don't want to ever remember my past i just want to bury it away and start anew)

buried under the rocks of lies (burl) episode 6: david: i am really a bike man at least i was when you saw me. (he said and i gave him the go ahead look) i ran away from home several months ago and i swore that i will not return but i did because of you (what the fuck! he returned because of me, this guy is really crazy but sha let me listen and not go ahead of myself) i left all my riches and moved with and old friend of mine Matthew who lived in the ghetto, he introduced me to several jobs which i did so i could sustain myself and i have been living with him at the slumps before i met you tumininu. (i suddenly sprang up when he said my name and i became shocked as i never remembered telling him my name, i stared at him as he continued talking and did not notice the change in me) me : how do you know my name ( i said and he stooped talking and faced me but he could not reply me, i saw that something was definitely something he was hiding from me) tell me how do you know my name, i never mentioned it to you ( i then stood up not minding my injured foot) David: you cant stand up, your foot will get swollen (he stammered but i immediately got furious) me: dam the fucking foot, that is not the topic, i said how do you know my name. (i said but he did not reply me but just stared at the floor) answer me (i shouted at him) David: i know your name because i searched through your things but i am really sorry. i just wanted to know more about you. (he said as i then heaved a sigh of relieve in my mind as he urged me to sit down which he did) me: so you are just returning to your home now (i asked) david: yes! (he said) me: what made you to run away from home? david: my mums constant nagging about my behaviors made me to leave the house. me: what behaviors? (i asked him) david: a lot of bad behaviors that i began to exhibit when i returned from the states almost two years ago) me: which state? ( i asked but he smiled) david: united states of america (oh my god i cant still believe all these that am hearing) i was born in united kingdom but i was brought to Nigeria when i was of age three but i then left for the usa at the age of eleven for my education and i returned two years ago. me: why did you decide to help me? i mean i am a total stranger david: (he smiled) must i have a reason to help, i just felt like always protecting you ever since i set my eyes on you but i do not have any bad intentions and i only want to be your friend. me: friends with someone you dont know? david: i can get to know you cant i( he said as he smiled to me and for the first time i reciprocated by smiling too, the way i was feeling at that moment was incredible, i mean david is really so kind and so caring and no doubt i can say that he is like an angle sent from the creator to me, although i did not believe in the existence of god because to me he never existed, as if he did he will not have let all those things in my life to happen to me, i told david about myself, i told him everything but i just could not tell him all about mama d and the fact that i was a child sex worker as i feared that if i told him i might lose him, we already became close at that moment, i urged him later to go and apologies to his mother and he did also did he promise her that he will not go back to his bad ways, he introduce his mother to me and also did he introduce the young lady to me as his sister damilola and she happened to be only a year older than i am he told them all about me and how we met and he mentioned that we were friends later that day when david left me in his room to rest, his mother came in) david's mum: how are you doing tumininu? (she asked as he smiled to me) me: am doing well ma thank you david's mum: no i should thank you for bringing my son back to me and for changing him (she said) i have never seen him these happy ever since he returned from the states and i can see that you are the reason for all this jy in him (what the heck is the woman saying, but anyway i just have to listen) please do not stop been his friend me: i will not ma david"s mum: you can find a mother and a friend in me too tumininu, even thou you don't have any parent i want you to see me as your mother (she said and i felt very glad within me, how long have i longed to see someone to call my mother.) always confide in me child and see this family as your own family. me: thank you ma (i said with a grateful heart and the woman wrapped her arms around me in a hug and i felt loved for the very first time, well, i don't want this to end this is the live that i always dreamed of, to have a family and now it slowly coming into reality, i don't want to ever remember my past i just want to bury it away and start anew)

Happy for you but I think there is more to what David is telling you

I'm really happy for you.. I think David is in love with you but your past might not let you love him back.... You can't hide the truth for a long time you know

Hmmmm

I think he's life is even more complicated than a bike man's life

I will advice you tell him about you before he finds out himself

Observing

buried under the rocks of lies(burl) episode 7 i began to say with david and his family, david's father i heared has not returned to nigeria for the past two years, i also found out that david had an identical twin brother who was also in the states with their father, i was told that his name was daniel, my familiarity with the family increased and over the time of months i had already blended into the family, meanwhile the friendship between i and david increased and it even began to get out of hand as david was always with me, always protecting me, always caring for me. he enrolled me in a lesson in order to prepare to write the west African examination and also jamb, i began the lesson because i have been wishing to go to school as mama d only sent me to a public school for my primary education while i learnt secondary stuffs from the other girls at the brothel, two girls for that matter they were my only friends at the brothel, anna and bisi. they said an opportunity does not come twice so when david offered to send me to school, i did not hesitate before saying yes, i worked very hard at the lesson center and prepared and studied well for the examinations, i made a friend name deride at the center and we both prepared for the exam, soon i wrote waec and neco and waited for the results, but while i did my relationship with david became more closer and it soon became obvious that we were closer than friends, i was with deride at the lesson center chatting with her when someone suddenly closed my eyes from behind and i immediately knew it was david) me: (i laughed) i know its you david (i said and he removed his hands from my eyes) david: how are you doing tumi me: am doing good! (i said as i smiled and he also smiled but i saw that my friend was getting uncomfortable) so what are you doing here? David: cant i check on my friend anymore me: of course you can David: hope am not disturbing you and your friend me: no David deride this is my best friend david and david this is my other friend deride (i said introducing them to each other) david: (he handshaked deride) nice to meet you deride deride: (smiling) also pleased to meet you in person David (i could notice how my friend looked at David) tumi has always spoke about you David: i hope its a good thing deride: of course (she said still smiling as she looked at him and refused to drop down his hand) you are very handsome (that enough i cant take it anymore i just couged out a bit and she finally released his hand) david: tumi i will go and check your coordinator and when am true we will both g, alright me: ok (i smilled as he pecked me on my forehead, david always has the habit of pecking me and i got to admit that i love when he does it but for so many times i told him to stop it though i did not mean it but he never stopped but i noticed how my friend looked at us she looked somehow jelouse, well she doesnt have a boyfriend so i cant blame here) David: i'll be right back (i nodded in response as he walked away from us and deride's eyes followed him, i had to cough out again before she looked at me) me: girl what is up with you deride: nothing (she said) david is really handsome me: i guess he is deride: and you are only friends me: yes we are the very best of friends Deride: ok(she smilled but some how i could tell that there was more to her smile and there was more to what i and david have together, but certainly am not ready to lose him as my friend nor will that ever happen in this lifetime)

u get luck

mmmm. your friend Deride likes David

Derinde likes David,,and she will do anything to get him

Abi him na ritualist??

I am happy for you dear but I still don't trust David at all

Tumi u have to be very careful

I think David is hiding something,time will tell sha

Babe shine ur eyes o.

Next plz

Waiting patiently

Continue

D only problem nw is ur past wich u hide frm dem

buried under the rocks of lies episode 8 deride after that day that she met David began to come regularly to greet me butt each time she came she always asked about David but most of the times that she came David was not around, but she will still insist on waiting behind but David never paid her any attention. one day when I was chatting with damilola when David arrived but he was arguing with someone on the phone and was so engrossed in this that he walked past us without even noticing us me: what is wrong with him dami: am supposed to ask you, aren't you his best friend me: (I eyed her) aren't you his sister dami: even thou I am his sister, I have never been close to David or Daniel as they were both raised and brought up in the states and mum gave birth to me in Nigeria and she never let me at once go to see them. me: so, you just met David when he returned two years ago dami: yes, as I was still very little when he was around, but i have never seen Daniel before me: what! (i exclaimed) you have never met your brother. dami: (she nodded) i think you should go and check on your best friend me: alright (i stood up and walked to Davids room, i knocked and he told me to come in, i saw him sitting on the bed but he was no longer on the phone and i sat down beside him) who were you speaking with? you sounded very angry with that person. david: its nobody, just forget about it. its just some company issues me: are you now keeping things from me david: no! (i will never want to do that (he said) OK i was speaking with my dad me: so why were you arguing. david: he was frauded by some people over there and he now wants to come back home me: well whats the problem with that? david: the problem is i don't want him to come back. me: why? david: because if he return Daniel will also return (he said angrily before he calmed down and sighed) i am not in good terms with my twin. me: what! david: yes. me: why are you not in good terms? david: my brother is very destructive, he destroyed almost everything, he always interferes in my life (he said) i was once in love with a girl Natasha when i was in the states and she was my love and the first girlfriend i had but but then my brother impregnated her me: what! (i exclaimed with my mouth opened in shock) david: because we were identical, he acted like he was me and went to her and he became intimate with her until he got her pregnant but the most annoying thing is that even when Natasha found out that she had been sleeping with my twin she still continued but when she got pregnant, that was when i found out about what they have been doing, i broke up with Natasha and i became enemies with my brother that day me: but you could have just forgiven them david: yes i could but there is only one thing i hate and that is for people to lie to me or keep secrets from me, i detest such people (as he spoke i remembered all my past and i remembered that i myself was lieing to him and i was also keeping the truth about my past from him, my heart then began to thundered in fear) tumi! (he called me out of my thoughts) me: yes (i stammered out) what did you say david: you were so faraway from me in your mind, what is wrong with you? me: (i managed to smile) nothing david i was just thinking about the exam results, i was wondering when they will be out and how my result will be. (i lied) david: (he laughed) come on that should not cause you to think, am sure that you did well because you prepared well. me: you know what you are right but i cant help but to be nervous, so back to Natasha and your brother, what happened david: oh! i really loved natasha with all my heart and i could have even easily forgiven her and also accept her pregnancy as my own but i hated her because she lied to me and so i left her on her own and my brother and i never spoke again. me: wow i really pity Natasha but i pity you more, you must have been greatly hurt david: i was hurt deeply hurt in fact i was shattered but i am over her now because i have met you me: come on! ( i said smiling as i hit his arm playfully and he laughed) david: but seriously tumininu, you have really tumininu, you have eased my mind and repaired me and i am never sad because you are here with me, you are the source of my happiness but please promise me that i can trust you and that i can always rely on you, promise me that you will always remain truthful to me ( i became stumped) my pov oh my god i know that everything i told him is a lie and now he wants me to promise him that i will be truthful to him, but i cant tell him about my past as i far that i may lose him but if i don't and he later finds out i may as well lose him then, but i cant tell him not now that i have begun to fall in love with him, i have to make sure that he never finds out about my past, i just have to make sure he never finds out. me: i promise david (i said and he smilled to me before he wrapped his arms round me)

Tumininu, you are taking a wrong step ooo... Maybe should try and tell him

Hmmmm watch ya back den tumi, bcus derinde might be upto no good atall especially abt ur past dat u are hiding frm david

is better you tell David about your past than him finding it out through someone else

Tell him the truth now... If he finds out from another source, then be ready to loose him forever

Wrong step u av taken...just tel him d truth o

You should try and talk to him Tell him the truth

Hiding your past from him is not the rite desicion,what if he finds out???...then he will hate you with PASSION!!!

Next plz!

u should have told him d truth

ooh,ve missed alotta episode, Temi can u tag me wen u update new episode, tnx

no kum regret later o

buried under the rocks of lies episode 9 our exam results were soon out and i scored two a's and five b's and the rest were c's, david was very happy with my result that he took me out and made me feel like i was on top of the world, i now began to prepare to write another exams to gain admission. deride applied for a job at david's company and she got taken, i did not know why she choose to apply at his company over all other companies, few weeks after she began to work at his company david's mum sent me to his office at almost the closing time of all staffs, when i got to his office i was greeted by the gate man who knew me well and he told me that david was in his office and i walked straight to his office but before i opened the door i heaved an heavy sign fully knowing that he was unaware of my coming and i wanted to surprise him but as i opened the door, i met the greatest shock of my life, derinde was half naked and she wastring to kiss david who immediately stood up frightened as he saw m and so did derinde. me: what the fuck is going on here? (i asked beeming with anger) david: tumi its not what you think (he said but deride smilled) deride: it is exactly what you think tumi me; (i was filled with so much anger that i immediately attacked deride) you tramp, harlot, bitch. (i called her so many names as i landed blows on her, i was really busting with anger but david prevented me from hitting her any further as he pulled me back to himself and held me tightly david: please tumi calm down, she's not worth all these me: (i looked at deride with so much anger and hatred) i thought you were my friend, what did i ever do to offend you deride: david is not yours, he doesn't belong to you, i love him me: what! (i exclaimed in anger) is that why you decide to become so loose, bitch deride: you are the real bitch (she said making the anger in me to rise up) david doesnt like you but he likes me me: (i couldn't control myself this time around as i broke out of david's grip and rushed to her and we began fighting pulling each other at the hair and at the cloth but then david came inbetween us) david: that's enough, i don't tolerate fights in my presence (he said sternly to the both of us) miss deride you are a disgrace to women and for what you have just done, you know that my company cannot take it so you are fired deride: (her countenance changed and her eyes were filled with tears) no please david, dont fire me, dont send me out of your life david: will you get out before i call the security me: (i joined him) get out deride: you motherfucker david: get out now, security (he screamed as the two officers came in and forced her out and she walked out of the office shamefully and reluctantly, immediately she was led out david turned to me i guess to try to apologise but i just signed him not to) me: no! david: am really sorry tumi me; please david ( i said to him as i walked out of his office and went straight back to the house with a trouble and confused and betrayed heart, how deride do this to me, she and david the man that i love, she is certainly wicked and i promise that i will make her pack, i locked myself in my room until someone knocked at the door and i knew it was david) i dont want to see you david: ( from outside the room) please tumi me: are you deaf i said that i dont want to see you david: let me explain things are not what they seem to be me; just leave me alone (i screamed out angrily as i trhew a pillow at the door) go away! ( i said as i broke down in tears and i buried my face in a pillow and i weeped0 my pov how could derinde do this to me, i saw her as a friend but i should have already noticed that she liked david and she wanted him for herself but i will not let her have david, no way, i am just so angry but i don't know why is it because i caught david and deride? or is it because i am jealous? i just don't understand the anger that i feel

he will find out,maybe ur friend will tell him

hmm,deride shild of Jezebel,,,

Well, I don't really blame derinde cos she asked you nd you told her, David is just ur best friend... I'm sure derinde won't back out easily,, just be careful Tumininu

You better tell David about your past or that your do called friend is going to dig into your past and tell David

I don show. Carry on this one daniel will be coming back. I hope derinde and daniel dont plan against tumi and david

derinde will do anything to have David.

You feel more hurt than this when he finds out you're hiding a secret from him..... Just hear him out and use that opportunity to open up

Like seriously my dear he has nt mention anytin like he loves u or sumtin, why flighting over him? For me o u wuld v walked out d moment u saw them nd watch out his reations nd why callin her those names wat abt u?

it's like i've missed an episode, who's Derinde?

Hmmm.. Am speechless

To be sincere with you I don't blame Derinde one bit She ask you who David is to you and you said he is your best friend so what did you expect

sorry for the late reply, i haven't got data in my system anyway am posting two episode to make up buried under the rocks of lies episode 10 & 11 David opened the door with a spare key and he came to me and i was still weeping with my face buried in the pillow David: please tumininu let me explain what actually happened me: (i stared at him) why will you and my friend David: its not what you think, just let me explain. me: OK go ahead and explain why i caught you and deride in that position David: she tried to seduce me, and she got off her cloths and that when you got in, nothing ever happened between us (he looked into my two teary eyes) i cant lie to you, nothing happened between i and your friend, i am not that type of person, am decent but i apologies for the scene you saw. me: i never really thought that deride will be able to do this, yes i saw that she admired you but she should not have tried that. David: even if she likes me, i don't like her back, i only love one (he said and i faced him fully and he stared into my eyes) i only love you tumininu and no one else me: what! (i exclaimed slightly but still kept staring into his eyes) David: yes tumi i love you, i feel in love with you since the first day that i met you, and the times we spent together has increased my feeling for you ( i just looked at him stumped and not sur of what to say to me, although i was surprised that David loves me but i was glad anyway) i love you tumi more than a friend me: i love you too David (i said but his eyes opened out and i was sure that he was surprised but then he smiled) David: you do? (he asked and i nodded gently) me: i also love you and that was why i was angry on seeing you and deride David: that will never happen again that i promise you (he said as he smiled to me and i reciprocated by smiling and he held my hands and looked into my eyes) will you be my more than a friend? will you be my girlfriend? (i was really so happy i my mind, David was an amazing man and i cannot deny that i have fallen deeply in love with him) me: yes i will (i said with a smile as he wrapped his arms around me and hugged me tightly and i also wrapped my arms round him) David: i promise to always love you tumininu, to always care for and cherish you me: i also promise to love you David (i said as he placed a soft kiss on my forehead) my pov no amount of words could express how i felt that moment, surely i fell in love with David even thou my past had made me swore to never love a man but i have given that promise up now, David is different and i love him more than anyone else in the world and i don't want to ever lose lose him episode 11 very soon David's mum and his sister found out that i and David were now dating, ever since that day that deride was walked out by the security, i haven't set my eyes on her again, i never saw her again not even in our lesson place i later found out that she had failed her exam but did not bother to even pick her result up, to be truthful i felt sorry for deride but again i also felt hatred that she tried to get David long story cut short, i gained admission into the university of lagos (unilag) to study law as i always wanted to do, my relationship with David increased by each day and h continued to love me, then few months after i clocked the age of nineteen and was almost over with my first year, David called me and told me that his father ad his brother where returning to Nigeria and although he was again angry that Daniel was returning, i pleaded with him not to let that put him down but he should only think of his father, we prepared for there return, and David sent one of his drivers to go and pick them up from the airport and very soon they got to the house, a short man maybe in his late fifties came down from the car before another young man that looked exactly like David came out, everything was just so identical, except for the young man's hairstyle and cloths, he had this bad boys hair cut on his head, and he dressed like he was going to the club, they both walked into the house and when the man came in i and damilola knelt down and greeted him, he hugged his daughter and looked at me me: welcome sir! (i said with a smile) David's father: my daughter in law how are you, its so good to see you ( although i was surprised that he called me his daughter in law but i smiled) me: i am fine sir David's father: it is really so good to see you, David has told me a lot about you me: i hope its not anything bad sir David's father: (he laughed)of course not child, at that time David's twin brother walked in and walked straight into the house without greeting anyone but i swear that i saw him look at me, his sister damilola even tried to greet him but he ignored her and just walked in, i can see that this Daniel is very rude, quite unlike his brother David) David's mum: let us all go in (she said breaking the silence as we helped them carry the suitcases up to there rooms, David quickly left after receiving an important call from work, i carried his twin brother suitcase to his room and knocked) Daniel: (from inside) who's there (he said with a bold voice) me: i brought your suitcase ( i said as he came to open the door and i pushed the suitcase to him and turned to leave) Daniel: you are David's girlfriend aren't you me: (i turned back not expecting him to talk to me) yes i am(i said and he smiled and he stared at me from head to toe and smiled) Daniel: i see this time around David picked a really beautiful girl, i see why he loves you so much (what is this guy saying, i just hissed and turned and left but i could tell that he stared at me till i got out of his sight, when David returned i told him about what Daniel said and i could tell that he was angry but he sat me down and held my heads and stared deeply into my eyes) David: tumi please stay far away from Daniel me: David why should i, i mean the guy is already ignoring everyone David: but i saw how he looked at you, i cant let him touch you me: (i laughed) he isn't going to touch me David, he is already with Natasha right? David: no! (he said and i became surprised) me: but you told me that she got pregnant for him David: yes she did but after i broke up with her, Daniel denied her pregnancy and she was forced to abort and he never bothered to see her again, he never liked Natasha, he only just wanted to get in with her which he did me: OMG i didn't know David: that is why i want you to be careful now that he is around (he said to me) i saw the way he looked at you earlier, i do not want to lose you tumi me: you will never lose me god forbid David: tumi i have to protect you from him (you have to go to stay in the hostel) me: what! David: yes at least you have to be away from this house, at least for the time that he is here, he will soon leave. (he stared deeply into my eyes) please tumi me: OK as long as that is what you want then i will do it David: thank you so much tumi ( he said as he hugged me tightly) my pov this arrival of Daniel is making things complicated as i can see that David is very scared, i don't know what Daniel is capable off but i will do as David asked me to do, as long as it will keep away from Daniel. EPISODE 12 LOADING.....

Up to sumtin...next plz

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I really don't know about this One thing I can say about this is for Tumi and David to have a code way of taking to each other especially in Private cos from this description it clearly shows that Daniel can behave like David anytime to get to Tumi but if they have a code way of talking in private It will help Tumi to detect any of daniel's plot

cnti

Be prepared for your friend's revenge

Hmm.. Tumininu, you claim to also love David but still hiding the truth from him, I hope he doesn't find out from an outsider, by then it might be too late. Daniel might try to pretend he is David, just to get u, Tumi u need to be careful sha

Hehehe! The return of Daniel is the begining of fear

Tumininu, you just have to be careful

U ar makin tins more difficult for urslf

buried under the rocks of lies episode 12& 13 the next day i was in the kitchen with damilola when David just walked in and hugged me from the back David: good morning sunshine, how are you? me: am fine (i don't know but David was sought of different today, he did not usually me sunshine or other names, but i waved it off thinking that maybe he wants to start calling that) David: sunshine, i thought about what we discussed yesterday and i think it will be better that you stay at home. me: but you were the one that brought the idea up David: well now i am changing it back me: OK if that is what you want then no problem i will stay back David: thank you so much my princess (he said as he smiled to me) me: anything for you David. David: one more thing my love (wow this is method of calling me names is getting too far) i might change my mind later but i do not want you to mind me sweetheart, just don't leave the house. me: OK! (i said uncertain if i understood why he said so) David: i just want to protect you at all times ( he said as he smiled to me and i reciprocated) me: OK i have heared David: i love you (he pecked me on my cheeks, at that time his mother walked in and he just smiled to her before he walked out of the kitchen but i could see that David's mum countenance was changed and i could see that something was wrong, i tried to think about what it could be but i did not get anything out of that, when we were all done with cooking, we all sat down to eat but i noticed that Daniel wasn't among us but David sat close to his father, now this was getting stranger as David usually sits with me when we eat and we even do eat together but i shoved it off thinking that maybe he just wanted to spend time with his dad, after the breakfast David's mother called me to her room and when i got there i saw the troubled look in her face but she beckoned me to sit down) me: mum why are you looking so worried David's mother: my child you are very innocent in all these me: what do you mean ma? David's mother: David left the house early this morning to attend a business conference and he left a message with me me; (i laughed remembering that i had seen David all through) mum David did not go anywhere, you say him with me in the kitchen right? David's mother: that was not David me: what! (i exclaimed shocked as i opened my mouth wide) what do you mean that is not David. David's mother: i gave birth to my sons and i know who is who, the person you were with is Daniel not David (i moved back in shock as my heart thunder in fear) me: daniel but how he looks exactly like David david's mother: David was not the one that came to you in the kitchen, tumi i know Daniel very well and i know that he is up to no good for dressing up like his brother me: (i looked at her still not believing what i had heared, so i had actually fallen for Daniel's trick, i could have never imagined that Daniel would dress up and act like David in a very short period of time, what kind of a mess did i get myself into, dating a twin is the most complicated problem in the world especially when the other twin is also after you, what am i to do to differentiate between Daniel and my David) episode 13 David's mother: are you OK child! (she said waking me up from my thoughts and i shook my head) me: no! mum i am not OK (i said as tears formed in my eyes) David"s mother: i understand how you feel child me: mum how am i supposed to know who is who, i mean i already fell for Daniel's trick David"s mum: tumi you will have to know what David has that Daniel doesn't have, or the behaviors that he exhibits and his brother doesn't, you know that David has some habits with you, some private things he does with you. those are the way you can differentiate between David and Daniel me: (i sighed) mum Daniel is cunny right? he may adapt to all David behaviors and habit and trick me David's mum: child you fell in love with David and you have spent a lot of time with him, you are the only one who will be able to differentiate between those two apart from me. (she placed her palm on my chest) your heart loves only one, even if there are so many that looks like him, you can still tell who is who me: thank you mum, i will do all that you said David"s mum: you are welcomed my child but just be careful me: OK ma ( i faked a smile and walked out of her room, i was all confused of what to do, why will the creator have to create the one i love to have an exact duplicate, to be sincere i could not have know that that was Daniel, i got to my room and sat down on the bed when i heard a knock on my door) who is there from outside the room David: its me tumininu me: (oh god is this the real David or his twin, i sighed and went to open the door and he came in looking quite exhausted and i looked at him carefully and saw that truly there was a difference in the twins) David: tumi am sorry that i left without telling you, hope mum delivered the message me: yes she did (i said but then i decided to tell him about Daniel's trick) but she was a little bit late with her message David: (he looked at me with two surprised eyes) me: i did not know you had gone out, but Daniel came to me dressed like you and acted like you, he told me that he had changed his mind concerning yesterdays decision and that he wanted me to stay back at home (i could see the anger in his eyes and he clenched his fist tightly) David: but how did you find out that it was Daniel me: mum told me David : (he hit his fist on the wall out of anger) so you could not tell that i wasn't the one? (he asked me and i shook my head) dam Daniel, its like as if i don't even have my own personality me: i am really sorry David but i will not fall for him again David: that bastard sure will not stop until i deal with him (he said out of anger as he walked out of the room and i followed him until he got to Daniels room and without hesitating he barged open the door and before his brother could react he landed blows on Daniel continuously and they both began to land punches on each other, then David's father came alongside the gate man and they pulled the two of them apart David's father: what is wrong with the both of you? ( he said as they were pulled apart and David came to me, i saw that he was bleeding from a cut on the side of his lips and his eyes, Daniel too was also injured) David: Daniel i will no longer allow you to stay in this house Daniel: (laughed) are the owner of this house, this house belongs to dad and i can stay here David: you are a bastard why most you always interfere with my life Daniel: because we are twins David David: i swear if you ever try fooling tumi again, i will not be responsible for what i will do to you ( he said as he held my hand and walked out of the room and back to my room, i immediately got some spirit and some cotton wool to help him clean his injuries) me: why did you get into a fight David (i said as i cleaned his injuries) David: i just would not sit and watch him interfere in my life and my relationship with you me: its OK it will never happen again this i promise you 9 i said but he just held my hands and looked at me) David: tumininu how do you know that if i am the one with you, if i am the true David and not Daniel

buried under the rocks of lies episode 12& 13 the next day i was in the kitchen with damilola when David just walked in and hugged me from the back David: good morning sunshine, how are you? me: am fine (i don't know but David was sought of different today, he did not usually me sunshine or other names, but i waved it off thinking that maybe he wants to start calling that) David: sunshine, i thought about what we discussed yesterday and i think it will be better that you stay at home. me: but you were the one that brought the idea up David: well now i am changing it back me: OK if that is what you want then no problem i will stay back David: thank you so much my princess (he said as he smiled to me) me: anything for you David. David: one more thing my love (wow this is method of calling me names is getting too far) i might change my mind later but i do not want you to mind me sweetheart, just don't leave the house. me: OK! (i said uncertain if i understood why he said so) David: i just want to protect you at all times ( he said as he smiled to me and i reciprocated) me: OK i have heared David: i love you (he pecked me on my cheeks, at that time his mother walked in and he just smiled to her before he walked out of the kitchen but i could see that David's mum countenance was changed and i could see that something was wrong, i tried to think about what it could be but i did not get anything out of that, when we were all done with cooking, we all sat down to eat but i noticed that Daniel wasn't among us but David sat close to his father, now this was getting stranger as David usually sits with me when we eat and we even do eat together but i shoved it off thinking that maybe he just wanted to spend time with his dad, after the breakfast David's mother called me to her room and when i got there i saw the troubled look in her face but she beckoned me to sit down) me: mum why are you looking so worried David's mother: my child you are very innocent in all these me: what do you mean ma? David's mother: David left the house early this morning to attend a business conference and he left a message with me me; (i laughed remembering that i had seen David all through) mum David did not go anywhere, you say him with me in the kitchen right? David's mother: that was not David me: what! (i exclaimed shocked as i opened my mouth wide) what do you mean that is not David. David's mother: i gave birth to my sons and i know who is who, the person you were with is Daniel not David (i moved back in shock as my heart thunder in fear) me: daniel but how he looks exactly like David david's mother: David was not the one that came to you in the kitchen, tumi i know Daniel very well and i know that he is up to no good for dressing up like his brother me: (i looked at her still not believing what i had heared, so i had actually fallen for Daniel's trick, i could have never imagined that Daniel would dress up and act like David in a very short period of time, what kind of a mess did i get myself into, dating a twin is the most complicated problem in the world especially when the other twin is also after you, what am i to do to differentiate between Daniel and my David) episode 13 David's mother: are you OK child! (she said waking me up from my thoughts and i shook my head) me: no! mum i am not OK (i said as tears formed in my eyes) David"s mother: i understand how you feel child me: mum how am i supposed to know who is who, i mean i already fell for Daniel's trick David"s mum: tumi you will have to know what David has that Daniel doesn't have, or the behaviors that he exhibits and his brother doesn't, you know that David has some habits with you, some private things he does with you. those are the way you can differentiate between David and Daniel me: (i sighed) mum Daniel is cunny right? he may adapt to all David behaviors and habit and trick me David's mum: child you fell in love with David and you have spent a lot of time with him, you are the only one who will be able to differentiate between those two apart from me. (she placed her palm on my chest) your heart loves only one, even if there are so many that looks like him, you can still tell who is who me: thank you mum, i will do all that you said David"s mum: you are welcomed my child but just be careful me: OK ma ( i faked a smile and walked out of her room, i was all confused of what to do, why will the creator have to create the one i love to have an exact duplicate, to be sincere i could not have know that that was Daniel, i got to my room and sat down on the bed when i heard a knock on my door) who is there from outside the room David: its me tumininu me: (oh god is this the real David or his twin, i sighed and went to open the door and he came in looking quite exhausted and i looked at him carefully and saw that truly there was a difference in the twins) David: tumi am sorry that i left without telling you, hope mum delivered the message me: yes she did (i said but then i decided to tell him about Daniel's trick) but she was a little bit late with her message David: (he looked at me with two surprised eyes) me: i did not know you had gone out, but Daniel came to me dressed like you and acted like you, he told me that he had changed his mind concerning yesterdays decision and that he wanted me to stay back at home (i could see the anger in his eyes and he clenched his fist tightly) David: but how did you find out that it was Daniel me: mum told me David : (he hit his fist on the wall out of anger) so you could not tell that i wasn't the one? (he asked me and i shook my head) dam Daniel, its like as if i don't even have my own personality me: i am really sorry David but i will not fall for him again David: that bastard sure will not stop until i deal with him (he said out of anger as he walked out of the room and i followed him until he got to Daniels room and without hesitating he barged open the door and before his brother could react he landed blows on Daniel continuously and they both began to land punches on each other, then David's father came alongside the gate man and they pulled the two of them apart David's father: what is wrong with the both of you? ( he said as they were pulled apart and David came to me, i saw that he was bleeding from a cut on the side of his lips and his eyes, Daniel too was also injured) David: Daniel i will no longer allow you to stay in this house Daniel: (laughed) are the owner of this house, this house belongs to dad and i can stay here David: you are a bastard why most you always interfere with my life Daniel: because we are twins David David: i swear if you ever try fooling tumi again, i will not be responsible for what i will do to you ( he said as he held my hand and walked out of the room and back to my room, i immediately got some spirit and some cotton wool to help him clean his injuries) me: why did you get into a fight David (i said as i cleaned his injuries) David: i just would not sit and watch him interfere in my life and my relationship with you me: its OK it will never happen again this i promise you 9 i said but he just held my hands and looked at me) David: tumininu how do you know that if i am the one with you, if i am the true David and not Daniel my pov how can i answer david's question, when there is just so little difference between the brothers, oh heavens please help me

Find something like a necklace or bracelet and give it to David. Tell him to always wear it nd not to be removed from his neck or hand no matter what happens

u ar right @victorious child

The bracelet might be too suspicious since daniel is too cunny...... I guess both tumi and david shuld have a character or a name or even a password in private that dey will use for eachoda.... And david shuld alwys keep in touch, i mean he shuld be calling her regularly even if he is at home....... And there shuld b a slight change in david's mode of dressing dat daniel wont suspect..

Or maybe a small tatoo in david's fingers or palms will do the trick of differentiating btw david and daniel

Or maybe a small tatoo in david's fingers or palms will do the trick of differentiating btw david and daniel... Since she knew david more dan daniel

Remember when Daniel was with you in the kicthen you noticed something was off...maybe their choice of word is difference,or better still look @ them closely there will still b some differences.

you should give him mark where Daniel will not see it

Tell him, if you are not David,, then the real David wud have prevented you from walking away with him

David doesn't call her love names which Daniel just did

This is not a small thing o There must be something u gat to know to differenciate David from Daniel

Daniel is a bastard tumi should be extremely careful

This is a serious matter.. But i think there must be something difference btw them

Hmmmm too bad... I can't really tell what is on my mind now, but am sure you guys can sort it out

buried und the rocks of lies episode 14 ( i looked at david, there was just something that is completely difrent betwee those two, i can feel it although i cant see it, i think its the love i feel, david is quite polite and does not go ahead of himself, he is always trying to make me smile, and he does not call me sweet name as daniel did in the kitchen, daniel does not speak to his sister damilola, the diffrence betwin the brothers is in the way they behave, act and react, it is diffrent) david: tumi whats your responce? me: david sincerely in physical features daniel can duplicate you. david: so how will you know if i am the one or not me:david i know it is you because you are the one i am in love with, the way you speak and care for me is diffrent and no man can copy that. david: am glad that you know me through your heart definitely that must be the one special thing we share love, but we still have to be careful (he looked at me) the things that i will never ask you for but i know Daniel can; is sex, i will never ask you for sex, i want our first time, to be our first night on our wedding day (the way he spoke made me feel alive once again, surely god gave me david as the best thing that could ever happen to me, he is just amazing me each day by and making me to slowly forget my hatred for the world) tumininu that is one thing that you should know me: ok david, that is noted david: (he held my hands and pulled me close enough to him and then placed his mouth on my ear and then whispered) one secret code between us is splendid (he whispered into my ear and i turned to face him as he stared deeply into my eyes) you will always ask me for the code, that is the only way that i know that we ccan be sure. me: ok david (i said as i then finished treating his cuts and i sat beside him and he placed his hands over my shoulders and i rested back on his shoulders, i could feel his heart beat and his body temperature but i was still sure that he was bothered) david: when will you go to the hostel me: as soon as you tell me too david: how about later today me: that is okay david: i hope that you are okay with this decision tumi me: yes although i will miss the house, mum, dami and most especially staying with you david: (he smiles) but i'll come to keep you company at all times. me: you have to do so david: i love you so much me: (smiling) i love you too (later that evening, david took me to the female hostel without letting anyone know except for dami and their mother, this hostel was so tight with security and no male were allowed, that david had to hand me over to the head matron of the hostel but before i went in he held my hands and stared into my eyes) david: despite the fact that you are here should not make you relent on being careful, i know daniel will not stop but i will not let him come to you. me: its okay david we already have done what we ought to david: i will call you through the phone any time that i want to see you, so please do not come out if daniel send's someone to call you me: ok david, its alright david: we will get over this tumi and we will soon be back together (a woman looking quite elderly walked to us and david bowed a little to greet her, yes david had manners so unlike his brother that didn't) tumi meet mrs sharia me: nice to meet you ma mrs sharia: also my pleasure tumininu david: tumi she is the head matron of this hostel and you can always see her for anything me: ok david (i and mrs sharia walked into the dormitory and i looked back and still saw david there and he smiled at me before he waved at me till he was out of sight, mrs sharia took me to my new room, she told me that i had two roommates but they usually returned in the morning, i and mrs sharia became close and she was like a second mother to me, well the first mother is david's mum and my own biological mum does not exist, later that night david called to ask how i was doing and we chatted until i told him that i wanted to go and sleep and he offed the call, i slept off minutes later only to be woken up when my two roommates came back, i checked the time on my phone 6:00am, aren't this girls sleeping at all, but that is not my concern anyway) ist girl: are you David's girlfriend me: (surprised that they knew David and more that i was his girlfriend) ist girl: my name is bidemi and the other lady she is Sharon me: nice to meet you both, i am tumininu bidemi: we know a lot about you, David is my brothers boss me: oh i did not know that Sharon: (this girl just spoke out kind of rudely) don't you know that your boyfriend is a big man, he is well known and a big catch for girls bidemi: and so also is his twin brother, its just that Daniel is not responsible and he is a flirt while David is his complete opposite me; OK girls bidemi: anyway welcome to our hostel me: thanks ( i could see that bidemi was much more nicer than Sharon and she was much more open, while Sharon seem to be a cold person, anyway i am starting a new journey again, in the hostel, i hope that my plan with David will work and Daniel will not be able to find me, i just hope it will work

he just asked the big question Tumi can't answer...

ready to follow to the end

Yeah.. I hope so too Tumininu,, cos Daniel can be so cunning

Chose wisely tumi

buried under the rocks of lies episode 15 i began staying in the hostel, with my new best friend bidemi showing me how to live the hostel life, i asked her why they do not stay in the night and she told me that they always went to club, Sharon and i weren't that close as it seemed that she envied me and David, whenever David came to see me i will notice her watching us from a distance, for as one week at the hostel, i saw no sign of the imitating brother, until one day that i was with bidemi in the school restaurant when Daniel walked in this time around he did not dress up to look like his brother but he was just himself and he came to the table that we were) Daniel: hi tumi me: (what the heck is he doing here) hey Daniel: can i speak to you privately me: no way (i said to him and i then pressed a message in my phone to David telling him that his brother was in my school) Daniel: tumi please just away from this place, i wanna speak to you (he pleaded) bidemi: (to me) come on tumi just hear him out me: i have my reasons bidemi, just leave here Daniel Daniel: its alright (he said as he turned to leave , after he was gone i turned and faced bidemi) bidemi: you know you were too harsh on him, you could have heard him out me: bidemi i know that he is up to no good, besides david has warned me not to go near him bidemi: OK oh (she said) but tumi you are very lucky me: what do you mean bidemi: i mean that David is in love with you and so is his twin brother me: (i laughed) Daniel is not in love with me, he is only after ruing my relationship with David as he did with David's first girlfriend bidemi: i knew about Natasha but that girl caused everything upon herself, it was all her fault, she felt that she could be with the two brothers at once me: why will anyone want to do that, why will she do that bidemi: because David never at once touched her and the girl got horny and let Daniel fuck her me: what but she should not have done that, you know she could have waited for David to be ready bidemi: David has never been ready, did you think Natasha didn't wait for long, i mean they dated for four years and he never at once bleeped her me: David does not believe in pre-marital sex bidemi: i don't think so, i think he is just making excuses to cover up his insufficiency as a man me: (i knew where this girl was heading too and i am not ready to listen any further) please bidemi i love David and for no reason will i like his brother (i said as i stood up) bidemi: ah where are you going me: i have a lecture in thirty minutes ( i said as i walked out of the restaurant but as i got out i saw Daniel standing beside his car, what is he still doing here, i tried to walk on but he walked and got to me) Daniel: please tumi, am not asking for much me: just leave me alone (i shouted at him but he just grabbed my arm and pulled me to face him) Daniel: i asked for just a chance to speak with you and you cant give me that me: listen to me Daniel, leave me alone, stop following me and stop interfering in my relationship with david (i said as i shook my arm off his grip and turned to go0 Daniel: but i will tell David about your past (i turned and faced him shocked) me; what past? ( i asked shocked) Daniel: mini the child sex worker (he whispered into my ears and my heart started to beat faster, how did he know about me, how did he know about my past) mini the girl that has been fucked by several men since the age of thirteen (my heart raced in fear as tears clouded my eyes) me: please stop ( i pleaded with him) Daniel: is the truth hard for you to bear, have you forgotten so soon your past me: how did you find out about that (i said with teary eyes) Daniel: how i found out is none of your business, your business is that i will tell your boyfriend all about your past with proves me: please Daniel do not (i said as the tear flowed freely down my eyes) Daniel: i will keep this a secret if you do all that i tell you me: what do you want Daniel: i want to be your lover (he said and i looked at him with two shocked eyes, now it has happened Daniel is going to use my past to get to me, i cant afford him to tell David as he will never forgive me and at he same time i will lose him forever, now i have finally put myself in trouble, my past has caught up with me when i did not expect it too) EPISODE 16 LOADING...............

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Just tell David the truth because Daniel blackmailing you will never stop

mumu girl instead of her 2 tell David about her past, nd nw Daniel has gt 2 knw about it, he be blackmailing her with that

Chai... Almost came late . . Nice Story . . But just tell, David the truth

Just tell david about your past coz i don't trust that Daniel guy

So U mean u accept to be his lover,i knew u were digging ur own grave by not tellin david

you better tell David before Daniel will tell him because Daniel will never stop until he have you

somebody pls wake this girl up.. is she stupid or something..

U shuld have tell david abt ur past since nah.... Nw daniel is gonna use ur past against u.... Sorry in advance dear

Tel David d truth simple

Just go and david the truth

buried under the rocks of lies episode 16 (no matter what I will not give in to Daniel’s demand) Me: I will not be your lover Daniel: (he laughs) are you ready to lose David, you love him so much don’t you Me: yes I do but I will not be crazy enough as to allow you to blackmail me Daniel: alright if that is your choice then I will go ahead and tell my twin Me (I can’t let Daniel tell David, in fact I don’t even know what to do, but David must not find out from someone else about my past, I have to gather up courage and tell him, then I will plead with him to forgive me but I cannot be Daniel’s lover) Daniel; what’s your decision Me: I just can’t be your lover, ask for another different thing but not to be cheat on David Daniel; it seems that you do not get what I am saying, I like you and I want you (he said) are you in or I should go and tell my brother about the bitch that you really are Me: please give me sometime please to decide, I will do as you say but just give me time Daniel: that great (he said as he came closer to me) I will not tell David but you only have till tomorrow morning to decide, anything later than that will mean David is gonna hear about it Me; thank you Daniel: I am watching you (he said as he walked away and I broke down in tears, how was I going to tell David all about me, how am I going to face him, is he going to forgive me or will he just leave me alone as he did with Natasha, a tap on my back brought me back to life and it was bidemi) Bidemi: tumi what is wrong with you or rather what did Daniel say to you that made you cry Me: I am in big trouble bidemi Bidemi: what! (she exclaimed) what trouble Me: it’s a long story (I said as I wiped my face) Bidemi: alright lets go to the hostel and talk about it in private ok (she said and I nodded gently, we both walked back to our hostel and when we got to the room and bidemi made sure that no one could hear us, she asked me to tell her everything, and I told her everything about my past and how I am hiding it from David and to the fact that Daniel is blackmailing me) Bidemi: you mean you kept all these from David Me: yes! (I said as tears rolled down my cheeks) Bidemi: you have to tell him, you have to tell david, you cannot give in into Daniel’s demands, he is blackmailing you but you can only stop him if you say the truth Me: I know bidemi but I don’t know how to tell David about all these, he is never going to forgive me and he will hate and I will lose him Bidemi: tumi if David really loves you then he will appreciate the truth and forgive you 9she said to me) but I will never advice you to give in to a blackmailer and most especially his own brother, you can’t do exactly what Natasha did, so it’s better you tell him the truth Me; but how am I to tell David Bidemi: you just must summon up courage and tell him, then leave the rest to God. (I have never at once believed in god but as I am in this situation I just really need to have hope that if I tell David, he will forgive me) Me: bidemi what he never wants to see me again Bidemi: do you have faith in God (she asked) because you need to believe and have faith that god will touch David’s mind and he will not take it hard on you but you must be quick and go and tell him right now Me: ok (I sighed as I was ready to do anything just to get Daniel away from blackmailing me) Bidemi; are you ready tumi, I know you can do this but just have courage David is not a monster that he will swallow you up, remember that he loves you Me: thank you bidemi(as I spoke we both heard a knock on the door and I became frightened, who could this be, Sharon would not return until the other morning, so who could it be) Bidemi: who is that? (she shouted and the person outside answered) Person: David is here to see tumi (as the person mentioned David’s name my heart skipped a bit and I became terrified, what was he doing here now? And most especially how am I going to face him, then my phone ranged and I saw that it was him calling but I was too terrified to pick the call)

This girl na mumu gan... Abeg gerrara here jhoor

this girl na original mumu

Tell him . . Get the courage

See what you put yourself into??...you naw have two options 1. Approach David and tell him about your past, he will definatly get angry but Daniel won't trouble again. 2. Keep your secret from David and be ready to be Daniel's whore...the choice is yours

buried under the rocks of lies episode 17 bidemi: tumi he is here use the opportunity to tell him me; ok! (i said as i left the room and went outside there and i saw david there standing beside his car and he was pressing something in his phone but he soon look up and smiled to me) david: i thought you did not want to see me me; i am sorry david; that's ok, i saw your message and that's why i came, is he still here? (he asked making me to remember that i had texted him when daniel came) me; no he isnt but (i must tell him now no other time will be the best) david i want to speak to you concerning something very important (i said as he looked at me and i could tell that he saw the fear in my eyes) david: ok then lets go into the car ( he said as we both got into the car, after we both sat i turned and faced him) so what is it? (he asked as he searched my eyes) me: david i have something to tell you about my past (i said) david: your past me: yes! (i said as my heartbeat increased) david: go ahead then tumi me; david i have being lying to you concerning my past, i am not who you think i am (i said as he listened with rapt attention) i never knew my parents david, so it was a lie when i told you that my parents died when i was little, because i never met them, i do not know anything about them (i paused to see his reaction but he remained adapt ) i was raised by a brothel owner (as i said that he raised an eyebrow and that was his only reaction) she was mama d, i lived with her but when i was thirteen her only son raped me (i said as he turned to me with two shocked eyes and tears lowing began to drop down my eyes, i expected him to say something but he didn't and so i decided to continue) when i reported him to his mother she told me that he had only opened me up and that i was ready to join the other girl and that day i became a child sex worker (i said as i stopped to catch my breath and i could see that david's eyes were also teary but he did not react to this but just looked to the front) i began sleeping with men at the age of thirteen, with so many men, but at the age of 18 that's when i decided to leave the brothel because i did not want to continue living that live (tears were now pouring freely down my face but david still showed no reaction or emotion) and that day that you met me was when i left abeokuta and came to lagos. david: why did you keep all that from me me; i did not know how to tell you david, i was scared that i might lose david; you know how much i hate liars (he said and he turned to face me) i told you about this tumi, i trusted you me: am sorry david, please forgive me (i pleaded amidst crying) david: why are you just telling me this me: i wanted to tell you since but then daniel found out about it and told me that he will tell you, he said that he will keep it a secret if i become his lover david: so you decided to tell me because my brother wanted to blackmail you (he shouted at me angrily, i have never seen him this angry) so you would not have told me, you are a faker. me: no i am not david i love you david: i trusted you and i never kept anything from you, why will you this to me me: i am really sorry david, i did not mean to keep it from you david; its like i dont even know you tumi (he said as he looked down) get out of my car me: what! (i said not actually believing if i heard him right) david: get out of my car me: david i am sorry david: out of my car (he screamed out still looking down and i just opened the door of his car and got down and almost immediately he started his car and drove out speedily while i broke down in tears, i am sure that he will never forgive me, i then began to wish that none of my past should have happened to me, i sank down to the ground still weeping until i felt someone's hand on y shoulder, i looked up and saw bidemi) bidemi: it's ok get up tumi you did the right thing me: he told me to get out of his car, he was so angry bidemi: he will need to get all this into him, how else did you expect him to react me: i don't think he will ever forgive me, i lost the man i love bidemi; no have faith in God tumi me: (nodded gently as she helped me up and we went into the hostel)

I warned you earlier but you didn't listen.. Well its your cross to bear

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this girl wan make this story dull for me oo... you better tell him now or ruin yourself

You did the right thing sweetie

Just tell him the truth

you did the right thing. he will still come around

Sorry ohhhhh

You did the right thing by telling him your past Daniel won't be able to blackmail you again He may be angry at you now but he will surely come around

Abeg tell him jor

Even if you give in to his demands he will still expose you! Next please!

u just gave Daniel d evidence he needs. u told ur story 2 d wrong brother gal!

You did the right thing Tumininu.. Am sure he will come back

hmmmmmm

this gal get nut 4head... Temi tnx 4 d call

Girl this your mumu don dey too much o...

aeeeeeyyyya

yea! tumi u just did the right thing

He will certainly come back

You did the right....just wait for him to digest all what you've told him just like Bidemi said,i know he will surely come around.

Just tell him!

You did the right thing

He will come back, is just the shock! Next plz!

You did the right thing

sorry for the late reply buried under the rocks of lies episode 18 when i got into the hostel, bidemi went out to get some recharge card in order to call david, and i was left alone in the room, i was till weeping about what david had said to me, did i do the wrong thing by telling him the truth, i was still lost in my thoughts when my phone rang and i ran to it thinking it was david calling but it was a strange number and i picked) me: hello caller: so you decided to go against me tumi (i then knew immediately that it was daniel) me: so you do not have anyting to use against me daniel: its very right that you have told david about it but i still want you to be my lover me: i don't have any deal with you anymore so just stop this (i said angrily to him as i wanted to cut the call) daniel: i have my men pointing a gun straight at your boyfriend's head me: what? daniel: switch to video call (he said as i quickly switched to video call and i saw david at a far distance drinking in a bar i guess, he was lost in his thoughts and i could see that he was crying, then daniel moved the video to his side and there was a man aiming directly at david's head and my heart thundered in fear) me: please daniel do not shot david, i beg of you (i pleaded with tears) daniel: then meet me at sir lankars hotel in five minutes, do not try anything funny or else david's head will be blown to pieces (he said) your time starts now (he offed the call and i stood up in fear as i looked at my phone 5;02pm, i could not let daniel kill david, i will do everything to protect the man i love, i picked up my bag and ran out of the room and then out of the hostel, i ran as far as i could because the hotel was two streets away, i hanged down a bike and hoped on it, i got there at exactly four minutes 28 seconds and i came down from the bike and gave him his pay before i ran into the hotel and as i got in i saw daniel standing at a side and i went to him) you are just in time me: please call off the killer daniel: be patient girl, i have to make sure that you do not turn against me me: just call off the shot please daniel: okay but that will be when we are two minutes in having a serious fuck me: please daniel, call off the shot, i will not go against you (i pleaded) daniel: (he dials his phone in video call) matar hold on for now (he said as the killer lowered his gun and daniel off the call) lets go (he said as he held my hand but i hesitated a bit and he turned to face me) remember that my man is only on hold, he only lowered his gun (he said to me as i became alarmed and i walked with him to the hotel room) me: please daniel (i pleaded with tears) you can still let me go, i love david and i am ready to anything for him, please do not do this to me daniel: (he grabbed me fiercely and pushed me to the bed, but before i could get up he got to me) i will never change my mind not now not ever (he said as he began to kiss my neck but i weeped and pleaded for him to not fuck me but he still went ahead and tore my dress but suddenly we heard a voice) voice: daniel do not move (the voice said as daniel froze and i also stopped in fear) stand up from the girl, you are under arrest (daniel stood up from me and i saw three police men at the door and they pointed there guns at daniel, i curled myself up in fear as i tried to cover up my nakedness, daniel was handcuffed by the policemen and was taken out by two of them while the remaining police man came and held me up and took me out, as i got out i saw various police vans outside and i saw daniel taken into one while i was also taken into another one, i wondered what had happened how the police got to know about this and much more if david was ok, but never the less i am glad that i got saved) EPISODE 19 LOADING....

u did d ryt tin

seatbelt fastend for dis ride. Can feel d excitement buildin up

d guy wil come bak so chill and figure out wat to do wen u leav hospital

Hmm.. But who wud have alerted the police

Who could have called the police?

you ar just friends? Den dont blame deride wen she starts gunnin for david coz she is certainly goin to do dat

Thank God u are save

u did the right thing dear .Don't worry David wil still come around

Nice one

buried under the rocks of lies episode 19 i was taken to the hospital and checked and the doctor told the police officers that i was fine, but was still in shock, it was then that i noticed that i did not say anything at all ever since i got rescued, bidemi came in to see me after the officers left my room and immediately she saw me she hugged me tightly bidemi: i am so glad that you are okay, we were all scared me: but i am fine bidemi: why did you leave without informing me, you know Daniel could have gotten away with what he wanted to do me: i am so sorry bidemi but i had too, David's life was in danger, he wanted to kill him and i could not let that happen bidemi: i understand at least we should be grateful to God (she said as she sat beside my bed) we wouldn't have if not for Sharon, she was in the bathroom and she overheard all your conversation (wow i didn't even know that i wasn't alone but i am still glad anyway that someone heard me) she immediately called me and told me everything and i texted David that his life was in danger explain to him that there was a man aiming to shot him in the bar that he was, i also told him that Daniel is bent on continuing the blackmail but that this time around it was with his life me: how is David? (i asked as i remember the video and everything) bidemi: David is fine, he was the one that informed the police. (when she was speaking two men came in, one a police officer and the other was not in uniform) man: miss tumininu my name is detective ogunshade and this is inspector Ezekiel, we are here to ask you a few questions concerning the incident. me: OK i am ready detective: can your friend please excuse us bidemi: of course i i will step outside (she then left) detective: we have Daniel in our custody but we need to find his other accomplice the one who gave him information about your past, do you have anyone who you think might have the motive to want to reveal your past to David. me: (i thought for a while) i don't think that anyone will do that to me in Lagos, no one knew my past here. detective: it doesn't matter as the person might have moved from where you were before, so think very well me: the only people i knew where mama d, her girls and her son john (i said and the detective whispered something to the inspector who nodded and mentioned john) detective: we will get mama d and the girls and her son for interrogation. thank you for your cooperation inspector: but miss tumi did you know that what you did back there was very risky me: yes i knew inspector: what if your friend wasn't in the bathroom, we would not have known where you were going too and why me: wait (i said as i looked at them, they were speaking as if they had already been watching me) that means you have all been watching me inspector: yes we were watching you under the orders of Mr David, who told us that you were being blackmailed me: i don't get it but how did he do that he was very angry with me inspector: being angry did not mean that he has stopped protecting you, he abides by the law in this country and he know how much danger that a person in blackmail can face, so he informed us immediately you told him, and we moved in position me: so David brought you all inspector: yes! but we have to also thank you for delaying Mr Daniel's man from shooting David, because he was not protected at that time but do not do so next time because it is very risky anyway we managed to arrest the man but we need to get the person who gave Daniel all your information me: please do so inspector: please excuse us miss tumininu me: you are excused (they both left and i did not know but i felt in me that David still cared for me because despite all that i kept from him, he never played with my security and always had my back, but i am still not sure off is if he will still want to love me and forgive me after finding out the kind of bitch that i am)

Who tipped the police off? My guess, bidemi? Maybe she probably saw her going out and followed her

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Wow... David is so sweet despite everything he still provided security for tumi. I am so happy at tot sharon was a bitch but she just proved me wrong. I think derinde could be the one to have told daniel about tumi's past

Wow... David is so sweet despite everything he still provided security for tumi. I am so happy nothing happened to tumi i always tot sharon was a bitch but she just proved me wrong. I think derinde could be the one to have told daniel about tumi's past

how come the police know abt it

I think derinde gave out d info of ur past to david

i dey suspect bidemi or natasha

David is a great man

Who could have told Daniel about your past

@wyse-one u are correct it might be her

you no get sense at all! He just use dat to get to you! next please!

that serves that heartless Daniel right

Hmmmmm . . Who could have alerted the police . Waiting to find out

Wow.. DAVID is such a nice guy So despite the way Sharon acts towards you,, she still has a good heart . Next please

Your friend Derid might be his accomplice

I fink its abidemi dat saw u wen she went 2 buy d card

Tnk God for u

Buried under the rocks of lies Episode 20 The police interrogated Daniel and after so much torture he told them that John was behind the truth of my past, I stayed in the hospital for one more day before I got discharged, I returned back to my hostel, I did not hear anything from him and I decided not to call him or see him in other to give him time, if we were really in love with each other and we were destined to be together then definitely he will forgive me and we will get back together, few days after I was discharged from the hospital I got a call from the police station telling me that John wanted to have a word with me, because their court day was the following week,I left for the station with Biden and Sharon but I was led alone to the visitors room, John was brought out and even on seeing him was I disgusted, and I will never forget what he did to me, I wouldn't have come here if not because my friends persuaded me to hear him out anyway make I hear what he want to say, he sat down opposite me and I saw that he was handcuffed but I did not feel any pity for him. John: mini I wanted to tell you something that you have been wanting to know Me: go ahead I don't have the whole Day John: I know that you have always hated me and I know the reason why you do and even if I plea for forgiveness, I know you wouldn't forgive Me: say whatever you wanna say John: it's about your parents (he said as I looked at him, how many years have I wanted to hear about my parents but never knew anything about them, I have even learn to accept my fate) Me: I dont have any parent John: you do Me: then where are they and why did they abandon me John: they did not abandon you as you were stolen from your parents when you were still a toddler Me: what (I exclaimed with my mouth wide open in shock) I was stolen John: more like you were taken Me: by who John: my father and his friend took you from your parents when you were just eight months old, I don't know about the whole story, all I know is that my dad brought you when I was six and gave you to my mother Me: (I was shocked and stumped on my seat) Then who knows about it John: my mother mama d know everything Me: (I stood up) where is she John: the brothel was raided by the police and everyone were arrested including her, she Is in the female prison Me: (I turned to go) John: please mini forgive me (he said but I just hissed and walked out, intended to find mama d and make her tell me all about my parents, I have to find them at all cost)

Maybe.. David's parents is ur parents too nd if I'm right dat means David is ur brother.. Wow,, this is really getting sweet

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tanks for the beep @denciebabe

getting more interesting thanks @denciebabe

This is really buried under d rocks of lies, thanks @denciebabe.

Be sure that the police will not harm you... But you fvcked up when you told David that his bro was blackmailing and that was why you decided to tell him the truth... Anyways, lets see what prompted the police

If David's parent are your parent then it literally means your are Daniel and David sister Ew

Thanks @denciebabe for the tag

@dencygirl thanks tagging all Buried under the rocks of lies Episode 21 I went with my friends to the female detention center and saw the head warden, I told her that I wanted to speak with one of the detainees and I told her that it was mama d I wanted to see, she took me to the visitors room and I sat Down and waited a bit before mama d was led out, I couldn't even believe at first that she was the one, until when she got closer and then I saw she was the one, she looked so lean and sick and her face was battered up with bruises, I could not still believe that she was the same woman that I grew up knowing. She sat opposite me and I stared at her the warden had already told me that I just had fifteen minutes to speak with her. Me: I came here to know the truth about my parents. Mama d: your parents Me: yes! Who are my parents and were are they Mama d: your parents are not far from you, my late husband brought you when you were eight months old, my husband was an armed robber at that time but your mother was his ex girlfriend but she left him when he joined bad gang and married your father, you were not their first child, you had two brothers and a sister, my husband took you because you looked like your mother and your arrival to the family brought so much joy to them all. Me: you said my parents are not far from me Mama d: let me finish the story mini, my husband had a change of heart months later and wanted to return you back but he could not as the cold hands of death cuddled him away leaving me stuck with you and I hated you because my husband loved your mother till he died Me: enough of the story (I said as I have heard enough) where am I parents Mama d: I have to show you to your parents, I can't tell you who they are but I will return you to them (at that time the warden came telling us that our time was over and mama d stood up and the warden wanted to lead her in but she had not yet told me who my parents were and I needed to know) Me: tell me who my parents are Mama d: (she just looked back) I have to take you to them (she was lead inside and I just wondered why she insisted on taking me herself to my parents, I went to head warden and told her what she wanted to do and the head warden notified me that mama d had previously asked for permission and that she will be given an hour tomorrow and she will be able to take me to my true parents. I thanked her and walked back to my friends, I was wondering in my mind who my parent were and why mama d insists on taking me there herself, tomorrow I will finally meet my parents and my family) EPISODE 22 LOADING....

Plz let David not be her brother

Next... I'm sure David's parents are ur parents too

hmm,

hmmmmmmm,Daniel z an asshole

Wow.. This is getting more interesting.. Thanks for the beep @denciebabe

let it not be what am thinking o

Episode 22 i told my friends about the progress on finding my parents but sharon commented telling me that when mama d mentioned that i have three siblings, daniel, david and damilola are siblings and i could be their sister but i told her that god will not let that be because david can never be my brother and daniel too can't be, well we waved that idea off and we returned to our hostel but when sharon went to the club and bidemi slept off i remained awake thinking about all that mama d said, i was thinking about how it would have been if i wasn't stolen from my parent, maybe i could or might have lived a better life, but all has happened and all i want now is to find my parent after 19 years, then the thought came into my mind concerning what sharon had said about the probability that david, daniel and damilola were my siblings both i then waved that thought off, it could never be possible and i don't want it to be, then i went to bed, after thinking about david, i have not still heard from him and although i badly miss him i just want to give time and let destiny take its course over our love, the next afternoon i left with bidemi to the station where mama d was already prepared and so where the security that were going with her, i guess she had already told them where we were going to because immediately we got there, we got into their van and we set out, my suspicion began when we drove into david's street and my heart increased its beat when we got to david's gate and the gate man opened the door as we drove in, i could gather from all the cars packed there that they were all in well all except daniel who is in jail, we got down and i looked fro but in my mind i wished that sharon's word will not be true as a lot of things will go wrong in my life, when we got in i saw david's father sitted down with david's mother and dami also sitting stood up as soon as she saw me and she came to hug me) dami: tumi we have missed me: i have also missed you too dami (i said then david's parent stood up) david's mum: ngozi what are you doing in my house (she said to mama d, well i guess they already knew each other from long ago because i never knew that mama d was ngozi) after all that you and your husband did to my family, you still have the rights to come to my house (david's mum said angrily, i have never seen her this angry before, then the inspector spoke out) inspector: mrs odetola calm down please, this detainee is hear to say some truth and it will be good if you hear her because she has limited time (he said to david's mum who just nodded and looked at mama d) david's mum: so what do you want to say mama d: my husband was the one who too your second daughter david's mum: what (she exclaimed) mama d: but when he took her, he then faked the news that he had thrown her into the river and drowned her, he did that so you would not be able to find your daughter (as she was speaking my mind went totally away accessing every information that comes out) david's mum: so where the heck is my daughter, where did your husband take my little girl too (she shouted at mama d) where is she mama d: (she is here (she pointed at me at first i thought she was pointing at someone else but then i realised she was pointing to me and then i heard a loud "what" and i looked back and saw david, he was so shocked that he was glued to his feets, was he there all the time, i also became shocked so i was their stolen daughter) david's mum: (she pointed at me with her hands shaking in fear and i could see tears forming in her eyes) she! tumi is my daughter mama d: yes she is the eight month old twin sister of this daughter you have with you (she pointed at dami, what the fuck dami and i are twin, its impossible we don't even look alike, definitely this woman is talking rubbish) i am not lying about this kemi, my husband took your daughter and brought her to me, but he died two months later after been in an accident, i then deliberately refused to give you back your child (her voice had become cloudy and her eyes were now teary) because my husband always loved you over me and he would do anything for you, he thought of you till his last breath and so i made sure that i will make your daughter pay for that, i made her into a prostitute, at an early age because i know how much pain it will cause to you finding your daughter as a prostitute (she said and then i realised that she was referring to me, so that was why she always hated me, i knew there was more to her hatred for me but what i cant still accept is that the odetola are my family it just could not happen) david's mum: why did you do all this, why? (she asked as tears rolled down her eyes and everyone else just watched like as if it was a drama, david was stumped shocked and i could not tell what he was going through because he just remained blank but i could tell what was going on with me, i felt sad, happy and angry at the same time, i finally find my family after nineteen years but then they turn out to be the family of the only man that i love, all this truth is just getting me crazy, i don't think i can handle anything more, i can not) EPISODE 23 LOADING.......

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So what are you going to do now

so dami nd tumi are twins

like seriously tnx @denciebabe 4 d call fresh update here

nawa o

Hmmm

:o:o:o:o:o:o:o

:o:o:o:o:o:o:o.... What are you gonna do now???

This is serious

Am just short of words o.. I wish David is adopted so you two can continue your love life

Hmmm, next plz!

Buried under the rocks of lies Episode 23 Mama d: I did all of this to make you suffer David's mum:you did a very bad thing, this is not only to make me suffer but this two children that love each other (she said with tears as she looked at me and David behind me) you could have just chosen to kill me than to do all this (she said bitterly but David's father came to her) David's dad: it's ok please (he said to his who then calmed down and walked to me and she placed her palms on my cheeks) I should have known that you were my daughter, I also loved you ever since David brought you and I have long been saddened over the lost of dami's twin, and I always prayed to God that one day I will find my baby girl but I don't know why God decided to do all these (she weeded as she looked at me, at that moment I kept on pushing away the thought of her being my mother, I can't let it be) Mama d: forgive me mini, forgive me kemi for all I did to you (but this only angered me as I left David's mum and rushed to her) Me: you are a wicked woman and I pray that you never have peace because you don't deserve it Mama d: I am sorry mini, if I could only turn back the arms of time Me: but you can't(I screamed at her as the inspector came to me and pulled me away from her, I turned back to where David was standing but he wasn't there and suddenly fear gripped me) where is David? (I asked as we all headed a car drive out roughly and we all went out only to see david drive out of the house roughly) David's mum: somebody please stop him (she screamed out and before I knew what was happening my heart started to thunder in fear and my eyes began to spin, I did not understand what was going on so I held on tightly to something as my eyes started to spin faster and faster, bidemi ran to me and I headed her call my name until my grip on whatever I was holding slipped and I slumped down and my eyes closed shut, I could hear a lot of people calling my name but slowing their voices reduced and then flashes and images of the past went by in my mind and I could see nothing or hear anything until all went blank) Episode 24 LOADING.....

thank God no s-x involved

wow! first to comment

I hope David doesn't harm himself ooo

David don't try anything stupid

David don't harm yourself o

Thank God David was against premarital sex Plz let David not harm himself

hope David did not do anything stupid

David no kill yourself o! Next plz!

David should be safe o

Hmmm wat a life.

Maybe they should call David on the phone I really hope he is Okay

hmmm

Hope David will be fine??

Hmmmm...Na Wa oooo . . I really hope David is okay

So David is you blood bro? Wonders shall never seize

David u can kill yourself oooo but life moves on

david pls dnt do anytin stupid oo

buried under the rock of lies episode 24 i woke up to a beep sound and i opened my eyes and saw a doctor beside my bed and i turned to the other side and saw bidemi bidemi: she is awake doctor (she said to the doctor who immediately came to check me, he felt my heart pulse and check my eyes) doctor: miss tumi welcome back to the world (he said as he romoved something from my face and it was then that i noticed that i was wearing a gas mask) can you breath (he asked and i nodded gently considering that i could breath air, but i was still wondering what i was doing in an hospital, the doctor injected something into my drip and said somethings to bidemi before he left the room) bidemi: i am glad that you are awake tumi me: what am i doing here (i said as i tried to remember what last happened, then all of a sudden i remembered everything) how is david? (i asked as i remembered that david had drove out roughly and my friend smiled slightly) bidemi: he is fine (she said and i felt a little bit relieved) me: what about everyone else and what really happened to me bidemi: you passed out and went into coma, we all rushed you to the hospital as we were all scared me: how long did i go into coma bidemi: it has been three days (she said as my eyes popped out shock, so it was true that someone could sleep for that long, i was so close to death, i could have died definitely something called me back to life and at that moment i began to believe that God actually existed) me: but where is david now (i asked but i could see the change in her face but she quickly smiled to cover it up) bidemi: he...is...em (she began to stammer and at once i knew that she was lying and definately something was wrong) me: bidemi don't lie to me, where is david? what happened to him (my heart beat faster and faster) bidemi: tumi you are just recovering, believe me he is ok (she said but i could still tell that she was lying) me: where is david, if you want me to be calm then i want to know where david is, i wanna see him bidemi: ok (she said dejectedly as she stood up and walked outside and i saw her speaking to some nurses and they brought a wheel chair into the room with bidemi behind them) tumi i will take you to david ok, just promise me that you will be calm me; i will be, i just wanna see him (i said to her as she nodded and the nurses helped me up from the bed and unto the wheelchair and they wheeled me out of my room and down the hall way until we got to a department "ICU" and i was wheeled into the room and i saw david's dad and dami at the waiting room, dami looked worried but she smiled anyway to me, i began to think that something was terribly wrong, i was wheeled on until we got to a room and i saw david's mum outside the room and i could see that there were tears in her eyes but she came to me) david's mum: why didn't you tell me that she was awake bidemi bidemi: immediately she woke up she demanded to see david no matter what i said me; please can i see david david's mum: ok child ( she said as the door opened and i was wheeled in and i could see a man on the bed with a lot of drips connected to him and at once fear gripped me as i got closer i saw that it was david, and my heart thundered in fear) david! (i screamed out as i touched him, his body wasn't moving, but his chest was going up and down slowly at least he was breathing, then i looked forward and i saw that he had some stitches on his face and some bandages on his arms and his left leg was plastered and their was a gas mask on his face, i looked at him and i noticed that tears rolled down my face, i hated to see him hurt but now he was hurt and injured all over and he looked terrible) what happened to him? (i asked looking back at bidemi and david's mum, what could have happened to him i wandered in my mind as i looked back at david on the bed) EPISODE 25 LOADING..........

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Eya...d truth rili hurts

I pray David recovered

What exactly happened to him??

Where is David going now

i really hope David will recover

its not easy for him

its not easy for him...

Was he involved in an accident?

Get well soon David... Calm down Tumi, all is well

David was involved in an accident.. I wish him quick recovery oooo

he has accident nah.. abi what else

I guess David was involve in a car accident

Geeezzz... I pray he recovers fast

Buried under the rocks of lies Episode 25 David's mum: he was involved in an accident, he drove off the road,he wanted to kill himself Me: how long has he been like this Bidemi: for three days just like you were and we are hoping that he will wake up soon David's mum: child you need to rest Me: no!(I knew that they wanted me leave David, but I am not leaving him alone, I will stay with him until he wakes up, I do not care if we are brother and sister as this doesn't change the way I feel towards him) David's mum: tumi both of u matter to me, don't you know how much pain that I feel when three of my four children are suffering, you and David and Daniel are hurting very much Me: (I looked at her) I don't want to be your child (I said as tears gathered in my eyes, I couldn't just accept her as my mother, I even wished that I hadn't knew the truth, I actually preferred the lies at least I will have less troubles to worry about) David's mum: please my daughter, I have longed so much for you Me: I am not your daughter please, I don't want you to be my mother David's mum: it's ok my child, I understand how hurt you are, (she said as she walked out and I moved closer to David and I held his hands as tears gathered in my eyes and I remember the first time we met and all out time together, why is Destiny playing with us, why is life so unfair to me despite all that I have been through, I still can't be happy, I have always wished to know my parents but now I wished that I never knew them, no amount of words could describe how I felt and I know David must have felt the same way and then decided to kill himself, I squeezed his palm lightly and i hopped in my mind that he will wake up and be alright, I felt a gentle hand on my shoulder and I looked back and saw Bidemi) Bidemi: let us pray for David Me:(I never believed in prayers but now I just need to hold on to something, I need peace in my life so I nodded and Bidemi held my hands and told me to say amen to her prayers and I said it until she was through praying, she left me and I laid beside David on the hospital bed and stared at his face until I feel asleep, I woke up later to some one speaking to David's father, I did not open my eyes but I listened to what they said) Doctor: we have the results of the DNA test David's dad: what does it read Doctor: why do you think that David and daniel aren't your children David's dad: because my wife's first child was a boy but that baby was born dead and in the same hospital another woman gave birth to twin boys but she died and I knew my wife will not handle losing a child, so I took the twin boys Doctor:how could you do that( I couldn't believe what I was hearing and I felt as if there were more truths to be told, then suddenly I felt David move his hand that I was holding and I thought as well that the doctor and David's dad noticed as well as they stopped talking, but David did not move his hand again until he squeezed my hands and I opened my eyes) Me: David(I called to him as he opened his eyes slowly) David's dad: he's awake!(he exclaimed as the doctor came to him and checked him although he was been attended to by a doctor he still held my hand, I am so happy that he is awake)

thank God

interesting so David nd tumi are not bro nd sis

Wow...rili interestin...more truth still need 2 b told

na wa oh

I know the answer, is accident! Next plz!

That mean they can date each other

Logical! Drove out roughly, without care then he had accident. Simple... he was devastated You turned out to be her sister. Too much for him to swallow I guess

Interesting . . That means they can both be in a relationship

The case will be set in places

Hmmm

Hmmmm getting interesting

Hmmm.. So they are not related after all

Writing a story like a typical nollywood movie

hmmmm...gettin more interestin nd thanks @temioluwa for d update

buried under the rocks of lies episode 26 (david was attended to by the doctor, he still looked weak and in pains and he didn't speak to anyone, the doctor told me to excuse them and i left along with david's dad, oh how glad was i that david was awake but i was more relieved that david and i aren't siblings although i do not know the full story as they stopped talking as soon as david awoke.) david's dad: child you must be hungry as you haven't eaten a thing since (oh yes i just remembered that my stomach has been growling for some time now like an hungry lion) me: no i am not hungry (i said although god knows and my tummy knows how hungry i am but i will not eat until david eats with me, boy have i missed him so much and yet despite all that has happened between us, it only made our love stronger and god has always destined all these to be) david's dad: tumininu i know that you heard everything that i and the doctor said (wow i was just thinking in my mind about how to tell him that i overheard him but he just made it easier for me by confessing) me: does mum know about this (i asked as he shooked his head, i was forming an angry person but deep down oh was i so happy that there is hope for i and david but i just have to form and be angry so he would tell it to everyone else mostly mum, dami and the twins) david's dad: i have held this secrets for 25 years and it will crush your mother's heart if i tell her that the sons that she raised for twenty five years aren't her sons, she will never forgive me and even if she does daniel and david will not (he said sadly) me: its better that you tell the truth it mustn't come from me, it has come from you. tell them all david's dad: cant we just keep this a secret child (what is this man saying, i that have been looking for hope for my love and i get one and will i now bury it up, no way!) me: not a chance father. (i said this time really angry) if you wouldnt tell them then i will david's dad: please my daughter do not do that, i have been with your mother for so long, and we have been through so much, but she loves you all and the boys are are best possessions, she'll de if she finds out me: then let her die, at least she'll die with the truth, you have buried us all under lies, now open it all, definitely there will be consequences (i said as i looked at my father) but dad believe me its worth it to tell the truth, we were almost destroyed by lies, do you want that to continue? (he shook his head, at that time the doctor came out ) doctor: tumi david wants to see you (as the man said that david wanted to see me my joy became full and i stood up happily but then i turned back to my father and gave him that look that he should tell the truth and i went inside the room, i saw david sitting upright on the bed, although he was still looking pale, he was much more lively and he soon noticed me and he smiled to me and i ran to him and i hugged him, oh how much have i missed him that tears began to form in my eyes, tears of joy i guessed) me: david why did you try to kill yourself david: believe me tumi i just just wanted it all to be a dream and to end me: but you didn't think about me (i said this time tears flowed freely down my cheeks) what did you think will happen to me if you had died, did you think about that david: no! (he said as he used his palm to wipe my tears) you are the reason why i am fighting to stay alive, i want to be with you, although (he said as he looked away from me) me: but what david? (i asked as he looked at me) david: i am sorry tumi that i fell in love with and made you fall in love with me me: (i couldn't believe what i was hearing was he saying was he giving up on us) what! (i exclaimed) david: tumi we just have to accept this, that we are related me: but we are not (i yelled at him) we are not related david: it doesn't even matter anymore, we are not destined to be. me: how can you say that are you giving up on our love david: there can't be such between s, we are brother and sister for gracious sake. you are my sister me: david it doesn't matter besides we are not related david: tumi don't try to go further, this cannot work, i just can't live with these lies, we can't date each other, although i love you but i'll convert that love to a brotherly love (as he was speaking my heart just sunk in and i was shattered i never expected him to give up or to say all those things) tumi we are over, this thing between us can't work me: so you are breaking up with me david: obviously me: (i got so frustrated that i couldn't control myself anymore and i began to blabber out everything) you know what go ahead and break up with me and for what we are not related, i am the the real oyetunji odetola, you are not my brother because mum and dad didn't give birth to you and daniel, your own mother died while at birth and mum lost her own son, so you and i aren't related at all (i spoke out ) david's mum: what! (she exclaimed from behind me, then realising what i said i looked at david and saw that he was dumbfounded, what did i just say oh god what have i done, i looked back and saw david's mum and dami staring at me with shocked eyes and david's dad stared at the floor, oh my god what did i just cause with my blabber mouth, oh dear god help me. you know when you are in the situation that i am you'll be praying that the ground should swallow you up or that you should just disappear, that was exactly how i was feeling, how am i going to explain this and it will not scatter my family and hurt the man i love, guys pray for me that i don't say the wrong thing) EPISODE 27 LOADING...

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My dear u said the right thing just at the wrong time For real wrong Timing

so happy you and David are not siblings

Awwwwwwn,weldone poster,next

I think you should have just keep things cool and wait for your dad to do the talking... I just hope David won't kill himself this time.

nxt pls

love

Girl, you were too fast.. You should have just calmed down and let ur dad do the explanation

Ok

Buried under the rocks of but all the things I did was for you to be happys Episode 27 David's mum:what are you talking about tumi Me: (I just stood there still shocked at my own behaviour, how could I have just blabbered about something as huge and important as this, I looked at David who starred back at me as if I was performing some kind of trick. My father then spoke out, though it looked like he was pushed to say it out, I had agreed that it was better for the whole family to hear it all from the horse mouth but I just broke that when I went crazy for love, I have never in my life imagined that I will do such a thing for a man) David's dad: I can explain kemi (he said to my mother and everyone turned there attention to him including me) but before anything I will plead with you all to have mercy on me, and to know that the reason why I do all things is for the happiness of this family.(he said as I noticed that some tears were forming in his eyes under his glasses but he hid that) twenty five years ago Kemi when you went into Labour for our first child, I was told by the doctor that there was some complications with our baby and then when you gave birth and passed out without seeing your child, the doctor told me that the baby born had died even before he was pushed out, I was so devastated and I cried knowing how much you dreamt of that baby and how much you have longed for a child, coincidentally a woman in the same Labour room died and she gave birth to identical twin boys, the woman had no relation as she came to the hospital herself and I thought that the children will have no family member and so I thought that taking the children to be ours will make us happy and the children will have a family, I made a deal with the doctor and we switched the babies, he took the twin babies to your side Kemi and our dead son to the dead woman's side until you woke up and found the boys beside u, I wanted to tell you but I couldn't when I saw how much you loved the children David's mum: so you kept these a secret from me for all these years ( she said to my dad as those tears that he was hiding poured out) David's dad: I am sorry but I want you to know that all I did was for you all to be happy David's mum: you kept a lie from us all, from I your wife (I went to her side and tried to calm her down) David: so my real mother is dead(he said as we all turned to him, he just looked at us and yet I saw this spin mixed with anger that was in his face) where the neck is my father then. David's dad: son your dad is very much alive. David: I want to see my dad (he said, I did not expect him to react that way to the story, I actually felt glad that we are not sibling and it's know to all but I can see that David is not at all glad about these, in fact everyone is affected by this news) Me: (I went to David) David please David: not now tumi (he shouted at me, being the very first time that he'll shout at me that way, I was shocked, did he want to take out his anger in me) David's dad: son it's not her fault David: I don't care whose fault it is (he said angry to my dad and suddenly a rush of anger came over me) Me: David mind the way you speak to m father (I said angry to David and I had said it all before I realized what I said and David starred at me) David: this is none of your business Me: this is all of my business, you have been overreacting, everyone is affected (I had already begun this and I had to calm him down and get the old David back) don't you even think about mum, she had raised you for as long as you can ever think off, she loved you and your twin brother also did dad. If you think you are the most hurt, what about mum just finding out after twenty five years that the sons that she raised took care of and loved aren't her son's and that her own child is dead, how do u think she feels (I noticed the David had calmed down and was listening to me with adapt attention, I will definitely settle what I started,I will not scatter my family and I will not lose the love of my life) David I know that you are definitely going to want to know more about your family but don't forget the family that you have always know, that have always been your family (I said then turned to my mum) mum dad was yes wrong with what he did but at least he came around to tell the truth and because of what you did, Daniel and David grew up as your children (I walked to my mother and held her hands, she was weeping but I used my hands to wipe her face) forgive dad, think of all the good things that he has done over this,think of your moments together,think of us all the children you had and raised with him. Please mum ( I said as I looked at my mum hoping that my words will enter into her heart and both her and dad will be okay, I turned back and saw Daniel staring at us, his eyes was also teary, dami was also emotional,I know that I can make this family come together and at the same time build back my love with David, I hope my words change their hearts for good, I look to God for his divine intervention, wish me luck guys) EPISODE 28 LOADING

she has talk ooo.. how will this end

It will be difficult but hmmmm . . All the best

Tumininu, I just hope so too

I just hope things don't get complicated

he's ryt

The truth just has to be told

Hmmm... Serious matter

Look out what your loud mouth has landed you You should have control yourself nd allow David's' dad to tell the family the truth himself

At least, you have said it! Next plz!

This tumi you be oluku o... You should have put yourself in David's shoes before blaming him for giving up, he didn't know the truth and now you have given room for him to finish what he stopped half-way... Just pray for yourself

Ota koko

Good luck

I wish u luck tumi

secret revealed

Buried under the rocks of lies Episode 28 (My mum smiled at me) David's mum: my child I don't have any reason to hate my husband, the father of my children, although it is hard for me to accept it but we will get over this as a family. Me: (I was so glad that mum is ok with this) thank you mom David's mum: (she smiled as she wrapped her arms around me In a hug, I left her and turned to David who just looked at me as if I just finished acting a play) Me: David please David: tumi you've tried but I still want to see my father (he said to me coldly, as if none of my words affected him, he just turn to dad) I need to see my father David's dad: ok son, I will make arrangements with the doctor to have to go to Abuja (so his dad was in Abuja) but son I just have to tell you that your father is not a man that you can call your father David: I don't care (he said and my dad nodded, the doctor came in and told all of us to leave as David needed to rest, I left the room and walked out of the hospital and all in my mind was that I had lost David, maybe he is this way because of the news or is he also adding my past to his reaction, or doesn't he love me anymore. At least we aren't siblings but it seems that that does not change a thing, I sat outside of the hospital all lost in my thoughts, I was so lost in it that my phone bleeped and I came back to my senses with fear before I looked at my phone,it was a message from an unknown number, I opened it and it read) come back inside I want to speak with you (at first I was thinking about who could have sent the message then I remembered that the only person who will send such message is David, I stood up sighed and went back into the hospital premises, I saw my dad speaking with the doctor and i went towards David's ward, as I got to the door of his room, I quickly prayed that David will speak about us getting back together before i opened the door and saw him sitting up on his bed and he was watching something in a laptop, I walked to his side and stood there for some minutesa

Buried under the rocks of lies Episode 28 (My mum smiled at me) David's mum: my child I don't have any reason to hate my husband, the father of my children, although it is hard for me to accept it but we will get over this as a family. Me: (I was so glad that mum is ok with this) thank you mom David's mum: (she smiled as she wrapped her arms around me In a hug, I left her and turned to David who just looked at me as if I just finished acting a play) Me: David please David: tumi you've tried but I still want to see my father (he said to me coldly, as if none of my words affected him, he just turn to dad) I need to see my father David's dad: ok son, I will make arrangements with the doctor to have to go to Abuja (so his dad was in Abuja) but son I just have to tell you that your father is not a man that you can call your father David: I don't care (he said and my dad nodded, the doctor came in and told all of us to leave as David needed to rest, I left the room and walked out of the hospital and all in my mind was that I had lost David, maybe he is this way because of the news or is he also adding my past to his reaction, or doesn't he love me anymore. At least we aren't siblings but it seems that that does not change a thing, I sat outside of the hospital all lost in my thoughts, I was so lost in it that my phone bleeped and I came back to my senses with fear before I looked at my phone,it was a message from an unknown number, I opened it and it read) come back inside I want to speak with you (at first I was thinking about who could have sent the message then I remembered that the only person who will send such message is David, I stood up sighed and went back into the hospital premises, I saw my dad speaking with the doctor and i went towards David's ward, as I got to the door of his room, I quickly prayed that David will speak about us getting back together before i opened the door and saw him sitting up on his bed and he was watching something in a laptop, I walked to his side and stood there for some minutes and waited for him to leave the laptop and face me) David: come look at this (he said still looking at his system and I moved to look wandering what he wanted me to see but I was shocked when I saw David and another girl together in picture) Me: what is the meaning of this David: wait and continue watching (he said as other pictures slides went by,all of David and the other girl, I couldn't take it a more when I saw the picture of him a d the girl locked in a kiss) Me: just stop this David (I said as tears poured out of my eyes) so you have already gotten a girl, so you have already decided not to love me anymore (I noticed that he was stylishly smiling, was he mocking) what is so funny (I asked as he laughed) David: you are Me: so you are mocking me (I said angrily but he only laughed the more) so who is she David: that's what I want to ask you, who that girl is Me: stop this David, you are torturing me, who the neck is that girl David: Tumi why do you like overreacting anyway who is that girl ( what kind of question is he asking, he takes picture with a girl and tells me to identify her) Me: she is your lover or your girlfriend (I said as he laughed) David: then who are you to me (what is he getting to, what is he talking about) answer me tumi, what is your relationship with me ( I looked at him, this guy is really playing games with me, he broke up with me so what relationship is he talking about and why the neck those he think that I amuse him) Me: I am your ex girlfriend David: are you Me: you broke up with me David: alright but do you know this girl Me: no I don't how I am supposed to know your lover David: she is not my lover, (he said and I became surprised, then why was he taking pictures with her, what game is this David trying to play with me, oh God I just don't want to loose David, I love him more than I could ever love any man) EPISODE 29 LOADING... BURIED UNDER THE ROCKS OF LIES IS APPROACHING ITS FINALS, QUESTION: HOW DO YOU THINK BURIED UNDER THE ROCKS OF LIES WILL END? COMMENT AND LETS SEE WHO GETS IT RIGHT

I pray so tumi

I tink davido wil mary tumi.....wat could davids father b??...next pls

Tumi, don't worry you're still his lover.. Welldone

Good luck to you dear

Can't wait to find out what will happen next

I wish you luck o

who could David father be? tumi calm down David is yours

David wud still marry tumininu nd he will also forgive his dad... While Daniel.. I don't really know what to say about him

Busted

Maybe dahz his ex wit daniel

Goodluck ooo

Hmmm i can't really guess.. But let it be what am thinking

Following

Am here

Observing

following

finally I have caught up with this story

David will marry tumi

I don't understand one thing

I hate David

watching sha

Still watching sha

Buried under the rocks Lies episode 29 I looked at him trying to figure out what he wanted to get at, and why he is playing this game and am trying to figure out who this lady is, maybe she isnt his lover then I remembered that could bmie Daniel and Natasha considering that Daniel tries to look exactly like his brother and the lady unknown to me Me:the lay is Natasha and that is Daniel David:I thought that you will not figure that out (he said and in my mind I was so happy that it was his brother and not my David, he then closed the system and faced me) why did you overreact so much, you know I was actually thinking that you would not be able to differentiate still between me and my brother but I'm glad that you can Tumi I love you and I will never cheat on you (he said but I couldn't believe yet that he said he loves me, was he warming back to me, has he forgiven me, was their still hope for our love) Me: David did I hear you well, you love me David: yes I do tumininu, I am so sorry for the way I acted to you, I was just so frustrated and confused but I didn't mean it when I said I broke up with you Me: so you mean we are still together David: (he reached for my hands and began playing with my fingers, I knew definitely that he wanted to say something, he wanted to reply me and was searching for enough courage to do so) tumi (he finally said as he raised his eyes to meet mine) I was so hurt when you told me about your past and yes I was so angry but I would have completely stop loving you if you did not had told me Me: David I am really so sorry for keeping it all away from you (I said as tears gathered in my eyes) I never wanted to keep anything away from you but I feared that if you knew about my past you will hate me. David: I would not hate you for your past because that happened before to you and it far gone, I only want to build our presence and look forward to a future with you Me: I promise that I will never keep anything away from you again David: (he smiles to me) that's what I want to hear Me: do you forgive me David: I have forgiven you since the moment you told me the truth Me: thanks so much David (I said as I smiled with joy,) David: tumi you also have to forgive me for all the things I said out of anger to you, I am really sorry and I take it back but just forgiven Me: (see him asking for forgiveness, who am I not to forgiven him when I want him so badly) I forgive you David David: thank you so much tumi Me: are we back together (I asked hoping that he will say yes) David: we were never apart Tumi besides you know how crazy I am about you Me: (I smiled) David: I love you so much tumi Me: I love you also David (I said as he wrapped his arms around me in a tight hug) David: promise me that we will not fight as we did Me: I promise (he kissed my forehead) David: I have missed you so much Me: I also did David : did you see how jealous you were (he said and we both laughed, we were back together and much more stronger, the next day David was allowed out of the hospital to go met his father in Abuja, he went with my dad while I stayed back with my mum, my twin sister and my friends, I resumed school, David kept me informed on meeting his father, he told me that his father was Mr akinwande and that his father was married to a woman that happened to be his second wife, since the first was his late mother, he also told me that his father was an ex convict of drugtrafficking and that his father was a gangster even after he married his second wife who had just one daughter for him but that daughter had run away from home when she was still young and hadn't returned, David returned a week later to the hospital and he resumed his treatment and soon he was discharged from the hospital after regaining his complete health. My relationship with David became so strong that we became inseparable, few tweaks to my twenty first birthday, well since my real birth date was told to me and then inbound out that I was actually a year older that the age that's had been claiming, Daniel was sentenced to two years in jail least I forget and John was sentenced also to two years, mama d was meanwhile sentenced to 25 years in jail for child prostitution, that really servers her right, at least all the evil doers have been given their justified punishment, the day of our birthday that is I and dami 's birthday my mum organised a large celebration because it was the first birthday that she will be with me. During the birthday party, let me say halfway through the party David appeared on the stage calling everyone's attention before he walked were I was standing with dami and some guest and when he got to me he went down one knees and brought out a little box, I couldn't believe it but David actually wanted to propose to me) EPISODE 30 SEMI FINALS LOADING....

Na love Love is a beautiful thing now Tumi, what a life

I can't guess. Bt I jst wish it will end well.

wow

Wow... Am happy for you Tumi

wow everything is going well..I wish na like this real life dey

everything is going well. I wish na like this real life dey

That's the defination of true love...

wow! I guess he wants to propose nd I know you can't wait to say I do

Happy 4 u dear

ooh love

I DNT KN O

Semi finals indeed, hehehe. This story has now turned to a football knockout competition

Am happy for you Tumi

LOVE IS TALKING O

Wow...I Am happy for u

hehe

Wow! Jst as I thought. I so much like dis

Finally u guys are back together

Eya gud 4 u o

What a life

Buried under the rocks of lies Episode 30 Everyone gathered there eyes on us, while David looked at me David: tumininu from the very first day that I met you, I fell completely in love with you, time has passed and we have been through a lot of trials but we overcame them (he looked at me and I was just smiling as my joy knew no abounds) that's why I cannot ask for a better partner, a better friend to spend the rest of my life with (he opened the box and my heart raced happily as I saw a beautiful silver ring) will you tumininu marry me? Me: (I was so happy that tears rolled out from my eyes, everyone was chanting say yes, will I even be so foolish as to say no, David is the only man that I love and I will love to spend the rest of my life with him) yes I will marry you David (I said as everyone jeered happily, David then took the ring and slipped it into my finger and he hugged me tightly, I also held unto him tightly, I was really so happy that I can actually get to see a man propose to me and I will accept despite everything that had happened in my past, we began to prepare for the wedding, as an adage says make hay why the sun shine, I did not want to wait another second before I get married to the man of my dreams. We set our church wedding to be in late October and we are in August now, preparations went on very fast and months turned into weeks, nd weeks turned into day, it was four days to my wedding day, I was in the school already done with my lectures and I wanted to return to my hostel to meet with Sharon and Bidemi as we needed to get somethings for the wedding, I was walking to my hostel when a black jeep drove roughly to my front and three huge men came out of the car, my instincts told me to run but the men got to me and bundled me into their car and drove on, in the car I struggled but one of the men placed a n handkerchief on my nose and as I inhaled it, I slowly became week and slowly closed my eyes until everything around me went quiet, I woke up later and found myself in an empty and dark room, I tried to stand up but my hands and legs were handcuffed to a pole in th room) Me: help me (I called out hoping that someone will hear me, I did not know where I was or who had me handcuffed to this room) somebody out there please help me (I shouted out and almost immediately the door barged open and three huge and fierce men came in and I immediately got scared) Ist man: so you don wake up Me: please I beg u do not hurt me (I Pleaded but the three men only laughed and mocked me) 2nd man: we no go hurt you Me: thank you please let me go 1st man: (he laughs devilishly making me to become greatly scared) dat one we no fit do baby girl, na our Madame wet go tell us wet in we go do with you Me: (who the heck is there Madame, and why will she ask people to kidnap me) pls I don't want to know your Madame, I beg you in the name of God just let me go 2nd man: Madame Don deny come, so make u chill baby Me: please (I pleaded as tears rolled down my cheeks, then the three men walked out and I prayed in my mind that God should help me and they should release me, I did not wrong anyone so whoever there Madame was did not have anything to do with me, I was still mumbling some prayers when the door barged open and then the three men walked in and behind them was a lady, she was wearing a thick wig and a sunglasses So I couldn't see her face but I guess that that was there Madame and I called out to her) Me: please let me go, I did not do anything wrong, pls let me go (I pleaded but then the lady laughed and her laughed was similar to the way derinde used to the laugh,the lady walked to me and squatted in front of me and she was smiling before she removed her glasses and my suspicion was confirmed when I saw that it was deride and opened my mouth in shock) EPISODE 31 LOADING (FINAL EPISODE) LOADING......

wouldnt want to b part of this family lest one day somebody tells u dat ur gender is nt ur gender or ur complexion nt ur complexion #HouseOfLies

Derinde??

God help u

This derinde of a girl is nt alright nd too wicked

I know derinde will come back

i thought derinde have disappeared for good

I just hope she won't hurt you

What did she want this time around

All will soon b owk...deride!

I knw u will surely scape through

hmm,so she's back again

she wants your man by all means

I knew Derinde was going to come back to hurt you nd I was right

I suspected the so called madam to be Derinde... Na wa ooo,, what does she want again

BEAUTIFUL

Hmmmmmm . I knew this girl will be back....i just hope she doesn't do anything bad to you

May God help you

Hmmmm....problem again

Huh Derinde?

Buried under the rocks of lies Episode 31a Derinde: are you surprised to see me Me: please derin let me go, I never offended you. Derinde: you never offended me (she asked angrily) Me: I never offended you derinde Derinde: you did (she said angrily but I could see traces of tears I her eyes) you told me that between you and David there was nothing and for once I thought I could date such a good man like him and live a good live with him, but you (she pointed at me and I could see the anger in her eyes ) you went and had a relationship with him and now you are about to marry him but you were only friends before when I wanted to have him but you seized that opportunity and became his lover Me: derinde I do love David but I wasn't sure of what I was feeling then Derinde: so you used the opportunity to understand what you were feeling at my own disposal Me: derinde I and David were always made for each other Derinde: but I could have been right were you are, about to be wedded Me: (in tears) derinde your own man will surely come for you Derinde: but I don't want any other man except for David (she shouted at me and I shifted back scared, derinde stood up and brought out a gun from her bag and pointed the gun to me) Me: (I became greatly scared) pls..derinde...I beg of you… (I stammered out in fear) Derinde: if I can't have David then neither can you (she said as held the gun tightly and pointed it to my head) Me: please derinde don't kill me, you don't have to do this Derinde: you know what you are right, I don't have to shoot (she said and heaved a sigh of peace as she retracted her gun) I will make sure that you die a horrible death, your body will be unrecognizable. That's what I will do Me: please derinde (I pleaded with tears) Derinde: lion, jumbo take her (she said to the men as she walked out and they came to release me from the pole and led me out and into the same car, I continued pleading with derinde to have mercy on me and to spare my life but she ignored me as she drove the car until we got to the end of the road and all the men got down leaving me strapped and handcuffed to the car seat, derinde kept the car on and she came out) goodbye tumininu (she said and it was then that I figured out that she wanted the car to go off the road with me inside, she slowly removed her leg from the brake pedal and she left the car which began moving to the edge of the end of the road, I panicked and tried to get myself loose but it was of no use but I still continued to get myself loose and I did but then I looked forward and saw that the car had gotten to the fall and it moved forward and I was thrown forward and I hit myself on the front, my head hit the steering wheel in front, I became weak as I was bleeding from my head, I shared gunshots been fired and at the same time the car fell off the cliff but suddenly it stopped midway in the hair as if something caught it from falling, the gunshots reduced, as I tried to get up from where I was considering that I could hear cracking sounds of the glass that I was resting on, I quickly tried to get up which I did before the glass broke and I held on tightly to the drivers seat and the seat belt as I clunged and held tightly for my dear life) EPISODE 31B LOADING FINAL EPISODE

Hold on tight I know you are going to survive it

u will survive dear

Hanging on a cliff, thats nice.

just hold on a little

u will surely survive

lol...

cntinu

you not gonna die .. just hold on tight

If you didn't survive it how are we gonna know about this story

Hold on tight . . U will surely survive

Wat did u say was holding de car?

We all know you are going to survive it

Just a little moment of trial...all wil soon b owk

Hollywood sort of right...

You gonna survive this dear

jst wen u tink everytin is fine. Well derinde na sall case shaa

Episode 31b I was still clinging to the seat when the car was attempted to be pulled up but as the car shook it felt as if it was going to throw me off so I screamed out that I was going to fall, I looked up and saw David with a rope tied to his waist and his brother beside him, I knew the who was who, David lowered himself and stretched out his hand for me to hold but I could not because I used both my hands to hold on to the seat and I feared that i may loose my hold and fall. David: Tumi hold my hand Me: I can't David, l will fall. David: ok hang on, I will come to you (he looked up to his brother) Daniel let the rope down (he said as he lowered down to my side and held me and I let go of the seat after I was assured that David was holding me and I clunged tightly to my fiancee body, the rope was pulled up pulling us up, when we finally got up, I couldn't believe what I was seeing but there was a crowd of people out there, there were police cans there, I saw derinde’s men all injured being dragged to the police van, I also saw deride been led to another van with her hands in cuffs, I could tell that she was shot on her leg as she was limping, David came to me and I hugged him tightly and wept on his shoulders, I was so close to death, was this how people died, oh I could not help but thank God that I was alive. David spoke to me but I was still in shock that I could not hear him or reply him, an ambulance arrived from the state emergency service and two nurses came down with a stretcher and came to us, I was lifted and placed on the stretcher and taken to the ambulance, David followed us in. I was given first aid in the ambulance and an injection was given on me that made me feel sleepy and I closed my eyes to rest and woke up in an hospital bed with my mother beside me, I felt less pain now in fact I felt relieved and well) David's mum(now my mother): I am happy that you are awake my child (she said as she placed her palm on my forehead and smiled to me, it was then that I noticed that I had a bandage wrapped on my head) Me: mum I am glad to be alive, what about David My mother: he is on his way here Me: what about derinde and her men My mother: they are in jail so you shouldn't worry anymore because they can no longer hurt you. Me: am glad mum because I am alive (I then remembered my wedding as it was supposed to be in two days time but I did not want to get married with bandages all over my body) but mum what about the wedding My mother: don't worry child everything is going to be okay (she said as she smiled to me and I reciprocated her smile, I and David postponed the wedding till December to give me enough time to recover fully and for other issues to be settled, when David's parents saw derinde they were shocked and so was derinde, they told us all that derinde was their runaway daughter and derinde was so ashamed of herself considering that she had almost killed me all because she thought that she was in love with David not knowing that they where half siblings anyway the dead was done and she had to pay according to the law, the court sentenced her to 18years in jail. I mentioned seeing Daniel at my rescue, well David told me that Daniel was pardoned and released because of his good behaviors by the government, he told me that Daniel had apologized to all for all he did and they had forgiven him and he was back to the family, Daniel apologized to me for all the times that he had feigned his brother to get to me and I forgiven him, I and David got married in late December and our wedding was wonderful and a dream come true for me, despite all that had happened to me in the past I never thought that I will one day get married, and our marriage night felt like my first night as David made me feel like I was a virgin all over again because I was the first woman that he will have sex with, I never thought in my life that I will marry such a man like David, find my family despite everything and guess what after some months I gave birth to my first children, yes I gave birth to twins, identical twin boys) My pov A lot had happened in my life most of which were caused by lies, I was buried under lies which almost destroyed me but once the truth was out, my life became better. So it doesn't matter how much of lies you may be holding in your mind just say the truth to prevent yourself or your children from getting buried under the rocks of lies. THE END

Thank you so much guys Buried under the rocks of lies end EPISODE is out I can't forget to tag u all @jummybabe @itzprince @olayintan @divinewisdom @coolval22 @emmazzy @adeniyi @mdcollins @dencygirl @victoriouschild @willingyung(KOGR) @kennysilver @charlieking @lonewolf05 @munapeters @oneal @kerrysmart

Wow.. What a lovely story.. I really enjoyed it.. Kudos 2 u mr/mrs writer.. Keep it up

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@olayintan Am a miss and am glad u enjoyed it

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