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FIRST LOVE BY DENG BOL DENG

FIRST LOVE BY DENG BOL DENG

By Tippex in 16 Aug 2015 | 10:56
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This is a story written by deng bol deng and i will be posting it here,its a story of imagination..............but it doesnt contain strong language due to limited grammar.the author is in s.2 probably my classmate,pliz if the story is boring let me know




i dont know where it will end.......ur corrections,critics and comment are needed, from wat i heard,he said his conscience would nat let him be so he decided to share it was you guys.





Do not copy any part or the whole story without permission........kindly contact him through the following sites and email






FACEBOOK: Deng Wene Bol Mathíêêng
2GO: Tippexdebol
TWITTER: Deng Bol Deng
EMAIL: [email protected]
NUMBER: +211956480462


this is his first story


thanxs,am from south sudan.
16 Aug 2015 | 10:56
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Updates starts next on friday @Mray and T-dak come and do ur work
16 Aug 2015 | 10:59
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Nawao, na so u go cum put us 4 suspense till friday uh.. me no jux gbadun dx kine waitin tinx o.. 1st 2 comment anyways!
16 Aug 2015 | 11:42
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U dey bear it@DonMike learning pidgin
16 Aug 2015 | 13:20
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@Mray and T-dak come and do the role call,updates comes up 2moro
20 Aug 2015 | 15:07
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PROLOGUE:- It was one saturday night,one hour after super,and the play THE ABC,written by form (s.2) stundent named jackie,was being staged in the school hall.Most model high school students together with their friends and parents had gathered at the hall for the play.This was an exciting play by a clever and creative stundent the play sought to portray a society where corruption,poverty,drugs and violence were prevalent,the play seemed destined for great things. Jackie's teachers had been an encouragement to her and was confident that the play would make it to the national level during the inter-school drama competition. In this particular show, new charges that had been incorporated would be highlighted. The charger were significant and would give the play a sharper edge. Vuziga michael jackie's english teacher had advised her to make the changes and she accepted enthusiastically. I was looking forward to seeing the performance that night. Ejoe and Nelson were sitting at the far end of the hall,i was sitting next to them. They were both chewing gum and feeling the reeling after-effects of the bhang the had smoked earlier that afternoon. When the curtain was raised and the play got under way, Ejoe sat back in his chair with a sneering expression on his face. Andrew wore a dreamy expression almost oblivious of what was taking place on the stage. And finally when the play with a thunderous clapping of hands and the cast given a standing ovation by the excited audience, the boys stirred to life. "the fool!," Ejoe metered. Andrew dug him in the ribs "shut up man!" He hissed at him ,"that language is reserved for gutter". Andrew tended to dislike foul language. Ejoe noticed jackie stand on the flat form to thank the audience and accept congratulations from eager students and parents.
21 Aug 2015 | 02:17
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