FAR BEYOND THE OCEANS

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*I wish to post a picture of the Nemo island but I can't o. Chapter 1 Far beyond the oceans to the land of America.There lived an undersea life expert named John Gates,who lives most of his life doing research about the sea and oceans of the world. He works with the American ocean research institute where he is highly respected for his undersea expertise. But although john was highly respected,he was also disliked for his overconfidence in going for expenditures. This may not have worried them until the day he tried to go on real life expenditure that almost got him drowned. It was after and John's workmate felicity invited him for dinner. John disliked going out for dinner because he was a home boy. But Felicity was quite persistent so he had to go. Back from dinner,he was very tired but he had nice evening with Felicity. John is 23 year old and he lives in a flat.What he loved doing his reading and researching and his knowledge gained him respect in his work place. All he wanted to do when he got home was sleep but as he was about drowsing of,he got a call from office. He enjoys getting calls from office but this night was different,he was very upset at the call. He had no choice than to get dressed and off to office.When he got to his work place,there was much discovery on ground and he immediately became lively. His boss said to him "I present to you the NEMO ISLAND"

Chapter 2 John was surprised at the discovery his boss made on the mysterious captain Nemo island.Right in front of him is the snow packed island full of mountain and extinction animals. In the south pole,it is said that there is no stagnant area but this is a livable land on the unending ocean of the world said Mr. Mark;John boss. John then said this will be a good place to discover but immediately the whole gave him a icey stare. He denied having intention of going but his boss told him to have faith and believe. John was suprised but he was happy that he will at last go on a real expenditure.They will have to sign lot of papers before they can go for this journey. John called Felicity that night and told her to accompany him on the journey which she agreed after much persuading. That night john had a bad dream about the journey but all his worries got lost when his boss told him their ship will sail in eleven days. John begged his boss to allow Felicity on the ship and he reluctantly agreed.Since the journey is set john decided to visit his parents and tell em bout d journey.John asked Felicity to follow him down to his parents place and she agreed. Even john knew his parents may not be in support of the journey,it was his chance to let them know her.

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*work all day chill all night Chapter 3 Your parents are very good people said Felicity on their way back from John parents house.John was happy his mama liked Felicity even though he claimed they were just friends.Visiting his parents home gave him lot of confidence even though he later decided not to let em know bout the journey. Back at the workplace,the heat was going down now that it is sure the journey will commence.Many still had low confidence.John had to do something because if the people travel with a doubtful mind there is more possibility they fail. John then went out and gave a speech to the people "we are researchers and what we do is discover things that has never been discovered. This is a chance for us to discover the last secret of our planet and bring extincted animals back to existence and because of fear we losing this chance. If we don't do this our children will and we will not have the honour. Everyone was moved by John speech and they gained more confidence Felicity smiled. Now the whole team started preparations. John went home with a eased mind but remembered what his dad told him.A new discovery is a new world and a new danger so be prepared for nothing and everything. The D-day came and everyone was ready to sail. their ship was a big one and there was lot of new faces john haven't seen before.As they were leaving hundreds of boats piled behind them and bid them farewell. Even the doubtful became confidence when they saw the love people showed them

Chapter 4 The ship branched many places before leaving for the south pole.The commander of the ship never believed they will get there not to talk of returning. The ship was cruising safely until they got frozen up by ice beneath the ship. The immidiately came to an halt and waited days before getting free. But after two days the ship started an automatic movement.The ice were moving the ship towards the pole.They all were scared but happy the ice was moving south. No one believed that ice could move such a big ship. Hours passed and they continued there automatic cruising until suddenly half of the ice broke off and put the ship in slanting position. pandemonium broke when the ship started moving slant and the whole ship was scattered from the inside. Head hitting head,they tried to get up and look they saw a big wall of ice in front of them. Everyone decided to say thier last prayers as the ship collided with the wall and went through it freeing them from the ice that had been moving them. There was a tempest but everyone tried to get out in one piece on little boat on board.Everyone got out and swam to surface except for one man had been throw off the ship during the collision and landed in a forest. John.

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*forget em stories today o Chapter 5 John had actually been thrown off from the ship to a forest on the island.He started running through the forest to get to a land covered with ice, he kept moving till he got to land where he found a flag with a large "N" engraved on it. He moved on till he came to a city. He moved into the city and tried from the people around about the place but no one seems to understand him at all. He was still doing this when some men came and took him away. The displaced people had actually gotten themselves together to a nearby cave. As they walked into the cave they discovered that it was a passage and they went through to the forest. They made camp in the forest and decided to pass their night there. Felicity became sad when she discovered that John didn't make it, she cried. She volunteered to watch the camp while they sleep. She took a walk and got to a nearby stream,she looked into the stream and saw that it was cloated on top.She immidiately called the camp and it was discovered that there was petroleum in the island. John was imprisoned for a while before he was invited before the king.He was asked questions but he could not understand their language.Later a man came out and spoke english to him,he explained his journey and the man told him he could live on the island but never leave.John was happy he was free but he got to the streets and no one knew him.

Chapter 6 In the forest everyone was so eager to go home but not just for free but petroleum.John had decided to just sit on the side of the road when no one seem to understand him on the streets.His joy knew no bound when a girl came to him and spoke english to him.She was the daughter of the man that spoke english to john in the court.Her name was angel.Angel and john became friends and they discussed about the island but angel was quite secretive.But john will forever be greatfull when she offered to take him to where the animals are. They set out for the journey and the got to the icaland john had actually crossed to the forest but now it was icey not snowy.They went to the top of a mountain and the animals started coming out.Dinosaurs came out nd other animals john had never seen in his life.John said how i wished i had a camera right now.After watching for some time they started sneaking back to the city.Suddenly a snake almost bit angel but john pushed her away and he fell into a small pit.As john came out of the pit a guy hit him and they started fighting.John pushed him and he fell off and died.Almost immidiately over 5 men came and took john away back to the cells.

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*hmmmm I am cooking dinner for the family John knew he was in a big trouble this time. He was locked in the cells and it looks like he will be killed. Meanwhile The forest inhabitants are getting used to forest life. They wake up in the morning.Hunt for animals and the girls cook. Every morning Felicity will walk as far as she can finding a way out of the forest. This day she had walked until she got to the icelands but she couldn't find her way back. When the camp expected her and she haven't arrived, they followed her trail. John was brought before the king and he was questioned,he claimed he had only mistakenly killed the man not intentionally.He was finally told to leave the city forever.John was banished but as they were taken him away, the man he had killed was actually part of those that exiled him. The camp had trailed Felicity and found her.They immediately left for the icelands but they haven't walked far when someone feet hit a stone.It happened to be a animal that hid underground. It stood up and faced the team and they started running back to the forest.

Chapter 8 Angel had already gone to her father to tell them about the man that John had claimed to kill. He is alive. John was already on the icelands and suddenly he was hearing people screaming.He had Felicity voice he knew it was his people. He saw them being chased by an animal. He took a ball of ice and threw it at the one eyed animal. The beast immediately faced john for a fight. Just as it was about to attack, it suddenly covered itself with a shell and there was a snow storm. The whole place was covered with snow. When the storm was over, they came out and brushed themselves and went back to their camp. Felicity was so happy that John was alive.They all greeted john but he didn't tell em bout d city. Some men were sent to bring back john from the forest when the secret was leaked that the man didn't die.The search got to the forest and decided to camp since it was nightfall.At john camp,john as decided to go and tell Felicity about the city. Felicity was also going to tell john about the petroleum but suddenly a wolf jumped into camp and there was commotion.

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*Hope you guys checked that story? What do you think? Chapter 9 The men of the camp stood against the wolf while the soldiers that are looking for John also heard their screams and came to help them. The wolf seeing that the men had become much,it called on its pack and the group became powerless over them. They ran to the island to discover that the animals on the island were also alive in the nights. The men immediately told the women to find their way while they battle the animals. John and the soldiers were also lucky to find their way through the animals. Angel immediately came to hug john when she saw him. Felicity sensed some relationship but she kept mute. John and his people were taken care of at the city. John expressed his gratitude and told Angel that they were good people. She said why shouldn't we be good when we are all going to die soon.

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Chapter 10 John was suprised at what Angel said but he kept mute not to make her angry. John and Felicity left the place to discuss personal issues and Felicity told John about the oil. Angel was angry when John left her for Felicity,she decided to deal with it. In the morning when Felicity was awake, some men came into her room and started hurting her.She protected herself and unknowingly killed one of them. John came in and saw this,he stopped the men and attacked one of them.The men retreated and immediately took Felicity claiming she had murdered someone. Her case was taken to the Council and she was charged for manslaughter and sent to the icelands. John jumped into the palace and told them that it can't happen. They told him if he wishes to go to the icelands in her place, he can and John agreed. John told Felicity that he would come back in the nights to take the whole team away from the forsaken island. John left for the forest and got there in no time. Suddenly he stepped into a trap that clipped his legs.John tried to remove it but he couldnt and ended up crawling back to the icelands. As he was about leaving a man grabbed him and took him to the forest. At the city angel decided to finish Felicity herself.She left her room with a knife and went to Felicity room,.She opened but suddenly she started hearing screams,she ran to the city and saw snow beast hurting people on the streets.

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*this story will be longer than I thought When the wolf attacked the camp, everyone fled but one man couldn't,he was hurt so he stayed behind. He took care of his wound and hid in the forest he had set traps should in case animals come around. This trap was what John stepped into.He took john to the forest and helped him cure his wound. After helping him with his wound John explained to him that he wanted to sneak the team back to the forest and escape. The man decided to go to the city to start plans on how to escape. When he got to the city, he saw people being hurt. He immediately took a torch and attacked a beast and the beast just melted as the torch came near. He saw this and decided to run to the palace to tell the soldiers since they were fighting the animals with swords. But on getting there,he saw that the crowd are all being directed into palace and the streets was empty except for the beasts. Big tanks of oil with fire was poured into the streets and all the animals melted to nothing. Another drum of water was poured and the streets were smoke.The people already knew about the beasts. Then the man whose name is Mark told the team about their plans and when it was night,they all left the city to the forest. In the morning when it was discovered that they were missing,soldiers were sent to catch them and bring them back!

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*The tale of Captain Nemo A man who toured the oceans of the world underwater with his Nautilus(A submarine) and got stuck in a maelstrom which he escape nearly losing his life.Captain Nemo had left for the South pole were he decided to live with his team.He beleived the south hasn't been touched but evil of men but getting there they met some inhabitants who were premitive. Nemo met a girl that looked like his wife. He got stuck on her and raped her one day. When the people discovered this,they tried to kill him but he escaped with his Nautilus back to Atlantis where he died. The Nautilus team after the leaving of their boss,started sleeping with most of the female premitive tribe. But there was only one team mate who thought it was wrong but he drugged till he did it. He got angry at this and killed himself. In respect of his holiness all his generation were made priest and could only speak English for the man was the only Englishman on board. Angel was a generation of this man. They have a strong and angry temper. John had built a small yacht at the forest to convey them at least away from the island a bit to some some ice place. The team crossed the icelands and to the forest.When they got there,they started climbing the yacht,John was behind pushing the yacht to water when he was grabbed from the back by Angel.The team started rowing away and then the helicopters came. The government was worried and they had come to save them. The people were pulled but after a few climbed through the ropes that they were using to climb up,some soldiers started attacking and the copter had to leave.

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*Island dwellers The soldiers attacked them and arrested the ones that couldn't get on the copter. They took them to the cells in the city.John was personally locked up by Angel. It was decided that they will be killed for trying to escape. At Washington DC,the copter have arrived in the white house and the survivors were taken into the white house to freshen up. After they took care of themselves,the president called them in and asked about their expenditure.They immediately told him that some of their teammates are still on the island. The President then told some soldiers of USA to go back to the island to save them but he was informed that they were primates on the island. Angel decided to reveal to them about the city. Even the President mouth was wide open after he was told that there was a city on the south pole. He then told the team to drop a warning letter to the city through a helicopter to threaten Angel. The letter was prepared and the chopper rode to the top of the city and dropped a letter. into the street warning Angel to release John and the others else the city will be. attacked.The letter was taken to the king and he read it. He decided to let john go to his people since they can't face the USA. John and his mate were taken to the front of the king,but as the king was to give the judgement, an arrow pierced through his chest.Angel killed him and told the city that their king was cowardice and can't rule them right. John was taken back to his cells.

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The American army awaited the island response but when they found none,they decided to attack. Meanwhile Angel visited John and told him that all she want is good life for people.She begged John to let the America people take them from their forsaken island to their own lands. John reluctantly agreed since no one will be harmed. The Army arrived copters after copters. John came out to the Centre of the city and waved at them. One of the choppers landed and Felicity came out of it. John told her that angel have surrendered and she wishes to let her people live in America.The request was immediately passed around and it was taken back to the President. He agreed to let the whole city be brought to America after a estate will be built for them to live in. Months passed and the city was invited to the states. It was a blessing for the people but an opportunity for Angel. Captain Nemo during his days had found an alien weapon he found undersea. The weapon was an energy giving ball. It was left in the Nautilus after his death. He had written the code and pattern to use this ball to power machineries. At Washington DC,Angel estate as it was named had companies that the people would work in. The people were trained on how to build machines and other things. Angel asked the government to train some on how to build weapons since they had previously knowledge about it. Some where trained to build weapons. Angel had secretly made local guns but powered them with the alien energy. She decided to attack the gun factory and take over it.She also had the soldiers were leather made from elephant skin to made them invulnerable by bullets. The factory were the gun was made was heavily guarded. Angels people who were inside armed themselves the day Angel was going to attack.They made their plans and got ready. Angel and others from the outside visited the factory and requested to go inside. They were checked and weapons were detected,immediately they started attacking them and killed most of them. When the ones from inside saw that the outside have attacked,they swung into action and killed some of those inside. Angel basted every door open with her guns even though it was made from woods. They went into the factory and helped the ones inside finish their killings too.Immediately the factory was under Angel's command,she shouted Hail Nemo and the others repeated it too.

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The American army sorrounded the factory and asked Angel to surrender. She instructed her men to go out one after the other armed. They went out and lifted their guns. Hail Nemo and they started firing. No bullet could pass through what they wear. And there was nothing their weapons couldn't destroy. Many years ago,a sea captain was hurt by his fellow captain.He had no power against turn and decided to go and build a submarine with some of other people who have been hurt and think that men are wicked. The nautilus was built and it attacked any ship that comes it way. It terror will always live in the heart if sailors. But before the death of Captain Nemo,he still wanted more revenge. Angel being so heartless have decided to continue the war against the American army and take over the world. It was a like a dream to the soldiers when they were fighting people they can't hurt and can over hurt them. Copters fell into the ground like rain and jeeps blew up like balloons. In minutes,the whole place was a grave yard. Angel and her men then left for the streets and straight they went to white house. Anyone found wandering around was shot to death instantly. They got to the White and easily made their way into the compound. A missle was immediately launched and it drop in their middle causing them to fly into different directions. But they all stood up one after the other and release fire against the white house. They couldn't go in because the white house had the most security, then they left and drove back to the weapon factory. Angel then brought an idea. The American governments has a particular place were untested and dangerous know or unknown weapons were kept. They decided to attack this place instead but they didn't know where it was situated. It location was classified. They needed help. John heard the stories about the terror attack unleashed by Angel. He called his boss and his boss told him that the government are coming to take him. He knew all he had to do was prove that he knows nothing bout the attacks. The soldiers came in their jeep and took john but yurt hadn't drove far when the road was blocked by men carrying alien powered weapons.

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The men cleared off the soldiers and took John straight to Angel. They blindfolded him when they got there and angel came out. Angel asked john about the arsenal and John said he disentangle know it's location. The men then brought a metal that was nakedly connected to electricity and placed it on John body. He screamed and he was asked again about the arsenal. He said he does not know but he know someone that may know the location. Angel immediately asked who the person was and John told her that the chief of navy may do. They took john and he directed them to the place. Angel men got out and released fire in the soldiers protecting the place and they went in. Angel went to the man laptop and took it away but as they got to the frontdoor, an army was waiting for them so they ran back into the building and a chopper came from above. They climbed into the roof and took the chopper away but left john behind. The soldiers came inside and took john away. Angel and her men got to their base and brought out the laptop.Then a man hacked into it and went to the documents.He saw the nuclear arsenal drive and opened it. It read thus: The United States maintains an extensive nuclear arsenal. According to the Federation of Atomic Scientists, in April of this year the United States maintained an arsenal of over 7,200 nuclear bombs. Of those, more than 2,000 were deployed (1,900 strategic nuclear weapons and 180 non-strategic weapons). America also maintains a plethora of delivery options for its nuclear bombs. As part of its nuclear triad, it maintains some 94 nuclear-capable bombers (B-2s and B-52s), over 400 Minuteman III ICBMs and 12 Ohio-class ballistic missile nuclear submarines. The latter are equipped with modern Trident II submarine-launched ballistic missiles, which are drastic improvements over their land-based competitors. Angel looked into the the laptop in front of her and smiled.

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Angel was happy when she saw the weapons she could harness but became confused when she saw that it had even more security than the White House.She then decided not to try steal the weapon but destroy it. They planted a explosive into chopper and decided to crash it into the arsenal. The chopper was driven to the top of the arsenal and it was released from the air and down to arsenal and it exploded. Millions of nuclear particle was released into the air. The government were informed immediately about it and they sent a message to Angel asking her to settle her feud with America.She said she wanted to rule the lands. They told her that she must release the nuclear weapons to them in exchange for the position of the President. She agreed and she was given the office of the President. The nuclear weapon was the only chance to save the life of the people. It was exploded from the same point the nuclear weapons exploded and it neutralize it effects. With Angel the President and the people now safe, the governments decided on how to deal with Angel. The American government had a research on Captain Nemo and had found another copy of the way to utilize the alien weapon. With the help of this discovery and the weapon with army they made counter products of the weapon. They made cloth proofs and others and with this they decided to attack Angel. The military was asked to plan a coup and overthrow angel.The coup was planned and the soldiers attacked the house.Angel soldiers released fire and tried killing the soldiers but the weapons didn't hurt them.They were all arrested and imprisoned including the female version of Captain Nemo herself "Angel"

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The mysterious rulers from the ocean were all arrested and jailed.Their verdict was given and they were going to be killed any time from soon. John was freed from his case and he went back to his Felicity. Since the incident,they had finally decided to go into a relationship and it's fine for them. " " " " " He moves as fast as wind,he slaughter people with no mercy and he has count on his killings. This was the situation of things after a serial killer spranged from nowhere into the street of New York. He had somehow been in the 5 years ago incident of Angels terrorism and had been poisoned by the nuclear energy which makes him moves very fast. The police department decided to seek for detective Harrison. A former detective who had been forced to retire after getting stucked in the middle of a serial muder. He had since been called upon only a special duties like this one. He arrived into the office of the mayor. He was bit curios about the mayor personally asking to see him. He arrived into the office and sat down. The mayor then spoke to him "I am interested in anything that has to do with 5 years ago sad events so as the white house. But here is our problem,if the house hears about him,then our city will become a war ground. Military attack will be declared and lord knows how many people will be hurt. That is why we need to find a way to catch this man before the white house knows" Harrison sighed and looked at the mayor he said "a 5 year ago mystery can only be solved 5 tears ago" The Black Angel as she is fondly called by the prison guard. Angel had finally made herself a real angel since her arrest. She could tell the food anyone ate for breakfast by just hearing your breath. She would even say if you rushed on your way to work by just listening to you breath.This way she could tell which of her people still hate her for what she did to America. She would tell them it was destined and wasn't her doing those things. With her newly found good nature,she has lot of visitor daily and she has gotten used to it. Harrisson came into prison yard and asked for angel cells, he was directed and he went there. He stood in front of her cell and greeted. Angel stood up from her bed and faced him. She asked from him "why are you scared? "

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Harrison replied that he is not scared. Angel smiled and asked from him what he wanted,he said he wanted her help.Angel asked from him if it is a murder case and he replied positively. She then asked from him how does the case concern her. Harrison then explained it to her. She looked away from him and said that she doesn't even know that the energy from that thing could do anything to human than kill. Harrison believed her but asked about any clue. Angel told him to find out why he is fighting.Harrison said it could be about 5years ago and angel looked farther away. She went back to her bed and sat down then she replied him that no one of her men will fight behind her back not for their course. Harrison left for his office, he got down in front of the building and someone passed by him.But he didn't see who it was. When GE got to his office, he found a letter written roughly on his desk warning him to stop going to Angel. He took the letter and went straight to the Mayor to show it to him. The mayor then told him to go and show it to Angel. He left for the prison yard.Driving so he played music from the radio. The music suddenly went low minutes later and he looked by his side.There sat a man that looked exactly like Angel he was going to meet.

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The man told Harrison to keep driving and he did so. He got to the prison yard but the man told him to keep driving till they got to a warehouse. He told him to get down and move to the warehouse. Being a smart detective Harrison brought out his gun and pointed it at the man. He commanded the man to lie down but he just smiled. Angrily he screamed and told him to lie but the just started moving towards him so he shot the man. He looked up but to his surprise the man was nowhere to be found. He turned back immediately and pointed his gun at the man again and the man said call me Disintegrate. Then right in front of him the man started spreading into smaller and smaller particles till he was nowhere to be found. Harrison was confused so he decided to escape but hadn't moved far before he appeared again.He shot at him but couldn't get to hit the target. He hid behind a pole and watched for him to show up but suddenly he heard a loud this on his head and fell off.

His phone rang and rang and get suddenly woke up. It was his wife favourite,he loved to remember her everytime cause she was what he fought for. He opened his eyes and tried to pick his phone but he was tied to the chair. He fought and fought but couldn't get to free himself so he loses hope. Disintegrate came and brought out the phone from his pocket. He asked from him who DG was and he said the mayor. Then Disintegrate picked the call and told the mayor that he has Harrison. The mayor tried to talk but he just switch off the phone and broke it. He told Harrison that he has no issues with him only if he doesn't try to escape. Saying this he left the place. The mayor immediately called into the police department and asked them to trace the call. He was told to recall but it was off. Then they told him nothing could be done. The mayor the took his car keys and decided to leave for the prison yard. They begged him not to go but he wouldn't listen. He was even told to take some guard with him. All he said was that he brought Harrison into his present condition. With this he left the station and got into his car. He drove off.

The mayor kept driving till he got to the prison yard and it was such a surprise to the prison guards when they saw the mayor. He asked for Angel office and he taken to the place. He looked straight into her face and asked her where Harrison was. Angel replied that she has no information about him. The mayor screamed at her and she just kept mute. He told her that he would gladly kill her right there if he doesn't tell him where Harrison was. He hijacked a gun from one of the prison guard that followed him and pointed it at her. Angel also replied that she would also gladly die for she is telling the truth. The mayor calmed and asked from her what she knows about this man. She said she doesn't even know who he is. The mayor left the place and got to his car. He opened only to find a man sitting in his car. He quickly closed the car and ran back to the prison yard but the man drive his car from behind and knocked him down. He got down from the and lifted him up. The man he saw looked exactly like Angel and he said to him I am disintegrate.

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Disintegrate took the mayor and told him he will kill him for interfering in his case. The mayor started praying and suddenly someone shot him from the back and he immediately went away. It was the mayor head of security,he had secretly followed him to the prison yard. He took the mayor and they both went to back to the police station. The mayor thanked him for saving his life. The man told the police that he shot the man. They went to the spot and collected disintegrate blood and tested it. It was same as Angels blood print. The mayor went to Angel and asked her if she had a brother. She said she had one that had died a long time ago. She said he died even before she was born. The mayor said your brother is alive.

Angel was surprised. She then told the mayor to leave. She then went to her bed and prayed to God. The mayor told the police to keep working on the case. Many years ago at the Nemo city,the priest had given birth to a son. When night came,he took the baby and secretly went on a ship with some crew and they sailed away to atlantis the lost continent. When they got there,The priest went to the place were captain Nemo kept the nuclear energy. He brought it out and put it on a table and lifted is son up. He put him very near to the lantern and called some spells. The energy started coming out like waves from the lantern and started entering into the baby. The priest smiled but suddenly the wave started going Back into the lantern and was taking the baby with it particle by particle till the baby disappeared.

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Angel woke up from her dream. It was obvious that she now knows that Disintergrate was her brother whom her father had mistakenly lost into the alien energy. She prayed to God to let him come aroud. Disintegrate went back to the warehouse where he kept Harrison. He was hurt and he needed help. When he got in bleeding. Harrison offered to help. He agreed and loses him from the chair he tied him to. Harrison helped remove the bullet from him and cleaned his wound. After taking care of him,he asked from him who he was. Disintegrate told him that he doesn't even know who he is. He had only memories of his city which he had seen when he was a baby. He went back to the city after the nuclear weapons neutralized the effect of the alien energy from him. He came back to life and immediately travelled to the city only ti find it empty. He screamed until he saw a note that read that the city now lives in America. He had travelled down to America but on getting there,the stories he had was of an Ange in prison. He decided to start hurting people out of anger. He was going to kill the number of years he spent in the alien stuff. When he saw that the people started visiting the Angel, he was scared that the Angel will tell them about him and that was why he was after them. He thought she was a real Angel. Harrison sighed.

Harrison asked him what he planned on doing. He told him that he would not kill anymore if Harrison can take him to the Angel. He wanted to know who he was. Harrison knew the Angel of the cells couldn't do this but he was scared. He agreed and they both left the warehouse for the prisonyard. On getting there,harrison blinked at a guard to signal him. The guard followed them. They got to Angel and she said welcome brother. Angel explained to disintegrate how their dad had caused him his pain. She also told him how she had foolishly followed Nemo course and caused people life. While saying thiszthe prison yard was raided and troops of officer stormed in and sorrounded Disintergrate. He was told to surrender himself.

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The final saga Disintegrate surrendered himself after angel explained to him who he was. He allowed the police take him away. The mayor heard the news and immediately left his office to go and meet disintegrate at the cells. He got there but found soldiers from the capitals too. The soldiers who informed him that the white house knows about the case already and they have decided not to probe him for keeping it secret. He thanked God for that. The soldiers started questioning angels brother khan. He refused to speak. He told them to just either take him to Angel or bring angel to him. The soldiers told him to tell them first before they do that and then he was there no more.

He got to the entrance of the cells and grabbed a guard,he told him to go and release angel for him but the guard told him that the key to angels cell is not in the place but at the state house. Khan left him and went to state house with a knife. When he got there,he brought me out the knife and grabbed a woman. He asked her about the keys and she told him it was not with her. He killed her. The soldiers called the white house and told them about disintegrate. They went to the prison since they knew that was where he would go. When they got there, the guard explained his ordeal to them. Then they went to Angel and explained things to her and she in turn told them all about who Khan was. The soldiers called the white house and explained to them. Then the soldiers from the white house prepared the remaining part of the alien energy that was kept. The state house have called the police and told them that Khan is murdering people. The mayor then told them to take angel to him. Khan had killed half the people in the state house. He asked them again where the keys were and they said they didn't know. He decided to go back to the prison to kill the guard with the beleived that he had fooled him but on turning back he saw his angel.

He quickly ran to her. She told him that he was a sinner and so he shouldn't touch her. The copters arrived with the alien energy. The president himself got down from the copters,he walked up to the siblings. Angel looked at him and she fell to ground, she begged him to forgive her and the President replied that he had done that a long time. He then told her that Khan was a danger. The more he disintegrated around,the more he released the energy in him and this will later pile up and become dangerous to the people. Angel then asked him what could be done and he told her that unless he doesn't stay among people. Khan then spoke, he told the President that he would leave the city to anywhere cause he doesn't want ti hurt people anymore. The president than said that he should go to the city. He agreed but begged them to let angel go with him. The President said it wasn't his decision. Angel then told them that they should let the both of them go back to the city where they were born.

It was a sad day for all the people from Nemo city when their one and only angel was leaving. Many of them requested to go with them but they weren't allowed. Angel spoke tj them and gave them encouraging words. Most especially she warned them not be evil. The copters were set and the both of them left for the South pole. When they got to the top of the city, Angel brought out a small box. She opened it and some gases came out. The pilot inhaled it and passed out leaving the plane to crash. Khan looked at angel but her eyes said it all. From the empty space, the copters fell and crashed into the very middle of Nemo kingdom and exploded. The explosion let out blue gas due to the colour of the energy in Khan. The gas travelled far into the clouds and spread. It could be seen from anywhere in the world. Just go to a beach and the cloud is just plain blue at the far end far beyond the ocean.

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