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lighthouse by*Ritagold*

By AH in 23 Sep 2015 | 09:23
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A story of love and lust, victory and defeat, hatred, revenge and regrets. read as we unravele the mystery behind lighthouse. This is a work of imagination no part of it is real. And please nobody should copy this
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.Episode 1
after another heated argument with my dad, I decide to stroll out to get some fresh air. That old man will not let me be he will have my head if I refuse to listen to him. But this time I'm not going to let him have his way. He came over yesterday for a visit. At least that was what he said, that he wanted to see how his only son was doing which was true and also a lie because the only reason he is here is to 'chew my brain' the fact that I refused to further my studies was a thing my dad couldn't take. But ' dance' is my life, I know this would sound stupid but its true. Even at twenty six my dad still treats me like a toddler. Being an only son is a blessing but at time I see mine as an over bearing blessing.
My name is abraham femi also know as ibrams, the only son and eldest of mr and mrs eugene femi I have an annoying little sister who is ninety Nifemi is just like my mom calm but tolerant why I though I hate to admit I'm just like my dad. And like I said before, dance is my life as long as there is Music. My dad has tried all he could to make me quit but I just couldn't he even sent me to a boarding school at some point but this only made me grow as I was the team choreograper in the dance group in school I have won so many competition. My team always come first in any competition. I'm a graduate of law of which I came out with a first class result. Yeah I know its hard to believe but I'm not actually dumb. it was after my gradation I decide to pursue my dreams, and standing in front of a Judge to defend a criminal was not part of it,' no offence please' at least now I'm doing well for myself and I wouldn't want anything to stop me from achieving my dreams I own a dance school which is well known. being a professional choreograper was what I have always dreamt of and my dreams was gradually coming through thought it wasn't that easy at first. But now I'm doing great. Ibrams loved by all, the dance master and other funny names I got from my fans. Being at the top was always my target and I was indeed getting all the attention I needed the only thing I still couldn't get use to was the way girls flooded me everywhere I go like Mtn sure I was handsome fair in complexion with my flavour-like six pack that any girl will die for and when I say 'any' I mean any girl no girl has ever resisted me at least non that I have see. I'm not a flirt though I only have one girl friend or should I say best friend. Anna has been my friend from childhood I probably see her as a dude but some thing let to another and we started dating. I have other girls though but for Anna I felt committed to her I also came to realise how much she loves me but the truth still remain that she doesn't give me that vibes if you will understand me, I just pray I don't end up breaking her heart which was bound to happen someday.








please guys I need your comments at least to give me hope that I'm not just writing for writing sake. I 'm sure there is a lot of error in the write up but I will try my best to correct them love love love......
stay tuned for the next episode...
@t-dak @ibrams @tenniebenson @nazzy @khola46 @frankkay @babe4biola @femi @mray @jennifer @skookum @wyse-one @taiwo @flames @shaxee @ others I'm sorry that's all I can remember for now I need ya'll here
23 Sep 2015 | 09:23
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I don land oooo... Way to go girl! I'm ryt behind u.... I no come get call card o.. @Phinebraim abeg come call attendance... No matter aw short of card I maybe.. I must call my hubby @Vict-Vames my sister @Swtharyomi nd my paddy of life @Babe4biola [hr] [b] LINK TO AVAILABLE EPISODES [/b] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/3/ ][b]Episode 2[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/5/ ][b]Episode 3[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/6/ ][b]Episode 4[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/7/ ][b]Episode 5[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/13/ ][b]Episode 6[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/15/ ][b]Episode 7[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/18/ ][b]Episode 8[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/20/ ][b]Episode 9[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/23/ ][b]Episode 10[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/26/ ][b]Episode 11[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/28/ ][b]Episode 11B[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/30/ ][b]Episode 12[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/31/ ][b]Episode 13[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/33/ ][b]Episode 14-15[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/34/ ][b]Episode 16[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/37/ ][b]Episode 17[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/39/ ][b]Episode 18[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/42/ ][b]Episode 19[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/44/ ][b]Episode 20[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/45/ ][b]Episode 21[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/47/ ][b]Episode 22[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/54/ ][b]Episode 23-24[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/57/ ][b]Episode 25[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/59/ ][b]Episode 26[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/61/ ][b]Episode 27[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/62/ ][b]Episode 28[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/64/ ][b]Episode 29[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/67/ ][b]Episode 30[/b][/url] •[url=https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/lighthouse-byritagold/page/70/ ][b] last Episode[/b][/url]
23 Sep 2015 | 09:31
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#Yawns_ Pls ride on, a vry nyc start indeed.. Am certain dx is one hell of a block bustrous story, oya nxt pls.. *sips_zobo*
23 Sep 2015 | 09:45
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@Ritagold Ontop say u 4get to invite ur padi anogo vex Buh u must chop cain wen we reach house Coz i go tell pale about u ad ibrams d way u guyz usually sneak inside wenevr iz nt around. Wah a beautiful beginning, diz story iz gonna b waooo! ...oya drive on. Ho! Sorry i mean ride on...or 'anyhw sha' As pple da call their hubby Oya sweetheart mi @Nazzy show face quickly Ofcourse can't 4get mah padi them @Skookum ad @Frankkay check d garage u we c a car toyota bullet don't take it o. At d left u wil c the Rangerover spot don't dare touch it. At a corner u wil find a tricycle, lap urself in to it ad appear here immediatly.
23 Sep 2015 | 10:01
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Waoooo my wifey(sorry my frnd wifey)is givin us a right up I must surely stand by u I dey com to call attendance oo
23 Sep 2015 | 10:01
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@emmyrexx ouch d@ late wey done already arive with d bullet oya my people oo @babe4biola @frankkay @hbankee @wyse-one @krisbert @babe4biola @wyse-one @jummybabe @jenifa @hbankee @ibrams @emmyrexx @konphido @frankkay @danco4real @ritagold @krisbert @t-dak @tiffany1 @vict-vames @dabcy @gracedkyenn @sofia @ebube @emmabrous @jummybabe @chomyline @youngfellow @originalann @anitcham @onahsunday631 @chinedueze @steph @slimzy @wyse-one @vict-vames @hbankee @gambola @ritagold @abradek @victoriouschild @softouch @pweety @krisbert @holarbordah @ifeoma1 @temmyjoy @besty @christiana @mray @isabella1 @justify @jenifa @chriswayne @taiwo @Tenniebenson @khola46 @Anitcham @Stephanie @Mray @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Delight @Rhennyjay @GeeAdore @Tonia @Hameyeenat @InemLove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Charliebryn @Charlywizzy @Japhola @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @VibratingWind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Besty @Bsam @Youngestprince @Simzy @DonMikie @Portable @Olaking3 @Harddy @Henry @Hardeywummy2 @Blakstudd @Prince @Kingsbest @Flames @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Escysegzy @Olusegun @Sandy @Adewunmi @Adesewa200 @Adesewa @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @SexyNikky1994 @Tenniebenson @Anitcham @Stephanie @Mray @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Delight @Rhennyjay @GeeAdore @Tonia @Hameyeenat @InemLove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Charliebryn @Charlywizzy @Japhola @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @VibratingWind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Besty @Bsam @Youngestprince @Simzy @DonMikie @Portable @Olaking3 @Harddy @Henry @Hardeywummy2 @Blakstudd @Prince @Kingsbest @Flames @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Escysegzy @Olusegun @Sandy @Adewunmi @Adesewa200 @Adesewa @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @SexyNikky1994 @Tenniebenson @Anitcham @Stephanie @Mray @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Delight @Rhennyjay @GeeAdore @Tonia @Hameyeenat @InemLove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Charliebryn @Charlywizzy @Japhola @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @VibratingWind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Besty @Bsam @Youngestprince @Simzy @DonMikie @Portable @Olaking3 @Harddy @Henry @Hardeywummy2 @Blakstudd @Prince @Kingsbest @Flames @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Tenniebenson @Anitcham @Stephanie @Mray @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Delight @Rhennyjay @GeeAdore @Tonia @Hameyeenat @InemLove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Charliebryn @Charlywizzy @Japhola @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @VibratingWind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Besty @Bsam @Youngestprince @Simzy @DonMikie @Portable @Olaking3 @Harddy @Henry @Hardeywummy2 @Blakstudd @Prince @Kingsbest @Flames @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Escysegzy @Olusegun @Sandy @Cherryserah @SexyNikky1994 @calisto @hbk @frank @davick @whistler @sirp081 @kristen @liciacutes @whistler @murshan @mojhisolar @charlywizzy @scholes junior @seyifunmi @kingsengine @aaron @tony @ruth @besty @shaxee @kemkit @jenny @leo @john @williams @softtouch @hoelhay @christopher @opeyemii @oluchi @maurice @abdulseries @olamy4fun @hameyeenat @stanny39 @harnuholuwa @jhorlade @somkhid @ruth @flames @loveth @peace @chinanza @ty @mrsolace @kingsbest @ib_dreams @frankkie @crusher @maxblaze @jclash @pholaryemmie @dozzle @donvalley @donpaschalo @joseph @fridex @davin @nash @kuks @ewomazeal @nizzy @ebube @okklad @justify @funmilayo1 @loveth @donb @iksqueency @smilie @borwerleh @hollar @kolababs @ogbara @franklin @vasty @walexidey @damzitayo @chikere @anita @iamchris @wisdom @thankmic @christopher @jummy @maurice @herbyhorlarh @magdalene @esejerro @roes @pearl @chernor @priceocity @mature @swissy @omodunbi @T-DAK @sam @ibrams @dhemilade1 @oyindamola1 @samdee @others u are invited
23 Sep 2015 | 10:07
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Wow ve landed already sitted at d front tanks 4 d iv dear @skookum
23 Sep 2015 | 10:59
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Oh swthrt @skookum tank u #hugs# let me cal my goons @Tholartee abeg bring sumtin wey mouth fit chew as we dy hear tori 4 here @Jummybabe @Konphido @Mumabel @titimi oya make una show oo @Simzy abeg carry dah ur long bench if u dy cum
23 Sep 2015 | 11:01
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@skookum *muaah* hope my guy no c m.
23 Sep 2015 | 11:16
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Thanks @skookum & @Sofia following @ritagold @hbankee come o
23 Sep 2015 | 11:16
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@frankkay I don catch space 4 us 4 front... Oya nw wey d tori I don sitdon already.
23 Sep 2015 | 11:19
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@Tenniebenson @khola46 @Anitcham @Stephanie @Mray @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Delight @Rhennyjay @GeeAdore @Tonia @Hameyeenat @InemLove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Charliebryn @Charlywizzy @Japhola @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @VibratingWind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Besty @Bsam @Youngestprince @Simzy @DonMikie @Portable @Olaking3 @Harddy @Henry @Hardeywummy2 @Blakstudd @Prince @Kingsbest @Flames @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Escysegzy @Olusegun @Sandy @Adewunmi@Adesewa200 @Adesewa @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @SexyNikky1994 @Tenniebenson @Anitcham @Stephanie @Mray @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Delight @Rhennyjay @GeeAdore @Tonia @Hameyeenat @InemLove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Charliebryn @Charlywizzy @Japhola @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @VibratingWind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Besty @Bsam @Youngestprince @Simzy @DonMikie @Portable @Olaking3 @Harddy @Henry @Hardeywummy2 @Blakstudd @Prince @Kingsbest @Flames @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Escysegzy @Olusegun @Sandy @Adewunmi@Adesewa200 @Adesewa @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @SexyNikky1994 @Tenniebenson @Anitcham @Stephanie @Mray @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Delight @Rhennyjay @GeeAdore @Tonia @Hameyeenat @InemLove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Charliebryn @Charlywizzy @Japhola @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @VibratingWind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Besty @Bsam @Youngestprince @Simzy @DonMikie @Portable @Olaking3 @Harddy @Henry @Hardeywummy2 @Blakstudd @Prince @Kingsbest @Flames @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Tenniebenson @Anitcham @Stephanie @Mray @Lollybabe1 @Dahcutebae @Delight @Rhennyjay @GeeAdore @Tonia @Hameyeenat @InemLove @Promzy @Mohjisolah @Charliebryn @Charlywizzy @Japhola @Jencute @Jenny @Doublewealth @John451 @Kniphemi @VibratingWind @Emmanesth @Horpheyehmy @Valking1 @Pweety @Kpumpy @Justify @Gracy @Olami @Promise @Sylvia @Besty @Bsam @Youngestprince @Simzy @DonMikie @Portable @Olaking3 @Harddy @Henry @Hardeywummy2 @Blakstudd @Prince @Kingsbest @Flames @Mhzzrblayse @Azeeco @Temmymofrosh @Sandra @Escysegzy @Olusegun @Sandy @Adewunmi@Adesewa200 @Adesewa @Kaysmart22 @Cherryserah @SexyNikky1994 @calisto @hbk @frank @davick @whistler @sirp081 @kristen @liciacutes @whistler @murshan @wind @mojhisolar @charlywizzy @scholes junior @seyifunmi @kingsengine @aaron @tony @ruth @besty @shaxee @kemkit @jenny @leo @john @williams @softtouch @hoelhay @christopher @opeyemii @oluchi @maurice @abdulseries @olamy4fun @hameyeenat @stanny39 @harnuholuwa @jhorlade @somkhid @ruth @flames @loveth @peace @chinanza @ty @mrsolace @kingsbest @ib_dreams @frankkie @crusher @wind @maxblaze @jclash @pholaryemmie @dozzle @donvalley @donpaschalo @joseph @fridex @davin @nash @kuks @ewomazeal @nizzy @ebube @okklad @justify @funmilayo1 @loveth @donb @iksqueency @smilie @borwerleh @hollar @kolababs @ogbara @franklin @vasty @walexidey @damzitayo @chikere @anita @iamchris @wisdom @thankmic @christopher @jummy @maurice @herbyhorlarh @magdalene @esejerro @roes @pearl @chernor @priceocity @mature @swissy @omodunbi @T-DAK @sam @ibrams @dhemilade1 @oyindamola1 @samdee @others u are invited
23 Sep 2015 | 11:27
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Piim piim we don land abeg my guy park de keke one side @emmyrexx for ur mind u won make we say tank u if i hear no tanks for u hw u go do dis kind tin jeep dey rangrover dey naim u say make we carry keke.......@ritagold kip it up tanks for ur iv e be like say i don de fall for u (i pray my wife no see dis ooo ) @skookum if i hear say i go tell u tank u for de iv y u de use ur trick de snatch my babe i swell if e happen even b/h no fit seperate us ....@gracedkyenny sweetie i saw u but no yawa we will settle tins at hm u go explain..shift abeg make sit jare ..,
23 Sep 2015 | 11:51
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@tenniebenson can u pls make dis clear to me since u drop @khola46 for @vict-vames i no dey see him abeg tell me were he dey abi no be so my fellow coolvallers.............ehen before i forget were my b frd i never see her hear @mizleemah.....@gambola @babyj @suezana @promise @steph i won see una for here
23 Sep 2015 | 11:58
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@Skookum 'Emperor Skookum, thanks. @Ritagold, fire on cos we dey ur back. I don't c dancing as a bad profession cos u can make money from where u lest expect.
23 Sep 2015 | 11:58
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@ritagold.. Saw d names u "REMEMBERED"
23 Sep 2015 | 12:03
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@Tenniebenson, I thought I left Khola for u. Y anoda?
23 Sep 2015 | 12:03
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.Episode 2 . . . . . . today is monday and lighthouse(gym/dancehall) is always closed so I decided to go and dance out my headache.I didn't go with my power bike because I forgot to take the keys due to Dad's preaching and there is no way I'm going back there to avoid the roit of the boiling mr femi. lighthouse is not far though, its about thirty minutes walk from my house. ''dancing rock'' ''The living mike'' ''Hey ibrams'' King of the dance floor... The main man.....blah blah blah All kind of names came from different corner as I walked towards lighthouse .I Managed to answer few of their greeting because I wasn't in the mode. I got to lighthouse opened the door' switched on the lights and then turn on the music. I did some press up, before I started dancing pausing every once in a while to think of a better step. And then I did a stunt that landed me on my buttocks. Though the music was loud but I could hear someone 'Giggling' I was startled because the last time I checked there was nobody in here aside me.so I turned round to see' who' only to see young girl of about ten, laughing the living christ out of me. I gave her the what are you doing here? Look. but she just kept laughing not minding my massage. I turned off the music. Then she slowly stopped laughing though she was still grinning from ear to ear ''I'm sorry, I was just passing.... We just ....I'm pretty'' she finally muttered And what are you doing here?I asked In a harsh tone that made her tremble A bit because after that I could see the intimidating look on her face You should be in school Not here. Go home now I pointed at the entrance door Please let me stay she pleaded '' No'' I replied ''but I said please'' ......... ''you are so mean''... And that stunt was so lame I can do better than that she poured out before leaving me a with surprises look on my face. she really was a pain but I felt bad for treating her that way.she was only a kid though she was a spoil brat. And about the stunt I know she was just bluffing at least that was what I taught. And then my phone started ringing I checked it was Anna so I picked the call Hello sweet I said Hi love Anna replied from the other side I have been trying your number since morning but you are not picking my call she complained ''Baby I'm so sorry'' I didn't check my phone. Hope all is well? I asked just to clear all doubt ''Yeah'', she assured me can you come over to my place now? I have a surprise for you she added Could my day get any worst I taught i'm saying this because Anna's surprises are wild once I still remember the last one on my birthday I got home late after a life tiring practice with the guys There was no light as I opened my door I saw two shining lights that was not suppose to be there I still didn't mind but as I steped my foot inside the room the strange light started running toward me I ran as fast as my legs could carry me screaming and pleading the blood of jesus as I ran for my life thank God I ran into Anna outside the gate I told her what happened then she started laughing To cut the long story short the strange light happened to be the cat she bought for me as a birthday gift. So I was hoping I wouldn't have a heartattack this time all in the name of surprise Hello.... are you there? I heard Anna's voice from the other side of the phone I was busy thinking about the kind of surprise that I almost forgot that she was still on the line Yeah,'' I will be there soon bae ''I replied Okay see you soon then she said and hang up While I locked the door and Head to her place boarding a bike from lighthouse. *************************** Next Episode loading
23 Sep 2015 | 12:03
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My nigg @skookum thankz 4 d mention bruv.. . @sofia thanks 4 d invite... I owe you one . hey boo @kuks ghat reservation for US
23 Sep 2015 | 12:06
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lol @konphido and @emmyrexx abeg make una nor vex nor be my fifth he be like na the zobo when @Donmike bring dey catch me ....
23 Sep 2015 | 12:12
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#Ican'tstoplaffing#. Waiting eagerly for d nxt episode.
23 Sep 2015 | 12:13
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thanks @skookum you are a sweetheart
23 Sep 2015 | 12:15
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Fanx 4 d mention my sister @tenniebenson. @ritagold u r doing a nice work here keep d flag flying dear.
23 Sep 2015 | 12:45
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Nice start... Let's roll all d way till d end.
23 Sep 2015 | 12:47
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thanks @skookum
23 Sep 2015 | 12:54
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@Tonia u left khola 4 who? U didnt leave him 4 me o..u were trying 2 snatch him 4rm him...but u knw na... Me sef no dey slack... @Frankkay shey Khola complain sey i dey date somebdy join am? Na khola give me go ahead... Nd he is still my hubby too... No shook mouth 4 our matter o
23 Sep 2015 | 13:01
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bring it on bring it on i am ready are u ready? @ritagold, i am with u all d way sai ka che holy spirit. Let's go dia
23 Sep 2015 | 13:06
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@Tenniebenson, as husbands plenty for ur side, I wan take wat rightfully belong to me. I lend Khola to u and nw, I want him back. Lols. U know dat we r "Ts".
23 Sep 2015 | 13:13
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Tanx dude,i no wan talk any oda thing o@skookum
23 Sep 2015 | 13:17
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Ride on sis@ritagold
23 Sep 2015 | 13:19
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I also dey follow sing the song,bring it on by psquare ft dave scoot@wyseone
23 Sep 2015 | 13:20
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@frankkay did u see me 4 ur wife side no be she com dash me correct kiss ni,abi wen u no dey giv it to her d way she like *tongue out* u too ask her d difference abi @gracedkyenny sey u too no sabi d diffrnce
23 Sep 2015 | 13:24
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@temmyjoy y?? U ar free to talk anytin . But I hope u too done dey crush on me.....d@ d only tin I will be eager to hear(I pray make my babes no see this oo)
23 Sep 2015 | 13:27
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tnx @frankkay @skookum u guys re 2dafl let d tori continue @ritagold nyc tori
23 Sep 2015 | 14:12
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@Ritagold dear am sorry i came late...... ????❤❤❤❤???? please forgive me...... this story is dedicated to our love move on am right behind u....
23 Sep 2015 | 14:34
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@skookum i see u jor.... take tym....
23 Sep 2015 | 14:37
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Tanx dear@konphido
23 Sep 2015 | 14:53
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Me?crush on u ke,no be u dey crush 4 me if nt y did u wnt 2 hear wetin i wan talk.Dnt wori ur babes no go hear@skookum
23 Sep 2015 | 17:58
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.Episode 3 . . . . . . . . On getting there Anna was in the kitchen And what ever it is that she was cooking reminded me that I have not eaten since morning Babe is that you? Anna asked from the kitchen ''Yeah'' I replied I will be there in a sec she shouted almost bringing down the roof Really?i'm asked ''yeah'' she replied But its 10::::15::::20 Aww its almost an hour I counted *laughing* Whatever ibrams I will join you soon I could hear her laughing to my silly joke I sat on the couch and put on the Tv and waited patiently for her. And there she comes with a plate of fried rice and chicken My tommy started making some funny sound Wow... ''this looks delicious'' I said ''But I still have to confirm that'' She just giggled She kept the food on top the table in front of me with a bottle of coke I immediately started devouring it Gosh....it was so delicious plus I was very hungry before she cold say jack the plate was already Empty she cleared the table while I drank the coke Thank you very much bae for this delicious surprise. I complimented she just grinned looking at her she looked so pale Baby are you okay? I asked ''yeah'' I 'm okay Why? Do I look ill? She inquired I just ingnored her question and planted a kiss on her lips So tell babe where is the surprise? I asked I know for sure that the surprise is yet to come the Anna I know will not prepare a surprise like that. I took her both hand and drew her closer to myself then she rested her head on my shoulder I'm pregnant she said still resting her head on my shoulder Huh? I asked not like I didn't hear what she said but I wanted to be sure ''I'm two months pregnant'' 'I'm carrying your baby'' she poured out what? I shouted I'm sure the was startled because she quickly stood up How?......... When? I stammered What do you mean by how? and when? ''Are you not happy''? '' But you are still not done with your studies'' I said looking for a good reason to give for my sudden change in mood ''And so what''? she replied ''We can get married'' ''No'' I said without even thinking I'm not ready I voiced out pacing like my million naira worth of goods has just drowned in the red sea But then a resounding slap from Anna made me come back to my senses How dare you? She screamed at me with tearsfilled eyes What am I to you? A toy? I just stood motionless my hand on my check where she slapped me And the the next thing she suddenly collapsed I taught it was a prank I called her name but she didn't answer Annabel...... Annabel Talk to me Anna ...... Anna please talk to me.... . . .goodnight guys there will be more updates tommorow. @tenniebenson @ibrams @khnopido @emmyrexx @skookum @mray
23 Sep 2015 | 18:09
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Waooo d@ slap I dey feel am,but w@ make her to colapse . @Temmyjoy hmmm I g@ yah dnt worry we go talk d rest 4 conner . My wifey makin brain ride on I dey ur bak(abi my frnd wife sebi na my wife also,because nw ibrams go run com,com dey chase me wt dagger)
23 Sep 2015 | 18:55
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.Episode 4 . . . . . . .At the hospital I was pacing from one end of the Opd to the other. All the Nurses were busy running from one direction to another some with tray containing God knows what ..others with syringes and some other stuff I don't care to know but nobody was talking to me It has been close to three hours already and I was beginning to get scared What will I tell her parent? That I got their daughter pregnant and she is about lossing her life because the baby was not actually conceived or whatever the doctor meant when she said the baby was outside the womb ''Etopic pregnancy'' like she called it. Was that even possible! I had to sign the consent form before the surgery though I have called her parent which also mean that her life was in my hands I have prayed and I still kept praying while I waited for someone to at least tell me what was going on Is she still in the theater or what? I asked one of the nurse that came out but just before she could answer me the doctor came out wiping her face with an handkerchief Mr abraham please see me in my offices she said I quickly followed her she sat down while I stood waiting for her to tell me what was going on Please sit' said pointing at the chair opposite her's I obliged and sat down Please tell me how is she doing? I inquired Calm down please she said She is okay the operation was successful I Exhaled deeply and sighted God I have never been so scared I said smiling even though I have no reason to can I see her now I asked? You can see her, but not now. she Replied But for now you need to make some deposite she added I went out to pay the deposite I had to wait for another two hours before I was allowed to go inside her ward I stood at the entrance of the door Watching her she was awake on blood transfusion I walked in and sat down on the chair beside her bed I could see that she has been crying Leave she said turning her face away from me Anna I'm sorry I pleaded Its okay she replied ''But leave me alone''. ''Now'' she added as much as I didn't want to leave, I had to let her be for now ''Okay'' I said I will be around just incase you nee.... I won't be needing your help she snapped Go ibrams I don't ever want to see you I was taken aback by her last words Ann please don't say that I said I was hurt by her words Nurse she called in a weak voice a nurse came running in like she has been Stung by a bee I'm done with him she said and please I don't want him around here anymore she added Okay the nurse nodded Please you can go now the nurse said ushering me out like I was some kind of pest I looked at anna who has closed her eyes as if she was sleeping before walking out of the ward. Her dad almost have my head chopped off when he came about two hours after I wouldn't blame him though I'm sure I will do worst if I were in his shoes I had to go home because her family was there already her younger sister came along with her mom and from the look of things I wasn't needed there so I had to leave I got home about eleven thirty my dad had already left leaving some sum of money for me which he kept on top the table Way to go... He will never stop treating me like a kid I was glad I didn't meet him at home I took a warm bath after which I turned on my home theater and increased the volume it was already past twelve I took my dairy and jolted down.this is going to be a long day. Without Anna I will miss her smiles her laughter and most of all her surprises. I kept the diary and lay down but sleep was not fort coming I kept rolling from one end of the bed to another And from nowhere the memories started coming back Once I have buried and though I have forgotten I groaned with pain and regret A day I will never forget .. . . .
23 Sep 2015 | 20:09
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@skookum shift make I spread my mat...... girls are not allowed to look the side of my mat... cos I don't need a slap just like ibrams.........any way good night.... in ibo language...... na chi fo
23 Sep 2015 | 20:15
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you have done well @ritagold ride on light house
23 Sep 2015 | 20:26
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thumbs up 2 u miss@ritagold..... U don try... 4 episodes to call it start.... @skookum... Gee tanks 4 d iv.
23 Sep 2015 | 20:37
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nice one next abeg.. and @skookum thanks for the invitation
23 Sep 2015 | 21:41
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good morning guys...... Still cooking the next episode wen he don I go bring am....Oya more comments. @ibrams bae how was your night? @tenniebenson
24 Sep 2015 | 02:03
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@roes y dnt u tell me u ar a cleric I beg oo I am surounded by my first ladies ni oo Rita babe good mornin Barka De Salah guys,all yeh muslim here as u don dey com make u dey com with fried meat(ram)or else hmmm u knw w@ uncle Skookum can do oo *winks*
24 Sep 2015 | 02:19
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Looking forward 4 mur episodes. Buh @ritagold na my name u murder lyk dat???
24 Sep 2015 | 02:38
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Hahahahahahahahaha I just d imagine d way dis guy dy run............. @skookum Nawa 4 u o, I just give u small appreciation *kiss* u com dy shout as if I don cheat on him...... @frankkay no mind @skookum I still dy loyal 2 u
24 Sep 2015 | 02:58
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***********continuation************ : ; : : : : :I could see her sobing in her clumsyness,i could see her struggle in vain as I shamefully took her pride without her consent. It was our last day in secondary school we hosted one of those wired party at sam's resident we got all drunk and did some really stupid things. The night I met the most beautiful girl ever my heart went to her the moment I saw her I was told that she was lyna's cousin from zimbabwe she came for a visit I didn't even know her name and I couldn't mutter up the courage to talk to her as I was still very timid then when it comes to girls issue I was barely sixteen so I told sam about my feelings and he said he could help...... Of cos he did, and its the reason why I regret it up till now She was drugged and I stupidly and shamelessly took her. I raped an innocence girl. after that night I never set my eyes on her I learnt she had gone back to zimbabwe but couldn't dare to ask about her . I tried to stop those memories from coming back even the loud music was not helping issue I cold still her pleading in vain as I forced myself on her . I checked the time and it was six am already I didn't even sleep I hissed no wonder they say there is no peace for the wicked. I stood up put on my sweatpant, t-shirt and a sneakers I grabbed my headphone from the locker turned off the music and went out for my morning exercise. I put on the headphone turning the volume up almost shattering my eardrums but I could still hear my thoughts loud and clear. I started running as soon as I got out. I was heading towards lighthouse and then from nowhere someone bump into me or was it the other way round all I could see was some one bumping into me and then went flying and landed on the ground and then I looked closely I saw that it was pretty I was surprised and at the same time wondering what she was doing out at this early hour of the day I was about helping her up when a strange lady came from no where and helped her up. She looked at me moving her lips Was she talking? I wasn't hearing her I just stood watching her lips as they move I was so lost in her bueaty and then pretty yanked the headphone from my head it was then I realise why I wasn't hearing her Watch where you are going next time she said taking the headphone from pretty and then gave it back to me. ''PrettY''.. She called as she continued her jogging I still couldn't say anything I just stood watching her like a zombie only to be drawn back again by pretty ''Stop drooling'' ''she is gone'' she said smirking What?what do you mean? I asked defending myself ''Hey grumpy'' I saw you drooling over her Don't lie she reply a with an evil grin plastered on her face Shut up I said looking back to see if the strange lady was near ''Don't worry,'' she is 'denced' she said and I won't tell on you so put a smile on that old face she said giggling and then she joined the strange lady. That little girl was beginning to get on my nerves such a brat And that strange lady who is she? Like I have seen her before but I don't know where Could be in one of the party's Or so I taught I was feeling sleepy all of a sudden so I decided to go home and sleep first before going to lighthouse I sent a text to taiwo telling him I will not be there on time so he will be in charge till I get there. . . . . .stay tuned more episode loading....
24 Sep 2015 | 04:04
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@konphido even me myself tire as I try to spell the name many things come dey happen abeg nor vex. @ibrams @skookum @tenniebenson @frankkay @Roes Oya all ya ll start dropping your comments like offering and you will be blessed with more episode Amen.. Lol
24 Sep 2015 | 04:15
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Whalai na d babe u rape be d one u bump on. . . . . I dnt knw y guys rape,u wunt even enjoy d stuff just do am 4 doing sake *iranu* . Ride on jare swt@ mi na 8 episodes am expectin 2day oo . @gracedkyenny hmmm i wunt talk ooo we go meet again 4 our emm emm(u knw nw) @frankkay just watch ur back ooo . Guys my second story will be droping by month endin it Title *JAMB LESSON AT OSCCO* wacth out still packaging,editing and preparing d script(@ritababe dnt worry I go pay 4 d advert)
24 Sep 2015 | 05:22
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.Episode 5 . . . . . Two weeks after the the incident of Anna she was discharged. I tried all I can to reach her but all my effort was in vain. what I feared most has happened I have lost my girlfriend along with my best friend I had to move on hoping she will come around when she is ready. . At lighthouse things were getting really tough we have a competition coming up in about ten days and I have to build up a strong team if we win this time lighthouse will be in a higher range so I have to put all my Effort plus time I picked ten persons out including taiwo and of cos vicky she is one of the best female dancer in lighthouse The competition will last for two day and in the two days if we are not evicted we have to come up with different dance step we practised day and night though we win almost all the competition we have participated in but this one was different The winner will be going home with a whopping sum of five million naira and a car That was tempting and I'm not ready to loss It not for anything I was already dreaming of a better life in lighthouse same thing goes to my team Some days ago they were fighting over how much will be given to them and who will be the first to drive the car Taiwo was suggesting that the car should be sold and the money shared equally that was a joke though, but vicky took it seriously and chased him out. Those two could be hilarious at time funny and silly couple ''The Spiders'' was one of the threat we have I learnt they now have a very good choreograper that has made their once strong group unbeatable This only made me more determined And the team was not letting me down I have already prepared our costume for the grove only waiting and practising as well We just have to win...... we are the winner lighthouse......
24 Sep 2015 | 05:32
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Finally am here...waow what a nice story!oya ride on dear...tank u so much 4 d i.v @skookum
24 Sep 2015 | 05:34
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Yes yes finally i have catch up thankx to you guyx for the iv @skookum @sofia thanx so much nice story @ritagold keep it rolling am cofortably seated waiting for the next episodes
24 Sep 2015 | 05:38
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make ah tok ma own oooo... any body wey come near @temmy joy wit smile or laf na crushing tinx... no use ma bae play for me ooo
24 Sep 2015 | 05:54
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@skookum I swear I must to marry you duro.... if you help me with that(i hope say ibrams nor for see this one)lol thanks guys I will try and post more updates. only say all this Napa pipo nor dey use brain he bi like they nor dey wear trousers so they nor get shame lolz...
24 Sep 2015 | 05:57
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Nice one Ritagold next pls
24 Sep 2015 | 05:59
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Make una no vex say i cme late d important tin b say i don show. Abeg bar man give me 7up mke i tke ride wit my peeps.
24 Sep 2015 | 06:10
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@ritagold ride on i day ur side
24 Sep 2015 | 06:14
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@skookum tnks 4 invite
24 Sep 2015 | 06:15
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Corner ke,u wan kobalise me ni@skookum
24 Sep 2015 | 06:26
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Dnt wori am yours forever,no anoda@crusher
24 Sep 2015 | 06:30
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Nice [email protected] fire on
24 Sep 2015 | 06:33
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@ritagold i no understand you o
24 Sep 2015 | 06:43
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Thanks 4 the invite@skookum*kisses*shea ur wifely no see me make im no come strangle me night o.... lol
24 Sep 2015 | 06:45
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Ah jux dey tek one corna eye luk u @ritagold shey na my zobo dy mk u high no wan gree post d nxt episode or na actuali nepa pple ni.. Jor o my zobo no go enter ur hand xcpt u post lyk 2 episodes 2day at least o.. Buh den u knw wat sweerie, in whisper.. Ssshh next pls!
24 Sep 2015 | 06:51
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Thanks @Skookum. Nice work
24 Sep 2015 | 07:08
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Still observin @tenniebenson no be say i dey chuk mouth for another persin mater . De tin be say am jst tryin to be a gud frd bcos i no hear khola gave u go ahead .had it been he did so. He could have told me tennie diaris God oo hw many guys u don de date u said khola is still ur hubby nd u dey date @vict-vames ...@skookum watin dey worry u sef u jst won snatch everybody bae u better concentrate on ur babe oo @ritagold abeg help me talk to him ooo hmm or .@ibrams no mind skookum jare na ojukokoro de do am
24 Sep 2015 | 07:11
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here finally, nice story
24 Sep 2015 | 07:33
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@crusher sey na me u dey refer to stylishly abi no worry I get ur code #lolz . @ritagold I beg no put me 4 @ibrams trouble oo he don dey gv me close marking b4 . @temmyjoy I wunt talk ooo untill we see . @frankkay y u too careless wt ur bae . @chomyline hmmm can u give me d repeatision of d@ privately
24 Sep 2015 | 07:40
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Wetin dey do this Anna of a girl sey na him distroy d pregnance ni You too wen u no u say u never ready y u dey box without glove
24 Sep 2015 | 07:42
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*just peeping ooo* "Am I invited ?"
24 Sep 2015 | 08:26
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Of course yes @eminem abeg o make una shift 4 me. No noise oo nice story swt @ritagold
24 Sep 2015 | 08:38
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Lol@skookum but na true my guy @crusher dey tell u o
24 Sep 2015 | 08:51
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Thanks Sofia
24 Sep 2015 | 09:19
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@eminem how you check this my mat........ @skookum .......nd others..... in the book of kiss chapter love verse romance: it says even your boo get a boo.......mmuah to all the ladies..... @ritagold you first take the kiss
24 Sep 2015 | 09:42
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I kiss you all whether @tennibenson.... or @temmyjoy...@sofia. all ladies are girls @crush no quarrel here o .....(wink) all my ladies kukere
24 Sep 2015 | 09:47
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Lolzz@skookum
24 Sep 2015 | 09:52
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Thanks wifey @tenniebenson and @skookum 4 sah I.V
24 Sep 2015 | 10:15
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Nice work @ritagold
24 Sep 2015 | 10:32
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@skookum she say na .only tank u kiss she gave u dat 1 way dem dey give for fourhead u won use style turn am to mouth she riject.i trust my babe oo did i say trust oo yes trust so no talk am say i no hole my bae wella
24 Sep 2015 | 10:46
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Aiit, let d strange lady b known. Nd as 4 d competition, dnt wori i'm gon' vote 4 ya.
24 Sep 2015 | 10:57
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Lol... All of una come dey claim boo nw bah? I don open floor... Nice one.... I just dey look all of u togeda... @Tonia u cannot see o... Even if I av 1 million husbands... I cnt give u one. @frankkay leave matta 4 mathias o... We knw as we dey do our thing. U re welcome sweetie @Vict-Vames
24 Sep 2015 | 11:29
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@Ritagold u re mouthed jae... Loving it
24 Sep 2015 | 11:30
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.....*clears throat*..... 4 diz matter nt to totally get out of hands @skookum ad @frankkay Oya both of u should drop d girl ( @ritagold ) 4 me Make u na com da go house That iz hw good elders solve problem between 2 children. Lol...
24 Sep 2015 | 13:08
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@roes wat do u mean by ur mat ?
24 Sep 2015 | 13:09
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Diz iz getting more interesting Sumting tells me "pretty" iz d new dancer "the spider" jux got ad also thesame girl he raped years back. Oya continue Abeg! Iz any body with handfan here?? Diz place iz 2 crowded ad tight Am feeling heat o!!!
24 Sep 2015 | 13:25
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I sat on my mat following this sweet story.. I like to sit on mat so that wen my bombom minister word to air nobody go yeram
24 Sep 2015 | 13:29
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Haaahaaaa Judge @emmyrexx sey na d@ dem dey do am hmmm u na try ooo,but I hope say u don hear of ''magun''(thurnderbolt) I wunt say more dan d@ oo . Hmm @frankkay u no sey we be paddy it wunt make sence to be fytin ontop girl mata oya I dash u den,but with condition sey she go come help me cook 4 two weeks only b4 I 4get nd 4get*winks*
24 Sep 2015 | 13:40
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tanx @skookum take ileya meat chop
24 Sep 2015 | 13:50
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ayam here @skookum. thanks a milllie. thou calleth, n mi answereth. ride on writer.
24 Sep 2015 | 14:49
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Ok following @ritagold
24 Sep 2015 | 17:35
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kai walahi.. Noise dey 4 hia....*noise pollution*
24 Sep 2015 | 18:32
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.Episode 6 . . . . . . .And the Winner is.....And the Winner is li..light...house. The Host announced I almost choked from excitement My team carried me up in jubilation why the Audience were shouting Ibrams ibrams ibrams . I Was feeling ontop of the world Yes yes yes I shouted as they handed over the cash sum and the car key to me I was still busy shouting yes yes yes when someone called my name as I turned back to see who it was only to wake up and see taiwo starring at me Oh no.. That was just a dream Ibrams are you okay? he asked grinning You were screaming at the top of your voice And what's up with the yes yes.... Now he was laughing I felt Embarrassed I'm sure he was thinking the opposite I have slept off thinking about the competition. ''I''m going home'' I said as I took my stuff and zoomed off with my power bike I was almost home when I saw pretty at a shop buying some stuff I have been seeing her frequently these days I couldn't stop wondering why she wasn't going to school She strike to me as an intelligent girl but she is always in the street Either at the game house or at the state stadium she should be ten if I'm not mistaken, but a 'pain' I still remember the dayI saw her beat up a guy mercilessly A guy that was purpose to be Older than her. But for the strange lady I only got to see her once after the incident the last time I bump into pretty they both bear the same resemblance so I guess they are siblings She saw me and waved at me but as usual I Snobed her pretending I didn't see her But deep down anytime I see her my heart skip a bit as I remember the the strange lady with her the morning I bumped into her. I have been thinking a lot about her recently and for no reason I have been keeping a close eye on pretty too Like there was a bound between us. I so much wanted to know her better but my ego will not let me . . . Finally the D-day We Gathered at Lighthouse as early as five o clock so we can get to the venue on time the journing to the venue was just about an hour and thirty minute drive so we should be there by seven . Vicky lead the prayer as we head to the venue I remembered my dream and a smile drawn on my face. We got there a little earlier than I taught the place was already crowded with different dance group I went in to take down our attendance while we waited for the others to join us the host was busy Interviewing ''How prepared is your team''?' ibrams' she asked as the came over to were I was sitting ''Very prepared'' i replied ''Expect the best'' from'' lighthouse'' I added while my team all shouted lighthouse......lighthouse. Just as she turned to leave I saw someone I was not expecting to see here but I wasn't sure course before I could look again she was gone ''Tsk I think I'm going crazy''... The Competition soon kick start after we have been allocated to our different room where we will do our changing and also where we will spend the night. We changed into our outfits and stood at the back stage waiting to be called upon. there were twenty groups all together and we were number twelve on the list. I was already having a cold feet as the first group came back complaining that the Judges were too harsh. God help me I prayed silently the six of us were going to perform the other three are just there for back ups It was slowly getting to our turn so I gathered my team for a little prayer a thing I learnt from our Nigeria Footballers always praying before the match starts.... And the next team that is going to perform is lighthouse.... The Host shouted my heart skipped A bit as I heard that Lets go there I shouted in an exciting but trembling tone we joined our hands together and shouted ''Fighting''...... . . . . . Guys I'm sorry I couldn't updated more I will try to update more tomorrow Nite nite.
24 Sep 2015 | 19:06
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pray u quys shld win... Blissful nite *kiss*kiss*
24 Sep 2015 | 19:34
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Prophet Skookum talking,pretty is ur daughter,the strange lady is d girl u rape in secondry school so she got pregnant nd gave birth to pretty emm emm both pretty and nd d strange lady are both dancers u go compete against them 4 dix competion..w@ next oooo emm emm dem go give u tough time but lighthouse will win at last...but I dnt knw hw u will reunite sha(d spirits never show me)
25 Sep 2015 | 01:53
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Cary on
25 Sep 2015 | 02:36
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good morning guys How was ya night? Next episode loading 80%....... @skookum you try lol
25 Sep 2015 | 02:37
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Nice one.... Next plz
25 Sep 2015 | 04:13
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Prophet @skookum i dey hail ooo wic time u don turn to prophet hmm young gals go suffer ...as for dat matter skookum i don drop de case rested.....@emmyrexx wic kind elder are u i no agree wit ur judgment de gods of our land most hear dis inshort i don drop dat case but now am filin another against u AAaa skookum dis kind of elder e taya me oo........ @ritagold keep it up thumb up u are doin a nice job here....
25 Sep 2015 | 04:20
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Nice one..... . . @skookum i no dey ur invitation list again?
25 Sep 2015 | 05:53
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Haaaaaaa egbele oooo @kingson1 I swear no vex na dix girls don enter my brain com dey dance skelewu ooo
25 Sep 2015 | 05:58
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prophet @skookum i won't bliv un yhur profesi unti u profile sigh four d next episode 2 drop rite nw. I huge u 2 profile sigh b4 @ritagold drop it o. Coz d 80% loading, don pas 190 ooo
25 Sep 2015 | 06:01
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Hmmm all dis Pipo ENGRISH sef! Even d pidgin dae hard to comprehend!!!
25 Sep 2015 | 06:03
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Hahahahaha @Konphido u no well... tnx my Luv @Ritagold ur rily d best, nyc 1 dear, @Emmyrexx tnx Also for d I v BT did I hear u say ur taking who as ur new wife? hmmmm #filinforadivorce
25 Sep 2015 | 06:16
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Wow prophet skookum in the house no wahala ...ritagold nxt pls
25 Sep 2015 | 06:18
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@konphido sufer nr b my english u dy talketh abt so
25 Sep 2015 | 06:38
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Lolz @nazzy buh I nr lyk d stle u use take curse me!! @roes shebi I mention ur name ni
25 Sep 2015 | 06:54
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@skookum No pro jor . . . But Na shoki she go start 2 dey dance 4 ur head nw. Lolz
25 Sep 2015 | 06:57
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Nice one
25 Sep 2015 | 07:27
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@Skookum i just op ur prophecy is true @ritagold we dy ur back gidigba
25 Sep 2015 | 07:43
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Nice story u got here dearie@RITAGOLD Waiting 4 d nxt ep
25 Sep 2015 | 09:49
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. Episode 7 . . . . . . . As we stepped on stage the music started and also we started our performance the Audience were shouting lighthouse lighthouse like they were singing hossana in the highest. We captured their heart with our mind blowing performance The judges were all grinning they must have been really bored from the previous performance. ''That was an amazing performance from you guys'''' the host said'' ''Over to the judges'' ... They also said the same thing Why we Exit the stage ''Yes''.... we did it... Vicky screamed in excitement Everybody joined as we all came together for a group hug Now my heart was at Ease. The next team to perform is...... ''The spider's '' was the next thing I heard and then every where was calm for about ten seconds and then the music followed and then the screams What was that for? They have barely started their performance and the Audience are shouting already '' Taiwo said hissing'' I peeped from the back stage to see what was going on And there she was ''Again ''? I have to wipe my eyes to make sure that I wasn't just imagining things this time But she was still there. The performance was mind blowing The Judges even gave them a standing ovation While the Audience were busy screaming like hell. And from the look of things, They just crucified our performance We have to put more effort on the next performance so we won't be below them. We should be on he top list The two of them were now Among ''The spiders'' ''You are in spider's'' one of the judges shouted What!! Taiwo exclaimed He too has been peeping just like most of the other teams I so much wanted to answer him but I was lost as at now I was suddenly feeling weak Soon it was time for eviction We were all called up on stage Nine team were dismissed With just Eleven team remaining After the second performance four more were dismissed with just seven team including ''The spider's'' of course For the grand finally tomorrow We all retired to our different room to rest for the night. I was not myself anymore I couldn't stop looking at her when we were called up on stage. ''Pretty'' saw me and smirked I guess she wasn't surprised She stick her tongue out anytime we lock gaze. That kid is really annoying. We took bread and tea in the morning for breakfast before the competition kick start This time there is no Jokes I almost choked when Vicky said she won't be able to perform because she has come down with Dysemenorrhoea (menstrual pain) And she is to lead the next performance we have to settle for one of the back ups I already have my doubt about winning this competition ....Or what do you think? . . . . . . . . Next Episode loading......
25 Sep 2015 | 10:21
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waiting for the next..... @konphido why you put sand for my mat na ??
25 Sep 2015 | 11:01
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m having d feeling dat spider will win...... Dat lady z ur wife(d girl u rape) @frankkay u no miss m? @skookum na u sabi o @ritagold kuddos
25 Sep 2015 | 11:16
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U see my prophecy comin to reality
25 Sep 2015 | 11:20
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@gracedkyenny sweetie i miss u alot am nt even enjoin de story since u are nt around me
25 Sep 2015 | 11:46
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nice..... sorry @Ritagold i couldn't support you all this while, hope you aren't angry..... hmmmmmm **sorry face **
25 Sep 2015 | 12:06
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@ibrams its alright......its okay since you have saw I finener girl that is more finener dan me its okay *sob* I will commoting from your house and left you be I'm going aboard to rest in p Lolzzzzzzz. Its okay hun I understand . @skookum all this your profile site as my bae call am lolz
25 Sep 2015 | 12:16
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haba swty..... it ain't like that please don't break my heart..... ????????????????????????
25 Sep 2015 | 12:25
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Abeg try more than this O
25 Sep 2015 | 12:47
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@last I get here @sofia thank ooo Yu are now boss now ooo Were all of yu dey ooo @titimi @federal @kampat @mumabel @omoobaa @temmytopluck @solo @phemboard @generusnelly @Hormotayor @others ooo
25 Sep 2015 | 13:04
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@roes wich kine mat b dat..??? We talking TABLE wif MAGIC MOMENT, HIENEKEN, MOET, HENNESY et RED LABEL u dae call mat??? U must b LOCALIZED!!! . . . LOLZZZZ
25 Sep 2015 | 13:27
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@konphido. Her lawv my local stile. Am chillin wit pammy, bush meat, abacha n ugba, okporoko , herbelg, hw una check tabe nd mat ?
25 Sep 2015 | 14:22
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next pls
25 Sep 2015 | 14:59
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@konphido Hw many u b.....i no understand o
25 Sep 2015 | 15:14
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Oya Ibrams d man do the thing 4 dem has DJ Williams(Columbus Short)did it in Storm The Yard(my best dance film ever)u must win ooo nd com along with d prize nd d oda prize awaiting u *winks* @ritagold wetin shele now I no see update oo
25 Sep 2015 | 17:37
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@roes chaiiiii wetin u dey do @ am wen I need english teacher ur vocabs fit uproot a mansion (no offence bro just playing)
25 Sep 2015 | 17:40
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@frankkay ur bae dey my room dem warm my bed
25 Sep 2015 | 17:45
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@skookum notin busines me o.. My only problem nw is dat @ritagold never posteth any update 2 nite nd d seconds is stil moving.. Har larf parz yew. No kworel year
25 Sep 2015 | 18:32
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@skookum u dey dream wake up pls
25 Sep 2015 | 20:05
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i sit down for one corner dey watch next pls
25 Sep 2015 | 20:13
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I guess u will win
25 Sep 2015 | 20:39
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Stop shaking n concentrate
25 Sep 2015 | 23:13
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are u ready 2 win?... Put away fear... If yes @ team liqhthouse.
26 Sep 2015 | 01:05
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Making sense.... Next
26 Sep 2015 | 01:31
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@roes nr bring dat leg cos I av bin dere befor... . .And accordin to da emperor witat an Empire @skookum, .Me go like weneva u drop ur ENGRISH nr tag me o... Thankz
26 Sep 2015 | 03:52
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.Episode Eight . . . . . . . It was a battle for the fittest. I had to put together all the stunt I know to be able to win the Judges over this time. Even the Audience had no choice than to dance to the tone of our music The spider's were also at their best Who would ever think that I will be fighting had to claim what's mine And that annoying little kid. At eight pm the whole place was filled up the brim. As the Judges concluded on the result . I was surprised to see my dad and my little sister among the audience even my mum was there. I was really happy to see them This is the first time they have come to watch me perform though Mr Femi was putting on facing that I couldn't really tell what going on in his mind if he was proud or disappointed. good evening ladys and gentlemen the host greeted drawing the attention of everyone back to stage. ''Tonight,''' we are going to have a new winner in the lola street dance season two''......... There Audience all applauded and some of them screamed. ''Calm down''.....''calm down'' just be patient'' she said. ''The Judges have concluded''. ''And soon. ''One of the seven team will be crowned winner'' ''while three others will follow as the first, second and third runners up''. ''So are you ready to... See... The ... Winner... Of ..the...lola street dance season two''? ''Yea.......h'' they all cheered ''Okay okay''.... Let me have on stage, '' Team lighthouse'' my team were all happy as we were the first to be called out and you know what that means. ''the spider's'' ''she called'' while they joined us on stage. ''team Elshida'' ''Team Nova'' ''Team flexibility'' ''Team owk'' And lastly the lonny brothers before we proceed, let me first let you all know that, you are winners, No matter what happen or the outcome of the result you are a winners. Well spoken like a politician taiwo said and I almost burst out laughing ''Okay'', ''I will start will the third runners up'' ''And that is''...... ''The lonny brothers''......they all jumping and screaming in jubilation. Tsk If I were in their shoes I will bury my head in shame. And the second runners up is...... The flexibility they did the same thing. ''These guys are annoying'' I said to my self ''And the first runners up''.................... Lig........ht house....................I could see my Team all jumping and couldn't tell why they were happy the winner hasn't even be called. And then reality strucked me when the host Announced the winner ''The spider's'' she shouted That was the last thing I remembered as I blacked out. . . . . Sorry guys Napa no be person friend they just dey frustrate their self ontop say na china phone I still they use so editing I s really hard prophet @skookum @tenniebenson @Roes @frankkay @ibrams @jennifer @konphido good morning to ya'll I will posts more update
26 Sep 2015 | 04:29
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Post kia kia oo
26 Sep 2015 | 04:52
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Morning tu you too nd how was ur nite @ritagold
26 Sep 2015 | 05:08
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Morning sweetie @ritagold hw are u..........waitin de worry sis nepa people sef abeg help tell dem let dem no allow me react oo
26 Sep 2015 | 05:52
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@frankkay never in ur life sud u call ritagold ur swiddy again except u wana see d oda side of me #vexin mood# . @ritagold dear oya com update quick ooo
26 Sep 2015 | 06:20
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@skookum lol dey dere u dont no watin dey happun for ur back .as for ur order side i don see de one way pass am if it comes to fist i dey gidigba. wait ooo na only u get ritagold no let me change dat ur mood o
26 Sep 2015 | 07:05
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@frankkay I keep am 4 u inside cooler
26 Sep 2015 | 07:50
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Ha!!! So una no even get 2nd or 3rd positions? Its a lie.. Post d next tin nd let's see d winner jae.. Else I will come nd beat up all doz judges
26 Sep 2015 | 08:18
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@skookum better
26 Sep 2015 | 08:25
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Hmmm
26 Sep 2015 | 08:34
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@Ritagold nice.....kip it up let me go and talk to this nepa pple..... i will do anytin for u..... i will do anytin u want me to do.... cos i love u more than anyone...... @Skookum bros me hw far.... tank u for doing ur job weldone.... @konphido hw far my niqqa... long tym mehn..... @frankkay i see u jor
26 Sep 2015 | 09:50
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@ibrams watin i do again
26 Sep 2015 | 10:22
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Nice one,bt y runner up na?y not winner
26 Sep 2015 | 10:54
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@frankkay i jst they hala u neh.....
26 Sep 2015 | 11:06
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Dat so bad ur dad will be disappointed in ur work oh my gosh
26 Sep 2015 | 11:27
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Next
26 Sep 2015 | 12:51
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Pls who do hell won d competition pls..? Nxt abeg
26 Sep 2015 | 13:23
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Episode 9 . . . . . . . . I woke up only to find myself in a strange environment. In hospital bed on Infusion I was feeling a slit headache and I was burning inside. Is he going to be okay? I could hear my dad's voice but he was not in the ward. Just then Nifemi came in seeing that I was awake she ran out again without saying anything. And when she came back the whole of lighthouse was with her They were all putting on a gloomy look And then ''pretty'' What is she doing here I asked no one in particular. But they all started laughing I was lost as at why they were laughing ''Guy you almost gave us a heartattack'' ''Taiwo said'' amidst Laughter ''Not almost'', Vicky said. ''I had an heartattack'' They were still laughing when my dad came in and they slowly stopped laughing. ''Ab'' what happened to you? He asked though he seem okay but I could still tell that he was worried. ''Dad I'm fine'' I said assuring him you see what I'm tell you? You have to stop this NOnsense and face reality This will take you no where ''Dad.....not now please my head stil''...... ''Your head what''? he interrupted ''Doctor''.....he shouted. The doctor came running in ''Tell him how you feel''' he said to me after the doctor came in. Doctor I'm Okay I said ''He is lieing'' my dad argued '' Please he is my only son he ranted on on ''He is okay'' pretty shouted and then he was quite. He looked at her and smiled a bit. And then he looked at the doctor who also looked lost . Lets talk in your office he commanded Okay the doctor said as he lead the way whew.....I see where you get your grumpy ness pretty said and Nifemi yanked her ear while she screamed ''Its my dad you are talking about sibo'' she said. ''Aww please don't copy my mom'' ''she complained'' ''Then don't call my dad grumpy when I'm here'' I watched as they both kept arguing and I couldn't help but wonder when they both became so closed and when she met her mum. Back to why I was here I still remember the host declaring the spider's as the winner but aside that I can't remember another thing that happened. ''Guy why you just come faint like that nau''? Vicky asked grinning. At least we are the first runners up she added ''We still have a car'' taiwo added ''But we missed the after party pretty joined' And then she came and sat on the bed handed a flower to me ''Get well soon grum... Sorry ibrams'' she said smiling. They soon left leaving only Nifemi and pretty behind they both seem to be so close ''Bro what will you have for break fast,'' '' I'm sure you are hungry already'' ''Me too'' pretty said'' I still couldn't believe that we came out first Runners up And its even more humiliating that I fainted right there on stage. And the fact that pretty was here at the hospital was also disturbing. How long was I out I asked Nifemi who was busy playing truth or dare with pretty ''long enough for me to miss the after party, And now my mum is mad because I didn't tell her I was leaving with you guys.'' ''Shut up sibo'' Nifemi shouted'' ''Don't call me that'' she said ''Just about fifteen hours'' Nifemi said ''You fainted on stage so we brought you to the hospital' ''The doctor said You were Dhydrated so you were admitted''. She concluded. What about mum? ''She is at your resident will be here soon'' ''aren't you forgetting some thing''? pretty asked laughing'' ''No of course not'' ''we all slept on your bed she shouted'' laughing'' What? You didn't I shouted ''You are such wimp'' Nifemi said ''I know'' she replied ''Okay, both of you get out I need some rest and please tell dad that I want to go home'' already I added. ''Sure bro'' she said'' ''Oh! before i forget'', '' Aunty Annabel is also at home with mum'' What? I asked surprised. ''Exit''......they both chorused and ran out Taiwo came in some minute latter smiling ''Please don't start'' I begged seeing that he was about to start from where they stopped. ''Alright boss'' he said hands up ''We are leaving now'' ''See you at home latter'' I could see that he was grinning as he hurried out. I hate my life I said as I closed my Eyes. . . . . . . Next episode loading ....
26 Sep 2015 | 13:31
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Waiting
26 Sep 2015 | 14:08
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@ritagold na d xame tin me nd u dy face wit nepa o. Imagin. 4rm gud morning roes To gud evening ritagold
26 Sep 2015 | 14:31
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Am finaly here,@skookum tanx fo inviting me@ritagold u have an intresting story here keep it roling.
26 Sep 2015 | 14:39
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@ibrams itz bin long bruv n m stil cul like ice. Inbox me... Gotta catch up on old times
26 Sep 2015 | 14:48
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Lets keep sentiments aside... the spiders were supposed to win, check it na... the crowd screams, the judges standing ovation, C'mon!
26 Sep 2015 | 14:54
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I no undastand,u said the called the spiders as the first runner up bt now is the lighthouse
26 Sep 2015 | 15:09
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Am lost......wu be Nifemi hw did she get along with pretty
26 Sep 2015 | 15:36
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@ritagold... Xplain b4 postinq wu b nifemi and she qet alonq wit pretty
26 Sep 2015 | 17:07
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am confuse o
26 Sep 2015 | 17:08
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Dnt hate ur lyf oo @ibrams
26 Sep 2015 | 17:38
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Dat pretty is funny, buh i follow diz guy faint o cos na so my hrt dey race when d host dey announc d winner. Congrats al d same, u guys tried.. Nice one @ritagold
26 Sep 2015 | 17:55
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next
26 Sep 2015 | 18:19
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Lol can't stop laughing
26 Sep 2015 | 18:47
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we go no nifemi wit flash bck. Jxt fayadan no nid 2 ex plane
26 Sep 2015 | 19:16
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@Tenniebenson Ha tire 4 dem o Ha beg wen u set on going to beat the Judges Call me @Skookum 4getti...i get ordechi 4 magun (thurnderboat) So notin do me @Frankkay U no even get respect at all o C as u ar talking 2 an elder wit out kneeling down Oya portrait ad appologize nw nw @Nazzy Dear It azn't got to that nw Az a gud elder that want gud development 4 diz community am just trying to do d rit tin by settling matter 4 diz 2 children fighting of somtin dat iz 2 big 4 dem to handle that can only b maintain by an elder like me Hope u understand qua?...oya chop kiss @youngfellow Y b say na corner u seat down da watch? Oya come seat on my lap so u can watch clearly ad comfortably @Ritagold Great story Lerrit kip rolling
26 Sep 2015 | 20:37
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Next.
26 Sep 2015 | 21:46
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@emmyrexx just wait nd see u will no say I no be good man wen it involves girls
27 Sep 2015 | 02:13
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@skookum u be fake prophet.. how u de take c ur own sef
27 Sep 2015 | 03:13
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Eyaa
27 Sep 2015 | 03:46
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@emmyrex no vex na u course am y u come dey do dat kind of judgment na so other elder de do
27 Sep 2015 | 04:59
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Thanks to who invited me
27 Sep 2015 | 11:02
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Episode 10 . . . . . I was Discharged home the next morning. my dad sent his driver to pick me up at the hospital I didn't brother to ask why they didn't come with him I just figured they were busy and Nifemi is the last person I want to argue with this morning. When we got home the whole place was calm and I wondered if Mum and Dad has gone home already. Well that will be better, I taught. but when I opened the door, I almost jumped out of my skin as they all shouted ''Surprise''...... ''Happy birthday to you'' they all sang I Even forgot my birthday. Now I know why Anna came She wouldn't miss that for anything But I was happy that this surprised was not that Weird But she didn't seem to care if I was around or not. she was busy chating with the guys Which left me wondering why she was here. I looked round to see if pretty was still around but I couldn't find her any where. The whole place was filled up. The celebration soon came to an end and everyone was leaving Anna left two hours after I arrived she only handed a package to me wishing me a happy birthday. mum said Nifemi has gone back to school because she has an Exam . Dad also left saying he has a meeting to attend taking his wife with him. but not without preaching. The whole place was finally empty at twelve because my team had to stay behind for the after party as they called it Everywhere was messed up Even my room was a mess. I tried to put some things in other but I was really tired so I decide to sleep and continue Tomorrow. But first I have to jot down some things And then I started looking for my dairy But it was no where to be found My dairy is always beside my bed locker but right now it was not even in my room I searched almost Everywhere but I couldn't find it. Who could have taken my dairy? I was so Worried. My whole life is in that dairy I sat down on my bed looking lost and then I sighted a teddy bear at the corner and then I took it. The teddy was holding a heart on it was written happy birthday ''sibonokuhle'' I couldn't even pronounce the name And then I remembered Nifemi calling pretty sibo yesterday now I see while she call her sibo The name sound so strange so I decide to goggle it to see the meaning And then I found out that it was some kind of native zimbabwe Name. . . . . . . *********pretty's pov*********** Since we came from zimbabwe I have been trying to trace the root of my birth. My Mum has been divorce for two years now or should I say we were kicked out because Mum couldn't bear a child for my Ex-dad And he beats her up almost everyday calling me a bastard and my mum a prostitute. My mum told me that my dad is a Nigerian so when she said that we were coming to Nigeria. I had a Mission . And that is to find my dad Either she likes it or not. She told me she loves him That she was forced to marry my Ex Dad.... But on getting here things changed I met uncle Abraham From the first day I met him I felt really attached to him. And the first day he met my mum I could see By the way he looked at her that something was starting. So I decide to change that plan So what if I Don't find my dad? I just want my Mum to be happy and I can tell that he will make her happy. but the competition was not part of it. It just happened and I guess it happened for a reason. Because I got to meet his Not so cool Dad his Mum and his lovely sister I really love his family and I can't wait to be among this family. . . . . . . Happy sunday guys. So sorry for the late update. prophet @skookum tell them who Nifemi be nau? Guys if you read the first episode you will see where I mentioned that Nifemi is ibrams little sister Una dey fall my hand oh. I will put more effort on editing so you guys will understand. Thanks for understanding.
27 Sep 2015 | 14:34
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Kinda short. Buh stil cul
27 Sep 2015 | 14:45
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Uhmmm so na lighthouse come carry second.. Okay.. Its a good thing Spiders won... I already knw Pretty was Ibrams daughter.. Nd dat lady he saw was d gal he raped..
27 Sep 2015 | 15:51
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@Ritagold happy Sunday dear.... @tenniebenson gud evening ma and happy Sunday also..... ibrams ibrams..... hmmmm
27 Sep 2015 | 17:42
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******** continuation******** . . . . . . . Noooo.... this can't be happening I was pacing from one End of my room to Another . Could she be what I think? I just want to think that this is a coincident and nothing more. But still I was curious. ''And my dairy'' What if she has my dairy. I have to act fast before this gets out of hands. There was only one way to find out and that is to do a background check on them. I took my phone and dailed folake's number She is a detective friend of mine. I told her Everything. Excluding the horror part There is a saying that, ''A Well told Lie is better than a Bitter truth'' So I just twisted the whole story, And then she agreed and promised to get back to me soon. But then I had something else in mind I hope this works. . . . . . . *********Anna 's Pov******** For the few weeks I was away from ibrams I was so miserable. it seems I can't do without him. He has become a part of me and I was not ready to loss him for no just reason it wasn't his fort that I lost the baby though he didn't agree with my having the baby at first. So I had to look for an excuse to come and see him. since his Birthday was in two days time, I decide to come over to his place but then I didn't meet him at home I met his mother his sister and also a little girl I latter learnt that her name is pretty But then that wasn't all. ''she looked so familiar'' ''she is familiar'' There is this piece of art I saw in ibrams room some time ago it a drawing of a young girl. He told me she was his first love how come they bear so much resemblance? I decide to search for the picture again I'm sure it will be in his old stuff I turned and searched the room I was almost giving up And then I found it . There was no different between the piece of art I'm holding now and this little girl And the fact that Nifemi was with her all through which has never happened before. Nifemi is always happy to see me around But now, it was as if I wasn't needed here. I have to find out who she is I asked Nifemi but she couldn't even give me a straight answer. It seems I was away for too long So many things has happened I just left for a few weeks but it seems I have been away for years When he got home the next day which was his birthday' I just handed my gift to him and left. ''I'm not done yet'' I'm coming back ibrams is mine and no one will take him away from me. . . . . . . . Good night guys
27 Sep 2015 | 18:10
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@ritagold same to u .nyce one thumb up but u no dey rex
27 Sep 2015 | 18:14
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@ritagold happy sunday dearie,but u fall my hand 2day ooo why one episode now
27 Sep 2015 | 18:31
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Anna get prblm
27 Sep 2015 | 18:36
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Anna if u said so... Then pretty and sibo qo fiqht u 2.
27 Sep 2015 | 18:59
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Yours ko.. His first love nd daughter are back...so bae,forget joorr.. At least nah u do shakara send an comot..
28 Sep 2015 | 06:37
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following... Am back for good
28 Sep 2015 | 06:43
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Nice one,just hope dat u will finaly marry preety mum
28 Sep 2015 | 07:06
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Hmm
28 Sep 2015 | 07:17
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Hope u r nt d father of pretty @ibrams
28 Sep 2015 | 08:05
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[color=red][i][b]*Just Watching*[/b][/i][/color]
28 Sep 2015 | 09:12
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were the update for today now @ritagold
28 Sep 2015 | 09:23
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Same to u
28 Sep 2015 | 10:20
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who will ibram marry ?
28 Sep 2015 | 11:21
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@hardeywummy2 ...... maybe i am ooooo, but....... hmmmmm
28 Sep 2015 | 12:17
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hmm. next oh
28 Sep 2015 | 16:24
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Nice one.............. Next plz
28 Sep 2015 | 16:36
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I'm so sorry I couldn't update any episode today. work things.....life first oh... for those our health workers you should understand. But I promise tomorrow by his grace when I'm free I will try to post the update including the one of today. Nite nite.
28 Sep 2015 | 16:56
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sweet dreams @ritagold
28 Sep 2015 | 19:21
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@Babyj Long time Where av u been Welcom bak kiddo
29 Sep 2015 | 03:32
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We'd be waiting till you start updating again. Meanwhile, nice story. Lighthouse came 2nd, Pretty came to identify his real family; she is also wishing that Ibrams and her mum Nifemi hooks up. Waiting to see if that would happen even as there is the possibility of it taking place
29 Sep 2015 | 10:12
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.episode 11 . . . I woke up the next morning quite late I checked my phone and it was past eight already. So I started putting things in other while I was also searching for my dairy. Then I heard a someone knocking I'm coming I shouted. But whoever it was kept banging on the door without mercy. I Opened the door ready to pour all my anger on whoever I find there. But as I opened the door I was surprised because this was the last person I was expecting to be here. I just stood there staring at her. I was busy staring at her lips as they move with different thoughs on my mind. ''hello''... She snapped her fingers in front of my face and then I woke up from my hallucinations only to see that she was still there staring at me with disgust. ''can you at least answer me''? ''maybe by nodding, or sign''. or are you deft and dumb? she asked using her hands to demonstrate as she spoke. ''is sibonokhule here ''? Actually she left the house this morning she started explaining all over again, Tsk you are useless she exclaimed looking drained and exhausted. I just stood there staring at her as she kept pouring insults on me she was about leaving when pretty opened the gate. ''there she Is'' I said'' I finally found my voice she looked at me in shoke. ''I taught you were mute'' then she turned to pretty who was already at the door with a smirk on her face. Where have you been? I have been waiting for you to come back home and here you are.. She poured out in anger. Mama...... Please I'm not a baby I can take care of myself she said. Sibonokhule you are going to school either you like it or not. And you are coming with me now. Even if I have to drag you there. ''Hi papa ibrams'' she waved and I almost burst out laughing with the way she ingnored her and also their accent as they spoke. ''Mama please not today'' she pleaded''. ''Sibo you won't get away with this not this time or you will have go back to your grandpa'' and I wondered if that was a threate because pretty was moody after she said that. ''Okay mama can I at least''.... ''No...... you are coming with me now''. ''But its late already mama and I won't be allowed in class mama please''. I was standing there contemplating either to intervain or watch them as they keep arguing. ''Pretty you should be in''...... I have not even completed my sentence when She shot a death glare at me so I just kept quite. ''Khulungile''(okay) ''my teddy'' she said'' and I went inside and brought it for her. she thanked me as I handed it to her. For the first time since I met pretty she was calm and moody. I wasn't happy seeing her like that but still I wanted the best for her. she looked at me and smiled a bit. ''Bye'' she said'' as they turn to leave. ''I will see you latter'' I managed to say. but she didn't turn back she just nodded. Her mum turned to look at me.while I smiled like a fool and she hissed. she looked cool but she is not. I mumbled as I closed the door behide me. Then my phone started ringing. I checked it was folake. so quick I thought as I make the sign of the cross before picking the call. while I also prayed silently so I won't pass out after I hear what she has to say. . . . to be continued.
29 Sep 2015 | 19:20
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Don't pass out ooo cos na only yu dey house nobody to help yu oooo Abeg bring more of the story on ooo
30 Sep 2015 | 06:15
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papa ibrams? Dats so cooool. Wetin folake want now, no be say she no do again? Next pls
30 Sep 2015 | 06:27
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Who will tell d story if u pass out,don't abeg.
30 Sep 2015 | 06:30
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Hmm i wish u can post 5 episode today @ritagold nice story
30 Sep 2015 | 06:49
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more please
30 Sep 2015 | 07:08
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Hmm..still observing
30 Sep 2015 | 08:17
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Ibrams sii..... i dey feel u
30 Sep 2015 | 08:32
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Fine one
30 Sep 2015 | 10:35
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******** continuation******** . . . ''hello'' she said even before I could say anything. 'hello detective'' I replied ''Come on''.. '' ibrams no need for that title I don't need that now''. ''Okay''. ''so what's up''? don't tell me you are done already''. I inquired ''Sorry to burst your bubbles man'', ''you still have to postpone that wedding''. ''I actually called to check on you'' you know as friends''. She answered. ''Hmmm''.... ''And Why don't I believe you''? I asked scratching my head. that's something you have to deal with ibrams. Actually I'm not in town now but by next week I will be around so we can talk on lunch at the usual spot ''I'm still on it understand''? And you still have to tell me why you are doing this I you know? She concluded while I nodded as if she could see me.... I really wanted to clear my doubts but for now I don't think I'm ready for any bad news. . Weeks has past and lighthouse was doing great even more than I could ever imagine. with lots of young talented dancers that represent anyday. but something was missing. I'm leaving fine no doubt, but I'm lonely. I haven't set my eyes on pretty and her mum since the last time at my resident I was really missing them and even if I have barely said two words to her not so cool mum I still miss her. strange though. But at time I stay up all night wishing I could see them just once. Funny enough folake has not showed up as planed. And anna has been on my neck for days she has suddenly become a thorn on my flesh. The Annabel I see now is so different from the one I use to call my best friend. Maybe I caused it but right now her attitudes is really pissing me off. she has suddenly turned into a nagging bitch. I can hardly tell what she is thinking or what her next move will be. in her eyes I could see that she has changed a lot. I was on my way to lighthouse when I saw pretty at the shop where she normally buy tthings I called her but she didn't answer me. I couldn't bear the fact that she was ignoring me I waited for her to finish buying her stuff. but she walked past without even turning to look at me.but then the nylon bag she was holding torn and everything was out she stood there staring at them not knowing what to do. I alighted from my bike, walked up to her and started picking the stuff I looked at her and she smiled back at me while she also started picking some of the stuff. She went back to the shop to get a new nylon bag to put them in.. ''siyabonga uncle''(thank you)she said in a typical accent just like pretty and her mum but her's was more typical I was bemused because right now I could see that she isn't pretty just that they look so much alike maybe they are twin. ''you said what''? I asked since the only thing I heard was uncle. the first word was a mystery. ''Than..ks'' she said shyly Oh...... that okay you are welcome I said. I go now uncle... Mama will wait.. She said her english was a total disaster but I could pick one or two from it. Let me drop you at home I offered but she said no. ''sengihamba'' (bye) she waved I didn't bother to ask what that means since she waved her hand I just figured that she meant bye. while I also waved back. Wait...... what's your name I asked? As she was about leaving. ''Lily'' she answered. ''And pretty''. ''where is pretty''? I asked just to be sure. ''sibonokhule''......? She asked'' Yes sibo whatever I said. ''she.... home'' she answered'' ''I' go now uncle''.... I watched as she hurried home. I wanted to ask more but I had to let her go. I was confused. pretty has an identical twin sister. I'm sure she has not been around. I have to call folake she was taking long in her investigation. and I think I'm ready to hear anything. Be it bad or good. even if I have to be jailed if it so happened that she is the same girl and then lily and pretty are my daughters. I'm already dreaming of having a daughter like pretty but seeing lily I think I'm the most happiest man on earth. I don't know what to expect next but I'm ready... . . . . to be continued
30 Sep 2015 | 11:01
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Am finally here nd I mst say, u hv a vry nice story here
30 Sep 2015 | 12:52
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@ritagold kudos u are doin a nice work here nd i like .......u......no no no i mean i like it ......,,,,, @gracedkyenny were u dey am missing u alot
30 Sep 2015 | 13:16
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Ur own pass out is it everytime.
30 Sep 2015 | 15:14
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This is Sinayiurs they are urs
30 Sep 2015 | 16:30
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I bin dey suspect since say d gal u raped be4 is d mother of pretty....well let me watch nd see
30 Sep 2015 | 20:08
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so d qirl u raped qave birth 2 identical twins*papa ejima*
30 Sep 2015 | 21:17
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Prophecy !!
30 Sep 2015 | 22:45
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@Babyj Really Av 4gotten Can u remind me pls? Baby kiddo . . . Mehn Seems ibrams must learn sibabua diz time around for better communication between him Α̲̅πϑ iz new family Nice story ... siyabonga @Ritagold
1 Oct 2015 | 04:48
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diz story self! Following shaa
1 Oct 2015 | 06:32
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happy new month to y'll and happy independent.... sorry guys I won't be posting any update till monday. Tomorrow is my birthday and I will be really occupied....stuff like that Siyabonga...... I know you understand..
1 Oct 2015 | 10:27
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happy bufdae in advance
1 Oct 2015 | 14:31
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Haffy buday.... Enjoy 2day z ur day.
1 Oct 2015 | 20:41
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A birthday is a million of moments, each holding a promise of fulfillment of your dream and accomplishments of some special offers..wishing you a very nice HAPPY BIRTHDAY @ritagold
2 Oct 2015 | 06:00
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thank guys.. you are the best......
2 Oct 2015 | 10:35
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Following
4 Oct 2015 | 21:02
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no update yet?
5 Oct 2015 | 05:17
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today na d Monday @ritagold
5 Oct 2015 | 15:50
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episode 12 . . . I have been doing my own private investigations, but I just wanted her to confirm all that i have find out so far. And its been weeks already. I tried calling her when I got to lighthouse but all her numbers were switched off as usual. leaving me with no options than to take this upon myself since it's my cross. I ran into my childhood friend sam... yes.. The same sam that own the apartment where the whole rape thing took place. At a mall where I took anna to for some shoping.at first I didn't recognise him ''sammy''? I called not sure if he was the one. but then when he saw me he almost brought down the mall with screaming I equally joined. Not minding the attenion we were drawing. The thing is that after that night, I never did keep in touch with him and my other friends because after that we moved to town and that was the last time I saw him until now. Even though sam and I were really very close then. I use to see him as a big brother because he was two years older than me. He kept hailing and raining praises just like some of my fans do when then see me. ''Samy where have you been''? I asked'' ''I should be asking you that'' he answered ''after that night,'' '' you just disappeared'' and that was the end''. I looked away as he mentioned the same night that is still hurting me up till this moment. ''Ah'''.... ''Why don't we hang out later''? I asked'' ''jeez man I have really missed you'' ''and I can see you have done well for yourself'' Sam said. Hugging me continuously and that wasn't funny as well. the last thing I wanted now was a question and answer segment from anna. She was standing staring at us as we talk or should I say make noise. Because on like me, sammy was really happy to see me and I didn't want to spoil the mood so I had to play along. I know sam and what he is capable of. he didn't mind telling the whole world how he made out with his girlfriend. and I'm sure he was about spilling what I did that night in present of anna. I guess he did understand me because he turned to look at anna who was staring in great amusement. ''Oh''.. don't mind ibrams''...... ''you know he tends to forget things at time''. ''I'm anna'', ''his fiance''...she introduced herself while extending her hand for a handshake. I stood there bemused because I never really knew she was my fiance. at least I just found out.. ''Really''? ibrams... ''you really have eyes for good things''. ''I'm Sammy... angel'' ''and its really nice to meet you'' Sammy said turning to look at me while I smiled. He winked at me and I intentionally stepped on his foot. He groaned. And put on a force smile after that ''thank you ibrams''.... ''I will see you tomorrow then'' ''here,'' my card just give me a call when you are free''. I collected it while I gave him a frieidly hug. Before he left At the exit door he turned and winked again and anna was blushing. If what I saw was right. I looked at her I wanted to ask what the drama was about but then I just decide against it. I got to meet sam the next day at a bar we talked about the good old days. Sam was one guy that loves attention and as long as he get enough of that he can stay there for till dawn. And then when it got the the night I didn't want to discuss it with him. But still I had no choice he could be of help. So I opened up to himabout my recent discovering. While I showed him the picture her picture. He just waved it off telling me to forget about it...but then he was also laughing for no reason I was confused and angry at the same time. ''Can you tell me, what is funny about the picture''? ''why are you worried over nothing''? He asked'' ''What do you mean''? I asked'' since I was lost ''Fine she is the one'' ''And actually I have been in touch with lyna''. ''You know her right''? ''Which lyna''?'' ''you mean her cousin''? I inquired'' ''no her grandma''.. ''yes of cos''. ''You know me nau''... ''why you come dey dull me ibrams''? he complained'' looking disappointed and bored because he wasn't getting the vibes he wanted from me. ''Man you have changed a lot o''.... ''see as you come dull'' ''abi na that babe dey witch you like this''? ''Sammy''...... ''not that''. ''Just tell me what you mean''? ''Okay fine'' ''if you wan know'' ''actually that babe just forget am'' because she nor go get your time and the two children;' they could be yours,'' but I'm telling you'', ''you have a lot to loss man''. ''That's if you are thinking of coming clean''. just leave them. Na me Sammy dey tell You.... ''What''! I exclaimed'' ''I can't do that'' ''I'm already attached to them'' ''and to tell you the truth,'' ''I'm in love with her.'' ''I have been in love with her since that night''. I confessed''. Sam looked at me in disbelieve. ''Tell me you are not serious ibrams''. ''What about your other babe nau''? ''You already know what you are getting yourself into right''? ''the secret behind that rape has been kept in locked cupboard for a long time now''. ''Have you ever thought of what will become of you when she finds out the truth''? ''oh I didn't tell you that I was almost locked up because of that''. ''ibrams if not for my dad I will be roting in jail now'' ''Man I thought you were wise'' ''She was forced to get married to a very old man by father when it was discovered that she was pregnant some weeks after the party''. ''and I'm sure that lyna doesn't even know about it(the rape) as well''. ''She told me that she refused to disclose the father of the children''. Which means that they could be someone else. ''Thought we know the truth'' ''and what if they are your children''? ''Your love will take you nowhere'' ''Man she took all those pain alone''. ''Coming out now will remind her of all she went through'' ''Ibrams''.... ''I know I'm also to blame'' ''but you should have used''....''huh'' ''you know what I mean'' I exhaled deeply as he kept rambling. Somehow I wished I hadn't showed up as planed, but he was right though. but still I can't just forget about them like I never met them. I wished it was that easy. My nights has become sleepless i stay up all night thinking about what to do next. ''I thought of telling my dad about it but I still have to be hundred percent sure. ''i know he will be so disapointed but he is bound to find out soon''. ''Because i'm not ready to let go''. I see her almost everyday but I'm scared of approaching her all I do is stare at her from the distance. I finally got to know where they stay so I go there every morning in disguise before they leave the house. It became a routine for me.All I needed was her attention. . . .to be continued
5 Oct 2015 | 16:22
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Ibrams... Attention seeker...
5 Oct 2015 | 18:44
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am sure pretty was d one took ur diary, and she already knows u ar her dad
5 Oct 2015 | 20:10
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Interesting! U did well @ritagold
6 Oct 2015 | 04:35
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seeking attention like Ricky in controlled... any ways hbd in arrears @ritagold
6 Oct 2015 | 05:06
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hmmm, ibrams take it easy o
6 Oct 2015 | 05:44
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Hmmm,u ave to talk to her ibram
6 Oct 2015 | 07:39
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Pretty wil be so hapy d day she wil meet u as her dad.
6 Oct 2015 | 11:39
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@ritagold once you post mention names so that we will no..... @konphido Abeg help me call @kuks .. @Skookum aryu with mie
6 Oct 2015 | 18:39
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Atten what? afta raping ger hmm
7 Oct 2015 | 04:22
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.¤¤¤Episode 13 . . . ''Doctor what is wrong with me''? ''I have been treating myself for this same symptoms for weeks now but it seem to be getting worst'' I complained'' for some time now I have been so sick. it started gradually but now it seem to be getting worst each day. I was practical placed on admission every week. All kind of test has been done with different prescriptions each time I'm admitted the illness will go for just a day then come back again the next day even worst. ''We are still runing some test'' mr abraham'' The doctor said while writing on the file. ''For how long doctor''? I'm dying I lamented. ''here, I'm writing some drugs for you but you will have to come back tomorrow'' the doctor said giving me a prescription. I thanked him before going to get the drugs from the pharmacy. The pharmacist was still attending to me but I was tired so I decide to sit down. I took one of the chair at the opd(out patient department). Hello you are on my sit I heard someone said as she approached me. I didn't look up to see who it was but I answered anyway ''I'm sorry but I'm so tired and I can't stand up now except I'm going to get my drugs''. I explained. ''but you are sitting on my bag'' she shut back at me. ''So I looked up to see who it was only to find out that it was pretty's mum. She looked surprised as she saw me and so was I only she waved her hand telling me to stand up. I obeyed even if I was so tired. I have declined admission earlier but right now I was thinking of staying back so I could be treated I came with anna but she left when I went in to see the doctor saying she will come back. I sat down on the next chair with my both hands on my head ''Are you okay''? She asked'' with a little or less concern. ''Errm....yeah I'm okay. Thanks. I replied'' I'm sorry I didn't see your bag I apologised ''Its okay''she said bluntly'' Why are you here I asked. avoiding her intense gaze. It just felt awkward that the same person I have been trying to reach for months now is sitting next to me and in a hospital. she shrugged ignoring my question. ''Mr abraham'' the pharmacist called ''Oh.. I will get that'' I said standing up but I was feeling dizzy everything was blurring after that . I could hear her screaming and calling the nurses for help but that was the last thing I heard. I woke to find myself in the same ward I'm always admitted which seem to have automatically become my room Anna was sitting on a chair beside me with her head rested on the bed. She was fast asleep. what could be happening to me. Anna woke up seem she heard me talking to myself ''thank goodness you are awake baby''. She said. How are you feeling now? Should I call the nurse? Do you need anything? She kept asking all kind of questions she was so worried. ''Its okay anna I think I'm feeling better now'' I assured her. It was late already I wanted to ask her if she saw the lady I was sitting with before I was admitted but I know she will take it the wrong way so I kept to myself. I called my mum in the morning and told her. She kept wailing like I was already dead I know she will be here by evening with dad. even though I didn't want them to worry about me I still had to call them I needed all the care now. As much as I wanted to believe that this was just plasmodiasis as the doctor has said I could feel and I know that I was dying slowly. I was strong this morning so I told the nurse I was assigned to that I wanted to get some fresh air she let me sit at the opd anna has gone home to prepare some food for me. So I sat down waiting for her to come back. ''Uncle ibrams'' pretty jumped on me I didn't see her coming but she was so happy to see me and so was I. ''Hey pretty how are you doing?'' I haven't seen you for a long time'' even if that was a lie. ''school...she intoned and lily....She paused her mood suddenly changed. What happened to lily I asked in a trembling voice. ''She is ill very ill'' you know lily? She asked'' she seem surprised that I actually know who lily was ''Yea...h I have met her once she is your twin right?'' I inquired'' ''ooh...... Yes she is my twin. How did you know that?'' ''I asked her.. I taught she was you'' ''And she told you that I'm her twin?'' She giggled'' ''You are are silly I poked her nose'' and she laughed. Oh mama is here I have to go now she made to leave but I held her hand. ''I want to see lily will mama let me?'' I asked'' ''here she comes ask her'' she replied ''Hey.. how are you doing now?'' She asked as she got close I was surprised because I didn't expect her to talk to me ''I'm good, and I'm sorry about yesterday'' ''no problem, I'm just glad you are okay now.'' ''And lily?'' I asked'' She is just there...... She looked depressed as she replied. ''can I see her? Please''.. I begged'' Yea.....h She shrugged'' but not now. ''okay.... I'm ibrams'' I said ''Tania'' she I was glad she didn't snub me this time it made me wish I will be sick everyday if that will make her talk to me. she sat on the chair close to me and gave me one of the polythen bag she was holding. Its fruits you need that she said. I looked at her surprised ''this so thoughtful of you thank you very much.'' I thanked her She just nodded. And smiled a bit I took one of the apple was about taking a bite when pretty took it from me You didn't wash it uncle let me go and wash it she left with a bottle water she took from her mum. I smiled foolishly as I turned to see Tania staring at me. She seem to like you a lot mr ibrams. ''Pretty is a sweet girl but she could be really silly at time'' I laughted as I remembered how she will stick her tongue out anytime she saw me at the competition. And Tania joined also didn't know why but it felt good hearing and see her laugh. ''you know, I have not been so nice to you'' ''and yesterday I didn't know you were that ill'' ''I actually thought you were stalking me'' ''and I'm really sorry.'' she poured out and I couldn't just believe my ears if only she knew who I really am she wouldn't be sorry. ''No.... you don't have to be sorry I should be sorry for everything... I should be sorry for... I almost blurted out the R word when I saw anna coming towards me looking furious ''Why are you here?'' She demanded angrily'' ''I was bored so I....'' ''But I told you I will be back soon''.she cut in ''what if?...'' ''I'm okay anna, so there is no what if. you don't have to worry I was just bored'' I assured her again and again ''and what's that you are holding'' she asked pointing at the polythen bag I was holding. ''Fruits'' I answered She didn't say anything she just glared at me silently. she looked at Tania scrutinizing her from head to toes like she was some kind of pest. Then she turned back and started heading to the ward. ''Whew.....that isn't good...... Is she your wife? pretty asked'' they were both staring at me with a look of pity and I felt like I have just been caught committing a crime. ''What? No just a friend'' I replied I looked up to see if anna was near I'm sure she will have my head if she heard that. ''I have to go now'' I stood up quickly ''nice meeting you Tania.'' and thanks for the fruits.'' ''its nothing.. Get well soon'' she added It felt like this was a dream and I didn't want to wake up. Everything was just surprising but the greatest surprise was awaiting me inside the ward... . . To be continued
7 Oct 2015 | 18:52
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@Roes @kuks @khnopido @ibrams @skookum sorry for the late update guys. good evening to ya' ll
7 Oct 2015 | 18:57
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oh... She talk 2 u.
7 Oct 2015 | 19:50
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@konphido come to lighthouse oh....@kuks ayu we tee me ?
7 Oct 2015 | 20:11
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This Anna of a girl her own na pheeeew Am very sure both you and Lilly ar suffring from the same illness
8 Oct 2015 | 01:09
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So, what now awaits him in the ward? Next episode @ritagold
8 Oct 2015 | 05:07
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@Ritagold u did nt remember me abi well nice story de tory is so nice wen next are u updatin
8 Oct 2015 | 05:40
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Hope d suprise ll nt make u faint sha,cos anna suprise is smtin else@ibrams
8 Oct 2015 | 06:48
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@Roes et @ritagold m following this story keenly.... @kuks itz on her way
8 Oct 2015 | 07:16
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following.......
8 Oct 2015 | 08:53
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Episode 14 . . . . She stared at me muderiously as I walked in.. ''What where you doing with that thing? That... That...'' I just stood glaring at her as she kept rambling and cursing. I waited till I was sure she has nothing else to say. ''She is here because this is a hospital anna'' I charged back'' why do you always think the opposite?'' I have my limits'' I choked out'' I wanted to make her know that Tania wasn't really what she thought and I was sure it will never be. Give me a break anna and stop embracing in public all in the name of jealousy. I lashed at her. she stood still staring at me I guess she didn't expect me to talk to her in that manner but I didn't regret it. Fine then I'm leaving, she muttered'' ''I see you are strong enough to take care of yourself'' she took her bag pushed me out of the way and she was out I didn't try stopping her I just watched as she marched out I was just too fed up of her recent attitude and I needed a break. I was hungry so I took some from the food she brought and some fruits from the one Tania gave me.it became worst towards evening that I could hardly move it felt like my heart was being ripped out of me I kept throwing off and when my mum came she almost cried out her eyes seeing how critically ill I was.the doctor kept giving different drugs which only works for some minute only for the symptoms to get worst I practically puke on any food I take in. I kept dozing off each time. I don't know how long I have spent here but anytime I open my eyes I either see my mum crying or my dad.sitting and muttering incoherently to himself Then pretty and Nifemi I was just so weak. I kept drifting back to sleep each time I try to stay awake. I woke up one morning feeling a bit strong. Nifemi was sitting on the chair beside the bed reading a magazine she was so engrossed in what ever she was reading. ''baby sis'' I called'' I could hardly recognise my voice She looked up from the magazine bro you are awake! she exclaimed Was I dead? I asked mimicking her voice She giggled a bit only her mood changed after that. Let me call dad he is into he doctors office she hurried out even before I could say anything. Just then taiwo walked in with pretty behide him he is awake mama pretty said she was on a call when she came in and seeing that I was awake she brightened almost jumping on me but taiwo held her back. Easy girl he is still weak. She stepped back but she held my hand ''Man what is going on?'' Taiwo asked'' he looked stressed out. ''the doctor should be the one to answer that question except that's a rhetorical question.'' I answered. I'm just worried about you and we miss your actions so just get off that bed its taking too long already there is no light in the house without you he kept talking like he was sent to deliver a speech well spoken like a true politician I intoned that was what he said at the competition.I was laughing as I remembered that. What's so funny pretty asked'' . . . . Pretty's pov Lily has been sick and mama told me that the doctor said she has kidney failure I didn't know what to do mama is so worried though she looked strong during the day but she cry all night beside her. and grandpa has refused to send us any money and we still needed someone to donate a kidney for her. Raising the money was not an issue, mama has said she would donate but after the test the doctor said she wasn't she couldn't. and lily just has some few weeks if she isn't transplanted before then we might loss her. I was thinking of going to meet uncle ibrams maybe he could help but I was surprised to see uncle ibrams at the hospital and for the first time mama talked to him I thought I found a solution but I later found out that he was very sick and each day it seem to be getting worst. he was always weak didn't really know what was wrong with him but what ever was happening it seem to be serious his mum was always crying and his dad had become very calm he just stare at him anytime he is there his team as well. It was really bad seeing him in this state and there was nothing I could also do to help. I cry anytime I come into his ward seeing time lay on his back not being able to move. today his health was better considering since the last time I saw him mama will always ask how he was doing and I was glad she showed concern about him. he was laughing but I could feel he was in pain. But all the same it was nice to hear him laughing. I needed so much to talk to him. and it seem that day would never come but I was happy to see him awake today he looked weak as always though. And when he asked me about lily I told him she needed a kidney without battling words He was quite for a long time and I thought he was sleeping already. I brought out the dairy I took from his room and started reading one of the poem he wrote down I do this each time I visit him and only if her sister or mum is not around. and if he was sleeping. I opened the dairy and started reading. ''If I should die tonight, then let me die in your arms. Your face is the last that I wish to see. I can feel your tear falling softly on me. Your touch is the last I wish to feel and your love would be the last thing that I will ever want. If I should die tonight, then I will leave you my heart. Please know forever and always that shall I be sorry for all the pain I caused you¤ but I won't be dying¤ soon I still have a price to pay...¤if i....'' He suddenly stood up I was startled' I snapped the dairy close and hide it behide me. . . . . To be continued. @Roes @ibrams @konphido @baby j @tenniebenson @skookum the prophet... Mind telling us what is wrong with our dance master? Lol. thanks for your comment guys
8 Oct 2015 | 09:31
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@frankkay lol I'm soo sowe @wyse-one @Hardeywummy2
8 Oct 2015 | 09:34
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Loving d pretty's pov
8 Oct 2015 | 10:42
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an wot could that be
8 Oct 2015 | 10:47
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Quick recovery,so dat dere will b light in d house.
8 Oct 2015 | 11:58
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U see on Ibrams mata he should just com 4 consultation I cnt say w@ wrong 4 now......
8 Oct 2015 | 12:18
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fake prophet @skookum ...am jst inlove wit dis story @ritagold y cant u updat like 10ep everyday i will be happy if u could
8 Oct 2015 | 14:17
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prophet @skookum... I aqree wit u.... Oly d poem don do wonder.
8 Oct 2015 | 19:26
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he don catch u
8 Oct 2015 | 20:15
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I pity u becos anna wil cut off ur head.
8 Oct 2015 | 23:33
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What Is That? Pls Some Shld Notify Me Next Post
9 Oct 2015 | 05:23
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ibrams Wat's wrong with u.... abeg stand up jor.... be a strong man jare... @Ritagold dear how are u....
9 Oct 2015 | 06:10
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Hmm its seems like pretty knows that ibrams is her dad oo
9 Oct 2015 | 08:07
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Episode 16 . . . . . I was still talking to pretty when I dozed off I remember her telling me about lily needing a kidney transplant but after that the next thing I heard made me jumped up I was surprised from where I got the strength from that poem I wrote that poem and pretty was reciting It I wrote that down in my dairy I looked at her she was startled and was trembling. ''I'm sorry did I startle you?'' ''no..... Uncle'' she stammered'' ''I heard you recitating a poem where did you get that from?'' I inquired'' She tossed something on the floor staring at her toe. ''I....I... I read it'' she muttered'' I could tell that she was lieing. ''pretty?'' She was still staring at her toes ''I'm sorry... I took your dairy'' she admitted And I almost choked on hearing that. if she has my dairy then that only means one thing that she already know who I'm I found strength from nowhere and I sat up What? Where is it? I panicked. but she maintained her position ''but why?'' ' ''I didn't want to,'' she bent down picking up what she just tossed on the floor and it turned out to be my dairy and then one of the drawing of Tania fell off she picked it up and hand them to me. I have a lot of them inside the dairy. ''I wanted to return it I swear'' she said placing her hand on her chest.'' Is it true? do you know mama? Why did you do that to her. She kept lashing out questions and I didn't know which one to answer first.I guess she just figured out who I was now but I was less worried about that. the only thing that came to my mind right away was; oh my God Tania already know who I'm but how come she isn't angry. I 've no ideal but the feeling that she already know me was so strong that it blocked other line of thought. That even when she called me papa and also assured me that she hasn't told her mum my heart was still leap-frogging I lay down not know what to say to her I couldn't tell if she was angry or not. then she started crying I sat up again and beckoned to her to come she did I wiped the tears off her eyes ''I'm so sorry pretty I have wronged your mum'' ''she will never forgive me if she finds out'' ''please don't tell her about this'' I pleaded I was practically trembling like I have been caught red handed committing a crime. ''I won't I promise'' she said crossing her heart'' ''My papa she muttered'' still sobbing She took me by surprise and don't know for how long but I didn't want to let go. I hugged her. She was so adorable what more could I ask for. ''I love you so much my baby and I'm so sorry.'' I promise I will fix this just don't tell her tears filled my eyes and I didn't battle with it I just let it flow. I was still scared what if Tania has seen the dairy, what if pretty has already told her, they could be nigeria because of me, my thoughts kept going from ''what if'' to ''if not.'' Just then anna snapped in like it was her room I haven't seen her since the last time. she looked surprise seeing me awake but then she forged a smile. I quickly wiped my tears and pretty did the same. I was worried if she has been there for long and heard our conversation. She was staring at the both of us. As if to figure out what was going on. am I interrupting anything she said sarcastically I didn't reply seeing her really pissed me off and I seriously didn't want to talk to her now. I'm sorry baby I have been really busy lately hope you are not angry? Still I didn't say anything. after about some minute of straight silences she bundled herself out and I was glad. a nurse came in after that so pretty left after hugging me like forever. She made me promise that I will tell her mum about it I obliged not that I really have a choice. But only when all this is over. I was so strong for the rest of the day mum and dad was very happy. my team were also here I was in a private ward else they would have been asked to leave because the ward was crowded and I'm well known that was a little advantage on my side. doctor walker was around and I was really happy to see him. he use to be our family doctor when I was still very young. he is a chief consultant here but has been on leave he resumed yesterday . And was not until today that the test result they have been running came out. and so was the misery behide my sudden illness... you won't believe what the doctor said...... . * * Pretty's pov******** I couldn't hide it anymore I wanted so much to tell him but I haven't find the right time to talk to him but I still didn't get why he did that, if he really loved mama that much. and mama has also been lieing to me as well she told me that she loves papa. I had taken his dairy home the last time I was at his resident. I was reading some of the poems when mama came to take me home so I had said I will return it but mama didn't allow me in the day I wanted to do that because I had to go to school. So I took it home and hide it but I kept reading some of the poems until I came across a pic that looked just like my mum inside they were just drawing but it was mama. a drawing on each page he wrote anything about her. And the poem I read was one of the pages with the pic. I didn't tell mama because I fear what she will do if she finds out so kept to myself hoping I will see him and talk to him. Maybe he can explain all this And as much as I wanted to hate him reading his dairy was enough for me to know that he wasn't a bad guy it just happened. Yes...... It just happened. I called him papa while he hugged me so tightly I had thought he wouldn't like me calling him papa I guess I was wrong. I was suppose to be happy because I have actually find my real papa. but I fear what mama will do when she finds out. I fear she will have him jailed. And I will nother see him again. I just have to keep cool like papa said. but I don't know for how long I could keep a secret from her it will break her heart when she finds out. I love mama as much as I love papa now. And I won't want to loss them for any reason and I want to see mama happy. See us happy. Me lily mama and.... When I got to lily's ward she was reading story book I borrowed from my school library. ''how you doing lily?'' good...she answered. ''Stupid... Why can't just say I'm fine'' ''You stupid too plenty...'' she cursed ''Tsk you are so dumb.. Its pretty not plenty'' We started our usual fights and cursing lily is always fun to be with and I like teasing her a lot unlike me she is so shy. she has been staying with grandpa at zim she only came for a visit when she took ill she does not school nanny lopez has been the one teaching her how to read but when she came I took time to teach her. she was only fluent in shona. we look so much alike and she love's me a lot she will send me gifts on every of our birthday only I don't send her anything she prefer calling me sibonokhule than pretty which she finds hard to pronounce, at time she ends up calling me ''plenty'' which Is really funny. Lily will you be happy to see papa? I asked her I wanted to tell her that I have found our real papa though he turned out being a....... No I don't want to see him.... I guess she thought I was talking about mama's Ex-husband ''our real papa lily I mean our real papa.'' She calm down and looked at me ''I found papa lily'' I whispered but don't tell mama she will get mad Why? Mama will be happy to see him. I will tell mama.'' Ngifuna ukhubona ubaba'' (i want to see dad)she whispered back I started regretting why I told her. I guess I forgot how much she tends to talk when she is with mama. ''Only if you promise to keep your mouth shut.'' I guess that would work but only for today. ''dili'' she said ''Its deal..stupid not dili'' She Giggled. . . . . . I will post the Next episode on sunday. @skookum @frankkay @ibrams @konphido @kuks. @nazzy babe where are you nau?
9 Oct 2015 | 11:40
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@ritagold y now Sunday z too far ooo
9 Oct 2015 | 12:11
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@ritagold nice tanks for de tag ¤muah¤ but y nt tomorow nah pls
9 Oct 2015 | 12:14
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That's a long wait....
9 Oct 2015 | 12:53
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I dey hear yu oooo keep the flow going
9 Oct 2015 | 12:56
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Yes o plenty dili abi na Peter Odili, by d way wu among u guys say d house is dark, so u dnt kno how 2 put on light? If dere's no nepa why nt light landle or lamp cos i have matches here or lighter. Get wel soon ibrams to Start carry out ur responsibility cos d truth cnt hide 4 ever
9 Oct 2015 | 13:39
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@ritagold m rite bhind u.. Kip the flag flying babe
9 Oct 2015 | 13:46
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Dis suspence dey giv headache oo
9 Oct 2015 | 14:39
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So funny lily nd pretty
9 Oct 2015 | 17:01
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kk ooo, hope lily wont become a parrot and spill it out? @softie wia art thou
9 Oct 2015 | 17:59
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@ibrams sweetheart mi.... I'm fine o just missing yOu like mango....stuff like that....
9 Oct 2015 | 19:04
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Waow,what a sweet episode..thanks 4 d update
9 Oct 2015 | 19:26
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Lol jux land with jumbo jet from Ghana!
9 Oct 2015 | 20:03
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Ok o... Am still followin
10 Oct 2015 | 00:09
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ibrams.... D dili will b oly 4 a day... Then true wil show face.
10 Oct 2015 | 01:04
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Am So Much In Love With Dis Story. Keep It Flowing As Usual Ritagold. Abeg Tag Me Wen U Post A New Episode I Dont Wnt 2 Miss It
10 Oct 2015 | 16:35
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Lolz Lily z very 4ny
10 Oct 2015 | 20:07
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Maybe if lily could see her father, she will be healed, her kidney will not flunctuate. Lol @ritagold, una weldone oo
11 Oct 2015 | 08:48
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¤¤¤¤¤Episode 17 . . . . ''from these investigations, there was a toxic substance found in in your blood and also the symptoms I guess you were poisoned'' the doctor confirmed to me and my dad ''what?'' dad shouted.I was simply dumbfounded. ''I guess whoever did this wanted you dead but slowly and painfuly without being suspected'' he explained further ''and that's exacting how this... Works'' Showing us the file containing the investigations. ''A slow killer..'' how is that possible? who would want me dead? I kept pondering over this I couldn't even utter a word dad was the one doing the talking. Even when the doctor was asking if I can remember what I ate and who prepared it before I started having the symptoms. All I could do was glare at him. dad collected a copy of the investigations.he kept asking me questions that even I couldn't answer. What if its Tania what if she already know and she wants me dead she must have hired someone to have me killed and this is the best way. I wanted to dissuade my dad from reporting the case to the police, but I failed to come up with a good reason I still do not have the courage to tell him even though I wanted to. If she want me dead then fine.I barely slept through out the night I was thinking of approaching her in the morning but what will I tell her? I woke up the next morning feeling more healthier than ever. as I sat up blinking a few times so my eyes could adjust to the light in the ward, pretty was there smiling at first I thought I was dreaming. ''Papa'' she called ''Pretty'' I wanted to ask how she was doing but I remembered what the doctor said yesterday my heart skipped a bit. ''why are you here'' was the only thing that came out of my mouth after that. And she frowned. ''Sorry''....she murmured ''no I'm sorry I didn't mean that'' I said and she flashed a smile.. ''Sorry.. ''she said again and now she was trying to say something but didn't she looked down. ''What is it?'' I asked curiously ''Sorry...... I told lily'' she finally said ''and she wants to see you or she will tell mama'' she added. I guess she expected me to lash at her but when I told her it was okay she looked relieved. can we go now she asked. as much as I wanted to tell her that I didn't care anymore if she finds out, I also wanted to see lily. ''Mama has gone home she asked me to stay with her'' she said since I wasn't making any move. When we got there lily was still asleep with all those stuff on her, I didn't even know when I started crying but not loudly I held her hand to my face. Just then Tania came in and lily also woke up looking round as we all stare. Tania was surprise to see me, and so was I.not to mention how lovely she looked this morning on a pair of jean a mini top and balerina. and those tempting lips that I always dream of kissing. Ibrams you are here? she asked more of a rhetorical question. Yes I'm here I answered matter of fact I'm not dead I said to my self I'm glad you are okay now she said flashing a smile. were you crying? She asked scanning my face Errm... I something.... I trailed off sibonokhule? Is he...... ''Yes lily''... pretty shouted before she could finish whatever she wanted to say. ''he what?'' Tania asked looking at pretty. ''He...... Said he will...donate his...'' She looked at me apologetically and continued ''donate a kidney for lily '' he completed head down. I almost burst out laughing only I realised what she just said Tania was looking at me in a is this true way but I didn't say anything pretty stepped on my foot intentionally I jerked out of my little slumber Yes...... That's true...i just said that... And.... I trailed off ''Omg Tania shouted'' then suddenly hugging me thank you thank you she kept repeating my mouth was just open all I could think about was her body on mine I could see stars running out of me eyes like I have just hit my head on a rock. My both hands were in my pocket I just stood still as she grind herself on me. Pretty cleared her throte ''Yeah....thank you'' she said smirking Tania withdrew feeling shy all of a sudden. I'm sorry... I was just carried away... I... Let me inform the doctor.... We have to be fast....we have to run some... she was just talking but my mind was else were of course on her lips Did you hear me she asked. I snapped out of my dreams and nodded like a fool. I looked at pretty who was whispering something to lily. ''You are coming with me right?'' She asked ''I'm sorry I really don't want to rush you but the earlier the better'' she said. ''Yeah true i.... I will be ba..ck..'' I stammered ''Just hold on'' I added excusing myself. I was still thinking about the hug when I entered my ward seeing my dad ''Where did you go he asked?'' I might as well tell him now I thought. ''Dad I want to talk to you'' I said ''We can talk but only when we get home'' he said. ''I'm discharging you and you are coming home with me''.He added. ''dad please let not do this now...'' ''You have no say in this son I'm not going to be alive and watch you die. who ever it is that wanted you dead is still out and not until the person is behide bars, you are staying with me.'' ''Well I don't care if I die'' dad I shunned him ''and I'm not leaving now I need to do somethings'' ''And what could that be?'' he shouted ''i.... I'm donating... A kidney'' I couldn't look at him in the eyes. He stood motionless staring at me. ''Is this part of your dance madness? He cooed Have you gone mad? Are you sure you weren't the one that drank that poisone on your own will? Do you need money? are selling your kidney for money? ''Dad...... Please I'm not selling my kidney'' ''Then you have gone mad'' he shouted ''totally mad.. Abraham'' I will disown you if you....'' ''Dad I'm doing this because she is my daughter'' I cut in, head down Dad was looking at me in a confused way. ''My son has gone mad'' he exclaimed ''I'm not mad dad I have two daughters dad'' He sat on the chair beside the bed he pinched me just to make sure he wasn't dreaming he waved his hand on my face asking if I could see him. ''I have to call the doctor, this is not my son'' he shook his head standing up ''Dad...'' I called as he made to leave ''can you please let me explain this?'' ''look here young man I'm not your dad'' he warned ''my son is not married, doesn't have a child And.. Is not mad'' ''give me back my son'' he gripped my shirt. He was shouting at the top of his voice the nurses came running in they struggled to take his hand off my shirt but they failed to. he kept screaming give me back my son... doctor walker came seeing the confusing he tried talking to him but it didn't work by now he has torn my shirt into shred heading for my pants I didn't struggling with him.a nurse came in with a tray handing a syringe containing God knows what to him. ''I'm sorry mr femi but I have to do this'' he injected him and slowing he went down but I caught him before he could hit the floor laying him on the bed. I crashed on the floor crying and regretting doctor walker ask the nurses to leave after that.... ''What is all this about ibrams?'' I kept weeping I felt like shit have never seen my dad so heartbroken. I wished.... But only my wish can not turn my past ''I'm so sorry dad'' I'm so sorry'' I kept crying doctor walker was just standing there waiting for an explanation just then Nifemi walked in rushing towards me ''what happened'' she asked already crying ''what is wrong with dad? why is he on the bed?'' she turned to the doctor ''Doctor what happened to my dad?'' ''He is okay'' he said in a not too sure tone and there came my mum. ''Eh... What is going on'' she laughted only that wasn't a laugh she was already crying doctor walker was now confused. So I decide to help I stood up holding mum as she wailed ontop her husband like he was already dead mum he is okay see he is breathing I showed her Nifemi confirmed that by feeling his pulse. ''But why is he sleeping on the bed'' mum asked but before I could answer. Dad started breathing hard like he was finding it difficult to breath. In a seconds, the ward was already filled with nurses and also a doctor including doctor walker We were asked to leave the ward Mum increased her wailing and so was Nifemi I this was my worst nightmare if my dad should die now I will never forgive myself I had to take my mum to my resident because they couldn't stop wailing. I came back I wasn't allowed into the ward so I had to wait for doctor walker. . . . To be continued.
11 Oct 2015 | 12:29
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@skookum @ibrams @nazzy @konphido @frankkay @kuks @don mike prophet ejor help me call the rest of them
11 Oct 2015 | 12:54
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@skookum @ibrams @nazzy @konphido @frankkay @kuks @don mike prophet ejor help me call the rest of them @hadassah
11 Oct 2015 | 12:55
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Chai.....ibrams keep kul nothing will happen 2 dad....u just spilt the revelation in a wrong time....
11 Oct 2015 | 13:16
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Wat has happen 2 ibrams dad nw,hope he is nt dead?
11 Oct 2015 | 13:36
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I still dey oberserve ooo
11 Oct 2015 | 15:42
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Ibrams hope ur dad will nt kick the bucket.
11 Oct 2015 | 17:13
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Though i was't mention.. Bt am stil folowin
11 Oct 2015 | 17:19
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nawa o, hope say they did not inject him wit something else
11 Oct 2015 | 17:33
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It just bad timing sorry at @ibrams in advance cos ur dad us gone
11 Oct 2015 | 18:32
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she kind medicatn d nurse qav 2 hm
11 Oct 2015 | 20:24
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Hmmm,d truth z out
11 Oct 2015 | 20:31
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Hmmm am here @ritagold weldone nice write up
12 Oct 2015 | 04:55
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I dey wait to hear watin happen ooo
12 Oct 2015 | 05:59
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@ritagold m keenly folowing dis story .. Tanks 4 tagging
12 Oct 2015 | 06:36
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Ibrams dnt blame upsef yet remember ur condition 4 now. Ur dad 4 now is in shock dats y. It is well
12 Oct 2015 | 08:12
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Present ma@ritagold lol
12 Oct 2015 | 08:50
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Rita babe oya now we waiting 4 u
12 Oct 2015 | 10:37
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¤¤¤¤¤episode 18 . . . I finally met doctor walker asking him how dad was and why I wasn't allowed into the ward. He said he was okay but for now he doesn't need anything that will worsen his conditions ''What condition?'' I asked ''don't worry he is in good hands'' was his only reply. Then he asked to to tell him what really happened. I had no choice than to explain everything to doctor walker, and just like my dad, he was so disappointed and blamed me for being stupid enough to tell him a thing like that without thinking, knowing fully well his health condition. dad has had series of heart attack but for long since he is on medications he has been okay. I was only allowed to see him the next day, I was there with him didn't allow mum to come only Nifemi and anna was there. And as much as it annoys me to see her around, I had to let her be since Nifemi was enjoying her company.but they both left early. Meanwhile, The necessary test was done and was confirmed that I could be a donor for lily and the surgery was fixed for next week I didn't tell mum about this, only Nifemi knew about it and I made her promise not to speak a word not even to anna. dad finally dad woke up and I was so happy. But he was not the same. I couldn't bear to see him surfer for my own mistake. He has this disappointing look on his face as he set his eyes on me. ''is it true?''he asked ''Dad I'm so sorry,'' I pleaded talk to me ibrams if I'm going to die let me at least know who my son really is'' he shut back at me. ''Dad you are not going to die but please dad let talk about this when you are strong'' ''Abraham I'm asking you is it true?'' ''yes dad, I'm sorry dad, I swear I wanted to tell you but...'' ''but you didn't tell me'that's because I found out not long ago Dad. I had to explain everything to him bit by bit. ''my son is also rapist'' he cried out. I buried my head in shame as I cried my eyes out. ''I gave you all you ever wanted, love you even for than your sister, and this is how you are paying me back?'' ''Dad please forgive me, I was confused, I didn't know what I wanted then'' He laughed painful turning for once to look at me. ''and now? do you know what you are doing now? You still don't have the courage to tell her who you really are and you think you can buy her over by saving her daughter?'' are you sure you know what you are doing? Son.. Don't keep me quite talk to me.He shouted. ''dad please...... I....re..'' but before I could finish he started jerking again just like before.. ''Doctor..'' I shouted... and the nurses came running in including doctor walker. I waited outside in my car with my head on the starring as I cried and prayed that nothin happened to him. when all of a sudden two strange guys from no where one hitting the windscreen with something I don't really know as I opened the door to confront them a car rode in with full speed and they both bundle me and the next the I was inside the butt of the car as they zoomed off. . . . . To be continued... I'm sorry guy I don't think mentioning names will be a good idea.... Everyone is invited so... @skookum help me call them.
12 Oct 2015 | 13:19
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Hmmmm,wat is it again,who r does pple,cm nd giv us more @Ritagold
12 Oct 2015 | 13:51
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Emm emmm am suspecting d@ ur frnd u told or Anna either of d two wana kill u nd also behind ur abduction but I dnt tnk it z Anna bt shex not ruled out sha my main suspect z d@ ur frnd. Y did ur dad took it so personal @ least d deed z already done y givin himself HBP @ibrams @konphido @kingson1 @wyse-one @babe4biola @frankkay (aburo u hav bein quite dix days yyy) @hbankee @tenniebenson @emmyrexx @mray @donmikie @sofia @ebube @temmyjoy @delight nd d rest dia z new update oo
12 Oct 2015 | 14:08
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HMmmmm don't even know what to say let's wait nd see.
12 Oct 2015 | 15:19
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ayam hia n am following... Anna at work
12 Oct 2015 | 15:51
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its definately anna, since she can no longer poison him, she has diverted to anoda alternative. ADOPTION
12 Oct 2015 | 15:53
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Itz abduction nd nt adoption @wyse-one
12 Oct 2015 | 15:57
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tnks for d correction @precy. See as i forget spelling
12 Oct 2015 | 16:07
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Tank u swt @Skookum lily life z @ risk, wat going 2 apen 2 Ibram's father. I op u wil find means 2 escape b4 d operation day, am just opin ntin bad wil apen sha. Mur grease 2 ya elbow @ritagold
12 Oct 2015 | 16:07
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Honestly d light in dis house is going down gradually
12 Oct 2015 | 16:23
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Anna is at work o, am sure it is her
12 Oct 2015 | 17:33
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Ok following
12 Oct 2015 | 17:55
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don sit down well... Tori don chanqe hand... Wu plan dx... Next.
12 Oct 2015 | 19:08
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Nawa o...wahala dey
12 Oct 2015 | 19:10
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Tankz 4 d notification @skookum
12 Oct 2015 | 19:12
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I Officially Declare Dis Story 1 Of My Best Story On Coolval Rounding It Up 2 5(Best Stories). 1daful Storyline Abeg Ritagold Tag Me Weneva A New Episode Z Out *U Knw As Compensation*
12 Oct 2015 | 19:22
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Wonderful story. Good job. Am suspecting Anna.
13 Oct 2015 | 02:10
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Hmmmmm
13 Oct 2015 | 02:38
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Hmm no calling names nd u use style call @skookum i dey suspect 2 of una oo @ritagold well i jst de observe shaa skookum dey reason be say i de lonely now my wife @gracedkyenny don leave me for @emmyrexx dat old man can u imagin dats y i jst de quet since
13 Oct 2015 | 04:00
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¤¤¤¤¤ episode 19 . . . pretty's pov Papa has been so depressed lately, maybe because his dad had had an heartattack when he told him the truth. is it really that bad? Will mama also have an heartattack when she finds out? Now I wished I hadn't told lily. I have run out of excuses already any time she asked of papa and why I have not told her who our real papa is. But then something happened today. While I was reading one of the story books to lily just to make her shut up. I heard a crashing sound outside followed by screams. I ran out ignoring lily who was asking me to continue reading since I had stoped just to confirmed what I heard. I was outside within a second I looked round only to see papa's car has been crushed. I looked round if I could see him but he wasn't there. I walked to the crowd in front of the car maybe I could get someone to tell me what happened ''he was kidnapped'' I heard one of them say. ''I don't think this is kidnapping'' the other said ''I guess they are hired killers or how else can you describe this?'' another added. I was so drained I thought I would faint. Papa had been adopted. the worst has happened. then I saw mama coming towards me. I staggered a bit she looked angry but why? Was it because I was here. ''Pretty you shouldn't be here you here I told you not to leave lily alone'' she scolded me well I guess that was the reason she looked angry. ''He has been kidnapped mama'' I said softly as she scanned the car that had brought if not all the patients out. Of their ward. ''Who'' she asked confusedly even if she already know that the car was papa's but I guess she didn't want to believe that. ''No this can't be happening now'' Nifemi cried out. looks like someone must have called her to inform her about what happened I watched as she cried not knowing what to do. Mama was also crying. seeing them cry I couldn't help but join in. mama's cry is always contagious. The polic latter came and towed the car to the station they talked to some eye witnesses who told them different stories one said he was bleeding before he was bundled into the car. Mama cried all night. Just when she thought she has find hope it came crashing down. We just have three day left before the surgery lily was getting weak at each passing day and right now it seem like we are going to watch her die slowly and painfuly. I cried with her. What if they kill papa?who could be behide his adoption? what will happen to his dad? He is probably still weak and nobody will tell him what had happened. I will have to see him tomorrow. . . Seem they have gotten to their last busstop I heard foot steps as someone opened the butt I quickly breath in some fresh air they dragged me out binding my eyes before I could open my eyes then pushed me into an unknown destinations hitting me with what I suspected to be a gun on the head and I blacked out. when I woke up at least my eyes was not bind this time I looked round to see where I was. The room was just so dark I could barely see anything aside the chair I was sitting on only when I made to move that I realised that my hands were both tied to the chair. I struggled to set myself free but I ended up crashing on the floor with an excruciating pain on my right hand all this while I was thinking of just one thing. Who was behide this. I heard footsteps coming toward the door then a phone ringing I kept still as the footsteps head back maybe to pick the call. And then when coming back I guess he was still talking to someone all I could pick was ''yes boss, he is here now, I will take care of him now, you don't have to worry, I get back to you when I'm done boss.'' my heart was threatening to bursting out when I heard him said he will take care of me. In what way? Are they going to kill me? First I was poisoned I survived that but now there is no escape. I cried like a baby. But then the door opened. And the light was on I blinked my eyes a few time before turning to see who it was. it was one of the guys that adopted me smirking as he brought out a knife. ''hmm see how you dey shake'' he started coming towards me ''What do you want from me?'' I asked in fear as he approached me. ''shut up'' he ordered with a slap on my face then he pulled me up still tied to the chair my hand was hurting so much. ''You see this knife'' he pointed the knife resting the tip on my neck. I was shivering by now I wanted to plead but there was no sign of mercy on this beast standing. ''na the last thing went you go see be this you dey hear me?'' but first make I give you morning food so wen you reach that side you go tell baba gan say I dey hail am from this area.'' He walked backed I actually thought he was going to get me food ''I'm not hungry just let me go'' I shouted only for him to locked the door coming back with a smirk on his face. Then he started laughing. ''You say waytin? Thunder.....'' he shouted and started pouncing on me like a punching bag I screamed and wailed and pleaded but he had no mercy till I kept quite but he kept pounding my face. then he finally stopped I thought he was done with me only I was wrong. This time he brought out a gun licking my blood that has stained his hand. ''Oya say your last prayer'' he said pointing the gun at me ''Please don't kill me'' I pleaded even if I knew that he wouldn't listen. ''I promise to give you anything you want I mean anything.'' ''That na you last prayer?'' He inquired. ''okay na my turn. baba gan make you rest this soul when I dey send com so'' he said laughing then placing the gun on my forehead I closed my eyes as I breath my last waiting for him to shot. When his phone started ringing again. He dropped the gun and I opened my eyes slowly. ''Change of plan? ''okay boss'' ''ten million?'' Okay boss'' yes boss'' Then he ended the call looking at me with disdain. ''Baba gan don answer your prayer. Oya give me ya papa number.'' he commanded Now they are asking for ransom but there was hope of me leaving here alive I will probably be found on a dead bag rotting away before I get help. escaping was not even possible. I gave him taiwo's number because he is the only one who I can rely on now. Mum will probably be crying her eyes out by now and dad I cried as I remembered the state he was in before my adoption. And lily if I'm not out of here before three days I fear the worst will happen. He put a call through to taiwo he purposely put it on loud speaker. ''Oya talk to your padi'' he said putting the phone on my ear. ''Hello who is this'' I heard taiwo asked ''It's me ibrams'' I replied weakly. ''My God! where are you we...'' ''Okay that one don do, him dey with me now'' he said ''and make you listen to me with your two ear.'' He went out locking the door behide I waited for him to come back but he didn't. This is just the beginning.... . . .to be continued @humblelion For compensation huh? Okay @ skookum pls.., help me call them. @Roes I dey see you @konphido thanks for following @ibrams hun were have you been? @ebube Good morning guys...hope you all dreamt of me? Lol......
13 Oct 2015 | 05:39
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lol @frankkay very sorry o take am easy. @emmyrexx @tenniebenson @kuks I f I call you abeg help me call one person so the matter go settle. Siyabonga ......
13 Oct 2015 | 05:42
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@skookum
13 Oct 2015 | 05:46
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I hear oooo
13 Oct 2015 | 05:50
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@swtharyomi nd christiana over here @ritagold i dream of u but de dream no too clear shaa were dat pastor @skookum com nd help explain dis my dream abeg
13 Oct 2015 | 06:43
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@ritagold I dream u get package for me o
13 Oct 2015 | 08:41
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@ritagold anytin 4 my guy's sunshine @ibrams.. . @sofia. Anoda episode has dropped
13 Oct 2015 | 10:32
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@ibrams, i just hope u are set free. And who could be behind this ur abduction? If it's Anne, i will surely kill her with my bare hands. @ritagold
13 Oct 2015 | 11:08
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@frankkay wen did I turn to dream interpreter hurRrr,u also dey suspect me nd Rotagold na u Sabi oooo Usually I dey observe
13 Oct 2015 | 12:15
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Nice 1 @ritagold ur story is cool
13 Oct 2015 | 16:21
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@Ritagold i dey ooo i was just observing..... two days @konphido baba mii .....nagode ibrams eyaa i dey feel for you ooo... why them go kidnap u nah...... search party please join hands and look for him oooo.....
13 Oct 2015 | 20:44
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#10milli 4 ur ransom... Wu adopted u.
14 Oct 2015 | 04:01
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@skookum shey be na pastor u be abi ur own prophet na for gals as man of God u supose sabi everytin .... Nd for u nd @ritagold de day i go use dis my naked eyes see u de smooch her i swell u go shed tear dat day no mercy better back off hmm no say i no warn u @ibrams warn skookum ooo
14 Oct 2015 | 04:02
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@Frankkay wetin happen..... eheen na untop who sef u dream..... hmmmm she is a military zone keep off....... i serious oooo for anybody wey the put eyes for Rita......
14 Oct 2015 | 05:25
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Nice episode
14 Oct 2015 | 06:06
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¤¤¤¤¤episode 20 . . . I remained in one position till evening but he didn't come back. The pain on my right hand was now overbearing. My face were swollen. I tried looking for how to set myself free but the pain on my hand was just too much. Then I slept off. I had no clue of who will want me dead for the umpteenth time I kept telling myself that Tania was behide it, but why will she decide to have me killed now when it's just some days to the surgery.I will make it, I kept telling myself I won't die now. my only hope now was on taiwo and the whole team. Nifemi and mum will be so devastated and I'm sure if dad is okay nobody will tell him about this. I soon slept off only to wake up the next morning when I heard some noise. I slowly opened my eyes to see the room filled with guys about seven of them the light was on so I could see their faces because they weren't putting on mask. I quickly scan their faces if I could know anyone of them. Then my eyes met with his. I know him he quickly turned his face away when he noticed that I was starring at him. ''hey our boss don rise'' the same devil of yesterday shouted and they all turn to look at me ''Make you look us wela o because you go need am when you commot for here.'' The all started laughing. My eyes was still on the same guy but he was avoiding my gaze. He latter excused himself I guess this was their handout for smoking ''make I tell you, if your pipo nor cooperate, we go flush you one of the guys threatened.'' ''And if them come involve police, we go flush all your family'' they all chorused. I was already tired, and begging these sons of devil will only increase my torture. So I was there looking at them fearfully. As they smoke their life out. They started leaving one by one until they were all gone leaving me to battle with pain. Then he came back again. The same guy ''how did you get yourself involved with these people'' he asked as if he wasn't one of them I guess I could get through this I thought so I decide to try my luck by begging him to untie me He shrugged then brought out a knife cutting the rope. ''Why are you doing this'' I asked he looked so innocent like he was dragged into this ''It's none of your business'' he snapped He brought out some snack from his forward bag handing it to me. ''you must be hungry'' he said ''Be fast with that or we will both be in trouble'' he warned dropping a can water on the floor. I will be back he said as he made to leave I thanked him he turned and looked at me ''You are still going to die they won't spear you'' he said briskly then walked off I wanted to ask him why he was here. But he was gone. I devoured the snack as quickly as I can like someone was going to take it from me and drank the water. He came back like he said with some drugs. ''This will Ease your pain'' he said As much as I wanted to trust him I was scared that this was another death trap ''No thanks I'm okay'' I refused to take it He scoffed and kept the the drugs ''have it your way then.'' ''why are you doing this?'' I asked for the second time ''Shut up'' he shouted. and tied my hands back to the chair while he left in a hurry. Only for the beast to come back, his looks alone frightens me. and just like before he gave me the serious beating of my life. My whole body was sore. he tortured me till I blacked out I woke up late I was lying on the floor I could barely move. Then I heard someone sobbing the room was dark I got scared ''Who is that?'' I asked . . . To be continued
14 Oct 2015 | 07:48
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Hmmmm,ad who could dat be
14 Oct 2015 | 07:53
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hmm @ibrams I was beginning to suspect you oo @frankkay you say Watin? Smooch abi smog abeg nor let my sweetheart hear am.... We are just friends nothing more... abi na lie? @skookum
14 Oct 2015 | 07:54
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Let know who us behind dis jhoor
14 Oct 2015 | 09:06
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Oya reveal the person now now oooo
14 Oct 2015 | 10:16
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@ibrams u don carry ur own trouble come abi to dream of somebody na bad tin afterall i dont no weda u too de for waitin list ....ehen @ritagold i no agree wit dis ur frd tin way u de use cover up i no dat prophet king o no prophet @skookum he no dey agree ordinary frd only
14 Oct 2015 | 10:22
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¤¤¤¤¤episode 21 . . . ''you are not dead'' Only then I realised that it was Tania but why was she here, ''Are you okay? I thought you were dead, my God everyone is so worried about you.'' I still didn't know what was going on I wanted to stand up but I couldn't move she also remained where she was ''Why are you here?'' I asked ''What a foolish question'' she said ''I came for a visit'' she intoned ''What about you? Why are you here? here I'm worried about you even when I have several other things to worry about. I should be with lily but I'm here tied to this.. stupid chair. I never knew getting involved with you will put me in this.. And now you are asking me what I'm doin here, I think that's the most stupid question anyone has ever asked me. I wish you die.'' She poured out angrily I couldn't help but smile hearing her speak with her typical accent. I managed to stand up with my both hands still tied behide me. I staggered toward her I could feel that she was crying. The whole thing was funny I didn't know what to say. first I thought she was behide this, and now she is here, well that makes us two then. ''I'm sorry I was just... I didn't.... But how did you get here... Sorry I mean...'' I trailed off. ''Can you please untie me? This really hurts she complained.'' ''well you have to deal with that I have been there for almost three days already'' I said ''You ba#tard'' she shouted ''i know, call me anything you want, call me stupid, I don't know how you got yourself involved in this but I'm glad I have company'' ''I hate you,'' she shouted ''Keep your voice down now, you don't want to call the beast do you?'' I warned As confusing as this could look I was glad she was here and though she hasn't told me how she got herself involved, I was relieved that she wasn't actually the one behide this which left me to wonder who it could be. we were both quite for what seems like forever. Then she started laughing. I was amazed but then she started crying. Well too much for a company.I groaned you know its midnight already, she said ''seems like'' I replied ''the surgery is suppose to be some hours from now. I was so desperate to help find you quickly that I forgot about my lily. And the funny part is that you still have your kidney she chuckled but I won't have my baby, I won't even be there if she decide to stop fighting... This isn't fair. I won't forgive myself pretty will not forgive me I have failed them. I'm so stupid, she kept repeating. I didn't know what to say, I couldn't console her she just kept crying. I decide to let her be for now. She was actually trying to help, I couldn't believe my ears she actually wanted to help, but why did she end up here? Did she know who was behide this? I couldn't ask her I wanted her to calm down first maybe she will tell me. when she finally stopped crying and fell asleep. Why I lay on the floor thinking of what to do next. since we were two already I found the strength from no where I looked round to see if I could see anything to cut the rope but obviously the room was empty I didn't want to wake her up so I tried to untie her with my back against her's I tried but it seem like I just worsen the knots. I went to the door to peep but the whole place was dark. I sat next to her staring at her as she slept. Seem like destiny. We are suppose to be together but not like this I promise to get us out of here, you don't have to worry. It was morning already the room was beginning to brighten up when the door opened my heart skipped thinking it was the monster. I quickly lay down and closed my eyes Tania was still sleeping. ''Stand up'' I heard someone whisper I quickly opened my eyes it was the same guy of yesterday. ''are you okay?'' He asked I looked at my hand which has now swollen and nodded. Just then Tania woke up. ''Leo is that you?'' she asked this left me agashed as I stare at the both of them. Now I know him he is one of the spider's Tania? He too was surprised to see her here ''what are you doing here'' he asked. ''Exactly what I should be asking you ''she shut back. ''acting tough will not help you this time boss this is no spider's'' he said mockingly. ''I'm out of here'' he said ''please wait'' I pleaded ''please get us out of here I promise I will give you anything you want I begged. her daughter is dying and so is my dad and they need us'' I added hoping this would work, ''And you think you can escape the boss? He asked ''I will be signing my death sentence if I do that and I'm obviously not prepared to die.'' ''Then go to hell'' Tania shouted ''We don't need your help'' ''We?'' I asked well the last time I checked I'm tired of being tortured for no good reason and she want to ruin our only hope. '' just Shut up'' I snapped ''You know she is right, I will go to hell.'' He made to leave but then he paused then he came and whispered something in my ear then walked off ''What did he say ''she inquired ''None of you business I thought you don't need help.'' She was quite, so I exhaled ''what was that for?'' I asked. ''He is my Ex'' she replied without battling words. ''Ex?'' I asked surprised ''You know What?'' She asked ignoring my question ''What?'' I groaned ''when I first saw you, I thought you were mute'' she started laughing. ''Hahaha how funny'' I said. ''You know when I first saw you I lost my heart'' I have already said that before I realised. ''Not my heart... I mean...'' I tried to refrain ''I heard you I m not deft'' she cut in ''Okay I'm sorry didn't mean that I...'' ''Just shut up......''she said laughing. ''how did you get yourself involve in this'' I asked then she stopped laughing the room was fully bright now and I could see her face was swollen that beast must have tortured her. I was so angry. ''Will you believe me if I tell you who is behide this?'' she asked ''Try me'' I said though my heart was beating. ''okay I want you to guess.'' she said while I hissed. ''I'm not sure though, but they are the only suspects for now detective folake is still on it'' ''meaning they are more than one? ''you are so dump clever'' she said smirking ''So you still want to guess or should I start calling names?'' . . . . To be continued Good morning guys. @skookum abeg come help us guess cos me don even confuse.. Lol @konphido @frankkay @emmyrexx @ibrams @kuks @wyse-one @humblelion @sofia @softie please call other's
14 Oct 2015 | 10:46
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@frankkay I hear you
14 Oct 2015 | 10:47
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tnks @ritagold. Its anna, no long thing
14 Oct 2015 | 11:24
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Kan't guess.. Have a guessingphobia... Lolz. . . An awesome story... Tanks 4 tagging me ..
14 Oct 2015 | 11:34
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Sleeping tinx @ritagold if u post abeg notify me (hukkryr)
14 Oct 2015 | 11:49
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@christiana @simzy @swtharyomi @tenniebenson @fridex @holarbordah @roes
14 Oct 2015 | 11:52
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chiisoos christ of bariga...na dz kny tori i don miss..una wicked oloun
14 Oct 2015 | 13:06
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who can that be?
14 Oct 2015 | 13:22
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Ohke i guess is dose pipo dat is behind dis. Am i rite?
14 Oct 2015 | 13:31
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Abeg,i wan knw d person
14 Oct 2015 | 14:24
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@Frankkay frankkay frankkay how many tyms i called u kwaaa u wan hummmmm dnt worry
14 Oct 2015 | 16:36
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I beg @ritagold u ar putin too much suspence now kilode now,no vex i came late hav bein busy since mornin no tym to log in just login in dx night
14 Oct 2015 | 16:53
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Yes she wana mention names okk let me guess ooo,d@ ur frnd I repeat(i don 4get his name)nd Anan,but not realy sure about Anan sha,but d@ ur frnd z my sole suspect nd am sure it becux of Tania he did it
14 Oct 2015 | 16:56
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Ritagold Thanks 4 D "Compensation" Am Following D Story As "Bad Niggas Take Dey Follow Anytin Wey Dey Wear Skirt" Skookum Permit Me 2 Prophecy Lyk U...Dis Z D Prophecy Of Apostle Prophet Humble L, "Lily's Surgery Will Succeed But More Trouble/problem Will Occur" Make I Stop Dey Bcos I No Wan Make Pple Knw B4 Tym D Tin Wey Go Happen 2 Ibrams. Oya Ritagold Confam Dat Prophecy Sharp Sharp. Skookum No Vex Say I Don Take Ova Ur Work Na D *coughing* Do Am Ooo
14 Oct 2015 | 21:29
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The spiders.
15 Oct 2015 | 01:05
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Thanks @ritagold, but make una invite me when the next episode is out oo. Tania and ibrams, get out soon. @ibrams, u still dey lost heart for Tania when u are tied down there, i just dey pity u.
15 Oct 2015 | 02:55
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i suspect d spider or anna
15 Oct 2015 | 04:06
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¤¤¤¤¤ episode 22 . . . . ''Is that why you were kidnapped?'' I asked ''Isn't it obvious? I was actually following one of them when I was adopted.''she explained ''Who is that?'' I asked just then the door opened again this time the two guys that adopted me came. They were looking at her in a lustful way, for once I swear to God I will reap their head off if they dear to lay their hands on her.but it seems they were here for something else. ''Your pipo nor wan answer us I think say you be baba of your own'' the monster said ''You will get nothing you bast#rd''' Tania shouted. Now that girl is trouble no wonder they took her in she has no fear. The other guy gripped her neck but she spat on his face with anger he was about hitting her when I got up and kicked with all my strength but he only staggered a bit and came rushing towards me. the both of them they tied my legs and tortured me I heard Tania screaming and begging them to let me go but that only increased their anger one she has triggered. They finally left me when I was even too weak to say a word. ''that na warning for you, if you ever try yourself I go make sure I flush you.'' ''See this as#w# she still stubborn I go teach you some lesson Oya follow me.''They untie her dragging her towards the door she struggled with them giving the monster a bleeding nose when she kicked him I was amazed she could easily defeat them in combat. but the monster brought out a gun threatening to shoot but still she didn't follow them she kept fighting. I found myself smiling seeing the two men fighting hard. they were already drained. They made a mistake when they untie her. But what happened next was beyond amazement I thought I heard gun shot just after I saw Tania brought out some sharp tool or what should I call it she actually pulled it from her hair. but then the monster was on the floor, while the other was holding his stomach while blood was gushing out.. I blinked a few time to make sure I wasn't dreaming, seeing the two lifeless body on the floor. she stabbed the monster while he fired a shot that hit the other. I guess I'm dead already, if they don't kill me here obviously Tania will if she finds out who I'm. ''Bast#rd'' she shouted kicking them Coming toward me I rolled to the other side thinking it was my turn. but she untied me and helped me up. ''You are bleeding'' she said ''I'm okay you don't have to worry about me'' I quickly said. ''Can you walk? Because we are getting out of here'' she informed ''We can't leave we are surrounded and we don't even know how far this place is from the city.'' ''Say's who?'' she asked ''Leo'' I replied ''Then stay here and rot'' she said muttering incoherent words But she dragged me along anyway. ''Really? is this still about my kidney or you are planning to get us killed'' I asked. She only chuckled. ''You killed a man'' I said ''I killed a beast, same way I should have killed that beast some years back before''.... She didn't complete that but I already knew what she was talking about. I was scared of her already. ''Just shut up'' she commanded. As she dragged me along. Some minute latter we were outside the building but there was no one in sight we stood starring at the forest surrounding us ''Lets go this way'' she said ''Why?'' I asked ''Following the footsteps stupid'' she cursed But before we could move I spotted three guys pointing their gun at us we didn't stand any chance running will mean suicide because three others came out from no where. we put our hands up as they approach us ''See what you caused'' she muttered ''I told you we were surrounded and that gun shot must have been heard.'' ''Shut up'' she cursed They took us back but this time we were tied together back against each other while they carried the two corpses. I was happy they didn't torture us this time not even when they just lost two of their men. ''Back to square one'' she exclaimed ''And we are never going to leave here alive you just killed two of...'' ''What do expect me to do? Follow them, and watch them r#pe me? No I won't allow that I had rather die I won't make the same mistake again, if I only knew who he was then I would have killed him I swear. He ruined my life that bas#rd ruined my life'' she started crying profusely And I regreted saying that, I felt bad and angry with myself. I wanted to tell her I was the same person that has caused her pain then and even now, same person that ruined her life but I still couldn't bring myself to tell her that. ''Tania I'm sorry I didn't mean to remind you of your past, please don't cry I promise we will be out soon, leo said he will be here in two days time he will get us out of here.'' ''See how foolish you are? In two days we will be dead by'' then she shouted Well that worked because she actually stopped crying. ''I know I'm stupid, foolish, I'm an idiot, but please stop crying you can curse me instead.'' She giggled ''Ibrams you are funny'' she said ''Yeah I know, and stupid'' I added ''Of cause you are'' she laughed even more I exhaled deeply ''No wonder pretty like's you a lot ,she thinks you are grummpy and sorely and bossy'' ''Is that all she can say about me?'' I asked ''she talks about you all the time, ibrams this ibrams that, you know at time she calls you papa ibrams that's funny though. I almost choked on hearing that. ''And there is this poem you taught her hmmm can't really remember '' ''Poem'' I shouted ''Yeah can you remind me?'' Errm...... . . . . To be continued @ibrams @konphido @skookum @Roes @kuks @ebube @pastor @henry @emmyrexx @frankkay please call others.
15 Oct 2015 | 05:29
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Waow,confusion mood
15 Oct 2015 | 06:18
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Reserve my comment
15 Oct 2015 | 06:46
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lol @ skookum why you go reverse your comment?
15 Oct 2015 | 06:53
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e don land.... @skookum u reserved that comment for who.... nice one @Ritagold dear
15 Oct 2015 | 07:16
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una well done o < s t r o n g >
15 Oct 2015 | 07:21
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@Frankkay me dey on waiting...... it can't be possible... u can ask her ur self...... I just dey dere the look una make una finish galvanating.....
15 Oct 2015 | 07:40
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Me don show @ritagold nice of u @skookum help me clap for rita she is doin a nice work here:)
15 Oct 2015 | 07:46
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@ibrams no need to ask her bcos i saw u for de list of waitn u nd @skookum .. @pastor shey be u de for church since de tory starter dats y i no bother to disturbe u ....... @roes @christiana @frank oya to here
15 Oct 2015 | 07:58
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@ritagold m feeling dis ur story... My comment on dis Episode is AWAITING MODERATION
15 Oct 2015 | 08:15
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@ritagold ride on
15 Oct 2015 | 08:22
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@ibrams just dey look me oo na @Ritagold dey confuse me ooo I dnt wana say d prophecy I saw so has not to spak controvercy @frankkay I see u jare,but I no blame u na jelousy wan kill u orrr *tongue out* :p
15 Oct 2015 | 08:39
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Anna Planed With A Gang 2 Avenge Wat U Did 2 Ha (Plus Ha Promise). Nw U Knw D Risk Of Letting Tania Knw D Truth Ibrams.....If Only She Knew Dat D Bastard Dat Raped Ha Z D 1 Pretty Likes Talkin Abt Nd Z D 1 She Z Lafin Wit *Wat A Life* Q1) So Hu Z Takin Care Of Pretty/Lily Q2) Wer Did She Learn Hw 2 Fight/combat Q3) B4 2 Days Tym Wont Lily B Dead Q4) Hope Leo Wud Succeed Nd Survive
15 Oct 2015 | 09:42
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ibrams pray she doesn't kill u when she finds out
15 Oct 2015 | 10:52
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waow waow!!!!! @ritagold & @frankkay thank you
15 Oct 2015 | 11:09
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@Ritagold carry on.
15 Oct 2015 | 11:15
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Hmmm next pls.
15 Oct 2015 | 12:13
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Mhen the story is very Intrestinq,,thank God av finally reached u all.... U're really doinq a qood job here @Ritagold Thumbz up!! #Followinq
15 Oct 2015 | 13:03
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Abi o @skookum,my work nwadays re so tedious,dat's y.
15 Oct 2015 | 15:35
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ok o, dis is great. Wen are u guys gonna escape or b free. I hope lily doesnt die o
15 Oct 2015 | 16:23
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@temmyjoy wetin u dey do now sey mk I com help out
15 Oct 2015 | 16:44
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****Clears throat**** Finerly...i meet up. Eleyi gidigon ooo Diz one iz strong @Ritagold Nice writ up U really doing a great job here Chai! @Frankkay ad @skookum Diz 2 duo won't jux stop fighting eachoda ontop bae dat iz already in control of d elders. Lol
15 Oct 2015 | 16:50
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Sometin iz telling me that Anna iz behind diz ad i also think Ibrams sister(Nifemi) iz also involve. Waiting patiently az d story unfold itself.
15 Oct 2015 | 16:55
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Tanx alot dear@skookum,but there will be no need 4 dat cos i no wnt trouble 4rm ur babes.winks
15 Oct 2015 | 17:02
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I dey hear the poem ooo
15 Oct 2015 | 17:35
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Observing
15 Oct 2015 | 18:05
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@temmyjoy dnt worry will sot Dem out u hav no worry
15 Oct 2015 | 18:30
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@emmyrexx ur own elder wana be rudicle ooo cux if I catch u WT any of my babes ehn hMmmm
15 Oct 2015 | 18:31
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If oly she knw dat d quy dat ruined her life z riqht dia wit her.... Na oly God qo save u 4rm her.....
15 Oct 2015 | 19:36
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@emmyrexx were u go for so long i never see u i tink say dat gal way u de follow everytime don kidnap u nd now u don come back wit dis ur elder tins way u dey take snatch people bae ..... @skookum wic kind jealosy again y i go come dey jealosy u y u still dey for waitin list e no fit happun dat way naw. .....;( @jummybabe as my b frd way u be i go advice u . See dat my( bro)@skookum way u dey see so no agree date am ooo na heart braker him be oo hmmm i dey tell u now no say i no warn u oo nd abeg do me a favour no talk say na me tell u oo
16 Oct 2015 | 05:32
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K o make i nw relax@skookum
16 Oct 2015 | 09:11
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@ritagold kilode
16 Oct 2015 | 11:03
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@ritagold una abandon us go read another story abi. No worry, we are still here
16 Oct 2015 | 16:27
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Fanks dear mi @frankkay I don land o,any good thing 4 me? (Eg money)?
16 Oct 2015 | 17:27
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@ritagold... Obu qini(wht hpn)
16 Oct 2015 | 19:15
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am finally here ... Why can ibrams just muster courage and tell her ..
17 Oct 2015 | 08:37
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She gonna kill u if she u were the one.
17 Oct 2015 | 14:18
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Oga pls come zoom up
18 Oct 2015 | 07:40
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Rita wia have u bein now since Dix days now
18 Oct 2015 | 08:39
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Y d dulling @ritagold
18 Oct 2015 | 10:08
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ritagold ki lon sparkle
18 Oct 2015 | 15:53
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what's delaying d story naw @ritagold
19 Oct 2015 | 17:00
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Wow my luv @ritagold am here swidy...... @emmyrexx I jst dey luk u..... still following
20 Oct 2015 | 05:26
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¤¤¤¤¤ episode 23 . . . just then the door opened and in came leo with one other guy.He quickly untie us ignoring Tania who was asking what was going on. ''We have to leave now, we have no time'' leo said ''What about those guys outside?'' I asked ''They are going to bury the two....'' ''What happened here he asked?'' ''Errm...'' I didn't know how to explain ''Okay lets go'' he said supporting me. Soon we were on our way but It seem we will never get to our destination. ''Where are we going leonard? And why are you even helping us? aren't you suppose to be one of them?'' Tania asked ''We have no time for that now, just keep going or by the time they find out you are gone, we will be dead so please stop asking questions we still have a long way to go. ''we have been walking for hours now and it's getting late ''it wasn't that far when we were coming'' I said trying to put in a word or two so I won't be left out. ''you didn't tell me you came here on foot mr lighthouse'' leo said earning a laugh from Tania all this while the other guy was busy acting wired. we have been walking for about three hours already and there is still no hope that we will be out of this forest anytime soon ''I'm tired'' Tania shouted as she sat down ''Tan.. please...'' Leo said ''can we at least rest for two minutes? can't you see how tired ibrams is?'' ''Why me? You are tired why do you have to drag me along?'' then we heard a gun shot, first one, then two, and then continuously. leo panicked ''I'm dead the other guy said with his hands on his head. ''What do we do now? they are coming after us I don't want to die, they won't spare me.'' he kept lamenting. ''Let's go this way'' leo said. we were running as fast as we could Tania was dragging me along with her. I fell down and I couldn't move anymore, Tania was trying to pull me up but I was just so tired I haven't eaten anything for four days now except the snack and water that leo brought for me I attempt to stand up then I saw the other guy pointing a gun at Tania I pushed her as I heard a gun shot but everything was blur after that all I could hear was Tania crying. I opened my eyes again and I could still see her crying. she was talking to me but I couldn't hear what she was saying. . . . Pretty's pov. I waited for mama but she didn't come back, I called her but her number was unavailable. lily couldn't even say anything today, she was just there I held her hands but she didn't fight nor curse me to leave her alone but then the doctor came in saying they are going to take her in for the surgery. But papa wasn't even found yet then who will be the donor. he said everything was under control I had to believe him and pray that the surgery will be successful and also that mama and papa will be back soon. aunt lyna came and was with me she told me that mama will be back soon but she looked worried. and I could easily believe aunt lyna but mama can never leave lily alone, not when she needed her most. something was not right. I was lost nobody was talking to me everyone is busy answering calls or waiting for a call. even aunt lyna, They were in the theater for hours and I was beginning to worry. Then doctor walker finally came out all sweating. he asked aunt lyna to see him in his office I wasn't even allowed to go with her. When she came back she was crying but when I asked her why, she said nothing that lily is okay now. I asked to see her but she said we can't see her now. I couldn't argue I waited till the next morning but mama was still not back and her line switched off. Aunt lyna's phone was ringing when I woke up but she was not there so I picked the call And it was mama I was so happy but she wasn't hearing what I was saying so the call went dead. ''Who was that pretty?'' Aunt lyna asked ''Mama but... She... '' ''Your mum called? ''She asked ''where is she ? How is she doing?'' She was so walked up ''I thought you said you know aunt ?'' ''just tell me I don't have time for that now'' she snapped ''The call went dead aunt, she didn't hear me'' She took the phone and tried calling the number but it wasn't going through.
20 Oct 2015 | 15:15
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¤¤¤¤¤ episode 24 . . . . When I finally woke up, I looked round to see where I was. but aside the thatched roof and the smell of some herbal mixture coming from a boiling pot on the fire beside me there was nothing else in sight. I heard someone talking but I couldn't tell who it was. then Tania came in with a old man that look more of an ancient human. dirty from head to toe. ''He is awake'' the old man said.Tania sat on the floor next to me her eyes were all swollen from crying. ''are you okay?'' she asked tears dripping from her eyes. I nodded painfully while she held my hand. ''Leo is going to get help just hang on okay, you can't die on me now'' I wanted to wipe her tears and tell her I'm okay but then I noticed that my right hand has been tied along with my shoulder with some stuff. and the pain seem to have subside a bit but it was heavy. ''Be careful with that hand you shouldn't be moving it now'' the old man advised ''The police are finding it hard to locate here, and the network is bad over here. I tried calling my cousin but I didn't hear what she was saying. ''thank you'' she said as I looked at my shoulder I didn't know why she was thanking me, and I couldn't even ask why I just stare. I guess she understood and decide to explain. ''For saving my life stupid'' she said smirking I would have been dead if you haven't pushed me. you risked your life to save mine.'' I was starring at her not knowing what to say How is that even possible? Then I remembered the other guy with leo. I knew he was no good when I first saw him. ''They are here'' she shouted waking me from my thoughts. ''Where is he'' someone asked. that was folake's voice I could tell she was the one. about a dozen of armed police men came in with leo I still do not understand his role in all this. while we were running an identity card fell from his pocket, and when I checked, I learnt he was an under cover agent. and his name was celeb clerk, and not leo or leonard as Tania has called him. but who is he working for? ''My God I was so worried about you. but thank God you are okay even if you have just one broken hand.'' Folake said while she ordered two men to carry me to the van. But all this while, I could barely say a word. like I was totally mute. I try to talk but nothing would come out. after several attempt I decide to keep cool. they all talked and laughed as we drove back to town. but I was just there starring at them I found nothing funny. I should be happy that I'm going home but I was battling with my sudden mutism. We finally arrived at the hospital as I was laid on a stretcher Nifemi and mum ran after me this time they weren't crying i guess their tears has run dry already. today being the fifth day since I was adopted. I saw pretty running to embrace her mum as I was rolled in. I wished I could stand up and embrace her too so I can know how lily was doing. but then I remembered that I still wasn't able to say a word since I opened my eyes in that hut. I was taken to the theater for another round of pain because the doctor said he can not treat without seeing what he was treating and the stuff that was used to tie my hand was so bizarre. they had to untie it. With some stitches on my shoulder where I was was shot, before they started putting some knot and whatever on my broken hand all the pain joined together I thought I could shout but I couldn't. All I could do was nod when they ask any question. I was transfered to another ward while mum came in looking all worried I wanted to ask about dad but I couldn't say anything. tears filled my eyes as I saw Nifemi rolled dad in on a wheel chair. They gathered round me with worried looks plastered on their faces. ''Are you okay son?'' dad asked I nodded looking away so I won't have to see the pain on his eyes. ''Say something son don't just nod I want to hear your voice'' he insisted Nifemi was crying now I turned and waved my head saying I can't talk but they didn't seem to understand me. I didn't know how to explain it. I just wished that this was a bad dream that I would wake up from soon. When doctor walker came in to check on me, he also tried asking some few questions. I nodded to the one that required yes or no and stare at him when he ask other's that needed explanation he also looked confused just like mum, dad and Nifemi was now. ''can you speak?'' he finally asked I nodded saying no Mum by now has also joined Nifemi in crying I think he need some rest he said telling them to excuse him. After which he took time to ask some other questions. Which I answered with a notepad he gave me. Could life get any worst for me? Somebody should wake me up from this bad dream. . . . . . To be continued @skookum @konphido @humblelion @kuks @frankkay @pastor @ibrams @emmyrexx @ebube @pizzaro @khola46 @femi @baby j. Please call others. I'm so sorry for not posting updates for almost a week now I was just so busy with work but I'm off duty now. So expect more episodes. Thanks for understanding.
20 Oct 2015 | 15:25
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I hate tragedy.......... Welcom back mama nurse hope ibrams z doin cool........ I will acept ur apology under d condition d@ u will cover d remainin 8episode u supose to hav update b4 dx tym 2moro......deal or not @ritagold
20 Oct 2015 | 15:48
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@skookum I can't say for now lol... But I will try...
20 Oct 2015 | 16:12
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@Ritagold welcome back.... I hope the contract was Successful....and also your trip to Dubai..... Ook ibrams Wat's apening nah... talk jor
20 Oct 2015 | 17:09
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if not that am checking on this story.... this episodes would have pass me.... no one cares
20 Oct 2015 | 19:38
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Wia be d@ j.bro nw @frankkay bring ur mouth waka here ooo
21 Oct 2015 | 01:29
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what hpn 2 ibrams... Y cant he talk.,#dumb welcome back @ritagold.
21 Oct 2015 | 02:29
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Hmmmm.... welcum back @ritagold ...
21 Oct 2015 | 04:26
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Hope u regain ur voice soon
21 Oct 2015 | 04:32
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Am here who is dat boi dat tag me. oooo is @skookum my boi ..... @ritagold u are wlc back i have been missin u am now happy u are back .(arms open for hug)
21 Oct 2015 | 06:12
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@jenifa @chomyline @christiana @wyse-one @vict-vames @nextangel @frank over here sharp sharp
21 Oct 2015 | 06:16
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Thanks jawe ma oga @frankkay, where ma people them abeg if you ar here already say present @pizzaro, @pharm-vickymears, @sofia @youngad, @vict-vames abeg all of una come see ooo
21 Oct 2015 | 06:56
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Traqedy everywhere...Nothinq should happen to Ibrams and his dauqhter Lily ooo.... I pray he should be able to talk later after he takes a little rest...
21 Oct 2015 | 07:15
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@Ritagold Welcome back dear...Itz qood u're free...xo letz feel the updates now... @NextAngel am Present...Thank you v much...
21 Oct 2015 | 07:19
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it a very worst dream o
21 Oct 2015 | 10:38
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Welcome back @ritagold
21 Oct 2015 | 12:17
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On d trak,,,present @Nextangel
21 Oct 2015 | 13:09
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Present Boss @Nextangel. @Tholartee @Konphido and @Kuks anurda epic z here
21 Oct 2015 | 13:15
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kk, wat happened to ibrams voice? Wat abt lily? Is she alryt? Who really is leo abi na caleb? Y really is @ritagold gone for a whl now.... All dis questions i need answers n hope to get dem by nxt episode.
21 Oct 2015 | 13:55
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I feel ur pains ibrams
22 Oct 2015 | 04:18
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;( i feel 4 u ibrams. @ritagold wat took u so long? We've missed u
22 Oct 2015 | 04:34
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Tanx @frankkay 4 alerting me .....
22 Oct 2015 | 06:02
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@ritagold wetin dey delay us now I tot u ar on break abi which medicle term u dey use. 4 it
22 Oct 2015 | 16:56
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@Ritagold Am here already Oya lerrit keep flowing @Skookum Did u jux say babes??? azing u av anoda girl apart 4rm jenifer? Infact Jenifer most hear diz Some one should get me a MEGA Phone U better com ad bribe me with palmi nw nw... @Frankkay No mind me jawe Na PHCN did wah da no hw to do best 4 our street Na him i con run go charge my phone 4 Ritagold bedroom, na so one special breeze dat i can even describe jux com 4rm where i don't even knw com da cares my body gently so tey sleep com kidnap me go wonderland o Az u jux Tag my name na him wake me up. @Nazzy sweety B4 nko Which person u go com da luk if not 4 only me daz y u ar special jawe U don't luk at anybody except me Buh diz one wa u com da call ritagold "my Love" Na him one make my jaw drop o, if not 4 d chew gum i da chew na him hol'am coz me no understand y u go da call am my love make he no b watin i da think o.
22 Oct 2015 | 17:09
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Xo eager to knw who iz behind all diz predicament happening to ibrams Can't wait 4 d nx Epi.
22 Oct 2015 | 17:14
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Get well soon Ibrams
23 Oct 2015 | 00:38
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Oga @emmyrexx u make me laugh in Hindu let ibrams catch u calin jenifer my gf u go fia fia. Okay I go bribe u with falon4
23 Oct 2015 | 01:38
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Hahahahahahahahaha @Emmyrexx wot is it ur thinking? @Ritagold am loving dis story ride on @Emmyrexx I think lighthouse ex is d person behind all dis.... more episodes please
24 Oct 2015 | 07:03
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@Ritagold ........................ ......./"""!!"""""!!"""""\....... |....@.................,@....| were are you
25 Oct 2015 | 17:22
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@ritagold oyaaaaa nwwww
25 Oct 2015 | 19:32
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¤¤¤¤¤ episode 25 . . . . I remained mute for two days. It wasn't funny. mum came the next morning with some group of people that called themselves prayer warriors. with lots of speaking in tongues combined with rains of saliva that was almost drowning me on the bed. God!.... I will never forget nor forgive that pastor. He kept bathing me with saliva, choking me with some disgusting stuff he called anointing oil. ''I say come out'' he will shout holding my neck I never swallowed anything in the first place. ''Jesus'' I will respond, not because I was in the spirit but because this pastor was killing me with his hand round my neck. He was strangling me like I was a chicken ''Drink the blood of jesus'' again he will pour some more oil inside my mouth. until the bottle was empty. These people were here to finish me. After much saliva bathing all in the name of prayer.' oshe'.... they left saying the lord is in control. ''Amen o..'' my mum said as she gave the pastor some offering money before he left with his flock. I guess they all have the same sickness. if I'm suffering from ''selective mutism'' as the doctor has tagged it, they are suffering from halittosis. smelling mouth. I'm sure the gate of hell will not dare to prevail against their prayers. Because they already have an advantage. even God will answer without delay. After about a week, things finally went back to normal. not everything though. because it was now certain that the devil has put up a seven point agenda for me, and it all started from the lola street dance competition. You can start counting from there. what I meant was that I was finally able to speak, dad was okay, he has even been discharged. While I was still at the hospital, there were police or should I say bodyguards stationed round. I just concluded that mr femi was at it again. Though nobody told me what was happening. even when folake came she too did not tell me what was going on. I mean I have to know if those guys were behide bars already. But he kept saying that I needed to rest. not until today I never knew how famous I was until I turned on the tv in the ward seeing my picture and that of taiwo displayed on the screen. I paused a bit. this time, not because my picture or that of taiwo was on tv, but because the presenter mentioned something about the best man of lighthouse being involved in the kidnap. I was still trying to get what she (the presenter) was saying when the tv went off. Napa can be stupid at time. but before they put on the gen or whatever they switch to when there is no light, there was nothing left for me to see. why do people carry false rumours? But then reality strucked me. Does that mean that taiwo was the one behide my.... No it can't be. I tried reaching him on his contact but his both line were switched off. While I was trying to take my mind off it, Tania came in accompanied with mum, who was All smiles. I couldn't help but wonder the reason behide those smile. Something must be amidst. ''Hey,'' she said flashing a heart warming smile. ''Hey'' I replied. I could see mum slowly walking out with the smile still on her face. She sat down on the chair beside the bed. She was quite I too was quite. Trouble... Who will be the first to break this silences? we have virtually talked about everything since we came back from our wonderful adventure. from the good samarita that save lily by donating a kidney without asking for a dine and also preferred to remain anonymous and so many other things that I can't put in words. She laugh at any silly jokes I make even ones that are not funny. But more than that I noticed she could barely look me in the eyes. I can remember vividly months back when I was so scared to say a single word like hi to her without getting a death glare that will shake my foundation. But I guess it was her turn this time. She didn't stop making a big deal of how I saved her from being shot by the wired guy. She was getting on well with mum, and I could tell that mum liked her. too she has a way of capturing ones heart. pretty must have got that from her. I couldn't say the same for lily I get lost each time I talk to her. Her english were always combined with shona. ''How is lily'' I finally asked after much silences. She is doing fine... She replied almost whispering she didn't even raise her head actually she was acting all wired today and I couldn't tell why. I have to go, pretty isn't back from school, lily is alone. she said standing up since it seem there was nothing left to say. I quickly stood up with my other good hand, I held her hand. I wanted to tell her that I didn't want her to leave. but I couldn't say a word too. I had my reasons though. she was practically shivering while I held her, and so was I. my heart was almost popping out of my chest. There was tension and I suddenly regretted my action. As much as I wanted to pour out my heart, I couldn't bear deceiving her now. I forged a cough and sat down while she hurriedly poured some water for me ''Are you okay?'' She asked Obviously I was okay and she knew that. We were both acting stupid. I felt like laughing but I had to resist the urge so I kept coughing to cover up. While she on her own hurried out after she made me drink the water. I wanted to start laughing when detective folake came in. He was starring at me suspiciously. ''I see you both are getting along now'' folake said with a devilish smile. I just hope you know what you are doing. All that gitters is not always gold. you know, she look innocent, but...'' ''Okay please don't lecture me now'' I cut in ''the doctor said you will be discharged today'' she said ''Yes and I'm so glad that I'm finally leaving this prison'' ''well don't be over excited because there is bad news.'' she said more like she was trying to change the topic. ''does this bad news have anything to do with taiwo?'' I asked. She looked surprised as I said that. Though she tried to cover up. ''Did she tell you?'' She asked gesturing to the door I guess she meant Tania ''On tv'' I simply said ''uhh....'' she cooed ''Is it true?'' I asked not wanting to accept this horrible truth. But she didn't answer ''Was he involved?'' I shouted but she didn't say a word. I couldn't tell what truth she was hiding from me, or why she has decided to shut me out of my own life. she soon left, leaving me alone to wallow in my thoughts. while I also waited patiently for discharge so I can at least see the outside world. And know what has been going on. I haven't been to lighthouse for months now and since I came back from my wonderful adventure none of the team has came to visit me either. I wonder what is going on in lighthouse. To be continued.
27 Oct 2015 | 19:45
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what will be my excuse for not posting this time?......hmmmmmm. My ink got finished.. Lol Guys I'm so so so so so sorry for the delay. hope you 'll a'll forgive me this time.
27 Oct 2015 | 19:52
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Take ur girl and forget about light house
27 Oct 2015 | 23:19
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Have not forgive u yet ooo @ritagold so dnt tnk of it :( ------------------------------------------ I dnt even knw y Taiwo will want u dead,let just be watching sha.What up it Anna now we dnt hear of her or she z also involved
28 Oct 2015 | 02:35
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Hmmmm... Am following
28 Oct 2015 | 03:23
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I just want u and tania to be 2geda again
28 Oct 2015 | 03:49
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Let us kw wats going on @Ritababe
28 Oct 2015 | 05:08
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abeg forget about lighthouse nd focus on ur woman
28 Oct 2015 | 06:28
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U shud av called reg again 4 diz new eps o
28 Oct 2015 | 07:36
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Hmmmmmm! Its alright
28 Oct 2015 | 11:01
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@ritagold i no understand u again oo hmmm
28 Oct 2015 | 12:01
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@ritagoald u r 4givn o if dat wil make u give us more update
28 Oct 2015 | 14:59
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It Seems As If My Spirit Dey Wit U Weneva U Dey Post D Story Cos It Wz Jst Yestaday I Resolved D Data Issue I Had.......Finally Welcome Bck.....If U Wnt Ur Apology 2 B Accepted Den Cover Up By Postin D Episodes U Wud Hv Posted Den.......As 4 D Story - Comment Reserved (Awaiting Moderation). NEXXTTTTTTT!!!!!!!
28 Oct 2015 | 15:41
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guessinq... If taiwo has hand in dx.... Dat means he z 2 qet tania attention....
28 Oct 2015 | 19:56
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Hmmmm
29 Oct 2015 | 12:55
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@ritagold y u dy dull my spirit for this story na
29 Oct 2015 | 17:08
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@ritagold pls stop d dullin
29 Oct 2015 | 17:22
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Go get ink, don't wan to hear any story
30 Oct 2015 | 02:37
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Next pls!
30 Oct 2015 | 07:04
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¤¤¤¤¤ episode 26 . . . If not for leo who, I still do not know and Tania, I would have been dead by now and. I still couldn't tell what was actually going on in my life. at least I will soon be discharged and by the time I get home, maybe folake will have to start explaining what was happening. When dad's driver came latter in the evening to pick me up, because I was not going to my apartment i wanted to see my dad. After telling Tania that I would be leaving which she seem to have find out already, And promised to come back tomorrow before lily would be discharged. I bade farewell to the hospital which has been my home for weeks now, if not months. Though I would be coming for check up. but I was indeed glad that I was out. While on my way home, I told the driver to play some music. I can't remember the last time I danced. If I had my way, I would have stopped at lighthouse but I know that no matter what I tell this driver, there was no way he would do that. When I got home dad was sleeping while mum was in the kitchen cooking. I guess Nifemi has gone back to school. After having a long bath I came out. Dad was in the parlour watching news I stood watching him from the door. He looked so pale his once pot belle, seem to have reduced. even now he is constantly on the wheelchair. I still wonder why he was discharged. if it was left for me, matter of fact I would not have allowed him. ''Why are standing there and starring at me like I'm a some ghost son?'' Dad asked I didn't know he had already seen me. how could I have forgotten how sensitive mr femi is? ''Good evening dad'' I greeted as I approached him and sat down. ''you were sleeping when I came in'' I explained while he nodded ''Hmm''' how is my granddaughter doing?'' he asked. I was simply amazed at his question. ''she is... Doing great''...i stammered matter of fact she will be discharged tomorrow I answered. He smiled to himself while I sat there starring at the tv with little or less interest. There was a lot of questions I wanted to ask, but I didn't know where to start from. ''Did you....?'' I asked more like I wasn't sure of what I was ask. ''Did I What?'' ''Dad you know what I mean,'' ''I couldn't just fold my hands and watch her die son.'' he said holding my hand. ''Dad...'' I cooed like a kid tears dripping from my eyes as I hugged him tightly ignoring the pain on my hand. ''All I want you to do now is make me happy before I join my ancestors.'' he said breaking the hug. ''Dad don't say that, you not are dying.'' ''Yes I'm, I'm dying.'' there were complications after the surgery. ''No dad its not true,'' he just smiled ignoring me and continued watching the tv. ''You have to tell her the truth son'' he said still focused on the tv. I didn't know what else to say I sat there motionless staring at the tv. As I thought about the price I have paid for my sin. ''food is ready'' mum shouted from the dine While I helped him pushed the wheelchair to the dine, I didn't even have the appetite, not even when I have so much missed mum's cooking I couldn't finish my food. We eat in silent I'm sure mum was already aware of my little secret and the fact that his husband was going to die because of my mistake. my conscience kept pricking me. I retired to my room after that. Folake has called late at night saying she will be coming in the morning. I didn't know when I slept off playing music with phone. The next morning I woke up at about nine, I checked my phone and saw three missed call all from folake I wondered why she was calling, when she told me she will be here this morning. Dad must have gone for check up already but then I heard some noise. I got up still feeling dizzy as I came out only to see the the parlour filled with police I quickly scanned them and saw leo sitting with folake. ''Thank Goodness you are awake'' folake said as soon as she saw me. I greeted them more like I was forced but they were all busy with what they were looking at. ''please sit down ibrams you looked lost'' I sat down while she handed me an envelop I opened it and brought out the content which happened to be pictures. ''What is this about?'' I asked ''Go through those picture and tell me if you know who they are'' she instructed, while I sleepily went through them. First it was anna, and sam you know Sammy my friend from school, and taiwo including two other female that I don't know. ''Why are you showing me this pictures'' I asked handing them back to her. ''do you know them'' leo asked ''Yes, but not all'' I answered truthfully ''Sammy,'' I showed them the picture ''Yes...'' leo said nodding as gesture so I would explain further. ''is my childhood friend we attended the same secondary school'' I explained While leo looked stunned as he starred at me suspiciously. ''Go on'' folake urged. ''Anna'' I showed them the next picture. ''is my girlfriend, but I haven't seen her for sometime now, we actually have some misunderstanding so I guess she need a break'' I concluded while folake scoffed ''Taiwo'' I showed the next they were all quite as they stare at me waiting for me to explain but I took my time. I didn't have to think deep before I know what all this was about ''Yes go on'' leo said ''Is my friend, kind of a brother, and a dancer. In lighthouse he is my best man'' I concluded painfully. ''I don't know the others,'' folake collected the pictures, and kept them inside her briefcase while she switched to interrogation. she kept asking me life tiring question. same thing goes for leo. then I noticed that they were both in for something different. ''Sammy was your childhood friend right?'' Leo asked ''You heard me right'' I answer bluntly ''when was the last time you saw him?'' ''Some months ago'' I answered truthfully ''for what reason?'' I looked at him not knowing what to say. ''he is my friend I bumped into him after a long time'' I lied. ''am I the suspect here or what?'' I asked Even folake looked surprised. ''I'm sorry ''he said. ''Just that for years now, I have been searching for this same person. he always manage to slip out, after each crime but this time he won't go free. Actually, folake said. Sammy happened to be the master mind behide your kidnap he only used Anna taiwo and the two others.'' ''What?'' I exclaimed ''Yes and right now we have anna and taiwo in our custody but as always, this same Sammy has vanished into time air.'' Leo added. folake went out to receive a call when she came back she said she was leaving. ''I still have a lot of questions to ask'' ''I will answer them, you can go. I will be with you soon'' leo quickly said. something told me that he was no good. ever since I said I knew Sam, he has been starring at me like he was searching for some answer on my face. ''She hesitated, but latter gave in while she left with four police men. leaving only leo behide and two other police men. ''Well.. well.. ibrams, let me introduce myself properly. I'm....'' ''I already know'' I cut in before he could start exaggerating. ''Wow.... that is interesting he said sarcastically. ''you know, some years back, there was this party, some school party that took place at Sammy's resident, something really awful happened that night.'' My ears snapped opened as he said that while my heart was threatening to explode anytime soon. Who is he? How is it that he was talking about the party? ''Are you listening?'' He inquired seeing how disturbed I looked. ''nobody died though, but someone I care so much about, she was raped by your so called childhood friend.'' I almost choked on hearing that. I could see the pain on his face as he spoke. ''Who was that?'' I asked. as I managed to hide my fear. ''A friend'' he answered. ''she went through a lot of pain after that incident. I promised to come back someday and make sure he reap what he sowed. I know that this time, something tells me that he will not go free this time. So go on ask your questions'' he urged while I swallowed hard. I didn't know which of the question I wanted to ask anymore. I was practically shaking within like I was suffering from pakinson disease. ''Why would sam want me dead? I finally asked after gathering much courage. ''I think your girlfriend and your best man has the best answer to that.'' Detective folake will be here soon we are heading to the station together. So get dressed he said. If it was before I would have be happy to go and see the face of the two monsters that wanted me dead. but after what leo has said I couldn't even blame them for wanting me dead. for once I had wished I had died in that forest. Because right now I could see that my end was near. I wished I had told her the truth. I can still tell her the truth. its never too late. ''No not today'' I said ''I can't bear to see their faces'' I lied. . . . . . To be continued @pizzaro @frankkay @skookum @Roes @konphido @ebube @humblelion. As usual, please call others. Thanks for your comments.
30 Oct 2015 | 08:28
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kudos @ritagold ride on pls
30 Oct 2015 | 09:35
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D tin z getin more interesting now
30 Oct 2015 | 10:25
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I hope we wunt wait till eternity b4 u come again @ritagold... U see sey my own phrophet no be yeye phrophet all does I named as d culprit ar actualy d one except I dnt remember to mention Taiwo. So let go wait nd see.
30 Oct 2015 | 10:26
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Datz why they say Ya best friend can be ya worst enemy....Ibrams Thank God u're sound and fine now...u shld be preparinq on how to open up to ya baby mama nd leh Folake deal wid the rest...
30 Oct 2015 | 10:54
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Is @konphido stil foloin ?
30 Oct 2015 | 14:17
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So pathetic dat ex-qrl and best friend wants u dead... Nxt episode will tell us dia rea, @ritagold... Post faster.
31 Oct 2015 | 00:09
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Chai ... u are in d midst of enemy
31 Oct 2015 | 05:39
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Ritababe now pls come update
31 Oct 2015 | 06:38
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¤¤¤¤¤ Episode 27 . . . . I refused going with them to the station. But after much pressure from folake when she came, I went in got dressed and followed them. On getting to the station, when I saw taiwo, he was badly beaten that I could barely recognise him, his face swollen, his eyes red. When he saw me, there was a look of guilt on his eyes and I couldn't help but wonder where I went wrong, I took him as a friend, like a brother I never had. but all those feelings was gone now all I could feel was pity. But then when I saw Anna, all I could see was a shadow of someone I once loved and cherished she almost tore me apart when she saw me. if not because she was behide bars and then the two girls, I letter find out that they were working at the hospital, where they have also contributed to my unending illness by helping anna transfuse the poison when I could nolonger take in food orally. ''But why do you want me dead?'' I asked her not minding how violent she was. I wished I could rip her head off. ''oh shut and stop acting like the saint here, when you know fully well that you are not. you idiot, cheat'' she kept cursing I couldn't really ascertain why she was angry at me. Was it because of Tania that she wanted me dead? taiwo couldn't even explai he kept saying it was the work of the devil. The devil who happened to be anna. ''She dragged me into this she made me believe that... You didn't want me.'' for crying out loud I needed a good reason why he wanted me dead. on his statement, he stated that anna introduced him to his boyfriend that happened to be sam, while he had made a deal with him. sam had promised to give him three million naira plus a forged document that shows that he is the ceo of lighthouse. All this just to give them feedbacks of how I was doing at the clinic, but when doctor walker came, their plan was interrupted that was how the two nurses got arrested. So they changed their plan which was to kill me but this time they sent their guys. But then sam was asking for ransom. still this was interrupted by Tania who came in with a spy. They had intended eliminating the both of us only to be arrested two days latter. There was more to the story that I couldn't put together. One, was when anna started dating sam, two, why would sam join force with her. and three, what was my offence? So much deceit from those I call my friends I don't even know who to trust. while I could tell that taiwo was driven by greed, I still do not know the reason why sam will want me dead. that would be until I see him. but for some reason I wish he will never be found at least not now. My phone kept ringing nonstop while I was still there, it was pretty i didn't intend staying long but folake didn't allow me to leave. It was 2pm already. Dad has called twice already asking when I will back home. I had to send pretty a text saying I couldn't make it. I'm sure Tania was expecting me. But all the same I wasn't ready to see her today. When I got home at about five in the evening, Nifemi was around and the house was a bit lively I almost forgot how annoying my little sister could be. It was obvious that everyone already knew my little secret, which they seem to take likely. But still there was tension anytime we see dad clenching his fist in pain even when he pretends to laugh. one thing I would for ever be grateful to God for, is blessing me with a family that care and understand what it means to stand in for eachother no matter the circumstances. They are my real friends. I called pretty later in the evening, I know she will be sleeping so that means that Tania will have to pick the call, she love using pretty as an excuse to call. I was beginning to adapt to that also. I was almost giving up when on calling when I dailed the number the third time and nobody picked the call. I tried one last time and her voice came in Hello she is sleeping she said.I smiled to myself like who says I wanted to speak to her. I could tell she was angry. ''I know, and I'm so sorry I couldn't make it today'' I pleaded. ''okay'' she said ''Okay?'' I asked again ''Yes okay....'' ''you are not angry?'' ''Why will I be angry? I have no right to be angry I had to wait for almost four hours at the hospital for you. only to get a text not even a call, that you couldn't make it, no I'm not angry. Ngiyathaba (i'm happy) so happy.'' Now she is really angry I said to myself combining shona with english. I was quitely waiting for her to finish talking. ''Are you there?'' She asked ''Tania I'm sorry, I was at the station,......'' I tried explaining but the call went off. She must be really angry with me I tried calling again but it didn't go through. I was tempted to sneak out but I swear the gateman will never let me out not without dad's permission. I could barely sleep through out the night I wish it was morning already so maybe I could go to her apartment with a good reason on how I got to know where they live too. I wished I had called earlier I also blamed folake for making me stay longer than I expected. then I thought about all taiwo said, I wonder why taiwo of all people would be so foolish as to believing anna, I always knew that she has a dark side but not to the extent of wanting me dead. I didn't want to think about the betrayal I puton my headphone turning the volume up. Sleep soon came like a visitor relieving me of my thoughts. . . . . To be continue. @skookum @konphido @ibrams @ebube @Roes @frankkay please call others.
31 Oct 2015 | 17:44
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@ritagold am api dat u cald me
31 Oct 2015 | 18:03
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I don ever forget say story dey here. Anyway am back. Ibrams shud have revealed dis to tania long ago n plead for her forgiveness.
31 Oct 2015 | 19:12
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............following the logic. Ibrams, how are u gonna do it now? Next pls @ritagold
1 Nov 2015 | 05:05
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Taiwo just of qreed make u sell ur brother..... Ibrams are u sure she will 4qive and 4qet easily when u tell her d truth.
1 Nov 2015 | 07:58
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Hmmmmmm Folding unfolding
1 Nov 2015 | 13:14
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Waitin 4 nxt epi
1 Nov 2015 | 15:25
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i nor undstnd d way @ritagold kum dy dul 4 story again o
1 Nov 2015 | 16:38
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when will u brave up and tell tania
1 Nov 2015 | 17:10
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Hmm am here nd who nd who suppose to be here ok is every colvaller oya make una de show one by one @wiseman @steph @promzy @christiana @youngfellow @emmyrexx @semilore @swtharyomi @nextangel @kuks @sofia @jummybabe
2 Nov 2015 | 09:11
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Episode 28 . . . tragedy... always lurking at every corner. I have barely slept when I heard some screams. At first I thought Nifemi was watching some horror movie again. But then when I took off my headphone, I heard the scream again this time I stood up and rushed out of my room toward the direction the scream was coming from. in dad's room. I slowed down when I got to the door. then I opened the door with trembling hands. Mum was screaming non stop hitting herself on the floor while Nifemi was sitting motionless starring at dad who was smiling in his sleep, only this wasn't some natural sleep he had turned pale and stiff on the bed. ''What happened'' I asked no one in particular. While I clenched my fist. I tried to console mum. but she pushed me away. ''He is dead... He... You....'' she shuttered. If only I knew what he meant by those word just some hours ago, when I thought we were having a family time like some thanksgiving. He was in pain, he was dying slowly but he didn't want to make us worry over nothing. I laughed more like I was going mad I sat down on the bed he lay on holding his hand that were now cold as ice. ''I killed him'' I completed what mum was unable to. ''I killed dad'' I tuned to Nifemi who has also join mum in crying. mum ran out screaming I quickly followed her before she do something to harm herself. thank God I did as she went straight to the kitchen picking a knife which I quickly snatched from her. ''Let me join him. Of what use will I be here without him'' she cried bitterly on my arms, where we have landed on the floor while I was struggling to take the knife from her. ''I want to die'' she kept screaming. Nifemi was also wailing on her own while I was left to console them. I called folake because I didn't know who else to call at this time, who within a minute came in with an ambulance to take him to the mortuary. I couldn't believe my dad was actually gone. I promised to set things right. I wanted to make him happy. Why would he leave me now? he has been my strength what will I do without him? I looked at his smiling face for the last time. Hot tears gushing out of my eyes. I wished It was just some natural sleep. I had to stay behide as I was scared of leaving mum alone with Nifemi it wasn't easy calming mum I just let her mourn her husband but made sure she didn't hurt herself. we all gathered at the parlour the driver the gateman and also the two garner till it was morning while I started calling some of dad's relative to inform them of the bad news. As early as eight in the morning the house was filled with relatives from far and near those I don't even know. Family meetings up on family meetings for about four days. it finally dawn on me to take responsibility since I was now the man of the house. while I have pleaded for them to give us time. The so called relative has insisted that the burial be fixed on the last day of the month which was in two weeks. following tradition they said it was never in history that their son should be in the mortuary for any reason. My only joy was that they didn't make mum go through any ritual all in the name of tradition they allowed her mourn her husband in peace I was surprised to see team lighthouse on the fifth after along time. And also Tania came with the girls it wasn't how I expected to see her she barely talked to me she was with mum and for the first time after about four days mum was smiling a bit to whatever she was telling her. only pretty was clinging to me through out before they finally left in the evening. ******** just before his corpses was finally lowered. mum and Nifemi bade him goodbye, which I was unable to do. because more than just a goodbye I still couldn't accept the fact that I will never see my dad again. he should be have been alive today if not for me. 'Nifemi' I promise to carry on your contagious smile. The same one that would light up a room the minute you walked in. I promise to laugh and never take myself to seriously. I promise to love harder and forgive faster. I promise to be content, in every sense of the word. To be thankful for the air in my lungs, and the nineteen years I was blessed to have with you. I promise to try and have as big a heart as you did. To be selfless. To know what I have, and know what I can give to others who are not as fortunate. I promise to grieve that absence of your physical being for only a moment. And then I promise to set you free. I promise to never give up on others, even when I'm ready to give up on myself. I promise to be a friend and a mentor as you were. To be a helping hand, a shoulder to cry on or a set of ears to simply listen... And I can promise you this... I can promise to open my heart to you when I fall in love and when I fall apart. When I become a Mrs. and when I become a mother. I promise to let you hear every giggle and feel every hug. To know every heartache, and let you be there for every triumphant moment... The most important promise I can make, despite all my failures and all my losses. A promise that carries the equivalence of all the rest combined is this... I promise to make you proud. With all that I am, I love you dad. Rest in peace till we meet again on the last day. Nifemi loves you. 'Mum' If I only had five minutes the day you passed away, I would have had time to tell you all the things I needed to say. I never got to tell you how much you mean to me, Or that you were the best , better than any man could be I I wish I would have known. I would have said I love you, . If I only had five minutes, the morning you passed away, I'd give you one last hug so tight and see your great big smile. I'd tell you that I don't think I could live without you, not even for awhile. I'd kiss you and take your hand and tell you it's okay to go And tell you that I'll miss you, more than you'll ever know. But you were gone so quickly, One last breath you'd take. Before you even knew it, you were standing at heavens gate. Now God has called upon you, It's time to get your wings. To leave this life behind you, And enjoy all of heavens beautiful things. So wait for me in heaven my heart, Don't let me come alone. The day the angels come for me, Please be there to bring me home. Because I want to come back home to you some day. And from dust to dust ash to ash and so on.. The reverend said the final rites. I held on to Nifemi and mum as the corpse was lowered. Remembering all the good and bad times, the time we disagreed or always disagree. ''Goodnight dad we will meet again'' I murmured letting the tears flow. His fight is over, now its my turn. Will I survive this alone? But then I looked round seeing my girls standing just behide the only one my heart has ever yearn for.. There is a but, but I'm not alone. . . . . To be continued. @skookum @Roes @konphido @horlarbohdey just about four episodes remaining, I'm so sorry for the late updates. I appreciate all of your comments so far, I wouldn't have gone this far without you guys...just keep supporting me. @wyse-one @humblelion @frankkay @sofia and my buddy @softie and @pizzaro. Please call others.
2 Nov 2015 | 10:41
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oh my God tear rolled dwn frm my chicks wen i read dis episode. May his gentle soul r.i.p
2 Nov 2015 | 11:08
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@ritagold no b like dat oo bt anyways sha u don post am , thank u. @ele where u dy oo @Tholartee aw far na
2 Nov 2015 | 11:10
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Sad mood *sobing* eyhaaa papa Abraham R.I.P ooo
2 Nov 2015 | 11:36
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Oh papa rip soory ibrams no be ur fault nao Thanks @frankkay for d mention
2 Nov 2015 | 11:42
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Oh Death!!! Am very very sad riqht now...Well,the man has lived a fufilled life and he has atleast seen his qranchildren(Pretty nd Lily)...itz now ya turn Ibrams... ...xo jex be ready to say it out but It seems Tania Already knows u're the one that raped her sha....nex plx...
2 Nov 2015 | 12:50
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Wow so touching bt at ibrams i dnt knw hw u wil face tania and tel her all u deed to her oo @ritagold nice on keep it coming
2 Nov 2015 | 13:33
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@sofia ..tnks 4 d invite ,.. but (sad face) .. una don go far ooo *tear drops*
2 Nov 2015 | 14:09
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*sobbing* r.i.p mister, what a pity! Ibrams, life still dey go, carry on pls. @ritagold, i feel ur hand oo more grease to ya elbow
2 Nov 2015 | 15:40
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Chai!! I cry. Lets morn wif dose dat morn, comfort dose in sorrow, dere's tym 4 everyfin o, i fink is too late 2 cry wen d head is cut off. Goodbye is hard to say @tym 2 our luv 1s but anyhow shaa @ritagold just keep it best story so far, but dnt pause at d endtime o
2 Nov 2015 | 16:27
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I knw ibrams is so heartbroke now. Pls accept my sympathy. Now is d tym to man up and tell tania d truth nt minding d outcome. Be rest assured dat pretty will have ur back
2 Nov 2015 | 17:51
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RIP.... Papa.... Take heart.. Ibrams Nifemi and Mama.... Ur try... He put his own life at stake 2 save his qrand dauqhter... Dx z d time 2 be a man... Open 2 tania.
2 Nov 2015 | 17:55
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tnx for d Iv @frankkay my man
3 Nov 2015 | 03:50
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Z time to tell tania everytin so dat u can start rebuilding ur family
3 Nov 2015 | 03:53
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well thanks for the mention @ritagold put please load d remaining for EPs on a trailer and off load it here .. the suspend is too much had it been that @ibrams suspend did way her mother would av gone too in d kitchen.. so pleas delay is dangerous..... Adieu papa ibrams
3 Nov 2015 | 05:43
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Rip
3 Nov 2015 | 07:34
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I pray tania take ur story wit gud heart and may ur father soul r.i.p
3 Nov 2015 | 10:43
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¤¤¤¤¤ Episode 29 . . . . I was pacing I thought she said she was on her way, then why isn't she here? I was beginning to loss confidence I brought out my wallet bringing out the little picture I have kept in there. a picture of my Dad. ''Do you think I'm doing the right thing dad?'' I scoffed. ''Of course, this is what I promised and there is no backing out now. So please dad I need now...'' Just then I saw her walked in ''More than ever'' I muttered placing the picture back. remembering what leo told me about three days ago, I couldn't help but wonder if this was actually a secret anymore. Or she was just waiting for me to come out and say hello I'm the b###### that r#### you. ''Are you just going to stand here starring at me like a statue?'' She asked irritated my mind was so occupied that I didn't realise that she was already here standing right In front of me. this was surpose to be a date to her, it was wired enough that I picked lighthouse instead of some fancy reassurance. because I felt safe here at least a bit. Because I was alone with her about to tell her the truth. with the intense gaze from her right now' I was already losing it. ''Please sit'' I said adjusting the chair so she would sit. she frowned and sat down. ''is everything alright?'' She asked curiously ''You looked a bit lost tonight. Still thinking about your dad?'' ''No.... I.... You look so gorgeous tonight'' I said even though that wasn't actually what I intend to say. There is still time, one more minute I kept saying then I served dinner which I had bought on my way.then I remembered that I left the wine inside the car. I'm coming I said rushing out then came back with the wine. then some desert. One more minute I kept saying, We talked about other stuff but I couldn't just bring myself to telling her the reason I asked her out. ''Lets dance'' she suddenly said jumping up only then I noticed that she wasn't at all dressed for some date she was putting on a jean trouser and a big t-shirt that fits her well too then a mixcoloured sneakers she looked adorable and stunning. ''is there no music here?'' she swirled round her hair flying. ''Because you ibrams are so boring. you look so grummpy that I might puke if I take one more look at your face.'' She giggled. She was acting childish and that was a bit relaxing for me. I stood up went and put on the music ''no.. not personally'' I grumbled as the music started playing 'personally by psquare' I quickly changed the music. ''yes this is better'' I said. Westlife imaginary diva. I turned round she was just there starring at me with the most perfect smile ever, she was perfect. I walked slowly towards her she seem to stagger a bit backward as I stood right in front of her. ''Can I have this dance ma'am'' holding my hand out I bowed while she smiled ''Sure...'' She drawled and took my hand. while I pulled her closer, feeling the warmth of her body against mine I inhaled the sweet smell of her hair as we danced slowly to the music. this is no competition it was just the two of us. She rested her head on my shoulder. The music came to and end while she stepped back starring at me passionately. ''I....'' We both said at the same time she chuckled ''you first'' she said. ''No you first'' I said nervously No you first she said yet again. ''if you are not the one by DANIEL BEDINGFIELD'' was playing now. she placed her hand on my shoulder still smiling only this time I felt there was something mischievous behide those smile. ''I.....'' We both said again ''Just shut and let me talk ibrams'' she said sweetly but dryly. I nodded. ''You know when I came back to Nigeria, for the second time, I came for a reason. with so much.... Pain, anger, I came for revenge, to.... You... Are you crying?'' Then I realised that tears were gushing out of my eyes without my knowledge. Where did these come from? I asked myself. ''No I'm not'' I quickly turned my back on her wiping the tears off only they kept coming back this was getting too much. I couldn't just start crying in front of a girl ''This is so Embarrassing'' ''I think its cute'' she said laughing ''Did I say that loud'' I asked surprised turning to face her now. ''Not really, I just heard.'' I think we should leave... I mean go home... Like I mean I will go home to my house and you to yours. I'm sure you are feeling sleepy And... ''Not yet, I have something to say'' I said smiling foolishly. Ok..ay I'm listening are you sure you are not feeling sleepy? She asked smiling nervously '''I.... I.... Love you'' I said saying the wrong word again. though I love her but this wasn't surpose to come first. She was just starring at me couldn't tell what her reaction was I maybe saying this for the first time but I'm sure she already knew how I felt. This wasn't our first date so she must have been expecting that. ''Gosh I'm so stupid'' I said. this time she was surprised. As I started laughing. ''I swear I love you Tania, with all I have.ever since the first time I set my eyes on You.. It has been love all the way... I think about you every minute and every seconds. And that is why I'm saying... I mean I'm so sorry... And I'm so sorry for all the pain I made you go through... For everything... I laughed nervously But still she was there starring at me. I felt a sharp pain on my stomach but I didn't care. I took a sip from the juice on the table were we dined and continued. I.... I.... Did r### you that night... Tania, And I swear there is no day I don't regret my actions that night. She stood there starring at me with little or less concern. Did you hear me I asked confused. ''I said I did...'' Then I felt the pain on my stomach again this time i was sweating profusely. ''Jesus my....'' I clenched my stomach with my both hands only then I saw a look of panick on her face. Are you okay? She asked ''Yes...... No.... ''I said in pain. Just then leo came in or was he there before? ''Let him be'' he said as he came closer. ''He will soon join his father'' he said grinning. ''No you didn't change that'' she shouted ''Yes I did my love, I did this for us, I did this for you. We won't be needing him anymore. now get in the car I will be with you soon'' he ordered. ''So... Well ibrams....'' facing me. ''this is where we say our goodbye, our mission here is over. by the time someone will find out where you are, we will be far away having a good time. All thanks to your beloved friend sam...'' He concluded all this while Tania was screaming and begging that he give her some antidote. ''You poisoned me, Tania you poisoned me'' I said grinding my teeth in pain. I laughed and coughed grabbing the glass of juice so I could quench my burning throte but she took the cup and threw it away. My heart was heavy I couldn't tell what I felt mixture of love and hate if that was possible. ''stop drinking that'' she shouted. ''Tania in the car'' leo shouted in anger dragging her out. ''No I can't leave him here to die'' she protested ''Don't tell me You have fallen for his charms bitch'' he shouted slapping her. And dragging her along with him. while I lay on the floor in pain. I was coughing out blood. I tried bringing out my phone but I was clumsy. I managed to bring out the phone but all I could see was darkness I lay there fighting for my life. ''Dad... I told her the truth, but she has no feelings for me like I taught. I don't blame her. I'm coming to meet you soon dad.'' I kept talking until I felt no more pain everything was calm now but cold so cold. I had to stop fighting. . . . . To be continued @skookum @ibrams @Roes @frankkay @konphido @emmyrexx @ebube pls call others.
3 Nov 2015 | 23:01
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Eyhaaaaa but actor are not made to die....... Abi w@ z d humor of a play wen d actor die without fulfilling his course...... Nd beside ibrams here z out narator so dia z no way his going to die ..
4 Nov 2015 | 01:18
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@frankkay @jummybabe @temmyjoy @tenniebenson @kingson1 @mhzzrblayse @pizzaro @pheranmmie041 @invincible @besty
4 Nov 2015 | 01:22
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@skookum tnks jae..u no fit jst die lyk fowl nah..@ele
4 Nov 2015 | 01:48
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No way ibrams u cant just die now, no u cant, u wil survive
4 Nov 2015 | 03:30
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Tania loves u 2,u dont ave to blame her,leo z d devil....bt i knw dat u wount die
4 Nov 2015 | 03:57
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a pray for good Samaritan.... @ritagold ride on ham wheat yul
4 Nov 2015 | 03:57
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Am here @ritagold @skookum tanks is a pity dis ibrams have suffer alot well get well soon i no u wont die .... Rita ride on
4 Nov 2015 | 04:50
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Hmmm
4 Nov 2015 | 08:01
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Ibram u can't just die
4 Nov 2015 | 09:03
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leo said 'just like his father' does that mean he is d one that killed him. Am sure he is d master mind behind ibrams kidnap nd attempted murder
4 Nov 2015 | 09:23
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Actor dnt use 2 die o If u die dat means 1 thing "TORI DON END" @ritagold ride on no tym again
4 Nov 2015 | 09:46
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@pheranmmie041 i'on grab ooo *confused face*
4 Nov 2015 | 09:49
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@ritagold ..pls i nid a big favour from u .. i already inboxed u
4 Nov 2015 | 09:51
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@skookum, thanks, i'm really late, lemme catch up...
4 Nov 2015 | 09:57
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@ele y r u confused?
4 Nov 2015 | 10:25
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wasnt clear with what u told me nii
4 Nov 2015 | 10:29
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You r dreaming right ? then wake up frm that slumber
4 Nov 2015 | 11:51
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Actor no dey die oh, I know sumhow u will survive...
4 Nov 2015 | 12:18
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O my God!!!...Ibrams can't die jex like Dat... Leo is jex a crazy Bitch...Someone should please help...
4 Nov 2015 | 12:21
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Eleyi gidi gan
4 Nov 2015 | 13:34
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Ibrams will/must nt die IJN i wil enta fasting n prayer. Pretty where a uuu
4 Nov 2015 | 14:45
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Someone is going to rescue him from dying, actors/narrators are not meant to die. @ritagold, do quick with this episode so that u can start the new topic asap.
4 Nov 2015 | 15:03
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Hmmm Diz iz so interesting @Ritagold thumps up Waiting 4 d nx Epi lik seriously
4 Nov 2015 | 15:27
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Gud job @ritagold
4 Nov 2015 | 17:52
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Episode 30 . . . . I blinked my eyes a few time as I opened my eyes the light was reflecting on my eyes. ''Where am I? my throte was so sore and dried. then I remembered. Could I be dead already? Then I looked round hospital? My eyes kept darting from one end to another. No it can't be, someone was resting on the bed. I didn't have to see the face to know that was Tania. I must me really dead then if this was actually Tania. Same person that wanted me dead. plucking out the stuff on my nostril that was now obstructing my breath. looked like I was on oxygen. it fell on her while she jumped up. She stood starring at me for what seem like forever, then she started sobbing. I'm sure she has been crying her eyes where swollen. But still she didn't say anything. while I just lay there starring at her looking confused. I closed my eyes and opened it just to make sure that I wasn't dreaming. Then the door opened and doctor walker came in. He too joined in the confused look. This must be the mute side of heaven then I thought. ''Did you take that off'' he asked gesturing at the stuff I removed from my nostril since I wasn't talking I'm guessing he thought I was still unconscious.She waved her head ''how ... Are you doing?'' He asked more like he wasn't sure I was awake. I looked from Tania to him not saying a word. Then lily and then pretty, mum, Nifemi, and folake came in all at once. Okay I'm dead I said to myself this could be some last respect or whatever. ''Its a miracle'' doctor walker exclaimed. ''He is awake'' they all chorused almost at the same time. I looked from the doctor this time to each and everyone of them as they stood starring in amazement. ''was I dead'' I asked breaking the silent though my voice was barely heard. Tania was crying out loud this time. then I saw that she was handcuffed. While Folake took her out. ''Do you mind explaining what is happening here?'' I made to stand up then I got another shoker. my legs were glued to the bed, it was like they were not a part of me anymore because I couldn't feel them. ''We were about giving up on you, it has been two weeks already you have been in coma. And there was every possibility that you wouldn't make it.'' Doctor walker explained. ''I can't move my legs'' I said ''That is as a result of the poison you took in. we tried our best to flush your system when you were rushed in, you were half dead already. your system were all shutting down. its a miracle that you made it out alive, a miracle'' he said again breathing out. Taking off his glass and wiping the tears on his eyes. Mum sat down holding my hand she was humming while tears were dripping from her eyes to my hand pretty and lily were clinging to Nifemi as they all shed tears. ''I will leave you with your family'' doctor walker said excusing himself from the ward as quickly so he won't get caught up in their contagious cry. I scaled through this again but in a bizzered way. Doctor made it clear that I would never be able to walk again except by miracle. Two weeks and everything has changed sam was arrested leo had led them to him after they dumped me under the bridge to die. A good Samarita had saw them dump me and informed the police and that was how they were caught. ******** Two months later, I got to talk to sam, and taiwo and then anna for the last time before they finally faced judgement. Taiwo had apologized, even though he did want me dead he still remained my best friend. Anna on her own was still stubborn seeing me on the wheelchair she was dancing as she cursed. But sam, we had a really long talk, his reason for all this amounted to the fact that he envied me right from time so when anna came running to him for help he didn't hesitate and also when leo found out that I was the one that raped Tania and not him, he had also asked for help which he also granted as he was the boss they all worshiped. I couldn't believe how I ended up having theses set of people as friends. Maybe this was the price I had to pay. sam was sentenced to life imprisonment for attempted murder and kidnap with hard labour. while Taiwo was sentenced to seven years imprisonment Tania suffered same fate at sam and the two nurses. Leo was shot dead the same night I was poisoned when he tried escaping after killing a police man. ******** It wasn't easy to live as a cripple, when I wasn't born as one. Sure I had my girls with me they gave me so much joy. It was funny how the mistake I made about eleven years ago has bring joy to me at the end. Its a miracle... Isn't it? I know you will be wondering where Tania is, if she is dead or serving a jail sentence. Well.... I dropped all charges against her. I couldn't bear to see her suffer for what my actions lured her into. She had thought that the substance leo gave her was just to make me sleep only it turned out to be poison. Leo was just obsessed over her just like anna was over me. he wanted her all to himself. Seeing that the truth was not enough for her to hate me, he had planned something else. She left after that not even when I asked her to stay. Who would marry a cripple anyways. She left, Leaving the girls behide ******** Its been two months already. and in a few hours, my girls will turn eleven. I worry only about lily she is so attach to her mother. I wanted to make her happy. I wanted Tania to be around to wish them a happy birthday. or was it because I missed her? I find myself glue to my desktop every morning, just to read her email. she made it a routine to send an email every morning. though I never replied any of them until three days ago. Mum had made arrangement for their birthday already, she was so excited about it. I kept checking the time ten thirty, eleven thirty, and then it was 'twelve.' I turned on my home theater increasing the volume till it was full blast. That was the only way I get their attention since I couldn't walk. And in a second they came running in like they were never sleeping. ''Happy birthday to you... ''i sang in off tone as mum and Nifemi came in and joined me adding flavour to it. ''I love you papa'' they both chorused hugging and feeling me with kisses mum and Nifemi brought the cake on each was written happy birthday lily and pretty. We were happy but something was missing I put on an induced smile. While they were about blowing the candle. ''Wait won't you make a wish?'' I asked ''Wishes don't come through papa'' lily said ''It might come true this time'' I said ''Then I wish mama will be here today'' then she blew the candles off ''You don't say it out loud'' pretty said ''It won't work that way idiot.'' she cursed. ''Too late'' lily replied blowing off pretty's candle and there was chaos as they both fought over nothing in particular it was fun watching them. They ended up sleeping on my bed while I sat on the wheelchair watching them sleep. ******** . . . Last episode to be updated tonight. @skookum @ibrams @Roes @konphido @frankkay @ele @horlarbohdah @pizzaro @emmyrexx please call others @softie @ebube @jennifer @vict-vames.
4 Nov 2015 | 20:49
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Wow wow wow nice story @ritagold
4 Nov 2015 | 21:00
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Ibrams u should be very qrateful to God 4 ya life...U've cheated death twice....Nice one and i pray Tania comes back to make the family complete... Welldone @Ritagold ...expectinq the finale..
5 Nov 2015 | 00:55
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Nawow! Bt hope u didn't die eventually
5 Nov 2015 | 01:40
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@pizzaro did u say twice,not @ all it more dan 2 tyms ooo.. .. .. .. .. .. .. Okkayy Rita dear welldone u effort is appreciated keep d good work.. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. Without reading d last episode I where d story is heading,Tania will come nd marry Ibrams becux shez inlove but I cnt say if u gona walk again or not but sebi na only leg it affect it dnt affect spinal cord,u can still perform like a man u knw now,so wen Tania comes back she wunt be starved #winks# :)
5 Nov 2015 | 02:22
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@skookum u see ur life na waitin u don dey tink be dat dis my aburo eah .....well @ritagold weldone u are doin grt. i like it keep it up .......ibrams abeg make u walk oo i no need any story again u must work to be criple is nt ur potion
5 Nov 2015 | 03:30
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@chomyline @jenifa @frank @december @kuks @nextangel @christiana
5 Nov 2015 | 03:33
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Lyf as a criple z very bad bt beta dan death,ibram u will definately walk again
5 Nov 2015 | 03:39
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waow my prayer work for ibram.... and am seeing lily wish coming true...... @ritagold I lock my lip on ur .............. ................. . . . . . . .forehead.... before @ibram neither @skookum think otherwise
5 Nov 2015 | 04:15
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And finally, her birthday wish will eventually happen
5 Nov 2015 | 04:25
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Ehn @roes ur lip wana burn if I chatch u pere........@frankkay na u Sabi ooooo
5 Nov 2015 | 04:25
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Nyc 1 @ritagold........ Cnt wait 4 d last chapter
5 Nov 2015 | 04:51
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Wow
5 Nov 2015 | 04:53
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Cant wait 4 final.....surely tania will come bak
5 Nov 2015 | 05:00
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[b]@ritagold u're doing great! i apologize for not commenting on ur work all this while.... i saved the pages nd read it wen i'm free. But i won't miss the last episode for nothing, waiting for it[/b]
5 Nov 2015 | 05:09
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Her wish might come 2ru
5 Nov 2015 | 06:03
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@ritagold thanks .. will catch up today God willing after im thro with dis boring lectures .. nice job
5 Nov 2015 | 06:41
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Intresting bt y do u hv 2 be cripple@ibrams
5 Nov 2015 | 06:44
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Nice story ever. Thanks sis.
5 Nov 2015 | 07:27
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Thank God for ur life, Ibrams. U are such a lucky fellow by escaping death twice, indeed is a miracle! Am sure to read the last episode @ritagold, ..................waiting..................
5 Nov 2015 | 07:32
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God don do am 4 me #singin# my fasting n prayer z nt in vain. @ritagold shebi i told u
5 Nov 2015 | 12:27
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@frankkay thanks 4 the invite....surely i knw dat tania wil come bak cos she cant leave her kids
5 Nov 2015 | 14:44
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Waoooooooooo... am really happy for ibrams . as for Tania she will surely come back
5 Nov 2015 | 14:57
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I reserve my coment 4 d last episode
5 Nov 2015 | 16:00
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waiting 4 d last episode where d girlz will meet dia mother..
5 Nov 2015 | 17:44
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¤¤¤¤¤ Final episode . . . . The party was one of a kind, it was like a surprise party for me. team lighthouse came, with lot of dancing the girls had fun I never saw lily so happy like she was today. It gave me so much joy to see them dance, play games which they involve me in, like making me the clown on the boucy castle while we took lots of pictures. The party was long over the girls were tired but mum had insisted they put things in other before they sleep. I kept waiting for the door bell to ring or for someone to open the door. its eight pm already for some reasons I was worried. What if something had happened to her? she should be in here by now. I told mum to take me to my room. She noticed how worried I was ''Everything will be okay'' she said smiling. '' Are they sleeping?'' I asked ''Yes they are with Nifemi they slept off why opening their gifts.''I nodded before she left. As she left my worry turned into anger as I clenched my fist fighting the tears that were threating to gush out soon. It was like a knife was pierced through my heart. I dragged myself to my bed laying down on my back. I closed my eyes. Then I heard a knock. I thought mum said they were sleeping already only lily knock like that like she was afraid to hit the door. ''Come in'' I said but for close to a minute the door was not opened ''Lily come in'' I shouted maybe she didn't hear me then the door opened and then slowly she walked in with mum behide her. It was Tania she stood starring at her toes like some kid that was caught stealing candy. ''I will leave you two to talk'' mama said pushing her forward then going out she shut the door. She stood there still starring at whatever it was she was on the floor or her toes. She didn't say a word I also didn't say a word. Like we were playing ''say uncle'' I use to play with Nifemi when she was still young I will hold her both hand backward till she agree to whatever I wanted her to do, or say. I was still angry even though she was here now so much for acting already. ''Hi'' I said struggling to drag myself up so I can sit instead on lying down. ''are you disappointed that I'm still crippled?'' I laughted as I finally sat up resting my back on the bed locker. ''the kids are sleeping already there are lots of guest rooms you can go and have a nice rest So...'' ''Stop tormenting me'' she shouted dropping her hand bag on the floor. ''For the past two months I have tried to reach you,.. I send you email upon email everyday... Do you know how I managed to cope without my kids?... I missed them so much but I couldn't call. even when I did call pretty, she refuse to pick or she hang up as soon as she find out that I was the one calling.'' ''Well.. how is that my fault?'' I shut back ''Whose fault is it then? Mine?'' ''how can she talk to you when you almost killed me for your own stupid reasons?'' ''If you hadn't r##### me I wouldn't have done that'' she fired back bitterly. ''Then you never have been a mother of two princess'' I said. I laughed again and again until I couldn't control it anymore she also joined me. While she came and sat on the side of the bed. ''I'm sorry.... I'm so sorry... I just can't forgive myself'' she was crying ''I knew better that leo was bad news but I wanted revenge. I don't deserve your forgiveness, pretty would probably hate me forever. I.... I....'' I wanted so much to hug her and tell her that she doesn't have to beg for forgiveness but I didn't. instead I kept quite and watched her hands akimbo as she cried like a baby. ''I was so stupid. even when I knew that I am madly, foolishly and totally inlove with you. I still went ahead with the stupid plan.'' I couldn't help but smile as she professed her love for me for the first time. she kept talking while I was trying hard to restrain myself from the crazy huge I was feeling as I stare at her lips. ''I'm not mad at you'' I said breathing in and then out. Then she paused looking at me but I looked away my heart was beating fast. Only when I thought I had overcome the huge she suddenly placed her hand on my face while I turned to look at her her she locked her lips on mine. I moan as I tasted the sweet flavor of her lips. for what seems like forever she kissed me passionately chewing on my lips until they started hurting. And like she had came to her senses she quickly stood up. ''Omg... I'm so sorry'' she said grabbing her bag from the floor and heading for the door. ''Why? Is it because I'm a cripple'' ''Stop sayin that'' she said turning to face me ''Then while will you kiss me and say you are sorry? Just a few seconds ago you said you love me and now?'' ''You don't seem to care. I look in your eyes and I see.... I don't know... Do you still love me like before?'' Now that was the issue, how could she not see how much I love her. ''I still love you, more than ever and I have missed you so much'' ''Then why didn't you reply my emails? You don't know how much it hurts. I almost died of heartache.'' ''Come here'' I said she came back and sat down again on the bed. ''I know this is hard, we have been through a lot already. I don't want you to make any decisions because you want to make me happy.'' ''I'm not.. I want to stay now... I can't... I don't want to leave please love me like befor.'' I smiled broadly taking her both hands ******** It cost me my both legs, I lost my dad, a near death experience not once not twice, selective mutism, just to mention but a few. But at the end I still got what I wanted then. The same girl I violated. many of you might say it ended like the faretale a happy ending indeed. how about you put yourself in my shoes? Have you ever thought about the pain and stigma she will suffer just because of two minutes pleasure? What if she turns out to be your sister? What is you find out on day that you were conceived when some strange guy violated your mum? I used love as an excuse, yours might be lust I escaped death, you might not even live to tell the story. You might think that no one will find out so you drug her. Remember that one day, you will face judgment. Stop violating our young innocent girls!! . . . . The end.
5 Nov 2015 | 21:02
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Were do I start from now..... @skookum for your unending comments (kisses on your fingers that didn't rest until now lol) @frankkay @vict-vames thanks boss for your support/comments @konphido I didn't see you again lol @pizzaro my Oga @ the top I go make you the new lighthouse ceo as I move to forbidden passion lol @tenniebenson for your small but many comment (spiritual one) @softie @sofia @ebube @Roes @humblelion @simzy @pastor @ele you nor let me sleep lol @jummybabe thanks boss you na second grandma for coolval after tennie @jennifer @donmikie @horlarbohdeh @kuks @tinagabe @ na wa my ink don finish. I can't remember all but I want to thank each and everyone of you for your support/comment so far. One one kiss for all the guys and small hug for the babes lol. Make I nor come forget my hubby @ibrams sweetheart mi I love you faint. We shall saw on my next post (forbidden passion) only say I come dey fear that place as comment don baff ground already lol
5 Nov 2015 | 21:16
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@Hardeywummy2 @chomyline @emmyrexx @Precy @frank @wyse-one @blessedgirl @delight @o baby @taiwo so many I can't even remember but I just want to thank y'll for your comments.
5 Nov 2015 | 21:21
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I will start the next story on saturday. Until then. Siyabonga.........
5 Nov 2015 | 21:23
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@ritagold ,,, na me hold touch 4 u every single nite since u stat d tori .,, so i appreciate myself *tonque out* ,,, anyway .,, thanks for this superb piece .,, to say it was scintillating would be one of the biggest understatements in history .,, more creativity to your initiative
5 Nov 2015 | 21:38
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Thanks @ritagold. U did a very nice job. Keep it u!
5 Nov 2015 | 22:19
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Wow! Wow!! Wow!!! Great story with so many Great lessons to be learnt...Ibrams u should be extremely qrateful to God...cos dat 2min pleasure of ya's could av jejely ruined ya entire life,ya family,ya vision even ya ambitions....atleast u're still alive....I see ya survival as a second chance qranted to you by God himself... :-) :-) :-) . . Finally @Ritagold ...U're simply the best...more qrease to ya elbow,more wisdom to ya brain and more creativity to ya hands....Thumbz upp nd Weldone!!! SIGNED BY : #Pizzaro The New C.E.O Of Liqhthouse
5 Nov 2015 | 22:47
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HHmmmmmm am speechless @ritagold u ar highly nd mightly appreciated... ... ... ... ... ...more info to ur brain... ... ... ... ... ... ... waoooooo ibrams u knw I told shex gona come now here she is happy married life in advance... ... ... .... ..... .... My guys in the house I think we learnt something meaningful from onset I hate rapist it like intentionally digging oneself grave,do u even think about d trauma ur victim will go through some may even not be abble to get over it nd d tin z d@ u gan self will not enjoy d stuff u just widin ur wait unnecessary... .... .... .... .....advice to guys STOP RAPE ....................... Over we dey move over to forbidden passion @pizzaro congrats on ur new post as CEO of light house hope u fit dance verry well @ele d candle holder wink 4 u
6 Nov 2015 | 00:11
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[b]Wow! @ritagold u a great job in compiling those words and lines into a well composed and structured story with lessons to learn. Waiting for your next story....[/b]
6 Nov 2015 | 02:15
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@ritagold nice work... well done... @skookum diaris no way that my lip will burn ......Rita has quench it..... ehe ritagold nor fear comments let's go dia forbidden passion
6 Nov 2015 | 02:26
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@ritagold it ws such a nice nd wonderful ride, I must say I enjoyed it a whole lot. Hapi ending lik wat happens in telenovelas, most stories won't end dat way, not all girls can 4gv who voilated dem nd even fall in love wt d culprit, I must say ibrams is one big lucky dude. One mistake made u loose a lot bt still gained u a family, very nice. @ritagold, I wl eargerly b waiting 4 ur nxt story. I trust u 2 make it superb, nice work.
6 Nov 2015 | 02:59
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Thank you Bro @Skookum ... I don't think the C.E.O is a qood dancer ooo...but since itz an appointment...i think knowinq how to dance should'nt come to play.....Lolxx
6 Nov 2015 | 03:04
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Nyc story dear@ritagold
6 Nov 2015 | 03:08
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Hmmm nice one i really gbadu this story oo @ritagold am waitin 4 u at the other house since this one is occupied lets meet @forbidden passion see u then
6 Nov 2015 | 03:52
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Perfect story ever.
6 Nov 2015 | 04:03
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Work well [email protected] story was xo thrilling with alot of lessons....more greese to ur elbow dear......
6 Nov 2015 | 05:49
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@skookum ... werin u mean by candle holder. *grinning*
6 Nov 2015 | 06:57
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thanks guys.
6 Nov 2015 | 07:17
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Wow wow wow @ritagold u did a wonderful job more and more knowledge wisdom and understand ijn amen cant wait for d new story Dis one way u say i be gramma pls i be small girl o cis frank wont like dat lol Great story on coolval ever
6 Nov 2015 | 08:17
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I dey always come late kilode well @ritagold i will say u are such a gud writer u did a nice job here inshort u are dey best i most say ur story has impact some leason to many. may de almighty God bless u nd dey hand u use to write nd post dis wonderfull leason teacher .my fellow guys as @skookum says .say no to rape .....@pizzaro congrate for ur new post hope u will nt let us dawn....
6 Nov 2015 | 08:20
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make una not vex I na fit remember everybody name. But I just posted the first episode on forbidden passion.
6 Nov 2015 | 08:24
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@ritagold thank u 4 completing d story. U av a very nice story here, kudos 2 u and mur ink 2 ya pen. Nw we a waiting 4 d "Forbidden passion" God bless uu
6 Nov 2015 | 09:15
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U're welcome @ritagold
6 Nov 2015 | 10:13
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@ele I kept it 4 u
6 Nov 2015 | 11:16
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@Ritagold Waoooo! Out of the little time i av 2 b online here on coolval i sil manage to follow d story rit 4rm d beginning to end Do u knw y? Coz Ur story iz one of d most wonderful story i av read here on coolval Thumps up dear, more ink to ur pen Wil surely create time out of no time of mine To read ur nx story coz i knw it's gonna b wonderful.
6 Nov 2015 | 11:30
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Nice ending
6 Nov 2015 | 14:00
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Wow! Just wow! It's wonderful. Thank u @ritagold
6 Nov 2015 | 14:03
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kudos to u. although am a secret ghost reader but I knw I do comment once in a blue moon. Tnxs for dis 1daful story full wit grt lessons. am at Your back in forbidden passion. no shaken
6 Nov 2015 | 18:32
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Weldone
7 Nov 2015 | 04:48
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nyc story...cnt wait to read d nxt story..thumps up@ritagold
7 Nov 2015 | 05:27
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Hmmmm,intresting story,wt gud leesone 2 learnt more grease 2 ur elbow @Ritagold
7 Nov 2015 | 06:47
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Hip!! Hip!!! Hi.........p. Wo......w wat a api ending @ritagold tnx u plenty much. I dey hia dy burst bottle 4 ya head o. Okay.......time 2 go 2 forbidden passion lets goooooo
7 Nov 2015 | 08:56
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wow... dis is cool, weldone @ritagold
7 Nov 2015 | 09:47
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9c story @ritagold kip it up
7 Nov 2015 | 10:29
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Ritagold u are 20much jare ... that's true sha some ppl don't av a happy ending lyk he did ...
7 Nov 2015 | 15:01
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At Last, Nice Work Nd I Really Love D Storyline. Well Wat A Gud Lesson 2 Learn But Atleast D 2 Of Dem R Bck 2geda. I Wont B Surprised If Dis Z A Real Life Story Nice Work Ritagold, I Must Say Indeed U R A Gifted Writer Nd Am Lukin 4ward 2 Readin More Of Ur Story. But Grant Me 1 Request Which Z Tag Me In Ur New Stories.
7 Nov 2015 | 15:24
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You cant remember all, u mean u cnt remember me during the vote of tnks? Na lie oo. Come and tnk me ooo. I dey wait @ritagold
7 Nov 2015 | 16:53
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This is an excellent work. You are really gifted @ritagold. More grease to ur elbow. Now unto d next "Forbidden passion"...... Following keenly
7 Nov 2015 | 16:56
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ah boss mi @wyse-one abeg nor mind me o this my head don carry many this self lolz na you I thank pass o... Thanks a lot I really appreciate each and every one of you and also @onahsunday don't know if that is correct. Thanks a lot. For your comments @humblelion I have started posting the next story ''forbidden passion'' already you can check the list of updated stories.
7 Nov 2015 | 17:47
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@ritagold..... Nice work and I enjoyed d tori
7 Nov 2015 | 22:29
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you try @ritagold kudos
23 Apr 2016 | 16:36
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thanks sir @3plex
24 Apr 2016 | 13:49
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Nice story
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