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CAPTAIN JACKSON {BY CAPT. VICTOR THOMPSON}

CAPTAIN JACKSON {BY CAPT. VICTOR THOMPSON}

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[b]Another thriller from DTLC series. Captain jackson is a fictional short story , which unveils the evil in men and exposes the hidden part of men that are hard to detect, men who uses big deeds and titles to cover up their evils. Relax as i take u on the ride.

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(C) DTLC series[/b]

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[b]Episode 1


captain jackson's POV

I woke up from sleep looking around the place, it was kinda strange, how did i get here ? When did i get here? What happened to me ? I was asking these questions to no one in particular, it then began to dawn on me that i might have slump but what happened that made me slump as i was still thinking just then a lady in white long shirt walk into the room that i was , i guess she might be a doctor but then she ask me some few question about me, which i told her, i was still very confused when it started getting memory of what happened, i have been in the command of my unit on a mission to carry out an offensive across the enemy line but it seems that the mission was abortive cause we were place under order not to engage but to withdraw back. On our way to withdraw, we were ambush which led to a hot gun fight. I watch my team falling apart one by one and finally i lost consciousness that was all i could remember only to wake up only to see myself in a strange room. Hmmm thats very weird.

Just then , a group of armed men came into the room , they were five in number. Two stood at the door while two stood beside me as if to hold me down if i make any fucking move and the one who looks like their leader sat opposite me looking at me and shaking head at the same time.

"listen and listen well captain jackson, there is no escape for you and there is no hope that your government or army will ever come to rescue you from here cause all your team were wipe out and they might think that you didn't make it as well, so all we need now is for you to corporate with us and give us answers to what ever questions that you are ask but if you refuse am afraid you will be subjected to torture and inhumane treatment. Hope you gat my point captain?"

"yea sure i gat you alright man , so what the question and corporation all about?"

"you'll give us all the information we'll ask for"

"information? What information are you talking about?"

"we'll need information concerning your military defense strenght and its capabilities , and weakness as well."

"why? And for what?"

"you see captain, you ask question very much unlike other military officers of your calibre, thats why i like you, you see this is war, and in war, victory is needed by all means even if it entails killing for it to be achieved, hope you gat my point?"

"yea, i gat your point but am sorry i can't help you out"

"oh...really? I bet you'll change your mind later"

"no i wouldn't"

"then i'll advice you to think about it"

"forget it man, i wouldn't tell you anything at all, so go to hell!"

"oh i can see that you're refusing to corporate but don't worry, i promise you that tomorow you will be the one to beg"

with these last words, i watch him leave the room. It now really dawn on me that i was really capture and held hostage to give out information.......




TBC[/b]
28 Dec 2016 | 14:06
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Just One Click Episode 2 Episode 3 Episode 4 Episode 5 Episode 6 Episode 7 Episode 8 Episode 9 Episode 10 Episode 11 Episode 12 Episode 13 Episode 14 Episode 15 Episode 16 Episode 17 Episode 18 Episode 19 Episode 20 season 2 https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/captainjackson-season2-revenge-of-the-marines-by-lucky-thompson-victor-thompson/
28 Dec 2016 | 14:10
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28 Dec 2016 | 14:12
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28 Dec 2016 | 14:54
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[b]Episode 1 captain jackson's POV I woke up from sleep looking around the place, it was kinda strange, how did i get here ? When did i get here? What happened to me ? I was asking these questions to no one in particular, it then began to dawn on me that i might have slump but what happened that made me slump as i was still thinking just then a lady in white long shirt walk into the room that i was , i guess she might be a doctor but then she ask me some few question about me, which i told her, i was still very confused when it started getting memory of what happened, i have been in the command of my unit on a mission to carry out an offensive across the enemy line but it seems that the mission was abortive cause we were place under order not to engage but to withdraw back. On our way to withdraw, we were ambush which led to a hot gun fight. I watch my team falling apart one by one and finally i lost consciousness that was all i could remember only to wake up only to see myself in a strange room. Hmmm thats very weird. Just then , a group of armed men came into the room , they were five in number. Two stood at the door while two stood beside me as if to hold me down if i make any fucking move and the one who looks like their leader sat opposite me looking at me and shaking head at the same time. "listen and listen well captain jackson, there is no escape for you and there is no hope that your government or army will ever come to rescue you from here cause all your team were wipe out and they might think that you didn't make it as well, so all we need now is for you to corporate with us and give us answers to what ever questions that you are ask but if you refuse am afraid you will be subjected to torture and inhumane treatment. Hope you gat my point captain?" "yea sure i gat you alright man , so what the question and corporation all about?" "you'll give us all the information we'll ask for" "information? What information are you talking about?" "we'll need information concerning your military defense strenght and its capabilities , and weakness as well." "why? And for what?" "you see captain, you ask question very much unlike other military officers of your calibre, thats why i like you, you see this is war, and in war, victory is needed by all means even if it entails killing for it to be achieved, hope you gat my point?" "yea, i gat your point but am sorry i can't help you out" "oh...really? I bet you'll change your mind later" "no i wouldn't" "then i'll advice you to think about it" "forget it man, i wouldn't tell you anything at all, so go to hell!" "oh i can see that you're refusing to corporate but don't worry, i promise you that tomorow you will be the one to beg" with these last words, i watch him leave the room. It now really dawn on me that i was really capture and held hostage to give out information....... TBC[/b]
28 Dec 2016 | 14:59
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@froshberry-2 where d hell are u?
28 Dec 2016 | 15:21
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@tellem itz oscilo story d0n land oh nice story
29 Dec 2016 | 02:53
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Bring It On....omo i first @froshberry 2day...unbelievable!!!!
29 Dec 2016 | 02:55
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Nice, bring it on
29 Dec 2016 | 02:56
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????
29 Dec 2016 | 02:58
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Nyc start....
29 Dec 2016 | 02:59
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Bring it on...
29 Dec 2016 | 03:23
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nice start
29 Dec 2016 | 03:30
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ride on
29 Dec 2016 | 04:02
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you beta no form jesbon because you are just a metre from your grave
29 Dec 2016 | 04:30
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[b]Episode 2 IN CAPTAIN JACKSON'S HOUSE IN THE CITY OF BALANDO, HIS WIFE MARIA IS AT HOME WATCHING THE EVENING NEWS MARIA'S POV I was in the leaving room watching the evening news when suddenly the phone rang, i beckon on our first son name Jack to pick it up, he went to pick it up only to return back telling me to change the tv channel to channel 96, i did with much curiousity to know whats going on. After changing i could see images of soldiers being carried into ambulances, when suddenly the reporter's voice brought me back to sanity, from the news i learnt that my husband's team fail and every one on the team was shot only few survived but my husband was missing, and the colonel incharge of the mission was busy writting my husband off that he is death, no it can't be, my husband can't be death, no he can't die just like that , not after all the promises he made to me that he will return back alive. I just stormed into the room pick up my car keys and and storm out of the house. My destination was to the barracks where he serve. IN THE BARRACKS COLONEL'S POV I was damn angry with the general for what happened, how could he give order for a mission to be carried out but when the mission was nearly at the apex he called it off, now look at the fucking damn shit he has caused. A whole unit wiped out even the captain missing , who knows if he is death or alive and is being held hostage? No one could tell. I was still standing there when a sergeant came to notify me about captain Jackson wife's presence, i just took a deep breath, this was it, what am i going to tell the poor woman? How will i even explain things to her? Just then i summoned courage to see her. On arrival to the guest room, once she saw me she just grab my shirt collar and when the four soldiers that work as my securities came to hold her what this woman did made me nearly wet my body. She turn around like a trained combatant soldier facing each soldier and one by one they were all on the floor rolling in pains,she finally beat them all up and advance toward me in a flash she has grip my throat and hit me against the wall, it was painful, i felt like crying but i have to maintain my manliness. Soon i found my voice begging her to please take it easy on me for i am an old man, it seems the effect of my plea weight on her , she released me from her tight grip. MARIA'S POV once i arrived the barracks , thanks goodness that am popular cause i was a captain's wife ,i found it easy to get pass security easily, so i was showed the guest room, i requested to see the colonel, in less than five minutes he was in the room alongsides his security guards, with anger boiling in me i just grab the collar of his shirt just then his guards came to hold me down, i became infaturiated , thanks to all the combats self defence training my husband teached me, i advanced towards them and unleashed the monster in me on them, within five minutes they were shouting in pains. I left them and went back to the colonel and grip him harder this time around, push him to the wall when he started begging and soon i had soft spot on him and released him. "so colonel is it true?" i backed out with a bariton voice which shocked him, and he dropped down his face to the floor, deciding either to drop the bomb shell or not TBC[/b]
29 Dec 2016 | 04:50
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Ride on
29 Dec 2016 | 05:14
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I Loving U
29 Dec 2016 | 05:20
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Seated
29 Dec 2016 | 05:28
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Ride on
29 Dec 2016 | 06:12
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Correct woman
29 Dec 2016 | 06:58
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[color=orange][b]tahh which kind self defence training go make you beat soldiers like that abeg tell me another thing WOMAN for that matter[/b][/color]
29 Dec 2016 | 07:17
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Nexttt.
29 Dec 2016 | 07:55
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Leh go
29 Dec 2016 | 08:28
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Next
29 Dec 2016 | 08:40
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Woman Beating Soldiers Black And Blue? :g
29 Dec 2016 | 08:47
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Ride on
29 Dec 2016 | 09:52
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[b]Episode 3 JACK'S POV After picking the call and telling my mum to change channel, i watched her reaction, i wasn't a kid any more so i knew that something was up her sleeve but i should just let her pour out her first anger after she'll be able to control herself. Soon she storm into their bedroom and pick her car keys went to the garage opened the door gat in and sped off. I am seventeen but one who doesn't know me better will mistake me for a twenty year old. My immediate sibling named Amanda was 15. And my mum was pregnant with her third child. Three months to be precise, three months pregnancy , before our dad embarked on this mission promising us to return back. After mum storm out, i know that she was going to meet the colonel in the barracks, so i quickly ran to my motorcycle calling Amanda along but she wasn't responding so i have to run back inside only to meet her crying i tried consoling her and at the same time persuade her to come along "come on Amanda whats making you cry, stop it dad is not dead, lets go to the barracks" but her responds infaturiated me "jack am not crying for dad, am crying for my boyfriend" "Amanda what about your boyfriend?" "He just broke up with me" "come on amanda, you can always get another boyfriend but can never always get your dad, dad is missing we need to help in the search" "dad is dead can't you guys get it? Get the hell out of my presence." i was infaturiated the more and felt like walking up to her and strangling her to death with my bare hands, we were here talking about dad and she was there crying for her bastard boyfriend, i was angry very damn angry but manage to hide it from showing "amanda did you just ask me to get out?" "yes , what the hell are you still waiting for?" "okay then suit yourself" i replied her and storm out of her room banging the door so hard that it sent down the furniture on the walls of her room crashing down. From that very hour, i develop hatred for my sister amanda, she's a bitch, what daughter with her right sense of thinking will choose a bastard over her dad? Our dad was out there , i knew, something inside me was telling me that my dad was alive out there waiting for help. And if any body refuse to help i'll do it myself. But i need help, yea just then my fantastic four image flashed into my head. Yea, they are my crew. The four of us on the crew include me, a captain's son, bill a scientific researcher's son, then my crush evelyn a computer analyst who work in the barracks and lastly bill's girlfriend Rose a bright geographer and the daughter of a doctor. I smiled to myself, yea my crew was complete but first i need to alert them. I hope onto my motorcycle start and ignite the engine and speed off to the barracks but not to see my mum or the colonel but to see evelyn cause we gat lot of work to do. Amanda can riot in hell with her boyfriend for all i care, my dad's safety is my top priority now. Tbc[/b]
29 Dec 2016 | 10:03
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Hw yhu no ur root at captain jackson
29 Dec 2016 | 10:29
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I hope you will succeed with your mission
29 Dec 2016 | 10:34
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Intresting........next
29 Dec 2016 | 10:41
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next
29 Dec 2016 | 11:02
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Hmmmm follow like instagram
29 Dec 2016 | 11:03
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ryt on tym...nyce won
29 Dec 2016 | 11:09
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So u think she can't fight soldier bcos she is a woman @danco4real
29 Dec 2016 | 12:33
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wow..strong woman
29 Dec 2016 | 13:17
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Next
29 Dec 2016 | 13:42
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observing
29 Dec 2016 | 13:55
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Cool Jack.Next
29 Dec 2016 | 13:58
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This story go make sense. Someone please alert me wen anoda episode drops. Kisses
29 Dec 2016 | 14:23
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Combat is here! Cal for reg. Please
29 Dec 2016 | 14:48
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Interesting. . . Ride on
29 Dec 2016 | 15:02
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Nxt pls
29 Dec 2016 | 15:28
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[b]Episode 4 JACK'S POV CONT. I arrived the barracks on time, getting pass security wasn't a big deal cause my dad was an army captain a commando at that and this made my family very famous and popular in the barracks.. We come into the barracks when ever we like without anyone raising an eye brow. I Got into the computer apartment went into block 4D were evelyn works as a senior computer analyst. It wasn't long before i located her. "hello evelyn" "hi Jack, what are you doing here?" "its something very seriouse," "about your dad?" "yeah, how did you manage to know?" "i read it on the news, am very sorry," "its okay evelyn thanks but am after a quest to fine my dad" "like i knew, come on , take a look at this" i moved closer taking a good look at the computer screen before us. "whats all those i can't understand it" "you see that area shaded blue, thats the area where your father's unit was ambushed, and this red line here tracks his movement. Your dad was with the military tracker so i guess it might still be with him. What we need now is a geographer who can track and encrypt the tracking code for us. So i guess it time we bring......" ".....Rose" "yea, but alongside bill, we need the fantastic four to be complete in order to achieve success in this mission." "yea, you are right , you can make the call" evelyn : dials bill speaks into the receiver almost immediately "bill please report to the barracks in my block now" dials Rose, ringing but not answer after like about five time of calling she finally did pick the call "Rose report to the barracks in my office in less than five minutes from now" cuts the call "jack they're on their way now" "thanks evelyn" BILL'S POV damn!!! Why is this girl so adamant to listen to me, i can't really bear it, i've given her some calls but she refuse picking up the phone. I just drop the phone and was still contemplating what to do when my phone rang, yes its she let me just pick it up and listen to what she has to say. I pick up the phone almost immediately as it began to ring "hey bill come the barracks now in my office" the voice said with finality and ended the call. Hmmm i then knew that it was evelyn, why is she asking me to come to her office by this hour. I check the wall clock and it was tickling 8:00pm. I knew that it was an emergency so i just grab my back pack and went to the garage refill my motorcycle petrol tank ignite the engine and took off to the barracks. ROSE'S POV Why can't this boy let me be, i caught him red handed kissing another girl and he is here telling me that it was an accident. Soon he stopped calling but after like five minutes, the phone ringtone came back to life, i ignored it but the caller wouldn't let me be. On the fift time i decided to pick the call and listen to what he has to say again. Once i pick the call evelyn's bariton voice broke in almost immediately "come to the barracks right now and meet me in my office." the phone line went dead completely, damn she didn't even let me say a word. Like someone under spell i just walk up to my car in the lot, ignite the engine and zoom off to the barracks , who knows what lays ahead, only time will tell. Tbc[/b]
29 Dec 2016 | 15:49
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@wyse-one episode 4 dn show o
29 Dec 2016 | 15:52
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Next
29 Dec 2016 | 15:57
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this is not good
29 Dec 2016 | 15:59
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Hmmm Amanda Crying Abt Her Bf? WTF!
29 Dec 2016 | 16:00
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Nice one
29 Dec 2016 | 16:03
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Mr fanatstic four go cum i dae here dae wait 4 ur burial
29 Dec 2016 | 16:11
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following
29 Dec 2016 | 16:59
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Go on
29 Dec 2016 | 17:17
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dis intresting
29 Dec 2016 | 17:40
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dis is intresting
29 Dec 2016 | 17:40
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Continue
29 Dec 2016 | 17:47
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Let see hw it goes
29 Dec 2016 | 17:59
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Yes, u r a gud son Jack....interesting...next!
29 Dec 2016 | 18:59
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Let c wat u got
29 Dec 2016 | 20:13
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Interesting
30 Dec 2016 | 01:37
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@captainspoonz Here!!!! @gentleman Lma0!!
30 Dec 2016 | 06:11
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[b]Episode 5 JACK'S POV Wow evelyn is such a genius, just take a look just after five minutes of making the call , both bill and rose came nearly at the same time. Bill entered followed by rose. But i notice something, immediately rose entered and say bill, her facial expression changed to shock and anger all in one. While bill on the other hand appeared rumorseful as if he was caught committing a crime red handed. I turn to look at evelyn who also notice the change of the atmosphere in office, but she managed to murmur a welcome to both lovers. I could see that rose was visibly angry. So i chip in to cool her down, cause bill did brief me about what happened a day before. "come on rose, this is not the right time to play your lover angry mode activated here, there is an emergency on the desk and we need to act fast" "excuse us, we'll be right back" evelyn notified me as both she and rose left the office leaving me and bill alone. I turn to look at bill , saw what looks like nemesis on his face, i then fake an evil smile. BILL'S POV AS soon as i entered the office behold my rose was there and i was very much ashame to speak cause i knew that am a cheater. But looks like jack knew what was going on and manage to say some few words which did bring down the tension. Soon rose and evelyn left the office after evelyn notified us about their exist. Pheew i breath down in relief wow that was really close. Just then i took a look at jack only to see an evil smile playing along the corner of his lips, i became very much ashame and darted away my face. SAME BARRACKS BUT ANOTHER APARTMENT. IN THE GUEST ROOM, MARIA AND THE COLONEL ARE DISCUSSING AND IT SEEMS THEY'VE COME TO A CONCLUSION "colonel please don't fail me please i count on you very much. You are my last hope in finding my husband" "don't worry maam, your husband's safety will be my top priority untill we fine him, no one in this barrack including myself shall rest" "thank you colonel, am sorry for what i did earlier" "its okay maam, any woman in your shoes will probably do the same, i understand it well. Your husband is such a lucky chip to have you as a wife" "thanks alot colonel, i guess i should be on my way now" "okay maam, i guess i should be in the conference room by now, thanks for your visit" maria left the guest room to the parking lot were she entered her vehicle and drove off. Tbc[/b]
30 Dec 2016 | 07:24
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@froshberry-2 its nice having you back, but guy where you chook head?
30 Dec 2016 | 07:26
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I just came back fr0m my vacation to MARS. @Captainspoonz
30 Dec 2016 | 08:47
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lets go dia
30 Dec 2016 | 13:09
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@froshberry-2 make vacation to mars fire u their! U dn even near airport before? Lol
30 Dec 2016 | 14:05
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[b]Episode 6 MARIA'S POV Convincing the colonel was an easy task since he himself seems to take a good stand in the belief that my husband was not death. After the meeting with the colonel, i went to the car parking lot, gat into my vehicle and drove off towards the gate of the barracks, but on reaching the computer section popularly known as the I. T. C centre, i notice that jack's motorcycle was there, i just shrug it off , it might just be a coincidence cause someone else with that same brand might also be around. So i drove out off the barracks to my house. Only to meet my daughter at home, where is jack i murmur to myself, i just pick up my phone and dial his number, just then, he pick up and told me not to worry that he is in a safe zone. When i enquired where? He told me that he was in the barracks. I was a bit relief. JACK'S POV soon enough both rose and evelyn emerged back from where they went to. And straight away we gat down to business. After making a tracking sketch movement with the computer , we finally hot the location where my dad was held hostage but the exact room where he was held hostage was now the problem. After thinking over and over again, i finally got an idea. But just then my mum called, and enquired about my where about i told her i was go a safe zone but she press further, i just told her where i was and she said ok and ended the call.i turn back to evelyn with the idea on my head. "Evelyn please log onto the commando's number data base" with a questioning look on her face she log in and immediately all the names and number of trackers where display. We continued searching untill we gat to my dad's. Tracker id JACK1013SON249CSF yea thats it. "evelyn alright thats it, now click on the alert button, if it blink red then , it went through and once the red changes then we get the location cause it means he's alive." without delay, evelyn clicked on the search button and it turn red, within five seconds it turns green showing that my dad have responded and immediately the green showed, the room where he was held hostage appear cause red alert light started blinking in the main place. Wow. I was joyious, my dad is alive, at last we all dispersed to our various homes. But i wasn't ready to tell my mum yet cause she might spoil the show. CAPTAIN JACKSON'S POV I was in a deep thought about what to do, should i tell them what they want? No but wait my family's life were also in the line, i kinda don't want anytim to happened to my family especially my daughter. Just then , the tracker on my wrist beep and blink red, hmmm looks like someone is trying to contact me. Wow they found me. Without wasting time, i click on the respond button and the light change green which means they've gotten my location. Wow that was great i breath down in relieve , hatching and drawing my escape plan. Tbc[/b]
30 Dec 2016 | 14:50
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Your daughter who thought u was dead
31 Dec 2016 | 03:11
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u no even think abt jack DAT is very worried abt u na DAT UE useless daughter na her u de think abt
31 Dec 2016 | 03:59
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please try and alert us when a new episode arrives i nearly missed all next please
31 Dec 2016 | 05:58
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irony of life..u are dere having ur daughter in mind nt knowing she only tinks of her boyfriend while jack is da one traying to locate u
31 Dec 2016 | 05:58
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Following
31 Dec 2016 | 06:29
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irony of life..u are dere having ur daughter in mind nt knowing she only tinks of her boyfriend while jack is da one trying to locate u
31 Dec 2016 | 06:58
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0ga @captanspoonz Lmao...
31 Dec 2016 | 06:59
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next..
31 Dec 2016 | 08:03
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Ride on...let see how they will plan to save him
31 Dec 2016 | 09:05
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nice one
31 Dec 2016 | 15:05
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enjoying this
31 Dec 2016 | 17:29
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next
31 Dec 2016 | 21:43
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[b]HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU ALL LOVE YOU ALL[/b]
1 Jan 2017 | 07:12
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Al of ona dserve red card for nt responding to my new year greetings, u beta apologies now or i wil gve d story red card
3 Jan 2017 | 09:59
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Same to you.
3 Jan 2017 | 10:37
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[b]FIRST EPISODE OF THE YEAR 2017, HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU ALL. :b . . . . EPISODE 7 [color= red]JACK'S POV i opened my laptop, log into facebook, thanks goodness all my fantastic four were online and immediately i created a group chat adding them all and i decided to start a conversation. FACEBOOK DISCUSSION Me: hello comrades evelyn: hi jack how are you doing? Bill: cool and you? Evelyn: same rose: jack how is your family? Me: {typing...} bill: my family's nice and yours? Me: {stop typing to see rose's reply} rose: you bastard did i ask you? Evelyn: OMG!! Me: SOS!!! Evelyn: come on guys this is not the right time to fight, am sure jack created this group for a reason for us to sort things out bill: okay rose: okay me: evelyn do you know any military personnel who you trust well that if we contact him or her will readily assist us? Rose: yea i know one sergeant daniels , if we contact him he will, cause he is a good friend of your dad. Bill: yea me also know a lady who work with my mum, she's a good tracker and also and ex marine. Rose: whats her name?!! Me: {sense jealousy in rose's question} bill: rose i thought you ask me not to talk to you and you also call me a bastard for replying your message, why questioning me now? Evelyn: {silent} me: {typing, just then rose's reply came in} rose: you player is she one of your numerouse girl friends, or is she the one you're now stalking with? You bastard , you son of a bitch. Bill: if you care to, yes she's my new girl friend so better go to hell for all i care! Rose: {silent} me: come on bill its ok {i knew that his message got an impact on rose, but am sure bill was kidding} evelyn: {for the first time since the quarrel started} yea, colonel will be of help i'll try him me: ok guys thanks alot, we gat work to do tomorrow. Good night bill: same over here evelyn: same rose: {silent} JACK'S POV wow, that was a nice one, we'll definitely embark on the mission tomorrow, yea sure but the problem is bill and rose , why are they always at each other's neck? Well thats story for another day. I decided to check on amanda to see if she'll change her mind. On arrival to her room i found it lock but as i was turning back i over heard a phone conversion i went closer to eave drop it. ROSE'S POV i knew that bill cheated on me and this feeling alone drives me mad at him but trully i still love him , love him more than i even did before but i don't know what always come over me and makes me rude to him, during our facebook conversation,his last reply to me shocked me beyond my bone marrow. No it can't be, my bill, my love , my life , my everything no its not true, i felt very jealouse and at the same time angry with myself for snubbing him. No it will not work. As long as i am aliver i will never share my bill with any lady. Just then i decided to settle issues with my beloved bill. I didn't even know when i slept off. It was around 2am that a phone call woke me up, checking the caller , it was jack. I picked it and immediately what i heard sent my spirit flying...no it can't be...why must it be jack's mum again? Tbc[/b]
3 Jan 2017 | 11:14
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[b]Episode 8 loading but ur comments determines[/b]
3 Jan 2017 | 11:25
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Bring am na
3 Jan 2017 | 13:24
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What happen to jack mum
3 Jan 2017 | 14:21
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I can give you all the comments you deserves just continue to flog us with updates kay!!
3 Jan 2017 | 14:24
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Following...
3 Jan 2017 | 15:02
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What???
3 Jan 2017 | 15:16
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What happened??
3 Jan 2017 | 15:33
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Jack mom ke? What happen
3 Jan 2017 | 16:40
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@wyse-one i don dey eye you o
3 Jan 2017 | 16:45
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fire on
3 Jan 2017 | 17:22
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Lol... Have they come for her too?
3 Jan 2017 | 17:33
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Jack mum wat happened to her, may be she went into labour just a guess work tho.
3 Jan 2017 | 17:41
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what
3 Jan 2017 | 19:10
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Nooooo...it cant be....hope its nt wat am tinking?
3 Jan 2017 | 19:28
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mum too?
4 Jan 2017 | 04:12
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What happen
4 Jan 2017 | 17:00
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Expect episode 8 sooner or later, cause NEPA people just dey fuck us up
5 Jan 2017 | 12:03
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And again i dey my villa and we no get light for my villa,
5 Jan 2017 | 12:04
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[b]CAPTAIN JACKSON[/b] brought to you by de~thompson's literal collection series . . . . [b]Episode 8 JACK'S POV looks like this girl is making some suspeceous call let me check it out amanda: yea sure caller: **** amanda: jackson is back and has been working towards it but please we need to do something about it before our cover blows up caller: **** amanda: where? Caller: **** amanda: okay, i'll be there in 5minutes caller: **** amanda: bye {and drops phone hmmm this girl is upto something, something fishy is going on, just then i heard her coming out and i dashed back to my room. Just then my dad's tracking signal started blinking on the laptop screen and without delay i click on the response section and the light went green and wow! All the details of what we needed appeared on the screen. Wow this is a great break through and am sure my comrades will be glad to hear it. CAPTAIN JACKSON'S POV it was around 12am when suddenly the door to my room flung open and i thought it was my captor not untill the female doctor who have treated me earlier came in and introduce herself as clara. Told me about herself and that she was held captive also but all her attempts to escape were futile cause she was always caught, and that she has studied the security and escape rout properly that its heavily guarded but there is an underground part way which only a computerize system could operate its passway, that we need it and luckily she have the chip. Me: wow so you mean it? Clara: yea, i stoled it from the bunker but its not known me: how will it work, how are we going to operate it? Clara: its a chip like memory card, just insert it into a system that do support it and thats all it shows the grid of the entire area me: ok bring it let me try it. I collected it from her and insert it into my tracker, the light change red, meaning they're still tracking me, so i pressed the response button and every thing displayed. Wow. The grid and map of the area. Yea the biggest part is now done , it remains to draw my plan of escape. JACK'S POV i was soon brought back to reality when i heard voices arguing i went closer only to see amanda arguing with my mum. I just walk in, it seems like she finally gat her way and walk out me the house to the nearest junction and boarded a taxi and left to "only God knows" destination. Just then, my mum ran inside grab her car keys and head to the garage , i ask her where she was heading to and she told me she was going to look for amanda, i tried persuading her but to no avail, she finally left went into her car and i went inside the, next thing i heard was a boom!! And i ran out only to see my mum's car on fire, looks like a bomb has been fixed to it. I just sunk to the floor pick up my phone and dialed evelyn's number it was when she finally pick and exclaim that i knew that it wasn't evelyn but rose. I swear, amanda will pay for this tbc[/b] . . . . Pls take note that [b]DTLC series[/b] stories title [b]1. Seven days to make a man season 3 and 2. The rebirth season 2[/b] will start update monday 9th january 2017. Thank you for bearing with us when we went on break. Love you and pls Stay tune.
6 Jan 2017 | 16:27
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hope the doctor is not one of them
7 Jan 2017 | 02:08
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Amanda wot wrong with u
7 Jan 2017 | 04:41
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Brought to you by [b]DTLC series[/b] [b]Episode 9 JACK'S POV CONT... I was still on the ground crying when rose and bill came , bill: jack what happened? Pls tell me you're joking cause am beside myself now. Rose: jack pls tell me its not true.... I just point at my mum's burning vehicle's direction to clear their doubts, they were both very shock rose: who do you think is behind all this? Me: thats the mystery, i have no idea bill: and am sure the person who is with your dad have a hand in this me: bill you're right but who could that be? Rose: am sure colonel will be of help, cause he can help to trace just then my phone rang, bill pick it up, after about 10seconds, his face went pale, me: bill whats wronge, what happened? What is it? Bill: **** me: come on bill please be audible rose: {went closer to bill and placed his head on her laps} come dear what is it? Please tell us the bad news we will accept our fate. Bill: its evelyn... Me: what about her? Bill: she's the one that called, she told me the what happened to ur mum also did happened to the colonel. Rose: what??? Me: how about evelyn? Bill: she's on her way here just then, evelyn's car pull up the drive way, on seeing my mum's car on fire she manage to ask me if its not what she's thinking, i told her that it is that my mum gat blown up she just ran into my arms and hugged me tight. I found solace in her warn arms, i felt loved again, my dark days were begining to go away. I felt more protected, i felt that i have someone who i could lean on when ever i need comfort. My mum is gone and i wouldn't let anything happen to my dad, i'll make sure i get him out. Suddenly i broke away from evelyn's arms and walk into the house with the rest of my pals trailing after me. This is the time for action. And the battle line has been drawn. And i'll show the bastard that am the son of a soldier CAPTAIN JACKSON'S POV i got down under the bed and luckily the little hole i saw earlier was still there, i smile and notice a confuse look on clara's face, i just motion her to come come closer, she did and i showed her the hole and told her my plans and she smiled giving me that "am begining to fall inlove with you look" i just ignore it and continue with my plan. At long last, the plan was successful all thanks to clara's assistance. The battle line has been drawn, time checked 5am, let the music get ready to blast, i'll show them that i wasn't train to be a soldier for nothing, its time to show them that as a soldier, i got lots of training also. Tbc . . . . Like our page on facebook , De~Thompson's Literal Collection .[/b]
7 Jan 2017 | 04:50
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Gosh! Amanda?? Show them what you're made of!
7 Jan 2017 | 05:28
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All the best . . Show them that u are Captain Jackson
7 Jan 2017 | 06:27
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Please bribe DTLC with ur comments to unlock the next episode 10, an action pack episode
7 Jan 2017 | 06:31
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[b]Please bribe DTLC with ur comments to unlock the next episode 10, an action pack episode. The battle is about to begin[/b]
7 Jan 2017 | 06:33
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mmmmm, like father like son
7 Jan 2017 | 08:05
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show dem ooo
7 Jan 2017 | 08:46
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finally am here
7 Jan 2017 | 09:23
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ACTION PACK!!! . . . . [b]Episode 10 JACK'S POV . . . i entered into my room opened the laptop and showed them the grid and all the things that we needed, evelyn later got a call that the two more people we wanted to recruited have been killed also, damn! Checking the time, it was almost 5am, i draw down the plan and every one of us did some combat training exercise and finally i went into my dad's closet where he usually hide his arms, there i found lots of guns i guess it was the gun his men and him user on special mission. I collected 3 pistols, and one ak 74 riffle while bill collected a bazooka with lots of daggars. Rose grab a m17 riffle , this girl really wants to kill, while evelyn just grab a m4 riffle, all set after four hours of training. We finally left time check, 10am. Getting to a police check, the guy recognise me and cleared way and we zoomed past. The tracker was leading us into the boarders , we were almost at the boarder when suddenly a military attack craft attacked us, we took cover under the rock, exchanging bullets at each other when finally the craft drop down its occupants, they were not even in our army uniform so i instantly knew they were foes. Immediately threw a grenad and it went boom the enemies were confuse and we started dishing out sounds of bullet to them. Bill then aim his bazooka at the aircraft and released a shot within the next second, the aircraft was in flames, we've cut off there transportation now lets move in, bill commanded and we advance towards the 10 men and started gunning them down one by one untill we clear them all. Thanks to the heavy gears we put on, we were not harm. We hide our vehicle went into and corner in order to prepare for our operation silent storm. . . . CAPTAIN JACKSON'S POV . . . the next morning around 7am, the door flung open and six hefty men with arms match in and their leader soon came in and sat down on the chair , facing me squarely "captain, now we've taken down almost everybody you card about and those that would have rescue you, so now corporate or you die" i've been waiting for the opportunity to strike and her finally it was, i was waiting for clara to start but she was not doing anything yet and then i started feeling that she have betrayed me when suddenly the door burst open and a round of gun shot circulated the room i just bent down i crawl towards the door, it was clara, and she was really dress up for battle, i quickly put on the gears she have me and collected my arms of MAK17 then off we went through the back door, yea i knew that the battle has began. Tbc[/b]
7 Jan 2017 | 10:20
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Hmmmmm. Escape is the only thing on your mind.
7 Jan 2017 | 10:21
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Enjoying this story
7 Jan 2017 | 10:36
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let d fun begin
7 Jan 2017 | 10:51
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@Lucky Thompson no eye me, just feed me with more episodes
7 Jan 2017 | 11:07
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Ride on
7 Jan 2017 | 13:37
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Enjoying this ride
7 Jan 2017 | 14:36
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wow, time for action
7 Jan 2017 | 14:48
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@wyse-one pls be my date
7 Jan 2017 | 14:57
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ready for some actions
7 Jan 2017 | 16:17
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ride on
7 Jan 2017 | 16:29
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Hmmmmm
7 Jan 2017 | 17:15
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Story continues on monday, lets take sunday off :b
7 Jan 2017 | 18:24
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i finally caught up with u guys//////...... abeg fine girl shift for me... so wati for epi 9
7 Jan 2017 | 19:33
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Wow
8 Jan 2017 | 01:13
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let d war begin
8 Jan 2017 | 06:59
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Wow! I jst hope u make it safely...
8 Jan 2017 | 17:50
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[b]Episode 11 CAPTAIN JACKSON'S POV we ran out of the room into a door way, and then the was began, a unit of 10 men heavily armed attack us and a hot gun battle ensued, clara was superb in gun shooting within 5 minutes we've cleared them off. Clara: Get your ass over here captain lets fuck out of here, reinforcement's on the way. I ran toward her direction and immediately she signal me to stop clara: one at 6'clock and two at 3'clock now!! I turn round immediately facing the directions she mentioned and thank goodness it was early so i brought down the intruders. I was confused and surprised at her military skills and her ability to speak the marine language. I was wow by her bravery. Suddenly we heard a very loud bomb blast across the forest , i knew that my men were on their way to rescue me. I set to be the man in charge again. We ran and shot at random untill we get to a point where we were surrounded by 20 men, in such situation a careful planning is required. "Drop your weapons and hands up in the air, if you move an inch you will be fired upon" i stood transfixed to the same spot. We've been busted. JACK'S POV After making a careful planning, we match out of our hideout and started crawling towards the enemies zone. We did that successfully and passed their alert systems but on getting to the entrance of the forest where we will have to walk through the forest before we get to where my dad was held captive, people started firing on us and it now dawn on us that we've been ambushed. Damn. "operation fire storm" i shouted out and bill toast out 10 grenads to 10 different direction and bazooka shots follow. Evelyn suprised us by firing a bomb missle into the forest and every where went up boom!!!. We took cover as the bomb did its work and within 10minutes our way was clear, we advanced shooting at random and taking cover i was surprised that evelyn was a more rugged lady than i pictured her, among the four of us, she was the only one who uses hand to hand combat mostly . She always beat them to subormus. Her gallantoers was becoming farmiliar with us. Sha she's very gallant i'll confess. We continue fighting our way to the forest when suddenly bill yelled "look out!!!" wow what a sweet music we'll have to dance, can't beleive they're using armour tanks now to fight us. Some mortal shells started landing here and there making thud and blasting sounds. And just then , i turn round to take a look at my comrades, everybody was shaken just like me. We have no choice than to withdraw. Tbc[/b]
9 Jan 2017 | 06:11
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hmm...dnt b afraid guys..u gonna win diz battle...nd dat ur sist na suspect....nxt
9 Jan 2017 | 08:03
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You guys can do it
9 Jan 2017 | 09:45
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Armo tank .hw many una be
9 Jan 2017 | 09:55
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Guys be bold...u can do it
9 Jan 2017 | 09:57
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You can kill them all.
9 Jan 2017 | 11:44
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No dont do dat
9 Jan 2017 | 17:53
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God is with u guys..dont relent
9 Jan 2017 | 18:20
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u gonna get of that place Alive I believe that
10 Jan 2017 | 03:40
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[b]Episode 12 jack's Pov we turn back and started running, running for our dear lives when suddenly evelyn stood still on her spot without moving am inch , "come on evelyn lets get out of here" i yelled at her trying to bring her back to sanity "jack you're a coward!" she fired back "what?" i manage to ask amid fear, anger and frustration "we left home on a quest to rescue your dad and we are 50% to complete the task, why running away now? Come on jack we can do it" she tried speaking some sense into me "am with you ," i heard rose said and walk over to where evelyn was standing and held her hands i turn took a look at bill who shook his head and walk up to them held them by their hands. I took a good look at them and i started crying, i didn't cry because i was behaving cowardly, i was crying because here were people not related to me by blood or by any way but just ordinary friends yet they where putting up their lives to make the mission of rescuing my dad a success and again they were also the ones even persuadding me not to loose faith or hope. This is what i can call true friends if am not underrating them then let me just say they're now my brothers and sisters . Like someone determined to accomplish a mission i just walked up to them and held their hands "we'll stick together and fight side by side till we all either succeed or die. " bill intoned with tears rolling down his eyes "yea" we all chorus as we went down to take cover just then i saw rose making her way towards bill rose: "bill am very sorry for my actions lately, i couldn't forgive myself for snubbing you all this while, please fine a place in your heart and forgive me and accept me back as your love once again." bill: "its okay i understand and i also ask you for your forgiveness" i watched them as they both reconciled and started wispering "i love you" to each other then a passionate mind blowing kiss followed suit. I noticed evelyn chuckling and taking a peep at me i decided to confess my love to her before it might be too late. I walk up to her , held her by her hands and took a soulful look into her eyes then i tried my mission me: evelyn , i don't know how to say this but i think i have to try atleast, the truth is that am...am...am...am...am" evelyn: shhhh...i know what you want to say and i think that am also inlove with you. I love you very much baby, its because of the love i have for you that is making me to share go your burden" i was very much touched with her words that i didn't notice when i dived her lips and a heavy explosive kiss ensued. It was the blast from a mortal shell that brought us all back from the world of bliss back to our sanity, that was when we realised that we were in the war front and the battle was at our door step. Tbc[/b]
11 Jan 2017 | 05:59
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Funny people....kissing on battle field
11 Jan 2017 | 07:13
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U Guys Are High On Bullet,how Can U B Doin Lovin Tinz Wen U On A Mission
11 Jan 2017 | 07:30
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see una see bullets ooo
11 Jan 2017 | 09:47
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kissing in front of a war haha
11 Jan 2017 | 12:26
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Na mumu d wory una.
11 Jan 2017 | 13:15
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dat is I called last breath war affection
11 Jan 2017 | 14:00
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@andreytimms yea man thats it. Last list kiss before death.
11 Jan 2017 | 14:18
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Hahahaha...u people r funny...last kiss...i don't think so . . U will all live and the mission will be a succesfull one
11 Jan 2017 | 15:15
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@[b]BARRY ALLEN[/b]....HAHAHAHA I WILL STILL TRY TO BOLD TO COMPLETE THE MISSION . . . JUST AS THEY HAVE DONE
11 Jan 2017 | 15:22
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Having a romantic moment on the battle field
11 Jan 2017 | 16:24
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victory is urs
11 Jan 2017 | 16:36
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[b]Episode 13 jack's pov continues we all realised that we were almost busted, we took covers behind a giant rock and the squades of enemy soldiers alongside there tanks passed without realising that we were there. Giving them enough time to clear pass i saw evelyn burying IED bomb on the track , i was stunned and wondered were she got that improvised device from. Any way this is war and during war, both sides try all odds to win the war even if it include murdering. Once she was done with her assignment, we all mustered back into our old attack formation and started advancing. Me and rose, bill and evelyn, we walked in twos. On getting to the forest, we were fire upon once again, but thanks to our readiness, we fired back and after almost half an hour of blood bath we finally cleared our way. Advancing towards our target fighting our way through every barrier, tearing down barb wires and bombing down trees and walls. We finally got to the target. Just then we heard a loud bomb explosion which sends every one to different direction. Captain jackson's pov both i and clara stood still and lowered our weapons as instructed. Yea we had a plan B and lets just hope it work out. "now move out of the building to the basement" the voice commanded and with great relieve and i walk out with clara following behind. I stole a glimps at my watch time almost up. I signal to clara who nodded and i turn towards the owner of the voice and yelled "see you all in hell" immediately i dived clara down and the bomb which we've set earlier explode scrapping every where . I held unto clara very tight and the force of the explosion threw us almost 30 feet from its place of occurance. We both passed out. BACK TO THE BARRACKS Everyone was standing attention and it looks like a superior officer was delivering a speech. Just then the general climb down the office stairs , looks out to see the soldiers then headed towards the platform and grab a microphone started delivering his speech, "soldiers of our great nation, i greet and salute you all for your dedication to duty and for your commitment to the service of our father's land. We all knows that our gallant and able captain the leader of 101 marine strike force operation delta delta has been missing for almost a month now and sadly colonel williams was murdered via car bomb with an improvised device. Alongside the wife of our great captain. Please gentlemen , ladies, lets join our hands together to carry out justice for the and to make sure that we win this war." he concluded his speech and thunderous applause followed suit. He left the platform went back to his convoy with an evil smile dancing along his lips. "its time to show him who i'm really am" tbc[/b]
11 Jan 2017 | 18:35
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kissing in war front lol
11 Jan 2017 | 18:50
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Hmmm... I think general is up to something
11 Jan 2017 | 19:24
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@froshberry-2 @wyse-one where ona chook head?
12 Jan 2017 | 04:17
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This people sha!
12 Jan 2017 | 05:09
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Am here O @captainspoonz
12 Jan 2017 | 05:10
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general ur cup go full one day oo :b
12 Jan 2017 | 06:24
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[color =pink]The general is a traitor We wish d resure and rescuree luck[/color]
12 Jan 2017 | 06:29
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[b]The general is a traitor We wish d resure and rescuree luck[/b]
12 Jan 2017 | 06:30
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evil general
12 Jan 2017 | 07:24
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evil general, your plans will soon be exposed
12 Jan 2017 | 07:25
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Episode 14 loading
12 Jan 2017 | 08:14
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@froshberry-2 ok take this 10naira go buy me new pen my ink don finish and no forget to bring my change o
12 Jan 2017 | 08:16
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Nextt.
12 Jan 2017 | 09:49
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next
12 Jan 2017 | 12:02
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This general...ride on
12 Jan 2017 | 14:20
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Change kor Buhari ni! @captainspoonz
12 Jan 2017 | 15:46
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let go dere
12 Jan 2017 | 20:55
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[b]Episode 14 Location: 3rd marine base . time: 0004hours detachment: 101 operation delta delta camp lieutenant jones a plump looking but actionable man in his late 30s walk into the office of his superior captain williams who have been sent to occupy the space of captain jackson untill his where about is located. "shun sir" "stand easy lieutenant" "sir, i just came to inform you that unit 3 and unit 6 are ready for the counter operation, unit 5 and 2 are still mobilizing while unit 1 and 4 will stand as decoys" "what about unit 7, 8, 9 and 10" "they'll act as reinforcement sir" "good thats a nice plan lieutenant, carry on" "yes sir!" salutes and left lieutenant jones seems not to like the captain a bit, thou as a second lieutenant that he was, he was always addressed as lieutenant, he was in command of three units . But now he has been appointed the head commandant incharge of the operation. He is a very close friend of jackson and he was determined against all odds to safe his friend. But here this captain williams of a guy is acting some how weird, after he was posted here to replace the missing captain jackson, colonel williams was killed followed by first lieutenant sampson, and when he tried to report the issue to the battalion head commandant, the general just wave it off as a mere coincidence. And all the spies which he lieutenant williams have sent, they all came back with one story. Looks like captain is plotting, the best way was for him to divert plan and carry out the mission his own way. But how can he do that when all the other units commandants were appoint by the captain himself , it is only three units that takes orders from him and those units are his subordinates and he is the one that appoints their commandants , thinking fast an idea got struck in his head. He went ahead to make a general call to all the units "hey soldiers all hands report on deck to the drill field in less than 5 minutes starting from now, count down begins." he called them together and have them his last speech before they all set to march out of their camp. He secretly called the three commandant incharge of his unit and told them a secret plan. Feeling satisfy with his work he stood up and said aloud "let the music begin" the captain is seen in his office its like his done making some phone calls , he smiled and said aloud "let the music begin" tbc[/b]
13 Jan 2017 | 05:07
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dey shal dance according to the music
13 Jan 2017 | 14:38
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Dance dance dance.
13 Jan 2017 | 15:02
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Johny cage lets dance
13 Jan 2017 | 16:50
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Let the Music begins . . Let all dance . . O o o o o . . Waiting to see how this battle goes
13 Jan 2017 | 17:22
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which song shey na shoki
13 Jan 2017 | 17:36
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okay nxt
13 Jan 2017 | 17:49
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Oh yes let the music begin
13 Jan 2017 | 18:04
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den let d Army dance
13 Jan 2017 | 19:50
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[b]Episode 15 {the counter/escape} jack's pov it was 15minutes later that we all regained consciousness, thank God we were all okay, immediately we dash back into the counter operation and thanks to the bomb blast, most obstacles were remove, but we also did encounter gun fight on the way, we fought our way through, shooting like professional soldiers. Suddenly i spotted two images afar off but since both images seems to be shooting at our opponents, we decidede not to open fire on them, cause if they were opponent they would have open fire on us. We advanced towards them while they did the same, weapons held firmly incase of any......mischap......suddenly the image appeared clearer, i couldn't believe what my eyes saw. Captain jackson's pov after the blast which send us damn far away, it took us 20 minutes before we both regain consciousness. Thank God we weren't seriously injured, it was just bruises here and there, clara was okay . I was glad to see her that she was super ok, i didn't know when emotions drove us crazy and we dived each other in a tight embrace then a powerful mind explosive KISS followed suit, i even forgot that i have a pregnant wife and two kids, we were still having a romantic time when AMANDA crossed my mind, oh my little angel, i broke from the kiss and told clara that we should get out of here first that here isn't safe. We advance out of the place going to the gate when we were attacked, we were engaged in a heavy gun war, we fought back tooth and nail and soon were were going low on ammo {ammunition}, just then we saw four hefty men from afar off heading towards our direction, suprisingly they didn't shoot at us . That also convince me that it was that the enemy, cause if it were they, they would have fired us. Just then some shooters from the enemy side engage us and we took cover shooting back , clara threw a grenade and boom they were cleared. And we advanced towards our four men or should i say counter men or hefty counter men. Closing the range , what i saw next made me broke into race towards the figure....leaving clara behind location: moister point detachment: 101 marine force ops delta delta field operative force temporal camp lieutenant jones now seated in the mid of his tent, thinking, just then a clue got into his head. Talking to himself "when that captain came, he suppose to be the one to lead missions but they gave it to lieutenant sampson, sampson was killed alongside his 3 units but suprisingly no one from the other 7 units died. Hmmmm, funny, does this means that all the other seven units joined hands together to clear off the three units? , i thinks something is very fishy here, come to think about it, i think i've got an idea i know what i'll do." he moved out of his tent and summoned a meeting of all the units commandants..... Tbc[/b]
17 Jan 2017 | 04:37
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Next...........
17 Jan 2017 | 12:58
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still following
17 Jan 2017 | 13:08
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@DTLC abeg where d music, i wan dance o i don put on my dancing shoes
17 Jan 2017 | 13:50
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Next...t
17 Jan 2017 | 14:22
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Following
17 Jan 2017 | 15:06
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Iam Supect That Major O Nice Story N^ E^ X^ E^ <<^PLE^>>
17 Jan 2017 | 16:02
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following...
17 Jan 2017 | 16:50
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NexT
17 Jan 2017 | 17:13
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ne xt
17 Jan 2017 | 18:01
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nxt
17 Jan 2017 | 19:02
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Next oo
17 Jan 2017 | 19:04
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[b]Episode 16 Location: still at the ops delta delta temporal camp venue: lieut. Williams tent gathering: commandants meeting at the meeting place which is also located at the moister point, in the lieutenant's tent, commandants of different units are having an urgent meeting with there operational commandant, williams look at the faces surrounding him him and then decided to approach his tactics skillfully. Just then he decided to break the silence "able men of the marine, i salute you all gallant soldiers for your bravery and willingness to serve our nation and also willing to embark on this mission of rescue." just then he paused , took a careful look on his officers faces, anxiety and suspense was written all over there faces, he took a look at his loyal three officers their faces look calm and relax unlike those of the traitors. He just smiled inwardly and resumed talking "in the military , we are train to be soldiers, as soldiers , we are train to kill , in other words we kill to live and we live to kill. The adag in a war period is either you kill or you are killed...hope am making some sense here?" he stop talking and took some quick sweep look around his officers "sir yes sir" was there reply in uniosm taking a look at the traitors forming loyalty , calling him sir while they all have a secret agenda of killing him once the opportunity unravels itself, it angered him to the very extrem that he felt like strangling each and everyone of them to death with his bare hands. But sha soldiers are prone to obey the last order without complaint, so they were not to be blamed. But wait a minutes majority of the soldiers were northerners , it was only unit 7 commandant that was a southerner among them, if they were all northerners he would have come to the conclusion that the northern officers were up to something, just then he summoned courage to speak up "i have a very bad feeling that we have traitors in our mids as i am talking right now." once he spoke this word there was panic every where, ofcourse apart from his three loyal officers , the rest were panicking. Just then warrant sergeant johnson who was the commandant of unit 7 a southerner ,spoke up "sir to be honest, you're right, i was force into conspiring against you and your three loyal unit by captain, he threatened to kill my family , he used my family as a leverage on me. Please sir am very sorry please forgive me, i vow to execute this mission loyally" lieut. Williams stood up and paced up and down the tent, finally, he decided to forgive him. "Alright the rest of you march out" was the next thing he heard, turning back to face his officers only to see that everyone in the room have drawn out their revolvers ready to striked at each other. tbc[/b]
18 Jan 2017 | 10:36
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who is the Judas
18 Jan 2017 | 13:48
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Juda full dia oh.
18 Jan 2017 | 15:42
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Still following....
18 Jan 2017 | 16:11
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Traitors :s
18 Jan 2017 | 18:41
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hmmm
18 Jan 2017 | 18:50
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haha ole toyen ni
18 Jan 2017 | 19:55
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Episode 17 80% loaded
19 Jan 2017 | 03:37
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MEGA EPISODE 17 . . . . {SUB DIVIDED INTO episode 17a&17b} . . . . . . . . . . . SCROLL DOWN FOR EPISODE 17A . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . [b]EPISODE 17a . . . lieutenant williams wasn't suprise to see the action about to take place, he just smiled and walked towards his officers , still beaming with that handsome smile which gave him the confidence of an able leader. Looking directly into his opposers faces he let out a mild chuckle which made every one confuse about what was really funny. Suddenly the chuckling turn into a heavy laughter, looking straight into the eyes of every one he decided to enlighten them "gentlemen, many of you will be wondering why i suddenly bust out laughing, its a very funny circumstance or should i say coincidence that most gallant and rugged men who fought side by side with me during the war times, who made sacrifices with, to win the war, and yes we did win . We fought on the good side and we fought because we believed that we fight to be free, our brothers, sisters, children, wives , fathers and mothers we fought for so that they will live a life of freedom, but here we are ready to kill ourselves" he pause , taking a careful glance and look on the faces of his officers, shook his head then continued with his speech "that was how it happened when lieutenant sampson lost his life and you all think me to be a fool? Come on , we are the marine commandos, we are trained to take lives when ever we fine ourselves in such situations but we are not trained to commit murder. But now why are we turning around to murder ourselves just because of some self centered individuals in power.we were sent on a mission to rescue not to kill ourselves except the fact that that captain did commissioned you all to murder me and my unit for some selfish benefit" . . . .tbc[/b] . . . . . . . . . SCROLL DOWN FOR EPISODE 17B. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . [b]EPISODE 17b . . . After saying these words he looked directly to his officers faces then proceed "since we all seem to be very stupid in letting some selfish individuals to take advantage of us, let any one who seem to be sure of himself and what he is fighting for and his reward open fire on me." saying this he walk to the middle of his officers revolvers, drop down his arms and knee down waiting for them to proceed for their mission. But yet no one dared released a shot. He closed his eyes and still waiting hoping that they will change their minds and shoot him but no one still did a damn. Just then he yelled out "are you all not soldiers? Weren't you trained on how to pull the trigger? Aren't you ready to complete your mission? Or do you want me to help you do it myself incase your guns are faulty? Come on you bastards pull the damn trigger, what the hell are you fucking waiting for?" just then all his officers lowered down their guns and went down on their knees to ask for mercy that they were all threaten to carry out their sinister mission. Lieutenant williams stood up and spoke up "it pains me alot that the soldiers who i fought side by side with and suffered the pag of the jungle with ,will conspire against me to murder me without reason, but we're all soldiers and we're family . What will be my gain if i don't forgive my family, come on lads all of you jump up , i've forgiven you all and before i forget, we got lots of duty to do to rescue our able captain, come on lads , united we stand..." the officers responded "divided we fall" "alright lads each man to his unit and moister your troops, we march out and advance towards the enemies camp around 1800hours on the dot" all: "sir yes sir" and they all marched out of the tent.[/b]
19 Jan 2017 | 08:31
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following
19 Jan 2017 | 09:07
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followin
19 Jan 2017 | 10:40
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Chai....!
19 Jan 2017 | 13:41
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time for war. next
20 Jan 2017 | 01:44
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[b]Anom ya aunty following[/b]
20 Jan 2017 | 02:31
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seated....next
20 Jan 2017 | 03:49
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next
20 Jan 2017 | 03:59
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*next*
20 Jan 2017 | 04:13
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Next pls
20 Jan 2017 | 08:28
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Next
20 Jan 2017 | 10:20
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Leggo...
20 Jan 2017 | 10:24
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love how lieutenant Williams handle the situation
20 Jan 2017 | 12:40
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following.....
20 Jan 2017 | 14:44
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Nyc...
20 Jan 2017 | 15:35
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Let ride on
20 Jan 2017 | 16:26
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[b]EPISODE 18 . . . CAPTAIN JACKSON'S POV i never did believe that i'll live to see any one of my family member again. Wow i couldn't believe that i'll see jack in such a place and also the spear head of my rescuers. I ran down and embrace my boy tightly , my boy is indeed a grown up. "wow jack how are you and how did you do it. How's mama and amanda?" i noticed that once i mention the name amanda he stop smiling and frown his face, "jack is any thing the problem?" "no dad not really," he manage to fake a smile i knew that all was not well so i pressed him on "come on jack, am ur dad, you can't hide away any thing from me , i know that something is wronge with you pls share it with me" "come on dad nothing is wrong , am super alright, am happy to see you safe" i knew that all wasn't well with him, that something was bothering him, i knew from the look on his face, but i have to retreat, i didn't want to press him further and furthermore here wasn't safe to discuss. "come on lets get the hell outer here" i commanded them as we all started running out of the damn place for safety. Just then we spotted some squad of tanks advancing toward us. I wanted to run toward it but evelyn with a baritone voice ask me not that we should all fall back. I just obeyed her without question and we ran back and took covers, i guess this girl was up to something, when the tanks were getting into range, she pressed a remote control with her and the whole tanks went up "boom!!!" leaving its pieces and fragments around the environment. Wow that was great , i can't recall the last time my troop performed such miracle. "am sorry about what happened few minutes ago" i turn towords clara "what was that?" "the kiss" "its nothing, i so much enjoy it, honestly jackson, i love you ." "i love you too but just as i told you earlier, am a married man,please try and understand" "i understand perfectly well dear" "am sorry" "its okay, thats no big deal" i watch her trying to hide her emotions, trully, i really love her but as i've already told her, i am already married and i love my wife dearly. All this were running through my mind when i spotted a green light afar, yea thats my marine divison coming to my rescue, "come on every one, rescue is on the way, lets advance" we started advancing and a series of gun battle ensued between our enemies and us but we were out numbered, we tried all we could to hold unto our ground till my troops arrived . . . A notice from DTLC series to the readers; dear readers, right from the begining of this action pack story, you were informed that the story will be short and will stop at episode 10. Am sure many of you will be suprised that the story has exceeded it promised episode. But pls note that the author have updated the story on our script and have also prolong it by writting more scripts. The good news is that this story have been extended to a very long one. And will have to be dividede into seasons. Thanks for ur understanding. Sign: DTLC CEO & DTLC editor. . . . Story tbc next week monday[/b]
21 Jan 2017 | 06:32
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@victoriouschild help DTLC with the register
21 Jan 2017 | 06:35
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I don't have the new reg
21 Jan 2017 | 06:39
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Next and pls what's the meaning of DTLC
21 Jan 2017 | 12:00
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Okay...continue
21 Jan 2017 | 12:00
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Nice story... Feed me more.
21 Jan 2017 | 13:35
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interesting. Continue pls
21 Jan 2017 | 14:27
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Wow wat a nice story
21 Jan 2017 | 16:48
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let go there
21 Jan 2017 | 18:23
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U wlcm man
21 Jan 2017 | 19:00
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@victoriouschild ok @mimi-02 DTLC stands for De Thompson's Literal Collection. Its a book writter's series forum. You can search up our new page on facebook with its full name. De thompson's literal collection .
22 Jan 2017 | 00:55
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Beta oh
22 Jan 2017 | 04:11
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continue
22 Jan 2017 | 17:21
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continue
22 Jan 2017 | 17:22
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<b>love this story
22 Jan 2017 | 18:54
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[b]Episode 19 Marine Force POV [lieut. Summary] The marine forces advanced towards the camp of the enemies. Although the lieutenant was the one leading, being a professional soldier, the battle was very tough, "common lads! Every body move it, yes thats it lads, fire!, etc" could be heard from each units commanders as they were trying to boost up their men's morale and uplift their weary spirit. They fought tooth and nail killing and dying also . Many able body and vibrant gallant young men falling like sack of beans. The war was bloody. It was a war of the revenge and defend. The lieutenant's last orientations to his troops before embarking on this suicide mission seems to boost the soldiers morals. Cause the more they died the harder they fight. No one cared a damn either they died or live. For them, it was a game of survival for the fittest. Guns continued blasting, flesh and bones continues tearing and cracking. The wasted ones drop down to the ground like dried firewoods.indeed the war was bloody, but the lieutenant's orientations prevailed . . . FEW HOURS BACK LOCATION: MARINE FORCE TEMPORAL CAMP VENUE: MOISTER POINT CALL: TROOPS ORIENTATION the lieutenant climb the podium, looked across the field, his troops were all girdle up for action, but he could read anxiety, fear, and confusion on his men's faces. He therefore used the opportunity to boost their morales. "soldiers, i greet you, mariners i salute you all. When i joined the military about 10 years ago, as a young private, i use to obey every military law, i fought in bloody wars, battles and also went on suicide missions. And that laws states that a soldier's life is an adventure, cause without adventure you wouldn't have a challange, and without challange you wouldn't have to brave death and challange it, and without braving death you wouldn't be call soldier. Cause a soldier do not see death as a threat, rather, he sees death as an obstacle which must be over comed and cross over to the other side. This mission is a very dangerous mission soldiers. I wouldn't sugar coat it, for many of us standing hear will get wasted, many of us will get deformed and many of us our remains will never be found. It is only a few of us that will make it out me here alive. But never-the-less, all we need to do is to hit up, fight for the people you love, died for the people you love, for even if we die fighting today our legacy shall continue to live even among the next generation to come, how will you feel when in the future you hear your son boasting out to his friends telling them that , my dad was among those brave soldiers who fought to restore peace to this country? Common soldiers, we obey the last order, we are not fish but we dive and swimm, we are not birds nor witch but we fly, we are not snakes but we crawl. , we are not afraid to die cause what we do in life echoed in enternity, cause we know that our legacy lives on. Now with determination in our heart to fight even to the last drop of our very blood we shout lets march to death!!" he concluded while the troop all shouted "to death!!!!!" they all marched out to the battle field . . . Tbc[/b]
31 Jan 2017 | 04:42
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continue
31 Jan 2017 | 08:40
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Death
31 Jan 2017 | 08:55
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u all will succed...continue
31 Jan 2017 | 09:47
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dats it
31 Jan 2017 | 11:21
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NYC ONE ... TO THE DEATH . . U WILL SUCCED
31 Jan 2017 | 11:38
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Stay safe soldiers
31 Jan 2017 | 11:40
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nyce won still waiting
31 Jan 2017 | 12:48
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Thats the spirit soldiers!!!
31 Jan 2017 | 13:29
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@froshberry-2 , notify talk for the cover photo
31 Jan 2017 | 15:14
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Nice 1,lieut
31 Jan 2017 | 18:53
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Ride on where is that amanda sef?
1 Feb 2017 | 05:40
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Next
1 Feb 2017 | 08:02
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My new story titled the veil is out pls follow along
2 Feb 2017 | 01:48
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SEASON FINALE EPISODE 20 . . . The scense continued from the last..... {BATTLE FIELD} The marine forces are fighting very hard to rescue their commander, officers shouting out commands while soldiers shooting randomly, bullet piercing skins, breaking skulls and agonizing tears are shed , the fallen trampled upon without been paid any attention. Every one is fighting for two objectives, to rescue and to survive. The battle was bloody, lieutenant jones williams walk from the flank B point to the flank A point fighting alongside his soldiers. Yes the taste of victory was near, after what seems like a bloody endless gun battle, victory was finally getting near, captain jackson on his part of combat was also smelling victory in the air as both he and his teams fought their way out of the enemies camp. The battle was intense and it escalated to the point whereby no one even care about his or her life again, the battle was fought as if they all still have season two of their lives in place incase they lost the season one. Finally captain jackson's team and lieutenant jones williams team met each other. "captain am very happy to see you alive" lieutenant jones shouted out due to the noise from guns "lieutenant nice to see you again" jackson shouted back and both men ran towards each other embraced themselves and return back to business. "nice job so far lieutenant now please tell the men to fall back lets change plan" "aye captain" the lieutenant quickly gave out a signal and all his men fell back to a safe zone. The enemies couldn't chase them because they were out numbered and they were also down on ammo. They all went back to their previouse camp where they all gathered together to draw out combat plan "gallant soldiers, i thank you all for your ruggedity displayed today, we all are aware that we're in danger now so no need to relent, we're not withdrawing nor fleeing nor surrendering, we just want to change attack operation thats all. So rather than operation delta delta rescue {OPS DDR},we're taking operation cobra strike {OPS CASE}. The attack formation is DESERT STORM, we'll go in low and storm their defence and strenght, their strenght lies in the artillery while the infantry are their defence. Now i want each and every one of you to be grouped into the number of ten men per unit and please remember team work, never you forget or abandoned the man beside you and always bear in mind that it is either you kill or be killed , to those who will never make it out of this bush alive and those who will never get to see their family again i say rest in peace in advance. Without much orientations due to the fact that we're out of time, i'll ask you all to start regrouping into tense." captain jackson concluded his speech and soon the formation was form and they all marched out to the battle field to battle only to behold a well equipped mechanize soldiers awaiting to battle them. Every man's heart fainted as they started preparing for the worst...death comes to all and something must always kill a man...this is where our story about a captain and his troops came into a very death end starts.... . . . What happened to captain jackson and his troops? Fine out from the next series CAPTAIN JACKSON SEASON 2 {REVENGE OF THE MARINES} don't miss out . . TH£~ £ND . . (C) DTLC 2017 ALRIGHT RESERVED
7 Feb 2017 | 15:49
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Nice one
8 Feb 2017 | 03:21
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Can't wait for the season2
8 Feb 2017 | 03:50
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Interesting story.... Thumbs up Waiting patiently for the season 2
8 Feb 2017 | 07:00
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Can't wait
8 Feb 2017 | 08:11
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waiting
8 Feb 2017 | 11:23
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Wow! Gonna finish up that thing and send it..
8 Feb 2017 | 13:27
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waiting
8 Feb 2017 | 13:48
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CAN'T WAIT
8 Feb 2017 | 15:03
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Great. Nice one. Waitng for season 2
8 Feb 2017 | 17:04
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Wen d season two d cumot.
8 Feb 2017 | 17:12
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Ok @froshberry-2 pls be fast o.
9 Feb 2017 | 04:51
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Nice 1,waitin 4 nxt
9 Feb 2017 | 06:08
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Season 2 will be out next month
10 Feb 2017 | 06:17
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waiting patiently
12 Feb 2017 | 02:14
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@coolval222-2 and @victoriouschild episode 20 which is the season finale is missing, i.e there is no link to it- why?
19 Feb 2017 | 10:29
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this story is damn interesting
21 Feb 2017 | 05:28
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@coolval222-2 nd @victoriouschild tnx 4 creat link to episode 20
22 Feb 2017 | 12:50
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You're welcome
22 Feb 2017 | 13:02
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Anxiously Waiting For Season 2
22 Feb 2017 | 14:52
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Waiting
14 Mar 2017 | 20:07
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Waitin' mahn!
15 Mar 2017 | 02:37
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@froshberry-2 die it man, where are the second sets of cover photos
15 Mar 2017 | 03:32
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where is season 2 i think w are in june
7 Jun 2017 | 06:00
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@victoriouschild @coolval222-2 @frankkay pls do something cant this story's cover photo. It just got missing o .
5 Jul 2017 | 11:15
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inbox me the image link
5 Jul 2017 | 11:29
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Pls ask @coolval222-2 for the image link cause he was the one that added it
5 Jul 2017 | 15:41
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omg that yeye daugther of yours lol nawa oooo,,,, i know blam u na ,, you dont know nii
13 Dec 2017 | 15:56
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NICE
30 Dec 2017 | 04:46
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I luv dis give em wat dey deserve
27 Jan 2018 | 01:26
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Gaan gaann
27 Jan 2018 | 23:47
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Roll it up
26 May 2021 | 18:51
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Let see what time has for us
26 May 2021 | 18:58
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Some children are daft your dad is mainly thinking about u but u are thinking about one useless guy that has drop u for better pussy
26 May 2021 | 19:05
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This is not good at all
26 May 2021 | 19:14
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This is getting more weired
26 May 2021 | 19:18
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Battle begun
26 May 2021 | 19:22
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Hmmm
26 May 2021 | 19:26
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See this penple ooo
26 May 2021 | 19:30
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I dont normally believe this leaders jooooo
26 May 2021 | 19:35
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Like i said earlier this leader ar bullshit
26 May 2021 | 19:39
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Great commander
26 May 2021 | 19:49
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Kudos to the writer
26 May 2021 | 19:59
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This captain's wife is captain herself.!
12 Jun 2021 | 13:02
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i think i like that boy!
12 Jun 2021 | 13:10
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if the soldiers can not do it let the kids handle the issue!
12 Jun 2021 | 13:18
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i wonder where is the "like" button on this stories so whenever i feel like not commenting i just click it.!!??????
12 Jun 2021 | 13:27
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Nice story
6 Aug 2021 | 17:51
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