My Wonderful Adventure

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@khola shift small make i balance well,i even came with my patner incase if d need arise nd we ar waiting

fanks P.R.O

Jenny, I don come, make khola stand up for our seat abeg

Mehn,i don cum...se empty sit still dey coz my hmmm dey cum

waiting....

@Khola46, tnkz. I don cum wey my seat.

@Mray & @Jenny You don forget say anybody(Ladies) weh come here, nah on mah lap them go sit..

Tankz @Khola46 4 notifying mhe.......Let the story beqin.........ah don qrab bread oh lolz...

@khola46 wetin b dat na, y u call jenny join? @jenny abeg commot ur yansh frm his laps shaperly.

Well... Tnk u 4 leaving d front seat 4 me... (ya'll knw datz where i usually sit)... Ok i am here let d story begin.... Blayse u no go complete oda stories b4 starting anoda one ni?

@khola shey u hearam,my oga talk say make u stand up 4 our sit we wan balance well,@mray no mind khola he no go fit carry my leg nt 2 talk of my yarsh unless he wan make we dash am some slaps

@jenny abeg make d slap 10vlts.

10 volts??? haba!!! pity khola now

If u @khola46 10volts,he no go remember his name and wil deaf n dumb for 10hr....abeg,make i beg on his bhalf

@Mray Lol....Even if she give me 50volts... Its because of love...abi ah lie? @Jenny

lmao.....tennie dnt worry they would all be completed

ah meant John's adventure It was around 6 am when John woke up, he tried to get up and say his morning prayers when he noticed that TJ, his childhood friend had slept with his leg over his chest, he pushed his leg aside and cursed TJ ” when you go dey drink too much “, Adebayo John was a 23 year old corper who hailed from Ogun state , he and his friend Timmy Johnson 23 whom also hailed from Ogun state have been together since childhood, they both attended the same primary school, secondary school and university, and surprisingly they were both posted to Enugu state for their NYSC. They had finished their NYSC and were going back home that morning, John was not really excited that morning because he was returning home to his busy father who never had time for him and his mean step mother who hated him because he was the only male child in the family, John’s mother had left him with his father because he was a drunkard and beat her up every time he drank, he had met John’s step mother at a club where he usually drank. John quickly said his prayers and went to have his bath, when he came back TJ was still sleeping, John kicked him and said mumu you no go go bath, TJ then said ‘weray’ and went out to have his bath. John had finished dressing up when TJ came in, John was dressed in his Corper outfit, while waiting for TJ to finish dressing up he took his time to cross check his luggage, he then remembered that he had not picked up his novel, at least that would entertain him throughout the long journey to Lagos. John and TJ went to have their breakfast of moin – moin and pap at mama Nkechi’s buka, they then set out to the main road to look for a taxi to take them to the motor park, they waited for about 7 minutes before they saw a taxi, after a minute of negotiating the taxi driver then agreed to take them there for 200 naira, they then set off on the 15 minutes journey to the motor park, John looked sideways at TJ, TJ was the last born of a rich family of 3 girls and he was the only male child, his 3 sisters were based in the U.S with their mother, while his father was a busy business man who rarely spent a week without traveling, TJ was handsome, he was the ladies guy but he was not brilliant in terms of academics, he graduated with a second class lower, TJ also had a knack for getting into trouble. They got to the park and alighted then settled their taxi driver, it was then TJ tried hiding his face when he sighted somebody in the garage , John noticed TJ’s action and asked oh boy wetin happen? TJ said padi mi na one of those girls I see o, make we do quick go enter bus, they hurriedly entered a bus with a Lagos sign on it, while in the bus TJ put his head on the seat to hide his face. John, still a little bit surprised asked, which girl be that? TJ with his head still on the chair, it’s one of those girls who claimed I impregnated them, Job burst into an uncontrolled laughter which attracted some passangers in the bus, so you dey run from your responsibility abi? Which kind responsibility? Na only me they dey follow sleep? If she see me for here she go hook me down come embarass me for this park. Luckily for TJ the last passanger entered and they set off, but TJ still had his head on the chair, John with a smile on his face tapped TJ on his head and said Baba Junior carry your head up, TJ grinned and said you don dey craze. John checked his wrist watch, they had set off around 8 am, John then took a moment to survey the faces of those in the bus, they were six corpers in the bus including them, 4 guys and 2 girls, one of the girls of which he knew, her name was Joy and she was one the few girls he admired. Joy Parker was epitome of beauty, she was an half-caste, her father was from England and her mother was from Nigeria, John had seen a lot of girls in his lifetime but he could swear she was the most beautiful girl he had ever seen, after a while John picked up his novel and got busy, he was reading the broker by John Grisham, he was in the 5th chapter when something happened. Suddenly the woman beside him had an asthma attack, as she tried to use her inhaler it fell outside the bus through the window, John immediately shouted at the driver to stop, when the bus finally came to a halt, John got down and sprinted back in search of the inhaler, he ran for about 50 metres before sighting the inhaler, when he picked it up he ran back to the bus like a mad man and handed the inhaler back to the woman, she then used it and it stopped the attack in a matter of seconds, John looked sideways only for him to see that Joy was staring at him, John was immediately taken aback by her captivating beauty, she had a light skin and beautiful brown eyes, they had eye contact for about 5 seconds before Joy finally looked away smiling , after the woman had calmed down she thanked John for his help and prayed for him. Joy knew a trustworthy guy when she saw one and to her John would be trustworthy, she had only seen hima few times around camp but there was something about him that interested her, after being cheated on by her ex boyfriend, Joy decided that she was done with Nigerian men but maybe John was an exception. TJ was glad he was returning home, home for him meant he could go out with his father’s cars, go clubbing, bring home girls and move at his own free will, he remembered his ordeal with different girls with different sizes, shapes and skin colour, he was a player unlike his friend John, he felt sorry for John who didn’t really know what fun was like, his attention was drawn back by the screams of the people in the bus, when he looked to see what was happening TJ said “oh damn ” because trouble was ahead of them Right in front of them stood six men armed men, the driver thought about making a run for it but thought again when he saw a plank full of nails right In front of him, he had no option but to stop the bus, the armed men ordered them all out of the bus, and asked them to drop all their valuables and money, the passengers immediately began to comply, the only thing John could think of at that moment was the safety of Joy, he hoped the men would do nothing more than collect their money and leave them alone but he was wrong, the woman who had an asthma attack earlier suddenly fainted, no one dared go to her aid, the leader of the armed men ordered the corpers and four other passengers into the bus where they were blindfolded, the next thing John heard was gunshots as the remaining passengers were killed in cold blood, the driver of the bus tried to escape but got six bullets into his back as a result of his action, the men then got into the bus and drove off, John’s heart started to beat fast he was half glad that Joy and TJ were in the bus with him, though he didn’t know this men but he knew one thing about them “don’t mess with them “, TJ had his heart in his mouth, he had never had a gun pointed at him before, he didn’t know where these men were taking them to but he knew it could not be good

@khola46 you and this girls sef

@MhzzrBlayse Nah gentle ah deh ooo..... The two are falling for each other... nah thieves or kidnappers or ritualist them be??? hope nothing would happen to them all sha.......Interesting

Uhmmm...seems i will excuse myself 4rm dis story...(so as nt to say what will happen later)... I read it on fb...last year...but its a very intresting story...

@Tenniebenson That doesn't mean nah.....me sef don read ahm.....but the tori still sweet..... *how them take exc.....oopshhhh(mah shut up)*..

They ar coppernapers!

@tenniebenson, ex-readers ar not allowed here. Commot dah seat make i siddon nd gimme dat guguru nd eve/citrus.

*walks in with 1 bottle of orijin*una good evening o...make i go hide mysef for one corner first.....*walks straight to the last row*oya boss come continue...chai i don forget my popcorn and straw o....i dey come make i go bring them come...abeg pause o

Quite intrestinq.. @khola46 Abeg stand up make i cum sit for daht place wey u sit,coz i wan sit close to d driver... To those dat av read dis ztori abeg commot make d late comers av place to sit

Lol... @Mray i no fit give u dis front sit... Na @Delight (my p.a i wan give am to).. *tongue out* @Khola46 if i read am aqain na me go finish d story b4 d writer finish am..so na to jez dey go sweet pass

@tenniebenson, Heeeen heeeen, na del8 u wan giv abi! No p na o. @Delight, if u really luv ur yansh nd phone dun go near dat seat 0000.

@Tenniebenson m sure you meant the poster

....Interestin..

Joy was so scared that her heart pumped like a pumping machine, she had different questions racing through her mind like Who were these people? Where are they being taken to? What do they want from them? Why were they the chosen ones? John noticed that the bus suddenly slowed down and took a turn, now there were off the tarred road, he knew because he could tell from the buses sound and movement, he heard one of the armed men talking about how much they will be paid for bringing ten people, one of the men said If na 100,000 naira per person then e mean say na one million naira we dey collect, now John knew where they were being taken to, they were going to be sold by the armed men to ritualists who would pay them 100,000 naira for each of them, TJ’s worst fears were confirmed as he also heard their conversation, is this how his life is going to end? He thought, the bus had continued along the rough road for 30 minutes where it had taken different turns than they could count, they drove for another 20 minutes before the bus finally came to a stop. They were there, John thought, they were at the place where their lives might end, their blindfolds were removed and they were ordered to get down from the bus, as they got down lo and behold they were in the middle of nowhere inside a very thick forest, right in front of them stood an uncompleted building with hefty and heavily armed men, they were about 7 in number, one of the guards said they don come o, the leader of the armed men then ordered them to line up in a straight line and move into the building, John wondered how any human being in their right senses would think of building a house in such a thick forest in the first place, as they were moving into the building, John noticed that a car was parked beside it, it was a Range Rover SUV, John quickly crammed the number of the vehicle AA 885 AKD as they were about to enter into the building John thought, was that the last car he was going to see? Well if it was, it was a nice one . They entered the building which was dark and damp and smelled of death, escaping was not an option as they were surrounded by hard looking, heartless and hefty armed men, they were lead to a dark room they called the dungeon, where they were chained. TJ said to John ‘on the bright side we’ll pray to God for forgiveness and end up in heaven ‘ prayers! John hadn’t thought of that, he began to pray to God for forgiveness, he asked God to find them a way out of this smelly, dark dungeon, he had not finished praying when one man walked in carrying injections all filled with a substance that neither of them knew about, the man began to inject each of them with the substance, as he was injected, John began to recite psalm 23, he had not reach ‘thou anoint my head with oil ‘ when he suddenly felt dizzy, as his eyes were about to close the last thing he saw was Joy who was already unconscious …………………………………………………………… It was almost evening when they woke up, they must have slept for about 5 hours, it was then John noticed that he was Unclad and all his hair was shaven, not only him but all the guys who were in the dungeon, he looked towards Joy’s direction, she was untouched and so were the remaining women in the dungeon, he and Joy’s eyes met, he was a little shy, he liked the idea of being Unclad in front of her but not under such circumstances, their clothes were in the center of the room, John felt uneasy, he was not used to being Unclad in front of women, but he knew TJ was, he had to find a way to free himself and get out of this mess along with Joy and TJ at least, he looked at the far end of the room and noticed that some of them were weeping, John studied the room for escape points, the window was not an option as it was high, very small and had a hard burglary barricade in front of it, he looked up at the ceiling, the door was not an option either as two armed men were outside guarding it, he looked at Joy then he had an idea … John looked at Joy’s hair and noticed that she had a hair pin, can you throw me your hair pin? John asked politely, okay Joy replied as she removed her hair pin and tossed it at John, with his shackle bound hands he pick up the pin, as he tried to use the pin to pick the lock of his chains, the door opened and 3 men came in and took the four other people who were not corpers, John heard one of them say something about beheading them and using their organs for money rituals, John silently prayed to God for a miracle, as the last armed man was about to close the door he mistakenly shut the door on the bunch of keys attached to his belt hole, the keys fell inside the room as the man shut the door, that was the fastest prayer that God had ever answered him, now he had to act fast, heaven had helped him now he had to help himself, he got back to picking the lock as he was sweating as if he was inside an oven, he was relieved when he picked the first lock, he had never done such beforebut he had now put the movies he watched into good use, as his left hand was free he used it to pick the second lock,it took about 3 minutes for him to pick the lock until it opened, with both his hands free he stretched to where the key was but he was just a few inches short, he looked around and remembered their clothes which was in the middle of the room, he stretched to where the clothes were and took his boxers and used often it to try to get the key, He threw his boxers over the bunch of keys and pulled it nearer, now he had the keys, he had tried 3 keys before the fourth one opened the shackles on his feet, now free, he out on his boxers and went to release Joy first, he tried the keys that released him first and it opened all her shackles, he tried it for TJ too and It worked, when TJ was free John have him the keys to release the other 3 people while he dressed up, when they were all released and dressed up, John had a plan to get them out of there.. ……………………… Bison was in the slaughter room when he noticed that his keys were not with him, he quickly retraced his steps in search of the keys, he searched everywhere but could not find his keys, he then remembered that he had not searched the dungeon, with his pistol in his hand he ran to the dungeon, he then ordered the two guards to open the door, when the door was opened, Bison could not believe his eyes The room was empty as all the prisoners had escaped through the ceiling, he raised an alarm and informed all the men that the prisoners had escaped and he needed to have them back, all the men ran out in search of John and his mates because prisoners meant money, John and his friends ran through the back of the building into the forest as fast as they could because sooner or later their captors would find out that they had escaped, before they could say Nelson Mandela 6 armed men were after them, it was now a race of life and death called stop and you are dead, TJ had been in a similar situation before when he was being chased by cultists in his university for dating the girlfriend of one of them, that time he ran through the school premises to the nearest police station or else he would have surely been beaten to coma, he had then called his father who had then called the commissioner of police to get the cultists arrested, they ran through the forest without knowing where exactly they were heading to, luckily for John the men had not collected his wrist watch, he checked the time as he was running, it was 4:20 pm, as they continued running one of the male corpers whose name was Chidi fell and twisted his ankle, they had already ran far ahead before TJ looked back and noticed what had happened, none of them dared go back to rescue him, John felt sorry for Chidi as the men pounced on him and dragged him back, one man dragged him as the remaining 5 continued the pursuit, as John and his friends ran on they jumped over a pit which was full of bones and skulls and produced a bad odor, John concluded that that was probably where the men dumped the remains of their victims, they ran and turned left but the men kept pursuing them, they arrived at a cliff which had a river at It’s bottom, John and his friends looked back, there was only one thing to do John looked down at that river, it was flowing fast, he looked at TJ who nodded at him he looked back and saw that the armed men were closing in on them, he held Joy’s hand and said we all jump at the count of 3 okay, by then the men were 50 feet apart from them shouting stop! stop there! With Joy’s hand in his John counted 1, 2 , and at the count of three the youth corpers Jumped down the cliff, by the time the men got there, John and his friends were half way down the cliff, the men turned back disappointed, Bison was going to be mad at them……….. Splash! John and his friends landed into the river, they tried to swim as the strong river current carried them along, he held on tight to Joy’s hand, no matter what happens he’s not going to let go, he didn’t bother much about TJ, he knows he’ll be fine, he looked back and saw that the other male and female corper were doing well, they journeyed along the river as the current continued to push them down the river, John’s heart raced as he sighted something that looked like a crocodile ahead of them, his heart pounded even faster as they got near it, it was then he realised that it was just a log of wood, he felt relieved as his heart beat reduced, he and Joy held on to the log of wood as their Journey continued, TJ looked to his side as he saw monkeys on the trees beside the river chattering and jumping happily, for one second he wished he could take their place, he had had enough worries for that day, he looked at John and Joy floating away with the log, he smiled a bit, he knew John liked Joy a lot because he had told him about her before, he had never seen John go crazy about a girl before, at least he was happy for John whose dreams were coming true but maybe not the wayhe had wanted or imagined it, the river slowed down as it brought them into a larger river, this was probably the end of the river , he thought, he was right, it was the end of the river but the beginning of a new journey as they felt something like ropes pulling them into the river, they tried to scream for help but their words became bubbles as they were dragged underwater The corpers struggled for air as they were drawn down deeper into the river, suddenly a bright light shone and they all became unconscious …………………………………………………………… Joy was the first to wake up in the unusual environment, as she opened her eyes a tilapia fish passed in front of her, she was shocked as she noticed they were underwater and she could breathe, John and the rest too woke up and were shocked but amazed that they could breathe underwater, as they tried to move they realised that they had been tied down by some mysterious sea plant, as they tried struggling to free themselves a voice echoed ‘what are you looking for in my kingdom you worthless and wicked human beings ‘? They looked around but could not find anybody, you fish eaters disgust me and do not deserve to be alive, I don’t know why my daughter rescued you people from the drowners but you are going to face the panel tonight, it was then that the merman showed his self to the corpers, he was very handsome and had a the trunk of a human being and the rest of his body from his waist was like a fish, John had heard of mammy water, he had even seen them in movies like H2O but he never imagined it was anything as beautiful as that, the merman swam towards them and looked at their faces before swimming away, then another figure approached them, it was a mermaid, the most beautiful thing TJ had ever seen in his life, she came towards them and told them how she had rescued them from the drowners, she also told them that her father, the king hated human beings and was going to put them on trial, if they were found guilty they would be eaten by fish, she also told them that they had to pick one of them to be their lawyer and that they had an hour before trial, she then swam away, they spent the next 45 minutes debating who would be their lawyer as John and TJ both studied law, they finally agreed that John should be their lawyer as he had taken good decisions for them, they had not waited too long when some huge mermen came to lead them to trial…

Hmmmmm getting more intresting..........i pray u quyz survive dis oh.....nxt plz.

Lolls @Emmanesth. @khola46, u sure sey u fit take am? Dah 1 go 4mat ur memory ooo

Oya let d trial begins.........

@Mray Ah go direct ahm to you.....sebi its out of love.......ah go take ahm...you go recieve ahm.... Interesting...

Tankz @khola 4 dis invitation!!!!! I pray notin happen to dem.

Adventure indeed

Oh my God!!dis is interestin..next pls..

quite awesome

Frm frypan 2 fire,may God save u pple ooo

updates cominq up shortly

They were led to another part of the river where a lot of mermen and mermaids were, it looked like a place where they had their events , then the trial began, the opposition lawyer started by accusing humans of murder and pollution of their water world, he pleaded with the court to give the humans the justice they deserve which was death, then John was called to defend his friends, he first started by greeting that judge and the entire members of the underwater world, he then asked the opposing lawyer what his best food was, the opposing lawyer replied and said he eats underwater plants, John then said he was also guilty of murder because the plants also had life, he said that if the plants could move and talk they would also put the merman and mermaids on trial, he explained that fish was one of man’s best food and that man even reared them for food, he went ahead to say that they were some humans who kept fish as pet, he narrated their ordeal in the hands of the kidnappers and begged the court to have mercy on them as they all had families to return to, when John had finished speaking, the court jury then swarm away to decide on the outcome of the trial, TJ chuckled as the jury swarm away, he could not believe his eyes, they were being tried by fish, he was guilty of eating fish ranging from cat fish pepper soup, tilapia, Titus, sardine and many more than he could count, in fact fish was in the moin – moin they hand for breakfast that morning, the jury were back and they were not smiling, they told the judge their decision and went back to their position, the judge cleared his throat and said here is our decision, after hearing from both lawyers, this underwater court finds the humans. Not Guilty! You are therefore discharged and acquitted, John and his friends heaved a sigh of relief as the judgement was passed, John was the happiest amongst them because he had won his first major case, it was a special and unique one, it was underwater against the mer world, he knew he was destined for great things, he went to give the opposing lawyer a hand shake, the opposing lawyers hand was the softest and smoothest hand he had ever touched, he was full of Joy, he was the man of the moment, Joy stepped forward and gave him a hug, yes! he deserved it, the rest of his friends stepped forward and hugged him too, TJ gave him a pat on his cleanly shaved head and said that’s my boy, the princess of the underwater world came forward gave John something that looked like a Pearl and whispered something in his ear, John looked at the pearl and nodded his head in understanding ……………………………… It was time for them to leave the underwater world, they were lead upwards by hefty mermen who helped them swim to the river bank and quickly swarm back to their underwater world, finally they were free from the water world, TJ had seen the mermaid tell John something in his ear, he wondered what she might have told him, maybe, she was asking for his bb pin or his twitter handle, TJ chuckled as he thought, John looked at Joy, she was dripping with water as her Corper vest stuck to her skin, he could now see her s*xy** and lovely body, she saw him looking and smiled at him, John looked back at the river which was now calm, if there was a world record for longest time spent by a human being underwater without air, they had now broken it, he looked at his watch which he could not see clearly, whatever the time was, the day was far spent as it was already evening, they continued their journey with great precaution as they could not afford another negative surprise that day, they found an orange tree in their path and plucked some oranges to cure their hunger, John watched as TJ devoured an orange, he just hoped there was no orange kingdom to arrest them again, they finally decided to spend their night under the orange tree, they would wake up in turns to keep watch of the others, as John lay down to sleep he looked at the bright side of their Journey, he had gotten a clean hair cut and shave from his kidnappers and he had received a very valuable jewel from the mermaid, he had also won his first major case in court, he was also closer to that girl he loved, a cool breeze blew as John fell into a deep sleep. Shh! no noise They awoke to the sound of birds chirping in the forest, the sun was about setting, Tomiwa, the other male Corper had slept off while keeping watch over them, he forgot to wake John up to keep watch, John stood up and looked around, his back ached from sleeping on the ground, he looked at Joy, he was glad she had survived all what they had gone through, he somehow felt responsible for her safety, Becky the other female Corper was crying and lamenting that they would not get out of the forest, Joy moved closer to her and comforted her telling her all was going to be all right, John knew she was right, they didn’t know which direction they were going, but he knew that once there is life, there is hopethey went in search of what to eat, luckily for them they found a pawpaw tree with ripe fruits, they shook the tree until two pawpaws fell, that was their breakfast, they needed water so they set back to the river they had just come from, but they were careful not to go to close to it, as they drank and washed their hands, legs and face, it was the first time any of the had voluntarily drank water from a river , did they have a choice? Now which way will they head? John called their attention so that they can decide, Tomiwa studied geography, so using the position of the sun he got their bearing and suggested they head west, what did they know? They rarely knew anything about geography, they set off on their journey, John was the one Who was in front, they had walked for two hours when they got to a wider road that was not tarred, they were glad because it meant they were closer to civilization, they navigated the road for 10 minutes when they suddenly heard a voice saying stop there leh the comment flow

Stop kee,na another race be dat oo

Stop where?...make i cum read weytin marathon race seems like so interestin

The comments are flowing!

Ahhhh anoda danger!!!!!! God will protect u ppl.

Haba!!!... Tnks 4 inviting me @khola46... It s so interesting, dey re in secnd camp... Hard training. Hmmmm..... Dis wil make john more trustworthy 2 joy. @ TJ dis wil make u repent..."if u undastnd wat u went through" (lions' den indeed)

Wonderful adventure indeed.......Oboy! Una no sabi run?? John no mek anitin do mek u lose ur adamma oh......nyc stori nxt pleee

episode cominq up

Wow Nice Fenkz at khola Continue

chai frm frying pan to fire.......seh no be de tin way i dey tink sha.......

That stop there doesn't seem like danger

Fuel don finish........continue na

Continue nah

Oya nah...

Another wonderful adventure loading............

phewwww..just qot loqqed in after series of trials

Mtcheeeew..........

Their hearts saddened as he stepped out of the bush pointing his gun at them, they recognized him instantly, he was one of Bison’s men, he made a whistling sound and two other men came out holding swords, make una no even try run or else I go shoot una leg comot for una body, the man said in a deadly serious tone, na una go dey allow make Bison para for us abi? una own don finish today, he continued, oya in a straight line the second man ordered harshly, they dared not disobey men with swords and guns, ironically the lined up according to their height with Becky in front followed by Joy then John was behind her after him was Tomiwa then TJ was the last on the queue being the tallest, two men stood behind them while the other one who was holding the gun lead the way……………………….. Thousands of kilometers away, Mr Adeboye was in his sitting room sipping his red wine from his glass cup, he was a little worried because his only son, John was expected from Enugu the previous day, he had read in the morning paper how 9 people were found shot dead in Enugu state, he had dialled John’s number several times the previous day and even that morning, it was time to take action, he could not just sit there and do nothing, just then Kemi his wife came to the sitting room and greeted him, she seemed less concerned about John’s whereabouts, he knew she disliked John but he didn’t know it was up to that extent, he hissed as she walked away, he stood up, picked his car keys and set out ………………………………………………… John and his friends had walked for about 15 minutes with their abductors, he had never killed anybody in his life before but he could swear he was going to kill these men with the slightest chance he had, they had threatened their lives enough, he remembered the fighting skills he had been taught when he was at the NYSC camp…………. The DPO sat in his office in deep thought, that morning was not a good one for him because he just got a call from the commissioner of police who threatened to sack him if the criminals who killed those 9 people which the TV news and newspaper broadcasted were not arrested, he had been receiving reports of kidnapping in the community and now was the time to act………………………………. The man who held the gun suddenly stopped and said ‘my guys wait I wan piss’ , John was alert, now was his chance, he looked back at TJ who understood him, using his hand to signal to TJ he counted down with his fingers 5,4,3 he was ready to die trying 2,1 The birds in the forest flew away at the sound of the gunshot, the first one was followed by two quick ones, John and his friends laid motionless on the ground, John looked up and saw a gun pointing at his face, he raised his head more to study the person who had a gun to his face, no shoes, Dane gun and the man had a sack around his neck, John concluded that he was definitely a hunter, but at that period his name had been changed from hunter to hero as he was their saviour, the hunter had shot their abductors within the blink of an eye, they stood up slowly, John looked around to check if any of them were hurt, he didn’t know whether to hug the hunter or prostrate for him, he had rescued them from the hands of death, they all thanked the hunter for his help as if he had given them 20 million naira each, the hunter replied them and said no worry my children, he went on to narrate how his one of his daughters had been kidnapped by those wicked men, TJ looked back and saw one of the men struggling to reach for his gun, with an anger that he had not shown for a long time, he stamped his foot into the man’s neck, killing him instantly, they all stared at TJ in awe, except John, he had seen TJ portray that kind of anger before, the last time he saw such anger was when TJ was sent out of the examination hall by one of his lecturers, that time TJ had reacted by breaking both side mirrors of the lecturer’s car, he knew TJ too well, for someone who joked most of the time, TJ had a horrible anger no one would wish to witness, my children where una dey come from and where una dey go? the hunter asked them, Tomiwa then narrated their ordeal in the hands of the kidnappers and their underwater adventure to the hunter who didn’t seem surprised but just nodded his head slowly and said okay make una follow me, the didn’t hesitate much, he had just saved their lives and earned a little trust from them, at least he had just saved their lives, he lead them through a different path, they walked for 10 minutes and began to wonder where he was taking them to, as if he was reading their minds, he told them that he was taking them to his house, from there he would take them to town the following morning, he introduced himself as Okeke, he was a hunter as they would have noticed, they walked for another 10 minutes before arriving at the hunter’s house, the house was made from mud, Tomiwa couldn’t have expected better, as they approached the house, a young boy ran out and said papa welcome, he introduced them to his son Obinna, where is ya mother? he asked the little boy, she has gone to the farm, the boy replied, just then a beautiful girl who was around 17 years old came out from the backyard, welcome papa she said softly, the hunter replied her and introduced them to his first daughter Chinelo, John saw TJ focusing on the girl like a lion focusing on its prey, TJ looked at John who gave him a stern look, he knew John meant hands off, the hunter ordered his daughter to prepare food for their guest, he then lead them into the house and asked them to sit down, 20 minutes later Chinelo walked in with their food, it was Akpu and ogbonna soup with antelope meat, they started devouring their food immediately it was dropped in front of them, nothing like forming, even Joy who had never eaten any Nigerian staple food before eat her akpu like a pro, Tomiwa was the first to finish his food, they washed their hands and drank water from a bowl made from calabash, they thanked the hunter or his hospitality and then they relaxed, they all slept and woke up 3 hours later, by then the hunter’s wife had returned, she greeted them and offered them oranges, after they had eaten the oranges they went out to join the hunter who was by the fireside, they began to tell tales by the fireside as the moon smiled on them, they later went inside to sleep, the hunter’s wife offered them 4 wrappers for them to cover themselves, she apologized for the shortage as that was all she had, Tomiwa, TJ and Becky grabbed theirs quickly and went to sleep, leaving one wrapper for John and Joy, John told Joy to use the wrapper as he could cope without a wrapper, Joy smiled and suggested they share the wrapper together, she winked at him and he got the memo, they laid side by side under the last wrapper and John put his hand over her and smiled in his sleep, the girl he loved was in his arms

So hapi 4 u guys,nyc wrk @dozie

mah no collect all the praise..i'm just postinq the story aint the writer

Tank God 4 dem...

dis story iz interesting......nxt pls

Lolz

Lols. Nice1. Pasting is also work na, u still deserve t b praise

Nice one here............Na God qo bless they hunter and his family...............they really saved u quyz and ur return 2 dey city is quaranteed wid him......next plz.

laff don kill me with this una comments...episode cominq up

nxt pls

yeah nyc adventure...john has already won joys heart...next epi pls

John woke up still smiling, it was the best night sleep he’s had for a long time, he was sleeping in the comfort of a girl he loved, no TJ had his leg over his body when he slept and he was not sleeping under any orange tree where ants crawled on his when he slept, he stood up and went outside, leaving his friends who were still asleep, he went to ease himself under a tree and went back to inside to lay beside Joy, he was not the only one who had a good night sleep, Joy woke up full of Joy, it had been almost a year since she had slept beside a man whom she liked and who also liked her too, she knew John was in love with her, she loved his warmth and manly presence as they lay……………………. Thousands of miles away from them somebody didn’t have a good night sleep, Mr Adeboye had traveled to Enugu in search of his son, he arrived Enugu around 9pm and decided to lodge in an hotel so that he could start searching for his son this morning, he rarely slept for 1 hour the previous night as thoughts began to occupy his mind, he hoped John was safe and sound, maybe he had an emergency and could not come home then his phone got spoilt or stolen, even if his phone got spoilt or stolen at least he knows his phone number, why didn’t he call, he knew John to be a responsible man, unlike him, he had failed as a husband to John’s mother and he was a bad father to John, John’s mother had left him when he had beaten her for the umpteenth time after he came home drunk from the club, she packed her bags and left his house that very night never to return again, that time John was just a year and seven months old, he felt sorry for the boy, he never had a real mother to care for him, he went into the bathroom to have his bath ……………………………………………… The DPO was not in a good mood either, he called his men out, they all stood at ease before him as he addressed them, he challenged them to show why the police should be trusted, while the people of the community should feel safe and to show that they were more powerful than the trouble makers, with that he dismissed them……………. Bison had a good night sleep, despite the events of the last two days, he had earned about 15 million naira that week, he had given his men 100,000 naira for each man or woman they brought, now he could buy that range rover suv like the type that Chief Dotmann brought two days ago, business was going on well, all he had to do was keep on kidnapping people…………………. The corpers had taken their bath at a stream not far away from the hunter’s house, they then had their breakfast of eba and ogbonna soup with antelope meat, John and Joy kept making eye contact with each other, they wanted each other badly, the hunter came out of his house carrying his dane gun, but he was not dressed in his hunter’s outfit, he told them he was ready, they were also ready, they were ready to take the long walk to freedom And they started their journey, the hunter’s daughter was going with them too as she was going to carry some of the foodstuff that her father was going to buy from town, the corpers were all happy, finally all their troubles were going to come to an end, if they could reach town they were all going to call their parents, TJ smiled at his thoughts, if he called his father, he could go to extent of sending an helicopter, he father might not even know that he’s not in Lagos yet, he was always busy with his business, Lagos today and London tomorrow, next week Johannesburg, next month Liverpool, well he was already used to his father not being around, John too thought about his father’s reaction, his father would run to Enugu immediately, he knew his father would be worried about him, if his phone had not been collected by the kidnappers he would have had over 300 missed calls, his father does not joke with his only son, Joy didn’t have any parent or relative to call, her father and mother both died in a car accident in Manchester, that was about 5 years ago, it was her father’s life insurance money that was given to her that she had been using for her upkeep, she couldn’t inherit her father’s property yet because he had instructed in his will that his lawyer should not hand any property over to her until she had finished her NYSC, now she was going to Lagos to inherit her father’s property, they walked through the bush path until they finally got to the wide road where Bison’s men had harassed them, but no one was in sight today, they continued walking along the dusty road, John and Joy held hands and she put her head on his shoulder, see gbese o,TJ thought in his mind, these people love don reach level 2, love ke? He had never really loved any girl, all he had for girls was lust, for him girls come and go, he used them like recharge cards, they walked for 15 minutes when they began to see more mud houses, they were closer to town, they passed through the small community and alas! They were finally at the tarred road, their Joy knew no bounds as thespotted a call center, they all ran with their full speed towards the yellow umbrella leaving the hunter behind, Chinelo too followed them, they heard drumming and cheering not far away from them, as they approached the call center, the man that was there was surprised to see them, he was trying to tell them something, he could not speak because he was dumb, he quickly wrote something on a paper and gave it to them, the drumming and cheering became louder as they saw a croud approaching them, they were probably celebrating something, John read the paper, “take the women away, no woman is allowed to be outside today “, before they say Blayse, four men grabbed Joy, Becky and Chinelo , it turned into a tussle between them as more men came to drag the ladies away, the hunter had just caught up with them, he had forgotten that it was the nwayi festival which no woman was allowed to come out for that day, any woman who was caught outside would become either the king’s wife or slave, John took a deep breathe, he could not let Joy or Chinelo go like that, their walk to freedom had just become longer.. Comments flow

interesting i waz jst imagining tinz in my mind kudos to u....john show dem wat u got bt tk it easy

Gettinq more and more intrestinq:D:::::::dis una journey sef nah 4rm fryinq pan 2 fire::::::::Well John dis is anoda oppurtunity for u 2 shw ur luv 2 Joy:::::::::jex activate ur tiqer mood and let the villaqer^s knw who u really are:::::::::::next plz

Hmm..

Wow! Things must nt end lyk dat o, majorly cos of this JOHN 'n' JOY thing. Weldone nigga. Likin this

@Pizzaro, u sabi John b4?

Waitinq

Ma guy show dem d quantity of charf nd paper in ur bodi

Adventures

Wic kind tinz be dis....trouble after trouble.nawa ooooooo

John no gree 4 dem oooo

Next please......

This film is like pavitra rishtra (divine relationship) From one problem to another

dis interesting ooo

still waiting for the next episode,my leg don tire abeg somone gv me chair bfor smtin go apen to me

NEXT PLEASE...........

i finally meet up loving dis story lyk mad cum Continue o

Wonderful begining

@Dozzie were are you pls com n update us

They followed the mad crowd around the town till they finally arrived at the “so called” king’s palace, the king came out and the crowd chorused “Igwe” the king in response raised his hands and waved at them to acknowledge their greetings, then the three girls were presented to him, John stretched to get a sight of the king as his temper had reached boiling point, he hissed, the king looked like Mr Ibu, an Igbo film actor, this took his temper to the melting point of iron, this ugly man was going to take his one and only Joy forcefully as a wife and maybe Chinelo and Becky too, he knew the king would choose Joy to be his wife because no man could resist such beauty, his head was steaming like a steam train, no one and no one messes with his Joy, the three girls were forced into the palace as the king dismissed the crowd, John looked at TJ and the hunter, he had a plan ……………………………………………… Mr Adeboye checked out of his hotel room, he met the receptionist and dropped his room key, he then walked out of the hotel, since the hotel’s parking lot was full he had parked his car along the street, he passed through the hotel’s gate and walked towards his car, he was shocked by what he saw, the bumper and two side mirrors of his car had been removed, he stood for almost a minute, staring in disbelief, when will Nigeria become better? He thought, he finally opened the door of his BMW 5 series, he wondered how they did it without the car’s alarm going off, this was the work of an expert, he thought, he dialled Nelson’s number, Nelson was one of his friends, they had both attended the same secondary school, Nelson was a police officer in Lagos before he got transferred to Enugu where he became a DPO, Nelson had helped him recover this his same BMW car when it got stolen, he had then helped him to install a GPS tracking system into it, he had called Nelson before hand that he was coming to Enugu because of his son, Nelson picked the phone after three tries, he then asked for the description of his police station which he gave to him, Mr Adeboye started his car and headed for the police station ……………………………………… DPO Nelson had another worry apart from being sacked, his friend’s son was missing, he had gone to check John’s apartment but he found out that it was empty, he had also gone to the motor park where someone confirmed that about six corpers were on the missing bus, he knew but he didn’t want to tell his friend on the phone, he had told Peter Adeboye to meet him in his office within the next 1 hour as he had somewhere to go to …………………………… Mr Adeboye was driving along the express road, he was deep in thought only for him to look foward and see a plank full of nails right ahead of him, he immediately slammed on his brake, suddenly two hefty armed men came out of nowhere, one man opened his door and knocked him out cold with the bottom of his gun ……………………………………… Some men were carrying fire wood to the king’s palace, John had caught a toad, he planned on putting it inside the king’s soup which was going to be cooked with the firewood, he only had to get closer to the pot, he had killed the toad and cut It’s legs, it now looked like a piece of meat, if the king wanted to have his Joy he could have her in hell, they dressed like palace errand boys, they had gotten the clothes from where they were spread, John and Tomiwa carried firewood to the palace kitchen, as he dropped the firewood, he quickly tossed the toad delicacy into the boiling pot of soup ,.they walked away slowly not to arouse any suspicion, the king was in the palace with all his chiefs, he has chosen Joy and Chinelo to be his new wives while Becky would be his new wives servant, he dismissed his chiefs and went to have his supper, he ate his akpu like a glutton and then devoured his meat he saw one strange piece of meat and tasted it, it tasted delicious, he then tossed the rest into his mouth, little did he know that he was eating his last supper .. King Emeka drank almost a two liters of palm wine, now it was time for him to go and sleep with one of his new wives, he tried to stand up but he fell back to his chair immediately, he was a little bit drunk, he then used the table in front of him to support himself, he staggered towards Chinelo’s room………………………………. Chinelo was not in the least bothered, she had just become the wife of a king, she was a Queen now, ‘Queen Chinelo’ she said to herself, she had left the bush home where she was with her parents, at least life in the palace won’t be as boring and stressful as life in her parents home, she admired the new wrapper she was wearing, it was given to her by one of the palace maids, she could now do as she wishes, she would convince the king to build a new house for her parents, suddenly someone had entered her room, it was the king, she stood up and said Igwe good evening, the king didn’t even say much, he pulled the wrapper she was wearing off her body, she now stood uncladbefore him, he pushed her and she fell on the bed, he pulled his trousers down and lay on her with his heavy weight, Chinelo did not even try to resist, she knew the king would love her more if she bore him a child, she knew the result of se*x and she was ready to bear the consequences, King Emeka entered her and he knew pleasure ………………………………………………………… Nelson had waited for two hours and his friend had not showed up, he dialed his phone number but it was switched off, he wondered what must have gone wrong, maybe he had missed his way and his phone’s battery was flat, he left the police station as he had more important issues to attend to, he instructed the constable to bring Mr Adeboye to his residence when he comes to the station, he entered his SUV and told his driver where they were going to, they set out and a patrol van followed them ……………………………………………………….. Mr Adeboye woke up in a small dark room, he was unclad, in chains and all his hair had been shaved off, he was terrified, he was alone in a strange place, he thought about his son, maybe the same thing he was experiencing had happened to his son, he knew Nelson would find him, but it was a matter of when……………………………………………….. The wore his trousers, he was fully satisfied, his new wife had given him pleasure that he had not experienced for a long time, he wondered what his other new wife had in store for him, as he turned to go out of Chinelo’s room, he suddenly felt a sharp pain in his stomach, before he knew it, a seizure took over him and he fell to the ground, Chinelo saw what was happening and she shouted for help, immediately two guards came in and saw their king vomiting foam, suddenly he stopped moving, one of them placed his chest on their king’s heart and didn’t detect any heart beat, hell was about to break loose, their king was dead

Following like a doom.....

Eyes wide open

Nice, continue pls...

Great story

Stupid king

Hmmmmmmmm.............yes they kinq don join his ancestors next qeneration him no qo accept such tradition........pityinq Chinelo.......next plee

dat good for hmmm foolish king

gud riddiance to bad rubbish...........silly king.......hmmmmmm dix kidnappers ur end z around d corner.....nxt bro

John, TJ and Tomiwa sat under a tree not far from the palace, the only news john wanted to hear was that the king was dead so that he could carry out his plan to perfection, the hunter had left them and gone back to his home, he seemed less bothered than they were, maybe he wanted something like that, his daughter getting married to a king, TJ looked at John in surprise, he had never seen him act with so much determination, Joy had surely had a lot of impact on him, Tomiwa mind had wandered away, he was thinking of his father, his mother and his little sisters, though he had not informed them of his decision to come to Lagos two days ago, he just hoped they have not tried dialing his handset yet, his mind was brought back to reality when he saw a guard running towards their direction, John was battle ready, if the guard was coming for him, he was going to use his combat moves now, the guard ignored them and branched to the house behind them, the guard seemed worried as he knocked on the chiefs door, the chief came out almost immediately as if he had been expecting him, John looked back to see what was going on between them, he heard the guard say something like ‘the Igwe is dead’ then the chief reacting to what he had said as if he was in trouble, John’s greatest news had been confirmed, his plot had succeeded, the Igwe was dead, he signaled to TJ and Tomiwa who also knew what was going on, they had to execute their plan now ……………………………………………. The hunter entered his house singing a joyful song, when his wife saw him alone she asked of their daughter Chinelo, he then went on to explain what happened to his wife, as soon as he finished narrating the story she started dancing and singing, they both sang and danced together, their dream had come true, they were now officially In- Laws with the most influential man in town, they were now In- Laws with the king…………………………………… It was 9 pm, Nelson was in his sitting room with his wife, he was worried, his friend had not come to his house and his phone number still switched off, he had to act fast, he feared the worst, something might had happened to his friend, maybe he was not lost but had fallen victim to the ruthless kidnappers, he stood up and left his wife in the sitting room, he had to go to bed because he had the feeling that tomorrow was going to be a long day …………………………………………………………….. Kemi was having the time of her life, she was in another man’s bed, her husband had travelled to Eungu in search of her stepson, she hissed at the thought of it, she couldn’t care less if John was Dead but she was glad her husband was gone because now she would have the chance to sleep about with other men, she smiled as her concubine came out of the bathroom and smiled at her, she knew what the smile meant, he was ready for round two ……………………………………………….. Chinelo was in tears as she realized that she had made a mistake, her husband was dead and for all she cared she could be pregnant for him, her dreams only lasted for a few hours as it had vanished from her face like a smoke, she had different thoughts, what would she tell her parents, what if the new king would not want her, suddenly a guard grabbed her arm, she looked up at his face and recognized him instantly, it was one of those corpers, we have to leave here now TJ said to Chinelo, instead of following him, she placed her head on the late King’s chest and wept, TJ had to leave, he had tried his best ………………………………………………………… Joy was sitting on her bed when a guard barged into her room, she recognized him instantly, it was John, the love of her life, she almost wept as they kissed each other, John said they had to leave quick, Tomiwa had rescued Becky, TJ had gone to rescue Chinelo, they had to meet them at the rendez vous point, they ran through the palace which was now in disorder as everybody was weeping for the king, they ran through the back door and towards a tree, John could see Tomiwa, Becky and TJ but Chinelo was not with them, he asked TJ what went wrong, TJ replied and said she does not want to leave her new husband, they ran to the main road, they didn’t know where they were heading to, but they kept running, suddenly John remembered the place, it was the road to his dad’s friends house, Mr Nelson, he had visited there twice, Mr Nelson though always came to check up on him at least once every month, this way everybody John said to them, they didn’t know where they were going but they had all learned to trust John’s decision, he ran towards the black gate and knocked it furiously, a gate man opened the gate, he recognized John, Oga mi wetin happen now? He asked John they pushed him out of the way, entered the compound and locked the gate behind them, Nelson ran out of his house wearing pyjamas, he thought it was his friend Mr Adeboye, but it was someone he was even more glad to see, he was so happy, John was alive John was so happy to see his father’s friend, he ran towards himand hugged him, the rest of them were relieved to be behind the safety of a gate, TJ knew Mr Nelson, he always came around to check on them and give them money and foodstuff, TJ went closer to him and greeted him, Mr Nelson hugged TJ and John together, he looked over their shoulder and noticed two girls and a guy came with John and TJ, he wondered why John and TJ were dressed in the palace guards clothes, as if John was reading his mind, he introduced his friends to Uncle Nelson, as he usually calls him , Nelson asked them into his house, only a mad man would say no, Becky and Tomiwa wondered where John knew this man from, John had been a blessing to their journey, they didn’t hesitate to move towards the house, at least this man seemed nice enough to be a kidnapper or a wife snatching king, they all followed him into the house, Nelson immediately ordered his house help to prepare food for 5 people, John greeted Nelson’s wife who was surprised to see strange faces in their house, she saw John and immediately went to hug him, she thought he was dead, John was no visitor, he went into the kitchen and brought out 5 bottles of water from the fridge, and took 5 cups from the dining table, he handed his friends four bottled water and four cups and he poured himself some water, and gulped other down, it was as if the water had come from God’s personal pool, they sat down in the sitting room and watched TV, they thought they would never watch TV again, John looked at Joy, he hoped that king had not touched her, cause if he did? he wouldn’t mind killing him the second time, his mind came back to life when a plate of rice and turkey was placed before him, he began to dig in without hesitation, within seven minutes the mount Everest placed before him had become Jos plateau, after resting for five minutes he went to Mr Nelson and explained their adventure to him, but he didn’t mention what the mermaid gave him or that he poisoned the king in his story, Nelson was astonished by his story, even people stronger than them did not escape alive, Nelson showed them to the two guest rooms, they could choose whichever room they wanted, they all moved up to the rooms, TJ and Tomiwa stayed in one while the girls went to the other One, as John wanted to go to the room, Nelson called him back, he had something to tell him

gud job jawe john...weldone @dOOzIE..chop kiss jawe..

Wonderful adventures indeed

captivating

i claim it @olami

Nyc one,dat fit d king right....welldone @dozie

Interesting.... @doozie wa gbayi

thanks @charliebryn

ok durlin @dOOZIE..

Hmmmmmmm.......ride on we're wid u oo

hehehe

Dis so swit, i beg post d nxt episode dear

John u ppl ar in save hand nw,is left 4 u to tink hw u will find ur fada.

sowie cant upload today...bear with me

Na wa ooo,d story never start

John was troubled by what Nelson just told him, he went back to the sitting room and sat on the couch, could his father had been kidnapped by those wicked men? He asked himself, he went to the fridge to get a bottle of water, but this time he sipped it slowly instead of gulping it like a dragon that wants to put out It’s fire, countless thoughts occupied his mind, Joy sat beside him and held his hands, she had listened to their conversation, she felt sorry for John, she had lost both her parents a few years ago in a car crash, but she had gotten over it, she wouldn’t want him to lose his father, she looked at his face and tried to console him, he looked into her eyes and his heart melted, he almost smiled, he then held her head and placed it on his chest, 10 minutes later, John looked at Joy any saw that she had slept off, he stood up and carried her to the room where Becky was, he placed her on the bed gently and kissed her, he went to the room where the guys were and he lied down on the spare bed, he was deep in thought until 1 pm when nature came and closed his eyes ………………………………………………………… Kemi woke up with a smile on her face, her concubine had satisfied her more than her husband ever did, she even wondered maybe that was the reason why John’s mother left, maybe he could not satisfy her in bed and she left for that reason, wise woman, Kemi thought to herself, she had made the right choice, but she herself won’t leave the house for her husband, when he comes back with John, that is even if the useless boy was found alive, she would send an assassin to take care of them, her concubine was still sleeping, she didn’t blame him, he had worked like a bull, she stood up and wore her cloth, she carried her hand bag and left his house, she drove back to her husband’s house as she had to go to work that morning …………………………………………………… The corpers woke up early except John, he had woken up around 8:30 am, he stood up and walked towards the bathroom, he brushed his teeth and had his bath, he saw a new T-shirt and a pair of jeans on the bed, he didn’t need to ask Google before he knew it was for him, he was happy he was not going to wear the smelly palace guard clothes again, he went out of the room and walked towards the dining room, there they were eating breakfast, he greeted them before sitting down with them at the dining table, the house help brought his own breakfast of moin – moin and pap and placed it before him, he ate silently without saying a word, when they had finished eating, Nelson announced to them that a police pickup was waiting outside to take four of them home as John would go later because he had some important issues to attend to, John then interfered, he told them what happened to his father, they all felt sorry for him and hoped that his father was not in the hands of the kidnappers, Tomiwa and Becky were inside the police pickup, Joy and TJ had refused to go, Joy said she was going to Nelson’s place with him until he was ready to go, he was the only person she trusted, TJ was not going to leave his friend in this state of mind, he called his father using Nelson’s phone, it was his father’s assistant that picked the phone, his father was out of the country, he told the assistant to tell him that he would be spending a few more days in Enugu, the police pickup left on the journey to Lagos carrying only Tomiwa and Becky, John wished them safe journey ………………………………………………… The hunter and his wife wore their best clothes and began their journey to the palace, they were going to meet their new son-in-law. Nelson received an expected call, one of the chiefs called to inform him that the king was dead and the police was needed to make an investigation and state the cause of death, he knew the king was dead already because John had told him so, he was dressed in his police uniform already, he asked John and his friends to excuse him, he had to get to the king’s palace, he went out of the house and he and his driver set out in his Toyota Prado SUV, John was a little bit scared, it just occured to him that if he was identified as the one who poisoned the king he might be charged to court for murder, it would be a case that he could not win, it would be John vs the entire community, ……………… The hunter and his wife were close to the palace, they had almost gotten there when they heard people wailing, the hunter feared that the king was dead, and his fear was confirmed when a girl told him that the king had died the previous night, after hearing this, his wife Chinyere immediately sat on the ground and stared wailing, their son in law was dead, that hunter shouted on his wife to get up from the ground immediately, they stormed towards the palace and were about to enter the palace when two men who looked like balotelli stood in their in their way one of them asked where they were heading and told them to state their business, the hunter narrated their reasonfor being there, the guard told him that the king was dead, but he still allowed them to enter, the hunter and his wife were inside the palace, they were lucky to find Chinelo easily, Chinelo was wailing and her mother quickly went to console her, Chinelo told them Of she and the late king’s love affair, they exclaimed after hearing what their daughter Said, they would be in big trouble if their daughter ever got pregnant, the hunter asked about John and the female corpers from Chinelo, she told him that she had not seen John or any of the female corpers but TJ had tried to come and rescue her, the hunter shook his head in self pity, the situation had turned around ……………………………………………… Nelson arrived at the palace with his officers who were specialized in such matters, they ordered that no member of the palace should leave, the specialist examined the king’s corpse, they came up with a result within 30 minutes , they didn’t need to ask ifa before they knew he was poisoned, they told Nelson their findings, he announced to the palace that their king was poisoned, the people in the palace shouted ahh! Nelson’s men began their work, they started first by interrogating the palace cooks, they separated the people who prepared and served his food, Nelson personally went to interrogate Chinelo, he was told the king had died in her room, he saw that she was in a sober mood, he told her to calm down, all he was going to do was to ask her some questions, she nodded her head in approval, he started by asking her what the king was doing before he died, she answered shyly and told him that they had just finished making love, when he suddenly fell down and died, he asked her if the king had forced her to have se*x, no she replied, she had done it willingly, he asked her if she was happy to have been in the palace before the king died, she said yes, Nelson examined her carefully, with his psychological instinct, he knew she was not lying, she looked young and harmless but then he reminded himself that looks could be deceiving, he asked her how old she was, she said she was 16 years old, Jesus! Nelson said within his mind, she was underage, the king had definitely committed child abuse, but he couldn’t do anything about it even if the king was alive, the king had authority over such matters, he stood up and went out of her room, he placed her under the low priority suspect level, Sir, one of Nelson’s men called him, he told him his attention was needed in the kitchen, when he got there another officer told him that they had tested the food that the king had eaten the previous night, it contained some toxic substances which they believed to be poison, Nelson told the chiefs about their discovery, he noticed that one of the chiefs, chief Doherty aka chief Dotmann was not present, he asked about him and he was told that chief Dotmann had travelled to Lagos two days ago, Nelson ordered that his men should round up all the cooks and take them to the police station for serious questioning, Nelson left the palace and went to town to buy some more clothes for John and his friends, as his driver was about to drive his car into his compound, he received a call from one of his men, his man informed him that after torturing the cooks, one of them confessed to have poisoned the king’s food, Nelson went into his house and told John that they had found the person who poisoned the king, John was relieved when he heard what Nelson said, maybe he was not the one who was responsible for the king’s death, he was glad someone else had also wanted the king dead, but one thing he didn’t know was why?

Wow xo 2 people were actually wishinq the kinq 2 be dead....... And u mean Chinelo ez jex 16yrz old?? The kinq must be a very heartless person.......kul story @Doozie Next plz

@dOOzIE weldone dear...

You're at God mercy @john

thanks jahree iyawo mi @Olami

What a wicked king, infact it is an honour to those who killed him

Pls record it, I ws here. Doozie u hv a gud story. jst lik Tennie, I hv read it b4 on FB, nw anybody can hv a front seat while I observe 4rm d back. No noise

Make nelson leave d yeye king case nd go find john papa

Hmmm. Interesting

Nice story

@doozie iyawo e for where... @delight my wife how far na....you no come chat room again?

hmmm interesting

Pls continue

Enjoying every bit of d story... Nyc one

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Chief Dotmann woke up around 10 am, he felt satisfied, the lady who he slept with had left him in bed, he had met her in a night club, from there they drove to his apartment in Lagos, he remembered the instructions given to him by the native doctor, he had chewed the green kolanut before sleeping with the woman, now it was time for him to chew the red one, he pulled the drawer beside his bed and brought out the red kolanut, he chewed it immediately, now the process was complete, the woman’s spirit would bring him more money, but she would die any moment after 24 hours, now he could do away with his range rover and buy something better, he picked his phone to call Ijeoma, he hoped she had completed the job, Ijeoma’s phone rang several times but no one picked It, he prayed all was well, Ijeoma never wasted time picking his calls, he stood up and went into the bathroom ………………………………………………… Nelson picked his phone up and tried dialling Peter Adeboye’s number again, still it was switched off he sat down on the couch and looked at John, suddenly an idea came to his mind, why hadn’t he thought of it? He suddenly remembered that he had helped Peter install a police tracker inside his car, he still had the details of the tracker inside his laptop, he picked up his phone and called the specialist who helps him install trackers into police vehicles, within 15 minutes the man got to his house, Nelson gave him the details and he didn’t use up to 5 minutes before he located the car, it was about 12,000 metres away from their current location, Nelson picked up his phone and called all his men, they were going for a serious mission, John and his friends offered to come, Nelson didn’t like the idea but he said they could follow him under the condition that they were going to remain in the car, they all agreed, Nelson’s men didn’t take long to arrive, John and his friends entered the DPO’s car, they then set out on their mission, Nelson’s phone rang and he picked it, one of his men called to inform him that after further torture the suspect had confessed that she was sent by chief Dotmann, Nelson thanked his man for the good job and ended the call, he put two and two together, now he knew why Chief Dotmann was absent, that was a business for another day, right now they had to find his friend ………………………………………………… Peter Adeboye was no more lonely in the dungeon, his captives had brought in more people, five more people to be precise, four men and one woman, the men were also unclad and had their hair shaved, he was shy being Unclad in front of strangers but he knew he would have to get used to it ………………………………………… The tracking specialist whose name was Promise was the one directing the police convoy, he was also in Nelson’s car which was the car that led the way, he told the driver to stop the car, he looked at his laptop and told the driver to take the next turn on the right which he did, soon they were off the tarred road, following the map on his laptop, he directed them through different turns, John thought the road felt familiar, it felt just like the road the kidnappers took them through, Joy and TJ also said the same thing, they made this known to Nelson, Nelson knew it had to be the kidnappers, Promise informed them that they were 1500 metres away from the cars location, Nelson ordered his driver to stop, now they had to continue on foot, Nelson went to the back of his car and picked a bullet proof vest from the trunk, he ordered his men to remember to wear their vest and make no noise as they moved, he told John and his friends to remain in his car no matter what happens, so Nelson and his 24 man squad walked for about 1400 metres when Nelson spotted Peter’s car parked in front of an uncompleted building, Bison’s building, he split his men into three and ordered them to surround the building, Nelson took one last look at his AK 47, they were going in hot Kemi had finished preparing for work, her daughter Lisa was still sleeping, Lisa had just come home from a party that she went to the previous night, Kemi didn’t bother to disturb her, she picked up her car key and went outside to her car, she started the engine and set off for work, she remembered her husband, she picked up her phone and dialled his number, it was switched off, she hissed, why was she even bothering herself, she got to the traffic light, it was already on red so she stopped, she remembered her sweet experience in the hands of chief, she smiled to herself, soon all chief’s wealth would be hers, all she needed was 24 hours, before the balm that baba gave her would take effect, she had rubbed the balm on her laps before going to the club, baba had instructed her that any man she slept with after she had rubbed the balm on her laps would be under her control, the traffic light went from red to yellow and finally green, she drove off and continued her journey to the office ……………………………… John, Joy, TJ and Promisesat in the car, alongside Nelson’s driver, John was deep in thought, he hoped his father would be found, alive, and with all his body parts complete, Joy kissed him on the cheeks and told him all would be fine, John looked at Joy, if he was in the mood he would have kissed her small inviting pink lips, but he was not in the mood, all he could think of now was how his father was going to be rescued ………………………… Peter was half asleep when the dungeon door was opened, two men came inside and released him from his chains, they then pulled him up and dragged him out of the dungeon, they then locked the dungeon door back, they forced him through a long dark corridor and they turned left, Peter knew there was trouble immediately, a left turn was not a good sign, was this how his life was going to end? Bison stood in the slaughter room waiting impatiently, they should have brought the man here already, he didn’t know what was taking them long ………… Nelson took a deep breath, it had been quite a while that he had been on a mission, in fact he shouldn’t be here, but he was here because his friends life was in danger and whoever was responsible was going to pay dearly, on a normal mission, his men would have handled it alone, but this was no ordinary mission, these kidnappers had threatened his Job and his friend’s life, using his radio he told the other two groups to attack on his count, 3, 2, 1 the three groups attacked at once …………………………………… Bison took a machete from a corner, he was going to behead this one himself, two men held Peter’s hands and legs and placed his head on a flat rock, Peter tried to struggle but he could not free himself, he said his last prayers, Bison raised his machete ready to behead the man before him …………………… the people in the dungeon heard a cry of pain from an area of the building, they now knew why they were kidnapped..

hilarious commenters....thanks y'all

Can't believe it

Peter must nt die oooo

hmmm..

See kemi o...lol...she use charm for chief and chief use her for ritual....I just pity her... John no worry your papA no go die that cruely....

Gbam......... Very danqerous one here....... Jex prayinq makez it alive.....

cant stop laffinq

@kuks My darling no vex...come and comment o

@kuks wetin u jus do so,ok i guess u'r singing,lolz

haba...well twaz @khola46 who threw the invite qotta blame him on that...@kuks oya you are invited

Charm upon charm hmm who go win? kemi or chief let ur wait an see. @d00zIE next pls

I believe the cry was that of bison and not peter

Blood splashed on Bison’s hand, he could not believe what he just saw, he looked through the tiny window of the slaughter room and saw about 8 police men advancing towards the building, they were armed with guns, and one of them who had probably seen his man holding a gun had shot him in the arm, Bison looked at the machete in his hand, he looked at Peter, Bison knew he had to escape, that was the most important thing now, he raised an alarm to inform his men that they were under attack, Bison’s men went to the arsenal and carried guns and hand thrown grenades, they then went to confront the police, they marched out of the building and planned to surround the building and defend themselves, but as they were marching out those that were in front faced the wrath of the AK 47 as the police shot at their direction mercilessly, they all managed to get out of the building as some of them passed through the window, they formed a circle around the building and shot at the police, one of the kidnappers carried a grenade and removed It’s cork, he then threw it at the first group of police, as the police saw it coming, they didn’t need to ask Google what it was or what to do before they split for their dear lives, the grenade exploded within four seconds as It’s sound echoed through the forest ………………… John felt uncomfortable as he heard the loud noise, he tried to figure out what it was, it was either a grenade or a car had just exploded, but he had not seen the police carry grenades, he relaxed and assured himself that the police would triumph, 15 seconds later they heard another explosion, John could not take it anymore, he got down from the car and went to the trunk, what are you trying to do? Joy asked him, what does it look like? He replied, I can’t just sit here while my dad’s life is in danger, I’m with you bro, TJ said as he also got down from the car and went to the trunk, Promise offered to help to as he got down from the car, Promise was an ex-soldier, he was dismissed from the army when he was caught hacking into one of their computers, it had been long, he thought to himself, now he needed to feel the moment again, John handed TJ and Promise a vest each and gave them guns, AK 47 to be precise,Promise taught them how to reload the guns as they were probably novices, they looked at the way Promise talked and knew he had experience, they nodded their heads in understanding when he had finished talking, John went to the window side and kissed Joy passionately, they might he seeing each other for the last time, John wore his bullet proof vest, and he, TJ and Promise left Joy and the driver alone in the car, Promise me you’ll be back Joy shouted to John, John didn’t reply, he wasn’t ready to make any Promise he couldn’t keep ……………………………………… Nelson and his men were still at battle, he had lost 2 men from his group but he didn’t know about the others, he cocked him gun and shot at three kidnappers killing them instantly as he still lay on the floor with his men, the battle continued …………………… The people in the dungeon were happy and scared, at last the police had come to their rescue …………………… a few metres away Peter laid low on the floor as he heard gunshots, his heart was Still ybeating because few minutes ago he was about to be beheaded like a bull in the abattoir, he slowly crawled away from the slaughter room and back to the corridor, he saw a pair of trousers hanged on a window, he didn’t need to write a letter of permission before he took it and wore it while sitting ………………………… Bison went to his room in the building, he brought a box from under the bed and opened it, it contained a pair of police uniform, he had always prepared for this day, he put on the uniform and carried a gun, he then sneaked out through the back door …………………………………… John and Co had jogged through the distance, they were now at the battle scene, John looked to his right and saw a police officer coming out through the back door of the building, the police officer was making suspicious movements, John looked at his face and recognized him instantly, it was one of the kidnappers, the one who dropped the key, the one who ordered men around, the police officer now increased his pace, John told Promise and TJ to carry on as he went after Bison ……………………… All the men in Nelson’s group were nowhere to be found, he raised his head to get a proper view when a bullet hit him in the chest, he laid down in pain, the bullet had hit his chest but he still felt the pain, suddenly a kidnapper stood before him and aimed his gun at him, the kidnapper pulled the trigger but the gun clicked empty, he was out of ammo, the kidnapper quickly reloaded his gun and aimed it at Nelson again, Nelson swallowed his spit, he was face to face with death … Suddenly three bullets pierced the kidnapper’s chest before he could pull the trigger, Nelson managed to look back and saw Promise with a gun, Nelson felt relieved, Promise had just saved his life, Promise advanced to where Nelson was and dragged him to safety with one hand like soldiers do while he held the gun in his other hand, when they reached a safe place, Nelson tried to stand up, he looked into Promise’s eyes and said thank you, I hope John didn’t come with you? Nelson asked, the poor boy couldn’t just sit and watch Promise answered him, Promise was right but Nelson didn’t want John getting into trouble ……………………………………………………. TJ was not used to handling guns but he knew that once he pulled the trigger bullets would come out of the gun, he remembered how he used to play COD (Call Of Duty), an action video game, he lay on the floor and aimed, he took his first shot at a kidnapper and missed, then he took two more and he got a kidnapper in the arm, suddenly a soldier jumped over him followed by more soldiers, soon up to 20 soldiers arrived at the scene and took control of the situation, Nelson was impressed from where he stood, he had told one of his men to go back and tell the soldiers that they had an emergency before they even started the attack on the kidnappers, and within 30 minutes the soldiers had arrived, the soldiers came with more sophisticated weapons, the enemy were falling like bowling pins, Nelson looked on in amazement, the soldiers had better strategies than the police, within 10 minutes they had already got very close to the building, they rounded up 5 kidnappers and marched them out, the soldiers also came out with the hostages, one of them wore only boxers, they still had chains dangling from their hands and feet, the soldiers had used their guns to break the chains, Nelson counted five people but he could not see Peter among them, he waited in anticipation for Peter to come out from the building, suddenly he saw a man wearing only trousers jumping through the window, the man stood up and ran with his hands up towards where the soldiers were, Nelson did not need to ask Google who it was, still feeling pains in his chest, Nelson ran towards Peter as if Peter was a goal keeper who had saved the last penalty in a penalty shoot- out, Peter was scared at first when he saw a police officer running towards him, he raised up his hands the more and said please o! please! I’m not among them o! Hetook a closer look at the person running towards him, Nelsonnnnnnnnn! Peter shouted he ran towards Nelson, the two friends hugged themselves as everybody looked on ……………………………………………….. John had been running after Bison for 7 minutes, Bison had no idea anyone was after him, John started getting tired, he went down on his knees and aimed, boom! The first shot got Bison in his left buttocks, Bison fell to the ground and tried to stand up again, as he stood up John gave it another shot, this time he got Bison’s right lap, Nelson walked tiredly to where bison was and knocked him out with the end of his gun, John didn’t know where the strength came from, he pulled Bison by the leg back the way they came ………………………………………… Nelson and Peter were under a tree, Nelson told Peter that John was alive, but he doesn’t know his whereabout,Nelson feared that John had been shot among the police officers, they started searching among the dead police and kidnappers on the ground, Peter’s heart was heavy, TJ knew John was not among the dead people on the floor because he saw him go after a man dressed in police uniform, as TJ opened his mouth to speak, he sighted John coming out of the woods with a man on his shoulder, there TJ said as Nelson and Peter looked in the direction where TJ pointed, they all ran towards John as he dropped they man he was carrying on the floor, John ran and hugged his father, Nelson inspected the man John dropped, it was Chike Uche also known as Bison, he was wanted for the murder of his wife ………………………………………. 15 police officers and 17 kidnappers were killed, 5 police officers were injured and 3 kidnappers were injured, a police officer read out the stats for Nelson as they were going back to where their cars were parked, they walked for 1500 metres before they finally reached where their cars were parked, John could not wait to see Joy, he walked elegantly like a soldier who had come back from war triumphant, Nelson looked forward, he could not believe his eyes, his car windshield was broken and blood had splattered on the front seat, the driver, lifeless, had his head on the horn as the horn sounded continuously, John immediately ran to check on Joy, nooooo! He shouted, Joy had been shot in the chest, he looked at her face and said don’t leave me, It’s gonna be alright, Nelson looked away, one of the kidnappers who probably escaped had shot Joy and his driver, Joy managed to look at John, I love you, she said slowly and she died, John cried like he had never cried before,

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@fateemat if you are talkinq bouh vhis story..its not a coolval written story twaz also copied buh if its another one whch is a coolval written story pls be specific

Hmmm,so painful,Rip@joy

R I P@Joy....... Jhon evertin is going to b well

hmmm

Joy nooo i pity john ooo

Y did joy die na *tears*

oh my God!

hmmmm

See me see suspense... See me see sadness... See me see anger... See as john go dey shoot gun like person wey dey throw banger...

how joy go die #sad......ha sowi @john take heart

OMG! Joy shuld nt leave uz lyk dis it cnt b possible o

ohk i think you should report that in the story itself @Fateemat

joy hope you've accepted vhis various condolence

Nooooooo! Joy cnt be dead lyk dat! Too bad dia relationship couldn't blossom! Nyc 1 n thumbs up @doozie

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TJ came to console him, it was then John remembered, he immediately reached into his empty wallet and brought the Pearl out, it was around the size of his thumb, and transparent, he looked at it desperately, he remembered the instruction the mermaid gave him, it was his only hope..John held the pearl in his hands, he remembered the words the mermaid told him to say, Pearl of the river bring Joy back to life, John said slowly, as he said so, the pearl began to glow like a bulb, when he saw this, his hopes were raised, the Police men and soldiers watched in anticipation as they saw all that was going on, he looked at Joy, her cloth was stained with blood, God please let this work! John prayed in his mind, he opened Joy’s mouth which was already becoming stiff and put the pearl in her mouth and made sure it went down her throat, before John could say Luis Suarez, Joy woke up and coughed, she vomited something identical to the pearl in size and shape, but this one was made of pure gold, John was the happiest man on earth, he hugged the still coughing Joy, Joy looked at him in surprise, she looked at her chest and the bullet wound was gone, ‘the bullet wound, it’s gone’ Joy said laughing, she looked at John’s teary eyes, don’t tell me I died and came back to life, Joy asked John, shh say no more, John said while putting his hands on her lips, the both of them kissed passionately as the police men and soldiers clapped and cheered, Peter didn’t understand what just happened or who the girl was, but he felt happy for his son, he liked what he just saw …………………………………. Kemi sat in her office happily when an Idea suddenly occurred to her, she could use the balm on her boss who had been troubling her for se*x ever since she started working there, she would just control him and ask him for a promotion and a salary of one million per month, she stood up and made way to her bosses office, she knocked the door of her bosses office, a man voice said come in, Kemi entered the office and shut the door behind her, her boss was happy to see her, so Kemi what brings you to my office? Her boss asked, Kemi didn’t say a word, she moved to her where her boss was and sat on his laps, her boss could not believe it, she had finally agreed to his advances, he began to handle her bosoms, Kemi was not concerned about romance today, if not for the balm that she wanted to use on him she wouldn’t even think of having se*x with him, she stood up and pulled his trousers down, she pulled down her panties and rode him on the chair for 5 minutes, she reached climax point and stood up from her boss, it was quick and precise, she didn’t do it for pleasure but for power, she put her panties back on and went out of her bosses office, her boss just sat on the chair looking surprised, he was not even satisfied, and when he thought he had had his way with this woman she had walked out on him half satisfied …………………………………………… Nelson went to the soldiers and thanked them for coming to their rescue, they might not have been alive if the soldiers had not come to their rescue, the drivers corpse was removed from the front seat Nelson’s car and placed at the back of one of the police pickup’s, Nelson took a towel from the trunk of his car, he cleaned the blood from the front seat and dashboard, Peter, John, Joy, TJ and Promise entered the car, Peter sat in the front seat with his friend,John sat at the backseat beside Joy, he put his arms around her neck and she put her head on his chest, John was still in shock, minutes ago he thought he had lost her, Nelson reversed the windshieldless car and drove after his men who led the way, Peter had tried to start his car but the petrol had been drained from it, maybe Nelson’s men would bring it for him later, as for him, he would never step foot in that place again, he might never even come to Enugu state again …………………………………………. Chief Dotmann sat the sitting room of his Lagos apartment sipping on his red wine, all he could think of was how to spend his money that would come a few hours soon, after two hour passed he went into his room and brought out a calabash from his wardrobe, he went to the drawer beside his bed and brought out the half eaten green and red kolanut and put it inside the calabash, he covered the calabash and opened it after a minute, behold! Different bonds of Pounds were inside the calabash, he smiled, it worked, but the lady he slept with would die soon, he heard a knock on his door, he wasn’t expecting anybody, he quickly put the calabash full of money inside his wardrobe and locked it, he went to the sitting room and opened the door, he was shocked as if he had just seen a ghost, it was the woman who he slept with yesterday, Kemi spoke up, go and will your properties to me Kemi Adeboye of 11, Henderson street, Agege Lagos and after that go and hang yourself, Dotmann stood transfixed like a dummy, yes mistress, he answered… Nelson made a call to the palace, he told them that the culprit had been apprehended and that they were free to go where they want to, Chinelo, still weeping, went with her parents back to their home, the only thing she had gained was a new wrapper and some of the royal beeds, she was back to square one, right from where she started ………………………………… John and Joy sat in the sitting room of Nelson’s house, playing with each other, John looked at his father who was now dressed in a decent cloth, John sensing what his father was thinking said Dad this is Joy, my fiancée, Joy’s and Peter’s eyebrows were raised, Joy was surprised, they had never talked about getting engaged, talk less of marriage, and there he was introducing her as his fiancée, he didn’t even say girlfriend, Peter was also surprised, his son had just finished his youth service, he hasn’t even gotten a job and he already has a fiancée?! Well, what could he do about it? John was already an adult, at his age he was already engaged with John’s mum, he wondered why John decided to study law like his mother, Peter felt bad at the thought of John’s mum, he knew he had treated her badly and he wish he knew where she was so that he could just apologize to her, he was fed up with Kemi, she is rude, saucy and to worsen her case she is a bad cook, John stood up and pulled Joy with him, he took her to the balcony of Nelson’s house, he knelt down in front of Joy and brought out the golden pearl, Joy parker, will you marry me? John asked, Joy didn’t know what to say, the man she loved proposed to her with a pearl instead of a ring, it was awkward, when she made up her mind she said yes John, yes! Kemi was driving, her daughter Lisa was with her, she was taking her to LC’s, one of the best night clubs in Lagos, Kemi looked at Lisa who was excited, she sighed, if Peter finds out that Lisa is not his daughter he would kill her, but she will kill him first, she looked at her watch, it was 9pm, Lisa looked at her mum, right now her mum was the best mum in the world, none of her friends mum ever take them clubbing, instead they tell them not to ever go out at night, suddenly her mother lost control of the steering and their car smashed into pole and tumbled, Lisa struggled to get out of the car after it came to a stop, the car was upside down, she pushed the car’s door open and crawled out to the other side where her mum was, Mum! Mum! Are you alright? Lisa asked but she got no reply, she managed to pull the door open, lo and behold, a splinter of glass had cut her mother’s throat, blood was gushing from her throat like a tap, noooo! Lisa shouted, she quickly stood up and ran to get help, she continued running in exactly no direction, she saw a group of men standing and ran towards them, when she got to their place, it smelled of cigarette smoke, please help me, my mother is bleeding to death, the men, seven in number, who didn’t even understand what she said were excited to see such a beautiful girl dressed in skimpy clothes in their zone at that time of the night, you no dey fear? one of then asked, Sniper, JJ carry this girl go base, their boss said, they didn’t even say a word, they carried her like a cotton wool and took her into an uncompleted building, she tried to scream but they held her mouth, they entered the building, pulled off her skimpy cloth and tied her to a table, Lisa was scared, were they going To Molest her? She asked herself, please don’t molest me,she pleaded, but her pleas fell on deaf ears as the master of the hoodlums took her virginity, she felt a pain she had never experienced as her Molested her, when he was done, a second person took her, when he was also done, another man came, no not another one she said, the hard looking man gave her a back hand slap across her cheek, you dey craze, he said, na me you dey call ‘another one’? I be your papa mate? He asked with authority, he entered her and Molested her mercilessly, the last thing Lisa saw before she fainted was another man trying to get between her legs …………………………………………………………….. Nelson was in his office in the morning, Peter, John and Joy were on their way to Lagos in the police van, he took the news paper on his table and read it, he was shocked when he saw one of the headlines, one man identified as Doherty Anthony Lemeta was found hanged in his residence in Lagos, Nelson sighed, Chief Dotmann had committed suicide, well it made his Job easier, no need for them chasing a dead man, the lady who was responsible for the King’s death would be charged to court immediately, he sipped his coffee, he was having his best morning of the year, he had caught the kidnappers who were threatening his job, his friend and his son were safe and on his way to Lagos, what else could he ask for? …………………………….. The police van carrying Peter, John and Joy came to stop in front of a big mansion where Joy resides, Joy had called her lawyer to meet her in the house, she had to sign the papers to inherit her parents property, her lawyer sat in front of the house wearing a white shirt and black skirt, John down from the back of the van and walked with Joy into her compound, now he knew where she lived, he saw a woman waiting in front of Joy’s mansion, they reached where the woman was, meet my lawyer Mrs Adebayo, Joy said, John looked at the woman, he had seen her before in the photo’s at home, Mum?! John said, she recognized him even though it had been 22 years, John?! The woman said, John went to hug his mother, he had hoped to see her, Joy immediately got the memo, her lawyer was John’s Mum, John had told her about his mother,Peter got down from the car to see what was going on, he saw his wife Mary, his heart sank and he was ashamed, he slowly walked towards where Mary was with his head hung in shame, he looked at Mary and started to talk Mary said shh! And she went to hug her husband …………………………………………. Peter and John reached home, as they entered their home phone rang Peter went to pick it, the expression on his face was sad when he dropped the phone, he told John that Kemi had died in a car accident the previous night, John felt sorry for her even though she was always mean to him, the phone rang again, Peter picked it up and showed a sad worried face again he dropped the phone, Lisa was found beside the road yesterday, she is in the hospital now, Peter said, Peter took the car keys to his Toyota Corolla and went outside, he entered the car and John joined him, they drove to the hospital, on getting to the hospital the doctor told Peter that Lisa had lost a lot of blood and needed blood, Peter offered to donate blood as he and Kemi were in the same blood group so Lisa should also be, the doctor suggested they do a test before anything else, when the results came out Lisa’s blood group was different from Peter’s, he wondered how thatHe asked the doctor to do a DNA test on Lisa, the test was carried out and they discovered that his DNA and Lisa’s did not match, Peter felt betrayed, he didn’t even feel pity for Kemi again, she had done a really bad thing………………….. Few days later John went to Joy’s house, he knelt in front of her and said ‘for the second time, Joy parker, would you marry me?’ he brought out a gold ring from his pocket, for the second time, yes! Joy answered, they kissed each other as John inserted the ring which was molded from the gold pearl into Joy’s finger, he carried her into a bedroom in her mansion, he kissed her on the neck, and he entered her and they made love for an hour, they had finally made love after all these while of wanting themselves, it was the first of many to come ………………………………………………………. John went home and saw his mother seated in the sitting room, he greeted her, so you are coming back to us? He asked, yes, she said, John went into Lisa’s room, she was asleep, her father had decided to still take her as his daughter, she had nowhere to go, he closed the door and went to meet his father in the balcony, Nelson told me you had quite an adventure in Enugu, can you gist me? Peter asked, you wont believe if I told you John answered, John brought out his phone to browse and check where he posted to study law in a law school, not again, he said when he saw where he was posted to, he was posted to Enugu… ******** THE END********

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