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Eve.
By Chimdi Jane Samuel.
Chapter One.

When I was thirteen, my father owed a very rich and powerful man a huge amount of money and since he couldn't pay him back, I was given to him as a price for his debt.
Now at age seventeen, I haven't had a taste of the outside world. Alberto was my pain. My suffering.
He abused me and defiled me in the most horrible and cruel ways.
He kept me locked up in his house all day. I only came out when he had to take me for a very important occasion.
I stared out the window and saw two teenage girls in uniform, talking loudly and laughing.
Sorrow gripped my heart. I couldn't help but wonder how it felt to have friends. To crush on a guy. To be in high school. To be in love. To be free.
A drop of tear fell down my eyes and I quickly wiped them away, in fear that Alberto would see it and get angry.
He wasn't here in the room but his presence was felt.
I had grown to live by his demands while he was present or not.
Alberto was a monster, a demon. Satan's reincarnate.
He brought me pain.
He owned my soul.
He owned my body.
He owned my heart.
He owned every piece of me.
I laid down on the bed and tried to sleep. But sleep wouldn't come.
Alberto was in my dreams. He was everywhere.

Just as I closed my eyes, my door flew open and I heard heavy footsteps. It was coming closer, and I shut my eyes tighter. I knew who it was.
It was the beast.
It was the heartless monster.
It was Alberto.
15 May 2019 | 08:37
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15 May 2019 | 10:02
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Thank u for the i.v
15 May 2019 | 10:02
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Ride on
15 May 2019 | 11:38
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Nice start,,,,,,,continue
15 May 2019 | 14:08
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all I need is you people's comment
15 May 2019 | 16:49
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with that the episode will be coming frequently
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Eve. By Chimdi Samuel . Chapter Two. Even as I tried to block the sound of his feet shuffling on the floor. I couldn't stop the feeling of his hands running down my cheeks. I whimpered. "My dear wife, Eve, my soul" he said. I turned and sat up right, staring at my hands, I couldn't look at his face. "Good evening "I said, visibly shaking out of fear. "Did you miss me?" He asked, I could feel his gaze boring holes into my head. "Yes" "Liar" he shouted, he knew I wanted him gone, I could never miss a monster, a demon. My husband. "Liar, I'm sure you want me dead and every opportunity you have to kill me you won't miss it" Very true. I hated Alberto. I didn't say anything as I let out a whimper. "I missed you Eve and I'm going to show you how" he laughed, dragging my hand and throwing me in the bed. No, no, no I knew what he was about to do. "No, Alberto please, please don't do this" I begged, now tears were visibly falling down my cheeks. He unbuckled his belt and sat on top of me, tearing my gown. "Stay still, wifey. I'm your husband afterall" he laughed. I screamed at him, I lunged at him. I tried to get away from him. I struggled. Fighting with all my might. But Alberto seemed to be enjoying himself. He touched me. Everywhere. From my chest down to my legs. Leaving his hand prints all over my body. It hurts. It hurts so much. I cried. But Alberto didn't stop. Seconds turned into minutes. Minutes turned into hours. Alberto didn't stop. I was sore. Tired. Weak. When was this going to end. I laid limp on the bed. Not feeling anything anymore. I was just like a bag of rice. Not moving. I stared at the ceiling. Thinking. Not moving. Soon he came down from me. Buckled up and left not turning to look at me. I tried to get up, but fell back. The pains between my thighs was unbearable. It hurts. All over my body hurts. I got up again. I needed to be strong. I fell back down but got up again. Tears blinded my vision as I went to the bathroom.
15 May 2019 | 16:53
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How cud ur parents do Dis to u??? Alberto too why na???
15 May 2019 | 20:08
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This is terrible... Please continue
15 May 2019 | 21:39
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So sorry
16 May 2019 | 10:15
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Eve must be going through a lot of pain and agony. If adam was around, her adam may can will would have may have , things would have been much better for her. She will be hoping for a help to survive.
16 May 2019 | 15:42
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That name brings bitterness to her heart, that name makes her to cry, that name is the reason for her predicament. They called the man with that name alberto, you can call him nonsense shit.
16 May 2019 | 16:00
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People that are wise are already wise because they believed in God as the giver of wisdom, motivation and inspiration. In the other chat a guy told a gal something to make her happy and she became too proud...Fools refused to move out of folly like give away daughter for depth, Seriously, there's no reason to give away a daughter to a known or unknown animal for depth. Search for a way out and not this folly against human right.
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Eve. By Chimdi Samuel. Chapter Three. I stared at the mirror in my bathroom. Looking at my face. My brown wavy hair had lost its shine. My hazel eyes held sorrow and pain. There was a scar on my cheeks it was not very visible but it was there. I remember how I got it. *flashback* *Four years ago* I sat on the big bed in a very big room. Alberto said the room was mine. I didn't want to sleep here. I would be scared after all I was just thirteen years. I was used to sleeping with my parents in their room. I looked around the room. Too much space . Immediately I started crying, I missed mom and dad. Why had dad given me away to this man. Alberto. I knew him. Everyone knew him. He was wicked and he killed people. And my dad gave me to him. But why had mom done nothing about it. Instead she just stood there and watched the man take me away. I missed mom do much. I laid in the bed and tried to sleep ,but I couldn't. I can't sleep without Daniel. My teddy bear. He was soft and always brought me the comfort I needed. I wiped my tears and tried to sleep when my door room opened. I shut my eyes. And pretended to be asleep. But someone drew me out of the bed, and I screamed in fright. Alberto gazed at me. I tried to get up but fell down back. "You're beautiful, you know? " he laughed, touching my face . "I want my mommy and daddy "I cried, starting to shake in fear. Immediately, his smile was replaced with a frown . He was angry. . "How dare you speak of your parents, don't forget they gave you to me. " "No, my mom wants me back, they love me" This time I shouted. Just as I said that, he slapped me. "Bitch, your parents haven't taught you enough. You have a lot to learn from me. First, never speak back" He picked me up and took me out of the room. Fear surged through my body. I started crying asking him where he was taking me to. But he didn't re ply. Soon we came to the door and I feared what was behind it He pushed open the door and threw me inside. I looked around and saw it was a torture room. It h as blades of all different sizes, shapes. Whips of different length and sizes hung on the wall. Fear gripped my soul. "I'll teach you never to talk back at me "Alberto came behind me and pushes me to the chair In the middle of the room. "No, please, I'm sorry, dont do anything to me. Please" I begged. "No, darling. I haven't even started yet" He took a rope on one of the tables and started to tie my hands. I struggled to get out of it. But Alberto was much more stronger. He tired my hands to the back of t he chair. And my legs also. I couldn't move. "You have a lot to learn baby. Rule number one. Never talk back at your husband" he picked up on e of the knifes, it was short but sharp. He stared a t it and smiled. "Let's start with your size" Then he came closer t o me. I struggled. Fought. Screamed at him. "Please stop it. I won't talk back I promise " I tried to move back but pains surged through my shoulders and back. Alberto brought the knife closer to my face. It was when the knife touched my cheeks, I screamed louder. I screamed. Then he began putting more pressure on my face with the knife. It stung. The pain started. Blood gushed down m y cheeks. The pain was unbearable . Then he finally let me go. Took a mirror from the t able then showed me my face. It was partly covered in blood and tears. "This is just a tip of an iceberg Eve, never underestimate me" Then he untied my hands and legs an d looked at me. He placed a kiss on my lips. "I love you, you know that?" I nodded. Tears streaming down my face . He then carried me to the room. I fell asleep in hi s arms. *flash back over* I got into the tub, and scrubbed my body well trying to remove all traces of Alberto fingerprints . H e had always said he loved me but never showed me how much. No one tortured the one they love. I stepped out of the bathroom and went into the room ,only to find a girl there.
17 May 2019 | 02:32
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This is serious
17 May 2019 | 03:54
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I, am not sure of continue reading this story. Too much emotional
17 May 2019 | 14:45
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And who is the girl and what did she want
18 May 2019 | 01:27
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Chapter Four. The girl in the room was stating at me. She looked a little older than me. With black hair and brown eyes. She was putting on a deep blue gown that reached her toes and in her hand held a box. I went forward to meet her and was about to ask her who she was, but she beat me to it. "Good evening Mrs Santiago, Mr Santiago asked me to get you ready for the Ball going on in one of his hotels. He said he would be here to pick you in an hour" She concluded, putting the box on the bed. "A ball?" I asked. "Yes ma, I have to get you ready now. Mr Santiag o hates lateness" I was going out. I was leaving the house. This wa s my chance to escape. My chance to leave Alber to Santiago. My chance to be free. I was going to run away. Finally, I was going to get a chance to leave the party and run away before Alberto notices my absence. I was going to run, escape and never look back. I smiled and sat on the chair as the girl started with my face. In a few minutes, I turned to look at the mirror and could barely recognise the person who stared back at me. My hazel eyes looked brighter. My cheeks looked brighter. My skin shone. My eyebrows perfectly carved. My scar was invisible. My lips shone deep red. My hair was in a perfect bun. It was neatly packed. Silver pins glittered from my hair. I was gorgeous. "Mrs Santiago, this is your dress" I turned to look at the girl bring out a deep blue gown from the box on my bed. I gasped. "Mr Santiago picked it for you from the mall. He knew you would like it" Alberto picked out a dress for me. The dress was magnificent. I quickly put it on and stared at the mirror. It had a V neck. It sleeve hugged my shoulders exposing my neck. It was long. Hugging my body so tight . The dress had silver stones from the neck to the breast region. It was a beauty. I was a beauty. I was gorgeous. I could barely recognised myself. I turned and noticed it was opened at the back. So my legs were on full display. I smiled at myself. This dress would cost thousands. "Now your shoe, Mrs Santiago" The girl said, bringing out a shoe from the box also. It was pure silver, From the straps to its heel. It had stones on it, blue,silver. It looked beautiful. "Mr Santiago really wanted you to look beautiful tonight, Please make him happy. He spent a lot on what you’re wearing" She said. I couldn’t speak, I was dumbfounded. I looked younger and beautiful. I looked like a queen. "Thanks so much" I told her. Just then the door opened to reveal my husband. He was fixing his tie but immediately he saw me, he stopped. He was shocked. He stared at me from my face to my toes. He was breathless. He was frozen in his spot. He tried to speak but no words could come out. Finally he spoke. "That would be all ,Tina. You can leave me and my wife" Alberto said. looking at me straight in the eyes. When Tina left he came closer to me. "You look beautiful Eve" He said rubbing his fingers on my face. "You look like a queen. My queen" I blushed. For the first time, whenever Alberto complimented me i never blushed. So why was I? "Thanks for the dress, It’s beautiful" I looked at him. "You are not so bad yourself" Alberto was wearing a deep blue tux. His hair was neatly combed backwards. The 26 year old man before me was handsome. His green eyes held lust as we stared at each other. He was tall. Had a good body statute. His muscles seem to bulge out of this jacket. Alberto was handsome, no one could deny it. Not even me. At 26 he was handsome, rich and powerful. He had five star hotels all over the world. Santiago Suite and hotels. He opened a little box in his hand and i saw a diamond necklace. "Alberto, this would cause millions!" I gasped. He just smiled and move behind me and placed it on my neck. It was shiny and it looked expensive. "I would buy the whole world for you, my dear wife" He placed a kiss on my cheek and then on my shoulde"You look gorgeous, beautiful. You dont know how badly i want to rip this dress from your body and take you now the whole night" Fear. I was scared. I was still sore. No, Alberto. please not now. Just then some one barged in and Alberto let go of me. I released the breath i was holding. Thank God. "Boss, the limosine is ready dowmstairs" Tyler, a man a little older than Alberto said. Tyler was Alberto right hand man. Very loyal. He was handsome but not as Alberto. He had a wife and a little boy . They came very rarely. "Come on Eve, the car is waiting" Alberto took my hand. I had never seen him so gentle with me. He was even smiling. This man was different from the Alberto i knew. He was nice. I smiled and held his hand tighter as we went downstairs. Alberto was making me smile. And happy. I quickly shook that thought away. What was wrong with me? Had i forgotten who Alberto was? This was the same man that abused me. The same man that totured me. Why was i acting like this? Had i forgotten my plan? My plan to run away cannot be stopped by Alberto sudden change. Even if he buys the whole world. I was going to escape this night. I was going to leave and never come back. I thought as we made our way to the Ball
18 May 2019 | 02:14
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Hope u are not dreaming o
18 May 2019 | 08:21
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ride on
18 May 2019 | 13:36
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na wow
18 May 2019 | 13:37
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Madam,are u sure u r not dreaming??? Anyways I do hope ur plan of escape works...
18 May 2019 | 16:03
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Eve. By Chimdi Samuel. Chapter Five. Alberto held my hand as qe walked into the hotel. Everywhere was packed with both young couple s and old. I noticed almost everyone had a partner. I was a little glad Alberto was with me. Everyone seemed to be having fun, drinking, laughing, talking. Some were even dancing at the corner of the room. Soft music filled my ears. The hall was huge. With bright chandeliers hanging from the ceiling. It was perfectly decorated. I tried to look for any exit but found none. How was i going to escape? "Eve, Eve" Alberto shook my hand, looking at me weirdly. "Did you hear me?" He asked. I was so caught up in my thoughts i didnt notice Alberto was talking to me. "Sorry i was thinking about something" I replied. "About what?" uhmmm..... "About how handsome you look in this tux" I said, the first thing that came to my mind. I cant give Alberto any reason to think i was planning on running away. He has to be happy with me. For a moment Alberto was suprised. I had never called him handsome. "Really, why the sudden change?" He questioned. God! He was going to find out about my plan. "Just joking my dear Eve, I know you secretly ad mired me even with all your fake tears. You love me" He kissed my checks. The next few minutes Alberto introduced me to a lot of his friends, business worker, and even his best friend. He treated me well. Telling them how loyal a wife i was. They called me beautiful and praised Alberto for picking someone as me. I was sitting with Alberto in the vip area when on e of his securities called him away. "Boss, Mr Martins would like to see you at the back now" "Ok, i will be right back, Eve. Dont move an inch" He said kissing my cheeks and standing up. Dont move an inch my foot! I was going to run! I thought smiling to myself. He started to move away with his securities following him. Perfect! I was already smiling. Just a few minute s he would be away from sight. Just then he stopped and turned to look at me. "Fuck!He drew two of his securities out of the five and pushed them towards me. "Where the hell do you think you are going! Who would protect Eve?" He asked, angry with them. "Stay here! Dont fucking let any guy around her! If one strand of her hair is out of place I would cut off your balls and feed it to the dogs!" He said, staring at them with anger. He looked at me next. "Dont go too far, you can get a drink and come back here. No talking to anyone ok? You are mine, and mine alone!" Then he kissed me fiercely to sh ow his point. All the gentlemen looking at me quickly removed thier faces. Alberto had made it clear. I was HIS. He walked away with the remaining three. And i almost broke down in tears when i looked at the securities. My plan was ruined. I blinked away the t ears and stood up to get a drink. As i walked to the bar man, with the securities following me. The MC announced it was time for the general dance. That the men should pick the lady beside them. I scoffed and continued walking. I wasnt a great dancer, and besided Alberto would kill me if he saw me dancing with another dude. "Running away I see" Someone said behind me, I turned to see a man. Handsome, probably in his early twenties. He was putting on a black tux. His hair fell across his face, giving him a sharp look. I fell immediately. "uhm..no. Just going to get a drink" I said, wanting to walk away. "I want a dance with you" He said, holding out his hand towards me, inviting me to dance. I blushed staring at his hand. I wanted to take it. I wanted to dance with him. Immediately one of the securities coughed, giving me the signal that Alberto was not going to like it. I frowned. "Sorry, but i would like to decline" I said walking a way, but a hand drew me back and i came crashing on his chest. "I never asked" He said, staring deep into my eye s. Just then my securities came forward in attempt to pull the man away from me. Then another securites came forward too I figured the securities belonged to this handsome man. The two securities stared at each other almost ready to protect their own. Just then the man chuckled. "Calm down boys, no need to crash this party. Its just a dance. No harm in that" He was facing my own securities. They frowned and step back a little giving me a "hate" look. His securities also moved back, giving us space t o dance. "I’m James" He said. Starting the dance by bending a little. "May i have this dance my lady?" By now i was mesmerised by him. He was loving. I couldnt say no. "Yes" I courtesied. He moved closer to my face, while i moved back wards. We started dancing. I didnt know where th e dancing steps came from but i danced like someone who had been dancing for years. We looked at each other’s eyes. His blue eyes staring deep into my hazel ones. He moved so swiftly, holding my waist and turning me around. He carried me with very little effort. He smiled at me. I smiled at him. The soft music playing only made it more magical. More glorious. I didnt want to stop. I wanted to continue dancing with James. I wanted him. I rested my head on his shoulders as we moved slowly. His hands around my waist in a protective way . I felt safe in his hands. I felt happy. I didnt want t o let him go. "You are the most beautiful person i have ever m et" He said, kissing my shoulders. I didnt say anything but listen to the sound of his heartbeat and smiled by body responding to his t ouch. "You havent told me your name yet" "Its Eve" I said. Smiling to myself. Breathing in hi s scent. It felt wonderful. James was making me feel wonderful and i loved it. I didnt want to leave him. I wanted to dance with him forever. I wanted him to take me away to live with him in his castle. I wanted the man before m e. I raised my eyes to look at his face. But as raised my head, to the left was the monster looking at us. Making his way towards us. He w as angry. Very angry. Furious. He looked dangerous He looked like he wanted to kill. He was pissed. Anger, Jealousy ,lust, sorrow, pain filled his eyes and he walked towards us. I was dead. I knew it. He was going to kill me here. I thought as Alberto walked towards us.
19 May 2019 | 03:03
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I think he will kill some one
19 May 2019 | 03:57
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But i, hate the nousence that u just act
19 May 2019 | 05:57
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Oya! Lets see what gonna happen
19 May 2019 | 13:10
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EVE Chapter Six. Fear. It was the only emotion i was feeling right now and nothing else. I quickly moved away from James who didnt know what was happening. I continued watching Alberto as he made his way to us. I was dead i knew it. James noticing my strange behaviour tried to talk to me but i couldnt hear. I suddenly became deaf. "Eve, Eve, what’s going on?" He asked shaking me. "Al..Alb..Alberto, he is here" I pointed at the angry man. Before James had the opportunity to look back a blow landed on his face. "Oh God" I gasped as James fell to the floor. "She’s mine asshole. You had no right to talk to her.No right to breathe in the same air as her" Alberto punched his face. James fell to the ground but Alberto didnt stop there. With every sentence he made, he gave James a punch. "Alberto! Alberto! Stop" I shouted, trying to move him away from James "Hold this bitch!" He roared at his securities. Immediately, following his command ,they held me. They held me as James was being beaten up. "Alberto, please, I beg you, you would kill him if you dont stop!"I cried. By now the whole party had stopped. People were screaming, shouting. But no one did anything. Afterall Alberto was the boss. James securities tried to help him but they were outnumbered. They were at gun point by Alberto’s men. James wasnt even trying to fight back. He had lost. His face was unrecognisable, he was covered with blood. He was passing out. "Alberto please, please stop" I pleaded, tears spilling out of my eyes. Trying to get out of the men who were holding me. Alberto wasnt even listening to anyone. He continued hitting James, battering his face. Hitting his stomach, chest, face, shoulders. "No one dare touches Eve! No one!" He shouted. Someone please do something. No one moved. Everyone stared. Only the sound of Alberto punches were heard. And James gagging. He would kill him. I had to do something to make Alberto stop. "Alberto, please stop, I love you" I whispered Immediately i said it, Alberto froze. He stopped. He stopped hitting James. He got up and i sighed in relief. He stood in front of me and stared deep into my eyes. He looked happy. Alberto was happy. "Do you know how long i have been waiting for you to say those words?" He asked almost in tears . Alberto was almost crying. Alberto, the boss was almost crying because i said i loved him. I quickly took a glance at James who was laying still on the ground. His securities were released as they tried to help him up. James face was a mess. He was bleeding from al l part of his upper body. Blood oozing from his nose. His mouth. His chin, jaw. His eyes were deep red. Alberto really beat the shit out of him. Guilt. I felt guilty, if only i had just ignored James and went to get my drink and went back to the vip booth all these wouldnt have happened. A tear fell down my cheeks. But Alberto quickly wiped them away, staring deeply into my eyes. I removed my face from his bloody hands. His whole hand was stained with blood. "Don’t cry my dear Eve, that shit head wont bother you anymore" He said. Immediately, i didnt know the anger that consumed me, maybe because i was seeing James unconcious body being carried out by the paramedics. "How dare you? James had done nothing to you. He only danced with me. For the first time in my life, i actually felt happy, i felt safe and free. I dont love you Alberto. Not now. Not Ever!" Alberto looked at me with disbelief. He was suprised i could shout at him. He stared at me, he looked sad and i was actually feeling bad. Maybe i was a little harsh. "Alberto, I’m sorry. It wasnt suppossed to come out that way" I said, taking his hand in mine. Immediately Alberto exploded Drawing his hand back and giving me a stinging slap. I fell to the ground. It hurts. Tears filled my eyes as i looked up at Alberto. He was angry. Mad. Furious. He dragged me up and held my wrist, taking me outside "After all i had done for you. I give you clothes, jewerries, shoes. My heart. And this is how you repay me!" He roared. Now my wrist was paining me. He was holding me so tight. "Alberto, please, stop, people are watching" My cheeks stung, and i used my other hand to hold it as if it would reduce the pain. My wrist also hurt. Alberto was taking me outside. Shouting how i betrayed him. People were watching, doing nothing. Cowards. "You think I give a fuck, Let them watch!" We were outside now and Alberto opened the car and threw me inside. "Alberto, let me out!" I screamed, banging the door. "Take the limosine, and go home" I heard him.say to the securities. Oh no. He quickly got into the car and started it. "Where are you taking me to" I cried. Alberto smiled looking at me. "We are going for a ride bitch!" "No, please i wanna go home. Please Alberto. I’m sorry!" But he just laughed. "Home?, no way bitch. We are going somewhere nice" "Alberto please" I pleaded. I looked outside through the window and it was pitch black outside. No one was in view. The streets were lonely. Trees s urrounded us. Alberto increased the speed of the car, causing me to jerk backwards. Hiting my head on the window frame. One of my hair pins pierced my head..A nd i groaned in pain. "You had the guts to dance with that idiot. James Winter. My rival. I hate him!" So Alberto knew James, no wonder he attacked him so fiercly. He hated him. Why? What had James done to Alberto that made him hate him? "Please Alberto slow down" By now blood was gushing out of my head, my wrist was almost black. My cheek still hurt. I was loosing blood, I was tired. "Don’t fucking tell me what to do!" A few more minutes, and Alberto stopped the car, he came down and drew me out. Causing me to fall. I groaned in pain. I looked around, we were in a forest. "Alberto what are you doing?" Now i was really scared.Was he going to kill me and bury my body? "I’m going to make you feel the pain I am currently in. I want you to feel the pain of having your heart broken, shattered and thrown away!" He picked me up and that was when i saw the river. No. No. No. I knew what Alberto wanted to do. He was going to push me into the river. He knew i hated it. He knew I couldnt swim. I was going to drown. I was going to die. Alberto was going to kill me. "Alberto. No. Please i beg you!" I begged, trying to get out of his grasp. He laughed, a very loud and mocking laugh. "Next time you won’t dance with my enemy, Next time you would listen to me. Your husband. You told me you loved me." He laughed again. Fear filled me. "But that was just a lie, wasn’t it?" He asked, stopping and staring at me. I couldn’t speak. I couldnt say Yes, i couldnt say No. He laughed again."I knew you were just lying" He dragged me again. Moving me towards the water . "You really shattered me Eve, you broke me, Now I’m going to make you feel that way. You are going to feel the same way i do!" I was really scared. Tears were running down my red cheeks. This was it. This was my death. Alberto was going to kill me. I never even had the chance to meet my parents one last time. I never even had the chance to live a normal life. I never even had the chance to be free. I never even had the chance to love. With all these thoughts, Alberto pushed me. I fell into the river. Tears. Fear. Agony. I was dying. I struggled. I tried to fight it. I tried to get out of it. I tried to survive. But no, i could feel my lungs closing up. I could feel my body shutting down. I could feel my body giving up. I could feel myself dying.
19 May 2019 | 23:45
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You'll be save
20 May 2019 | 07:25
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U will be ok. Becuase an actor don't die like that
20 May 2019 | 08:56
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u know him ,u should've avoid to dance with him
20 May 2019 | 09:11
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God help Eve,I hate this man
20 May 2019 | 09:21
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Just hope someone is gonna save you
20 May 2019 | 09:50
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I guess he will pull u up
20 May 2019 | 14:50
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Eve. By Chimdi Samuel. Chapter Seven. *Four years ago* "Mom, mom. Look at this little cat on the fence!" . I shouted looking outside the window at a cat sitting on the fence. It was cute. "Not now baby" My mom said, she was curently cooking for my dad who would soon be back from work. My mom was a wonderful woman who loved me so much. I took after her in everything. The hair, eyes, behaviour. I was the photocopy of my mother. The only thing i took after my dad was his smile. I smiled a lot like him. I couldnt wait for him to come back. I was closer to him. I missed him. I hope he buys chocolates. I looked at the cat again, it seemed to be sleeping . His tail waging. "Mom, i want a cat" I said, moving away from the window and coming to hold my mom. "Not now Eve, Im busy. Move away from the pot before it burns you" She pushed me slighty and i frowned. "I’ll tell dad you keep ignoring me" I said folding my arms. Instead she just laughed. "Ok I’m so sorry darling " She said, coming closer to me. I knew what she wanted to do. She was going to tickle me. So I ran, she laughed and ran after me. Just then the door bell rang. I ran to open expecting it to be dad. When i opened the door, I saw someone else. A man. A tall handsome man. He had black hair and was on a black suit..He looked scary. Behind him were about five other men with black suits and dark shades. I stood there frozen as the man stared at me. Something in his eyes made me shiver. "Hello darling" He finally said and i ran to the kitchen. "Mom! Mom! A man is here!" I shouted. My mom came out, holding my hands tight, she looked at the men who had already come in. The man was sitting on the couch with a gun in his hands. I gasped. A gun. Was he going to kill us? "Eve, go to your room honey and watch some catoons" My mom said pushing me in the direction of the stairs. I quickly ran upstairs, but i didnt want to stay in my room. I wanted to know who that man was and what he wanted. So i stood at the top of the stairs and peeped. "Alberto, what do you want?" My mom said, looking scared but she tried to appear strong. So the man name was Alberto. Nice name. Alberto laughed. Still playing with the gun. "What am i doing here?" He laughed again. This time louder. "Your husband still owes me three million" My mom gasped. Three million? That was a lot of money. Dad owed this Alberto man three million. "No, no, Dave told me he had paid you" My mom said, shocked. "It seems your husband lied to you, because he hasnt" The door opened, and my dad came in. He was holding a bucket of icecream. "Wow, just the man we were waiting for" Alberto stood up, tucking his gun in his pockets. My dad froze, he was shocked, he looked scared of this man. "Dave, Alberto said you hadnt paid him" My mom said moving close to my dad. "What do you want Alberto?" My dad said, holding my mom. "What do i want? what do i want? I want my fucking money asshole" Alberto said, clearly angry. "Tell him, you’ve paid him Dave" My mom said. "Give me a week, i would get the money" My mom moved away from my dad clearly hurt that he had lied to her about paying Alberto. "A week? No Dave your time is up" Alberto picked his gun and the pointed it at my mother. No. Dont kill my mom. "Alberto, please, i would give you your money, please let my wife go" "Dave!" My mom cried as Alberto’s men held her. Fear ate me up from inside. They were going to kill my mom. "Go get the girl upstairs!" Alberto shouted, his mem followed and started to come up the stairs. I got up. They were coming after me. They were going to kill me. I ran to my room and closed the door. There was silence and i quickly hid under the bed holding Daniel, my teddy bear. Immediately, my door burst open, and i peeped from under the bed and saw a man’s feet. I pressed my hand to my mouth so i wouldnt scream. Silenced filled the room and the man moved towards the other side of the bed. I was scared. I held Daniel closer to my chest. Then a pair of hands grabbed my legs and drew me out. I screamed when i saw the man. One of Alberto’s men he looked scary. "Gotha" He smiled at me and carried me away. Despite all my efforts of trying to come down he still held me tight. "Mom! Dad!" I shouted, kicking my legs and hitting him with Daniel, the teddy bear. At last we got downstairs and mom was already crying. My dad was sad. Alberto was smiling. What was funny? The man placed me down and Alberto came close to me. I held on to Daniel. "Mom,Dad" I whispered, but they didnt answer, they reamained were they were not looking at me. What was going on? "Dear, dear Eve" Alberto said, holding me face. "You now belong to me" My mom broke down in tears. My dad still looked down. Sad. Broken. I didnt understand what he was saying? I was his ? How? Why? I was just thirteen years. I didnt understand what all this was about. "What do you mean?" I asked, tears already falling from my face. "You see, your dad over there" He pointed at my dad. "Owes my money and dosent want to pay up, so he said you should go with me and stay with me forever. And even your mom agreed" Alberto finished. The way my heart broke was unimaginable. No. No. Mom and dad wont let me go with this unknown man. "You see, Mommy and Daddy dosent love you" "No, stop. My mom loves me, she wont give me away to you" I cried. "Really? Lets see if they would call you back when i take you away" He said taking my arm and dragging me towards the door. My parents didnt even move. Mom was crying, dad was still looking at the floor. I could see the tears falling from his eyes too. They were crying, they didnt want me to go. But at the same time they werent doing anything. "Mom! Dad!" I shouted at them but thet remained still. "Mom! please dont let them take me away. I promise i would be good. Dad!" "It was nice doing business with you Mr and Mrs Peters, you are never going to see your daughter again" Alberto dragged me out and threw me inside the car. I cried, wailed, screamed and shouted at him to open the door that i wanted to go back to my parents. But no. No one answered. No one replied. I felt lonely, scared, sad, broken. I had lost Mom, Dad even Daniel fell on the road while i was strug gling. The car started and i looked at my house. This was it. This was the end of my life. This was the last time i would see my parents. This was the last time i would be free. This was the beginning of hell. *Back to the present* Still going deep into the river, i remembered the d ay Alberto took me from my family. That was the day i became Eve Santiago and no more Eve Pete rs. I was loosing consciousness as the water filled my lungs, i was dying. Then i felt my body being lifted up and out of the water, I felt relieved. I could finally breathe. But i was loosing it. I tried to cough out the water but i couldnt. I could only see black. I was going to faint. The pair of hands held me closer. "Don’t die now Eve. Please dont" The person carrying me said. But i couldnt identify the voice. I wa s too tired. I was too tired to open my eyes so i g ave in to the darkness. I fainted in the person’s arms.
21 May 2019 | 03:05
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Eve u will nt die
21 May 2019 | 07:33
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Thank God you're safe, but Who save you?
21 May 2019 | 10:18
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who's ur saviour?
21 May 2019 | 15:25
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Or is that the cat that came for ur rescure
21 May 2019 | 16:25
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here I come again
22 May 2019 | 03:02
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comment after reading ooo
22 May 2019 | 03:02
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Chapter Eight. A beeping sound woke me up but i was too tired t o open my eyes. beep. beep. beep. It sounded in my ears. I tried harder to open my eyes and i finally did. I was in a room surrounded by white. White light. White walls. White ceiling. My eyes shut itself because of the high intensity of the light. I felt something on my hand. Someone was holding it. It felt warm. It felt nice. I opened my eyes and my brain transmitted the images i was seeing. I was in a hospital. Machines surrounded me. Some were connected to me. That was when i saw him. A man. The man. He w as holding my hand. He was sleeping. Resting his head on the bed and holding my hand. I looked at the hair and i figured it was Alberto. Why was he here? How did i even get here? What was i even doing in the hospital? A pain struck my head and i groaned. Suddenly last night came flooding back to me. Dressing up. Going to the ball with Alberto. Dancing with James. Alberto angry. Beating James. Dragging me to the river. Pushing me into it. Drowning. Oh God! I remembered being saved. It was Albert o. I remembered he didnt want me to die. But why? Why did he push me into the river? Then save me? I looked at him again. He was sleeping but he see med to be struggling with himself. Like he was having a bad dream. He held my hand tighter. As if holding me for life. Support. Safety. I tried to move, but my head hurts. My whole body did. I felt weak. Then Alberto woke up. The first thing he did was to look at me. Then he smiled. Happy to see me. "Eve" He said, then kissing me. He kissed me with so much force. I could feel the love in it. I could feel his fear in it. The fear for almost killing me. I could feel his care. But i didnt kiss back. I couldnt. This was the same man that tried to drown me. That tried to kill James. The only man to show me affection. Alberto drew back and held my face in his palm. "I thought you had died Eve. I thought you were g one. I dont know what i would have done if i had lost you. When i pushed you into the river. At first i just wanted you to feel the pain you put me through. But then when i saw you drowning, I feared. I didnt know what pushed me to do that. But i was scared i would loose you. So i jumped into the river and carried you out. And you werent breathing. I almost ran mad Eve. I never felt so broken before so i carried you here. To the hospital" Alberto wiped his tears. He was crying. The monster was crying because of me. He was scared to loose me. "Eve, im so sorry. I love you so much but i dont know how to show it. I try and try but my anger gets the best of me. And when i saw you dancing wit h James. I lost it. I wanted to kill him for laying his filthy hands on you. And i wanted to beat the sh it out of you for dancing with him. I felt so jealous because you were looking at him with so much love. You had never looked at me like that and i w as so angry" Alberto placed a kiss on my cheek and i moved a way slightly. He knew i didnt want him to kiss me . He frowned and clenched his fist in annoyance. "Its ok Alberto" I held his hand trying to calm him down before he got angry. "I’m ok now, thats what matters" "I know, but i feel so shattered, you are my wife, i should protect you not cause you pain" Alberto felt sad, broken, hurt. He brushed his hair back in fustration. "You shouldnt have pushed me Alberto, you know i cant swim" I whispered. He stood up in annoyance. "I know and i feel so fucked up, i shouldnt have done that but you hurt me so badly Eve. You said you loved me but you just did that to save James" As i was about to answer him but then the door opened and a male doctor came in. He looked about thirty years. He was putting on a white coat an d was holding a note pad. "I see you are awake Mrs Santiago" He said smiling at me. "Yes, she is" Alberto answered. "How do you feel? Can you tell me where hurts?" "Just my head, I feel dizzy and i think i have a headache" I answered. He flashed a torch on my eyes and felt my hands. He also listened to my heartbeats. He looked at the machines and put it off so the beeping noise stopped. "Nothing sleep cant stop" He said, looking at Alberto, who was currently staring at me with affection. "Mr Santiago, you have to leave now, so your wife can rest, afterall you have been here the whole night" Alberto was here with me the whole night? I smiled, feeling happy. "You dont fucking tell me what to do" Alberto grumbled. "She is my wife and if i wanna stay here with here, i will!" He shouted, causing me to whince in pain. Headache. The doctor placed a hand on my head." Mr Santiago, you really need to leave. Your wife is suffering from a serious concussion and she needs to rest " "Alberto please" I begged i was already feeling tired. "Just because of you Eve. Its because you asked me to and not this asshole of a doctor here" He pointed at the doctor. Alberto placed a kiss on my cheek and left the room after telling me he would come to check on m e when he was back from work. The doctor left a few minutes later. And i was left with my thoughts. Alberto really felt bad for what he did but could i really trust him. I thought of what he told me about having problem controlling hi s anger issues. I felt sad a little for him but at the same time i hated him for what he did. After battling with my thoughts for an hour i finally slept. When i woke up, it was already evening. I was disconnected to the machines. I felt better. And i was dying to take a walk. I wanted to go away. I wan ted to run. So i stood up. With Alberto not here, i could run away. I could escape. I came down from the bed falling slightly, the headache was coming back. I got up and went to the door and opened it. To my suprise i saw three of Alberto’s men. Are they always everywhere? I asked my self frowning a little. Now my plans are shattered. "What are you doing Mrs Santiago" One of them asked. "Just taking a walk" "You shouldnt" "Well the doctor said i should, it helps" I smiled at all three of them. "Then we would come with you. Alberto orders" Alberto this. Alberto that. Stupid man. I started walking down the hall. Looking at the nurses and doctor running from one room to another. The whole place smelled like drugs and i hated it. Some people were walking in hands. Some were crying. Some were laughing. A small boy ran past me holding a little girl. They were laughing. A girl was walking with a guy in hand. They looked around my age. They looked happy. Would i ever be happy? I turned and saw an exit. I looked at my back and still saw Alberto’s men behind me. They looked at me, telling me not to try it. So i walked past it and looked forward. That was when i saw him. His face bandaged up. His eyes was blue black. He was limping. He looked badly injured and bandaged up. He looked different from the man i met at the ball. .He looked different from the man i danced with. He looked different from the man who made me smile. He looked different from James but it was James.
22 May 2019 | 03:03
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By force love
22 May 2019 | 05:22
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Alberto na by force
22 May 2019 | 14:59
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I guess DAT was James u saw,pls leave DAT guy alone sha...
22 May 2019 | 16:20
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Even if Alberto claims to love you, he's nothing but a tyrant
22 May 2019 | 16:26
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Go and u will smell ur hel
22 May 2019 | 21:14
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let's go these
23 May 2019 | 02:00
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Eve Chapter Nine. "James!" I shouted. Immediately, he looked up and saw me..He smiled. "Hey, Its me Eve" I said not knowing what to say . "I know, i can never forget a beautiful face" He said. I blushed at that. "What are you doing here? What happened to you? You look pale" James said, taking a good look at my face. "Uhm..er..er..i umm" I stammered. I couldnt tell him. I couldnt tell James Alberto tried to drown me. I couldnt tell him he almost killed me. "Its Alberto isnt i?" He said and i looked up to look at him. "He’s still the same sick bastard after all those years" He frowned. All those years? Which years? Alberto wasnt lying when he said he knew James that they enemies. "How are you James? I’m deeply sorry the other night. I shouldnt have danced with you that day. Now see the mess i put you in. Youre here in the hospital all because i couldnt walk away. I'm deeply sorry James" I said, almost in tears. Guilt ate me from inside. It was all my fault this handsome man was here. "Its OK Eve, you don't need to apologise. Its not your fault. Its Alberto’s. He’s sick. Twisted. Crazy. He doesn't like anyone playing with his toys" James said wiping my tears away. Toys? "You need to get away from him Eve" He said. Get away from Alberto? Was i crazy? Alberto would find me and drag me back to him even if he had to kill everyone in the fucking world. "I think i need to get going back to my room. Its Evening and Alberto would soon be back" I stood up and started to leave. "You have to get out before you end up like Jane" What? Jane? Who was she? "Who’s Jane?" I asked, sitting down again. "Alberto wasn't always like this" James started. "We were very good friends, right from childhood, he was friendly, caring, funny. He was my best friend. Then one girl Jane came into my life. She w as gorgeous, beautiful, smart, intelligent, she was all i could ask for. I wanted her to be my wife" James laughed. A sad laugh. But Alberto got jealous and wanted Jane for him self, so he started doing things to destroy my relationship with her. But Jane kept coming to me , our relationship got stronger. It got Alberto more angrier. He grew obsessed with Jane. He grew intense feelings for her..He craved for her. He wanted her. He was going to do anything for her. Even if i t meant killing his best friend" "No. Alberto would never do that" I said. But James just laughed. "Oh, he would. Alberto started stalking Jane. He watched her and followed her everyday. He grew too close. He needed to see her. He took pictures of her. He grew obsesssed. He became a stalker. Jane grew uncomfortable and told him to stop but instead it grew worse. I confronted Alberto to stop stalking my girlfriend but he refused. Few days later, Jane gets missing ." I gasped, no Alberto wouldn't take her..He cant. I argued with myself..But something deep in me he did..He did it. "I called the police to investigate the case, they did but couldn't find her. So i went to Alberto’s house and lo and behold Jane was there, looking battered up, she looked just like you. Pale and sick. I tried to get her out of his house but Alberto came and Jane told me to go so he wont see me. But it was too late, Alberto was with a gun..He was going to kill her. Saying if he cant have her no one else could but Jane had a knife with her the whole time. She slit her throat" James finished, tears was in his eyes. "James, I’m so sorry" I cried. "I didnt know Alberto was so cruel" "No, Eve. Jane made her choice that day. She killed herself to escape from Alberto. He drove her in sane. He drove her to her death. Thats what he does Eve. He drives people to thier death all in the name of his stupid love. You have the chance to get away from him now Eve before he kills you like he did to Jane" I was confused. I wanted to go. I wanted to leave Alberto but at the same time i didnt want to. "Come with me Eve" James stood up holding his hand. He held hand for me to take. I wanted to take it. I wanted to go with James. "We can get away from him Eve. I have enough money to take us far away from here where Alberto would never see us. Just name the country you want us to go to and we will" James said, staring at me. The offer was tempting. I was starting to like James. But was i really ready to leave Alberto. Anywhere i went he would get me back. I knew Alberto. "I cant...I'm sorry James" I said, crying. I needed t o get away from him. I needed to be alone. "Alberto would find me and bring me back. I cant. I can never be free from him. I belong to him" "Eve, I know its too much to take in now but i stay in room 45 so when you are ready come there. W hen you make up your mind i will be waiting. But i would be discharged this night. So decide quickly" With that he limped away. I quickly looked around me to see if Alberto was around. The body guards were talking amongst themselves so they didnt hear any of me and James conversation. I went back to my room in tears. I sat on the bed and cried my eyes out. There was freedom waiting for me and i had declined it. The freedom i had always wanted.. Was i really ready to leave Alberto? The truth was i didnt even know the answer. Alberto was a monster. A beast. Now a murderer. Why wasnt i running away? Why wasnt i with James now, half way across the world. Why did i choose to stay with Alberto ? Was i having feelings for him? What? No? I was going crazy just like Jane. Love Alberto? Never! I cried harder as i fought with my inner mind. Alberto was going to be the death of me. No! Alberto loves me, he said it a million times. But then why does he keep treating you badly? Another voice in my head said. Because he dosent know how to express his love ,he allows his anger and obsession get the best of him. Another voice in my head said. I was running mad. It was evening. Alberto would soon be back. James would soon leave and i would never see him again. My last chance of freedom would be gone. Was i really ready to spend my whole life with Alberto? Yes. No. Yes. No. I wanted to spend it with James. A man i didnt even know. Someone i just met yesterday. Was it re ally worth it. But i would never be happy. No, i would be happy with James, he was nice and caring . It was getting darker outside and Alberto would soon arrive. I needed to make up my mind. You have to get away from Alberto before you end up like Jane. I remembered James words. I was going to leave. I was going to get out of her e..I was going to go with James. I was going to g et away from Alberto. I cant stay with him. He would kill me just like he did to poor Jane. I was going to leave this place with James, we would go sonewhere far. I was going to get my freedom.
23 May 2019 | 02:16
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Some kinda fake love from nonsense alberto the wicked one. There's no love in his malicious mind. He's a man of trouble, thinking that his wickedness and heartlessness could be love.
23 May 2019 | 05:30
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Eve need to escape from these bitterness and shame. The fear of what will happen next after the escape is troubling her mind. Escaping when chatting with james with those abt guards around was another too risky.
23 May 2019 | 05:50
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James has lost jane to heartless alberto, jane couldn't take the pain anymore. James maybe needing a better strategy to rescue eve in such circumstances. Eve's parents wasn't wiser enough to save their daughter that's better than goods or any amount.
23 May 2019 | 06:04
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What if James is a monster too
23 May 2019 | 07:00
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this one is strong
23 May 2019 | 08:42
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Ma dear u need to be careful with ur decision oo tho I know it's a hard call but I wish u all de best in ur quest...
23 May 2019 | 12:29
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what's if James is not a saint either
23 May 2019 | 13:58
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Eve Chapter Ten. Yes, I was leaving with James. I was going to have a fresh start with James. I was going to leave this monster of a man, Albert o. But how? How was i going to leave this room with Alberto’s men right outside my house. I sat on the bed and thought of a plan. Nothing. I was blank. No plans. Just then the door opened, and a female doctor came in. "I see you are awake" She said, taking a sip of her coffee. Suddenly a plan came to my head. "Yea, just a little headache" I said, standing up quickly and hitting her, so the coffee she was drinking poured on her white coat and her light blue to p. "Oh God, im so sorry"I said, almost smiling because of the annoyed and shocked look on her face. "Ugh. Let me just clean this in the bathroom" She removed her white coat and went to the bathroom in my room. Great! I picked her coat and put in on. I brushed my hair and packed it the same way she did hers. I picked the note she had bought. I looked at the small mirror in my room and from behind i looked like a doctor. Everything was ok expect from my legs. I was put ting on slippers. No. Alberto’s men would know. I heard the water put off from the bathroom and i knew the doctor would soon be out. I had no choice, i had to go out like that before sh e came. So i picked her books and walked out of the room , bowing my head so Alberto’s men wont see me. I walked past them and continued not looking back. Yes! "Hey" I heard one of them shout. "How is she?" He asked, but i didnt look back. "All good" I shouted, still not looking back. I continued walking, until i got to another ward, far away from Alberto’s men and my room. Room 45. I remembered James room. As i turned into another hallway that said Room 40 -50, I saw someone coming out of the exit door . He was holding a bunch of flowers in one hand and a lunch box in the other hand. He was on a black suit, he looked happy. He was looking at his watch. I knew this man. I knew the walking steps. It was Alberto. He brought flowers and lunch for me. Guilt pierces my heart. I felt guilty leaving this man. No! I should me happy, Alberto had done nothing but bring me pain and anguish. As he rose up his head almost seeing me. I quickly made a U turn and started walking. I was scared to look back. What if he saw me? No, he didnt. I took the risk and looked back. No, he was walking to the direction of my room. Thank heavens! I turned back and started to run to James’ room. I had to be fast before Alberto knew i was gone. I got to the room where Room 45 was written on. I took a deep breath. This was it. A chance to get freedom. Was i really ready to do this. No. But i had to, before i ended up like Jane. I opened the door and saw James fully dressed in a simple jeans and white cotton top, he was ready to leave. There was a nurse inside prescribing some drugs to him. A man was also in the room. Probably his security. James turned, and saw me. He smiled. "I thought you wouldnt come" "It was a tough decision" I walked to him and hugged him tightly. My saviour. "We have to go now I saw Alberto at the hallway" "Ok, come on. This way. My car is parked at the back" James held my hand and dragged me out of the room. We ran through the hallway, almost hitting the people and doctors along the way. I looked up and saw one of Alberto’s men. James didnt know who he was but i knew. I quickly pushed James towards the wall hiding behind it, so h le couldnt see us. "Fuck!" James shouted. "Shh" I whispered. "Alberto’s men are already loo king for me. I saw one of them" "My ribs fucking hurt" James said, clearly in pain. Raising his top i saw bandages wrapped around his stomach and chest. It was red. It was bleeding. I had pushed him too hard. "Oh God! You need a doctor" I said scared he was going to bleed to death. "No, not when you are almost free" He peeped, looking for any of Alberto’s men. "Come on!" He ran dragging me again. We ran like our life depended on it. I was scared, what if Alberto caught us. I was dead. No. I couldnt think that way. I had to think positively. "Where is the car?" I asked James. "Not too far" He grimced in pain. Holding his stomach, he was really bleeding. Oh God! "James, we have to go, before Alberto sees us" I held him as he continued walking, he was really bleeding, blood seeped through his white top. I looked up and saw another of Alberto’s men loo king at another direction. I pulled James towards a room. We opened the door and went in. "What is it?" He asked, shutting his eyes in pain. "Another of Alberto’s men" The room was empty only a bed. I removed the coat i was wearing and placed it on James. Covering his bleeding wounds. "The nurses and doctors in the hallway cant see you like this, they would take you back to the rooms" James nooded. I sat him on a chair. I sighed, this was harder than i thought. I wanted to cry, i was scared. What if Alberto caught us. I was dead, no doubt he would kill James too. I had to be strong. I had to stay strong and positive. I looked through the door and still saw some of Alberto’s men, they were checking the rooms one by one. God! I was dead! I looked around, looking for an exit. Just beside t his room was a staircase. Was i going to make it? Was i going to be fast to get to the stairs without Alberto’s men seeing us. Yes. I went back in. "There is a staircase, but beside this room, we can get to it, we just have to wait till Alberto’s men went inside the next room. to search it" "Ok, lets do it, it was now or never, free or bound" James said, standing up. We went to the door, and saw Alberto’s men just coming out of a room and banging the next door. They went into the room and as quick as the speed of light, we ran to the stairs with James behind me. He was trying so hard to keep up. We ran down the stairs and to the last floor. James groaned in pain as we made it down the stairs. He was in deep pain. I was scared. I prayed silently in my mind so Alberto wont see us. I held James as we went down together. Just as we took the last step we heard. "Well. Well. Well, if it isn’t my wife and my best friend" He laughed. No. No. No. God! I looked up, It was him. He was laughing. The monster was laughing. He was happy. He was pleased. The devil was happy he had found us. The devil looked at me with so much anger and hurt. The devil was angry. He looked dangerous. The devil was Alberto
24 May 2019 | 02:41
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You're dead already
24 May 2019 | 08:07
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But to say the truth albeart love u more than u think
24 May 2019 | 14:35
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Eve Ure taking It So Quick To James's Side.
24 May 2019 | 14:41
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Kasala go burst now
24 May 2019 | 15:49
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I thought I warned u???
24 May 2019 | 18:05
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Eve. Chapter Eleven. I started at Alberto in fear, anger, pain. His men were standing beside him about six, there was no h ope.going through him. I looked at my back and his men were there too. I wanted to cry. "After all I’ve done for you Eve, you still choose to run away from me, with this" He pointed at James who was almost loosing consciousness "This fool" "Yes, he’s better than you, you treat me badly, you have nothing but hate me Alberto. You hit me, you abuse me both physically and sexually. Hell you almost killed me. And you say you love me. No, Alberto that is hate!" "Alberto just let the girl go before you finally kill her" James stood up straight despite his pain, he was ready to fight for me. "Shut up!, the only person who is going to be killed here is you, James. How dare you run away with my wife. How dare you. After all you’ve done to me" After all you’ve done to me. What was that all about. It was Alberto who did something to James. Not the other way round. "Eve, come on, come here" Alberto called out to me. "Never! I’m never coming back to you, Ever!" I shouted. "You would have to kill me before i ever came back to you, you are a monster!" "I love you Eve, you know that, I’ll never do anything to hurt you" I laughed.."Can you hear yourself right now Alberto? You’ve always hurt me..There is no day i spend in your house happy. You have done nothing but bring me pain. Four years Alberto, four years i spent with, four years of suffereing, hurt, lonliness, you are nothing but a beast!" I was angry, pouring out my mind to Alberto. He looked sad for a moment. "You have to let us go, Alberto" James mutterrred . "Shut up! This is not your businness." Alberto grew angry once again. "Eve, come back now that I’m asking nicely" "No" I said, holding James. "I’m going with James, I’m going to live with him and even marry him. Because he saved me from you, he is a better man than you, you monster!" Alberto laughed and pulled out a gun from his pocket and pointed it at James. I gasped, stepping back. Was Alberto really going to kill James? "Alberto, are you crazy!" I shouted. "Yes, darling. I’m crazy for you" He smiled. James shivered. "Put the gun down Alberto, and lets settle this like a man" He said. "Settle this like a man? thats what you said when Jane was here, before she killed herself. Its all your fault asshole" I looked at James, he didnt say anything. What was going on here? "I guess he hasnt told you about Jane" Alberto laughed again. "Of course he wont say anything about the evil he has done, He’s not the saviour you see him as Eve. He is a greater demon than i am" No. No. This was all wrong. "Yes, he told me. He told me you led Jane to her own destruction. He told me, it was your fault she killed her self. They were going to get married Alberto, but you just had to spoil it all" I said. Alberto looked shocked for a moment then he laughed. "Wow James, i must really give you an award for twisting stories. lying ass motherfucker" He laughed again. "Is that what.you told her?" "Eve, come on, dont listen to him, He is just trying to make you believe him" James said, taking my face in his hand. "Remember we have to escape, thats what matters" "Dont touch her, asshole!" Alberto shouted, pointing his gun at James. "Get away from her before i blow your fucking brains out" I was confused. I didnt know what to do. A part of me believed Alberto, but what did he mean by James should be given an award for twisting stories? I looked to my side and saw an exit and just outside the door was a blue car. "Is that your car?" I whispered to James. He nodded his head, and i smiled. We can get out of here. We can get my freedom. We just had to be fast. "Come on, at the count of three, we would run" I said, my voice shaking. Fear. "Eve, come on. This is your last chance" "One, two, three, run!" I shouted, running towards the car. With James following behind me. "What the fuck?" Alberto shouted behind us. "Get them!" he told his securities. Then i heard feets runing after us. We were almost there. I was almost free. I was almost away from this monster. I ran faster, like i have ever ran before. i didnt even look back for fear that Alberto’s men would catch up with me. "Faster Eve!" James screamed, running beside me. "Get back here, Eve. You cant run away from me! I’ll get you!" Never. I stared at the car as i continued running. Just a few more steps. Just a few more seconds and i would be free. Then Alberto fired some shots. I quickly looked to me side, at James, he was ok. Alberto shot at us. But none had touched us, as we opened the door and to the car. "Get in!" James shouted. I quickly looked at Alberto, he was about to shoot James. "Hurry!" I shouted as James quickly opened the car and got in. I got in through the passenger door . Alberto was pissed. He looked murderous. He was really going to kill James. "Lets go!" I shouted, but James seemed to be looking for something. "I think i dropped the keys while trying to open th e door" Oh No. Fear. Alberto was almost close to us. I stared to cry. I was dead. Alberto was going to get us. I was going to die. He was going to kill me. "I found it!" James said , showing me the keys. "Stop showing me the keys and lets get the hell outta here!" Alberto came out of the hospital with his men behind him just as we started moving. In a few seconds, the car was up and running and i looked back. Alberto was staring at us. He looked hurt. He looked angry. He looked pained. I looked at him. I looked at Alberto with Sadness. Why was i suddenly feeling like this? I was suppossed to be happy. Pleased. Jumpimg for joy because i finally got away from the monster. I looked at Alberto once again, and i broke down in tears. He looked so broken. He looked shattered. I looked at him once last time. He was a very handsome man. I suddenly remembered when he bought me that gown i wore to the ball. I remembered when i saw him bringing those beautiful flowers for me to the hospital. I remembered when i woke up and he was there holding my hand, waiting for me to wake up. I remembered when he bought me my first cat, a beautiful grey cat, which died shortly after. I stared at the man who had done good things for me too Alberto hadnt brought me only pain. He had also brought me joy, happiness. He had also made me smile. He cared for me. He showed affection to me. He loved me. Alberto wasnt total monster. He wasnt a total beast. He had a heart. He had a soft spot. Even a beast still know how to show a little amount of care. I continued staring at him, trying to memorise his face. Because i knew i wasnt going to see him again. I stared at Alberto, we stared at each other. Until we made a turn and i didnt see him again. What had i done? I asked myself. But it was too late.
25 May 2019 | 03:03
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I suspected that James was lying
25 May 2019 | 04:33
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you have decide
25 May 2019 | 04:50
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I don't trust James
25 May 2019 | 07:41
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u should have stay an plan way instead
25 May 2019 | 08:19
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I think that James is a lying,if u know all those things why did you leave him
25 May 2019 | 14:36
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Why all these thoughts u have run to anada beast.
25 May 2019 | 15:00
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I know that james is lairn 4 her
25 May 2019 | 15:17
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U have run to another beast.
25 May 2019 | 15:54
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Eve. By Chimdi Samuel. Chapter Twelve. *A Year Ago" It was a sunny saturday afternoon and i sat in the sitting room watching tv. Saturdays weren’t really my favourite days because Alberto was always at home through out the day, unlike weekdays where he went to work. The house was busy, the maids were running up and down, cleaning a week’s dust. They came every saturday. Alberto hated strangers in his house. The cook was the only one who came everyday , in the mornings and went in the afternoons after instructing me on how to heat the food when it was cold already. The gardner too came every saturday, trimming the overgrown grasses. It was a normal saturday, a busy saturday. I didnt do anything because Alberto forbade me to even pick a broom. Still sitting, and watching 8 miles , one of my favourite movies, which was a real life story of Eminem. Alberto walked in. "Hey" He greeted, sitting beside me, and picking the remote. "Good afternoon" I replied softly. He changed the station and put wrestling. I had always hated wrestling, it was violent and rough. So i stood up and wanted to leave the room when Alberto called me back. "Where do you think you are going?" "To my room" "No, get back here and sit on my laps!" Alberto commanded. I sighed and sat down on Alberto’s leg. Suddenly, he started laughing. "Why did you sit like that?" I looked at myself, and i was sitting down normally. "Rest your head on my chest, now" Alberto ordered. So i rested my head on his chest and listened to his heart slowly pounding in his chest. I felt his chest rise and fall in rhythm with his breathing. "You are the best thing that has ever happened to me Eve. For years, I’ve lived in despair, sadness, l onliness but the first day i saw you in your parents house, looking so innocent and small, then i wanted to have you to myself" He touched my hair and my heart skipped a beat. Why was i suddenly feeling this way? "You were very young then, only thirteen. I came to your house with the intention of killing you and your parents. But when you opened the door for me, my stony heart melted. I fell inlove with your big cute eyes. You looked so innocent and fragile . I wanted you to be with me, i wanted to have you to myself, so i took you now im too selfish to return you" I wiped the tears falling from eyes as i listened to Alberto confess his feelings. "Then as soon as you opened the door, you ran away from me, you were scared of me. My heart broke for a moment and then anger consumed me. I wanted to drag you back and force you into the car and go with me. But when your dad didnt have the money to pay me back, i used that opportunity to ask for you to be with me" He picked my face and stared at me, wiping my tears. "I was happy when i had you. I was so selfish, i kept you here not wanting anyone to know you exist. I stripped you away from your freedom, Eve. I took you away from your family, your joy, your everything all for my selfish reasons" "Then please Alberto, let me go" I whispered, holding his hand. He looked still for a moment, looking at my eyes, taking in the colour, looking for any emotion. "I cant Eve, I cant give you up, not now not ever" He finally said. I burst into tears when he said that. I cried, i was never going to see my parents again, i was never going to get my freedom. Alberto held me while i cried. "I’m so sorry Eve. But my selfishness wont let me take you back, i hope you can forgive me for that " "Go get dressed we are going out" Alberto said. In a few minutes i was downstairs dressed in a white flay gown. Where were we going? Alberto came down seconds later and led me out of his mansion. He picked the black suv car out of the seven cars that were in the garage. We got in and i asked Alberto where we were going but he said it was a suprise. Few minutes later, Alberto stopped the car and we came down. It was a beach. I shivered. "No, Alberto, im scared of the water please, lets go back. I cant swim" "Oh! I didnt know that, its too late now. Dont worry, its not like im going to push you inside the water. Lets go" Alberto picked the mat, buckets and somethings in the car before we went towards the beach. Only a few people were there, with little kids running around with water guns. The beach was blue and a wave came crashing, I screamed and went towards Alberto holding him tight in fear. He just laughed. "There’s nothing to be scared of Eve, Its just water" "Yea! just the water that takes people and drown them" I looked at the beach and saw surfers. Riding on boards with a smile on thier face. Still looking at them, Alberto spalshed water on my face. "Hey! what was that for?" I said frowning, but Alberto was just laughing. "Ok, if you can catch me, i would be your slave for the whole day, i would do anything you want me to do" I looked at the barbeque roasting at the beach, and i wanted it, if only i would just catch him and demand he buys it for me. So i stood and started running after Alberto, i was nt really a good runner, but Alberto ran like usain bolt, laughing loudly. I ran faster with all my might but Alberto was faster. I had to do something to make Alberto stop. Alberto looked back and winked at me. "Youre so slow, Eve" "My stomach it hurts!" I shouted, holding my stomach as if in pain Alberto stopped laughing and quickly ran to me. I smiled a little. Fool. He quickly held me and looked at me in concern and care. "Where does it hurt?" He asked, worry filled his face. "Gotta!" I said, jumping on him. But he stumbled and fell, and i crashed on top of him, laughing. "No thats cheating, thats not fair,.you used my emotions" I smiled, squeezing Alberto’s cheeks. "You didnt say there was a rule against that" I smiled while Alberto sighed and got up. "What do you want?" "Barbeque, ice cream, pizza" I said, pointing at everything i saw. Few minutes later, we were sitting on the mat eating. While Alberto was telling me funny jokes. I laughed till i cried. I didnt know Alberto had this playful and funny side. He looked so handsome when he smiled. His hair was wet. His muscles bulged out from his white top. He was also putting on a kakki short. Alberto was handsome. I looked at his lips as he talked and for the first time since i came to Alberto’s life, i wanted to kiss him. "Uhmm, why are you looking at me like that?" Alberto asked, smiling. "Nothing" I said, standing up and looking at the beach. It was evening already and the sun was setting, a lot of people had gone home. The water looked so calm and still. Alberto stood up and came beside me holding my shoulders and looked at the beach with me. It looked the quiet, the moment looked so perfect. "Alberto, are you ever going to let me go?" I asked looking at him. "I dont know, Eve" We stared at each other, and for a moment i forgot all my problems and i took in Alberto beautiful eyes. He bent down, coming closer to kiss me and i let him. When his lips touched mine, i felt sparkles fly. He kissed me softly and i kissed him back. His love, possessiveness, care, obsession, afftection could be felt in that kiss. This was the first time Alberto kissed me. This was the first time i kissed Alberto. This was the first time i grew feelings for Alberto. *Back to the present* I opened my eyes and saw i was still in James car. "Hey, thank God you are awake" James smiled at me. "Where are we going?" I asked James. "To your house, you are going to see your parents, Eve"
25 May 2019 | 23:15
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Were you dreaming all these while?
26 May 2019 | 11:25
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So its a dream
26 May 2019 | 17:36
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I need need new episode badly. Next pls
26 May 2019 | 18:20
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here it is
26 May 2019 | 23:52
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Eve. By Chimdi Samuel. Chapter Thirteen. "We are here, Eve" I heard someone say as they shook my shoulder slightly. I opened my eyes slowly and looked outside. It looked the same, the small house. The house were i spent thirteen years of my life. It hadnt changed one bit. It was the same colour. The same vegetables planted in the front garden. The lights were still on in the house, they were still awake. We got down from the car, I looked at myself, i was putting a jeans and a top. James stopped at a mall so we both cleaned up and change our clothes. James wound were rebandaged at a small clinic. A lot had happened this night and i couldnt wait to sleep on a very soft bed. James came to stand beside me as we walked in together. I took a deep sigh and knocked on the door. "We’re in this together" He smiled, holding my hand. That didnt even calm me one bit. I was scared. I was scared of seeing my parents after four years. Would they accept me back or throw me back out ? With all this thought, the door opened and i saw a woman, she looked older, but still beautiful. I saw my face in hers. The same eyes, nose, colour of hair. It was my mom. She looked at me, trying to figure out if she was dreaming. "Eve? Is that you?" She asked, almost in tears. "Mom" I whispered. She drew me in a tight hug, as she started crying, i cried too. I missed her, i missed her hugs. I missed my mom. I was just very young when i was stripped away from here. We hugged for about five minutes, then James coughed. "Hello Ma" He said extending his hands. "Who is he? How did you get away from Alberto? How did you get here? Where is Alberto?" My mom asked while looking around as if to see Alberto jumping out of one of the trees. "I ran away, mom. James helped me" I smiled at James who drew back his hand. "Arent you going to invite us in?" James asked. My mom looked shocked but moved away to let us walk in. When i walked in, the first thing i noticed were the change of curtains and rug. The house looked smaller compared to Alberto’s mansion. James and I sat on the couch as my mom went after closing the door, shouting my dad’s name. "We are just going to stay for a few hours and we should be out of here"James said. "Eve" I looked up to see my dad. He looked older too. He was holding a news paper. "Dad" I went towards him to hug him. We hugged and sat down. "How did you get away from Alberto? And who is this guy?" He said pointing at James. So i narrated the story to him, i got dressed to when we ran away from the hospital. I told him about how Alberto threw me in the river, but i didnt tell them about how i kinda missed him. "You have to go back Eve" My mom said. "You have to go back to Alberto" Shock filled by body as i stared at my mom in disbelief. "Mom?" "She’s coming with me" James said, taking my hand. I couldnt believe my own mother wanted me to go back with that monster. "I cant, I’m going with James. Alberto is a monster mom, a beast, i can never go back to him" "There’s something we need to tell you Eve. The real reason we let you go with Alberto" I gulped, i needed the know the reason. I had to. My dad started. "Before you were born, I was into drugs, all kinds of hard drugs. Cocaine, indian he mp, you name it. But the deal went wrong and the people who were suppossed to buy it, stole it and shot all of us. I was the only survivor. But i went back to my boss, he didnt believe me and demanded i pay all the money for the drugs. He thought i was working against them. So i went to Alberto for help, and he gave me the money and demanded i pay up within ten years, because it was a lot of money" He sighed and continued." I payed my boss the money because if i didnt he would kill your mother, and she was just pregnant for you then. Since then i left the drug dealers and got a job" "Ive been trying Eve, to give Alberto back his money but expenses keep rising up. Ten years passed and Alberto came to demand his money but i didnt have it. Your mom became worried, and she has heart problems" I looked at my mom, I didnt know she had heart problems. "I found out when you were just eight" She said. "So i couldnt let her worry so i told her i had given Alberto the money, that i had taken a loan" Dad looked at mom sorrowfully. "I’m sorry i lied to you " "Its ok Dave, you’ve said it a million times" My mom smiled at him. "But it would never be enough" Dad sighed. "Since then, Alberto kept asking for his money, but i kept giving him excuses. Eve, the Santiagos are very heartless people, you annoy them and they come for your family. Alberto’s father was a very ruthless and dangerous man. He passed it down to his son. They are not to be messed with. So when Alberto demanded for his money that day, and i couldnt give him. He said he would either kill you or take you" My mom broke down in tears and i leaned against James for support. This was too much to take in. "So we had no choice Eve. We had to let you go, we didnt want you to die. We are sorry Eve but everything i did, we did" He held my mom’s hand "We did for you" Tears spilled from my eyes, all these years i had spent blaming my parents for everything..They had only done it to help me, but a question came to my mind. "Why didnt you call the police?" "The police? And tell them what? I was involved in drugs? If i tell them, i would be held in custody and they would demand for the name of my boss. And Eve, that is something you never do. If you are no more in a drug business, you must never reveal anyone name, if not they would kill you and your whole family" My dad said. "And besides Alberto is a very powerful man, with a lot of connections. I dont stand a chance against him" My mom concluded. James stood up. "We have to get going. Mr and Mrs, Alberto would be here soon" I looked at my mom and dad as they stood up. "No matter how hard and far you run Eve. Alberto would always find you" My mom said, i tears. I couldnt believe what she was saying. "You have to go back, Eve" "Never! You dont know how Alberto treats me. He is wicked and even dad said it. He is ruthless. Im never going back to him. Dad tell mom" I looked at my dad, expecting him to defend me. "Your mother is right Eve, Alberto would find you and kill the both of you" I couldn't believe this. My own parents. "So you would give me to that monster, twice?!" I shouted. "You are supposed to help me get away from him, the first time was understandable but now. You are selfish mom and you too dad" "You are the selfish one here!" My mother spat on my face. "You are the one enjoying all the luxuries in Alberto’s house, you are the one in the big house, buying things and enjoying yourself. While here we beg for food. You should be grateful we gave you out!" "Have you seen my scars,.mom?" I cried. "Alberto scared me for life. I cant believe this. You are heartless, both of you. I can never forgive you for this. Come on James lets get out of here" Just as we made it for the door, i looked out of the window and saw a black suv, just like Alberto’s car. "What have you done, mother?" "I called your husband Eve, he is here to take you home"
27 May 2019 | 00:09
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Hmmmm
27 May 2019 | 06:31
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Hmm this your mother self is hardless oh....
27 May 2019 | 08:47
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Hmm running away this time would be like mission impossible
27 May 2019 | 08:48
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This James of a guy i thought he had securities too??? Where are they now
27 May 2019 | 08:50
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all this is a dream?
27 May 2019 | 09:19
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I, supt the woman
27 May 2019 | 09:26
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You can't hide from alberto
27 May 2019 | 10:56
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How can a mother be tha heartless?
27 May 2019 | 13:12
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Speechless
27 May 2019 | 15:06
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hmm na wow
27 May 2019 | 18:01
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Eve. Chapter Fourteen. I stared at the window in shock, the black suv parked carefully and James was shouting at my parents that how could they do this to thier daughter . I looked at the car, praying that whoever came down from it was not Alberto. The door opened and my breathing stopped. I prayed harder, and then i saw the feet. It was in blue heels. I sighed. A woman came down, dressed in a black dress, and holding a blue bag that matched her shoe. She walked towards the house. "James come on, its not Alberto. Let’s get out of here." I pulled James away from my mother. I turned to look at her and my dad. They were on the brink of tears. "Everything I’ve done, i did for you Eve. I hope you understand" "No! Everything you did to her was out of fear and selfishness. You are just trying to save your ass and in the process putting your daughters life at risk in the hands of that monster" James answered for me. "And who are you, gentleman? How did my daughter know you?" My dad who had been quiet the whole time asked James. "I met him at the ball, two days ago. And he is helping me to get away from Alberto" I said, holding hands with James. "And his name is James?" "James Parker, lawyer at an international firm" Ja mes said proud of himself My dad seemed to be thinking for a bit and i raised my eyebrows for a bit. What was he thinking about? Does he know James? "Aren’t you the same James that was accused in the suicide of--" My dad could hardly finish his sentence when someone knocked. The door opened and a woman came in. "Mrs Chamberland!" My mom greeted. "Eve we gotta get out of here" James dragged me out. The woman looked at me and James. I looked at my parents one last time as James dragged me out of the house. "Eve! Eve! Get back here! Alberto is coming for you!" My mom shouted running after us. "You are making a big mistake!" "Get away from me mom, I’m leaving with James. Whether Alberto comes or not" She grabbed my hand, spun me around and gave me a resounding slap. "Never speak to me that way! I am your mother! And I care about you" "Leave me alone!" I shouted, struggling to get out of her grip. "No! You are going back to Alberto, he would be here soon!" James quickly came to my aid and pushed my mom away, causing her to fall and hit her head on the floor. "Come on Eve" James dragged me and pushed me into the car. I turned to look at my mom. She was unconscious, lying still on the floor. There was a little blood on the floor. James didnt have to push her that hard. He got into the car and i shouted "That was my mother you pushed like a sack of potatoes, She’s u nconscious!" James gripped the steerng in anger, fuming. But i kept shouting at him. Immediately he exploded. "Shut the fuck up! And stop whinning like the little bitch that you are!" To say i was beyond shocked was an understatm ent. I was terrified. James shouted me. He called me a bitch. I stared at him, tears falling from my eyes. He started the car, and we got to the road, i looked back at my house and my dad was running towards my mom unconscious body with thier visitor behind him. "You are so naive Eve. I thought Alberto taught you better than this" He laughed. What was happening? Was this James? Why was he acting so violent? "James? Why are you acting like this?" I asked. But James laughed louder. "Oh dear Eve, I’m going to have so much fun with you" He touched my cheeks, and i moved away from his touch. "Running away from me i see. Remember you were the one who made the decision to follow me" He smirked. "You are so foolish, how long have you known me? Two days or is it three? And you follow me like a little puppy" "James stop this madness, Please. I followed you to get away from Alberto. You know that" "Alberto?! Never mention that bastard name close to me again" He grabbed my wrist, squeezing it tight. "James, let me go! Stop, youre hurting me!" I pleaded. "For years Ive been trying to get back at Alberto for the death of Jane and When i first saw you at that ball with Alberto. I knew exactly what to do" He laughed. "That was the best night of my life, Then i saw Alberto leave the party and i saw you going to grab a drink. I was happy all i needed to do was just dance with you and as stupid as you were, you fell under my spell. You fell for me Eve and i knew I had gotten Alberto most priced jewel" I cried, so all this had just been a plan to get back at Alberto? That wonderful dance, it had meant nothing to James? I was played. Fooled. Deceived. "Then i saw Alberto, i moved closer to you, drawing you closer to my body to get him angry and boy he fell for it. He came towards us and beat the hell out of me. I allowed it. So i wont appear as the bad guy in front of you" "Stop this! Its not true. You liked me. You fell for me too at that ball!" I screamed at him in tears. Yes. James liked me. He held me so well. He danced with me. He made me feel like a queen. He made me feel safe from the claws of Alberto. "Like you? Never! You were just a means of getting my revenge back at that bastard" "No!No! Stop this!" "Oh sweet Eve. Then i landed at the hospital, thinking all hope of getting revenge was lost. But then, there you were. Calling my name. I was happy, I looked around to see if Alberto was there. But he wasnt. He left you once again" I remembered that day, i was so happy to see James. Thinking he was my saviour. "All i had to do was just convince you to come with me and then i had won. I knew you wont come out of fear so i told you about Jane. I twisted the story Eve" Suddenly I remembered when Alberto was trying to tell me, he said James was a liar. If only i had listened. "You see Jane loved Alberto, and he loved her too . But Alberto cant always get the good things, can he? No! So i started watching Jane just to annoy her at first but later i wanted her for myself. I wanted her to be mine" James laughed. "I needed her to love me too. I couldnt sleep without seeing her at least once. I needed to touch her, caress her. But she kept going back to that bastard!" James shouted, gripping the wheel in anger, his knuckles growing white. I shifted a little in fear. This James was different from the one i knew. What had suddenly possessed him? Why was he acting this way? "Then i grew insane, i kidnapped her, i took Jane. Damn! I was pleased. I had her all to myself, her body was so sweet to touch, i touched her every where, she was mine. Fucking mine! Until that bastard came , I could have killed him. I could have. But then Jane slit her throat. All because of him!! " He shouted. And i jumped in fright, fear. I moved away. James was the real murderer here, not Alberto. He had drawn Jane to her early death, not Alberto. He had kidnapped her, not Alberto. He had done all evil things to her, not Alberto. I was lied to, and i believed. "Now I’m going to make him pay for all he did to me! He would pay for every pain he caused me. And i know how to cause him pain, i know how to make him sad. I know how to kill Alberto. Its you Eve. You are the source of Alberto’s pain. He loves you so much and he would do anything to get you" James laughed. "You think Alberto is a demon? No, Im the greater Demon Eve"
28 May 2019 | 03:12
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Hahahahahaha. I'm speachless.
28 May 2019 | 03:44
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Eve u deserve it 10 times
28 May 2019 | 03:45
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I, in the first time that he is liarn for u and albeart love u
28 May 2019 | 03:51
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Even.if you die, how could you follow the man that pushed your mother on the floor. If that woman die ehn.
28 May 2019 | 11:36
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What!!! I hope I'm not dreaming.. From frying pan to fire,,hmmmmm....
28 May 2019 | 12:09
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I said it
28 May 2019 | 14:34
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Eve U Will Better
28 May 2019 | 15:36
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Sorry Eve
28 May 2019 | 15:37
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Eve u see what ur foolish has landed u abi,I pray u get away from him an learnt ur lesson
28 May 2019 | 16:26
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Our suspicion is playing out
29 May 2019 | 03:10
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Eve. Chapter Fifteen. *Before you read, this is Alberto’s point of view. That is, this is Alberto now, no more Eve* I sat at the bar and drank myself to stupor. Thinking. Wondering. Hurting. I wanted Eve, I missed her. I needed her. But i couldn't go back and get her. They say when you love someone, you should be ready to let that person go. All this while i had tried, forced Eve to love me but she never did. I locked her up, so she wouldn't look upon another man. I kept her here so she would have no other choice but to love me, no other choice to be with me. Me alone. All for my selfish interest. Now she was gone, finally free. The freedom she had been looking for. I took another bottle of wine and gulped down a whole cup. I needed Eve. I craved for her. My body, soul, heart, mind called out to her. But i couldnt get her back, i had done nothing but bring her pain, sorrow, distress, lonliness. She was right all along, i was a beast, a monster who couldnt treat the one i loved well. I claimed i loved her but all i was to her was the enemy, the heartless one who did all he could to gain an angel’s love. Now she was gone, without even looking back. She ran away with him. That motherfucker, James. But at least she was free from me. Free from the man who did nothing but cut out her wings, like the angel she was. Her beautiful face haunted me anytime i tried to close my eyes. That beautiful smile i only saw not more than three times clouded my mind. I rubbed my eyes in pain. I was in pain. I had lost Eve. The only girl to steal my heart after Jane die d. The girl who made me whole. The only girl who made me complete. The only girl to win and take my soul, mind, body, heart. All the horrible things i had done to her, my Eve came back to my mind, tormenting me, destroying me, breaking me. I allowed it. Allowed it tear me a part. I took down another gulp of wine, and i could feel my body getting under the influence of the alcohol. My body surrended to the alcohol, completely bluring the images i was seeing. I was getting drunk. But then who cares? No one. I turned around and one blonde chick sat on my laps. "What are you doing here, honey?" She asked, pressing her blood red lips on my face. "I...I..Drink..I’m- here, drink" I laughed at my own foolishness, i couldnt even make a reasonable sentence. But she just laughed as she pressed her breast to wards my chest. "Is that all?" She said, running her slender fingers down my face ,seductively. I knew what she was trying to do, seduce me. "No, I need something else" I said, removing the sleeve of her dress. She stood up and took my hand. I stumbled, almost falling but i laughed. I was drunk. She laughed and guided me upstaris. I fell almost a million times, everything was blury, moving. I wasnt seeing properly. She opened the door and dragged me into tbe room, it was a small one but enough for two people . It had a bed and one fan thats all. She stood before me and started to unzip her dress. "Do you need help with that?" I asked, and she nodded. I turned her back to me as i zipped down the clothes, her skin was lovely, pure, spotless. I wanted to touch it so i did, removing the dress, exposing her whole back, hips, legs, she stood naked before me and i was loosing control. I thought i was ok but when she turned around i almost fell. There she stood like a goddess, every part of her body was pure, smooth, my mouth watered. I looked at her from her toes, legs, hips, stomach, breast but when i got to her face i was shocked. it was Eve. How did she get here? "Eve" I whispered. "No darling my name is Pamela" She said, walking up to me. I shut my eyes and opened them again and it was the girl, no more Eve. What was wrong with me? Was i going crazy? She came closer to me and i felt her breast on my chest. She took my hand and placed it on her waist. But i couldnt look at the face again, i was scared of seeing Eve. She was haunting me. Those beautiful eyes. They haunted me. Pamela started removing my clothes and i ran down my hand on her back. When i looked up again, i saw Eve. I jumped away from Pamela. "Whats going on?" She asked. "Eve, what are you doing here?" I asked. "Who’s Eve?" I looked up to see Pamela again, Eve wasnt here. I was going crazy. I buttoned my shirt and ran out of the room, pushing other people. I almost fell down the stairs as i ran. I could here Pamela’s voice calling out to me, but i didnt answer. I ran out of the bar and opened my car after trying so many keys. I couldnt see well. I was beyond drunk. I tried my keys to my car, it started and i zoomed off with full speed. Why was i seeing Eve? I shut my eyes and all i could see was her beautiful face. Her hazel eyes. Those pink lips i had forced to kiss me and that begged me when i was about to do something to her. God! I missed her! I fucking missed her! I couldnt live without her! I craved for her, craved for her body, her heart. I needed Eve to survive. I banged the steering in anger. She was with James, that mother fucker. But atleast she was happy, free from me. Free from the monster who kept her locked up for four years. But i couldnt take her back, i was willing to let her go and be free. I loved Eve. And i wanted the best for her. But i knew i couldnt give her that kind of happiness. I couldnt give her joy. I increased the speed of the car as it raced along the streets of Italy. I made sharp turns and avoided the traffic lights. I was too drunk to obey the rules. I was too heartbroken. I needed Eve. I needed her for survival. I made another sharp turn as i almost hit another car. Eve beautiful face flashed in my mind. A picture of her and James smiling happily filled my mind. A picture of her and James getting married and having kids flashed through my mind. Another picture of James touching her, her body found its way to my mind. I grew angry. That mother fucker didnt deserve Eve. She was mine. My angel. My wife. My soul. My source of life. She belonged to me. Only me. No one else. Eve’s beautiful face clouded my mind and i didnt see the trailer coming towards me. The impact was too great as the trailer smashed my car. Pains, was all i could feel. Screams was all i could hear. Petrol was i could smell. Heat, fire was i could feel. I was hit. I was bleeding. I was in pains. I was loosing consciousness. I was dying. But Eve was all i could see.
29 May 2019 | 04:06
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I can feel your pains Alberto
29 May 2019 | 05:45
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Sorry albeart
29 May 2019 | 10:18
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Eve. Chapter Sixteen. *This chapter is still in Alberto’s point of view* *Ten years ago* I just clicked sixteen years. My dad as usual did nothing to celebrate my birthday and my mom too. He said celebrating birthdays was a sign a weakness. My dad, Mr Vettriano Santiago was a very heartless man, ruthless, drug dealer. He was a dangerous man and he taught me to be like him. My father never did anything good for me, he showed no sign of affection for me. He told me never to love anyone only myself. He taught me to be heartless. "Alberto, come here" He called from the sitting room. I was in the kitchen, playing with the food i was given. Today was suppossed to be a day of celebra tion, my birthday, the day that marks the one i was born. But no one did anything. It was a normal day. "Coming, master" That was what my dad demanded i called him. He didnt want to be called "father" or "dad" he said it made him appear weak. I walked to the sitting room and saw him sitting on the couch, a gun in his hand. He was playing with it. "Here, take it" He handed me the gun and dragged me outside. The gun felt heavy in my hand, i could barely hold it properly. My dad had done so many things to me but he had never given me a gun before. He whistled and my dog, Jake came running towards us. Jake, was the only thing i had close to a family, i got him five years ago and he had been with me since, i loved him so much. "Now Kill it" My dad said, pointing at the dog. What? "Master, why?" I said looking horrified, i couldnt kill Jake, he was my best friend, the only thing i cared i about. "Kill it, this animal is nothing to you. I gave it to you to care for it, now i want you to kill it" He frowned. I pointed the gun at the animal, looking widely at us, he didnt know what was happening. I couldnt pull the trigger, i just couldnt. "Kill it Alberto, this thing only makes you weak, what is rule number one?" He asked walking behin d me. "Never let your feelings, love and care get the best of you" I said, having remembered when my dad broke my fingers, forcing me to learn all the fifty-six rules that makes a man. The rules that makes me a Santiago, according to him. "Good. Rule number two?" "Obey all instructions from your master, no matter the cost" "Rule number thirteen?" "Never fall inlove with any body, either a pet or a human" I was almost at the brink of tears as i pointed the gun at the animal before me. "Rule number twenty, Alberto?!" My dad shouted when he saw my eyes. "Never shed a tear for anything" "Why?!" "Because it shows weakness!" I set the bullet in the gun, and pointed it to my dog. "Now, kill it!" My dad shouted. "Kill it Alberto, Ive taught you to never allow your emotions get in the way of what you are suppossed to do. Kill it!" I stared at my dog and remembered when it killed a snake that was about to attack me in the forest . This dog had saved my life a lot, when i got lost in the forest..I loved it. I couldnt kill it. I gripped the gun harder, with all my strenght i tried to pull the trigger, i couldnt. "I can’t" I finally said it. My dad grew angry, he hit me and took the gun from me. He used the gun to hit my forehead, i was bleeding in seconds. "Today marks sixteen years since i have taught you all these. All i did for you Alberto, you still dont know anything" He kicked my stomach. Blood spewed from my mouth as i groaned in pain. My ribs were broken no doubt. He pointed the gun at my dog and pulled the trigger. I screamed. No. No. "Thats what you get when you let your emotions cloud your duty" He said, kicking my stomach harder, I screamed in pain. He continued hitting my stomach even when i tried to stop it with my hand. "Get up, Alberto" My dad said. "Get up!" I tried but fell down back, he hit me again and i shouted. "What is rule number thirty?!" He shouted back at me. I couldnt talk, my mouth was covered with blood and i couldnt think well "What is rule number thirty, Alberto?!" He dad sho uted louder. "Get up!" I couldnt, i couldnt speak. I was too weak, my dad kept hitting me my ribs hurts. I couldnt even breathe, my lungs were closed up. I was in agony, pain. But i couldnt get up. That was when i heard my mom, she was crying, begging my dad to stop hitting me. He was too furious he didnt listen to her. He continued hitting me, completing ignoring her pleas. He hit me harder and i thought i was finally going to die. "Get away woman!" He pushed my mom away as he fell down to the floor crying, wailing at the pain i was going through. My life flashed through my eyes. The day my dad beat me up for helping a lady who fell down. The day my dad totured me to telling him, the girl i liked in school. Lets just say the girl left our school after my dad paid all the teachers to fail her. The day my dad broke my right fingers the second time, hitting it with a hammar for trying to help my mom up when he beat her. The day my dad taught me the rules. The day i forgot the rules, my dad flogged me with whips all over my back. The day i tried to run away from him, but he caught me and locked me in a dark room without food and water for five days. My dad was a cruel man, who never loved me. He never loved my mom who he married because she was already pregnant with me. A pain surged through my head as i was brought back to my current situation. My dad was holding my hair, dragging it and shouting at me to not faint. "What is the rule Alberto, say it. Only then would i leave you" But i still couldnt talk, as i stared at him, blood running out of my nose and mouth. We had the same eyes, nose, everthing i was just like my dad. The man who broke me. The man who made me who i was. "Get up!" I looked at Jake and i tried to get up but the pains in my ribs wouldnt let me. But i needed to fight. I needed to be strong. Maybe my father was right. I couldnt let my emotions get in the way. I should have obeyed him. I needed to start following the rules. I didnt want to feel weak. I didnt want to feel sad. I needed to be ruthless. I needed to be wicked. Dangerous. Heartless. I tried getting up, but i fell back down. I stood up again. "Get up Alberto!" My dad shouted, watching me struggle without helpung me. My ribs hurt the more, and i coughed and spat blood. But i didnt let it affect me. I stood up and held my ribs in pain. I almost fell back down but i held unto myself. My dad smiled at me. This was what he wanted. He wanted me to be like him. "Rule number thirty, when your enemy attacks you, never back down. Stand up and fight" I managed to say, blood coming out of my mouth. My dad tapped me on my shoulder and gave me back the gun and pushed me in the direction of my mother. "Shoot her leg" I gasped as my mom shouted at my dad, cursing him and pleading for me not to, but i didnt listen. I pulled the trigger and shot her leg, she screamed. But i didnt listen. I looked at my dad and he was smiling, very proud of me. He wanted me to be a monster. And i was going to be that monster. Heloo....This chapter was about Alberto, ten years ago, when he was just sixteen years. As you can see his father was a very ruthless man who trained Alberto to just be like him. Now we know how Alberto got to be the way he is. We still dont know if Alberto survived the accident and Eve is now with James, who is the real monster here.
30 May 2019 | 02:25
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James is the real monster
30 May 2019 | 04:35
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Let me keep reading
30 May 2019 | 05:12
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Watching
30 May 2019 | 09:48
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Alberto look 4 eve she is in trouble
30 May 2019 | 13:04
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following,nice one
30 May 2019 | 19:35
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Eve. Chapter Seventeen. *Back to Eve’s point of view* "James! James! where are you taking me to? let me out of this car this instant" I banged at the do or as i shouted at James. "Shut up bitch, i am just getting started with you" James yelled, hitting the steering in anger. We were driving through the woods, I didn't know where we were going and i was scared. After James showed me his true side, i felt more vulnerable and weak. I regretted leaving Alberto. At least i knew what Alberto was capable of but with James i didn't. I grabbed my hair in frustration. Tears threatened to spill from my eyes but i held them back. I couldnt let James see me cry. I felt helpless. I felt lonely. Betrayed. Foolish. For the first time in my life i wanted Alberto to come. James stopped, and i turned to see a small cabin in a clearing away from the woods. The whole place was deserted, no one was here. There was no house around, only just the small wood house, and trees. "I use to come here with my dad for hunting every summer holiday" James smiled. "Please James, I want to go back, i don't like this place. Its creepy" I said looking at the dense forest. "No Eve, we would stay here, me and you. Alone with no disturbance" James chuckled, opening the door and getting out. I still looked at the house, it was dark, lonely and scary, i didn't want to go in there. So i stayed in the car. But James had other plans, he came to my side opened the door and dragged me out. "No, please. I don't want to go in there" I cried trying to get away from his grasp. "Come here bitch, we are going to have a nice time here" He pulled me harder. He opened the door and i could barely see the room. Pitch darkness. I shivered in fear as he pulled me inside. "Let me put on the generator" He announced. "Stay here, i would be back soon" "No please let me come with you, i’m afraid of the dark" I said gripping James arm as i tried to go out with him. I wanted to go with James, I couldn't stay here alone, in the dark. "Stay here Eve!" James roared. "Get off me!" But instead i held unto James harder, the darkness was too intense. He pushed me hard and i fell, hitting my head on a hard surface. I screamed and James locked the door. No..No. No. "James! please let me out!" I shouted but no one answered. My heart race increased and i shivered. The darkness was thick, i could almost touch it. Fear consumed my soul and i banged on the door, tried the door knob but nothing worked. I screamed when i thought something touched me but it was only the curtains. I guess. I was in fear, shivering, lost in this pitch darkness . When i heard a noise, i screamed again. My mind wondered to many thoughts. What was that? Monsters? Have they come to eat me? I tried to keep silent as i listened harder. Nothing. I could hear nothing else. I sat on the floor and sobbed. I wanted to get away from here. I needed to get back to Alberto. I needed to get away from James. Just then, the lights ignited. James had put on the generator and my fear vanished when the darkness was driven away. I hear d a noise again and i looked at the direction it came from and saw a very small mouse. I sighed in relief. And looked at my environment. I was in the sitting room. It was beautiful, three couches, a big tv, cool air came from the air conditioner. A huge chandelier hung from the ceiling, shining brightly. I saw a corridor and walked through it looking at some pictures on the wall. They were pictures of little James. His mom and dad. They were all smiling at the camera. I continued walking and came across a door, i opened it and saw a room. Neat. A huge bed, a small TV and air conditioner. A huge wardrobe also rested on the wall. I felt someone breathe on my neck and i turned around to see James. He was looking at me hungrily. I needed to get a way from here. "Please James i want to go back to Alberto" I announced. James face changed instantly. Turning to anger. "Never mention that bastard name here again. I brought you here, so we could get away from him. To stay with me. We would get married and have kids" Was he insane? "I can never marry you James. Is that the same thing you told Jane before she took her own life? Is this what you told her that made her take her own life" I said, speaking with courage. "Don't you dare put Jane into this! I loved her" "No! you were obsessed with her, you killed her. You are a monster James not Alberto" James just laughed coming closer to me, i took a step back..My courage crumbling down immediately. "You want to know who a monster is? I would sh ow you one" James grabbed me and forcefully kissed me. I struggled out of his grasp but it was no use. In a few minutes my clothes were already torn from my body and James had thrown me to the bed . I was already in tears. "No James, please i beg you. Please!" I begged. This was happening again, first with Alberto now James. He laughed and unbuckled his clothes too, getting on top of me. I tried to push him away as i turned and turned, trying to get away but my efforts were all useless. My pleads fell on deaf ears. And when James plunged into me, i screamed in pain. The pain came with screaming and i cried . "James, please! stop! i beg of you!" I begged. But James seemed to be in a land of pleasure as he took me in. He touched me everywhere, from my face, breasts, stomach, hips. He touched me everywhere, squeezing and feeling. I screamed in pain when he plunged again. The pains were unbearable compared to Alberto’s. This was far worse..Far painful. James kissed me again, almost tearing my lips and he forces himself into me. I struggled. Screamed. Cried. Cursed. Turned. But to no avail. James continued and the pains grew intense. He was laughing, smiling down at me, touching, plunging. Seconds bled into minutes and hours. But James never stopped..He kept taking me. I thought of Alberto. I wanted him here. I needed him here with me as my life flashed before my eyes. Alberto. I could see him. Waiting for me in front of a bright light. He was calling out to me, and i could see myself running out to meet him. I was in a white gown. But as i was running to meet him, someone dragged me back and it was James. My vision was tainted black. James dragged me away as Alberto ran after us. I was trapped with James. As he got off me, he walked into the bathroom not before saying. "Never mention Alberto’s name ever again..He is not going to come for you. You are trapped with me forever, Eve" He smiled and went away leaving me in pains, i bleed..I cried. Thinking. Hoping. Praying. That Alberto would come to save me.
31 May 2019 | 02:42
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Owk
31 May 2019 | 05:00
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Cela va ta aprend un lesson
31 May 2019 | 05:01
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Well, have fun with James while you are still living
31 May 2019 | 05:52
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Sorry for your life
31 May 2019 | 07:33
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I pray nothing bad should happen to her ,so that she we learn her lesson next not to trust stranger
31 May 2019 | 09:07
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Enjoy With James
31 May 2019 | 10:00
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James is a monster... Now u see the difference
31 May 2019 | 10:49
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that was what u wanted abi? by running away someone u hardly know
31 May 2019 | 16:01
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Two monsters, one was hidden because of the cruel attitude of the first monster. The fear has always been whether james will the worst monster than alberto. It came to be so about who is the better monster.
31 May 2019 | 16:32
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There couldn't have been any better monster between james and alberto if not for the hidden love of alberto for eve. He shouldn't have allowed how the grew up to affect him so much and made him a monster.
31 May 2019 | 16:39
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Eve's parents, especially her father was satisfied with his folly by thinking her daughter being the one to pay for crimes he committed was for good. And now his wife is in a critical condition because of another monster.
31 May 2019 | 16:46
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Right now things are so tougher than the tough for eve. It's looking like alberto will learn how to love if he will survive and get eve back. Staying with alberto monster who learnt from his evil monster father was bad. Running away with james monster was too bad.
31 May 2019 | 16:56
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Eve. By Chimdi Samuel. Chapter Eighteen. *Now Alberto’s point of view* I felt myself surrounded by darkness. Being trapped in my mind for a long time. Being trapped in my subconscious. Here i felt helpless. Weak. But when i opened my eyes, white light surrounded me, i shut back my eyes. And tried to sit up, i opened them again and adjusted it to the lights as i looked around. Hospital. Various machine surrounded me. Beeping. How did i get here? I tried to remember but nothing came, all i got was a very serious migraine and i shut my eyes in pain. I was sore all over. My head fucking hurts. My ribs bandaged up even my left arm was broken. What happenned? A doctor ran in looking shocked. "Mr Santiago?" He asked, he looked like he was in his early fifties. He was wearing a white coat slightly opened which showed his blue shirt. I looked at him inquisitivly as he took a survey at the machines and sighing in relief. "I see you’ve woken up after a long time" He smiled flashing a torch on my eyes. "Please follow the ray of light" Woken up after a long time? How long had i been here? How did i get here? Questions filled my mind. But my mouth wouldnt open to ask. I tried talking but i just couldnt hear my voice, the doctor noticing my trials just smiled at me tapping my shoulders lightly. "Its ok Mr Santiago, you wont be able to talk, for now. Your brain is still trying to recover from the damage done to it in the accident" Accident? Was i involved in an accident? He gave me a pen and a book. "Write whatever you want to say here" He said, picking up a stethos cope and checking my heart beat. I quickly wrote. How did i get here? "Mr Santiago, you have suffered what we call as elective memory loss. That means in the cause of your accident, you had a serious brain damage, which has erased a particular event, or someone, or thing from your mind. The brain damage also affected your ability to speak" I gasped. I had forgotten something, someone. Who? And i wouldnt be able to talk again? "Calm down Mr Santiago, your heart rate just picked up. The good thing is you would still be able to talk, just give it a few hours and your brain would finally bring out your voice. But the worst part is your memory may never be recovered. That mea ns whatever your brain has wiped off may not return back to you. You may forget it forever" What? My brain has wiped out something, someone from my mind? There is something i dont remember, or someone ? No, No. This was bad. What if that person was really special to me? And i needed to remember? I quickly wrote on the book. Is there something that can be done to this memory loss? "I’m afraid nothing can be done Mr Santiago. But its left to your brain now to bring back the memory loss. But please Mr Santiago, dont try recovering those memories because they would give you nothing but a migraine" He said, pressing a botton on the machine. How long had i been here? He looked at the note. "You have been in coma for a month now Mr Santiago, we were suprised you woke up, because your body was shutting down a lot of times, but you just kept coming alive." How did i get here? I wrote. "You got into an accident Mr Santiago. You were driving under the influence of alcohol, and you didnt pay attention to the road. Its a good thing the paramedics brought you here on time" I was drunk while driving? Why? Why was i drinking? Did anything happen to me? As i tried to remember how i got here, a sharo pain attacked my head and i groaned in pain. "I told you Mr Santiago, everytime you force your self to remember anything you would a migraine. So just rest and allow your head recover those m emories" He said, laying my back to the bed. In a few minutes i was back in my subconscious ness. *Few weeks later* After a painful two weeks in the hospital, i was fin ally discharged home. But as i entered my house, i felt a pang of lonliness. Did i live here alone? I quickly went to the kitchen to make myself a hot tea. After two weeks, no memory of my accident came to me. No memory recoverd. I was still the same since i woke up except i could now talk and my hand was ok now. The bandag ed ribs still remained though. I put the kettle on the gas and waited for it to boil. Even without my memories back, i felt a deep hole within me. A part of me was incomplete. A part of me was lost. I felt something was missing. But what? What was it that was so important to me that i needed to remember. Was it someone? Something? A family member? Someone i loved? As i tried to remember a sharp pain stung my head and i groaned in pain. "Fuck!" I hissed and stood up to put off the gas. As i tried to pour the water into a cup, it fell, splashing its content on my toes. I screames in fustration and climed up the stairs to the room. Going towards my room, i saw a door opened and i walked in. The room was designed for a female. What was a female doing in my house? Did i have a wife? Sister? Daughter? Fuck! Why couldnt i remember anything? I walked in and went to the wardrobe. female clothes of different colours and designs stared at me, expensive jewerries layed on the surface. Shoes of different designs stood on the floor. Who owned these? I picked up one of the gowns and looked at it and noticed it belonged to a very young girl probably seventeen or eighteen. But what was a girl that young doing in my house ? Migraine attacked me and i sat down a bit. I needed to remember, i needed to remember this girl. As i sat on the bed i saw a book peeking out of the pillow, i picked it up and opened a page May, 15, 2015. Dear Diary, Today is my birthday but Alberto dosent know ab out it, i dont want to tell him. He treats me bad..It has been two years since i started staying with hi m and i already had a scar. I wanted to go back home but Alberto wont let me. He says i now belong to him. Sometimes i think i like him. But i dont want to, because he is wicked. I just want to sleep and get away from him. Till tomorrow diary. I closed the book and many thoughts wondered t hrough my brain. This girl said she liked me. She said i was wicked to her. Who was she? I looked at the cover of the book and saw a name written on it. Eve. Who was Eve?
1 Jun 2019 | 03:07
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Take it easy bro
1 Jun 2019 | 11:52
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Eve. By Chimdi Samuel. Chapter Nineteen. *Now Eve’s point of view* Its been a month and two weeks. More than a month with James. The real monster. Everyday i was beaten up. Everyday i cried. Everyday i suffered. Every night i was locked up in the basement, in the darkness. Every day i kept waiting for Alberto. Hoping, believing, thinking he would come but he never did. Why? Because he never loved you Eve, a voice in my mind said. I smiled sadly, stirring the food on the fire. James made sure i learnt how to cook, he forced me. Here i did everything, cook, wash, clean the house. All the things i never did in Alberto’s house. James said we would stay here in this cabin until Alberto had stopped looking for me then we would fly out of the country. I thought about Alberto, I missed him. His smile, his touch, his breathe on my skin. I missed him, i wanted him, i craved for him. He said he loved me, but why hadnt he come to save me from James? What happened to Alberto? I looked at the window and trees stared back at me.The house was locked, the windows locked. I was trapped inside. James made sure of that. By now i had gotten used to it, staying home alone till he got back, locke d here. Even if i tried to escape, the forest looked scary, dense and dark. I wouldnt make it very far and James would catch up with me. This past month had been hell. I prefered Alberto to James. James was more cruel, heartless and unforgiving. He beats me up for any little thing. He punished me for every mistake. He found pleasure doing them. I wished i was still with Alberto. I regretted going with James in the process of getting away from o ne monster, i fell into the hands of a greater one. But was i to blame? No. I was just a naive, innocent seventeen year old who wanted freedom, a girl who wanted to go to high school. A girl who wanted to go to prom with the guy of her dreams. A girl who wanted to have a best friend. A girl who wanted to go to clubs, parties. I was just a girl who wanted to live life like any ot her teenager, gossiping about guys, going shopping with friends, hanging out. But all i got was two monsters who loved me, one who i realised i loved back too late. All i got was suffering. Caged up. Tears. Betrayal. Lonliness. Hurt. Pain. Scars. When was i ever going to run outside the sun with my hair in the wind, free? Never. That day would never come. I would never be free. I was going to be James’s puppet forever. Only if i had listened to my parents when they tried to warn me. If only i had listened to Alberto when he tried to reach out to me about who the real monster was. If only. A tear slid down my cheeks and i didnt bother wiping it. It was a normal phenomenom. Crying was an everyday thing. After these month with James, i was already giving up. I wanted to die, i wanted to be free even if death was the way. What was i thinking? Killing myself? Death? Was i finally going crazy like Jane? Was i going to kill myself? The door slamed opened and James walked in looking angry as usual. He removed his tie and threw his briefcase to the floor. "Eve!" He shouted from the sitting room. "Welcome" I said, bending down to remove James shoes, it was my duty."How was your day?" James told me i was to ask him how his day went. So i did. "Good news and bad news" He sighed heavily before giving me a smile. "I would set the dinning table for you" I said, placing his shoes beside the door and running to the kitchen. James hated being served late. I quickly placed the table cloth and set it for him and he sat down. I was walking up to him with a glass plate containing his food when i heard him speak. "Your lovely husband was involved in an accident , he was drunk while driving" That was when the plate fell. Its content fell over the floor. The plate shattered to tiny bits. A loud crash was heard. Alberto was in an accident? He was drunk? No. No. Was he alive? "Did he survive?" I asked James. James stood up angrily. "Look at what you did bitch!" He pointed at the glass scattered all over the floor. But i was too shocked to answer, Alberto was in an accident. Thats why he hadnt come to save me from this beast. James shook me vigorously. "He is dead, Eve. The doctors said he didnt survive the accident. Your husband is gone and you are stuck with me for life" I fell. Falling on the glass. No. No. No. Alberto couldnt be dead. No. He was still alive. Yes. James was just lying. Alberto was alive! "No! No!".I screamed, wailed as i gripped my clothes. "No, Alberto is still alive! Youre lying! You are lying!" I stood up and started hitting James on his chest. "He’s dead, you piece of shit!" He screamed back at me. No, not Alberto..Not the man i was in love with. Not the man who bought me that beautiful dress i wore to the ball. Not the man who took me to the beach. Not the man who loved me dearly. No. Not Alberto. I stumbled when James pushed me away from him. Alberto. I hadnt even had the chance to tell him i loved him back. I sat on the floor, crying, blaming James for all these. "Its your fault, you asshole, you drove Alberto to his early death all because of your selfish reasons" That resulted to a slap from James but i didnt fee l it. I was already used to the pains. The heartbreak. He slapped me again, hitting me, but i was numb. "Just kill me already, James. Just like you did to Jane. The only reason i was still keeping myself was because i still had hope that Alberto was going to come to save me. But now he is dead. I have no reason to live" James hit me again, severally. Until i was bleeding from my mouth and nose. I couldnt even feel it. The only thing i was feeling was Alberto’s death. A part of me had died too. I had lost Alberto. I had lost the man i loved. After about five extra minutes of beating, James dragged me to the room. He pushed me in it and l ocked me in it. That smile. That voice. Those eyes. That touch. That kiss. All gone. I sat crying for hours. I cried for Alberto. I cried for my husband. Then bile rose to my mouth. I wanted to vomit. I stood up rushing to the bathroom and throwing up into the toilet bowl. This was the fifth time i was throwing up this week. Why? Last month i hadnt seen my period. Now vomiting. Was it a coincedence? Was I? There could only be one explanation for this. And i knew it. I was pregnant. But for who?
1 Jun 2019 | 19:56
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comment after reading
1 Jun 2019 | 19:58
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I'm just praying that God should help u even if u didn't listening to ur parents winning,I also pray God should send someone they to help u,he can do in possible things
2 Jun 2019 | 07:36
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You are the one to blaim. A man that claim to love you will never push ur mother like that
2 Jun 2019 | 08:36
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What A Mess
2 Jun 2019 | 11:15
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may God help u
2 Jun 2019 | 12:17
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see where ur stupidity has led u
2 Jun 2019 | 14:43
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Eiyaaa.... Kpele oooo
2 Jun 2019 | 17:36
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Eve. By Chimdi Samuel. Chapter Twenty. *Alberto’s point of view* I kept staring at the diary, it belonged to a girl called Eve. Who was she? I opened another page and it read, August, 27, 2016. Dear Diary, Today me and Alberto went to the beach. We played a game that if i caught him while running he would be my slave. Guess what? I won, i tricked him and he bought me a lot of things but that wasnt the best part. We kissed. I kissed Alberto. And it was the best moment of my life. When his lips touched mine, i went to clo ud nine. I was in a land i never wanted to leave. Then he told me he loved me. I believed. That day, was when i started loving Alberto. But i would never tell him. He treats me like a slave. Alberto must never know i love him. Now i need to sleep before Albert comes to my room and see me writing. Let me look at the picture once more. The only picture i have of me and Alberto. Good night Diary, Till tomorrow. I sighed. This Eve loved me? But why didnt she tell me? Was i too much of a monster that she didnt want me to know? Who was this girl that said i loved her? Wait! She mentioned a picture she had of me and her. At least i would know what she looked like. I flipped the pages of the diary to find the picture but it wasnt there. I stood up too fast and my ribs stung in pain. Groaning, i opened the drawers and started searching for the picture. It wasnt there. I opened the drawers, wardrobe but it wasnt there either. I sighed in fustration. Where could this picture be? Then i raised up the pillow and there a piece of paper there. Two faces stared at me. One was me and the other was a girl. She had hazel eyes a beautiful smile. She was the most beautiful creature i had ever seen. That smile. Lips. Cheekbones. Eyes. I fell in love with them as i admired. In the picture, i was looking at her. I recognised the look of love in my eyes, I knew from the way i was looking at her that she had already won my heart. Who was this Eve? Why didnt i remember this girl, i seemed to look at so lovingly? I stood up fustrated, angry, pissed. Questions fille d my mind. I didnt know anything anymore. I didnt know this girl in this picture. Yet those eyes and that smile haunted me. Why did she say i treat her bad? Was i a kind of a monster towards her? Did she really love me? How did i even get into that accident? Why was i drinking? What happened to this girl, Eve? Why isnt she here? Did she leave? Did i push her away? Or was she taken away from me? I screamed as my head started to hurt. The pain was so intense i fell, hitting my head against the floor. The pain grew and i could feel my vision turning black. I was loosing my sight. I couldnt see. Ever ywhere was dark. I couldnt hear, Silence filled my ears and darkness filled my eyes. I suddenly couldnt move. I layed on the floor, not moving. I was frozen, blind and deaf. The only part of me working was my mind, i felt worried what was happening to me? Then it came crashing down. Memories, events, people started filling my mind. First, i was in a house asking for my money, saw a beautiful young girl. Took her with me. She stay ed with me. I fell in love with her. I treated her badly, I turned to a monster, punishing her for any little mistske. Giving her scars, making her cry, leaving her alone. Then taking her out, there she was dancing with the enemy. I was angry, i beat him up and dragged her away, speeding off into the woods. Angry and shouts at her. Throwing her into the river. Watching her drown, feeling for her, fears of loosing her, angry with myself. Rushes in to save her, takes her to the hospital. Confessing my love and apologising to her. She is sad, broken and scared . I was sent out to allow her rest. But when i came back, she was gone..She was not there anymore. I was sad, broken, torn, fear consumed me. I wanted her back. Then i heard the enemy was in the same hospital. Anger filled me and i knew i had to get her back. Even if it meant killing him. But it was too late, they finally left. I knew she was happy to be finally free from someone as evil as me. I was angry, shattered, torn, broken beyond limit. My heart crashed, it broke to a million pieces. She left me. She left me for him, for that demon. She left me. She never loved me. Because if she dids he would have stayed. But it wasnt her fault, i was a monster. I did nothing but bring her pain. I kept her locked up with me for fear of loosing her. I trapped the angel beca use i didnt want to share her with anyone else. I clipped off her wings, i broke her. I couldnt love her properly because i always grew jealous and angry. My emotions always got the best of me. I locked her here so she could be with me forever. Forgive me if i was selfish. But she meant a lot to me, but everytime i tried to show her, my anger, pride, jealousy, consumed me. I was the beast who fell in love with an angel. Then with all that pain, i went to the bar. I drank till i could not talk. Then than blonde girl came up to me. I followed her like a fool because i needed to get my mind away from the angel. But i couldnt, i kept seeing her face, hearing her laugh. seeing her smile and those beautiful eyes. I couldnt take it anymore, i ran out. I ran away like the coward i was. Running away from my heart with all the heavy pain. I entered my car. Her beautiful face still burning at the back of my mind. Her smile lingered in my brain. Her eyes tormented me. Her lips spoke to me, begging them to be kissed. Still thinking about her, i didnt notice the car coming in front of me. The last thing i remembered was the crash. Then i woke up in the hospital. All my memory of her gone. Now here was i. The memory had returned. I kne w her. She was my all. She was the girl i had fallen in love with when all my hope was gone. She was the girl who captured my heart, sealed it and held unto the key. She was my soul. She was my heart. She was my mind. She was mine. And i was hers. I needed her to survive. I was lost without her. I knew who she was. The darkness, the void, the space had been filled up with memories of her and questions in me had been answered. That angel was Eve Santiago, my wife. But she was with the devil and there was only one thing i needed to do. Bring her back to me. I was going to save her. I was going to save my wife, my angel, my queen.
3 Jun 2019 | 02:30
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Eve needs you Alberto
3 Jun 2019 | 04:09
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But now she is pregunat
3 Jun 2019 | 04:33
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Alberto, let's go get Eve back from that monster James. I'm coming along with my short gun, lolz
3 Jun 2019 | 04:58
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oya na let go there
3 Jun 2019 | 05:48
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Eve. By Chimdi Samuel. Chapter Twenty One. *Eve’s point of view* I ran to the bathroom for the fourth time this morning. Throwing my digested food into the toilet bowl. My head was aching, and i could feel there was something growing inside me. And i knew who it belonged to. It was Alberto’s. But if by any chance it was for James, i would kill it. I couldnt carry a monster as a child. I had yet to tell James but i noticed the inquisitive look he gave me anytime i ran to the bathroom to vomit. With every passing day, i was missing Alberto. I still couldnt believe he was dead. The pain was still sore. There was no hope for me getting away from James now. I was trapped with him forever. I washed my face and left the bathroom. Going back to sit beside James who was watching a foot ball match. "What’s going on with you? This is the fourth time you are running to the bathroom" He said, looking at me intensely. "Uhm. Nothing" I lied. I just couldnt tell him. What if it didnt belong to him? He would kill it. No doubt. And the remaining piece of Alberto would be gone. "Get dressed we are going to the hospital" He said taking my arm and directing me to the bedroom . Hospital? No, they would know and they would tell James. "No, James. I guess i just have a fever or there was something in the food. Thats all" I said, stopping him. He looked at me very closely. Studying my face. Looking for any thing to show i was lying. Please please believe. I prayed in my mind. "No, we are going to the hospital, get dressed. We leave in ten minutes" He said closing the door behind him and leaving me in the room. I quickly changed my clothes, while thinking of a plan to change James mind. But i couldnt think of anything reasonable. "Eve, get out here now!" James barked from outside. I quickly ran out to meet him, getting into the car and shutting the door. "I want the best for you Eve. I dont like it when you fall sick" James strocked my head with his fingers. He gave me a small smile. I looked out the windo was we passed trees and trees and trees. I didnt even know where we were. After a few minutes driving, we finally got to see people and got to the hospital. "Dont talk to anyone and stay by my side" James ordered. I nodded in response and followed him inside the hospital. Fear consumed me. I didnt know how James would react if he knew i was pregnant. We entered an office and a female doctor was sitting on a chair holding a book in her hand while studying its pages. James coughed gaining her attention. She looked up and smiled. "Oh, Mr and Mrs Parker. Please take a sit" She pointed at the chair. Mr and Mrs Parker? James wasnt my husband. Alberto was. It was Mrs Santiago. I dared not say that out loud because James would kill me. "My wife here has been vomiting" James said pointing at me. Your wife? Or the slave you beat up everyday? "Oh Mrs Parker, how have you been feeling?" She asked, adjusting her glasses, getting ready to write some notes. "I’ve been feeling nausea and vomiting every morning. I feel weak generally and urinate frequently" I replied, not saying the part where i missed my period. "How about your period? Did you see it for last month?" Ugh. Why did she have to ask that? "Yes" I lied. James turned to look at me and i shivered praying he didnt know. "Are you sure ma’am?" She asked again, removing her glasses and staring at me inquisitively. I looked at James. "You can tell her anything Eve. I’m here for you" He said, squezzing my laps and giving me a reasssuring smile. "No, i didnt see it for last month" I said finally. "There could be only two reasons. Some people dont see their periods either due to stress or pregnancy" She smiled. James turned to look at me, smiling. "So you mean my wife here could be pregnant with my child? " Your child? You wish. "Yes Mr Parker. We just need to take your wife to the room and confirm that. Please wait here." The doctor stood up, taking my arm and leading me out of the room. James stood up too holding my hand, he kissed it. "I’ll be waiting for you" Eww. He disgusted me..He acted like he was a saint outside but back at home his horns and fangs came out. Demon. "Ok" I managed to say as the doctor pulled me outside. She took me to a room and in a few minutes we came out with the result positive that i was pregna nt. When she told James, he was suddenly happy , treating me like a queen. He suddenly changed. But i was still confused. I wasnt still sure if the baby i was carrying was mine. So i called the doctor aside while James went to get the car around. "Miss. Please i need you to do a faternity test for this child. I want to be sure this child belongs to James" "But why? James is the only man you’ve been with right?" She raised her brows at me. "That is none of your business. I just need you to do it" I said, getting angry. Why didnt people just mind thier business. "Ok, i just need a strand of his hair. Thats all. And since i already have your baby profile. I just need to check if it would match. Thats all" "Thanks, but how would you send me results?" I asked, knowing i wouldnt come here until the next appointment. And that was too far. "Just give me your email. I would forward it to yo u" I didnt have an email..Oh i did. We were asked to create emails as a project when i was in school.. I quickly gave her my email. "Please i dont want James to know about this" I pleaded with her. "I understand ma’am. The results would be out this evening. So be expecting it." "Lets go Eve" James suddenly came in, giving me a bright smile that made him look so handsome. Handsome devil. But how was i going to get a strand of his hair? I walked towards him, giving him a hug and running my hand through his hair and plucking a strand and quickly giving it to the doctor before James saw it. He hugged me tighter surprised i had hugged him in the first place. "Please dont forget to bring your wife every week for check up on her and the baby" "I wont" The doctor gave me a thumbs up and i smiled at her. James looked at us in confusion. But didnt ask. We went to the car and drove home while James told me he was happy i was carrying his child. He said i had made him the happiest man on earth.. He said he would start treating me well from now on. That night, James didnt let me pick a stick of broom. He did everything for me. Taking me to the room and giving me a massage. He even washed the dishes.. James changed towards me. Treating me like a queen and i was a little happy. He said we were going to go shopping for baby things next week Saturday. We finally went to sleep, with James holding me tightly as if i would vanish anytime soon. He was asleep. But i couldnt sleep. My mind went wandering to the results. I would use James phone to log in to my email. James didnt buy me a phone he was scared i would call someone. I quietly took his phone without waking him. And my heart skipped a beat when James moved a bit, snoring slightly. I pressed the power button and i saw he put a password in his phone. Oh God. I tried his name but it rejected it. Funny enough i tried Jane it still didnt work. So i tried my name. It worked. James used my name as his password. I quickly logged into my email and saw a message from "Saint Hospital" I opened it and quickly glanced through the doctor terms until i saw. No match. There was no match between James DNA and the baby’s. That means James was not the father of the child i was carrying. Alberto was the father. I tried containing my laughter..I was so happy. At least now i had a reason to live. I was still carrying a piece of Alberto in me "What are you doing with my phone?" James woke up, snatching it from my hand.
4 Jun 2019 | 00:41
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I wonder what will happen if he finds out the baby wasn't his. Alberto thank God for your memory,it's time to go and look for your wife.
4 Jun 2019 | 01:43
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Hmmm
4 Jun 2019 | 07:29
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Hope you were smart enough to delete the email before he collects the phone?
4 Jun 2019 | 11:58
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I hope u delete the message?
4 Jun 2019 | 12:32
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Hammmm
4 Jun 2019 | 13:22
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let's go there
4 Jun 2019 | 22:52
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Eve. By Chimdi Samuel. Chapter Twenty Two. *Alberto’s point of view* "Tell me! Where is James?" I asked angrily for the seventh time. But the man who was strapped to a chair and was being tortured by me wasn't answering me. "Fu- fuck you" He managed to say, coughing out blood from his mouth. He was one of James men. And i took him for questioning. But he wouldn't talk. There are other ways to make him talk. We were in my torture room and i was going to make him bleed. All for my Eve. I would kill everyone to know where she was. I already had seven me n bloods on my hands. And i would still keep killing just to get her back. I would fucking kill anyone who knew James. For one and a half month now Eve had been with that monster. Who knew what he had done to her .That demon was going to pay for all he had done to me and my beloved wife. He was going to pay. I would cut off his balls and feed it to him. I would pluck out his eye balls and shove it up his ass. I was going to make him bleed. I would give him the most horrible death ever. No one touches Eve. No one takes her away from me. Not James not anyone. "You don’t want to tell me where James is. Dont worry i have a plan set for you" I smiled, making him scared. I picked up a device just like a prong. And put his little finger between it and clipped it shut. His little finger fell to the floor as i detached it from his hand. His screams filled my ears and i smiled. His pain made me satisfied. I was happy. His pains and screams were my joy. "Where is James?" I asked again. "Please, i swear i dont know" He said, screaming loudly. "Wrong answer buddy" I patted him and picked up the device. Putting his ring finger in between it. "Please...I swear i dont know..Please" He begged. "I believe you" I said, clipping his finger, it cut off and fell to the ground and he screamed, begging me to stop but i didnt listen. I did it for his middle finger, his index finger and h is thumb. In a few minutes, all his fingers on his left hand was on the floor. All his fingers cut off. But i wasnt done yet. Anyone who knew about James whereabout was going to die if they didnt tell me. "Pl....Pl...please...I swear ..i dont know" He said, tears dropping from his eyes. He was in agony, pain. So was Eve. Eve was also in pain. "You see. I dont really believe you. You are James best friend, Fernando and if anyone knows about him it is you. Where is he?" "I dont know" He said. I picked up the device and went to the second hand. Putting his finger in it, i clipped off the little finger. Fernando cursed, screamed and trashed all over the place. Blood seeped through his finger and he screamed in deep pain. I picked his next finger and clipped it off too. "James has my wife. My sweet wife Eve. She means the world to me and i would kill to get her back" Fernando didnt reply, he was crying for the amount of pain i was causing him. I clipped of the middle finger and the index then the thumb. By now Fernando was already loosing consciousness. I called one of my men and he poured a bucket of water on his head causing him to regain consciousness. "How long would you do this Alberto" He asked, dropping the bucket on the floor. "You have already killed seven of James men. Do you want to have much blood on your hands?" "I would create a massacre for Eve. I would fucking kill all of James men to get Eve back!" I screamed at him and facing Fernando. "Where is James?" He didnt reply, instead he just spat blood on the floor. I picked ten metals like the size of a pen and put it in his finger. Piercing it one by one into his hand as his fingers. I coiled wires to each of the metals and pressed a switch. Each of those metals were connected to a wire which was connected to a power surge so when i put on the power, current, electricity passed through it and into his body. Fernando jerked in his chair as he was being electrocuted. His teeth was clenched. His fist was tightly closed. His viens bulged out as his face turned red. He was in serious pains. His hand drained the blood in him. He continued jerking in pains. His bones, tissue, organ, system, cells, muscles and nerves shoot violently as he reacted to the high voltage passing through him. If there was anything my father taught me well was knowing how to torture to get answers. He taught me not to feel sympathy for anyone and i remembered it all. All the rules. The monster my father made me was back. I was going to get Eve back no matter who i had to kill. I switched off the electricity supply and Fernando body fell. He was calm, free from the shock. He breathed heavily. His eyes red, very red. Dark circles covered his eyes. His body pale. "P...ple...please...st..sto..stop" He chocked. "I would stop as soon as you tell me where Eve is " I said, squatting in front of him and holding his face so he was staring at me. He looked away, still not talking. This time i switched on the electricity and increased the voltage to the highest. Fernando body started jerking again. And i watched. There was no sympathy in my eyes. Instead i felt pleasure in my veins. Anyone who was with James was considered my enemy. I had already wasted one and half month trying to regain my memory. And now i had finally gotten it but Eve was no where found. I was not going to let anyone who knew James go scot free. They would all pay. Anyone who knew James was going to get whats coming to them. I wouldnt stop. I wont stop until i had Eve in my hands again. I was going to kill any motherfucker who knew about them. Seven were already dead. Fernando would make it eight. And the number would keep counting till i found Eve. I was going crazy, i was going insane every passing moment Eve was not here. I needed her. I needed her to survive. I missed her voice. I would do anything to have her back. Fernando’s body kept jerking and i switched it off . Coming closer to him i asked again. He was breathing heavily, blood gushing out of his nose. His face almost white. His veins showed and his hand was battered. "I would keep on going Fernando until you tell me where they are" He didnt look up. He still wasnt ready to talk. And i wasnt ready to let him go. "As you wish" I said going back to put on the switch. "Wait" He said, i almost couldnt hear him. I turned back to him. "James and the girl are in his cabin, downtown. The cabin he goes to with his dad y ears back" Finally, i smiled. The cabin. I knew it. James had showed he the cabin a few times. It was about a few hours drive from here. I laughed. Finally i was going to get back my queen. My angel. I took out my gun and pointed it at Fernando. "No. Please. I told you where they were" "I know, thanks for that" I pulled the trigger and the bullet hit his brain, blood smerged on the wall and his body fell limp. Dead. But that was the least of my worries. I knew where Eve was. I knew where James was. That mother was going to get whats coming to him. Poor James, I was going to kill him in the most horrible, violent way. And my sweet Eve. I was going to have her back. Her smile, body, heart and soul was going to be mine again. Dont worry darling, your saviour is coming.
4 Jun 2019 | 23:06
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Okay ooo
5 Jun 2019 | 04:11
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The way things were going to was more horrible in the heart of james and alberto. No feelings attached, not until the baby came around and jame was the first to notice and started pretense carings that doesn't look real after all he has done to the girl.
5 Jun 2019 | 07:46
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Getting interesting
5 Jun 2019 | 07:52
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Eve has a choice after all she's being through in the house of monster james. She has a choice to love alberto who is better than the other. If alberto will start loving with the real attitude of love, then, we can conclude on alberto's love.
5 Jun 2019 | 07:56
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Who owns the baby must be alberto when eve just found out that alberto is the father of her baby before one monster james close to him took the phone and the email message. The battle to rescue eve was getting closer to next of may happen.
5 Jun 2019 | 08:05
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Like killing more men of james wasn't enough. It's looking like more of them were ready die not ready to talk, covering the monster. So sad for the number eight dead one who was already bleeding to death.
5 Jun 2019 | 08:19
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Seaching for love wasn't easy for alberto. Killing the eight from the men of james was nothing to him, he grew up a cruel man. If he can change into the real love attitude towards eve ,then, he's ready to love.
5 Jun 2019 | 08:27
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Good For You
5 Jun 2019 | 14:46
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oh my, instead of u to talk at that first time u prefer to suffer why na
5 Jun 2019 | 17:45
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Alberto is back
5 Jun 2019 | 18:27
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Eve. By Chimdi Samuel. Chapter Twenty Three. *Eve’s point of view* I watched as James stared at the screen of the p hone. He was going to see the email. No doubt. And he would discover the truth about the child i w as carrying. "You are carrying that bastard child" He said, loo king at my stomach with so much hatred. His veins in view. He was angry. "When were you going to tell me?" "I...I...I..was going...to tell you when you woke up" I stammered, getting down from the bed amovin g backwards. "Liar! You would never have told me, you lying bitch!" James came to my side. The anger in his eye s were unquenchable. I had never seen him so angry in my life. He took another step closer to me and i took one backwards. My heart raced a thousand miles per second. My breathing hitched. I continued moving backwards as my back hit the wall. Causing me to stand firm in front of James. He smirked. Putting his hand against the wall. "Eve darling. You think you are so smart to raise that bastard child knowing it wasn't mine. You would never have told me. I would have loved it, like it were mine." He clicked his tongue. "Now I’m going to kill it" I gasped. No. No. James couldn't kill the child. The only piece of Alberto that remained. "No, James. Please. Do whatever you want with me. But please leave this innocent child out of it" I pleaded, at the brink of tears. "You call it innocent. No. Anything that belonged to Alberto is never innocent." James said, taking my face in his hand. He hit my stomach and i fell to the floor. "If i have to damage your stomach to kill that demon in you Eve. I would" James said to me. He hit me again continuously. He hit me stomach and i groaned in pain. It was unbearable. Pains surged through my stomach as i winced loudly. "Ple....ple.." I tried telling James to stop but he didnt. He looked evil. His eyes dark. His muscles taut. He was staring at my stomach with so much venom. . I coughed out blood as my stomach screamed in pain. . "I’m trying to save you Eve. I’m trying to save you from that monster growing in you" James laughed. Hitting me more harder. "I’m going to be your saviour Eve. This child has to die" No. No. I couldn't let James kill this baby. I needed to fight. I turned to the other side allowing James to hit my back instead. "Bitch!" James roared, picking me up from the floor, he dragged me to the basement. The basement was dark with only a little light from a very small window. James picked a rope and tied my hand at my back. The rope was too tight and my stomach burned with pain. I silently prayed that nothing had happened to the baby because i was already bleeding. James tied my eyes and legs. Preventing me from having a little light. "Since you are so bent on saving your monster baby, I would leave you here, without food or water . Till you starve and beg for food. But then your baby would have been gone then. And with the amount of pain you are in. The baby wont last long." James chuckled and left me there. Eyes, legs, hands bound. Please God let the baby be okay. I silently prayed. My whole body burned with pains. My eyes were in a pitch darkness. My hands, i couldn't even feel blood flowing in them. My legs hurts so much. I couldn't move. My whole body was stiff. My stomach was the worst. It felt like James was still hitting me. It burned with so much pain. I felt like dying. No. I needed to stay strong. I needed to stay strong for my baby. I tried to breathe. I needed to be alive. I tried to breathe. But it seems the air didn't want to pass through my lungs because of the intense pain i was in. It must pass through. I took deep breathe again and i could feel my body coming back to life. Blood tickled down my legs and i feared the baby was gone. Was it? No. No. Eve. No. The baby was still there. Think positively. I breathed in again. I needed to be alive. I was going to see this child grow. I was going to see this child get married. I was going to hold this child in my arms. I took another breath and my stomach hurt with e very breathe i took. I was in a much pain. With every breath i took, i could feel intense amount of p ain in my stomach. With every breath i took, i could feel my body fighting back death. With every breath i took, i could feel my lungs opening up again. With every breath i took, my hope increased. Those seconds bled into minutes. Hours. With every passing hour, my body was feeling weak. I was tired. Hungry. I was breathing, giving myself strength but my body was consuming it. With every breathe i took, i could feel myself getting weaker. My body was shutting down. There was only so much i could take. So much pain, fear, darkness, hunger, bleeding. I could feel the blood spreading around the room. The bleeding was another source that was draining all the strength i was trying to gather. How was i going to survive? Would anyone come to save me? Would my parents magically come to rescue me? Would James change his mind and take me back inside? None of the above. No one would save me. If only i had stayed with Alberto. If only i had bearer the pains with him. If only he was still alive. Tears fell from my eyes and wet the cloth covering my eyes. I missed him. I still couldn't believe he was dead. He was gone and i he didn't get to know how much i loved him. He was gone and i was here with his child, slowly dying. So this was how i was going to die without ever tasting freedom? The pains were growing stronger. My legs, eyes, stomach. The bleeding didn't stop. I have been bleeding for hours. I have been in the same position for hours. My hands tied in the same spot behind my back. My legs, i couldn't even feel them anymore. I gasped. My body was already giving up. I said my last prayers. I prayed my baby would survive this. I prayed James would die in the most vile way. I prayed Alberto’s soul would rest in peace. Still saying my last words, i heard footsteps coming down the stairs. I didn't even bother hoping it was anyone else because no one else knew i was here. It would be James. The footstep stopped and i heard my name. "Eve" It said. That voice. That voice was so much different from James’ That voice was too familiar. No. No. It cant be. The owner of that voice was dead. I felt some one untie my hands and my legs. Finally, blood went through them and pains also. They were sore. But who was this person? Who was this saviour? Who was this person that dared to challenge James and free me? The person sat me up and i winced in pain, my stomach. The person rested my head on its shoulders as it tried to untie my blind fold. "I’m so sorry Eve" It said. It was a male. His scent filled my nose and i knew it. The voice, the scent all belonged to one person in this world. But no. The person was dead. Wasn't he? The blindfold was removed and i looked up to see him. Tears were in his eyes. Those blue eyes. Those lips. That face. It matched the voice and the scent. It was him. He had come to rescue me. He had come to save me from the grips of his monster. He had come to save me from James. He was my saviour, my knight in shining armour. He was Alberto.
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Eve. By Chimdi Samuel. Chapter Twenty Four. *Eve’s point of view* "Alberto" I said, holding his face and looking at him deep in the eyes. "Eve, I’m so sorry. I know i should have come sooner but i got into an accident. I lost all my memories of you. I tried Eve. I tried recalling my memory and when i did, i searched for you. I would kill for you Eve. I wou--" I didn't let him complete his sentence, I grabbed him and placed his lips against mine. I kissed him hard, very hard, my stomach fluttered, like butterflies were in it. Alberto’s lips were as i remembered, fluffy and soft and sweet. I kissed him harder, taking in the sweet flavour of his pink lips. Alberto hands found my breast and i moaned in pleasure. He groaned and pressed them, kissing my neck and sucking it. Then i felt pains in my stomach and gasped for breath. "Come on, lets get out of here. We can continue when we are safe" Alberto said, raising me up and carrying me in bridal style. I whinced in pain as i closed my eyes, breathing heavily. Alberto looked at me suspiciously. I didn't want him to know about my baby yet. I was going to tell him when are out of here. "Where is James?" I asked, looking around expecting him to come out and grab me. "I don't know, when i came, he was not here" Alberto carried me out of the basement. We were almost out of the house. "Am so happy you came for me, James told me you died" I screamed in pain again, my bleeding w as still there. "That lying ass motherfucker! Whats wrong with you Eve?" Alberto asked, his eyes changing, seeing my bleeding state. "If it isn't the bastard and his angel" I turned to look towards the door and behold James was there, pointing his gun at us. I gasped and Alberto placed me on the chair, blood staining his hand, he drew out his gun too. I looked at him properly, he looked like he was still in pains. Like his ribs were hurting. His faced changed, the monster Alberto was back. He cocked his gun and James did his. I could smell a bloody fight coming. And i was still in pains. "You motherfucker, look at what you did to Eve!" Alberto shouted at James in pure anger. "Oh Alberto, you missed a lot. Eve was so sweet to touch, did she tell you how she screamed your name from the pleasure she received when i went into her?" James smiled, making Alberto more angry. "Shut your filthy lying motherfucker mouth up, be fore i blow your fucking brains out!" But James didn't take the threat likely at all. He just smiled. "Did she tell you how i fucked her so hard, she screamed my name. She begged me for it Alberto, she craved for it, she sucked my d-" James laughed. I looked at Alberto. "He is just trying to get at you Alberto, none of them is true. He raped me!" I shouted, and rested my head back when the pains in my lower belly increased. Alberto eyes softened for a moment when he saw me in pains. "Oh she hasn't told you yet, she is pregnant! Fucking carrying my child" James laughed. "No. No. Don't believe him Alberto!" I shouted, groaning in pain. Alberto rushed to me. Tears in his eyes. He bent in front of me. Hurt. Pains. filled his eyes. I held his face, tears in my eyes. "Its not true, Alberto believe me. The child is yours" But James took this as a weakness, he used the handle to hit Alberto. I screamed as Alberto fell limp in front of me. No. "Please James, stop this and let us go" I begged, trying to wake Alberto up. James walked away and towards the basement, probably to get ropes. "Alberto, Come on. Get up! Please get up, lets get outta here, before James arrives" I shook Alberto but he didn't wake up. James came shortly after, with ropes in his hand. No. I needed to find Alberto’s gun. He must have fallen on it. I tried moving him away but he wouldn't move. He was to heavy. James dragged my hair, pulling me away from Alberto unconscious state. "Please James, please let us go" I cried as my was blood leaving its trail on the floor. The pains grew intense. James tied me to the chair and as he turned, Alberto landed a blow on his face causing him to stumble. Alberto sat on him, punching him, hitting hi m, just like he had done at the ball that day. But this Alberto looked more monstrous as he hit James with so hard. "This is for Eve" He punched him harder. "This is for my child" He punched again. James nose was already bleeding, his face was twisted but Alberto didn't stop. He kept on punching, distorting James face until i couldn't see his face. Suddenly a sharp pain hit my stomach and i screamed. Alberto stopped immediately, getting up from James and rushing to my side, he untied me. "Hang in there Eve, I’m going to take you to the hospital" He carried me out of the house, by now, I was screaming, the pains were getting intense. I screamed louder when Alberto placed me in his car. Just as he was about to get in, a gun shot sounded and i look as Alberto fell to the ground, screaming. No. I came down immediately and went to him. He was shot in the stomach, it was bleeding seriously. I looked up to see James coming at us. He was bleeding seriously. "Eve, get out of here. Get into the car and drive off !" Alberto shouted, pushing me back to the car. "No. I cant leave you here. No. We are both getting out of here. Come on. Get up!" I wiped my tears as i tried to raise Alberto from the floor. James was almost here. He was laughing at us. Holding his gun at us. "Love birds. Pathetic!" "Eve, get out of here! Save yourself and the baby!" Alberto shouted loudly at me. "NO!" I shouted back, "I’m not ever leaving you again. No matter what!" I kissed him. "Where you die, Alberto, there would i die, where you stay, there will i stay. Where you are buried, there would i be buried. I love you so much Alberto. I love you so fucking much." I kissed Alberto and he kissed me back, we were both oblivious to James who had drawn back his gun pointing it at us. "I never thought you loved me back Eve. I thought you hated me" Alberto said, coughing out blood, he squeezed his face in pains. "I didn't at first. I hated you when you first brought me to your home. But after that day at the beach, when you kissed me..I started growing feelings but i wasn't so sure then when i left you. I knew i had left a bigger piece of me behind. I wanted to go back but James wouldn't let me. I love you Alberto Santiago. If you were to die, i would die with you" I said holding Alberto’s hand and smiling at him softly. Even though we were both in severe pains, we managed to confess our love. Alberto was already loosing consciousness. We were both loosing a lot of blood. "I love you too Eve" James frowned shouting at us. "Shut up! I’m going to kill you and you are here kissing and saying i love you’s!" He laughed. "If its death you want i would gladly kill the both of you" He smiled, and cocked his gun. Then i heard the gunshot.
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someone might have come to save you
7 Jun 2019 | 00:42
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Someone has come to your rescue
7 Jun 2019 | 06:30
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I beleive both of u can not die
7 Jun 2019 | 06:59
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Then Who Was Gunned down?
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Lolz, this one nah real action movie
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Eve. By Chimdi Samuel. Chapter Twenty Five. *Eve's point of view * I screamed in horror when I heard the gunshot. James body fell to the ground and I looked up to see my father standing with a gun in his hand. James groaned in pain as he held his shoulder, the gun fell to his side. "That would put you away for a while" My dad said, kicking the gun away from James' reach and running to meet me. "Dad?" I asked shocked. What was he doing here? "Mr Peters" Alberto chocked clinging to his stomach and shutting his eyes in pain My mom came running behind him, and hugged me. "My dear daughter we thought we lost you "I could fell her tears on my back. But I couldn't hug her back because i was looking consciousness. I gripped unto Alberto's arm for support. But I just couldn't breathe, my body was shutting down. "Eve?" I heard Alberto say. "We need to get her out of here, she is looking consciousness " I felt my body being lifted up. I was still bleeding. I was tired. Weak. Hungry. Scared. I wanted to feel safe. My body was giving up. Finally, I could rest in peace knowing that Alberto was safe and James was defeated. As I struggled to breathe, my body was placed in the car. Voices echoed in my ears. "She's loosing a lot of blood" "Where are my fucking keys?" "My dear daughter, please dont die on us" "She's not going to die!" "I love you Eve, please fight this" That was the last voice I heard before I gave in to the darkness. I fainted. *Three weeks later* I was still in the darkness. The pains. The silence. I was still in a state of come. It felt like i was floating in space. Just floating without any direction. The void, emptiness, was killing me, I was tired of it. I wanted to get out. I wanted to go back to the world. But my body was too tired to bring my soul back. So I was trapped here in this space. Waiting for it to be fully recovered. After all the waiting, I finally opened my eyes. The bright lights made me shut them back, and a pain attacked my side. My ears finally started working as a beeping noise could be heard. I opened my eyes again and I adjusted to the lights, looking at my environment, I noticed the cards, flowers, and balloons surrounding me. The whole place was colorful. "Get well soon" was all I could see on the brightly coloured cards and I smiled. The flowers were the most beautiful ones. White roses. Red roses. Then the balloons were of different colours. Blue. Red Purple. Green. All decorated with smiling faces. Still looking at the room i was in, the door freaked open and there came in the most handsome man I had ever seen. He smiled brightly at me, holding a bouquet of flowers. He was putting on a black top and blue jeans. Alberto smiled at me."Hey dear, I'm so happy you've woken up " I was so pleased to see him. So I smiled in return. He dropped the flowers and came towards me and grabbed my lips with his. It was the best kiss I had received from Alberto. His happiness could be felt in the kiss and he explored the depth of my mouth and I his. He pulled back, breathing very loudly and i smiled, touching his hair. He could feel my love for him in that single touch. "Alberto" I finally said, my throat itched and I coughed. "I missed you so much, thank you for coming back for me" "I love you Eve. I would never have been myself if I didn't find you" He said, wanting to press my lips again when the door burst opened to reveal my arguing parents. "It must be a girl " That was my mom shouting at my dad. "No, I need a grandson, who I can train to be like me" My dad resorted back. "Train to be like you? Please we don't need another copy of you in the family. It would cause so much damage" My mom laughed. Alberto coughed, and my parents looked up, finally realising i was awake they ran towards me and hugged me so tight. "Thank God, my beautiful daughter is awake" "We love you, Eve. We were worried sick after you left us. We knew something was wrong so we tried finding this place. Thank God Alberto called us" My dad spoke, rubbing my head. "I should have listened to you" I grumbled, taking Alberto's hand and staring at him deep in the eyes. "You saved me" "No, I saved both of you" He placed his hand on my belly. And for the first time, I noticed my belly was a little bugger. There was a little swelling. My baby. It was alive. It was safe. "Oh, Alberto. I love you so much. Thank you for all you had done and you too mom and dad. Thanks for coming to save us" Tears ran down my cheeks and my mom wiped them away. "We love you, you are our daughter. Thank God for Alberto. He is the real hero here" My dad smiled at Alberto, who was just looking at me with love in his eyes. For the next hour, we all kept laughing and talking. My parents were still arguing on the gender of my child. No me and Alberto's child. My mom was going for a female while my dad was going for a male. His warrior as he called it. Alberto was just telling me about how his wound hurt less and his day at work. I was angry he was going to work but he assured me that all was going to be well and I didn't need to worry about it. Then I asked of James. He told me He was in our torture room and was being tortured everyday. Alberto said he hadn't even started with him. The evening passed and my parents bid me goodnight as they left for home after giving me a long kids on the head. So I was left with Alberto. "What if it's a female?" "Male or female, it's my child. And you are it's mother that's all that matters" He replied. Then Alberto stood up and knelt down on one knee. "Uhm. What are you doing?" I asked, looking at him strangely. "I realised I never asked you to be my wife. To be mine " He brought out a small box and opened it. A diamond ring stared back at me. It fluttered with a thousand stones and reflected different colours of rays of light. "It's beautiful" I gasped. "Not as beautiful as you" Alberto coughed. "Eve Peters would you do me the honour of changing your name to Eve Santiago?" By now i was already shedding tears of Joy. Alberto had asked me to marry him I was dumbfounded. I couldn't speak. I was shocked. "I know I might not be perfect, but I'm willing to be for you Eve. I'm ready to change. To be the man you dreamed of. I kno--" "Yes! I would marry you, Now put that damn ring on my finger before I change my mind" I shouted at Alberto, causing him to laugh. He placed the ring on my finger and it fit perfectly We kissed. Everything was perfect. This was my happily ever after.
8 Jun 2019 | 02:51
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Wow am so happy Finally love is everything
8 Jun 2019 | 08:05
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hmm... wonderful
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This is lovely
9 Jun 2019 | 11:41
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u should've tell the doctor when next u visit,so that he or she we tell u the result than asking him to send it to ur mail when u don't ve personal phone, Alberto!! God still love you
9 Jun 2019 | 19:04
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someone might come to save u guys
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wow I'm happy for you
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remaining the last episode
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Eve Epilogue: The final chapter. *Alberto’s point of view* The first blow landed on James cheek and blood flew from his mouth. The second landed on his eyes. James face was unrecognisable as it was battered, black and purple from the blows. His eyes were totally covered with swellings. But i wasnt satisfied. His body hung from a chain. His hands was was tied above his head and his legs were chained to t he ground. His chest was completly bare, opened. There were bruises on it to, but it wasnt enough. He was going to feel times two of the pain he caused Eve. "Just kill me already" James spat. "Kill you? That is a very easy death. You deserve worse" I said walking to a small stove that had a small iron rod on it. The rod was already red because it was extremely hot. "This is for Eve" I said picking up the hot rod and placing it on James chest. The sound of his skin burning, tearing, melting filled my ears. His screams followed. "You defiled her! You tortured her! You tried to kill my child!" I shouted, pressing the rod deeper to h is chest. James shouted, beggung me to stop. "This is just the beginning, you would plead and beg just like Eve did, but since you showed her n o remorse, i would show you none" I placed the rod back on the stove. "I never forgave you for what you did to Jane. I never had the opportunitu to avenge for her death" I chuckled. James groaned in pain. "So this is for her and Eve!" I picked the hot rod and placed it on James chest again. More screams and burning of skin were heard. I laughed.."You were the reason Jane died, all be cause of your selfish reasons, when she died, a p art of me died too. Then i finally found someone who took away my pains. Eve. I was finally happy , but as usual, as if Jane was not enough, you came after her. Using her taste of freedom to lure h er into your trap" I placed the hot rod in James again. This time, it slized through his skin. James screamed and i laughed. I laughed at his pains. "You took my joy, my peace, my love, my queen, my angel from me. Right from under my nose. Yo u had no fear James. You should know that i am damaged and insane when it comes to the people i love!" "You caused Eve, so much pain. What were you thinking? That you could just have her to yourself ? You are really stupid. I gutted down your men f or information. I killed seven of them. Then Fernando opened up to me after i chopped off his fingers!" James screamed and struggled, anger cursed through his veins for his friend. Fernando was his right hand man. "It was a shame, he died a miserable death. Its a good thing he didnt have a wife and child that would miss him. Just like you James. When you die, no one would even care, or notice. But me, i have Eve. Someone you never have" I picked up a small dagger and started cutting James nipples. He screamed and tried to get away but he couldnt. I cut off the left one and forced it into his mouth. "Swallow it!" James tried to spit it out back but i forced it in, until he finally swallowed it. "Good boy" I smiled, picking up the knife and cutting the next one. James screams filled my ears and i smiled. The sound of the blade tearing his flesh brought me joy. Blood dripped from the blade. And once again, i forced him to eat it. Then i went to his legs, picked up the clipper and started with his left leg. I clipped off his toes one by one. James screamed and begged for mercy but i paid deaf ears. I went to the other leg and cut off the remaining toes, dragging it off and slizing it. Blood gushed out like a fountain and i was pleased. "Get me the bucket of hot water!" I commanded t o the guards. They brought it and i placed James feets inside it. His feets shook in the bucket. Blood changed the colour of the water, turning it red. He screamed and pleaded, begging for death to take him away. "You took Eve away from me!" I picked an instrument from the table. This one was for removing t he tooth. James body was brought down and placed on a chair, a strap was used to hold his mouth open wide, so he couldnt close them. "Pl...ple..please" James.croaked out. I didnt listen, i used the device and started with hi s front tooth. I placed the tooth to the two prong of the device and dragges the tooth out from his gum. James screamed. It was a painful scream. "That’s one. We still have a long way. .Thirthy five more" Then i removed another, and another until al his teeth was gone. His mouth was filled with a lot of blood, covering everywhere. Blood fell from his mouth, dripping and staining his short. James body shook as he was in deep pain. He couldnt scream any longer. Still holding his mouth, i cut off his tongue. Throwing the piece of flesh on the floor. But i wasnt satisfied, i cut off his fingers, all of the m. Shot his manhood. And cutting it off from his body. And showing it to him. "This was what you used to rape Eve. Now its gone" I threw it away. Then i picked up my gun pointing it at James. I looked at him one last time. His face was distort ed. His fingers gone, his toes gone, his teeth and tongue gone as his mouth was wide opened. His chest was covered in burns, marks. He looked damaged, weak and in pains. But i didnt feel any remorse. "See you in hell, goodbye old friend" I pulled the trigger ending his life. *Months later* *Eve’s point of view* "Oh my God, the wedding dress wont fit in anymore because of my belly" I cried, trying to zip up the gown of my wedding dress. "Calm down. It would zip up don't worry" My mom said, trying to encourage me. "Dont tell me to calm down, now Alberto is waiting for me at the altar, imsuppossed to be there no w. He would start thinking i dont want to marry hi m. Then the wedding would be cancelled and--" "Shut up, biko" My mom shouted. biko? Whats that? "What is biko?" I asked. "Oh, its called please in Igbo language, Its a Nigerian language, Chi is teaching me" My mom replied. "Chi is here?!" I gasped, Chimdi was the new friend i just made, She was a Nigerian woman who loved books. Sh e even said she was going to write a novel about me and Alberto. I hope she does. "I cant wait to see her, did she come with her Nigerian friends?" "Yes she did and they have almost finished the drinks we placed on the table. Such Nigerians!" My mom laughed. "And i dont understand what they tied on their he ads, and bodies. I think Chi called it gala, no gela, no GELE!" "I’m sure they look beautiful in it?" "They do. Such lovely people" The zip finly went up. "Thank heavens, mom how do i look" I was gorgeous in a stunning white wedding dress, with silver stones. My hair was perfectly plaited and a crown of flowers surrounded my head. "Take your flower, you look like a queen" "Is the bride ready?" My dad ran in. "Wow, you loo k beautiful" My dad said, coming to hug me. My mom hugged me too. "That's enough, Alberto is waiting" I screamed, rai sing up my gown and holding my dads arm so he could walk me out. My mom kissed my cheek an d ran to the church and sat down. I peeped through and saw Alberto in a stunning white suit, he was handsome. My king, My saviour, My knight. "Come lets blow his mind away" My dad said as we walked down the aisle to meet my groom. *Seventeen years later* "Mom, can you please tell Marcello to reduce the volume of his radio, that stupid song is blasting t through the speakers. I cant concentrate on my homework" "Alessandro, I’m so busy, call him." I said, srriting the food on the gas. Those twins are something else. Marcello was the rough one, the one who took after Alberto, troublesome, bad ass and he loved music always playing it through the speakers every morning. I was sure he hadnt done his homework. His teachers complained bitterly about him. But he didn't seem t o care, just as stubborn as his father. But Alessandro, took after me. Quiet. good and respectful. He did his house chores on time, went to school early, did his homework. He even helped me in the kitchen. He was the good twin. His teachers adored him. As different as the twins were in personality, they had the same look. The same black hair from Alberto and his blue eyes. They were handsome. Their teachers had complained that half of the school girls fought over who would sit close to them in class. "Shut the fuck up Alessandro. That wasn't even the loudest!" Marcello shouted. "I kept on making mistakes in my maths homework. I’m sure you havent done yours!" Alessandro shouted back. "Why do you always have to be the good student ?" "Why do you always have to be a pain in the ass? " They continued arguing, i was fed up of all this fighting. This twins would be the end of me. "Marcello, Alessandro! Its enough, i’m making breakfast over here. Today is saturday, please i need some peace and quiet" They finally looked at me and kept quiet, still exchanging glares among themselves. "Thanks" Phew. Just as i turned back to my cooking, my fifteem year old daughter ran to the kitchen. "Mom, please can you tell dad to stop reading my text with Arsenio" She walked in, clearly annoyed . Cara, was my daughter, she took aftet my looks, the same hair and eyes, but she had her father’s attitude. Stubborn and troublesome just like Mar cello. "He likes her, to need to see their messages Eve, i need to run a background check on this guy, he must be a killer who knows?" Alberto said walking in and taking a seat close to the boys. "Who is this Arsenio, we always hear about anyway?" Alessandro asked, looking at me. I looked at Cara, she promised me not to tell Alberto and the boys about him. He was her boyfriend . But with the way the boys and Alberto were looking at me, i had no choice. "Its her boyfriend" I finally said. "WHAT??!!" The three of them shouted and i could have sworn the house shook. "You are too young to have a boyfriend" That was Alessandro talking. "Who dares date my sister? Is he crazy?" Marcello shouted getting up. "I’M GOING TO FUCKING KILL HIM!!".Alberto shouted. Oh God. "Alberto lets take this easy, Ive met him and he is a really nice guy" I said, trying to calm Alberto down, but he wouldnt listen. "Nice one dad, I’m with you on this. We would kill him" Marcello smiled. "No, leave Arsenio out of this. I really like him dad . Mom you betrayed me" Cara shouted. "I think Arsenio may be a really nice guy" Alessandro said, taking Cara’s side. "Nice my ass" Marcello answered back. "He is dead!" Alberto said. And that was how the fight started again. Marcello and Alessandro were arguing again, raining cur ses at each other. While Alberto was shouting about how he was going to kill Cara’s boyfriend, that how dare a guy d ate his only daughter. He said he was going to sc are the boy away so he wont come.near Cara aga in. Cara was begging him that she really liked him. Everybody was just shouting..Four voices talking at once. Marcello and Alessandro, Cara and Alber to. The whole house was on fire. Noise. But i was happy, I had three wonderful kids who i adored so much..And a very loving husband, who cared so much about me. There was nothing i could ask for anymore. I had all i wanted. Kids, husband, love and freedom. This was my happily ever after. And it was the be st. "SHUT UP!" I finally shouted. THE END. Written by Chimdi Samuel Also read this more interesting story titled AMANDA >>> https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/amanda/
10 Jun 2019 | 02:59
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Kudos
10 Jun 2019 | 04:45
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Awww so interesting
11 Jun 2019 | 09:10
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Hmm Kudos
11 Jun 2019 | 16:17
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Thumb up
11 Jun 2019 | 16:46
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Not bad at all, at all cost and it caused a lot of blood for eve to be free from pain. Love and freedom came to her beyond her expectations. Eve loving alberto for real while alberto changed into a lover with the right attitude of love.
12 Jun 2019 | 13:49
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Alessandro, marcello and cara are part of this family of alberto and eve that has builded true love and kindness among themselves. The real monster was james who died in his folly and heartlessness. Eve's parents that helped in the last fight to defeat james, can now enjoy the happiness of being an inlaw. When arguments like that of cara and arsenio relationship comes up in their family. Eve will always be their to settle their issues with her voice and calmness will take over.
12 Jun 2019 | 14:06
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THE END
12 Jun 2019 | 14:16
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wow! wow! what a nice ending
12 Jun 2019 | 18:29
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Wat a story.. a mixture of sadness, love, hatred and happiness.. Buh lots of lessons learnt
12 Jun 2019 | 19:46
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WOW!
1 Aug 2019 | 13:57
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Interesting
19 Mar 2022 | 12:55
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Too bad
19 Mar 2022 | 12:57
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Hmmmmm
19 Mar 2022 | 13:08
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I dnt trust james
19 Mar 2022 | 13:15
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Good
19 Mar 2022 | 13:23
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