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EVERLASTING RAPTURE by sylvia....

EVERLASTING RAPTURE by sylvia....

By Sylvia in 1 Jul 2015 | 05:55
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Thanks to all the coolvallers who av motivated me in so many ways, thanks VAL 4 accepting me as one of d members, s indeed a great story section which has given me the strength to drop my own story, i hope u all enjoy it, and please dis s ma first time of writing, i need u all 2 help in correcting ma mistakes whch cn help empowering me to write more. This story is an imaginative work which i wrote down myself, it s a story whch cn help in empowering youths nd families of 2day 2 live a normal life of LOVE, hapiness, trustworthy, kindness, truthful,and faithfulness. It consist of secret, betrayal, deceit, i hope dis wil help in bringing families, friends, love ones together to live a life of "EVERLASTING RAPTURE".
1 Jul 2015 | 05:55
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Episode 1 . . Life was so peaceful in d family of Desmond Daniel, a wel knwn multi-billionaire business man "via" his father business left 4 him 2 handle before d dad "kick d bucket". It s indeed a big challenge 4 him. Believing in God and being a christian also helped him alot in overcoming all d temptation dat befalls him. Desmond being the only surviving child of his parents ( chief & mrs jack Daniel) was indeed a big task and a great challenge 4 him. It happened dat all the children his parent had died immediately after birth, but the birth of Desmond was a different case. It took all "dicks & harry" so much time to believe in d miraclous deed. The love dat bind d two soul together where so powerful 4 them to be saperated, all the castigation nd rumors coming frm people s a mere word to them until d miracle happened which left the wicked people aback 2day. They say dat "what is writen is writen" unless God changes it. Their prayers and fasting has been answered with a bouncing baby boy. A boy which has brought so much joy to them, they trained him with love and caring in d ways of God which makes him differents from all his age mate, Desmond grws up to be a handsome lovely child, the family of three live the life of estatics until death snatched d flower dat beaultifies the pillar away frm them(mrs Daniel) living father and son in dis sinful world. They say dat "no one runs away from fate", dat is how chief Daniel find his own fate, he vowed to his precious wife dat he wil nt remarry due to love nd circumstances dat follows sute( maltreatment frm d step mother), all d effort made by his relatives was like a water poured away. He later hired a nanny who helped in taking care of his son until he was old enough to take care of himself.
1 Jul 2015 | 09:22
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Wow .......Nyc beqinninq here @Sylvia Vhiz would be Spectacular and Educatinq..... Ride on Dear...... @Khola46 @T-Dak my masters ya attention is kindly needed here......Thankz
1 Jul 2015 | 10:23
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Tnks @pizzaro,....... I promise 2 make u all hapi wit ma story.
1 Jul 2015 | 12:22
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No probz am already seated.......Leqqo *qrabz fish-pie*
1 Jul 2015 | 14:40
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---------continuation----------------------------------- Ten yrs after his mum's death, Desmond graduated frm skul(bth primary to tertiary level) with second class upper degree in business administration. After his service he joined his father in running the family business which grows to a large empire and many business partners all over the world. But one thing about chief Daniel s dat he likes helping the poor which acquired him so much love from them, two years after their successful business he had a ghastly car accident dat took away his life after so much effort from the doctors to revive him, Is indeed a great lost for desmond, he remembered all his dad wish 4( to see his grandchildren), to eat d fruit of his hard labour, see his wife and den grw old by their side but none of dis happened rather d strange hands of death took away the great pillar of d house. After d burial and funeral of his dad he build up his life by fulfilling his dat last wish (taking cares of the company and having a wife nd children). He was blessed with a beaultiful wife(vivian), but five yrs of marriage his wife did nt conceive, they av consulted many doctors whch result to desame story( mr & mrs Desmond you two are intact, you av to believe in God, am sure you will conceive at best time of God), but woman heart couldnt allow vivian to rest, she keeps pestering her husband to adopt a child, no other option 4 desmond than to do his wife wish. Two weeks after the adoption of a son his wife became pregnant, he remembered d words of their last doctor "wait 4 God","GOD'S TIME IS THE BEST". They took care of the son whch has favored them wit joy nd took away the rumors of being infertile nd inpotent from people, Desmond named him Damian as his first son. Nine months later vivian gave birth to a bouncing baby boy Daniel(named after his late grandpa) which followed sute with a girl(Tessy). Thanks 4 reading
1 Jul 2015 | 19:25
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Pls d next episode wil be tomorrow. Av a nice dreams all. "bt am nt hapi", wat s happening, der are no comments, tnks once again @pizzaro for sitting next 2 me.............
1 Jul 2015 | 19:35
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2 Jul 2015 | 15:24
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2 Jul 2015 | 15:28
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@DaintyShewa @PhineBraim @Seadurf @Konphido
2 Jul 2015 | 15:28
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@sylvia nyc one......am here also right beside u ready for the journey @Pizzaro e be like say we go sit put sylvia for centre ooo mak she tell us the stori wella
2 Jul 2015 | 15:42
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Nice one @Sylvia we are here with u
2 Jul 2015 | 15:45
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Lol @Ibrams Oya now make we rearranqe....... @T-Dak tankz 4 dy roll call....... Guyz mek una arrive one after dy oda o.....
2 Jul 2015 | 16:22
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U're welcum once aqain #Sylvia
2 Jul 2015 | 16:23
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Tnks all....so happy:-D
2 Jul 2015 | 16:55
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9ce story here.... Thanks T-dak and what happened next?????.....
2 Jul 2015 | 17:20
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Episode 2 Desmond and vivian promised each other to keep the identity of damian away from his sibling, that he will be truelly their first child, no matter the circumstances he will still be their 1st son. At the house of Desmond, a storey building painted with milk and brown colour, different kind of flowers cuts equal to beaultify the house, at one side of the compound there is a garrage, garden and a swimming pool. At the other side another house was build for the servants, the compound was a maverlous site to behold. Every servant were running helter skelter doing one thing or the other. It was the memorable day of Mr & Mrs Desmond Daniel. The day they where celebrating their twenty-five years of marriage. Inside the sitting room sits desmond, wife and their 2 sons discussing while waiting for their guests( just a small party only for families and friends they invited). Des: hey! honey, you luk so stunning today. Viv: thanks dear, and you too. Des: i hope guys wunt be attracted by dis dress becus i dnt wnt to loose you. Viv: "laugh"......oh! Dear, are u jealous already. Des: well, am just saying. Viv: you knw, u re my number 1, nd will surely be mine forever. So dnt wori. Okay?. Des: okay oo.( turns to his sons) em kids where is ur sister. Dami: dad i dnt knw, maybe daniel knws her whereabout. Dan. I think she went to call a friend. Des: hmm(luks at his watch) and the guest wil be arriving a minute from nw. ( immediately two servants entered). 1 servant: sir everytin s in total condition nw. Des: ok, thank you so much, and make sure you all eats before the arrival of the guests. 1 servant: ok sir.(leaves) 2 servant: sir a guest has arrived. Des: who?. 2 servant: chief ikechukwu okafor sir. Des: oh, usher him in. Chief ikechukwu was desmond best friend since childhood, they grows up in the same neighbourhood at ogbogoro in river state, he was also a citizen of imo state likewise desmond, he was desmond best friend who he shares all his secrets with. After the arrival of chief ikechukwu and family other guests began to arrive, some in two's,three's or more, within a small time d party began fully, it was indeed a great party.
2 Jul 2015 | 19:04
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Pls, i tried to arrange it well bt wen i submit, it turns out 2 be like dis, what should i do? Plsss VAL help me
2 Jul 2015 | 19:11
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Am here also o. @ibrams make u knw sit bsyd my padi *am jealous*
2 Jul 2015 | 19:17
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@herbyhorlarh u can join us....it will be wndeful
3 Jul 2015 | 05:23
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MAKE DAN &DAM NO FIGHT 4 THIS STORY OH
3 Jul 2015 | 05:28
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@Sylvia, heeen so u 2 don qo join all dis pweetty writers wey been dey feed us since wt dire delicious stowie? Well, hope d delicacy of ur own stowie is able 2 catapult me in2 planet Mars as well as meltinq d world stronqex_heart 2! Lol..... |9ice*Start*thou'| bt try read in_btw lines b4 postinq & let it be a li2 lenqthy. Shuld u knw, dis is d least of my comnts, so ur post shuld b plentyfu cmpare 2my comnts, Ok! Jst advizinq o! Oops! So stressUp afta all dis terror searchinq, I stil can't find any MT front seat? Well, I qex some1 'll hv 2 plant me on his/ha lap b dat ni...... I won sit_down o! Any1 wt d BIGEX lap @ d front seat? Holla@me so I wuldn't qo on in search 4 d biqer lap dt'll contain ma yansh, lolz.....
4 Jul 2015 | 07:30
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Hahaha, ok @fridex, i wil try to make it nice, thanks 4 d advice.
4 Jul 2015 | 16:23
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@Shaxee @Johnysky @Coolval. PLS do something we are enjoying the story.
4 Jul 2015 | 20:55
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--------Countinuation-----------------------------------wow! Who am i seeing? What a beaultiful angel, oh! Cindi stop, av'nt you seen me before? Or am i not the friend you always know? Abeg, ( she hissed and sit down) no, you should keep standing there,y are u siting?. I should wait 4 u to finish blabering dis uncontrolable mouth of urs be4 i sit down abi. Oh tessy, u mean am a parrot, cindi asked. NO, you are a dove, jentle girl.( tessy turn to her bestfriend) and y are u nt prepared? You think i came here to wait 4 you. Oh dear am xo sorry, i was preparing my mums food, i need to go and wash up , just give me twenty minutes, ( stands up) y dnt you select a dress for me. Do i look like a dress "selecter" to you. she role her big brown eye to ha best friend and "wink". Cindi's face changed, are you insulting me? Well, dnt help me again i can take care of ma self(she walks away jingling heq bottom) hahaha, oh cindi come back(run to cindi) am so sorry, i was just joking. Pls i wil help you select the most beaultiful dress. You know you are beaultiful, even when you are sad u re still d most beaultiful and elegant princess i have ever known.( cindi smiles and hug her friend) oh tessy, you are always farcical, thats why i love you so much. Now, cindi go in there and wash up, you will see a suprise package waiting for you. Ok, dear (leaves) cindi was tessy's bestfriend since kindagarten. They were like sugar and honey, she was the only child of her parents, she and tessy cannot be separated no matter the circumstances. Some of her friends have tried alot to separate them by creating problem between them, but it turns out to no avail. Due to cindi's not having siblings, she took tessy as one. Wow! what an angel(aback) you look so Good dear. You are beaultiful, am so jealous of James now. Oh, stop flattering me tessy, u are........(ugly) i pity Ben so much( well sorry for that am just joking). Bonker, Abeg lets go joor we are already late. Ok tessy, let be lock ma room. Lets i forget, did u invite Ben? Y asking? Because i dnt want to be left out. Am xori dear. I do invited him. Then i should call james my love. You are free cindi to call your beloved handsome guy. Lets go( they leaves).
5 Jul 2015 | 12:23
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Xori 4 updating late guys. Please forgive me.
5 Jul 2015 | 12:29
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@Sylvia nice story :) but please stop the use of abbreviations ;)
5 Jul 2015 | 22:45
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Oh my gosh!.... Hope am nt late shaa Nice story @sylvia Chai!!!.... All d front seat is filled up, nd i hate sittin at d bak.... Abeg make una no vex, i need sumone wu gonna render his/her lap for me to sit on
6 Jul 2015 | 09:52
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nyc....and wonderful.... apology accepted*smiles*
6 Jul 2015 | 11:37
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Nyc story
7 Jul 2015 | 05:23
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Ummmm...... Relaxinq @ d front seat.
7 Jul 2015 | 13:09
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@Sylvia, dnt mention, Ok! Anywyz, carry on wt ur delicious stowie, I full qrand alrdy on top 1 front seat 4 hia o, jst dt I hvn't seen any of my top biq bros/sis around hia, sebi dem don call ro_call? Abi dem qo do vacation 4 Obudu ni....??? Lolz.... Watin dey xup! Una no won show faze 4 hia ni...??? @Tenniebenson @khola46 @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Besty @Stephanie @Mray @Lollybabe1 Abeq, it's alrdy off_rinq tym, make I qo pay my tite b4 pastor Okpooz qo sample me as im xample 4 church o, Lolz.....
7 Jul 2015 | 13:17
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Well....its nt my fault ooo... Personally i av limited tym nd datz why i hardly read new stories nw.... Will try nd make out tym sha... Let d good wrk continue
7 Jul 2015 | 13:25
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Am here @Fridex
7 Jul 2015 | 19:21
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The last episode is some hw confused
8 Jul 2015 | 05:27
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@Tenniebenson, dt's no pro... jst dt I neva new u wia arand, I tot u hv left planet earth 4 Jupita ni....Lolz.... @Mray, Alrit wlcm. Wht kip u so lonq? Anywyz, u fit join me @ d front seat sha if u hvn't found any yet, Ok!
9 Jul 2015 | 11:16
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Na on top ya laps I wan sit @Fridex
9 Jul 2015 | 11:47
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HeyHeeey! @Mray, so ur plan is 2 render me lap_less abi? U hv fail o! Hw 'll u hv tot my lap culd contain ur typ of yansh? Beta start callinq ur bf b4 it's 2 l8t o coz am nt redy 2 luz my lap yet o, Lolz......
9 Jul 2015 | 15:18
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Lollss @fridex
9 Jul 2015 | 16:14
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I don land jare thanks @fridex
11 Jul 2015 | 06:25
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Wlcom @Grace, dis 1 dt u com l8t so hope u did com 2qether wt ur chair sha cos if ur plan is 2 seat on top my lap den u hv 2 contend wt my gf b dat, Lolz.....
11 Jul 2015 | 10:35
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Following
11 Jul 2015 | 17:19
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Y is diz stowie pressing pause?
8 Aug 2015 | 08:34
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wia is the remaining story?
21 Sep 2015 | 02:21
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