HAUNTED HOUSE

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Prologue: It was dark, and silent. An eerily silence, the only thing I heard was the sound of my worn out sneakers hitting the wood floor, and the creaks of the aged wood as I did. Not a single thing was lit, so I held my arms out in front of me, listening for any indication of someone, something. A high pitched chuckle filled my ears, and I froze, once again looking for something that was lit at all. A little, cold hard hand was placed on my shoulder and it's nails dug into my pale skin through my white shirt. I shrieked as pain shot through my body, strongest on my shoulder. The little hand started to pull me back, and I fell to the ground with a loud thud, echoing in the little hallway. I screamed a blood curtailing scream, as the hand let go of my shoulder and quickly grabbed a hold of my foot and dragged me. Splinters entered my body as I was dragged, and a pick axe quickly came down on my head, silencing my cries for help. Chapter 1: "I hate clowns!" Brianna yelled playfully, and Tristen rolled his eyes. My light red hair swirled around my face in the cool breeze, and I pushed it behind my ears. We were about to go inside the so called scariest haunted house in Michigan. But we were taking it one step farther, we're going in after it closes. "Well you will have to get over it, this is a haunted house, it will have clowns," Nick said stuffing his red hands in his jacket pockets. The air was colder than usual, and I didn't like it. Brianna pouted, crossing her thin arms across her chest. Jacob walked up behind her, wrapping his strong muscular arms around her and Brianna smiled. Gosh she was such a flirt! "You guys be quiet!" Jeff hissed at us, he pushed his wire framed glasses up, and I saw a shiver run through his small, thin body. "We are fine, nobody will catch us," Jacob stated smugly, a smirk spreading across his god like face. "Maybe your used to breaking into places, but I'm not," Jeff snapped back. My eyes widened, I have never heard Jeff talk like that, especially to Jacob. Jeff, the weakest of the group, and Jacob, the strongest. I guess opposites really do attract, otherwise I have no idea how to explain how we became best friends. A big group of misfits, or at least thats how I saw us. "How exactly are you getting us in Jacob? Lily asked quietly, her hazel eyes taking in our surroundings. Jacob smirked his world famous smirk, and ruffled his short, messy brown hair. "I know a guy," he said mysteriously. Hayley laughed, and slapped her knee lightly. I smiled, I knew what she was thinking. Of course that's what he would say. Tristen's beautiful green eyes glimmered in amusement under his long, dark hair. "Let's just go," muttered Jeff, tilting his head to the ground and walking toward the haunted house..... Well this would be interesting. Turns out, the guy Jacob 'knew' was just the owner, Issac. He kind of gave me the creeps, the way there was always a smirk on his face, and just how he dressed, he looked like a sleeze. Jacob gave him fifty bucks to let us in, as long as we didn't make a mess or trash anything. That man must not know us at all. This haunted house wasn't ordinary, it was a real house, a real big house. Apparently it's Issac's house, every year during Halloween season, he turns it into a haunted house and stays in a hotel. It was a really creepy house too, just from the outside. The wood was old and tattered. The white paint was already half peeled off, and underneath was an ugly brown color. The shutters were hanging half off because the hinges were so rusty. Black, that was the color of the door, I have never seen a black door before but there it was. Issac noticed me eyeing the house, and chuckled slightly, sending a slimy smile my way. I just went back to staring at the scary house. There was half of a brick chimney, the other half was in a pile on the dead, brown grass. There were a couple windows, but they looked boarded up from the inside. The inside. "Weird much?" Hayley said under her breath, I smiled, trying hard to contain a laugh. Issac didn't leave yet, he was getting things ready or something, Hayley was right, weird. "OK, have fun kids," Issac said. He winked as he quickly ran to his beat up Ford Fusion and took off as fast as he could. I could see him eyeing us out of his review mirror. Brianna's eye brows furrowed in confusion, and Tristen chuckled lightly, slowly shaking his head. "That guy is a creep," Nick annouced, popping the collar of his varsity leather jacket he got from playing football. His light blond hair just barely covered his sky blue eyes. Nick was your average everyday Jock, the kind that played football, baseball, track and never got good grades. Lily has been tutoring him longer than I can even remember. She had to teach him the ABC's. "Are you ready?" Jacob asked menacingly, tightly grasping the door, and pushing it open. Brianna hide her eyes in Jacob's chest, Hayley's eyes went wide, and I gasped at the sight before me. Issac was good at his job.

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chapter 2: the fun begins "Oh golly," Jeff said, pushing his wire frame glasses up his slim nose. Wow, he sounded like a real nerd there. Apparently I wasn't the only one who thought that because Hayley started to laugh. Once more I looked at the horror in front of me. It was just the beginning hallway, and it looked like there was a war in there. The nasty walls were brown and blood stained, the old wood was beat up and creaky and when you looked straight ahead, you could see the hallway go on and finally turn to black. "Wow," Nick said in amazement, running a hand through his gorgeous sandy hair with his other hand in his jacket pocket. Brianna finally peeked out from behind Jacob, and peered inside. Her eyes widened in horror at the thought of going in there, and she yelped. "It's not that bad Brianna," I said. As soon as the word left my mouth I knew it was a lie, I mean, it was pretty bad! Tristen chuckled and put his arm around me, which sent a blot of energy through me. I had always had a crush on Tristen... "Really Brianna, it's all fake, and besides, it's not like we're going to die in there," Tristen stated flipping his shiny black hair out of his gorgeous green eyes. I looked away before I started to drool. "So let's go," Hayley drew out, taking a teasing step forward. Nick and Lily followed and soon everyone was inside, and Jacob shut the door behind us, making what little light we had disappear. I heard a faint whimper and knew it was Brianna. Jeff, Nick and Lily pulled out flashlights and quickly turned them on, letting us get a better look at the 'haunted hallway'. "Hey Jacob?" I asked, stopping in my tracks. Jacob stopped too and turned to face me, "If all the people that work here are at home, how does this work?" Brianna looked scared for a second, and before Jacob could answer my question, we heard a little chuckle, then a loud and a scream. Jeff cocked his head, and Brianna stepped behind Nick this time. Tristen chuckled before answering me, "They don't hire people here, he uses robots, simulators and projections." My brows furrowed in confusion as I prosesed this information. That was a weird way of doing it. We heard another childlike laugh, and it was Lily this time that whimpered. Nick took her hand and led her forward, the rest of us following silently behind. The hallway ended soon, and it opened up into a large and extremely creepy room, filled with dolls. These weren't normal dolls either, they looked like they have been threw schredders and fires and hurricanes. A big shiver ran through my spine and I closed my eyes. "Emily? Are you okay?" Asked Lily. She draped her thin arm around me, and I opened my eyes to find everybody staring at me with concern. Tristen lifted his pale hand and began to chew one of the nails that were painted black. "Yeah, yeah I'm fine just got a chill," I said, ruffling my light red hair. It felt smooth and soft in my cold fingers, and I played with it for a while. "No kidding, it looks like Chucky's whole family decided to have a party," Hayley stated taking a step closer to a doll that looked particularly like Chucky. We all laughed at Hayley's funny remark. If anybody could turn a haunted house into a joke, it was Hayley. Just then, Brianna gasped loudly and we all turned to look at her. She was buried in Jacob again, shaking slightly. "Di... di... did you all see that?" She asked shakily. I cocked my head in confusion, as Jacob tried prying Brianna off him, "That doll's eyes moved."

Chapter 3: We were all frozen in place. And I do mean frozen, like, not even blinking. This was a haunted house, were they really aloud to drag you away like that? Was that even legal? I sure didn't think so. We rounded the corner, expecting to see Brianna sitting there, but she, and the clown were gone. How was that possible? We were like two seconds behind them. Jacob let out a little whimper. I would have laughed, but considering the circumstances I didn't feel it was the right time. "Jake, it's okay, I mean this is all fake they couldn't have gone far," Lily said, rubbing his back. Jacob leaned against the dirty wall, and slide down to the floor. "Maybe one of us should go with him to look," Nick stated, looking down at Jacob with concern. I shook my head rapidly. "No, we can't split up," I said, chewing my bottom lip a little. Nick looked back up at me. "We have too." "No." "Emily." "NO." I said a little harshly, "Nick we can't, I don't know what is going on, but I know they can't do that, so something is wrong. We can't split up now." Hayley kicked the floor a little, looking very uncomfortable. Nick just nodded weakly. I was suddenly very tired, I just wanted to find Brianna and get out of this creepy house. "Let's go find her," Jacob mumbled, taking a couple steps forward. We reluctantly followed, staying silent the whole way. I felt a hand touch my shoulder, and placed my hand on top of it. I had assumed it was Tristen, but when I looked to my left, there he was, hands in pocket. A small lump formed in my throat, and I stopped walking. Slowly, I turned my head to see what was touching me. There, stood a man with beautiful brown eyes, and gorgeous brown hair. His pale skin seemed to glow in the almost blackness, and his sinister smile was heart stopping. "Helloooo," he said, stretching out the word. I swallowed the lump, and blinked a couple times before I screamed. The man laughed, lifting his hand from my shoulder and grabbing my wrist gently. I screamed again, and this time I heard voices. My friends had actually gotten far while I was standing there, but they arrived in no time. "Emily?" Lily asked, eyes full of concern. Her eyes widened in fear when she realized what the problem was. "Who are you?" Hayley asked shakily. The man smiled again, then he tipped his black top hat. The white silk gloves he was wearing added to his whole look. He had on a white dress shirt, a black vest, black bow tie and black pants. A red jacket finished the look, and it was obvious what he was. A ring leader. He let go of my wrist, and ran his pale fingers through my hair. I froze again, and I saw everybody stiffen. "Ryan," he said smoothly. Tristen cleared his throat and glared at Ryan angrily. Ryan just smirked and continued to pet me like a dog. "What are you doing?" Nick asked, scratching his head. Ryan's smirk widened, and he pulled me close to him. What the Hell? Why was he acting like my fricken boyfriend? "Well, Mr. Boulders, I'm pretending," Ryan said, letting me go and pulled out a long stick. Nick stiffened, and I realized why. Did we even say his name in front of Ryan? Even if we did we wouldn't have said his last name. "How do you know my name?" Nick asked, pointing an accusing finger at Ryan. He laughed, pushing Nick's shaking finger away from his face. "I know all your names, Nick Boulders, Lily Parch, Tristen Smith , Jacob Marley, Hayley Lowen, Jeff Edwards, Emily Valentine and Brianna Williams," he said, sending a wink my way. I stiffened again, and let out a little squeak. "How?" Jeff asked slowly, pushing up his cute glasses. "That doesn't really matter does it?" Ryan said chuckling slightly. He turned on his heel, and walked away, red jacket flowing behind him. I was tempted to go around the corner and look for him, but I had a feeling he was gone. "Let's just keep going," Jacob said, opening one of the doors in the hall. It was dark inside, and Jeff reached inside to look for the light switch. The flouresent light flickered on, and I realized it looked just like the one scene from Saw. The wall were white, and so was the floor. The light continued to flicker, and there was a vile, decomposing body smell. Because thats what was in there. Jeff froze, staring at the bloody mess inside the room. There were chains, some still holding people to the wall. Some just had hands. Blood was scattered across the walls, though it was dry, and there were disconnected body parts, mostly arms. In the corner, on the counter were jars and jars of what I believed were eyeballs. Lily started to gag, and ran back into the hall to puke. I was suprised Jeff was as calm as he was, being as he usually had a really weak stomach. "What... is... that?" Hayley choked out, pluging her nose and pointing to something to the left. My eyes searched until I found what she was talking about. It was a body, a girl I think. Most of her hair was pulled out, her eyes were missing and her mouth was dripping with fresh, deep red blood. The girl's face had scratches all over. This time, Jeff did throw up, right in the middle of the floor. So did Hayley, Nick and Me. I almost did twice looking at what just came up from my stomach, so I quickly ran out. Everybody else followed, and Jacob slammed the door shut, turning to look at us. "You don't think that was Brianna do you?" he asked, shivering slightly. Tears welled up at the corners of my eyes. I haven't even thought of that, but what if it was? "I don't think so," Tristen whispered, running a hand through his hair. Everybody turned to look at him, but say anything else. We were all okay with that being the final answer. Nick walked over to another door, and slowly opened it. He peeked inside, before closing it and shaking his head. We walked down the narrow hall, looking into doors, before each one was slammed closed. We can across the last door in the hallway, and all entered the small room. I was instantly hit with the smell of flowers. It was a small room, with pink floral wallpaper, and white carpet. The little pink bed had a flowing white net above it, and the curtains had small roses and lily's on them. There, in the middle of the floor was a little white table with fake tea and cookies on it. A small teddy bear with a light blue bow tie sat on one side, a bunny with a pink dress on another, and on the last side was a girl, with brown hair and a frilly white dress. Her back was too us, and she wasn't moving. Lily cleared her throat, yet the little girl didn't move. Actually, she wasn't that little, she just looked like it because she was wearing a dress and sat at a small table. There was also a creepy, childish music playing in the back ground. It reminded me of scary movies with possessed kids, and shivered at the thought. "Little girl?" Nick said, taking a small and slow step toward her.

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Chapter 4: "Brianna?"Lily whimpered stepping closer to the little girl. Hayley was weeping, and Jacob stood frozen in place, staring at the little girl. I walked around to see if it really was her, and it was. Her face was covered in white makeup, and there was bright pink makeup on her cheeks, making it look like she had a blush. Brianna's eyes were outlined in heavy eyeliner, and green eye shadow covered her eyelids. Red lipstick was smothered on her lips to form a doll like pout. She was wearing a childlike white, frilly dress. For some reason, she seemed way shorter, and I gently lifted her dress to see why. Her legs were gone. Jacob started to sob, and Tristen gagged at the open wound. There was no blood gushing out, for what was left of her legs were wrapped tightly in blood soaked towels and blankets. The dress had fell just to wear you couldn't see that. "Brianna?" Lily called out, hanging onto Nick tightly. Silence. She was dead. Tears ran down my cheeks then, and I quickly wiped them with my sleeve. Everybody seemed to be crying, and then I noticed someone standing by the door frame, a smirk on his face. Ryan. "Aw, that's sad," He said sarcastically. Jacob shot him a look of pure hatred, and lunged at him. Ryan was out of the way in a second, already across the room. "You bastard, you did this didn't you?" Hayley screamed, reaching for him. Ryan just laughed, and slowly walked over by me. "Actually, I didn't. I didn't even know they were going to kill her," He said, placing a glove covered hand on my shoulder. Another shiver ran through my spine. "They?" Jeff choked out. His glasses were off, and he was rubbing his eyes, probably getting rid of the tears that soaked his sad face. "Yes, they," Ryan said. He turned on his heel, and walked out the door. Jacob ran out after him, anger written all over his face. Hayley buried her face in her hands, letting out the last sob. Lily, Nick, and Tristen followed Jacob out the door. I placed my hand on Jeff's shoulder and led him out, closing the door after Hayley followed. Jacob was sitting on the ground, ruffling his hair. Ryan wasn't anywhere in sight. "Let's get out of here," Tristen whispered, helping Jacob up. Everybody nodded, but didn't move. I took the first step forward, and soon we were walking in silence, down the damp hallway. All of a sudden, there was a high pitched chuckle, and it quickly filled the air. Everybody stopped, and looked around. There in front of us, was a doll, with blood stained clothes, and pink skin. Its hair was dirty, so dirty I couldn't tell the color. The smile on its face shook me to the core, and its' eyes rolled back into its little plastic head. "Would you like to play?" Its childlike voice asked, and again it chuckled. I saw Nick shiver, and Lily clutched his hand. Tristen gently grabbed my arm, and pulled me back away from the doll. "Go away," Jacob shouted pulling Jeff and Hayley back. He came to stand in front of all of us, towering over the small doll. I could tell it still scared him though. "Play time," The doll murmured. Jacob cocked his head to the side in confusion. The doll smirked, and then it was gone, just like that. Tristen pulled me back quickly, as a wall of glass slide down, separating the hallway into two. Everybody was on one side, except Jacob. "Jacob!" Nick yelled, pounding hard on the sleek glass. "Help!" Jacob yelled on the other side. You could just barely hear him. He pounded on the glass too, and kept looking over his shoulder making sure nothing was coming. Something was coming though, I couldn't tell what it was, but it was creeping closer. Like a black shadow. "Jacob!" Hayley screamed, pointing behind him. The thing finally arrived. It was a little kid, with a black cloak and the hood up. I couldn't see it's face. Jacob leaned back on the glass as the thing came closer and closer. "Stay away!" Jacob yelled at it, trying to back up more. It stopped, and looked up, showing off it's face. Tristen gasped, and Lily covered her eyes, it was hard to look at. It looked like his face was set on fire, because it was red everywhere, and it was blistered. He was missing an eye. "Back away!" Jacob screamed at him. He kept walking though, closer and closer till he was inches away from Jacob. My breath caught in my throat as I waited to see what would happen. He finally grabbed a hold of Jacob's arm, and Jacob wailed out in pain. The thing continued to hold him, as Jacob thrashed around, screaming for help the whole time. Nick and Tristen were banging on the glass, yelling for him to let go of Jacob, but no such luck. I was frozen, staring at the scene playing out in front of me. "Stop!" Lily yelled, pounding on the glass loudly. Everything went quiet, and the shadow let go of Jacob, making him fall to the floor. Then it walked off, leaving everybody to stare at Jacob's limp body on the nasty wooden floor. "Jacob?" Jeff whispered, leaning on the glass. There was a long silence that followed, and then finally, finally Jacob shuffled. "Help me please," he called out weakly, and there was a tug at my heart. He sounded, defeated, and scared. Jacob clawed at the glass slowly, barely moving his legs. "Jacob, try to stand up," Hayley ordered, her brows furrowed in concern. Jacob lifted himself up onto his elbows, and tried to move his legs, but they wouldn't move. It was then that I noticed they were smoking a little. "Lift your pant legs up," I demanded suddenly, focusing on his steaming flesh. And so he did as I said, and slowly lifted them up, trying his hardest to do it pain free. But that was hard considering his legs were half burned...

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Chapter 5: Tristen's POV: It dawned on me right then and there, this was a real. Brianna is dead, Jacob is dying, the dolls, the clowns, all of it. It was real, this was really happening. I pushed my hair away from my face a little, getting a good look at the burned remains of Jacob's legs. It was pretty bad, and I didn't want to say this but I didn't think Jacob was dead. I could practically hear that creepy ringleader now, two down six to go. Emily was froze in her place, so I placed my hands around her shoulders and pulled her close to me; enjoying the warmth her stiff body gave off. My eyes searched the hallway. Everybody was the same as Emily, except for Nick who was pacing between the two dingy walls. There was no doubt his head was filled with hundreds of different thoughts. We were all on out death beds, but there was nothing worse than knowing how we would go. Nothing worse than knowing we would all die in here, probably painfully too. Lily was starting to cry, I was surprised it took this long. Nick stopped pacing, and pulled Lily into a hug. Hayley pulled a now teary eyed Jeff into a hug, and even though this was no time to laugh, I chuckled a little. Suddenly, the glass slowly began to lift, and everybody pulled away from each other to rush to Jacob's side. I was the first one over to him, and I pressed my ear softly to his chest, listening for a heart beat. There was one. Emily stuck two fingers just a centimeter below his nose to check if he was breathing. She nodded her head and hope filled her eyes. Jacob might actually make it! "Tristen, grab his waist, I will get his arms. Lets take him over to that lump of cloth," Nick ordered, lifting Jacob's arms easily. I went for his waist, and was surprised to find he wasn't that heavy; even with all that muscle. After we picked him up, he legs came right off, landing with a thud on the floor. I closed my eyes for a moment and tried not to barf. Emily, Lily, Hayley and Jeff pushed past us so they didn't have to look at it. Couldn't blame them, it wasn't everyday something like this happened. Emily grabbed a couple of cloths before running up to Jacob and wrapping them around the open wound. Blood eventually stopped gushing out and I sighed in relief, that sight was not one I wanted to keep. We carefully carried him over to the pile of cloth in the corner by one of the doors. Sure, it didn't look that clean, but anything was better than the hard, dirty floor. "Need any help with that?" Somebody asked behind me. I turned around after setting Jacob down. It was the weird ringleader, Ryan I think. He winked at Emily and anger boiled inside me. Who did he think he was? Flirting with her, especially after all of this. "What do you want?" I hissed. Ryan looked at me, amusement glimmered in his eyes and this annoyed me even more. "Tristen, why are you so sour?" He asked lightly. Ryan came over to stand by me and put an arm around me like best friends did. I shook it off quickly and pushed him away. "Hmm, well I think I will take off, see you later!" He said with enthusiasm. Emily's mouth hung open at his casual departure. Ryan was acting like he was our friend, which he was far from. Jacob was dieing and Brianna was dead. Not just normal dead either, they had been tortured and murdered. "We have to kill that son of a bitch," Hayley whispered. Nick turned to her and nodded his head, as did Lily and Jeff. I nodded and soon all eyes were on Emily, waiting for her response. "We can't kill him," she murmured, staring straight ahead to where he once stood, "we have to torture him first, kill all his little workers." My eyes widened, she was right. Killing all of Ryan's minions would make him feel hopeless and scared, it was perfect. Hayley looked at Jacob suddenly, who was moaning and twitching his fingers slightly. Nick kneeled down next to him and whispered something to Jacob. He opened his eyes slowly and looked down at his legs. Letting out a quiet whimper he reached down to touch the nubs. Did he not feel pain? His legs were burned and fell off, how was he not in pain? I took a closer look at his face and saw fresh tears forming in his eyes. Jacob was trying to hold in the screams. "Jacob?" Jeff whispered. Jacob finally let out an agonizing scream of pain and rubbed what was left of his leg. "Whlatt haplpenled?!?" He yelled out slurring his words a bit. The pain in his voice stung me a little and my head started to hurt from exhaustion. Before anybody could answer Jacob's question a loud noise filled the hall, like a screeching sound and suddenly Jacob was sucked into the wall. Shock spread quickly through me as I thought over what just happened. But before my mind could clearly process this he was spit back out. This time though, he was a liquid. Chunks of skin were covering the floor and shredded insides were spewed in every direction. The smell that followed curled in my stomach and I could hold it in. I threw up over Jacob's scattered remains and turned away from the god awful sight. "Lets go now," Nick said slowly pushes us all down the hallway toward where the thing that hurt Jacob came from. "STOP." someone behind us yelled. We didn't stop though, by now we knew better than to fall for this evil house's tricks. "I said STOP," it yelled again. This time Nick and Hayley were throw into the wall and we all stopped to help them back up. I looked over my shoulder at the thing that was causing the problem. It was a little girl with orange frizzy hair covered in dried blood. Her eyes were black and evil, a smirk was on her face and dried blood streamed down from her eyes. She had a plain white dress that was shredded at the ends and her bare feet were blue. "Thats more like it," she annouced. Her voice reminded me of the little girl from the exorcist, deep and evil. "Oh my god," Lily whispered and she looked at me wide eyed, "that's Satan's daughter." Shocked, I turned to the little demon and she smiled at me and squinted her eyes. Harsh Pain shot through my body and I yelled out in agony. It stung like nothing I have ever felt and tears started to run down my face. It felt like my body was set on fire while millions of insects ate away at my muscles. Suddenly the pain stopped and I fell to the floor weakened. Tiredly I looked up and saw the little devil child sinking into the floor. The look on her face told me this was just a 'Hello'. TO BE CONTINUED

So scary

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Hmmmm. This is so so scary.

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Nawa fo d smal girl she is evil.

Dis Is so bad what are you guys gonna do now

Nawao, scary indeed . . . . thanks for advising us not to read it at nite

Oh My

So scary indeed

Chapter 6: Emily's POV: Tristen didn't look too bad, but I helped him up anyway. Whatever that was that just caused him pain scared the shit out of me and everybody else. Lily said it was Satan's daughter, but is that really possible? Even then why would she be here... "We have to get out now," Jeff stated and everybody gave him a look. For the smartest one here he sure was good at saying something so incredibly dumb that Brianna wouldn't even of said it. "No duh Sherlock! What do you think we were trying to do? Find something to eat?" Hayley snapped. At the sound of food my stomach growled. When was the last time I ate? The last time any of us ate? How long had we even been in here... Nick whipped out his cell phone and checked the time, "It's almost midnight, we came at like what? Seven?" he stated flipping his phone closed and stuffing it back in his pocket. "You have a phone?!?" Lily screamed. My eyes grew wide and I whipped the phone back out of his pocket. "You fucking idiot what the hell is the matter with you? You had a phone the whole time and you didn't call anybody? Why?" Tristen yelled at him. I lifted the phone into the air and looked for a signal, but nothing. "Tristen chill, it doens't have reception," I announced trying to calm Tristen down. Nick looked angry though, and he wasn't the type of person to let someone just yell at him like that. He furrowed his brows in anger. "Thank you! Don't you think I tried? It didn't have a signal you bastered," Nick shot back. Tristen took an intimidating step closer to Nick. Even though Nick was at least a foot taller, he took a hesitant step back. "You still could of told us you had it!" Jeff chimed in throwing his hands into the air. Hayley chuckled and shoved him a little. Crap, now everybody was turning against each other! Jeff pushed Hayley back and they glared at each other for a second. "For being the smartest one here you sure are a retard! What was he suppose to do? Its not like he could of used it you dumbass!" She shouted right in Jeff's face. Jeff glared at her through his glasses, you could practiclly feel the emotions running off him, anger, sadness, fear. "At least he's not a bitch," Lily shrieked at Hayley. Hayley turned on her heal and marched over to Lily opening her mouth to speak while pointing her finger straight in Lily's face. They had a little stare down for a minute. We were turning on each other, it was obvious we were the real monsters here. But that's what Isaac and his band of freaky killers wanted, they wanted us to tear each other apart so they wouldn't have to. "I think your the bitch in this situation Lily!" Hayley shouted back at Lily. Nick gasped at her and I decided to put an end to this madness. "You guys stop!" I yelled stepping in between the two, "don't you see what is happening? They are turning us against each other, trying to tear us apart." Lily nodded and came to stand by me, "Exactly, we can't let them do that, it will just weaken us." Tristen and Nick both looked down in shame and I placed my hand on Tristen's back. He looked up and smiled at me. "Ok, so your phone has no signal?" Hayley asked getting into bossy mode. Nick shook his head no and Hayley sighed. I looked back down at the phone and my eyes widened with hope. It had two bars! "You guys it has a signal!" I shrieked and slide open the keyboard. Lily screamed in excitement and everybody started to talk at once. "Call my brother," Nick shouted over everybody. I gave him a look of confusion, "He's on the force remember?" My heart beat quickened with hope as I punched in Nick's brother's number. It rang and suddenly the hallway fell silent. "Hello?" "Oh my gosh Collin!" I sobbed into the phone. My knuckles began to turn white as I clutched the phone with everything I had in me. Hayley started to jump up and down with excitment and Nick let out a huge breath of relief. "He answered?" Lily shouted twirling around with happiness. For the first time, I think we had hope, just a little hope that we might get out of here alive. Everybody had huge goofy smiles on their faces. "Emily? Why are you calling on Nick's phone?" he asked and I could just imagine him scratching his head like Nick always does. "You need to bring help Collin, Brianna and Jacob are dead and-" "Whoa wait they're dead? How?" Collin demanded, I could hear shuffling on the other end as I assumed he got up from his bed considering it was like one o- clock. Tristen placed his hands on my shoulders to calm me before I started to hyperventilate because I was really starting to. "They were murdered Collin! We're in this haunted house and its like real Brianna was cut up and painted and Jacob was shredded and there are these dolls and clowns and scary ghosts and we need you to bring lots of help because there's too much in here for us and just you to handle," I said quickly into the phone. Tears were streaming down my face and Tristen pulled me into his chest. Hayley took the phone from my hand and spoke to Collin, "Collin just please bring alot of men we are trapped in here and may die any minute," she said calmly holding everything in. "Um ok which haunted house are you guys at?" Collin rushed into the phone. Now you could really tell he was quickly moving around his apartment. "Its the one on the corner of Sibley," Hayley said softly into the phone, she then flipped it shut and sighed out loud. Now we could only hope he would get here quick. "Umm, you guys I'm feeling a little dizzy," Jeff announced and crashed to the floor. We all gasped and ran over to his limp body. Yes, this was really bad. We needed food soon, but there was no telling if we would get some. Hayley shook Jeff's body slowly and whispered his name. "Jeff? Jeff can you hear me?" Nick said slowly lifting him back to his feet. Jeff opened his eyes again and shook his head. Great, now we had starvation to think about, soon sleep deprivation would get to us too. "Should we sleep?" I asked mostly to myself. Tristen looked at me and placed a hand on my forehead. His eyes filled with worry and I started to sweat a little. "Emily are you okay you look.... well you look dead," Hayley said scooting closer to me. I nodded, even though it was a pure lie. I felt dead, like I would collapse any minute from exhaustion. But I had bigger things to worry about, if I fell asleep there's no telling what the things in this house would do. "We need to sleep somewhere," Tristen muttered scooping me up in his arms. He carried me through the hall for about two minutes until he kicked open a door and walked in. Unlike the other rooms, this one was lite pretty well. It was just like the room we found Brianna in, all pink and childlike. It scared the shit out of me. "Come on you can sleep in here," Tristen said setting me down on the surprisingly soft bed. He got up to leave but I grabbed hold of his arm and pulled him into the bed with me. No way in hell was I going to sleep in here alone.

My dear, you shouldn't.

Dis is so scary

So scary mehn!! Waiting for the Next episode

I dn't think i can sleep dis nite oh!

Becos na nite me dey get chance 2 dey read dis ur story

This is really scary ooo. Pls no sleep,there o, u a'int safe dear

scary!

Sleep? Where?

dx z serious and scary.. If i shld b in dia skul... No sleep til am out of dat hauz.

Chapter 7: Collin (Nick's Big Brother's) POV: As soon as I got that call from my brother's friends, I was out of my apartment. Okay, so maybe I was only twenty two and still in the academy, but I still had the whole police force in my back pocket. There was no way I was just going to let the police handle this without me. I burst in the doors of the station and immediately went into the back where my best friend worked, he got out two months before I did. "Quil!," I yelled running around looking for him. He popped up from behind his desk and grabbed my shoulders to calm me. "Whoa, chill Collin! What is it?" I sucked in a big breath, "I just got a call from Nick, he and a couple of his friends are stuck in a haunted house, apparently two people are dead and everybody else's life is in danger," I stated. Quil's eyebrows furrowed in concern and he let go of me, walking back over to his desk. Quil picked up his phone and whispered something I didn't catch, but I assumed he was calling for some back up. "Where is this haunted house exactly?," he asked suddenly serious. I picked my brain trying to remember what Emily said. "The corner of Sibley," I announced and Quil suddenly froze. "That one?" "Umm, ya," I stuttered,"Whats wrong with that one?" Quil took a seat and pulled open a drawer, pulling out a large, thick brown file. He opened it and started to flip through till he got to a list of names,"See all these names? These are all people that went missing. They were last seen going to this haunted house. We closed it down though so I don't understand..." "Wait," I shouted, Quil stopped talking and set his eyes one me. A memory flashed into my head, something about Nick going to the house, "Nick.... said.... he was going to a haunted house.... a closed one... I remember now!" "This doesn't make sense, the owner was arrested last week,Andrew Roy. So who is running this thing?," Quil asked himself shuffling through all the papers in the thick file. "Hey Collin, can you name all the people he is with?" I thought again, sure I knew all Nick's friends but I didn't know which ones he was with. "Well I know he's with Emily Valentine and Hayley Lawson, but that's all I know." "How do you know this?," Quil asked staring right into my eyes. "He called me...," I said, quickly I flipped my phone out and called Nick's number. It rang for a couple minutes before going to voicemail. I screamed and threw the phone at the wall with anger. It shattered to pieces and I sighed. "Wait," Quil suddenly shouted. I looked at him with confusion and he shot out of his seat. "It says Andrew Roy has a twin brother! A man by the name of... Isaac." And with that, Quil jumped up ran around the whole place, telling officers to get in there cars and go to the mysterious house where my brother and his friends were trapped. We got there in record time, though that was no surprise considering we were zooming down the highway with the siren going off. We pulled up to the house and I gasped. What the hell was Nick thinking going in here? The paint on the house was peeling and all the windows were boarded up. A dense fog surrounded the house and half dead trees hung around it. There was even a creepy rocking chair on the porch that was rocking like someone had just been sitting there. A chill ran through my spine and I hopped out of the car. "Okay, everybody buddy up and we will go in two at a time, everybody split up and look for anyone alive," Quil announced. Someone laughed, "You want us to use the buddy system?," he asked chuckling again. Anger boilied up inside me and I stomped over to the jack ass. "Listen here, my little brother and at least three other people are trapped in there with god knows what so I suggest you shut the fuck up and do your job, or is that too much for your little brain to understand?," I said harshly right into his face. He gulped and nodded his head. I went to stand by Quil and he gave me a flashlight. We walked up to the house first and slowly opened the creaky door. We were hit with an intense smell of death, and my eyes began to water uncontrollably. As soon as we stepped in the door slammed shut behind us and echoed down the dark hallway. It looked like hurricane Katrina hit. There was little bits of dry wall all over the floor, but it was a deep brown color. Wires hung from the ceiling and looked as if they were chewed. There was even some graffiti on the wall, but all of it was unfinished. "Turn on your flashlight, Collin," Quil whispered. I felt around the flashlight looking for the switch and flipped it on. Quil and I began to walk down the hallway, looking for any sign of my brother and his friends. A rat ran across my foot and I shot back with a small yelp. It was more like a mutant rat, gray, nasty and about the size of a small dog. "Nasty," I whispered to myself stomping on the ugly little creature. It let out a small squeak and started to squirm a little until I stomped on it again. I looked at the stained wall, and when I looked forward again noticed two people standing about ten feet from us. The taller one had curly, dark brown hair and brown eyes. He was kind of tan and wore a white dress shirt tucked into dark jeans with black suspenders. The other one also had dirty blonde hair that was kind of curly and green eyes. He wore a gray t-shirt and dark jeans with black converse. His hair was kind of spiked. Then, I realized who those men were, they were us, Quil and I. "Wait, is that...us?" Quil asked suddenly, he cocked his head in confusion and pointed his flashlight straight at the people. The weird thing was, they weren't moving the same way we were, so it wasn't a mirror. "Who are you?" I shouted at them, our twins walked forward till they were about two feet away and I was now certain they were us. They looked at each other, and suddenly melted into the floor. Someone else rised up from the floor though. A little girl with black hair draped in front of her face. She was wearing what looked like a hospital gown, but it was an icky brown color. "Quil," I whispered hitting him lightly on the chest. He looked up at the girl and squinted his eyes. Suddenly, the girl screamed a piercing shriek and I dropped the flashlight to cover my ears. Terror shot through me. She stopped and laughed, the laugh was like an evil and psycho laugh and I bent to pick the flash light up again "Wanna see something cool?" She asked stepping closer to us. I jumped back but keep my eyes on the little creep. She bent backwards un-naturally and stuck her stomach up into the air. She twisted back and then twisted her leg around all the way. The little girl went back to normal for a second, just to twist her stomach around.A loud cracking sound filled the air and blood began to seep from an invisible wound on her belly. "Quil!" I shouted stepping back even more. Quil followed my lead and stepped back too, but the girl would not have that.

Mayb d next ep ll scare me sha

Chapter 7 continued: "So you wanna play hide and seek?" she asked. I shook my head vigorously and looked beside me, but Quil was gone. I looked ahead too, but the little girl was also gone. "Quil?" I yelled out in a scared voice, "Quil?" No answer. My legs were shaking, but I decided to walk on down the hallway. My voice rang out as I continued to call Quil's name, but again and again it went unanswered. In a way, I was glad it went unanswered, that meant I wouldn't bump into anything else scary or deadly. I was suddenly led into what seemed like a basement, but I didn't go down any stairs. There were pipes lining the walls and gases seeped through some of them, it smelled like rust and pollution. At least there was more light here, but it was a creepy yellow color. I walked on, pointing my flashlight at the pipes every time one would make a sound, it was really quite un-nerving. Out of the corner of my eye I noticed something move, a shadow. It moved into a dark corner and my hands began to shake. Ever so slowly, I flashed the beam of light from the flashlight into the corner. Lucky for me, nothing was there, but I wasn't totally convinced. The hallway seemed to go on forever, pipes still lined the wall and gases still filled the air. Suddenly, a ticking sound seemed to sound out, it was as if someone was taping the pipes or something. I whipped around, yet nothing was there. I saw something out of the corner of my eye again, and quickly my flashlight in the direction of it. Jumping back in surprise, my eyes grew wide at the thing crouched in the corner. It was a little boy, but not a normal little boy. He was pale with light blond hair and piercing green eyes. He opened his mouth when he noticed me, and a snake like creature began to crawl out and hiss at me. That's when I decided to run, run the hell out of the creepy hallway/basement. The next hallway I ended up in looked like a normal hotel hallway, and for some reason it was the scariest. There were doors on either side, and I opened each one, looking for something, or someone. The next one I opened though was like a little girls room, flowered wallpaper and light pink carpet. There was even a little table with fake tea cups and cookies. There was a little girl sitting there, and even though I was scared out of my wits I ran up to her like an idiot. Placing my hand on her shoulder I turned her around and screamed. I recognized her face almost immediately, Brianna. "Brianna?" I gaged, it was obvious she was dead so I ran out of the room and slammed the door behind me. It felt like I would throw up any minute, so I placed my hands on my knees and tried to catch my breath. I looked back up, but I was in a different place, it looked like I was in a school hallway. There were white lockers on the walls, and white linoleum floor. It was brightly lite and it stung my eyes a little considering I just came out of the dark. There was a slight scraping sound but I didn't think much of it, that is until it got louder and louder. Slowly turning around I looked at the corner of the hall and waited for the thing making the scraping sound to come out. Then when a girl came around the corner. You could barely tell it was a girl though, because she was extremely bloody, every inch of her skin was bloody and her blonde hair was stained. Another thing, she was wrapped in a large, clear body bag that was dragged across the floor at her feet. Leaving a trail of thick, red blood. She got closer and closer, and finally I was able to snap out of my state of shock and process what was happening. If it really was happening, what if my head was making this all up? The girl keep getting closer and closer. "Leave me alone!" I yelled at it as i took off full speed in the opposite direction. "Help me!" she screamed behind me but I kept going, she wasn't one of Nick's friends so it must of been a trap. Soon enough, I ran out of breath and stopped to get a break. I closed my eyes tight and started to pry. "Please please please god let me find who I'm looking for and get out of here alive," I whispered to myself. When I opened my eyes I was in a different place again, it was starting to make me dizzy. I couldn't tell what this place was, after looking into a room I figured it out, I was still in the school. Only this hall was dark, and the air seemed a blueish color. There was writing on the way, and it looked like finger painting too. The painting was actually kind of creepy, no doubt a little kid did it, but It was pictures of people, people with X's for eyes, and some were smeared with red paint. Slowly swinging one of the doors open, I walked in cautiously. There was desks and chairs scattered every where, and a giant black board at the front. There was a window too, and I made sure to remember that when looking for a way out. There was writing on it, and I stepped closer to get a better look. There was a couple names, Brianna, Jacob, Lily, Nick, Hayley, Jeff, Tristen and Emily. Shock filled my head as I realized those were Nick's friends. Fear took over as I got a closer look, there was an X above Brianna and Jacob, and Lily's name was circled with the powdery white chalk. "Find something interesting?"

Opppss....diz almost scare me!!

So scary.

Dose with X are already dead,following

Pls collins shud come with Reinforcement ASAP

Hmmmmm, Emily u' re the last to die the names written on the wall re how they re going to be killed, Brianna and Jacob dead d nxt person z lily

Nxt

Are they going to make it out of there. I guess nt all.

dose wit dx *X* ar already death... *0* next to die.... Pray u will survive and save d remaininq dat will survive too....

dis is so scary

Hmmm so scary bt interesting to read chai this house na die no way out oo

I wish yu sound sleep in a haunted house oo

hmm scary but, i only read @ night. Though not intentional

Guy abeg dnt scare us out of here mbok

Chapter 8: Emily's POV: There was a ear splitting scream, and that's what I woke up too. I sat up quickly and paused to let the dizziness fade away. That's when I noticed where I was, it was a bright pink room with frill and lace and flowers everywhere. It actually scared me a bit! Someone beside me stirred, and I glanced over to find Tristen, in bed.... with me. Of course the first thing that came to mind was the worst possible scenario, but then I noticed not only were we both dressed; we were also not somewhere familiar. Memories came rushing back at an alarming rate, and I began to feel dizzy again. There was another scream, and I remembered why I woke up in the first place. "Tristen?" I asked almost screaming, I nudged him a bit before his beautiful eyes fluttered open. Wait... beautiful? Tristen sat up almost as fast as I did, and groaned while resting his hand on his forehead. "Emily? What is it?" he asked concern filling his eyes. A scream filled the air again, and tears welled up in my eyes for what felt like the thousandth time sense we were here. "Shit!" he mumbled quickly hopping off the bed and throwing the door open. I followed hastily on his heel and soon we were inside a room with Nick and Lily. There was someone else inside but I couldn't tell who because Tristen held an arm out in front of me. "What the fuck is that?" Tristen shrieked, and I pushed his arm down. There was a man, with an extremely white face and dark, black, huge eyes. He wore a black shirt and a black suit but with no shoes. The man hissed, and came full speed at Tristen with his arms held out. Tristen dodged him, taking me down to the floor with him. "What is going on in here?" Jeff asked running in. He stopped in his tracks and stared wide eyed at the demon man, it was actually kind of funny the way his glasses were all askew. He stared down and Tristen and I next, and I saw a shiver go through him. The demon man hissed again, and ran toward Jeff suceeding in slamming him into the hallway wall. I heard the sound of a bone crack, and Jeff wailed out in pain as the man opened his mouth so wide the sides started to crumble and bleed. "Stop!" someone yelled down the hallway, everyone even the man's attention was focused on the whoever yelled. It was a guy, a rather cute guy with brown hair and a slight beard, he also had on a cop uniform. "Quil!" Nick shouted and the man who's name was apparently Quil ran to us. Nick pulled him into a bone crushing hug that screamed relief, and happiness flew through my system. Someone was finally here to save us! The demon hissed again, but let Jeff go and sank into the floor. Jeff fell to the floor and Hayley was at his side at once. Nick was still hugging Quil. "What was that?" Quil asked but everybody ignored him as we caught our breath. "Where's Collin?" Nick asked pulling away and suddenly turning serious. My whole body shivered and I realized who Quil was, he was Collin's best friend. But... where was Collin? "I don't know, we got separated and then I got lost," Quil stated letting a tear fall down his cheek. Man, he was in here alone, I can only imagine what that might have been like. Quil closed his eyes for a moment and sucked in a deep breath, before slowly releasing it to calm himself. If you ask me, it didn't work. Quil looked like shit. "Lost?" Nick repeated. Quil nodded softly, and let out a little sob. Nick started to pace around the dingy hallway. Someone cleared their throat behind me, and I turned to see Ryan standing there in a different ringleader outfit. It looked almost exactly like the other one, but the hem of this one was black. "What did you do to Collin?" Lily shouted at him. Ryan smiled his world famous smirk, and stepped forward to grab a piece of Lily's blond hair. "Sweet Lilian, why do you assume I did something? I didn't do anything, why if anything I helped that hopeless bastard. Oh, and a heads up, someone here wants to meet you," Ryan announced and twirled around like he always does to leave. "Someone... wants... to meet.... us?" Hayley stuttered out nervously. A slow and thick tear rolled down my cheek, leaving a trail of salty wetness. It rolled down to my chin, before falling off to the ground. More tears followed and Tristen grabbed hold of me, cradling me in his arms. I hid my face in his shoulder, and let out all the stress of everything. Finally, it felt good to let it off my chest... and literally onto Tristen's chest. "What are we going to do?" Lily asked wiping away a stray tear. Nobody said anything for a little while. "What we've been doing, keep walking forward and see what horror awaits," Nick annouced. Again, nobody said anything, but instead nodded in agreement. Slowly, I turned around and walked straight into somebody's chest. "Whoa," they said and when I turned away, I noticed who it was. Collin. "Collin! You're alright!" Quil shouted running up to Collin and hugging him tightly. Nick ran up too to give Collin a hug. There was something in Collin's eyes though, fear maybe? He pushed Quil and Nick away, but not harshly. "You guys, we have to get out of here now, I know whos next to die!" Collin exclaimed. Everybody stopped in their tracks and stared at Collin wide eyed, his eyes searched the hallway till he found who he was looking for. Just then, there was a shrill hiss, and the same demon from before popped out of nowhere behind Lily. It smiled a wicked grin before grabbing hold of her neck with its claws and slowly \ ripping it off. You could hear the sound of Lily's skin tearing, and she screamed bloody murder while the demon tore her head clean off. Blood spurted from the open wound, and Lily's headless body fell to the ground. The demon stuffed her head straight down his throat without chewing and it stuck out from his neck. The demon man smiled evilly again, and picked up her body, he then threw it at us and it flew straight toward Collin. Lily's body hit him and pinned him to the ground with the weight. "Lily!" Nick screamed out letting tears fall down his pale face. The demon was gone in the blink of an eye, and everybody burst out crying. "Get her off of Collin," Quil shouted keeping his calm. Hayley and Tristen lifted the bloody body off Collin and he popped up off the floor. I could feel breathing on my neck, and turned my head slightly to see who it was. It was a man, with long, straight black hair and bright beautiful blue eyes. He was pale, and slightly buff. He wore a black shirt and black gloves, with dark denim pants and black shoes. "Enjoying the show?"

Fear don catch me o.

This story is damn scary

Really scary ooo Can I finish dis sha may God help me oo

Hehehe.. I'm yet to see what these 'demon-gentlemen' see in Emily; from Ryan to this blue-eyed man??

oh no! am scared

fear don catch me hia... But dey enjoy d show.

About to pee in my pants cos of dis story(expression

So scary.

Hmmmmn another horror story....

Yes we r enjoying d show

Chapter 9: Emily's POV: His words chilled me, but the look on his face confused me. Instead of a smirk or a cocky grin, he looked sad, almost scared. Tristen protectively stood in front of me, holding out his arm like I've seen him do a lot since we've been here. "Who are you?" Tristen spat at the black haired boy. The boy furrowed his eyebrows and opened his mouth to speak, but was interrupted by Quil suddenly bursting in front of everybody. "I know who you are, you're that kid.... Cameron Deaply, you went missing two months ago," Quil stated cocking his head to the side. The boy, whos name was Cameron I guess nodded his head sadly. Wait... this boy has been missing for two months? "Yeah, I am. A couple of my friends and I thought this would be a fun thing to do on a Friday," Cameron said softly. That's when I noticed a couple things about Cameron, he was cut up. Not alot, but he had scratches on his arms and a couple on his neck. They weren't deep, but they looked painful. I stepped forward around Tristen and placed my hand softly on Carmeron. He looked at me for a moment before smiling slightly. His beautiful blue eyes sparkled, and we didn't speak for a moment. "Wait, what happened to the other kids?" Nick interrupted, and the smile faded from Cameron's face. The smile on my face involuntarily turned to a frown too. "Cameron!" someone yelled running up to our group. She came the same way Cameron came from, and she almost looked like him too. She had deep brown eyes, long, curly black hair and was kind of pale. She too, was kind of cut up and wore a jean skirt and a yellow frilly tank top. "Are you.... Camilla Deaply?" Quil asked pointing to the black haired girl. She nodded slowly and I noticed a few tears escape from her eyes. "Whoa whoa wait... what is going on here?" Hayley asked loudly throwing her arms into the air dramatically. Camilla and Cameron both turned to look at Hayley. "We have been stuck in here for two months," Camilla whispered wiping a tear from her eye. That must have been hell, we could barely last a day in here and these two have been stuck for months. I snuck a glance at Cameron, and he turned to look at me. His eyes met mine and butterflies erupted into my stomach. "So... theres no way out?" Jeff asked quietly. Cameron shook his head slowly, and suddenly all my hope, all my sprirts fell. We were never going to get out of here... at least alive. "There is one way out," someone yelled down the hallway, we all turned in the direction of their voice. It was Ryan, and he leaned against the dingy wall with his arms crossed over his chest. The usual smirk plastered on his face. "You!" Collin announced pointing an accusing finger at Ryan. His smirk grew wider and he walked casually over to us. Collin stepped back as did Quil, I guess those two weren't used to Ryan popping up yet. "Theres a way out?" Hayley stated standing in front of Ryan. Ryan shook his head yes, and hope filled my insides again. "Where? Where is it?" asked Camilla. You could hear to joy in her voice, although I had the feeling Ryan wouldn't just tell us where it was. Knowing him, he would make us work for it. I was willing though, if it meant we could get out and no more people die. Memories filled my head, and I looked around at our group of people. Nick, Hayley, Jeff, Tristen, Collin, Quil, Cameron and Camilla. Jacob, Lily and Brianna were all dead, but it didn't even feel like it anymore. Sure, there was lots of sobbing when Brianna died, but after that we just kind of guessed it would happen. It was like I was numb to any pain. "I will give you a hint," Ryan stated teasingly. Camilla's features switched from happiness to fear, as did everybody else's,"you must pass a test to get to the exit." Fear was deffinitly the main emotion now. A test? That could mean anything, we could be doing the test right now and not even know it. Ryan strolled over to me, and started to pet my hair. Cameron quickly slapped his hand away and Ryan smirked at him, before walking on down the hall. That was one freaky dude.

May God save u guys

Following.

Really Scary story Yu would be stuck for a year

Quest for adventure...i hope u guyz finds a way outta dat haunted house n no more deaths...wah z Ryan upto??? Hmmmn..xcared.

May God save yu oooooo......emily op Ryan doesn't av a ********** 4 u

Tell me how cameron and camila killed some of u guyz... I don't know why I LOVE HORROR movies/stories... Cos m basically avin fun reading dis piece jes lyk wen i watched CHUCKY at midnite...

He is sure freaky.

There is fire on the mountain!!!

Test nke... Pray say una pass dx test.

Which kind test @dis dieminute abeg show dem road ooooo. @konphido u remained me of CHUCKY i like dat movie cos i always laf n fear @d same time i even d scream out wif fear sef

Chapter 10: "We have to find the way out of here," Hayley announced, you could see the determination in her eyes, but it wouldn't be as easy as she thought. "What do you think we've been trying to do throw a party?" Tristen asked sarcastically. Hayley shot him a look, but Tristen ignored it and turned to look at were Ryan once stood. "Ryan said we had to pass a test to get to the exit... but that could mean anything," Jeff stated. I noticed something then, we had became to know Ryan so well that we used his name. We didn't just say, that freaky dude said... we actually used his name. "Well let's just keep walking, I mean we don't have anything else," Nick stated still wiping tears from his eyes. Dang, that boy must of really liked Lily. I mean, we all did, but he must have been in love with her. Shoving back my emotions, I took a weary step forward. Everyone was silent as we slowly walked on, I wasn't even aware of where we were going. Soon, the silent air was filled with a terrible sound. It was like electronic dance music, and out of nowhere, an extremely ugly clown appeared. "Who wants to dance?" It asked letting out a shrill laugh, Cameron turned around and grabbed hold of my hand. He started to run, dragging me behind him. Nick followed, dragging Camilla. When I turned around slightly to make sure everyone was following, I was suddenly pushed hard into a wall. Pain shot up through my shoulder, where I had collided the hard brick wall. It was just barley bleeding, and when I looked beside me I noticed Cameron against the wall too. The stupid clown pushed us. When I looked up he was staring down at me, a scary and ugly grin on his face. The dance blared out louder, and the clown pulled me up by the hands. "Lets dance!" the clown shouted roughly pulling my arms forward. I slammed into his chest, and closed my eyes tightly, I could feel myself shaking with fear. "Let her go you ugly ass bastard!" Cameron yelled. I opened my eyes to see Cameron take a baseball bat and swing at the clown. The bat connected with it's head, and wiped it clean off. The head landed on the floor a couple feet away, and I practically barfed at the sight. Blood was everywhere, but it was more of an orangesh color and it smelled like ravioli. The worst part though, was that the when the clown's neck stopped bleeding it was a pinkish color. "How did it stop bleeding so fast?" I shouted but didn't really need to know the answer. The clown ran at us, and I was shocked to say the least. It's head was gone, yet it was still alive? This sent shivers down my spine and Cameron took my hand leading me out of the way. We began to run down the hall again and soon meet up with the others who were still running. The clown had stopped chasing us, so we all slowed down to a stop. Taking in huge gulps of air, I took a second to catch my breath. Tristen came over and wrapped his arms around me, giving me a tight hug. "We are fighting a losing battle," Camilla stated running her had through her long black hair. Nobody said anything about that, it was still too soon to give up hope. "NO, no we aren't... we can't give up yet! that's just what they want!" Hayley announced throwing her arms in the air dramatically. She was about to go on about how we couldn't give up hope but Jeff butted in. "Will you give it up? We obviously can't win! its over, the only thing we can do now is wait for them to kill us," Jeff stated. I noticed tears starting to for in his eyes and walked over to comfort him a little. Again, nobody said anything. I was getting kind of used to the silence that followed after somebody said something hurtful yet true. About ten minutes had passed with nobody saying anything. Everybody was kind of tired, even though Nick, Hayley, Jeff, Tristen and I had gone to bed last night, nobody really had slept well. I was thinking intensely about everything that has happened since we were in here, trying to remember every little thing people said, everything thing we have saw, and every little thing we walked pass. I thought about when Collin showed up, and the things he said. I know hows next I shot up from my sitting position on the floor and looked at Collin. He stared back at me for a second before confusion filled his eyes. "What?" I continued to stare at him, trying to think if that's what he had really said. "You said before.... that... that you knew who was next?" I choked out. It sounded more like a question than a statement, but I didn't care. Understanding crossed his face, and he slowly stood up. He nodded slightly. "How." I demanded softly. He thought it over for a second before speaking. "When I was first separated from Quil, I wander around a bit. I walked down a hallway and entered a classroom.... and there was a chalk board that had a bunch of names on it. Nick, Tristen, You, Hayley, Jeff, Lily, Jacob, Brianna and a couple I didn't really pay attention too. Brianna and Jacob's names were crossed off and I remembered you saying they were dead so I knew why their names were crossed off. Then Lily's name was circled... so I knew she was next. Then that weird dude came in and helped me find you guys." Collin explained. Disgust was the only thing I felt. Not only did they have to torture and kill us, but they had to plan it out and make sure we knew we were going to die? ".... Can you show us the room?" I asked slowly. Collin's eyes immediately filled with fear and I wondered what he went through to find the room. "I don't even know the way back to it," he said softly playing with his fingers slightly. Quil patted his back with a look of understanding. Did Quil have to go through hell to find us too? I really didn't want to make Collin go through that again, but we needed to find that room. "Then I guess we will just have to start were you and Quil got separated."

Following....

waiting.

Owkay....wah'next???

Wat next

This once everyday isn't gud ooo

GOD will save all of u.

Mayb u cn find ur way if u get d class

Chapter 11: Ryan's POV: Slowly I crossed out Lily's name on the chalkboard, smirking to myself. These people where just too easy to freak out, all you had to do is show up every now and then and give them a pointless riddle or something. I already caught that Collin kid looking at this chalkboard, which is just what I wanted. I thought for a moment about everybody and who I should circle to go next. Smiling to myself, I made my decision and circled the name, carelessly dropping the chalk to the floor. There was a shuffling sound by the door and I looked over to see Harry, a little boy who died fifty years ago. He had been raped, and torn limp from limp. Grimacing at the sight of him, I looked at him sternly, "Leave. Now." I ordered and he bowed his head in respect, but before he left he limped over and handed me a shoe box. I knew exactly what was inside the moment I took the box from him. Smirking, I quietly said out loud, "Things are about to get one hundred times more interesting." Cameron's POV: I hadn't felt this good in months. Not that I was happy that more people had been trapped in here. And I certainly wasn't happy that more people have already died, and tortured. But in a weird sick sense I was happy I was no longer alone with just my sister. I was happy more people were here to help us all get out. And I was happy that they were this determined. "I... I think this is it," That guy Quil announced sounding unsure of himself. He stopped walking and everybody else did too. Emily was walking in front of me, and she suddenly stopped causing me to crash into her back. Grabbing hold of her before she fell, I smiled as she looked up at me with her beautiful green eyes. "Sorry," she said smiling widely. I looked over at Tristen while he glared at me. Man, what was that guy's problem? I gave him a look that said 'what the hell' and he just glared at me even more. Looking down at Emily again I smiled when I realized she didn't pull away from my hold yet. "Yeah, I think this is it, I remember.... I remember the little girl," Collin stated closing his eyes for a moment. I understood exactly what he had went through. Being in here for months has caused me to experience almost everything this house has to offer. A hand touched my shoulder and I jumped while my heart accelerated. "Chill bro its just me," Camilla said removing her hand from my shoulder. Letting out a deep breath I let go of Emily and turned to face her. Camilla was everything to me now, being the older brother I had always felt the need to protect her, but ever sense we got here the need has intensified. *flashback* "Dude this is gonna be fucking awesome!" My best friend Andrew exclaimed hitting me in the back playfully. Chuckling I gave him a high five as we walked up to the cool looking haunted house. I wasn't going to lie, this looked like some hardcore shit. "Don't pee your pants this time Andrew!" my older brother Jake said. He was my other best friend, even though we were brothers. My brother's girlfriend Kelsey walked up behind us with Camilla in tow. "Hey that was once smart ass!" Andrew said scowling. Jake and I burst out laughing before I turned to Camilla. "What are you doing here?" I asked cocking an eyebrow at her. She gave me a frustrated look before huffing out a breath. "I'm going to a haunted house duh," she stated rolling her eyes at me. "Umm, think not." "She's fine Cameron," Kelsey said wrapping her arms around Jake's neck. Jake nodded in agreement before leaning down to kiss her. Ew, I thought looking away. They really didn't need to suck face in public. "Yes, I am, now lets go!" Camilla chirped happily running up to the entrance. *End of flashback* "So then I went this way," Collin said interrupting my thinking. He pointed down a narrow corridor and started slowly walking down that way. Everyone followed in his path and I made sure to keep my eye on Camilla, like I had sense we got here. Tristen walked up and grabbed Emily's hand, walking with her hand in hand. Were they dating or something? For some reason, that thought angered me and made me feel a little... sad? Now was not the time to start crushing on some girl I didn't even know. Suddenly we were in a hallway, a school hallway, with lockers lining the walls and creepy florescent lights overhead. I didn't remember ever being here, so this house did get worse. The smell was excruciating, it smelled of pure blood and fear, which in turn scared me. What kind of secrets did this part of the house hold. "What the heck," Collin mumbled to himself furrowing his brows. Was he here before? Or did we take a wrong turn.... "What?" Nick asked sounding slightly panicked. Hayley's eyes got kind of wide, and Jeff placed a reasurring hand on her shoulder. It was kind of a weird sight, a nerd reasurring a girl that looked kind of like a badass. "Well, I was here, but I had to walk through a couple other halls to get to it.. I'm just a little confused is all," He stated rubbing his shoulder softly. I sighed, I had learned a long time ago to not try and figure out how that happened. "It just happens, we never figured out why,"I said out loud and everyone turned to look at me, including Emily. "Hello," Someone said behind me. Collin's eyes widened a lot before he took a couple big steps back, holding up his hands. The voice sounded slightly familiar, but also sounded pained. Turning around slowly, I gasped and jumped about ten feet back. Standing directly behind me was a girl, well at least I thought it was a girl. She was standing, which was weird considering she was in a blood filled body bag. She was frowning, well at least I think. "Help me please Cameron," she whispered reaching out to me. I jumped back even farther and gasped again. How did she know my name. Camilla gasped loudly behind me and I turned around to see her eyes watering. "Kelsey?" she said stepping forward a little, I held my arm out but took a closer look at the girl. It was Kelsey, my brother's girlfriend. Well, she was his girlfriend. "Help me!" she screamed at us. That was all it took for all of us to bolt down the hall and around the corner. Taking in a lot of deep breaths I felt a little dizzy. How was that possible? What the hell was going on? Tristen's POV: "What the fuck was that?" I yelled out quickly sucking in air. Damn we had just run like bloody hell away from...well bloody hell.

Expecting nxt episode ooo

Den what next

Am Scare.Hop U Guys Find Ur Way Out Of Dat Hell.

Enjoying d story, next pls

Enjoying every bit. So wat next?

i dey enjoy dx haunted house tour.

Next plz.

Following d story.

If they can find d class room, they can also find their way out.....calculations doh........hope high now

Hmmm..Vhiz iz thrilling

Chapter 12 Emily's POV: "Are you ok Camilla?" Cameron asked. He stopped walked and stood in front of Camilla with a concerned look on his face. I had noticed she was scratching her arm, but didn't really think anything of it. "Mein Arm juckt und schmerzt wirklich," Camilla said, everybody turned to look at her weirdly, what the heck did she just say? "What?" Nick asked raising an eyebrow. Camilla ignored him though and kept scratching at her arm. She was itching it really hard, and I wondered what she said to Cameron. "Warum denkst du, das ist?" Cameron asked in the same language. It actually sounded like German, I could only tell because of the accent. "What the heck are you guys saying?" Hayley asked crossing her arms. Cameron and Camilla ignored her again and she scoffed at them before closing her eyes and letting out a big, deep breath. "German?" I asked and both Cameron and Camilla looked at me. Cameron nodded before looking back at Camilla. "So whats wrong?" Nick asked and Camilla hesitantly looked at Cameron before turning to look Nick in the eyes. "Ummm.... my arms just itches," she stated looking down at the floor and scratching her arm again. Hayley squinted her eyes and widened them with realisation. She pointed at Camilla and opened her mouth to speak. "That's what happened to Quil before he died," Everybody gasped and looked at Camilla, who started to sweat a little. "It is," Collin whispered, looking at Camilla with wide eyes, "Did you get attacked by those parasites, l-like Quil did?" he asked shaking a little. It must have been hard, to lose a best friend you have known for ten years. Actually, I knew what that felt like. I just lost Brianna, Lily, and Jacob. "I don't think I did, but I don't know for sure," Camilla said softly, still scratching her arm. Jeff stepped forward and grabbed her arm, lifting it to observe it. "Well, its obvious you have been scratching it, its starting to get raw, and its bleeding a little, stop scratching it and ignore the irritation," Jeff stated pushing up his glasses. Camilla nodded and put both of her arms by her sides. "So, how do you know German?" Jeff asked staying at Camilla's side. "We were born in Germany, but moved here when I was seven and Cameron was ten. So German is our first language," she said walking ahead with Jeff. Suddenly, there was a loud crashing noise and we paused in fear. "What was that?" Hayley asked grabbing onto Nick's shoulder and stepping behind him. Nick and Collin walked ahead of everyone and leaned against the wall. "Shhh, be very quiet," Nick hissed slowly stepping forward. Nobody made a sound as we all inched forward. There was another crashing sound, and everybody stopped walking again. Nick looked around the corner of the hallway, before ever so slowly creeping forward again. "What the hel-" Nick started, but he stopped talking to turn around, fear clear in his eyes, and started to push us all back, "Go go, now! Go," He yelled pushing us forward. Suddenly, a creature ran out from behind the corner flailing their arms around. I was sure it wasn't human, its face looked burned and scabby, and its eyes were pure black. The clothes on it were shredded, and it was missing an arm. Flesh was hanging from its teeth and it ran at us. "GO!" Nick shouted again and this time we listened. More of the creatures started to run out, about three more, and they were pretty fast. One of them was grabbing at me, and they just barely missed arm. I felt their disgusting finger brush my arm which sent a chill through my body. Letting out a scream, I pushed myself to run faster. He was just about to grab at me again, but Tristen pulled me away and in front of Jeff. "Jeff run faster!" I yelled out behind my shoulder. I looked behind me, just as the mutant creature thing got a good grip on Jeff's shoulders and pulled him down. All the mutants crowded around him and started tearing him to pieces. "Jeff! No!" Hayley yelled stopping in her tracks. Everybody else stopped too, trying to pull her along but she wouldn't budge. Tristen grabbed my left arm, and Cameron grabbed my right arm and both started pulling me forward, Collin, Nick and Camilla started running forward too, leaving Hayley behind. The mutants finished with Jeff, and one of them grabbed Hayley down by the hair. She started to scream, and I looked behind me to see one mutant grab her lips and rip them clean off. I let out a scared squeak and began to cry. We ran up a staircase and straight into a dirty room. Nick locked the door behind us, and leaned against it, sliding down to the floor. He put his head in his hands and I could faintly hear him sobbing softly. "Oh my god," Camilla said turning and crying into Collin.Collin patted her on the back while letting out a few tears of his own. "Are you ok?" Cameron asked me. I slightly nodded and put my head on his shoulder, shut my eyes, and tried my hardest not to cry my heart out.

humm GOD wil save u guys diz iz rily scary

God would help yu all out

It getting boring

I fink u skipd an episode...

so how and when dis quil die?

Oh my gosh dis is so bad

So save yu God

Problems de ooo

d creature killing 2 pesin,God save u and odas dat is rimening.

Roll on

Oh...dis is ghtin more scary.. @mastersam001 ...I think u skipped an episode..hw did Quul die??

nic one

Wotz goin on naaaw..no mur updatez..@mastersam001

Sorry for being absent for sometime... I was having issues with my Coolval account

Chapter 13 Chapter 13: Cameron's POV: Emily was leaning on my shoulder, trying not to cry. My eyes, on the other hand were completly dry. Not that I wasn't sad, but I wasn't capable of crying anymore, not after what I've been through. Nick got up from the floor and started to pace around the room. Tristen was glaring at me for some reason, and I patted Emily on the back soothingly. "Knock knock!" Ryan announced bursting into the room with a wide grin on his face. I turned around and glared at Nick. "I thought you locked the door!" I exclaimed and Ryan's grin got even bigger. It was sort of weirding me out the way he was standing, with his hands behind his back like he had a present. "I did!" Nick hissed back at me. Ryan took a step forward and threw something on the floor right in front of Emily and I. Taking a closer look, I covered Emily's eyes when I realized, it was a limb, either Hayley's or Jeff's. "What the hell!" Tristen yelled kicking the body part away to the corner of the room. "It was Hayley's, what a shame. Gingers are cute," Ryan stated smirking and then winking at Emily. She gave him a disgusted look before closing her eyes and trying to hold in more tears. Ryan walked into the room even further, before closing and locking the door behind him. I was about to ask why he locked the door, until there was a very loud, scary pounding on the door. "What is that?" Camilla asked trying to hide behind Collin. Collin just shook his head in confusion and stood in front of Camilla. Ryan got a very annoyed look on his face, and let out a big sigh. We waited a couple more seconds before the pounding stopped. "Damn teenagers," Ryan mumbled, and my eyes got really big. Teenagers? What the hell was he talking about? I looked down at Emily and she looked at me the same way, with a look of shock and confusion. The pounding was back, and this time Tristen quickly unlocked the door and opened it wide. Three people, around our age stumbled in and closed the door behind them. One was a girl, with bright red hair and big brown eyes. There were two boys, one was pale, with spiked black/brown hair and a couple tattoos and piercings. The other boy was pale too, with longish black hair and blue eyes. He too had two lips piercings. "Who the hell are you?" Nick shouted standing in front of them. The girl gasped for breath and closed her eyes for a moment while she answered us. "I'm Kylie, this is Jayy," she said pointing to the guy with spiked hair,"And this is Jeremy," she stated pointing to the guy with longer hair. All three of them seemed to be trying to catch their breath. "We need help!" Jayy said pushing past Nick to look at all of us. That's when I noticed, Ryan had left. Tristen scoffed and got up in Jayy's face. "Yeah join the club dumbass, if your in this fucking house you need help! I mean look at us, we are tired, hungry, I have to piss really bad, and we all have at least four cuts and bruises on us," Tristen yelled getting really angry. Emily quickly stood and ran over to were Tristen was, put her hand on his shoulder, and pulled him away from Jayy a little. "Don't yell at me!" Jayy shouted taking an intimidating step forward. "Guys! Stop! You really think arguing is going to help? Cause its not, so shut up and get over it!" Emily yelled looking more at Tristen when she said it. Both Tristen and Jayy shut up and looked away from each other. Emily looked at Kylie. "Why do you need help?" "We lost one of our friends, Megan." Kylie said, her eyes watering up a bit. "How long have you been in here?" Collin asked stepping forward. Kylie wiped her eyes of any tears before she replied. "About ten minutes." Nick let out a short, cruel laugh, "Ten minutes? Ten minutes! How can you bitch and whine when you have only been in here ten minutes! We have been stuck in here for days. Cameron and Camilla have been stuck here about two months! Six of our closest friends... are dead! And guess what? We got to watch every single one of them have a slow, torturous death." All the while Nick was saying this, he was trying not to cry. I hadn't known him for very long, but he definitely didn't seem like the kind of person that cried a lot. "..... Really?" Kylie asked looking surprised. She had only been in here for ten minutes, she has yet to see anything really bad. I had been here two months, don't ask how I haven't killed myself yet. I had to protect Camilla. "Two of our friends were just eaten alive in front of us," Collin stated quietly. Everybody nodded and Jayy and Jeremy suddenly looked very sick. "What if Megan's dead?" Kylie asked producing a fresh set of tears. Jayy pulled her into a hug and started whispering things in her ear. "You guys!" Collin yelled from the corner of the room, he was crouched in front of something, and pretty much everyone ran over to where he was. He was crouched in front of a vent connected to the wall. It was an air vent. "I think I found a way out!" he whispered pulling at the vent over the small opening. The screws were so rusty, that he was able to pull it right off. "Who shall go first?" Collin asked looking at all of us. His eyes landed on me, and I looked between him and the vent. Sighing in content, I crawled in first, and pulled Emily in after me. There was a ton of cobwebs, and I had to carefully brush them all out of the way. Killer clowns, devil dolls and ghosts I could handle, but who knew what kind of whacked up spiders this place had. We crawled on, and I looked back every now and then to see everybody behind me. Suddenly, the vent collapsed and everybody fell down onto the floor of the room below us. Collin and Camilla fell in the hall, and Nick, Jayy, and Jeremy fell on the stairs then stumbled down. As if things couldn't get any worse, there was a high pitched chuckle, and I slightly turned my head and saw a doll, with a blood stained face, bright, wide scary eyes and messy black hair. It was holding a blood stained ax. _____________

chapter 14 Chapter 14: Emily's POV: I had landed on my stomach, and now it hurt really bad. My vision was blurring too, which was not a good sign. Looking to my right, I saw Cameron staring ahead of us with wide eyes. Looking forward too, I saw a really ugly, scary doll thing standing. Staring down at us with a perverted smile. Even though my vision was blurry, and my stomach and head hurt, I was able to shoot up and begin grabbing Tristen's arm to pull him up too. Cameron got up too, and quickly pulled Kylie out of the little room. Tristen, on the other hand seemed to be passed out, so I struggled to drag him out. Just then, the doll started to stalk forward, getting quicker with each step. Using all my strength, I kept pulling Tristen just when the doll stopped right in front of him. I stopped dragging him, and tried not making any sudden movements. The doll looked up at me for a moment, before quickly swinging the ax around Tristen's foot. The ax barely missed his foot, and I hastily began to pull randomly again, just to get him out of the room. The ax missed his foot again, and I screamed for someone to come help me. Jeremy ran into the room, and paused at the sight of the walking doll trying to kill Tristen and I. The ax once again barely missed Tristen, but instead got Jeremy's foot. Jeremy howled out in pain, just as I was able to get Tristen out. Dropping Tristen's body, I went back and put my arm around Jeremy's waist to get him out. He stumbled out of the room and I slammed the door behind me, just as the ax hit the wood of the old, aged door. Shrieking, Kylie crawled back a little, as Jeremy fell on the floor. "Fuck that hurts," he said carefully placing a hand on the open wound. He hissed in pain and recoiled his hand. Kylie looked away in disgust, as blood poured out of what was left of his foot. The ax seemed to have chopped of about two inches of the top of his foot, through his black converse. "What the fuck happened!" Jayy exclaimed kneeling by Jeremy to look at his foot. "That.... that thing! Chopped off my foot with an ax!" Jeremy said through his clenched teeth. He was trying to hold in the pain, it was obvious. He closed his eyes and re-opened them and let out a big breath. "Kylie, give me your scarf," I demanded holding out my hand and looking at Kylie expectantly. Nodding, she fumbled to get it off than softly placed it in my hand. Everyone looked at me, waiting for me to do something. Crouching in front of Jeremy, I began softly, carefully wrapping the scarf around his foot to hold some of the blood. Jeremy hissed in pain again, but didn't say anything while I finished up. "Wow, good thinking Emily," Camilla said scratching at her arm again. Her arm started to bleed a little, and she looked down at it with confusion "Camilla, you have to stop scratching it! It's obviously making it worse," Cameron stated putting Camilla's hands by her side. Camilla didn't say anything, she just stood there, frozen. It was kind of creepy the way she just stared straight ahead at nothing. "Ummm.... Camilla?..... are.... are you ok?" Collin asked waving his hand in front of Camilla's face. Nothing. Collin snapped in front of her face too, but still nothing. Suddenly, she screamed out in pain, as something similar to a huge, white, snake/ worm burst out of her mouth. She kept screaming, even as her mouth began to bleed from being over extended. Camilla's eyes rolled back into her head, and everyone started to scream. Camilla was desperately clawing at her mouth, trying to get rid of what ever was flying out her mouth, suddenly she stopped, and then fell limp on the ground. "Camillla! Oh god," Cameron yelled out kneeling in front of her body. The worm, snake thing crawled completely out of her mouth and onto the ground. "Shit, we have to go.... now!" Nick yelled pushing everyone forward. Kylie screamed again and Jayy grabbed her hand and pulled her froward. We all started running down the hall, and I was struggling to pull Cameron forward. He wanted to go back for Camilla, but of course I couldn't let him. "Please, please let me go back!" he pleaded looking back at Camilla. "I'm sorry Cameron, she's dead, we can't go back or you will die too!" I yelled pulling him forward. He didn't say anything, but didn't fight me anymore either. The thing was following us, crawling up the side of the wall and on to the ceiling. It was right above us, and looked like it was about to grab Kylie. "Jayy, Kylie watch out!" Collin shouted at them. Jayy and Kylie both looked above them, and Kylie screamed a blood curtailing scream. Jayy pulled her off to the side, but the thing followed them, reaching for Kylie with its millions of teeth. It opened its mouth further, and another, smaller worm thing came out and started grabbing for Kylie too. "Move," Tristen demanded, and everyone stopped running, while Tristen swung a baseball bat at the smaller creature. It connected with it, and the creature cringed back into the bigger one's mouth. The bigger creature let out a shrill, painful sound and Tristen began to whack at it too. It let out another shrill sound, and started to bite at Tristen. Nick pushed Tristen out of the way, and pointed a gun at the creature. He pulled the trigger, but nothing happened. He pulled it again, and again, before he opened it and realized it was not loaded. The smaller thing popped out again and shot right into Nick's stomach, pulling Nick into the bigger creature's mouth. Nick screamed for a second, before it was cut off. "Oh my god!" Kylie yelled out putting her face in Jeremy's chest. Jeremy and Jayy both just stared wide eyed at the thing, not believing what was going on. "We have to go!" Tristen announced pushing Collin slightly. Collin stumbled a little, but didn't move forward. Snatching the bat from Tristen's hands, he walked toward the creature and whacked it straight in the eye, It let out the same shrill noise, and, everybody took that opportunity to run into the room behind us. "It killed that guy!" Kylie stated rubbing her eyes as more tears escaped. Jeremy tried to sooth her by patting her head, but it was easy to tell he was holding in tears as well. Cameron went over and slide his back against the wall. I was about to go over and comfort him, when I realized what was in this room. Guns, lots and lots of guns, and knives, swords, everything. So this is where Nick got that gun, and probably where Tristen got the baseball bat. "You guys, what are we going to do?" _________________________

Wat r u going 2 do? Make use of those weapons period.

Time to use weapon....

Dair iz hope...

Scary but now it will bcom a battle!

scary

Chapter 15 Chapter 15: "You guys... what are we going to do?" Cameron asked putting his head in his hands. I walked over and sat down next to him. "We need to split up and find a way out," Jayy stated holding Kylie to his chest while she cried. Jeremy had sunk down to the floor, examining his foot. Collin was leaning against a wall, rubbing his eyes, while Tristen was looking at all the weapons in the room. "Right, lets just split up, I mean that always works in the movies!" Collin exclaimed sarcastically. Jayy narrowed his eyes at Collin but didin't say anything. "Like staying in a big group is helping?" I yelled at Collin, standing up and throwing my hands in the air, "At first staying together sounded good, but its only making us a big target, its not doing anything to help us. We. Need. To. Split. Up." "Fine! Fine lets split up then," Collin shouted back sinking to the ground and putting his head in his hands. "Ok, we need people who know what their doing in each group, Tristen and Kylie will be a group, Collin and Jayy will be a group, and Cameron, Jeremy and I will be a group.... got it?" I ordered and everybody nodded their head and got in their groups. Although,Tristen didn't look very happy, he was giving Cameron a nasty look. Jeremy slowly got up and limped over to us and everybody walked out into the hall cautiously, but the snake thing was nowhere in sight. On our way out, everybody grabbed a weapon, that wasn't a gun. We had learned our lesson with the guns. I grabbed just a giant sword, Cameron grabbed a bat, and Jeremy grabbed a knife. "Ok, we will go left, Collin and Jayy go right, and Cameron, Emily and Jeremy go left too," Tristen said still eyeing Cameron. Collin and Jayy took off in the opposite direction, while the rest of us went left. We walked in silence for a good ten minutes, till we came to the end of the hall. It split off in two directions. "Ok, we will go left you two go right," Jeremy stated walking down the hall to the left. Cameron and I followed him is silence. We came upon a set of thin stairs, the kind that are small and twirl up into the next floor. We slowly and cautiously walked up them, keeping a good grip on the railing. When we got up the stairs we found ourselves in an empty room with a door. "I guess we have no choice but to walk through the door," Cameron mumbled and swung the door open. We stared for a long time, I mean it could have been hours that we just stood there in shocked silence and stared at the scene before us. "Megan?" Jeremy yelled out limping forward. In front of us, was a girl with blond hair, and blue eyes, duck taped to the wall. Just completely stuck to the wall, it was one of the weirdest things I had ever seen, especially sense the duck tape was... hello kitty? "What the hell?" I yelled out closing the door behind me as we ran into help the girl. "Megan! How... what... how... who did this?" Jeremy stumbled pulling out the knife and started cutting at the duck tape. Megan looked perfectly calm, which again was really weird. "Kellin Quinn did it!" She exclaimed jumping down after Jeremy cut the duck tape. Jeremy gave her a confused look... as did Cameron and I.... Kellin Quinn? Wasn't he a singer? "Um... Megan... Kellin Quinn is the lead singer of Sleeping with sirens.. I really doubt he duck taped you to the wall for no reason," Jeremy stated giving Megan a concerned look. Slowly, a smile grew on Megan's face, a really creepy smile. "That's because I'm not Megan," She stated, only it sounded like she had three voices. "Um, you know.. I think we should just keep walking.. now," Cameron announced pushing Jeremy and I forward to another single door. Megan just watched us as we slowly made our way out, we were almost out the door, when she flung herself at us. "GO!" Cameron yelled flinging the door shut and running down the hall, dragging me with him. Jeremy ran too, although it must of hurt. After about five minutes of running, we took a break to get our breath, but a foul stench filled my nose, and I gasped for air. Weirdly enough, the smell was familiar, and I looked around a little. We had been here before, and in front of us was the pile of rotting flesh from earlier. Jeremy choked on his air a little, gaging so much he had to turn away. "Oh.. my god!" he choked out, Cameron was just stuck staring at the flesh like a zombie, tears started to form in his eyes. "Jake?" He whispered crouching in front of the pile. "Who's Jake?" I asked keeping a cautious eye on Cameron, Cameron stuck his hand in the flesh and started digging around, which caused me to gag big time. The sounds it was making, sounded squishy and liquidity. Cameron took his hand out, and was holding something, a cross necklace with J on it. "Jake... was my brother." _______

Chapter 16 chapter 16: "Your brother?" I asked staring down at the pile of flesh, trying my hardest not to throw up. Cameron nodded, and I placed my hand on his shoulder, "I'm sorry," I said sympathetically. Jeremy nodded in agreement, and it was silent for a moment. The silence was soon filled with the sounds of chains clanking, and everyone turned to look down the hall. "Shit," Cameron stated snapping out of some sort of trance. He grabbed my wrist and began dragging me the opposite way, Jeremy close on our heels. "Cameron! Cameron what is that? Whats going on?" I asked frantically, Cameron ignored my questions, but the clanking sound was getting closer, even though we were running. We stopped in front of a door, and Cameron pushed it open and we all ran in. It was dark, so dark I couldn't even see my own hands. I felt someone pulling me down to the floor though, so I sat down and tried to even out my breathing. The clanking sound got even closer, and I layed down so I could see under the door crack. Nothing was there, so I sat back up and listened to the sound of chains get closer and closer. Then, the sound suddenly stopped, and my breath hitched in my throat. Lying back down, I prepared myself to look under the door crack again. I could hear Cameron and Jeremy hold their breath as I looked under the door, but nothing was there again. "Nothing is there you guys," I whispered still looking under the door. Suddenly, an eye appeared and stared back at me. It was the eye of a demon, all black. Screaming I shot up and backed up all the way, which wasn't very far. This room was like a closet. Something stabbed my back though, something very sharp. "Ow!" I shouted out, turning around, I still couldn't see but I stuck my hand out, searching for the thing that poked me. My hand touched it again and it pierced the skin, I could feel blood running down my finger. The door handle jiggled and I stared at it, holding my breath. Jeremy freaked out and started cussing and begging. It suddenly stopped wiggling, and the lights came on. At first it was pretty blinding because we had been in pitch black for a while. After my eyes adjusted, I turned around to see what stabbed me. The wall was covered in sharp points, sticking out in our direction, and there was something stuck to the wall. A body. My eyes widened and I stood frozen in place. It wasn't just any body, it was Hayley. "Oh my god," Jeremy said covering his eyes and turning to look away. Cameron looked away too, unable to stand the sight of a girl stuck to a wall, with numerous sharp points sticking out of her body. Her hair was all bloody, as was her face. What the hell was going on? "Thats.... that's... that's Hayley!" I stuttered out feeling tears stream down my face. What had those creatures done to her? I thought they killed her right there, I guess I had been wrong. Jeremy gagged and closed his eyes, he wasn't yet used to the sight of death. Although, death is something you never really get used to. The smell started to get unbearable, how had we not noticed that when we ran in? "We need to get out of this room," Cameron stated staring at the door. We didn't know if that thing was still on the other side, I would rather stay in here than be confronted with whatever that was. Cameron flopped on the ground and looked under the door, he stared back up at me and shook his head. He stood up slowly, and reached for the door handle. Getting a good grasp on it he pushed it open. There was nothing on the other side, letting out a breath I didn't know I was holding we exited the tiny, stuffy room. A shrill, growl sounded from behind us in the hallway, and there stood the creature with black eyes. It's skin was white, and flaky. The creature had long black hair to his knees, and he wore very familiar clothes. Were those, Jacobs clothes? It let out another growl, and stormed after us. "Go, go go!" Cameron yelled pushing me forward. I stood like a statue, shocked that the thing wore Jacob's clothes, what the fuck... It came right up to me and pushed me over, snapping me out of my trance. Cameron attempted to grab my hands and drag me forward, but the thing got a hold of my legs and pulled me the opposite way. "Emily no! Jeremy come help me!" Cameron shouted frantically, grasping my wrists and pulling me as well. Jeremy came back and got a hold of my upper arms, also pulling. It was painful, but I didn't care I just wanted this thing off me. The creature continued to pull me, and quite frankly it was winning. I started to scream out loudly, and kick my legs in an attempt to make it let go, but no such luck. Camron and Jeremy let go, falling on their butts, and I was suddenly jerked forward and flipped on my back, the weird demon thing was taking me somewhere, and I didn't like the sight of a bat with nails sticking out in his hand. "Cameron help!" I screamed flailing my arms everywhere, Cameron quickly shot up and chased me, reaching for my hands. He fell flat on his stomach but managed to grab hold of my hands, and I held on tightly. But the creature continued to pull me along as if I weighed nothing, he was even pulling Cameron along. "Jeremy grab my ankles and pull!" Cameron demanded and Jeremy quickly did as he said. Jeremy too couldn't pull us away, and he fell on his back, letting go of Cameron's ankles in the process. He whimpered and reached for us but the weird thing pulled us a little faster. "Let me go asshole!" I screamed at the creature attempting to get him to stop. He did, and he slowly turned around to look me in the eyes. He growled again loudly, and soon everything was blurry. "Cameron? Cameron I can't see! What did he do I can't see its all blurry!" I yelled out frantically flailing my arms looking for Cameron, he didn't answer though, and soon everything went black. "Emily? Emily please wake up," Someone whispered in my ear. Slowly, I fluttered my eyes open to see Jeremy by my side looking at me with wide, scared eyes. Looking around, I noticed Cameron on the other side of the brightly lite room. It was like a hospital room, only there were no beds. But there was a weird machine inbetween Cameron, and Jeremy and I. "Jeremy? Where are we?" I asked attempting to sit up. My body wouldn't move, I was stuck in a lying postion on the dingy floor, "Why can't I move?" "I don't know, after Cameron passed out so did you, and then he hit me on the head and I blacked out too. Then I woke up here to find both you and Cameron still out of it. Our hands and feet are chained to the floor and Cameron's in that weird chair thing," Jeremy explained quickly. Looking over at Cameron again, I noticed the chair this time. It was big and wooden, Cameron's hands and feet were locked to it and weird leather belts held his chest and neck to the chair. "Cameron? Cameron please listen! You have to wake up!" I announced, he stirred slightly but didn't wake up. "I've been trying that for hours he's not going to wake up," Jeremy stated closing his eyes. He looked really stressed out, not that I blamed him. My stomach made a noise and I looked down at it, if only I could move!

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Chapter 17: "No, no no we can't do that..." Jeremy stated stumbling back. The girl smiled, and made eye contact with me. Her eyes seemed to seep into my soul, and I could sense she was here to hurt us; one way or another. "What do we have to do to make it out alive," I asked, keeping eye contact. I needed to act tough, even if I wasn't. The girl smiled wider and looked down and the box in her hands. "All you need to do, is get the key, " she stated, holding her hands out with the box. There had to be a catch, no way it was this easy. There wasn't even a lock on the box, as far as I could tell. She set the box on the ground, and disappeared into thin air, leaving behind the sound of a giggle. Jeremy just stood still, staring at the intimidating box. "Open it," Cameron whispered, staring down at the box. Jeremy shook his head, but didn't break eye contact with the box. I stepped forward, and slowly reached for it. I grabbed it, and nothing happened. Slowly opening the lid, I peered inside. There was a shiny gold key, and quickly I reached in and snatched it. Handing the key to Jeremy, I set the box down and helped unlock Cameron. "That was too easy..." Cameron stated rubbing his wrists where the chains were. Jeremy shook his head to agree. We all slowly moved toward the door, scared. There was definitely a trick to this we weren't just going to get out that easily. Cameron extended one finger toward the door, being as cautious as possible. His finger touched the door, and as soon as it did a giant blade swung down. Cameron ducked, and pushed me down by the shoulder. Jeremy was late, and stood frozen as the blade sliced through his neck, decapitating him. His head hit the floor before his body, and I screamed hiding my face in Cameron. You would think I would get used to this by now. "How do we get out of here?!" Cameron shouted trying to kick at the door. The girls giggle from before echoed throughout the room once again. Cameron stood up, and looked directly up where the blade came from. He turned back to look at me. "There's one more up there," He stated. Great, so we would have to grab the handle and duck again. Cameron looked around the dark dingy room, "If something else touches the handle, we can just wait for the blade and then get out," He mumbled to himself. There was nothing you could pick up.... besides, well Jeremy. I guess Cameron had that same thought, because he slowly walked over to Jermey and crouched down. "Cameron don-," I started, but it was too late. Cameron got a good grip on his head and whipped it at the door. It headed straight for the handle. The blade dropped down, slicing through the air and stopping right in front of me. Cameron darted for the door and opened it, ushering me out. The hallway we were in didn't look familiar. It was actually nice, covered in elegant white wallpaper and gold designs. There was a red velvet carpet, and it was brightly lite with little chandeliers on the ceiling. "Why is this so nice?" I asked, taking in the beauty of the place. "I don't know... I've never been this way before... but I don't trust it..."Cameron stated, looking around in amazement. Something had to be up... ----

Chapter 18: (Tristan's POV) This place was even worse when it was just two of us. Especially since I was stuck with Kylie, who knew nothing about this place yet. We slowly shuffled through a hallway, neither of us speaking. The eerie quiet was starting to get at me, especially since the only thing on my mind was Emily with freaking Cameron. I didn't trust that guy, he just screamed bad news. Well, that and the fact that he was all over Emily. Who... I had liked for years. We arrived in yet another hallway, looking the same as before. The wallpaper was peeling, the wood squeaked and everything was barely lit. "Fancy seeing you too here," a familiar voice said. Turning around, I came face to face with none other than Ryan. "Its been awhile hasn't it Mr. Smith. and hello Kylie," Ryan added, giving me a smirk. "How do you know my name and who are you..?" Kylie asked shaking, like I said, inexperienced. "What do you want," I snapped at him. Ryan made a tsk sound and smoothly stepped forward. "Now Tristan, no need to get touchy, I'm only here to help," Ryan explained, cocking his head to the side. My eyes narrowed, I was so ready to explode. "Help? Really, your here to help. Well you've been much help. Yeah, Brianna, Jacob, Hayley, Jeff, Lily, Nick they are all dead. Obviously you have helped a lot," I stated pointing my finger at him. Ryan didn't lose that annoying smirk though. "Well, I guess I don't need point you in the right direction then," Ryan stated, looking at me. "No no! Tristan didn't mean that, can you please help us?" Kylie asked pushing me back a little. Ryan's smirk got bigger, and he slowly raised his arm to point to a door to the left of us. "Have fun," He said, turning around swiftly and walking down the hall.It was silent again, neither Kylie or I wanted to be the first to open the door and look inside. Stepping forward, I turned the knob and opened the door. It looked like a classroom, with rusty chairs and desks. The ceiling was leaking majorly and it was almost pitch black. "How is this the right direction?" Kylie whispered, stepping into the room and looking around. Hey, I knew he couldn't be trusted. There was a chalkboard at the front of the room, and I made my way towards it. There were names on it, our names. The names Brianna, Jacob, Lily, Jeff, Hayley, Nick, Quil and Jeremy were crossed off. "Jeremy's name is crossed off.... is he.... is he dead?" Kylie stuttered, shaking a little. Tears came to her eyes and you could tell she was struggling to hold them in. I ignored her question and continued reading the board. My name, Emily's, Collin's, Jayy's and Kylie's were up there and Kylie's was circled. "Oh my god, am I next?" Kylie screamed, taking a couple steps back and tripping over a chair. She let the tears flow now, and I crotched down to pull her in for an embrace. She held on tight to me and cried into my shoulder. We really weren't getting out of here. I looked closer and the board. Why wasn't Cameron or Camilla's names up there? Camilla's should be crossed off. I let go of Kylie and stood up to examine the board. It was big, but there was no other writing. Or atleast, no other writing that I could see. Walking closer, the only thing I noticed was a little chip in the paint. Picking at it, the board started to crumble to reveal something white. "Kylie, help me chip away this paint," I demanded, not taking my eyes off the board. She stood up and slowly walked over, scraping away the green chalk board. Something was starting to appear, it looked like newspapers. Kylie and I worked away the last of the chalk board to reveal layers and layers of newspapers. To make matters worse, it was our faces plastered on the newspapers. I saw my face, and looked closer to it. 'Six friends disappear' the head line read. Another headline read, 'Kids that disappear a week ago are still missing' A week ago?! No way we have been in here that long.... it had to only be like two days, how could we go without food and water for a week. "Um Tristan, you might want to look at this..." Kylie said pointing to a little piece of paper. I walked over and looked closely at it. It had small writing on it. I decided to read it out loud, "Mutants will take care of Hayley and Jeff, parasites will take care of Quil, Clowns will take care of Lily and Brianna, spirits will take care of Collin and Jayy, Cameron will take care of Emily and Tristan..." I stopped reading. Fuck. I knew that guy was trouble. I knew he couldn't be trusted, the question is was Camilla evil or did she really die? "Tristan, Emily is with Cameron. He's suppose to kill her...." Kylie mentioned, shaking still. Fuck. Fuck. Fuck. I had to find Emily, and fast.

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Chapter 19: (Emilys POV:) The elegant hallway still shocked both Cameron and I. Putting his hand in my back, he led more forward without any words. We turned the corner, and came face to face with... Collin?, "Collin! where's jayy?" I asked, pulling him in for a hug. Collin hugged me back but sniffled a little bit. "He's gone, we were walking and somthing got him, I didn't see it but something got him and now he's gone," Collin rambled, shaking his head in guilt. "We have to go find him...." Cameron stated, looking worried. I nodded my head to agree. We silently walked down to the end of the elegant hallway. "What happened to Jeremy?" Collin asked suddenly, looking around. I swallowed a lump and shook my head, signalling something had happened to him. Collin understood, and looked forward again. We kept walking, the hall was getting dirtier and dirtier as we went. Than, we stopped walking. Someone was standing there with their back to us. "Hello?" Cameron yelled out to him, stepping forward. The person turned around and I screamed in shock. They had no eyes, just hollow holes where eyes used to be. Dried blood was all over their face. "Go, go go," Cameron demanded pushing me forward and to the side of the man. He didn't move toward us, just turned to watch us even though he couldn't see. After we passed him, all three of us ran. The only sound was of our feet pounding on the floor boards and of us breathing heavy. It felt like I hit a wall when I suddenly hit the floor. I looked up to see Tristan looking at me with wide eyes. He reached down and helped me up. "Oh Emily I'm so sorry! You have no idea how relieved I am to find you," He stated hugging me tight. Kylie was behind him looking at Cameron with a scared look in her eyes. Tristan let me go but pushed me back behind him by Kylie. He glared at Cameron. "Get away from her," Tristan said through gritted teeth. Cameron cocked his head to the side, confused. I was confused too, what did Cameron do? Tristan wasn't even with him. All he's done is help. "And why should I do that?" Cameron calmly asked putting his hands behind his back. Tristan glared harder. "Because I know the truth Cameron. Your hear to kill Emily and I. You've been faking help this whole time. I bet Camilla has too. Cameron looked angry. I didn't know whether it was because Tristan accused him of being evil or if it wad because he brought Camilla into this. "Your lying!" Cameron shouted, stepping closer to Tristan. Tristan didn't look scared though, he just smirked. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a knife he must have gotten from the one room with all the weapons. Kylie pulled me back a little as I stared shocked at the two boys. Cameron looked at the weapon and said one thing to Tristan. "Try." Tristans smirk got bigger and he jabbed at Cameron, just barely slicing his side. Cameron acting as if he wasn't hurt and grabbed for Tristans knife. This was too intense and I didn't like it. Turning to look away, I noticed Ryan standing behind us, smiling. Someone screamed out, and I turned back to look. Cameron was on his knees, gripping his side. Tristan stood back, panting. I ran over and crotched down next to Cameron. He looked up at me and reached for my hand. Holding his, I tried to forget about the blood now on my hand. "Get away from him Emily," Collin said, pulling me away from Cameron. Cameron was bleeding out and everyone was just standing around, what the hell was going on?!

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chapter 20: THE TRUTH "What the hell Tristan?" I finally spit out, trying to get back to Cameron. Collin held me back though as Cameron got weaker. "He's on their side Emily, he's here to kill you and me.," Tristan stated bending down by Cameron. Tears started to form in my eyes. "No I'm not! What are you talking about?" Cameron gasped out. Tristan looked down and plunged the knife once again into Cameron, only this time it was in his o. Cameron cried out, and than went silent. gasped and struggled in Collins grip. Cameron was dead. Someone laughed behind us, and I turned to see Ryan stepping closer to us. "Nice Tristan, doing Whatever you can to stay alive. Too bad Cameron really wasn't on our side. Too bad I planted that paper to trick you." Ryan stated, leaning on the wall. Tristan looked shocked. As did everyone else. Collin was so shocked he let me go and I ran over to Cameron. I set my hand on his, which was right over his heart. It was easy this time to ignore the blood as tears silently fell from my face. "Tristan! You could have atleast asked him!" Kylie stated, staring at Cameron's stiff, lifeless body. "Like he would tell the truth if he was a killer! Besides you saw the paper first," Tristan yelled. "Oh, and one more thing, Emily, when you were taken to that room, Cameron had a bomb planted in his stomach set to go off in twelve hours and its been hmm, seven?" Ryan explained, smiling evily. I stood up and stepped back, staring at Cameron. There was no way we were getting out of here in four hours, we were all dead. "We have to go before he kills us all," Collin said, pushing Kylie and I past Ryan and around the corner. Tristan followed. "We need to find jayy and find a way out!" Kylie stated, looking back at Collin. "What do you think we've been doing this whole time?" Collin shouted, looking at Kylie like she was dumb. We walked in silence, always looking behind us. How were we going to find Jayy? "I last saw Jayy in the weird school hallway place," Collin stated, leading us to where he thought that was. Collin tripped and fell flat on his face, as we all stopped walking. There, on the ground was a bloody plastic bag, like the one I saw earlier. It had a person inside, but I couldn't recognize who it was from all the blood. Collin hurriedly scrambled to get up, and he looked down at the bag. "Open it," I whispered, staring at the bag. Collin crotched down and tried to find the opening. He found found and opened to bag, getting closer to see inside. A hand shot out and grabbed Collin's face, scaring us all. Collin screamed and clawed at the hand. The person started to crawl out of the bag and closer to Collin. Tristan ran over and pulled the hand offf Collin. His face was covered in blood but he scramble to back up. The body in the bag was for sure Jayy, and Kylie screamed. Tristan pulled his knife out and stuck it in Jayy's head. Jayy wasn't fazed as he continued to crawl out. 'You can't fight the dead with death'. "Lets get out of here!" Tristan shouted helping Collin up. I grabbed Kylies hand and pulled her past Jayy, but she tugged back and fell. I almost fell too and let go of her hand. Turning around, I saw Jayy had a hold of her foot. "Emily help!" she screamed reaching for me. I grabbed her wrists and attempted to pull her free. "Collin, Tristan help!" I yelled behind me, the boys came running to my side and Tristan kicked Jayy in the face. He still wasn't fazed. Kylie screamed louder and started to cry hysterically. Jayy reached up and grabbed the knife from his head, stabbing Kylie's back. She screamed out in pain, and it made my ears ring. She was still fighting though. Jayy dug the knife out and sent it into the back of her neck. Her hands went limp in mine, and I dropped them. Tears formed in my eyes and anger boiled in my stomach. Pulling the knife out of Kylie, I stabbed Jayy in the eye. Than the other eye, Than the forhead. I stood up and Tristan started to pull me away by the hand. That was it, we were getting out of here.....

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Chapter 21 chapter 21: "Its just three now, does anyone remember the way we came in?" Collin asked, wiping sweat off his forehead. Tristan and I didn't say anything. If we had remembered our way around we wouldn't be in here still. We walked down a hall and passed a room on our left that looked familiar. I stopped, and peeked inside. It was girly, and frilly. There was a life size doll sitting in a chair. It was Brianna. I looked at Tristan and he stared back at me. We were closer to the exit. Tristan walked forward even faster, he had a look of concentration on his. trying to figure out which way we had first come from. The halls were looking familiar, it was weirdly easy, and I started to get a bad feeling. They couldn't make escaping this easy. Tristan stopped walking, looked behind us. There was no one there. I was guessing he was thinking the same thing I was. What are you guys waiting for, lets get out of here!" Collin said, walking forward. We followed without saying a word. Maybe we were just being paranoid? There it was. The tall double wooden doors we entered in. It was beautiful, I never thought this moment would come. The three of us stood there, just staring at them in disbelief. Collin stepped forward and grabbed a hold of the doorknob. He started shaking, and it took me a moment to realize he was being shocked. Tristan ran over and tried pulling him away. Collin was stuck to the handle though, and seconds later spikes shot out of the door and stabbed him in multiple places. Tristan jumped back and screamed. Collin was a bloody mess, and he fell to the ground with a thump. "Going somewhere?" Someone said behind us. We turned around and saw a man that actually looked normal. He had a big smirk on his face and looked really familiar. He was greasy looking, and wore a bowlers outfit it looked like. It was Isaac, the owner of the haunted house. "What the hell man! Let us out you crazy basterd," Tristan shouted, throwing his arms in the air. Isaac chuckled and stared at Tristan. "Now why would I do that, I keep you kids in here for a reason. I need to feed my pets, my children. Everything that's killed your friends, they eat flesh. Why would I starve them?" Isaac explained, keeping the smirk on his face. "That's so sick, your a fucked up man." I yelled pointing my finger at him. His smirk just got wider but he wasn't keeping eye contact with me anymore. I followed his line of sight to see a creature standing over Collin. He was pale, so pale it looked like his skin was cracked. He dragged Collin away quickly before I even had a chance to realize what was happening. "Let us out. Or your going to regret it," Tristan said pulling another knife out of his pocket. He really stocked up. Isaac laughed yet again, and snapped his finger loudly. The same demon that dragged Cameron, Jeremy and I away before appeared. Tristan didn't look scared though. "Emily, go check the door handle, I will hold him off," Tristan demanded, not taking his eyes off the demon. Was he serious? He was going to die to save me, I couldn't let him do that. "Tristan, I can't... I can't just leave you in here!" I whispered, tears were beginning to form at my eyes just at the idea. Tristan turned to look me in the eyes. He was about to cry too, but he leaned down and softly pressed his lips to mine. They were sweet and gentle, and I realized I had been waiting a very long time for this to happen. I loved him. Tristan pulled away and I instantly felt empty. "Go Emily, I'm not letting both of us die in here, ill be fine. Just go, and take this," Tristan said, pulling a lighter out of his pocket, "You know what you have to do." I was full on crying now. I didn't want to leave Tristan, but if he was going to die to save me than I was going to make it worth it. I nodded my head, and ran toward the door. There was a lot of grunting, but I refused to turn around. There was a giggle, and I looked to the left to see a doll. It had black stringy hair and a cracked face. It was dirty and had a scary smile in its face. It was now or never. I grabbed the doorknob and was instantly hit with electricity. Trying to fight through it before the spikes came out, I twisted the knob and flung the door open. At the same time, the doll charged at me and jumped on my shoulder. Its claw like hands dug into my skin and I screamed out in pain. I tried to pull him off but he wouldn't budge. Tristan came running to my side and stabbed the doll in the face. It fell to the ground. The demon Tristan was fighting ran over and picked Tristan up. He threw him, and he hit a wall. I screamed and dashed out of the door. It was pitch black outside. I took the lighter out and sparked it, throwing it onto the porch. The house shot up in flames instantly. I stepped back as the heat became too much. Falling to my knees, all I could do was watch the house burn. I could hear screams, of men and women. I could practically see the spirits that were trapped in there floating off to heaven. Brianna, Jacob, Lily, Nick, Hayley, Jeff, Collin, Quinn, Kylie, Jayy, Jeremy, Cameron, Camilla, and Tristan. They were all in a better place now. They were at rest. There were sirens in the back ground, but I was still focused on the house. The house were I had lived in a nightmare, a hell. The sirens were getting closer, and eventually I heard the cop cars and fire truck stop right behind me. A man came up behind me and grabbed my shoulders, pulling me back. "Are you ok miss?" he asked, I looked up at him and his eyes got wide, "Your the missing girl, where are the others?" he asked looking shocked. Slowly, I looked at the house. He got the message and ran back to his car. Firefighters ran past me and up to the house. It was over, it was finally over....

epilogue: My parents cried when I was taken home. There were a lot of questions, what happened, where were the others. I didn't say anything. I couldn't, not yet. I was actually exhausted, so I went straight to bed and passed out. Bursting up in bed, I noticed it was pitch black, and I slowly walked toward the door and opened it. I was in a dingy hallway. Was this a dream? I walked down the hallway, even though it was still dark. "Mom? Dad?" I yelled out, hoping someone could help me. There was a small chuckle, and I turned around to see nothing. "Welcome back," A voice said, oh no. oh no how did I get back here?! It was dark, and silent. An eerily silence, the only thing I heard was the sound of my worn out sneakers hitting the wood floor, and the creaks of the aged wood as I did. Not a single thing was lit, so I held my arms out in front of me, listening for any indication of someone, something. A high pitched chuckle filled my ears, and I froze, once again looking for something that was lit at all. A little, cold hard hand was placed on my shoulder and it's nails dug into my pale skin through my white shirt. I shrieked as pain shot through my body, strongest on my shoulder. The little hand started to pull me back, and I fell to the ground with a loud thud, echoing in the little hallway. I screamed a blood curtailing scream, as the hand let go of my shoulder and quickly grabbed a hold of my foot and dragged me. Splinters entered my body as I was dragged, and a pick axe quickly came down on my head, silencing my cries for help.....

THE END..... HOPE U GUYS ENJOYED IT?? WELL, IF U DID, YOU'LL ENJOY "CONTROLLED" ITS AN OBSESSION STORY....... VERY INTERESTING..... I'LL POST THE LINK HERE ONCE I UPLOAD THE FIRST CHAPTER

Do u mean she eventualy die or what I dnt get d epilogue

dnt understand o

Yes... she died.. No one was meant to survive (it's a horror story) Her fresh flesh were fed to the dolls...(^_^)(^_−)☆

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great job... But scary.

Hum' Scarry

Hum' Scarry. Interesting

Great story... Wow...scary bht awesome..

Wotz goin on naw..no more updatez??x_x@MasterSam001

I dnt like d end..tz tragic..#sobz#

come ehnn dis author ur story make sense die bt I no too understand d end. do u mean all of dem died

Oh at least someone should have survived to tell the story, no actor nor actress. Anyway, nice job @Mastersam1

Nice story

Hmmmmmm dis story is really scary, so everybody die in d endin, so bad @Mastersam

Sometimes i used 2 wonder if white mens r human being, bcos i cnt imagine someone going 2 haunted house in d name of adventure.

Very good

Very horroficated