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Men, oh Men ( poem by Tenniebenson)

Men, oh Men ( poem by Tenniebenson)

By Cool in 4 Feb 2015 | 22:42
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Well.... You could imagine what brought about a poem like this....uhmmm
....So unpredictable they are...
So unbelievable their acts..
So irreplaceable on earth....
Highly untouchable like curse and fire
.....As heartless as stone...
As hot as molten magma
As hard as igenous rock
Hidden mind like cave in thick forest....
.....I fear them all
I'm scared of their smile and touch
Seems to be thorn in my flesh
Just can't believe them all
....Men! So unimaginably,unpredictable.....



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4 Feb 2015 | 22:42
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Courtesy of unfulfilled promises cos dis is exactly how Oleng will lament for been deceived by Dave.
5 Feb 2015 | 06:50
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Very correct @Lyna .... I was inspired by dat story
5 Feb 2015 | 08:27
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scared of their SMILE.... smiling is does not always means happiness, at times it means Danger ahead. thumbs up tenniebenson
5 Feb 2015 | 11:10
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Thnk u
8 Feb 2015 | 18:24
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sweetie i dey feel u
22 Feb 2015 | 04:52
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Nice work.... But we are not that bad as you think.. Both gender has their bad part o.. Women are also(even more) like that! Good job. I love the content(but i'm changing the Oh Men to Oh Women in my mind o).. In Unfulfilled Promise also, remember there is Mrs Akpan....! Great job once again..
22 Feb 2015 | 05:34
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Lol.... Tnk u @Khola46
22 Feb 2015 | 09:40
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Am loving the wonderful poetry even tho na we guys you just castigate...lol.. @tenniebenson... Thats why the heart and form of a woman is designed to take it all, only by her touch can the beast in him be sated, only her smile can calm the raging waters in him, no matter how hard as rock men may seem to be, only creature can make him cry... I dont think you should fear them tho, i think it is better to know them cus you cannot fear what u know.. But dont say na me tell me tell you, there are sometimes when it is just better to "RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!!!" hahahahahahaha thumbs up
23 Feb 2015 | 21:18
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Very funny... Tnk u @Johnysky
24 Feb 2015 | 09:47
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Tennie dear your literary works are so marvelous but here d truth to be said u condemn we guys but come to think of it that in d bible,Samson(d strongest man) was capture through d charms of Delilah(a woman),Sani Abacha died on top of a woman(prostitute). No matter how strong a guy can b,he must bow to a woman's charms. A woman is d only creature that can kill d strongest man on earth without a blade. Anyway I appreciate ur work in Literature. I say to u,'More grace to your ink'. We want some more from u Tennie.
24 Feb 2015 | 17:09
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Lol... Aiite... Will post soon.. Tnk u @Flames
24 Feb 2015 | 17:49
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