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Greater tommorow.

Greater tommorow.

By ITMRABZEEZ in 16 Oct 2015 | 05:50
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Hello fellow coolvalers.
Am here to start posting a story here.
I kow most of you will be wondering who is this guy. Yes I am Azeez but feel free to call me smart, loyal or abzeez....
Well the story am about to start i don't know how its gonna finish but i do hope you will all enjoy it. So pull a sit from wherever you can, sit down wherever you find space. But i do like to tell you that in this my own class boy should sit down near boys and girls near girls, i don't want the mxing of both. And only me is allowed to sit down near babes wit my vise chairman @ pizarro or pizaro. Na only him sabi d way ein dey spell am with my deputy @khola and my first lady @ teninbenson. Hope i get d spelling jare.
Well as a matter of fact your comment and critics will be highly appreciated.
Wait ooo. Do i just say critics? Yes i think i say so. Yes please feel free to critise me as a matter of fact am also a critics.
I will start as soon i recieve go ahead(popular support)
16 Oct 2015 | 05:50
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I don land oooo..... And I'm lookinq foward to another Intrestinq story here.....Go ahead we've qat ya back bro... . . Now,here comes the invite's... @Tenniebenson @Khola46 @Wiseman @Ibrams @Swtharyomi @Wyse-one @Eddy @Delight @Pweety @Mray @Jummybabe @Babe4biola @Ritagold @Kuks @Fridex @Frank @Simzy @Pheranmmie041 @Temmyjoy @Chriswayne @Evanz @Mecuse @Skookum @Donmikie @Kingsbest @T-Dak @Charlywizzy @Charliebryn @Hardeywummy @Japhola @Konphido @Kingson1 @everybdy come ooo.... plz if ya name was'nt mentioned,jex be rest assured it will be included as we proqress... Lol...No beefinq plz
16 Oct 2015 | 06:00
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Oya ooo preido don land oooo wia u keep my seat oo Emperor Skookum in d oux dem guys @konphido @ibrams @kingson1(come with d register) @frankkay dia z somtin I want u people to see here dem babes @wyse-one @babe4biola @jummybabe @hbankee @ritagold as usual u ur seat don dey reserve.. .. I realy need a new register ooo people don dey vex I no dey call dem.I beg if I no call u no vex will soon get ur call frm my Deputy @kingson1 *winks* nd my aburo @frankkay
16 Oct 2015 | 06:01
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Go ahead,we're here
16 Oct 2015 | 06:03
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Ok another story @tenniebenson @mray @Sofia @Besty @percy @holarbordah @empress @franklin @december @prince @ewomazeal @blessedgirl @tifanny1 @skookum @pizzaro @khola46 @onahsunday631 @ritagold @ibrams @jclash @vibratingwind @kemkit @Taiwo @T-dak @donmikie @Geeadore @Temmyjoy @somhkid @ebube @tinagabe @hbankee @jummy @justify And special invitation to my dear @Frank
16 Oct 2015 | 06:04
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Thanks skookum already here
16 Oct 2015 | 06:06
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so far am not invited i do do mogbo mobranch fr here so ride on@Abzeez
16 Oct 2015 | 06:20
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@pizzaro baba I see u..... tanks hope say item 7 dey abii.... @skookum I still believe and agree say u nah emperor.... @jummybabe tanks a dozen times..... but shey u go bring something bah
16 Oct 2015 | 06:27
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My people thanks 4 d iv @jummybabe my sweet heart thanks a million times
16 Oct 2015 | 06:29
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Am Present Since, Tanks 4 D Mentions My Gud Friends And Dearies @Pizzaro And @Jummybabe Oya Ride On, We're Firmly And Kinkinly Seated In Da Sharia Way Lyk U Want..
16 Oct 2015 | 06:31
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Pastor pizzaro GO thanks boss
16 Oct 2015 | 06:31
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@pizzaro I feel u bro. @ibrams after u na u ooo u be d pillar
16 Oct 2015 | 06:39
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I dor show for here like James bond . @pizzaro, @tenniebenson, @japhola, @sofia, . Make una show face o . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST !!!
16 Oct 2015 | 06:40
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What's ur story dude? Bring it on...
16 Oct 2015 | 06:41
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@frank ur wife like u she spechali invite u @jummybabe she con call u there hmmmm i go love oooo and @azzez or loyal wich 1 i hope dis story is not a sex story ooooo because i dey fart and i know wan spol my fast #lol
16 Oct 2015 | 06:41
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I land here but forgot my pen at home Someone should lend me there cos wanna call reg @sofia @titimi @femight @temmytopluck @federal @kampat @mumabel @omoobaa @hormotayor @solo @phemboard @generusnelly
16 Oct 2015 | 06:43
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Wow finally landed @pizzaro so u couldnt invite me even u 2 @ibrams anyway am already sitted let me jst mak a few cal @ebube @frankkay @blessedgirl @steph @ritagold @pastor @empress li @jclash nd everybody mak una show face
16 Oct 2015 | 06:46
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@skookum d emperor, I don land tankiu... Nd @jummybabe thankz a billion.
16 Oct 2015 | 06:58
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@Jenifa oooh Sorry i 4qot to add u up Dear....i'll do dat immediately.... . . @Ibrams lol...The Refreshment(Item 7) would be here anytime from now ooo....welcome bro!
16 Oct 2015 | 07:05
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@jenifa no be sooo.... I want invite you special.... please make una no vex... can u give Mrs jenifa Ibrams a standing ovation....
16 Oct 2015 | 07:06
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@pizzaro OK ooo.... shey u know the kind of stuff wey i like bah.... no forget tell them make them garnish am with some.......
16 Oct 2015 | 07:09
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmm start oooooooooooo but i 4get 2 buy gala nd viju milk pls who will help me out ooooooo?
16 Oct 2015 | 07:13
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@jummybabe tnx st much 4 d iv, make i stil put mouth 4 sum pipo like. @emmyrexx @luckystar @mray @ebube @geeadore @christiana @crowniey @phineBrain @murshan @starlet @simzy @onahsunday31 @chomyline @olesev @walcomzy
16 Oct 2015 | 07:16
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Chaiii. Am very hapy for the turn up thank you all. Like am not gonna waste your timd.
16 Oct 2015 | 07:24
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Am right there
16 Oct 2015 | 07:49
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@Tinagabe tanx 4 d iv. So jammybabe u no even invite me @prizzaro even u too no wahala.
16 Oct 2015 | 07:52
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Lol @ibrams i feel honored *headswells* so 4 dat u've been forgiven but if u try dis tactics next time it wont work oo*winks* @pizzaro u re also forgiven but dont 4get me next time or else......hmmm let me jst reserve my comment,sha remember 2 pass d refreshment 2 my side wen its being brought*winks*
16 Oct 2015 | 07:57
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''Dave Dave Dave , yes papa, come here'' mr ekong called out '' and call your mother for me.. Yes papa. Answered dave. Dave and his mother entered there sitting room which was scarely arranged, some little things can be seen like table, three wooden chairs, an old radio tape and a big television set which was no more in use. Mr ekong happens to be a poor farmer, he practice substitence farming and sells the remaining in the market on market days to meet the remaining needs of the family,he has three children. Dave, blessing and joy,he so much love his children and his wife, and he taught them Godly things. mrs ekong daves mother is a trader, she sells firewood and groundnut with any fruit in season at the market. Her daughter help her to sell somethings. Dave is just fourteen years old while joy and blessing are fourteen respectively. You see my son you know that we are very poor and hardly do we eat three square meal a day because i have to pay your school fees with your younger onces own. Your anty in lagos said she will like you to come and stay with them in the city and she will also sponsore your education till university level, she also said that she will take care of you like her own children '' while mr ekong was saying all these things, dave felt somehow, he was not happy that he will leave his parent and go and live in the city. Mr ekong notice his mood and asked, dave what's wrong? It seems as if you are not hapy with the situation of things.. '' mama how can i leave you, papa, joy and blessing and go to the city?'' dave answered. If it is to drop out of school to help papa in order to send joy and blessing to school, then am ready and again how am i so sure that my aunt's children and husband will love me as you love me here. Mba oo. Am not going..eh it's ok. Why woun't your aunty's husband and children love you. You know we always love ourselves in this family, and i can't allow you to drop out of school because i want all my children to b well educated, you know i and your mother didn't go to school and we want you children to be better of us, mr ekong said. If you go to school in the city you will have enough things and you will be trained in school, good schools are in lagos, my son just go so that when you graduate you will not live a village life and you will take care of us your parents. On hearing this, dave decided that he will go, his parents thanked him and pray for him. They arranged for a day, dave was also preparing. * * * * * * * * * * * It was on a bright saturday morning, the sun shun with caution. Mr and mrs ekong are seen dressed in there best native atire, dave was also dressed in his best clothe a black trouser with an over size shirt with one of the 19th century shoe. The one yoruba call (koko shoe). They were all travelling to lagos. They got to the bus stop and boarded a bus going to mild 2 before a twinkling of an eye the bus was full and off they zoomed to lagos. during the journey dave asked lots of question while the father reply to the ones he could answer and gavd him a reply '' you will know it yourself ones you are staying in lagos''. Finally the bus got to mile 2 and all the passengers came down including dave and his parent, they boared another bus going to oshodi and from oshodi they board a bus going to lekki phase2 where dave's aunt lives with her family. Fellow coolvalers . What await david in the new world his finding himself. Sit down relax and read. U can also come along with snacks
16 Oct 2015 | 08:34
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I will try as much as posible to b uploadng twice a day. But if am not oportund atleast once a day minus saturday.
16 Oct 2015 | 08:38
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Tanx alot@pizzaro nd @jummybabe
16 Oct 2015 | 08:54
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I don land nd i don ready 4 d story gidigba
16 Oct 2015 | 08:55
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@tenniebenson,my namesake y re u hiding ur face these days,i don miss u
16 Oct 2015 | 08:57
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Nice beqinninq.... @Itmrabzeez why u dey ask me wetin await Dave 4 Laq...i be prophet ni?? Abeq come continue the story ooo... . . @Ibrams Garnished wid Cameroun pepper and a sweatinq bottle of Oriqin :-)
16 Oct 2015 | 09:08
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@Jenifa Thank you...Dey item 7 shld'nt be a problem... Sure I will qet it to you once it arrives....
16 Oct 2015 | 09:14
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Omo na so hall don full aaah i be don come late be dat well no yawa i sure say my seat dey reserve @skookum aburo mi tanks small for de iv @jenifa my bae tanks but i dey vex oo hw dat guy @ibrams dey call u mrs ibrams abi u won leave me for him ......... Ehen mis smart u are doin a nice write up here pls dont keep us waitin or.........u no dey rex
16 Oct 2015 | 10:16
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Chai! Where i wan sit nw? Anyways sha i don land @Tholartee @Wiseman @Jummybabe. Sum ple are stil missin here o @Taiwo @Nextangel @Kingson1 @Konphido @Kuks @Taiwo @vanrafael @Simzy make una carry chair if u dy come
16 Oct 2015 | 10:34
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I dey give u close marking brainy start . I hope dey wunt turn Dave to oux help sha
16 Oct 2015 | 12:00
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Mr toms house is a storey building. Their sitting room is well furnished with mordern furnitures and there is a big plasma abot 80 inchies hung on the wall along side with samsung home theatre mr tom is a chartered accountant who work with one of the biggest firm in nigeria while mrs tom happens to be a bussines woman, she has a big super market and all the things she sells are imported from oversea. Mr and mrs tom are blessed with a boy (jerry) and a girl (linda), linda who was the younges is just 14 years old, 'same age with dave' while jery is 16 years. On this saturday, the tom family where in the sitting room watching t.v after lunch, there was a knock on the door and linda went to open the door ''Good afternoon ma, good afternoon sir'' linda greeted. ''good afternoon my daughter'' mr and mrs ekong chorus with dave in the middle. Mummy it's grandma and grandpa'' linda shouted,she ushered them into the sitting room where are parents are sitting down. Dave was dazed at the sight of the tom's family sitting room, he compared it to the own in the village and the different was just too much for him to start comparing. Mr and mrs tom greeted there visitor before mrs top stood up to go and bring a bottle of cold water for them. "how are you doing my children?" we are fine replied mr and mrs tom. And how is the village, hope there is no problem there, fine my child mr ekong reply whild gulping down the cold water. After some minute of silence mr ekong clear is throat and started. '' my son" he was refering to mr tom. You and your wife must have discuss about this. This is dave my son, "he pointed to dave" that you said he should come and live with you. Yes we have discussed about it and i have prepared everything for him, he will resume school next week, said mr tom. Thank you very much my son, please help me take good care of him, if he does anything that is not good, which i believe he can't do, please talk senses into him and don't let him join bad gangs in school, because life in the city is very rough, and i belief you and your wife will help me take good care of him'' mrs ekong said. What will you like to eat? Mr and mrs tom asked. Anything said mrs ekong. Mrs tom told linda to take dave to the visitors room. Dave stoodup and carried his GHANA MUST GO and followed linda. Mr and mrs ekong went back the next day, they advised there son. You know this is a strange place, listen to whatever your aunt and uncle tells you,never disobey them, you kow they are now your parent and make sure you learn very well in school because that is the main reason you are here. After all these advice they departed. But however a week after dave's arival some obnoxious happened. Sit down, relax read and learn
16 Oct 2015 | 12:02
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Ryd on...
16 Oct 2015 | 13:21
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Tanx 4 ur [email protected] got ur bak at mr writer
16 Oct 2015 | 15:28
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Ha, it's not an easy thing to live with someone o,,,, I can testify that my self!! . . I still remain your boy . . JESUS-BOY JNR . . DE . . COOLVAL YOUNGEST
16 Oct 2015 | 16:10
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@Frankkay ur wife hmmmm OK nah everybody be ur wife for coolval abi..... Oya nah
16 Oct 2015 | 17:49
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Tanks bro! @pizzaro 4 the *invi* grt story,,continue....buh wait o..i've nt seen this story in 2day's update's why??
16 Oct 2015 | 19:53
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Am here nw ***Stretching*** @Tinagabe Thankz 4 d IV Comment reserved.
17 Oct 2015 | 01:40
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Thanks 4 i v.. @jummybabe.. @jenifa @tinagabe. K. K(kunu and kola) on point 4 dx.
17 Oct 2015 | 03:57
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Tanx @jummybabe 4 d iv
17 Oct 2015 | 04:22
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@ebube abeg share me kunu my wife @sofia no carry food come ooo Hunger der wire me and I no wan leave this my seat . . . or better still @pizzaro that refreshment nefa come . . Mr writer I dey watch oooo
17 Oct 2015 | 06:31
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Lolxx @Tholartee ...e neva land ooo...wen im land ah promise ah qo leh u knw oo ...Welcome Bro!
17 Oct 2015 | 06:43
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Lol @frankkay no worry i no fit leave u but shey u no say u neva propose sha but no let @ibrams see dis oo *winks*
17 Oct 2015 | 06:56
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@jenifa nah soo u wan do me abi.... tank u *sobing* walking away
17 Oct 2015 | 07:26
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@sofia u 2much @skookum hope say i no cum late? Na work cause am oh! . @khola46 @Anitcham @Stephanie @Mray @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Delight @Rhennyjay @GeeAdore @Tonia @Hameyeenat @InemLove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Charliebryn @Charlywizzy @Japhola @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @VibratingWind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Besty @Bsam @Youngestprince @Simzy @DonMikie @Portable @Olaking3 @Harddy @Henry @Hardeywummy2 @Blakstudd @Prince @Kingsbest @Flames @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Escysegzy @Olusegun @Sandy @Adewunmi@Adesewa200 @Adesewa @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @SexyNikky1994 @Rhennyjay @GeeAdore @Tonia @Hameyeenat @InemLove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Charliebryn @Charlywizzy @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @VibratingWind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Besty @Bsam @Youngestprince @Simzy @DonMikie @Portable @Olaking3 @Harddy @Henry @Hardeywummy2 @Blakstudd @Prince @Kingsbest @Flames @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Escysegzy @Olusegun @Sandy @Adewunmi@Adesewa200 @Adesewa @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @SexyNikky1994 @Tenniebenson @Anitcham @Stephanie @Mray @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Delight @Rhennyjay @GeeAdore @Tonia @Hameyeenat @InemLove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Charliebryn @Charlywizzy @Japhola @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @VibratingWind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Besty @Bsam @Youngestprince @Simzy @DonMikie @Portable @Olaking3 @Harddy @Henry @Hardeywummy2 @Blakstudd @Prince @Kingsbest @Flames @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Tenniebenson @Anitcham @Stephanie @Mray @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Delight @Rhennyjay @GeeAdore @Tonia @Hameyeenat @InemLove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Charliebryn @Charlywizzy @Japhola @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @VibratingWind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Besty @Bsam @Youngestprince @Simzy @DonMikie @Portable @Olaking3 @Harddy @Henry @Hardeywummy2 @Blakstudd @Prince @Kingsbest @Flames @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Escysegzy @Olusegun @Sandy @Adewunmi@Adesewa200 @Adesewa @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @SexyNikky1994 @calisto @hbk @frank @davick @whistler @sirp081 @kristen @liciacutes @whistler @murshan @wind @mojhisolar @charlywizzy @scholes junior @seyifunmi @kingsengine @aaron @tony @ruth @besty @shaxee @kemkit @jenny @leo @john @williams @softtouch @hoelhay @christopher @opeyemii @oluchi @maurice @abdulseries @olamy4fun @hameyeenat @stanny39 @harnuholuwa @jhorlade @somkhid @ruth @flames @loveth @peace @chinanza @ty @mrsolace @kingsbest @ib_dreams @frankkie @crusher @wind @maxblaze @jclash @pholaryemmie @dozzle @donvalley @donpaschalo @joseph @fridex @davin @nash @kuks @ewomazeal @nizzy @ebube @okklad @justify @funmilayo1 @loveth @donb @iksqueency @smilie @borwerleh @hollar @kolababs @ogbara @franklin @vasty @walexidey @damzitayo @chikere @anita @iamchris @wisdom @thankmic @christopher @jummy @maurice @herbyhorlarh @magdalene @esejerro @roes @pearl @chernor @priceocity @mature @swissy @omodunbi @T-DAK @sam @ibrams @dhemilade1 @oyindamola1 @samdee @tholartee @semilore @frankkay @Konphido @pizzaro @sofia @ibrams @others u are invited
17 Oct 2015 | 08:43
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@pizzaro i see u my nigga
17 Oct 2015 | 08:44
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Hey my sweetheart @ibrams u kw i cant do dat 2 u or hv u forgotten we jst got married yesterday am urs already soo smile or do u nid a kiss lol!
17 Oct 2015 | 09:32
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Tanx for d IV @kingson1 . I don't land for here oo but hope say seat never finish
17 Oct 2015 | 09:46
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@ibrams cry wela i go do everytin even beyond my power to take dat damsel from u bcos u no sabi take care of her @jenifa no sorry him joor he no deserve u u are too prety for him
17 Oct 2015 | 10:06
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Omo were dey tory naw aah aah na hw many days u carry us keep for one place me i no fit stay again oo
17 Oct 2015 | 10:09
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Yearn*wia d poster now
17 Oct 2015 | 14:55
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thanks @kingson1. ride on. @pizzaro, u always forget to iv me. diaris God! diaris God in everytin u ar doing. al d forget u ar forgetin, 1 day wil answer
17 Oct 2015 | 19:08
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@tholartee... Cum take... U knw dia z love n sharinq and i no b aka qum like ur wifey...
18 Oct 2015 | 02:37
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@jenifa as the both of us are together.... BAD BELLE IS ALLOWED PLEASE....
18 Oct 2015 | 09:23
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Lol @frankkay nd @ibrams ve heard u
18 Oct 2015 | 18:45
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@ibrams who come be bad belle na u nah hw many gal u want only u abeg face one @sofia dey dere abi u won do like doc goodheart
19 Oct 2015 | 06:08
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After a week of dave's arrival into the tom's family, he has started school, he was in jss2, while jerry is in jss3 and linda in jss2. "Dave" mrs called out, "yes ma" Dave answered runing to the sitting room where mrs tom is sitting watching tv. What is your duty in this house? Sweeping and washing plates ma, dave said. "As from now on, you will start cleaning my shoes and my children's own, wash my car and my husband's car and make sure you always wash all the dirty cloth in this house. Every saturday, you must do the general clean up, is that clear?'' dave was looking round wondering if he heard everything very well. What is it? Oh, do you think i brought you to this house to just come and eat and sweep, or whatever you call it? If that is what you are thinking, then you are doing a great mistake, you are here to work, cause am going to work as well to pay your school fees and feed you. Just get out of here, mrs tom fired. It was on monday morning, the toms's family where to go to school includen dave, they all entered inside mrs tom's car to school, when they got to school and were about to alert from the car to go to their various classes, mr tom gave jerry and lind 200 naira each to buy whatever they wish to buy incase they are not ok with there food and told dave to just eat what he has in his lunch box but dave was not suprise or feel anyhow cause he was used to eating nothing while he was in the village. However everything went fine in school because dave is a brilliant boy and his teachers loves him alot. After school hours, they rang the bell for lesson, so dave remained in his class since they have been told to do lesson but jerry went to a corner in the school with his girl friend rebecca to discuss some unneccesarry thing. After some time linda came to call jerry that she was through with her own lesson, so they both went to call dave. "Dave we are going home" jerry shouted from outside. Dave took excuse to go and meet jerry and linda. " please wait we are almost through, please just thirty minute" dave begged. " who will wait for you, see we are hungry and i think you know the way home, so meet us at home'' but remember mum said we should always come home together . "dave we can't wait for you am very hungry" linda relied. "come here" the teacher in dave class called them when the arguement was getting thougher. What is the problem? I said they should wait that we will soon finish lesson but they wouldn't listen. Is that true? The teacher asked jerry and linda. Yes ma. We are hungry and he knows the way home. But jerry your class mate are still doing lesson, how come you are going home? Am hungry ma and i can't wait. "Oh. I see", the teacher replied nodding are head. "but just wait for him, we will be through very soon" ok ma. Jerry and linda chorus. However jerry and linda went out to board a bike and they went home. When they got home they met their mum at home and she ask them what of david? "He said he wants to play ball that he will come home when his done playing ball" linda lied. Is that true? Mrs tom asked jerry. Yes mum i even persuaded him but he wouldn't listen. "He will come home and meet me". Mrs tom said angrilly. When dave was through in school he started to look for linda and jerry but he could not find them, so he decided to go home and check them. When dave got home he met miss tom in the in the sitting room. "Good afternoon ma" he greeted. "Bad afternon sir", she responded. Come here what kept you so long? As dave was trying to explain, she gave him a dirty slap on his face,and started to hit him hard untill she was tired. "stupid boy, you where playing ball and you come he to lie for me. Go and pack those plate in the kitchen and wash for me after that pack my children's uniform and wash them for me, if u like pack your own too. If you finish sweep and mop the whole house for me" mrs tom said not minding if dave has eaten. Then dave knew he was in for it.. Sorry for late update, some thing funny happened, please bear with me, i will make it up to you guyz.
19 Oct 2015 | 07:14
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second update comes up in the evening.
19 Oct 2015 | 07:16
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following.... Tnks for d I.V @pizzaro. @ITMRABZEEZ, y is dave and his sisters of d same age? Are dey triplets?
19 Oct 2015 | 08:29
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Nawa o,dats 2 bad
19 Oct 2015 | 10:23
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Dave wadsup wid dis woman nah...why the sudden maltreatment..??? Hmmm na wah ooo . . Welcome Dear @Wyse-one
19 Oct 2015 | 13:54
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@wyse-one which of dave's sister
19 Oct 2015 | 18:54
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am suprise 4 d sudden maltreatment... Dats what dey do wen pick up a low class.
19 Oct 2015 | 20:54
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@ITMRABZEEZ, in the 1st episode u said dey are all 14yrs. Check it. His sisters joy and d other one
20 Oct 2015 | 08:43
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( 3years laters) Dave is now in sss2,linda in sss1 and jerry in sss3. It was on a friday they were in school, school closes by 12:30 pm every friday and fellowship starts from 12:40 and ends by 2:00 pm. All the classes were through with the day work. Linda went to meet jerry in the usual corner he usually stays to talk with his babe " jerry please let us go home, i want to go and finish the film we were watching yesterday before going to bed" but you know dave is the fellowship president, he will be very busy by now. Jerry told linda, '' no o , we will tell mummy we are humgry" ok, no problem, please give me 30 minute, i will meet you outside'' After about an hour jerry went to meet linda. "linda let go and tell dave that we are going home first so he woun't start looking for us. Ok. Linda agreed. Later they found dave in the fellowship hall. " Dave" linda called out. "Yes" we want to go home. Are you not waiting for fellowship? No, we can't wait, jerry replied. Ok no problem, dave did not bothered to argue with them cause he knew they woun't anwer. Okada ! Okada ! Linda and favour shouted. An okada stopped right in front of them, they both climbed and went, as they were going a trailer lossed control and was coming in front of the okada, the okada man was also trying to contro himself but the trailer was faster than him and it jammed the okada man and the passenger into the gulter. The okada man died instantly while linda and jerry were unconscious. The people who were at the scene at the time of the incident rushed forward to help them and took them to the nearest hospital( Cross hospital) the doctoq knew there parents ,because that is their family hospital, so he quickly called their dad. "helo mr tom'' this is doctor Timi . "Helo my good friend, how do you do?" mr tom greeted. "How do you do?" hope there is no problem. Mr tom asked. " well just come to the hospital right now." The doctor cut the line. Without wasting any time, mr tom took his car key and off he drove to the hospital. When he got there he went straight to the doctor's office, wondering why he has an emergency call from him. He knocked when he got the door and he was asked to come in. " Good afternon doctor, hope there is no problem". "Good afternoon mr tom, you can have your seat". Well your children had bike accident when they were going home from school . What? My children? How come? How did it happen?. Mr. Tom was so shocked to hear this. You wouldn't have allow them to take bike, you know that bike riders are so rough and reckless. What about their brother. The doctor asked. They went to school together, are they ok? "yes, God really saved them, because the okada man died instantly. Only jerry that was roughly injured. Linda was just bleeding from the nose, so it not that serious. Thank yo so much, i will go to the school right now to see their brother if he is fine. Mr. Tom drove to the children's school ,he asked of david from a student. " Good evening boy, do you know dave Ekong ?" yes he is in the fellowship hall. Please can you direct me to the place? If you reach upstairs the second class hall by the left,you will start hearing the speaker. " Thank you" mr. Tom went upstair as directed, when he got there he saw david preaching about "patience", he listened to what david was saying, dave also saw him but didn't go and meet him because he was preaching. When they finished they shared the grace and all departed. Dave went straight to meet Mr. Tom. "Good afternoon sir" "Göod afternoon" where are is your sister and brother?. Mr. Tom asked . " They told me that they wanted to go home, that they can't wait for the fellowship, i told them to wait but they wouldn't listen" Dave said . So i belief they should be at home , he concluded. " O.k. Let's go ". Mr. Tom comanded in a low soft voice. Dave was surprise because anytime his uncle wants to pick them up in school he normally tell them in the morning. They both went downstairs and entered Mr. Tom's car. Mr. Tom drove straight to cross hospital and stop. Dave was wondering while they walked into the hospital. They went to the doctor's office and the doctor led them to the ward jerry and linda were admitted. When dave saw what has happened to them he was so surprised " you see what your brother and sister has cause themselves" jerry leg was bandaged while linder head was head was bandaged as well and she was breathing through oxygen. Mr. Tom was just staring at his children. Mr. Tom was watching t.v in the parlour. She went to collect her husband's suit case. "Good afternoon darling" she noticed the expression on her husband face. " Good afternon ". Mr. Tom replie. What's wrong? Where are my children?. Mrs. Tom asked in one breath. Eh eh eh . Your children had a bike accident..... What? How did it happen? "They had a bike accident" what of dave? Why is he not involve? " Ask God" Mr. Tom replied angrilly. "Dave where were you? Later in the evening by 5 0'ckock. Mr. Tom and Mrs Tom went to the horpital. However after seeing the children the doctor invited Mr and Mrs. Tom to his office and told them the condition of the children. " The children will be alright but jerry might not be able to wall with his leg very well again" what? You mean my boy woun't be able to work well? Mrs tom shouted almost about to cry. " No am not saying he woun't walk, it just 50/50 he will walk but not might not be able to walk properly, just pray" the doctor explained. Thanks for reading, i really appreciate your comment as well. Thanks. If am chance i might paste one more episode. (thank u, merci, obrigado, asante sana, iantenda,) 4 spending your time to read
20 Oct 2015 | 10:52
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@wyse-one its definately a mistake. Please take it like dat. Am even typing it wit my fone, so i dont even hav tym 2 prove read. And tankz 4 noticing dat.
20 Oct 2015 | 10:54
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Oops mrs tom wo'nt go flog nd dave for nuffin.. lol., i like viz story wella... :) plz continue...
20 Oct 2015 | 13:06
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Ride on am luvin dis
20 Oct 2015 | 15:25
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ndidi amaka
21 Oct 2015 | 01:49
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Dis mrs tom z wicked o
21 Oct 2015 | 02:55
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2 months later Jerry and linda were discharged from the hospital, they were unable to write the school examination which was the promotional examination, but due to what happen to them, they were given promotion untrial. Jerry ''SSCE" was also fast approching. The school resumed for a new term, everywhere was dusty, the student did clean up and settle down in their classes for the day's work. A week after the resumption the school chose the school prefects. Dave was made the head boy because of his performance since he entered the school and also because of his good conduct. Mrs.Tom no longer give him breathing space, it's now from one work to the other but despite all odd he maintain the good grades and conduct. It happen on a friday even when Mrs. Tom travelled out of the country to go and buy goods from china, Jerry and linda had left sleft school earliar like they always did, dave was still busy in school with the fellowship. However dave was very tired as he trekked home. On getting home dave was surprise that the house was very quiet, but has he entered into the main parlour about to go to his own room he heard a faint nose from linda's room, it was as if someone was mourning in pleasure. Dave first of all stood still to confirm if his ears were not trying to play a kind of trick on him. But d voice was coming again and again. Dave then decided to moov closer to the door to confirm his fair, because how can linda bring a guy home to come and do non sense with her all because her mum travelled just for day. On getting to the door he started hear "please faster, faster please, i love this" the other voice was also familiar. Dave was sturned, he couldn't even move, he just remained glued to the spot, his head was spining, he wasn't even think in the right proportion any longer, he didn't know when he badge in. Holy mary !!! Dave almost colapsed with what his too eyes just saw, his two eyes almost fell off the socket, this is unbelieveable, he was rubbing his eye with his two palm to see if it was a dream or reality. Oh but this isn't a dream, he thought it only happens in film but its unbelieveable, he is seeing it with his own two naked eyes. The two of them quickly sat up trying to clad theirself with the bedshit but it seems the bedsheet was also against them cause it was still tightly tucked in into the bed. Dave just stood mouth open looking at them, he couldn't belief he just saw linda on top of jerry riding him like a horse. As soon as dave became little bit concious he just turned and left the room. When dave got to his room he was deep in thought that he didn't know when linda entered walk in and went on her kneels begging dave not to tell anyone what he has seen, dave was just there looking at her, he couldn't even open his mouth. "Dave please am begging you" linda keeps on begging dave, when dave did not answer. Linda then stood up and strip herself naked, immediatly dave regain consciousnes, " Jesus !" dave shouted, "i rebuke you in jesus name" "where is jesus? You better stop pretending and fuck me hard, am sure this ur d..ck will be as sweet as lolly pop" linda said about to grap dave from below. Dave stood up immediately and ran out of his room, then linda started sarcastically, but immdiatly dave was stepping out of the room he was shocked to see jerry standing in front of the door look very mean. "Dave you see am not going to beg you not to tell, go ahead, tell mummy, tell dad, and if that is not ok, you can call journalist so the whole world would know we are having fun, but i will like to let you know it wount help you or add to you, rather you will land yourself into a big trouble with it, and for you best information mum also has her own secret with us, rubbish, little fool" Jerry said and walk away. Dave just stood and there wondering if it was a dream. Linda then walk out of david's room. " Mr reporter, am sure you heard him clear, cause your ears are not paining you, so no one his begging you to keep it a secret, MTCHEW old fool." Linda said as she pushed davd out of the way and walk to her room. " OH Lord, please wake me up from this BAD dream !" dave shouted....
21 Oct 2015 | 09:07
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Oh my God!brother nd sister unbelieveable hmmm dave u did d rite tin by rebukin her
21 Oct 2015 | 10:45
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What a shameful act from jerry nd linda
21 Oct 2015 | 19:03
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God4bid bad thinq 4 my side ooo....Dave u should av shouted Holy Gost Fire...dat workz very well and in such case it was needed.... Bro and Sis??...abomination!!! Wah secret does mrz.Tom share with them??
21 Oct 2015 | 20:29
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just havinq fun.... Kip d secret.
21 Oct 2015 | 22:34
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Slut children of pig
22 Oct 2015 | 04:52
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Children Of Devil
22 Oct 2015 | 11:13
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my eye don chi chum chin
22 Oct 2015 | 16:17
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Next.
22 Oct 2015 | 16:47
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Its d influence of mrs tom dat corrupt d children. @dave dnt worry d good Lord is wit u
22 Oct 2015 | 19:21
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@joseph u r funny o, u chi chom chin or u hear chom chin cos u were'nt dere nau
22 Oct 2015 | 19:25
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I don show...... Let d story continue
23 Oct 2015 | 01:33
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After 4 days Mrs. Tom arrived back, the children with dave were so happy to see her back savely, " mummy i want to tell you something" linda told her mum. "what is it that you want to say, that you can't let me even rest, please we will talk tommorow" Mrs. Tom told her daugher. The next day linda and dave went to school while jerry remained at home since he was waiting for another waec, Mrs. Tom also went to her shop, leaving only jerry at home. When everyone had gone Jerry girl friend called him that she was coming. About an hour later Rebbeca arrived. Jerry was in the parlour watching film. '' oh my baby, hw are you? You are looking so hot" thank you, rebbeca replied. " so whatsup, let go to my bedroom" no o, this place is ok, what do you whant me to come an do there. "So that you can be confortable nah" and did i tell you am not confortable here? "you didn't even ask what brought me here" "common rebecca, i know you are here to have a nice time with your boy" rebecca stood up, walk up and down then face Jerry with all seriousnes "Jerry see. I am pregnant". Jerry stood up from where he was sitting as if there was fire on the chair, he opened his mouth but words could not come out. "please what do you say ? He managed to ask. " are you deaf ?, i said am pregnant" rebbeca repeated. but how come? Jerry asked. Are you asking me how come? "Oh when you were doing it, did i not tell you? "but i do use condom nah" jerry said looking so confuse. Rebecca moved closer to him putting her hand around his neck. "Have you forgotten the last time the condom finished and you did it raw? Jerry couldn't talk, he was so confuse. "Wait, apart from me, who else haveu told?" Jerry ask. " No one " Rebecca replied. "yes, that is good" dave said calmly. "what is good ? Rebecca asked. " don't worry, i will tell my mum" what do you just say? You mean you will tell you mum this? "yes nah, my mum will definately have a solution" you mean your mum woun't scold you? Don't worry, i trust my mum. Just make sure u tell no one. "O.k". Rebecca replied. * * * * * by 4pm Mrs. Tom came back from her super market. Not too long linda and dave also came back. " Good evening" dave and linda greeted. "Good evening" Mrs. Tom answered. " Dave come here immediately you off your uniform, you want to go to the market for me". O.k ma Dave replied. "And you linda,your food is on the dining,i know you must be very hungry" After 2 minute dave went back to meet mrs tom in the sitting room. Mrs. Tom gave him a list of what is going to buy and money and off he went to the market. Mrs. Tom and linda were sitting together in the sitting room gisting. "My queen what did you wanted to tell me yesterday?" i thought you woun't ask. "0h why woun't i?" mummy can you belief that dave was peeping at me when i was in the bathroom bathing? Linda told her mum. "what do you just say? You mean that bastard was looking at you while bathing? Are you sure?" mrs tom asked. " mum why would i lie" hmmmmmm. That boy is in trouble,let him come back. Mrs. Tom said angrilly About an hour plus,dave came back from the market. "welcome back, where you able to get all i sent you?" yes ma. Dave replied. "Go and drop it in the kitchen and come back here to give me my change". O.k. Ma dave replied and went to the kitchen. "Dave i want you to tell me the truth, what happened between you and linda when i wasn't around?". Mrs. Tom asked dave. " nothing ma" dave replied. Are you sure? Mrs. Tom ansked again. Yes ma dave replied once again thinking hw he was going to tell mrs tom what his eye saw. "Linda what do you say this lieng bastard did". Mrs tom asked linda. "mum i said he was peeing at me when i was taking my bath" do you hear that? Mrs. Tom asked dave. "No ma,i did nothing of such" kip shut, liar. Mrs. Tom fired back. "It better you tell me the truth cause that is the only thing that can save you" dave was just totally lost. Before dave knew what was happening mr.tom has already pounce on him, calling him all sort of names. " Just go and kneel down there" mr.tom said after beating him blue and black. * * * * * " mum i want to see you". Jerry told his mum. "what isit my king" mrs.tom asked. "It is about my girlfriend. Rebecca. I think you know her". Jerry said."yes. I do. What about her?". Mrs. Tom asked. " she was here this morning, she said she's pregnant and i don't know what to do" mr tom was just looking at him. "How come, don't you use condom any longeq?". "Mum i do use condom,but that day the condom finished". " and so? So you can't ask me for another one, or better still get one by yourself. Now you have landed yourself into trouble you want me to save you" mtchew. Mrs. Tom hissed. " Mum please nah, it woun't happen again". Jerry begged. "but you know you dad must not hear about this" yes mum, and that is why i need your help. " how many months did she say the pregnancy is?". Mrs. Tom asked. " she didn't tell me, she only said she hasn't seen her period for two weeks". Jerry explained. "O.k. Tell her to see me in my office tommorow" ok.thank you ma. "mtchew better pray, and becareful next time and make sure you always use your co...dm " thank you mum, that why i love you". Jerry said kissing the mum, he then stood up and left. Mr. Tom had hardly settle down when Mrs. Tom started telling him what linda said dave did. "Dave is it true?". Mr. Tom asked dave. '' No sir i didn't do that dave told mr.tom. "o.k. Call me linda" o.k. Sir. Dave went to call linda. "Linda what happen?". Mr. Tom ask. " Daddy when i was bathin after we came back from school, dave came to be looking at me inshde the bathroom" linda are you sure of what you are saying? "yes dad" linda replied. "why didn't you tell me before your mum came back?" mr tom ask. " i didn't tell you because i know you woun't belief me" linda told the dad. "yes i wound because you are lieing" mr.tom said."just go, dave you can go" mr.tom said. "Is that what you will say?". Mrs. Tom asked. "yes . You should know if someone is lieing or saying the truth". Mr. Tom told the wife
24 Oct 2015 | 08:30
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sory 4 d late update, i don't just av any excus
24 Oct 2015 | 08:31
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U 4 get excuse nah..... Make I spank yah head... Thumbs up bro. U try wella.
24 Oct 2015 | 09:51
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*sighs*
24 Oct 2015 | 09:52
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Mr.tom... I like hw u settle dx matter... She shld knw wen smbdy is lyinq.
25 Oct 2015 | 02:39
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wow nyc story. tnx kingson1 4 ur IV. missing sum1 dat i love @ tenniebenson nd sofia.
25 Oct 2015 | 08:20
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@ITMRABZEEZ dat means u sef dnt know how 2 lie dat's y u dnt have any excuse. Is mr tom Dave real uncle?
25 Oct 2015 | 09:29
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Mrs Tom And Her Spoilt Brats Wil Surely Regret Deir Deeds
25 Oct 2015 | 09:49
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mr tom z a real man
25 Oct 2015 | 10:31
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Mr Tom, na correct father. Wic kind of mother is Mrs. Tom
25 Oct 2015 | 10:39
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Incest jerry nd linda are mad, well for mrs Tom she will soon receive her payment from her 2 spoilt brat. David keep on with ur good work, I believe Mr Tom will see u through ur education no matter what mrs Tom is doing.
25 Oct 2015 | 12:59
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Mrs Tom
25 Oct 2015 | 14:20
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Mrs Tom is a very Irresponsible mother sneh...can u imaqine the advice she's qivinq to her son sneh... Mr.Tom is a qood father sneh...he is jex lyk my dad...knows whenever u're lyinq to him.... :roll:
25 Oct 2015 | 14:38
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Untrained and intractable children will be corrected by outsiders. Mr. Tom, you'd better call those little brats and talk sense with them. Their mother is spoiling them little by little. If u are not careful, u won' t be able to handle them. Next episode pls!
26 Oct 2015 | 04:02
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Loving the story go on guy
26 Oct 2015 | 04:56
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Mrs tom is definetely a useless mother nd dat her 2 spoilts brat
27 Oct 2015 | 15:30
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Rebecca and mrs tom both went to the hospital for the abotion, it went succesfuly so jerry was so happy his mum also warned him not to make such mistake again cause if he does he would be responsible. The senior school certificate examination arrived. Dave an jeryy were to sit for the examination. Mr. Tom also make such he has no time to rest or read but dave never fails to wakeup mid-night to read. Jerry was to write his examination in a special centre while dave was to follow the school. The examination came and dave did well, he made all his papers in one sittin the lowest grade he scored was B3. Jerry on his own too made all his papers except english where he got E8. Mrs. Tom was very suprise at dave's performance despite all hostility. On dave's graduation day, Daves parent also came, Dave recieved a lot of gift from teachers and junior students. He also collected present in six subjects. Maths, english, physics, biology, chemistry and economics. His parents were so happy with him, and they also snapped lots of pictures, some junior students even cried that dave was leaving them. Dave parents also waited for a week and mrs.tom was behaving well and pampering dave, his parents were so happy that they had left dave in a save hand. They were even thanking mrs.tom not knowing who she really was, dave as well didm't say anything odd about her. "Thank you very well my son" Mrs. Ekong thanked Mr. Tom. "I am very grateful, that was why i said education in the city is better than the one in the village, now see Dave, he is speaking like the white people, thank God o". Mrs. Ekong knelt down, stretch her hand and was thanking God. Jerry continued to park more girls while Linda was following the biggest guys in town. Dave knew he still has a year to spend in that house before he enters into the university, he was equally preparing for his jamb. One day Mrs. Tom came back from her shop and met Dave reading. "Dave have you done all your work?". Yes ma, replied dave. "You mean you have wash all the plates, sweep, and the cloths i gave you to wash?" yes ma, replied dave. "O.k. Where is Jerry and Linda?" "They are both in Jerry's room" "what are they doing" questiond Mrs. Tom. "They are ehm, ehm, ehm, hnm,hmm.". Dave could not talk because he knew they were sexying each other. "what is it?" mrs tom fired. "I don't know" replied Dave. "Go outside and bring those things in the boot" said mrs tom. When Mrs. Tom got to Jerry's room she opened the door and saw that they were having hot sex. "Oh my God, again? I think i told you guys to stop this silly act, you are brothers and sisters for cry out loud". Mrs Tom said angrilly. "Mum we are sorry, it just caught us urgent". Jerry said. "Common kip shut, don't you have girl friend and you Linda what of your boy friend?" we are sorry mum. Jerry and Linda begged. "Hope Dave has never caught you guy" "He caught us ones but that was when you travelled" Linda explained. "Oh my star, you guys are so careless, what if he tells your dad". "No mum he cant" "who even knows if he caught you today, the way he was stammering when i ask about you guys" mum that is own problem. * * * * * 2 weeks later Mrs. Tom came back from the shop and gave dave #10.000 to go and give her friend who living on the second street to their house. When Dave was going some guys attacked him, they beat him and really injure him, he was also trying his best to save the money but they were too much on him. Dave was confuse wether to go back home and tell mrs tom what happened or he should just run away, but he decided to go home and tell Mrs. Tom and also show her his bruise body.. When Dave got home Mrs. Tom noticed how he was badly injured and ask him what happened. "em - em - em". Dave was stammering "Talk, what happen to my money". "em - em , when i waas going soome peo...ple came toooo mee and collected the money and beat me like this" what? "My own money? Are you stupid? You even have the guts to tell me one.. Mtchew enough is enough with your cock and bull story, jst go inside there, pack all your things and leave this house, before i close my eyes and open it bastard ". Dave was lost in thought, he didn't expect this type of action. He tried to beg but recieve the hottest slap. He went to room and did as he was asked to do When Dave left home that day there was no place go to since he din't know and placd in lagos. After he has walk and walk he becme tired and slept under the bridge with some boys. The next day he woke up and was very hungry he went out and started begging for money, some people gave him money while some didn't even look at his face. However dave counted the money and saw that he has realise #340. He was happy, he went to eat wit the #140 and bought two bags of pure water with #200 and started to sell One day has he was selling his pure water someone came from nowhere and snatched the money away from him, as he was trying to figure out wu was it the remaining pure water fell down and bursted..
27 Oct 2015 | 19:54
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plz try to corect any mistake u c on ur own. I didn't cros chek bcos i typd it with my fone and dat was also d reaso 4 late update. Thanx 4 d love
27 Oct 2015 | 19:57
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I pity dis poor boy
28 Oct 2015 | 01:40
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Mrs Tom z heartless ooo
28 Oct 2015 | 04:12
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Dave cool down dat z ur stepin stone 2 ur success. May Lord see U tru.
28 Oct 2015 | 04:15
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Eyaa,such z lyf.
28 Oct 2015 | 04:29
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Hmmm i realy pity dave
28 Oct 2015 | 05:21
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I kw God ll always be wt u @Dave,just be prayful
28 Oct 2015 | 05:32
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Mrz.Tom is a bitch infact she's a beach sef lol....she's forqotten the story of the rejected stone in the bible...let'z watch out and see sha...
28 Oct 2015 | 06:50
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GOd will c u true @dave
28 Oct 2015 | 07:42
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Hyaa am so sad for u dave may de good lord see u through
28 Oct 2015 | 12:19
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Mrs. Tom or what's ur name, u are very wicked ooo, even u are animal in human clothing. Dave, dont worry, u gonna make it by God's grace. Next pls!
28 Oct 2015 | 12:49
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U wil surely make it, d road wil b rough bt i knw u wil get there. Leave dah Mrs Tom God go judge her
28 Oct 2015 | 12:50
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Mrs tom av unknowingly push u 2 ur destiny just lyk Joseph n his step brothers
28 Oct 2015 | 13:02
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Dave God is your strength, I know you will make it one day.
28 Oct 2015 | 13:04
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There's no Glory widout a Story.... Jux pittyinq Mrs Tom nd her da--n fvckinq children..... . . . . Led watch nd ce de outcome...
28 Oct 2015 | 14:15
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Eyaa...sowie Dave. God will surely help yhu out nd as for Mr nd Mrs Tom, they'll reap wad they've sowed..
28 Oct 2015 | 16:34
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oh... She push u close 2 ur destiny... I pity her and her children jerry and linda...
28 Oct 2015 | 18:32
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oh... She push u close 2 ur destiny... I pity her and her children jerry and linda...,.
28 Oct 2015 | 18:33
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oh Dave... She push u close 2 ur destiny... I pity her and her children jerry and linda...,.
28 Oct 2015 | 18:35
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Wat a pity ooooooo
29 Oct 2015 | 04:08
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@ele ..u re invited ooo .. as nobody call me .. i don invite myself .. ***clears throat*** ..its obvious ..mrs tom and jerry is suffering from ancestral curse .. pele davidi theres a greater tomorrow ... @itmrabzeez ..roll on
29 Oct 2015 | 18:03
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After weeks of struggling hard on the street Dave secured a job with a woman who was selling office stationary, he was paid #6000 a month. After 2months of working he started saving the little money he has with a daily saving collector. But he was living in the market square, only his cloth that he keeps in the shop. However he was a good boy to his employer and as well hard working. One day big mama as she was always call because of her extra ordinary size forgot her saving box key on the table when she was going home and she normally keeps the money in the shop. When she came the next day she met the key where she kept it and went to the saving box to count her money, she found out that her money was complete and intact the way she had left it. She didn't say anything and she started to study Dave. After three weeks big mama purposely kept #10000 on the table before she went home. The next day when she came back she found out that her money was no longer there, she didn't say anything. "mummy, you forgot your money here on the table yesterday ma" said dave. "oh, really? Thank you very much". Big mama pretended. After a week there was a serious robbery in the market. Harm robbers came to rub most of the biggest stores in the market and many lives where lost. The police also came late and the robbers excaped. That night police where patroling round the market square when they another guy trying to break into another shop. " Stop there or i shoot you" shouted a police office from the van. However the guy did not stop but started to run and two police got down and gave him a hot chase, the guy was still runing and he ran to where dave and other guys who does not have home normally sleep. When the police got there they arrested everyone they met there and took them to the police station. The next day when big mama got to the shop she did not see dave, she waited and waited and there was not sign of dave then she became scared. She search inside the shop and dave clothes were still they, she was just wondering what might have happen that made dave not to come to thd shop, she also know that dave can not just mis work without any reason. "hey big mama, do you here that the police has catch those thieves?" said mama sonto. "Really? Thank God o, at last they will face the wrath of the law. But how did they even catch them?" asked big mama. "You woun't belief that they came back yesterday night to finish their evil work, they were about to break in into senator ibikola's wife stord when the police caught them" said mama sonto. "Thank God o, they will never go unpunish" said big mama. Mama sonto went her own way to tell everyone in the market her story. Then big mama resumed to her own thought. "Big mam have you seen your boy?" asked mama serah. "No o, i don't know why his not here" replied big mama. "better go to the police station to see if his there cause my husband told me they arrested some guys in the market square yesterday and they will be taken to court on monday" said mama serah. "how come nah, i heard it was the arm robbers they arrested nah" "no o, my husband told me some boys who normally sleep in the market square that one of them was trying to break into mrs ibikola's store" "oh my God, but dave can't try that nah" said big mama. "yes. That is true, that boy is a good boy, but i suggest you go and check if is not their" "that is true, am going right now" big mama started packing the little things she displayed outside. "i will follow you there, you know that boy is a good boy and may be my husband can be of help" said mama serah. "Thank you very much" said big mam. When big mama and mama serah got to the police station the went straight to mama serah's husband and told him what they came for. Sergent okoro, told them to wait that he wants to go and check if any one bears that name. Few minute later he came out with dave looking very tired and weak, he wasn't putting on any cloth. "yes. This is him". Said big mama. Big mama later spoke with sergent okoro and pay the sum of #10000 for is bail. Big mama took dave to her house. "I don't want you to live in the market again, i want you to be living with me in my house he, am the only only one living in this house, as big as it is". Dave was very happy that he almost jump up. " thank you ma, i promise to always be a good boy". Big mama just smile. " dave i know you are a good boy and that is the reason i bring you to my house and that is also the reason i came to bail you at the police station" dave just knelt down and thank big mama. To be continue in two hours time...
30 Oct 2015 | 13:29
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dont worry dave ur future z bright
30 Oct 2015 | 17:11
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I can only see ur future being bright mr dav
31 Oct 2015 | 04:00
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@itmrabzeez ..ahn ahn ..ur 2 hrs never pass? ..*sobs*
31 Oct 2015 | 07:30
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wia z d nxt episode
31 Oct 2015 | 11:02
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Mrs tom u a just a shame to the world of motherhood........dave u dat has been the rejected stone shall be the chief corner stone......nice work to the writer
31 Oct 2015 | 18:13
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This is really a hard time for u Dave, but be rest assured, u gonna make it
1 Nov 2015 | 05:23
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Linda is now in ss3, she's now happy that dave no longer lives with them, so linda and jerry continue to have their affairs. " Jerry can't you see life is now beautiful? No one to poke you up and down". said linda. "Thank God o. Ever since that boy left there has been a kind of fresh air in this house, the only thing there is the way dad now treats mum," "don't worry its only because its just a year, by next year he must have forgotten everything" . Linda : come to think of it, those guys are bad o. We only told them to collect the money from him but they also beat him blue and black. Infact i respect them. Jerry : ( laughing) don't you know those boys? Na them they hold all this area. No even try them. Dem fit even kill am if they want. Linda : gbosa ! For you. But mummy self even bad o. * * * * * dave was also enjoying his stay in big mama house. She adopted him as her child because she has no child and her husband was dead. She registered him for jamb. She still continue to give dave his salary but now in for of monthly allowance. When the time for jamb came dave wrote it and he made it at once. He chose unilag as his first choice. He was so happy when he sat down for the almighty post utme and made it as well. Big mama was also happy that she has found a son and she promise to send him to any length he wishes to go academically. The plan dave and big mama had after dave told her about the story of his life from A-Z was that dave would only go back home after he has finish his education and he was very happy with that. * * * * * * Two year later dave was now in 200l while jerry and linda was still trying post jamb. It was either they fail in jamb or the post utme fails them. So they where still at home. One day as dave was rushing home from school to go and see big mama. It was on saturday, he needed some cash in school to do something, so as he was rushing home he saw mrs tom and linda in the market, they came to buy food stuff. Should i go and greet them? Dave was thinking if he should show himself or not. "Good afternoon ma". Dave greeted mrs. tom as she was try to pass by him. Mrs. Tom look round and was shock to see dave. "Afternoon". She said and hurried pass him, she couldn't even look at him in the eye. She was damn shock and also suprise on how dave has changed and the way he was also dressed. "Mummy. Linda called her mum and broke the thought on her mind. "Yes dear. She ansered". "Is that not dave?" "yes, i think it's him. Your dad must not see that bastard". " that's true mum. How will you do it? "well, i have to stop your dad from coming to the market before they meet each other" " mummy, but you know dad woun't answer you. He has friends her" "you don't worry. Leave that for me. Let just go home" "go home? But we haven't bought anything nah? "i said let go home, do you want that bastard to see me again?" . Mrs.tom and linda entered into their car and zoom off. Dave was also suprise to see them. When he got to big mama he told her what he saw and big mama told him not to come to the market again that if he needs anything he should call she will send it to him and whenever he wants to see her he should go home directly. It was on a sunday even the Tom's where having familily discussion when linda just stoodup and ran to the bathroom and vomit. Mrs. Tom also stood up and followed her then minute later they came back. "What is the matter" Mr. Tom asked. "Nothing, i think she has f ever" "Then let me take her to the hospital" "Don't worry dear, i wil do that tomorrow" O.k. Mr. Tom replied. While they were still talking Linda stood up again then ran to the bathroom to vomit again. "Jerry get me my car key, i am taking your sister to the hospital". Mr. Tom commanded. When Mr. Tom got to the hospital he met his friend and they both exchange pleasantry before he told hm what broth him. After 30 minute the Doctor came . " Yes. The scan and test run on Linda shows that she is 3 weeks pregnant". The doctor dropped the bomb. 3 weeks what? Watch out for the final saga. Sorry for late update as well i gat no excuse for that cause i can't lie. "mi o le paro" just plz forgive me, it's laziness please pray 4 me against every spirit of laziness... fire...fire....fire.
2 Nov 2015 | 13:45
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@ele am sorry ehn. Its jst diz lazines of a thng.
2 Nov 2015 | 13:47
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No wonder lazy ..... guy I beg come update somtin 4 us
2 Nov 2015 | 15:31
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Cant wait 4 d final episode 9ice 1 @ITMRABZEEZ
2 Nov 2015 | 15:33
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we understand @itmrabzeez ..final saga keee? 'sad face' and i dnt want this story to end anytime soon
2 Nov 2015 | 16:05
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lazy kee. plz update
2 Nov 2015 | 17:54
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cnt wait 4 d final
4 Nov 2015 | 03:14
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Intrestinq....Jerry Casala don burst...u've qot no where to qo kid...u're doomed...
4 Nov 2015 | 12:50
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What z going on na,come and update dis fyn story
5 Nov 2015 | 08:19
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Who is writing this story now? Abeg come update na @itmrabzeez
5 Nov 2015 | 09:51
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Okay o @ITMRABZEEZ fire fire fire
6 Nov 2015 | 18:03
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''Oh my God! Am ruined''. Who impregnate you? Can't you talk? Mr. Tom was about to stranggle Linda to death. ''It's O.k." said the doctor. Mean while jerry was at home praying his last prayer. ''Mummy, what will happen? Are you asking me? Let your dad come before we know what the problem is. "hope she's not pregnan" "pregnant?, what do you mean? Nothing ma. Am just thinking... Pon..... Pon..... Pon. Mr. Tom was at the game horng for the driver to open the gate. Minutes later the driver opened the gate and Mr. Tom drove in. He got down and walked angrily inside the house. "Jerry, where is your mother" "she just left for her room sir" "go and call her for me right now" mr. tom shouted. What is it? Asked mrs. tom . Are you crazy? Are you asking me what the problem is? Now tell me if you don't want problem. Who impregnate your daughter.? Impregnate? mrs. tom asked looking at jerry. No. Ask me again. Let me tell you something. " If you and your daughter do not tell me who impregnate her. I don't want to see the two of you in my house". Mr. Tom said and walked out. Mrs. Tom could not talk or move. "Jerry. Meet me in my room right now" "ok ma
6 Nov 2015 | 19:01
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Ehn ehn dat good for u @mrs tom u doom is near
6 Nov 2015 | 19:24
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@jummybabe .u no de slip?
6 Nov 2015 | 19:56
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The next day mrs tom and jerry went to the hospital to see linda. The doctor told them that she is now o.k. That they can take her home. "Linda. Can you tell me who impregnated you? Mrs. Tom asked. Linda after they got to he ward. Linda just kept quiet. She could not talk, she was just sheding tears. "can't you talk? Or are you now deaf? "mu..mu..mu.....my. I don't know". Linda stamared. "what do you mean by you don't know, are you sick? "yes i think she's sick, we are in the hospital" said jerry. Will you keep quiet? Mrs. Tom shouted at jerry. "Now my dear please just tell me who impregnated you, because your dad said we shouldn't come home without knowing who impregnated you" linda could not still tall. "O.k. Look hear. How many people do you had sex with? Just tell me, you can trust your sweet mum. Isn't it?" "mummy it is emma my boy friend and ... She broke down again and continued to cry. "mummy. May be it is emma. Let us go and ask him" said jerry. "will you just keep your dirty mouth shot? If you don't keep shot there, i will slap you and end you out here" mrs. tom bark at jerry. "my dear,tell me. Who impregnateyou? "Mummy. I only had sex with Jerry and Emma". "Oh my God !!!. Holy sh*T. I think i told you guys to stop this rubbish. Am gone, you children have kill me. Who do i tell all this rubbish." mrs. tom broke down wailing seriously. "Hello. Wha is happening here?". The doctor asked .
6 Nov 2015 | 19:57
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U havnt even started crying.....
7 Nov 2015 | 04:50
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finally u ve update @itmrabzeez nxt update cums up in d nxt century. well dat serves u right @mrs tom jerry nd linda
7 Nov 2015 | 04:53
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@henry sanctus and diz is d update, nt even up to 20 hrs.
7 Nov 2015 | 10:18
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At Mrs. Tom's super market. "Emmanuel. Do u know Linda is pregnant? And she said you are responsible". "No o. For where? It's been long we had sex, cause she's always giving me one excuse or the other" "what do you mean?'. Let me tell you she's three weeks pregnant and she made me to know that you are responsibe". "No, No. It's not me she's talking about,may be another emmanuel". "Will you just shut up? Are you insane? Last time i checked you are the only emmanuel i know with Linda and you are here denying instead of asking what is going to be the way out" mr. Tom shouted with fire in her eyes. "But it's up to 3 or 4 months we had sex and it was protected" emma said nervously. "Let me tell you. You have to just admit the truth and stop beating around the bush" mrs.tom said. "admit? Ok. What do you want me to do ? "Fine ! Fine !. Know you are talking. All you have to do is to come home and tell my husband you are responsibe then we know the next step of action to take" "O.k ma. Thank you, i will come by six". After emma left mr.tom picked up her phone and called jerry. "Jerry i want you to meetme in my office rhght now!. Few minutes later jerry was in his mum's shop looking very nervous and uncomfortable. "Jerry. Jerry. Jery. How many times do i call you? Mrs. Tom ask. "Just three ma" "now i want you to tell me nothing but the truth. When last did you had sex with your sister? " hmmm... Hmmmm. Hmmm. Last week. No no. Lart two weeks". Jerry stammared. "Oh my GOD. You children finally kill me. I told you to stop this rubbish. Now look at where you have land yourself." mrs. tom said almost in tear. "Mummy. But we can say it's emma. You know he is her boy friend. "see. I just finish speaking with emma and he said it had been long emma had sex with you sister and he said they had a protected sex, unlike the foolish you having sex with your blood sister unprotected". "but mummy. We are sorry. We never knew it was going to be like this" "Just keep shut your dirty mouth, you don't know. It would be like this, when i was warning you, why do you refuse to listen. I think it's time for you to face your fathers' wrath. And let me warn you. If i ever hear mum did this or that or you ever relate what transpires to your dad, just know that you are dead". Mrs. Tom said and walk out of her office. Jerry was lost and confuse, he couldn't cry cause he knew it was useless, he just stoodup and went home. * * * * In the evening in the Tom's house. Mrs. Tom, Jerry, Emmanuel and Linda who was just discharged from the hospital where all sitting down waiting for Mr. Tom to come out. The atmosphere was like that of an uncertain J.s.s 3 pupil who jumped from Jss3 to s.s.s 3 to go and write the unilag almighty post utme.. Hmmm. Mr. Tom breathe heavily has he entered into the sitting room. . "Good afternoon sir" emmanuel first greeted mr tom as mr tom entered. "Good afternoon. How can i help you? "sir...sir...sir...sir. I am . .am . . Am. ". Emma was stammering. . " dear. This is emma. Linda's boy friene. He is responsibe for her pregnancy. "hmmm. Emma where do you live, how do you know my daughter and who are your parent? Mr tom asked all at once.
7 Nov 2015 | 10:19
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ah u re uselesss @emma
7 Nov 2015 | 13:40
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wow at last.. u updated .. i thought u said this would be the last episode,, ride on
7 Nov 2015 | 13:54
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Emma U're foolish to accept such deal..Datz deadly uno....And as 4 you Mrs.Tom,No matter how u hide the truth...it must always present itself at the end...chillax!
7 Nov 2015 | 16:57
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@ele. I tink u said u dnt want it to finish now.
7 Nov 2015 | 17:10
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hmmmmm
7 Nov 2015 | 17:41
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Nice one,what goes around will surely come around
7 Nov 2015 | 18:09
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Idiot woman let me tell you u can run as u like but remember u can't hide forever
7 Nov 2015 | 18:26
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Emmanuel u no well for accepting dx
7 Nov 2015 | 22:10
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Next
8 Nov 2015 | 01:20
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@itmyabzeez yaa *grinning* i really dnt want it to end .. carrying on pls
8 Nov 2015 | 09:07
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@itmrabzeez
8 Nov 2015 | 09:09
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Emmanuel is a big foooooooool.....oponu agba
10 Nov 2015 | 05:02
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Dis emma is senseless oo
10 Nov 2015 | 14:52
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Mr. Tom and emma came to a conclusion that he wil come go and see emma's parent. The next saturday mrs.tom, linda and mr.tom went to emma's house, when they got their they met his parent at home . "Good afteroon, we are mr and mrs tom and this is our daugher linda. Hope your son told you the reason for our visit". "visit? No. Emma. Emma. Come here". Mrs. Adeyemi called out. Yes ma. "sit down there" "you are welcome. We are sorry, you see this boy never told us anything, he never informed us that we were going to have a visitor. So please what is the cause of this visit". Said mrs. adeyemi. "Ok. I will go straight to the point because we don't have all days" Mrs. Adeyemi : ok. Mr. Tom : Last week sunday we were at home during the family time when my daughter stoodup and rush to the toilet to go and vomit at the toilet, when she came back, she went again. Then thought may be it was malaria or fever so i have to rush her down to the hospital only for the doctor to tell me that she's 3 weeks pregnant plus this one. Making for week which is a month. I was very angry and her told my wife that i don't want to see her in my house without bringing the person responsible for this home. Then on monday she came home with this young man... Mrs Adeyemi : you mean my own son? Emma? Mrs adeyemi asked in suprise, )all this while Mr. Adeyemi was just sitting quietly.while mrs tom was sweating in the air conditional room). Mr. Tom : I was very annoy Mr. Adeyemi : is that true?(he asked facing emma) Emma : yes.. No .. Yes sir(taawai . A very hot slap landed on his face from his dad). Mr Adeyemi : wil you talk? What do you mean by yes.. No. Emma : yes sir. But it has been long we had sex last. Mr Adeyemi : like how many weeks? Emma : 3 months. Mrs. Tom : will you keep shut? Liar. Mrs Adeyemi : there is no keeping shut about this cause they are the two involved. But not withstanding. We agree Emma is responsible now till the time she gives birth. Mrs. Tom : what do you mean by to to the time she gives birth. Mrs. Adeyemi : yes. When she give birth we will have to carry a DNA test of the baby and then we asume full responsibility. Is that not my dear? Mr. Adeyemi : yes . (with this mr and mrs tom could not talk again and they had no option than to agree. They later bade each other good bye and left). * * * * * * 8 months later Linda was in the labour room and after what seems like an hour she gave birth to a bouncing baby girl. What supose to be a thing of happines and joy became a thing of fear and saddnes to jerry and mrs tom. Mr. Tom was happy but at the same time ashame. The Adeyemi's came to visit them in the hospital and later went home to visit them when they were discharge. They bought lots of things for the baby.infact they never behave in any doubtful way and this made mrs tom to be alittle calm. After thre months.The adeyemi rented a very nice apartment for there son and linda as husband and wife. Mrs tom was happy that her secret was already covered. * * * After a year. Mr and mrs Adeyemi went to see mr and mrs to that it was time they go for the DNA test. Mrs. Tom became very scared but has no choice than to agree cause that was the agreement. Mr. Tom on his own has no problem with that. They schedule a date for that. Finally the day arrived and the test was carried out. The test was negative. This made Mrs. Tom to colapse and she was quickly revive. They Adeyemi's took emma home and told him that they are sure he must have learnt his lesson. When Mr and Mrs. Tom got home. Mr. Tom made things very unbearable for Mrs. Tom and Linda. And when linda woundn't talk he pounced on her with full force but she wound't talk. While this was going on they heard a knock on the door. Mr. Tom : who is that? Jerry go and open the door. (when jerry opened the door a fair tall fat woman walk in, follow by a young man. The young man was no other person than dave. Then dave mum and dad entered). Mr tom : what!! Dave? Where went you?( dave did not talk, he was just lookin. He is now an achietect. When mrs tom turned back and saw dave with his parents' she almost faint. There was so much tension in the room.)
12 Nov 2015 | 08:32
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hmmmmmmm nxt oooooooo
12 Nov 2015 | 12:45
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Mrs tom... d guy u thought he will be nobody z now somebody... Wich means man proposed God opposed
12 Nov 2015 | 18:58
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u see...u beta dnt collapse hia o..omo,mi dave waa qba iyi
13 Nov 2015 | 02:38
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Dats serve u right @Mrs tom nd linda,just feel pity 4 ur husband sha,cos he did nt kw anytin,bt wats d secret btw u nd ur children @mrs tom,only tym ll tell sha...,welldone @Azeez
13 Nov 2015 | 03:37
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wow wow ,,, this is the moment of truth ..mrs john and her spoilt kids una go hear wieenn .,, dave my man,i knew u wud have d last laugh *shout-out to the Lord*
13 Nov 2015 | 04:12
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Nice One!!! Dave i Thank God 4 you but please take it easy with Mr.Tom cos he was not included in the whole plan of sendinq ya away...As 4 Mrz.Tom,no matter how u covered the truth,it must always prevail at the end...Nex pwease!!
13 Nov 2015 | 04:22
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Thank God 4 dave.
13 Nov 2015 | 05:09
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Dats good
13 Nov 2015 | 05:21
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When trouble meet problm
13 Nov 2015 | 06:19
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Nice one
13 Nov 2015 | 07:32
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plz nex.!
13 Nov 2015 | 12:03
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mrs dave dat good for u
13 Nov 2015 | 12:59
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nxt plz
13 Nov 2015 | 18:15
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hahahahahahahahaha ... chio .. I can't stop laughing so Dave is finally a graduate and or children are noting to write home about.
14 Nov 2015 | 12:09
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This supose 2 b d story of akpos, her father is her uncle wyl her mother is her aunt
14 Nov 2015 | 16:21
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wia d write plz cum nd update oooooo
17 Nov 2015 | 05:12
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So, what happen next? Both mother and children, woe unto u
19 Nov 2015 | 05:40
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Wia dx guy nw
22 Nov 2015 | 00:53
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abeg wia dis guy dey,anybdy wey see am shld help me tell am say mey im cum update dis story
25 Nov 2015 | 07:07
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plz am so sory u guyz. i have been very sick. bt thank God i survive, i wil finish d story b4 24hrs
25 Nov 2015 | 18:03
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There was total silence in the house as if it was a burial ground. Mr tom: please sit down. (Mr tom managed to say) They all sat down . Dave was sitting between his mum and dad. Mr. Tom: Dave, where have you been all these days? (Mr. Tom managed to break the silence once again. Big mama : hmmm. He has been living with me Mr.Tom: with you? How come? Please am totally confuse. Mr. Ekong : my son you don't have to be confuse. Dave open your mouth and tell him all what happened. Dave: o.k. thank you. Sir. ( dave said facing his dad) i thank God for making today a reality cause i have always pray for today. ( dave started to explain everything from the beginning, hw his aunty has been treating him right from the time they. Were going to school, to hw he caught jerry and linda having sex with each other and how he was sent on an errand and he lost the money and how his aunty trew him out, how he met big mama, how he was arrested and bail by big mama and hw she finally adopted her, to how she sent her to school and tbe day he saw his aunt at the market and hw she behave and ran away, when dave finished, everyone was surprised especially mr.tom. he couldn't jist believe his ears. ) Mr. Tom. : jerry come out here. ( mr.tom shouted at jerry). Is it true yoi and your sister are screening each other? Yes or no? Jerry: ye ye ye( tawaii. A big slap landed on his face from mr.tom.) Mr. Tom : can't. You talk? Jerry: yes sir!! Mr. Tom: for how long and do your mother knows about. It? Jerry: yes sir. Yes sir Mr. Tom : oh my God!! Am finished. Is that true? ( mr.tom asked facinh his wife). Mrs. Tom : yes dear. Am sorry. Please am sorry., forgive me. Mr. Tom : forgive you? I don't even thknk God can forgive you. And what is the reason you ruin this children`s life. Jerry : sir it is mum. Mr. Tom : what is mum? Jerry : one day she was calling someone to go and kill your wife and child but linda heard her and told me and we both ask her and she told.
25 Nov 2015 | 18:49
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We both asked her and she tkld is that you have another wife and kid outside and she has order hire killers to kill them that we shouldn't tell you that she will give us anything we want so far we keep shut. ( everyone were just surprised and lost. Even dave was totally lost. Mr. Tom : so it was all from you, i never knew i was living with the devil all these while. But thank God . And for your best information theh are nog dead, they are now in Canada. And i think i should call the police. ( as be was about to pick his phone everyone started begging him . He then gave them two options) o.k. you don't want the police to be involve. Then it either you and your bastards leave mh house and you drop the key of my super market before i file a divorce or you let me call the police. With this she had no option that to leave even though everyone begged mr. Tom and he refuse). Since then dave became biv mama son, he continue to visit her anytime his off work and he started to treat her as if she were is real mother. However he never forgot his biological parents. Mr. Tom also promise to see his own children(linda and jerry) throughout there higher institution. But the question is can they even pass jamb to talk of post jamb. THE END. THANK U ALL FOR BEING PATIENT WITH ME. I ALSO THANK YOU FOR READING MY STORY. HOPE IT'S NOT A WASTE OF TIME.. YOU CAN WATCH OUT FOR MORE. ..... IT YOUR MAN ABZEEZ. A.K.A. RUDESS BOY.... Fine me on Facebook @ Azeez damilare junior Love u all.. one love..
25 Nov 2015 | 19:15
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*find thank you all for tagging me to one story or the other. i really apreciate even thogh i do not coment. i really apreciate. it's. just that am always to busy to coment or send THANH U. lookng forward for more. love yeh all
25 Nov 2015 | 19:21
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Nice story
26 Nov 2015 | 04:21
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Nice story.hmmm
26 Nov 2015 | 12:19
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ernesto plz y d hmm
26 Nov 2015 | 17:55
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Indeed greater height, greater people, greater coolvallers and GREATER TOMORROW!
27 Nov 2015 | 06:02
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wow tnx @rudeness boy. tnx to God for healing u.. pls dear coolvallers writers plz try to notify us eachtym u guys fall sick so dat we can pray for ur recovering dan hiding it z unfair we re all brodas nd sistas hia. love u all
27 Nov 2015 | 17:12
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Nice story
28 Nov 2015 | 00:41
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Dats nice story we really apreciate it . We will be expecting more
28 Nov 2015 | 09:52
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