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Far but Near (poem by Tenniebenson)

Far but Near (poem by Tenniebenson)

By Cool in 27 Feb 2015 | 14:16
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......FAR BUT NEAR....

.Lots of miles away..Travelling far and wide again..Through the ocean and the sea..
Flying with birds across the tree..I know my love is beside me..Even though he is really far away..

When the cool and sweet smelling air..Make a lovely little sound through my ear..The only thing i feel Is the way he makes me chill..
He has gone through the miles..But yet,I can still see his smiles..
365 days is too long..To have a taste of his tongue..Truely my love is far away..But i do know he is near with me.....
27 Feb 2015 | 14:16
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This poem is dedicated 2 every lover of Tenniebenson... Nd my sweet@'s.... Favourite... Bishop... Flames.. Johnysky.. Krizzy... Vanephy.. Davy.. Oh! Nd of cos Chikere.. Even though i avn't heard 4rm him...
27 Feb 2015 | 14:16
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Lol..... That means the poem doesn't have impact in you(Val) with that word /Even though i avn't heard 4rm him/.. 2 Lines from the poem says /Truely my love is far away/ /But I do know he is near me/.. That mean Chikere is with you everytime,you don't need to heard from someone near you nah!!! Woooow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Greeeaaat work!! 99.9% good!!! Because it was only for girls(it wasn't refer to guys feelings) thats why I deduct 0.1% from the overall %... Great/Nice job....
27 Feb 2015 | 15:07
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Lol.... See aw u made it sound like i wrote it 4 Chikere... Abeg ooo... I said "even though i avn't heard 4rm him" cos he has refused 2 show up 2 complete his stories na... Tnk u @Khola46
27 Feb 2015 | 15:41
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Lol...hahahahaha...! Don't mention!!
27 Feb 2015 | 16:05
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Tennie dear,I ve waited so long for u to release this and now that u have, I commend u for d nice effort. Every poet has a way of expressing his or her emotion... Thumbs up dear. We expect more from u Tennie
27 Feb 2015 | 17:57
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Tnk u @Flames
27 Feb 2015 | 23:53
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Nice write up tennie.
2 Mar 2015 | 07:42
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Wow wow wow wow... Am just seeing this now and am like wow wow.. @Tenniebenson what can I say? You're the best in the world.... Would never forget this.. Thanks dear..
6 Apr 2015 | 15:50
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Hmmm... Tennie best,someone explain for me ooo
6 Apr 2015 | 17:00
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Whao nyc writeup dearie @Tenniebenson .........kip d ball rolling
6 Apr 2015 | 18:09
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See my sweet@!!! @chikere tnk ya #muah# @Flames lol... Where shld d person start xplaining?? @Pweety tnk u darling ;)
6 Apr 2015 | 20:23
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