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The President's Daughter And I {Season 2}

The President's Daughter And I {Season 2}

By Vict-Vames in 4 Apr 2016 | 06:17
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[b] [color =red] This story "The President's Daughter And I" is written and solely owned by Victor U. James (Vict-Vames). [/color]

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[color =red] ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ [/color]


[color =red] NOTE: There must be a cause for not updating. [/color] [/b]
4 Apr 2016 | 06:17
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Clears throat.... All dis instructions no be hia ooooo
4 Apr 2016 | 06:29
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[b] [color =blue] STORY SO FAR [/color] Story of myself who changed  to be a better person in the hard way . I tried hard, overcame temptations and found favour when i got involved with Mirabel (The President's Daughter). Even when i thought that my past would hunt me in my future relationships but to my greatest dismay, Mirabel accepted me and my past. I had a very supportive family, a friend at school Promise whom fell in love with me unknowingly to me. I resisted the seductions of Lola (Mirabel's friend) yet, she didn't give up trying. My greatest fear came sooner than i expected when a video of me kissing Mirabel on campus surfaced online. What happened next? Read from this intriguing story, full of suspense by Victor U. James (Vict-Vames) [color =red] ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ [/color] [color =blue]EPISODE 1[/color] What my heart started doing wasn’t heartbeat anymore, it was hitting hard. I if hadn’t calmed my heart that moment, maybe I would’ve been the youngest guy in history to have an heart attack. Me: Nancy! (my younger sister) Nancy!! Nancy: Yes senior bro **from the background** Me: Come here please Nancy: See me Me: Take **handling her ₦1,000 note** go buy me two hollandia yoghurts Nancy: What’s the occasion? Me: Nothing, just thirsty Nancy: Hhmmm… senior bro, are u expecting someone? and why are u sweating like this?? Me: No… Nancy please go quickly I don’t have time for this Nancy: Okay, ah… **she went out**   Chai! If I’m not dreaming, then my life right now is a film trick,,, I’ve never been this scared in my entire life. I became restless, breathing like a dog, sweating profusely like a suffocated pig.   Nancy: Here senior bro **giving me a leather containing my yoghurts with my change** Me: Thanks **collecting it and burst one open immediately** Nancy: Bro Me: Yes? Nancy: Won’t u give me some? Me: Nancy….  take this and buy whatever u want **giving her ₦100** Nancy: No senior bro, I want yoghurt too Me: Oya add this one and buy your own yoghurt **gave her another ₦100** Nancy: Thanks… buh senior bro, u don’t look ok Me: I will be fine Nancy: Are u sure? Me: Yea, lemme be alone for now Nancy: Or has she left u? Me: Nancy… Nancy: Okay,,, I’m out. Thanks for the money anyways, I’ve been looking for money to recharge my phone.   She talks too much geez! Every moment is a joking time for her. I burst the second yoghurt open and rushed the drink till it remained small. Now I can focus on my thinking on what to do … before I could think of how,,, my phone rings. I wanted to ignore it and switched off my phone, but the caller was a special one.   Me: Hello Mirabel, have u seen it? Has your father seen it? What are we going to do? Should I run to my village and hide? Or i shoul… Mirabel: Relax Victor, I’m on my way to your place now, I will call u when I get to the junction u told me. Me: Okay... please answer this question I’m going to ask u Mirabel: What is it? Me: Has he been told about the video? I mean your Father?? Mirabel: Yea Me: Oh no… Mirabel: What? That was the last thing I heard before I found my self on the hospital bed.      [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED I know its short, buh its just for a start! To Be Updated Later.[/color][/b]
4 Apr 2016 | 06:29
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Wait o hubby.... Shey it is one per day...abi one episode in a week? I no too sabi ur grammar
4 Apr 2016 | 06:30
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Second to coment, my plane jst landed let de game continue.
4 Apr 2016 | 06:33
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Hmmmm... No die finish b4 death come o
4 Apr 2016 | 06:34
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4 Apr 2016 | 06:35
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[b]@Tenniebenson Wifey its once everyday except Saturdays and Sundays[/b]
4 Apr 2016 | 06:36
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Wow its nice continuing anyway its nice having you back the president inlaw @vict-vames
4 Apr 2016 | 06:44
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Nice start….am following, ride on @vict-vames
4 Apr 2016 | 06:44
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oga don faint... welcome back bro @vict-vames
4 Apr 2016 | 06:51
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Seated Wetin carry you go hospital ?
4 Apr 2016 | 06:52
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@victoriouschild na private jet... and it is na me dat flewn d jets..hahaha..... . . . . welcome bk bro @vict-vames hw U.S
4 Apr 2016 | 06:55
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i am goin in nw nw the season two is back, iam wit my gun nw to chase the rats(episod)
4 Apr 2016 | 06:59
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Seated ..lol no more april fool @frankkay
4 Apr 2016 | 06:59
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@pheranmmie041 which kind yeye jet or who dash you private jet sef ?
4 Apr 2016 | 07:00
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sitted..... @Krizzy @promzy @Ele @Invincible @frankkay @crusher @delight @Emmyrexx @everybody come while there is still seat oh
4 Apr 2016 | 07:02
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he don do you
4 Apr 2016 | 07:02
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[b]Thanks guys.:) @Edna @Olayintan @Pharm-vickymears @pheranmmie041 And seated with me is my wifey @Tenniebenson at my right hand side, and seated with me at my left hand side is **she's shy** @Victoriouschild U re asking ? instead of coming to take care of ur senior bro[/b]
4 Apr 2016 | 07:06
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hmm,calm down
4 Apr 2016 | 07:14
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@VICT-VAMES Thank U For Starting To Write This Story Back But To Be Honest It U Too Long Some Have Already Giving Up On It. But I Appreciate U Start Again @Victor Just Take It Easy U Dont Have To Worry That Much
4 Apr 2016 | 07:16
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Sorry bro @vict-vames I will be on my way to the hospital now. what should I prepare for you ?
4 Apr 2016 | 07:18
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@victoriouschild i invented it nah...any tin u see flyin in d air...believe me it is na me dat does it.. @vict-vames uwc
4 Apr 2016 | 07:23
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hmm
4 Apr 2016 | 07:25
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thank god am not 2 late o.. @vict-vames aja 5 gbera
4 Apr 2016 | 07:26
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@chinyenorah too bad i am no staying....thanks for the invite though
4 Apr 2016 | 07:30
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Why are u afraid?? Did u kill the president daughter??
4 Apr 2016 | 07:36
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@pheranmmie041 this your lie make one pregnant woman get miscarriage
4 Apr 2016 | 07:44
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hmmmmm
4 Apr 2016 | 07:46
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@softie I have been wondering the same thing o
4 Apr 2016 | 07:46
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waoooo I have being longing for this. A nice commencement
4 Apr 2016 | 07:48
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u never see death u dey falnt if u con see death nko
4 Apr 2016 | 07:49
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I invited myself and am really enjoying the yoghurt vict-vames left behind
4 Apr 2016 | 07:53
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[b]@Nkluv its a lie! I can i never leave behind even a drop of my yoghurt, u get ur own biko.[/b]
4 Apr 2016 | 08:02
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looool
4 Apr 2016 | 08:12
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wow! vict- games is back again, welcome back.so much love your story.. ride on
4 Apr 2016 | 08:15
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omo eehhh nawa ooo,how the video leak lola i dey suspect una oooo
4 Apr 2016 | 08:17
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lol I can see @onahsunday631 :) vames u are wlc back dats gud of u by promising to be posting everyday
4 Apr 2016 | 08:37
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ThankGod u r bk.....diz story is interesting
4 Apr 2016 | 08:38
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Nyc1, even gave up on ua piece.... Gud 2 av u bak @vict-vames, nxt epi pls
4 Apr 2016 | 08:40
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Welcome back @Vict-vames Lolz! You fainted and was even rushed to the hospital? Nawow! I thought you were a man? Why fainting just because people are helping you become famous or do you think it's easy to be videoed having a passionate kiss with the President's daughter? Better wake up and enjoy he fame joor
4 Apr 2016 | 08:41
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Have already taken my sit,weldone vict
4 Apr 2016 | 08:43
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No kill urself o
4 Apr 2016 | 08:46
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Hiah Ayaf landed... U fainted abi
4 Apr 2016 | 08:47
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Ride on we are solidly behind you. Victor recover quickly ooo.
4 Apr 2016 | 08:50
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I DON LAND WITH MY #vEnZa ....move it broh
4 Apr 2016 | 08:54
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hmmmm chai just the begaing and am sweating
4 Apr 2016 | 08:58
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@ LAST
4 Apr 2016 | 08:59
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so on point
4 Apr 2016 | 09:13
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Seated tightly ... @chinyenorah ... Thanks for d invite
4 Apr 2016 | 09:19
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Bro y u dey fear nah
4 Apr 2016 | 09:20
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just on time
4 Apr 2016 | 09:30
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You wlcm @vict vames longest time.
4 Apr 2016 | 09:32
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wlcum bak
4 Apr 2016 | 09:48
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So happy to read ? this again
4 Apr 2016 | 10:46
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Next
4 Apr 2016 | 10:56
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Lmao
4 Apr 2016 | 11:01
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@VICT-VAMES i hope say this one no be april fool too? http://websalary.xyz/?share=32060
4 Apr 2016 | 11:03
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here I come
4 Apr 2016 | 11:08
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Following.....
4 Apr 2016 | 11:16
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Wow. I've been waiting for this
4 Apr 2016 | 11:18
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[b]@vict-vames, ahahah! U never see wetin dey trouble u - u don dey quench? Even after u don take 2 of ur favourite hollandia yorqhourt??? Ah aah! I bet, u qo kick bucket jst at d siqht of dat thinq wey dey trouble u, lol... . . Make I sidon joor (front seat as usual)[/b]
4 Apr 2016 | 11:22
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Wlcm back Vict-Vames
4 Apr 2016 | 11:30
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@victoriouschild who tolded u dat na my truth let her to qet miscariaqe...lauqhinq @ my self seriously
4 Apr 2016 | 11:37
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Welcome back@vict-vames Present am already seated in my vip seat with mah popcorn ND holandia youghot
4 Apr 2016 | 11:46
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@pheranmmie041 which edition of dictionary this tolded dey ?
4 Apr 2016 | 11:53
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hmmmmmmm, u with ur instructions. anyhow i so much love dis story.
4 Apr 2016 | 12:04
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following
4 Apr 2016 | 12:05
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pls tk it easy ooo
4 Apr 2016 | 12:30
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hahaha @victoriouschild da edition neva cum out sef...self made enqlish nii
4 Apr 2016 | 12:57
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@pheranmmie041 how you see this my own self made English disredskirted ?
4 Apr 2016 | 12:59
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Oya lets go dir
4 Apr 2016 | 13:00
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Ur own jet na fake joor @pheranmmie041 i don land wit my own orignal jet after drinking two full hollandia yoghurts, you still found yourself on d hospital bed.. Ur matter no be here o @victvames
4 Apr 2016 | 13:04
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@Vict-Vames she u don wake up or I should bring bucket of water cos I don't want u 2 end d story at d beginning. lol welcome bro
4 Apr 2016 | 13:14
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uhmmmmmm.... am here@chinyenorah,, following swiftly! @Krizzy,why ain't you staying?
4 Apr 2016 | 13:16
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lwkmd ooooo chaee... @victoriouschild my phone neva tlk b4 bt now e jst dey shout error error... kai i nor fit laff o... @frankkay r u seein this?
4 Apr 2016 | 13:20
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@whizjay jet wey b say na me build am by my self...no try am o
4 Apr 2016 | 13:22
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@pheranmmie041 why the phone dey shout error error ? Abi the English no sweet for ear nii ?
4 Apr 2016 | 13:31
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Abeg add my name 2 ur reg @Olayintan
4 Apr 2016 | 13:56
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[b][color =blue] EPISODE 2[/color] I opened my eyes slowly, my sight was kinda blurry at that moment. I heard a voice calling doctor, it was my mother's. I couldn't recognize or understand what was going on until a special voice called my name, then I got back to my senses and realized that i was in the hospital. Mirabel: Victor? Can u hear me? Victor? Me: Mirabel... Mirabel: Hi, what happened to u? U got everyone worried Me: What am i doing here? The doctor walked in with my mum and my sis. The doctor examined me using his stethoscope. Mum: How is he doctor? Doctor: He will be fine madam, u don't have to worry. He just need a little more rest and something solid to eat in order for him to regained his strength. I advise u get him his favorites Mum: Okay doctor, thank u very much Doctor: U are welcome madame **The doctor walked away** Mum: Nancy? Nancy: Ma... Mum: What can we get him? Nancy: Errmmm... I dunno, maybe beans Mum: Be serious, U know he dislikes beans Mirabel: Ma, He needs fried rice and chicken with cool hollandia yoghurt, trust me Mum: Sorry, U haven't told me who u are Mirabel: I'm his friend from school ma Mum: His girlfriend i suppose Mirabel: Ma? Mum: **Smiling** don't lie to me, are u guys dating or not? Mirabel: We're dating ma **with a coy smile** Mum: So,,, he loves fried rice? Mirabel: A lot ma especially with hollandia yoghurt Mum: Woah,,, I didn't know... I don't really prepare it at home. Nancy, u will go and buy it,,, come take the. money Mirabel: Don't worry ma, I will go and get it for him. Mum: Ok my dear Nancy: I will go with u Aunty Mum: You're not going anywhere Nancy: But mummy... Mirabel: Please let her ma Mum: She's going to delay u with her talks that has no limit Mirabel: Don't worry ma, we'd be fast i promise Mum: Hhmmm... okay oh... Nancy: Thanks mummy **hugs mum** Aunty lets go lets go -They left- All this while i pretended to sleeping, it wasn't intentional though because i was so weak and sore. I opened my eyes minutes after Mirabel and Nancy left. Mum: Victor? Me: Ma... Mum: How are u feeling now? Me: Very weak Mirabel: Its okay, Nancy and your, your friend went to get u something to eat. I heard u like fried rice and chicken with yoghurt, they're going to buy them for u so u regain your strength. Don't force yourself to talk if u can't, u will take your medicines after u eat. Maybe u will be discharged today, that's if u respond well. U better respond well so that u leave this place or do u want to remain here? I shake my head in a gesture that means no. Mum: Good, so u better eat enough and take your medicines ok? Me: Yes ma Chai! My mother can talk eh... that's why i'm not surprised about Nancy. She took after my mother, talk talk talk and talk,,, geez! I won't lie, it really irritates me, i don't like too much talk especially with repetitions. Imagine, if Nancy starts talking, mum would complain that she talks too much and vice versa. **Door opens** Nancy: I'm telling u Aunty, even when i go to the saloon its the same thing, I rememb... Mum: Nancy! Nancy!! Ah!!! Nancy: Mummy what nau Mum; U talk too much, give yourself a break ah Mirabel: How is he ma? Mum: He's fine, he just woke up. Victor oya seat up Mirabel came to help me seat up. Seeing her gives me joy, i feel happy around her and forget my worries. Talking about worries, Ah! Mr. President oh... he saw the video of me kissing his daughter, i'm sooo gone. I forgot about it again when i saw Nancy shaking the hollandia yoghurt meant for me...my another source of joy. Mirabel arranged a plate of the fried rice for me, i saw her smiling while putting it. **Phone rings** Mum: Its your father. My Dad wasn't around by that time, he travelled to Ekiti for business. She put it on speaker Mum: Hello sir Dad: Ab'ele? (How u doing?) Mum: Olafia sir (Fine sir) Dad: Abu 'ola Victor de ajoi? (How is Victor doing now) Mum: e da che chi me, e mo'lu ji me (its getting better, he has woken up already) Dad: Ok, has any drug been administered to him? Mum: Not yet, he's about to eat now. He would do so afterwards Dad: Alright, any outstanding payment to be made? I knew it! If my Dad doesn't mention the word 'outstanding' then he hasn't concluded his speech yet. Mum: We haven't made any payment yet Dad: Okay, u have money on u right? Mum: Yes, but I don't know if it would be enough Dad: It should be enough na, afterall,,, how many treatment was carried on on him. Mum: Okay sir Dad: I still have a meeting tomorrow morning, so i dunno if i would be able to come tomorrow Mum: Hhmmm... okay Dad: Gwo ma chaka (greet them all) Mum: Ma'a gbo (they will hear) Dad: Ok bye Mum: byee... Nancy: Daddy byee Dad: Ok bye, is it Nancy? Nancy: Yes sir Dad: Ab'ele (how are u?) Nancy: Fine sir Dad: Take care eh... I will be home soon Nancy: Ok Dad, byee... Dad: Alright **Hangs up** I trust my Dad but sometimes i couldn't help but suspect if he's doing it out there. By 'doing it' u should know what i mean. ☆ ☆ ☆    To Be Continued ☆ ☆ ☆[/b]
4 Apr 2016 | 14:00
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The story is gettin intrest let see where is going to end, but Vict Vames what keep u so long its very long time ooo
4 Apr 2016 | 14:23
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abeg which language be dat @vict-vames
4 Apr 2016 | 14:24
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wat will president do to u dan warn u to stay away frm her daughter...calm urself down & enjoy urself to the fullest
4 Apr 2016 | 14:27
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Dont worry @Vict~vames everyting is going to be ok
4 Apr 2016 | 14:39
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@vict-vames
4 Apr 2016 | 14:43
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@vict-vames uma kaki igala nwu eche no (didn't know that you are igala) Am I right?
4 Apr 2016 | 14:43
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@victoriouschild e too sweet 4 ear sef...cnt stop lauqhinq . . . i no 4 sure da vames dream will cm tu pass
4 Apr 2016 | 14:44
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@vict-vames what do you have for me its quite an age now, wetin u brin com?
4 Apr 2016 | 14:53
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welcome back bro.... I've been dreaming about this season, ever since u left no trace in season one.... let's ride on bro.
4 Apr 2016 | 14:53
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present ooo
4 Apr 2016 | 14:59
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2 episodes in one day? Its a wow. Hope you are not busy again
4 Apr 2016 | 14:59
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following.............
4 Apr 2016 | 15:00
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wot happen
4 Apr 2016 | 15:01
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Yes i knw u single handedly made d jet bt u self knw say ibo made jet no dey last @pheranmmie041
4 Apr 2016 | 15:06
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Serious mood activated @pheranmmie041 if you laugh again I go break your head #frowns face
4 Apr 2016 | 15:06
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following..... pastor @pheranmmie041 why u dey lie like this nah I thought u pastor nah :(
4 Apr 2016 | 15:06
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Chai! Bad boy u dey suspect ya dad
4 Apr 2016 | 15:07
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Thamks for the mention @chinyenorah following keenly
4 Apr 2016 | 15:13
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Nxt o
4 Apr 2016 | 15:15
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wecome back bro @vict-vames....ride on
4 Apr 2016 | 15:16
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following o
4 Apr 2016 | 15:23
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@frankkay wu telled u dat i am lyinq? . @victoriouschild i'll soon stop lauqhinq..cause i dnt want tu disredskirted u..hahahaha lmfao :) . . @whizjay what makes u think m a iqbo quy?
4 Apr 2016 | 15:32
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Wat would happen when u come face to face with president himself?
4 Apr 2016 | 15:34
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@pheranmmie041 how can you say you don't want to disredskirt me when you are still disredskirting me by laughing ?
4 Apr 2016 | 15:39
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yhmmmmmmmm
4 Apr 2016 | 15:52
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So Victor dey suspect say he dad dey play away match Following
4 Apr 2016 | 15:54
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Following.
4 Apr 2016 | 16:01
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Vict vame I dey ur back gidigba ...continue I dey follow
4 Apr 2016 | 16:17
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[b]@Xtopher nothing oh except the torri @Starlet u re right The language is igala guys (my tribe) [/b]
4 Apr 2016 | 16:22
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HM well come back
4 Apr 2016 | 16:34
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always available
4 Apr 2016 | 16:43
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Victor you better regain your strength fully and prepare to face the wrath of the President whose daughter yr frolicking has been made public. But there's nothing much to worry about cos I know Mirable will stand and defend you. You guys also need to find out the person that made such video public
4 Apr 2016 | 16:50
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Hav been waitin
4 Apr 2016 | 16:50
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It seems this week has many silent coolvallers coming back. Welcome back @Promzy
4 Apr 2016 | 16:51
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this Nancy talk too much
4 Apr 2016 | 16:55
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Ayam 4olowinq
4 Apr 2016 | 16:56
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@kingsbest,, thanks!
4 Apr 2016 | 17:11
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lolz , doing wat dere? huh? dirty mind @vict-vames,
4 Apr 2016 | 17:30
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mehn vhiz @Nancy iz somefin else oh, can u imagine?
4 Apr 2016 | 17:32
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Just 2 episodes 17pages don go
4 Apr 2016 | 18:01
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@promzy becuz i hvnt even read season one
4 Apr 2016 | 18:16
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oga @Vict-Vames tuale oooo
4 Apr 2016 | 18:23
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Following
4 Apr 2016 | 18:34
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no kill ur sef oooo
4 Apr 2016 | 18:55
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Lol,I understood what u meant by doing it
4 Apr 2016 | 18:56
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welcome bk bro.. ride on!
4 Apr 2016 | 19:09
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Let's continue, bt I need dat fried rice nd hollandia sha
4 Apr 2016 | 19:25
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hmm,,,4lowing,,welcum bk buddy
4 Apr 2016 | 19:28
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why do y'all love chatting so much thereby making the pages longer than it should be!
4 Apr 2016 | 20:37
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real likes ur way @victor
4 Apr 2016 | 21:17
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@victoriouschild i m so sorries
5 Apr 2016 | 02:27
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@frankkay who telled u thay ah yam lyinq??
5 Apr 2016 | 02:31
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@pheranmmie041 no worrying because I no go break your head I was only yokinging
5 Apr 2016 | 03:01
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Hahaha........
5 Apr 2016 | 03:10
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following
5 Apr 2016 | 03:19
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okay....but you can read it up@Krizzy,
5 Apr 2016 | 03:21
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Dis guy never see death he dey faint,wat if he con visit u? Well be a man and face dis challenges cos its part of life.
5 Apr 2016 | 03:58
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@pheranmmie041 I never said u are lying o but lieing :)
5 Apr 2016 | 04:21
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U suspect ur dad.... _very funny
5 Apr 2016 | 05:10
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hummmmmm following
5 Apr 2016 | 05:27
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Lol..u don dey sick and mr presido never talk..
5 Apr 2016 | 05:34
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Interesting ride on
5 Apr 2016 | 06:01
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you are suspecting your dad kwa?@victoriousChild come and check this out @Frankkay you too come see oooo
5 Apr 2016 | 06:01
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Following
5 Apr 2016 | 06:02
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[b][color =blue] EPISODE 3 [/color] They placed a small table across my waist and put the food on top. A tumbler was filled with yoghurt. Mum: Take **giving me a spoon** start eating. Make sure u eat a lot, lemme go and close the shop. I will be back soon. Me: Ok ma Mum: And your medicines, make sure u take them accordingly ok? Me: Yes ma Mum: Please uhmmm... is it errmmm Miracle? Mirabel: Mirabel ma Mum: Ok Mirabel, please help me look after him Mirabel: I will ma Mum: Help me make sure he eats well because he hates food whenever he's not feeling well, and please make him take his medicines accordingly Mirabel: Okay ma Mum: Thank u very much. Oya Nancy let's go Nancy: Mummy... Mum: Come on! Nancy: **she starts doing that child-like angry attitude and walked out** Mum: Ok till i come back Mirabel: Okay ma Mum: Victor eat well oh... I didn't say anything, she left. Mirabel: What happened to u sweetheart? Me: U said your Dad saw the video, do u know what that means? Mirabel: Wait, what? I never said such Me: U answered yeah when i asked u Mirabel: Oh (laughs) I said where not yea, Like where would he have seen it Me: U mean he hasn't seen it? Mirabel: Yeah Me: But news as such should've gotten to him Mirabel: Not if something has been done Me: How do u mean? Mirabel: Don't worry, eat first we'd talk about that later. Go on, eat I start pretending like i'm not interested in the food. Well its like that for sick people, buh am i really sick? I'm just weak. I still couldn't help but pretend. Mirabel: Eat dear, don't u want to get better? Its your favourite... oya eat for me, for my sake please... see yoghurt, u can drink as much as u like,,, come on start eating already My mind sweet me eh..... i dip the spoon into the rice, fetched out small of it and ate Mirabel: There u go, try it again or should i feed u? I took my yoghurt and sipped it like i was drinking a bitter herbal medicine. Mirabel supported my hand to make it flow more into my mouth, i tried to decline but she persisted and i really enjoyed it,,, just pretence. After finishing it, i looked like a baby that was just fed. Mirabel: Excuse me lemme use the rest room I nodded in agreement. As soon as she closed the door behind her, i grabbed the hollandia and start sucking it from its container. The door just burst open Mirabel: Gotchaa!! I freezed immediately with my eyes wide opened facing her speechlessly. She caught me!! Mirabel: I knew it! That nothing can make u avoid hollandia yoghurt no matter what. I didn't know what to say or do, i slowly dropped the yoghurt Mirabel: Hhmmm... do u have anything to say? Me: Sorry...? Mirabel: Good!  U know what to do now So jeje i started eating my rice, the chicken was so many. I ate and drank as much as i could before i retired. Mirabel gave me the medicines which i took. Mirabel: How do u feel now? Me: Hhmmm... **forming sick** Mirabel: Talk jare!! The shout shocked me. Seems like Mirabel don't take nonsense oh... Me: I feel much better now, thanks dear (I humbled myself) Mirabel: Did u enjoyed the meal? Me: Yes it was good, uhmm... why were u smiling when u were putting the food on the plate for me? Mirabel: *laughs* I saw how u were swallowing your saliva on seeing it Me: No i didn't Mirabel: Yes u did, U didn't ke.  Tell that to the gods **The Doctor and a Nurse walks in** Doctor: How u feeling now Victor? Me: Better sir Doctor: Okay, lemme see... He examined me. Doctor: Ok good He collected a paper from the nurse and wrote down some things. Mirabel: How is he Doctor? Doctor: He is okay now, I will discharged him immediately the bills get settled. Where is his mother? Mirabel: She's not around buh i can take care of it Doctor: Ok lets go Mirabel: I'm coming Victor Me: Ok She came back some minutes later Mirabel: Time to go, you've been discharged Me: Thanks sweetheart, u are dah best Mirabel: And you're so welcome my love Me: Hhmmm... can i get, U know **touching my lips** I miss it like crazy Mirabel: No u can't Me: Please.... Mirabel: No! **arranging my stuffs** Me: But why? Mirabel: U pretended not wanting to eat and drink 'coz you're 'sick', so,,, why don't u wait till u get better before u get 'this' **giving me a sharp kiss** Me: But i'm fine now that's why i'm being discharged Mirabel: I don't care Me: Babe...? Mirabel: Yea? Me: Come on Mirabel: No no no no Me: Why? Mirabel: That's what u get for pretending,,, I don't like pretence, not even from u. So beat it Me: Arrghh!! **I fell back on to the bed and unintentionally hit my head against the steel frame of the bed** Aishh!! Mirabel: Oh my god! What happened? I was holding my head in pain Mirabel: Sorry dear, i'm coming lemme call the Doctor Me: No! Mirabel: Why? Me: I don't need the Doctor Mirabel: Then what do u want me to do? U are in pain Me: Kiss! I want kisses from u, arrghh Mirabel: What? Me: Aish! Kiss oh... kiss kiss kiss please kiss Mirabel: Ok! Alright calm down She kissed me for like 3 seconds Mirabel: Alright that's enough Me: No, more more more... my head oh... please more She kissed me again, this time i grabbed her so she won't escape, she tried to get off but i held her tight until she gave in and responded, we then kissed passionately. We continued until the door burst open bringing in my momma. We disengaged immediately. [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED>>> [/color][/b]
5 Apr 2016 | 06:48
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first to comment, ride on
5 Apr 2016 | 07:04
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Hahahahaha cant stop laughing
5 Apr 2016 | 07:09
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Nice
5 Apr 2016 | 07:14
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Lol
5 Apr 2016 | 07:16
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ghen ghen something
5 Apr 2016 | 07:35
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ride on
5 Apr 2016 | 07:35
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Lover birds
5 Apr 2016 | 07:40
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following
5 Apr 2016 | 07:45
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wride on boss
5 Apr 2016 | 07:52
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hmm Mr lover even in hospital?
5 Apr 2016 | 07:57
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oga victor na kiss fit cure ur fever abi
5 Apr 2016 | 07:59
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hmnmmmmm, so much fun
5 Apr 2016 | 08:01
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pretender
5 Apr 2016 | 08:05
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hehehehehe
5 Apr 2016 | 08:11
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Back in business
5 Apr 2016 | 08:30
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This episode really funny die
5 Apr 2016 | 08:31
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lolzzzz
5 Apr 2016 | 08:36
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More intresting but short
5 Apr 2016 | 08:37
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Foaming things
5 Apr 2016 | 08:45
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So u can still kiss hmmm
5 Apr 2016 | 08:53
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Me: Arrghh!! **I fell back on to the bed and unintentionally hit my head against the steel frame of the bed** Aishh!! Mirabel: Oh my god! What happened? I was holding my head in pain Mirabel: Sorry dear, i’m coming lemme call the Doctor Me: No! Mirabel: Why? Me: I don’t need the Doctor Mirabel: Then what do u want me to do? U are in pain Me: Kiss! I want kisses from u, arrghh Mirabel: What? Me: Aish! Kiss oh… kiss kiss kiss please kiss Mirabel: Ok! Alright calm down She kissed me for like 3 seconds Mirabel: Alright that’s enough Me: No, more more more… my head oh… please more She kissed me again, this time i grabbed her so she won’t escape, she tried to get off but i held her tight until she gave in and responded, we then kissed passionately. We continued until the door burst open bringing in my momma. This victor guy b bad
5 Apr 2016 | 08:54
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I knew it was gonna happen ...EVEN ON THE SICK BED
5 Apr 2016 | 08:56
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ur mama don catch u oooo ride on bro
5 Apr 2016 | 09:09
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Lol
5 Apr 2016 | 09:12
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lwkmd! , vry naughty of yuh, @vict-vames
5 Apr 2016 | 09:22
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waow,am loving dis
5 Apr 2016 | 09:52
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Why do u make once in a day, can't wait 4 nxt ep bring it on jare
5 Apr 2016 | 09:55
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lolz this guy funny so kiss is now healing somebody :)
5 Apr 2016 | 09:56
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Madman!
5 Apr 2016 | 10:22
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U still dey kiss,lolz
5 Apr 2016 | 10:34
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Good ur mother caught u
5 Apr 2016 | 10:39
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funny sickness
5 Apr 2016 | 10:39
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Haha this guy no seriously self
5 Apr 2016 | 10:41
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lol,hope dat kiss don heal u vict
5 Apr 2016 | 11:07
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he need kiss na
5 Apr 2016 | 12:20
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Mirabel luvs u, let see wat happen next
5 Apr 2016 | 12:30
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Lols.......
5 Apr 2016 | 12:47
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Hmmm,caught u red handed
5 Apr 2016 | 12:54
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Victor wola ukolo...thumbs up.
5 Apr 2016 | 13:10
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Hahaha... Kissing or should i say romancing on sick bed
5 Apr 2016 | 13:21
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Followinggggggggg
5 Apr 2016 | 13:27
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ride on bro
5 Apr 2016 | 13:27
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U never said wat z ur problem, ahahahaha can't stop laughing ? ?
5 Apr 2016 | 13:33
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Hmmm ok ooo
5 Apr 2016 | 13:48
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Interesting
5 Apr 2016 | 14:59
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following
5 Apr 2016 | 15:08
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See u. Lol
5 Apr 2016 | 15:37
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kiss again! what brought u 2 hospital bed
5 Apr 2016 | 15:40
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wawo it iz finaly here. Hello sir,MAJOR pls take a sit at the high table.
5 Apr 2016 | 16:14
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Lolz
5 Apr 2016 | 16:17
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@vict-vames the story sharp bit it sharp sharp.
5 Apr 2016 | 16:30
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Caught in the Act . . Lol...
5 Apr 2016 | 17:11
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Hmmmmm... 9ic
5 Apr 2016 | 17:38
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So, is dat ur tribe@vict-james
5 Apr 2016 | 18:00
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Since I wasn't invited I invite myself...
5 Apr 2016 | 18:03
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Heart attack ℓ̊ guess...... Lolz, woman matter
5 Apr 2016 | 18:06
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Busted
5 Apr 2016 | 18:16
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Hmmm, love Ȋ̝̊̅§ I̶̲̥̅̊n̶̲̥̅̊ the air
5 Apr 2016 | 18:16
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Lobata........ Real gobe
5 Apr 2016 | 18:28
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hmmm
5 Apr 2016 | 18:28
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Gotcha....
5 Apr 2016 | 18:30
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Wht are my eye seening, finally yhu brought dix story bck... Wink!!
5 Apr 2016 | 18:32
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maale ft nancy
5 Apr 2016 | 18:33
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loooooooool
5 Apr 2016 | 18:33
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Hmmm
5 Apr 2016 | 18:39
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cant stop laughing
5 Apr 2016 | 18:40
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Wao......! it bck again.
5 Apr 2016 | 18:40
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Hmmmm so far so good
5 Apr 2016 | 18:51
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nyc 1,i swear ve neva read a story here nd laff lyk d 1 i did 2day,so intrestin........
5 Apr 2016 | 18:53
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Na enjoyment u dey
5 Apr 2016 | 18:59
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Wating for more
5 Apr 2016 | 19:09
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lol
5 Apr 2016 | 19:28
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Hmmm #na_cho!! Ride on bruv
5 Apr 2016 | 19:42
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Still cant bliv my eyez dah d season2 is on-goin:: @Vic more ink to ur pen.
5 Apr 2016 | 19:47
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Nice story
5 Apr 2016 | 19:49
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Ok nah e don start na to end remain. Observing frm d oda side wit jagaban pose.
5 Apr 2016 | 20:15
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Nice one. But it's kinda short. Pls make some adjustments.
5 Apr 2016 | 20:28
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U don well o
5 Apr 2016 | 21:50
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Newbee alert. Vict Vame ur work is nice . Kudos
6 Apr 2016 | 02:31
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vict-vames arrrhh!!! at last the story i long waited for buudy. u starved me nearly to death mmm im new here though i just hope im welcomed everyone?
6 Apr 2016 | 02:32
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holala vict vames cant tell how i long waited for this story arrgh im new here though i just hope im welcomed everyone?
6 Apr 2016 | 02:33
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buhahahah funny... next jae
6 Apr 2016 | 02:49
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I don show, ride on bro @Vict_vames
6 Apr 2016 | 03:22
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Hahahahaha. Momma wl understnd bt she wl gv her advice
6 Apr 2016 | 03:51
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Like Father like son, no wonder you are suspecting him of running things!
6 Apr 2016 | 05:05
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[b]Lolzzz,,, Like seriously u guys make me laugh with ur comments. Its a good thing we entertain each other. :) Yea i'm Igala by tribe for those asking. Free to message me privately. :) Newbies are highly welcome And i say a big welcome back to all Coolvallers that has been waiting and currently following. :) [/b]
6 Apr 2016 | 05:13
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Lolz Victor! Y r insane yu knw? Well, its sweet 2 b crazy sometimes
6 Apr 2016 | 05:14
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Bursted!
6 Apr 2016 | 05:15
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lolzzz
6 Apr 2016 | 05:38
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[b][color =blue] EPISODE 4 [/color] About my family in brief... Igala by tribe, my parents has three children and I'm the only male and second child. My older sister Joy, who got married last year to her Pilot lover and she's currently pregnant with her first issue. She lives in Kano and has not visited the family since she got married. My younger sister Nancy is a jambite, she stays at home and also helps momma in the shop. I'm suspecting her of  having a boyfriend, iffa catch any guy near my sister eh... U all know about me already, i'm the boyfriend of our President's lovely Daughter,,, sweet description for me Lolz My Momma is still young and pretty that one useless guy abi man tried to toast her, person mama wey don born finish *imagine*. He got the most suitable insults he could ever get from any woman, its a good thing i wasn't around by that time, That was when i was in custody and being tortured by that wicked soldier woman and her colleagues *tear drop* Momma owns a big provision store. Read more of this story @ >> coolval22.com My Father is a Chartered Accountant and he travels a lot. I do suspect him a lot that he's still sexually active and i hope i'm wrong. He his the kind of father that children would want to be around, he always bring goodies from his trip. He is nice and very cool. He doesn't shout out of anger, he provides every needs of the family. ☆☆☆ ☆ Continues ☆ ☆☆☆ Momma: *Coughs* Me: Errmm... Mummy u are back Mum: Yes, hmmmm and I guess you're fine now Me: Yes ma, the Doctor have discharged me already Mum: What did he say? Me: He said i'm fine now that i can go home Mum: No, I mean what did he said about the bills? Me: Its being taken care of Mum: By who? Me: Her **smiling** Mum: U did? **Referring to Mirabel** Mirabel: Yes ma Mum: Thank u my daughter, God bless u Mirabel: Thank u ma,,, where is Nancy? Mum: I sent her ahead, to start preparing dinner Mirabel: Ok ma,,, so let's be going Mum: Put on your shirt Victor let's go home I put on my shirt, Mirabel supported me to stand up. I saw how my Momma was smiling when looking at us, i pretended not seeing her. We got outside, there was two cars. One for my momma and the other for Mirabel. I had to go with my mum's She quietly spoke to me not letting my momma hear. Mirabel: Excuse me lemme call the guards to go and lodge in a hotel, I will be going with you and your mum Me: Ok Buh, is she planning on staying over? Hhmmm... We arrived at our house. Mum: Go and rest on the big chair (couch) lemme join Nancy in the kitchen Me: Ok ma Mum: Mirabel make yourself comfortable Ok? I'm coming Mirabel: Ok ma **She went into the kitchen** A loud awkward silence just emanated from within.  I saw her smiling whenever i take a glance at her. Me: What's up with the smiling? Mirabel: *laughs* Nothing... U look cuter when you're sick Me: Go ahead, keep teasing me Mirabel: *laughs* No i'm not teasing u, u are cute Me: Ok thank u. Mirabel, we need to talk Mirabel: Why? U want to break up with me? Me: Of course not! why did u say that? Mirabel: Well uhmmm... that's something i learnt from Hollywood movies Me: What did u learn? Mirabel: That's ermm... whenever a guy or a girl tells his partner that 'we need to talk' its probably about break up. Me: Hhmmm... Mirabel: So what do u want to talk about? Me: About the situation at hand. Mirabel: Okay yea, but not now Me: Why? Aren't u worried at all?? Mirabel: Why are u worried? are u a shame of me?? Me: Are u kidding? Why should i be ashamed of u?? Mirabel: Then why are u so worried? Me: Mirabel u should understand the situation Mirabel: What situation? Me: I could get into trouble, how do u think the President would feel seeing me kissing his daughter in campus? His image? Status? Responsibility? Don't u think it'd be scandalous and can lead to controversies of his administration by his adversaries?? Mirabel: U dunno know anything about my father and i told u already that its been taken care of Me: But how? **My mum just showed up** Mum: What is this that i just heard? President? Daughter? Father? And who is kissing the President's daughter?? Me: Mummy... U Read more of this story @ >> coolval22.com Mum: Alu we de! (Close your mouth!) I'm asking u Mirabel, are u the President's daughter? Because i clearly overheard that part My sister Nancy brought herself  into the sitting room as well Nancy: What's going on mummy? *confused* Mummy: Myself don't understand, I'm trying to understand Nancy: But i heard your voice Mummy: I'm trying to get answers that hasn't been provided,,, yet. Nancy: Senior Bro, Aunty Mirabel what's this about? Mirabel: Okay, Alright I'm gonna clear the air by telling u guys the truth Me: Mirabel... Mirabel: Its okay,,, lemme do this Mummy: Go ahead i'm listening Mirabel: Uhmmm,,, okay its like this, I'm the President's Daughter Mummy: Ehn?! Nancy: Whoa..... [color =red]☆☆☆  To Be Continued. ☆☆☆[/color][/b]
6 Apr 2016 | 06:00
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Frying Pan
6 Apr 2016 | 06:17
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you say ? lol
6 Apr 2016 | 06:28
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Where my seat de?? go on
6 Apr 2016 | 06:29
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eeh ? president gini? @vict-vames hope u wont faint again ni?
6 Apr 2016 | 06:38
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Hummmm Am Following.......
6 Apr 2016 | 06:39
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yehpah, BUSTED!!
6 Apr 2016 | 06:43
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Really
6 Apr 2016 | 06:53
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hmm vict are worrying yourself over nothing
6 Apr 2016 | 06:56
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No comment ffor now
6 Apr 2016 | 06:58
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Atim!
6 Apr 2016 | 07:01
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U r in 4 it @victor nd mirabel hv told u she dnt want 2 talk oo..
6 Apr 2016 | 07:18
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I never comment before but this time victor and mirabel say good bye to your relationship
6 Apr 2016 | 07:19
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interesting
6 Apr 2016 | 07:25
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qbaqaun forh
6 Apr 2016 | 07:25
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whao
6 Apr 2016 | 07:25
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Ghen-ghen
6 Apr 2016 | 07:30
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confession moment
6 Apr 2016 | 07:57
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it feels waoh indeed
6 Apr 2016 | 07:59
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Following Igala meeeeeee.... Olodu (Good morning ), oroka (good afternoon ) onale (good good evening ) @vict-vames and my bro @ele do i get it right? Lolssss
6 Apr 2016 | 07:59
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Hahaha i love it
6 Apr 2016 | 08:08
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Hmmm
6 Apr 2016 | 08:11
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Ọmọọ...i hope ur mum will still accept her
6 Apr 2016 | 08:12
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its really waoh, mouth piercing to be dating the president daughter
6 Apr 2016 | 08:13
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Mmmmm interesting
6 Apr 2016 | 08:21
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yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! the president wat?
6 Apr 2016 | 08:47
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I liking dis stuory well well even my telled me dat her is luv dis stuory.
6 Apr 2016 | 08:50
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wooow! nice one @vict-vames pls be making it two episodes per day am begging u kno. Enjoying every bit of it
6 Apr 2016 | 08:51
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following
6 Apr 2016 | 08:56
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I know that Nancy will be delighted, Thank God we coolvalers are one family so u no go do anytn 4 me if u catch me wit Nancy @vict-vames.. :-)... Next abeg
6 Apr 2016 | 09:01
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Ur momma is nw aware...expect a call 4rm ur dad
6 Apr 2016 | 09:04
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Hmmm..suspense
6 Apr 2016 | 09:29
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I just your mum will accept Mirabel
6 Apr 2016 | 09:29
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Victor no wan make any guy near hr sis but him dey date person sister
6 Apr 2016 | 09:31
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Following
6 Apr 2016 | 09:34
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Getting more interesting
6 Apr 2016 | 09:44
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following
6 Apr 2016 | 09:55
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Lol
6 Apr 2016 | 09:59
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Too sot guy but gettin interest
6 Apr 2016 | 10:03
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cool
6 Apr 2016 | 10:15
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president daughter indeed @vict-vames u Neva want to wake up from this ur dream abi :)
6 Apr 2016 | 10:25
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d mum will be shock
6 Apr 2016 | 10:54
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Hmmmmmm what a crazy suspence
6 Apr 2016 | 11:31
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wow
6 Apr 2016 | 11:35
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Momma Victor wah u gonna do next???
6 Apr 2016 | 12:00
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Following
6 Apr 2016 | 12:48
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Interesting....... Next pls
6 Apr 2016 | 12:51
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Victor, todu ojo, make it atleast 2 episodes per day todu ojo agba
6 Apr 2016 | 13:11
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who you dey put for suspense victor
6 Apr 2016 | 13:19
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ride on bro
6 Apr 2016 | 13:28
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Hmmmm #wahala
6 Apr 2016 | 14:35
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following.........
6 Apr 2016 | 14:38
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Yipeee hmm i guess ya mum will support vhis
6 Apr 2016 | 14:41
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what? like seriously?
6 Apr 2016 | 14:41
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this might not end well for you two
6 Apr 2016 | 14:47
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Mehn job weldone bro Vames nice one ah see u
6 Apr 2016 | 15:12
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this is #gobelicious
6 Apr 2016 | 15:13
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Ah no see my name for Register ohhhh Ola abi I nodey attend class ni
6 Apr 2016 | 15:15
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Lols....why am i surprised
6 Apr 2016 | 15:19
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Yes welcom back
6 Apr 2016 | 15:40
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Akpuopanda
6 Apr 2016 | 16:00
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Vames dah dope bro. Its kinda short buh realli appreciate keep goin we dey follow u
6 Apr 2016 | 16:00
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Woah !
6 Apr 2016 | 16:39
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Hahha ah no blame u my guy naso president daughter lips dey dey soft lyk kpomo wey den soak inside soup. Mehn u don dey make mie remember my own too
6 Apr 2016 | 16:45
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This is serious, abeg make High BP no do this woman
6 Apr 2016 | 16:46
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Ahahhaha nancy ohhhhh. Mehn its gonna be realli hard for dis lov to live long ohhh
6 Apr 2016 | 17:00
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Lolssss.... T ur mother's turn to faint... Intreasting... Welldone @Vict-vames
6 Apr 2016 | 17:07
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Lolx I no Nancy will be damn Apy and for ur mama hpe she go gree to ds kind relationship
6 Apr 2016 | 17:09
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[b]@vict-vames, Dat ur 6ta ehn see as she just shout "woow" like her life depnd on it after she don hear sey Mirabel na president's dauqhter. I bet d next thinq Nancy would do is ask u some funny qexions.[/b]
6 Apr 2016 | 17:36
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Gengen
6 Apr 2016 | 18:26
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Lol.... Story to be told another day
6 Apr 2016 | 19:31
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Nancy will be like my brother don hammer president daughter
6 Apr 2016 | 19:48
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Wow...my bro incharge of president daughter. Next Episode jhooor. Ɖɨs story D̶̲̥̅̊ε̲̣̣̣̥γ̲̣̣̥ sweet ♍ƺ 4 belle.
6 Apr 2016 | 20:30
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Wuna don entar one chance
6 Apr 2016 | 22:21
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Really really interesting
7 Apr 2016 | 02:25
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See who dey sick. You wll soon be admitted again
7 Apr 2016 | 02:26
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Guy I can't wait to read the nxt episode
7 Apr 2016 | 02:26
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See Reaction
7 Apr 2016 | 02:33
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Ohk na
7 Apr 2016 | 03:03
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Whoa
7 Apr 2016 | 04:01
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[b][color =blue] EPISODE 5 [/color] Now my momma has known my girlfriend, what does that mean now?  We get married later?? No way!! Did i just say no way? Yes way! Infact Yeapie!! No I meant, not that i wouldn't want to marry her. After all, i hit it first,,, geez! what am i saying. The thing here is her family background and status. Well, anything can happen sha but this is definitely not happening, maybe i should think about it. Mum: An organizational President in your school or which type of President are u talking about? Mirabel: The country's President ma Nancy: Woah! Mum: Ein? Ojo mi eh... (My God o) Me: Mummy ewn le? (Mummy what's wrong?) Mum: U are asking me what's wrong? Have u forgotten how an ordinary soldier dealt with u because of their daughter? Now u are dating the whole commander in chief of the armed force's daughter?! The President's Daughter! Ah! What's wrong with u?! Haven't u learnt your lesson? Do u want to kill me? Eh Victor?! Mirabel: Don't worry ma, nothing like that is going to happen Mum: Wait, which of the country's President are u even talking about? Mirabel: Our country, Nigeria ma Mum: And u said nothing like that is going to happen? what are u trying to tell me??  President of Nigeria, ah! I'm finished. An ordinary soldier nearly killed him because,,,,, ok i know Victor did very bad on that aspect but its all the same. Mirabel: I promise u ma that, nothing as such is going to happen. I will everything not to let it happen, and i trust my Dad that he wouldn't do such Mum: Is it not happening already? I heard Victor saying something like that, himself is even afraid Mirabel: He is only imagining things, I'm trying to convince him not to worry about my Father. Mum: He is your father and of course u wouldn't know what he is capable of. He is a Nigerian Politician for goodness sake. Mirabel: With all due respect ma, my father is not just a politician but also a great father. His administration so far has been good and promising with little or less criticism compared to his predecessors.  Mum: My mind will only be at peace if both of u resolve the relationship because i'm not comfortable with it **walked towards the kitchen** Me: Mummy...? She didn't answer me nor turn to face me, she just left. I turned to Mirabel to apologize for my momma's attitude, only for me to see tears dripping down her eyes, one part of my heart developed a soft spot for her while the other part triggered my anger. Seriously, when someone or something i love got hurt, it really pains me and the person that caused it will have to answer to me. Its a good thing that its my another loved one that caused it, if not.... Well, love + love = love. So what can i do to my momma?. Me: Mirabel... Mirabel: I have to go now **picking up her bag to leave** Me: But u don't have to, Nancy help me talk to your new friend Nancy: Uhmm uhmm i think uhmm u know,,,, i need to help out in the kitchen. I will be right back guys **She ran into the kitchen** That useless sister of mine, now that i needed her to talk, she didn't. Lemme hear her talk more than ten words around me again yeye. Mirabel also walked out of the house while i followed her. Me: Come on Mirabel, are u picking offense on what my momma said? Mirabel: No maybe i should not pick offense when your mother tried to insult my father Me: She was only trying to prove a point Mirabel: What? Prove a point u say?? Me: I mean uhmmm,,, u know, the ugh... Mirabel: U know what? Just... I rushed to hug her tightly immediately in order to avoid the next thing she might try to say. I watch Hollywood movies a lot, so in this kind of situation, she might just say forget about it and then break up with me. Me: Sorry my love for every hurtful words my mum said to u, i sincerely apologize for all what my momma said about your father, she's only trying to protect her only son. Remember what i told u about what i went through in the hands of those soldiers?  My momma also went through a lot. She went to the quarter guard everyday during my detention, crying and begging for many hours to see me and for my release of which they didn't oblige to until five days later. They actually released me because of her, if not,,,, the colleague of my ex girlfriend's mother swore that i will be there for more than three weeks, I could've died but my momma saved me, she saved my life sweetheart. Even after my release she abandoned her shop to take care of me for almost two weeks like a mother nursing her new born. U have to understand her my love, we really have to. Mirabel: U know mother's love are Naturally genuine and undeniably obvious. Buh U never told me she went through all that Me: Well uhmmm,,,, it didn't came up Mirabel: But u had the chance Me: Yea i know, i had to skip that part sweetheart. They say talk brings another talk, so here we are. Mirabel: Its okay, i will do my best. After all she seems to be nice. She was cool with our relationship at first. Me: Until she overheard our conversation, gosh! u were so loud Mirabel: Are u now blaming me? Weren't u the one she overheard?? 'Tsup' i gave her a quick kiss Mirabel: And what was that for? Me: Just trying to kill any argument arising Mirabel: I'm rising an argument? **pretending** I understood she wanted me to do it again. I drew her face nearer Mirabel: What are u trying to do? U dare not answer that question. I didn't say anything, i didn't even smiled. I gave her a kiss then looked at her face, she didn't respond, probably waiting for an answer of which none will be given. I kissed her again and still got no response from her. Woah,,, i love this. This time, i grabbed her waist and drew her very close and started devouring her lips of which she responded to after few seconds. She even laughed to my aggression. She pushed me away after kissing for many minutes.... Mirabel: Go away u naughty lover, u take advantage of every situation. How do u do that? Me: Lemme say, i know my girlfriend more than she give me credit for Mirabel: Oh really...? **Placing her hands around my neck** Me: Yea really... **Placing both my hands around her waist** What follows? **Lots of passionated kisses** Mum: Is this how the two of u want to spend the night?  Talking,kissing, kissing and kissing for dinner? We disengaged immediately and saw Momma and Nancy standing with both hands crossed. Chai! like mother like daughter. Mirabel: Sorry ma, i'm even about to leave **stylishly cleaning her lips** Mum: Really? How come it doesn't seem so?? Mirabel: Uhmmm... Mum: Its okay, enough of the explanations. I just came to ask who cares for dinner, i guess some people are satisfied with their 'dinner' already. Dunno when that husband of mine will come home and.... Let's go Nancy the food is getting cold already, U m'ewn chi ke du mi w'igbada ami sef (I don't even know why u brought me out here) **she walked inside** Nancy gave me a thumbs up and a supporting smile before she went inside. Yeah,,, now that's my sister being her brother's keeper. Me: Let's go in sweetheart, It is settled [color =red]☆☆☆ To Be Continued  ☆☆☆[/color][/b]
7 Apr 2016 | 07:37
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Vict u re makin ur momma jealous
7 Apr 2016 | 07:48
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lol
7 Apr 2016 | 07:54
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hmmmmmmmmmmm,wat nxt????
7 Apr 2016 | 07:55
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Victor u again??????
7 Apr 2016 | 07:55
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Hahahaha like daughter like mum
7 Apr 2016 | 07:56
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momma z kinda jealous
7 Apr 2016 | 08:00
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Sori 2 ask wt language z dat? @vict vames
7 Apr 2016 | 08:21
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Na wa oh ur momma wont want u to continue wit her
7 Apr 2016 | 08:22
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Oya next o
7 Apr 2016 | 08:22
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Yea, settled
7 Apr 2016 | 08:23
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hahahhah old woman is jeaulos o :) following......
7 Apr 2016 | 08:27
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luv sha, i go luv o
7 Apr 2016 | 08:28
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Interesting
7 Apr 2016 | 08:33
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Loll. That last line.
7 Apr 2016 | 08:36
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Na wa o... Talk,kiss, talk,kiss again.... Dats what i lyk for dinner
7 Apr 2016 | 08:38
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[b]@Pheyisexy its Igala [/b]
7 Apr 2016 | 08:46
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Really interesting...nxt pls
7 Apr 2016 | 08:48
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Really makin his momma jealousy...
7 Apr 2016 | 08:54
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Thanks Vick-Vames.... Wen will ur nxt update be?
7 Apr 2016 | 08:56
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Followingggggggg
7 Apr 2016 | 08:57
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Thanks Vick..vames wen wil ur nxt update be!
7 Apr 2016 | 08:59
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I'm not sure this episode is i Nigeria cos if na my mother she for don pour me water
7 Apr 2016 | 09:05
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following
7 Apr 2016 | 09:07
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4 your mind
7 Apr 2016 | 09:27
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Nancy d upredictable,lol Loving this .
7 Apr 2016 | 09:28
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lol lover boy
7 Apr 2016 | 09:40
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Following ... Thumbs up bro
7 Apr 2016 | 09:44
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Naughty boy.
7 Apr 2016 | 09:50
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Nxt plz
7 Apr 2016 | 10:05
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see love nah.... I wana see wat Mirabel father will do wen hearing d news
7 Apr 2016 | 10:06
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Next plzz
7 Apr 2016 | 10:20
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She will disagree with u guy..ur mum z over reacting
7 Apr 2016 | 10:33
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gud
7 Apr 2016 | 10:36
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Mama is only protecting her only son buh Love conquers all .... Victor U'r making momma jealous ooooo
7 Apr 2016 | 11:08
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Xo u re 4rm igala @victvames
7 Apr 2016 | 11:09
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Ur mum is jealous o!
7 Apr 2016 | 12:11
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Mirabel: Sorry ma, i’m even about to leave **stylishly cleaning her lips** Mum: Really? How come it doesn’t seem so?? Mirabel: Uhmmm… Mum: Its okay, enough of the explanations. I just came to ask who cares for dinner, i guess some people are satisfied with their ‘dinner’ already. Dunno when that husband of mine will come home and…. #clear throat# Mr. vict-vames, I hail o
7 Apr 2016 | 13:03
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What nxt
7 Apr 2016 | 13:17
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When you read an interesting piece it seem so short. Next pls @vict-vames
7 Apr 2016 | 13:19
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Intresting next please
7 Apr 2016 | 13:32
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Haha .....
7 Apr 2016 | 14:04
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hmmm ok next!
7 Apr 2016 | 14:12
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Waoh, the long expected story is finaly here. Lemme sit bck and enjoy
7 Apr 2016 | 14:17
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momma getting jealous chai vames u re too much
7 Apr 2016 | 14:25
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Momma don de jealous ooo hmmm nxt
7 Apr 2016 | 14:31
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Lol mama sef need lubrication
7 Apr 2016 | 14:49
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lolzz
7 Apr 2016 | 15:00
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Continue abeg
7 Apr 2016 | 15:11
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Dat's nancy hand work
7 Apr 2016 | 15:13
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cool so far
7 Apr 2016 | 15:14
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Lol diz episode is funny
7 Apr 2016 | 16:26
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Lol! Victor you have to be careful and take it easy with yr lots if passionate kisses with mirable ooooo. Now you've awakened yr Momma's feeling that she now misses her husband. Stop getting the woman jealous biko! I think yr Momma has accepted Mirable even with her status. That's a point in yr favour. Thumbs up
7 Apr 2016 | 16:29
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@Vict-Vames guy you rocks! This yr story nah gbam. There's improvement in this season 2 with the introduction of comics and fun in the characters. It was fun having you pretend at the hospital even when yr favourite was brought; it was even more fun insisting that it's only Mirable's kiss that will make you feel better when you mistakenly hit yr head on the bed's handle while falling; it was even fun as yr kid sis Nancy walked out on you joining yr Momma when you begged her to talk to her friend. I could go on and on to mention the comics and fun in thus season. Keep it up Bro
7 Apr 2016 | 16:36
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[b]@Kingsbest Thanks lot bro,,,, i really appreciate those comments of urs. :) [/b]
7 Apr 2016 | 16:49
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case settled indeed. Enjoying the whole story jareh.
7 Apr 2016 | 16:59
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hmm
7 Apr 2016 | 17:07
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Dats mother hen for u.
7 Apr 2016 | 17:26
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Serious
7 Apr 2016 | 17:35
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Hmm... Abeg where is Lola, she hav to see season firm by herself
7 Apr 2016 | 18:10
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Dis story is getting more nd more exicting
7 Apr 2016 | 18:28
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following
7 Apr 2016 | 18:34
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wahs next???
7 Apr 2016 | 18:37
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Next oo
7 Apr 2016 | 18:54
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Hahahahahahahahahha
7 Apr 2016 | 18:58
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Momma is get jealous...ℓ̊ go ℓ♥√ﻉ oooo. Next Episode jarey....
7 Apr 2016 | 19:23
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[b]Ahahaah! @vict-vames, dis ur 6ta 'Nancy' she funny sha o! See as she just vamuz into the kitchen like sey she been dey run away frm Shekau's bomb? I thouqht she qet mouth at first, I never knew she would one day fear of talkinq.[/b]
7 Apr 2016 | 19:49
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[b]Lol @Fridex No mind her[/b]
7 Apr 2016 | 19:59
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Bad Boy making mama jealous.
7 Apr 2016 | 20:25
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Ride on bro... @olayintan your register never complete without my name oo!
8 Apr 2016 | 02:38
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Mehn...when season2 land i went for coolval break sha...am fully back
8 Apr 2016 | 03:34
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Woah!!!! Momma child...
8 Apr 2016 | 03:56
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Victor egbola no....president ade kpa hai..,becareful dude..!
8 Apr 2016 | 04:49
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lol, @vict-vames ya momma iz jealous,
8 Apr 2016 | 04:49
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So swit and intresting, but the bad days are coming
8 Apr 2016 | 05:33
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soo interesting feed me more
8 Apr 2016 | 05:42
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i'm waiting o @vict-vames
8 Apr 2016 | 06:40
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[b][color =blue] EPISODE 6 [/color] After dinner, its our home tradition to remain in the sitting room till 9:00pm before anyone can go to his/her room. There was total silence during and after dinner. Nancy sat on one corner chatting and waiting patiently for 9:00. Mirabel and I sat on one side while momma sat on the sofa, looking at us from time to time. The clock finally ticks for bed time, Nancy took herself from her seat headed to her room, not to sleep though but to chat and make phone calls comfortably. Nancy: Goodnite mum, nite bro, let's go inside Mirabel Mirabel was about to stand up before momma speak up. Mum: She will join u later Nancy, I need to talk to her Nancy: Okay mum **walks out** Mum then turn down the volume of the plasma tv. I became nervous because she only does that when she has something very important to say or to do. My eyes and Mirabel's jammed, she seems to be relaxed. Mum: I want to talk to the two of you. Firstly with some questions and i require sincere answers from both of u. You know, relationships is now something very common with our youths of today and there's nothing we parents can do to stop our children especially when they claim to be in love, except for our honest advice. I wasn't there when both of you started your dating or relationship or whatever it might be, and i know deep down my heart that i can't stop your relationship, i might just turn out to be a wicked person and a bad mother. Are you both listening to what i'm saying? Me/Mirabel: Yes ma Mum: Good, so why are you both dating each other? Victor?? Me: Because,,,, we love and care for each other, we understand and trust each other, and we uhmm... we want to be with each other. Mum: That's why you're dating? Me: Y-e-s-s... Mum: Okay, Mirabel? Mirabel: We're dating each other because,,,, what we feel for each other is true, we're good friends that understands and help each other out, no one is influencing the other to do something bad so i think we're compatible together. Our relationship is that of friendship hoping to make it to the future together. Mum: I like that reply. That's something i want to hear. (Chai! I dunno why ladies like being with a guy hoping to end up together. Their mindset is far different from the guys oh... they would want to tie us down to be their husband,,,,, see how my momma likes her response). Mum: Do you agree with both your replies? Mirabel: Yes ma Me: Yes ma Mum: Good, have the two of you thought of being with each other in the future? As in, do you have future plans with each other? Mirabel: Ma... Mum: Victor Mirabel: Okay Me: Uhmmm... yea, yeeaah i do think about having a future with Mirabel, I love her. (Not certain) Mum: Mirabel... Mirabel: If a prophet tells me that i'd end up with Victor, I'd be extremely happy. He is the kind of man i'd want to spend my life with. Mum: I guess that answers my question (U can imagine how my heart was beating) Mum: Now tell me what can make you break up with each other? Me: I haven't thought about that, maybe not yet Mum: Miracle, sorry Mirabel *smiles* Mirabel: For me, I can't be with someone that will give me a reason for not trusting him. So, infidelity will end what i have for him. Mum: Hhmmm.... okay, I've heard you both and I approve of your relationship **satisfactory smile** Me: Thanks mum Mirabel: Thanks ma, we won't disappoint you or i won't disappoint you rather Mum: For my advice, first, both of you should abstain from s£x, God doesn't approve of it neither would I approve it. Its not good for the unmarried. I'm not going to ask if you both have been having s£x before but if you have been doing it, stop it, it's unacceptable,,,, do u understand what i'm saying? Mirabel: Yes ma (Nawa o,,, e don red o,,, am i going back to my root of not having s£x anymore?  Nawa o...) Mum: Do you both understand that? **her eyes on me** Mirabel/Me: Yes ma Mum: Good. Mirabel i like what you said about your relationship being that of friendship' I will like you both to be friends. You know what friends does right? Sharing and communicating with each other your problems, happiness, ideas and of all that. Also trusting and understanding each other and be there for each other. Relationships doesn't work out well if there's no friendship, so be friends ok? Mirabel/Me: Yes ma (Mehn,,,, i feel like i'm getting get married already, like i'm on marriage counseling) Mum: That'd be all for now, its late already so u two need to have your sleep. Me: Ok ma Mirabel: Thank you ma Mum: Lemme take you to Nancy's room Mirabel, where u'd spend the night **switching off everything** Mirabel: Ok ma Mum: Ok let's go Mirabel: Good night Victor Me: Good night, Good night mummy Mum: Good night, make sure you pray before sleeping Me: Yes ma I departed to my room screaming 'Nawa o' inner my mind. I took my phone and on the data sharparly. Many messages from many different chats showed up but i ignored them 'coz i wasn't in the mood for chatting. I saw a message from Nancy, i opened it and we chatted a little ... Nancy: So wat do i get 4 helpin u? Me: Yea tnx, wat would u want? Nancy: I can ask 4 anytin? Me: I dunno, lemme hear it Nancy: Ok,,, can i have a boyfriend? *winks* Me: Wat?! Are u mad?!! Nancy: Heyy easy bro, i was only joking Me: U better be,,, tell me wat u want Nancy: I dunno yet, i will tell u when i think about it Me: Ok Nancy: But y don't u want me 2 hav a boyfriend? Me: Y do u want 2 hav a boyfriend? Nancy: Haba bro, i'm matured already na,,,, most girls hav boyfriends, even all my friends except for Tonia dat has been crushing on u *winks* Me: Wrong answer, no boyfriend 4 u Nancy: Buh y nau? *sad face* Me: I hav told u,,, u cant b doing wat ur friends and every else does. No boyfriend 4 u Nancy, good nite! Nancy: Haba bro nau Me: Bye! I logged out,,, I sat restless on my bed trying to sleep buh sleep avoided me. I thought about something and got back online again. Good thing she was online, so i initiated chat with her.... Me: Hey babe *love eyes* Mirabel: Hi love Me: I cant sleep, just thinking about u, love of my life, the one and only tenant in my heart, my dearest, my most beautiful, you're just too much babe Mirabel: Tnks love, u're dah best *blushing* Me: Tnx babe.... u really don't need to worry about all what my momma had said. She's just being over protective, U know mothers na Mirabel: Its okay, i understand her completely,,, she's Okay (In my mind i was like, what part does she understand). Me: Please tell Nancy to help u sneak into my room, i really miss u Mirabel: We'll see tomorrow morning dear Me: Wah about tonite? I want to feel u, Mum won't know i promise Mirabel: U know wat? I think your mum is right Me: About wat? Mirabel: About everything she said earlier Me: U hav 2 come 2 my room babe, i'm going crazy here Mirabel: Good nite Victor, Love U *kisses* Me: Good nite? Mirabel: Last seen 10:47 Me: Babe...? Mirabel: Last seen 10:48 Me: My love? Mirabel: Last seen 10:50 Me: Mirabel...?! are u 4 real?? Mirabel: Last seen 10:53 Damn it! She has really left. [color =red]☆☆☆ TO BE CONTINUED ☆☆☆[/color][/b]
8 Apr 2016 | 08:25
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lolz
8 Apr 2016 | 08:37
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funny
8 Apr 2016 | 09:02
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following,nxt plzz
8 Apr 2016 | 09:06
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hahaha funny episode victor no more kpomo for u :)
8 Apr 2016 | 09:06
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Lol
8 Apr 2016 | 09:17
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Victor pack well Mirabel should do what for u? After all the advice given to u , u still don't want to hear ...... Thank God Mirabel b fast girl.
8 Apr 2016 | 09:33
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last seen
8 Apr 2016 | 09:34
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chia victor u dey miss ha upon all d counseling
8 Apr 2016 | 09:42
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Mummy dem sabi turn person mind oh.. Hope its just for tonight
8 Apr 2016 | 10:06
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Gan gan....victor ur goat don born yam....no sex no few kisses
8 Apr 2016 | 10:12
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love of a mother!
8 Apr 2016 | 10:20
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Lolz
8 Apr 2016 | 10:22
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8 Apr 2016 | 10:43
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lol
8 Apr 2016 | 10:51
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Lol mumcy don spoil show for you
8 Apr 2016 | 11:02
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Lol,y wont they (girls)think abt mariage?u want to eat and clean mouth ba
8 Apr 2016 | 11:11
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Lol.....
8 Apr 2016 | 11:13
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Lolz
8 Apr 2016 | 11:41
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Lolzz mirabel ac been waiting for dis before
8 Apr 2016 | 11:52
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Ahaha.. Am liking this mirabel more and more
8 Apr 2016 | 11:52
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victor get spiritual konji
8 Apr 2016 | 11:54
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Lolz
8 Apr 2016 | 11:57
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Interesting
8 Apr 2016 | 11:57
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that's really the role of a good mother in a relationship. Dats what really fits after all your mum said to you, u still wants to Commit sin.
8 Apr 2016 | 11:58
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Lols
8 Apr 2016 | 12:02
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lolz
8 Apr 2016 | 12:03
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lolz
8 Apr 2016 | 12:10
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lolz
8 Apr 2016 | 12:13
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Lolzzz nyc one next.....
8 Apr 2016 | 12:32
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Hmmm...u go take am like dat
8 Apr 2016 | 12:44
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Nice story
8 Apr 2016 | 12:48
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smh
8 Apr 2016 | 12:51
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Elegushi no b smal tin.
8 Apr 2016 | 13:17
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Bt I just dy observe tinz choi 2 fal in luv na beta tin I swear.
8 Apr 2016 | 13:20
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lolz smart Mirabel
8 Apr 2016 | 13:22
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lolz Am very happy your mum accepted your relationship with Mirabel
8 Apr 2016 | 13:27
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Try soap na
8 Apr 2016 | 14:05
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doorrr
8 Apr 2016 | 14:20
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Oh boi!!! Dis episode 3 just dey make me shine my teeth sha
8 Apr 2016 | 14:46
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U don enter 1chance
8 Apr 2016 | 14:58
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Dis Vic ehn!.... I dont know why guyz are always scared when ladies mention marriage.... Will u be dating 4reva?
8 Apr 2016 | 15:39
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Sorry
8 Apr 2016 | 15:53
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lol cant stop laughing
8 Apr 2016 | 16:05
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Ur momcy wan put sand for ur garri
8 Apr 2016 | 16:08
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Lolz! Even under yr Momma's roof and just some minutes after counselling about the need to stay off sex, you see still inviting Mirable I'm yr room St such ungodly hour. Victor! Are you well at all?
8 Apr 2016 | 16:47
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I so much give kudos to yr Momma for that genuine and lovely advise. You'd better stick to it joor & stop making it hard for Mirable to stick to. Just remember what Mirable said would make her break up with you which is infidelity. That's why you should avoid Lola's advances and even relate it to Mirable
8 Apr 2016 | 16:51
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u no want make she slip abi
8 Apr 2016 | 17:21
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guy, hold yourself self oo.
8 Apr 2016 | 17:55
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Mirable are yhu for real? Question for next wk....
8 Apr 2016 | 18:09
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I really lyk dis episode
8 Apr 2016 | 18:17
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Counsellor Momma.
8 Apr 2016 | 18:30
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Hahaha
8 Apr 2016 | 18:34
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Good for you
8 Apr 2016 | 19:00
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Ur mum is doing d wright tin
8 Apr 2016 | 19:22
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See bad boy want to taste her again
8 Apr 2016 | 19:46
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Ur plan no work!
8 Apr 2016 | 20:06
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Ride on pls!
8 Apr 2016 | 20:19
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Hahaha...
8 Apr 2016 | 20:29
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Yesss ma'am that's true, they should abstain from s*x until they qot married, I surport u qidibam on that one. U hear ahm kwo??? @vict-vames
8 Apr 2016 | 20:29
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loving this
8 Apr 2016 | 21:11
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nice advice from your mother.
8 Apr 2016 | 23:30
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u should also go and sleep , it is night already.
8 Apr 2016 | 23:32
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Lol
8 Apr 2016 | 23:34
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U sef na bad boi o ontop wetin ur mum tlk u wan still bleep 8-) jt observin sha :x
9 Apr 2016 | 04:03
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haha..no more sex
9 Apr 2016 | 05:04
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Chai ur mum don spoil evrytin..Bt mirabell b careful wen u deny him dat he surely gets it elsewhere..
9 Apr 2016 | 05:14
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Hahahahha Guys shaaa. Nice one Bro @vict vames. WaiTinnnnn ohhhh
9 Apr 2016 | 05:45
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lolz
9 Apr 2016 | 06:26
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funny
9 Apr 2016 | 09:35
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y can't I comment self
9 Apr 2016 | 09:35
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hmm
9 Apr 2016 | 09:35
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#Funny...:-D
9 Apr 2016 | 17:33
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wait ooo u mean no show today haba!!!
9 Apr 2016 | 17:55
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Victor go get high BP 4 dat sex matter
9 Apr 2016 | 22:44
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Intwextinq!
10 Apr 2016 | 01:51
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vict vanes..........you're the best
10 Apr 2016 | 01:57
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U gat to understand... She don't wanna make ur mum hav wrong impression abt her..... Guys am u but dnt 4get me in d role call
10 Apr 2016 | 02:00
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@vict-vames, weatin dy vack u na, y u no go allow ur sis flex, me wan go out wit ha, ur own na to connect us togeda.. No worry i wont b like u, i will b a perfect gentleboyfriend... Abeg do am sharp sharp... Kudos to Mirabel.. Love that..
10 Apr 2016 | 03:40
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The writer should be fast #KUDOS# I love The work
10 Apr 2016 | 05:46
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Is she d one sending d last seen message
10 Apr 2016 | 06:27
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Never knew we have my tribe people (Igala) here, Am'gala, abu mele?
10 Apr 2016 | 08:39
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No she's still dia text her more. Lol
10 Apr 2016 | 08:55
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hahaha! she don dey form akpo for you
10 Apr 2016 | 09:12
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Good news f☺я̩̥̊ the family
10 Apr 2016 | 09:26
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You with kiSs all the time
10 Apr 2016 | 09:34
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Bye to s*x
10 Apr 2016 | 09:43
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I think Mirabel will find her way to ur room @vict-vames
10 Apr 2016 | 19:20
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Lolzz, chilax....sɦɛ is rite away @ur door step coz sɦɛ wunt b ⌣̊┈̥-̶̯͡»̶̥Ơ̴̴̴͡k⌣̊┈̥-̶̯͡ dere as ЎO̶̲̥̅̊ΰ sef D̶̲̥̅̊ε̲̣̣̣̥γ̲̣̣̥ mood 2av ha
10 Apr 2016 | 20:23
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@vict-vames today update nkor am still waiting o
11 Apr 2016 | 07:47
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 7[/color] I wasn't happy that night, But Nancy will surely be very happy. I know she'll bombard Mirabel with lots of questions and other things she would like to know out of her curiosity. She won't let Mirabel rest because she'll want to know a lot from the little opportunity she got to sleep on the same bed in the same room with the President's Daughter which happens to be her brother's girlfriend *Winks* ☆☆☆★☆☆☆★ Around 5:21am I heard a loud knock on my door and heard momma's voice calling my name, it was time for our morning devotion which was Nancy's turn to lead. I joined them in the sitting room singing praises to God. We heard the word, we prayed, did some chores, bath, then ate bread and tea for breakfast. I didn't know if i should be angry with Mirabel or not. I hate being disappointed. Did she really disappointed me?  She made her point sha buh i still didn't like the fact that she turned me down. Mum got prepared to go to the shop with Nancy. Mirabel asks if she could join them. Mum agreed while Nancy was glad. Mum asked me if i'd join them, but i declined. Mirabel took me to a corner and gave me a quick kiss,,, just a kiss before she left with them. I was left at home,,, alone. What i did i do? I dashed to the kitchen immediately, took a big cup, put a lots of my momma's  powdered milk with chocolates, then used cold water to drink it. I went to the sitting room to watch movies,,, many channels were showing interesting movies, series, and music but they bore me. I got out of the house to the game house. I related with my hommies and they showed me love. We played, gists, we had fun till i left there later in the afternoon when i got hungry. Mum called me to inquire if i would go to the shop for lunch, or prepare something to eat at home, or buy something to eat. And of course i chose to buy something. I don't really enjoy suya in the day time so i bought meat pies and hollandia yogurts. I got bored at home again, i decided to watch the television and NEPA seized the power. I don't chat when i'm bored so i just slept. I don't know how long i slept but i know i didn't wake up intentionally. My rap ringtone actually woke me up and the tone appeared in my dream. **Picks up** Me: Hello *horror voice* Promise: Hi,,, why weren't u picking up? Have u been sleeping? Me: Yeah Promise: Yeah,,, seems so sounding from your voice. So how u doing? Me: Fine i guess Promise: Mirabel told me she's been at your place since yesterday and that you weren't feeling too well, so how u feeling now? Me: Better,,, i'm ok now Promise: Of course, why won't u be ok now when she's with u Me: Yea,,, how u doing? Promise: I'm ok, rocking my iPhone Me: I see... that's good Promise: Yea, the camera is wow! Me: Yea it is Promise: U sound boring, what's up with u? Me: I just woke me up from my siester Promise: Even at that, its not like u Me: Promise I'm fine Promise: Sure? Me: Yea sure Promise: Ok, we'd talk some other time when you're more 'lively' Me: Yea, bye Promise: Byee... **Hangs up** I saw 2 missed calls, it was from Promise. The power got restored back buh i still wanted to sleep. I was enjoying my dream before Promise cut it short. It was even her call that made my dream sweeter. Because i was hearing my rap ringtone in my dream. The dream was.... I was the class and the Lecturer was lecturing. Then suddenly, the Lecturer start rapping my ringtone in the class which was 2Pac Shakur's. I joined him in the rap 'coz i know the rap and i love it. That's how my Lecturer and i was rapping in the class before i woke up and discovered that it's my phone that has been ringing. Later in the evening, Mirabel and Nancy came back from the shop to start preparing dinner. I really missed her,,,, i mean Mirabel. We exchanged pleasantries and i got just a peck from her. Me: How did it go? Mirabel: Very fine, the sales was good Me: Oh i see... i know Nancy disturbed u Mirabel: Not at all, she's fun and good to be with Me: Really? Even with her talking problem ? Mirabel: Its not a problem Victor, its her Natural gift and its cool Me: Hhmmmm (speechless) Mirabel: Talk to u later, lemme freshen up (Walks away). After they did a little freshen up, Nancy went to the kitchen while Mirabel came back to me. Mirabel: I will be leaving tomorrow Victor Me: I thought u would spend the week here? Mirabel: I never planned on doing that, besides your Dad called to inform your Mom that he'd be coming back tomorrow Me: So, U will leave me like this? Mirabel: Like what? Me: We could spend quality time together tonight Mirabel: Not gonna happen Me: Come on,,, not even a kiss? Or kisses rather Mirabel: **smiles** (she walked closer to me and whispered) Mum instructed us to prepare fried rice and chicken for dinner, and she'd bring some yogurts. So hold that thought for later (She gave me a simple kiss on the lips then walked away smiling) I was like 'Hhmmmm' About 45 minutes later, I started perceiving a delicious aroma from the kitchen. I couldn't bear the suspense of the aroma any longer so i left the house to the game house to pass time, I hate suspense. There was a kind of party at the game house. I was told earlier but i forgot. On reaching there, they start hailing my name. I felt like a local celebrity. They dragged me to a seat claiming its mine and brought in drinks for me. I don't drink alcohol anymore but i couldn't refuse it because of how they were hailing me. They showed me love. And the hailing also made some girls come around to me. I was hesitating to drink but my guys were pushing me to drink before displaying on the dancefloor. I finished one bottle, they opened another one for me. I was about to empty the bottle, before two of my guys dragged me to the dancefloor. The people that knows me started screaming. My head grew bigger, the DJ changed the music to one of my favourite song for dancing which was 'Alingo' by P'Square. The song burst my head that i didn't know when i started dancing. Its been long since i last danced but i still didn't missed my moves. Before i knew it, girls started bringing their waist closer to me. One even came and put my hands around her waist then she started twisting it for me. The party 'entertainers' came to me from behind and offered me a cup of dry gin and two piece of condom (That was how we party) It was the gin that got me high. [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED [/color][/b]
11 Apr 2016 | 07:47
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condom oboy na 4uking tinz b dat bt b kiaful oooo no fall 4 dia temptation ooo
11 Apr 2016 | 08:09
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hmmmm alcohol u don enter one chance
11 Apr 2016 | 08:09
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If mirabel catch you! Na you sabi.
11 Apr 2016 | 08:11
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omo,u go shayo wella oo, becareful with those ladies sha.
11 Apr 2016 | 08:11
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hmmmmm... Mirabel must hear this
11 Apr 2016 | 08:25
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If Casala Burst,na U Sabi Ur P
11 Apr 2016 | 08:26
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7 episodes 66 pages ... Nawa ooo
11 Apr 2016 | 08:27
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Chai! Temptation dont do d unthinkable o
11 Apr 2016 | 08:28
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I smell something is gonna go wrong ...
11 Apr 2016 | 08:31
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ooooo...mira qo catch u baa
11 Apr 2016 | 08:37
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victor hmmm
11 Apr 2016 | 08:39
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Condom? I must tell Mira should you misbehave
11 Apr 2016 | 08:40
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plz guyz BTW "Clara the governor daughter" and "the president daughter and I" which one u gbadun pass
11 Apr 2016 | 08:42
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What!! Condom? What are u even thinking
11 Apr 2016 | 08:50
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I pity u Victor
11 Apr 2016 | 09:00
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U don enta one chance
11 Apr 2016 | 09:04
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Dem don carry wahala put 4 ur neck
11 Apr 2016 | 09:08
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huh u don finish see how the devil is misusing u
11 Apr 2016 | 09:15
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I hate such tins
11 Apr 2016 | 09:16
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wahala dey ooo
11 Apr 2016 | 09:20
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smh see your life for outside next jae
11 Apr 2016 | 09:24
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U don entar avatar stage,but hope say u no go F up
11 Apr 2016 | 09:27
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Victor,hmmm U don start again.
11 Apr 2016 | 09:44
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hmm....badoo
11 Apr 2016 | 09:50
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C ur lyf outside
11 Apr 2016 | 10:04
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Victor, u said u don't like suspance, but why do u like keeping us to it.
11 Apr 2016 | 10:06
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Take it easy oooo
11 Apr 2016 | 10:15
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guy b careful dere
11 Apr 2016 | 10:18
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mirabel is at ome
11 Apr 2016 | 10:40
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u have Mirabel so b careful
11 Apr 2016 | 10:45
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Omo see gobe wey dis guy dey form,if the presido's daughter caught you,you for beg for lyk weeks
11 Apr 2016 | 10:49
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temptation in the air again
11 Apr 2016 | 10:51
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Make mirable caught u
11 Apr 2016 | 10:52
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1cup of dry temptation and two piece of wet ones....hehehe....if mirabel hear!i reserve my comment..... This one weh be say na @coolval222-2 nia update so....hope no be fuel @vict-vames go talk about wen he come?
11 Apr 2016 | 10:56
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hmmmm fried rice dey wait for u at home o
11 Apr 2016 | 10:59
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com gini? nke dom? @vict-vames no play dat game again oh, once beaten twice shy
11 Apr 2016 | 11:00
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Nice story, hope u did nt sleep wit any of d gals
11 Apr 2016 | 11:46
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mugu mirabel go lef u to continue parting haha!!
11 Apr 2016 | 12:07
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if mirabla catch u ehn . . ehn ehn i tot i heard u say u 8 suspense,dat shudnt cum frm u @vict-vames u knw d kin of suspense u carry give us 4 season1
11 Apr 2016 | 14:17
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bad market be that ooo
11 Apr 2016 | 14:27
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Victor no fall my hand abeg
11 Apr 2016 | 14:39
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Yeepa...don dey ceee tinz... Alaye just be careful
11 Apr 2016 | 14:41
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Hahaha.... I dey like that kin party
11 Apr 2016 | 14:48
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
11 Apr 2016 | 15:41
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Omo quy yhur own don bend
11 Apr 2016 | 16:18
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Hmmm
11 Apr 2016 | 16:42
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hmmmmmm
11 Apr 2016 | 16:48
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Victor you dey madddd! So because Mirable is now going the way of chastity as your Mum requested and advised now gave you the room to let yourself loose to such wild parties that led to sharing of condoms. Now that you are ever high on dry gin and what have you, would you be able to control or withstand the temptation that would follow suit. Hope you've not forgotten that Mirable gave infidelity as the reason she would consider calling it quits with you. That's exactly what you are about doing
11 Apr 2016 | 17:08
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U r about to go the d forbidden land.
11 Apr 2016 | 17:16
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Omo,you better be care full
11 Apr 2016 | 18:19
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Hmm see gobe, be careful o
11 Apr 2016 | 18:37
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I comment my reserve oo
11 Apr 2016 | 20:05
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i smell setup
11 Apr 2016 | 20:12
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If Mirabel catch you my hand no dey
11 Apr 2016 | 21:12
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I love this story
12 Apr 2016 | 01:55
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So wat next
12 Apr 2016 | 02:12
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gin dy work wonders......lol
12 Apr 2016 | 02:35
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lol..... it's time for Mirabel to give you red card while i get in the picture.. lol drink more of that plsssssss
12 Apr 2016 | 03:45
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I pity u victor!
12 Apr 2016 | 04:44
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PARTY
12 Apr 2016 | 05:59
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next pls
12 Apr 2016 | 06:41
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[b][color =blue] EPISODE 8[/color] The party got hotter, I started feeling uncomfortable when I thought about home and Mirabel. I started adjusting but the girls wouldn't stop whining in front of me. The one in front of me did even more by pressing herself on me. She even whispered in my ear asking me if I would want to stay on the dancefloor all night long or get a room with her now (showing me a pack of condom) Chai! tempted to touch!! I didn't know what to tell her, but seriously, a part of me was giving in and the other part wants me to go home. Girl: Come on, lets go am burning up (pulling my hand to follow her) Skyly: Vickie V i dey see your hand oh... tha baddest nigga! Lechessy: Vickie no dull o... Those were voices of my home boys motivating me to go on with her Skyly: Vickie V i carry extra if u need 'am (Extra i.e Condom) Me: No need, loaded tinz Lechessy: Na so! (Laughing and dancing even harder) I followed her with no intention of having sex with her but in order not to fall my hands among my friends as i'm not that strong in my christian spirit yet, but i'm trying. I had handshakes with some of my guys i met on my way with her. Shapiro: The rugged vames! Me: Shapiro! Shapiro: Unto which angle na? (Like where am i taking her to) Me: Na away o... (She's the one taking me out) Shapiro: Abi? fine bwoy, me just arrive 360 na (Just came back sex-satisfied) Me: No be lie,,, I no see wetin fit kill u again Shapiro: Na lie, i go repent after the thing kill u Me: Dey deceive yourself na, guy later jare Shapiro: Oya na, nothing do u I left him and followed the girl to a dark corner, when walking I saw a girl and a guy having sex against a wall, I even saw more set of people banging their selves. My phone started ringing, It was Nancy. Me: Hello Nancy: Senior bro where are u nau? Why didn't u pick Mirabel's calls?? She's so worried bro! Me: Really? Oh my god, I didn't hear the call Nancy: Where are u anyway? Me: I'm I'm,,, I'm,,,I'm around, I'm coming in now Nancy: Around? around where with that sound i'm hearing in the background? are u at that game house or what? Me: Hey! I've warned u about jumping into conclusions of something u don't know,,, tell Mirabel I'm coming. *I hanged up* I looked at the girl, she has already undressed herself waiting for me. Chai! tempted to touch. My mind couldn't resist seeing a naked girl standing in front of me waiting for me to,,to,,, to... Chai! I felt like doing a quickie,,, I couldn't take it no more, I rushed to pounce on her. Unfortunately but thankfully my phone rang again. I took the phone from my pocket not to pick the call, but to ignore it and put the phone on silent but the caller was my mother! Me: Hello ma Momma: Yes where are u? Me: I went to buy something ma, its a surprise for Mirabel, please don't tell her. Momma: By this time? Me: She told me that she'd be leaving tomorrow and I wasn't aware of it before. So... I thought of getting her something fast. Momma: Well, She's listening to our conversation, its on loud speaker, because we're worried. Me: Oh... I'm on my way Momma: Okay and be quick *Hangs up* Girl: Come on babyy, you're keeping me waiting, just off your phone 'Devil is a liar' I said inner my mind. Me: I have to go, something very important came up Girl: what?! U want to leave me like this? are U for real? Me: I'm sorry Girl: Like seriously? Me: It's very important Girl: Baby okay I understand U, but please even small, just once will do. Please don't leave me like this,,, I need U inside me baby (trying to romance me and pulling my shirt) Me: I will be back soon (making her to let go of me) If I don't go now, she will surely get me. I hurriedly left her and headed home. Girl: Hey?! Hey?! Your Papa! Idiot fowl wey no sabi anything, mumu... msteeew That was the insults she rained on me when i left her. So what do I get Mirabel now? and I don't have enough money with me. Walking home, thinking hard on the kind of excuse i'm going to tell them. And even though i have the money now, what am i going to get her? I immediately brought out my phone and placed a call on Promise... I told her everything after picking up, excluding the girl's part. Promise: Hhmmm.... Me: So what do u think i can get her? Promise: Seriously i dunno o... me and her haven't discussed about her past relationships to know the kind of material things she might want from him. But base on what we've discussed about u, I think she only needs your 100% love with care, understanding and honesty. Me: So u girls do talk about me? Promise: Before nko? dey there na,,,, abegi, so i think gifts from u will be extra things she'd be needing from u Me: But what kind of gifts? Promise: That's what I don't know biko, my life and her life no rhyme oh... all i know is that, wealthy girls like Mirabel only need your Love Me: Alright, thanks for your help Promise: You're welcome Me: Did u even help me? (teasingly) Promise: (Laughs) What else do u want me to say? Me: Like, I wish i was helpful Promise: Bye bye jare! Me: You're sending me away? Promise: Not like that na,,, hia, u were teasing me nau,,, and i don't want u to make me blush Me: Why? Promise: Only my boyfriend is allowed to do that Me: U have a boyfriend now? Promise: Nope, just saying... I don't like where the conversation is heading to, so i twist it to escape from it Me: Okay o,,, got to go and face my problem now,,, talk to u later Promise: More like a week from now Me: What? Promise: Didn't say anything,,,, byeee **Hangs up** The reason why i'm so worried to get Mirabel something is because i already told them about it and she'll be expecting it. One thing we should all know is that, once u have the spirit and resources of giving, u should give with good intentions. It doesn't matter if the person is rich and able to provide everything for him or her self. U don't always give to the needy, U give to the rich as well, especially to your close ones. If your father is rich and working, U can still buy him Biro or even recharge card and he'll surely appreciate the kind gesture. U don't need to have all the money u want before giving to your parents, give them from the little u earn for they'll understand your income and appreciate your giving gesture for there's blessing for giving. [color =red]To Be Continued....[/color][/b]
12 Apr 2016 | 06:46
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<b>God saved you, hope we'll get the next episode today
12 Apr 2016 | 07:16
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Hmmmmmm
12 Apr 2016 | 07:16
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following........ keenly...........
12 Apr 2016 | 07:18
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4lowing
12 Apr 2016 | 07:23
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almost
12 Apr 2016 | 07:26
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Lol, so the thing pepper dat girl ahahahahhhhh... What will u naw buy for Mirabel ? Thanks for the word of encouragement tho... Next pls
12 Apr 2016 | 07:28
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Nice work bro ride on
12 Apr 2016 | 07:28
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
12 Apr 2016 | 07:29
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Thank God say you no fall for the temptation @promzy you prayer no work so you no go fit enter the picture *tongue out*
12 Apr 2016 | 07:30
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[b][color=indigo]Geez...Devil Is A Liar...God Save Ur A~s[/color][/b]
12 Apr 2016 | 07:34
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You were Really lucky. But there are more temptations on the way
12 Apr 2016 | 07:37
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So had it been those calls didn't come across to you, you would have given in to that seductress of a party girl. It then connotes that you ain't worthy of Mirable's love cos it seems that her alone and what you claim to feel for her couldn't keep you in check simply bcos she refused to give in to your sexual advances. Some guys amazes me shaa and Victor follow for one of them
12 Apr 2016 | 07:55
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nice show really like d scene
12 Apr 2016 | 08:01
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Great..na God save u mr vames
12 Apr 2016 | 08:07
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U get luck say d gul too dull
12 Apr 2016 | 08:14
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fact bro
12 Apr 2016 | 08:14
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Oboy see temptation
12 Apr 2016 | 08:21
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hmmm infidelity
12 Apr 2016 | 08:29
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Yeah that's true
12 Apr 2016 | 08:38
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hmmmmmm.... Na God save u ooo
12 Apr 2016 | 08:46
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Dat promise the trip for u
12 Apr 2016 | 08:56
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Hahaha
12 Apr 2016 | 09:02
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hmmm too good vict
12 Apr 2016 | 09:08
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wise word from vict vames
12 Apr 2016 | 09:12
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Chai! God saved ya ass following
12 Apr 2016 | 09:21
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O boy!! u fall my hand big tym. Hw can u let such meat escape
12 Apr 2016 | 09:28
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Hmmm....
12 Apr 2016 | 09:37
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hmmmm
12 Apr 2016 | 09:51
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lol , see preaching , @vict-vames u don turn to pastor ni?
12 Apr 2016 | 10:27
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Your Damn Lucky
12 Apr 2016 | 10:29
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Hmmmm
12 Apr 2016 | 10:39
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
12 Apr 2016 | 11:08
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<b>I dey feel you @vict-vames buy her chewing gum ....next episode abeg<b>
12 Apr 2016 | 12:05
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you are in for decision making
12 Apr 2016 | 12:12
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Oya wetin u go buy
12 Apr 2016 | 12:34
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Na God save u oo but u for do small
12 Apr 2016 | 12:50
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God save ur ass sha,u 4 enter 1 chance pepper soup
12 Apr 2016 | 13:01
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Nix one bro.... Ride on
12 Apr 2016 | 13:29
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buy her errrrmm tomtom
12 Apr 2016 | 13:49
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uhm,,continue
12 Apr 2016 | 14:17
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hmmm...following
12 Apr 2016 | 14:29
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Hmmm
12 Apr 2016 | 14:47
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ride on
12 Apr 2016 | 15:04
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dat for sure
12 Apr 2016 | 15:27
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God save your ass 2day
12 Apr 2016 | 15:46
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God save u sha I tout u go enter . u for son enter YouTube
12 Apr 2016 | 15:52
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Tell her say thug attack u for road tell ha say u beg dem wit d litu money u won use buy sumtin
12 Apr 2016 | 16:15
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Hmm u don implicate ur self. Weda money or no money make sure u buy her sometin gud to cover up ur lies.
12 Apr 2016 | 17:16
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Vames! thumb up.
12 Apr 2016 | 17:26
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Dnt 4get Ur Phallus is ur probleM...Vames...Dnt o
12 Apr 2016 | 18:05
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penalty
12 Apr 2016 | 18:22
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Oya do tell us how u wll manage to survive this oooo
12 Apr 2016 | 18:23
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Next
12 Apr 2016 | 18:24
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lol@victoriouschild ,tomorrow is another day.. .kikiki ride on. boss heed to my advice else....
12 Apr 2016 | 18:31
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you are lucky
12 Apr 2016 | 18:32
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hmmmm
12 Apr 2016 | 18:36
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Tooo short
12 Apr 2016 | 18:42
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lol, 4ny u. So 2 yoghurt 2 get urzf 2gda
12 Apr 2016 | 21:09
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ahhh,vick.na u o
12 Apr 2016 | 21:19
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Ehnnnn
13 Apr 2016 | 02:46
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ur God don save u
13 Apr 2016 | 06:46
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 9[/color] While thinking seriously on what to do to have enough money to get something for Mirabel, I went to my hommies to lend me some money. I couldn't find the trusted ones, they could be somewhere having extra fun. The few ones i met were so drunk, they denied having any money on them. I had no choice but to go home empty-handed then put up something as an excuse. I got home 8:47pm, I discovered they've already eaten. I met Momma in the living room seated on the sofa, Nancy at one corner of the dinning chatting or so, but Mirabel wasn't there. Me: Good evening ma Momma: Welcome,,, big boy Chai! Am in trouble, she's going to blast me this night... Me: Sorry for coming late, its really becau... Momma: Go and eat your food, its in the kitchen (She interrupted) Me: Ok ma One thing about my Mum is that, She doesn't play with food. She makes sure everyone in the house have something to eat at the appropriate time. My Mum don't starve anyone as punishment, she's seriously against such acts. I walked straight to the kitchen, Nancy was demonstrating her hands towards me but I didn't look at her to understand what she was trying to say. I didn't even ask of Mirabel. I served my self and ate on the kitchen's dinning, the food was already cold. I didn't really enjoyed it. I walked back to the living room to face the panel (Momma) that's what I say when I know I'm going to be blasted for doing something wrong. I got there, met Mirabel seated not looking good. Momma: Have u eaten? Me: Yes ma Momma: Oya come and seat down here. (Blasting tinz, here we go...) I said in my mind. I sat down jeje let her say it, I dare not interrupt her speech. Momma: (she lowered the volume of the TV) Nancy come and seat here Nancy: But Mummy... (She squeezed her face and walked angrily to take a seat) Momma: Good evening to you all All: Good evening ma Momma: U know as a Christian mother, I will always make sure I put my children in the right way because this is a Christian home. Which means I will never get tired of correcting them whenever they go wrong.  Nancy drop that phone before i seize it! what's wrong with u?! (She put her phone away) Momma: Now Victor, U know I no longer tolerate staying out after 7:40 without permission. Today U just went out without telling anyone where you were going to and just left everyone worried. I have said and kept saying that u always let someone know your whereabout to avoid unnecessary worries. And God forbid but if anything should happen, how do u expect us to know where u are? What if something bad had happen to u now? where do u expect us to start looking for u? This is wisdom we're talking about. I have been telling u, even though we're not with u at school, u should always inform your room mate or neighbours about where you're going to. Besides, I don't advice u to go out at night, I'm not comfortable with night out. What would u go out at night for? U have a girlfriend already,,, what else? Look at her, she hasn't eaten because of u even when she knew u are ok when I called u the other time. U see what u did to this innocent girl? Now where is the thing u got for her that made stay out late? Me: Actually, I forgot to take some money because i was in a haste, I thought I had enough money on me Nancy: So u didn't buy anything at all? Momma: Am very disappointed Victor, very disappointed. All this for nothing? Me: Sorry ma, I didn't know Momma: U can tell her that, am done talking to u (she turns to the TV and put up the volume) Nancy didn't wait time to get to her room as its past Nine already, while Mirabel followed. Momma: Mirabel Mirabel: Ma Momma: Come (She went to her) Momma: Please go and eat Mirabel: Yes ma (I thought she'd decline, Thank God she didn't) Momma: Call Nancy to warm it for u Me: I will do it Momma: Okay... I took her to the kitchen Me: Mirabel I'm really sorry for.... She interrupted me with a cool kiss, she smiled and cleaned my lips. I stood surprised. Me: Wow! easier than i thought (smiling happily) thanks sweetheart for your understanding, you're the best! and I love U so much Mirabel: I love u more Me: It's a lie, sorry,,, I mean ermmm,,, I love u more (smiling) Mirabel: (smiling) Its a good thing that you're save, and i appreciate your good gesture on getting me something I drew her closer, we kissed passionately for seconds before interrupted when I mistakenly hit a plastic plate which fell off unto the ground and made a noise. Me: Damn it! Mirabel: (laughing slowly closing her mouth) We warmed the food, She ate, I couldn't eat again but I drank some yoghurts. We went to the sitting room to bade Momma good night before going to the room (Nancy's).  And ofcourse she was still in there chatting,,,, what an addict like Promise aka Promzy, geez! Nancy: I've been waiting for u Mirabel, U promised we'd continue our discussion later. Mirabel: Yes I did promise, and I haven't forgotten (smiling) Nancy: Okay I drew Mirabel to a corner where Nancy wouldn't hear our conversation. Mirabel: What is it? Me: I thought You'd spend the night with me in my room? Mirabel: But we never planned on doing that Me: You should know na, remember u turned me down last night? Mirabel: So what happens to Nancy? I promised her but I didn't promise u anything Me: U came here for me and not for her na Mirabel: Yes I know,,, Isn't it a good thing that your sister likes me and enjoys my company? Me: Well i'm not surprised that she likes u or even love u already,,, But She's got all your attention since u came here more than me, we haven't spend any quality time together. U both slept in the same room, went to the shop together instead of staying home with me,,, come on babe, Its not fair Mirabel: (Laughs) You're complaining? Instead of u to be happy that i'm getting along well with your family, you're here being jealous of it (Leaning on me romantically) **Phone rings** Mirabel: Its Nancy, she's been waiting for me for so long now Me: Then let her wait, I want to spend time with my girlfriend! Mirabel: Don't be like that Victor,,, U and I have spent months together at school, and will spend more when we resume and even years to come that's if u don't screwed up. So why can't u let me use this little time i got to know your family and your family to know me as well? You're being selfish u know, this is.... (Momma shows up) Momma: U guys are still talking? Me: Ermmmm ma Momma: No, u guys have spoken a lot already, I need to have a little conversation with Mirabel, If u don't mind Mirabel? Mirabel: No i don't (smiling at me) Momma: Okay, let's go... (Taking Mirabel away) I mind oh.... Chai!  This is what U get for dating the President's Daughter... [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED>>>[/color][/b]
13 Apr 2016 | 07:19
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lolz....i swear d tin e dey funny me...#who you Epp
13 Apr 2016 | 07:37
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lolz everybody loves the presido daughter
13 Apr 2016 | 07:45
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LMAO
13 Apr 2016 | 07:51
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Lol..victor u are funny o
13 Apr 2016 | 08:16
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chai, bad market
13 Apr 2016 | 08:21
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make una allow Mirabel to rest nah from mummy to victor from vict to Nancy make una free person pikin jare
13 Apr 2016 | 08:27
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? hahaha funny
13 Apr 2016 | 08:31
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But the episodes too small nah
13 Apr 2016 | 08:46
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[b]you mind oooh[/b]lol....you go soon enjoy ur girl...just chill
13 Apr 2016 | 09:04
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@vict-vames i nova still forget that prologue for the starting of season1 oooooh...make anybody nor just tell me say [b]PRESIDO[/b] go give he blessings for this relationship
13 Apr 2016 | 09:07
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na president cause am? Konji dey worri victor. Hold ya tin
13 Apr 2016 | 09:12
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haha vict so yu are jealous naw ooooo too bad
13 Apr 2016 | 09:23
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[b]Hmmmm[/b]
13 Apr 2016 | 09:23
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then would be expecting to date a president daughter to knw how it feels.
13 Apr 2016 | 09:27
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Lolzzz bad market indeed!
13 Apr 2016 | 09:29
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its getting more interesting..you will hear from the president.
13 Apr 2016 | 09:53
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errm so nothing to write
13 Apr 2016 | 09:53
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lolz na so e dey be nah
13 Apr 2016 | 10:20
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Lolzzz reli funi...
13 Apr 2016 | 10:21
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Its unfair oo..Why's mirabell behavin like dis..
13 Apr 2016 | 10:35
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Lol ... U neva c anytin sef
13 Apr 2016 | 10:36
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Victor nache yewn,....becareful
13 Apr 2016 | 10:41
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Me too wanna talk to her jare, dats if u dnt mind. Lol
13 Apr 2016 | 10:49
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Lol waitin
13 Apr 2016 | 11:33
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following....
13 Apr 2016 | 11:58
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this tori don turn joke
13 Apr 2016 | 12:25
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Mirable is just so loving and caring not counting her status. Victor! Don't screw up ooo
13 Apr 2016 | 12:29
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ermmmm...............
13 Apr 2016 | 13:41
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Lol,you have a gud mum there
13 Apr 2016 | 14:04
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Control ur self vic
13 Apr 2016 | 14:11
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it's momma time to talk to mirable ooo
13 Apr 2016 | 14:29
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lol....pele victor
13 Apr 2016 | 15:35
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this is really funny
13 Apr 2016 | 15:40
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lolz.......pele victor so funny
13 Apr 2016 | 15:54
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hahahaha
13 Apr 2016 | 15:54
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Victor allow your bae to spend quality time with your family members and stop being selfish
13 Apr 2016 | 16:42
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I so much enjoyed every bit of vhiz story
13 Apr 2016 | 17:05
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Lol
13 Apr 2016 | 17:21
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Hahahaha! Remember thix night is a returned match btw Ati Marid v Barca! Who gonna win Victor v Mirable* wink*
13 Apr 2016 | 17:32
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*angry face *an addict? lol.... who knows what your mum is up to
13 Apr 2016 | 18:04
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@vict-vames, if u would not stop being selfish ehn then I qat no other option than to kick ur azz real qood for u, égbo mè?
13 Apr 2016 | 18:16
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Eeyah Sorry Oh
13 Apr 2016 | 18:36
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Ur momma has taken over ur gf.
13 Apr 2016 | 19:17
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good mother
13 Apr 2016 | 19:24
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Hahahahaha everybody what to be with her
13 Apr 2016 | 19:29
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U r about to make a mistake if u cheat on dis girl.
13 Apr 2016 | 19:46
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Guy very soon your mother will give her advice not to friend u again. Lolz.....
13 Apr 2016 | 20:19
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And 4 for ur sister, is like i like her a lot.
13 Apr 2016 | 20:21
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Don't worry everything gonna work out.
14 Apr 2016 | 03:47
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So fascinating
14 Apr 2016 | 05:36
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U hav no choice oooooooooo
14 Apr 2016 | 06:48
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U ar locky guy, Mirabel is wel matured in understanding.
14 Apr 2016 | 12:05
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Ames whtas up na come and update this thing ni
14 Apr 2016 | 15:04
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What d hel is holdin today's update @Vick-Vames
14 Apr 2016 | 16:51
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chaiiii,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,comment past story @vict-vames where u dey nw?
14 Apr 2016 | 16:52
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Following
14 Apr 2016 | 16:53
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vict vames come update us na
14 Apr 2016 | 17:21
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no be small@ kemkit
14 Apr 2016 | 17:23
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no be small @ kemkit
14 Apr 2016 | 17:24
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Chai!!!
14 Apr 2016 | 20:17
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Wow...itz gettin more more interesting
14 Apr 2016 | 20:21
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 10[/color] After sleeping angrily the previous night, a knock on my door woke me up which was time for our morning prayers. We prayed for so many things including safe arrival of our Dad and safe departure of Mirabel among others. We did our morning chores, bath then had breakfast. Mirabel's bodyguards came and took her away, after saying her goodbyes to all of us and also promised to come around some other time. I thought Nancy would be sad about Mirabel's departure, but she seems to be happy which got me wondering. School resumes in one week time, But I would be leaving in two or more weeks. After much thought, I decided to go inside only to see Momma and Nancy happy over what they were checking out. Me: What's all this? Nancy: Mirabel got all these for me and for Mummy I saw lot's of dresses, bags, shoes and jewelleries and an iPhone and an iPad. My eyes burst open. Me: When?! **No response** I saw Momma admiring the wrappers Mirabel got her and Nancy using the iPhone with her teeths out. Me: Is it iPhone 6? Nancy: Yes bro,,, she's so awesome! this is what i've been dreaming to have Me: So Mummy got the ipad? Nancy: Yes Me: Wait, how did she say it? Nancy: How do u mean? Me: As in,,, she didn't mention me? Nancy: No, why? she didn't leave anything for u? Me: Why would she leave anything for me, am i not the one who should be taking care of her? I only wanted to know if she mentioned my name Momma: Why? Me: Huh? No, Nothing precisely Momma: Hope u don't expect goodies from her? Me: No I don't,,, haba Mummy Momma: See, I'm telling u today, don't ask for anything from that girl. By the Grace and Mercy of God, your Father and I are here to provide for u because it's our responsibility Okay? Me: I know Mummy Mummy: No let me talk,,, I have seen in the movies how boys use rich girls to get what they want and left them heart-broken, U better behave yourself. I hope u will never forget what happened to u when u toiled with the daughter of a soldier not to mention when u mess up with the daughter of the Commander In-Chief of the Armed forces Me: I haven't forgotten, thanks for always reminding me (Pissed) Momma: Yes, if by reminding u every now and then will make u behave yourself,,, I will never stop updating it into your brain Me: But Mummy trust the son u raised na Nancy: (Laughs) Me: And what's funny to u? Nancy: Uhmmm Mummy, we should be going to the shop now oh... Momma: Yes o my daughter,,, take these things inside let's go Hhmmmmm.....  I smell conspiracy. **Later that day** Dad arrived home, Momma had to close early from the shop to welcome her husband. He brought lots of goodies,,, that's what i love about him. Before Momma and Nancy came, we had a little chat. Boss: So you're ok now? (Yea that's what i call him) Me: Yes sir Boss: Good,,, go and get me water from the Cway Me: Ok sir Read more of this story @ >> coolval22.com I rushed to the Cway, got the water, return back to him and gave him the water. After drinking, i collected the cup and took it back to it's position. He stood up, probably going to his room. I heard the car horning at the gate, I ran to open it for Momma for to come in. She entertained her husband before we left for Church by 7pm. ********************* We returned back from the mid-week service as we normally do every wednesday, everyone went straight to their rooms to drop their Bibles and also change dresses. Lest i forget, Mirabel called earlier and the following conversation ensued... Me: sweetheart Mirabel: Hi dear, I'm home now Me: At the villa? Mirabel: Yes of course Hhmmmm Presidential villa don turn home abi? Me: Ok good, how was the little trip? Mirabel: It was fine, except for the spoilt road at some parts of the road Me: Maybe your dad hasn't come to that part yet Mirabel: I dunno what the FCT Minister is even doing in that office, imagine Me: Don't mind him (Not enjoying the topic) So how is my heart doing? Mirabel: Very well but kinda not feeling too happy, Dad and Mom aren't home. They both went different places, Dad went to Canada for a meeting or so and Mom went to Uganda for African's First Ladies Conference, I'm feeling so lonely. Me: Well, I'm not surprised for the whereabouts of your parents, having a whole Country on their shoulders is not an easy task Mirabel: I know... Just can't wait for school to resume lemme get away from here and be with who will there for me at all times Me: Really? Mirabel: Yes ofcourse Me: (smiling) And who is this person? (Teasingly) Mirabel: Who else? If not you my love  Me: Me too can't wait to get u under my arms again Mirabel: Uhmmm.... that reminds me, when will u be coming to the Villa? Me: I'm not sure yet, But until my Dad travels because Mum won't be a problem Mirabel: Okay, please u will need to bring Nancy along Me: What? why?? Mirabel: She wants to come here and i promised her  that she'll come along with u whenever you're coming. Me: But u never told me about this before Mirabel: I know... please baby do this for me pleaseeeee... Me: Yea but if only we'd have some privacy, u know what i mean Mirabel: What privacy? don't tell me you're thinking of having sex with me here? Me: What? No! ofcourse not, come on,,, i mean, why would i even think of doing such?  But..... Mirabel: What? Me: Never mind, it's nothing Mirabel: What is it? Tell me Me: It's nothing really Mirabel: Alright so what's up? Me: Just missing u very much Mirabel: Missing u too, please try to inform me on when u will be coming ok? Me: Sure Mirabel: And it should be very soon Me: I will try, it solely depends on my Dad Mirabel: Okay,,, U said he's a chartered accountant right? Me: Yea Mirabel: It's a nice profession Me: Yea Mirabel: U know what? leave your Dad to me, I just thought of something,,,, so don't worry, your Dad won't be a problem,,, I shall handle it Well, base on how i watch Hollywood movies, if someone says a person won't be a problem, the next thing that follows is some kind of a problem or even death. I hope that's not the case here. Of course not! Me: What do u mean by my Dad won't be a problem? Mirabel: Don't u worry sweety, I will start working on it right away Me: Okay,,, hope its for good? Read more of this story @ >> coolval22.com Mirabel: It could even be for better if not the best, trust me dear Me: That's my baby,,, **Car horns** Got to go babe, I think my Dad is back Mirabel: Okay,,,, Love u... please text me his official mail and don't forget Me: Alright i will that, Love more byeeee.... **Hangs up** ***During Dinner*** Dad: Who owns the phone you're holding Nancy? I raised my head up and saw her using the new iPhone Mirabel got for her. [color =red]☆☆☆ TO BE CONTINUED ☆☆☆[/color][/b]
15 Apr 2016 | 07:39
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Following like Twitter
15 Apr 2016 | 07:57
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chai gobe
15 Apr 2016 | 08:00
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wow really interesting
15 Apr 2016 | 08:01
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Nancy what would be ur response????.....waiting
15 Apr 2016 | 08:01
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Answer that miss nancy
15 Apr 2016 | 08:15
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gbese re oo, aw will u explain urself
15 Apr 2016 | 08:16
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This one naw love ooo
15 Apr 2016 | 08:16
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Hmmmm
15 Apr 2016 | 08:24
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hmmmm small vict in villa lol ntin story won't do hahaha following shaa
15 Apr 2016 | 08:24
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qhen qen!! boya baba ma yari beyen aa tii mo
15 Apr 2016 | 08:27
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Explanation z needed hia lol
15 Apr 2016 | 08:37
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Mirabell's not gvn u chance again....Bt it pains..
15 Apr 2016 | 08:47
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Mogbe! Ur mum should provide ansas
15 Apr 2016 | 08:52
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lol... shaking my legs while waiting for answers
15 Apr 2016 | 09:00
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Lol... Loving the story.... Quite funny too
15 Apr 2016 | 09:01
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hehehehe wil hot slap follow am?
15 Apr 2016 | 09:06
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Ehnn... Following
15 Apr 2016 | 09:08
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I wonder what will be your dad's reaction when he finds out that you are dating the president's daughter
15 Apr 2016 | 09:09
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nice one. you are trying by updating every working day of the week. its not easy @Vict-Vames
15 Apr 2016 | 09:21
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Next ooo
15 Apr 2016 | 09:30
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[b]hmmmm,nancy[/b]
15 Apr 2016 | 09:45
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Hmm
15 Apr 2016 | 10:14
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It is a gen gen gen
15 Apr 2016 | 10:34
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Chai! Bad market
15 Apr 2016 | 11:48
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I would have loved to be in ur shoes oo
15 Apr 2016 | 11:54
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following..........
15 Apr 2016 | 12:00
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[b]Chai..#following bumper to bumper....like say na twitter[/b]
15 Apr 2016 | 12:08
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hmmmmmm i cnt wait 2 read d next episode
15 Apr 2016 | 13:04
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omoh dad z my own what who got it for u?
15 Apr 2016 | 13:43
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nice one bro lets get the party going
15 Apr 2016 | 14:35
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I dey enjoy u like lolly pop
15 Apr 2016 | 14:56
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nxt pls
15 Apr 2016 | 15:51
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@Nancy, of cos u no d ansa na, Mirabel. Wooo connection to ur family @vick, ur Dadd is about to be lifted into federal apointment.
15 Apr 2016 | 15:52
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nxt plz ride on
15 Apr 2016 | 16:23
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I think mirabel z going to giv ur dad big catch... Hands crossed.
15 Apr 2016 | 16:29
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Nancy: It's mine ooooooo
15 Apr 2016 | 16:44
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hmm guy he be like say fever don join this your dream ooo do and wake up because lips.....
15 Apr 2016 | 16:44
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Hmmnnn,,,,,,,,,
15 Apr 2016 | 17:06
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Hmmm, so you go hammer after all
15 Apr 2016 | 17:21
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See self control, its lovely
15 Apr 2016 | 17:28
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Hahaha, be a man and let her be f☺я̩̥̊ now
15 Apr 2016 | 17:38
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That ur sis sef na trouble
15 Apr 2016 | 17:40
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Lolz, Mirabel bought it f☺я̩̥̊ her
15 Apr 2016 | 17:46
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Ride on
15 Apr 2016 | 17:48
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Gobe
15 Apr 2016 | 17:56
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interesting
15 Apr 2016 | 17:58
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Vam tell Mirabel say I need job too! I know say she go fix ur old dad
15 Apr 2016 | 17:59
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Eheen problem
15 Apr 2016 | 18:24
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Gbagan!!!!!
15 Apr 2016 | 20:44
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Nancy be amiboooo.
15 Apr 2016 | 21:15
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Mirable, can make ur very family very rich.
15 Apr 2016 | 21:16
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ride on BOSS
15 Apr 2016 | 22:17
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Nancy oya answer your dad question
16 Apr 2016 | 04:52
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9ce 1...next pls
16 Apr 2016 | 06:02
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D TRUTH
16 Apr 2016 | 06:40
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Nice work here.....
16 Apr 2016 | 06:46
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Chai! see wahala here. . . waiting for next episode
16 Apr 2016 | 08:59
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Lol,I know that Nancy won't hesitate disclose the indiscloseable.
16 Apr 2016 | 10:01
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hmmmm
16 Apr 2016 | 18:28
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Wow......ℓ̊ hope Nancy wunt say d truth about d Iphone. Nkan ti a fe ki baba gbo, baba na lo ma pari e
16 Apr 2016 | 20:40
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suspecting dat u will fuck up with ha friend
17 Apr 2016 | 18:57
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Gbam!
17 Apr 2016 | 21:41
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lol. oya tok say na president pikin gv u
18 Apr 2016 | 03:41
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almost there!
18 Apr 2016 | 04:31
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 11[/color] If not for fact that i'm practically involved in this matter, i wouldn't even try to meddle in the situation. If not for her stupidity, why'd she be using the new phone during dinning and in the presence of Dad. Her stupidity is becoming too much. Nancy: Sir...? Boss: Who.... Me: I gave it to her Daddy, it was given to me by my friends who contributed money to purchase it for me as my birthday present Boss: Okay... Mummy, Nancy and I looked ourselves in a suspicious manner. After dinner, we all assembled in the living room pending 9:00pm where everyone can be eligible to go inside. Nancy was also there with us and not hiding at the dinning table this time because of Dad, he had seized her phone many times because of excess usage. So, she won't be able to chat until past 9:00 when she'd escape to her room. Boss: Lemme see the phone Nancy She went to unplug it from where she's been charging it and gave it to Dad Boss: Which one is this one? Nancy: It's iPhone Boss : It looks nice, so what will u do to the blackberry? Nancy: I will still be using it Dad, i have another sim card that i need to be using Dad: This one looks expensive, how much is it sold? Nancy: Me i dunno oh... Dad: Is there no receipt? or is it not a new phone? Me: It was only the phone and it's charger that was given to me Boss: They should've given u receipt when they gave u the phone He gave the phone back to her and faced the T.V I already told mum to hid the iPad for the main time till Dad isn't around of which she already did. For me, this is a disadvantage of having a learned mother, she will surely use the iPad instead of giving it to me. She's on bbm, facebook and on whatsapp. My momma no dey gree oh... I got a call from a friend, i went inside to get it. After the call, I dialled Mirabel's. Mirabel: Hello Me: Hey babe, how u doing tonite? Mirabel: Am fine,,, wah bout u? Me: Good... I forgot to thank u earlier for the things u got for my Mum and my Sis, I really appreciate it dear, thank u very much. Mirabel: And you're so welcome Me: So how is it going? Mirabel: I'm still adjusting,,,, wait, it seems u haven't seen what i got u or the small piece of note i left u Me: No i haven't, u got me something?  (heart beating) where did u hide it? Mirabel: Well, U will have to discover it yourself,,,, it's there in your house (Smiling) Me: So you're not going to tell me? Mirabel: Nah..... Me: This is work na, it's not fair oh Mirabel: (Laughs) You're on boo, do some house research Me: No problem, I won't kiss u when we meet Mirabel: Stamped! Me: What do u mean by that? Mirabel: I approve of it Me: What? it's a lie, things aren't approved that way, U will need to ask if i am sure but u didn't asked,,, U just approved. Mirabel: (Laughing) Okay, are u sure? Me: Hell no! We both burst into laughter Me: Please babe, tell me what u did to our videotape that was uploaded on YouTube Mirabel: Alright ermmnm, its like this...  are u listening? Me: Yea, loud and clear and even on record Mirabel: Okay, it was my cousin living in the U.S that informed me about the video asking me if i knew anything about the upload. He owned an ICT Company there and he also do some special job for YouTube and other big companies. After he told me, i checked it out to confirm if it was really me which was actually us, I freaked out and immediately told him to do something about it as the number of views kept increasing. He said some people had downloaded the videotape and others even uploaded it to their website. He said he could do something about it though. I gave him the go ahead to rid of it. Then he hacked into the into the server of every site the videotape was uploaded to and got every copy of the video down. He also used the IP address of those that downloaded the video to hack their system and deleted the videotape. Me: Woah,,, he must be a genius Mirabel: Yea,,, that's why he doesn't come home much because the white men wouldn't let him. He is well valued, he even married a white girl there, we had to attend the wedding from here. Me: I will like to meet him one day Mirabel: Sure,,, I told him about u already. We understood each other a lot.  He also brought down everything that was tweeted about the videotape on Twitter, Facebook and Instagram with his connections. Although, he spent lots of dollars to get it all done. Me: U guys must be close Mirabel: Very close,,,, we were almost inseparable when we were kids. Although he is almost 5 years older than me. He started in forth grade in the U.S and was stuck up at the top throughout his school. Always the best in the class, science fairs, he was even the prom king while the prom queen was his girlfriend who is now his wife. Me: Woah,,, like a fairy-tale Mirabel: Exactly what i told him about his life. He is currently working on his autobiography, to be launched probably in two years time. Me: It's really going to sell a lot Mirabel: Yea, but he said the proceeds will be given to charity, both in Nigeria and in the U.S and i think it's a great idea. Me: Yea yea, sure its a wonderful idea,,, how old was he when he got married? Mirabel: He was 23, he got married two years ago on the 4th of July,,, I can still remember that day vividly Me: Sweetheart I've been waiting for u to tell me his name Mirabel: Sorry my love, his name is Ikechukwu but he shortened it to Ike. Only close family members knows him as Ikechukwu Me: He is igbo? Mirabel: Yea, he's Father is igbo,,, he married my Aunt, my Dad's younger sister Me: Okay,,, i see Mirabel: Yea, enough talking about my cousin and let's talk about us Me: I like him Mirabel: I can see that, but u don't know him Me: I've heard a lot about him already, i love his story which is like a fairy-tale and he saved my a$$ from that videotape that could be scandalous,,,, i really do like him a lot already Mirabel: Okay then, I shall let u have a video chat with him on Skype when we get to school Me: That would be great dear Mirabel: Yea, and could be annoying too Me: How do u mean? Mirabel: U are dating his favourite sister Victor,,, be good is all i will tell u Me: Now you're scaring me Mirabel: (Laughs) Don't be scared, just don't break his sister's heart,,,,  he has been very stubborn right from time. He promised me that he will deal with any guy so severely that will break my heart and make me cry. I just hope it doesn't come to that 'coz i know what he can do. Me: I understand, i will the same for my sister. Excuse me love lemme bade my Parents good night Mirabel: Ok your Dad is back? Me: Yea Mirabel: Good for u unlike mine Me: Well that's for now, he might travel again anytime soon Mirabel: U have no idea Me: What do mean? Mirabel: U don't worry, I'm working on something and it's pending as it is Me: Hhmmmm... U and this your surprises u don't share with me Mirabel: Relax dear, its for good or don't u trust me anymore? Me: It's really not about trust sweetheart, it's about sharing. U know, sharing of ideas, problems, feelings and all that Mirabel: Ok, yea that's how it should be, i've read something like that before. Hhmmm... U read so much Me: Thanks to my conversion that gave me the chance Mirabel: I see... uhmmm Me: Be right back lemme greet my Parents good night then we continue Mirabel: Okay... After hanging up, I rushed to the living room. Dad was working with his computer while momma was watching her 9pm phillippians telenovela and Nancy has long gone into her room. I bade them good night then rushed back to my room and found my phone ringing. I checked it but it was an unknown caller. Me: Hello Caller: Hi Victor,,, long time No see ** It was a feminine voice** Me: Yes i guess, sorry who're u? Caller: Even though u blocked my other line, yet u dunno my voice? I can only remember blocking Lola's number and the voice i was hearing sounded like hers. Me: It'd be good if u tell me who u are now because i have something important to get back to Caller: By something important u mean Mirabel? **Of course its Lola, who else** Me: Lola? Caller: It's me dear Me: What do u want? Lola: Awwww that's so harsh, don't be like that. I bet u look cute on that face you're putting on right now Me: Lola i ask again, what do u want? Lola: Come on Victor, let's talk, it's been a while Me: Talk about what? Lola:  I know what Mirabel did, she told me everything. How u freaked out and all that Me: I know that made u happy, but it's in the past now, it's all over Lola: Are u sure about that? Me: Of course, or u have something else to say? Lola: Not really Me: Okay, i got to go now Lola: It's okay, i shall get back to u. Don't even think of blocking this line, because u won't enjoy the outcome of it Me: What? (Laughed) are u threatening me? what are u talking about? Lola: I won't say much buh, all i will say to u this night is that,,,, what u think is over is not yet started! Me: What? **She hanged up** Me: Hellooo? Lola?! I tried to call her back but it was switched off. I really don't get it, what was she talking about? she seems to know what she's talking about and sure of herself. Oh no i hate stuffs like this! I hate problems!! Lola left me in a worried mood, I know she could be dangerous from her desperation. I wish this was a film trick. Maybe i should start writing about my life, after all i've always loved writing. I shall write about my life because it looks like a movie. I couldn't speak with Mirabel that night because of my current mood, so i texted her to let her know that something came up. Then i started thinking and imagining things with my heart full of worries. [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED ☆☆☆[/color][/b]
18 Apr 2016 | 07:12
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she fit black mail u
18 Apr 2016 | 07:32
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forget abt her and concentrate. tell Mirabel her behavior
18 Apr 2016 | 07:40
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ah...esulola is bk aqain oo
18 Apr 2016 | 07:58
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some guys ehhh!! wat u sud av yell Mirabel since she started .. now or trouble go multiply
18 Apr 2016 | 08:02
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da lola na devil
18 Apr 2016 | 08:27
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she is bak again!!!
18 Apr 2016 | 08:33
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[b][color =]VHIZ_LOLA_abi_na _cocacola_her_own_too_much #FOLLOWING-LIKE-TWITTER[/color][/b]
18 Apr 2016 | 08:33
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18 Apr 2016 | 08:44
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this victor sef why nt tell Mirabel about her.. u knw dat winch is dangerous... well next pls
18 Apr 2016 | 09:03
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she may be de one who uploaded the video....
18 Apr 2016 | 09:23
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U ave to tell mirabel abt it guy
18 Apr 2016 | 10:03
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I smell trouble
18 Apr 2016 | 10:27
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mirabel should not be in the dark about this devilish lola act
18 Apr 2016 | 10:27
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d earlier u tell Mirabel d better for u
18 Apr 2016 | 10:27
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its good u no lola is d desperate type u should be careful with her.
18 Apr 2016 | 10:30
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hmmmm be carefull
18 Apr 2016 | 10:32
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HMmmmmmmm
18 Apr 2016 | 10:39
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Hmmm, Lola again?
18 Apr 2016 | 10:53
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It seems like trouble is back!
18 Apr 2016 | 11:05
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Lola was the architech behind the videotape! She's threatening to come up with a new mischief again and only Mirable can save your ass real good. You talked about sharing of ideas, feelings and the rest, this is the actual thing you must share with yr lovely Mirable.
18 Apr 2016 | 11:22
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What is this Lola's problem sef
18 Apr 2016 | 11:35
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she devil
18 Apr 2016 | 11:36
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Vict I will advice you to tell Mirabel about Lola, her advances towards you and also her threat
18 Apr 2016 | 11:38
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p in d air
18 Apr 2016 | 11:43
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Cut Lola to her perfect. Put her where she belong though u no get liver.
18 Apr 2016 | 11:46
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Alaye tell Mirabel nah abi U dey fear dat witch ni ( Lola )
18 Apr 2016 | 12:35
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U better imform mirabel abt her...
18 Apr 2016 | 12:36
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hmmm beta tell her i mean mirable abt lola call
18 Apr 2016 | 13:18
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Open up to ur woman n let her know d truth abt lola. She is a devil.
18 Apr 2016 | 13:44
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Hmm, dnt wait til is late befor telin mirabel about lola's actions nd trait
18 Apr 2016 | 14:41
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I still suggest u tell mirabel abt dis lola b4 it gets out of hand
18 Apr 2016 | 14:44
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lola! lola!! lola!!! fear ur head vic.
18 Apr 2016 | 15:04
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Better tell Mirabel about Lola
18 Apr 2016 | 15:26
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U got to tell Mirabel everything hiding ntin frm so if anything cms up she wnt be shocked or angry.... Lola z nt worth it... Nyc one.
18 Apr 2016 | 15:36
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Another bunch of headache
18 Apr 2016 | 15:37
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ur life is realy an adventure
18 Apr 2016 | 15:38
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Hmmmm...lola
18 Apr 2016 | 15:48
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I dnt know why some ladies are desperate dis day ooo.......
18 Apr 2016 | 16:33
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U be fool oo.. Instead of u to inform mirable immediately
18 Apr 2016 | 16:46
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she no fit na we get am lol
18 Apr 2016 | 17:24
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Blackmailing things....
18 Apr 2016 | 17:28
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Is nt better yhu open up to Mirable at early than for her to find the truth her self, which yhu knws wht it means
18 Apr 2016 | 18:39
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following ride on
18 Apr 2016 | 19:26
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I'm begining to like this Lola...just saying tho
18 Apr 2016 | 19:29
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and now this story don dey tou00 nice job boss
18 Apr 2016 | 19:56
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Lola toh bad Following
18 Apr 2016 | 19:56
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hmm....lola
19 Apr 2016 | 04:27
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Hmmm...This girl called . . . Lola
19 Apr 2016 | 05:11
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The best thing is to report her o
19 Apr 2016 | 05:25
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I dy feel Lola
19 Apr 2016 | 06:37
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hmmmmmmmmm
19 Apr 2016 | 07:57
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Maybe she still has d video tape on her mobile.
19 Apr 2016 | 08:08
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Next please.
19 Apr 2016 | 08:09
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Lola again?
19 Apr 2016 | 08:24
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Hmmm smelling problem victor u shuld be extral carefull oo cos lola may do d worst oo@vict_vames nxt epi
19 Apr 2016 | 10:03
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My brother you gat to let Mirable know about this now oooo
19 Apr 2016 | 11:18
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Wow!! I've finally landed once again. Nice story Vict. I'm following!
19 Apr 2016 | 11:47
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No update yet for today ni
19 Apr 2016 | 12:10
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hmmm, the devil lola is back. Who knws if she was the brain behind the video uploading. Kip on Vic
19 Apr 2016 | 13:01
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Hmmmmm. Following
19 Apr 2016 | 14:09
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Boss, No update today??
19 Apr 2016 | 15:27
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hnnnmmm.....cnt wait 4 d next episode bro....#kudos
19 Apr 2016 | 15:40
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Y can't you tell ur gf
19 Apr 2016 | 16:03
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Woow @last I met up wth u quyz! Ride on bro @Vict-Vames
19 Apr 2016 | 17:43
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BRO PLS NXT EPISODE OOO... TOUCHING STORY BRO.. RIDE ON
19 Apr 2016 | 18:50
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Hmm no post today?
20 Apr 2016 | 02:56
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it most likely Lola dat will cause trouble in dis relationship
20 Apr 2016 | 03:42
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You should let Mirable know about Lola
20 Apr 2016 | 04:36
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Still following
20 Apr 2016 | 06:27
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 12[/color] In life, there is no Victory without Battle, No Man or Woman is free from Challenges. How u win depends on how u fight for Victory. Success doesn't come on a platter of gold, the ability of manifesting your gifts depends on how u worked it out! ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ The morning came so late, or maybe it was because i didn't really sleep that night. It was a Sunday so we started the necessary preparations for the Sunday's service. We normally go to Church as early as 7:30 against 8:00 which was Sunday school service before the normal Church service at 9:00am. During our morning devotional, Daddy gave a Testimony. Daddy: Last night when you all went to bed, when i was here (Living room) doing some work with my computer. I checked my E-mail, I received three mails from three large companies for me to Audit. Nancy: Woa... that's nice Daddy Daddy: Yes, It's a great one. It is a great favour and also a great challege, because i've never had this kind of opportunity before in my 9 years of Auditing. Three large companies at once, and their dates did not clash with the other, which means i shall do them one after the other. This is a big favour from God. The companies are Nestle Nigeria, First Bank PLC, and Flour Mills Nigeria. Nancy: Daddy are u serious? Daddy: Yes, and i shall be leaving for Lagos on Tuesday to process some things before starting the job on Monday next week. I can't tell when i will return Momma: We thank God, it's a blessing, a wide door opened for us Me: This is really great, it's more than a open door, we should call it an Open Gate From Heaven Nancy: Only God knows the amount of money Daddy will get from these jobs,,, i'm so happy! Daddy: Like i said earlier, It is a great favour and also a great challenge. So i need God's favour; wisdom, knowledge and understanding; His mercy and also the strength to do the work. So we are going to pray seriously for that this morning. But we are going to thank God first for the huge favour Momma: The God that granted us this huge favour, will also favour u to do the work effectively Daddy: You all will be praying oh,,, U know it's not for me but all of us will benefit from it. Who knows, Victor may even go back to School with a car Momma: Amen oh... Oops! could this be good? that was when i remembered my range rover sport car which my Parents don't know about. Well, Momma knows about Mirabel already so i will tell her about the car and to let her convinced Daddy not to buy me another car. Nancy: Daddy what about me? Daddy: I know U'll want a promise Nancy, just let me do the job first before we exhaust an invisible money. Oya let us pray, we're running late already. We went to Church, the service was awesome. The Speaker was a guest Pastor and i was really blessed. Daddy also gave the testimony he testified earlier at home and the congregation rejoiced with him. After the service, we had to wait for Momma because she had to wait for their Women Fellowship Meeting. Dad and Nancy were inside the car. I leaned on our car replying messages on whatapp and forgot i had been trying to avoid someone. My ex girlfriend i didn't date, Dorothy. Dorothy: Hei Vickie (Distracted from my chat, i raised my face to face her) Me: D'thy how far Dorothy: Fine oh, you're waiting for your Mum right? Me: Yap Dorothy: Me too (Leaning on the car right next to me) I'm so tired of this their meeting, almost every Sunday, imagine. Women and never-ending talks Well, i quite agreed with her inside my mind because the worst thing is that, My Mum was the Leader. Me: Yea, that's how it is Dorothy: So what's up, with school and everything? Me: Very well, I thank God Dorothy: I've missed u so much, that your number hasn't been going through or did u changed number? She didn't even know i blocked her line. Me: Nope, still using the same line Dorothy: Then why can't reach u? Me: Could be network or maybe u weren't trying it Dorothy: Of course i was, wait lemme try your number now (reaching for her hand bag) My heart skipped, didn't know what to do. Maybe i should quickly unblock her since i'm holding my phone Dorothy: Oohhhh Daniel! Me: What? Dorothy: He's having my phone. He always took it without my knowledge Me: Come on, don't be mad at him (I was happy) He's your little bro and he looks up to u Dorothy: Buh he should've ask me first Me: Would u have given him silently? Dorothy: He is still a boy, what does he know? he'll just spoil my phone, i know how much i got that phone. Me: Small boy at 14? U and I know Daniel is a smart boy. Besides he might just be playing games with it Dorothy: That's what he does, my phone is so full of games he downloaded and installed that are not deletable Me: Not deletable? Dorothy: Yea, and i don't want to flash my phone I laughed deep inside my heart on what i just heard, chai!   I wish i could tell her how foolish she was. I have always known that her brother, Daniel is far smarter and intelligent than her, although he is very stubborn. Me: Just let him use it, let him be learning from yours till he get he's. Who knows, he might even teach u some things about phone day. Dorothy: And be mocking me? just the other day he managed to show me how to upload profile picture on facebook and how to use voice note on whatsapp, he kept bragging about it since then Me: He is just being proud of helping his elder sis, u know that kind thing na Dorothy: Whatever, its annoying... So will u still be around? Me: Not really, i will be leaving next week or upper week Dorothy: There's still time, i will check up on u tomorrow,,,, or even later today if you'll be free This girl won't leave me alone,,, i don't want her or whatever she has to offer. Me: No u can't come, u know my dad is around Dorothy: But i'm not just any girl, your Parents knows me. My mother and your mother are good friends Me: They will know something is fishy because u haven't been visiting before, why today all of a sudden Dorothy: U should quit being negative na, I promise to do whatever u want when i get there Me: Whatever i want? (Tempted) Dorothy: Yes i promise and i mean it (No! devil is a liar!!) Me: The thing is that, My Parents will at home, and We may also have visitors Dorothy: What about tomorrow when Your Father go to his office and your Mother and Nancy to the shop? Me: Worst, My Dad said, He will be taking me to His office for an orientation instead of staying at home doing nothing. Dorothy: Then how about u come to my house later today? My Mother won't be around, it'd fun just like before  (Her Father was dead and her Mother was a big business woman). Chai! bursted!! what excuse am i going to feed her with now? [color =red]☆☆☆ TO BE CONTINUED ☆☆☆[/color][/b]
20 Apr 2016 | 06:36
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This girl is up to something.
20 Apr 2016 | 06:54
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Tell her say u dey ur mama shop
20 Apr 2016 | 07:08
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that u are going 2 eleko beach
20 Apr 2016 | 07:18
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Why is she like this, after all It's not by force
20 Apr 2016 | 07:20
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Ma hear say na me if i no gree
20 Apr 2016 | 07:48
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busted indeed
20 Apr 2016 | 08:02
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tel her yes, afterall she wunt be able 2 reach u on fone cos u've blocked her
20 Apr 2016 | 08:04
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even if she calls wit anoda line, jsk keep on postin her
20 Apr 2016 | 08:06
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temptation
20 Apr 2016 | 08:08
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wot wrong wit her is it by force
20 Apr 2016 | 08:09
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na by force
20 Apr 2016 | 08:13
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Na by force ni??
20 Apr 2016 | 08:43
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hmmmm, ride on Vic
20 Apr 2016 | 08:45
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no more excuse ... jst giv in jare moreover u have ntin to loose
20 Apr 2016 | 08:49
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ok nah...... Next
20 Apr 2016 | 09:07
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Tell her capital NO and if she insist tell her u have no time... Shikena
20 Apr 2016 | 09:13
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Dnt get tempted oooo..
20 Apr 2016 | 09:21
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liar
20 Apr 2016 | 09:21
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Tell her say you de sick
20 Apr 2016 | 09:22
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Tell her the truth u cnt come.........
20 Apr 2016 | 09:32
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U better find another excuse o
20 Apr 2016 | 09:39
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Why women too dey like u? Na you fine pass?
20 Apr 2016 | 09:50
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dat u ar going to bible class
20 Apr 2016 | 09:59
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[b]tell her say u wan go carry drinks from ur mama store weh una go gv visitors [color =red]#FOLLOWING-LIKE-TWITTER[/color][/b]
20 Apr 2016 | 10:09
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let thy will be done LORD!.
20 Apr 2016 | 10:16
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The lady de feel you oh, go chop am
20 Apr 2016 | 10:22
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Yeah, bursted
20 Apr 2016 | 10:28
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accept ur fate
20 Apr 2016 | 10:42
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hahahhahahaha lafing in monk style tell her say u dey busy say u dey go friend house na, yeye guy u better no start anything fishy with am or else mirable will kick ur ass
20 Apr 2016 | 10:44
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Things fall apart
20 Apr 2016 | 10:50
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Post dis tin fast nw abeg
20 Apr 2016 | 11:47
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Lolz
20 Apr 2016 | 12:21
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fuck her pussy jare
20 Apr 2016 | 12:22
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No chance! Na by force?
20 Apr 2016 | 12:52
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victor we dey follow
20 Apr 2016 | 12:56
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Girls why una sabi disturb guys and later you girls will be accusing us of heart break
20 Apr 2016 | 13:00
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OKAY
20 Apr 2016 | 13:08
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Tell her no chance.
20 Apr 2016 | 13:29
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Tell am say u'll com to her. But for ur mind u wont
20 Apr 2016 | 13:35
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@softtouch,,,,she want to gain his luv back dat y she is pressurising him... tell her u wil come n make excuse later when she don't see u again...
20 Apr 2016 | 14:04
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lol tell her you would go for evangelism
20 Apr 2016 | 15:10
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@softtouch, no break my heart o
20 Apr 2016 | 15:11
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Respect urself and leave kpekus
20 Apr 2016 | 15:20
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tell ok cos yes z not a problem nd dosent lead to agreement bt no will always.
20 Apr 2016 | 16:02
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U wanna v enough rest for d orientation tommorrow.
20 Apr 2016 | 16:19
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I dey feel d story.... Jst tel her u cnt make it
20 Apr 2016 | 16:36
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Sumtin Fishy Indeed
20 Apr 2016 | 16:43
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any how shaa
20 Apr 2016 | 16:55
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Be careful
20 Apr 2016 | 17:23
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Is ur own body a stone, after mirable has refuse to given to yhu tru her visit, abi yhu can play ur game so tit
20 Apr 2016 | 17:28
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Tell her u are going for an outing in d eveing dont be tempted by her oo
20 Apr 2016 | 17:59
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Just think of another excuse jhoor
20 Apr 2016 | 18:22
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Temptation
20 Apr 2016 | 18:50
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tell her u are coming to my house nah
20 Apr 2016 | 18:59
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She wants your beeping so go on and ave fun
20 Apr 2016 | 19:02
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Hmmmm
20 Apr 2016 | 19:21
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Tell her to get out.
20 Apr 2016 | 20:04
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Or tell her, she isn't on ur level again.
20 Apr 2016 | 20:05
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tell her u re going to watch a match later in the day
20 Apr 2016 | 20:24
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d pple way wandestroy am plenty
20 Apr 2016 | 22:46
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Gv a one excuse jor
21 Apr 2016 | 02:01
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You always find your way, so lie again
21 Apr 2016 | 03:01
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So angry now this Babe just slipped off my hook now
21 Apr 2016 | 07:00
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bursted looto
21 Apr 2016 | 07:22
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[s] Lol... You ain't escaping today!!! Jex incase u've 4qotten, Lola is still waiting for you in school. [/s] :mrgreen:
21 Apr 2016 | 11:19
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u don finishe
21 Apr 2016 | 11:48
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Discharge am jare una level no be the came again. but seriously come update us Na.……
21 Apr 2016 | 12:04
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Lols...
21 Apr 2016 | 12:18
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no update today again???
21 Apr 2016 | 16:12
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WELL SHE'S UP TO SOMETHING TRULLY BUT YOU HAVE TO PLAY YOUR GAME WISE... MAYBE YOU SHOULD JUST TELL HER YOU ARE LOADED WITH WORK ALREADY SO YOU WONT BE CHANCED.
21 Apr 2016 | 16:34
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Na waoooo no post yet
21 Apr 2016 | 16:45
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Find 1
21 Apr 2016 | 19:59
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Be careful
21 Apr 2016 | 20:18
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lolzzzzz
21 Apr 2016 | 20:27
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Awaiting d next episode....
21 Apr 2016 | 20:33
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Never trust a girl ma man
21 Apr 2016 | 20:38
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This girl is up to something . . . Becareful boi
22 Apr 2016 | 03:59
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 13 [/color] Telling lies shouldn't be an excuse from abstaining from sin, it's like running from death to death. Be bold enough to say the truth at every given time even when they don't believe or understand u for you're not doing it for them, just know that your Father in Heaven knows what you're doing. Your Father, Mother, Brother, Sister, Uncle, Aunty, Spouse or Master won't kill U for telling the truth. It could be a means of obtaining Favour and Trust. U and I need BOLDNESS!!! ***CONTINUED*** Me: Look D'thy, sincerely i don't want to hang around with u. I am no longer that Victor that U use to know. We can just be normal friends and not with benefits. U really have to stop offering your body anyhow, it's not good and u know it when u think about it the right way, even toda... Momma: (coming) oya let's go let's go Dorothy: Good afternoon ma Momma: Afternoon my dear,,,,, Victor (Getting into the car) Dorothy: Bye ma Momma: Eh ehn... bye my dear, take care Dorothy left after looking at me some how without saying a word to me. I entered the car and we zoomed off. We got home, had lunch, rested a little then spoke with Mirabel on phone... I even told her about the good news and she claimed responsibility for it, that she did it. I appreciated her for the huge favour. She also told me that, My Dad will go places because of what she did through her connections and also be a big deal in ICAN (Institute Of chartered Accountants Of Nigeria). She advised that, My Dad should do his best so that he'll get personal favours and good deals from very big businessmen. Woah,,, I can't believe how my life is going smoothly, peacefully and sweet,,, This is surely the hand work of God. My life hadn't have turned this way if i hadn't changed from my bad ways. I believe God punished me so that i will follow the right path and also fulfill the life He has orchestrated for me. I really thank God for His Goodness, Faithfulness, Love and His Mercy. I had my siester, after that, we held our House Cell Meeting which lasted for an hour. I became bored,,,, I can't play my Play station game because Dad was in the Living room watching ChannelsTV. The Tv in my room is faulty and i left my laptop at my school house (The house Mirabel left for me to use). I don't enjoy playing games with my phone,,, I think i need an iPad for games. One thought led to another, so i decided to spend time on Facebook. I came across a page that posts stories, i checked on a story which was on Episode 17 and saw lots of good comments. I decided to follow the story, i wasted lots of MB because of pages i had to load before getting to the Episode 1 and pages i had to load again in order to continue the story. I read to Episode 26 and couldn't further because the person posting it stopped there. I really need to continue the story, so i thought of trying Google because i know it got answers to almost everything. The story was titled "Adebimpe The Facebook Girl" i really liked it. It was written by one Onihaxy. I searched and i got many results,,, i clicked on one link, the site was so disorganized for me to understand. I left it because i got other options from Google, I clicked on another link and it was the same thing, I clicked on another link and i discovered that the one i read was the season 2. I couldn't find the season 1 in the site so i checked in another site. In this site, the Story was arranged from Season 1 to 4, I started reading from the season 1 till i got exhausted. The site was actually coolval22.com, i explored the site and discovered many Stories and many talented writers. Even after saying good night to my Parents, i still continued the Story on my bed till i decided to sleep around 2am and woke up past 5am by Momma for our morning devotion. Daddy left for Lagos on Tuesday as he said, I requested permission from Momma to go to Aso rock (Presidential villa) to see Mirabel and Nancy will go with me. She obliged saying it would be a 3-day visit because she don't like being alone. She was still on the process of getting another house help since she let the previous one go because of me. Why? well,,, ermmm, Momma caught us in the act on three different occasions. She knew i'm a changed person now, that's why she reconsidered having another house help. I informed Mirabel about our visiting on Thursday, She sent her bodyguards to pick us with a cool tinted SUV ride which we were later told by the guards that the car was bullet proof. They came on Wednesday evening and lodged in a hotel before coming to our house the following morning. Mirabel sent many stuffs for my Momma through her bodyguards Frank and Jummy who happens to be secret lovers. On our way to Aso Villa, Nancy was far more excited than i am. She claimed to fully charged her phones so she'd take enough photos when she gets there. **Phone rings** Me: Hello Mummy Momma: Victor you have to start coming home immediately, your Daddy called that he is in the airport on his way back Me: What? But i thought he won't be coming back anytime soon? Momma: Yes,,, he said he forgot some important documents and hard drive that he will use for the job, that he underestimated the job not realizing how big the job is. Are u there already? Me: No, but we're almost there. we've passed the first two gates already Momma: U have to turn around now and get here before your Dad gets here before u Me: But Mummy,,, Isn't there a way u can cover for us? Momma: No way, what do u want me to tell him? did we inform him that you and Nancy will be going out to anywhere?? Besides, U know i don't lie,,,, not to you or to anyone else most especially not to my husband,,, call Mirabel and tell her what happened. It's better to unintentionally disappoint your girlfriend than deceiving your father. I'm still feeling guilty for the one u did the other day Me: Okay ma, we'll be on our way back Nancy: What?! what's going on? Me: Frank we have to go back, something came up Frank: What about Mirabel? Me: I will call her on phone and explain to her Jummy: Hope it's nothing serious? Me: Not at all,,,, just that, Daddy is on his way back home Jummy: Ohhh... can't Mirabel do anything about it? Me: I don't think so,,, he actually forgot something very important for the job Frank: Hard luck bro (Chuckles) **Turning back** Nancy: But Dad hardly forget anything, why today of all days? Me: Mummy said he didn't know the job will be that big,,, that the documents is essentially necessary for the job Nancy: Oh no,,, what will i tell my friends now? Me: U told your friends? why are u so stupid? Nancy: But bro i don't see anything wrong with that Frank: U shouldn't have done that Nancy,,, it's not save. Please don't do that mistake next time Me: That's if there will be a next time Nancy: Am sorry senior bro nau,,, am i forgiven? Me: Yes u are Nancy: Thanks bro,,, hope i will join u next time? Me: Not a chance Nancy: Haba bro nau,,, pleaseeeee...? Me: Just let me be, i have a lot in my mind to think about so please don't add yours to it I took my phone and placed a call on Mirabel and told her about the setback. She was really sad about it, she said, she's made all necessary arrangements for our stay. I apologized to her of which she sadly accepted. We got home before Dad came later in the evening. After three days of his stay, the job got postponed till upper week Monday which unfortunately, i won't be able to make it to Mirabel's invitation because i will be gone to school by then. She tried her connection to cancel the postponement but was an abortive attempt because the company wasn't ready. The company will have to produce every necessary documents before the audit can take place. Nancy was deeply hurt, she felt so disappointed. I can't tell my Dad about Mirabel, He wouldn't tolerate me having a girlfriend,,, he's so strict about it. Even when i got into trouble with those soldier women, left for him he wanted me to remain there as long as it would satisfy them. Dorothy came to my house on a Sunday, she came to my room when i was sleeping, she got her self naked and tried to get me naked as well (I was sleeping shirtless) before i woke up to see what she was trying to do. [color =red]☆☆☆ TO BE CONTINUED ☆☆☆ [/color][/b]
22 Apr 2016 | 06:08
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wat a shameless gal @dorathy..nawao in this 24century gals still dey force dere self on somebody who is nt interested... well I trust vict he will cast her away like devil.... following
22 Apr 2016 | 06:37
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That Dorothy of a girl...upon all the caution u gave her... mehn that girl is a character.
22 Apr 2016 | 06:40
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what was she trying to do
22 Apr 2016 | 06:45
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hmmm, following
22 Apr 2016 | 06:47
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Hmm doro
22 Apr 2016 | 06:49
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Dorothy waiting dey happen naw or na by force
22 Apr 2016 | 06:51
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Some girls er..sex addict
22 Apr 2016 | 07:10
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oga ooo .. that gal is so shameless
22 Apr 2016 | 07:24
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He he he, Dorostupid....
22 Apr 2016 | 07:25
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Next please
22 Apr 2016 | 08:15
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i dey ur back
22 Apr 2016 | 08:18
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doro tea wch kyn bae u b sef...he say e nor do u nor qo leave am?
22 Apr 2016 | 08:20
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na wa for nancy ooo bcos she had bought her many tins,she as started proclaiming to her friends.....she want to dey form wit her friends....
22 Apr 2016 | 08:35
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Some are so shameless to the extent that they will try to force themselves on a guy that don't want them
22 Apr 2016 | 08:43
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Can't wait for the next update
22 Apr 2016 | 08:46
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blood of somebody! dorothy is so lose.. what would she achive from fooling herself... just hope she wont end using this to blackmail you when it backsfire....... some girls are worthless i swear
22 Apr 2016 | 08:52
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hmmm!! 4lowing
22 Apr 2016 | 09:03
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Hahahahaha... Na u do like that for her house, she for don shout rape o.
22 Apr 2016 | 09:21
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abeg make una no blame dorathy... Conji na bastard nah
22 Apr 2016 | 09:26
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Girls nd dea problem...
22 Apr 2016 | 09:33
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Omg...dat girl sef. , . .
22 Apr 2016 | 09:34
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following sha..
22 Apr 2016 | 09:34
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Give her a dirty slaaaap
22 Apr 2016 | 09:34
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Hmmmm.still observing anyway
22 Apr 2016 | 09:45
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Dis Dorothy is a shame to womanhood. Victor said he does nt want u n seducing him won't work.
22 Apr 2016 | 10:25
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wot a shameless gal
22 Apr 2016 | 10:28
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yeeeeee c gobe
22 Apr 2016 | 10:30
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Na wao for dat gal o upon d hole advice
22 Apr 2016 | 11:07
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Victor, pls don't do anything stupid oh
22 Apr 2016 | 11:30
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What is trying to do
22 Apr 2016 | 11:40
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I hope and pray you resist her even if u can't
22 Apr 2016 | 11:44
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Yawa don gas
22 Apr 2016 | 12:36
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Wat a stupid gal she is @dorothy.
22 Apr 2016 | 12:39
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hmmmm following
22 Apr 2016 | 12:47
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Which kind Doro be this One naa... Doro-animashaun
22 Apr 2016 | 13:06
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shameless gal
22 Apr 2016 | 13:16
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She want to rape him
22 Apr 2016 | 13:38
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Is dat hw desperate Dorothy is? And Victor, who even allowed her in2 yr room?
22 Apr 2016 | 14:49
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Jesu!
22 Apr 2016 | 15:27
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Ok I still dey follow
22 Apr 2016 | 15:49
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CHAI!!! BOSS REALLY FUCKED UP... WHAT'S THAT DUROTHY PROB NAO, EXPOSE HER JOOR
22 Apr 2016 | 15:59
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Aso vila visit re-ajoind. & u @Doro, u wan rape man nawoooo
22 Apr 2016 | 16:27
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* tongue out*@Nancy Dorothy self
22 Apr 2016 | 16:33
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What a dissapointment it will be for Mirable. Sorry my dear, am sempathyzing with u.
22 Apr 2016 | 16:43
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D''thy is a DOG.
22 Apr 2016 | 16:45
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Hmmm,just Be Enjoying O
22 Apr 2016 | 16:47
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Ride On
22 Apr 2016 | 16:48
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Temp abi
22 Apr 2016 | 16:56
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she is stupid!
22 Apr 2016 | 17:02
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Sex na by force?
22 Apr 2016 | 17:17
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Hmm... More of it bro!
22 Apr 2016 | 17:18
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hope u won't do anytin o
22 Apr 2016 | 18:22
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Whc 1 be dis doro own
22 Apr 2016 | 18:39
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
22 Apr 2016 | 18:44
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shameless girl
22 Apr 2016 | 18:52
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Cool
23 Apr 2016 | 03:10
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Dorothy nawa ooh
23 Apr 2016 | 03:35
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hmmmmm,see free market o
23 Apr 2016 | 05:33
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i trust victor he will never fall 4 dat again, cause he is nw a new person
23 Apr 2016 | 05:40
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Devil is a liar
23 Apr 2016 | 10:57
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hello
23 Apr 2016 | 14:53
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I knew this girl was up to something . . . But Victor i know you will be able to overcome this. . . The devil is a liar.
23 Apr 2016 | 18:20
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hmmm
24 Apr 2016 | 09:13
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[b]@Vict-Vames, Such disappointed time sometimes ends as a blessing so don't be sad dat u couldn't make it to Mirabel's home, OK! [/b]
24 Apr 2016 | 12:10
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Is there smthin else to this.... This girl sha.... Vict i trust u to tk necessary precautions nd steps... On the track.
24 Apr 2016 | 13:31
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Give her what she want and be free from her
24 Apr 2016 | 14:57
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Victor be careful ooooo
24 Apr 2016 | 16:55
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Nxt pls.
24 Apr 2016 | 19:48
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@kene ...I dnt think dats d best advice.....Dnt forget five minutes enjoyment can lead u from d rightful path....I trust Victor he won't do it.....
25 Apr 2016 | 02:18
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Dis Dorothy gal nawa o
25 Apr 2016 | 09:26
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 14 [/color] Although, I initially woke up thinking someone was trying to kill me or something, so i rose up aggressively and pushed the intruder away immediately before i could even know who the person was. Me: D'thy? what are u trying to do?? Dorothy: Relax Vickie (crawling towards me) I promise i won't scream like i use to In this kind of situation, i had to insult her harshly so she'll get angry and leave me alone,,, besides, she can't tempt me because i don't like her. Actually, i hate her but i won't admit it because it's not proper to hate someone. Me: Is this how desperate and cheap u are? do u know why i can't fall for your pleas? it's because i hate u with passion, i hate seeing u entirely because of how cheap u are. You're such a biatch! Dorothy: What? all these coming out from your mouth Victor? Yea i act like a biatch, i do behave like a whore i know. But do u know i only do that when i'm around u? Go find out about me and get to know the kind of person i am. Go tell them that you've had sex with me and see what their reaction will be like. Me: What are u trying to say? Dorothy: No guy has ever kissed me not to mention have sex with me if not u alone. I should proof it? U deflowered me didn't u? **I didn't say anything,,, but i did what she was asking me** Dorothy: Answer me (sounding like she wanted to cry) why can't u answer me? How old was i when u deflowered me? I was 17. Although i planned not to do anything like that until i clock 18 but it was u,,, you've always been my crush. Even when u were dating girls anyhow u wanted, i didn't stop liking u, even though i felt bad about it. I broke my 18-years rule the day i had sex with u. I opened my legs for u whenever u wanted thinking it's the only way i could have u for myself, i waited for u to officially ask me to date u but u never did. I'm still intact as u left me,,, I can still give u the chance here and now even if its for a minute to confirm if i'm lieing or not. **Speechless and confused me** Dorothy: I'm not a bitch Victor (Now dressing up) I have never been one except to u i guess... thanks for all the insults,,, i brought this upon my self anyway (Grabbed her hand bag and left) I didn't know what to say,,,, i dropped back unto the bed to think about the drama that just happened about a minute ago. I think i am the bad guy in this situation,,, i felt terrible. I didn't know about all what she said, I have always seen her as a free giver not sure of who she's given though. I went to her house the next day, her mother wasn't around and she was in her room with two of her friends who i also thought was in the same category with her, but who am i to judge what i don't know? I sent her younger brother to call her for me, she sent him back to me that she doesn't want to see me. I sent him back to her again with a message that, I won't leave there until i see her. She eventually showed up about 38 minutes later while i was already enjoying the movie i was watching,,,, "Fast & Furious" to be precise. Dorothy: What do u want now? or have u come for the continuation of your insults?? Me: Look D'thy... Dorothy: Call me Dorothy please Me: All the same, I came here to apologize for everything i did to,,,, I am really sorry. I regretted everything i did. Dorothy: Are u done? Me: See,,, I know i messed with u,I abused your feelings, I toiled with your emotions and all that,,,, I regretted my bad deeds towards u and to everyone it affected including myself. I called u names,,, I had the wrong impression about u. It was even the wrong impression i had that developed my anger and dislike towards u. I beg for your forgiveness Dorothy, please forgive me and let's be friends again Dorothy: Friends again U say? were we ever friends before?? U made me your sex mate and nothing else. U are a devil Victor! U used me, dumped me and then hate me for nothing. What did i ever do to u? is it a crime to give u my body just to get u to love me??! I gave u my everything,,, my body, any money i get i gave to u just for u to love and ask me out,,,, but what did i get? Pregnancy!! Me: What? Dorothy: Oh yes u heard me right! I put my life on the line when i had an abortion not to mention the torture i got from my mother. She tortured me for getting pregnant and even dealt with me more, when i couldn't provide the person responsible for it just to protect u. But what did i get? insults!! I overlooked u the other Sunday when U treated me that way, I just reached an understanding that maybe it was the preaching that manifested in u, not knowing that u really hate me. Me: I'm terribly sorry for everything i put u through,,, I never knew u went through all that. I can imagine the kind of pain you're feeling deep inside your heart right now because of me. I wish there's something i can do to erase the past, but there's nothing i can do but to plead for your forgiveness. (I went down on my knees) please forgive me Dorothy from your loving and humble heart, I beg of u... **Her eyes was already filled with tears** She raised me up and hugged me Dorothy: U really hurt me Victor Me: I know, and i am very sorry,,,, can i resume calling u D'thy now? Dorothy: If u wish We disengaged from the hug,,, I noticed she was trying to draw her head closer to kiss me or something.... Me: So,,, am i forgiven? Dorothy: Hhmmmm,,,, just partially Me: Partially? why? Dorothy: If u want my full forgiveness, U will have to do something for me Me: Something like? Dorothy: U don't worry about that, I shall let u know when i'm ready for it Me: okay... We talked and gisted about so many things,,, I also confessed blocking her line from calling me. I unblocked her on the spot while we were still talking before her friends showed up from inside. Dorothy: Oh,,,, I even forgot they're here,,,, Hey girls Girl1: U try well well no be small Dorothy: Make una no vex jare. Victor these are my besties, Mirabel and Salome aka Sally Cue Me: Mirabel? Dorothy: Yea,,, and Sally Cue. Me: Okay nice meeting u girls Mirabel: Nice meeting u too Sally Cue: It's nice meeting u too handsome **Mirabel laid on the couch while Salome abi Sally Cue sat at the other end** Sally Cue: Msteeeew,,, that's why i hate this chair, i can't watch the TV comfortably She stood up from where she sat and sat right beside me. I stood up to leave after seating uncomfortably for many minutes. They eventually let me go after a little debate on why i'm leaving too soon. I got home, continued the story i was reading online. Later on,,, Mirabel and i spoke on phone and i also chatted with Dorothy on whatsapp. Dorothy: My friend SallyCue seems to like u Me: Stop the joke please Dorothy: I'm being serious, she admitted it,,, although i warned her to get her mind off u Me: Why? Dorothy: Never mind,,,, what do u have for me? Me: Nothing o,,, just feeling sleepy Dorothy: Hhmmm *sad face* I just sent her a flower then bade her goodnight and went offline. [color =red]☆☆☆ TO BE CONTINUED ☆☆☆[/color][/b]
25 Apr 2016 | 09:30
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Wow first to comment, nice one vames
25 Apr 2016 | 09:51
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hmmmmmmmmm
25 Apr 2016 | 09:54
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Just don't try anything with dat Dorothy.... Face only Mirabel
25 Apr 2016 | 09:56
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interesting
25 Apr 2016 | 09:56
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yaya yoyo
25 Apr 2016 | 09:57
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first to comment
25 Apr 2016 | 09:57
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Nice one
25 Apr 2016 | 09:59
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for ur mind @lnetfunmiyahoo-com
25 Apr 2016 | 10:02
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Guy am proud you've finally tame your little vames
25 Apr 2016 | 10:04
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hmmm victor u again thanks to ur star that u have explained ur pass to Mirabel
25 Apr 2016 | 10:12
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i really feel for Dorothy.. sally abi cue dey well oo
25 Apr 2016 | 10:33
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hmm...Am marveled...
25 Apr 2016 | 10:39
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No comment for now
25 Apr 2016 | 10:39
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It a good thing you apologize to Dorothy but plz don't try any thing stupid with her
25 Apr 2016 | 10:48
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This story is getting more interesting in each episode
25 Apr 2016 | 10:52
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following Dorothy dats wat u get by giving ur self to a guy in dey name dat he will love u after enjoying himself.. my sister u are lieing bcos we guys Dont like a free giver lol
25 Apr 2016 | 10:55
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stupid girl
25 Apr 2016 | 11:05
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victor you did the right thing by asking for her forgiveness
25 Apr 2016 | 11:08
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Nxt pls.
25 Apr 2016 | 11:10
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I dey follow dis story bumper 2 bumper. Nice story!
25 Apr 2016 | 11:12
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9ic 1 Following
25 Apr 2016 | 11:16
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Handsome boy way na
25 Apr 2016 | 11:40
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U no finish with lola now u wan carry dorathy join
25 Apr 2016 | 12:09
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Diz victor keep many legacy woo
25 Apr 2016 | 12:19
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U did de ryt tin for once
25 Apr 2016 | 12:39
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@vict-vames, U beter go back to ur school else u are in for a big sorry show wth that ur new friend "Dorothy" abi na D'thy wey u dey call her, me, I no know oo
25 Apr 2016 | 12:43
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Jst be careful o
25 Apr 2016 | 12:58
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what you did was good Victor, just be careful it just a matter of day before you lose the president daughter (Mirabel)
25 Apr 2016 | 13:08
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Please don't mind that Dorothy or what's her name o.... She is your past oo... Just face mirabel...
25 Apr 2016 | 13:40
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friendship with the devil
25 Apr 2016 | 14:05
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Mirabel will skin u... Just dont get caught...
25 Apr 2016 | 14:16
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Chai o!! Vhiz Dorathy is beginning to feel like ya Gf o. Now, how will you tell her you can't have a relationship with her without her feeling used and angry all over again??. Datz why i tell people to mindful of each and everything they do!!
25 Apr 2016 | 14:27
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Na wa ohh
25 Apr 2016 | 14:37
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U shouldn't v gone to beg D'thy for forgiveness. Meanwhile, ur luv life is getting complicated.
25 Apr 2016 | 14:48
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am following
25 Apr 2016 | 14:51
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Becareful
25 Apr 2016 | 15:08
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Hmm omo na danger o
25 Apr 2016 | 16:12
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Some girls get demonic issues... Guys will be toasting her but she want another person
25 Apr 2016 | 17:43
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in yoruba voice all i can say is TUALE BABA,TUALE......this story is breathtaking.....bt mere looking at the story it seems vict vames is going to mess things up...i jst pray make this dorathy no put u for trouble and as for lola...(hmmmm) i think she is the brain behind the video that was uploaded on youtube (jst my thought though) Her own matter dey different cos thunder wey go fire her still dey do push up........more ink to ur pen @vict vames bt please dnt keep us in suspense for too long....I remain loyal
25 Apr 2016 | 17:47
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i pity you!
25 Apr 2016 | 18:02
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hmmmm interesting
25 Apr 2016 | 18:03
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hmmmm
25 Apr 2016 | 18:09
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I'm sure yhu never read dat of fb gal season 8, then yhu wil no it a suicid to hav two or more gals at affair
25 Apr 2016 | 18:49
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Following.. I lyk the way you reconcile with Dorothy
25 Apr 2016 | 19:16
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hmmm following
25 Apr 2016 | 19:21
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hmmm. Doraty is a sexy girl, iyah iyah oo
25 Apr 2016 | 20:10
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Guy...how u go take cope with them
25 Apr 2016 | 21:21
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My brother see as you want take fall for D'thy. I pity you oooo
26 Apr 2016 | 04:01
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Hmm still on d line
26 Apr 2016 | 04:50
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My guy focus on mirable,she is d best.
26 Apr 2016 | 06:32
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Hummmmmmmmm Self determination is the ever best thing in life
26 Apr 2016 | 07:14
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I think I like this Dorothy of a girl
26 Apr 2016 | 10:02
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Mirable done dey get plenty rival oh,,,,
26 Apr 2016 | 15:48
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hahaha see wetin u do that girl?? too bad.
26 Apr 2016 | 16:02
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U better leave dat dorothy of a gal nd face only mirable
26 Apr 2016 | 16:20
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Na sօ օօօօ . Horlamidey nd lilrossy He needs 2 face mirabel alone 2 avoid gobe
26 Apr 2016 | 17:58
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 15[/color] The next day, I told momma about my car,,,, that i don't want another car from Dad. But she wasn't happy about it. She doesn't like the idea of a girl spending for a guy,,, She advised me again telling me all sort of things. She said that, she'll also talk to Mirabel about it, to stop spending on me. She continued saying that, She can use her money to support your home when u get married if possible and not to be spending on me anyhow now. Telling me to wise up and be the man in the relationship and not otherwise. She added that she will be sending me extra money apart from my Dad's so that i won't depend on Mirabel. It was then she understands why i don't call home for money when I'm in school. She made me promise to be man enough like my Father. I didn't enjoy her advise at first, but when i later think about it,,, she's absolutely right. Later that day, I decided to call my Uncle the Engineer... But he didn't pick up, he could be busy or something. I called Promise, we spoke for a while about when we're resuming because the school has resumed already. She said she will resume next week, i told her i will be leaving home next tomorrow. She then changed her mind to resume in three days time. I called Mirabel, and the following conversation ensued after the pleasantries... Me: I shall be leaving home in two days time and u still haven't told me about the stuff u hid for me Mirabel: (Laughs) Did u even try to find it at all? Me: Well, i did tried Mirabel: I doubt if u put in your best to find it,,, I know u. Check inside your old school bag u hung on the wall Me: U came to my room? Mirabel: Yep, Nancy gave me a tour Me: So, she knew about the stuff? Mirabel: Yep but not the content Me: Okay, i will check it out after the call, So when are u going to school? Mirabel: You're going next tomorrow right? Me: Yep if nothing comes up Mirabel: Okay, see u then Me: Next tomorrow? Mirabel: Yes Me: Great, i miss u so much Mirabel: I miss u too sweetie After a little more chat, we ended the call. I went straight to my old school bag to fish out the stuff. I saw a parcel, i brought it out and sat on my bed to rip the wraps open ... **Phone Rings** I picked it up. Me: Hello Sir Uncle: How are u?  I saw your missed call Me: I'm fine sir,,, I just called to hear from u Uncle: Okay, I was busy supervising a building site. So how's everything, studies and all? Me; All fine sir, but I'm at home still on break Uncle: Okay, it's alright. Call me when u get back to school Me: Okay, bye sir Uncle: Okay, greet Naomi for me That's what he calls Nancy, saying he don't like the name 'Nancy' Me: I will sir and greet  Jonas and Justina for me Uncle: They'll hear,,,,, take care ko Me: Yes sir Uncle: Alright **Hangs up** I ripped off the wraps, it was an iPad and a 4G SMILE wireless modem. Then i saw a piece of note that read.... "The small device is a 4G wireless modem containing 10gigabybe of data that u can be using without subscribing with your phone anymore. It will be renewed every month but u shouldn't worry about the subscription, it's in place to be renewed automatically and u will be getting 10gigabyte of data every month. The wireless password is ************ and please share with Nancy, it can cover the whole house. It's charger is in there, U charge it when the battery runs out. The iPad is yours baby, go to the video folder and see something.       Bye for now my love" Woah! Unlimited data for me,,,,  enough internet activities for me. My happiness faded a little when i remembered what Momma told me. I switched on the iPad, and went straight to the video folder, there was only one video in it. I opened it and saw that it was the video tape of us kissing on campus. I was like what?! I quickly placed a call on her and she picked up almost immediately Me: Hello Mirabel Mirabel: Hi sweetheart, I've been expecting your call Me: Anything? Mirabel: Not really, I believe U've seen the package? Me: Yeah,,, Thanks sweetheart, i appreciate it big time but,,,, what's the video for? Mirabel: U don't like it? Me: No as in, I thought u and your cousin got rid of it all? Mirabel: Yea, It's kinda romantic so i kept the last copy for myself  and u, but it seems u don't like it Me: Not like that babe,,, its just that, u and your cous did a lot to get it off the internet and individual's devices, so what if it get leak again? Mirabel: Who is going to leak it?  Me or u? Me: Babe, U should understand that anything can happen,,, it's truly romantic, i know, and it can be a good memory of us being together but anything can happen dear Mirabel: What can happen? Me: If anyone apart from u and i get to know about it, then it's out Mirabel: How can u be so sure? Me: I watch a lot of movies babe Mirabel: So, U are telling me that, Lola and Cynthia can't be trusted? Me: What? They know about it? Mirabel: Sure, it was even their idea to keep it and share to u as well Me; Mirabel..... Mirabel: What? Me: Tell me, who specifically brought the idea? Mirabel: Lola,,, why? Chai oh!! [color =red]☆☆☆ TO BE CONTINUED ☆☆☆[/color][/b]
27 Apr 2016 | 04:11
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First to comment... Lola really mean Victor. It's better he tell Mirabel about what she's been up to or he should record their conversation.
27 Apr 2016 | 04:36
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hmmm...lola chai
27 Apr 2016 | 04:37
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Lola is a devil.
27 Apr 2016 | 04:39
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lol Lola wan finish you your mum is right o see what i have been telling you shaa do n come back no be only Mirabel dey miss you..
27 Apr 2016 | 04:42
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[b]Lol funny u @Promzy[/b]
27 Apr 2016 | 04:48
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zvazvinhu
27 Apr 2016 | 04:54
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Lola want to ruin your relationship
27 Apr 2016 | 04:55
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dey will soon trap both of u again
27 Apr 2016 | 05:03
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I Dont knw what victor is still waiting for tell Mirabel everything ... well it will burst na me nd u ....for were is only u... so ntin kwansyn me lol
27 Apr 2016 | 05:15
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lol, vhiz LoLa of a girl wil gv yuh HBP oh.
27 Apr 2016 | 05:31
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Mmn Lola badoo
27 Apr 2016 | 05:52
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lol funny kinni
27 Apr 2016 | 05:58
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Victor be careful
27 Apr 2016 | 06:09
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Hope say lola no go finish u, wit d way she dy arrange tinx...
27 Apr 2016 | 06:28
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It's time to Man up.u have to take lead of the relationship and try to put Lola aside. Record ur conversation and hold it as evidence threat against her
27 Apr 2016 | 06:44
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my guy be careful with lola oo, my advise for u
27 Apr 2016 | 07:07
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Lola d bad girl
27 Apr 2016 | 07:08
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Chai! A she devil
27 Apr 2016 | 07:19
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Open ? up to her or else
27 Apr 2016 | 07:19
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Hmm, beta tel Mirabel al about Lola b4 is too late
27 Apr 2016 | 07:27
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U beta open up nd convince her 2 delete it or else your own don be
27 Apr 2016 | 07:32
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Doom.. Mirabel is so naive
27 Apr 2016 | 07:44
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The best thing is to tell Mirabel what happened
27 Apr 2016 | 07:49
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YOU ARE IN FOR A LONG THING, NAMESAKE, OR (TRIBE-SAKE).
27 Apr 2016 | 07:50
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Victor use your head
27 Apr 2016 | 07:54
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pls, jst open up to her
27 Apr 2016 | 07:57
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Lola wants to play de smart gal
27 Apr 2016 | 08:04
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Victor trying to solve Lola problem on ur own wont help cos of hw Mirabel trust her U better let the cat out of the bag.
27 Apr 2016 | 08:11
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she is leaking it again
27 Apr 2016 | 08:17
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Dz lola qurl enh
27 Apr 2016 | 09:05
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I Smell Trouble
27 Apr 2016 | 09:27
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Lola again
27 Apr 2016 | 09:40
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Vict I think its high time you tell Mirabel about Lola's threat
27 Apr 2016 | 09:48
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dah lola ehn
27 Apr 2016 | 10:05
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Delete dat lola
27 Apr 2016 | 10:25
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Lolxx... lola wise small
27 Apr 2016 | 10:27
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lolz lola again
27 Apr 2016 | 10:36
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lola...... Hmmmm
27 Apr 2016 | 10:51
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Lola is up to something...I believe she leaked d first one
27 Apr 2016 | 11:01
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Her plan don work
27 Apr 2016 | 11:23
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Ploblem
27 Apr 2016 | 11:37
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Mirabel doesn't even know the kind of person Lola is.....Mirabel trusts so easily which is very bad.
27 Apr 2016 | 11:46
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hmmmmm Lola d bad Girl
27 Apr 2016 | 11:47
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Or should i call her d serpent
27 Apr 2016 | 11:48
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Bro u acted very well
27 Apr 2016 | 11:53
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I dey scents trouble in the future.
27 Apr 2016 | 12:05
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Chaiii... Lola aqain???
27 Apr 2016 | 12:14
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Lola is not to be trusted
27 Apr 2016 | 12:14
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Lollybabe comes to play again..... Nxt pls
27 Apr 2016 | 13:08
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Nice Story Dear
27 Apr 2016 | 13:23
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U are doomed
27 Apr 2016 | 13:43
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Danger at d corner. Lola will still blackmail u guys with d video. I believe dat she has a copy of it.
27 Apr 2016 | 14:13
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don't say I didn't warned you to let Mirabel know of Lola's attitude towards you
27 Apr 2016 | 14:28
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lola!!!!!!
27 Apr 2016 | 14:42
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FOLLOWING
27 Apr 2016 | 14:48
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why can't mirable do something on her own without involving her so called best friends,some things are meant to be kept secret bt nt in mirables part...she jst behaves like a freaking naive little girl...(she should jst wise up and knw that nt all besties are genuie,some can change overnight)....well victor should open up to mirable cos i believe she will come back to her right senses and take up her responsibilities
27 Apr 2016 | 16:11
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hmmmm, serious trouble is still coming u victor
27 Apr 2016 | 16:27
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Hmmmmm. Des girls sef. Watch your side ooooo
27 Apr 2016 | 16:53
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Ha
27 Apr 2016 | 17:32
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She Devil @lola
27 Apr 2016 | 18:01
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Following
27 Apr 2016 | 18:01
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i smell trouble ahead
27 Apr 2016 | 18:21
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speechless for this lola girl
27 Apr 2016 | 18:41
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I don tire 4 dis story
27 Apr 2016 | 19:00
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hmmm
27 Apr 2016 | 19:13
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trouble
27 Apr 2016 | 20:27
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The problem with some guys is that they don't know when to open up! Victor wise up!
27 Apr 2016 | 22:58
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Hmmmm.
28 Apr 2016 | 02:56
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Chai... Nawa ooo.
28 Apr 2016 | 03:00
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Next waiting
28 Apr 2016 | 03:33
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U should no wot to do man, lola is her best nd child hood friend so use ur head. Put ur phone on record, put a cal to her, race up d issue, ask her her reasons for al those acts of her and let her speak while ur phn records it. Wit dt u can hv some evidens to prove 4 Mirabel to belive al u wil hv to tel her about her best frnd.
28 Apr 2016 | 04:44
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no update yet......... @vict-vames u are wanted..... report here asap
28 Apr 2016 | 06:06
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[b]@Frankkay can't make it today,,, tomorrow [/b]
28 Apr 2016 | 06:51
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chaii dis Lola of a gal na devil oo
28 Apr 2016 | 08:01
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Chai o..serious gobe . . . Just joining d season two..ts gud to b here again
28 Apr 2016 | 08:37
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OK nah bro no lele ......
28 Apr 2016 | 10:37
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Devil among human being dat lola's name
28 Apr 2016 | 16:59
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Okay
28 Apr 2016 | 17:47
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Thought she was the one shared it online?
28 Apr 2016 | 17:54
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hmmmmm yawa beta smart up Bro
29 Apr 2016 | 03:48
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 16[/color] No human is so perfect that challenges won't come his/her way. We need wisdom and courage to overcome any kind of challenges or trials. Get wisdom and boldness, be a Victor over challenges and trials that comes your way and your life will be successful. WE NEED WISDOM AND BOLDNESS! ☆☆☆CONTINUES☆☆☆ Me: Mirabel, the videotape should be our 100% privacy until we're clear to take our relationship public. Our Parents needs to approve our relationship so that, whenever anything as such gets to the internet, it will be a news and not a scandal. Mirabel: Baby, what can i do? Me: Tell me where u keep the videotape Mirabel: It's in my iPad, my computer and i backed it up in my external drive. Me: Your friends have access to your iPad and computer right? Mirabel: Yeah Me: Mirabel there are things that i need to tell u about,,, but that'd be when we meet. For now, U should delete the video from your iPad and computer then hide the external drive in a secret place. Mirabel: Okay Me: Or u can back it up with your genius cousin Ike and get rid of the drive. Mirabel: Okay.... Me: Sweetheart, please watch your friends closely,,,  they might be something else Mirabel: Why did u say that? Me: We'll talk about that when we meet,,, do u trust me? Mirabel: Of course! and with all my heart Me: Good, and u know i will never do anything that'd hurt u Mirabel: Yes i know,,, what's all this about dear? Me: Nothing much, just investing my innocence and good intentions towards u, just in case something comes up in the nearest future Mirabel: Is that so? Me: Yep Mirabel: I hope u are not doing anything illegal in the course of our relationship? Me: **Laughs**  illegal? Mirabel: Yes illegal, and u know what that means Me: I know dear, I'm very clean Mirabel: I know my love Me: Thanks again for the gifts, i really appreciate it Mirabel: Thanks for accepting it Me: She's even thanking me again, woah,,,, what a lovely girlfriend I've got, I'm so lucky to have u Mirabel: I'm happy to have u too,,, Mum knows about u already Me: Your mum the first lady? Mirabel: Yea Me: How? when? is she Ok with it? what did she say? Mirabel: Relax love, Mum is the best, and so my Dad Me: U haven't answered my question Mirabel: I guess we'll have a lot to talk about when we meet at school Me: What does that mean? Mirabel: I will answer your question when we meet, or we should shift it to tomorrow? Me: No, I'm not prepared for tomorrow, i will wait till we meet Mirabel: Its Okay... Me: So,,, goodnight? Mirabel: Alright dear, lemme take a shower Me: May i join u? Mirabel: Only if u can Me: Yea i can't now, maybe when we get back to School Mirabel: Good night sweetheart, love u... Me: Love u too **Hangs up** Well, well, well,,,, Little by little our relationship is going forward. Both our mothers knows about our relationship, now remaining the bosses, our fathers. I took my new iPad and wireless modem and started browsing immediately, It's so fast. I set everything in the iPad, my google account, whatsapp, Facebook among others. I downloaded more than 15 applications and over 20 games. I spent my night on the internet browsing and downloading till dawn. After the morning activities, Momma and Nancy left for the shop leaving me and the boss at home. The boss was in the parlor working with his laptop, he goes to his office anytime he likes because he is the boss and he can work at home using his laptop. I called Mirabel, recited a poem for her and professed my love for her. I silence my phone before i went to my bed to have a cool sleep. I had a daymare, I saw myself getting married to Lola, and i wasn't happy . It was as if i was forced to marry her. Something was about to happen when the minister asked if there's anyone here that have a reason why the two of us should not be together, I saw someone like a figure from afar,,, i felt some kind of feeling instantly before i was interrupted by the boss (my dad) he called me to open the gate for him that he's going to the office. After he left, I tried to sleep again but i couldn't sleep anymore. I kept thinking about the dream, why did i dream of getting married to Lola of all people, and who was the one that wanted to crash the wedding? I had to pray seriously that moment using Isaiah 7:7 to terminate the dream from ever coming to pass. I struggled with courage to wash my clothes as i will be leaving the following day,,,, i so much hate washing. Why?  because i started washing my clothes when my elder sister Joy got married last year and left our house. Thank God there is a washing machine at the house Mirabel gave me to live in. After washing, i spent the rest of my day on the internet, without even checking the games and apps i downloaded. I met new cool friends online especially at coolval22.com i love online friends better than close ones. Later in the night, the Boss called me to his room to talk as Father and Son. Boss: U are my son, and i expect to see myself in u,,, but it doesn't seem so yet. Why I'm trying to trust u now is because, many youths of our society start doing wayward life on higher institutions but instead, u got better. Your mother has been very happy and pleased with u recently, she says you've really changed, that u are now a good sensible boy and all that. For me, its your grades in school that will make me to trust u completely. If your first semester result comes out, and u performed well beyond my expectations,,,, Then i will purely understand what your mother has been telling me, I will surprise u, I will provide for u whatever u will need, i will support u in any way that will enhance your motivation. I thank God for blessing me with those jobs, with it and other connections from it will make me fulfill my promise. For these jobs has increased my level, professionals higher than me were dropped because of me. I don't know how it happened but i know its a favour from God. So please, make me believe in u, so that i can trust and know that u won't cause any trouble, then i can fight for u no matter what to prove my son's innocence. Are u following? Me: Yes sir Boss: Good,,,, as u are going back to school, do not keep bad companies, be prayerful, study hard and make me proud. Stay away from girls,,, Victor stay away from girls,,,, that's the area that i don't trust u with.... i know what I'm saying,,, abstain from them completely. It's better to keep one than be flirting around,,, but I'm not telling u to be in relationship yet. U may probably get my blessing and the go ahead to have a girlfriend on three conditions. First and fore-most, your first year results must please me, both first and second semesters,,,, secondly, u must introduce her to me and your mother, which means,,,, you will have her as your future wife and that's if i find her suitable and worthy. And thirdly which is very important even to God,,,, U must not have sex with her and to anyone else. For it is only for married couples. Do I make myself clear? Me: Yes sir Boss: Do we understand each other? Me: Yes Boss,,,, sorry, sir Boss: So u will go and write down everything u need, sum it and bring it to me Me: Ok sir He then prayed blessings for me before i left his room to write down my needs. I didn't even know what to write, i feel like I'm okay. My bank account is still intact, i didn't use the money that was sent to me when i was in school. I just wrote down some things with a total of  #6,800 and gave to him. He looked at the paper and looked at me, he looked at the paper again and then went inside to his room and came with some Naira in his hand and gave to me. Boss: That's 20,000 you're holding, U may need it for other expenses Me: Thank u sir. Boss: Its okay... Momma also gave me her own piece of advice, both morally, educationally and otherwise. She asked how much my Dad gave me, I told her the amount,,, she then gave me #25,000  and promised to backup some money in my bank account. I tried to resist it but she insisted and left me with no choice. I felt like too much money, i gave Nancy #5,000 and she hugged me crazily and happily.  [color =red]☆☆☆ TO BE CONTINUED ☆☆☆[/color][/b]
29 Apr 2016 | 06:18
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Na wooo no post yet
29 Apr 2016 | 06:18
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No alow d blessing of boss live u oh
29 Apr 2016 | 06:36
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School tinz
29 Apr 2016 | 06:44
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Victor, u are lucky that u are a boy like me, if it where to be that u are a girl. I WOULD HAVE LOVE U LIKE DIE.
29 Apr 2016 | 06:46
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Ur parents are very lovely and caring..good one
29 Apr 2016 | 07:33
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I just hope it end well for you
29 Apr 2016 | 07:35
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Diz lola wanna mak things bak to there grass root just give her wat she want lol
29 Apr 2016 | 07:46
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hmm Lola ooo is there ooooo
29 Apr 2016 | 07:48
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I pray that dream should not come to past
29 Apr 2016 | 07:55
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Nice one Mr. Vames... Just becareful of lola... She is gonna come out even stronger now..
29 Apr 2016 | 08:09
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9c one kip it up
29 Apr 2016 | 08:30
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wow, nice one
29 Apr 2016 | 08:47
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too much money...abeg ride on
29 Apr 2016 | 08:47
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too much money...abeg ride on following
29 Apr 2016 | 08:49
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Victor I can sense a trouble but let be going
29 Apr 2016 | 09:10
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u don get money
29 Apr 2016 | 09:50
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following........ I pray u will over come any seduction power of Lola dats dey only way u can marry mirabel..... DAT Lola ma confam winch....
29 Apr 2016 | 11:16
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d badest.. Big boy
29 Apr 2016 | 11:16
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Hahaha... Nancy go flex her friends wella
29 Apr 2016 | 11:16
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following
29 Apr 2016 | 11:23
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i smell gays here ooo . still following
29 Apr 2016 | 11:24
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getting married to weird Lola in the dream???...pls I've helped u to rebuke it too.
29 Apr 2016 | 11:38
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Hmmmm.... interesting
29 Apr 2016 | 11:42
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Oga oooo..
29 Apr 2016 | 12:01
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is always good to have a good family that helps both morally, financially and other aspect of life
29 Apr 2016 | 12:11
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rich boi na u o
29 Apr 2016 | 12:12
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confirm
29 Apr 2016 | 12:21
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Guy! Don't waste time in telling Mirable all that she needs to know about Lola else she will create a big problem between you both. Remember, she is Mirable's best friend and she might turn her against you if care is not taken. Dad is repeating what Mum said about avoiding sex. Victor! don't ever trouble Mirable with it again oooo. See Yr head! You are now forming big boy because Mirable is now stuffing you with enough money that for a whole semester, your list is just N6, 800? Yr Dad would eventually suspect you the more
29 Apr 2016 | 12:56
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Lucky follow me folo folo folo me.. I pray diz guy change completely nd act fast abt dat lola issue.
29 Apr 2016 | 13:07
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FOLLOWING YOU
29 Apr 2016 | 13:10
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love to witness d school scene, u were treated like a kid at home
29 Apr 2016 | 13:13
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episode 16 not showing
29 Apr 2016 | 13:23
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eheheh,,big bro
29 Apr 2016 | 13:36
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wow please send me of the money ooooooo..lols can't wait to see u at school
29 Apr 2016 | 13:53
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interesting next plz
29 Apr 2016 | 14:24
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Hmmm, abstain from sex not knowing your the baba of sex
29 Apr 2016 | 16:15
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you are very lucky that your parents are cool .......
29 Apr 2016 | 16:37
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Money everywhere i d feel ur life
29 Apr 2016 | 16:47
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@Vict-Vames e be like sey money don tire uhm u know what? I fit be ur bank or how u see the mater?
29 Apr 2016 | 17:13
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[b]Una try well well,,, Buh its okay,,, for those that want part of my money should send me his/her account details and ATM password as well,,, come on what are friends for???[/b]
29 Apr 2016 | 17:23
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is like u are on top of d world nw
29 Apr 2016 | 18:44
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Heheheh. bahd baddo baddest.. Common dab for d boss dat knwz his son z. Baba for d galz
29 Apr 2016 | 19:22
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Wooow Boos 3 conditions if u must hv a girl frnd... And d most important 1, com 2 think of it hv u kept dt or u hv already defile dt.... Vicky my man.
29 Apr 2016 | 19:39
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Victor is better u try ur best from getting into Lola trap.
29 Apr 2016 | 23:50
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see conditions o shaa do n come back mine is waiting for you
30 Apr 2016 | 01:30
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if u reach skul beta make d talk possible
30 Apr 2016 | 02:11
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Lol vic. 2 much moni. Bt u really need 2 pray or beta stil call pray band mak dem com pray 4 u concernin lola, cos i suspect ha moves o
30 Apr 2016 | 02:28
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Yeap gud1
30 Apr 2016 | 04:35
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Wht a family yhu hav, i wish my self also
30 Apr 2016 | 05:09
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Nice write up.. #next
30 Apr 2016 | 06:45
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Really enjoying dis tori just continue bro
30 Apr 2016 | 07:35
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Try n make gud grades in 1st n 2nd semester exams. Then, u r gud to introduce Mirabel to d boss.
30 Apr 2016 | 07:37
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I just love ur dad. I wish i had one like that.
30 Apr 2016 | 07:53
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Hy
30 Apr 2016 | 07:55
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Following
30 Apr 2016 | 10:03
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jst passing
30 Apr 2016 | 10:36
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I pray u conquer Lola cos she is a serious trouble @Vames...
30 Apr 2016 | 10:55
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nice one big bro
30 Apr 2016 | 11:41
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Hmmmm
30 Apr 2016 | 17:04
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Wow....**Lips sealed** Next Epiosde ah beg
30 Apr 2016 | 20:42
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U dey fuck up plus money ooo
1 May 2016 | 16:30
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Abeg, give me 5k too o, as ur sis frm anoda mother... Smiles! Nice 1
2 May 2016 | 00:53
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Victor,,, feed me more.
2 May 2016 | 06:27
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i don't like reading stories but yours just earn all my attention, i so much love this bro, keep it up... and i hope you tell Mirabel about Lola before it's too late
2 May 2016 | 10:02
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nice 1....Guy give mirabel belle make u marry her sharp sharp oo...b4 dat bitch so called lola go use Jazz on u n u will rejret EVERYTHING....
2 May 2016 | 12:23
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I love this advise
2 May 2016 | 14:09
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Big boy wit too much money
2 May 2016 | 15:44
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Still waiting for Episode 17 brother.
3 May 2016 | 01:11
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Boy better tell Mirabel about Lola Else you aint gonna like what she will do Interesting tho
3 May 2016 | 04:55
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I i neva stil understand d postin system of dz tori o, abi no be mon- fri postin ni?@vicky.......... Lng lif
3 May 2016 | 09:13
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No episode yet?
3 May 2016 | 16:32
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hmmmmmmmmmm
3 May 2016 | 16:51
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next episode boss... we are patiently waiting for the arrival of the episode Boss.
3 May 2016 | 17:21
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This is taking ages guy
3 May 2016 | 17:32
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Victor tell mirabel everything before it is too late
3 May 2016 | 17:33
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**
3 May 2016 | 18:43
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Oyar next
3 May 2016 | 19:00
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Next oooooo
4 May 2016 | 03:56
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 17[/color] The following morning, after our morning activities, i started getting ready to leave anything 11am. Momma arranged foodstuffs for me of which i declined the ones i don't like such as beans. I only collected small quality of it so i can prepare it with rice. After much preparation, i left some few minutes past 11 and arrive my apartment about an hour later. Did i mentioned where i was schooling? OK, I was schooling at the University Of Abuja studying Business Administration. I informed Mirabel of my arrival, she said she'll join me shortly. I also informed my Parents. My uncle told me to call him when i get to school but i don't want to,,,, I know he wants to give me money. I was about doing some clean up before i discovered that the place is even tidier than the way i left it. I was surprised a little because i was relieved from doing the cleaning. So,,, who else could have done it if not my lovely Mirabel. But how?? *I quickly dialed her line* Mirabel: Hello dear Me: Sweetheart,,, how did u do it? Mirabel: Do what? Me: The house, its cleaned up Mirabel; Oh yea,,,, I sent some cleaners with my guards to get it done. Hope they did well? Me: Sure, they did great. Thanks dear, Mirabel: Its okay... i think its my duty to clean for my boo especially when he's too lazy for house chores Me: I'm not lazy Mirabel: I know, that's why i said for house chores,,,, U re lazy on that Me: No I'm not Mirabel: Really? Me: Yeah Mirabel: Ok tell me, what do u do at your family house? And how often do u do your laundry? Me: Well,,, there's nothing much to do there and Mother and Nancy takes care of the few ones Mirabel: There u go,,,, there are some little things that u should be doing at home sweetheart Me: But i mop the floor Mirabel: After Nancy sweep the floor right? Why can't u sweep and mop alone?    Imagine, u started washing your own clothes just last year Me: What? Who told u that? Mirabel: Oops! Never mind, I will be with u shortly,,,,, and I'm coming with food. Not fried rice though, love u... *Hangs up* Chai! Nancy is a traitress!  Few minutes later, I went to the gate to check who was horning,,,, The car doesn't look familiar but i know it was Mirabel, she got another ride for another semester,,, cool. She drove in, parked, and then alighted from the car were Cynthia, Mirabel and Lola. But she didn't tell me that she'll be coming over with them,,,, Chaai Mirabel! Cynthia: Hi Victor? Me: Hello Cynthia,,, long time Mirabel ran towards me and gave me a cool romantic hug,,, I lifted her up and turned her around romantically and we shared a cool kiss while i was still holding her before i dropped her to her feet. Mirabel: I've missed u so much Me: I miss u too... Lola: Hello Vames **Smiling** Me: Lola, how are u?  how'd u know that name? Lola: Why don't u usher us in? instead of questioning us under this scorching sun **helping herself in** Cynthia looked around then joined Lola Mirabel: Let's go in na **pulling me** Me: Wait Mirabel: Why? Me: I thought u were coming alone so we can talk alone Mirabel: Yeah,,,, but they insisted on coming, that they would be bored at the lodge Me: We have some serious issues to tackle,,,, so how can we get to talk privately? Mirabel: Serious issues? what are u talking about? Me: I will tell u everything when we get to talk Mirabel: Okay uhmmm,,,, I will let them go while i spend the night here Me: Ok good Mirabel: Till then,,,, let's go in Me: Wait.... Mirabel: What now? They're waiting for us Me: **drawing her closer**  Do u know how much i've missed your kisses? Mirabel: Not now Victor Me: Come on... Mirabel: I miss u too but now is not the right time,,, I thought we have some serious issues to tackle? Me: Yeah... but my mind doesn't recognize the right time for kissing u,,, U should know that with u, every time is right... She started blushing while i draw her and placed my lips on hers and she responded.... Lola: The food is getting cold,,, do u guys mind? **Went back in** What will i do to this Lola sef?? Mirabel: Sorry dear, we're coming in now.....   Victor i'm going in now We went in together, Mirabel served the food. I don't know why she's the one doing it while Cynthia and Lola were there. The food wasn't fried rice and the drink wasn't hollandia yoghurt but the food was irish potatoes with egg and fried chicken with some kind of spice I've never seen before,,,,, with one nice orange juice like that which i later discovered that it was imported. Cynthia and Lola ate on their own, while Mirabel and I ate together but not in a romantic way because i wasn't comfortable with Lola's presence. After eating,,,, she (Mirabel) took all the dishes to wash. Her humbleness surprised me a lot,,, how can she, being the leader of their friendship and the President's Daughter be be doing dishes for her friends?? I really can't understand why. I helped her in the dishwashing of which she tried to decline but i superseded her. We wouldn't had completed the dishes without some cool kisses initiated by me.... we were yet interrupted by that Lola again! Lola: **Clears throat**  Do u have korean movies in this house?  I'm bored *This girl is annoyingly funny sha* Mirabel: Lola, there's no Korean movie here Lola: But he lives here, let him answer,,, he might have, who knows... Me: Mirabel answered u correctly Lola,,,, I don't even watch Koreans Lola: What? Why?? they're really good, U will love their movies just try it and see Me: Okay,,, maybe I'll try it out some time Lola: Yeah u should,,,, first u should try City hunter, Coffee prince, Playful kiss or Personal taste, Sea god or even Fugitive: Plan B it's awesome. Me: Okay... Lola: OMG! Please try as much as possible to watch Boys Before Flowers,,, I love the movie like crazy Mirabel: Lola follow me let's talk Lola: Talk about what? Mirabel: Follow me Lola: Okay, alright Mirabel: I mean now**walks away** Lola: I'm coming oh..... Vames sweetheart,,, long time no see I boldly brought out my phone from my pocket and start recording,,, I did it boldly so she won't notice my real motive. Me: What do U want from me? Lola: **laughs** Is that a question? Me: Yes it is a question and i demand an answer Lola: I don't need anything from U dear,,, wake up boo Me: I don't understand Mirabel: **cuts in from distance** Lola!!! Lola: Hey I'm coming!    got to go handsome,,, your girlfriend needs my attention *she winked at me and left* That's how the witch left without leaving any evidence for me to hold against her. I didn't know what they talked about.... Later in the evening, Mirabel and I lay on the couch together waiting for Lola and Cynthia to get going but they seem to be very comfortable. Mirabel: Don't u girls have any where to go? No party? No clubbing No dates and all? Lola: Since when do u care about that? Or aren't u the one preaching change on us? Mirabel: Ok now U have changed? Lola: Errrmmmmm,,,, I just don't feel like going anywhere. We just arrive campus na, we'll rest for today **58 minutes later** Mirabel: U girls can go,,,, I will spend the night here.   Lola? Cynthia? Cynthia? Lola?! Lola wake up jare!  **Hitting them to wake** Lola: **Sleepy** allow person to sleep na Mirabel: U should go to the lodge then, before it gets too late.  Lola? Lola! Lola is really a witch! Mirabel: (Whispering to me) What should we do now? Me: We'll leave them let them sleep here while we go inside the room Mirabel: Okay.... We went inside the room, Mirabel had a shower. She told me to join her of which i jumped up to feet before she declared that she was only joking. I told her that i will only shower that night if only i join her,,, She told me to suit myself. She came out after a few minutes Mirabel: Its your turn Me: Did we arrange for that? Mirabel: Alright, go and shower Me: I'm okay.... Mirabel: But u stinks Me: I told u that, i won't shower if not with u,,,, so I'm keeping to my word Mirabel: Okay,,,, but u will keep your distance oh,,, and we'll only talk Me: (Seductively) Are u sure about that? Mirabel: Hold it there, don't even think about it... Me: Really? Mirabel: I'm very serious (boldly) Me: Okay,,, its alright, i didn't intend to do anything anyway Mirabel: Says your mouth but can that thing down there attest to that? (Using her face to point at my private area that is nodding on its own) Me: Hey stop looking at it,,,, it got mind on its own and its alive because of the available frequency Mirabel: So I'm the frequency? Me: Yes of course, its not my fault that its nodding like that. I can only control it as its master but can't stop it from nodding to available frequency. Its like that, so can we talk now? Mirabel: Alright, what is it that u want to tell me about ? Me: Its about your' fr...... **Knocks on the door twice then came in without waiting for permission** Lola: I need to take a shower, sorry i had to wear this, can't find anything else to put on **walks into the bathroom** She was wearing my shirt. I was stunned and speechless so was Mirabel. She finally came out after spending almost 30 minutes in the bathroom. She laid on the floor Lola: Goodnight guys,,,, woah the floor is so cool I thought Mirabel was going to get angry and react, but she actually looks as if she wanted to laugh while i was burning inside of me Before i could say 'Mi' the door opened without knocking Cynthia: (Sleepy) So all of u camped here and left me all alone in the parlor,,,, msteeeww **She also laid on floor side by side with Lola** Mirabel started laughing out,,, I looked at her with an angry face. [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
4 May 2016 | 06:30
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that lola ehhh e go finish u
4 May 2016 | 06:52
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u better open up to Mirabel before Lola spoil ur relationship cos I think she is following u around during ur holiday.nice write up bro more grease to ur elbow
4 May 2016 | 06:59
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[b] @otegbeyeisrael I will finish her first @Amos thanks bro[/b]
4 May 2016 | 07:07
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This Lola ehn.... Hmm Victor careful o
4 May 2016 | 07:17
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Lol witchy witchy lola
4 May 2016 | 07:20
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chaii,,which kind witch is ds Lola sef,,,, Vict be careful oo
4 May 2016 | 07:25
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Hey dude your plans didn't work out well
4 May 2016 | 07:29
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LOL dat lola na one kind gobe bae
4 May 2016 | 07:37
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uhm,,
4 May 2016 | 07:42
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lolz no games for u Vict just hide ur thing and sleep
4 May 2016 | 07:43
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weldne,,,nxt!!
4 May 2016 | 07:43
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i h8t diz lola.
4 May 2016 | 07:52
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am falling for dis Lola oooo chain d gal get brain die even Cynthia is up to some mischief
4 May 2016 | 07:53
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am falling for dis Lola oooo chai d gal get brain die even Cynthia is up to some mischief
4 May 2016 | 07:53
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lolz
4 May 2016 | 07:54
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Which kind witchy witchy be dis Lola self
4 May 2016 | 08:09
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LOL she knows Vict will tell Mira abt her advances daz y she is snooping around them. Nice write up
4 May 2016 | 08:16
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Lola is a devil
4 May 2016 | 08:17
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u better open up to mirabel before find out on her own
4 May 2016 | 08:19
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If only you can avoid her
4 May 2016 | 08:28
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All na setup
4 May 2016 | 08:42
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lol woh d hell is wronq wiv dis lola nw?
4 May 2016 | 08:50
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This lola is just something else
4 May 2016 | 09:00
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nawa for dis lola o
4 May 2016 | 09:07
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dat lola is a devil u beta explain tinz to ur babe before she implicate u
4 May 2016 | 09:09
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BAD MARKET
4 May 2016 | 09:10
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Wic kind gal diz lola be?
4 May 2016 | 09:12
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Witches!! That Lola get plan.. Vames better make ur own plans ahead of hers....
4 May 2016 | 09:17
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Lolxx... lola again
4 May 2016 | 09:18
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This Lola na confirm witch o see as she dey use style the follow them around so that Vict no go tell Mirabel anything
4 May 2016 | 09:23
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Common man, act like a man n hit the nail on the head. Preferably in her presence sef...
4 May 2016 | 09:25
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Lola na chief witch oooo... Na girl fit dragggggg u enter grave
4 May 2016 | 09:37
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I swear Lola nah witch
4 May 2016 | 09:39
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Next
4 May 2016 | 09:40
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Vict vames bro nice one job welldone. Buh queez nd try to tell mirable ohhhh ah swear lola go spoil everytin
4 May 2016 | 09:40
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Loving this
4 May 2016 | 09:40
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a beg try finish her too @vames
4 May 2016 | 09:51
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Ooooboi eehh..this lola like to dey pour sand for another person garri...kikikiki @ vict vames you go hear am from lola...MORE INK TO YOUR PEN
4 May 2016 | 09:55
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let me reserve my comment
4 May 2016 | 09:56
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u are in deep problem....Mirabel z not helping matter at all
4 May 2016 | 10:05
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Dis mirabel or what's her name is very stupid..... You just dey blame vames... Mirabel too is not giving him time to talk abeg....
4 May 2016 | 10:13
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Lol! I like. This lola.. Somebody has to keep u on ur toes.... She is just like the Damon salvatore... Let's see if ur love for mirabel is strong enough to resist lola advances...
4 May 2016 | 10:34
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dz lola b witch
4 May 2016 | 10:38
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D girl na wichy wichy she be
4 May 2016 | 10:41
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Kip deceiving urself till she backfires it on u
4 May 2016 | 10:53
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abeg don't allow Lola to finish u oooooo Dis gai is new here
4 May 2016 | 10:57
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abeg dont allow Lola to finish u oooooooo Dis gai is new here
4 May 2016 | 11:01
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hehehe bad markets everywhere....
4 May 2016 | 11:03
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careful guy,,dnt fall for her
4 May 2016 | 11:04
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this girl is a witch
4 May 2016 | 11:25
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Victor and lola.. Lola and Mirabel... hmmn dis Lola na 1 kind witch... Itz now time 4 u 2 open up 2 mirabel...
4 May 2016 | 11:42
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Lol they don plan for you
4 May 2016 | 11:47
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Lola is ready to do nd undo
4 May 2016 | 11:50
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hmmmmm if it is me I can t take this trash o I will send her out by my self wic kind winch she be nah... vames beter do dey right thing b4 is too late....
4 May 2016 | 12:02
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lola wat ur problem
4 May 2016 | 12:10
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lolzzzz,,,,,,,,,,,,i dey pity dis vames oooo
4 May 2016 | 12:21
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wow intresting lola go cast u oo take time
4 May 2016 | 12:26
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nawa dis is getting out of hand n marable is just laughing I pity you
4 May 2016 | 12:48
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nawa dis is getting out of hand n mirable is just laughing I pity you
4 May 2016 | 12:48
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dis Lola na confirm witch .... Vict no worry I go help u go village for her
4 May 2016 | 12:58
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lola is sumtin else vict u beta b careful around her
4 May 2016 | 13:31
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be careful vames lola is dangerous
4 May 2016 | 13:39
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Lola is on a mission, d early u tell mirabel the better 4 u
4 May 2016 | 13:42
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Where is my own presidents daughter ohhhhh! Where Re u nah? Av got sweeter love for you OH. Call me on 070378309xx. Lols
4 May 2016 | 14:07
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Do u know that? Lola is the most rediculous being on earth @vict vames
4 May 2016 | 14:36
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Pls vames, i think mirable needs to know before this thing turns to something else.
4 May 2016 | 14:39
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This Lola is something else!. Ride on Bro
4 May 2016 | 14:44
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The truth must be spoken at all times. Tell her the truth that lola her friend wants to ruin the relationship
4 May 2016 | 15:07
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Lola!!!! am burning
4 May 2016 | 15:09
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This lola is a mother witch
4 May 2016 | 16:24
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Lola bi witch or @vames
4 May 2016 | 16:39
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Lola na amebo, winch, killjoy.
4 May 2016 | 16:45
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Lola is definitely on a mission of "Operation put asunder in that relationship" and yu have to step up ti your own game Victor. The girl has a lot of control over Mirable that it's becoming scary with her pranks.
4 May 2016 | 17:15
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hmmm next bro
4 May 2016 | 18:25
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Wooow @ last episod 17 hia u ar. Lola is up to somtin n u hv 2 act fast @vicky, nd dnt be too upset to her distraction it could a delay to get more evidence
4 May 2016 | 18:58
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Winch..mtchew
4 May 2016 | 19:17
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So Naive
4 May 2016 | 19:18
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Witchesssss!
4 May 2016 | 20:01
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This is really mad. Can this lola just leave for a while
4 May 2016 | 20:01
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Victor abeg tell ur gal frnd b4 lola starts story dat touches d heart
5 May 2016 | 05:13
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U don get 3wives b dat
5 May 2016 | 10:21
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i ve sum filin dat mirable nd lola re planin sumtin 2geda cos mirable z nt even givin vames d chance to voice it out... but all d xame lola z a bastard daughter of a thousands father
5 May 2016 | 16:44
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lose urslf frm lola's bond
5 May 2016 | 20:46
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Onto d nxt one....
7 May 2016 | 01:29
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Lola is really a witch, Vames be a man and act accordingly or you will regret later
7 May 2016 | 02:10
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Waiting... Next..plz
7 May 2016 | 08:13
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Hnmmm...
7 May 2016 | 13:14
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[b]I sincerely I apologize for the late updates,,,, And I appreciate you all that voted for me, Thanks Sweet Readers [/b] [b][color =blue]EPISODE 18[/color] During the night, I felt something rubbing my feet up to my leg,,, I quickly grabbed my phone and switched on the light to the direction only to see Lola smiling at me by this time of the night **What a witch** I adjusted and laid back, this time holding Mirabel very closely till i managed to sleep. I woke up the following morning feeling a slight headache but kept it to myself not telling Mirabel. I was alone in the room when i woke up,,, I went to check if they were still around, I got to the parlor and heard their voices in the kitchen. I went back inside to brush my teeth and had my bath as well. Of course I didn't feel good when Mirabel said I stinks last night. Mirabel: Honey where are you? Me: I'm in the bathroom Mirabel: Ok hurry up' Breakfast is served Me: Alright give me a minute Mirabel: Or may I join you? **She wants to trick me again, once bitten twice shy** Me: No need for that, I will be done in a minute Mirabel: Are you sure you don't want me to come? Me: Yeah Mirabel: Okay,,, I will be with the girls in the guest room Me: Wait dear were you serious about joining me? Mirabel: (Laughs) Of course not, enjoy your bath dear *Hhmmmm,,,, bitten twice* I had my bath, dressed up then went for breakfast. I got ready to leave, I told Mirabel to come back later in the day to talk on the matter at hand, She agreed to come before they left.  Home alone and you know what that means,,, thinking of what to do to while away time and other weird imaginations. First thing i tried to was to watch TV, I got bored and switched to video games before i realized something. That I have always wanted to use my laptop to surf the internet. Now I have the means with my Smile 4G wireless modem. I dashed to my room at once to get my laptop and wireless modem. I got them, switched them on, connected the laptop with the wireless modem and gained internet access in no time and i let out a satisfactory smile. I downloaded so many softwares that i have always wished to have in my system. They seized the power, I on the generator because I was so into the internet and can't leave it not even for a minute. I was so in to it that i didn't know when i passed lunch time, yet I didn't feel hungry but I'm actually hungry **Phone Rings** Me: Hello Promzy Promise: Hi are you at home? Me: Yeah, what's up? Promise: I'm around, on my way to your place Me: Okay,,, please do me a favour Promise: What? Me: Errmmmm,,, help pass by an eatery and buy me something to eat,,,, something simple like maybe meatpie and burger,,, don't worry about drink, I have some Promise: I haven't even agreed yet and you're already telling me what to do Me: I know you can't refuse me Promise: Really? what if i don't have enough money with me?? Me: Please Promzy, I will pay you as soon you get here,,, I'm very hungry biko Promise: Okay,,, I will get it Me: Thanks dear Promise: And what have you been doing that you couldn't get yourself something to eat? Me: It's a long story Promise: What's the long story on not having lunch again? Me: *Laughs* You won't understand,,, get here first Promise: Okay... **Hangs Up** I continued browsing and downloading till she arrived a couple of minutes later. She gave me a cool hug when i opened the gate for her before i ushered her in to the house. Promise: The place is looking really good, who did it? Me: What are you insinuating now? Promise: Come on,,, you and know that you didn't do it Me: And if i say i actually did it? Promise: Then I'll say you're lying Me: Please give my food, I don't know what you girls take me for Promise: So who did it? Me: Its Mirabel! Can I have my food now? Promise: **Hands the package to me** By Mirabel, you mean she did it manually or automatically? Me: How do you mean? Promise: As in, if she did it with her hands or she brought people to do it? Me: Okay it was automatically Promise: So, what's the long story you talked about? Me: **Chuckles** I was only exaggerating,,, just busy with the internet Promise: I see,,, and who were you chatting with that kept you busy? Me: Not chatting,,,, just surfing the internet and downloading from the clouds Promise: Okay oh,,, too much Mb, so you are on subscription? Me: Yap Promise: How many Mb Me: Promzy I want to eat oh please,,, care to join me? Promise: Tell me jhoor Me: It's 10Gb data plan Promise: For how many months? Me: For 30 days Promise: Is it not too much? what would u be doing with it? Me: It hasn't been up to a week, I have consumed about 3Gb Promise: What? with this your phone? Me: Yea and my laptop Promise: Okay U connected your phone with your laptop,,, cool Me: Not really, I'm using a wireless modem that can connect both of them and even more together. Look at it **Showing her the modem** Promise: Woah,,,, its nice Me: Yeah,,, I'm coming I went in to get some drink, the one Mirabel brought yesterday with two glass cups. Me: Let's eat Promise: No thanks, I'm okay Me: Not even a glass of juice? Promise: Ok that will do I offered her the juice while i helped myself,,, We gisted on so many things while eating till she finished her drink and boldly asked for more. While talking, a part of me wanted her to go so I could continue surfing the internet. Me: Or should I connect you? Promise: Yes oh,,, I need to do some things,,,, hope you won't mind if i download? Me: I hope its not large files? Promise: Yes Me: Okay then I connected her thinking i would be free to focus on the internet but I was wrong, She kept asking questions upon questions. **Phone Rings** Me: Hey dear Mirabel: Hey,,,, where are you? I've been horning out here Me: Really? sorry dear I didn't know, I'm coming out now **Hangs UP** I rushed to open the gate for her,,, She drove in Me: I apologize sweetheart, I didn't know **Hugs her** Mirabel: Its okay,,, and what have you been doing all day? Me: Just been surfing the internet Mirabel: And what did you have for lunch? Me: Some snacks,,,, Promzy is even around Mirabel: Inside now? Me: Yeah Mirabel: Why didn't you tell me? Me: But I just did Mirabel: How long has she been here? Me: I think for over an hour now,,,, what's this about? Mirabel: What do you mean by what's this about? She's my friend too and I miss her soooo much **Running inside** Promzy!! I was like "pheeeeww" I let out a sigh of relieve. [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
7 May 2016 | 15:50
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ok oo
7 May 2016 | 16:31
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#Lolz#
7 May 2016 | 16:50
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beta go straight to d point hmmmmm Mirabel just saved ur ass am suspecting dat snack talk about Lola as soon as possible bro
7 May 2016 | 16:56
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Hmmm
7 May 2016 | 17:01
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U have to man up ...pls cont..
7 May 2016 | 17:07
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Uhm... dis one na bad o, una friends no won give una breathing space again???
7 May 2016 | 17:45
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You better tell Mirable about Lola's pranks before it gets out of hand. Imagine she's even trying her lucks on yu at night in a room where Mirable is present. That girl will soon land yu into trouble if you don't take time. Promzy might be a good friend but you never can vow for girls and jealousy. I feel sone pints of jealousy in her questioning abi teasing
7 May 2016 | 17:49
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My guy is really enjoying.
7 May 2016 | 18:07
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Watching
7 May 2016 | 18:17
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Ohk... Following
7 May 2016 | 18:18
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Let her knw d truth b4 it ll be too late
7 May 2016 | 18:38
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Wow...interesting
7 May 2016 | 18:50
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i lyk dz mirabel
7 May 2016 | 19:04
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#smiles
7 May 2016 | 19:06
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Good boy
7 May 2016 | 19:08
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Nxt pls
7 May 2016 | 19:15
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wen are u gonna tell did gal abt that devil .... is better now or never
7 May 2016 | 19:53
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Lol
7 May 2016 | 19:53
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My only problem now is that u should tell mirabel abt Lola b4 tinx gts out of hand
7 May 2016 | 19:56
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Getting more interesting Next pls
7 May 2016 | 21:46
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Really love this story so far
8 May 2016 | 00:53
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Nxt
8 May 2016 | 00:54
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Vic i bet u wouldn't talk abt Lola bt be warned dat problem is running towards u with d speed of Usain Bolt.
8 May 2016 | 01:18
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U bera tell mirabell abt lola bfr she finds out
8 May 2016 | 01:50
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Lol
8 May 2016 | 01:53
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pray promzy doesn't spend d nyt wif u guys so u can tell mirabell abt lola
8 May 2016 | 02:01
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be carefully with Lola,nxt pls.
8 May 2016 | 05:28
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next oo
8 May 2016 | 05:48
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Nice, carry on
8 May 2016 | 06:02
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@sonshine you dor lost come back?
8 May 2016 | 06:19
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@pemamezi z dz u or ur twin ....as me dey c ya commenr enh fear dey catch me o
8 May 2016 | 08:03
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You better tell her about Lola before is too late
8 May 2016 | 08:53
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make Una free Lola abeg aftall Mirabel no be Victor wife
8 May 2016 | 09:06
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C dis story is rly getn bored. Too much unnecessary parts
8 May 2016 | 10:14
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best story so far,keep it [email protected] plss
8 May 2016 | 10:22
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Hope she's not suspicious
8 May 2016 | 12:37
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wow. this story keeps getting more interesting. still waiting for lola to act. i know her only strength is that video clip. she has it by now.
8 May 2016 | 12:39
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I'm bak bro, but I haven't been seeing u around since my return
8 May 2016 | 12:42
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I'm bak bro, but I haven't been seeing u around since my return.
8 May 2016 | 12:42
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this promzy talks too much oo see questions Vames better do the needful by telling mirabel about lola
8 May 2016 | 14:28
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Hmmmm!!!! she may be secretly suspecting promzy . . . my guy....wise up
8 May 2016 | 16:02
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eheheheh,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,lola will soon appear sha
8 May 2016 | 16:43
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Lolz..!
8 May 2016 | 20:22
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am happy mirabel arrive becos i dnt trust promzy she may hv drug u with d snack
8 May 2016 | 23:37
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Lola wants to send u to jail oo....d best is to report her to Mirabel before its too late
9 May 2016 | 01:55
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Nice one bro
9 May 2016 | 05:59
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Promzy loves you
9 May 2016 | 10:24
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hmmmmm
9 May 2016 | 12:15
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Lolzzz..
10 May 2016 | 03:25
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next eps nahhh,wat is taking u dis long
10 May 2016 | 05:01
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applaudisé to my boss... Your story brought me to this site 2months ago, and I bet u I really liked it and pick up the courage to write too, even though its not my field. Tnk God I've finished my first story and will keep on following you like twitter. I so much respect your office and will always do, more greese to ur elbow, more red and black ink to ur pen, more knowledge to ur brain box, and lastly more shawama to ur bleeping list. lol @vick-vames
10 May 2016 | 06:26
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Nxt..
10 May 2016 | 12:45
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So far so gud.... Pls giv us more @vames
10 May 2016 | 16:11
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Nice 1
10 May 2016 | 17:51
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Bring it on bro
11 May 2016 | 05:28
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Seems you're too busy these days
11 May 2016 | 05:29
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Still waiting for the update
11 May 2016 | 17:27
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dis story don try make dem update am
12 May 2016 | 01:47
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When will our brother give us the next episode ooooooooo
12 May 2016 | 04:06
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Hahahaha....Lola ad her ways sef
12 May 2016 | 08:48
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Dis suspense don tire me oo
13 May 2016 | 01:46
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the delay nd suspense of this story is making me to loose interest but anyways, nice story!
13 May 2016 | 02:53
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the suspense is boring de story. Nice story any way. more blessing Victor
13 May 2016 | 16:05
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this lola sef
13 May 2016 | 16:14
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They no want make you bleep
13 May 2016 | 17:52
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nxt epi nah
13 May 2016 | 18:25
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Update getting boring.
14 May 2016 | 03:10
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Vit vames next episode please
14 May 2016 | 05:46
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Guy this delay is getting out of hands ooo.
14 May 2016 | 06:08
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update is too slow and is making d story boring
14 May 2016 | 12:17
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Next episode pls am really enjoying this story
14 May 2016 | 12:22
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hmmm bro @vict-vames u still dey this world?....... asking though abi na ##changepalava##
14 May 2016 | 14:17
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guy dis delay de make dis story boring,let us no if u don't want to continue dis story
15 May 2016 | 04:55
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This story is borin and u are even makng it more boring by nt updating. If u are short of flows just end it. Or u want us to beg fr update:::: mtcheew::::: #triggar
15 May 2016 | 15:04
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Am even just usng it to past away tym. Coz am adicted to coolval n nt diz story coz if all d stories here are been updated like diz one i wonder hw coolval would be
15 May 2016 | 15:08
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Vames yu beta start telling her abuh Lola o...to avoid "yu shoot bird d mama fly"
15 May 2016 | 20:51
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Hello dear coolvallers, please I wish to bring to your attention that our writer and author of the story *The President's daughter & I* @vict-vames is currently unreachable. His phone/lines has been off for the past one week and half which is really unusual. We all know he's one of the most consistent writers we have here and the last time I talked with him was on May 6th when he told me he just moved to Kaduna ( Northern Nigeria) and I haven't heard from him ever since. in case you have reached him recently kindly comment below. He isn't someone that will abandon his story without any reason. Perhaps it's the power issue rocking the country that is affecting him at his new place. You will all be notified once we have an update. https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/important-announcement-concerning-vict-vames/ Thanks
16 May 2016 | 10:52
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Next!
16 May 2016 | 11:31
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not again......just be careful guy
16 May 2016 | 14:33
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no qualms
17 May 2016 | 18:37
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Alright sir@coolval .............*waiting patiently till he returns*
18 May 2016 | 04:14
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Just checking...
18 May 2016 | 08:30
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Been lng since u update..hope ntin s wrong..waiting
18 May 2016 | 09:53
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Guy shey u no dey write this story again?
18 May 2016 | 16:10
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Vames postin system has never been dt consistance. I pray he's stil alive
18 May 2016 | 21:20
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Lol
19 May 2016 | 09:37
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Wat wrong na
21 May 2016 | 06:42
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I pray he is okay. you know all these northern part are always in crisis
21 May 2016 | 15:51
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Next Next Myman Two At The Time Pls
22 May 2016 | 07:26
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Wat iz kipin u man.itz been more den 1 mnth,plz i nid dis story...siR...
22 May 2016 | 08:27
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Following
22 May 2016 | 12:30
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Am beginning to get worried about the where about of Vames.
22 May 2016 | 12:34
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God I pray that you protect him if he is at risk, provide for him if he is lacking,,,O God keep your eye on him.
22 May 2016 | 12:36
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next plss
23 May 2016 | 01:55
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 19[/color] Do not joke with the power of PRAYER for it is the KEY to your PROBLEM,,,, There is NOTHING TOO BIG to ask GOD for and in the same way NOTHING TOO SMALL. The Bible says,,, ASK AND IT SHALL BE GIVEN UNTO YOU. You don't just seat down and get everything You need without ASKING. Even when You need something from someone, Pray to God first for FAVOUR. For when God Favours You, Men will Favour You BIG TIME. HE/SHE WHO HAS EAR, LET HIM/HER HEAR!! ***CONTINUED*** It's a good thing that Mirabel wasn't suspicious of anything,,, I went inside to join them. Promise: It was my Aunt from Zaria that was able to convince my Mum to let come Mirabel: So you and your Mum are very close? Promise: Very close,,, we don't hide anything from each other Mirabel: Same with me and my Mum, even with her busy schedule, she always try to make up for it Seeing them talking, I went to help myself with a chill hollandia yoghurt from the fridge and went back to the parlor to continue surfing the internet untill they'll call my attention. I don't know why the three of us can't gist together,,, these girls sef **Sips yoghurt** **Phone Rings: Unknown Caller** I excused myself from the parlor before answering the call. Me: (Waited for some seconds) Hello Caller: Its me Lola, move away from Mirabel now **I quickly set the call on record** Me: Why? and why did you hid your number and change your voice ?? Lola: Don't be afraid handsome, just want to let you know that I don't need your little d!ck,,, gosh! I thought you were so hude Me: What are you talking about? Lola: Well I kinda touch and felt it last night,,, and i was so disappointed at myself to stoop so low for that little thing, jeez! Me: So what does that mean? Lola: My sexual urge for you ended last night, so we can be very cool friends from now on Me: You're serious? Lola: Yeah I promise Me: Woah,,, thanks so much, I really appreciate this Lola: Nah,,, you don't need to appreciate me, you should appreciate your little thing Me: Okay oh Lola: Alright bye, we'll talk later **Hangs Up** Woah,,,, It happened! Glory be to God!! Did I mentioned that I prayed over the issue of Lola? I have actually been praying over it. It became my top prayer point since the day I dreamt that I married her. I prayed over it seriously in the Night Vigil we did recently back home. God works in mysterious ways, I mean, look at how He did it,,, Of course my thing ain't little at all, I think God confused her so she'll leave me alone and I bless God for that. I started singing praises to God when going back to the parlor. Mirabel: Honey...? Me: Yeah...? Mirabel: What happened? Me: Like how do you mean? Mirabel: Why the sudden happy face and singing? Me: I'm happy Mirabel/Promise: **both chrosed** Why...? Me: Nothing,,, I'm just happy. I mean, who wouldn't be happy to have such a great and extremely beautiful girlfriend as you my dear Mirabel: You never talk true Me: I'm being serious Mirabel: You left here to receive a phone call and returned happy,,, and you're telling me something else Me: Okay relax dear,,, uhmmm its about a friend of mine that's been delivered from something evil Mirabel: What evil? Me: Trust me on this babe, You don't wanna know Mirabel: Why? Me: Just trust me,,, so what are you girls talking about? **They now face each other** Mirabel: Yes, so Promzy what happened next? Promise: He had to free me of course,,, I made him realized that he's not my type and if he continue to send me such messages and those disgusting pictures of his again, I will show it to my Father, that he should know what that means. (Her Dad was an Air force actually) I can see they're talking about guys, I just took my laptop and focused on it while sipping my yoghurt as well. **Phone Rings** Mirabel: Hey Nancy how you doing? ***** Mirabel: How's Mummy? ***** Mirabel: Okay... are you at home or the shop? ***** Mirabel: Alright tell her I say Hi ***** Mirabel: Yeah I'm at His place right now ***** Mirabel: Okay thank you ***** Mirabel: Byeee... **She dropped her phone down** Mirabel: Its Nancy Me: Ok how's she? Mirabel: She said they're fine Me: Okay... Promise: Who's Nancy? Mirabel: His younger Sister Promise: Ok Then they continued with their discussion. That useless Sister of mine, she doesn't call me oh,,,, only my girlfriend. **Phone Rings** Me: Hello Nancy: Hi Senior Bro Me: How you doing? Nancy: Fine oh.... Aunty just delivered a baby girl Me: Really? Woah,,, that's good news, hope they're all doing fine? Nancy: Yes they are and Mummy is now preparing to go there tomorrow, and you know Daddy will be travelling next week... so i will need to stay with someone till Mummy arrives Me: What are you saying? Why won't you follow Mummy? Nancy: But Bro its not necessary, I don't have anything to do there Me: You can be of little help there,,, besides, don't you want to see the baby? or is it not your wish for her to deliver a baby girl? Nancy: Yes, but let the baby grow up a little first Me: If you don't want to go there, then where do you want to stay? Nancy: Errmmm.... I'm thinking of Me: **Cuts in** Don't even think about it, You're not coming here! Nancy: No its not your place, its Mirabel's Me: What? Nancy: Yes I spoke to her about it, and she said its okay for her but I should ask you first Me: You wanted to skip me in the first place by going to her first right? Nancy: No its not like that Bro, its just that... Me: **Cuts in ** You are not coming here,,, you should go with Mummy! **I hanged up** Mirabel: That must be Nancy, why were you so hard on her? Me: Don't just mind her Mirabel: Why don't you want her to come? Me: Mirabel I think you should stay out of this I got up with my yogurt, laptop with modem and walked in to my room. Mirabel came in about three minutes later. Mirabel: What's wrong with you? Me: I'm fine Mirabel: No you're not,,, I mean look at you Me: Listen, I know my sister very well, she's an opportunist. She's not just trying to come here because she needs a place to stay, She just want to use that as an opportunity to come to you Mirabel: Is there anything wrong if she want to stay with me? Or Am I a bad influence Me: Come on babe, don't say that Mirabel: Then what is the problem? Me: Like I said, she's an opportunist,,, she wants to use this medium to see other part of the world Mirabel: How do you mean? Me: She wants to engage herself on what she sees in the movies,,, having the opportunity to be partying, clubbing, dating, and all that Mirabel: Are you sure of what you're saying? Me: Positive Mirabel: You were also like that before untill you learn to be of good behaviour the hard way,,, wait, just out of curiousity.... was your Parents like this in their youthful age? Me: Stop it,,, please don't go there Mirabel: I'm sorry dear Me: Its okay... Mirabel: But I won't let her engage in such activities with me Me: Can you refuse her pleas? Mirabel: Yeah if it comes to that Me: Mirabel, You and I know that you can't refuse her,,, I know You, You don't want her to see you as a terrible person, You wouldn't want to hurt her feelings by refusing her. To tell You the truth sweetheart, You don't have the boldness to handle Nancy, You really can't handle her. And of course You girls would put me in the dark when You give in to her. Mirabel: So are we just going to refuse her like this? Me: See what I'm talking about? It hasn't even gotten to a minute that I said it and You're already manifesting Your Nature. Mirabel: It will make her very sad Me: There You go again,,,, She will get over it, I know my Sister very well and She knows me too, I don't tolerate her stupidity or any nonsense emanating from her **Phone Rings** Me: Hello Ma Momma: Ab'ele? (How are you) Me: O lafia Ma (Fine Ma) Momma: Joy just gave birth some minutes ago Me: Ok yeah, Nancy told me just now Momma: Okay good,,, and I shall be travelling there tomorrow Me: Okay... Momma: Nancy wants to stay with you people there at school ,,, specifically with Mirabel as Your Daddy will also be travelling too Me: But why can't She go with You? Momma: She said she wants to be learning some things about the school as she'll be coming there later this year or next year by God's Grace. Please let her go and learn whatever She wants,,, me I'm tired, just let her Me: Okay Ma Momma: I will call You before I leave tomorrow Me: Okay Ma **Hangs Up** Me: Ok Mirabel here is the deal Mirabel: What? Me: She will stay here in this house Mirabel: Why? Me: So I'd watch her movement while under my control Mirabel: Its okay... you'r the boss! I felt so good hearing that from her... That's why we need WISDOM and BOLDNESS to handle situations and then YOU CAN BE RESPECTED FOR IT and you can also BE THE BOSS! TO BE CONTINUED[/b]
23 May 2016 | 06:11
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Lol i want God to arrest all my enemies d way he arrested Lola. d tin com becom small 4 im eyez *crazy lolest
23 May 2016 | 06:33
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[b]@stephniepaul Which tin? :)[/b]
23 May 2016 | 06:54
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okk... Nyc one bro... Nancy d oppturnist... Congratz top aunty joy...
23 May 2016 | 06:54
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lol broke dude @vict-vames .... well no p God will provide bro dats prayer answered.. Lola part is over ..... following bumper to bumper
23 May 2016 | 07:02
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@vict-vames which network u dey use?? We don do alnight vigil ontop ur head before ooh we think say sometin bad happen
23 May 2016 | 07:14
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[b]@Frankkay iffa burst ur nose eh... @Orevastar5 MTN and Etisalat, better dey ni?[/b]
23 May 2016 | 07:21
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Following
23 May 2016 | 07:24
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Feed us more
23 May 2016 | 07:25
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see mouth like beter dey ni ..... vames abeg no burst am ....
23 May 2016 | 07:28
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I sought if Lola is really backing off
23 May 2016 | 07:28
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welcome
23 May 2016 | 07:45
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Yes boss
23 May 2016 | 07:47
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@vict-vames, u broke keh??? No tel us say u don finish d 10gb suscription wea mirabel do 4 u... Anyway,,, kudos bro...
23 May 2016 | 07:59
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Lolz
23 May 2016 | 08:02
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understood.... and i appreciate ur commitment towards d story bro....
23 May 2016 | 08:04
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Hmm nice Lola's out of d way i hope
23 May 2016 | 08:09
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Lolz... Small something ni
23 May 2016 | 08:13
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abeg no use this one bribe us joor, wetin happen na bro u just put us for suspence na when we wan finish this story nw
23 May 2016 | 08:29
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@Vict-Vames Loool the tin na no put words for my mouth abeg lool
23 May 2016 | 08:34
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Welcome back . Yea that's why we need wisdom so we won't just be figure-heads
23 May 2016 | 08:35
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I pray dat Lola have change, he will see come around.
23 May 2016 | 08:39
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dont wori bro we understand
23 May 2016 | 08:43
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waooo Lola has finally backed out
23 May 2016 | 08:52
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Okkk...it's good lola hs gotten of ur neck but i think u still ve to tel Mirabel..
23 May 2016 | 09:04
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Hope u dnt delete the recordings sha ...... :D
23 May 2016 | 09:07
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Its gud to see you again @Vict-Vames
23 May 2016 | 09:11
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God arrest all my enemies same way you arrested Lola...... Amen!
23 May 2016 | 09:23
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Hmmm...enjoyin diz!!!
23 May 2016 | 09:25
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Go on bro!!!...
23 May 2016 | 09:27
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@vict-vames better gini me broke too shey you get airtime for ur etisalat and u dey EASYCLIQ mah tell u how to buy 1mb with N5
23 May 2016 | 09:42
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Following .,
23 May 2016 | 09:57
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MOVE IT
23 May 2016 | 10:06
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welldone...aam following!
23 May 2016 | 10:29
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bring it on bro @vict-vames
23 May 2016 | 10:29
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Cnt sop laffing tank God for lola life
23 May 2016 | 11:03
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Gud to av u bak vict-vames
23 May 2016 | 11:04
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Hmm cnt wait 4 d nxt episode.....welcome bak vict-james
23 May 2016 | 11:08
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Lol! Are you really sure that yr thing isn't small local level Lola confessed? But even at that (her announcement of letting you be & suggestion to become just cool friends) be careful with her and don't let your guards loose cos it might be another strategy to take you unawares when you'd least expect. Guy let yr sister enjoy herself joor! You think say nah only you sabi enjoy Presido pickin
23 May 2016 | 11:12
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Can I Buy Mb For U Just Inbox Me Hahahah Kidding Man We Dont Use Mtn In Lesotho
23 May 2016 | 11:18
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lolzzz ,,,,,,,,,,, see victor ooo * he doesnt want guys to pay her back*
23 May 2016 | 11:22
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just be careful wit lola even when she confess dat she dnt hv interest wit u again
23 May 2016 | 11:26
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Lols @vict-vame you go gree tell us say d tin small?
23 May 2016 | 11:26
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Good to have you back bro,,,,,,,bring it on.
23 May 2016 | 11:37
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ride on....
23 May 2016 | 11:51
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Following...
23 May 2016 | 13:00
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lol,,okay bro
23 May 2016 | 13:14
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Hahaha boss indeed
23 May 2016 | 14:15
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lol.....lola the crazy girl
23 May 2016 | 14:16
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praise de lord,vick is back
23 May 2016 | 14:26
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thank God she's leaving u nw
23 May 2016 | 14:34
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We miss ur story man where d hell have u been.
23 May 2016 | 14:46
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nyc1
23 May 2016 | 14:49
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nice one @ lola God don punish u by ur stupid reason
23 May 2016 | 14:49
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I don't believe what Lola said one bit
23 May 2016 | 15:29
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Nice one
23 May 2016 | 16:21
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I stil dnt trusth that Lola... She maybe pretendin so u could get close to her again. I guest she has other plans
23 May 2016 | 16:30
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Nice 1. God would provide
23 May 2016 | 16:32
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Yes BOSS
23 May 2016 | 16:40
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Are u kiddinq??? Upon all the MB wey Mirabel qave u @vict-vames u still dey cry for another??? Chaiii... I no believe YOU...
23 May 2016 | 17:07
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Hmm... Iffa hear say yhu change ur phone... Huh when Mirable is stil urz abi it has ended in skul lyf?
23 May 2016 | 17:09
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Alas another episde don land. Still following
23 May 2016 | 18:21
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No prob bros. But charge up.
23 May 2016 | 18:27
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@vict just chill man and be prayful... It is temporary God dey with us all..... Nice post
23 May 2016 | 18:32
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I no trust that Lola.. Guy be vigilante
23 May 2016 | 18:35
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lol ., dat lola of a girl dey crazeeee!!! eeh.
23 May 2016 | 18:41
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The boss we are still following
23 May 2016 | 21:11
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Nice one bro.....will be waiting
24 May 2016 | 01:55
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Ar u Rick Ross?
24 May 2016 | 02:54
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Lolo out? funny, she is a very good player nd this words of backing off hmmmmm. still following
24 May 2016 | 05:59
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[b]EPISODE 20 A week later after resuming school, Nancy came in and We made her stay in my place as planned without her knowledge at first untill we explained to her how I got to be living in that huge house. She had no choice but to concur to the arrangement we made. She thought I was staying in a single room with room mates thats why she wanted to stay with Mirabel. We told her that, both Mirabel and I don't have room mates. She asked why but no explanation was provided for her. She concluded on already having a place to stay when She starts schooling with us. And as for me,,, I now have a cook for two to three months. Even though Dad will return home before then, still he won't be stable so there's no need for Nancy to be going and coming. She will only go home when Momma arrives. I later spoke with my Sister; Joy on phone to talk to her and also congratulate her for giving birth safely,,, Her Husband wasn't even around, He flew to Cape Town, South Africa. He was a Pilot. On a Tuesday afternoon after school, Mirabel and Promise went to their places while I left for mine,,, I got a call from Dorothy before I entered the house and the following conversation ensued... Dorothy: I want to come stay with You even for a week Me: Why? Dorothy: Because I miss You and I'd also like to know the School that I'd be going as from next year Me: You applied for the University? Dorothy: Yes, I didn't tell You? Me: I don't think so Dorothy: Its okay... hope I can come? Me: No You can't come,,, If You really want to know about the school, You should look for a girl to stay with or better still, wait for the post UTME Exams Dorothy: Are You refusing me again? Me: Look D'thy, I'm in a relationship, a serious one and I won't jeopardize that ok? Dorothy: Oh! I see... I should have known, now I get it,,, so this is what all this is all about? abandoning me for some cheap slut? Me: D'thy You have to calm down Dorothy: Calm down? I should calm down?? After everything You did to me and all what I went through for You, this is what I get? Me: We've talked about this before, I asked for Your forgiveness and You forgave me so why are You like this? Dorothy: I might have tried to forgive You, but never to forget! and besides, I told You I only forgave You partially not fully Me: Come on,,, You were pulling my legs by then Dorothy: No I wasn't! I was serious about it and I made it pretty clear to You Me: Then what should I do to get Your full forgiveness? Dorothy: You know what to do Me: I don't know Dorothy: Yes You do Me: No I don't Dorothy: Text me Your address so we can talk face to face Me: I can't do that, You can't come over here D'thy, We can talk on phone Dorothy: Okay,,, I want You to get rid of that slut You call Your girlfriend so We can be together Me: No way, that's never gonna happen, I mean... it won't work Dorothy: It will happen, No girl can have You if I don't. Even if You turn gay, no guy will have You still. You are for me Me: I have always known that You're not smart, but I didn't realized that You're this stup!d,,, can You listen to Youself? Dorothy: I have told You, its either me or no other **Hangs Up** I just laughed to Her stupidity and went inside inside the house. Nancy served me a good meal which I ate and drank a cool yoghurt, then I went to sleep while Nancy has been using my wireless modem all day. I woke up later in the evening around 4 or 5pm (Nigerian time) I checked my phone and saw some missed calls from Momma and also from Mirabel whom I saved as 'Love Mi' of which the Yoruba can translate to My Love but I actually abbreviated her name to 'Mi' - Love Mirabel so it became of two sides either 'Love Mirabel' or 'My Love' and I also missed a call from Dorothy too. First of all, I dialled Momma's number,,, we just exchanged pleasanries, asked about our wellbeing and all of that bla bla bla. Before I dialled Mirabel, She picked the call in no time. Me: Hei Sweetheart Mirabel: Hi, where have You been that I've been calling You? Me: I was sleeping, I had to rest from the hot lectures we had today Mirabel: I thought as much because I know You can't just refuse to pick my call, but even at that, you should've known that I was the one calling and You should've woken up to pick Me: How? Mirabel: From Your dream na Me: Very funny Mirabel: Yeah,,, It was meant to be joke and t... What I heard was "Your call credit has been exausted and Your call terminated" and You know what that means. I didn't even get a warning like "You have one minute remaining". She called me back in less than 10 seconds and I picked up immediately. Me: Hello Mirabel: Don't tell me it was Your call that finished Me: What else do You expect it to look like? Or I just hanged up on You? Mirabel: I was only teasing, You don't have to answer me that way Me: **Laughing** I was teasing You as well,,, So what's up? Mirabel: I'm home watching a cool movie, So I won't be coming around today Me: Okay,,, and what movie is that that captivated You like that? Mirabel: Its a Korean Me: You watch it too? Mirabel: Yeah... just started it recently,,, with the influence of Lola and Cynthia Me: I see,,, If such a movie could hinder You from coming here, then I think its very interesting Mirabel: It is very interesting Me: Okay,,, You should bring that particular one You're watching to me tomorrow Mirabel: Ok I will Me: Alright continue Your movie, we'll talk later in the night before I sleep Mirabel: Ok dear, love you... Nnmuah Me: I love You too sweetheart, bye Mirabel: Byeeee... **Hangs Up** I refused to call Dorothy, I might even block Her again. I checked my unread messages and I saw two messages from Mirabel which read "Where are you and why are you not picking up my calls?" and the second one "Are You there??" I supposed It was when I was sleeping and missed Her calls. I saw a message from First Bank then I recalled when Momma said She'll back up some money in my account. I opened it quickly and saw that my account has been credited but it wasn't from my Mum nor from the Boss because I know their account number. I relaxed to think for a moment... *Could it be Mirabel? *And why would She send me money after all what Mum had told Her about not giving Me Her money? *Or Mirabel did it so I won't know that its from Her? *But who else can send Me money? My thought got to my Engineer Uncle, but He doesn't send me money just like that, untill I call or something *Or was it a wrong transfer? *Should I contact the Bank? I called Momma but She said She didn't send the money, I called the Boss,,, thinking He'd asked if I have I gotten the money but He didn't, which means He wasn't the one. I called and asked Mirabel but She denied responsibility. Then who is responsible for crediting my accouunt?? And what should I do?? It could be a wrong transfer. TO BE CONTINUED[/b]
24 May 2016 | 11:18
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who did that
24 May 2016 | 11:41
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first to comment
24 May 2016 | 11:42
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Who could dat be? Dorothy dnt even realize she is d one acting lik a cheap slut
24 May 2016 | 11:53
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ask promxy... Or lola
24 May 2016 | 11:54
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Wel,it's dorothy.
24 May 2016 | 12:09
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Did i missed any thing
  
24 May 2016 | 12:18
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I think its dorathy...Waitin fr d next episode
24 May 2016 | 12:19
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its a wrong transfer from me I'll appreciate you send it back
24 May 2016 | 12:23
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If u dont knw wu credited ur account just transfer it to me 2 avoid any implication
24 May 2016 | 12:33
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Dorothy ofcourse
24 May 2016 | 12:39
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My mind tell me Lola credited ur acct is not Dorothy...
24 May 2016 | 12:50
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Who snt d money???
24 May 2016 | 13:16
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Maybe it's Lola
24 May 2016 | 13:31
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Lol Lola is out of his way I sense that Nancy might be a pain in the a*s when she comes
24 May 2016 | 13:44
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Next Pls...
24 May 2016 | 13:50
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Mayb itz Dorothy
24 May 2016 | 14:13
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Nawao attack from everywhere. from Promzy to Lola to Dorothy. Victor d hawt boy
24 May 2016 | 14:45
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It shud b d handiwork of Mirabel
24 May 2016 | 14:48
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It might be Lola or some1 else nt Doro who dash dat one money a jambite for dat mata small girl sef
24 May 2016 | 14:50
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I am suspecting lola.
24 May 2016 | 15:15
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Nah Lola. I no trust that girl don't fall for her Game.
24 May 2016 | 15:38
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confusing
24 May 2016 | 15:49
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U guys shuld try nd update quick
24 May 2016 | 16:19
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it may be Dorothy
24 May 2016 | 16:22
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God knows
24 May 2016 | 16:27
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nxt pls
24 May 2016 | 16:40
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Who
24 May 2016 | 16:48
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my suspect is LOLA
24 May 2016 | 18:03
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I tink its promsy
24 May 2016 | 18:03
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nice..keep going!
24 May 2016 | 18:18
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Followinggg
24 May 2016 | 18:25
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could it be LOLA?
24 May 2016 | 18:37
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Lola could be responsible for that
24 May 2016 | 18:47
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who dd dat mayb his lola or promise
24 May 2016 | 18:55
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am enjoying d story, Dorothy is on her way so watch ur bk
24 May 2016 | 19:06
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who else if its not d'rothy
24 May 2016 | 19:14
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It is Lola
24 May 2016 | 19:14
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Oga bring it on
24 May 2016 | 19:19
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It was a mistake from me @Vict-Vames can u pls "qé-éyî ojo" transfer it back into my GTB Acct?? (0123456789) Pls! Aqba, na choloqwu bè...
24 May 2016 | 19:23
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Hmmm. i think lola
24 May 2016 | 19:25
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ℓ̊ tire f☺я̩̥̊ this story, one week one episode. Nawa o
24 May 2016 | 19:57
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Its from lola
24 May 2016 | 20:08
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Lock up na, abi money don do u
24 May 2016 | 20:10
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hmmmm I tink is Lola.... following keenly....
24 May 2016 | 20:40
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Dat shuld b Lola or Dorothy
25 May 2016 | 00:33
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hw did she manage 2 touch ur little vame without ur awareness??..nawa o, dis girl na sumtin else
25 May 2016 | 02:19
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Good samarithan..... Assume u don't knw who send d money into ur acc. Are u goin to inform d bank about the transaction?????
25 May 2016 | 03:10
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if its dorothy she have no sense na money she wan use buy love, she neva knw who u are dating i am pretty sure if she knw she is gonna lay low
25 May 2016 | 03:29
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Na Lola nah....remember she promised to be a super good friend to ya!
25 May 2016 | 05:07
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guy dat dorothy go mess u up oo if am u jst malhandle her so she go confirm u
25 May 2016 | 08:22
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Mr man continue laffin at Dorothy's stupidity.... When you were enjoying her you don't know that what goes around will surely come around. If you know what is better for you, just tell mirabel everything. Just in case... Hmmmmm, you know naaa... Vames good job... ? ? ? ?
25 May 2016 | 08:39
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who did dat?
25 May 2016 | 09:00
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well, maybe me
25 May 2016 | 09:01
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ride on pls
25 May 2016 | 09:02
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No worry na me na. lolz
25 May 2016 | 09:13
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Still on sick bed thinking of shits.. Lolz guy I remove cap, you can write oh
25 May 2016 | 11:08
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Dorathy will soon put you into trouble!
25 May 2016 | 16:50
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Maybe dorothy
25 May 2016 | 17:07
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Vames The Story Is Getting Boring....
25 May 2016 | 17:51
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[b]@Fridex Oji egbiti e che[/b]
26 May 2016 | 05:58
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 21[/color] After much thoughts, I decided to call My Uncle to greet Him and there I can also know if He's the one that sent the money or not,,, afterall, He told me to call Him whenever I get to School. I dialled His number... and He picked up. Me: Hello Sir Uncle: How are You Victor? Me: I'm fine Sir Uncle: I spoke with Your Dad, He told me Joy has delivered a baby Me: Yes Sir, We thank God for the save delivery Uncle: Yes,,, and I'm made to understand that You're in School already Me: Yes, We've resumed Sir Uncle: I told You to call me when You get to school right? Me: Yes You did, I apologize for not calling Uncle: Did You get the alert? Me: Yes I did, thanks a lot Sir,,, I really appreciate Your support and kind gesture Uncle: Its okay,,, make sure You study hard, We need a better result in the Family or don't You want to beat my record? Me: **Laughs** Sir We're trying Uncle: Don't just be trying, ensure that You get to be sure of Yourself Me: Okay... thank You Sir Uncle: Alright, I just got home from work,,,, so bye lemme rest a little Me: Ok bye Sir. Woah,,, I came to School to study, but I'm balling in School! I went to the Parlor, Nancy was there watching TV Me: Now You're tired of browsing and chatting abi Nancy: The thing just stopped working Me: How do You mean? Nancy: I don't know oh,,, its connected but not browsing and the network is ok Me: Chai! You have finished My MB Nancy: What? Me: Quiet jare! Msteeeew chai! exausted 10 Gigabytes of data in less than three weeks,,, Great! I left Her in the Parlor, went inside my room, grabbed my notes and went to the house library to read. That's my secret for answering well in class and also performing well in tests. I study whatever that I was taught in School later in the evening and also raed it again in the early morning of when We have the Lecture again. All what We were taught from Monday to Friday, I studied them at home on Saturdays and sundays. So don't think that I'm so intelligent or calling me a genius for my intelligence,,, Its because I studied hard. My Uncle wants His record of having Second Class Upper to be broken, I thought for a little. He was the one with the highest result in the family, My Dad had Second Class Lower which put him in the Second place after My uncle. That day was the day I officially set My goal of beating My Uncle's record. And You know what that means, First Class things. I left the library after for almost two hours, I dropped my notes in the room before walking to the Parlor, Nancy was still there watching TV, Although I perceived something coming out from the kitchen's direction. Me: What are You preparing? Nancy: Spaghetti Me: Again? Nancy: We ate rice in the Afternoon, what's again? Me: Are they not the same thing? Can't You cook something else rather than these starchy foods? If not rice its spaghetti or noodles or yam sometimes Nancy: But there's nothing else in the kitchen Me: What about Semo or pounded yam Nancy: There are no ingredients for soup in the kitchen Me: Can't You buy them and other things from the market? Nancy: With which money? and things like what? Me: Things like Platein, both irish and sweet potatoes, like that Nancy: Bro just give me money and I will get them tomorrow Me: No problem, but You will use Your money to buy meat and fish Nancy: Why? Me: Are You not the one that eat it more? See how You're getting fat here Nancy: I am Your responsibility na, You're my senior bro and I'm in Your place so You will have to take care of me Me: Na true, go check wetin dey fire jare... I'm hungry Nancy: Yes boss She went to the kitchen while I took the remote to the channel to either music or sport channel. She came back a couple of minutes later with my food, I ate and rested before calling Mirabel and then retired to bed after praying for the night and the new day I'll be entering. The next day in School, I met and chat with lola, Mirabel and promise with some quarter-friends that we only greet each other or talk about lectures only. Lola and Cynthia came to our Department when we were free,,, We all had lunch together, that is Lola, Cynthia, Mirabel, Promise and I. Our first semester result came out and I did great except for Maths that I had "C", I really needed to work very hard on Maths. Mirabel and Promise did very well too,,, And surprisingly, Lola and Cynthia's result wasn't bad at all. I guess they have their way because,,, those girls ain't really serious with their studies. As time goes by, Lola and I became close friends. I snatched her from Mirabel same way She snatched Promise from Me. I got to learn the other side of Lola, She's fun to be with, full of exciting stories and experience. I couldn't take it anymore from Dorothy, so I brought the situation to Lola not telling Mirabel about it. She told me to play along with Dorothy, that instead of giving her my house address, I should give her another address where she (Dorothy) would meet me and She'll take care of the rest. I did what Lola told me to do,,, I pretended to give in to Dorothy's pleas and made her to meet me in a certain place. She came at the appointed time and I drove her with the car Lola gave me to use to the address she provided. I didn't know what she wanted to do, and my mind didn't even think of Lola killing Dorothy at all. We arrived the location, an uncompleted building and I horned as Lola directed me to do. Dorothy: Victor don't tell me You live here Me: No I don't Dorothy: Then what are we doing here? Me: Just came to check on someone Dorothy: Victor I'm not comfortable with this place, let's go Lola: Nobody is going nowhere,,, yet Lola showed up with Cynthia and other two girls looking weird and dangerous, I was scared myself. Dorothy: Victor what's going on here? Is this a set up?? You want to kill me,,, Victor You want to kill me??? Cynthia: Shut up b!tch! Dorothy: Victor please don't do this to me I beg You **Almost crying** I didn't know what to say or do, I couldn't even understand what was going on Lola: So You're scared huh? **Lighting a cigeratte for herself** Dorothy: Please don't harm me... Lola: Shut up! Now tell me, why are You even begging? Dorothy: What? Lola: Why are You begging for Your life? Do You know me from somewhere?? Dorothy: No Lola: And why are You begging? I'm not even holding any weapon Dorothy: I'm sor-ry Lola: Now listen and let this be clear to You, Victor is my boyfriend and I'm not sharing his d!ck with no b!tch,,, You got that? Dorothy: Yes yes yes (Shivering) Lola: Stay clear of his d!ck, is that understandable? Dorothy: Yes I understand Lola: Good girl,,, just make sure that the next time You and I get to meet again, It shouldn't be like this okay? Dorothy: Yes pleaseee... Lola: Victor darling, take this girl to where You got her from (Walked back to where she came out from with the girls) Me: Okay.... D'thy lets go I felt pity on her, She was so scared and terrified. She stood up walked out in a hurry, I ran after her. Me: D'thy wait **She kept on moving** Me: D'thy wait lemme drop You Dorothy: So this is how wicked and heartless You are? How dare You put me in this kind of situation?! How dare You do this to me? Me: I never wanted this to h... Dorothy: **Cuts in** You're very wicked! I was too blind to realize it all this while,,, I was so stupid and foolish geez!! Me: Please hear me out Dorothy: What for? Me: Please just hear me out,,, it wasn't my... Dorothy: **Cuts in** Cut the crap You bastard! I will never forgive You for this, Never! **Walks away hastily** Me: D'thy! Dorothy!! She left without looking back. I felt so horrible. I kept dialling her number from that day but she kept rejecting my call till her line stopped going through, I thought she had blocked my line so I tried using another line but it still didn't go through. ******************* In School on a Wednesday afternoon, Lola announced that her birthday was coming up on Friday but she's going to celebrate it on Sunday evening. One talk led to another and they came up with an idea to have a dinner in respect of Lola's upcoming birthday at Mirabel's lodge. That would be the first time Nancy will be going there. I begged Lola specifically not to involve Nancy on any act, because Nancy claimed to like Lola on their first meeting and always want her around. She promised to be cool and friendly with Nancy and nothing else. Promise said she can't come and didn't give any suitable reason for not coming. Mirabel tried to talk her in but she still declined. When I got home, I told Nancy about the upcoming birthday and she appeared to be very happy, I causioned her to behave herself for I won't tolerate any misbehaviour from her. Read more of this story @ >> coolval22.com Sometimes I thought about going easy and cool with Nancy, because she might rebel against me later in the future when she realizes some things. And I also thought about something, if Nancy should go out and start doing bad things now,,, what can I even do to her? [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
26 May 2016 | 08:04
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Nxt plsss
26 May 2016 | 08:19
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gud
26 May 2016 | 08:26
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Interesting.. following
26 May 2016 | 09:05
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Nice one...
26 May 2016 | 09:12
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Nice1
26 May 2016 | 09:29
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enjoy Nancy buh dnt freeze
26 May 2016 | 09:31
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Nothing bro
26 May 2016 | 09:38
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grt, nex pls
26 May 2016 | 09:39
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Wow going really great
26 May 2016 | 09:43
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I just kip on loving dis story...
26 May 2016 | 09:43
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Nice...1
26 May 2016 | 09:46
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next pls
26 May 2016 | 10:10
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Following..
26 May 2016 | 10:19
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Noting
26 May 2016 | 10:22
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nice thought
26 May 2016 | 10:35
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dorothy, u see ur life forcing urslf on him
26 May 2016 | 10:36
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Stay clear off lola..She's a bad influence...Promzy is d best among you friends
26 May 2016 | 10:45
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Vames F*ck U... Feeling Sorry For Dthy
26 May 2016 | 11:05
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Following
26 May 2016 | 11:08
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Nice 1
26 May 2016 | 11:13
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chill guy
26 May 2016 | 11:21
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U just ve to advice n protect ha
26 May 2016 | 11:43
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I don't like the way Lola threaten Dorothy
26 May 2016 | 11:49
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so interesting... still following. am still suspecting dat Lola she won't back off jst like DAT ...
26 May 2016 | 11:50
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Make Lola no set you up ooooo! This one that she's threatening Dorothy with the claims that yr dick o's hers, hope she's not still planning on having a taste of it with the birthday party providing a good avenue for it.
26 May 2016 | 11:56
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lola.. Is becoming too friendly
26 May 2016 | 12:59
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Lol.... following
26 May 2016 | 13:06
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Gud 1 Boss
26 May 2016 | 13:21
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Nancy is pretty stubborn.
26 May 2016 | 13:26
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Great story Still following
26 May 2016 | 14:01
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Hmm..true talk
26 May 2016 | 14:20
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nancy enjoy life o
26 May 2016 | 14:50
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Ntin
26 May 2016 | 15:02
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intresting following like twitter.
26 May 2016 | 15:34
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Nice
26 May 2016 | 17:01
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Hmm so much interestin, so Lola is now ur padi padi 4real gud-luck then. And 4 Nancy, try to be gentle & nice to her, explain to her d posibility of going into such bad lifes & d implications.
26 May 2016 | 17:45
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Your duty is just to advice her as an elder brother.
26 May 2016 | 17:49
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Hmm.... This re-callsign with lola, hope it's a one cuz yhu can never tel wht lola is capatable of doing? And i think yhu too blind to see that promise is deep inlove with victor And as for D'thy hmm...
26 May 2016 | 17:51
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Nancy z a cul fellow bt Hmmm....lets see hw it goes... Tnx @vict-vames bt nxt pls
26 May 2016 | 18:10
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Don't let her flirt around
26 May 2016 | 20:45
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Dorothy, I pity you, you really loved this Victor guy
27 May 2016 | 02:02
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It depends on how u wants to handle her, but handle her wit wisdom...... Dorothy sorry oooooooo
27 May 2016 | 02:39
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Nice one dear
27 May 2016 | 03:09
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Ride on... Lets go to d party
27 May 2016 | 05:21
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you cant do anything to her
27 May 2016 | 05:34
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Nxt plz
27 May 2016 | 08:33
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Lola went too far. Buh, dat serves D'thy well as she wz too blind n daft.
27 May 2016 | 12:25
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Interesting next bro
27 May 2016 | 12:31
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nxt plzzzzz
27 May 2016 | 14:19
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Nice story next plsssss
27 May 2016 | 16:02
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Abeg Kul Down Jhoor!!...I Hope Lola's Attitude Won't Affect Nancy
27 May 2016 | 16:46
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Go On;
27 May 2016 | 16:47
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next pls
28 May 2016 | 06:31
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Nice one! More please.
28 May 2016 | 07:48
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restraining orders!
28 May 2016 | 08:39
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Hmmm... This Lola is reali smart, smarter than I guest
28 May 2016 | 19:16
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 22[/color] I refused to eat that afternoon pending the dinner later. I set myself ready to eat as much as I could. But I still did my two hours study, there is no barrier for that because I have a goal to achieve. I left the house with Nancy later in the evening and got to the VIP Inn where Mirabel, Lola and Cynthia resides. The Gateman opened the gate for us, they even changed their Gateman. We alighted from the car and went inside the Mirabel's lodge that's where they fixed the dinner. Entering the parlor, I met Cynthia and two other girls dancing. I recognized the two girls, they were the ones Lola used to intimidate Dorothy the other day. They paused the music to welcome us, I asked after Lola and Mirabel, Cynthia said they went to the restaurant to get the eatables for the dinner that they'll be here in few minutes time. She offered us Champagne, I declined for myself and Nancy as well and requested for juice instead. Nancy: But Bro, I have never seen champagne before except in the movies,,, let me taste it small please... Me: Nancy it's not as good as You see in the movies Nancy: Have You tasted it before? Me: Yeah and I regretted it Nancy: But how is it like? Me: Its alcoholic Nancy: Really? Me: Yeah Nancy: I hate alcoholics Me: Me too, that's why I refused it Mirabel and Lola arrived few minutes later and the bodyguards dropped the bags they were carrying on the dinning table. Lola greeted me with a hug and Mirabel with a kiss. Lola directed the girls and the lady guard Jummy to arrange what they brought in for dinner and Nancy also helped out on her own accord. Two huge guys came in some minutes later, Lola introduced the dark one to me as Dax her boyfriend and the other fair one as Vincent, Dax's friend. Cynthia said her boyfriend couldn't make it today but promised to come on the main birthday party. After the introduction, we settled down to eat,,, there was so much to eat and drink. I watched Nancy very closely so that an unplanned event will not take place. I ate as much as I could especially the chicken. We first ate fried rice and chicken with wine or juice in the first hour, rested for 30 minutes then ate meat pie with egg and well-prepared roasted fish with any drink of choice. Some rested, others danced for another 30 minutes then they brought in suya that expensive and well-prepared one, that was the day I ate suya like no other. After that, they shared cake and enough ice-cream. Then they increased the sound of the music and started dancing and drinking whatever You like. I also danced very well that night. I saw the fair guy Vincent getting closer to Nancy when dancing but she avoided him which got my mind settled. My eating didn't end there,,, I still ate suya and the roasted fish later on and ended it with a cool hollandia yoghurt. Around 11.pm or so, I told Mirabel that We'd be going home, She told me that we should all spend the night there but I refused her till she had no choice. I had to go home because of my Sister, can't leave her for that huge guy. They even tried to convince us to stay but I gave them a 'NO' that signifies no hope at all. Its a good thing Nancy didn't even want to stay. We arrived home safely, I had to set an alarm before I slept that night in order to avoid waking up late for lectures. The following day, I gave Nancy some money to go to the market and get what we needed in the kitchen while I went to School. Mirabel followed me to my place from lectures with the korean movie I told her to bring for me. Got home, Nancy served us lunch,,, Beans and plantein. Nancy: Woah this korean movie Mirabel: You've watched it? Nancy: Yeah but I didn't started from the beginning and I haven't watched it to the end yet,,, so interesting Me: Alright go and play it We started watching the movie, I read the summary on the disc's cover,,, Oh! its titled "Boys Before Flowers". We watched and discussed on the movie till nightfall with generator because the power was seized. I didn't even read my book that evening but I promised myself to read very early the following morning. Mirabel didn't go that night, she came prepared to spend the night. We went to bed around 10.pm because of School the following day, but we left Nancy with the movie. I went to have shower first to avoid being called a dirty boy... **While in the shower** Mirabel: May I join You honey? Me: No! Mirabel: **Laughs** I'm serious this time Me: Leave me alone Mirabel: Okay oh... (She thinks she can fool me again, lai lai) Before I knew what was happening, She slowly came into the bathroom and startled me when she slowly caressed and kissed my back. Me: I thought you were trying to pull my legs again Mirabel: Nah... I don't joke with my words all the time dear Me: I see... We bath ourselves, but nothing happened oh... I wasn't in the mood anyway **Winks** **After the shower and dressed for bed** Mirabel: So what was it that you've been wanting to tell me about? Me: Me? Mirabel: Yes,,, about my friends or so Me: Oh! yea uhmmm... just wanted to know why I don't know their boyfriends or they don't stick to one guy? but I've known Lola's own now**I lied,,, 'coz I couldn't tell her what Lola was trying to do again,,, since we're cool now** Mirabel: Well, They have their boyfriends,,, not for love though. They're just having fun and playing around Me: Okay... I get it now Mirabel: Goodnight dear, really need to sleep Me: Ok babe, goodnight **Few minutes later** Mirabel: Baby,,, are u awake? Me: Yea, anything? Mirabel: Yea... just need to tell you this Me: What is it? Mirabel: My Mum is planning to pay you an unanounced visit Me: Are you serious? the first lady wants to visit me? Mirabel: Yea, I'm not supposed to tell you because she told me not to Me: What's she paying me a visit for? Mirabel: You're dating her daughter hello...? She wants to know and confirm everything I told her about you Me: And what have you told her? Mirabel: Everything I know about you,,, your good side though Me: I see... so when is the visit taking place? Mirabel: I dunno Me: Baby please tell me, I need to be well prepared Mirabel: She refused to tell me, she knows i'll snitch Me: So I should be expecting her any time? Mirabel: Yea... don't worry, I'll help you out Chai! eleyi gidi gan oh... I said this one this thick [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
30 May 2016 | 07:27
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U've gat to be carefull
30 May 2016 | 07:41
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Kkkkkkkk once Lola hear that, she will come around to disturb u again so dat when she come, she will go yeye kkkkkk
30 May 2016 | 07:56
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second to commit,reserve my commit for now
30 May 2016 | 07:58
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the first lady is gonna pay u a visit very soon
30 May 2016 | 07:59
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Omo my liver no reach that one o
30 May 2016 | 08:03
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interesting, go on
30 May 2016 | 08:29
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nice one
30 May 2016 | 08:32
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Lol... see levels
30 May 2016 | 08:33
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na strong tin
30 May 2016 | 08:59
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Your failure to tell Mirable of Lola's antics and advances might cost you something in the future. Even though both of you are now cool, you would have still tell her about it and also mention to her that you guys are now cool. This will make her more careful of how she divulges private matters to them
30 May 2016 | 09:02
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U shouldn't be scared...D first lady is a human like you
30 May 2016 | 09:03
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Good to start
30 May 2016 | 09:03
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hand fold
30 May 2016 | 09:04
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it high time you open up to her.about Lola attitude towards you.
30 May 2016 | 09:05
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Mirabel you were not suppose to tell him anything
30 May 2016 | 09:09
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U get to prepare.????
30 May 2016 | 09:18
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Hmmmm nxt pls
30 May 2016 | 09:25
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hmmm, the whole First Lady paying you a visit. ride on guy.
30 May 2016 | 10:09
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Be prepaid o
30 May 2016 | 10:54
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wow my v good frd @vict-vames will be meeting dey first lady in his imagination wow! dats great hahahahah
30 May 2016 | 11:33
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Carefulness and concentration shud be ur watchword. I like ur way carry go
30 May 2016 | 11:33
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Ooo boy the first lady is coming 2 ur hus na u o
30 May 2016 | 11:44
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Hmm...be well prepared o...and dont bleep up
30 May 2016 | 11:51
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********go on********
30 May 2016 | 11:51
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If na me i for fear ooo
30 May 2016 | 12:02
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I stil dnt tink Lola is off ur neck victor..,i mean that fast afta hw much she tried 2 get u. Anyway,watchn closely!
30 May 2016 | 12:14
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Nxt 1 pls.
30 May 2016 | 12:21
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Observin
30 May 2016 | 12:27
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Vips visit
30 May 2016 | 13:04
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Lola is gonna be on ur neck again
30 May 2016 | 13:21
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It is not a small tin o
30 May 2016 | 14:09
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Chaii ... just make sure u are of ur best behaviour
30 May 2016 | 14:21
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Ok next epic
30 May 2016 | 14:32
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Hmmmm.
30 May 2016 | 14:44
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You don't need to worry, I belive the 1st lady is a cool woman!
30 May 2016 | 14:59
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make she come stamp u say u be gud boy so that u go marry her d'gther @vict
30 May 2016 | 15:35
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Ok
30 May 2016 | 16:33
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nothing dry happen. she no be human being?
30 May 2016 | 16:54
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am very sure that lola is still coming back
30 May 2016 | 17:32
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@Vict-vames, Ich'oji uche no
30 May 2016 | 17:32
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Lola you went to far
30 May 2016 | 17:34
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u've got nothing to be scared of
30 May 2016 | 17:43
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Lucky boy
30 May 2016 | 17:43
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Hmm i advise u be very careful about Lola and for d 1st lady's visit, beta be ready enough cos she's gona take u unware
30 May 2016 | 18:02
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No fall hands oo
30 May 2016 | 18:09
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D first lady is paying u a visit, dat nix
30 May 2016 | 18:38
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just be careful ooo
30 May 2016 | 18:42
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmm, u need to be prapared
30 May 2016 | 18:56
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Thick indeed
30 May 2016 | 19:07
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Dey observe with my telescope here. Gi di gan
30 May 2016 | 19:33
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A whole first lady want to pay u a visit, u don get mouth be dat o
31 May 2016 | 06:03
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nice story so far
31 May 2016 | 09:13
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I tink u've made a mistake by nt telling mirabel oooooo
31 May 2016 | 10:25
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there is fire on d mountain
31 May 2016 | 12:36
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Meetin d first lady? Eleyi gidi gan ooo. Nxt..
31 May 2016 | 12:37
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hmm.first lady is gonna visit u
31 May 2016 | 12:51
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this one is strong
31 May 2016 | 15:56
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hmmm 1st lady's visit
31 May 2016 | 16:31
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First lady!...u get mouth ooo
31 May 2016 | 18:17
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just observing... kudos vames
31 May 2016 | 19:30
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Wow,,,,I'm finally here.... you can proceed guy.. . but I just pity Dorothy and promise(or should I say Promzy)
31 May 2016 | 20:13
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finally here good to be back n here
1 Jun 2016 | 06:39
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OMG!!! First Lady visit, Oh boy, just be cool...
1 Jun 2016 | 07:06
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 23[/color] Sunday came up so fast with lots of expectations for Lola's birthday party. I wore a cool fitted suit, my best suit actually with a hat. While Nancy wore a dress Mirabel provided for her. We arrived the place before 4.pm and the place was wow! full of exotic cars, that was my first time of seeing a Lamborghini car and others. Music was booming the environment, I saw so many good looking and sophisticated persons in attendance. That was when I had a thought of pride that I’m rolling with bigger girls. Well, I didn't feel intimidated at all because, I got a nice ride and well dressed as well. I met Mirabel's guards standing at the frontage of her lodge, I asked them if Mirabel was inside, they replied positive. Some guys and girls were seated in the parlor but Mirabel wasn't. I greeted them before asking after her and they said she went to the room to get dressed. I went straight to her room and knocked... Mirabel: Who is it? Me: Your boyfriend Mirabel: Come in come in come in I slowly opened the door and walked in, she was backing me Mirabel: I’ve been waiting for you, Now tell me, how do i look? **Turning around to face me** Me: Woah... you're a true definition of beauty, a virtue of grace, I’m incredibly graced by your grace, I’m highly favoured beyond imaginations, you have no idea to how happy i am to have you, you're like a figment of my thoughts but thank God you're real, thank God for creating you, I’m extremely blessed. Oh my! what am i saying? Come give hug please baby... We hugged each other for so many minutes, i also caressed her hair emotionally that I didn't know when a tear dropped off my left eye. Me: I will always love you Mirabel, I will continue to love you no matter what... The love I have for you is irreplaceable. Mirabel: I love you so much and you know it, I believe whatever you tell me, I trust the love we have for each other,,, I’m made to understand that, sometimes in life, the best doesn't come first but mostly comes last. Yes I was born with everything i need, but you stand as the best thing that has ever happen to me. With you in my life, I have everything I want and my love for you is unconditional. **We were still hugging each other before someone opened the door** Cynthia: Oops! sorry for intruding guys, didn't know uhmmm... excuse me, Mirabel everyone is waiting for you outside, they're about to start Mirabel: Ok I’m coming out, just give me a minute. Is Lola out yet? Cynthia: No, she's waiting for you Mirabel: Ok, just a minute please Cynthia: Alright hurry up. Hi Victor Me: Hi **I just waved at her with a coy smile then she left** Mirabel: Victor Me: Yes? Mirabel: Everyone will know today that you're my boyfriend Me: I don't understand Mirabel: As you know, this is a high class party and everyone you see out there are sons and daughters of dignitaries like Senators, Ministers, Governors, big business men children and all that. So,,, people like us are not expected to come here with any random person, we can only come with our date, friends or spouse Me: Okay... Mirabel: You and I will be together throughout the party, that is after I escort Lola to the Celebrant's seat then We'll seat together by her right side. And I will introduce you to anyone I meet as my boyfriend Me: Its cool, no problem Mirabel: Sure? Me: Yea, sure, even if the your Father gets to know I won't be bothered Mirabel: Really...? Me: Just kidding Mirabel: He's not gonna do anything nasty I’m sure of that Me: Well, he is your Father, you should trust him,,, He should only know about us when the time is right Mirabel: Of course, that's what I’m waiting for. Put this in your mind that I’m taking you to my father in Aso rock two weeks after our final exams Me: Aso rock? Mirabel: Yea, why? Me: But his tenure will expire months before we graduate Mirabel: So? what happens to second term? Me: Oh... I forgot Mirabel: By the way, where is Nancy? Me: Oh my God! Mirabel: What is it? Me: No, nothing, She's outside... let's go join them, they're waiting for you Mirabel: Yea, let's go. What about Promise? Me: I dunno, we haven't talked today. She didn't call me Mirabel: The securities will deny her access if she should come because we only invited her with our mouth as our close friend and not with invitation card and she doesn't even have a car. Let's call her quick,,,, where is that my phone Me: Lemme call her **I brought my phone out from my pocket** my phone has been switched off all this while and i didn't know **I quickly switched it on** Mirabel: Maybe she's been trying to call you, who knows? Woah... eleven missed calls from her **She dialed Promise's number and she picked up at once, then Mirabel put on loud speaker** Mirabel: Hello Promise Promise: Hi I've been calling you but you didn't pick up and Victor's line is unreachable Mirabel: I apologize, I've been busy. They refused to allow you come in? Promise: Yeah at first, but I’m in now,,, thanks to Cynthia. Where are you guys by way? Mirabel: In my room but we're coming out now Promise: Please hurry up, I’m feeling awkward and nervous out here Mirabel: Just meet us in my lodge Promise: Ok, on my way **Hangs up** Mirabel: Lets go lets go Me: After you my darling We stepped out together, the guys and ladies we met in the parlor all stood up when we showed up in the parlor. She greeted them in a hurry while stepping out and they followed us or they followed her rather,,,, who know me? Lol. The guards opened the entrance door and there stood Promise, glowing like a star, where did she hid her beauty all this while that i did not see? I was stunned by her beauty but refused to get carried away. Mirabel: You're looking good Promise Promise: Thanks, and you’re looking gorgeous Mirabel: Thanks,,, come on, let's go and escort Lola out to her seat, we're already late. Guys you may go have your seat (Referring to the ones with us) Victor please wait for me here, Promise lets go They left for Lola/Cynthia's lodge to escort the celebrant out while I stood in front of her lodge as she told me to wait for her. I was looking around for my sister Nancy, I didn't know where she was. Mirabel came out alone some few minutes later and went to grab a mic, she signaled them to pause the music. After which, she welcomed everyone in attendance and also said other things. Gosh! her voice sounded so good on the mic, God help me 'coz I so much love this girl. She then announced the arrival of the celebrant, every one stood up clapping their hands while Lola and her escorts came out, my mind became cool when I saw Nancy with them. Mirabel however, handed over the mic to the MC after making a comment that… “Lemme quickly go get my boyfriend before these beautiful ladies in the house do something nasty” The guests cheered and applauded to that,,, while she left the stage and walk towards me smiling with confidence. All eyes on me! I started feeling so nervous that I felt like I was gonna collapse even though I was standing upright. [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
1 Jun 2016 | 08:15
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Kkkkkkk she is got a crush who she refuse before, he is there and he will make yo life miserable
1 Jun 2016 | 08:48
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don't collapse ooo
1 Jun 2016 | 09:08
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Dis your dreams strong honestly
1 Jun 2016 | 09:09
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Hahahaha..LOVE
1 Jun 2016 | 09:31
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Remember ur sister sha
1 Jun 2016 | 09:38
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Ife yii ga oooo
1 Jun 2016 | 09:42
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Collapse ke
1 Jun 2016 | 09:45
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Hmm good for you
1 Jun 2016 | 10:12
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Funny
1 Jun 2016 | 10:15
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Danger Coming...... !
1 Jun 2016 | 10:24
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I blve its nt a dream and if it is a dream it would surely come to pass...cont brah
1 Jun 2016 | 10:24
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wow nice episode
1 Jun 2016 | 10:30
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ayam blushing oo.. you are a man don't be nervous..
1 Jun 2016 | 10:32
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waow,interesting episode
1 Jun 2016 | 10:34
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guy no collapse o make u no fall my hand
1 Jun 2016 | 10:35
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lol....pls don't just embarrass ur self there oo
1 Jun 2016 | 10:40
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You people are getting bolder
1 Jun 2016 | 10:43
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Vict please don't collapse o
1 Jun 2016 | 11:00
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I hope der is no bad guy crushing on her der, else u wl b in deep shit
1 Jun 2016 | 11:19
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wat a wonderful beautiful Mirabel u make ur man carry away,next pls.
1 Jun 2016 | 11:31
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Not only colapes huuh ur head don big abi haa
1 Jun 2016 | 11:32
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Hmmm...You beta dont collapse kus if you do..you will pay a fine of #850,000....Lokz
1 Jun 2016 | 11:54
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go on jawe!!!!!
1 Jun 2016 | 11:55
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That's good a good one,,,,,, please Victor don't disappoint people that believe in this love.
1 Jun 2016 | 12:02
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U are dating some 1 sis but u don't want urs to be dated by another person... Mehn u are so selfish.
1 Jun 2016 | 12:17
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following.... victor dey dreamer
1 Jun 2016 | 12:21
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I dey fear oh... This one wey everything dey sweet so I dey see sad ending oh
1 Jun 2016 | 12:28
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i go luv oh
1 Jun 2016 | 12:40
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so interesting
1 Jun 2016 | 12:53
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wow that so cool be strong i wish i was in such a scenario
1 Jun 2016 | 12:54
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Nancy is dining with d high n mighty nw.
1 Jun 2016 | 13:07
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Lol
1 Jun 2016 | 13:55
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omo party olowo ma dun gon o
1 Jun 2016 | 14:14
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lolz
1 Jun 2016 | 14:19
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lol
1 Jun 2016 | 14:25
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Dats Gud @vict-vames God Will Help You
1 Jun 2016 | 15:11
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be a man oo is not easy
1 Jun 2016 | 15:23
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[b]Thanks to u all oh... @Frankkay my friend what's ur problem with this dream of a thing na? i'm balling, better accept it.... Lol[/b]
1 Jun 2016 | 15:39
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Ah go love ooo.....nxt pls,enjoyn diz.
1 Jun 2016 | 15:51
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That's the price to pay f☺я̩̥̊ dating president daughter
1 Jun 2016 | 16:49
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Nna Biko, no collapse yet o Abeq, @vict-vames, pend dat collapse thinq for now till forther notice when e qo remain u and ur boo for inside room... If dat time reach u fit collapse anyhow yagayaga
1 Jun 2016 | 16:59
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Your dram strong no be small
1 Jun 2016 | 17:22
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Ur problems re abt 2 start.
1 Jun 2016 | 17:24
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Hmmm...wat next?
1 Jun 2016 | 17:57
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Lol. collapse na.
1 Jun 2016 | 17:58
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Love in d air
1 Jun 2016 | 18:04
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Hope say no be dreamland yhu dy since all this while.. Anyway yhu deserve it guy... Jst enjoy ur self
1 Jun 2016 | 18:04
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Lol dis Victor is so overprotective of his sister Nancy anyway i will do d same wit my sis o
1 Jun 2016 | 18:18
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Hmmmm...
1 Jun 2016 | 18:23
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Nice...
1 Jun 2016 | 19:19
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Like play like play ....This dream go turn reality now wetin we go hear tomorrow now na Victor James weds Zhara Buhari
1 Jun 2016 | 19:22
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Big boy
1 Jun 2016 | 19:32
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No faint ooh..
1 Jun 2016 | 19:48
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@vict-vames am jst concern as a good frd
1 Jun 2016 | 20:00
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Eh ! Why do u stop here now... Pls post next episode
1 Jun 2016 | 20:01
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lol
1 Jun 2016 | 20:22
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i thought d party az ended b4? Plz dnt collapse ooo.... The nation is abt 2 knw d guy dat Mirable is crazy abt
2 Jun 2016 | 01:27
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haha.....dnt collapse oh
2 Jun 2016 | 03:47
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U don dey get mouth b that
2 Jun 2016 | 06:05
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hmmmm,nice one
2 Jun 2016 | 06:15
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ELEYI GIDI GAN O
2 Jun 2016 | 06:15
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Hnmmm! #feelingLove
2 Jun 2016 | 06:16
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love in the air....
2 Jun 2016 | 08:31
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ife yi le o... ife to lo dun, bi oyin
2 Jun 2016 | 09:03
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eheh.... eleyi gidigan oo
2 Jun 2016 | 09:36
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abeg ooo dnt collapse ooo... no go fall her hands
2 Jun 2016 | 10:27
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Lolsss..... Beauty dem say is in the eyes of d beholder.... Whoa!!! Loving this....
2 Jun 2016 | 10:41
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this story gets more interesting and captivating by the day. I only wish that new episodes will be updated more often than they are ... bcus as it is, I'm already addicted to this story. weldone Victor!
2 Jun 2016 | 12:54
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abeg no allow ur head burst o
2 Jun 2016 | 18:35
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hmmmmm....be ready to fight for your LOVE!!!
2 Jun 2016 | 18:45
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Lovely, next pls...
3 Jun 2016 | 06:18
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hmmmm
3 Jun 2016 | 10:58
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U got to watch ur back from now on.
3 Jun 2016 | 11:39
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omo no be small thing @ hw I wish am in ur shoe DAT will be great I think. but never mind you are the man of the day
4 Jun 2016 | 12:08
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Choi!!! Love in d air
4 Jun 2016 | 20:07
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4 d end we fit hear say na dream him dey dream all vhz while. ##lolz'ez
4 Jun 2016 | 20:08
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Wetin too much comment
5 Jun 2016 | 04:51
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 24[/color] She came and stood in front of me smiling,,,she looks so adorable and extremely beautiful. I looked at her with love written all over my face... I took charge of the situation by offering her my hand, she accepted then we walked like newly weds to our seat at Lola's right side. The MC continued with the menu after the cheering from the guests. The MC called on the celebrant to get her man by her side. Another romantic drama took place when Lola brought her guy Dax to her side. Read more of this story @ >> coolval22.com The party continued from one interesting item to the other... from cutting the cake to dancing, artistes performances and other entertaining performances. Lola's boyfriend, Dax also performed a special song for Lola,,,, that was when I know that he was a Musician. The time for general dance,,, everyone started taking their lady to the dance floor, I also did the same. I noticed how Nancy looked at me when that Vincent, Dax's friend offered her his hand as a request for her to dance with him. I just nod a 'go ahead' for her so she'll not fall his hand. I wasn't focused on my dancing because I was watching them for any wrong dance moves but he danced like a gentleman,,, although I was still suspecting him (Vincent). The refreshments were extremely refreshing, I didn't ate much though,,, I reserved myself for later when I can eat comfortably, probably with familiar eyes and not otherwise. Later in the evening around 7.pm or thereabout, the MC announced the main event of the menu which is the "Pool Party". Everyone cheered and applauded to the anouncement. Then they brought in costumes for the Pool party for both male and females. Bikinis for females and shorts for males. The MC further said that... MC: Its time to see dah sis packs in dah house and some banging bodies baby! leeets do this!! **Drops mic** (Instantly, the lights turned red and blue) Personally, I wasn't OK on that one, I felt somehow uncomfortable. Mirabel: Hey handsome Me: Baby is this necessary? Mirabel: Well, this is the best part Lola loves on every birthday party she attends ,,, so she also want to do it on her own birthday party, so here we are Me: I don't think I can participate on this one Mirabel: What? honey please you have to Me: I can't,,, I'm not feeling this Mirabel: Honey let's do this for Lola pleaaase? Me: Mirabel.... Mirabel: Honey pleaseee... just for today, for Lola please honey Me: OK alright Mirabel: Thanks hun,,, don't be shy of your invisible packs Me: What? Mirabel: Lemme get a short for you, gimme a minute Dax: Hey guys... Mirabel and ermmm sorry? Me: Victor Dax: Yea my bad, how is it going bro? Me: Just good **handshakes** Vincent: Hey man Me: Bro whats up **handskakes** Vincent: Good,,,, its a nice party Me: Yea... Mirabel: I'm coming guys **runs away** Me and both guys who were already on shorts showing their six packs chatted a little about some things before Mirabel showed up with a short for me. I excused myself and went in to put it on before joining them,,, I had my siglet on though, I don't have packs and I don't even like appearing bare-bodied in public. We all surrounded the pool in groups, some in twos and others inside the pool already having fun with non-stop party music and drinks. There were balls, water-guns and so many things that made the pool party fun for them. I was with Dax and Vincent chatting and getting to know each other, I was very comfortable with them,,, that was how we became friends. Mirabel: Excuse me guys, can I borrow my boyfriend? Dax: Sure of course, I should be with my baby too... Vince I can't help you tonight again bro, this is what I've been telling you about,,, get yourself a girlfriend Vincent: Guy leave that thing, I don't need a whore or should I kill myself for not finding the type of girl I need? Dax: You will start doing ultimate search after the loneliness you will feel today, everyone will be in twos soon and there isn't any single girl here Vincent: You guys should just go and leave me alone, loneliness won't kill me Mirabel: (Laughs) Of course we'll go,,,, honey let's go (Drawing my hand along with her) Me: Guys i'm coming... Vincent: Ok bro I smell conspiration among those guys, Infact I was sure that they're trying to get my sister for Vincent and trying to make me know that he is a good and responsible guy but I refused to concur. Mirabel took me to the garden where we once met, then we started strolling around slowly. Mirabel: You remember this place when we started our relationship? I come here whenever I feel lonely to relax myself and also smiled sometimes with tears when I recalled that day we met here. I have loved this place since then because of the good memory. Me: I remembered everything, even from the first time I saw you, I can still remember vividly like it was all yesterday. How it all started from hate to love Mirabel: Yea, you were so annoying by then... Me: Do you know I hated you at first sight? Mirabel: What? but why? Me: Because of how you showed up that day, how you spoke with your guards that are older than you and how you spoke with the Lecturer made me thought you were a spoilt arrogant brat Mirabel: Hhmmmm... I only disliked you because I thought you were a proud guy that shows off his intelligence to make everyone think you're the best or something,,, and I hate pride. Me: So we totally misjudged each other Mirabel: Yea absolutely,,, then I fell for you before I knew it. You hurt me alot when you played hard to get Read more of this story @ >> coolval22.com Me: I played hard to get? Mirabel: Have you forgotten? Me: Well, it wasn't like that... I saw you as a lover girl that needed real love not with someone like me who wasn't sure of himself. Hey what are we even talking about? we're spoiling the mood already, lets forget about all that and focused on the romantic night We stopped for a while then faced each other, she placed her hands on my shoulder and we looked straight to each other's eyes. Mirabel: So... how romantic could this be? I smiled sheepishly then drew her closer and initiated a kissing session that led to a hot romance for many minutes. The romance came to an abrupt end as I pulled off when the thought of my sister popped up. Me: Lets go inside (Smiling) Mirabel: Victor please no Victor: Why? you don't want to go inside? Mirabel: You know what i meant Me: I don't think i do Mirabel: You know we shouldn't go beyond kisses and romance Me: Yea I know. Oh... wait, you thought I was going to.....? Nah... far from it, my mind was far from that. I just want us to go inside and probably continue there 'coz its late already Mirabel: Is that so? Alright, lets go I went back to the pool and saw that the party was over and most of them had left, remaining some in twos that were just talking while others were making out. I was looking around every corner my eyesight can reach to catch them red-handed,,, by that I meant my Sister Nancy and that Vincent but I couldn't find them. I met with the male bodyguard and asked him if he has seen her. He replied saying he hasn't seen her all night. My heart started beating with rage, I thought of what i'd do the instance I catch them together. I went inside Mirabel's lodge, there she was sleeping on the chair. I became speechless.... Mirabel woke her up and showed her where she'd sleep. I told Mirabel to join me go to Lola's lodge to eat that I didn't eat well earliar, She agreed that she also want to eat too. We went there, and I saw that the party continued in there, they were dancing nude. [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED.[/color] I apologize for the late updates and short episodes..... the story will be ending soon, Thanks[/b]
5 Jun 2016 | 11:28
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Hmmmm, ALLOW VINCENT NAH...SHUUU
5 Jun 2016 | 11:46
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NUD£ kwa! All this rich children sef!.. Nice 0ne th0..
5 Jun 2016 | 11:58
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hehehe...oga vic u no wan mak dem screw ur sis sugbon u xabi screw anoda pesin sis abi
5 Jun 2016 | 12:11
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thats what lola likes
5 Jun 2016 | 12:54
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Huh...Dancing Nude..Spoilt Brats
5 Jun 2016 | 12:57
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For how long are you gonna monitor her? I need answer for this @Vict-Vames
5 Jun 2016 | 13:05
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holy Jah... Victor did nt want her sister to screw but he is screwing other's sister.. overprotective brother...
5 Jun 2016 | 13:14
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pls oooo,u re killing someone for here oooo,hurry and end dis story
5 Jun 2016 | 13:39
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Hmmm...nude ke? Which kin one b dat
5 Jun 2016 | 13:39
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Nude..well dis rich kid their is ntin thr can't do self
5 Jun 2016 | 13:40
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Lol Shey na you go marry Nancy.
5 Jun 2016 | 14:14
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naked??? Upon all the moneey?? Ride on bro!!
5 Jun 2016 | 14:15
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Dancing nude that's bad
5 Jun 2016 | 14:23
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Nice one
5 Jun 2016 | 14:25
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nice story
5 Jun 2016 | 14:40
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Ok o... We r waiting
5 Jun 2016 | 14:52
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Guy na u go marry ur sis... live her jor
5 Jun 2016 | 15:11
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Vic free d girl abeg, u no dey screw other people sis? Well go & dance 'nude'...
5 Jun 2016 | 15:13
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,,,following....
5 Jun 2016 | 15:21
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@Vict-Vames, u think u are protectinq ur innocent sister by followinq her up/down like fly? I swear, u 'll eventully end up havinq heart failure if u didn't stop followinq her like dat... . . Followinq keenly...
5 Jun 2016 | 15:38
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I trust lola fr dt...Its her work
5 Jun 2016 | 16:08
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Ending soon, hope not another season
5 Jun 2016 | 16:09
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Hmmmm mm. Nude or wetin I hear
5 Jun 2016 | 16:10
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Hmmn
5 Jun 2016 | 16:38
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following nxt plz
5 Jun 2016 | 17:01
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Elder bros are always like dat, but at least she knws wat his right now. Beta stop monitoring her like dat
5 Jun 2016 | 17:03
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Nude keh
5 Jun 2016 | 17:23
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U go folo dance nude too
5 Jun 2016 | 17:29
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Wooow soon?, gud job anywel. Waitin
5 Jun 2016 | 17:40
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Dancing nude, ?
5 Jun 2016 | 17:52
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Buh Victor, hope u know dat u can't marry ur sister. Allow Vincent to eat wat u can't eat.
5 Jun 2016 | 18:06
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Eheh iffa hear....nxt pls.
5 Jun 2016 | 18:13
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Hmmmmmmmmm
5 Jun 2016 | 18:21
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm l
5 Jun 2016 | 18:41
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Wil soon end keh! Dat I tot it wil b a long seasonal movie. Chai
5 Jun 2016 | 18:44
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The party is getting more wild
5 Jun 2016 | 19:04
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dancing nude kwa???? nawoooooo
5 Jun 2016 | 20:27
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Chai!
5 Jun 2016 | 22:47
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Mm run fr ur life
6 Jun 2016 | 02:12
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Omg lets see what you're gonna do
6 Jun 2016 | 04:57
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Guy relax, Nancy is responsible! Don't give yourself Bp for nothin!
6 Jun 2016 | 05:16
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Hey victor u are so so selfish.
6 Jun 2016 | 06:12
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wow....
6 Jun 2016 | 06:14
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Nice one
6 Jun 2016 | 06:27
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vic, over protection na hin be dis o
6 Jun 2016 | 06:33
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op say ntn go apun wit dis nude dance sha next abeg
6 Jun 2016 | 06:34
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Na waa oh
6 Jun 2016 | 08:25
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dz lola self
6 Jun 2016 | 11:59
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Nice..
6 Jun 2016 | 12:03
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NUDE dance chai
6 Jun 2016 | 13:52
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Let Them Screw Ur Sis Nah
6 Jun 2016 | 17:12
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just try vincent nd he will be honest
6 Jun 2016 | 19:02
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 25[/color] Mirabel and I stood dumb for many seconds to collect what our eyes were seeing,,, they were drunk and still having more, the place was smelling crazy, they've been smoking marijuana and other type of weeds, and substances like cocaine and all, they were smoking their lives out. I don't even know any of them there. Lola, Cynthia, Dax, Vincent and those two friends of Lola's weren't there with them. We irritatingly walked passed them to the rooms. Mirabel: Seems Promise left Me: I guess so Mirabel: But she didn't inform any of us Me: Was she even at the pool party? Mirabel: I didn't see her there Me: It could be that she left during that time, She'll never party like that Mirabel: Decent girl huh? Me: Very decent The first room we entered was hell! we saw a real live hardcore pornography going on among about eight of them both girls and guys. They didn't even care to noticed if anyone opened the door before we closed up to next room looking each other but remained speechless. Cynthia and her boyfriend were already asleep completely naked in her messed up room. At Lola's room? I got the shock of my life,,, three in one with Dax, Lola with those two friends of hers... they were extremely high on drugs. Dax: Hey, don't you guys knock? Mirabel: The door was left opened dummy Dax: Oh... but s.. Lola: **Cuts in** You guys care to join the fun? Victor you can take on my girls, I don't need yo little d!ck 'coz I won't even feel it anyway **Laughs out crazily** Mirabel how do you cope with that guy? girls... that dude is so so tiny **three of them laughed crazily, one of the girls had cums on her face and mouth** Mirabel: You're sick,,, let's go Victor **walked out** Lola got me extremely angry that night, I looked at them in disgust before walking out of the room. I was headed to Mirabel's lodge before I heard her voice closed-by. I looked around and saw her at a corner talking with someone unfamiliar to me at that moment. I went closer and that it was Vincent. Me: What's happening here? Vincent: Hey bro Me: Hey,,, why are you sitting out by yourself? Mirabel: He was actually sleeping when I saw him Me: Why don't you go inside? Vincent: I'm ok here,,, here is more cool, inside there is hell even with all the AC's... gosh! Me: So you've been all alone all this while? Vincent: And I'm very cool with it (Hhmmmm... seems he's really a good guy) Mirabel: But Dax is your friend, why aren't you with him? Vincent: Sure I'm with him and that's why I'm still here Me: Alright get up let's go to Mirabel's lodge, its more comfortable there Vincent: Yea it should, i can see it's less noisy. Please show me in before I catch cold out here **Standing up** Mirabel: Sure, lets go Vincent: After you (I was like hmmmm.... Lol) She took him to a room where he'd spend the night. Mirabel: We need to talk Me: About what? Mirabel: About what happened back there, what was she talking about? Me: Lola? Mirabel: Yes Me: Forget about that sweetheart, she's not ok. Lets just go to bed dear Mirabel: I need to understand Me: Sweetheart, there's nothing to understand OK? trust me my love Mirabel: I'm being serious Victor, tell me why she said that, she's high but not out of her sences Me: You listened to her? didn't you see how high she was? Mirabel: You can't tell me that, Lola will never say such thing just like that. Yes she's high and that's exactly when she exposes stuffs Me: Will you calm down? Now tell me, what's your point in this? Mirabel: I dunno, you tell me what she's talking about Me: Why don't you go ask her yourself, go on... she exposes stuffs when she's high right? go on and ask her as she's still high... excuse me **I walked into the room** I got into the room and was about to remove my suit before she stormed in Mirabel: So this is how you want to treat me? Me: Mirabel you better stop this, you're irritating me already Mirabel: Baby why can't you talk to me? Me: Answer this questions, she exposes truth when she's high right? Mirabel: Yea and it's true Me: Ok tell me what brought this issue? Mirabel: She said you have a little tiny,,,,, d!ck Me: Is that true? **Speechless** Me: Why can't you answer me? or you're not sure?? **Smiling** Mirabel: But... Me: No but sweetheart... I went behind her and placed my hands around her waist Me: I love you sweetheart and you know I won't do anything to hurt you, not even a bit will I feel comfortable in hurting you. That which doesn't please you, will never please me. What you hate, that I will also hate for your love is my love. Mirabel: I'm really sorry baby, I just... Me: It's Ok,,, can we go to bed now? Mirabel: Yea sure Me: Good **Removed my dress and about to jump on to the bed** Mirabel: But only after shower Me: What? No, You just go ahead I'm very very tired as it is right now Mirabel: I didn't ask for your opinion neither am I giving you a choice,,, get up and lets shower Me: Look dear its very late already,,, let today's shower slide by please Mirabel: Not a chance, you will save yourself more time if you comply now because you will only sleep after shower,,,, we've spent almost five minutes debating on this when you can shower within just three minutes. I was so weak, I didn't eat well from the party, I managed to gather some strenth before I could have my shower that night. I first had my shower before she did. Mirabel: Now how do you feel? (After I had my shower) Me: Terrible! (Actually, I felt better) Mirabel: Liar... Baby you should be taking your bath two to three times daily and also wash your teeth as well, you will feel free, more relaxed and feel cool when you shower before retiring to bed Me: I've heard you, can I have my sleep now? Mirabel: Nope Me: You must be kidding yourself **rested my body on the bed to sleep** Goodnight! Mirabel: No goodnight kisses? Me: Mirabel please I'm very weak, I might even collapse if I should sit up Mirabel: You're refusing to kiss me? Me: As I am right now? I will even reject $ex Mirabel: Woah... this is serious. Sorry baby for bothering you, I didn't know you're that tired Me: Its okay... **feeling somehow unusual** please switch off the AC its like i'm feeling cold Mirabel: Ok,,, sure you're Ok? Me: Yea,,, goodnight Mirabel: Goodnight, love u... Too tired to say I love her too, I just slept off. During my sleep, I had weird and uncomfortable dreams, I only have such kind of dreams when I'm sick. **The following morning** Mirabel: Victor wake up **tapping me** wake up I opened my eyes,,, I woke up feeling heavy Mirabel: You're burning up! we need to take you to the hospital. Please put on your shirt and trousers lets be going I managed to stood up Me: What about lectures? **feeling uneasy** Mirabel: You need to get checked first, you're sick and you're talking about lectures we can easily catch up with Me: I promised not to miss a single lecture, I have to go to school, I will be fine Mirabel: At the expense of your health? don't be sturbborn, You're going to the hospital I put on my shirt and trousers, she called on the guards and they took me to the hospital, the next thing was me lying on the hospital bed while the Doctor ran some tests on me. Mirabel: I called Nancy and told her what happened, she requested to come at once but I told her to wait till later that the guards will fetch her Me: She's still at your place? Mirabel: Yea, I told her to remain there while we're still here (Then I remembered Vincent spent the night there and he might still be there) Me: No, she has to go back to the house... She can't stay close to Lola Mirabel: Lola and Cynthia are on their way here, they will go to school from here Me: They'll make it to school today after last night? Mirabel: This is not the first time dear, they will go to school if they want to Me: Still I think she should go back to the house to,, to,,, to you know, freshen up, change her dress before coming here Mirabel: **Laughs** So its true? Me: What? Mirabel: Don't worry darling, Vincent left the lodge earliar with Dax Me: Really...? Mirabel: Yeapie Me: Then what's the truth about that? Mirabel: **Smiles** Nancy told me everything dear,,, girls talk Me: About what? Mirabel: How you've been strict on her concerning boys Me: She's exaggerating Mirabel: Really? is that right?? **Doctor walks in** Doctor: Hello Victor Mirabel: Doctor, are the results out? Doctor: Yes Mirabel: What's wrong with him? Doctor: Malaria and typhoid and also his sugar level is very high Mirabel: Is he going to be admitted? Doctor: That won't be necessary, I'll just prescribed some drugs for him Mirabel: Ok, thank you Doctor Doctor: I advise he should stop taking anything that contains more than 2% of sugar. Mr Victor what do you take much that contains sugar? Mirabel: Doctor he takes yoghurt excessively Doctor: I advise him to resist yoghurt for minimum of four months Me: What?! four months? Doctor: Wait, is he like addicted to it? Mirabel: Doctor I really dunno, I only know he drinks it excessively The Doctor started lecturing me on the implications of taking excessive yoghurt. My mind wasn't with him, It was the four months exile that bothers me. [color= red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
7 Jun 2016 | 08:16
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haha thatxis really a huge purnishment for u
7 Jun 2016 | 08:31
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Addicted to yoghurt Haha so even Nancy know
7 Jun 2016 | 08:33
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Lol...nice epi
7 Jun 2016 | 08:39
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I love this story die... THANKS victor
7 Jun 2016 | 08:42
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Lol four months for punishment
7 Jun 2016 | 09:07
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mehn! See severe punishment
7 Jun 2016 | 09:27
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good for u vic
7 Jun 2016 | 09:33
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what a cool episode
7 Jun 2016 | 09:38
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ride on
7 Jun 2016 | 09:39
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Funny guy
7 Jun 2016 | 09:51
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nawa oooh, dancing nude that very bad
7 Jun 2016 | 09:56
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Hahaha Lola is a witch o
7 Jun 2016 | 10:04
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Too bad for vic
7 Jun 2016 | 10:11
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Yipee. Addicted?
7 Jun 2016 | 10:32
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He he he...four month exile
7 Jun 2016 | 10:34
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[color =red]He he he...four month exile[/color]
7 Jun 2016 | 10:37
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iтs for your own good...so comply
7 Jun 2016 | 10:37
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Ending soOn ke?? U better dnt try it.how cn u end d stoRy like dat??bro abeg no try dat kind play dis tym o
7 Jun 2016 | 10:37
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------Go on------
7 Jun 2016 | 10:38
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Ahahahaaaa, how I which the doctor could make it 6 months
7 Jun 2016 | 10:39
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D longest episode ever since u started posting dis story....Thanks Man
7 Jun 2016 | 10:45
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Abeg stop ur yoghurt...
7 Jun 2016 | 11:00
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a huge punishment for u victor
7 Jun 2016 | 11:18
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4 mnth na small tin,mak dem give u 1yr
7 Jun 2016 | 11:39
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No more yoghurt boy
7 Jun 2016 | 11:47
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punishment
7 Jun 2016 | 11:51
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Lmao. Exile indeed
7 Jun 2016 | 11:57
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Lol. Mumu dey think on top 3 months not to drink yoghurt
7 Jun 2016 | 12:09
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see punishment victor u have to endure ...
7 Jun 2016 | 13:06
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Lol.... following
7 Jun 2016 | 13:18
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Now dis story is getn bored
7 Jun 2016 | 13:42
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hmmmm
7 Jun 2016 | 13:56
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na wa for u, sp u nor fit resist yogurt aby
7 Jun 2016 | 14:09
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lol..yoghurt addict.
7 Jun 2016 | 14:11
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lol dis so interesting am enjoying dis story
7 Jun 2016 | 14:54
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Yeah that's good 4 u.
7 Jun 2016 | 15:14
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9ce 1...ride on
7 Jun 2016 | 16:11
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@Vict-Vames, I over-heard doctor sayinq somethinq like u should abstain from takinq yoqhurt for 4 months.. Well, for me I think it should be one year so that u 'll not have Jedi Jedi ailment and plus 2qether with exccessive suqar content in ur body. Remember: "Aka magbòn òwn ch'uku imótó, Ali maka òwn ch'uku ògijò" (Iqala adaqe).
7 Jun 2016 | 16:21
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Baqqar.... Dnt yhu think it rite tym to open up abt dix stuff of yhu with Lola
7 Jun 2016 | 16:44
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Nice one......
7 Jun 2016 | 16:49
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Good for you Victor
7 Jun 2016 | 16:53
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Lolx
7 Jun 2016 | 18:26
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Bt make i ask?....Victor na u go marry ur 6ta!
7 Jun 2016 | 18:27
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lolzzz ......... Punishment
7 Jun 2016 | 19:25
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Hahaha,,. Hollandia
7 Jun 2016 | 19:40
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ending soon ?
7 Jun 2016 | 19:41
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woow! This episode is very sweet did'nt want it to finish sef. Looool Victor d dirty boy see d way she dey lecture u. As for lola nd her highness....
7 Jun 2016 | 20:31
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big punishment for ya,. four months exile....
7 Jun 2016 | 21:21
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Dats serves u ryt,excess of evritin is bad
8 Jun 2016 | 00:42
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Kkkk u worry as if u gonna die without yoghurt
8 Jun 2016 | 01:11
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*lolin*
8 Jun 2016 | 03:10
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its getting Long
8 Jun 2016 | 04:24
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Good, ℓ̊ tirE f☺я̩̥̊ every time yogurt
8 Jun 2016 | 04:47
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Hmmmmmm,
8 Jun 2016 | 05:35
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Addicted to Yoghurt hmmmn
8 Jun 2016 | 08:09
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I know the 4 months will be lyk 4 years to u Victor...anyway serve the punishment
8 Jun 2016 | 09:07
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NUDE ke???? Omo wahala dey 4 all dis baba olowo pikin Oooo!
8 Jun 2016 | 12:32
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hnnnn I think its time for Mirabel to reject what's bad off Victor
8 Jun 2016 | 13:10
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could this love last long?
8 Jun 2016 | 13:32
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hmm
8 Jun 2016 | 14:01
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Following. Nice one
8 Jun 2016 | 16:04
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Eya
8 Jun 2016 | 18:19
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Lol... really funny guy.... thinking abt four month...
9 Jun 2016 | 21:12
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Hmm four months too much? Complainin wen u ar nt even ask to stop it totaly.
10 Jun 2016 | 13:01
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nice one bro...
11 Jun 2016 | 02:00
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You're been over-protective to your Sister, Is she not matured enough to have a boifwend
11 Jun 2016 | 08:36
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still waiting
11 Jun 2016 | 10:53
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Hahahahahaha mr victor, addicted to yougurt and thinking about sis..!
11 Jun 2016 | 19:33
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11 Jun 2016 | 21:01
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you are doomed
12 Jun 2016 | 11:19
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This ur story is very interestin @vames but the posting pattern is boring
12 Jun 2016 | 18:16
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Victor is in big trouble, avoiding his favorite for 4 months
12 Jun 2016 | 19:32
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interesting ride on
12 Jun 2016 | 20:41
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. .. ... .... ..... ...... ....... ........ ......... .......... I mean we are waiting
13 Jun 2016 | 03:58
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[color =blue]EPISODE 26[/color] [b]Lola and Cynthia arrived when we were about to leave the hospital, they left for school from there while we went to Mirabel's lodge. I managed to eat some plantains so I could take my drugs. I took my drugs; slept for over three hours then I woke up feeling much better. I even had a video chat with Ike (Mirabel's cousin). We talked on many things; actually he did most of the talking while I followed up. He was quite a jester, He even said that "If your Parents won't approve of you both, just elope and come to the states" He said it jokingly though and it made sense but I thought about it again that it's not right. Marriage without parental blessing is not right. I also thought about my sister Nancy, so I decided to be making her happy and to make her feel comfortable with me as her big bro. I wanted her to look up to me, to always listen to me with clear understanding and trust me completely. So, instead of imposing power on her that she won't have a boyfriend, I switched to advising her, making her see reasons why I don't want her to have a boyfriend and I also coached her on relationship issues. I started showing her love and care as well as showering her with gifts. I made sure I get something for her whenever I returned to the house most especially ice cream and other snacks. I knew why I had to change my attitude towards her, because,,,, she might rebel against me in the near future when her eyes open fully,,, and she might also start dating secretly. Since I started doing all what I mentioned, she as well changed. My sister and i became friends. She started opening up to me, she mentioned to me all the useless boys that has wooed her and the pending ones. I was surprised to know that some of my useless friends were among. Being close to my sister is what i should've been doing instead of forming senior. All thanks to Mirabel that brought such a wonderful idea,,, or were you thinking it was my idea? Nah... My sister can talk from morning till night, she always have gist for me, she never run out of gist,,, it’s no surprise she inherited it from our Mother. I waited for Mirabel's mother for many days but she didn't show up. I remained indoors after my daily lectures awaiting her surprised visit. I asked Mirabel why it is taking her mother so long; she said her mother has been busy from one meeting or conference to another. Ike (Mirabel's cousin) and I retained good communication with each other, he did most of the calling though. We became friends. He taught me so many things on computer and technology, how to hack on devices, how to spy on someone, he sent me a lecturing video by him on how to design a website and tips on creating traffics and many more. Momma returned home after two months and two weeks,,, Nancy also had to return home two days after, I went with her to spend the weekend at home. On Sunday after service, I approached Dorothy's Mother to know why she didn't come to Church. She said, Dorothy travelled to one of her Paternal Aunt at Asaba, Delta State. She also said that, they'll all be relocating to Port-Harcourt in two weeks’ time. I asked for Dorothy's phone number but she told me that she lost her phone and hasn't gotten another one yet and that they only get to communicate through her Aunt. As time passed by without reaching Dorothy, I unintentional forgot about her. The second semester exams was fast approaching, I didn't allow anything to hinder my study. Although I still watched movies, chats, play video games and all my normal activities was still in place but with timing as there's time for everything,,, I set time to do whatever I wanted. All this while, Mirabel's mother still didn't show up. After some uneventful months, I came back for my second year (200L) while Nancy joined me weeks later as she got admitted,,, she studied Mass communication. One peaceful evening when I was chilling with my girlfriend Mirabel before she suddenly ruined the mood with no-good news. Mirabel: Baby...? Me: Yes dear Mirabel: Remember when we talked about our past relationships? Me: Yea,,, sure Mirabel: You remember the one I told you that we didn't get to break up, that was forced to school abroad and eventually got jailed? Me: Yea, what about him? Mirabel: The thing is uhmm... uhmmm... Me: What is it dear? Mirabel: He is back. He came in last week and has been troubling me to go see him; I dunno how he got my contact Me: You can make it clear to him now that you've moved on,,, nothing much there Mirabel: There's nothing I didn't tell him, he told me to cut whatever tie I gat with you that he's back for me Me: Forget about him, he can't do nothing Mirabel: He is a crazy guy, he just came out of jail, and we dunno what he's capable of Me: Are you afraid of him? Mirabel: Of course I am, he is crazy Me: Have you forgotten who you are? Mirabel: What should I do? Me: You get him locked up if he tries anything stupid Mirabel: Okay Me: What's his name again? Mirabel: Marcus Me: Don't take him serious dear,,, he can't do nothing, I'm here for you Mirabel: What if he gets to know that you're my boyfriend and he comes for you? Me: I can take care of myself dear, besides I'm not worried at all **Phone rings** Mirabel: He is the one calling Me: Give me the phone **I answered it** Me: Hello... Marcus: Who dah f*ck is this?! Me: Dah f*ck is Mirabel's boyfriend and who are you? Marcus: Give the f*cking phone to Mirabel mahn, I ain't got no business with yo' ass **Chai! This guy messing up with 2Pac's number 1 fan,,, A self-gangster** Me: Ok listen up motherfucker! She told me about you and everything you both had before you left her Marcus: I didn't leave her! Me: Well... she moved on, I advise you do the same Marcus: And I advise you to give her ass up mahn, I didn't go through all what I went through just to come back and get nothing for it Me: What are you talking about? Marcus: I ain't explaining sh!t to you, just give the phone to Mirabel and go blank Me: She’s not gonna speak with you ever again,,, I’m in charge, got that? Marcus: I ain't got no beef with you hommy, Mirabel is mine. Let her go like nothing ever happened between you two, only then this town will be cool for you and I.... I love Mirabel like crazy and I ain't gon' let you or anyone else hold me back from getting her back, she's mine! Me: You're just ranting dude, it's long been over between you two ever since you left Marcus: I didn't just leave motherfucker! Me: Yes you did; she lost you and found me Marcus: F*ck you! **Hangs up** Mirabel: What's all that about? Me: Just forget about him dear, everything will remain as it is,,, he can't nothing Mirabel: I hope so but I don't like how you talked to him Me: I'm not a weakling dear; I've never been and can't even pretend to be. I have to be strong for us; I will always fight for us. Nobody will ever come between us except the inevitable. I haven't told you this before but I want to spend the rest of my existence on this earth with you and not even that ex-con can make me bow down. Mirabel: Whoa... I dunno what to say Me: Just don't worry about anything, we shall overcome anything that tries to come between us, let's just see them as trials... Mirabel: Ok my love **Smiles** my life is getting more interesting and I'm getting stronger all because of you,,, I love your courage Me: I love your submission Mirabel: Hhmmmm.... we'll make a wonderful couple Me: Couple? More like a beautiful home We laughed out I got back to the house and couldn't stop thinking about this Marcus of a guy. I think he’s going to be a problem. I got into the house as unknown huge guy wearing black suit and blank shade opened the gate for me and saw a big SUV car parked inside. All my guts went off, I started sweating and breathing hard. I instantly locked car so he won’t come and drag me out. The only thing that came into my mind was that, they were robbers. *What am I going to do? And my Sister is inside the house, what if they do anything to her? I dunno how I’d take it if they should rape or kill her. The guy came knocking on the car; I didn’t know what to do and the guy kept knocking. Out of fear, I quickly grabbed my phone to call Mirabel for help. I dialed her number and it started ringing before I turned to look at the entrance and saw a woman walking out. She resembles the woman I see on TV somehow; I looked closer to be sure before I saw Nancy flaunting her white teeth. Then I heaved a sigh of relief that we’re save and I thanked God immediately. When the woman removed her shade, I saw that she’s the perfect description of the woman I always see in TV and the portrait in Mirabel’s lodge,,,,, Mirabel’s mother the First Lady is finally here! I thought surprisingly inside my mind. [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
13 Jun 2016 | 13:59
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coward
13 Jun 2016 | 14:22
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omo ole (coward) sebi na u dey boast now
13 Jun 2016 | 14:25
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niqqa dey fear sha eno be una fault enjoying it ride on boss
13 Jun 2016 | 14:28
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Time To Meet Her!
13 Jun 2016 | 14:35
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Thats Her Bodyguards All Clad In Blacks .. .So Dont Panic Ride On
13 Jun 2016 | 14:36
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idiot just de make mouth
13 Jun 2016 | 14:41
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Nah only mouth u get
13 Jun 2016 | 15:06
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hahahaha i wonder hw ur gonna be strong for u n mirabel if u can sweat coz of just guys
13 Jun 2016 | 15:10
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Marcus wl surely b a problem
13 Jun 2016 | 15:13
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Be careful o with that ex con......... Thank God 1st lady finally made it to your hostel
13 Jun 2016 | 15:21
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Lets see d man u ar..
13 Jun 2016 | 15:27
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See as fear don catch Vict
13 Jun 2016 | 15:39
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Meet d first lady
13 Jun 2016 | 15:47
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Lol... I think say u gt power
13 Jun 2016 | 15:51
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Haa
13 Jun 2016 | 16:08
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Mirable's mum is finally here. Maybe yu shld use d opportunity 2 tell her abt Marcus
13 Jun 2016 | 16:27
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Wonderful
13 Jun 2016 | 16:30
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Hehehehehehe............... Ua gonna fight 4 ua luv na only. 4 mouth........?
13 Jun 2016 | 16:46
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Nice
13 Jun 2016 | 16:55
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moving fine
13 Jun 2016 | 16:58
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lolzzz ....... Fear fear
13 Jun 2016 | 17:05
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Motherfucker! Wonder hw yhu gonna face this guy of a marcus
13 Jun 2016 | 17:48
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D part we have been waiting 4
13 Jun 2016 | 17:55
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Lol, so u fear reach dis ?
13 Jun 2016 | 18:23
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....Hehehehehe omo dis lola na die ooo...o boi if u fall for her f*cking a$$ u're on ur own niyen oo
13 Jun 2016 | 18:36
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Hmmmm..fear fear guy
13 Jun 2016 | 18:56
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Whao woooo wooooo.... Finally, the first Lady. But u acted rude at first... Out of fear I guess
13 Jun 2016 | 19:02
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Tslike I love this story die
13 Jun 2016 | 19:03
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It's not gonna be easy with that fucking guy Marcus. Watch ya back guy... Its gonna b a challenge
13 Jun 2016 | 19:05
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I just pray mirabel won't dump vames for that fucking nigger
13 Jun 2016 | 19:06
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forming boss b4 na..lol
13 Jun 2016 | 19:15
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wow... she's finally here... let's see how the interview goes
13 Jun 2016 | 19:19
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Ori nke mmadu mana eri kwana nkem... U are selfish mister man..
13 Jun 2016 | 19:28
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Lol, see dis weakling
13 Jun 2016 | 19:37
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Marcus another problem Don surface.... First Lady I hail oh Iya
13 Jun 2016 | 19:37
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So na only mouth u get u just dey form for mirabel oooole coward
13 Jun 2016 | 19:48
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See person way finish the para
13 Jun 2016 | 20:37
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:Ole ni e ooooo
13 Jun 2016 | 20:42
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The story is very interewting but the non constancy is making it boring @coolval22
14 Jun 2016 | 01:24
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so you are afraid
14 Jun 2016 | 03:45
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the first lady no b small thing oo
14 Jun 2016 | 05:04
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lolzzzz Jew man.u are with Mirabel ranting since I thought u get liver self .... hope u didn't urinate in ur trouser
14 Jun 2016 | 05:32
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lolzzzz Jew man.u are with Mirabel ranting since I thought u get liver self .... hope u didn't urinate in ur trouser
14 Jun 2016 | 05:32
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Wat a surprise visit. Buh wait ooh, where ur liver dey after all d boasting n para?
14 Jun 2016 | 06:02
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so u no strong at all
14 Jun 2016 | 08:56
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lolz, na only mouth u get
14 Jun 2016 | 08:57
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Hahahaha... No guts no glory....
14 Jun 2016 | 09:01
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val u never see d guy face u dey fear.
14 Jun 2016 | 11:09
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GOD help you
14 Jun 2016 | 11:22
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Lolz fear fear dude
14 Jun 2016 | 11:29
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Hmmm...meeting d first lady for d first time,what a honour
14 Jun 2016 | 12:18
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u dey 9ja dey form 2pac shakur for one x-convict from america....................hmm devil dey fry akara with ur destiny my niccur
14 Jun 2016 | 13:55
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
14 Jun 2016 | 18:04
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@vict-vames U pass the first test... Next...is the 2nd test. Let's see if u 'll pass that too
14 Jun 2016 | 18:43
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Hmm my guy u ar sweatin lik diz tinkin is Marcus or who, hop u can fight dz batle ni & nt just making mouth. And...... Yea here we ar befor d long awaited special guest, the 1st lady wooooo
14 Jun 2016 | 19:07
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Interesting. U gat to b more careful now that Marcus has finally surface.
14 Jun 2016 | 23:20
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See victor who said he is not a weakling type
15 Jun 2016 | 02:14
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Lol,,,, see fear. So your mind ends on the phone
15 Jun 2016 | 02:41
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We ar waiting o @vames
15 Jun 2016 | 18:12
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[color =blue]Episode 27[/color] [b]It was indeed a surprise visit, even though I already knew she’d be coming, I just wasn’t expecting her today. I took out my handkerchief and wiped off sweats on my face and composed myself so I won’t look or act like an idiot. I alighted from the car and walked towards them like a gentleman that I am. I fixed my gaze at the First lady; she was such a beauty even though Mirabel resembles her Father – the president instead. She was light skinned averaged height and weight cladded with a fitted outfit. First lady: Hello Victor **She greeted me first… ope o** Me: Whoa… good afternoon your highness… sorry I mean, yo your Excellency. I’m deeply honoured having you here **My confidence just quench** First lady: Thank you Me: Please…. **Ushering her into the house** First lady: Okay… but I won’t be staying longer; you know this is not an official visit that’s why I came in disguise and also I’ve been here for almost an hour now Me: Sorry I kept you waiting ma First lady: It’s okay; I enjoyed your sister’s company, she’s good in talking; I like her Me: Thanks ma We got inside; I saw that Nancy has already offered her the wine I bought for her months ago expecting her coming. First lady: John…? The two security guards standing in the parlor walked out. I guess one of them is named John and the First lady called on him to excuse us. She came with three security guards and a car. Like she said earlier that she came in disguise that’s why she didn’t come with her convoy. Nancy: Hhmmm… I will be in the kitchen (She excused herself) I was seated looking around like a stranger, didn’t know what to say… First lady: So… Victor; Mirabel told me many positive things about you and your family of which indicate that you’re from a good home. So your Dad is a Chartered Accountant right? Me: Yes ma Your Excellency First lady: **Smiling** Please just see me as Mirabel’s mother for I didn’t come here on official ground as the First lady but as a mother that want the best for her daughter Me: Ok ma **Confidence restored** First lady: Good! Now tell me, what’s your vision in life? Me: I’ll say visions ma, for I have many visions and wish to accomplish them all First lady: Okay… Me: I have a vision of being a big businessman; a manufacturer, importer of raw materials and exporter of finished goods. I see myself establishing a business empire with industries and manufacturing plants planted all over the country and beyond. By improving standards of living in the Country, establishing a special institution in training the orphans and the less privileged. I see myself representing my generation and also to be an influence to many generations to come. First lady: That’s a big one Victor. What makes you think you can translate these visions into reality? Me: Ma, ever since I became a believer, so many favours has been coming my way. I believe and have faith in God. I started praying over these visions of mine against my future since I started studying Business Administration. That is to say, I’m investing my prayers on what I want in future. First lady: I see…Impressive Me: And again, having Mirabel is another reason why I know that my vision will turn into a reality First lady: And how is that? Me: Ok look at it this way Ma, I’m young I know but I’ve learnt and observed many things about relationships and having a good, peaceful and influential home. Mirabel has every capacity of building a home as much as I know. With Mirabel, I know I’ll have a peaceful and influential home for I want her to be my future wife. We have absolute love for each other, she’s extremely humble, caring, and hard-working – she loves learning positive things, she’s kind, she has the spirit of giving. In fact, she’s perfect in all aspect of a woman that God has made to perfect a man…having Mirabel from now already shows how successful my visions will become in reality. First lady: You sound so sure of yourself. I’m impressed with your courage, your determination and your belief Me: Thank you Ma First lady: You see… my daughter has been very happy since you both started getting close to each other and seeing my daughter happy, makes me happier. She told me everything from when you both met to when and how you started dating and all of that. Although I blamed her earlier for trying to woo a guy instead of the other way round. I tried to discourage her and make see reasons on why it’s not proper for a girl to express her feelings to a guy first. But my smart daughter proved my belief wrong when the result of her actions did her good instead. From how you snubbed her at first to how you passed her tests and how you eventually did the wooing. I trust my daughter very much and I support her decisions. So…assuming you were after her money, she would’ve detected it because she’s very smart but I just don’t know if you’re a master in your game and maybe your smartness surpasses hers to get what you want. Me: **Confused** I don’t understand First lady: I see…I’ve seen how things like this happen. When a guy claims to love a rich girl, he invests his time and love on her then later disappoints her after getting what he wanted. Like I earlier that Mirabel told me a lot about you and your family, but I want to hear from the horse’s mouth to give me reasons why I should belief that you’re not after my daughter’s money, hope you don’t mind? Me: Not at all… well, I have a contented family that provide all of my needs, as you know my father is a professional chartered accountant; his income is enough to take care of the family but still my mother own a big shop that brings in more income. So…I and my family are not lacking Ma by God’s grace. And most importantly, I’m not lazy; I’m doing very well in school getting high grades so I can attain the utmost knowledge and qualifications in establishing my future goals. And with all due respect Ma, my father didn’t depend on his wife or any person to get to where he is right now, he only needed supports and that’s what I need too. My Parents taught me never to depend on a woman or allow her to perform my responsibilities when I’m still fit, for it’s not going to help the home. I love your daughter for who she is; her character, her perfection, her upbringing, her nature, and her kind of person. Lemme use this opportunity to thank you ma for raising such a wonderful daughter. Even with your busy schedule and little time you spend with her, you still managed to train her well. Her morals are too excellent for a girl from a wealthy home. She cooks pretty well too, all thanks to you as she’d say. First lady: **Smiling** I’m short of words,,, So far you’ve proven to be of good behavior and come from a good home. I’ll like to meet with your mother some time so uhmmm… we can have a chat. Me: That can be arranged ma First lady: And your father, hope he’s cool? Me: Cool but very strict only on morals and academic matters First lady: Okay… uhmm… its ok, I like you (smiling) even though you look shy, you still know what to say that’d make someone follow your lead. With the few minutes I have spent here I’ve learnt some things about you. I see some aspiring greatness in you and I can see that you have the flair of a leader. Me: Thank you ma First lady: I have to get going now Victor **Standing up** Me: Ok ma, I really appreciate you coming here First lady: Anything for my daughter Me: Is she aware of your visit? First lady: Sure and so are you Me: Ma…? First lady: **Smiling** No need pretending, I know she told you about my plan of coming here and that stand as one of the reasons why it took me this long to show up. Me: Honestly I wasn’t expecting you to show up today of all days. It’s indeed a surprise visit First lady: Yea, even when my daughter tried to compromise my plan – she forgot that I gave birth to her. We both laughed as I walk her to the door. Something then came into my mind to ask her of but I couldn’t, I became nervous. I don’t know when I’m going to get this type of opportunity again so summoned courage to ask her. Me: Ma? First lady: **Turns back** Yes…? Me: Ma, I will also use this opportunity with your permission of course; to ask for your blessing to court your daughter First lady: I thought you will never ask. You have my blessing and my full permission Me: Whoa… thank you so much ma First lady: But! Me: What ma? First lady: Don’t you ever hurt her Me: Not a chance, trust me on that ma First lady: And I’m sure you know your limit right? Me: Absolutely! First lady: Good… where is my new friend Nancy? Me: Inside ma, lemme call her… Nancy! Nancy!! **She answered from the background** (We’re now outside) First lady: John… The two security guards at the doorpost opened the car boot and off loaded stuffs from it. (Nancy now with us) First lady: Well… I didn’t come empty-handed; here, I brought to you some presidential supplies, you can have them (Before I could utter a word from my already opened mouth, Nancy took over. Nancy: Whoa…you’re very kind ma, thank you very much. **Already checking the supplies** Me: Thanks a lot ma, I really appreciate the gesture First lady: You’re both welcome… Ok time to go **Walking into the car** Me: Goodbye ma Nancy: Bye ma, hope to see you again soonest! First lady: Not a problem, byee **waving at us** Me/Nancy: Byeee…. **Waving at her too till they zoomed off sight** I closed the gate and rushed back to the house to see what she brought. I saw Nancy already biting a strawberry fruit. The supplies contained so many stuffs such as: seven packs of frozen chicken, two crates of eggs, dozens of soft drinks, and a carton-full each for apples, strawberries, grapes and much more including food ingredients. I called Mirabel and told her how it went with her mother and also invited her to come over. She came in about 35 minutes later and we canceled a pack of the frozen chicken that night with no left overs courtesy of me. Later in the night when we were already sleeping around 11.pm or so, I had a call from an unknown caller. I just managed to pick up and the following conversation ensued. Me: Hello Caller: Let this sound as a clear warning to you, stay away from Mirabel effective from this hour. And if you chose not to, I promise to make life unbearable for you. This is Marcus and my words don’t come back to me empty without accomplishment…like I said earlier, it’s a clear warning. **Hangs up** All what he said was like a dream to me that night because I was so weak and sleepy that I just fell back to bed. [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
16 Jun 2016 | 06:26
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Hmmmmmmmm i comment my reserve still observing marcus @vict-vames more ogogoro to your bottle
16 Jun 2016 | 07:12
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Hmmm..mirabel ave to tell her mother abt marcus na
16 Jun 2016 | 07:17
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instrestin
16 Jun 2016 | 07:26
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following
16 Jun 2016 | 07:29
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Hmmmmm.... If i guess right, that must be Marcus... Anyway i seems to love the first lady... Whoa!!! She's cool... U gat urself a nice mother-in-law... Remember don't hurt ha baby Gal
16 Jun 2016 | 07:31
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Wow Victor u r in 4 a serious love battle
16 Jun 2016 | 07:38
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[color =red]Hmm,,,Interesting...[/color]
16 Jun 2016 | 07:40
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I believe dat First Lady can handle Marcus with her position as she given d permission to court her daughter. So, let Mirabel tell her mother abt Marcus threat.
16 Jun 2016 | 07:59
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Dream indeed
16 Jun 2016 | 08:04
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I hope it is. let that word remain as a dream.
16 Jun 2016 | 08:12
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bia Marcus take your time ooooooooo
16 Jun 2016 | 08:12
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Dis Marcus of a guy will be a real nuisance
16 Jun 2016 | 08:19
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Oooh God! This marcus of a bitch again
16 Jun 2016 | 08:26
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Mirabel do something
16 Jun 2016 | 08:45
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Coded mumsy but wqtch out 4 marcus
16 Jun 2016 | 08:52
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dreaming tinx
16 Jun 2016 | 09:03
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Just imagine me been paid a visit by Aisha Buhari.... @fridex oboy how u see am.
16 Jun 2016 | 09:40
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Marcuuuuuuuuuuuuus!!!, I foresee your doooooooom!
16 Jun 2016 | 09:47
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Remember first lady supports you ooo so no shiver
16 Jun 2016 | 09:49
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Wow meeting the first lady is a dream come true
16 Jun 2016 | 10:31
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Marcus... Hez coming .. Chai.. See gobe
16 Jun 2016 | 10:55
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Hmmm..Its a gud visit..Bt u gat to be a man so u can withstand mercus
16 Jun 2016 | 11:09
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Lol
16 Jun 2016 | 11:52
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U don dey form over sabi abi? Well marcus would soon deal with u. Barman 1pack of cigarette for @vict-vames.
16 Jun 2016 | 12:28
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Mirabel try to tell your mum abt marcus
16 Jun 2016 | 13:10
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Nice but try nd update fast
16 Jun 2016 | 13:14
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With the first lady's consent and blessing for you to court her daughter, Marcus and his likes are just ranting. You only needs to be careful not to be taken unawares and try as much as possible to report any suspicion whatsoever
16 Jun 2016 | 13:29
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crazy marcus
16 Jun 2016 | 13:44
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Y Marcus or whatever wnt to brk this perfect relationship na
16 Jun 2016 | 14:01
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u guys have to do something about this marcus before is too late
16 Jun 2016 | 14:12
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victor! what a smart answer thank your God say you no fall my hand Marcus needs a severe beating from me. lol
16 Jun 2016 | 14:24
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just be care
16 Jun 2016 | 14:36
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Interesting...... As for Marcus, he want to rot in jail again.
16 Jun 2016 | 15:04
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Wetin be this Marcus own sef
16 Jun 2016 | 15:06
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I dey see danger danger wahala dey Abi u dey see danger danger ehh
16 Jun 2016 | 16:04
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U go soon collect
16 Jun 2016 | 16:12
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Hmmmm,
16 Jun 2016 | 16:33
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how will u over come this vick
16 Jun 2016 | 16:34
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Ahahahaha! Lauqh no qo kill me for here o @Macrex O boy, u funny with this ur imaqination o. How would u even imaqine such thinq in the first place.
16 Jun 2016 | 16:41
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Woooow u stand more ground on Mirabel nw than him so use ur power as d authorized presido's dauther boyfrnd to subdue dt moron
16 Jun 2016 | 17:04
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Kudos
16 Jun 2016 | 17:51
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This is the tym to prove to the gal whether yhu love her or nt Whether yhu fight for the love yhu clam for her or nt
16 Jun 2016 | 17:55
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Hahaha guys some times we need to man up and take charge of some situations
16 Jun 2016 | 18:50
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I wonda y life s full of dual sidedness
16 Jun 2016 | 19:11
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this is hot...
16 Jun 2016 | 19:27
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Nice one.
16 Jun 2016 | 19:42
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Since the first lady is on your side, you don't have to worry about the loser!
16 Jun 2016 | 19:44
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Victor U don enta am o... But why can't u guys let the first lady know atleast u ar naw an inlaw to her
17 Jun 2016 | 01:55
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With 1st lady by your side nothing go happen
17 Jun 2016 | 03:37
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Hmmmm....Thumbs Up.Ride On
17 Jun 2016 | 09:48
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;-) *_* Go On
17 Jun 2016 | 09:49
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Hmmmmmmmm i comment my reserve still observing marcus @vict-vames more ogogoro to your bottle
17 Jun 2016 | 09:58
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marcus eyes is on u
17 Jun 2016 | 09:59
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exconvict has spoken n its final
17 Jun 2016 | 14:56
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hmmmmmm stil observing
17 Jun 2016 | 18:37
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Continue o
18 Jun 2016 | 08:23
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cool...let d game begin
18 Jun 2016 | 08:25
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Marcus is just a traitor, though he may keep trying but i advise him to stay off
19 Jun 2016 | 02:14
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ride on bro I dey feel u
19 Jun 2016 | 03:21
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Its going to be a test of love Ride on
19 Jun 2016 | 18:25
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hmmm
20 Jun 2016 | 09:35
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nice
20 Jun 2016 | 09:35
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As expected, the suspense now getting in the story..... just as Dorothy came back, so Marcus also showed up. let keep the ball rollinggggg...
20 Jun 2016 | 09:59
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here d terrible comes... but never to fear victor another jail awaits Macus sooner. Lol. next pls
21 Jun 2016 | 08:03
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The earlier the better she(Mirabel) inform her mother
21 Jun 2016 | 10:30
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Wooo closs to a week nw yet no post. We ar waiting o @vames
21 Jun 2016 | 12:17
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Hmmm trouble lomming
21 Jun 2016 | 12:25
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Is Marcus for real? Can't he just accept that Marabel has moved on. Victor, I fear for u now. MARCUS has been through hell and back, he has nothing to loose deleting and cancelling u.just b prayerful, hope God saves u this time. But I still feel u ain't through with Lola's Drama. Something will come from it. I wish u told Mirabel that time everything that transpired between Lola and ur self. Don't loose the trust Mirabel has for u. Trust is a very fragile thing, trust me when u stand alone
21 Jun 2016 | 16:05
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Hmm
21 Jun 2016 | 17:08
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Dis Mercuze of a guy is reali a threat, sumtin has to b done on time, bt I believe wit d first lady on ur side u wil surely sail thro
22 Jun 2016 | 11:39
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Interesting... We,re expecting d next episode
22 Jun 2016 | 14:33
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No post yet nawaoooo
23 Jun 2016 | 00:17
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 28[/color] I woke up the following morning thinking about the call from Marcus last night; I checked my phone to review my call history, then I realized it wasn’t a dream but real. I talked with Mirabel about it, she felt uncomfortable about it. I told her not to fret that he can’t do anything that’d make me bow. We went to School and came back in the evening because a Lecturer shifted his period to 4.pm and made the day a stressful one. Later in the evening, I had a video chat with Ike (Mirabel’s cousin). The following conversation ensued after exchanging pleasantries. Ike: So… are you earning on your own as a business student? Me: Nope Ike: Have you thought about the kind of business you want to engage in from now? Me: Not yet, I’ll think about it more after school Ike: Are you kidding? After school? So you’ll keep depending on your parents till you graduate? Me: Seems so, I mean they’re capable Ike: I’m not talking parental capability mahn! I stopped receiving a cent from my billionaire parents even before I got into college. I earned my first million dollars at age 19. Wake up mahn! You start your career and future now not after you start growing matured beards or something. Me: Ok I’ll think about it Ike: Do you have anything in mind? Me: Hhmmm… not really Ike: What about your passion or visions of life? Me: I have them but they’re not something I can start with here in the University Ike: Which are? Me: Building a business empire in summary Ike: That’d require a lot of capital to begin with as well Me: Yea Ike: And how do you intend to raise the capital to finance it after you graduate? Me: **Speechless** Ike: See what I’m saying? You need to be productive and career-focused from now then you begin your establishment after school Me: Whoa… I come I never thought about this? Thanks a lot mahn; I’ll start thinking about it from today Ike: Too late already Me: What? Ike: To me, you’re already late. Now look at this; you’re already in your second year and you have two years to graduate right? Me: Yea Ike: Ok now look it, before you think about what to do, before you start doing whatever it is you want to do and before you start earning handsomely? Two years won’t be enough believe me Me: So what do you think I should do? Ike: Good! I’ve decided on handing over the ownership of one of my top-earning websites to you to begin with**Smiling** Me: Really? Ike: Yea Me: Whoa… that’s awesome, thanks a lot Ike: The market price of the site is worth $2.7 million **Both my eyes and my mouth opened up wide in shock** Ike: **Continued** you earn a monthly income of about $24,000 even more as much as you manage it well Me: For real?! Ike: Yea and I’ll partner with you for the next six months with no benefit so I can be able to put you through on how you can run the site effectively. Me: Thanks so much bro, I really appreciate this; I really can’t thank you enough Ike: Come on mahn, I’ve empowered so many youths I don’t even know; besides being my sister’s boyfriend, you’re also my friend Ok? So just chill and start preparing for your future Me: This is great; I shall forever be grateful for this favor Ike: It’s okay…you will have to text me your email address so I’ll send everything you’ll need to know about the site and how to run it and I’ll also arrange how you’ll be getting your money. Me: Ok bro, I’ll do that right away I texted him my email address without wasting time; then I started thinking about it with excitement and astonishment. If I should save such kind of income in three years, I know what I’ll get. My future is sure! Vames Empire On The Way!! I screamed out loud. I couldn’t even eat that night. I bought suya and ate it with hollandia yoghurt. I woke up the following morning and the first thing that came into my mind was my new source of income. I couldn’t even focus on my morning reading because of it and we have test that day. Later in school, I told Mirabel about Ike’s offer; she was happy for me. She called her cousin that moment to appreciate him. After the test, we had another lecture before rounding up for the day. I was so eager to go home; even when I was in the lecture hall, business ideas kept roaming through my head. I had to drop by an eatery to buy something to eat because Nancy remained in school; she has lecture. On reaching the house, I had to drop down and open the gate as no one was around. I drove in, alighted from the car to go and close the gate only for me to turn around and saw someone with a big scar on his fore-head. Intruder: Hi, I’m Marcus **Gbow!!** He accompanied the introduction with a punch straight to my nose; I shifted backward but another intruder behind me pushed me forward to receive a kick from Marcus, but I pushed his (Marcus) leg away. I quickly turned around with a punch hit to the face of the guy behind me – he shifted backwards as well. Two other guys came along to get me down. On seeing them, I adjusted a little to balance myself while they rushed me with punches from all angles till I fell to the ground. While on the ground, I tightened my fist then rose up and hit one of them straight to the jaw (Uppercut) he went down; I hit another one on the chest before Marcus gave me a super-kick from behind then the force from kick prompted me to head the guy in front of me on his nose before we both fell down. I quickly got up and ran towards Marcus with rage. We engaged in a fist fight. He was very muscular and strong but I didn’t care about it that moment because I fight with anger and I won’t stop until my opponent goes down or something else happens. The other guys dragged me back from him but I shook them off with all my strength and went back to face their leader. I came extremely hard on him this time with a push that got him down; then I pounced on him punching his face as if I was crazy that I totally forgot about the other guys he came with until a heavy plank wood landed on my head and send me off to the other side of the ground. I held my head in pain for many minutes. Marcus: I warned you! You got lucky that I even gave you a chance; but still you didn’t adhere to my warnings motherf*cka! This is what you get for being a coward!! What you gon’ do now? Common get up and face me! Why can’t you?! You think you’re a tough guy huh? huh?!! Answer me mother*cker! **Kicking me** Marcus: Guys? Guys: Yes boss! Marcus: You know what to do with him **Walking away** On hearing that, I prayed a fast prayer to God in my mind for mercy and I also declared that I will not die but live and accomplish my life-mission on earth! I started gaining strength while praying before the three guys came closer to me. The first guy that touched me got it back from me as I kicked hard against his penis while I was still on the ground before I quickly stood with my pen and stabbed the second one on his shoulder as he was about to bend down. The third one came hard on me but didn’t get me as I blinded his eyes with a strong slap and punched his stomach continuously till he fell down. Then I ran towards Marcus who was standing before the opened-gate watching the action. On getting closer to him, I suddenly stopped when he brought out a gun and pointed it straight to my skull. Marcus: Step back! **I moved a step backward** Marcus: Now get into the f*cking house! Where you’ll die slow motherf*cker… hahahahaha **I hesitated thinking of a way of getting his gun** Marcus: Get in motherf*cker!! Me: Then what will you do? Kill me? For what? For a girl you have no chance with? Go ahead and kill me! Marcus: Of course I will kill you. She has loved me more than she ever loved you! Me: That’s a lie and you it! Your relationship with her didn’t even last for a month Marcus: Doesn’t matter, she still loves me; you’re the problem for us not coming back together. So with you outta the way…? She’ll crawl back to me! Me: That’s never going to happen! Marcus: Maybe not, buh I don’t mind trying or is there harm in trial? Me: Killing me won’t bring Mirabel back to you; she knows how monstrous you’ve turned into Marcus: You know… I discovered that, it was only you she had date after me right? So getting her back won’t be much of a problem Me: She will never get back to yo… Marcus: **Cuts in** Shut tha fuck up! Now turn around!! **** Marcus: Turn around you mother*cker!! Voice: Drop your weapon! He got distracted when he faced where the voice came from. I didn’t bother to know whose voice it was; I grabbed the opportunity by attacking him with a spear (Those who watch wrestling like WWE will understand what Spear Attack means) the gun fell off his hand then I rushed to get it and pointed it at him while he was still on the ground groaning. Then I saw Police men coming to the scene. Police: You drop the gun! **talking to me** Mirabel: He is the victim here officer! I dropped the gun; one of the Police men collected it from the ground and handcuffed Marcus. I showed them the other three guys behind my car and they arrested four of them. The Police told me to visit the station tomorrow to write my statement of which I promised to show up. Then they zoomed off. Mirabel was already hugging me. Mirabel: Are you Ok? Me: Yea…I’m still alive **Smiling** Mirabel: Stop joking **Hits my chest** It’s a good thing that we didn’t come too late Vincent: But bro, how come those guys are also wounded? What happened here? Dax: I’m shocked myself, how did you do it Vickey? Mirabel: You guys should let him get medical attention first before questioning him na. But baby how did you managed to…you know…what really happened? Me: You guys don’t expect me to stay and watch some guys kill me without fighting back right? It will be nicer if you guys can get me a first aid box or something. I need to call Nancy to know if she’s Ok Vincent: I will do that! **I turned to look at him somehow suspicious** Vincent: I meant the First aid stuff **Sounded suspiciously** Me: Hhmmmm… I dialed Nancy’s line when going inside; she said she’s fine, that she’s on her way. Me: I appreciate you guys for the help; thank you guys Vincent: You’re welcome bro Dax: We got your back Me: But how did you guys know that I was in danger? I was surprised Mirabel: Well…it was from school I sighted Marcus from afar when he sent one guy to call me of which I ignored. I kept an eye on him to see his reaction. When you announced your departure and left, I saw him also stood up with his gangs and left too after some seconds of your departure. I dialed your number multiple times to inform you maybe they were after you but you didn’t pick up. Me: Yea…I put it silent during the lectures and forgot to remove it from silent Mirabel: Okay…I got worried; then I informed Dax and Vincent about it before we drove to the police station in the town, we got some police men and hurried here. Me: Thanks a lot; you saved me from that psychotic obsessed fellow. Vincent: So…your own side of the story bro; what happened here? How did you manage to…to to…injure them too? Nancy interrupted with a knock on the gate; Vincent offered to open the gate. She asked what happened to me as soon as she saw me. I told them everything that happened, the scenes, the action and all except the last conversation between me and Marcus. Mirabel’s mother – the first lady called me later in the evening to greet me about what happened; Mirabel told her. I saved her number after the call and started calling her from time to time. Mirabel call my mother almost every day as well. [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
23 Jun 2016 | 10:16
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Yooo u be sleeping n don't take de threat n warning serious!!!!
23 Jun 2016 | 12:27
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na wa o i no fit fight bcos of gal wey b say gals plenty pass boys the ratio na 20:1 some guys the try sha thumbs up to you @victor
23 Jun 2016 | 13:00
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Victor the Kiliwi Nwachukwu of our time lol Nice one
23 Jun 2016 | 13:13
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na waoo!!! some people are foolish I mean some men..... fighting with a girl who is not your wife nor your fiance ..he need to be jail for ever idiot...
23 Jun 2016 | 13:30
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Inlaw things
23 Jun 2016 | 13:32
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mentor nice one bro
23 Jun 2016 | 13:48
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Great epi
23 Jun 2016 | 13:51
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Lolz........... Nice1 bro, person wey he dy. Fight4 slf no luk am 2nd tym
23 Jun 2016 | 14:02
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hsha dat gud
23 Jun 2016 | 14:04
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Mirabel na ur wife bro
23 Jun 2016 | 14:22
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dats kul u guys will make a good couple... next pls vames dey super man!!!
23 Jun 2016 | 14:35
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Victor the ninja warrior
23 Jun 2016 | 14:47
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Nice 1@vic, hope u will laugh last @d end
23 Jun 2016 | 15:10
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Waooo this is gr8. Vicky the war lord
23 Jun 2016 | 15:13
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Good!
23 Jun 2016 | 15:17
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I no knw say u b COMMANDO o.. U go teach me hw to fight o.. Unah marriage don sure oo
23 Jun 2016 | 15:18
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No b small fight... tnk God everything is ohk nw
23 Jun 2016 | 15:21
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Like your style @victor
23 Jun 2016 | 15:26
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Thank God say you dey watch wrestling small if not you for don die
23 Jun 2016 | 15:43
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See favour o
23 Jun 2016 | 15:59
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na GOD save u o
23 Jun 2016 | 16:17
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vicky is really a man
23 Jun 2016 | 16:30
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Hmmmmmm Victor! You didn't tell us you are Commando abi nah Jetli you be? Faced four guys in a combat and subdued them Lol! That Marcus is truly a psycho dude to resolve in fighting you over a girl's rejection. I wonder why some guys are just insensible and disgracing the Guys club. Mirable is really very observant to have noted the impending danger and acted correctly. About Ike's offer, guy I dey envy you oooo! Your relationship with Mirable had done you much more good and brought many favour to you. Enjoy!
23 Jun 2016 | 16:34
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Fighter.....I hail o
23 Jun 2016 | 16:45
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Bravo. U outwitted d hoodlums
23 Jun 2016 | 16:45
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so Now u dey form James Bond Ko na rambo ni
23 Jun 2016 | 16:57
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sweet lover, how many boys can still do this
23 Jun 2016 | 17:12
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hmmnn ...... Marcus is really an idiot
23 Jun 2016 | 17:24
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Hmmm Victor, you've nw turn to Jackie Chan- The Sturbborn fighter that won't give up. Well, you try sha
23 Jun 2016 | 17:30
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wow interesting in here so what happened next
23 Jun 2016 | 17:35
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Wow congrats vict
23 Jun 2016 | 17:53
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I love how you dealt with marcus and his guys
23 Jun 2016 | 17:58
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Wheeewwwph! That was hectic
23 Jun 2016 | 18:05
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@vict-vames u no dey ever hear word at all o, shey no be the hollandia yoqhurt wey doctor prescribed to u make u never beqin dey take until next year nah im u don start to dey take so? Well, emm... I for like ahm wella if Jedi_Jedi visit u for just 1 week make u fit see reason why doctor talk ahm sey no hollandia yoqhurt for u for 1year...
23 Jun 2016 | 18:17
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U b jackie chan abi? Good one, dey act action film
23 Jun 2016 | 18:53
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Hmmmmm i go love oooo
23 Jun 2016 | 18:57
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Welldone victor. We go soon give blue belt for karate
23 Jun 2016 | 18:58
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Bruce lee vic
23 Jun 2016 | 19:06
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God save you
23 Jun 2016 | 19:17
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Waooo this is gr8. Vicky the war lord, up U my man
23 Jun 2016 | 20:12
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hmmmm nice one
23 Jun 2016 | 20:15
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Hmmmmmmmmm power much.
23 Jun 2016 | 20:45
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this Marcus is a fool
23 Jun 2016 | 22:24
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yawning .@
24 Jun 2016 | 01:55
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Hmmm... Report that Marcus to lady1 immediAtely!
24 Jun 2016 | 02:13
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in law
24 Jun 2016 | 02:30
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SPEAR.., #roman reigns...... u are the man
24 Jun 2016 | 04:56
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Hey! This writter is someelse bravo! The suspension have been very tiqht some part in the written made me lauqh out the ass just kinda funny
24 Jun 2016 | 07:29
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vict, u are strong o i luv ur courage
24 Jun 2016 | 07:45
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some men are foolish o, fighting over a girl who is not yet your wife nor your fiance
24 Jun 2016 | 07:47
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I believe one day the story go finish
24 Jun 2016 | 08:48
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9ce 1 bro,#really love this story
24 Jun 2016 | 09:18
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U fought like jet Li
24 Jun 2016 | 09:26
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God save u
24 Jun 2016 | 10:20
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Abeg summarize dis drama abi dream make we rest cos me I don tire gan
24 Jun 2016 | 11:53
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So you day tell me say u be jet li na,... Make i catch u @vict-vames
24 Jun 2016 | 15:50
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Nice One @vict-vames
24 Jun 2016 | 18:05
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wooaah!!!
24 Jun 2016 | 18:32
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I love this how I wish to get strength like that.
24 Jun 2016 | 18:39
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There should be something she is didn't tell you, so you try and fine out before you dry for a girl.
24 Jun 2016 | 21:08
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Hmm, bravo it is good to stand up for what is urs..... Be careful my man I got ur back
25 Jun 2016 | 05:10
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Nice one
25 Jun 2016 | 07:30
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na so u get strength reach # vamez
25 Jun 2016 | 09:29
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 29[/color] Mirabel spent the night with me to take care of me and the injuries I sustained from Marcus and his gang. But it didn’t stop me from going to school the following day. After the incidence and the arrest of Marcus and his gang; everything started going smoothly and peacefully. Ike did exactly what he said he’d do. He handed over his website’s ownership to me with every arrangement necessary. It’s a downloading site that has anything downloadable like Application softwares, games, Hollywood and Bollywood movies, Tv series, Wrestling WWE and TNA, football highlights and full match, music audios and videos, technology features and so much more. He taught me everything I needed to know on how to run the site. The site was extremely large. That was when I got to understand fully that success doesn’t come easily without working for it. I had conflicts with both my studies and the site that made every day a stressful one for me. There were already six people working at the site before I became the owner; I became the boss of six foreign people. I started earning thousands of dollars (millions of naira) as time passed by. I opened three current accounts in three different banks. I still didn’t stop collecting money from my Parents because I don’t know how to tell them about my source of income With the underground help from the first lady; Marcus got tried where he was found guilty and got convicted for attempted murder to serve 27 years jail term along with his gangs. The news got into the newspapers because his Father was a notable man in the society and a billionaire at such. The press met with him and questioned him on what he’d say about his son’s case that could ruin his reputation. He simply replied saying that he has no son. Then sources reached the media saying that he has long disowned Marcus as his son. Sometime later, the meeting for my mother and Mirabel’s mother to meet were arranged and they eventually met in the house I was staying (I was staying there temporally, so I can’t call it my house). My Father was on a work trip when she came with a girl (Her house help) she was quite pretty and well statured. Mirabel’s mother – the first lady came a day after my momma’s arrival. Good compliments came from both ends after their meeting. Momma left a day after their meeting. Day after day, my bank account kept growing big – odikwa large! I pay my tithes and also keep 10% from my income for my personal use. I always buy gifts for my sister and my girlfriend and sometimes for my best friend Promise. One certain day when I was in my best mood because of how happy I was; Vincent approached me requesting for my permission to date my sister Nancy. He caught me unaware seriously. I knew that my sister was matured enough already so I played cool and gentle. Me: Well…You’ve been a nice guy since I know you and you’re Ok. You can talk to her first then face me if she’ll agree to date you Vincent: Actually…it was her idea that I should ask for your permission **Inside my mind I was like what?! Although I still remained cool but my facial expression changed instantly** Me: That means she has agreed to date you? **controlling myself** Vincent: Uhmmm…not fully bro, that’s why she told me to seek for your permission Me: Ok listen up; she knows why she asked you to seek my permission. You can go ahead; she’s smart enough but if you lose your cool towards her? May God help us! She’s never had a boyfriend before which will make you her first. Don’t ever even think of seeing her nakedness talk less of attempting to, because she won’t dare give in and you also shouldn’t even try it. Vincent: Chill bro…why all this? I’m not s*x inclined please. I came from a Christian home and I was brought up to fear God. I’m not lusting after your sister bro! I fell in love with her because of the kind of person she is. She’s all I ever I dreamed of. She’s a virgin I know and so am I. I hope it doesn’t surprise you. My ex-girlfriend who was also a Christian and we fellowship together broke up with me because of s*x; she thought I was impotent. I don’t like girls that will allow a guy have s*x with her before marriage. Girls that have s*x disgusts me bro! That’s the first thing that got me attracted to your sister when I discovered how reserved and cool she is and how you’ve been protecting her as well. I won’t even kiss her because I’m made to understand that kissing before marriage isn’t right as well. I think you should know that too. Me: I feel like I’m being blasted Vincent: **Laughs out** Ahhh! Not like that bro; I’m only trying to defend myself and also present myself clean as well Me: So…what do you want from my sister? Vincent: Well…my real intention is to court her. She’s a nice girl and I wouldn’t want her to fall into the wrong hands in the near future by not presenting my intentions towards her from now. So…I’ll like to reserve her for myself before the bad guys come get her first for I wouldn’t want to miss the opportunity because girls like her are very rare. Me: It’s okay….just trying to make things clear so there won’t be any mishap in the near future Vincent: I understand; I will do the same for my sister Me: Good thing we understand each other Vincent: Absolutely! Me: So you have a sister or sisters? Vincent: Three sisters; two are out of the country Me: And you protect the at home from guys? Vincent: Not really, she’s a big girl; she can take care of herself and I trust her Me: You both are very close? Vincent: Not really but we share with each other Me: You know if she has a boyfriend? Vincent: Yea Me: You seem not to worry about it Vincent: You won’t be dating her in the first place if I should be over protective of my sister like you Me: How do you mean? Vincent: Mirabel is my kid sis bro Me: What?! **Shocked and confused** how is that possible? Vincent: Surprised? What an irony of life. The guy who disvirgined my sister is threatening me not to even see his sister’s nakedness…catch you later bro **Walks away** **I was like what?!** I felt so ashamed of myself. But how come Mirabel never told me about this? I need some explanations I dialed Mirabel’s line and she picked up Mirabel: Hi love Me: Hi…who is Vincent to you? Mirabel: He told you? Me: Please answer my question Mirabel: He is my brother Me: Why didn’t you tell me?! Mirabel: Baby I will come over so we can talk about this; I didn’t know he’ll reveal it himself Me: What are you talking about? Mirabel: We’ll talk about this when I get there please dear **I hung up** I was too annoyed to hear another word from her I think I owe Vincent an apology. Me: Nancy! Nancy!! Nancy: **From the background** Yes?! She came to me in the parlor Nancy: Yes? Me: What do you know about Vincent? Nancy: As in? Me: Are you aware that he is Mirabel’s brother? Nancy: What? I don’t understand…how? Me: Meaning you don’t know? Nancy: I don’t get it; he is Mirabel’s brother? Me: He just told me that few minutes ago that Mirabel is his kid sis. I called Mirabel to inquire from her and she confirmed it Nancy: Does that mean…he is the President’s son? **Surprised** Me: Seriously…I’m confused. I can’t believe she hid this from me Nancy: What do we do? Me: Mirabel is coming over to explain Nancy: If this is true **walking slowly around** then we’ll both be dating the President’s children; isn’t it cool? I just looked at her not much surprised; of course she’ll love it. [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
25 Jun 2016 | 12:23
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Ooohhhohhhohhh president's in laws
25 Jun 2016 | 13:33
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Just so interesting
25 Jun 2016 | 13:34
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Chilling stuff... Marrying 2 d same family.... M here Watching...
25 Jun 2016 | 13:51
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NICE ONE BRO . . . RIDE ON
25 Jun 2016 | 14:01
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Hahahaha what da fuck... Vincent is a bad guy, hiding since
25 Jun 2016 | 14:03
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Hmm see life
25 Jun 2016 | 14:05
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lollzzzz see them hahahahahaha president inlaws... chai na only una waka come
25 Jun 2016 | 14:06
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lol cool sha
25 Jun 2016 | 14:08
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Hahhahah no be small tin o president inlaws
25 Jun 2016 | 14:14
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lolzzzzzz, Nancy is really happy shaa. go on bro
25 Jun 2016 | 14:17
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Hmmmm...Complications are goin to com during marriage
25 Jun 2016 | 14:24
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hmmm ,,it's will be interesting
25 Jun 2016 | 15:04
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Omo see double blessing.
25 Jun 2016 | 15:15
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Hmmm... . . .
25 Jun 2016 | 15:19
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Move It
25 Jun 2016 | 15:19
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Hmmmmm wierd
25 Jun 2016 | 15:48
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Impressive. U are now indirect rulers of de nation
25 Jun 2016 | 15:51
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U tnk God say no be buhari children u and ur sis dey date
25 Jun 2016 | 15:53
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U both can't marry from d same family na,z not possible in my own culture sha
25 Jun 2016 | 16:01
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lolzzz ...... How come?
25 Jun 2016 | 16:18
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Not cool
25 Jun 2016 | 16:23
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President in laws, thats will be cool
25 Jun 2016 | 16:54
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Hmm... President! President!! President!!! Lol can i get diz site that turing yhu to a young billionaira
25 Jun 2016 | 16:55
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@vict-vames, it's sweet thouqh but I don't like the idea of u and ur kid sister datinq the children of the president even thouqh u now have the support of 1st laddy have u not thouqht about how the president 'll wieqh u as an opporunist, a qold diqqer, or somethinq of sort when he eventually find out that Ike had handed over his website’s ownership to u especially now that ur kid sister is also involved in Vincent's life! Just sayinq thouqh.
25 Jun 2016 | 17:10
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Itz getting more interesting
25 Jun 2016 | 17:31
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Lol! That your Nancy is a funny girl oooo! So all she could think of is the pride of both of you dating the Presidents children? Nawow! I knew before now that Vincent and Nancy will hit it off someday and thank God its happened. I'm also marvelled as you are to have learned that Mirable is Vincents kid sis
25 Jun 2016 | 17:44
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Waooooo na only ur family wan become president inlaw?
25 Jun 2016 | 17:46
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(song) Wot an irony of life
25 Jun 2016 | 17:47
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Hmm exchange of sisters right. Greedy friends
25 Jun 2016 | 17:48
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Ahahhha cnt stop laughing... Dat Vincent is a pro walahi
25 Jun 2016 | 18:02
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lolz..nancy and her words eh!
25 Jun 2016 | 18:08
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Error! error!! error!!! Why will two of you marry from same parent?
25 Jun 2016 | 18:12
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irony of life
25 Jun 2016 | 18:43
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Lol.... funny
25 Jun 2016 | 18:57
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president inlaws indeed
25 Jun 2016 | 18:58
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smart one... u guys ae lucky sha
25 Jun 2016 | 19:23
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Mimi is keeping a lot of secret... cnt bliv his Mimi's brother
25 Jun 2016 | 19:26
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Lauqhinq Vincent cauqht yhu red handed u wil be lyk wait? What? How? Do u mean? Too mean questions at a time
25 Jun 2016 | 19:32
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i am so shocked
25 Jun 2016 | 19:35
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Presidential in-laws. Lol
25 Jun 2016 | 19:47
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Woah...
25 Jun 2016 | 19:59
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vict and Nancy aso to rock here you come
25 Jun 2016 | 20:19
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Lovely
25 Jun 2016 | 21:23
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My head don full
26 Jun 2016 | 02:28
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hmmm...seems Vames was too overprotective. "u disvirgined her sister but u are warning him not to try it" lol. i dnt think vincent is for real abt wat he told vame. well lets wait and see what happens next
26 Jun 2016 | 03:31
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Haaaaaaaa
26 Jun 2016 | 04:53
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presidential family
26 Jun 2016 | 05:37
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hmmmm
26 Jun 2016 | 05:48
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Its cool
26 Jun 2016 | 08:32
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Oh My God.... Whoa!!! President In-laws... Vincent, thumbs up... U've acted kul all dx while.
26 Jun 2016 | 09:38
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Lol.... Vames u owe Vicent an apologies indeed. The presido's family wot a humble n unique family.
26 Jun 2016 | 09:53
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what???????????????
26 Jun 2016 | 10:52
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Lov dis
26 Jun 2016 | 11:38
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eheheheheheh
26 Jun 2016 | 13:40
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wonders shall neva end
26 Jun 2016 | 13:43
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The guy who disvirgined my sister is threatening me not to even see his sister's nakedness... . . . LOL Hahaha i luv this speech
26 Jun 2016 | 14:38
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Hnmm! Following this interesting
26 Jun 2016 | 14:40
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Hahaha nice
26 Jun 2016 | 15:13
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This is so cool.
26 Jun 2016 | 17:58
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Vincent d nice guy, teach some moral lesson abeege, d boy 2 selfish.
26 Jun 2016 | 20:00
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well its good to admire and aspire for something good..........to be an in law to president is not bad but Vic play your game with wisdom her bro don know say na you break her sister's wall don't be the one to write your day of death . I love that keep it on mr Vicvame
26 Jun 2016 | 20:03
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hw wil dis b possible brother and sister dating dsame family dat rubbish
27 Jun 2016 | 00:53
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Nice work here @Vict_vames....not been able 2 log in due to money problems
27 Jun 2016 | 01:39
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next....dnt take time oooo....
27 Jun 2016 | 02:08
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27 Jun 2016 | 03:46
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hmmmn, intereting..
27 Jun 2016 | 04:05
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Wow diz is getting interesting
27 Jun 2016 | 11:58
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lol @japhola na u be her campaign manager???? Victor u done hear am na
27 Jun 2016 | 16:16
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presidential ***************
27 Jun 2016 | 16:25
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Unna won take d president family one by one abi
28 Jun 2016 | 00:33
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lolzzzz funny,victor you dey chop her little sis and you don't want him to do also, are you with me @promzy.
28 Jun 2016 | 05:16
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yes oo 3plex....
28 Jun 2016 | 05:25
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Seriously
28 Jun 2016 | 06:33
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It can't be possible
28 Jun 2016 | 08:49
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Body guard brother
28 Jun 2016 | 12:27
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Hmmmm
28 Jun 2016 | 12:38
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nawa oh am juz speechless.....
29 Jun 2016 | 07:26
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[color =blue]EPISODE 30[/color] Something I got to realize from what Vincent revealed earliar was that..."Do not do to people what you wouldn't want them to do to you". ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ I closed my computer and walked straight to my room deep in thought and confusion. I waited patiently for Mirabel to come explain the whole thing. She walked into my room a couple of minutes later after a sharp knock on the door. Mirabel: Hi Me: Hi Mirabel: Can we talk? Me: Yea...you should start explaining Mirabel: **Sat down at the edge of the bed** Firstly, I apologize for not telling you about him. Just that, he made his reasons very clear to me. He doesn't like to be seen as the country's president's son. Infact, he wasn't happy when our Dad contested for presidency in the first place. So...he strictly warned me not to tell anyone that we're siblings most especially to those that already knew me as the president's daughter. He hates being seen as a big personality...he is always on a low key to accomplish his missions. Me: What mission? Mirabel: Soul winning for Christ Me: Serious? Mirabel: Yea...he is not just friends with Dax, he is on a mission of converting him from his evil ways. Me: So he is very serious with his Christian life? Mirabel: Extremely serious. He has succeded in converting many youths. So he thinks that, his ministry will be ruined when people knows who he is. Me: Ok, now he wants to court my sister Nancy; how is that going to work? Mirabel: Well...seriously i don't know but i know he'll make it work. Me: How? Mirabel: He is very influential in our family. He does whatever he wants to do as far as it doesn't contradict the word of God. Me: That's good to know Mirabel: What about your parents and tradition? Me: I don't know about the tradition. I only know my Parents aren't a big fan of it. Mirabel: Okay... Vincent will make it work; trust me. Me: Wait a minute... you weren't surprised when i said Vincent wants to court my sister. Mirabel: Well...he kinda made his intentions known to me Me: Did you help him in anyway to woo my sister? Mirabel: I kinda provided all the information he needed to know about Nancy and your family. Me: Runs girl Mirabel: Ah! **opens mouth the way yoruba people do** Me: I was just joking Mirabel: Hhmmm.... Me: So how come he knew we...uhmmm...you know, you told him? Mirabel: Yep! He asked me and i can't lie to him. He was so disappointed and extremely mad at me. I had to beg him to forgive me. He even warned me to stay away from you that you can't be trusted. He got to calm down after i told him that you and i have agreed not have s*x anymore. Although he kept asking from time to time if you made any attempt towards but he kept hearing 'no' from me till he finally forgave and trusts us. Me: What about kissing? He told me it's not right Mirabel: Yea...he's been telling me that too. Me: So...? Mirabel: So what? Me: We should stop it? Mirabel: I dunno...or should we? Me: I feel like kissing you right now Mirabel: Me too... *******Two years later******* In 400L; I was in a haste to get the hell out of school so I'd start building my business empire.  My website kept growing on daily basis. I added many African features on the site mostly Nigerian. By now i have already become a multimillionaire.  My Parents were living fine; My Dad became a big deal in ICAN (Institute of chartered accountants of Nigeria). He built a bigger family house in Abuja and in the village. He also expanded his company with many staffs. My Dad went ahead to buy me a cool toyota camry even when my momma tried all her possible best to discourage him from buying it. I liked the car though, instead of driving range rover to school, the camry seemed to be better. My older sister - Joy gave birth to another daughter, making two. Nancy and Vincent has been in their relationship for almost two years now. He's been helping her a lot with good morals, the word of God, praying and with her studies too. Vincent's mission is pretty much yielding good results from Dax, Lola and Cynthia. Promise is there as well; still single and most focused on her studies. She became the class representative when the department voted the former rep out. As for me and Mirabel; things were going on fine and lovelier more and more. Frank and Jummy(Mirabel's guards) had a secret court wedding while still serving Mirabel. Everyday passed by in a blink of an eye because of how peaceful and happy we were. ******** It was indeed a very sad moment that my Uncle the engineer died. He fell off from a six-storey building he was supervising and died instantly on the spot. I shedded tears and mourned him for a long period of time. We just arrived from the burial in Edo few days ago. My favorite Uncle just died like that. My Dad promised to take care of my Uncle's wife and train his children till they grow up and become somebody in future. Although, my Uncle left a lot behind for his family that can sustain them for the next three years or more. ********** One evening when I was working in my website; I checked on Linda ikeji's blog where I read news daily. Then i saw that there has been a break from the prison where Marcus was serving his jail term. It was said that some unknown gunmen attacked the prison and freed some prisoners. The names of the escaped prisoners are yet to be discovered. My prayer that moment was that, Marcus should not be among those that escaped. I took my phone to call Mirabel and inform her about the prison break but her line was switched off which was totally unusual. I also tried Nancy's line because she was at Mirabel's lodge but didn't go through. I kept trying till I heard a knock at the gate. I went out to check who was there. Me: Who's there? Frank: It's me Frank *I opened the gate and allowed him in* Me: Why are you here alone? Where is your wife and Mirabel? Frank: There's a problem Me: What happened? Frank: Mirabel and your sister has been abducted Me: What?! How did that happen?!! Frank: Some gunmen attacked the lodge two hours ago and took away Mirabel and your sister with Jummy. Me: What?! Who are they? Frank: I really dunno; I just came back from the villa where i went to get some supplies for Mirabel only for me to return and heard what happened from neighbors that witnessed the attack. Me: This must be Marcus! Frank: Exactly! I heard about the break Me: They broke him out Frank: We need to rescue them fast before they do something to them. Me: Is the president aware of this? Frank: I called him immediately I found out Me: What about Cynthia and Lola? Frank: I dunno, they weren't seen around **Someone starts banging the steel gate** Frank got hold of his gun while i peeped through the gate and saw Vincent looking fierce. I opened up the gate for him. Vincent: Guys...we need to save our girls! [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color] ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [color =red]I apologize for the late updates guys,,,, the shortage of power is really affecting me....Thanks for reading and understanding.[/color] [/b]
29 Jun 2016 | 09:32
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Lolzz... Nancy 4 ur mind fa
29 Jun 2016 | 09:37
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Hehe...vic apology for sure is needed
29 Jun 2016 | 10:20
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Mehhhnn!!!! So amazingly interesting.
29 Jun 2016 | 12:15
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This story is so banging
29 Jun 2016 | 12:18
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War war war..wahala dey o
29 Jun 2016 | 12:36
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Following
29 Jun 2016 | 13:06
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Ride on
29 Jun 2016 | 13:06
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Uhmmm,hope they are save
29 Jun 2016 | 13:16
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I think its time to start the campaign of #BBOG for Mirabel and co
29 Jun 2016 | 13:16
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We understood him
29 Jun 2016 | 13:17
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Mmmmmmm! All these happened? Looks like it'll drag into season 3. Nice story though
29 Jun 2016 | 13:26
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29 Jun 2016 | 13:29
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Nyc Hope dey rescue dem unhurt
29 Jun 2016 | 13:39
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FOLLOWING KEENLY BINCENT I LIKE UR PERSONALITY.... NEXT PLS
29 Jun 2016 | 13:42
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Marcus again ...did guy sha
29 Jun 2016 | 13:49
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Hehe...Mirabel And Co Must Be Found O
29 Jun 2016 | 14:05
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wow interesting
29 Jun 2016 | 14:06
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Ride on bro
29 Jun 2016 | 14:09
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Prison break
29 Jun 2016 | 14:12
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Abeg ooo... Make Nothing happen to d both of dem ooo... Marcus must surely pay for this...
29 Jun 2016 | 14:16
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Woww,interesting
29 Jun 2016 | 14:33
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Don't worry Marcus is a dead man now
29 Jun 2016 | 14:58
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Marcus have over step his bond........ He won't escape this time
29 Jun 2016 | 15:01
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The war is gonna be interesting with Victor Frank Vincent President and so on .. can't wait tho
29 Jun 2016 | 15:05
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dis Marcus he need to be kill.
29 Jun 2016 | 15:11
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presidential fight
29 Jun 2016 | 15:11
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This Marcus you're bitting more than you can chew, you will soon choke on it
29 Jun 2016 | 15:27
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Trouble
29 Jun 2016 | 15:28
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Marcus at work
29 Jun 2016 | 15:52
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Hmmm.. Action begins, this Marcus na witch o
29 Jun 2016 | 15:57
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nawa o. things are happening.
29 Jun 2016 | 15:59
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Gangan! Action time
29 Jun 2016 | 16:15
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President's in-laws indeed. Ride on plsss
29 Jun 2016 | 16:19
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Am sorry for u guys pls make it snappy...
29 Jun 2016 | 16:22
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[b]our girls indeed, sorry for d loss my his gentle sou R.I.P[/b]
29 Jun 2016 | 16:30
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Hmmmmmm....interesting
29 Jun 2016 | 16:32
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oh my God why now. why its still Mirabel and Nancy . why still this Marcus ........ I think I will inform my uncle at this junction cause he is also an army. Lil. Weldon bro
29 Jun 2016 | 16:36
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Yeah,,,,, you guys needs to save them,,,,,, Marcus is a loser.
29 Jun 2016 | 16:38
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This is my thought for this story .I think marcus is going to marry mirabell . .Victor is going to marry promzy while vincent for vic. Bro
29 Jun 2016 | 16:46
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U guys need to save ur girls...
29 Jun 2016 | 17:14
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It nt easy @ all to date president daughter...
29 Jun 2016 | 17:15
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Nxt pls oo
29 Jun 2016 | 17:21
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Chaii vhiz marcuz is a real criminal
29 Jun 2016 | 17:29
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Next.
29 Jun 2016 | 17:40
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29 Jun 2016 | 17:57
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Marcus again!
29 Jun 2016 | 17:57
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Vincent na good guy o
29 Jun 2016 | 18:02
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Dis is getting more thrilling. Wetin dey worry dis marcus sef
29 Jun 2016 | 18:02
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following
29 Jun 2016 | 18:08
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what?? that Marcus get mind o
29 Jun 2016 | 18:24
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Next
29 Jun 2016 | 18:51
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So sad you lost your dear uncle who wants you to break his record.... Will miss that yah ever supportive uncle.
29 Jun 2016 | 18:54
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Marcus really wnt to die b4 he learn
29 Jun 2016 | 18:55
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see gobe
29 Jun 2016 | 19:04
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wow cant wait for d next episode
29 Jun 2016 | 19:44
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President children... lucky guys...
29 Jun 2016 | 19:51
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marcus! marcus!! touqh quy..
29 Jun 2016 | 20:22
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marcuz again if dy hv knw dy wil hv kiill him instead of the imprisonment following nxt plz
30 Jun 2016 | 01:34
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Apology accepted, how is that going to work you and nancy to mirabel and vicent.
30 Jun 2016 | 01:46
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pls act quick, b4 Marcus spoil everything
30 Jun 2016 | 02:00
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Move it bro
30 Jun 2016 | 04:25
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hmmm u've got to really act fast.
30 Jun 2016 | 08:11
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u really got to act fast
30 Jun 2016 | 08:13
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Marcus ku e se
30 Jun 2016 | 08:14
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Nawa o...... Dis marcus of a guy wont rest ???
30 Jun 2016 | 09:00
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Hmm, we dey wait
30 Jun 2016 | 09:40
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BT Marcus, u no try ooo
30 Jun 2016 | 09:45
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God save the girls
30 Jun 2016 | 09:45
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pls, go n rescue ur girls o
30 Jun 2016 | 10:04
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dis marcus will soon learn in a very hard way
30 Jun 2016 | 10:05
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pls, dnt forget to VOTE @victoriouschild as d 2016 miss cooval God bless u as u VOTE
30 Jun 2016 | 10:06
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I think Victor overprotecting Nancy later became an advantage for her @least she got the best at last.
30 Jun 2016 | 10:44
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bring back our girls unharmed!
30 Jun 2016 | 10:45
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Is like this story is nw being posted once in a week @Vames ?
30 Jun 2016 | 11:40
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Hmmm nw tins are going smooth marcus came out of d blues to spoil everything
30 Jun 2016 | 13:48
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Hmmm, this is serious!
30 Jun 2016 | 13:49
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Woooo wot a fast play of Marcus, dt guy is dengerous n U guys need to act fast. U ar welcm @Val, tnkx 4 taken up d story but i stil hv nt understand d updating pattern of dz story currently. Hw many times in week?, wen & wen?.
30 Jun 2016 | 15:18
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This is stronger...
30 Jun 2016 | 16:35
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eheheheh ..........
30 Jun 2016 | 17:56
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This one na serious issue oh............
30 Jun 2016 | 18:01
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double trouble
30 Jun 2016 | 19:35
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Hhhmmm it is well
30 Jun 2016 | 19:54
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Nice one...
1 Jul 2016 | 03:12
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Hot spot... Continue..
1 Jul 2016 | 03:16
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Yes u quys need to save those innocent "ORENTE" bae(s) before it 'll turn into teary story o
1 Jul 2016 | 03:41
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Well done happy new month friends
1 Jul 2016 | 05:22
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not cool
1 Jul 2016 | 07:58
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is gobe,assumin Marcus gv u an option 2 save one person btw ur sis and ur gf,who wil u chs
1 Jul 2016 | 08:53
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 31[/color] After staring at ourselves for a couple of minutes, I ushered them into the house to talk more on the situation at hand. Vincent: We need to start planning on how to get the girls back in one piece Frank: I dunno but do you guys think we should leave it for the President to tackle? Of course he’ll do everything to get back his daughter and the others won’t be left out. Me: Marcus knows that before he abducted them which means he had this planned all along and it won’t be easy for the President to get them Vincent: What’s the plan guys? Frank: First and foremost; I suggest we vacate this house at once for the main time, it’s not save. Victor you know Marcus will come back for you right? Me: I guess Vincent: You guess? Have you forgotten how you kicked his ass when he attacked you which landed him in jail in the process? He’s not through with you bro; I suggest you come stay with me Me: Alright; lemme go grabbed some things **I went into the room and arranged some clothes and other important stuffs that I needed. We vacated the environment that moment to Vincent’s apartment. He was living in a simple self-contain apartment with nothing special about it. He was indeed on a low level. After settling for a moment, an idea popped into my head. I picked my phone and dialed Ike’s line. Me: I need your help bro Ike: What’s up mahn? **I told him everything** Ike: Who’s that crazy dude? He really got guts! What can we do to nail that b@stard?! Me: We will be going ahead of the President to get the girls back Ike: How do you intend to do that? Do you have any lead on how to reach them? Me: Not really…that’s why I need your help Ike: What do you want me to do? Me: I’ll need some tracking devices from you and other necessary technological devices that will be used to reach them Ike: That can be arranged Me: Like how soon can it get here? Ike: I’ll go to the plant as soon as I drop this call and fix up everything that’d be needed. I will make sure I ship the supplies in two days’ time Me: Please bro…We need to act fast Ike: We’ll surely get the girls in one piece I told Vincent and Frank about my discussion with Ike and they agreed that it’s a good idea. I called the First lady; she wept on phone. I comforted her that nothing bad will happen to Mirabel and I’ll do everything I could to get her back. She thanked me then I ended the call. Now I dunno how to tell my Parents that Nancy has been kidnapped, especially my mother. I decided not to tell them about it. I told promise about it; she was shocked. She promised to pray fervently for their save return. Cynthia, Lola and Dax called me that they heard about the abduction when they returned back from where they went to. They promised to do everything they could to rescue them. ************************** Frank later went to the house and planted some security cam all around the environment to see if Marcus would come around. I went to the School the following day not to receive lectures but to meet with all my departmental lecturers to let them know what’s going on and that I won’t be attending their lectures till I return from my quest. They all approved easily because they know me and Mirabel as well. I went back to Vincent’s house and had a chat with Ike. He told me he is seriously working on the devices that they’d be shipped anything tomorrow. Frank: Come check this out Victor I walked to him where he was seated Me: What is it? Frank: My hunch was right; Marcus and his gangs visited the house early this morning. He wouldn’t have hesitated in killing you I watched in Frank’s laptop how Marcus and his boys find their way into the house in search of me before they left a couple of minutes later. I still have a purpose to fulfill here on earth; I won’t die! Vincent: You should remain indoors bro…they might be monitoring your movements. You going to the school today was extremely dangerous. What if they had spotted you? Frank: I heard the other guys that were broken out from prison were convicted criminals. They were freed to work for Marcus. As it is right now, the President still in Dakar Senegal has instructed the information and communication Minister to make a public announcement about the kidnap of his daughter and her friends and who is behind it. Me: Will that be necessary? Frank: Well…he’d be needing the public cooperation in the search of the girls just in case they see something as the government don’t have any lead on how to find the girls yet Vincent: I’ll talk to my father to make sure every border is to be secured so Marcus won’t succeed smuggling them out Frank: The orders are already taking effect. There are thorough check points on every part of the road and Marcus will be regarded as a terrorist. *This time I know that my mother will definitely hear the news.* The Information & Communication Minister came online live on TV exactly 2:00.pm in a press conference to do the announcement. He called on the general public to be an ambassador of peace and security. He announced the act of terrorism being portrayed by Marcus and his group. He said a lot before ending the speech that “Marcus is the most wanted man in Nigeria”. **I got a call from an unknown caller some few minutes later after the announcement** I picked the call and put it on loud speaker but hesitated to speak up Caller: How you holding up Victor? Me: Sorry…who is this? Caller: I’m the new crowned most wanted man of the Nation mahn **Laughing out** Me: Marcus! Marcus: What’s up? Me: What have you done to them?! Why are you keeping them? Wh… Marcus: **Cuts in** easy there mahn…one question at a time. You’re already weeping; I thought you’re strong? I paid you a harmless visit today but you weren’t around. Are you hiding from me? Me: What is it that you want? Marcus: Good question! But the question is; can you give me what I want? Me: What is it? Marcus: Can we meet? Me: I thought you’re smarter than this; you know there’s no way that’s ever gonna happen Marcus: Why? You can’t do that for the safety of Mirabel? Me: I know you’r not going to hurt her Marcus: Is that so? Can you say the same for the other two?? **Laughs** reason why I took them as extra; they are of no use to me and I’m sure you wouldn’t want anything to happen to your sis Me: How’d you know that she’s my sister? Marcus: Lemme say…I did my homework Me: What exactly do you want from me? Marcus: Maybe you think I’d gun you down; nah…I made an agreement with my partner not to harm you and I wouldn’t want to breach our agreement. So I’m not goin’ to kill ya Me: And who is this your partner? Marcus: You will meet her soon Me: Your partner is a lady? Marcus: I will call you back in the next 15hours to hear your response. You know how to keep simple instructions right? Better don’t be a snitching a$$ ba$tard. Mirabel might be save but your sister is not! **Hangs up** Me: Guys…? Frank: I don’t believe him, it’s a trap Me: We’re not sure about that Vincent: Then what? You will give a thought to what he said? Me: I dunno…he sounded sincere Frank: How can he be sincere? Which lady would spare you from him? Me: I need to speak with Ike **I dialed his line and told him everything** Ike: Is that so? Me: Yea… Ike: We shall play a risky game with him Me: How? Ike: I will be in Nigeria tomorrow with experts and the devices; then we’ll make a master plan. [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
1 Jul 2016 | 10:22
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Hahahahahahahaha so funny "we need to save our gals" hahahahahahahaha
1 Jul 2016 | 10:28
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First to comment
1 Jul 2016 | 10:33
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Wish yah gud luck in dealing with dat bad ass
1 Jul 2016 | 10:34
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Marcus Bring Back Our Girls oo
1 Jul 2016 | 10:42
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chibok gals
1 Jul 2016 | 10:50
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lols Chibok girls kidnapped by marcus
1 Jul 2016 | 10:53
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Hmm, seems interesting. Let's see how it goes
1 Jul 2016 | 11:10
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whoa am in love Wid dis story already
1 Jul 2016 | 11:31
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Boko Haram carry Mirabel and Nancy lobatan Sambisa forest straight
1 Jul 2016 | 11:31
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Hmmmmmm! Watching to see how it'll end. Wish you all well and the safe return of the girls
1 Jul 2016 | 11:32
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This is becoming more tough!
1 Jul 2016 | 11:35
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A Lady?? Who Could It Be!!! Maybe Its @promzy Who Knows ...I Pray They Rescue Them
1 Jul 2016 | 11:43
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Go On..Am With You!!!
1 Jul 2016 | 11:43
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Abeg make una plan well o
1 Jul 2016 | 11:50
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Hahaha..dat my laugh no be beta laugh o.. Dorothy z on it again @vict-vames nice job bro
1 Jul 2016 | 11:53
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Eeeeei
1 Jul 2016 | 12:21
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Bring back our girls.
1 Jul 2016 | 12:25
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Ride on
1 Jul 2016 | 12:39
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Move it...
1 Jul 2016 | 12:51
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HEHeHeHehe... Interesting!
1 Jul 2016 | 13:04
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Ah! Let's go there!
1 Jul 2016 | 13:12
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Wala...action is about to kick off
1 Jul 2016 | 13:15
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Good idea
1 Jul 2016 | 13:20
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I quess the lady workinq with marcus miqht be d'thy.. #BrinqBackOurGirls..
1 Jul 2016 | 13:20
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This is serious
1 Jul 2016 | 13:27
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just speechless but let wait for the master plan
1 Jul 2016 | 13:34
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Wow getting more interested.....love diz story
1 Jul 2016 | 13:45
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Lolz this one pass chibok girls matter.
1 Jul 2016 | 13:47
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Haha ...ike the expert
1 Jul 2016 | 13:53
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mitcheweee,funny save your gals lolzzzz
1 Jul 2016 | 14:03
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Wow...
1 Jul 2016 | 14:06
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That lady must b Dorothy, am suspecting her to b d lady in dis
1 Jul 2016 | 14:08
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wowww, can't wait fr de next episodes
1 Jul 2016 | 14:30
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I think the lady that planned with them is dorathy she might have planned it all as revenge
1 Jul 2016 | 14:34
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hmmm....pls bring bk our girls ooo
1 Jul 2016 | 14:45
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let watch and see how all this game we end
1 Jul 2016 | 14:46
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Marcus bring back our girls o
1 Jul 2016 | 14:52
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I thank Lola is behind wat is going on.
1 Jul 2016 | 14:59
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Huhhhhh
1 Jul 2016 | 15:38
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Better act fast...@victor and ike
1 Jul 2016 | 15:56
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Wow! Action time
1 Jul 2016 | 16:16
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Wooooo Marcus doom is very near, many squard against him
1 Jul 2016 | 16:25
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Chibok Girls... Chai..
1 Jul 2016 | 16:43
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nice one bro
1 Jul 2016 | 16:56
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Wonder who the lady his wrkin with hmmm
1 Jul 2016 | 16:57
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d'thy and Lola are the prime suspects
1 Jul 2016 | 17:06
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I think it's Dorothy who's behind this plan.because she gave a warning when she's leaving
1 Jul 2016 | 17:49
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Yhu dnt need soothsayer to tel yhu he gonna use no one buh proxy against yhu.... Yhu hav to act lyk a man... With iyke into the mata yhu gayz gonna rescue ur galz
1 Jul 2016 | 17:56
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hmmmmm this is serious o ride on !
1 Jul 2016 | 18:03
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Seems there is more hope as ike is dropping by
1 Jul 2016 | 18:04
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@vic, ike will be your savior
1 Jul 2016 | 18:11
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It Is Well
1 Jul 2016 | 18:12
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I need 2 save my @jummybabe
1 Jul 2016 | 18:17
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Just getting more interesting.
1 Jul 2016 | 18:38
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action movie Don start
1 Jul 2016 | 18:43
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hope nothin bad happens......sad
1 Jul 2016 | 18:44
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I trust Ike's plan. Dis Marcus has taken more than d owner will notice.
1 Jul 2016 | 18:44
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Master plan can't wait to see it
1 Jul 2016 | 18:45
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Ride on
1 Jul 2016 | 18:47
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Let see d next epic
1 Jul 2016 | 19:10
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Prison break
1 Jul 2016 | 19:15
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My guess is lola
1 Jul 2016 | 19:29
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May God Released Them From That Fucked Dude Called Marcus.
1 Jul 2016 | 19:29
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Hahahaha
1 Jul 2016 | 19:40
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Lol,,,,, I will be in Nigeria tommorow,,,, this Ike na Jack Bauer?
1 Jul 2016 | 19:52
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@marcus please bring back our girls
1 Jul 2016 | 19:55
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very interesting and dangerous God save the girls (chibok girls) but na only girls kidnappers the see next episode please
1 Jul 2016 | 20:17
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on a second thought e be like say Marcus na Charles junior brother and na Charles help am escape from prison hmmmm
1 Jul 2016 | 20:20
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at some moment, thought the story eas ending bug there is a twist... good work
1 Jul 2016 | 21:31
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Kasa
1 Jul 2016 | 23:26
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I'm having this hunch that his partner in crime is Dorothy.....let me watch as things unfold but seriously "victor you need to careful.....
2 Jul 2016 | 01:26
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[b]Lol @Frank come join the quest[/b]
2 Jul 2016 | 02:55
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eh eh,arms folded
2 Jul 2016 | 04:20
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Smart up and be a man as you always do, stop fidgetting for that trash!
2 Jul 2016 | 04:49
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Master plan for master marcus.... . . I jst pray he dnt hurt ur kid sis
2 Jul 2016 | 06:29
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Hmm..... CIA work in Nigeria
2 Jul 2016 | 06:35
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I suspect Dat lady back in his town.. What's her name self?
2 Jul 2016 | 06:36
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Hmmm...its getting more complicated
2 Jul 2016 | 07:33
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wow........cnt wait for real action to commence
2 Jul 2016 | 10:11
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pls, dnt forget to VOTE @victoriouschild as d next 2016 miss cooval God bless u as u VOTE
2 Jul 2016 | 10:26
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Wow...,Save our girls o
2 Jul 2016 | 10:54
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Lol...this marcus is a bastard,karama will soon catch up with him.
2 Jul 2016 | 12:55
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Oops! I came late today
2 Jul 2016 | 13:41
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Hope the story hasn't ennded
2 Jul 2016 | 14:08
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hmm......next pls
2 Jul 2016 | 14:09
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Vames the story is not yet complete pls help us with the concluding part
2 Jul 2016 | 15:19
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hmmmm. story getting interesting
2 Jul 2016 | 17:06
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Following...
2 Jul 2016 | 18:32
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hmmnn ..... The lady might be DOROTHY
2 Jul 2016 | 18:53
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cool
2 Jul 2016 | 19:57
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Dora is his partner in crime
3 Jul 2016 | 00:16
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Bring back our girls....#BBOG
3 Jul 2016 | 03:02
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d mission na PRISON BRAKE BRING BACK OUR GIRLS .. LOLS
3 Jul 2016 | 07:10
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Next please.........kudos 2 u
3 Jul 2016 | 07:43
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NEXT PLEASE
3 Jul 2016 | 11:05
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 32[/color] The First lady called me later in the evening to know if the kidnappers had called to ask for anything, I didn’t tell her about it. I only assured her not to worry that we’re seriously working on their rescue. I made it known to her that Marcus is not going to hurt Mirabel because he is obsessed over her and wants her for himself. Vincent and I engaged ourselves in both joint and personal prayers for God to deliver the girls from the hands of Marcus save and unharmed. My mother called me that she heard what happened and asks if I’m Ok; I told her I will be fine. She then asked why Nancy’s line isn’t going through. I couldn’t lie to my mother so I summoned the courage to tell her that she was also kidnapped with Mirabel. She screamed in shock and started crying out loud instantly. So I ended the call. The boss (My Dad) called me minutes later asking how it happened; I told him that Nancy is friends with the President’s daughter and she was with her when the kidnap took place. The boss: How did she even become friends with the President’s daughter? Me: Through me because she’s my friend and course mate The boss: The President’s daughter School here in Nigeria? Me: Yes sir The boss: I think that boy Marcus is being used by those politicians. The election is in few months’ time and they could be using his daughter against him and I do hope that my own daughter doesn’t fall victim in their political affairs Momma: **Weeping from the background** They should let my daughter go oh… ritualists leave my daughter alone oh… politicians my God will punish you if anything happens to my daughter…..**Weeping continues in the background** The boss: The President has to do something fast about it Me: We just have to be praying hard for their save return The boss: It’s okay…do not hesitate to call if there’s any information Me: Yes sir The boss: Alright take care of yourself Me: Ok sir **Hangs up** Marcus must pay for my mother’s tears! I took some time to work in the website and put some things in order as the other guys must have already done the uploading. Vincent: Have you thought about his request? Me: I dunno…could it be a trap as Frank said? Vincent: **Puts his hand on my shoulder** I know you will make the right decision because I trust you Me: Thanks mahn Vincent: **Walks back to the kitchen** I really had no idea on who the lady could be. I couldn’t even think of anyone that would be partnering with Marcus. And what does she even want from me if Marcus is telling the truth? Chai! Lord have mercy. Vincent did an all-night prayer while I managed to sleep. I woke up the following morning; did my prayers; took my laptop and sat in the parlor. Frank walked in and dropped what brought on the table. Me: What’s that? Frank: Breakfast Me: Okay… Frank: I also purchase some papers because of the headlines I took the newspaper and saw the handsome and innocent face of Marcus being the mastermind in the kidnapping of the President’s daughter. Then I started thinking of what my response would be; whether to go to him or not. I started expecting his call. Then I’ll tell him whatever that comes out of my mouth. Ike called me later that morning that he’s already in the airport and the following conversation ensued. Ike: Accept to meet with him Me: Are you sure about that? Ike: Positive Me: What’s the plan? Ike: The thing is, you’re going to stall him so that the meeting won’t take place today. We’re going to place a tracking device in your possession that will lead us straight to him. Me: Wouldn’t it be risky? What if he guns me down on the spot? Ike: You shall put on a bullet-proof vest just in case that happens. Oh! The jet is ready…time to go; see you in few hours’ time Me: You’re coming with a jet? Ike: Yep my jet Me: Oh okay…. Save trip **Hangs up** He guy even own a jet…I told Vincent and Frank about Ike’s plan; they agreed that it’s a good one. Many hours passed and Marcus still didn’t call me. Ike landed safely in Abuja. He called me that he is now in his house. He built the house while in the U.S and this is the first time for him to enter the house. Vincent, who knew the house, drove us there and the mansion was a wow! Ike himself was a billionaire. Vincent stopped in front of the gate; stepped down from the car towards the gate; he spoke and waved his hand at the security cam and the gate opened on its own. He walked back in to the car and drove us in. On driving in, we saw Ike walking towards us before we alighted from the car. Ike: Welcome guys! *Ike and Vincent hugged each other for many seconds* Vincent: Longest time bro…I once again apologize for not attending your wedding Ike: I will get mad if you apologize again **Laughs** Victor! Me: Thanks for coming **we shook hands** Ike: You look horrible mahn! Don’t worry; we’ll get your girl soon He also shook hands with Frank Ike: Has he called yet? Me: Nope! He didn’t keep to the time Ike: He’ll call. Let’s go in please… We went into his fabulous mansion; both the exterior and interior were extremely beautiful. He introduced the four experts he came with to us and they showed us how the devices work. We waited for Marcus’ call till nightfall but he didn’t call. The first lady called me that night; I told her about Ike’s arrival to help in the search of the girls. I assured her that everything will be fine. We slept there in Ike’s mansion that night after eating a delicious meal for dinner. The experts trained us the following morning on how to defend ourselves from danger, how to use a Taser and a gun using blunt bullets to neutralize the enemy (That’s for Vincent, Ike and I because we don’t want to kill someone using a real gun) they also taught us how to defuse a bomb in case the situation gets to that. Marcus called me during the training as an unknown caller and the following conversation ensued. Me: Hey I’ve been expecting your call Marcus: Leave whatever you’re doing right now and go to your apartment; you will meet someone there Me: Who? Is it the lady? Marcus: Make sure to be there in twenty minutes and any foul play? Your sister will pay for it with her life; got it? Me: Please make it thirty I’m very far from the apartment Marcus: Twenty-five **Hangs up** Me: Hello hey?! **The ba$tard hung up on me** Me: Guys I need to get going ASAP Ike: Alright alright! Go put on your shirt… I put on my shirt; they fixed the tracking device chips all over my body about seven of them as they were very tiny. They fixed in all in my pockets, in my socks and my boxers; I also put on the bullet-proof vest. Ike and the rest reminded me of the instructions and then they wished me luck. Vincent hugged me as if I going to die or something before I hit the road with Mirabel’s SUV that Frank has been with. I drove as fast as I could to meet the time. My phone rings after about eighteen minutes of my drive and it was Marcus. Marcus: It’s been twenty-six minutes; hope you’re there already? Me: Yes I am Marcus: No you’re not there a$$hole! Me: I’m very close; two more minutes please Marcus: Stop where you are now Me: What? Why? Marcus: Just stop there! Me: Ok…alright I’m pulling over **He hung up** I pulled over at the spot and alighted from the car. The area was very free; no passer-by and there were bushes all around the area. A mini-van drove to where I was standing; some guys came out from it and told me to follow them that Marcus sent them and I did. They first drove me to the apartment where they parked the SUV. From there they took me away to heaven knows where. They stopped about seventeen minutes later and drag me down from the van. We walked a couple of steps before they stopped. There I saw myself standing in front of Marcus in a thick bush. Marcus: Here you are Me: Can I see them? Marcus: Not so fast **Nodded at his boys** The boys came ripping off my clothes Me: What’s going on?! Marcus: Don’t worry…I’m not going to kill you; sorry for the inconvenience, it’s just for security reasons Me: A terrorist being security conscious…are you kidding me? Marcus: You and I know that I’m not a terrorist. I might have been a bad guy but I also take precaution. You even wore a bullet-proof **laughs** that’s smart but unfortunately…I’m not going to shoot you The guys completely got me naked leaving no piece left on me. They brought a bag and dropped it on the floor beneath my feet. Marcus: Open it and wear the clothes inside *I did as he said* Marcus: Nice dress, it really suites you **** Marcus: Now!! Me: What? I got a very hard hit behind my neck that made me passed out. I woke up feeling pain around my neck and my sight was somehow blurry. I looked around and found out that I was in an uncompleted building full of spirogyra and all sort of dirt. Things will be more complicated as I don’t have the tracking devices on me. Now that I’m also missing…how will they find us? I heard footsteps and looked at the entrance and saw three people coming in with a lady in their middle. Lady: You’re finally awake Me: **Shocked** You…? Lady: Miss me? [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
3 Jul 2016 | 12:15
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it Lola joor
3 Jul 2016 | 12:29
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guess it's DORATHY
3 Jul 2016 | 12:38
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Dorothy
3 Jul 2016 | 12:46
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Time will tell what will happen............
3 Jul 2016 | 12:49
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Dorathy
3 Jul 2016 | 12:53
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hmmmm who could dat b....Dorothy or lora
3 Jul 2016 | 12:53
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Its dorothy
3 Jul 2016 | 13:03
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dorathy jare.... nice one bro!!!
3 Jul 2016 | 13:12
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Whaaaaaaatttttttt...
3 Jul 2016 | 13:23
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that will be dorothy jarre
3 Jul 2016 | 13:25
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Dorathy voting starts tomorow please dont forget to vote for @promy cos she alone posses all you want in a miss coval, beauty brain, character to name a few VOTE @PROMZY AS THE NEXT MISS COOLVAL God Bless you as you vote
3 Jul 2016 | 13:28
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Dorathy voting starts tomorow please dont forget to vote for @promy cos she alone posses all you want in a miss coval, beauty brain, character to name a few VOTE @PROMZY AS THE NEXT MISS COOLVAL God Bless you as you vote
3 Jul 2016 | 13:31
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speechless...
3 Jul 2016 | 13:33
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Who is dis lady oo...
3 Jul 2016 | 13:35
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Dthy I guess
3 Jul 2016 | 13:39
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Dorathy or lola
3 Jul 2016 | 13:44
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Dorathy!
3 Jul 2016 | 13:57
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Dorothy I knew it was her
3 Jul 2016 | 14:08
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Who could that be???
3 Jul 2016 | 14:10
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Lol
3 Jul 2016 | 14:15
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lola
3 Jul 2016 | 14:17
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l guess its promise
3 Jul 2016 | 14:20
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmm.................... comments reserved
3 Jul 2016 | 14:21
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I know say na dat girl wen do abortion for am dat tym
3 Jul 2016 | 14:21
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vhat guy is ah snitchinq ass bastard imslf
3 Jul 2016 | 14:26
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i guess it would be vhat lola gurl
3 Jul 2016 | 14:43
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I can't imagine
3 Jul 2016 | 15:05
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Dorothy!!
3 Jul 2016 | 15:38
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Nop
3 Jul 2016 | 15:42
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Marcus is also smart nd wise.... the evil ones ae the wise ones
3 Jul 2016 | 16:05
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Guess the lady is Dorathy
3 Jul 2016 | 16:06
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Who could dat b?
3 Jul 2016 | 16:46
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It's dorathy
3 Jul 2016 | 16:50
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But it can't be lola
3 Jul 2016 | 16:57
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i am speechless I don't known who I kind guess.
3 Jul 2016 | 16:59
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Maybe promzy sha.. No one is to be trusted
3 Jul 2016 | 17:01
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speechless but they were also monitoring you also as you do but you're all not that smart.
3 Jul 2016 | 17:06
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Hmmmm.....following
3 Jul 2016 | 17:24
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sure its dorathy
3 Jul 2016 | 17:33
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No doubting, it is dorothy
3 Jul 2016 | 17:37
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Comes July forth… dnt forget to vote for our queen.. @victoriouschild may the cartons of blessings follow u all as u Vote.. MERCI
3 Jul 2016 | 17:44
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Maybe na Dorothy
3 Jul 2016 | 17:49
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Dorothy!!!!!
3 Jul 2016 | 17:52
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I still think it's Dorothy. she's really dangerous
3 Jul 2016 | 18:05
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Dorothy???
3 Jul 2016 | 18:15
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I think it's Lola, Mirabel's friend
3 Jul 2016 | 18:28
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Dorothy in action [IMG]https://fbcdn-photos-a-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-xfa1/v/t1.0-0/cp0/e15/q65/p480x480/13508820_487919841416470_4954008867671192293_n.jpg?efg=eyJpIjoiYiJ9&oh=f49c9fe7e108a04cdeb88a54aa2bb394&oe=5836F26A&__gda__=1476889469_2dcf4db388b7d7672fe53ee2f7a31287[/IMG]
3 Jul 2016 | 18:49
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Go On Maybe Dorothy or promzy
3 Jul 2016 | 18:50
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hmnmn
3 Jul 2016 | 18:53
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its DOROTHY joo
3 Jul 2016 | 18:53
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Is d gal u disvirgin, wen u ar bad boi
3 Jul 2016 | 19:01
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Dora
3 Jul 2016 | 19:02
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Nice.. Following Keenly
3 Jul 2016 | 19:25
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Lola, Dorathy, Promise
3 Jul 2016 | 19:26
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It Dorathy joor.. She team up marcus
3 Jul 2016 | 19:34
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I pray mirabel and co r save, can marcus partner be dorothy juz guessing ooo
3 Jul 2016 | 20:37
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Oh she is Dorothy
4 Jul 2016 | 03:21
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Or i think she sud be esther, victz first girlfriend in season one.
4 Jul 2016 | 03:28
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Dorothy???
4 Jul 2016 | 04:49
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maybe is dorathy next pls
4 Jul 2016 | 04:51
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Dorothy in the league
4 Jul 2016 | 04:58
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########
4 Jul 2016 | 04:59
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ℓ̊ don't know o
4 Jul 2016 | 05:00
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Maybe Dorothy or Lola
4 Jul 2016 | 05:17
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u fucked up guy, how does yourba's open their mouth's ?
4 Jul 2016 | 05:35
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unguessable... pardon my English..
4 Jul 2016 | 06:10
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Dorathy final appear
4 Jul 2016 | 06:38
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Suspense... I dnt think lola can do dat it maybe Dorothy or promise
4 Jul 2016 | 07:42
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Dthy is brk to hunt u @Vames
4 Jul 2016 | 07:58
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Itz dorothy....marcus want mirable...dorothy want victor.
4 Jul 2016 | 08:30
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Hmmm
4 Jul 2016 | 08:30
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Lola
4 Jul 2016 | 08:59
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Coolvallers !!!it is almost time!choose the right candidate!vote for the right candidate!!!vote ABOLAJI!!!!An embodiment of beauty and brains!!!a motivational speaker,a baby lawyer (an advocte for justice)..vote wisely!!!!vote for @abolaji!![IMG]https://scontent-amt2-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/t1.0-0/cp0/e15/q65/s480x480/13533115_487210198154101_4992250113617701627_n.jpg?efg=eyJpIjoiYiJ9&oh=e97a96799d7cd1673f7456dd88558e6b&oe=580CBB54[/IMG]
4 Jul 2016 | 09:03
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is promise
4 Jul 2016 | 09:07
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lola!!!
4 Jul 2016 | 09:51
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Who could that be
4 Jul 2016 | 10:44
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Dorothy's handiwork
4 Jul 2016 | 10:52
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cud d person dorathy or lola
4 Jul 2016 | 11:01
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pls, dnt forget to VOTE @victoriouschild as d next 2016 miss cooval God bless u as u VOTE
4 Jul 2016 | 11:02
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Who's the lady? Marcus is smarter than we think self
4 Jul 2016 | 11:04
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Am so loving this story.. Ride on vict-vames
4 Jul 2016 | 11:11
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Dorothy or lola
4 Jul 2016 | 11:24
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O seriouse oo, i thing is lola sa
4 Jul 2016 | 12:16
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Vames in denger indeed. But i tink u stil can be tres cos dos dictatin elements is nt mentioned among d item's discoverd in ur body n they ar stil in ur cloths. And 4 who she was, nobody els bt Dthy.
4 Jul 2016 | 12:29
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Cool
4 Jul 2016 | 12:58
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marcus marcus! You time on earth is numbered.
4 Jul 2016 | 15:37
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No it lola... it her hand work
4 Jul 2016 | 17:29
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Esther or Dorothy
4 Jul 2016 | 17:59
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It Will Be Dorothy. Dat 4 Sure
4 Jul 2016 | 18:18
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it wil b dorothy,promise or lola
4 Jul 2016 | 18:52
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I think its Lola oo.. next pls
4 Jul 2016 | 18:55
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Continue please
4 Jul 2016 | 19:46
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so interesting dont forget to vote for @lizzy22 as miss Coolval 2016. epitome of beauty and intelligence
4 Jul 2016 | 22:19
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interesting dont forget to vote for @lizzy22 as miss Coolval 2016. epitome of beauty and intelligence
4 Jul 2016 | 22:20
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As for me and my household, am seriously guessing it's Dorothy
5 Jul 2016 | 01:51
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Dorathy wonna take his man back.. Lolz
5 Jul 2016 | 03:13
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I think Dorothy lacks the finance to pull off such drama,,,,,,, I suspect Lola 100%. Nextttttttt.
5 Jul 2016 | 09:49
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Hmmm Suspense I think the lady is Lola If not lola, then Dorothy. It can even be Promise
5 Jul 2016 | 12:13
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it is dorathy for sure
5 Jul 2016 | 13:27
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Nice work bro. Plz help us update. Diz is not longer a suspence
5 Jul 2016 | 13:38
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Dorothy don be bad girl ma!!! Terrorwoman!
5 Jul 2016 | 17:54
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guy update this story nah.......will it take eternity to post new episode.....ur own self is getting to much
5 Jul 2016 | 18:04
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oooh,that must be Dorothy I just guess oooh not really sure
5 Jul 2016 | 18:54
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Its Dorothy
5 Jul 2016 | 19:26
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The lady is either Promise or Dorothy
5 Jul 2016 | 21:16
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Whatsup post another episode
6 Jul 2016 | 02:01
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My first commet. It Lola
6 Jul 2016 | 04:49
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suspense......am sure she's Dorothy,,very desperate.... God will save you all
6 Jul 2016 | 05:52
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 33[/color] I couldn’t believe who I saw… someone I knew that couldn’t even hurt a fly is now working with Marcus. What has happened to her? This is incredible! Me: D’thy? Dorothy: Awwww… I really miss how you call me that name; it’s super romantic Me: **Stammering** Wha…wh…what what happened to you? Dorothy: Why? Do I look sick? Me: No; what have you turned yourself into? What are you doing with these criminals? I mean look at you; how will your mother feel when she finds out that her beloved daughter has become something else? Dorothy: You have no right to talk to me that way! No! **Walks away** Me: D’thy! D’thy!! Please don’t leave me like this D’thy! D’thy!! She left the room without turning back, I tried to run after her even though I was tied down but one of the guys she came with knocked me down with a rifle; I screamed out from the hit. Dorothy: **walks in** what just happened here? Guy 1: (The one that hit me) He tried to go after you; so I knocked him down Before I knew what was happening, Dorothy pinned the guy to the wall with a gun. Dorothy: Don’t you ever lay your filthy fingers on him again! Don’t you ever!! Guy 1: Yes queen Dorothy: Do we understand each other?! Guy 1: Yes queen Dorothy: Get out! **Letting go of him** **He bowed then walked away** Dorothy: You leave us **The second guy also bowed and walked away** Dorothy: I apologize for walking away from you and what that guy did to you Me: Queen…? What’s all that about? Or are you married to a king? Dorothy: Nah…forget about that; what would you like to eat dear? Me: I’m not hungry… where are you keeping the girls? Dorothy: They’re save Me: I want to see them Dorothy: No you can’t Me: And why is that? Dorothy: Because… to them; you’re already dead Me: What are you talking about? Who told them that?! Dorothy: Well… they saw your lifeless body with their own eyes Me: You see… I’ve always known that you’re stupid, but didn’t know you’re crazy too Dorothy: Here! **threw some pictures at me** I took it and saw myself with blood all over my body and bullet holes Me: What! How did you do this?! Dorothy: Don’t you watch movies? Of course it’s a make-up costume. You were deep asleep when all these were carried out Me: You drugged me? Dorothy: Yeap Me: Why are you doing this to me? You even kidnapped my sister Nancy who you were so fond of Dorothy: We freed her and the other lady the moment they brought you in. We held her as a bait to lure you in Me: And you left Mirabel with Marcus? What if he tries to rape her? Dorothy: I care less, she is his responsibility and you are mine Me: And what do you want from me? Dorothy: Just you, even if I don’t get to have your heart; having you here is enough Me: You know I’m a final year student right? You can’t keep me here; I should be in school Dorothy: That can be arranged; you don’t have to be there in person Me: Don’t threaten any lecturer on my behalf Dorothy: Okay… Me: D’thy please stop this madness and let me go Dorothy: Letting you go is backwardness for me. I can still remember what I told you three years ago that “No girl can have you if I don’t and even if you turn gay in the process, no guy will still have you”. You’re for me dear. I forgive you for what you did to me with that girl that claimed to be your girlfriend; while she’s just Mirabel’s friend or were you screwing her too? Me: What do you think? Dorothy: I don’t care; but I will soon get her and all her girl’s creed members Me: What’s that? Dorothy: You haven’t heard of the girl’s creed? Me: I have but what’s that got to do with Lola? Dorothy: She’s their leader helloooo…? Me: What?! Dorothy: I’ll soon get her Me: Are you a cultist as well? Dorothy: Yep you know I won’t lie to you Me: Why did you join them? See what you’ve become Dorothy: This is the life I chose dear and it’s because of you Me: Me? How? Dorothy: You did to me lots of wrong and you kept hurting me. I grew to hate you from that day you set me up with that b!tch. I set my mind to deal with you so severely for all what you put me through, so I left for Port-Harcourt where I told my cousin who was already a cultist to recruit me. I got recruited and became their member till I got admission and returned back here where I wasted no time in belonging to a confra. I scrolled past the ranks till I reached the second in command. The leader got killed during a clash with another confra then I emerge as the leader that’s why they call me Queen. Me: You went through all this just to get back at me right? So why am I still alive? Dorothy: My anger and quest for destroying you subsided when I found out who was your real girlfriend; I got extremely envious of her then changed my quest. Instead of destroying you, I chose to have you all for myself. And you know how much I love you; I can’t even bear seeing you get hurt. Sometimes I ask myself, how I got to love you this much that I can’t let go… I just dunno. Me: For how long will you continue this madness? Dorothy: As long as you’re with me Me: D’thy I’m begging you to let me go; you’re already ruining my life Dorothy: Sorry babe, I can’t do that Me: Please don’t let Marcus touch Mirabel I beg you, he might do something stupid Dorothy: I can’t do that either; we had an agreement. He’s got Mirabel and I gat you; no trespassing. Talking about doing something stupid **getting closer seductively** Me: Stop it! She started romancing me Me: D’thy please stop this *Note: I was tied up on a wooden chair* Dorothy: I’ve missed you… It’s you alone I want; I want to feel you this minute baby Me: Is this what Marcus is doing to Mirabel? Dorothy: I dunno and I don’t care **removing her dress exposing her cleavage** **I turned my face away so little vame won’t get excited.** Voice: I can see you guys are having fun **I turned to see Marcus** Dorothy: What are you doing here? **she backed him while wearing her dress** Marcus: Just came to see how you guys are catching up Me: You ba$tard! What have you done to Mirabel? Marcus: Hey don’t get upset ‘coz I interrupted your little fun **Smiling** Me: Don’t you dare touch her! Marcus: And why not? See Dorothy is touching you Me: You both should leave us alone! Is it by force to love? Why won’t you let us be?! Leave Mirabel and I alone! Marcus: Coward! You want reap from where you did not sow; haven’t you gotten enough from her? She got you a house with two cars and all her money you’ve been using, isn’t it enough for you?! You greedy ba$tard! Dorothy: Marcus that’s enough! Marcus: No let me talk to this f*ckin’ ingrate Dorothy: Marcus! Marcus: Bullsh!t **walks away** Me: You see who you’re working with? Dorothy: Don’t start with me **walking away** I will send you some food **Walked out of sight** D’thy is now the leader of a cult group? That innocent and stupid girl I used to know that couldn’t even stand a cockroach is now something else. I still find it very difficult to believe. Wait a minute…Lola is also a leader of a cult group? What’s going on? I do hope Mirabel isn’t among them. No wonder Lola got guts and influence. Maybe those two girls she used to intimidate Dorothy are her members; Hhmmm… it’s now making sense. A guy brought food for me, I ate while thinking. Now I need to start planning my escape. I’m going to create a problem between Dorothy and Marcus. **The following morning** When one of Dorothy’s boys brought breakfast for me, I asked if Dorothy was around but he said no. Marcus came, mocked and laughed at me then left. That was when I came up with a plan. I threw myself to the ground still tied to the chair; I started hurting and injuring myself till I heard footstep closing in. It was Dorothy; she ran towards me as soon as she saw me on the floor grunting in pain. Dorothy: What happened to you? Me: Leave me alone! Dorothy: Tell me who did this to you Me: Like you care Dorothy: Of course I care… just tell me who did this to you Me: Can’t tell you Dorothy: Why? Me: He’ll kill me Dorothy: What? Not after I kill the ba$tard first! Me: Just leave me alone! It’s all your fault! You brought me here to die Dorothy: That’s not true! Me: Then look at me; see bruises all over my body. Only God knows what he’d do to me when next he attacks Dorothy: Tell me who is the ba$tard that did this to you! Me: Who else if not your partner Marcus Dorothy: What? Me: He threatened my life Dorothy: I warned him of the implication of breaching our agreement… anyone who touch you; touches me. Anyone that touches me; touches the queen of the phantoms and anyone that touches the queen of the phantoms; toils with his or her life! *She briskly walked out of the room in anger* [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
6 Jul 2016 | 05:53
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Carry on
6 Jul 2016 | 06:42
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This is seriously making sense . Vict this is the best story I have ever read ... keep it up my man
6 Jul 2016 | 08:10
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Lolz smart dude
6 Jul 2016 | 08:18
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Very Clever
6 Jul 2016 | 08:42
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Vames Go On.
6 Jul 2016 | 08:42
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I love that
6 Jul 2016 | 08:47
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unbelievable
6 Jul 2016 | 08:50
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adey feel Ur plan
6 Jul 2016 | 08:51
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cary on guy i gat ur back
6 Jul 2016 | 08:52
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isit by force to love, marcus @ dthy
6 Jul 2016 | 08:53
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adey feel Dis Ur plan
6 Jul 2016 | 08:54
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Really making sense now
6 Jul 2016 | 08:59
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Just Luv This Story
6 Jul 2016 | 09:04
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Good plan u got there.
6 Jul 2016 | 09:19
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This guys issssss tooooooooooo clever
6 Jul 2016 | 09:36
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Waow..vames na u get sense pass
6 Jul 2016 | 09:36
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Umm... @vict-vames I no know sey this your small head carry better brain o, see how u just manipulate the calculus to infruate D-thy causinq her to want to kill your number 1 enemy which 'll reduce the problem at hand and make u the HERO. I like that bro...Fire on...
6 Jul 2016 | 09:43
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Lolx,,,,, nice one
6 Jul 2016 | 09:57
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wow...it's good plan
6 Jul 2016 | 09:59
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Intresting nxt oo
6 Jul 2016 | 09:59
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I think commotion will arise..
6 Jul 2016 | 10:02
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Tug of war...
6 Jul 2016 | 10:04
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U try ;)
6 Jul 2016 | 10:10
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Hmmm, see complication o, am loving it
6 Jul 2016 | 10:28
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yo! ride on vames
6 Jul 2016 | 10:31
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lol. correct plan. guy your brain dey reason well. ride on.
6 Jul 2016 | 10:31
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Brilliant plan....
6 Jul 2016 | 10:43
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vames....loving dis story more kudos to u.....muah
6 Jul 2016 | 10:47
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an u need to act first.
6 Jul 2016 | 10:49
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omoh this story is fucking crazy mehn, xo xo interesting u suppose dey do am one epi per day
6 Jul 2016 | 10:50
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You have got brain man,,,,,, Nextttttttt.
6 Jul 2016 | 10:52
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Observing
6 Jul 2016 | 10:53
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ride on
6 Jul 2016 | 10:55
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Dorothy on my mind
6 Jul 2016 | 10:55
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wow,,smart,,
6 Jul 2016 | 11:01
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we are still waiting ooooh......nxt please....
6 Jul 2016 | 11:09
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yes..love dat
6 Jul 2016 | 11:26
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Dorothy a cult member?............ Na wa o. Its becoming more interesting,am enjoying the story............. KUDOS TO VICT.
6 Jul 2016 | 11:49
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the dreaded Dorothy
6 Jul 2016 | 11:51
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Marcus is doom.... so is dorathy... they might end up killing each other
6 Jul 2016 | 12:02
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Good thinking ... u got her there
6 Jul 2016 | 12:03
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hope this plan of yours will work don't forget to vote for the only one who deserves to wear the crown VOTE @promzy for miss COOLVAL 2016 voting is on so hurry now and cast your votes God bless you
6 Jul 2016 | 12:03
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Omo see brain
6 Jul 2016 | 12:12
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Nic start
6 Jul 2016 | 12:14
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Loooooool crazy
6 Jul 2016 | 12:17
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A Gud Plan, I Guess It Will Work Out
6 Jul 2016 | 12:29
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Nyc job vames
6 Jul 2016 | 12:29
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Perfect Plan I Think Your No.6 Is Active
6 Jul 2016 | 12:36
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Analysis....
6 Jul 2016 | 12:48
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Okay!
6 Jul 2016 | 13:26
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this is seriõus vames nice move next pls
6 Jul 2016 | 13:26
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next please
6 Jul 2016 | 13:36
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sharp guy
6 Jul 2016 | 13:46
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seriously this is kind of suprising ... I know its dorothy but cant believe she is a cult member not to talk of being their leader ....
6 Jul 2016 | 14:00
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Kikiikikikik. Nice idea Victor, I pray dis ur plan works. Never underestimate any girl.
6 Jul 2016 | 14:15
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haha u really did think victor hpe u'll escape that and also ua wife mirabel
6 Jul 2016 | 14:31
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She is still a stupid girl yu know?
6 Jul 2016 | 14:59
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the real game just began
6 Jul 2016 | 15:25
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Victor I dey feel you.
6 Jul 2016 | 15:35
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Gbam gbam gbam...........
6 Jul 2016 | 15:43
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Mirabel is in danger
6 Jul 2016 | 16:07
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hmmmm
6 Jul 2016 | 16:24
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Hahahahahahahaha you bad, 9ce plan
6 Jul 2016 | 16:26
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hmm..I never knew dorathy will turn into dis
6 Jul 2016 | 16:27
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Very inteteresting, am loving diz
6 Jul 2016 | 16:33
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good step,,, but am sorry for Mirabel
6 Jul 2016 | 16:36
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am feelinq dis bro.....give me more
6 Jul 2016 | 17:57
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Nice plan
6 Jul 2016 | 17:59
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hmm........at last u finally posted
6 Jul 2016 | 18:12
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Ride on . . Nice plan
6 Jul 2016 | 18:18
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Hmmmm
6 Jul 2016 | 18:28
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Setting dem up against each oda is a perfect plan.
6 Jul 2016 | 18:44
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Hmmm D'thy d badest. Ur brain @ work indeed.
6 Jul 2016 | 18:47
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cant blv dat des love story Is also an ACTION PACKED story
6 Jul 2016 | 19:00
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Hmmmmm....loving it God will save u
6 Jul 2016 | 19:48
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Queen of phantom-my ass
6 Jul 2016 | 20:18
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I knew it will be Dorathy
6 Jul 2016 | 20:37
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Owkkkay Sha rap d next episde quik! quik!!
6 Jul 2016 | 20:45
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nice idea Vames
7 Jul 2016 | 02:36
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Gengen
7 Jul 2016 | 02:41
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I can see this game is making sense now ...kudos bro. but this thing is taking long please try more.
7 Jul 2016 | 07:37
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interesting
7 Jul 2016 | 08:00
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next pls
7 Jul 2016 | 08:41
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hehehehehehe
7 Jul 2016 | 09:22
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queen of d phantom i luv ur plan vic
7 Jul 2016 | 09:23
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sharp dude
7 Jul 2016 | 10:39
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too bad
7 Jul 2016 | 11:36
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nice ond
7 Jul 2016 | 12:33
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Following
7 Jul 2016 | 12:48
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lolzzzz,look like child's play
7 Jul 2016 | 13:40
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U guys re just hailing him....wat if dorathy harms mirabel too...wat is going na happen to her... Remember the rules *NO TRESSpASSING*...you know wat that means *YOU HURT MINE, I HURT YOURS TOO*...bad luck
7 Jul 2016 | 15:03
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nemesis will surely catch up with evil doer.....observing
7 Jul 2016 | 15:04
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Bad luck...bad luck
7 Jul 2016 | 15:07
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...........
7 Jul 2016 | 15:09
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Sha!....m still around
7 Jul 2016 | 15:12
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am so sure dorothy wil also beat mirabel also bt dat good becos marcus wilnt take it lightly wit dorothy for touching mirabel so their wil b a terrible fight between marcus nd dorothy dat gud idea vict
7 Jul 2016 | 19:35
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new development
8 Jul 2016 | 01:13
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Most of you guessed right. It was Dorathy indeed! Stupid and foolish fellow whose obsession of a guy is at the crescendo. Went this far and through such risky journey just to get back at Ben, nawow! [b](Hope none of our girls is desperately obsessed and stupid as Dorothy?)[/b] Ben, I just hope this your tactics works for our the end and doesn't backfire or cost you or Mirables life.
8 Jul 2016 | 02:16
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Hmm..intresting.
8 Jul 2016 | 04:09
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 34[/color] After she left the room, she came back a couple of minutes later with Marcus. Marcus: Hey what’d f*ck did you say I did to you?! **Speechless** Marcus: Huh?! **Speechless** Marcus: He’s f*ckin lying mehn! Why can’t he speak out? Dorothy: You threatened his life! Marcus: This dude is lying! I didn’t do nothing!! Dorothy: Victor say to me again what he did to you **I didn’t feel comfortable for lying earlier because I detest lying** Me: D’thy I’ve told you everything and he knows what he did so there is no need repeating myself Marcus: Dorothy can’t you see what he’s doing? He is doing this on purpose! To cause a rift between us. Dorothy: What are you talking about? Me: Ask him if he came here or not Marcus: This is bullsh!t Dorothy: Did you? Marcus: I did came here but i did nothing to him Dorothy: We had a clear agreement Marcus; remain on your path and keep the agreement intact so there won’t be a mishap between us Marcus: Dorothy you should be smarter than this; this guy is going to use your brain. Don’t listen to what he’s telling you; you can’t trust whatever he tells you now after all he's done to you. Remember he dumped yo' a$$ without looking back Dorothy: That’s enough Marcus: How is it enough? I hate it when I’m being accused wrongly! Dorothy: Excuse us Marcus Marcus: That’s it? Dorothy: I need to have a word with him so excuse us ** He left us** Dorothy: Are you lying to me? Me: What’s the use of explaining myself to you when my life is at stake on either way Dorothy: **Moves closer to me and started caressing my head** Victor are you scared of me? Me: Yes; for you’re no longer the Dorothy that I use to know. Now you’re the bad girl that claims to love me; boosting that anyone that touch me, touches you and all that empty words of threat you stated earlier. What did you do to him? Nothing! You can’t even keep your word. Dorothy: I meant what I said darling Me: Well…? Dorothy: I know you weren’t telling the truth Me: Really now? Dorothy: You want to play a smart one on me… nice try Me: Like I said earlier, there’s no need explaining myself. He’s your partner in crime and you both work together. So… I’m not surprised at all Dorothy: Yea, do not be surprised that I’m not that stupid girl you use to know Me: Your problem. So how many members do you have in your confra? Dorothy: 28 excluding our new converts Me: No girls? Dorothy: Sure there are Me: Why am I not seeing them around? Dorothy: They have no business in here Me: But they’re outside? Dorothy: Yea Me: With all your 28 members Dorothy: Nope Me: For how long do you think you’ll keep me here? Dorothy: For as long as it takes Me: I see… you know; there’s one peculiar thing that haven’t changed about you Dorothy: By that you mean my stupidity? Me: Yea… how’d you know? Dorothy: That’s the only thing you think you know about me and you’ve been seeing me as a stupid person for over 10 years now. So… I should know Me: I’m just sorry for your mother; she’s a good woman. Too bad she gave birth to a goat instead of her likeness Dorothy: What’s your game plan now? You think I’m going to fall for it? Me: I’m so surprised that you’ve been keeping your cool all this while not throwing yourself at me. Why is that? Or maybe Marcus has already satisfied you Dorothy: Me? **Laughs** I wonder how Mirabel would be feeling now after all she’s been receiving from him Me: What? Marcus has been sleeping with her? **She burst into laughter** Me: Talk to me! Dorothy: See how I got you with only one attempt **Laughs** you think I will fall for your enticements? I don pass that level na Me: D’thy has he been sleeping with her? Dorothy: I dunno and I don’t care My heart was already pounding hard, what could he be doing with Mirabel? I went into frenzy mode because I was so disturbed. I need to come out with another plan that’d work out well before my heart detonates out of anger. I was silent thinking hard while she’s there operating her laptop. Me: You said you came back when you gained admission, does that mean you’re in school now? Dorothy: Yep… 300 level Me: Why aren’t you in school now? Or you don’t have lectures? Dorothy: You don’t worry about me Me: Why not? And you seemed to be worried about me? Dorothy: That’s because I love you, got that? Me: But i care about you Dorothy: Nice try Me: No i mean it Dorothy: Alright thanks Me: Sure you're Ok? Dorothy: Perfecto Me: Where can i urinate? Dorothy: Double?! *A guy answered from outside* Dorothy: Bring the container Me: Container for what? You need to untie me so i'd pee properly Dorothy: Nice try Me: D'thy what's your problem? Please let me go Dorothy: Let you go? Only death can make that happen Me: You've really gone crazy you know that? Dorothy: **Speechless** **The guy came with the container** Me: Atleast you can untie me so i'd help myself Dorothy: Give me the container and go **The guy did as she said; then she stood up with the container** Me: What are you trying to do? Dorothy: **Pulling down the zipless sport trouser Marcus provided for me** Me: No Dorothy stop that... ah! **she's giving me a head** Dorothy! Ah! She pulled down the trouser completely, removed her undie then sat on me moving up and down after finding it a little bit difficult to place it in her because she was very tight. She raped me! -I cummed a couple of minutes later before she stood up- Dorothy: Whoa... I missed that Me: You b!tch Dorothy: Like you didn't enjoyed it **she wore my trouser back on** Me: Is this what Marcus is doing to Mirabel? Answer me! Dorothy: Well...just as he didn't know what just happened between us now, same way i dunno what happens there Me: You both are animals! shameless animals! Dorothy: You guys are the cause for all of this... you both broke our hearts! Me: Are you guys the first to have a broken heart? Mirabel also had a broken heart but she moved on with her life. Look at you, you're no different from a dog! You both are animals!! *Marcus rushed in* Marcus: What's going on here? Why is he shouting? Dorothy: Just a little misunderstanding Me: You ba$tard! What have you been doing to Mirabel?! Where are you keeping her?! Why won't you both move on with your life and leave us alone?! You're so shameless! Marcus: He needs to be shut off **He went and came back with something in his hand; he injected me with it. Then i dozed off instantly** ****** I found myself waking up with a blurry sight not knowing how long i slept but everywhere was dark, it was already night and i dunno what the time was saying. Those two shameless people were really so obsessed over me and Mirabel. If Dorothy could do such thing to me, I wonder what Marcus is doing to Mirabel. I was so worried and disturbed. Marcus and Dorothy have really gone crazy. I started thinking positively, the thought of encouragement, the thought of inspiration, the thought of strength and hope. Because, it is very difficult and rare for anyone to live a peaceful and perfect life of success without trials and challenges. No matter who we are, no matter what we do; there must be a time where we'd face some challenges. So it depends on how we'd overcome it. The Bible says that "For whatsoever is born of God overcometh the world: and this is the victory that overcometh the world, even our faith" so this is a challenge for me and i need to overcome it with faith! My name is Victor and Victor means overcomer or conqueror or winner. My name has always worked for me and this challenge won't be any different from my past victories! I started meditating on the word of God and made certain declarations. I asked God for forgiveness for what Dorothy did to me before i started praying throughout the night having faith that something would happen: that my life will not end up this way. I prayed that night like never before.I prayed and sang till daybreak and the glory of God manifested. **I started hearing gunshots outside** [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
8 Jul 2016 | 07:05
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manifestation at hand.
8 Jul 2016 | 07:24
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Wow. prayer indeed works. hope That's the police
8 Jul 2016 | 07:38
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dats good to hear...keep it up man!
8 Jul 2016 | 07:44
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D more u read dis story e more interesting it is kudos 2 u @vict_vames
8 Jul 2016 | 07:45
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believe and its done..
8 Jul 2016 | 07:53
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Hmmm.... Dis dorothy gan self... Na wa o
8 Jul 2016 | 08:02
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Next Vames Na
8 Jul 2016 | 08:05
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manifestation at hand
8 Jul 2016 | 08:16
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d police has come
8 Jul 2016 | 08:17
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Dat shud be Vincent and Ike dat ar der to rescue u... Dorothy is a bitch
8 Jul 2016 | 08:23
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Eiyaa..sorry mr vames..she rape u
8 Jul 2016 | 08:24
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8 Jul 2016 | 08:35
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I Think Its The Police/soldiers Trying To Break In ..
8 Jul 2016 | 08:35
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Na wah oo
8 Jul 2016 | 08:37
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Yes indeed prayer moves mountain.
8 Jul 2016 | 08:42
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dis story go kil me one day....
8 Jul 2016 | 08:52
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indeed the power of prayers,,,,,hpe u'll be rescued
8 Jul 2016 | 08:58
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Your prayer has been answered............
8 Jul 2016 | 09:00
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Wow! Our God is wonderful, next pls
8 Jul 2016 | 09:04
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they lord is great . ride on bro
8 Jul 2016 | 09:14
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CContain ooo
8 Jul 2016 | 09:19
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Continue in ooo
8 Jul 2016 | 09:19
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wao....interesting,RIDE ON BRO.
8 Jul 2016 | 09:35
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he don happen.
8 Jul 2016 | 09:38
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so,u remember u hv God now
8 Jul 2016 | 09:47
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Interestin bt dose two re beasts in human form
8 Jul 2016 | 09:59
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God don ansa ur prayer b dat o
8 Jul 2016 | 10:08
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Hmmn.. Gun shots from who?
8 Jul 2016 | 10:14
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Lol,manifestation In Progress
8 Jul 2016 | 10:22
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I think its the niger avengers, caus dats the sound of their gun shots
8 Jul 2016 | 10:23
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Nice one. Da tracking device should av been put in ur hair or probably injected in u
8 Jul 2016 | 10:47
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Part of your thanks would also go to Vincent
8 Jul 2016 | 10:49
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hmmmm
8 Jul 2016 | 10:51
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Gunshots?
8 Jul 2016 | 10:58
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waiting......
8 Jul 2016 | 11:18
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it seems security agents were there battling with them. interesting
8 Jul 2016 | 11:25
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Thumb up bro
8 Jul 2016 | 11:37
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Whao! I love dis story
8 Jul 2016 | 11:42
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God intervention atlast, power of prayer
8 Jul 2016 | 12:04
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Hmmmmmmmm, i love dis story
8 Jul 2016 | 12:23
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Action film
8 Jul 2016 | 12:32
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Gun shots? Clash of titans
8 Jul 2016 | 12:34
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Police Don show
8 Jul 2016 | 12:36
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Wow. .Its interesting
8 Jul 2016 | 12:45
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Victor Vames you remember God O boy!
8 Jul 2016 | 13:00
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God at work....... Miracle working God
8 Jul 2016 | 13:01
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Hahahahaha see better raping
8 Jul 2016 | 13:04
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following
8 Jul 2016 | 13:47
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Prayer answered
8 Jul 2016 | 14:04
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Prayers, gunshots, manifestation, freedom et victory
8 Jul 2016 | 14:28
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See Me See Gobe
8 Jul 2016 | 14:50
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prayer moves mountains
8 Jul 2016 | 15:18
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lolzzzz wonderful
8 Jul 2016 | 15:51
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Hmmm prayer warrior
8 Jul 2016 | 15:53
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abeg tell us wetin happen if you no believe say prayer the work you beta start now the believe am because me I don experience am
8 Jul 2016 | 16:05
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Hmmm....reserve my comment for now
8 Jul 2016 | 16:13
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Okay....nxt pls
8 Jul 2016 | 16:17
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Waoh,,,,,,, ???? shots. Hide your head oooo.
8 Jul 2016 | 16:36
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Good work
8 Jul 2016 | 16:37
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wow Abeg ride on
8 Jul 2016 | 17:15
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No sinners will go unpurnished....... dats 1 statement i fear d most.... even though Victir has repent yet he paid for his misdeeds
8 Jul 2016 | 17:24
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when it comes to good story, I'm insatiable. Nice work
8 Jul 2016 | 17:30
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In the tym of trial vict no who God is.... Well all the same... Save our writter o lord... Answer our pray over him IJN
8 Jul 2016 | 17:30
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Pastor victor
8 Jul 2016 | 17:40
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God is always on d throne for those who geniunely call on Him.
8 Jul 2016 | 17:55
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Breakthrough at last
8 Jul 2016 | 18:07
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Prayer do help..
8 Jul 2016 | 18:23
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What nxt..
8 Jul 2016 | 18:24
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yawa don gas
8 Jul 2016 | 18:26
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Faith do work for us one's we believe so
8 Jul 2016 | 19:01
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hmmnn ....
8 Jul 2016 | 19:21
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Kudos... Our God answer prayers
8 Jul 2016 | 19:26
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prayer... answered
8 Jul 2016 | 20:05
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interesting.. next pls
9 Jul 2016 | 05:38
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let seee what de prayer brings
9 Jul 2016 | 07:27
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Cool... good work ... Next pls... . .
9 Jul 2016 | 07:40
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Can't wait to see u come out of that stinky place
9 Jul 2016 | 09:38
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chaiii
9 Jul 2016 | 10:27
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Manifestation on point
9 Jul 2016 | 11:05
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Interesting next pls
9 Jul 2016 | 12:21
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Wooooow u guys wil soon be out of bondage
9 Jul 2016 | 16:09
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pls bro keep on and we dey enjoy you but its taking long.
9 Jul 2016 | 16:44
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oya come update o
10 Jul 2016 | 00:26
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prayer is the key.
10 Jul 2016 | 06:53
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waoh vhatz a biq fight btwn two confrater.
10 Jul 2016 | 11:15
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Oo boy see where sinner day pray. God go ans this 1?
10 Jul 2016 | 11:50
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Vames Next Naa
10 Jul 2016 | 11:51
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Waiting O.!
10 Jul 2016 | 11:52
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WOW, INDEED PRAYER WORKS . . RIDE ON BRO
10 Jul 2016 | 11:52
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we dey wait o
10 Jul 2016 | 12:08
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1 gala for u
10 Jul 2016 | 12:09
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abi make I add cook join am
10 Jul 2016 | 12:09
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but seriously we dey wait
10 Jul 2016 | 12:10
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The suspense too much
10 Jul 2016 | 12:11
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What happened here??
10 Jul 2016 | 13:47
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Pls lets know what happen next
10 Jul 2016 | 13:49
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i fink their's anoda tracker fixed on ur body witout u knowing pls update nd letz knw wat happen next
10 Jul 2016 | 14:00
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Faith with prayer z d key...
10 Jul 2016 | 17:21
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Jxt believe
11 Jul 2016 | 08:18
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 35[/color] ***KNOW THIS*** “Ask and it shall be given to you”. Our earthly Parents may know what we need but they’d expect you to tell them by yourself what you really want. We all know that GOD is our FATHER and HE knows our various heart desires; He expects us to have it in mind that HE’s always there for us and for us to ask HIM for our needs. There is nothing neither too big nor too small to ask our GOD. HE is always there for us only if we could go to HIM. HE is our ALL SUFFICIENT GOD! And always remember to thank HIM for everything. How would you feel if you did someone a favour and he/she refused to say ‘Thank You’? **CONTINUED** I started hearing gunshots from the outside; I didn’t know what to do because I was tied down and I can’t call for help, who will I call when I don’t really know what was going on? I struggled to throw myself down but I couldn’t; I started praying slowly while facing the entrance door. Just then Lola burst in. Me: Lola? **Surprised** what are you doing here? Lola: Came to rescue your a$$, where is Mirabel? Me: I dunno where they’re keeping her Lola: **untying me** we need to find her before Dorothy and her full gang gets here Me: Ok but how did you know we’re here? Lola: Now is not the time to talk about that, we need to leave this place as soon as we get Mirabel (She untied me) Me: Thanks Lola Lola: You can thank me when we leave this place in one piece. Now that I’ve found you, I need to call Mirabel’s mother for reinforcement because we’re no match for Dorothy’s gang. But the problem is how will they trace us? Me: Where is your phone? Lola: Here… **Handed her phone to me** Lemme go look for Mirabel Me: Ok I wanted to call Ike but I dunno his number off-hand not even Vincent or Frank’s. Then I dialed Nancy’s number since she’s been freed but it was switched off. I swiftly scrolled through her contact list in search of the first lady’s number; I dialed it as soon as I found it. She picked the phone… Me: Hello? It’s Victor Ma First lady: Victor what happened to you? Where have you been? And why’d you call me with Lola’s cell phone? Me: Please send me Frank’s number ma. It’s urgent First lady: Urgent? Where are you? Me: Ma this is extremely urgent; please send me Frank or Vincent’s number I need it very badly to get myself and Mirabel out from here First lady: Ok Ok… give me a minute Me: Please hurry up Ma or better still, just send this number to them. Tell them to track it and get to the location as soon as possible with the Police or the Army First lady: Ok alright I’ll do that right away *She hangs up* I put the phone on silent and hid it somewhere in the room then I walked out of the room to see what’s going on outside. On stepping out, I saw the lifeless body of those two guys that came into the room with Dorothy of which one of them knocked me down when I tried to follow Dorothy. I picked up one of their gun (a rifle) in case of anything. Mirabel: Victor! *I turned around and saw Mirabel with Cynthia* -She ran towards me and hugged me very tight while I did the same- Mirabel: Oh my God… thank God you’re alive! I thought you died, I mean I saw you dead. They brought your body to me and you were dead **crying** Me: They faked it, I’m not dead Mirabel: What happened? Where did they keep you? Me: They tied me down on a chair in that room **Pointing the room** so what happened to you? Where is Marcus? Lola: Here… **We saw Lola coming with three other girls and Marcus with his hands tied together ** I left Mirabel immediately and ran towards Marcus and beat him up Lola: Victor that’s enough, we need to get going now (They had to dragged me off him before I could let him go) Lola: The car is parked somewhere along the way, so we need to get there fast because it’s not too close While getting out of the building, Lola and Cynthia with Marcus were behind us while I and Mirabel were in the middle as the other three girls take the lead ahead of us. So I couldn’t help but ask Mirabel something that has been bothering me. Me: Did he touch you? Mirabel: Who? Me: Marcus Mirabel: **Speechless and uncomfortable** Me: Talk to me, did he sleep with you? Mirabel: We will talk about everything that happened here when we get home Me: I don’t want you to say everything; I just want a yes or no At that point, we were on verge of stepping out of the building before we heard gunshots killing the girls who were already out of the building so we ran back into the building to take refuge Lola: Dorothy is here! Cynthia: What do we do now? Marcus: Surrender Me: Shut up! Marcus: You can’t escape now Me: How about I blow your head off? Marcus: I will have nothing to lose Dorothy: **From outside** Lola! You’re outstripped! I give you all 50 seconds to come out and surrender or we will shoot aimlessly at you till you all die. 1…2….3…..4……. Marcus: Your time is budging very fast Me: You shut your mouth up! Mirabel: What are we going to do now? Dorothy: 29…30….31… Lola: Let’s go Me: I will take the lead Mirabel: Are you sure? Me: Yea let’s go I dragged Marcus with me as I take the lead out of the building to Dorothy. Dorothy: Drop any weapon you have on you **Lola and Cynthia unharmed themselves; I already dropped the gun I had with me inside** Dorothy: Go check them and take the guns**Ordering her guys** Guy 1: Clear Dorothy: **Came closer and stood face to face with Lola** Remember me? Lola: Yea you’re that b!tch I ditched off some time ago Dorothy: Really? Good thing you remember and I hope your guts save you today. Now let Marcus go *I hesitated* Dorothy: Let him go now! **Pointing gun at us** *I let go of him go; immediately he punched my stomach two times. Mirabel screamed out. I thought Dorothy would scold him for punching me but she didn’t. Instead, she shot him three times in the chest * Dorothy: You ba$tard! I warned you **referring to Marcus**. Now move inside all of you **We went inside the building and stayed in the bigger room** Dorothy: Victor come here Me: **Refused to move** Dorothy: come here! Me: No! **The next thing I heard was pow! She shot Lola in the chest** Mirabel: **Screamed** Lola! **I saw Lola on the ground with blood spilling down from her mouth and her body where she was shot** Dorothy: I’m not playing around Victor; come to my side Me: You crazy b!tch! (I ran towards her with rage to harm her) Dorothy: Victor! **Pow** Me: Ah! **she shot me at the left side of my chest; I fell down** Mirabel: Oh my God! Victor! Dorothy: **Shocked** what have I done? **Just then we started hearing serious gunshots outside; more like a gun battle this time** Cynthia: (Peeping through the window) the army is here Dorothy was still standing dumb; still in shock when Cynthia stunned her with a hit and pinned her down so she won’t escape while Mirabel was telling me to hold on and be strong that help is here. The military came into the building and took over it. One of them said ‘clear’ then Ike and Frank came in to identify the victims. They pointed us excluding Dorothy so the military arrest her and immediately took us out for medical attention. [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
11 Jul 2016 | 12:10
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my prayer is dat lola shouldnt die ooo
11 Jul 2016 | 12:28
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next please
11 Jul 2016 | 12:28
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wow ....thanks to u@Lola and Cynthia...love u well done vames
11 Jul 2016 | 12:30
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I Pray You All Come Out Alive..,May God See You Through
11 Jul 2016 | 12:35
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**following
11 Jul 2016 | 12:36
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God save Lola for me!
11 Jul 2016 | 12:36
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I jst pray lola does nt die
11 Jul 2016 | 12:41
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eyaahh Hope Lola s will not be d Sacrificial Lamb
11 Jul 2016 | 12:47
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Nice film tricks....
11 Jul 2016 | 12:50
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Wow I love dis story
11 Jul 2016 | 12:50
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I pray Lola should survive dis
11 Jul 2016 | 12:52
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hmm..Marcus is gone,..Vicky just praying you end up wif mirabell
11 Jul 2016 | 12:53
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Wow lola must not die o
11 Jul 2016 | 12:54
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wow. I just wish Lola would survive d shots. As for Victor, he is d actor. His tym is not up yet.
11 Jul 2016 | 13:04
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My paddy @Vict-Vames ... You're doing good here. I will confess... Still following sha
11 Jul 2016 | 13:06
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Wow Wow Wow
11 Jul 2016 | 13:13
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suspence ehnnnnnnn, no b small
11 Jul 2016 | 13:18
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suspence yi ti poju fa
11 Jul 2016 | 13:19
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.
11 Jul 2016 | 13:25
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[b]@Flames Thanks senior[/b]
11 Jul 2016 | 13:26
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wooaaahhhh
11 Jul 2016 | 13:33
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I hope lola will not die
11 Jul 2016 | 13:34
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Lola must not die ooo
11 Jul 2016 | 13:35
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Wow getting more intrested
11 Jul 2016 | 13:39
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following
11 Jul 2016 | 13:43
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hmmn,,I dnt want Lola to die
11 Jul 2016 | 13:53
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interesting
11 Jul 2016 | 13:55
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Oya summarize your dreams and den wake up
11 Jul 2016 | 14:02
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Nice one, Lola ain't dying jor ,she and Victor will be alright since help came on time
11 Jul 2016 | 14:10
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Lola has changed...bt its about to cost her her life
11 Jul 2016 | 14:20
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MAYBE MARCUS HAVE TASTED MIRABEL PUSSY, I PRAY LOLA & VICTOR SURVIVE THE GUN SHOT
11 Jul 2016 | 14:39
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Some people can't differentiate between love, lust and infatuation, so is the case of dorothy, now look where she got herself between a federal criminal just because you love a guy and he loves someone else.
11 Jul 2016 | 14:56
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Now marcus is dead, dorothy arrested. Good one
11 Jul 2016 | 14:56
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Missed some episode, but still following sha
11 Jul 2016 | 15:01
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Lola tried for you guys.
11 Jul 2016 | 15:04
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Is Lola Putting On Bulletprove
11 Jul 2016 | 15:07
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Lola don dye..... victor liveth to tell the story to the end
11 Jul 2016 | 15:19
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Lola don't die yet
11 Jul 2016 | 15:25
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Victor shld nt die ooo bt lola nar 50/50
11 Jul 2016 | 15:29
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hmmm pls cont
11 Jul 2016 | 15:36
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lola life is at stake now but victor is still alive
11 Jul 2016 | 15:38
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Hmmmmmmmm following
11 Jul 2016 | 16:04
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Hmmmmmmm cont dere is God
11 Jul 2016 | 16:11
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WAO! NEXT PLEASE
11 Jul 2016 | 16:15
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Nice one... Hope lola survive it,,
11 Jul 2016 | 16:22
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Hope Lola ...
11 Jul 2016 | 16:23
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Better Future I See
11 Jul 2016 | 16:43
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Dear Mr Writer i feel tHe Action Of Ur StOry
11 Jul 2016 | 16:48
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Dear Mr Writer i feel tHe Action Of Ur StOry ... Its Really Interesting.. ThumBs UP
11 Jul 2016 | 16:48
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wow!!! i hope lola won't die jst lyk dat
11 Jul 2016 | 16:50
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interesting
11 Jul 2016 | 17:24
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Pls we appreciate ur effort but make if fast pls i can wait to see d next 1
11 Jul 2016 | 17:33
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RIP Lola
11 Jul 2016 | 17:36
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sweet..... next
11 Jul 2016 | 17:41
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Hmm-still following
11 Jul 2016 | 17:43
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Yes ooo, God answers prayer
11 Jul 2016 | 18:21
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jeez,Lola shud not die pls.
11 Jul 2016 | 18:25
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lola et victor dnt die plx
11 Jul 2016 | 18:37
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I pray Lola should survive this
11 Jul 2016 | 19:11
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I hope Lola isn't dead.... Next pls
11 Jul 2016 | 20:12
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Next! Suspense is killing me!
11 Jul 2016 | 20:18
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A superb story you qot here.. keep the flames blue..and fire on.. I quess lola has bulletproof on..
11 Jul 2016 | 21:40
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eayah Lola is dead what a life
11 Jul 2016 | 22:14
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The one been shot at chest(lola) hw did yhu sure of her surviva
12 Jul 2016 | 02:02
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wetin hapun nah!
12 Jul 2016 | 02:08
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Cnt believe lola is death.. i just hope am wrong
12 Jul 2016 | 02:22
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Bring it on as e dey hot.......Hopefully Lola will survive
12 Jul 2016 | 04:05
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Next............
12 Jul 2016 | 05:24
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wow. this is looking more like those Navy seals American movie... like it though
12 Jul 2016 | 06:48
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I know Victor will definitely survive, but I hope Lola will survive it... as for Dorothy, let her be sentenced to death by hanging...
12 Jul 2016 | 06:55
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@jhidon You Remember That Navy SEALs ..The Likes Of Graham,hawkins,curran And That Shaheed I Realy Love The Movie!! @Vict-vames Oya Next Mehn!
12 Jul 2016 | 07:32
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Hmmm...9ce 1,following
12 Jul 2016 | 07:39
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wow too intrestin next please
12 Jul 2016 | 08:05
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Wow xoxoxo api u ar save now but am xoxoxoxo sorry for Lola
12 Jul 2016 | 08:44
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abeg make lola no die o
12 Jul 2016 | 08:51
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wat happened next pls
12 Jul 2016 | 08:52
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Gosh mehn. . .thatz interestinq
12 Jul 2016 | 10:45
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Lola pls don't die.
12 Jul 2016 | 11:48
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God please I don't want Lola dead
12 Jul 2016 | 12:19
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hmm... getting more intense Vict-Vames and I know Lola will not die, a lot of truth will be unfolded after this... Continue sir
12 Jul 2016 | 14:18
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Very very good and 4 lola God wil spare her life...
12 Jul 2016 | 14:29
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Finally you guys are freed, Hallelujah! Dorothy is ruthless oooo! Shot Marcus, Lola and even you. Thank God help came quickly else she would have also shot Mirable to prpv to you that she's not there for jokes. It seems your Mirable was violated by Marcus just same way Dorothy took advantage of you. What a pity but thank God it's over now.
12 Jul 2016 | 15:34
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I kwn victor cn not die bt as 4 lola am nt sure
12 Jul 2016 | 15:47
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I'll miss Lola
12 Jul 2016 | 16:17
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hmmm vames Marcus don chop ur food
12 Jul 2016 | 19:26
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Thanks to God for the devine rescue, more prayer for Lola, hope she make it.
12 Jul 2016 | 19:46
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Oh! Lola please don't die
12 Jul 2016 | 20:07
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hmmm,,dis is pathetic
13 Jul 2016 | 02:28
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Hmmmmm weldone mahn, eleyi gidigan. next pls.....
13 Jul 2016 | 02:35
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hmmn, wellbdone
13 Jul 2016 | 06:15
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wow,God help you victor and I pray Lola survive cause she is a good friend irrespective of her way of life
13 Jul 2016 | 07:49
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Remeber in any situation you might find urself,, always give thanks to God, cos he alone has a way of working things out.... Anyways welldone Vames... The story is an interesting piece so far. I guess lola is the sacrificial lamb!
13 Jul 2016 | 09:31
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Pow... Following
13 Jul 2016 | 10:46
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Wow..very interesting
13 Jul 2016 | 11:57
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:g
13 Jul 2016 | 12:57
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Haaaa!,my dear Lola...(bugging eyes)
13 Jul 2016 | 18:57
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 36[/color] They started providing medical attention from the military’s moving vehicle before we got to their clinic for proper medical service. They injected me something and I slept off immediately; that’s when they did operation on me to remove the bullet without me knowing. I dunno how long I slept but I woke up and the first person I saw was Vincent who was seated on a nearby chair reading a book and then Mirabel seated side by side with Nancy. None of them could see that I was awake and I couldn’t utter a word. I could feel the pain from where I was shot; so I was like that till Vincent sighted me. Vincent: He’s awake *Mirabel and Nancy instantly upstretched their heads facing me** Mirabel: Victor? Nancy: **Runs out of the room probably to call the Doctor** Mirabel: Thank God you’re awake **smiling with tears in her eyes** **The door burst open letting in the Doctor and a nurse with my Mother, Mirabel’s mother – the First lady and surprisingly my Father – The boss** {The military Doctor examined me for a many seconds then injected me} Doctor: He need to rest for now, please don’t let him speak much maybe for the next 12 hours so his wound will heal up fast Momma: Ok Doctor; should we give him food? He hasn’t eaten for the past two days Doctor: The drip is Ok for him now but if he would like to eat, no problem. Will you like to eat something Victor? Me: **I nodded my head left and right meaning No** Doctor: What about a drink? Me: **Thinking about it in my head** Doctor: Do you want a drink? Me: **Nodded my head up and down meaning Yes** Doctor: Ok Madam, you can make enquiry on what he’d like to drink and provide for him Momma: Ok Doctor Doctor: **Walks out with his nurse** Momma: What will you drink Victor? Me: **I turned my head facing Mirabel; she understood and smiled** Nancy/Mirabel: *Both chorused* Hollandia yoghurt! (I just smiled) Nancy and Mirabel ran out to get the yoghurt; My Dad talked to me a little then left saying he’d come back tomorrow; Frank came in with Jummy to check on me; Mirabel’s mother – the first lady kept thanking me for rescuing her daughter before she left; Cynthia came in as well, I managed to ask her about Lola, she said Lola is in the intensive care unit on life support battling for her life. She lost so much blood before the help came. Poor Lola, I pray she make it; she’s a great friend even with her little flaws and the issue we both had. Mirabel and Nancy came back with the yoghurt and Mirabel fed me with it. Me: Where is Ike? Mirabel: Oh… he already left; he said something came up so he returned back to the states Me: How long have I been here? Mirabel: Two days Me: Hhmmm… Momma: Won’t you eat something? Me: No Vincent: Hero how far (I knew he was teasing me) Me: Not funny **They all laughed** Vincent: I’m serious, see for yourself **showing me a newspaper then another one** Both papers headlined the happenings that took place. The first lady spoke on how Lola, Cynthia and I risked our lives to save her daughter. They pictured the lifeless body of Marcus and how Dorothy killed him and got detained by the Military. Vincent, Cynthia, Frank, Jummy and Nancy left later in the evening while Momma remained with me and Mirabel; she (Mirabel) refused to go. Momma says she wants to go get food for dinner; Mirabel offered to go with her. I told her to stay back that I want to talk to her but she dissented and followed her. I noticed she’s been trying to avoid my question, why? I dunno, all I know is that she can’t escape it. Her attitude tells me the answer I fear but I want to hear it from her mouth. A Military Nurse (A lady) came after they left to administer drugs on me. Nurse: Hi Victor Me: Good morning Nurse: Morning… how are you feeling now? Me: Better Nurse: Okay… lemme inject you so you’ll get well and strong sooner Me: **Speechless till she injected me and changed the drip** Nurse: You’re really brave to go into the den of the most wanted man in Nigeria to rescue a girl Me: She’s not just a girl, she’s the President’s daughter and…. Nurse: And? Me: Nothing, never mind Nurse: Okay… would you consider joining the Army? The Army needs brave personalities like you Me: **Smiles** Nah… **Sounded funny to me** Nurse: Common… you’re great, just say you’re interested then boom! You got it. You will be scrolling past the ranks like pages of a book Me: **Laughs** Nurse: I’m serious, you saved the President’s daughter; do you have any idea of what that portends? You have earn yourself a great favor in the eyes of the President and the first lady Me: Thanks for your concern Nurse, but I have my own plans Nurse: Just have a rethink and volte-face about it dear Me: Alright Nurse: I’m Norah by the way Me: Yea I know, it’s tagged on you Nurse: Oh yea… just want to do the introduction myself Me: Ok then… I’m Victor Nurse: I know that **we both laughed** Nice meeting you Me: Same here Nurse: I’m hoping this clinic won’t be our last place of meeting **Smiling** Me: I dunno… we’ll see **Door opens** Nurse: Ok we’re done here Me: Thanks Nurse Nurse: **Walks away** Me: Welcome Mirabel: Thanks Me: Where is my mother? Mirabel: In the ladies room Me: You’re yet to answer my question Mirabel: But I just said she’s in the ladies room Me: I know and I’m not talking about that one; you know what I’ve been asking you of **Momma walks; we had to suspend the topic** They both ate what they bought and gave me an energy drink which I drank. **The following morning** Momma left for the house to have her bath and change her clothes; she asked Mirabel to stay with me till Nancy comes around. I noticed how Mirabel was roaming about in and out of the ward probably trying to escape my question. So I decided to confess mine so she’d feel even and confess hers as well. **I told her immediately she walked into the room** Me: Dorothy forcefully had $ex with me **Expecting her response** *She stood still and faced me looking surprised for many seconds with disappointment written all over her face* Mirabel: **Grabbed her jacket and vacate the room without saying a word even when I called her** *I couldn’t understand why she reacted that way; I kept on thinking and wondering before the Military Nurse walked in* Nurse: How are you doing today my hero? Me: Much better, good morning Nurse: Good morning… hope you slept well? Me: Yea Nurse: Did you urinate at night? Me: No Nurse: Okay… **She changed the drip, injected me and gave me some tablets to gulp** Seems you’ll be discharged anytime soon Me: Thanks Nurse Nurse: Norah please Me: Okay… Nurse: Call me lemme hear Me: …Norah? Nurse Norah: Yeah…**Smiling** so you will give me your number now just in case you get discharged when I’m on shift **I called my number for her** Nurse Norah: It’s switched off Me: Oh… yea I forgot I lost my phone Nurse Norah: When you went to rescue the President’s daughter I guess Me: Yea Nurse Norah: You will do a welcome back right? Me: Yea Nurse Norah: Okay… or give me your address Me: Why? Nurse Norah: In case you fail to do a welcome back Me: I will do it Nurse Norah: I still want to have your address, or you don’t want me to visit you sometime? **I just gave her the address and she wrote it down** Nurse Norah: Thanks, lemme go and attend to other patients Me: Okay… **She gave me a peck and left** seriously, this Norah is another person to be worried about oh… because I don’t understand all this her attitude. And I’m very sure she’s like 4 to 5 years older than me. *Vincent came in some minutes later with Frank and Jummy; we exchanged pleasantries and natters* Vincent: Where is Mirabel? Me: Uhmmm… she left for a while Frank: **Speaks into his official ear piece** Copy that Vincent: Who’s that? Frank: Your father’s personal security detail; he says the President is here to see the boy, that’s Victor Me: **I was shocked, bemused, flummoxed, surprised, dumbfounded and speechless** [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
14 Jul 2016 | 08:07
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The Number One Citizen Is Coming To See Victor..Mehn,you Are Realy Honoured!
14 Jul 2016 | 08:14
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Whats Up With Mirabel's Attitude,maybe She's Shy To Explain Her Plights About Marcus To Victor You Better Stay Away From Norah,dont Let Her Ruin Your Plans With Mirabel :b
14 Jul 2016 | 08:16
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u av to be very careful of dis girl called Norah oooo
14 Jul 2016 | 08:50
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No be small Hero you be VAL. :b
14 Jul 2016 | 09:03
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Vic only yhu, u were shocked, surprised, bemused, flummoxed, dumbfounded and speechless .Na wa ooooo And as for Nurse Norah, beta run from her, she is a bearer of bad news
14 Jul 2016 | 09:08
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hahahahaha u no flabagersted?
14 Jul 2016 | 09:13
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lolz nice
14 Jul 2016 | 09:25
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lol......only u@vame
14 Jul 2016 | 09:37
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watching
14 Jul 2016 | 09:47
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Mirabel didn't have sex with Marcus... U re too fast forward vames
14 Jul 2016 | 09:57
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at last. I meet up. nice story
14 Jul 2016 | 10:04
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Waiting :s
14 Jul 2016 | 10:08
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Hahaha. D'thy is being a fool o. Her emotions will ruin her.
14 Jul 2016 | 10:19
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Yes you have to be
14 Jul 2016 | 10:22
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Hehe
14 Jul 2016 | 10:32
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Looooool oyibo, Mirabel shouldn't be jealous na cos he did nt deliberately had s_ex wit d bascard
14 Jul 2016 | 10:33
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Still following
14 Jul 2016 | 10:36
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Hmm... Heartbreaking happiness.
14 Jul 2016 | 10:36
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why is she angry? :S
14 Jul 2016 | 10:40
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More than IIIIIINTREEEESSSSSTIIIINNNGGG!!!! Vic update the remaining man! Too bad for Marcus sha. I was begining to enjoy his speaking style... Hehe eg yo mudafucka I said update de fucking next shit!!! Hahahah.
14 Jul 2016 | 10:47
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All at d same time..... :b
14 Jul 2016 | 10:55
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14 Jul 2016 | 11:14
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Hmmmm.... Ah pray victor wnt loose at last ooo.. Cos dis nurse issue na another series of episodes
14 Jul 2016 | 11:21
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Mr presido want to see his in-law.. :yes: more... Epi pls
14 Jul 2016 | 11:29
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Peeps
14 Jul 2016 | 11:35
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The presido
14 Jul 2016 | 11:50
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Come face ur interrogation
14 Jul 2016 | 11:50
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........
14 Jul 2016 | 11:52
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Norah leave Victor alone oo... Nor com spoil show...
14 Jul 2016 | 12:02
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nice one keep it up
14 Jul 2016 | 12:29
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Victor, master hero, i guess mirabel will come back to drop a bomb shell, @vict-vames next episode pls
14 Jul 2016 | 12:32
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hmmm
14 Jul 2016 | 12:39
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Victor has beecome a hero overnite. Kudos to u.
14 Jul 2016 | 12:52
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Waiting bro
14 Jul 2016 | 13:12
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Lucky you Vict-Vames
14 Jul 2016 | 13:41
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hmmmm wow my village vict will be meeting dey number one citizen of nija ...... .
14 Jul 2016 | 13:46
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Wow I really love this episode I just hope you and Mirable settle soon
14 Jul 2016 | 13:52
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Flabbergasted..
14 Jul 2016 | 13:59
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President in-law
14 Jul 2016 | 14:11
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U did d right tin by telling mirabel d truth
14 Jul 2016 | 14:17
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Presidential Hero
14 Jul 2016 | 14:18
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wow,that cool president seeing you victor????????????????
14 Jul 2016 | 15:11
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After do'thy comes norah, anyway congrats on your father-in-law's visit.
14 Jul 2016 | 15:12
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Waiting for nxt episode
14 Jul 2016 | 15:17
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Woooo d most wanted guy by al ladies n d Hero of d time, his name is Vick-vames
14 Jul 2016 | 15:48
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hmmmmm next
14 Jul 2016 | 15:52
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Lol........only u all this things??????
14 Jul 2016 | 15:57
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this military nurse na second Lola be that ooo
14 Jul 2016 | 16:13
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vames de hero
14 Jul 2016 | 16:14
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Nawa o o o, Dear victor, dnt fear, bc u will b his inlaw very soon
14 Jul 2016 | 16:21
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following.
14 Jul 2016 | 16:25
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d president wanna see u?
14 Jul 2016 | 16:39
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u will soon be famous
14 Jul 2016 | 16:40
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wow, kudose to u victor, u are a hero in deed
14 Jul 2016 | 17:23
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lol .....why suprise? what is wrong with mirabel sef?
14 Jul 2016 | 17:37
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Oya na ..Big boss...Presido con c u omo u don bam o
14 Jul 2016 | 18:04
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Nora, a new devil abi
14 Jul 2016 | 18:28
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Ne sef dnt understand this norah... she av exceed the limit of her job
14 Jul 2016 | 18:35
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U av to b.. mr president for that matter
14 Jul 2016 | 18:36
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That's grace working
14 Jul 2016 | 19:13
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Hmmmmmmm! This one dat Mirable left after confessing what Dorothy dud to you, are you sure she didn't stop her ground and was able to resist Marcus from having his way with her hence, she's disappointed at you. You are indeed a hero.E easy to rescue Presido daughter? The President visiting your hospital bed further confirms you are a true hero. That Nurse Norah looks like another Lola ooooo! From taking your mobile to your house address and even hinted about a possible visit to your house.Guy you need to be very careful
14 Jul 2016 | 20:03
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President is here to see who? Hmmmmmmmmm Victor the Hero.......... Beware of Nurse Norah oooo
14 Jul 2016 | 21:21
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Following
14 Jul 2016 | 23:04
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Bravo! Mirable is also force to sleep with marcuz that's why she is avioding yhu... And to Noar that is second lola to yhu
15 Jul 2016 | 01:53
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You are about to meet the President himself I wonder what will happen next
15 Jul 2016 | 02:18
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Vic dont go to coma due to president presence.
15 Jul 2016 | 02:37
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hmmmm
15 Jul 2016 | 03:37
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Nice 1 man, ride on.
15 Jul 2016 | 06:51
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Hmmmm, things are gonna happen
15 Jul 2016 | 09:40
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following
15 Jul 2016 | 10:21
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Okay Na
15 Jul 2016 | 12:22
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Lol.. Okay.
15 Jul 2016 | 14:19
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Nyc write-up vames
15 Jul 2016 | 14:33
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@victvames proceed
15 Jul 2016 | 18:06
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@Vict-Vames proceed :g
15 Jul 2016 | 18:13
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what's wrong with Mirabel self ?
15 Jul 2016 | 19:21
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Well, Vict-Vames, u did ur best by telling My Mirabel the truth, after all it was not ur fault that D'thy slept with u, Pls continue oo, I can't wait to see the President myself
16 Jul 2016 | 04:18
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you don hit be that
16 Jul 2016 | 07:11
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Nora done start dey sign her own document of ownership
16 Jul 2016 | 09:01
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Following... . . Proceed bro
16 Jul 2016 | 11:45
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Whao I dey enjoy this story lyk seriously @vict-vames u mean u gonna see buhari Abeg talk to him about Nigeria situation o.. Lolssss.
16 Jul 2016 | 13:27
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this is a very nice story, i enjoy it a lot
16 Jul 2016 | 14:44
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presidio inlaw
16 Jul 2016 | 15:01
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no need to freak out my man. I'm very sure u're up to the task...
16 Jul 2016 | 19:20
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next please
17 Jul 2016 | 14:08
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Pls we re waiting for u
17 Jul 2016 | 16:54
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 37[/color] I just had to compose and calmed myself from that awkward moment, the feeling was hard but I had to be a man as he is also a man. Vincent: Victor? Victor? Victor! Me: Yea… yes? Vincent: What’s up with you bro? What have you been thinking of that you couldn’t even hear your name? Me: Nothing… just uhmmm… nothing really Vincent: My father is here is see you, and where is Mirabel? He will need to see her too Me: I dunno, she left here briefly and hasn’t come back yet. I think she’d be somewhere around Vincent: Alright, let’s go look for her Frank; we’ll be right back Me: Ok That’s how they left me alone to face Mr. President… {O.M.O – On My Own}. I waited for almost 10 minutes before the door finally got opened by two high ranking army officers paving way for the President himself, His Vice and some other Government officials and some reporters as well. There standing in front of me, the number one citizen of the Giant of Africa’s Nigeria. Mr. President: Victor Me: Good morning sir Mr. President: How are you? **Offering me his hand** Me: Fine sir **Shook hands with him** Mr. President: I heard everything that happened, so I came personally to thank you for your support in rescuing my daughter. Me: It’s nothing sir, just helped a good friend Mr. President: How can you say it’s nothing when you took a bullet in the process? You did very well Victor; God bless you Me: Thank you sir Mr. President: Your Parents must be very proud of you. Are you a student? Me: Yes sir Mr. President: Where? Me: The University of Abuja, final year Mr. President: That’s good, what are you studying? Me: Business Administration sir Mr. President: Ok **Smiling** we’ll talk more when you get discharged from here; I had to visit you here for it wouldn’t be nice of me if I don’t visit the person that took a bullet in the process of rescuing my daughter Me: Thank you sir Mr. President: I heard she’s been here ever since Me: Yes sir Mr. President: Where is she? I haven’t seen her yet Me: Sh… Mirabel: I’m here Dad **The President turned around and saw his Daughter. I felt relaxed too, because she came back** After hugging her Father, she came and sat down beside me with her right hand around my shoulders. The position made me uncomfortable but I’m sure she knows what she’s doing. No doubt everyone present in the room will know something is going on. They talked for a while; the reporters asked the President some questions of which he replied back. They also asked me some questions of which I gave my best in answering them. I’ll be seen on national TV today, big boy. The President told Mirabel to bring me to the house when I’m well enough before he left with his entourage after they all shook hands with me. Mirabel escorted her Father out of the ward or so I thought because she didn’t come back. Both my Parents came in smiling few minutes after the President left. Dad: The President shook hands with us when he heard that we’re your Parents. My son is great, I’m so proud of you **Believe me when I say I’ve never in my life seen my Father this happy** Momma: He even invited us to the Presidential villa Dad: What’s really between you and that girl? Me: She’s my girlfriend **No need to lie, I’m no longer a kid. I should be getting married in the next two to three years** Dad: As in dating? Me: Yes sir, we’re actually in a courtship Dad: Without the knowledge of your mother and i? Me: She knows Dad: Who? Momma: Me Dad: What? When did you plan to tell me? Me: I planned on bringing her home after we finish school Dad: But that’s not what we agreed on Momma: Daddy leave the young man alone, it’s enough that I already know about their relationship Dad: This is the President’s daughter we’re talking about, what if something had happened; would you have handled it alone? Momma: **Laughs** since when did you start losing your trust in me? You should know I’ll never put my children on harm’s way. Mirabel’s mother and I have been good friends since we both approved their relationship Dad: Even the first lady knows? What about the President? Does he know about it too? Momma: Not yet, but I’m sure he’ll soon know the way things are right now. Dad: But how could Dorothy do this kind of thing? I thought she was a good girl Momma: I still find it hard to believe. And she always asks of Victor when she was in Abuja and Victor in school. I spoke with her mother the day before yesterday and she was fragmented and broken. *The Doctor and Nurse Norah walks in greeted my Parents and examine me. He brought down the drip and changed the bandage* Doctor: You can give him something to eat; I will discharge him later in the evening Momma: Thank you Doctor Dad: Doctor thank you **I noticed how Nurse Norah was staring at me** The Doctor left the room while the Nurse followed after she winked at me. Momma asked what I’d like to eat, I told her to get me any snack and drink. My Dad was talking to me but I wasn’t paying attention. I needed to speak with Mirabel before I leave the clinic. She’s definitely still mad at me even though she acted cool when her Dad was around. I waited for Mirabel till in the afternoon to come but she didn’t show up. *Vincent later walked in* Me: Mirabel went home? Vincent: No, she’s in Lola’s ward Me: Ok she’s awake? Vincent: Lola is dead Me: Oh no! *I was touched, I really felt it that I didn’t know when tears pour down my cheeks* [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
18 Jul 2016 | 05:17
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ooooh nooo, why na lola i will miss you alot, hope you understand why mirabel is not happy now @victor
18 Jul 2016 | 07:09
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Wooow vames d hero of d year, public admin. Presido take note, mirabel was made @ u cos she neva gav Marcus d previlage to, thou it was neva easy 4 her & she thought u could do so to D'th bt u faild her but dnt wori she wil understand u. If wot u wia tinkin realy hapened she would hv been admited too 4 check up
18 Jul 2016 | 07:20
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oh no. shit rip great lola....nxt plz
18 Jul 2016 | 07:54
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Chaiii lola
18 Jul 2016 | 08:59
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Eiyaa..lola
18 Jul 2016 | 09:34
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R.i.p lola..
18 Jul 2016 | 09:35
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Oh My!! After All Her Shortcomings,i Still Wish She Hasn't Died..
18 Jul 2016 | 09:40
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Rip To Lola
18 Jul 2016 | 09:41
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ohh!!! So sad she's dead:g
18 Jul 2016 | 09:43
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hnnnmm... i reason wit u @gordonspack
18 Jul 2016 | 10:22
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mmmm...rip@lola
18 Jul 2016 | 10:35
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haaa so bad
18 Jul 2016 | 10:39
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This is painful sha........ Lola is no longer in d game......... Victor the lucky guy, I hail oh
18 Jul 2016 | 10:54
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oh no wtf lola z gone 4eva she z the sacrified lamb
18 Jul 2016 | 10:58
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Now ur boss(dad) is happy dat u received a bullet... And every one is happy u received a bullet _FOR LOVE :-) :yes:
18 Jul 2016 | 11:01
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So so bad. Rip to the lovely naughty troublesome lola...
18 Jul 2016 | 11:12
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Oh lolly fuck shit up sha....E pain me
18 Jul 2016 | 11:17
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Eyaaa.....she have kpai....chai
18 Jul 2016 | 11:32
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Chai....rip lola
18 Jul 2016 | 11:45
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In utmost sobriety, I render my condolence
18 Jul 2016 | 11:51
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RIP lola
18 Jul 2016 | 11:53
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eayah Lola is dead what bad news :::sobbing::
18 Jul 2016 | 11:55
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eyaa Lola don die am waiting for d next episode
18 Jul 2016 | 11:58
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Lola is not suppose to die nw am starting to lyk her role n d rescue mission
18 Jul 2016 | 12:06
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RIP my baby Lola
18 Jul 2016 | 12:10
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oh no I cannot believe dis Lola of all people is die.
18 Jul 2016 | 12:19
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Chai!!! Loooooolaaaaaa
18 Jul 2016 | 12:20
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ahh Lola rip.....Mirabel will miss u
18 Jul 2016 | 12:30
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RIP Lola.so sad u had to die.
18 Jul 2016 | 12:33
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Eyaah! May her qen2soul rest in peace!
18 Jul 2016 | 12:34
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Too bad for lola
18 Jul 2016 | 12:35
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Hmmm
18 Jul 2016 | 12:53
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18 Jul 2016 | 12:53
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chai what a world
18 Jul 2016 | 12:54
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Haaaa god what kind of life did lola live
18 Jul 2016 | 12:56
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Lola the bad girl is dead. Oh no!
18 Jul 2016 | 13:04
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euuuh,,,lola mi,,#sobs
18 Jul 2016 | 13:10
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oh no lola why. ***sobbing***
18 Jul 2016 | 13:23
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Hmmm rip to lola :yes:
18 Jul 2016 | 13:39
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Eeya rest in peace@lolaa
18 Jul 2016 | 13:46
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Eyah rest in peace lola.
18 Jul 2016 | 14:06
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Lola doesn't have to die now. I feel for her right now.
18 Jul 2016 | 14:21
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so crazy....Rip lola d bitch
18 Jul 2016 | 14:25
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OMG! Α̲̅♍ not happy about her death. RIP Lola
18 Jul 2016 | 14:31
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Eyah r.i.p lola
18 Jul 2016 | 14:37
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Hmmmm Lola.
18 Jul 2016 | 14:55
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chaii too bad rip Lola
18 Jul 2016 | 14:55
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Eeyah
18 Jul 2016 | 15:08
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aeya Lola. rip
18 Jul 2016 | 15:10
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Am not happy Lola left, why???.... Ganna miss u a lot Lola
18 Jul 2016 | 15:21
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Ohh lola..Too bad ur dead ..RIP :S
18 Jul 2016 | 15:39
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Rip Lola
18 Jul 2016 | 15:48
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Rip lola
18 Jul 2016 | 15:53
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wot a tragedy
18 Jul 2016 | 16:06
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Eiiyaa,omgudness I'm Crying Fictionally
18 Jul 2016 | 16:06
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Oh geez... Lola, finally Dead Rip to a great friend
18 Jul 2016 | 16:08
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RIP Lola
18 Jul 2016 | 16:25
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Oh noooooooo! RIP LOLA
18 Jul 2016 | 16:28
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poor lola. hmmmm life is unpredictable.
18 Jul 2016 | 16:51
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Eeya lola byebye o victor your p-man is wonderful the day my p-man heard of my girlfriend he was so mad at me that i had to avoid him 4 almost a month. I was in 300 level then.
18 Jul 2016 | 16:54
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Wat a pity
18 Jul 2016 | 17:04
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Sorry For The Lost of ur friend
18 Jul 2016 | 17:09
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Gezz wtf, RIP LOLA......... Mr man be careful abt norah oooooooo
18 Jul 2016 | 17:18
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rip lola
18 Jul 2016 | 17:18
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OH..what a pity.. Rip lola
18 Jul 2016 | 17:22
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O.M.G,rest in peace lola,so painful,died a hero nt a coward all in d name of savin a friend,chaii
18 Jul 2016 | 17:22
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Chai Lola is gone
18 Jul 2016 | 17:34
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eeyah lola pweew
18 Jul 2016 | 17:58
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aww lola Tins will get better b/n u nd mirable
18 Jul 2016 | 18:04
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kai..... dis story sweet ooo.....next
18 Jul 2016 | 18:09
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Rip lola
18 Jul 2016 | 18:19
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Happy near endin
18 Jul 2016 | 18:36
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Thumbs up vic. Good job
18 Jul 2016 | 18:51
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lola...cahi!!!...Rip
18 Jul 2016 | 18:53
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oooooooooo,,,,noooooooo Lola is dead??? Then she's really d great hero
18 Jul 2016 | 19:04
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Lola dead?
18 Jul 2016 | 19:13
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Oh no
18 Jul 2016 | 19:15
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:s Lola was my all time character in this story. I am Commenting From Techviber.com
18 Jul 2016 | 19:29
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Wow so lola died what a pity
18 Jul 2016 | 19:52
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Oh too bad
19 Jul 2016 | 00:19
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OMG Lola is dead....chai
19 Jul 2016 | 00:23
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Eyaa.. it pains alot.... RIP lola
19 Jul 2016 | 00:33
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Did it really happen that Lola die true, cnt believe, she is main rescur of that event, she doe'nt deserve to die
19 Jul 2016 | 01:49
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Shit! Lola why na!
19 Jul 2016 | 02:27
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ѕσяяу ℓσℓα, яιρ ρєα¢є ¢αи'т ѕтσρ ¢яуιиg тнσ тιℓℓ ωє мєєт αgαιи иχт єριѕσ∂є ρℓѕѕѕѕѕ
19 Jul 2016 | 04:47
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[b]So Lola death no make una notice say The President visit me abi? Be like say Nancy and Mirabel will die too.* winks*[/b]
19 Jul 2016 | 04:59
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Next pls
19 Jul 2016 | 05:24
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Eeyah!!! RIP lola
19 Jul 2016 | 06:23
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Ohhh Noooo... Lola is gone??? Cant Beleive.. U ll neva b forgotten... R. I. P. Dear...
19 Jul 2016 | 07:22
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And I'm beginning to like her ooo rip gal
19 Jul 2016 | 08:01
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Chai too bad Lola couldn't make it, i feel like crying, dorothy u will so rot in hell _ she devil
19 Jul 2016 | 08:24
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Too bad! Terrible. R.I.P lola
19 Jul 2016 | 08:59
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Hmmmmmmmmm! Saying that you are now a big boy is an understatement cos you are now a National Figure as well. The President has taken a special note of you and that will come with a favourable reward. Beware of that randy Nurse Norah oooo and those her stares (Before somebody will put someone in trouble). Oh! It's a pity that Lola has loose her life in the long run. May her soul RIP
19 Jul 2016 | 09:09
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awww Lola
19 Jul 2016 | 09:42
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Gosh lola is dead. Bk here
19 Jul 2016 | 10:54
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hmmm, Lola
19 Jul 2016 | 11:00
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RIP lola. So touching and sorrowful
19 Jul 2016 | 11:44
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So Sorry, Take Heart
19 Jul 2016 | 11:55
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19 Jul 2016 | 12:34
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oh! No, lola cnt die
19 Jul 2016 | 12:56
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if dat shud be d case den R.I.P to her *sobbing*
19 Jul 2016 | 12:57
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Lola chaii so painful
19 Jul 2016 | 15:07
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Oohh noo!!! *sobbing*
19 Jul 2016 | 15:13
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Lola may ur soul rest in peace
19 Jul 2016 | 15:13
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Oooo Lola . . Hmmmm . . RIPP
19 Jul 2016 | 16:27
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wow! Vames Good job
19 Jul 2016 | 16:30
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Eyaaa@Lola. Heroine things sha or na matyr? Hahah
19 Jul 2016 | 16:38
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Oh my Lola!!
19 Jul 2016 | 17:27
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Ooooh so painful, Lola is dead!
19 Jul 2016 | 18:37
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Eyah lola is dead, wat a great feiend who could risk her life in helping her friend.
19 Jul 2016 | 19:17
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Ooooh lola am gonna miss u a lot...
20 Jul 2016 | 05:32
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hero Lola, r.I.p
20 Jul 2016 | 07:03
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 38[/color] I knew Lola to be a strong girl, very strong and tough. I never pictured her dying, although she was hit straight to her chest; a dangerous point. She was strong enough to live up to three days after the hit before giving up. The news of her death really shocked me; she was truly a great friend. Her death pained me seriously; I just wished she could come back. ****** Vincent: She’ll be buried later in the day Me: What? Why? Vincent: She was a Muslim Me: Lola was a Muslim? How is that? Vincent: Yea,,, her Father is a Muslim. He refused to allow his children to be converted to any religion. Lola doesn’t really like being a Muslim; I tried to convert her but her only fear was her Dad. Me: I didn’t know all this Vincent: My worry is if she confessed and accepted Jesus before she died Me: That’s another thing Vincent: I heard you’ll be discharged in the evening? Me: Yea Vincent: That means you’ll attend her burial? Me: Yea but this is really not cool,,, it’s just too soon Vincent: There’s nothing we can do about it bro Me: Please take me to where they are Vincent: Will they let you? Me: Sure, why not? Besides I’m no longer on drip Vincent: Alright *I was already getting up before Nurse Norah walks in* Norah: Where are you going to? Me: To another ward where I just lost a friend Norah: Ow… really sorry about that but you can’t go out yet Me: Why not? Norah: I’m here to give you your last injection before you get discharged Me: Ok that’s not a problem, it won’t take time Norah: I will advise you to remain in one position so it’ll function well in your body because it’s not just any injection; so… please Vincent: Listen to her bro, she knows better. There’s still time *I annoyingly lay back on the bed* Vincent: I will be outside **Walks out** Norah: **After injecting me** Sorry about your friend Me: **Still feeling annoyed** Thanks Norah: I know how it feels to lose a friend **She sat down on my bed** I also lost a friend. She was a very good friend of mine. She nicknamed me ‘Noriz’ back in our secondary school days. So believe me when I say I know how you feel right now **she held my hand and started caressing it** I’ll be here if you need someone to talk to. Me: Thank you but I’ll like to be left alone to do some thinking Norah: No no no… there’s no way I’m going to leave you like this; you need someone by your side dear **palming my left cheek** Me: You don’t have to be worried about me; you should attend to your other patients Norah: I’ve attended to all of them before coming here, I’m attending to you last today because you’re my favourite and my hero and I’m also using this opportunity to spend time with you since you’d be discharged today. Is there anything I can do to make you feel better? Me: I just want to be alone Norah: I’ve been through this, leaving you alone won’t do you any good trust me Me: **Speechless** Norah: I can make you feel better Me: **Speechless** **She slowly leaned forward to a kissing position** Me: What are you doing? Norah: Shhhh…. Relax **her lips almost touching mine** *Not again!* Me: Stop it! **with annoyance after a slight thought of Lola and Dorothy** Norah: *Got shocked then adjusted her position** **Door opens** Vincent: What happened? Norah: Just trying to console him about the demise of his friend but he seems to hate consolation **getting up** Me: I need to be left alone (They both left the room) I didn’t know what to even think of, I just felt enraged. My mind wasn’t stable, different things kept scrolling past my mind. Lola’s death was like an evil imagination to me that I can’t believe. She’d be buried today, so I won’t see Lola again. She left when I started liking and understanding her. Just not ok! I told the doctor to discharge earlier than the time he mentioned of which he did. I told my Parents to go home without me that I’d come home after the burial but they insisted on going there too. I got discharged and joined others at the cemetery where they were to bury Lola. So many people including students showed up on such a short notice. I felt absolute pity on both Cynthia and Mirabel. Even Nancy was very much affected because she really liked Lola from the first time she knew her. Lola was laid down into her grave without wasting time. Many people that knew her cried out that I didn’t know when tears rolled down my cheeks. Lola is gone! ************** Later in the evening at my Family house that same day, we all sat down in the parlor looking dull but facing the TV. I sadly yet proudly watched myself on TV during the President’s visit; that was what stabled my mind because I focused on the TV that moment. I was like “how I wish I added this and that to my replies” that kind of feeling. We talked and laughed over it. The President later spoke on Lola’s death; he said the killer will pay dearly. I remained in the house for two more days before I returned back to school without communicating with Mirabel all through. I attended lectures the following day but Cynthia and Mirabel didn’t show up. I used Nancy’s phone to call Vincent and asked him about Mirabel, he said she and Cynthia went on a mourning trip to Ghana to mourn Lola. Which one is mourning trip again? And she didn’t even inform me about it. I visited my Lecturers one by one in their offices to present myself as I’m back. They all welcomed me with a handshake saying I shouldn’t worry about the lectures, tests and assignments I missed; then I vamoosed from school. By then my wound has healed up a lot. I bought a new Samsung galaxy phone and a new sim then I did a welcome back. My Parents called me that night saying they just came back from the Presidential villa. They happily and joyfully announced to me that the President is now aware of the relationship between Mirabel and I and he’s fine with it. They said the President suspected it when he visited the military clinic. My Dad also said that the President told him to come back in four days’ time to receive an official contract as an Auditor of NNPC; do you know what that means? Enough money flowing in abundance. I was very happy, I will surely vote for him in the forthcoming genera[l elections that’s few months away same as my final semester exams in the University. The following day was Dorothy’s trial in court; I couldn’t go there so i went to school and came back to see that judgement has been passed. She was charged with manslaughter, kidnapping and cultism. She was sentenced [color =red]to be continued….. [/color][/b]
20 Jul 2016 | 12:58
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good for Dorothy
20 Jul 2016 | 13:16
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Good for her
20 Jul 2016 | 13:19
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death by hanging I guess since the president's hand is in it
20 Jul 2016 | 13:21
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To 2 Minutes Imprisonment..
20 Jul 2016 | 13:22
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Nxxxt Bro
20 Jul 2016 | 13:22
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chai. Dorothy
20 Jul 2016 | 13:25
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sweet like sugar next ooi
20 Jul 2016 | 13:26
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uhmmmmmmmm Nice one
20 Jul 2016 | 13:29
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Eeyah lola!! R.i.p
20 Jul 2016 | 13:39
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to Death by electrocution
20 Jul 2016 | 13:39
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She was sentence to death by.....???
20 Jul 2016 | 13:40
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Good for her
20 Jul 2016 | 13:40
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next please
20 Jul 2016 | 13:40
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Death sentence would be the best option for that stupid Dorothy! I share in your pains over the loss of Lola. Take heart. Mirable is taking this thing too far oooo. Imagine traveling out of the country without deeming it fit to inform. although i guess Lola's death contributed immensely in her change of behaviour somehow. If i catch that Nurse Nora eeeeh! I reserve my comment shaa
20 Jul 2016 | 13:42
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Sentenced to death jareh.. l tire for that girl, l wonder why she's my namesake when she doesn't behave like one. Hmmm, Mourning trip? that kind thing. l'm happy for you and your family Vic
20 Jul 2016 | 13:43
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next pls
20 Jul 2016 | 13:53
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to life imprisonment
20 Jul 2016 | 14:02
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Life imprisonment.
20 Jul 2016 | 14:03
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To life in prison..
20 Jul 2016 | 14:07
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Whats wrong with mirabel na
20 Jul 2016 | 14:08
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man good j
20 Jul 2016 | 14:21
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2000yrs imprisonment
20 Jul 2016 | 14:24
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She can't be a cultist and wayward as she was being a Muslim and that's why she don't. #yourthoughtthoughvic-vame.
20 Jul 2016 | 14:32
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Hmmmmmmmm,so dis is hw Lola loose her life
20 Jul 2016 | 14:55
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hmmmmmm rip Lola I really felt her dead
20 Jul 2016 | 15:05
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She was sentence to what?
20 Jul 2016 | 15:20
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I'm really touched by Lola death and this yeye nurse leave Mirabel man alone.... Cynthia n Mirabel sorry for the loss of your sweet friend but this your mourning trip to Ghana without informing your lover Hummn
20 Jul 2016 | 15:21
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Dorothy deserves death by hanging she shot Lola naw
20 Jul 2016 | 15:22
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20 Jul 2016 | 15:23
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Life imprisonment... Death by hanging.. Which 1?
20 Jul 2016 | 15:25
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This story hav come to an end when the boss pass out.... R. I. P lola
20 Jul 2016 | 15:34
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To what?
20 Jul 2016 | 15:40
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Death by hanging. Waiting for da next episode
20 Jul 2016 | 16:07
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next
20 Jul 2016 | 16:12
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To 50 years in prison :b
20 Jul 2016 | 16:13
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She deserve death by stoning
20 Jul 2016 | 16:38
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Suspense! Suspense!! Suspense!!!
20 Jul 2016 | 16:44
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Good 4 her
20 Jul 2016 | 16:48
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As Lola died, The story spoiled. :g I am Commenting From Techviber.com
20 Jul 2016 | 17:01
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Sentence to death by stoning her... idiot girl
20 Jul 2016 | 17:01
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Me sef... mke i go Canada go mourn lola ohh God RIP lola
20 Jul 2016 | 17:03
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To life imprisonment? Or to death by hanging.
20 Jul 2016 | 17:04
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If do'thy is kept in prison her members can or may break her free.
20 Jul 2016 | 17:07
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death will be better,because she is a big fool like victor always tell her very senseless
20 Jul 2016 | 17:09
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Ohh!!!..lola missing you..Wats really going on btwn u nd mirabel..Am thinking you guys won't end together Cos marcus might hv impregnanted mirabel...!!dats my view
20 Jul 2016 | 17:22
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To death by firing squad
20 Jul 2016 | 17:25
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Death I hope
20 Jul 2016 | 17:39
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Hmmm, how many years I̶̲̥̅̊n̶̲̥̅̊ prison?
20 Jul 2016 | 17:53
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Serves her right
20 Jul 2016 | 17:53
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Why suspence nw.... waiting 4 d nxt oo
20 Jul 2016 | 18:24
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It hurts to see Lola dead when she started doing good
20 Jul 2016 | 18:33
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This form of manslauqhter is described as "voluntary" because there has been evidence that Dorothy did intend to kill (which she actually did) and accordinq to HOMICIDE ACT 1957 If the defendant (Dorothy) is proved to be quilty of manslauqhter rather than murder under s2(1) of the Homicide Act 1957 which provides: "If a person kills or is party to a killinq of another, s/he shall not be convicted of murder if s/he was sufferinq from abnormality of mind." Well, if the punishment for kidnapping and cultism is been added to manslauqhter I quess Dorothy 'll be enjoyinq her entire life in prison with hard labour. Dorothy, nah law talk ahm o no be me o incase.
20 Jul 2016 | 18:34
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Next pls
20 Jul 2016 | 18:54
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death by hanging
20 Jul 2016 | 19:06
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i got here after all
20 Jul 2016 | 19:08
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Wooooo Lola is gone 4eva n i dnt tink Mirabel wil eva 4get her in a hori.
20 Jul 2016 | 19:11
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Why man slaughter? Someone that should be sent to life imprisonment..... Oh dear Lola!
20 Jul 2016 | 19:16
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:g some times life can be disappointing and can be uplifting.... We see the strong fall while the weak still standing and we ask ourselves is this life
20 Jul 2016 | 19:16
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"sentenced to death by electrocution" :yes:
20 Jul 2016 | 19:37
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Death by hanging??? Jux guessing Oya tell us
20 Jul 2016 | 19:47
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hmmmm......flowing along
21 Jul 2016 | 01:54
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hmmn
21 Jul 2016 | 03:09
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Oh Lola! can't imagine she's dead
21 Jul 2016 | 04:15
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Hmm... still mourning Lola, Right now am in U.S.A mourning Lola... as for Dorathy, I don't know what to say
21 Jul 2016 | 04:59
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Nice one..
21 Jul 2016 | 06:33
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Uhmmm...too bad lola is gone rest in peace wish we(me n vict-vames) knw n understand u earlier
21 Jul 2016 | 06:52
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oh mehn vames... Why not say it at once.... :g arrrhhhhh!!!!
21 Jul 2016 | 07:54
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I'm so not happy about Lola's death
21 Jul 2016 | 08:31
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sentenced to wat?
21 Jul 2016 | 10:55
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wats d judgment gvn to her o
21 Jul 2016 | 10:57
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Nice one... Following.
21 Jul 2016 | 11:50
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Hmm,life Imprisonment
21 Jul 2016 | 12:02
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too much suspense
21 Jul 2016 | 14:13
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Nice 1, but lola death was so painful
21 Jul 2016 | 15:06
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Hmmmmm
21 Jul 2016 | 15:21
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R.i.p Lola... I pity you Dorothy.
21 Jul 2016 | 17:39
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die by hanging
21 Jul 2016 | 19:43
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chai
22 Jul 2016 | 02:14
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Oh! Lola
22 Jul 2016 | 10:38
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Next :g ..
22 Jul 2016 | 10:59
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Eyah 4 dorothy
22 Jul 2016 | 13:11
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R.I.P Dear lola
22 Jul 2016 | 15:53
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100 Days imprisonment
22 Jul 2016 | 16:07
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ℓιfє ιмρяιѕσимєит ρσσя υ ∂σяσтну ????????????????
22 Jul 2016 | 16:57
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Hey! Stop it ....b4 i kontinew 4rm ur head.... Oooh lola is dead 4 real, cant stop crying...lola *3ce* RIP.....
22 Jul 2016 | 17:26
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So sorry for Lola......r.i.p lola
22 Jul 2016 | 19:49
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Nst one bro
23 Jul 2016 | 02:13
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Vict-Vames , oya nah, I have been waiting for 39 for too long nah , pls help our suspense... Moderator
23 Jul 2016 | 05:54
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Next pls
24 Jul 2016 | 12:45
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please update the next episode
24 Jul 2016 | 13:24
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I secondly, which one be mourn trip to Ghana? Great work bro..
24 Jul 2016 | 13:29
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so sad dat *Lola* die just like dat
24 Jul 2016 | 17:30
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 39[/color] **Never look down anybody** What someone is today might not be the same tomorrow. That someone has nothing today doesn’t mean he won’t have everything tomorrow. Never think low on someone because he isn’t worth anything compared to others especially when the same person is not lazy but struggling hard with his talents, skills and strength to make something good out of his life. Testimonies comes in different ways… what you are today might not be what you’ll be tomorrow; my story is different from yours and your story is different from others, so never look down on anybody. How shameful and embarrassing it is for you to go back to who you left, you regret leaving him/her because he/she didn’t have what you wanted. Everyone has his or her own Grace in life, so always think positive and never look down on anybody. “The stone the builders rejected can become the cornerstone” ***Continued*** With other crimes added to Dorothy’s case, she got sentenced to death by firing squad. Sincerely I got shocked when I heard it. I felt somehow sorry for her because this happened to her because of her stupid and crazy love for me. I met with Vincent to ask him if he has heard anything from Mirabel, he replied no saying she hasn’t called anyone yet. I still asked Jummy and Frank but I got the same answer. I told Promise everything that happened and how Mirabel has been behaving immediately I told her what Dorothy did to me. She also had no idea on what could be wrong with Mirabel. It can’t possibly be as a result of Lola’s death, because she started the attitude even before Lola died. I continued with my studies while waiting for her to return. I had to catch up with all I missed. I noticed how students gets closer to me since I resumed, asking me questions upon questions. Many of them want to be where I am, they also took pictures with me even those from other departments. Even Esther, the first girl I met when I started the school came to see me in my department accusing me of forgotten her as I’m now a big boy dating the president’s daughter, that she lost her phone and lost my contact in the process that’s why she haven’t been calling me and I refused to call her bla bla bla… and she still knows my department. My ex semi-friends Frankkay, Titus and others came as well to renew our friendship. I accepted them all on a condition that we’ll only be friends in school and meet outside school only on official and important matters. I wasn’t surprised about all these at all… that’s how life is. Dax has been in the U.S even before Lola died. He went on tour with one of his musical friend who recently signed him to his label; it’s an opportunity for him to boost his musical career, he already has the money, he is after fame. I got back to the house after school without Nancy and I had a video chat with Ike… we talked on how he left so soon, he said he had to leave because of some new business deals he had to take care of. I wanted to tell him about Mirabel but refused to after he teasingly said he’d only come back to Nigeria before the next five years only for our wedding (i.e Mirabel and I). He told me how he helped me with my website during my absence; how he, frank and others tracked me when they noticed the tracking device I had on me stopped moving so they thought I have reached where they were keeping the girls only to find my clothes in the bush. We talked on other things before we ended the conversation. I checked my website and noticed some improvements and the handwork of Ike. I saw new adverts on the sites which mean new deals. I initiated a chat with my workers and they updated me on everything that took place during my absence, the new deals and all before I checked my bank account and saw that it has gotten larger. ******* Later that night, I couldn’t sleep because of my thoughts for Mirabel. I kept switching position while on the bed restlessly, I got up started moving around still thinking about her with so many thoughts running through my head. I felt like I’m losing her, like her love for me has reduced to the red point, like she wants to end our relationship… Ojo ki ko! (Igala language which means God forbid!). Normally in my past relationships, I wouldn’t care if my girlfriend starts behaving somehow because it’s so easy for me to move on with or without anybody be it a guy or a girl. Mirabel has gotten to the deepest part of my heart, her love and care is so much for me to just forget. See how restless and disturbed I am because of her…. I really miss that girl! Now I understand what made Marcus go crazy, Mirabel is just the best! I decided to work on the site and as well surf the internet supported with a glass of wine as I couldn’t sleep. On my to school the following morning, I called Mirabel’s mother – the first lady but she didn’t pick up, probably busy. I couldn’t pay attention to the lectures and everyone noticed it even the Lecturers. One of them asked me to follow her to her office after her lecture of which I did and the following conversation ensued… Lecturer: Tell me Victor, what is wrong with you? I noticed how you’ve been acting dumb during the lecture Me: I’m fine ma Lecturer: No you’re not, you’re one of my favourite students and I do observe my favourite students. This is not how you are, you were always active during lectures but today is the direct opposite of that or are you missing her? Me: Ma? Lecturer: You know what I’m talking about Me: It’s just complicated ma Lecturer: Okay… I respect privacies but you’re my student and I’m your teacher, you can talk to me who knows I might be of help. **Phone rings: First lady calling** Me: Excuse me ma, I have to pick this call Lecturer: No problem, go ahead *I stepped out of her office before picking the call* Me: Good afternoon ma First lady: Victor how you? Me: Fine ma, I called in the morning but it seemed you were busy First lady: Not really busy, I only stepped away from my phone for a while to see Mirabel Me: She’s back? First lady: Yes, you haven’t spoken with her yet? Me: No I haven’t, I just rounded up today’s lectures few minutes ago First lady: Okay… she already left for her lodge Me: Ok ma, I’ll meet her there First lady: Alright bye for now lemme attend to something Me: Ok thanks ma… bye *Hung up* She’s back, what do I do now? I could use some advice right now! I quickly stepped back in to my Lecturer’s office. Lecturer: You’re done? Me: Yes ma Lecturer: So will you say what’s wrong with you? Me: **Told her everything** Lecturer: Hhmmm… first tell me what you think Me: I’m not sure ma, just that I haven’t been having good feeling about the situation Lecturer: What feeling have you been having? Me: Like we’re going to split up or something Lecturer: That’s too negative of you; you went into such situation because of her, so you’d rescue her. You think she’d just forget all of that? She’s just hurt, I understand what she’s feeling; for a lady to potently have $ex with a guy is implausible. Me: But I was firmly tied down on a chair, I couldn’t do anything Lecturer: You couldn’t even wave her off you? Me: You’re not helping me ma **Standing up** thanks for trying to help Lecturer: Sit down Victor Me: Sorry ma, I have to get going Lecturer: Sit down, trust me Me: **Sat down** Lecturer: Yes I’m trying to be of help and it’s what I’m doing Me: But… Lecturer: **Cuts in** I just put myself on Mirabel’s shoes, like what she felt about what you told her. Those are questions you need to answer, did you even explained in details to her? How you were defenseless? Me: No because I was expecting her to feel even and confess what the guy also did to her Lecturer: That’s the drawback; you carelessly said something like that to her without explaining in details how you were defenseless at the time just because of your curiosity in knowing if the same thing happened to her. Of course she’ll feel hurt; you said it to her without remorse on what the girl did to you. Me: Yes I did wrong… I was so eager to know if he really raped her. So what should I do now? Lecturer: Nothing much… Mirabel loves you very much and I’m very sure about it, I’ve been observing the both of you since I started lecturing you. What you should do is to get her attention in a cool and quiet place, then explain everything to her in details with apologies and also express how bad you felt when the girl did that to you.… nothing more Me: Only that? Lecturer: Yeah… your explanation and apology, there won’t be a plan B Me: Ok thank you very much, I really appreciate this Lecturer: You’re very much welcome anytime **Smiling** **I stepped out of her office feeling motivated and zealous to meet the love of my life** Explaining things on my mind, but how do I get a cool and quiet place? Hhmmm… I think I already know where. [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
26 Jul 2016 | 03:45
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Wetin that Lecturer tell na true shaa @Vict
26 Jul 2016 | 06:33
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I also know the place, I mean the garden
26 Jul 2016 | 10:26
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Hmmm ... Slow updates sha ... But the story is nice
26 Jul 2016 | 12:29
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Good luck
26 Jul 2016 | 15:50
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next!
26 Jul 2016 | 17:27
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thanks for the update.
26 Jul 2016 | 18:09
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Ok goodluck with ur explanation
26 Jul 2016 | 18:58
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Hmmnn ......
26 Jul 2016 | 19:28
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Next episode
26 Jul 2016 | 20:03
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26 Jul 2016 | 20:18
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Eh eh
27 Jul 2016 | 03:44
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You better. Do quick
27 Jul 2016 | 04:27
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Even me, I already knows where? @vict-vames don't ask me where o cos I wont tell u...ahahahah!
27 Jul 2016 | 06:02
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And where is that
27 Jul 2016 | 07:10
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Ok then,goodluck.
27 Jul 2016 | 08:34
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Why now i felt pity for Dorothy,
27 Jul 2016 | 10:05
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dnt forget to vote @eliboy for d next mr coolval
27 Jul 2016 | 10:52
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Loving dis story..
27 Jul 2016 | 13:00
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R.I.P Dorothy... Yhur foolishness has land yhu dere... Just feelin pity for yhur perants... Victor, be calm nd speak wit Mirabel...
27 Jul 2016 | 13:25
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Next....
27 Jul 2016 | 17:36
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[b][color =blue] EPISODE 40[/color] I quickly drove off to the house like someone who’s about to miss his flight. I got in to the house and started imagining how to go on with the plan of getting my love back. I immediately dashed to the fridge to get something that’d help me calm my nerves (Hollandia yoghurt). I started progressing in my thought, my mind became composed. So… will Mirabel refuse to come to me if I should send for her? I don’t think so, she can’t do that. Now my plan is to go to the lodge later in the evening with Nancy, then I’ll send Nancy to go in and call her out to meet me somewhere. Come to think of it, I have never given her flowers before, how unromantic I have been gosh! Ok today will be the day I’ll give her flowers for the first time. I think I also need to look good as well, she knows all my clothes so I need to get something new maybe a white suit (when you have the money, buying won’t be the problem *winks*) or………. Why can’t I just propose to her tonight? After all, we’ll be graduating in few months’ time. Whoa… I have never thought about that before, ohhhhhh… what should I do? What should I do oh…?? I furiously raced to the fridge and get myself another yoghurt. After drinking it, something popped into my mind. I took my phone and dialed Frank’s number and he picked up. Frank: Hello Me: Hello Frank please I need you and your wife Jummy to do something for me as a matter of urgency… ********* Frank: Ok no problem Me: Thanks man **hangs up** I called Vincent, he picked up almost immediately Vincent: Hello bro Me: Hi bro, please I need your help……. *********** Vincent: Whoa… I got your back on this bro Me: Thanks man **hangs up** I also called Promise Promise: Oga Me: How far Promise: Fine oh… this one you call me Me: Yea… I know you don’t go out at night but I need you to do something very important for me Promise: What is it? ********** Promise: Are you serious…? Whoa… I won’t miss it Me: Thanks… madam Promzy **hangs up** (Calling Nancy) Nancy: Hello Me: Nancy where are you now? Nancy: In the class about to come home, anything? Me: Yea… you will go to Vincent’s house from there and help in doing something Nancy: What is it? Me: Vincent will fill you in, and make sure you drive safely before you drive anyhow because of your curiosity to quickly know what’s going on **teasingly** (Yea she drives my camry) Nancy: Haba senior bro Me: I don tell you my own**hangs up** Hhmmm…. I wish Lola is here to make it more exciting, she would have been very useful… I really miss her. If you guys know how my heart was beating that moment eh… chai! I quickly grabbed my car keys and accelerated straight to the bank to do some transfer and also withdrew a substantial amount of money before visiting a luxurious boutique. I took my time to select what I wanted before I finally got them all and left there to a barbing saloon to have a nice haircut that is different from my usual hairstyle before I drove back to the house. I called everyone for updates and they said it’s going on fine that I should go to the lodge around 7:00.pm and the time is already past six. I hastily had my bath and dressed myself up with the stuffs I bought, a new fitted white suit, white pair of shoes, new cologne different from the one I was using, new wrist watch and neck chains because I wasn’t going to wear a neck tie. I just wanted to look exclusively different before the eyes of my love Mirabel. I grabbed my car keys, shut the door and went straight to my white range rover car feeling myself…. Vames on white! Hailing myself inside my head Victor! Victor!! I went towards the gate to open it; I opened it and saw a lady backing me in front of the gate… She slowly turned around to face and also removed her eyeglasses. Me: Norah? **surprised** Norah: Hi Victor Me: Why are standing out here? Why didn’t you knock? Norah: I was just contemplating if I should knock or not, maybe you wouldn’t want to see after what I almost did the other day Me: That’s in the past now, I didn’t even have it in mind and I suggest you also forget about it too Norah: I’m really sorry for coming to you like that on that condition Me: It’s Ok Norah Norah: Forgiven? Me: Yea Norah: Thanks… uhmmm… may I come in? Me: Oh… sorry I was on my going out when I saw you standing here Norah: I can see that, thought you could spare me some seconds Me: Maybe some other time, I’m already late Norah: You look charming; I almost failed to recognize you Me: Thanks Norah but I really need to get going Norah: Ok I’ll call you Me: Alright **Turning to go get the car** Norah: Wait Me: **I turned to face her** Yes? Norah: Do you uhmmm… have a girlfriend? Me: **Smiling** Yea Norah: Hhmmm… I wonder who the lucky girl might be Me: **Laughs** Lucky girl? Well… you’ve met her before Norah: Me? When? Me: When I was in the hospital Norah: Huh? Which of the girls? Me: Mirabel Norah: The President’s daughter you went to rescue? Me: Yup **smiling** Norah: What?! I mean wow! I didn’t know… so she’s your girlfriend? Me: Yea and I’m going to her now Norah: That means I stand no chance with you? Me: Sorry…? Norah: Uhmm no nothing… never mind. Me: Ok then, so later on phone? Norah: Yea sure **turns to leave** Me: You came with a ride or something? Norah: **Turns back**Yea, my car Me: Alright I went to get the car and drove it out of the gate; I stepped down to lock the gate before I drove straightaway to the lodge. On my way driving to the lodge, I dunno but thoughts of Norah took over my mind. I noticed the way she turned out sad when I told her about Mirabel being my girlfriend. I kept on imagining her physique; she looked great and appealing on mufti and no doubt that she’s very beautiful and adorable. What am I thinking? I vibrated my head to get Norah off my mind and focus on meeting Mirabel. I called Vincent for update and he said everything is in place. [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED[/color][/b]
28 Jul 2016 | 06:10
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hmmmm..I pray she acept you
28 Jul 2016 | 06:59
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Waow..mirabel ur prince charming z on his way
28 Jul 2016 | 07:20
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Norah you better mind yourself. A d you Victor u hope you get sense Sha? If you try bullshit na your head ooo
28 Jul 2016 | 07:21
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Vames dont fall my hand o..y are u thinking abt nora na?
28 Jul 2016 | 07:22
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OK let it flow
28 Jul 2016 | 07:22
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cool
28 Jul 2016 | 07:28
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nicd one bro
28 Jul 2016 | 07:29
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Wow! Proposal things on point.
28 Jul 2016 | 07:32
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Haba no update o
28 Jul 2016 | 08:02
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Haba no update yet o
28 Jul 2016 | 08:03
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The suspense is getting too much ooo
28 Jul 2016 | 08:18
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Hmmmmm
28 Jul 2016 | 08:29
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I can't wait to see what your plans are
28 Jul 2016 | 08:57
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Hmmmmmmm...interesting
28 Jul 2016 | 09:10
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I pray she didn't say No
28 Jul 2016 | 09:42
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If She Refuse Chai.....
28 Jul 2016 | 09:50
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Hmmmmm this one wey u don dey divert so???
28 Jul 2016 | 10:37
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Nice 1 pls stop using suspence
28 Jul 2016 | 10:54
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This suspense z get.. On my toes..
28 Jul 2016 | 11:03
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Hmmn
28 Jul 2016 | 11:05
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Ride on bro
28 Jul 2016 | 11:23
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Ooohh Cnntinue naw
28 Jul 2016 | 11:43
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Oya na,let's go there....kip up d gud wrk @vict-vames
28 Jul 2016 | 11:46
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Let Norah not be your hindrance btw you and Mirabel
28 Jul 2016 | 11:48
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Na wah ooo
28 Jul 2016 | 12:11
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Hmm,, Victor: Mirabel My Love, wil u please be my wife?? Mirabel: NO!!!!!! (runs away
28 Jul 2016 | 12:42
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dnt forget to carry ur whole self from head to toe and vote @ele1 as Mr Coolval 2016 #God Bless
28 Jul 2016 | 12:44
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Is this an update? Chai!....... The ojoro too much ooooo. Victor! It's a good thing you finally wanna propose to Mirable. Definitely, that will get her excited but i would prefer if you first settle your differences with her and both of you becomes even before pupping up this all important question. Wish you goodluck though
28 Jul 2016 | 12:48
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Propose thinqs I quess! But ehmm...come to think of it, @vict-vames how 'll you throw it to Mirabel, I mean how 'll you propose to her? Will you be kneelinq on your leqs with qold rinq on your hands while you ask her "Will You Marry Me"??? Or ...???
28 Jul 2016 | 12:55
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Good good... Proposing things
28 Jul 2016 | 13:11
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Hmm..Victor! Victor!!
28 Jul 2016 | 14:31
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Huh huh
28 Jul 2016 | 14:33
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Vicky! U no hw to put someone on suspence. Propoxin tins on point
28 Jul 2016 | 14:38
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Haaaaahhaahaaa c person wey doctor wan help no more yogurt .
28 Jul 2016 | 15:19
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Make dat mirabel just stop this her yeye attitude jor
28 Jul 2016 | 15:29
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Looking forward,for the next episode . . . Won't be easy koraaa ooo
28 Jul 2016 | 16:07
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hmmm can't laugh,nawa for you ooh victor,this word sweet for story and movie oooh.
28 Jul 2016 | 16:25
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Hmmmmmm...
28 Jul 2016 | 17:11
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Mimi is abt to gt the surprise of her life..
28 Jul 2016 | 17:12
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Waoo nxt epic
28 Jul 2016 | 17:59
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Hmmnn ...... Pray she accepts you
28 Jul 2016 | 18:13
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Hmmmm
28 Jul 2016 | 18:19
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hmmm one of d challenges in a relationship I pity Vames may God see him through
28 Jul 2016 | 18:53
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Lolz u don turn to John Cena now Haaaaahhaahaaa
28 Jul 2016 | 18:54
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Hmm.... Lola replacement is here!
29 Jul 2016 | 01:33
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Hmmm, ℓ̊ pray it works out fine o
29 Jul 2016 | 03:50
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Lol she preparation odiegwu waiting for the main deal
29 Jul 2016 | 03:54
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lets see how it goes,,,,what if she refuses after all,,,, hahaha just imagining
29 Jul 2016 | 04:23
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Y u no tint ur hair white nw...lols,9ce 1...fire on
29 Jul 2016 | 04:43
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Ghen-ghen
29 Jul 2016 | 06:14
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hmmmmm my eye is reading the line so fast.....next pls
29 Jul 2016 | 06:26
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Lolx Next pls can't wait ooooi
29 Jul 2016 | 06:48
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Nice one!
29 Jul 2016 | 07:17
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Wow can't wait for the next episode... Ride @vame Mr White... Lol
29 Jul 2016 | 07:49
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Confirm
29 Jul 2016 | 08:04
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can't wait to see d next episode
29 Jul 2016 | 08:17
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Uhmmm vict-vames u dint invite me@vict-vames. waiting...
29 Jul 2016 | 12:11
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I don't think Mirabel will accept your proposal
29 Jul 2016 | 12:56
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I've never seen a diamond in the flesh!
29 Jul 2016 | 14:28
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Hnmmm! Love this story big time
29 Jul 2016 | 20:20
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Very nice nd interesting... Thumb up bro
29 Jul 2016 | 20:22
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there is fire on the mountain
29 Jul 2016 | 21:33
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See u o u want to propose to Mirabel and you are thinking Norah.
29 Jul 2016 | 21:58
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Norah you are right when she said you don't stand a chance with Victor
30 Jul 2016 | 02:16
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Can't wait to read when Vict will propose to Mirabel
30 Jul 2016 | 02:17
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Hummmmmmmmmm see code don't forget to pray and support @don-funtie as [color=blue]Mr.coolval[/color] [IMG]https://mobile.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=1110062622398304&id=100001837317696&set=pb.100001837317696.-2207520000.1469877252.&source=9[/IMG]
30 Jul 2016 | 08:17
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[ color = green ] Hummmmmmmmmm see code don’t forget to pray mad support @don-funtie as Mr.Coolval [ / color ] [IMG]https://mobile.facebook.com/photo.php? fbid=1110062622398304&id=100001837317696&set=pb.100001837317696.-2207520000.1469877252.&source=9[/IMG]
30 Jul 2016 | 08:29
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i pray she accept o
30 Jul 2016 | 09:38
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mirabel, ur prince charming is on d way nd i hope dis norah wunt be anoda obstacle
30 Jul 2016 | 09:40
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mirabel, ur prince charming is on d way nd i hope dis norah wunt be anoda obstacle
30 Jul 2016 | 09:41
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pls kindly vote @eliboy as d next Mr. Coolval, God bless u as u do
30 Jul 2016 | 09:41
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observing things
30 Jul 2016 | 12:20
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Cool ?
30 Jul 2016 | 18:47
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Next
31 Jul 2016 | 04:16
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hmmmm...love.
31 Jul 2016 | 09:18
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Rip @Lola u r a great frnd,just take it easy @Mr Loverboy @Vames
31 Jul 2016 | 11:11
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Man, if I wan enta any story for dis site, na dis one! Shuuuuuuu!!! Hands up no be only thumbs Mr Vict Vames. Oya where episode 41?
31 Jul 2016 | 11:14
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Choi! The heart of men are full of evil. U av problem to solve with mirabel and u dont know if she will accept u when get there, u are still thinking of norah...
31 Jul 2016 | 12:48
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Next pls....
31 Jul 2016 | 12:52
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hmmmn, all this preparation despite not in good rapport...
31 Jul 2016 | 15:10
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Now am back..... longtime friends @tenniebenson u know ask of your friend ba
31 Jul 2016 | 16:57
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Gud for u too, Mirabel accept wit immediate effect
1 Aug 2016 | 09:19
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EPISODE 41 I got to the lodge some minutes past 7; I parked outside Cynthia’s lodge. I called Vincent to inform him of my presence and he told me to go straight to the venue and wait for them. I went to the venue and saw how well they did to the place, but the place seemed to be dark a little. I moved closer checking the place out and saw someone there. Me: Promise…? Promise: Hey you’re here Me: Why are you here alone? Promise: I have to stay here na to avoid Mirabel from suspecting anything Me: Yea that’s right Promise: You’re very serious about this, I mean look at you Me: **Just let out a smile** Promise: So you’re really doing this? Me: Yeah Promise: Okay… wish you both nothing but the best Me: Thanks Promise: Yea… are they aware that you’re here? Me: Yea I told Vincent, they should be coming soon Promise: Okay… Me: Isn’t it kinda dark here? Promise: Yeah… it’s part of the arrangement Me: How? Promise: Don’t worry, you’ll see Me: Ok oh… I really appreciate your coming Promise: Thanks also for making me a witness to this Me: **Smiles** Promise: They’re coming **I turned and saw Vincent coming hand in hand with Nancy, Mirabel and Cynthia** Me: Oh… **Trying to compose myself** Promise: Hope you’re not feeling nervous? Me: Seriously I am nervous Promise: Come on… It’s Mirabel, your girlfriend for almost four years Me: Yea I know… I just can’t help it Promise: Well you have to fix that and have the event under control; I need to hide for now Me: Why? Promise: Also part of the plan... Good luck! Me: Ok Ok (I watched her passed through the garden till I lost visuals of her) I turned my back on the four of them coming on my position and started composing myself. I gat this, I know I gat this. I started hearing approaching footsteps so I stood calm; you gat this Victor! Voice: Who's there? **I turned around on slow motion and saw Mirabel's figure, I thought i saw four of them coming? Why am i now seeing only Mirabel?? Or is it also part of the plan???** Mirabel: Victor? **The place suddenly lights up, I saw how shocked she was.... I was shocked though but i had to maintain myself so she'd know it's my doing** She started coming closer while i also walk towards her till we met face to face. We stood facing each other for a couple of minutes with my left hand crossed behind me holding the flowers. I was looking deep into her eyes sending the message of love. I refused to say anything, just hoping the magic would work. I noticed how it was taking effect on her, i saw how she was melting but trying to control herself. Then i made another move by stretching forth my right hand towards her. She stared at it for some seconds before she flung herself on me giving me a tight embrace. *It worked oh...* I also embraced her and caress her hair and also hailing myself inside my mind Victor! Victor!! The warm embrace lasted for almost two minutes before we broke it. I saw tears hanging in her eyes. I presented the flowers to her and she let out a soft cough in amazement. Me: I apologize for how i said what i saidsaid to you back in the clinic, I really felt bad when she did..... Mirabel: **Cuts in** Shhhhh.... it's Okay... Promise already explained everything to me Me: She did? Mirabel: Yea and i apologize for how I've been acting ever since Me: You don't have to apologize, it's all my fault, I was too curious to know if he... Miarabel: **Cuts in** He didn't raped me, but i kissed him Me: **Speechless** Mirabel: He tried to win my heart by bringing past memories and all he went through just to come back for me. I pretended to fall for him so I had to kiss him so he'll think i am going back to him. Yes he tried to have $ex with me, but i told him that i wasn't ready, that he should wait a little more. That was the wisdom i used to avoid being raped. Even when they showed me your dead body, I was extremely hurting on the inside but I pretented to be strong on the outside deceiving them like i don't really care about you. I got very mad at you as a guy to be raped by a girl when i that's a girl was able to escape it. And you didn't describe how helpless you were when it happened Me: I'm really sorry, I was so full of anger and hatred for her that i couldn't act wise... please forgive my imprudence Mirabel: It's Okay... I've forgiven you before now, just waiting for you to come Me: Thanks my love.... **hugging her** The lights suddenly changed to all red from white. Those guys did very well, i'm sure they have been watching us. We broke off from the romantic embrace when we started hearing some cool instrumentals close-by. We looked around and saw that we were surrounded by Vincent, Nancy, Cynthia, Promise, Frank and Jummy. Vincent was playing a guiter while Frank was playing harmonica. Mirabel was like 'Wow' and i was like 'It's time' I collected the flowers from her and dropped it one side. I held both of her hands looking her straight in the eyes. Me: Our love for each other matched right here on this garden. Ever since you told me how the garden got to be important to you since we started our love relationship here, it became very important to me too. I love you more than you think, You complete me Mirabel and I sincerely want to spend my existence on earth with you. Our friends and siblings here will stand as a witness to this moment **Going down on my left knee, brought out the ring box from the left side of my suit using my right hand** Me: I sincerely want you to be my life partner in marriage, will you? Mirabel: **Her hands covering her mouth; she looked around... they all gestured her to say yes** Me: Mirabel, will you marry me? Mirabel: Yes! Yes!! Ofcourse Yes!!! **All of them started cheering while i place the ring on her finger and stood up after i kissed the hand** That moment, fireworks started shattering up in the sky. Those guys did a wonderful job even more than the money I transferred to them to get the event done. They started congratulating us... the guys shook hands with me while Nancy hugged me like never before. Promise tried to shook hands with me, but I pushed her hand away and hugged her. After that, Jummy ushered us to another part of the garden and announced that we're gonna have a picnic. It was indeed an exciting moment, a night to always remember. We ate and drank, gisted and laughed out happily. Right there, I appreciated Vincent, Frank, Promise and others for the wonderful night they arranged. Mirabel also did the same to everyone and most especially me for being the man of the night's memorable event. Frank made it known to us that everything that took place in the garden was recorded in a video camera from five different angles. We watch the drama that took place from the main view of the recorded video when we got into Mirabel's lodge. While discussing, Cynthia suggested that Promise should come stay with her till we graduate in a few months time, we all bought the idea and made Promise agreed to it. Minutes later, Mirabel also suggested that the both of them should come stay with her and we all agreed to it. We all spent the night in the lodge including Promise who doesn't like sleeping out of her domain. Two days later, I decided to pay Dorothy one last visit before she get executed; I met her mother there and she started begging me while crying to do something about her daughter's case so she won't get executed. I told her there's nothing I can do about it but she insisted on saying that I am connected to the President, that i can plead on Dorothy's behalf so she'll be granted a Presidential pardon. ☆ What is this woman asking me to do? ☆ Should I listen to her? ☆ Should i try to help the girl that wanted to ruin my life? It's not like I like the fact that she's going to be executed, but then....she has gone bad.... Geez!! What should I do?? ☆ ☆ ☆ TO BE CONTINUED ☆ ☆ ☆
1 Aug 2016 | 12:49
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[size=40pt]congrats Mr Vict. just hoping helping her won't backfire[/size]
1 Aug 2016 | 13:48
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Don't try pleading, don't destroy your career.
1 Aug 2016 | 13:57
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hmmn she killed Lola so she deserve it. If u helped her and she later come for u nko... I will advice u not to do anything Vote for @Krizzy in the upcoming Mr coolval
1 Aug 2016 | 14:02
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The Ball Is In Your Court Man
1 Aug 2016 | 14:09
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Don't do nothing
1 Aug 2016 | 14:11
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Just do what is right
1 Aug 2016 | 14:12
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What about the dead Lola? If she can resurrect her the the president should forgive her ?? lol . Don't mind me Victor you can forgive her if she has received Christ in her.
1 Aug 2016 | 14:14
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l think she has to be punished diffrently dan excuting
1 Aug 2016 | 14:27
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To forgiv iz devine
1 Aug 2016 | 14:39
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hmm.Am speechlez
1 Aug 2016 | 15:06
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let her die she deserve it,if u let her go she wil cm back 4 u and Mirabel.
1 Aug 2016 | 15:06
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Jst do d ryt tin victor nxt update plz
1 Aug 2016 | 15:10
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Hmm #speechless#
1 Aug 2016 | 15:44
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hmmmm. speechless
1 Aug 2016 | 15:47
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Victor!! Victor!!...... :-D ... i fear that Dorothy o
1 Aug 2016 | 15:55
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Seemz am speechless
1 Aug 2016 | 15:55
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i fear that dorothy o..... is @bestie here
1 Aug 2016 | 15:58
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Don't do anything
1 Aug 2016 | 16:31
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Do Wat ur heart told u
1 Aug 2016 | 16:31
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Go ahead and help her. She was pushed into such life due to the love she had for you
1 Aug 2016 | 16:36
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dunno wah 2say
1 Aug 2016 | 16:37
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woah! i once tot des story will end 2day
1 Aug 2016 | 17:21
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Congrats Victor....U Mek I Wan Propose To My Wife To Be :-p :-D @Vict-vames.....@tenniebenson @bestie Where Are You Guys..... Am Back O....Just Created Another Account....I Lost My Password For My First Account Cuz I Was Coming Online Due To Exams.....Mis U Guys So Much Though Av Not Seen U Facially
1 Aug 2016 | 17:32
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wow! nice and romantic scene
1 Aug 2016 | 17:35
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нєℓρ нєя
1 Aug 2016 | 17:39
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Nyc write_up
1 Aug 2016 | 17:48
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I pity Dorothy. I pray she's pardoned.
1 Aug 2016 | 18:00
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Buh helping her is wat I dunno
1 Aug 2016 | 18:01
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What ever decision you want to take, take it with Mirabel.
1 Aug 2016 | 18:17
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wooow at long last, the update is here. pls dnt keep us waiting again
1 Aug 2016 | 18:31
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~Wow.Nice Epi.~
1 Aug 2016 | 19:05
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Its your choice dude. .
1 Aug 2016 | 19:05
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:b nexxt
1 Aug 2016 | 19:06
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You alone can answer that
1 Aug 2016 | 19:15
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Do what is right
1 Aug 2016 | 19:51
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[size =20pt] [color =green] OYA,NEXT EPISODE [/color] [/size]
1 Aug 2016 | 19:52
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Happy that u two r bk together. Thoughts for another day.
1 Aug 2016 | 19:56
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Dnt listen to dat woman
1 Aug 2016 | 20:47
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don't even think of helping her out...she's already gat dat devil inside her, so she wud always wnt 2 retaliate nd ruin ur life nd happiness.... ride on.
1 Aug 2016 | 21:21
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congrats Mr Vict. just hoping helping her won’t backfire
1 Aug 2016 | 21:25
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clueless.. followinq.. fire on, buddy..
1 Aug 2016 | 21:43
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*Wow* what a 9ce episode,hmmm...two things are involve if u help her
2 Aug 2016 | 01:33
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do it and ur end is near
2 Aug 2016 | 01:49
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Jst do as ur heart tells yhu, the ajustment is in ur hand
2 Aug 2016 | 02:34
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Don't help her jor
2 Aug 2016 | 03:04
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Congrats Vames but u have to Forgive and Forget....am sure @ the very end, she will be a great friend to u and mirabel once again
2 Aug 2016 | 03:05
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Delima
2 Aug 2016 | 03:18
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Wow.... Very romantic Thou shall not help her
2 Aug 2016 | 03:20
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@Vict-vames u aren't the bad person here and the world knows it. Now, if u think u could help brinq ur ex Dorothy out of her mess why not do just that. Ofcourse we all 'll understand that u are doinq it for old time sake.
2 Aug 2016 | 04:27
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GeZzzzz. Hope helping her will not bounce back on u bro.
2 Aug 2016 | 04:43
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Asking pple wunt b a bad idea
2 Aug 2016 | 04:49
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marcus is dead the son of one of the top men in the country why do you think dorothy will be set free even if you plead?
2 Aug 2016 | 05:01
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Let her face her fate
2 Aug 2016 | 05:14
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I'll advice you discus the issue with Mirabel and seek for her consent before taking it up to the President
2 Aug 2016 | 05:48
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Forgive & forget
2 Aug 2016 | 05:48
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Na juju she go use kill u now
2 Aug 2016 | 06:18
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Dnt listen to dat woman....u n Mirabel should just move on
2 Aug 2016 | 07:26
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Becareful
2 Aug 2016 | 08:29
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Congrat Vict and Mirabel
2 Aug 2016 | 08:35
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Help her because everyone deserve a second chance
2 Aug 2016 | 08:36
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I know it will be good for u to plead on her behalf but, If u should plead now she might think u still love her and thats why u pleaded on her behalf and when she gets out she will be all over you again
2 Aug 2016 | 08:56
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Next abeg
2 Aug 2016 | 08:58
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wow,diz z g8,diz story z d best
2 Aug 2016 | 09:58
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dont oohh,she will come bk for u
2 Aug 2016 | 10:19
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Plead for what... Are you dat dumb
2 Aug 2016 | 10:22
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U re still asking if to... She aimed her gun at you She killed ur dear friend She conspired with a criminal to kidnap ur gurl Wise up man
2 Aug 2016 | 10:24
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vic your trying oooo but dnt beg back xo ur career wont be destroying
2 Aug 2016 | 10:45
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Hmmm,congrats,so Whats Next
2 Aug 2016 | 11:05
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Just tell her mum that u will talk to the president but don't even try it...
2 Aug 2016 | 11:51
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Dont even try it
2 Aug 2016 | 13:36
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victor u can decide. . She die or live
2 Aug 2016 | 13:50
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I hope it won't backfire on later on
2 Aug 2016 | 15:23
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just be careful victor,try helping her God help you....
2 Aug 2016 | 17:01
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pls, dnt plead 4 her o
2 Aug 2016 | 18:35
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cos she myt do sumtin worst again once she is out
2 Aug 2016 | 18:40
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Pls kindly vote @eliboy as the next Mr. Coolval 2016 God bless u as u do.
2 Aug 2016 | 18:41
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Hmmmm... i wld av ask same q if u were in ur shoes
2 Aug 2016 | 18:42
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Follow ur hrt..
2 Aug 2016 | 18:42
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enjoyable story so far.!
3 Aug 2016 | 03:18
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To be continued after 1 week...
3 Aug 2016 | 10:49
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hmmmmm vames u dey try bt be posting faster
3 Aug 2016 | 11:09
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Victor I think u have to free this girl ....u have a great influence on the president
3 Aug 2016 | 12:37
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getting more interesting
3 Aug 2016 | 12:39
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So dem don serve the food una Don almost finish am. Abeg I like eating when is still hot. Help Dorothy cos u are the reason y she turned out d way she did. If u hadn't threaten her with lola I don't think she will ever look for that kind of vengeance. My opinion :b
3 Aug 2016 | 12:58
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Don't go bad,yourself.i think if you try doing what she wants it might get back to you ?
3 Aug 2016 | 17:42
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Hmmmmmmmm
3 Aug 2016 | 18:59
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HeHeHe HELP? pleadin 4 her ix very dangerous dont try it
3 Aug 2016 | 19:01
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Intresting Story Full Of Suspense
3 Aug 2016 | 19:04
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in sequence of betrayal, bro you gat to trust noone. Vict, it's time you figure out the right decision yourself.
3 Aug 2016 | 19:31
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abeg think before jumping into it o
4 Aug 2016 | 04:32
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am afraid she did get back to you if you help her
4 Aug 2016 | 06:53
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It is ur choice oh... If u plead for her release, i hope she wont come back to haunt u
4 Aug 2016 | 06:54
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Next pls
4 Aug 2016 | 06:55
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Next pls!
4 Aug 2016 | 06:56
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think
4 Aug 2016 | 13:59
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Many pple are sayin everybody deservers a second chance I do not see hw victor can help her escape conviction who will he go to? The president? And explain what? That she should be pardoned after kidnaping the presidents daughter and killing their good friend even Mirable will be agree if Victor should try and solicit for Dorothy in front of her Victor wise up
4 Aug 2016 | 23:04
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**Mirable will be angry**
4 Aug 2016 | 23:06
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EPISODE 42 Sincerely, if there's a way i could help her, I would've tried. But what she did was too big to be granted a Presidential pardon. She killed the speaker of the house of Assembly's daughter (Lola), She killed Marcus (A well-known billionaire's son) even though he was disowned by his Father, She is a cultist and an accomplice to the kidnapped of the President's daughter, she also broke criminals out of prison which is a serious offense. So what can I do to help her? Seriously there is nothing i can do about it. She committed a lot of crimes. Even in School, Lecturers spoke on how Dorothy and her gang threatened them and their family just to do something for her, to give her and her friends good grades and other things. The President can't pardon her, how can he do that? What will the people say?? Where is the justice??? Guys think about it. I thought and thought about it then concluded that it can't be possible, nothing can be done. So it shouldn't look as if i didn't try, I decided to talk to Mirabel and Vincent about it. Mirabel felt irritated about it at first and then told me it can't be possible, not just because Dorothy killed her best friend, but the way things are all what she did. Vincent told me even if they have forgiven her as a Christian they are, the law have to take it's course on this one, and that his Father - the president can't do anything about it. Dorothy's mother even went to our family house to plead with my Parents. My Parents called me to tell me about it and i told them how it is, that nothing can be done. Mirabel and I went to our Family house on a two-day journey to officially present my wife to-be to my Parents and they gave us their blessing. For the first time, I went to the Presidential villa (Aso Rock) to officially present myself to Mirabel's family and they also gave us their blessings. We discussed on so many things i.e Mirabel, her Parent and I in a closed door meeting. The First lady said; Mirabel and I don't need to do our NYSC after we graduate but to start our dreams immediately, and The President agreed with her. The President suggested we get married after School, then go on Business training in the U.S before we can start our own establishment. My heart was beating happiness all through, their suggestions were all good to me. Who would have thought I'd be sitting with the President discussing like this... God is great! It's was like a dream I never i dreamt of, My life is extremely favoured truly. The President had to leave the discussion for a meeting. Mirabel and I had a video chat with Ike afterwards to break the news to him and he was very happy. Mirabel called her sisters abroad and broke the news to them. I also introduced her to my elder sister; Joy whom i barely call. Of course she was so curious to know why i called her, so I introduced Mirabel to her and she congratulated us. Joy screamed out loud when she heard that Mirabel is the President's daughter. I didn't feel embarrassed at all, it's normal to feel that way. Mirabel later showed me the pictures of her sisters and many of their family pictures; i couldn't look them all because they were so many. We left that same day not spending the night there. On our way back to school, I confessed to her how nice her Parents are, that she was right about them. ☆★☆☆★★☆ Dorothy's sentence pushed through as she died nine days after. Her other gang members were caught and imprisoned. I felt sorry for her and her mother. Her definition of love was way out of the dictionary of love. Too bad she ended that way. Cynthia had no choice but to be born-again; she changed totally after the death of Lola. So Cynthia and Promise joined Mirabel in her lodge. ☆★☆☆★★☆ Our examination time-table came out earlier than expected and it was because of the forth coming general elections. We had to vacate School before the elections take place. We made a decision to get wedded two weeks after the elections, and we were pretty sure that Mirabel's father will win. So... we'll be preparing for the marriage and the elections. I started practicing how to fall flat on the ground... you know how it is to marry a Yoruba girl Lolx. Things started going smoothly and peacefully, the first lady recruited my mother to be working with her in the office of the first lady. So my mother will be traveling, campaigning and also accompany the first lady to meetings as my mother became part of her official entourage. My dad had to give her the go ahead as we don't have any little child to take care of, and dad also travels a lot. Securities from the first lady were provided for our house. As it is, Nancy is the one that'd take over our father's accountancy company as it's getting bigger day after day flocking with many employees. Just thanking God for everything. My dad who started from nothing, became something bigger suddenly. Our family was no longer in the middle class in the list of rich people, for we became very very rich. I earn a lot on my own, no longer receiving a naira from my Parent as i made my source of income known to them, my mother also earns on her own part, and dad kept his millions coming. I took Nancy's responsibility, so they have no child to train except for charity. My parents don't fail to give out to the poor and less privileged, that's how blessings kept flowing in our family. The secret of wealth is giving and helping people, not by only fasting and prayer. Our examination started before we knew it, we were well prepared for it though, for it's our final exams period in the university. Something started bothering me as time passes by, I couldn't take it anymore so I decided to talk with the person whom it concerns. And the following conversation ensued with her. Promise: So what is it you want to talk to me about? Me: I have no choice but to talk to you about this thing that has been bothering me long before now Promise: Which is? Me: I have never seen you get involved with any guy, why is that? Promise: *Laughs* Me: It wasn't supposed to be funny Promise: Sorry... it just sounded somehow to me because it was only yesterday Cynthia asked me the same question and Mirabel has asked me long before. Me: So... mind talking to me about it? Promise: Vickie, there's nothing to talk about... I just haven't met who i can trust and love that can replace the only guy i have ever loved. Me: You have loved someone before? Who is he?? What happened??? Promise: He is with another person and they're happy together Me: Oh... I get it now, your kept your heart wide open for that someone and that's why you can't let another person walk in. Promzy there are many good guys existing, you have to close your heart from that someone you love and open it for another person, try to give someone else the chance to prove himself worthy. You could even find someone better Promise: I doubt that Me: Stop that, how could you say such? Have you lost your faith or something?? What's wrong with you??? Promise: **Tears dripping from her eyes** Me: Hey why are you crying? Promise: **Stood up and ran away** Me: Promise?! I ran after her and caught up on her... Me: What's wrong with you? Why are you behaving like this?! Why can't you talk to me all of a sudden? Promise: Trust me when I say there's no point, let's just go meet the girls and go home Me: Ok... but this discussion is not over Promise: It is o... i'm not mourning my singleness and i'm fine without a boyfriend, final. **walks away** We joined the other girls and left school. I got home and started working on my website. Then i thought of something and decided to call Ike. Me: Afternoon young boss Ike: Afternoon future boss **We both laughed** Ike: How's the exams? Me: Good, how's your business? Ike: Flourishing... **we both laughed** hope you guys are preparing well for the upcoming events? Me:Sure, that's why i call to seek for something Ike: What is it? Me: How 'bout Mirabel and I go to you in the U.S for training in technology and other things that we would need to know and arrange before we setting up our Business empire. We need to start the preparations and also get connected to big business companies in different countries. I dunno if you understand where i'm driving at Ike: Yea I understand and it's a good idea, you will need all the knowledge you can get to set up your business and for it to be successful. It's no problem, both of you will follow my jet immediately after the wedding, you'll use a week for your honeymoon and then get to business. Me: Yea... I'll talk to Mirabel about it Ike: Alright... how's the website going? Me: Very well Ike: Good... talk to you later Me: Ok thanks **hangs up** I worked a little more before i took a nap. I woke up in the evening, took my books and two hollandia yogurt and went to the library to read. I checked on my phone and saw some calls i missed. I missed a call from Joy (my senior sister) and an unknown number. Joy started calling me since i introduced Mirabel to her. She has always seen me as a bad boy. She refused to believe that i will change sooner than she had expected, that's why we don't get along at all. So i called her back, we talked a little, she kept on saying that she thank God for life bla bla bla.... she told me to give Mirabel her number to call her. I texted her number to Mirabel after the call, with a message that it's Joy my sister. After that i called the unknown number and the person picked up. Female voice: Hi Victor Me: Hi, sorry who's this? Voice: It's Norah Me: The millitary nurse? Norah: Yea Me: Okay.... how are you doing? Norah: I'm fine... it's been a while Me: Yea... how's work? Norah: Work is fine, just feel like seeing your face again Me: Any problem? Norah: Not at all, why'd you ask that? Or are we not friends? Me: Well... not that we're enemies **laughing** Norah: How's your girlfriend? Me: She's fine, and your boyfriend? Norah: Can we see? **She ignored my question to ask me that? To see when it's already getting late? No way!** Me: I don't think we can, i'm very very busy Norah: What are you doing? Me: Studying for my exams Norah: Oh you've started your exams? Me: Yea... Norah: But you can still hang out even at that Me: No i can't, it's my final exams, so i'll need all the concentration i can get. I need to make a better result Norah: It's okay... maybe after your exams, we'll celebrate it Me: Absolutely... Norah: Ok then, bye Me: Alright, thanks for calling Norah: Just make sure you save my number Me: Sure Norah: Ok dear, bye Me: Bye **hangs up** I saved her number and went to read my books. **Phone rings: Mirabel** Me: Hello bae Mirabel: Honey I saw someone that looks like Marcus a minute ago **sounding terrified** Me: That's not possible, he was shot dead in front of us Mirabel: Yea but i'm sure i saw him, i can't understand.... honey i'm scared TO BE CONTINUED...
5 Aug 2016 | 10:40
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[b]I made it longer for the late update[/b]
5 Aug 2016 | 10:42
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Ok bro..
5 Aug 2016 | 11:28
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Marcus again? Nawa o
5 Aug 2016 | 11:29
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Hmmm
5 Aug 2016 | 11:33
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Marcus kwa! Na ghost or something? Hey you are not free until you are free, so what next?
5 Aug 2016 | 11:46
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marcus?
5 Aug 2016 | 11:48
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How can marcus be alive after being shot nd lola s dead . it can't be possible
5 Aug 2016 | 11:50
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Marcus again!!!
5 Aug 2016 | 11:52
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Did Marcus made it.... Be careful... And thanks for d long episode....
5 Aug 2016 | 12:05
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@vict-vames, me self dey surprised sey this episode dey lonq not until u stated the reason. Anywey, thank u for bribinq us with this lonq update! . . Macus still be alive? I doubt.
5 Aug 2016 | 12:08
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Wetin, na ten life Marcus get ni
5 Aug 2016 | 12:30
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Pls Marcus is dead ooo. The dead dnt come back to life
5 Aug 2016 | 12:35
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Again? E be like say dis Marcus na ur sworn enemy from heaven.
5 Aug 2016 | 12:52
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Marcus again
5 Aug 2016 | 12:53
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Oh boy.
5 Aug 2016 | 12:56
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Is this Marcus guy a GHOST? Abeg @vict-vames give me his spirit world address let me go finish him myself. As ghost to ghost..
5 Aug 2016 | 12:58
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Ride on bros
5 Aug 2016 | 12:59
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jeeeez marcus again?
5 Aug 2016 | 13:10
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I know marcus is alive
5 Aug 2016 | 13:15
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I know marcus is alive and very soon he will start fermenting trouble again
5 Aug 2016 | 13:16
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Hmmm. . . . Marcus again,are you sure its marcus @mirabel ??
5 Aug 2016 | 13:29
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it may be him and it may not be the one!
5 Aug 2016 | 13:30
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Abeg dis story don tire me
5 Aug 2016 | 13:32
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uhmmmm gobe
5 Aug 2016 | 13:45
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Okay
5 Aug 2016 | 14:09
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Woooo life is gud wen u hav lov'd one's around u. Promise sacrifice her lov 4 u, so can be wit d one u lov. That's real lov. There is every posibility dt Marcus could be alive but wil nt escap death dis time if he is brk 4 trouble.
5 Aug 2016 | 14:14
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wat again, Marcus is back.
5 Aug 2016 | 14:52
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Which kin trick be this... Probably Marcus did not die... Damn
5 Aug 2016 | 14:53
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Ehn Ehn
5 Aug 2016 | 14:57
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Heeeeeeeey!!!
5 Aug 2016 | 15:05
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from one to another
5 Aug 2016 | 15:16
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Vickie-vame...I Dnt Lyk Dis Tin Oooo..Even If U Make It Longa It Doesn't Change Anytin.. Marcus Ke'...I Rebuke Evry Spirit Of Marcus In Jesus Name
5 Aug 2016 | 15:21
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dis guy wan poil biznes...ride on bro...following in suit...next pls
5 Aug 2016 | 15:27
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Marcus NA clone? Well vict be very careful wit Nora
5 Aug 2016 | 15:28
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So marcus didn't die..Ur life is in danger
5 Aug 2016 | 15:35
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Hmmmm
5 Aug 2016 | 15:40
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Marcus!
5 Aug 2016 | 15:53
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Not again
5 Aug 2016 | 15:59
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Marcus again!!!
5 Aug 2016 | 16:20
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waoow, de lng waited episode is here. kudos to u bro. next pls
5 Aug 2016 | 16:41
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Not again
5 Aug 2016 | 17:11
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danger ahead..! next pls. youg boss
5 Aug 2016 | 17:35
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Dat marcus neva die ni..... Nw nar bomb he nid
5 Aug 2016 | 17:36
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Nice one bro. more ink to your pen.
5 Aug 2016 | 17:44
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@Ghost Lolx... we're working on hid location
5 Aug 2016 | 17:57
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Marcus is dead naw
5 Aug 2016 | 18:07
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Marcus again..
5 Aug 2016 | 18:19
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5 Aug 2016 | 18:56
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Hmm
5 Aug 2016 | 19:02
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O nawaaa ooo . . . Marcus again . . Wating for the next episode... Fast fast fast
5 Aug 2016 | 19:08
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Marcus.. Nah ,she is hallucinating
5 Aug 2016 | 19:41
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Ride on, marcus u beta b dead o
5 Aug 2016 | 19:44
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nawao Marcus is alive getting more interesting ride on bro
5 Aug 2016 | 22:29
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Waitin macus dey find again
6 Aug 2016 | 01:35
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I know Mirabel know who she saw
6 Aug 2016 | 02:03
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If Marcus is still alive that means serious trouble for Victor
6 Aug 2016 | 02:06
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Marcus might wanna ruin Victor's wedding
6 Aug 2016 | 02:08
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How could Marcus had escaped death?
6 Aug 2016 | 02:09
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Marcus!!!
6 Aug 2016 | 02:27
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Nt nw that things ae goin well
6 Aug 2016 | 02:28
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Marcus again???
6 Aug 2016 | 03:47
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nawao...
6 Aug 2016 | 04:39
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nawao.
6 Aug 2016 | 04:46
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Lol Marcus? Promzy stop dah ya naughty behaviour and have a bf ??
6 Aug 2016 | 04:56
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He is still alive?
6 Aug 2016 | 05:46
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Is getting complicated again!!!
6 Aug 2016 | 05:46
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Mar wetin?
6 Aug 2016 | 05:48
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hmmmmmmm, marcus again
6 Aug 2016 | 06:15
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Marcus or what? Hahaha gbege niyen o... Gobé
6 Aug 2016 | 07:01
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Hmmm
6 Aug 2016 | 07:05
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When should we expect update
6 Aug 2016 | 07:06
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When should we expect update?
6 Aug 2016 | 07:07
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Marcus abeg jst go die for good or get lost
6 Aug 2016 | 08:28
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Marcus?
6 Aug 2016 | 09:50
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haaa marcus shuld nt cum dis tym around o
6 Aug 2016 | 10:27
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Marcus get two lives? Abi wetin be this now And Victor be careful about NORAH of a girl she go shatter your relationship like ice block I don talk my own
6 Aug 2016 | 12:05
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Like seriously?
6 Aug 2016 | 13:41
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I jst pray it isn't marcusooo,maybe she saw marcus brother..i dnt wnt anybody that will be a threat to mirable's weeding,especially the make believe marcus.(more ink to your pen @vit vames)...
6 Aug 2016 | 15:44
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nice one bro
6 Aug 2016 | 16:06
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wats marcus stil doin on earth planet
6 Aug 2016 | 16:08
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Marcus again?
6 Aug 2016 | 16:13
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a clone or the wrong person was shot
6 Aug 2016 | 16:51
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@vict-vames I want to meet the president's inlaw in person
6 Aug 2016 | 17:33
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Nawa ooo
6 Aug 2016 | 18:57
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Eeee eeeeeeee eeeeeeeeiiish! It's not yet over Hope there won't be season 3
6 Aug 2016 | 19:03
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Marcus again.... Maybe u are hallucinating @Mirabel
6 Aug 2016 | 19:40
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9ce 1...Marcus Again!!!
6 Aug 2016 | 19:43
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Still right here
7 Aug 2016 | 00:30
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I pray we ddnt see season 3...
7 Aug 2016 | 00:33
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But am enjoyin dis sha
7 Aug 2016 | 00:34
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:whistle:
7 Aug 2016 | 00:36
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Are u sure of what u re saying@mirabeI
7 Aug 2016 | 01:27
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nice one bro
7 Aug 2016 | 06:23
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Marcus???? How come
7 Aug 2016 | 07:18
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ride on dude
7 Aug 2016 | 08:50
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Whaoo
7 Aug 2016 | 08:52
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What a story!
7 Aug 2016 | 08:53
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But could it really be marcus?
7 Aug 2016 | 08:54
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Ride On Bra
7 Aug 2016 | 10:42
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this Marcus again .... best enemy ever
7 Aug 2016 | 12:23
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abeg victor make dis story end for episode 70
7 Aug 2016 | 17:03
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Marcus Na twin??? He no dey die
8 Aug 2016 | 05:41
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I dedicate this episode to all my readers as this season 2 reaches 400,000 views on coolval22.com Please celebrate it with me by leaving a comment, even the ghost readers please... God bless you all! EPISODE 43 How can Marcus be alive when he was shot dead right in front of me, she must be hallucinating or something because for Marcus to be alive is impossible to me. And i hope that i don't start hallucinating about Dorothy too. ********* Me: Where are you now? Mirabel: In a saloon, just made my hair Me: How did you see him? Mirabel: The frontage of saloon is glass, so i just shifted my head to look around then i sighted him standing outside the saloon, i turned to focus on the direction that i saw him but didn't see him anymore Me: Baby it can't possibly be him, don't worry about what you think you saw, Marcus is already dead. Mirabel: I'm scared, or maybe his ghost is hunting me Me: **Laughs** Why would that happen when you weren't the one that killed him. Mirabel: It's not funny Me: Sorry, but you sounded funny, you're done with your hair right? Mirabel: Yea Me: Ok, come over here Mirabel: Okay... She came to the house, we talked about what she saw, I tried to convince her that Marcus is already dead and gone with his trouble. She seemed to be very sure of what she saw, but I was able to calm her down. I kept on thinking about the possibility of Marcus being alive but i found no possible way, how on earth would he have survived three shots in the chest? No way! ☆☆☆☆☆ Days past and our lives kept moving peacefully, Mirabel stopped talking about what she saw and we forgot about it. Everyone that follow news will know that Mirabel the president's daughter got engaged to a guy (Me). Mirabel posted pictures and short videos of the night i proposed to her on her instagram page and twitter handle. The media took it immediately, most of the news websites, blogs, youtube, twitter, facebook etc. I also did the same by uploading photos of us on my page. The recorded video of the night i proposed to Mirabel got edited, so all angles of the recorded videos were made into a single mp4 video. I uploaded it on my website and youtube and it went viral with so many views and downloads. I started having more and more followers everyday on instagram and twitter with the majority of females. Because of these as the world fully know Mirabel as the President's daughter and me as her fians, the first lady had to provide security of three mobile policemen each for me and Mirabel as our personal security and another two each for our house security with Frank and Jummy who were already Mirabel's secret agents bodyguards. No doubt that i'm now a big deal in Nigeria, millions will be demanded for ransome if i should get kidnapped. *winkz* I also started hitting the gym to get myself some six packs and a good looking body. ☆☆☆☆☆ One day, after rounding up a paper which leaves us with six more papers to go before we finish our exams, Mirabel touched me that she saw Marcus standing somewhere not too far away from us there in school where we gathered after writing a paper. She pointed the direction where she saw him and i didn't see anybody. She swore that she saw him, and he was putting on a hood with a gray jacket. She was so terrified that I had to take her to my house. She slept off minutes later then I called her mother - the first lady and told her what's going on with Mirabel. She asked me some questions on Marcus' death of which i answered sincerely. She concluded that she'll talk to the head of the millitary that raided the bush that day and rescued us to make enquiries. She called me back about 48 minutes later with a feedback. She said that she spoke with the captain that led the team to our rescue that day asking him about Marcus, but he said many dead bodies were recovered that day and they didn't get to know the details of four of the bodies so they buried them like that. And all the ones that they found their details, none of them was named Marcus. The Captain concluded that there is a 100% possible chance that Marcus was among those that they couldn't get their details. I ended the call with the first lady after a little more discussion. Then i started thinking... ☆ How could they not find the details of Marcus who was the son of a well known billionaire? ☆Or is it because his father disowned him? ☆ How can that change the fact that Marcus was his father's son? ☆ Or he wasn't among those that their bodies were discovered by the millitary? ☆ What's going on here? Ok lemme look at this way, Dorothy shot Marcus three times in the chest and immediately commanded us to go inside the building, so we left Marcus outside. I can't remember seeing blood on Marcus when he got shot and Lola bleeded immediately she got shot and me too. Maybe Marcus was wearing a bullet proof vest when he got shot and escaped immediately we went inside the building. It makes more sense now but i hope i'm wrong. This can't be happening, Mirabel was so sure of who she saw... No more doubts! Marcus is definitely alive!! I immediately called Vincent and Frank and told them everything, they were shocked to hear the strange news. We made it known to the President and the first lady and we discussed seriously about it. We discussed that we won't announce it to the public that there's a manhunt for Marcus, so that he won't get prepared and go into hiding. They concluded that hundreds of C.I.D's , Armies and other officers will go underground in the school and other places that Mirabel might go to. They won't be very close to her, they'll just be around anywhere Mirabel is and be watching incase Marcus shows up to her then they'll immediately come and get him. So we warned Mirabel not to be looking around suspisiously, let her always be relaxed. A small communication earphone was given to her to be in her ear at all times, as it is connected to all the underground agents and me as well for information and communication purpose. The plan took effect immediately, as they briefed the selected agents and they got to work. We're very much ready for Marcus, let him come! ☆☆☆☆☆ Because of the ongoing plan that we have for capturing Marcus, we started making more public apprearances. From the movies to the beach, to ice cream shops and also shoppings. It became fun for us because we don't do such before. We decided to continue doing it even after we catch Marcus. The more we go out in the public, the more i get famous as paparazzis always took pictures of us and get it to the media making headlines on news blogs and websites. TO BE CONTINUED...
8 Aug 2016 | 08:01
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Marcus alive I hope you catch him for real this time
8 Aug 2016 | 08:10
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Abeg o
8 Aug 2016 | 08:14
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8 Aug 2016 | 08:18
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Marcus is too dangerous..Be very careful
8 Aug 2016 | 08:30
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nawa o. Marcus
8 Aug 2016 | 08:38
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Marcus leave there lives alone na. You had your chance to win her love but u threw it away. Accept defeat and let love lead ??.
8 Aug 2016 | 08:39
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Marcus ur doom is near
8 Aug 2016 | 09:00
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I think marcus is still Alive
8 Aug 2016 | 09:10
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it wont be easy task cos marcus is prepared for the worst too
8 Aug 2016 | 09:58
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Hmmm hw many life macuz get na
8 Aug 2016 | 09:59
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Hmmmmn
8 Aug 2016 | 10:03
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I hope he get caught this time around...he is really smart
8 Aug 2016 | 10:05
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Bro you dey live your fantasies, no be so?
8 Aug 2016 | 10:06
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Dis Marcus is a monster 4 real... May God arrest him 4 u sha...
8 Aug 2016 | 10:08
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cont pls
8 Aug 2016 | 10:13
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Marcus i really something else
8 Aug 2016 | 10:15
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I go use my hand kill that marcus o...
8 Aug 2016 | 10:17
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Just be careful o he might have his plans too,remember the first time.
8 Aug 2016 | 10:17
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This marcus sef
8 Aug 2016 | 10:20
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hmmmmmm so is true Marcus is steal alive!!!! what a tale well I pray u get him early b4 he do any damage
8 Aug 2016 | 10:22
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*Marcus_da_monster*
8 Aug 2016 | 10:25
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Next pls
8 Aug 2016 | 10:26
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@vict-vames 400,000 views, sa4 ma5caha ma4na2ya
8 Aug 2016 | 10:27
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I Pray Your Plan Work
8 Aug 2016 | 10:36
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Just b careful cos marcus z ready for anything
8 Aug 2016 | 10:37
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I hope dey finally bring him down
8 Aug 2016 | 10:37
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Hmm God Will Save U
8 Aug 2016 | 11:01
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Marcus must be caught
8 Aug 2016 | 11:03
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ehehheheh ...... I pray you catch him this time
8 Aug 2016 | 11:19
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Ok..always pt bullet proof vest on pls
8 Aug 2016 | 11:23
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Be careful
8 Aug 2016 | 11:24
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next please. Marcus must be caught
8 Aug 2016 | 11:27
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hmmmm....unbliveable .
8 Aug 2016 | 11:51
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Following!
8 Aug 2016 | 11:56
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Wonders shall neva end marcuz is alive
8 Aug 2016 | 12:05
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Hmmmmmmmmmm tori don tough
8 Aug 2016 | 12:32
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Marcus Again!! I hope this your so called paparazzi wouldn't land you into trouble :yes:
8 Aug 2016 | 12:35
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oya next vict
8 Aug 2016 | 12:36
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hmmmmmm getting more interesting
8 Aug 2016 | 12:52
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Wow interesting
8 Aug 2016 | 13:04
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Hmmm
8 Aug 2016 | 13:09
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Kevlar held those bullets!
8 Aug 2016 | 13:22
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you guys be careful
8 Aug 2016 | 13:25
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hmmnn
8 Aug 2016 | 13:27
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hmmmmmm
8 Aug 2016 | 13:35
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Marcus is still alive, he was on bullet Prove vest. Congratulations vames.
8 Aug 2016 | 13:58
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nice work bro....I hope d story won't get to season three oo
8 Aug 2016 | 14:15
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Hhmmm i think the guy wanna take his time before he comes out
8 Aug 2016 | 14:22
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hmmmm may God elp u o
8 Aug 2016 | 14:50
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kudos to you dear. next pls
8 Aug 2016 | 15:34
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Okay
8 Aug 2016 | 15:36
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Marcus.... To hell wit his forefathers
8 Aug 2016 | 15:40
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So blood refused to show up on Macus' body the very moment he was shot by Lola on his fuckinq chest thrice.?. Okay! So u think u are wise abi.?. Well, trust me or not, this time u wont recognize urself in hell coz it 'll be one shot seven die!
8 Aug 2016 | 16:06
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Marcus is too old na, he need to join Dorathy
8 Aug 2016 | 16:09
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It seems yhu dnt knw who yhu are dealinq with, to my view this guy macuz hav gone for assasen trainq b'fore....
8 Aug 2016 | 16:21
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Am the chief and chair man of the Ghost readers.................... Thanks for ur updates.
8 Aug 2016 | 16:57
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The story gets interesting day in day out. following keenly.
8 Aug 2016 | 17:30
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hmmmmmm
8 Aug 2016 | 17:32
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Marcus alive?? Another wahala
8 Aug 2016 | 17:39
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Really loving this story,thanks for the update
8 Aug 2016 | 17:41
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He will surely be caught.. Lies may go on for a hundred year but d truth will catch up with it one day....
8 Aug 2016 | 18:23
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Marcus u knw dey die
8 Aug 2016 | 18:52
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wahala dey oh
8 Aug 2016 | 18:59
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Macus na akudaya (working ghost)
8 Aug 2016 | 19:24
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hmmm well, Marcus alive or dead, Mirabel n Victor ar gonna marry. carry on bro. next episode
8 Aug 2016 | 19:42
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next plx
8 Aug 2016 | 19:57
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marcus!!!!
8 Aug 2016 | 20:03
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ѕσ ∂ιѕ gυу ιѕ αℓινє
8 Aug 2016 | 20:42
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You Must Becareful Because As You Guys Have Plans For Him, He Must Have His Own Plans, So Tred Cautiously. Anyways Continu
8 Aug 2016 | 20:59
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I knew Marcus was still alive
8 Aug 2016 | 23:34
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I hope they catch Marcus on time
8 Aug 2016 | 23:35
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Gbese!
9 Aug 2016 | 00:01
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hmmmmmm so Marcus has bullet prove on.... um naw getting scared
9 Aug 2016 | 00:27
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So he dint die after all
9 Aug 2016 | 01:01
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U nd mirable better b careful
9 Aug 2016 | 01:02
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hmmm nxt plz
9 Aug 2016 | 04:06
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I pray they capture that idiot before he take any move
9 Aug 2016 | 04:07
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u guys av to watch ur back
9 Aug 2016 | 04:34
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he dint die
9 Aug 2016 | 05:18
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that guy is smart
9 Aug 2016 | 05:18
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Mmmmmm se gobe
9 Aug 2016 | 05:47
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Marcuz is alive no doubt....i escort him while he was shot by dorothy
9 Aug 2016 | 07:18
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Marcus no die
9 Aug 2016 | 07:36
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hmmm...dat Marcus of a guy seems tough, hu knows what he's up to dys tym....
9 Aug 2016 | 08:19
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damn marcus u better be watchful man live once die once
9 Aug 2016 | 08:38
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Marcus don't want to die...
9 Aug 2016 | 08:54
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Marcus na smart guy o
9 Aug 2016 | 09:46
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Marcus na smart guy o, he is puttin on bullet proof
9 Aug 2016 | 09:55
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Marcus will definitely mess with u b4 he is caught
9 Aug 2016 | 12:13
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woah........i love dis
9 Aug 2016 | 12:28
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dis dude smart o
9 Aug 2016 | 12:39
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I hope your plan works
9 Aug 2016 | 14:06
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Marcus hmmm
9 Aug 2016 | 14:42
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I hope u go add me to ur men on suit for ur wedding
9 Aug 2016 | 15:29
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Queuing for de next 1
9 Aug 2016 | 15:30
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this story will not end any time soon
9 Aug 2016 | 15:59
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Long life victor vames, long life followers
9 Aug 2016 | 16:05
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Wahala dey for you o, that's why i dont pray to have money like dangote, they don't sleep!
9 Aug 2016 | 16:41
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hmmmmm, I hope u catch him
9 Aug 2016 | 17:20
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next pls o
9 Aug 2016 | 18:27
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9 Aug 2016 | 21:19
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I sense another trouble and dis tym it ll b boom
10 Aug 2016 | 02:08
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Interesting, keep it rolling
10 Aug 2016 | 02:11
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No be small thing see Vincent oko iyawo(husband of wife)
10 Aug 2016 | 02:13
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Dorothy has turned to a badt gurl Na Wa o
10 Aug 2016 | 02:14
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marcus
10 Aug 2016 | 03:52
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Watching out for Marcus' second death. Real one this time. Good job Victor, I'm always proud of you! My 1st ever comment.
10 Aug 2016 | 03:53
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When our guy don dey act like oga boss already
10 Aug 2016 | 03:56
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Ojigbijigbi see me see gobe where is this story heading to now hope it will end well shar
10 Aug 2016 | 03:57
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Is it possible that two of them date the same siblings there should be a twist in the story some where
10 Aug 2016 | 03:57
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This is getting serious. Is this going to look like 24HR
10 Aug 2016 | 04:00
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ok
10 Aug 2016 | 05:59
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Lets see you catch him
10 Aug 2016 | 07:07
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ride on bro
10 Aug 2016 | 07:21
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EPISODE 44 We continued the fun like that for three days, and we didn't see or sighted Marcus and we're left with four papers to round up our final semester's exams. That Marcus, I am very sure that the bullet proof vest he wore was the one he stripped me off the time I went to him with tracking devices all over my body. He took away my bullet proof and kept it for himself; he thinks he's smart enough, we shall get him. We charged all the agents to be very watchful and vigilant so we won't miss a chance of getting Marcus. I came up with another idea to stop moving around with Mirabel, let her be going on her own so Marcus will maybe show himself to her again, and of course the underground agents will always be on her trail. ****** I forgot to mention that I met my Lecturer that advised me the other time, I appreciated her and told her it went so well. I even told Mirabel about it. I also appreciated Promise for explaining things to Mirabel ahead of me. ****** My late uncle's first son, Jonas was already in the university and i've been helping him because of the good deeds of his late father. Although, he wasn't in my school, but we do communicate from time to time. And my Father has been helping my late uncle's family. ****** I got a call from the first lady on my way back from school and the following conversation ensued... Me: Hello, good afternoon ma First lady: How are you dear Me: I'm fine ma First lady: Okay... I want to invite you personally to come for my wedding anniversary tomorrow 7:00.pm but you should be here before the time, oh sorry... i forgot to ask, can you make it? Me: Of course ma, i'll be pleased to be there First lady: Ok good... Your Parents are also coming, so... Frank will come pick you guys up including your sister Me: Ok ma First lady: Alright, bye Me: Ok bye ma **Hangs up** I told Nancy about it and she was so happy. It was only Nancy that has exam paper to write the following day. I went to Mirabel's lodge to spend my day before the evening when we'll be going for her Parent's anniversary dinner celebration. I already had it in mind to wear the new suit i bought the other time. Mirabel: We should bring Promise along with us Me: It'd be a good idea, that's if it's ok Mirabel: Sure, she'll be my guest Me: Ok, tell her then. She told her and she agreed to come along with us. Vincent came to the lodge, then we all went to my apartment i.e Vincent, Mirabel, Cynthia, Promise and Me. Nancy was already in the apartment, so we hit the road headed to the Presidential villa with an SUV and a Coaster bus. Frank, Jummy and two mobile police men drove in the SUV while the rest of us with three policemen drove in the Coaster bus. We gisted while on road, Nancy took the lead in the gist. I noticed she has reduced 20% of her talking capability, maybe Vincent is working on it. All i did was to contribute, defend myself when i'm being teased or accused of something, and i laughed out mostly. We arrived at the villa before 6:00.pm and mingled with those present and they served us wine. Guests started coming including my Parents, and the hall got filled up before 7.00.pm i wasn't that surprised, why won't they come before time when it's the President's party. The invited guests were close friends, relations and partners. It wasn't a big party, just a dinner celebration. Ministers, Governors, Senators and other dignitaries were in attendance. The celebration started, the President came forward and appreciated everyone for coming. He said some things before he introduced his wife, she came forward and stood by his side and then she gave a little speech. Vincent and Mirabel also came out as their Parents cut the large cake. After that, the president and his wife danced together for about a minute before others that cares to dance joined them on the dancefloor. The first lady introduced me to her friends and other guests as Mirabel's fiancé. And Mirabel also did the same to close relations including Ike's Parents. I shyly danced with Mirabel while many guests were dancing with their spouses. Nancy and Vincent were also dancing (I wonder when they'll take their relationship to the next level by introducing themselves to our respective Parents) I sighted Promise seated and talking with a guy we met earlier. The guy is darkly cute, I guess she has found a new friend. I stopped dancing and took Mirabel to our seat to eat the food i've been salivating for. I really enjoyed the night, it was so wonderful. Seeing prominent personalities of the Country in their cool with all smiles. Looking at them all, I couldn't tell which was a criminal. Me: (To Mirabel) Who is that guy seated with Promise? Mirabel: I forgot his name, but he is son of the FCT Minister Me: He's been with her for a while now Mirabel: Maybe he is seeking for a chance Me: Is he a good guy? Mirabel: I dunno, I only know him as the first son of the FCT Minister. Me: Okay... We left there about 13 minutes to the hour of 9:00.pm to my apartment dropping me and Nancy before they left for Mirabel's lodge. ☆☆☆☆☆ The following day, while chilling in my apartment and working on my website as I don't have a paper to write, my phone rang for one second and stopped. Someone flashed me, so i guess. I picked up my phone to see who the flasher was but it was a hidden number. How can a person hid his/her number and flash somebody? That's rubbish! I hissed and dropped my phone. A message came into my phone minutes later, I checked and the sender was unknown to me, so i read the content of the message and it read as follows: "Hi, It's Marcus, the same one. Yes i'm still alive. I'm alive for a reason, for a second chance. I know what happened to Dorothy, how her life ended. I don't want to end up like her. I have lost everything because of the crazy love i have for Mirabel. I want to start a new life and i hope you can forgive me for everything i did to you. I would've died for nothing, but here i am living for a second chance. I promise never to bother you and mirabel ever again" I was stunned when i read the message, is he for real? I find it hard to believe. Although, he made his point, but... he's backing out? How truthful is this?? TO BE CONTINUED...
10 Aug 2016 | 07:41
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I really appreciate you all for your comments... I wish I could be replying them one by one.... but i'm seriously watching all your comments... thanks y'all
10 Aug 2016 | 07:43
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I think he's truly changed
10 Aug 2016 | 08:11
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Oga vict vames u got my back thumb up
10 Aug 2016 | 08:15
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it a lie joor a snake must surely born something with a long tail.
10 Aug 2016 | 08:16
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@vict-vames nice epi boss.. I guess everyone deserve a second chance bt be careful
10 Aug 2016 | 08:17
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He is a sinner behaving like a saint in order to attract you to him. Be careful o.
10 Aug 2016 | 08:17
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but wen we go expect the next episode @vict vames
10 Aug 2016 | 08:19
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uhmmmmmm
10 Aug 2016 | 08:21
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Nice story here I dey gbadu you o @ victoriouschild or @fabulousvicky new episode here
10 Aug 2016 | 08:21
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I hope so
10 Aug 2016 | 08:25
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nice one bro, your story is getting more interesting every day. u be correct chairmo............ ride on
10 Aug 2016 | 08:30
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Oya ride on
10 Aug 2016 | 08:35
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U mean it....
10 Aug 2016 | 08:36
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Hogwash... dnt believe him o,
10 Aug 2016 | 08:38
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You deserve d appreciation here,big ups to you for never failing to update, u are too much @vict-vames
10 Aug 2016 | 08:39
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Hey don't trust him yet it may be another plot to axe u down ?
10 Aug 2016 | 08:40
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E Yaf Change Small
10 Aug 2016 | 09:12
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let look forward maybe he has change or not
10 Aug 2016 | 09:17
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Let's see if thats true or not
10 Aug 2016 | 09:19
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Hmmmm Marcus a changed man?
10 Aug 2016 | 09:36
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enjoying this dey more Marcus changed! wow well for me I believe him
10 Aug 2016 | 09:52
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second chance is not too much,we all have our past
10 Aug 2016 | 09:56
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MAYBE HE HAS CHANGED FOR GOOD REALLY
10 Aug 2016 | 10:01
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thumb up
10 Aug 2016 | 10:02
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Maybe his for real
10 Aug 2016 | 10:07
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Marcus z lyin abt backin out.
10 Aug 2016 | 10:13
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Luv did story thump up Vict-Vames
10 Aug 2016 | 10:16
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hmmm...speechless
10 Aug 2016 | 10:18
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He has changed, Marcus
10 Aug 2016 | 10:21
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Dat must be a lie
10 Aug 2016 | 10:21
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Nice one #following...more ink to ur pen
10 Aug 2016 | 10:33
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Hmmm! I doubt ooo
10 Aug 2016 | 10:46
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Huh dat marcus is unpredictable... u beta b wise
10 Aug 2016 | 10:56
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Hmmmmm....change is a constant phenomenal... Marcus might have changed indeed
10 Aug 2016 | 11:16
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let me keep my calm as i watch out 4 d nxt episode.....1 cn nt jst cnclude easily 4rm d content of d txt mssge 4rm Marcus, it cud be 4 real nd it cud b a trick.....hmmmmm
10 Aug 2016 | 11:19
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Nyce story........cant wait 4 d next episode............this x my first tyme here............hope am welkum
10 Aug 2016 | 11:23
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Marcus don vote 4 Buhari bdat onooo.....changes in the house
10 Aug 2016 | 11:26
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Lets see haw diz roll
10 Aug 2016 | 11:30
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ha marcus don change ooo
10 Aug 2016 | 11:34
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Ride m
10 Aug 2016 | 11:44
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.maybe or maybe not
10 Aug 2016 | 11:44
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he's saying d truth free him abeg
10 Aug 2016 | 11:51
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Escaping Death Is The One Way To Surely Know If One Has Changed. Oya Ride On
10 Aug 2016 | 12:01
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I Dey Enjoy This Story Lyk Seriously There's No Element Of Truth In Message Marcus Sent To You..Vict Be Wise Nd Also Be Extremely Careful. Keep It Up Dear@vict-vames
10 Aug 2016 | 12:13
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He is now repentant... I like that
10 Aug 2016 | 12:16
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I Pray He Change
10 Aug 2016 | 12:29
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hnmmmm Marcus changed . I don't believe so Just be careful Victor to avoid story that touch the
10 Aug 2016 | 12:42
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hmmm de cat smiles to you not because it likes u but it is creating a chance for u to loose ur guard, den it will strike. believe him but dnt loose ur guard. carry on bro.
10 Aug 2016 | 12:58
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I Hope marcus didn't write that message jst to confuse him....anyway let's watch and see.
10 Aug 2016 | 13:00
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Eh! changed! i hope he isn't pretending!
10 Aug 2016 | 13:13
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Nice story so far.. Maybe Marcus has changed..
10 Aug 2016 | 13:13
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Eh! changed! i hope he isn't pretending! for a whole criminal like that!
10 Aug 2016 | 13:13
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I no trust that guy that call himself Marcus.
10 Aug 2016 | 13:32
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Hmmmmm I just dy observe
10 Aug 2016 | 13:58
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Wen e look lyk story don end... Nw a new twist... Thumbs up man!!!
10 Aug 2016 | 14:01
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I doubt if he is for real
10 Aug 2016 | 14:40
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Kill him dis time
10 Aug 2016 | 14:52
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i think he is for real ooo stil observing
10 Aug 2016 | 14:55
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am not sure he can change
10 Aug 2016 | 14:56
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Jut watch ur back
10 Aug 2016 | 15:31
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Just watch ur back .
10 Aug 2016 | 15:32
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Gahngahn
10 Aug 2016 | 15:37
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Is like he is 4 real
10 Aug 2016 | 15:40
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wow.... I hope Marcus is 4 real
10 Aug 2016 | 16:33
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Its a trick for u to lower ur guard
10 Aug 2016 | 16:34
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give him a chance you will
10 Aug 2016 | 16:39
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Nice one ,but be watchful.
10 Aug 2016 | 16:48
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Maybe he hs changed... But pple cn be deceptive... Lets see wat happens in the long run.
10 Aug 2016 | 17:04
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hmmmm something is fishing
10 Aug 2016 | 17:35
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Marcus kwa? Its too risky
10 Aug 2016 | 17:47
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Welldone bro
10 Aug 2016 | 17:53
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Second chance he said... if he mean it then he deserve it
10 Aug 2016 | 17:54
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Uwlc
10 Aug 2016 | 17:55
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Good plan by mr President
10 Aug 2016 | 17:57
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Hhhhhmmm we'll see
10 Aug 2016 | 18:00
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Don't trust him, once a criminal Ȋ̝̊̅§ always a criminal
10 Aug 2016 | 18:06
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That kind person no de change
10 Aug 2016 | 18:22
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Marcus hasn't change, its just a new strategy to get back to u.... next episode shall tell sha
10 Aug 2016 | 18:57
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Lol..... Second chance! Hope he is for real, weldone the gud job VICT
10 Aug 2016 | 18:57
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e remains small to finish
10 Aug 2016 | 19:04
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Just be watchful
10 Aug 2016 | 20:44
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Second chance!!!!!
11 Aug 2016 | 00:16
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U don chop pesin sister see as u d protect ur own vic!
11 Aug 2016 | 02:58
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GOD REALLY DELIVERED U 4RM DIS LOLA
11 Aug 2016 | 03:00
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chai see trap
11 Aug 2016 | 04:07
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Human being can be trusted in a split second
11 Aug 2016 | 05:01
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Hahahahha! wow indeed ur victor.....
11 Aug 2016 | 05:04
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i dont trust that guy jare... but if he doesnt want to disturb her agiain, what is he doing in the school then, he should have just gone to another city or state and start a new life.... lets see if he si sincere sha
11 Aug 2016 | 07:08
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nice story vames
11 Aug 2016 | 07:08
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ride on sire
11 Aug 2016 | 07:10
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Marcus chanqed? Maybe keep dropinq bro
11 Aug 2016 | 08:11
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Nice I hope so
11 Aug 2016 | 09:33
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well you can forgive him,but keep him at arms lenght.once a soildier is always a soilder.
11 Aug 2016 | 10:08
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Nice Story .. Ride On
11 Aug 2016 | 10:45
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This Macus guy nah camelieon fah, I no trust ahm at all. Ofcoz the last time I checked he was a criminal, but today "he said" he is now a saint I wonder what 'll become of him tomrrow... Just be careful @vict-vames
11 Aug 2016 | 10:53
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Marcus wants u 2 loosen ur quard before he strikes aqain! That quy sha! He's qot 2mussh strateqies for my likin qon sef :s
11 Aug 2016 | 11:07
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Hnmmmmm! So intresting
11 Aug 2016 | 15:32
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Grt story there, u doing a gud job vict
11 Aug 2016 | 16:09
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I hope he is sincere...
11 Aug 2016 | 17:04
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surely marcus is a change agent. forgive him bro
11 Aug 2016 | 17:18
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Nice episode.. . . . Ride on . . . Let see wht will happen...
11 Aug 2016 | 17:39
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I dy wait oooooo
11 Aug 2016 | 20:08
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you have really done well with this story , in as much as i enjoy it alot am not too comfortable with the flaboyant nature of the fame of this story. well mayb cos its fiction that made it luk like fallacy. Wish like is as easy as portray here i would have gone for buhari's daughter ***wink***
12 Aug 2016 | 03:03
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man you got talent
12 Aug 2016 | 04:46
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ride on man
12 Aug 2016 | 04:47
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Wow ooo interesting nxt pls
12 Aug 2016 | 05:30
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Cnt believe ve been a ghost reader on ds intresting stowiee,more wisdom dear . . . Marcus lee,i tink hes sincerely sowie tho,wu wouldnt be wen in d face of death or imprisonment,Victor lee jez forgiv him bt he stil gats to pay fr his sins tho,nxt plsssss
12 Aug 2016 | 05:53
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nice story
12 Aug 2016 | 08:30
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next episode please
12 Aug 2016 | 08:32
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME TODAY!! EPISODE 45 I decided to call him through the message he sent after much thought and he picked up after seconds of ringing. Marcus: Hello dude Me: Marcus was shot dead in front of me, so who are you? (Pretending like I dunno) Marcus: It’s me, I didn’t die… I escaped death Me: How’s that possible with three shots on the chest? Marcus: I had a vest on Me: So you’re telling me you’ve been alive all this while? Marcus: Yea Me: I see… so what do you want from me now? Marcus: A second chance to live Me: **Chuckles** Second chance? Is that your new strategy?? You’re wasting your time. I advise you to do what you said in the text you sent to me because you have no chance of doing any harm to us again Marcus: I meant every word I said in the text, I have lost everything… my family, friends, everything! The only thing I have now is my life and I don’t want to lose it too Me: You’re not going to lose your life if you don’t bother us again Marcus: I know I’ve been a bad guy, but lying has never been a strategy for me to get anything. I won’t cause any trouble again and I mean it, I want to live a peaceful life Me: Peaceful life? How can you live a peaceful life when you still have a 25 year sentence in prison which could also be extended for escaping prison? Marcus: I know that, and that’s why I need your help Me: For what? Marcus: To start a new life Me: What are you talking about? Marcus: Now the world thinks I’m dead and I want it to remain that way. The authorities won’t be looking for me, I won’t even be recognized when seen and nobody will care if I look familiar as a criminal or not… this is Nigeria, who will care to notice me? Please I really need your help man Me: What help do you want? Marcus: Financial help man… I really need money to survive what I’m going through right now Me: You’re quite funny; I mean I don’t get you… you want money from me? The same me you wanted dead Marcus: That was out of desperation man, I’m done with all that sh!t… you got to forgive me for all that and help me out please mahn… I don’t have anybody to face Me: Your father is a billionaire, why not go to him? Marcus: I can’t… he’s gonna turn me in to the police himself Me: And why do you think I’ll spare you? Marcus: You wouldn’t have been talking to me like this if you were gonna turn me in Me: You can’t be too sure about that, I know you’re obsessed for Mirabel and you can’t just let go of her so easily Marcus: What are you saying man? Haven’t I tried enough?? I became the most man in Nigeria just to win her back and I got nothing but rather lost everything and you’re saying I can’t let go of her so easily? Come on man, my life is ruined… I’m totally messed up! Me: Alright Alright that’s enough… I’ve heard you; I will help you with some money Marcus: I’ll forever be grateful for that… thanks man Me: But you better be sure of what you’ve said, for you won’t have a third chance on this earth Marcus: Absolutely! Me: How will you get it? Marcus: Yea… let’s meet up somewhere Me: You must be a jester **I hung up instantly** I should meet him somewhere, as I’m a fool abi? **Hissed** The next thing I know, he sent me a “Please Call Me” message over and over again, I just ignored them. I’m totally confused about this guy, why can’t he call? Is he that broke or what? No… I can’t fall for this; he must be trying to outsmart me. I dunno if I should tell Mirabel or anyone about this or not. I decided to go Mirabel’s lodge to talk to her about this; I got there and saw that same guy from the President’s party that was talking with Promise. We shook hands and I joined in their gist with Mirabel, Cynthia and Promise. He then left and Promise walked him out. Me: (To Mirabel and Cynthia) I think he already likes Promise Cynthia: Promise doesn’t seem to be interested Me: Why? Cynthia: I dunno… her own holy holy nawa Me: It’s not about that… it’s about getting involve with the right someone Cynthia: How would she know when she doesn’t seem to care about having a man? Mirabel: I think we should work it out for them… its high time Promise get herself a man Me: Yeah… but she has her choice to make Mirabel: Aren’t you worried about her not getting involved with any guy? Me: Of course I do… but I can’t do anything about it Mirabel: We’ll be graduating in two weeks’ time; she has to think about her future Promise: (Coming from outside) Can you guys stop talking about me? Mirabel: Promise why not give him a chance? Promise: I don’t know him and I don’t like him Cynthia: Hhmmm… the likely ones are not yet born (Teasingly) Mirabel: You can get to know him better only if you can give him the chance Promise: **Speechless watching TV** I excused myself with Mirabel and took her somewhere private; I told her everything about what Marcus had told me. Mirabel: What could be his plan now? Me: I dunno, he is so confusing Mirabel: Please don’t go and meet him all by yourself Me: Of course… I can’t just trust him like that Mirabel: His survival could mean two things… it’s either he is right that he survived to have a second chance or it proved him to be more dangerous Me: He can’t do anything to us… he will surely lose again if he tries anything stupid Mirabel: I don’t want to any chances, I lost my best friend the last time he tried to come between us and I can’t bear losing another… not even for a minute! Me: Relax dear… we are well secured this time unlike before Mirabel: I said I’m not taking chances Me: So what do we do about him? Mirabel: Nothing! If he has changed as he claimed, then let him go his way and stop bothering us about anything. If he wants forgiveness, then he got it; nothing will be added to that! Me: Okay ok… calm down will you? Mirabel: Have you forgotten how much pain he cost us? Even if we should forgive him, would that erase the memory of everything? **Tears in her eyes** I just embraced her. **My phone rings** I excused myself from Mirabel and answered the call. Me: Hello? Male voice: Hi, it’s Fred Me: Fred? Voice: Yea Frederick, the guy that just left the lodge Me: Ok the new friend of Promise Fred: Something like that, please we meet? Like now? Me: Now? Why? Fred: Just need to speak with you, can you come? Me: Where? Fred: I’m outside the gate, meet me then we’ll go somewhere to talk Me: Ok I’m coming… Fred: Thanks **hangs up** Mirabel: Who’s that? Me: That minister’s son, he wants to see with me Mirabel: Where and why? Me: Outside the gate and I dunno why Mirabel: Alright… be save I kissed her on the cheek and left. TO BE CONTINUED… ****************** It’s my Birthday guys! Happy birthday To Me!! I will appreciate your wishes, Thanks!
12 Aug 2016 | 09:01
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY BRO WISH YOU LONG LIVE WITH GOOD HEALTH TO WRITE MORE... GOD BLESS YOU
12 Aug 2016 | 09:19
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Happy birthday! Next
12 Aug 2016 | 09:24
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Be careful o..maybe he z working with marcus
12 Aug 2016 | 09:24
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HBD to @vict-vames WULLNP.. Send my drinks and you get your gift
12 Aug 2016 | 09:25
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Hapi bday broh
12 Aug 2016 | 09:32
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Happy birthday dearie, age wt grace. Wat does Fred wnt? Mayb to beg u to help talk to promise
12 Aug 2016 | 09:38
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HBD bro
12 Aug 2016 | 09:39
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Happy Birthday! happy born day brother... wullnp @Vict-vames
12 Aug 2016 | 10:00
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Happy Birthday!
12 Aug 2016 | 10:01
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Maybe he wants to talk about promise,but be careful with him he might be Marcus agent too.
12 Aug 2016 | 10:02
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Happy birthday niqqae,llnp n more grease to ur elbow.
12 Aug 2016 | 10:04
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HBD... Wish you long life and prosperity..
12 Aug 2016 | 10:14
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Dnt trust him o
12 Aug 2016 | 10:19
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Hbd vames
12 Aug 2016 | 10:19
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Dnt trust him o cos a neva can tell wat he has dis tym around
12 Aug 2016 | 10:20
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hapi birthday
12 Aug 2016 | 10:20
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hbd bro wullnp
12 Aug 2016 | 10:21
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Happy Birthday..... Bro
12 Aug 2016 | 10:21
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Happy birthday bro,Best wishes
12 Aug 2016 | 10:22
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Happy birthday Vames ??? chop as plenty cakes as you want. LLNP . The president in law lol
12 Aug 2016 | 10:34
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Hmmm
12 Aug 2016 | 10:44
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hbd bro
12 Aug 2016 | 10:54
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HBD ....... Nice Update :g
12 Aug 2016 | 10:54
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Happy Birthday Bros
12 Aug 2016 | 10:56
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Happy birthday nd nyc piece...
12 Aug 2016 | 10:58
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Age with Grace.... happy Birthday..... all the Best
12 Aug 2016 | 10:59
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Happy Birthday Bro following ur story
12 Aug 2016 | 10:59
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY
12 Aug 2016 | 11:05
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Happy birthday vick
12 Aug 2016 | 11:08
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Hbd God bless ur new age
12 Aug 2016 | 11:08
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happpy birthday bro next pls
12 Aug 2016 | 11:10
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Happy bday wish u LLNP
12 Aug 2016 | 11:12
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Happi birthday 2 u
12 Aug 2016 | 11:25
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happy birthday to you..! i can 't wait for the next episode
12 Aug 2016 | 11:37
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No one is a saint the worst enemy can still be the best friend. Forgiveness is to be shared equally, give him a chance and wait 4 the outcome. Sister promise don't u plan 4 the feature
12 Aug 2016 | 11:38
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HBD LLNP
12 Aug 2016 | 11:49
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Happy birthday dear, I wish you many more years with good health and wealth in your life
12 Aug 2016 | 11:55
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Happy birthday dear,wishing u long life nd Prosperity. May God bless ur new age
12 Aug 2016 | 11:56
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happy birthday
12 Aug 2016 | 12:05
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Wishing the president son in law a happy birthday ...its an honor...happy birthday bro
12 Aug 2016 | 12:05
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Hbd bro.wullnp ijn,more ink to ur biro
12 Aug 2016 | 12:18
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Happy birthday boss
12 Aug 2016 | 12:22
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Happy birthday 2 u dearie.wishing you all the best
12 Aug 2016 | 12:26
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Happy precious birthday eli, i wish u more ahead.
12 Aug 2016 | 12:38
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We have arranged a huge celebration because a special person like you always deserves the best birthday celebration party. Happy birthday to d president son in law. Age with Wisdom.
12 Aug 2016 | 12:42
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Happy Birthday Dude, Long Life And Prosperity..... Nice Story Also, Keep It Up * Winks*
12 Aug 2016 | 12:43
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Happy Birthday Victvames ...Long Life And Prosperity, God Bless Your New Age
12 Aug 2016 | 12:47
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It Can Be True That Marcus Has Change For Good But Still Be Careful As Mirabel Has Said....Fred On The Other Hand Is In Love With Promise But She Can't Love No One Expect You Victor..... What Will She Do Now???
12 Aug 2016 | 12:52
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Happy b-day bro wullnp b kiaful ooo vic
12 Aug 2016 | 12:53
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Happy birthday
12 Aug 2016 | 12:54
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I dnt really trust that Fred of a guy
12 Aug 2016 | 12:56
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HBD bro wish u gud health & long life
12 Aug 2016 | 13:19
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Happy day birth bros , wish u long life nd prosperity.more years ahead.
12 Aug 2016 | 13:22
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happy birthday dude more age to come OK let d episode row
12 Aug 2016 | 13:36
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api bufdei...wullnp knowledge to write more
12 Aug 2016 | 13:38
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Happy birthday to u,wish u long life nd prosperity. I don't think marcus is going to do dem any harm again
12 Aug 2016 | 13:38
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Happy bday man
12 Aug 2016 | 13:43
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Happy birthday bro.
12 Aug 2016 | 13:48
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happy birthday vict-vames!!! wullnp bro.....u r gud at wot u do here bro, mre grease 2 ur elbow....
12 Aug 2016 | 13:52
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happy birthday wullnp don't give us a late update ooo
12 Aug 2016 | 13:57
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Hapi bornday,wish u long life and prosperity,weldone plz keep it rolling
12 Aug 2016 | 13:59
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Just observing!
12 Aug 2016 | 14:08
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happy birthday bro. llngp. wish u many happy return. more pu**y to ur d**k. i no talk anythin oh. lolz
12 Aug 2016 | 14:12
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llnp,next pls
12 Aug 2016 | 14:19
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HBD Òmayemî leléé.!. @vict-vames, Wish u many more years ahead. Twenty trailers of kpomo and plus toqether with twelve truck of fisheries join...
12 Aug 2016 | 14:43
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happy birthday wish u llnp success and more ink to ur Biro with more knowledge
12 Aug 2016 | 14:46
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Reading.. Happy birth day broh... @vict-vames @emergencia sirambassia, dey hail you
12 Aug 2016 | 14:51
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Happy birthday.longlife nd prosperity :g
12 Aug 2016 | 14:52
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Happy birthday big bro...wish you many happy returns in good health and prosperity....
12 Aug 2016 | 14:56
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Happy Birthday bros wish u Long Life and Prosperity.
12 Aug 2016 | 15:07
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Hbd Bro
12 Aug 2016 | 15:20
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belated happy birthday Victor :b
12 Aug 2016 | 15:30
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Happy Birthday to you bro.... Wishing you all the very best. Have a Blast cox its your day ?
12 Aug 2016 | 15:40
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I wish u long life,and many yes to come.
12 Aug 2016 | 16:02
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Happy Birthday @vict-vames Marcus might av change, give him d benefits of d doubt I believe Fred want ur help in winning promise heart.
12 Aug 2016 | 16:06
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Happy birthday bro..buip.
12 Aug 2016 | 16:12
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happy birthday vict....
12 Aug 2016 | 16:14
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whats wrong wit dis guy slf
12 Aug 2016 | 16:16
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Fred myt b an accomplice to Marcus... just b safe
12 Aug 2016 | 16:23
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Dont take chances as mirabel said!
12 Aug 2016 | 16:26
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hbd vames
12 Aug 2016 | 16:27
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On behalf of all ghost readers like me in the house. I wish you wonderful birthday celebration... bigger you I pray!!!!
12 Aug 2016 | 16:27
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Happy birthday boss
12 Aug 2016 | 16:28
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Happy birthday long life and prosperity
12 Aug 2016 | 16:37
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нв∂ иєχт єριѕσ∂є ρℓѕѕ
12 Aug 2016 | 16:42
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hbd bro
12 Aug 2016 | 16:42
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Hbd brather. Long live n productive
12 Aug 2016 | 16:42
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I fear you going to meet fred. Hbd 1ce again
12 Aug 2016 | 16:49
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Hmm. I hope fred is not some freak
12 Aug 2016 | 17:05
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I'm suspecting that fred gan.... happy birthday bto, wishing u long life and prosperity
12 Aug 2016 | 17:09
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Happy birthday to u wishing u many happy returns
12 Aug 2016 | 17:17
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Happy Earthstrong Bro
12 Aug 2016 | 17:22
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happy birthday :s
12 Aug 2016 | 17:23
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jeez,this is big time late but please pardon me....happy birthday to a great writer.wish u all d best vict vames.
12 Aug 2016 | 17:54
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Wonder what Fred wnt
12 Aug 2016 | 17:55
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Hbd, Marcus Na Call U So O, Nor Go Answer At All
12 Aug 2016 | 17:56
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better b careful ooo
12 Aug 2016 | 17:57
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Happy birthday bro. Wish u happiness and abundant grace and love
12 Aug 2016 | 18:01
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Happy birthday ? ? ? ? ? wishing you long live and prosperity
12 Aug 2016 | 18:03
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Hpi ? birthday dude, more years ahead
12 Aug 2016 | 18:04
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Happy Birthday 2 u @Vict-Vames
12 Aug 2016 | 18:05
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happy birthday but post fast ooh
12 Aug 2016 | 18:12
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Happy birthday vict vames. Have been enjoying ur stories for a while now.
12 Aug 2016 | 18:17
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Hbd... I hope u re safe
12 Aug 2016 | 18:19
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Happy birthday
12 Aug 2016 | 18:30
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Hbd
12 Aug 2016 | 18:39
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Happy birthday to you Victor
12 Aug 2016 | 19:00
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happy birthday boss new age wit grace. bless you!!!!
12 Aug 2016 | 19:23
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More
12 Aug 2016 | 19:25
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Happy belated birthday, LLNP
12 Aug 2016 | 19:32
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I dont trust that fred ..
12 Aug 2016 | 19:43
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Be careful man
12 Aug 2016 | 19:45
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Wullnp
12 Aug 2016 | 20:06
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Happy birthday ? ma friend long life and prosperity
12 Aug 2016 | 20:08
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Happy birthday bro. VAMEs 1
12 Aug 2016 | 20:10
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hbd bro
12 Aug 2016 | 22:48
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Maybe Fred wants to ask Vict to help him to to Promise
12 Aug 2016 | 23:31
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I don't know if Marcus should be trusted
12 Aug 2016 | 23:32
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If Marcus has truly changed then he should be given a second chance
12 Aug 2016 | 23:33
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If Marcus has truly changed then he should be given a second chance
12 Aug 2016 | 23:34
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I believe he's a changed man...
13 Aug 2016 | 04:18
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Hbd my boss.... wullnp
13 Aug 2016 | 06:52
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happy birthday dear
13 Aug 2016 | 07:30
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Happy birthday bro, pray for more wisdom
13 Aug 2016 | 07:46
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Age with Grace Victs
13 Aug 2016 | 09:56
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happy birthday dear .
13 Aug 2016 | 09:56
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Happy Birthday dear
13 Aug 2016 | 12:19
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Belated api bday to u, llnp
13 Aug 2016 | 13:04
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Be careful vames, a neva can tell if fred is workin wit marcus
13 Aug 2016 | 13:05
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Still following . . . Happy belated birthday bro
13 Aug 2016 | 14:10
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Happy birthday to u i wish u long life and prosperity
13 Aug 2016 | 14:17
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Hbd dude wullnp
13 Aug 2016 | 20:13
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Hi bro wch u llnp in good health and wealth
13 Aug 2016 | 20:38
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Hbd in arrears bro.. Guys check out this on going story titled Izi_Jae
13 Aug 2016 | 22:00
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Hmm u beta be careful
14 Aug 2016 | 01:16
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Happy for you bro llnpp
14 Aug 2016 | 01:30
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keep going dear... I came into this website because I was captivated with by your story... it's one of a kind
14 Aug 2016 | 08:22
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keep going dear... I came into this website because I was captivated with by your story... it's one of a kind. happy birthday in arias dear
14 Aug 2016 | 08:23
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Happy Birth day mahn
14 Aug 2016 | 08:59
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Happy birthday dear
14 Aug 2016 | 16:44
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Happy birthday in advance dear
14 Aug 2016 | 16:51
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Hapy birthday dude
14 Aug 2016 | 17:03
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I love dis story
14 Aug 2016 | 17:55
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I know am a little bit late, but nevertheless, HBD bro..more ink to ur pen
15 Aug 2016 | 02:56
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Sorry I came late bro... Happy birthday in arrears You're wonderfully doing well here... Carry on
15 Aug 2016 | 05:37
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[b][color=blue]EPISODE 46[/color] I met him outside leaning on his cool 4matic car. Me: So… what is it you want to talk to me about? Fred: I want to ask you for a favour, get in let’s go talk about it We both sat on the back seat while two other guys were in the front of which one of them took the wheel. Me: So how’d you get my number? Fred: Cynthia… I asked her for it Me: Okay… We talked about other things till we got to the place. We alighted from the car and walked straight in. Me: (While walking in) this is a night club Fred: I know Me: What are we doing here? It’s not open for customers at this time Fred: It’s never closed for me (smiling) Me: I see… He took me to the VIP side and we sat down. Fred: Care for champagne? Me: A glass of wine will do Fred: Have a taste? Me: Yea… Pure Heavens Fred: (To one of the guys he came with) go get us Pure Heavens Me: You take it too? Fred: Nope, too cheap for my taste. I just want to drink what you drink, to be polite Me: Ok, can we talk now? Fred: Yea let’s talk. The thing is… It got to my attention that you’re like a brother to Promise in school and you’re both close, am I right? Me: She’s a good friend of mine Fred: I know… reason why I asked that question. I like her and I want to date her but she’s not giving me any hopeful response. She always tells me ‘no’ on the spot whenever I try to talk to her without a second thought. Why is she like that? And I’m sure she doesn’t have a boyfriend in school; I dunno about where she came from, or is she engaged back home? **The guy came with the wine and served us** Me: Well… she never mentioned being engaged to me, so I don’t think that’s the case. You know… she has always being like that; we’ve tried to talk to her about her single state but she doesn’t want to be in a relationship. Fred: Have you tried to hook her up with a guy before? Me: Nope **sips** Fred: Good… please do that for me Me: **Speechless** Fred: I really do like her right from the very first night I met her; I’m loving her like crazy. You’ve got to help me out man Me: She’s a very good friend of mine as you know; she has been Ok with her singleness. I wouldn’t want her to get involved with the wrong guy that’d make her sad or hurt her; she’s a good girl that deserves a better man. So if I’m going to help you win her, you will have to promise me you’ll never hurt her. Fred: You have nothing to worry about; I shall give her everything she wants on this earth and I mean it Me: That’s good to know… but before I’ll say I’m going to help you, I will need to know who I’m helping in getting my friend Fred: No problem, you can ask me whatever you want to know about me Me: Okay… I threw some questions at him and his responses were good. According to him… he studied business in the U.K; he loves being a businessman and has no interest in being a politician like his Father. He talked about his likes and dislikes and said funny things. I think Promise will love this guy if she gives him a chance. **My phone rings and I picked up** Me: Sweetheart Mirabel: Where are you? Me: I’m still with Fred, what’s up? Mirabel: Are you coming back to the lodge? Me: I don’t think so, it’s already getting late, I will go to the apartment from here Mirabel: What about your car? Me: Oh… Fred: Don’t worry; I’ll give you a ride Me: He’ll give me a ride Mirabel: Why can’t you just come? Me: Baby…. Mirabel: Fine! Better look after yourself, Marcus is still out there Me: I will be fine dear Mirabel: You better be Me: Please come over tomorrow with my car Mirabel: Ok Me: Goodnight, love you… Mirabel: **Hangs up** Me: **She just hangs up? What’s up with her? ** Fred and I continued talking until I told him I’ll try to talk to Promise. He thanked me before we rounded up and drove me to my apartment based on my directives. I talked to Mirabel later that night on phone about Fred and his intentions towards Promise; we agreed to get them together within the two weeks we got left in School. We started talking to Promise and the intentions of Fred towards her. We gave tips to Fred on what to do and when to show up. We continued to pressure her non-stop until she finally accepted to give him a chance nine days later. We celebrated it thinking we did her a favour, not knowing we got her into a mess she never bargained for. Then I realized that, we should’ve respected her decision. [color=red]TO BE CONTINUED…[/color][/b]
15 Aug 2016 | 07:30
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[b]I appreciate all the birthday wishes from all of you, thanks and i really appreciate you all.[/b]
15 Aug 2016 | 07:32
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Hmmm, hope its not what am thinking
15 Aug 2016 | 08:07
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Ride on
15 Aug 2016 | 08:08
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bring it on
15 Aug 2016 | 08:09
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Get her into a mess ke.
15 Aug 2016 | 08:12
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Haaaaaaaaaaasssssaaaaaaaa
15 Aug 2016 | 08:23
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Guys check out this story. https://www.coolval.com/forumsss/topic/izi_jae/
15 Aug 2016 | 08:28
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Gosh.. and I 'like' promice
15 Aug 2016 | 08:30
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What did fred do?
15 Aug 2016 | 08:31
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This Is Serious. Oya Next O
15 Aug 2016 | 08:34
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What happened? Next please
15 Aug 2016 | 08:49
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what mess again oh... just when I thought the story has finished, it's taking another twist.... kudos Vict
15 Aug 2016 | 09:00
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in what way
15 Aug 2016 | 09:31
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hope he didn't do anything harmful to promzy
15 Aug 2016 | 09:33
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well let it not what am thinking cos if it z will promzy forgive u two???? all dsame ride on...
15 Aug 2016 | 10:08
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Fred a rapist or drug pusher?
15 Aug 2016 | 10:33
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Wah happened ooh
15 Aug 2016 | 10:34
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wow!dis story is just too captivating,from one suspense to another. good job bro @vict-vames
15 Aug 2016 | 10:54
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Uhmm... Respect her decission.
15 Aug 2016 | 11:08
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What?
15 Aug 2016 | 11:28
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Hmmm, hope its nt wat am tinking sha
15 Aug 2016 | 11:32
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Continueeee
15 Aug 2016 | 11:33
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Una dey do match-making and mediator
15 Aug 2016 | 11:33
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Seriously?
15 Aug 2016 | 11:35
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Trouble kwah?
15 Aug 2016 | 11:41
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Mess ke
15 Aug 2016 | 11:45
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Oh my!! from that last statement of yours,i hope its not what am thinking??
15 Aug 2016 | 11:50
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Am feeling the breeze!
15 Aug 2016 | 11:51
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Hhhhhmmmm and whats is the mess
15 Aug 2016 | 12:09
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HOW
15 Aug 2016 | 12:44
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Continue......
15 Aug 2016 | 12:53
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and whats that
15 Aug 2016 | 13:01
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next episode pls
15 Aug 2016 | 13:02
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hope ntin bad happen to her she is such a nice gal
15 Aug 2016 | 13:05
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nice episode so far
15 Aug 2016 | 13:07
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:g :s
15 Aug 2016 | 13:08
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.
15 Aug 2016 | 13:08
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MMMM WHAT IS IT NA ....
15 Aug 2016 | 13:15
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hmmm..
15 Aug 2016 | 14:05
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Oops
15 Aug 2016 | 14:14
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That's why sometimes Ȋ̝̊̅§ good to respect peoples wish
15 Aug 2016 | 14:21
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HBD dude, WULLP
15 Aug 2016 | 14:35
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heeyaa. Cnt really wait ta read da nxt episode
15 Aug 2016 | 14:48
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mess? let's find out
15 Aug 2016 | 14:49
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Ride on boss
15 Aug 2016 | 15:15
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Bring It On Bro
15 Aug 2016 | 15:37
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The guy raped her or slept with her and traveled back or got her pregnant and is deny it
15 Aug 2016 | 16:00
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Mess
15 Aug 2016 | 16:31
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Which kind of mess is that? Ride on.
15 Aug 2016 | 17:04
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loneliness is good sometym
15 Aug 2016 | 17:19
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awww, sorry promzy
15 Aug 2016 | 18:02
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mess +!!???? I knw dat Fred is smtn else
15 Aug 2016 | 18:32
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Ohh God ooo... my promise oo
15 Aug 2016 | 18:36
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Hope it Nt wat am thinking
15 Aug 2016 | 18:38
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Oh! Sounds bad
15 Aug 2016 | 19:04
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Hmmmmm
15 Aug 2016 | 19:09
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hmmmm i reserv my coment for nw
15 Aug 2016 | 20:10
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i hope its isnt like marcus's story
16 Aug 2016 | 02:08
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got promise into a mess keh... hope its naht wat m thinking??!... ride on sire
16 Aug 2016 | 02:48
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mine is coming late tho buh. happy birthday... mess ke? OK na. .
16 Aug 2016 | 03:11
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Hmmmmmm
16 Aug 2016 | 03:45
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Hmmm...what again?
16 Aug 2016 | 04:32
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Wht mess . . Pls next
16 Aug 2016 | 04:55
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Jesu..mess ke
16 Aug 2016 | 05:11
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Nice 1
16 Aug 2016 | 06:38
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Enjoying dis story to the fullest
16 Aug 2016 | 07:14
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Next plsss
16 Aug 2016 | 07:14
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Hmm
16 Aug 2016 | 08:01
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hmmmm.....'you should have respected her decision' meaning u guys hv gotten her into the wrong hands
16 Aug 2016 | 08:09
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dis is serious
16 Aug 2016 | 11:00
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What sort of mess is that....?
16 Aug 2016 | 13:52
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Vick Vames, you've really tried. This have being an amazing creative work so far. So intriguing and educative. Well done.!
16 Aug 2016 | 18:40
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I love everything abt this story except for the death of Lola *ghostreaderscomment*
16 Aug 2016 | 18:44
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Ehyah
16 Aug 2016 | 19:45
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What mess did you guys get her into?
16 Aug 2016 | 21:32
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Does that means Fred is not a nice guy?
16 Aug 2016 | 21:36
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Fred Na player
17 Aug 2016 | 06:47
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haa! ..... What mess?
17 Aug 2016 | 08:24
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mess as in?
17 Aug 2016 | 13:55
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Woooo realy...... Wel.. Am here to c hw it hapened
17 Aug 2016 | 19:57
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you are the one this promise loves
18 Aug 2016 | 01:10
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which mess is dat kwanu
18 Aug 2016 | 05:43
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into mess?waiting for the next epi
19 Aug 2016 | 02:28
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[b][color =blue]EPISODE 47[/color] Marcus never stopped sending me “Please Call Me” messages during those nine days and I kept on ignoring him until he called me himself and I picked up. Me: Hello Marcus: Hello man you said you were gonna’ help me; I’m totally broke mahn… please! Me: Why did you ask me to meet up with you? Marcus: Because that’s the only way for me to get the money, I can’t go to your house Me: Nothing has ever gone well whenever I meet with you Marcus: But that’s the only way Me: Don’t you have a bank account? Marcus: Screw that mahn; my Dad got it frozen Me: Sorry I can’t meet you Marcus: You still don’t believe me, do you? I can’t do nothing to you mahn. I already bow Me: I’ll think about something and get back to you Marcus: Oh mehn… Me: Alright come to my apartment tonight Marcus: Really? Me: Wait I’m not done talking. You’re not coming in; just outside the gate where I’ll leave the money in a corner for you to pick up and go. And you must be very careful; I dunno what will happen to you if you’re spotted Marcus: Why? What’s wrong? Me: Just follow what I say and you won’t get into trouble Marcus: Ok no problem… time? Me: From 8:00.pm Marcus: Alright mahn… I trust you Me: Wish I could say the same to you Marcus: No I understand, trust is earned… I get it Me: Alright **hangs up** I don’t even know how much I’m going to give him, and I can’t tell Mirabel about it. I thought about it then decided to give him ₦250,000. I can’t believe I’m going to do this, giving money to Marcus? So awkward! I dashed to the bank later in the evening and made some withdrawals; I kept it somewhere in a corner outside my gate when it got dark, then I texted him how to find it. The following morning, I went out to check the money, but it wasn’t there; He must have taken it. I tried to call him to confirm if he took it but his number didn’t go through after several trials. He took it without thanking me? Well… I just hope he has left for good. Two more exam papers remaining for us to write. We kept on reading and working to get good grades. That Fred of a guy kept showering Promise with love and gifts. To us, he is madly in love with her and we think he is a good guy suitable for Promise. After finishing the second to the last paper on Monday, I hanged out one on one with Promise to discuss about her relationship with Fred. Me: So… how is your relationship going with Fred? Promise: Fine, he is loving, caring and always want to be seeing me Me: Hhmmm… I can see you’ve found what you want in a man Promise: Well… I’m beginning to like him Me: And love? Promise: Not sure about that yet Me: He loves you dearly, you should love him too. He is making good use of the chance you gave him Promise: (Staring at me somehow) why are you doing this? Me: I want you to be happy and feel loved Promise: Is that how love should be? Me: What are you saying again? This guy is ready to love you Promise: Agreed but what about me? Me: Love him too Promise: (Small tears in her eyes) Okay… I’ll try, besides I’m not getting younger, I should move on Me: Yea! That’s the spirit!! (Holding her) Fred: Hey guys Me: (I took my hand off Promise) Hey… Fred: Mind if I have her? Been looking for her, I miss her so much **smiling** Me: Sure! She’s all yours (I saw Promise blushing) Fred: Let’s go **holding Promise** We met the others then zoomed out from School anticipating for our final paper in two days’ time. After we parted our ways that day, we didn’t see each other till the final exam day; I didn’t go to the lodge because I want to study and work on the website and Mirabel on the other hand didn’t come to my apartment so she’ll prepare very well for the final paper. I tried Marcus’ line but it didn’t go through, so I stop trying. The day came; I went to school feeling well-prepared to pieces the exam and to see my lovely fiancée who I miss so much. I was in School before them; when they came, I noticed some bruises on Promise and I asked her immediately I saw it but after I have already spoken with Mirabel. Me: (Close to her) what happened to you? Promise: I fell from a bike Me: Which bike? Promise: Okada na Me: When and how? Promise: On Monday, later in the evening when I was returning back to the lodge Me: Where did you even go to? Promise: From Fred, I didn’t go straight to the lodge after we parted ways; he took me out for lunch Me: Why didn’t he drop you after picking you up from school? Promise: He couldn’t, he said something came up that he had to attend to Me: Hhmmm… you have to be careful next time Promise: Of course I feel something wasn’t right, I couldn’t doubt her because I know she doesn’t tell lies; why would she even lie? I shunned my thoughts on that. We all went to where we normally study together, did some revision before the commencement of the exam. During the exam, a guy almost got me into trouble. He was copying my work and I couldn’t hide it from him. A lady invigilator took me from my seat to another one, maybe she suspected something. And the guy foolishly followed me to where she took me to and sat behind me to continue copying my work. I didn’t know if I should laugh or get mad at him for the foolish act. The worst thing, she tried to stop him but he refused and insisted on coming to where I was seated. She had to take me to another seat at the back where there was no space for him to come and seat. I saw how the guy kept looking back in a pitiful way; I couldn’t help but laughed out a little, even the invigilator couldn’t help but also let out a smile. Good thing the wicked supervisors weren't around that time. [color =red]TO BE CONTINUED….[/color] ****************[/b] [color =red]I’ve been attending a seminar for the past days, that’s why I couldn’t update. Like I said from the beginning, there must be a cause for not updating on time…Thanks for understanding.[/color]
19 Aug 2016 | 10:07
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Hmm,luvly 1 Bro
19 Aug 2016 | 10:32
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<delHmm. Fred is a woman beater i guess
19 Aug 2016 | 10:34
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Big bro @vict-vames am enjoying this ride
19 Aug 2016 | 10:47
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deal with that guy call Fred
19 Aug 2016 | 11:16
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i got ur back
19 Aug 2016 | 11:20
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What could dat marcus be up to...
19 Aug 2016 | 11:23
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OK.... following
19 Aug 2016 | 11:25
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hope that fred didnt touch promzy
19 Aug 2016 | 11:29
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hope that fred didnt touch promzy
19 Aug 2016 | 11:29
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vicky wer is d rest,we are waitin
19 Aug 2016 | 11:40
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Hmmm,i wish promise the best oooh!
19 Aug 2016 | 11:41
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No problem.. Hope Fred z nt d one behind promise wound...
19 Aug 2016 | 11:50
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Ride on bro
19 Aug 2016 | 12:24
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Abeg @vict-vames Open ur answer script make I copy and paste ur work jorh abi u won talk sey u no recognize me "Fridex" ur right hand man again.?.?. :g
19 Aug 2016 | 12:34
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Ok
19 Aug 2016 | 12:40
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Hmmm..... What's Marcus up to?
19 Aug 2016 | 12:40
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Hope marcus won't com back fr you
19 Aug 2016 | 12:41
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nice epi
19 Aug 2016 | 13:48
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seems fred beat her up
19 Aug 2016 | 13:57
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[b] @fridex Lol.... copy copy... na me u wan put for trouble?[/ b]
19 Aug 2016 | 14:04
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Hop say no b d guy beat promise
19 Aug 2016 | 14:07
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Thankz boss
19 Aug 2016 | 14:08
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Relex vict-vames ofcours them no fit catch
19 Aug 2016 | 14:13
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Marcus is unbearable. Gosh!
19 Aug 2016 | 14:50
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Ride on bro
19 Aug 2016 | 15:19
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yeah, as u said @victory rred might be a woman beater
19 Aug 2016 | 15:25
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no prob continued.
19 Aug 2016 | 15:26
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this Marcus could be preparing something hotter for you this time and I fear for Promise
19 Aug 2016 | 15:35
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Promise been molested by fred, hmm.... Victor yhu park well cuz the return of macuz is lyk..... No be my mouth yhu go hear am
19 Aug 2016 | 16:06
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woow still reading more grace to u. next update please
19 Aug 2016 | 16:14
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Hmmmm
19 Aug 2016 | 16:19
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hmmm somethings is wrong
19 Aug 2016 | 16:24
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Fred might have injured Promise!
19 Aug 2016 | 16:37
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Nice episode . . I got ur back . . Ride on
19 Aug 2016 | 17:04
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Thanks to vict-vames
19 Aug 2016 | 17:41
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tnx bro
19 Aug 2016 | 17:47
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ride on
19 Aug 2016 | 18:05
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promise got something she do not want to relate. i also know it has something to do with fred. keep up the good work @victvames
19 Aug 2016 | 18:39
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welcome back
19 Aug 2016 | 18:43
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Gud job @Vames. For Marcus, ar u sure he was nt trace'd & caught by d force agents.
19 Aug 2016 | 18:44
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exuberantly following
19 Aug 2016 | 18:46
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I sense marcus is smwhere.... And u fred y will u hurt my girl? Y? Eeem talk nah ...aint u am talking to? Eeehn ehn ehn... Okay no problem... Kontinew...*winks*
19 Aug 2016 | 19:02
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No Pee Man Just Bring It On Wne U R Chance
19 Aug 2016 | 19:16
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Hope say no be fred drill promise so
19 Aug 2016 | 20:11
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Na only God know wetin marcus dey plan
19 Aug 2016 | 20:13
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Sori Promise
19 Aug 2016 | 21:25
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what something happened to Marcus when he went to pick the money?
20 Aug 2016 | 02:12
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no lele bro.... Fred don beat promsy shea
20 Aug 2016 | 03:24
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Maybe Fred got drunk and beat her..o ga o
20 Aug 2016 | 03:25
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Hmm..marcus. Promzy didnt fall from a bike jare..maybe it was fred who battered her!
20 Aug 2016 | 04:06
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Hmm..marcus. Promzy didnt fall from a bike jare..maybe it was fred who battered her! next
20 Aug 2016 | 04:07
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What next
20 Aug 2016 | 04:59
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That Fred is another thing.... promise be careful..
20 Aug 2016 | 05:27
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hmmm,,promise is nt telling d truth
20 Aug 2016 | 06:12
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Oooookay
20 Aug 2016 | 07:13
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I guess Fred is a beast
20 Aug 2016 | 08:23
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No p vict am beginning to suspect dat marcus, he is up to sumtin dats y his num is nt goin tru
20 Aug 2016 | 09:08
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hmmmm.....Marcus, just hope he's up to some good.....I'm suspecting Fred beat up promise......observing.
20 Aug 2016 | 12:02
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good job
20 Aug 2016 | 12:58
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Hmmmmmmmm,is like Fred beat up promise
20 Aug 2016 | 19:42
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fred used er 4 practical
20 Aug 2016 | 20:13
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Good work bro
21 Aug 2016 | 04:37
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Fred raped her
21 Aug 2016 | 09:05
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[b][color=blue]EPISODE 48[/color] We concluded our exams and it was a good one. We gathered outside talking, taking photos and other things; we were just so happy. The department organized a party but we won’t be attending it; Fred arranged a small indoor party for us, that is; Me, Promise, Mirabel, and Cynthia. And also Nancy and Vincent will also come. He took us to his house later that night; he has a beautiful house with fleet of cars. He entertained us very well and it was really fun as we were all in twos except for Cynthia, she broke up with her boyfriend. We appreciated him and left there after hours of fun and playfulness. ************ [Phone rings – Caller: Frank] Me: Hello Frank Frank: Hello, Marcus is currently in custody now Me: Huh? How was he found? Frank: Based on the report we got, he was found travelling in a night bus to his hometown when the Army stopped and searched the bus at their check-point and arrested him when they found him. Me: What will happen to him now? Frank: Back to prison of course Me: Uhmmm… ok Frank: Aren’t you supposed to be happy? I don’t understand your tone Me: There’s something you didn’t know Frank: What is it? Me: He reached me and apologized for everything he has done Frank: What? And you listened to him? Me: He sounded sincere Frank: Are you kidding? Have you forgotten all he did? Me: I didn’t forget anything ok? Frank: Then what are you saying? Me: I have forgiven him Frank: Well… that can’t change what’s going to happen to him now Me: I know, I told him to be careful Frank: Wait… are you saying that you knew he was leaving town? Me: No, got to go, update me if anything comes up Frank: Alright Me: **Hangs up** Well… it’s no longer my fault that he got caught; I tried for him after all he did to me. It’s clear that he can’t run from justice here on earth, even Dorothy faced justice even though I forgave her. ***** Promise remained in Abuja after the exams and enrolled into a computer institute for the knowledge and certificate; she can’t stay in Mirabel’s lodge anymore as Mirabel won’t be staying there anymore so I told her to stay in my apartment with Nancy because I won’t be stable as I’ll be preparing for my marriage with Mirabel, the elections and my passport and visa to the United states. I took Mirabel to my hometown and presented her to my close relatives as the girl I’m getting married to and she also did the same by taking me to her hometown yorubaland where I met with her Grand-mother from her Father’s side and her Grand-parents from her mother’s side and all the visits were favoured by God as they all went so well. Mirabel has already left the lodge, now with her Parents in Aso rock and Cynthia also with her family. Marcus’ sentence was extended and he is to spend 42 years in prison with hard labour for his uncompleted sentence, breaking out of prison, kidnapping the president’s daughter with two other ladies (that is, Nancy and Jummy) and being Dorothy’s partner in crime etc. As for me, I got back to our family’s duplex to stay and became very busy doing many things plus working on my website where money kept flowing. The house is always empty, Dad always out for business and Momma working with the first-lady and all. I’m a man now; I can go out to anywhere I want. I even travelled with Mirabel to Jos to visit Joy – my older sister and she was very happy that we visited. We spent two days there before returning back to Abuja. My communication with Ike didn’t slack not a bit; he is going to be my best man. I sent him my measurement as he requested to get the wedding suits made. I was in the house one evening resting and sipping hollandia yoghurt after working all day on the website when Nancy called me to inform me about something terrible. Nancy: It’s Promise Me: What about her? Nancy: She just came to the house with bruises on her face and some part of her body Me: What happened to her? Nancy: She said she was robbed on her way back but I don’t think that’s what actually happened Me: Why do you think she’ll lie? Nancy: She said she was robbed but nothing seemed to be missing from her possession, her phone and bag with her laptop were intact Me: Promise can’t tell lies Nancy: Believe me senior bro, I think Fred is beating her up Me: What?! Nancy: That’s what I’m thinking Me: Promise is the nicest girl I have ever known, why would Fred beat her up? No, that can’t happen Nancy: I’m the one here with her so you have to believe me; I’ve witnessed how he drags her along with him if Promise refuses to go out with him, he treats her as if he owned her completely like she’s he’s slave. He dictates on her Me: **Boiling with anger** Fred doing that to Promise?! Is he stupid? Nancy: I dunno oh… please you have to do something before this goes too far Me: But why will Promise hide this from me? Nancy: I dunno… she must be the type that doesn’t speak out even when dying slowly Me: This can’t be… that girl deserves the best in life not this Nancy: It was you guys that got her into this, you persisted her to accept that monster Me: We were only trying to do her a favour, so she’ll also have a man in her life and I thought Fred was a good guy Nancy: As it is right now, you didn’t do her any favour but brought pain to her Me: Oh God! Are you serious about all this? Nancy: She’s not enjoying the relationship bro, she’s not at all. Fred even has a night club Me: A night club? Nancy: Yeah…. one “Jollity Nite Club” Me: He took me there once before but never mentioned it belongs to him Nancy: He own and runs it, he is not a good guy. I think he do drugs as well Me: That ba$tard! I shall be there tomorrow to speak with Promise Nancy: Please do Me: What about you and Vincent? Nancy: We’re good and happy together Me: Ok good,,, see you tomorrow Nancy: Ok bye Me: Bye **hangs up** Oh no! What have we got Promise into? It’s all my fault. So he even runs a nite club, no wonder he said the club is never closed for him the time he took me there. I need to speak with Promise one on one before I will think of what to do. ~ But why has she been quiet? ~ Why didn’t she tell me what’s going on? ~ Why did she have to start telling lies? [color=red]TO BE CONTINUED…[/color][/b]
22 Aug 2016 | 11:25
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I pity promise ooo that Fred is a bastard
22 Aug 2016 | 11:36
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Fred must be a bîtch
22 Aug 2016 | 12:04
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hmmmmmmm hope the monster isn't threatening her
22 Aug 2016 | 12:04
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Fred threatened her
22 Aug 2016 | 12:33
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she is enjoying it dats why
22 Aug 2016 | 12:54
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She did all that so that you won't feel guilty.
22 Aug 2016 | 12:58
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*speechless*
22 Aug 2016 | 13:23
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oh dat gud gul..
22 Aug 2016 | 13:28
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She choose not to say
22 Aug 2016 | 13:31
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Promise deserve the best man...
22 Aug 2016 | 13:35
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I said it That bastard has been bullying and beating Promise
22 Aug 2016 | 13:39
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Maybe promise will .... Ike
22 Aug 2016 | 13:42
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questions 4 d gods...
22 Aug 2016 | 14:23
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Hmmmm
22 Aug 2016 | 14:29
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See the Emotional trauma is into now!! Y'all caused it; trying to force a lady into a relationship with a guy she didn't have feelings for.. Well its all a story!
22 Aug 2016 | 14:38
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Chia,my Sweet Promzy,this Fred Must Chop The Beatin Of His Life
22 Aug 2016 | 14:38
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Abusive relationship hmm can't deal
22 Aug 2016 | 14:39
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Dat bastard! Victor Do somtin fast, promise deserve d best
22 Aug 2016 | 14:44
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I love this storY .... Nice storyline..keep it flowinG :yes:
22 Aug 2016 | 14:45
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What!
22 Aug 2016 | 15:18
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Fred z a monster
22 Aug 2016 | 15:27
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Ehen See O
22 Aug 2016 | 15:30
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Women with Their "ETE KETE" (Hypocrites)
22 Aug 2016 | 15:32
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u need to talk to her next pls
22 Aug 2016 | 15:50
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Find out 4 us 2 read oo
22 Aug 2016 | 16:02
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Hmmm..... Following
22 Aug 2016 | 16:03
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Hhhhmmmmm
22 Aug 2016 | 19:11
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Hmmnn ..... maybe she was threatened
22 Aug 2016 | 19:27
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hmm
22 Aug 2016 | 20:09
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hmmmmmmm
22 Aug 2016 | 20:55
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dat fred is a beast
22 Aug 2016 | 22:36
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next oooo
22 Aug 2016 | 22:38
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That Fred must be a real monster...
22 Aug 2016 | 23:10
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Pls do something fast before Fred will kill Promise
23 Aug 2016 | 01:20
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Ride on please
23 Aug 2016 | 02:13
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i go break fred head
23 Aug 2016 | 02:17
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this monster might have raped promise..! it's a painful moment here ........sobbing.........
23 Aug 2016 | 02:38
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it ok
23 Aug 2016 | 02:40
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this monster might have being raped promise..! it's a painful moment here ........sobbing.........
23 Aug 2016 | 02:40
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Eyah... Poor gal
23 Aug 2016 | 03:39
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I feel pity for Marcus after he decided to change, karma law caught up with him
23 Aug 2016 | 04:08
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Next bro
23 Aug 2016 | 04:18
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maybe HD threatened her I knew it will all result to this for her
23 Aug 2016 | 05:27
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we call guys dat beat up ladies beast so fred is a beast of d worse kind
23 Aug 2016 | 05:30
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Wat a world! So sorry for marcus...HAD I KNOW comes at last,as for promise....i reserve my comment...
23 Aug 2016 | 06:41
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Too bad, I pity Promise
23 Aug 2016 | 06:58
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Oh i pity u o
23 Aug 2016 | 08:22
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What a pity! Promise of all people
23 Aug 2016 | 08:46
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promise deserve d best not that beast
23 Aug 2016 | 08:49
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Av known 4rm day 1 dat Fred is a miniach.
23 Aug 2016 | 09:05
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aww so promise had been enduring. wat an unfortunate son of a b---h @ Fred
23 Aug 2016 | 09:24
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u guys are the architect of her problem
23 Aug 2016 | 12:41
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This fred guy paaas.. Hmmmmm
23 Aug 2016 | 13:07
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Nawa ooo....
23 Aug 2016 | 13:46
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What a world. Hmmmmmmmmmmmm, ride on bro
23 Aug 2016 | 16:27
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Nawa oh o o o
23 Aug 2016 | 17:42
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Promise never deserve to be punish that way but any way there must be an answer why she was quiet and never said a word to Vict
24 Aug 2016 | 02:27
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Promise why?
24 Aug 2016 | 04:55
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Eyah, poor promise dat fred is a monster
24 Aug 2016 | 08:31
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[b][color=blue]EPISODE 49[/color] The following day in the afternoon, I got myself ready and zoomed off to the apartment with my mother’s car. I called Nancy and told her about my coming, she said she’ll be at Vincent’s place so I can speak with Promise. I got there; Promise received me in to the house. I noticed how she was trying to hide her bruises from me. I don’t want to do as if I already know about it, so I just played along with her as we engaged in conversation. Promise: You didn’t tell me you’re coming; I would’ve prepared something better Me: What did you cook? Promise: Beans and friend plantain Me: You like beans too much, just give me plantain jare Promise: Is it every day one will be eating rice? (Walking into the kitchen) I waited till she came back with a plate of fried plantain; she pushed a side stool in front of me and dropped the plate on it. I saw some bruises on hand, but I didn’t say anything yet. Promise: Should I bring water or juice for you? Me: No yoghurt? Promise: Nop Me: Ok a glass of water will do She went in and came out with a bottle of water and a glass cup and dropped it on the stool. Promise: (About to go back to her seat) Me: Pour the water for me na Promise: Do that yourself na Me: I asked for just a glass of water but you brought a bottle of it Promise: That’s how it should be na Me: Just pour it The bruises on her became more visible when she was pouring the water… Me: Promise? (Holding her left arm) Promise: What? Me: What happened to you? Promise: **hissed** some hoodlums robbed and beat me up yesterday on my way back to the house Me: Where? Promise: On the street Me: Which street? Promise: Along that Masukwai crescent Me: Hoodlums on Masukwai cresent? Promise: Yea Me: Promise are you lying to me? Promise: Why should I lie to you? Me: Because there have never been anything like that on that street, there are no hoodlums or criminals around here Promise: Yea maybe those ones came from another area Me: Ok Promise tell me the truth now, what really happened to you? Promise: I just told you na Me: I don’t believe that, tell me something else Promise: There’s nothing else to tell, that’s what happened and I’m trying to forget about it Me: Fred did this to you right? Promise: What kind of question is that? Why will Fred beat me up? What is wrong with girl?? Me: I did a background check on him and he isn’t what we think he is Promise: Really? Me: He is a bad guy, a very bad guy. He is on drugs and even owns a club where many ungodly acts takes place Promise: What are you trying to say? Me: Break up with him Promise: I should break up with him now because you tell me to? Me: Promise you have to, that guy is no-good Promise: Look! I’m sick and tired of you telling me what to do ok? What do you take me for? Me: **Shock** Promise? Promise: What?! Me: **Speechless** Promise: Not even my Father has dictated on me like this, what’s your problem? Why telling me who to be with and who not to be with? Me: Look I’m very sorry I got you involved with Fred, I really sorry I made a very huge and expensive mistake; please forgive me and break up with Fred Promise: No I won’t break up with him and stop telling me what to do! (walking out on me) Me: Promise? Promise?! Promise: **Out of sight** Oh my God! Not again!! What have I gotten this girl into? No no no no no no… another girl’s life must not be ruined because of my mistake. Oh God forgive me, it wasn’t intentional. (I dialed Nancy’s number) Nancy: Hello bro Me: Nancy the situation is now worse Nancy: What happened? Me: Promise is not listening to me, she’s so mad at me Nancy: What do we do now? Me: Is Vincent there with you? Nancy: He is in the kitchen Me: Please go give the phone to him Nancy: Ok hold on for a sec Vincent: Hello Me: Vincent Vincent: Yea? Me: Promise is in bondage, she needs all the prayers she can get please I beg you Vincent: Nancy just told me about what Fred is doing to her, that’s not good Me: It’s getting out of hand; she’s not listening to me, the solution I seek for now is prayers Vincent: Ok bro, we shall go on three days fasting and prayers for her Me: That’d be great Vincent: Don’t stress yourself, the devil will surely bow in defeat again Me: A big Amen to that Vincent: Later bro, lemme check what I have on fire Me: Ok ok **Hangs up** I did a conference call with Mirabel and Cynthia to let them what’s going on. They were also disturbed about it. They suggested we confront Fred but I impeded them from doing that, at least not yet. Once Promise agrees to break up with him, he won’t be a problem. After the call, I slowly walked towards her room and entered without knocking; I saw her sobbing on the bed. I got on the bed next to her and tried to raise her up Promise: Leave me alone (crying) Me: Please Promise… I don’t want to lose you because of this foolish mistake I made I’m begging you Promise: Why? (Seating up) tell me why? Do you know what I’ve been going through because of the love that I have for you? Do you have any idea on what I’ve been going through inside of me? As if not loving me back was not enough, you went ahead and hook me up with a beast! A tyrant! Me: I’m really sorry; I never wanted all that to happen Promise: What can your sorry do? Will it ease the pain that I’m going through? I accepted Fred in order to stop my love for you, thinking I will get to love him and forget about you, but what happened? I’m still at the losing end… Fred beat me like i deserve nothing but pain. He is jealous of our closeness that he deleted all the pictures of us from my phone. He first beat me up because of the position he met us with on the day of our second to the last exam. I never fell from any bike, he was the one that hurt me because of our closeness we’ve been having long before he came into the picture Me: Promise you should’ve spoken out Promise: How could I when the guy I love gave me to the beast himself? Me: Promise you know it can’t work between us please I beg you, kill that love I beg of you. Mirabel and I are getting married soon; please don’t do this to yourself. Promise: I have tried and tried, but I can’t help it Me: Break up with Fred and the right person for you will eventually come Promise: Do you love me? Me: Promise… Promise: Just answer me Me: Please na Promise: I know you do, you had the intention of asking me out back when we were in 100L but you couldn’t talk to me because I didn’t give you a “go ahead” signal Me: I love Mirabel Promise: You loved me first Me: That can’t change anything now; you know I’m getting married to Mirabel soon please don’t make things difficult for me and yourself Promise: It’s okay… I know I can’t do anything about that and I wish you both well Me: Thanks, I really appreciate your understanding Promise: Just facing the reality Me: But you have to break up with Fred Promise: It won’t be that easy Me: Leave that for me to handle, I got you into this mess and I’m getting you out from it Promise: **Tears dripping down from her eyes** I wipe the tears off her cheeks with my bare hand and we both hug each other for many seconds… we broke off when we heard someone coughed out. [color=red]TO BE CONTINUED…[/color][/b]
24 Aug 2016 | 11:02
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Fred the devil
24 Aug 2016 | 11:25
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ehem.... who could that be? next pls
24 Aug 2016 | 11:25
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Hmmm.....
24 Aug 2016 | 11:42
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who be dat
24 Aug 2016 | 11:51
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Fred d monster
24 Aug 2016 | 12:11
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If i get hold of that bastard
24 Aug 2016 | 12:27
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D beast z around
24 Aug 2016 | 12:32
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Mirabel caught you
24 Aug 2016 | 12:37
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hmmmmmm
24 Aug 2016 | 12:42
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Fred i guess
24 Aug 2016 | 12:44
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who b dat na
24 Aug 2016 | 12:59
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Maybe is mirabel or that beast named fred.I felt pity for Promise
24 Aug 2016 | 13:10
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that would be fred the beast
24 Aug 2016 | 13:17
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H0mmm i can feel d pains Promise is going throgh
24 Aug 2016 | 13:21
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Promise should understand him....cause he just need the best 4 her cause she is d best female frnd he had
24 Aug 2016 | 13:24
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Fred z there..
24 Aug 2016 | 13:40
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Lolz next joor
24 Aug 2016 | 13:47
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emotional episode
24 Aug 2016 | 13:48
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Fred
24 Aug 2016 | 13:55
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Am sure is fred
24 Aug 2016 | 14:28
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hmmmmm, i smell trouble
24 Aug 2016 | 14:52
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Na hu be dat
24 Aug 2016 | 14:59
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That should be fred
24 Aug 2016 | 15:04
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He Don Come
24 Aug 2016 | 15:08
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Ehya,so Sorry 4 D Bae
24 Aug 2016 | 15:32
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I Think The Intruder Is No Other Person Than Mirabel. Please Make Your Update To Come Fast O, Thanks
24 Aug 2016 | 15:47
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Whats wrong with fred... He knew u guys where close and yet he is still complaining
24 Aug 2016 | 15:47
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it is Mirabel.
24 Aug 2016 | 16:05
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eheheheh ..... Another beating day
24 Aug 2016 | 16:07
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Fred the cougher I guess
24 Aug 2016 | 16:12
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Oh promise..
24 Aug 2016 | 16:16
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Fred I guess
24 Aug 2016 | 16:34
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I'm sure that's Fred the idiot. Thunder wey dey do press-up go fire am left right front center.
24 Aug 2016 | 18:00
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hhmmm
24 Aug 2016 | 18:32
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Tht beast . . I never taught he will do tht to Promise
24 Aug 2016 | 18:35
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Mirabel
24 Aug 2016 | 19:18
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Son of a beast!
24 Aug 2016 | 19:32
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Fred u are a beast Nice one bro
24 Aug 2016 | 19:35
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0h God!!!
24 Aug 2016 | 19:38
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Who is That...
24 Aug 2016 | 20:13
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Now PlayiNg #What Is Love By Empire ..... :yes:
24 Aug 2016 | 20:14
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Fred the beast
24 Aug 2016 | 22:51
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Oʍɢ. Mʏ ʄɨʀst ċօʍʍɛռt օռ coolval
25 Aug 2016 | 10:14
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Who be dat, hope its nt fred sha
25 Aug 2016 | 11:43
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u don die be dat
25 Aug 2016 | 12:34
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hmmm trouble is coming
25 Aug 2016 | 19:50
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sometimes helping someone to love is bad,victor was wrong by determining promise happiness, well the deed have been done just try and get her out of that mess @victor
25 Aug 2016 | 19:57
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neхт
25 Aug 2016 | 20:50
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Is dat not fred again
26 Aug 2016 | 01:14
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Fred is really a beast, I just feel for Promise. If it is Fred that entered pls Vict do something about it
26 Aug 2016 | 03:53
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[b][color=blue]EPISODE 50[/color] We turned around and saw Nancy standing in the middle of the entrance; I didn’t shut the door when I came in. Me: Nancy, you’re back Nancy: Yeah… I came to check on Promise and the door was opened so i… I’m here Promise: Welcome Nancy: Thanks! So… what’s going on? Me: She has agreed to break-up with him Nancy: Really? Whoa… great! Call him now and break the news to him Me: Not on phone, she’ll have to meet and tell him face to face Nancy: Huh? Me: Yea Nancy: Can she do it? Promise can you? Promise: Victor I don’t think I can Me: Of course you can, we’ll stay behind you Promise: I can’t face him anymore Me: He won’t leave you alone by just sending him a break-up text or call; you have to be bold to tell him to his face Promise: I can’t Me: You’re not going to face him all by yourself; we’ll be there for you. Just break the news to him with all sincerity and boldness and walk away from him, I’ll take over afterwards Nancy: That could work Promise: And if he keeps coming? I don’t want what happened to you and Mirabel by Dorothy and Marcus Me: I don’t want that to happen either and that’s why we have to act now Promise: Ok, we should do it tomorrow Me: No problem Nancy: What if he comes by today? I don’t think they’ve met today Me: **Looked at the time** it’s 17 minutes to 6:00 Nancy: Not late for him, he even comes around 7 or 8pm Me: Then we do it today if he comes around, Promise hope you can handle it? Promise: Ok Me: Good Promise: What about you? Me: What about me? Promise: Will you sleep over or you’re going back? Me: I’m sleeping over Nancy: So… since she’s agreed to break-up with him, are we going ahead with the fasting and prayer? Me: Yes so that everything will go well Promise: Fasting and prayer? Me: Well ermmm… the thing is, I thought you lost it because of how you reacted when I asked you to break-up with Fred, so we wanted God to intervened and bring you to your senses **teasingly** Promise: You’re not serious Me: You won’t understand, because I’ve never seen you like that before… Promise: And whose fault was it? Me: Mine Promise: So you know? Good thing you admitted it Me: So what’s for dinner? Nancy: I think we still have some left over beans Promise: Yea Me: For who and who? Abeg make una go cook something else Nancy: Yes sir Promise: What do you mean by yes sir? We’re going to cook again because of him? Nancy: Yes because I want to sleep peacefully tonight, let’s go if you want that too Promise: Not me Nancy: Ok o **walks away** Me: You won’t follow her? Promise: As your cook or gini? Better know those you boss around Me: Really? Promise: Yea Me: Oya get up Promise: No Me: Get up Promise: No I rushed her and start tickling her playfully, she starts to giggle and laughing anyhow till I grabbed her up and took her out of the room heading to the kitchen while she was still laughing out loud. We stepped into the parlor and saw Fred stepping in as well. He paused immediately he saw us in that position and removed his glasses from his face. Didn’t he come with a car? Why didn’t he horn so we’ll know about his arrival?? So he is so regular around here that the security/gateman will just open up for him??? Our laughing face immediately turned normal, and then I slowly dropped Promise on her feet. He let out a smile of which I know it’s a fake one. I’m sure he’ll try to beat her up for that. Fred: I can see you guys are having fun Me and Promise both didn’t say anything Fred: Hey mahn **giving his hand for a handshake and I shook hands with him** Baby… go dress up lemme take you somewhere special Promise: Fred we need to talk Fred: Yea we can do that when we get there or on our way in the car Promise: No, now please Fred: You sound serious, hope no problem? Promise: Let’s meet outside **walking outside** He smiled at me while doing a cross sign before going out. I sat on the couch to watch Tv but didn’t pay full attention to it. Nancy came to the parlor and said she heard Fred’s voice. Me: They’re outside Nancy: By their selves? What if he hurt her? Me: I doubt it, he can’t do that Nancy: But we have to be sure, lemme go and see what’s happening Me: Nancy let it be, he can’t… (I got distracted when Promise stormed in and headed straight to her room) I stood up then Fred also walked in following and calling her name. He came back to the parlor about two minutes after he knocked and knocked and called out Promise’ name but she didn’t open the door for him. Fred: You got to help me mahn, Promise is breaking up with me Me: **speechless** Nancy silently walked to the kitchen. Fred: Why’d she decided to break-up with me all of a sudden? Please help me talk to her Me: Sorry I can’t do that Fred: What? Why?? Me: I don’t want to meddle in her private life anymore, I’ll respect whatever decision she decides to take Fred: But this is a terrible decision! Please talk her out of it Me: You’re a man, talk to her and fix your relationship and leave me out of it. If she accepts you, fine, and if she refuses there’s nothing I can do about it Fred: She doesn’t want to listen to me, she listens to you more than anyone mahn… please talk to her for me, I really love her Me: No you don’t Fred: Excuse me? Me: You don’t love her Fred: Of course I do! Me: How can you be beating up the girl you claim to love? A gentle and responsible man will never do that to a lady no matter what she did to you Fred: She told you that I beat her up? Me: No she didn’t had to, the constant bruises on her says it all Fred: It could be something else that happened to her, like an accident or… Me: **Cuts-in** Spare me all that Fred, Promise has never had a single scratch on her body for the past four years that I’ve known her then she started having them constantly from when you both started your relationship Fred: The truth is I didn’t mean to be hurting her, just that, that ugh, just some little misunderstanding that every couple have and i….. Ok look I promise never to hurt her again Me: Go tell that to her not me, I will respect whatever decision she make Fred: You and I know she’s not coming back to me if you don’t interfere, and you also know we would never have dated if not for you Me: And that made her loses her trust and respect that she has for me because I got her involved with a guy that hurt and disrespects her Fred: I’m sorry it’s all my fault, it won’t happen again trust me, just give me a second chance Me: Sorry mahn, I’m not gonna do that mistake again. It’s her decision to make Fred: You don’t want to help me because you’ve been sleeping with her! Mirabel: What? I turned and saw Mirabel at the doorpost. [color=red]TO BE CONTINUED…[/color][/b]
26 Aug 2016 | 09:45
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Huh
26 Aug 2016 | 10:36
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Omo see problem o...... [color =blue]But seriously you need to mind how you talk @Fred...[/color] [color =red]Next please[/color]
26 Aug 2016 | 10:41
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Funny?
26 Aug 2016 | 10:42
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Eee which kind wahala be this na
26 Aug 2016 | 10:45
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What this guy problem
26 Aug 2016 | 11:21
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What is the problem with this guy
26 Aug 2016 | 11:24
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Fred are you okay?? Mira, don't mind Fred o! Promise, i am sure some one even more better than your long time crush will locate you soon. Victor, i hope you get yourself at of this mess fast. #dropMyPen#
26 Aug 2016 | 13:27
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Mirabel won't buy that shit
26 Aug 2016 | 13:35
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mad Fred
26 Aug 2016 | 13:40
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Problem upon problem, dis Fred na something else
26 Aug 2016 | 14:11
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Oh My!! am beginning to paint pictures of this scene!! :unsure:
26 Aug 2016 | 14:17
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waoh!!! Fred is unfaithful human being
26 Aug 2016 | 14:18
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omo c yawa ooooo
26 Aug 2016 | 22:09
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Gobe see wahala
27 Aug 2016 | 00:35
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What
27 Aug 2016 | 00:44
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Abi This Fred Da Mad Ni
27 Aug 2016 | 00:45
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Another wahala....
27 Aug 2016 | 00:54
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Another wahala... but Mirabel should trust victor by now.
27 Aug 2016 | 00:55
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Nice story,....
27 Aug 2016 | 03:22
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Hmmn
27 Aug 2016 | 03:54
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gan gan......nxt oh
27 Aug 2016 | 04:06
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This Fred is a big fool! The same guy you are asking to help you out is the person you are accusing of sleeping with her. You just spoke out what is bothering you!
27 Aug 2016 | 04:10
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Its. Too bad, some guys Α̲̅я̩̥̊ε̲̣̣̣̥ beast
27 Aug 2016 | 04:14
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Ooooo! . . Wahala here oooo
27 Aug 2016 | 04:19
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Fred, your not a man but a beast. How cn you beat up a girl that was hooked up with you?
27 Aug 2016 | 04:46
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Beast indeed
27 Aug 2016 | 04:56
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Woow I love this nyc one Vames
27 Aug 2016 | 05:27
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lolzz...wen did Mirabel got dir?
27 Aug 2016 | 05:34
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Lol..mirabel ave to trust victor
27 Aug 2016 | 05:47
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Fred is really crazy
27 Aug 2016 | 05:52
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Hmmm, na wao, see serious talk oh@fred?
27 Aug 2016 | 05:55
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hmm Marcus kwa ??? How manage
27 Aug 2016 | 06:00
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is that why u beat her up
27 Aug 2016 | 06:18
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wahala dey
27 Aug 2016 | 06:24
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For Mirabel mind it wil be "Tell me is not true"
27 Aug 2016 | 07:32
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This guy is a beast o
27 Aug 2016 | 08:20
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Mtchewww .... Stupid fred
27 Aug 2016 | 08:24
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E don happen, wahala don burst. Next ooo
27 Aug 2016 | 09:08
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Mr writer talk to fred ok, fred is really disgrace to manhood. We fred are different frm dis fred guy
27 Aug 2016 | 09:11
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This is the part I have been waiting for. Vict, ride on
27 Aug 2016 | 10:15
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Fred want to fuck up... I just pray mirable doesn't act stupid
27 Aug 2016 | 13:20
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Nite of Commotion :g :s
27 Aug 2016 | 13:21
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humhhum
27 Aug 2016 | 13:31
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Speechless
27 Aug 2016 | 13:44
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FRED MMMM..
27 Aug 2016 | 14:50
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Provlem ** In hausa voice**
27 Aug 2016 | 14:55
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huh
27 Aug 2016 | 15:21
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Lol... It must be soap opera.... Can't stop laughinq
27 Aug 2016 | 15:55
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Gha ghan ghan Ghan E Don Set
27 Aug 2016 | 16:20
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wat!!
27 Aug 2016 | 17:57
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Fred has gone nuts :b
27 Aug 2016 | 19:02
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Gombe sele... Mirabel cnt and mustn't believe that shit....
27 Aug 2016 | 19:38
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Radaada
27 Aug 2016 | 23:16
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Who coughed out?
28 Aug 2016 | 00:48
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What the f**k is this fred talking about?
28 Aug 2016 | 02:25
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Hnmm! Getting more complicated..
28 Aug 2016 | 03:56
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This Fred of a guy enh!
28 Aug 2016 | 03:57
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What? Fred, pls mind d way u talk to Vict o
28 Aug 2016 | 04:16
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Kukukukuku.
28 Aug 2016 | 06:56
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Lol...this fred deserve a dirty slap at the butt,gosh! he has no iota of remorse in him.
28 Aug 2016 | 16:58
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see yawa
28 Aug 2016 | 18:43
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Mirabel trust ur guy
28 Aug 2016 | 19:57
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Yawa Don Gas
29 Aug 2016 | 06:50
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If mirabel believes,, i go just vex
29 Aug 2016 | 07:46
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This is the part I dread most
29 Aug 2016 | 08:05
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Vict next episode please
29 Aug 2016 | 08:43
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Nice one @Victo ?
29 Aug 2016 | 09:24
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this Fred no get sense o.
29 Aug 2016 | 09:59
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[b][color=blue]EPISODE 51[/color] I turned around and saw Mirabel standing at the doorpost; it’s surprising because she came unannounced. Mirabel: Fred, what was that you just said? Fred: I think your boyfriend and my girlfriend having an affair Mirabel: Oh really? Fred: Can’t you see their so-called friendship? They’re having an affair right under our nose Me: Mirabel… Mirabel: **cuts-in** Wait, I’ll handle this (gesturing her hand towards me) You Fred, we had the wrong impression towards you Fred: What are you talking about? Mirabel: You’re not good for Promise and I’m telling you now to go your way and never come back, it’s a clear warning Fred: Warning for what? Why telling me I’m not good for her? No, I’m going nowhere! You can’t tell me to leave. I love Promise and will not let go of her just like that Mirabel: You’re not getting it, do you? Are you tired of being the son of a minister? That can be arranged and you’ll be the son of nobody. Are you tired of running your night club? That can also be arranged and the club will be shut down permanently. Or are you tired of living a good life? That can be arranged and you can imagine what will happen next Fred: Are you threatening me? Mirabel: Not really, just telling you what will happen the next time you show yourself to Promise or to anyone that’s related to us one way or the other Fred: Can we talk privately? Mirabel: There’s nothing to talk with you, just go away. We’ve forgiven you for the wrongs you did to Promise and our trust that you betrayed, so just go now! Fred: Why are you doing this? I really love Promise; I sincerely apologize for my shortcomings, please give me another chance and I’ll be the best man I can be for her Mirabel: Like I said earlier, we’ve forgiven you, but we’re not taking any chances no more Fred: Please, I promise never to hurt her in whatsoever way again Mirabel: Get out of here Fred! Fred: Plea…. Mirabel: Get out!! Fred: Ok alright, I’ll leave… but, I will advise you to watch those two closely; they have something hidden under the radar Mirabel: One more word from you and I promise you’re not gonna like the outcome of it. Frank! Frank: (from outside) Yes? Mirabel: Come get this ingrate out from here! Frank walked in with Jummy and two mobile policemen; they wanted to drag him out, but he behaved himself and told them not to touch him that he’ll leave and he left. Mirabel: (to me and Nancy that’s with her) it is done guys! Where is Promise? Nancy: she’s inside, lemme go call her **ran off** Me: Thanks for not listening to what he said Mirabel: That’s nonsense, why would he be after the girl that’s cheating on him? And besides, I trust Promise can’t do such thing **walking inside** Me: **confused** wh… what? Mirabel: What? **turning around** Me: What do you mean by you trust Promise can’t do such a thing? What about me? Mirabel: What about you? Me: Are you kidding? Mirabel: **laughs** I trust Promise 100% and I trust you over 100% darling… so if I say I trust Promise, you should know your where you stand, and please it’s enough, let’s not talk about what doesn’t make any sense Me: **relaxed** Yeah… that’s my fiancée Mirabel: You said Promise refused to listen when you told her to break-up with Fred, hope she hasn’t fallen in stupid love with him? Me: Which love? She later came back to her senses and broke up with him the moment he came here, that’s why he’s been talking rubbish Mirabel: Oh… Me: What? Mirabel: I thought I was the one that took care of him not knowing that she already broke up with him Me: Hey sweetheart, you did something great here, you finalized everything because if not for what you just did, i’m sure he won’t stop coming for her. Mirabel: Yea… I had to warn him to clear off so Promise won’t go through what we both went through in the hands of Marcus and Dorothy Me: That’s right Mirabel: Where are they na? Me: Maybe we should go in there Mirabel: Yea let’s go **walking inside** Me: Sweetheart… Mirabel: **turns around** Yea? Me: You know we haven’t seen each other for a while Mirabel: Yea, I know… (walking back to me) so sorry my love, I was just so focused on fixing Promise’ predicament <She gave me a tight hug> Mirabel: Missed you so much Me: I missed you more Nancy: **coughs** Promise is here o… Mirabel: **breaking off from the hug** Promise… She went to her and they hugged each other for some seconds… Mirabel: How are you holding up? Promise: I’m fine Mirabel: Sure? Promise: Sure **smiling** Mirabel: Good then, I was so worried about you. Sorry for hooking you up with that pervert, now we’ll understand and respect your decisions Promise: It’s okay… I understand you guys were worried about me and you all care for my happiness, of which I appreciate Me: Boring…. **teasingly** They all laughed Me: Nancy, where the food na? Nancy: I thought we’re discussing something important? Me: Discussing what? Go bring food abeg Nancy: Nawa o… She went into the kitchen, Mirabel joined and they came with the food and we ate peacefully but Promise refused to eat, that she’ll eat the remnant beans later. Me: Nancy, you should update Vincent Nancy: I’ve already done that but not in details though, I’ll tell him everything when we meet tomorrow Me: Of course, that’s what you do best Later that night when we all bade ourselves goodnight and went to our bedrooms, Mirabel and I discussed on many things before she slept off while I was working in my website. It was around 11.pm when a text message came from Promise and it read “Thanks for always been there for me, no one can beat the spot you have in my heart” I smiled and replied her “I know that *winkz*” I took it as a friendship thing and nothing else, and I’m sure that’s the same way she also took it as. Then we started chatting like-play like-play through SMS where each message costs ₦4.00 Promise: Why can’t you just say thank you instead of that reply? It’s embarrassing na Me: Embarrassing for what? Or don’t you also know your spot in my heart? *winkz* Promise: Whatever! **Minutes later** Me: Why are you still up? Promise: Can’t sleep, trying to watch tv but it’s not helping, what about you? Me: Surfing the web… you’re in the living room? Promise: Yea Me: Ok I’m coming Promise: What about Mirabel? Me: Sleeping Promise: Ok I put on a shirt and went to the sitting room. I sat with her while we talked, teased each other and laughed out till she felt sleepy. We bade each other goodnight for the second time that night then I walked back to room. I opened the door and met Mirabel who seemed to be going out. She stopped when she saw me and then stretches her hand towards me handing my phone over to me. [color=red]TO BE CONTINUED…[/color][/b]
29 Aug 2016 | 10:01
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please vote for me as ur favorite writer via [email protected] or +2349037042410 via text/whatsapp. Voting closes on Wednesday 31st
29 Aug 2016 | 10:05
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odaran ni bobo Fred yi o
29 Aug 2016 | 10:13
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Opps she has red your conversation with problem; sorry promise... Another story.
29 Aug 2016 | 10:31
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Wahala Dey
29 Aug 2016 | 10:31
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It's nothing nah....let see how mirabel is gonna react sha...
29 Aug 2016 | 11:00
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ahhhh gobelicious leleyio ooooo
29 Aug 2016 | 11:22
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I sense something bad
29 Aug 2016 | 11:24
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Heii,whats This 1 Again
29 Aug 2016 | 11:24
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Nice one, next!
29 Aug 2016 | 11:28
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Oh my....
29 Aug 2016 | 12:01
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Ok
29 Aug 2016 | 12:05
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wot could it be
29 Aug 2016 | 12:22
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Hope d phone has nothing dat will implicate you
29 Aug 2016 | 12:40
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NA WOW O PLS NEXT
29 Aug 2016 | 12:51
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Pls vote for me as your favorite writer
29 Aug 2016 | 13:03
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noo
29 Aug 2016 | 13:05
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Holding ur phone, hope it's passworded
29 Aug 2016 | 13:41
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Just waiting patiently 4 wat will happen next
29 Aug 2016 | 13:44
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So dis story nvr finish
29 Aug 2016 | 13:53
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Lol...u guys gönna ave problem
29 Aug 2016 | 14:14
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Omo
29 Aug 2016 | 14:14
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Next
29 Aug 2016 | 14:18
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ur own don finish,she go believe Fred talk.
29 Aug 2016 | 14:39
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Vict..i hope she won't av a doubtful mind
29 Aug 2016 | 14:40
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hmmmm.....I just hope it's not heading the way I am thinking o
29 Aug 2016 | 14:44
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gobelicious
29 Aug 2016 | 15:21
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Ok
29 Aug 2016 | 15:55
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Hmmmmm......
29 Aug 2016 | 16:03
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hummmmm
29 Aug 2016 | 16:20
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Thank God d devil s gone...
29 Aug 2016 | 16:43
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Busted
29 Aug 2016 | 17:00
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Wow... Am back... Thumbs up bro... you're doing a great work
29 Aug 2016 | 17:22
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Speechless for the time been . . Let see wht will happen neXt
29 Aug 2016 | 17:37
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@Japhola welcome back bro... thanks man
29 Aug 2016 | 17:44
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interesting........ m never tired of D's story, thumbs up to d author
29 Aug 2016 | 17:45
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anoda challenge o x3 (skul song)
29 Aug 2016 | 17:50
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hmmmn promise go cause kasala fr u nd Mirabel, take heed
29 Aug 2016 | 17:53
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I fear for your life
29 Aug 2016 | 18:32
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hmmnn ..... Following
29 Aug 2016 | 19:00
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I hope mirabel understands d msg chat in full
29 Aug 2016 | 19:04
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yawa don gas oooooo
29 Aug 2016 | 19:26
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too bad, a second break up within 24 hours?
29 Aug 2016 | 20:34
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Let it not be that she saw the message and start thinking stupid
29 Aug 2016 | 21:10
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Hmm....next episode oooo....The suspence is too much
30 Aug 2016 | 02:46
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I pray mirabel believes what you will tell her
30 Aug 2016 | 04:57
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Omo see gobe
30 Aug 2016 | 05:10
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Nice 1....that is friendship
30 Aug 2016 | 06:32
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Hmmm! Yawa don gahz
30 Aug 2016 | 06:52
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Hmm mirabel don see d message
30 Aug 2016 | 09:16
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Mirable has read ur conversation with promise, i hope she wunt take it as sumtin
30 Aug 2016 | 09:32
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Haha see ur life
30 Aug 2016 | 11:44
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okay i go vote...shebi na to vote dat one na small tin
30 Aug 2016 | 12:40
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What a grt suspense
30 Aug 2016 | 13:10
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Hmmm! Blunder loading...
30 Aug 2016 | 13:38
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@ Vict-vames et promise, this una play-play go soon turn true-true later if una no careful now like very careful
30 Aug 2016 | 14:37
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Be careful how you do things with promise.
30 Aug 2016 | 16:45
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hmmm she have read ur msg
30 Aug 2016 | 18:54
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I just hope Mirabel don't interpret your text msges with Promzy
30 Aug 2016 | 20:29
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[b][color=blue]EPISODE 52[/color] The look on her face when she was handing over the phone to me was so unusual; i collected the phone from her thinking I got a night call or something. Me: What’s up dear? Mirabel: Victor where have you been? Me: What’s wrong that you even called me by my name? Mirabel: I’ve been up for some minutes and I didn’t see you here or in the toilet. Then a message popped into your phone from Promise telling you to try and sleep immediately you get into the room, I scrolled up out of curiosity and found those chats you both had, what explanation can you give me Victor? I trusted both of you with all my heart! Me: Honey what are you saying? That’s nothing I promise Mirabel: Nothing? Me: Come on dear, you have to calm down, what is the thing you saw that’s making you to react this way? It was just a harmless friendly chat Mirabel: Stop making a fool out of me, what did she mean by nobody can beat the spot you have in her heart? And you also confessed that she also have a spot in your heart, what kind of spot is that? You went to meet up with her because I was sleeping. Victor why did you do this to me? Why? I gave you my everything Me: Mirabel you have to calm down and allow me to talk Mirabel: Of course I’ll let you talk, go on and give me another definition of the chats and the meeting you both had Me: Please sit down Mirabel: I’m fine standing Me: Mirabel you have to sit down so we can talk and reach an understanding, this is not how a couple can settle their misunderstanding Mirabel: **sits down** Me: (I sat down on the bed too) you have to trust me; I cannot do anything like that. She was only thanking me as a friend and how I’ve been there for her, that no one can replace me in doing all that. Sweetheart please don’t misinterpret it. You know too well that I can’t do something like that and neither can Promise do such thing Mirabel: Yes I trust you both, but that chat is like that of those having an affair Me: It’s nothing dear Mirabel: Like when you said you’re coming and she asked what about me and you told her that I’m sleeping before you went to meet up with her… what did you even go to her for by this of the night when everyone is sleeping? Me: She couldn’t sleep just as you see in the message, and I thought it was about Fred, so I went to her in the living room to cheer her up. Mirabel: It’s just too suspicious Ok? Please I don’t like something this. I have to say your closeness with her should be redefined so I won’t be suspecting anything please… I have never been suspicious of you for anything; I always believe whatever you say until I saw those disturbing messages that got me so worried Me: You have nothing to worry about dear Mirabel: No let’s make some things clear, I’m here to be your friend and companion and everything you need, so please… your friendship can continue but not this close anymore Me: Alright, no problem Mirabel: I will let this go, but I’m begging you now, don’t cheat on me and never give me any reason to doubt you Me: Ok my princess Mirabel: I am very serious Me: Relax na, it’s me oh… (Going for my magic move) Mirabel: You that got me very worried this night abi morning I threw my phone on bed and drew her closer to me by holding waist Me: Sorry for the misconception… I hope I didn’t lose any percentage of your trust for me? Mirabel: You lost 80% of it Me: Ah! Mirabel: Kidding buh you almost lost it Me: That’s never going to happen; I rather gain more of your trust than lose a single percentage of it Mirabel: Okay… now can you let go of my waist so I can sleep? Me: If not until you smile, I won’t Mirabel: **She let out a fake smile** Can I go now? Me: Okay… I let go of her, then she climb the bed facing the other side. I knew we were not all cool yet, so I thought of doing something about it. I joined her on the bed and placed my hand around her waist Me: Sweetheart…? Mirabel: What now? Me: I can see you’re still mad at me, I will just tell you what I wanted to tell you later in the day **withdrawing myself from her** Mirabel: What is it? Me: Don’t worry… I’ll just tell you later Mirabel: No I want to hear it now Me: Ok, if you really want to hear it, come rest your head on my shoulder Mirabel: **Hesitating** Me: Come na… it’s about our wedding oh… When she hear that one, nobody told her before she brought herself closer to me. Mirabel: Ok what is it? Me: Uhmmmm… I think we should start taking our pre-wedding pictures from now Mirabel: What for? Me: You don’t like it? Mirabel: No, we don’t need it Me: Why? Mirabel: It’s just not needed, what are we going to do with it? To post on social media and all, I don’t like it Me: I thought it’d be fun Mirabel: You know what? Me: What? Mirabel: Instead of this pre-wedding thing, let’s just have all the fun together without the world knowing about it until the day we’ll get married Me: Okay… Mirabel: And stop holding my waist anyhow anytime you want, because it’s not yours yet. Me: **Laughs** No problem, I’d be the proud owner come next month Mirabel: Until then, you’re strictly restricted Me: It’s okay… I’ve heard you, we need to sleep now I took my pillow and positioned myself on the floor to sleep Mirabel: What are you doing? Me: Well… so you won’t rest on my chest later while I’m asleep, as it’s not yet yours to lay on whenever you feel like Mirabel: Oh really? Me: Goodnight, love you… Mirabel: Goodnight! **BLACK-OUT** I woke up the following morning and saw Mirabel resting comfortably on my chest while on the floor; I just smiled and placed my hand around her waist. Later that morning when Nancy has gone to school, and Promise to her computer institute leaving Mirabel and I in the house while Frank and Jummy were also around. Mirabel was in the kitchen preparing lunch while I was in the room working in my website with hollandia yoghurt by my side, sipping it little by little until Mirabel suddenly stormed into the room looking infuriated. Mirabel: Victor what’s the meaning of this rubbish?! Me: **Surprised and bemused** what is it? Mirabel: I saw this diary somewhere in the kitchen which is supposed to be for Promise; take and look what I found inside… [color=red](TO BE CONTINUED)[/color][/b]
31 Aug 2016 | 11:58
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first to comment carry on
31 Aug 2016 | 12:02
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see suspense
31 Aug 2016 | 12:11
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dere is fire on d mountain
31 Aug 2016 | 12:14
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danger
31 Aug 2016 | 12:14
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seriously..!
31 Aug 2016 | 12:32
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Who knows what's in the diary.....
31 Aug 2016 | 12:37
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hmmm see suspense
31 Aug 2016 | 12:59
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lol Mirabel take it easy on yourself b4 you do or say what you gonna regret later.
31 Aug 2016 | 13:09
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suspense
31 Aug 2016 | 13:14
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Trouble looming I hope promise keep her love to herself n don't ruin your relationship
31 Aug 2016 | 13:15
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This is cool, am loving this....i hope they would later get married....i am being forced to comment due to how i am feeling right now
31 Aug 2016 | 13:17
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which kind wahala b all D's self.... promise z becumin a thorn in d flesh, take heed of her to prevent problem btwn u. nd Mirabel ooh
31 Aug 2016 | 13:17
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Hmm wahala
31 Aug 2016 | 13:17
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Uuuh! LA LA promise why na
31 Aug 2016 | 13:23
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Hope they would get married...i am seriously cool with this story....why cant you update it everyday....please....
31 Aug 2016 | 13:24
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Just few days to the wedding, why all ds na
31 Aug 2016 | 13:24
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Now mirabel will start thinking over what fred said
31 Aug 2016 | 13:26
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Chaii wahala dey o
31 Aug 2016 | 13:32
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Hmmm. Mirabel just calm down
31 Aug 2016 | 13:43
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Fred is ruining your relationship with mirabel
31 Aug 2016 | 13:53
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Suspense Next
31 Aug 2016 | 14:16
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Abeg oga victor reduce this suspense.
31 Aug 2016 | 14:18
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ohh promise stop Na
31 Aug 2016 | 14:23
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again! Victor slow your relationship between you and promise to avoid either know.
31 Aug 2016 | 14:24
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See suspense o I hope say Promzy no profess her love for Vict in writing for that diary
31 Aug 2016 | 14:33
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Okpetu, Die'ebi Promise O'rue' Vi Kitcheni Na Wo ( Wahala, Wetin Promise Book Dey Do For The Kitchen.
31 Aug 2016 | 14:34
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Promzy Kofess D Luv He Had 4 Vames In Her Diary,,u Killing Me Wit Suspense Oo
31 Aug 2016 | 14:37
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diary about u.
31 Aug 2016 | 14:40
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What's that she find out in that note? Error.?. (this grammer needs some correction please). Simple grammer I no fit spoke.
31 Aug 2016 | 14:40
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Wetin dey work dis Mirabel self
31 Aug 2016 | 15:03
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hmmn how will ths end am waiting to see
31 Aug 2016 | 15:12
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hmmmmmm promise really loves u I hope u end up with her :mrgreen: @vict-vames will be like whaaat!!!!!!
31 Aug 2016 | 15:13
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Coolvallers, it's been long oo I even thought this story would have ended by now
31 Aug 2016 | 15:15
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:b
31 Aug 2016 | 15:16
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hey! nawa o....just hoping you'll both scale through this stage of trials and challenges in your relationship.
31 Aug 2016 | 15:19
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The suspense is killing Click here to register on Swisscoin. http://swisscoin.eu/Chillzemy
31 Aug 2016 | 15:21
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kai! dis z gettin mur serious oo... ride on vic
31 Aug 2016 | 15:39
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Chia anoda wahala nxt plz
31 Aug 2016 | 15:39
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hmm dis somtin else.
31 Aug 2016 | 15:46
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hmmm
31 Aug 2016 | 15:59
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wat is dere?
31 Aug 2016 | 16:03
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Abeg o, make dis una relationship no scatter bc of Promzy o!
31 Aug 2016 | 16:05
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omoh nawa oooo even if she wrote anything about victor i aint tink u should confront victor bt the owner
31 Aug 2016 | 16:07
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from chatting to diary... . every suspense in des story is a hit from back to d front...... Victvames ti takeover :b :whistle:
31 Aug 2016 | 16:20
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Like my yoruba friends will say Mo gbe!(winks hope i got the spelling)...lol.wahala deyooo
31 Aug 2016 | 16:23
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think i knw wats in d diary
31 Aug 2016 | 16:41
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His he 4 real?
31 Aug 2016 | 16:49
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Promise gonna spoil thinz 4 u guyz...
31 Aug 2016 | 17:18
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Hmmm... Danger ahead
31 Aug 2016 | 17:22
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Abeg mirabel should calm down jor... Wetin gan self.. After all he is not dating promise.. It is a crime for her to let him she loves him.. It's better you use your common sense sha...
31 Aug 2016 | 17:38
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Haaa .... Asiri ti tu !
31 Aug 2016 | 17:41
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Hmmmmmmmmm. Promise has poured all her heart in the diary.
31 Aug 2016 | 17:54
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suspense oh.....
31 Aug 2016 | 18:03
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Wahala here again ooo . . I can't wait for the next update . . Ride on oooo .. I dey wait
31 Aug 2016 | 18:08
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hee hee,,,, Diary again??? Nawa ooo
31 Aug 2016 | 18:25
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What's the contents??
31 Aug 2016 | 18:44
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Wat do u find?
31 Aug 2016 | 19:14
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hmmmm, following.
31 Aug 2016 | 19:38
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Hhhhmmmm
31 Aug 2016 | 19:44
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Na wa oo... Fred have just succeeded in poisoning ur mind
31 Aug 2016 | 20:04
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hmmmmmm dis is crious o wat apen next bcus dis suspence is too much o
31 Aug 2016 | 20:05
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hnmmmmm i smile danger
31 Aug 2016 | 20:14
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suspense is killing .....
31 Aug 2016 | 20:54
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Abeg this story don too tay
31 Aug 2016 | 21:19
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Uhm? .... I cant predict this one o
31 Aug 2016 | 23:11
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I smell trouble on it way o
1 Sep 2016 | 01:12
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Intruiging Story!
1 Sep 2016 | 02:35
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suspense too much
1 Sep 2016 | 02:38
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Just don't know what to say
1 Sep 2016 | 03:49
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Uhmmm..dis one is strong
1 Sep 2016 | 04:43
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nothing to worry about it's her's not urs
1 Sep 2016 | 05:27
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suspence oooooo
1 Sep 2016 | 06:17
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Na Wa For Dis Mirabel Next Pls
1 Sep 2016 | 06:56
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WHAT DID U SEE AGAIN THIS GIRL.. NA WOW
1 Sep 2016 | 08:14
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hmmm,gobe is about to happen,i tynk d diary contains a write up of promise's love for victor
1 Sep 2016 | 09:22
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Another Trouble Be That O
1 Sep 2016 | 09:48
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Abeg dis story don d bored. summarize it
1 Sep 2016 | 10:31
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[color=blue]Yes we made it guys! We won… “The President’s Daughter And I” is ranked No.1 as the best story of the Month! I appreciate all my readers for your votes and supports! God bless you all…[/color] [b][color=blue]EPISODE 53[/color] I dunno what’s in the diary, but her reaction just got me feeling so nervous and scared on what she might have discovered. Me: Why would you go through her diary? It’s so not right na, you’re invading her priv… Mirabel: **cuts in** If I hadn’t gone through it, I wouldn’t have discovered this secret you both are hiding Me: That diary must be containing her private life, please respect it and go keep it for her; I don’t want to know what’s in it please… Mirabel: Do you even know what I’m talking about here? I’m talking about a lady professing her love for my man that’s supposed to be her friend. What do you know about this victor? Me: Her diary should be her 100% privacy; I didn’t even know she has a diary till now. So… whatever it is you see in it is her privacy please Mirabel, stop all this doubts for it’s not helping matters at all. How can this help our marriage that’s coming next month? Please don’t give the devil a chance to destroy us Mirabel: It would’ve been mare doubts if I had no prove, Fred warned me about something like this, and look what’s happening? From flirty chats to professing of love in a diary, that you’re the only man she loves, is that also just a friend thing? So you’re even the reason why she can’t have a boyfriend? No wonder! I thought it was about her being a good girl and a saint, not knowing she has my man at heart; Victor are you having an affair with her? Me: Of course not! Mirabel: You’re lying,,, there’s no explanation for this anymore! Fred was right all along Me: Mirabel… I have nothing to do with her; I never had any intimacy with her even before I got to know you Mirabel: You both are deceitful! Me: How can be saying something like this? We’ve been together for four years and I’ve never for once proven to be unworthy in any way, how can I be having an affair with Promise, for what? Mirabel: **silence** Me: Could it be for $ex of which you and I agreed to abstain from because we know it’s not right for the unmarried? Or is it for love? Why then will I be getting married to you? It’s not making any sense can’t you see? Mirabel: Don’t even imply that I’m insinuating nonsense when I the prove in my hand Me: What prove? How can that diary be a prove that I’m cheating on you? It’s someone’s privacy for goodness sake. It could be her thought or something that she wouldn’t want anyone to pry and it could be very embarrassing to her if she finds out about this Mirabel: Embarrassing? She should be ashamed of herself for professing such rubbish for you Me: Mirabel what’s going on with you? I mean… this is not you, why the sudden temper? (We heard Promise’ voice from the living room asking where is everyone) Mirabel: She’s here **walking out of the room** Me: Where are you going to? Mirabel don’t… (She slammed the door behind her) Chai! What’s all this for goodness sake? Why is Mirabel changing all of a sudden? This is nothing but the hand work of the devil, the destroyer. Just when everything was going well, now Mirabel of all people is the one causing headache and nagging around on everything….. God have Mercy. I dunno why Promise could be so careless to forget something like that in the kitchen. I’m already losing the trusts Mirabel have for me, I don’t think she’ll be comfortable with me again, she’ll be suspecting my every move. So this how innocent people get accused wrongly? I really hope that we push through with the wedding and pursue our dreams instead of arguing and fighting unnecessarily with words. Just then I ran after Mirabel to the living room where she’s already confronting Promise. Mirabel: Promise what is all this you wrote in this your diary? Promise: Why are you in possession of my diary? Mirabel: You haven’t answered my question, what is the meaning of this love confession for Victor who you know is my fiancé Promise: Mirabel that diary contains my personal and private life with my thoughts which I don’t intend to share with anybody Mirabel: Oh really? Me: Mirabel please you have to stop this, she has no evil intention towards our relationship Mirabel: Of course! The saint who is in love with my man will never have any evil intentions Mirabel just start to annoy me for the first time since we started our relationship, this is not the Mirabel that I know, what has happened to her? Or is this her true colours? Definitely not! She’s been humble from the start, she’s shown me nothing but love, she’s always been there for me, she’s always ready to do anything for me, she’s ready to submit to me. This is all Fred’s fault! He was the one that started all these perils. I regretted hooking him up with Promise, he brought nothing but trouble which is now affecting my relationship with Mirabel. Promise: **tears soaking in her eyes** Me: Mirabel… Mirabel: You know what? I’m stopping the wedding Me: No Mirabel, you can’t do that please… Mirabel: Yes I can and I will! She said that then furiously rushed to the room. Then I started perceiving something smelling, the food is burning in the kitchen!! Somebody should just wake me up from this nightmare!!! [color=red]TO BE CONTINUED…[/color][/b] [color=red]Once again, I appreciate you all for your support in this story which is currently the best story of the month of August, 2016 through your votes and supports. I remain Victor U. James on 07060981481 or bbm D1EF38E2 {Vict-Vames}[/color]
1 Sep 2016 | 13:02
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Hmmmmmmmm...Enjoying This... I don't even know what's wrong with Mirabel this days.
1 Sep 2016 | 13:17
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Mirabel don dey mad
1 Sep 2016 | 13:22
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That is girls 4 u
1 Sep 2016 | 13:32
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Something is definitely wrong with that promise? Na by force?
1 Sep 2016 | 13:34
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see another wahala
1 Sep 2016 | 13:40
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Getting more interesting
1 Sep 2016 | 13:50
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Please summarise this story
1 Sep 2016 | 13:57
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I talk am, something dey work that Mirabel for her head
1 Sep 2016 | 14:14
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it was all Fred doing since Fred said dat she started developing lack of trust for u well I pray and hope u end up with promise I prefer her
1 Sep 2016 | 14:23
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it was all Fred doing since Fred said dat she started developing lack of trust for u well I pray and hope u end up with promise I prefer her
1 Sep 2016 | 14:23
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hmm patience bro
1 Sep 2016 | 14:25
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Abeg next
1 Sep 2016 | 14:38
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Things are getting out of place o...,
1 Sep 2016 | 14:38
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Hmmmm . . Cool down ur temper, girl . . U can't let the devil come b/n u two, now tht u are about to get marry
1 Sep 2016 | 14:40
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i smell trouble
1 Sep 2016 | 14:42
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somebody should talk sense to Mirabel.
1 Sep 2016 | 14:50
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Abeg don't beg her joooorrrrr.... She is president daughter nah.. Let her stop the wedding, she will be the one to lose... Rubbish!!!
1 Sep 2016 | 14:52
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I don't understand this Mirabel anymore
1 Sep 2016 | 14:54
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na by force to marry her??? abeg leave am joor
1 Sep 2016 | 14:57
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I don't blame miracle she has every right to be upset
1 Sep 2016 | 14:59
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see see see abeggy appreciation don accept post another epi jere
1 Sep 2016 | 15:00
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Seriously, something is wrong with Mirabel.
1 Sep 2016 | 15:25
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Mirabel will use ha hand n spoil ha relationship am just pitying ha cos she will sure cry last
1 Sep 2016 | 15:38
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okay
1 Sep 2016 | 15:39
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nah braintouch dy wovi ah lyk cwiourzly
1 Sep 2016 | 15:57
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Just be careful with Promise
1 Sep 2016 | 16:02
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hmmm well am not surprise cos I know that something of this nature will happen
1 Sep 2016 | 16:04
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To hell with you Mirable, gosh, you make M̶̲̅ε̲̣ annoyed
1 Sep 2016 | 16:13
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Not her fault. Most ladies wl react same way or worst
1 Sep 2016 | 16:24
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Wahalaaaaa oo
1 Sep 2016 | 16:25
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Mtchewww .... Let her stop the wedding now *is she not the lady getting married?* am sure she will be ashamed of herself later
1 Sep 2016 | 16:28
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нeнe adey ѕмell............ ѕoмeтнιng ooo, wнo can gυeѕѕ?
1 Sep 2016 | 16:29
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Hmnnn. Buh y s Mirabel doing all diz... Feeling pity 4 Promise.. Chai Victor, wat appening
1 Sep 2016 | 16:46
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Na craze dey worry am..to hell with her jare
1 Sep 2016 | 16:48
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Fred has succeeded in poisoning her mind
1 Sep 2016 | 16:56
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stop wedding khe ... if I hear am
1 Sep 2016 | 16:59
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mirabel don mad ni
1 Sep 2016 | 17:07
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Ise esu ni (is devil handiwork)
1 Sep 2016 | 17:21
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Fred Caused This
1 Sep 2016 | 17:37
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...
1 Sep 2016 | 17:57
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Huh.. Mirabel anoda sheep in human clothing
1 Sep 2016 | 18:23
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Mirabel take it easy
1 Sep 2016 | 18:27
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wot wrong wit her self she is just acting as if she is mad
1 Sep 2016 | 18:28
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mirabel is not in her senses
1 Sep 2016 | 18:36
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congratulation sir Vic!!! it is d story DAT lead me into coolval. congratulation once again.
1 Sep 2016 | 18:36
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I wont blame her..
1 Sep 2016 | 18:38
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Congratulations Vict vames we should be expecting another update tomorrow then
1 Sep 2016 | 18:38
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uhmm,,observing mk I adjust ma glasses
1 Sep 2016 | 18:52
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Wow ... I love this story
1 Sep 2016 | 18:59
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Jeez!wht's happenin to her abi she don dey fill form fr madness?
1 Sep 2016 | 19:03
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Hmmm! Lots of intrigues and suspence. Very captivating. next...?
1 Sep 2016 | 19:05
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Lol... Who is that lady that will open her two eye and allow other woman to take wht belong to her? I dnt blame her, thuo
1 Sep 2016 | 19:05
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she has gone crazy o
1 Sep 2016 | 19:40
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Mirabel u don dey too over react o No make me vex join o, mind yourself ?why would u think of stopping the ? marriage? behave yourself fah! @vict-vames go take yoghurt step ur temperature first so that u go fit reason wetin Mirabel dey do u now
1 Sep 2016 | 19:42
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shiiit
1 Sep 2016 | 19:53
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This Mirabel Is Beginning To Be Annoying, Next
1 Sep 2016 | 20:10
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Omg
1 Sep 2016 | 20:30
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wahala
1 Sep 2016 | 20:33
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dis is really smtyn
1 Sep 2016 | 20:53
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Real kasala is brewing
1 Sep 2016 | 21:40
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why are people saying he should summarize the story if you are tired pls quit the story. @vict-vames bro please take your time and finish the story we ain't tired. don't let anyone push you into premature ending of the story ??☝
1 Sep 2016 | 21:41
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I hope this is just a dream
1 Sep 2016 | 22:30
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Wow wanna stop the wedding, is she mad?
2 Sep 2016 | 02:01
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good story :b
2 Sep 2016 | 02:04
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Just let her be she has no trust for u
2 Sep 2016 | 02:16
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Wat again o, abi is promise looking for a way to break u two
2 Sep 2016 | 03:18
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mirable,ur stubborness is not helping matters
2 Sep 2016 | 03:37
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Aaahhh!!!!!!!! So unlucky for you but I know she will sort this out
2 Sep 2016 | 05:05
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Mirabel don dey Kolo
2 Sep 2016 | 05:18
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Why won't it win when its the best story I've ever read . Thumbs up bro BT next pls
2 Sep 2016 | 06:02
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The devil is a liar!
2 Sep 2016 | 06:24
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WHAT!!! she dare not stop d wedding! I knew DAT promise go cause gbege. ...prayers r urgently needed here....
2 Sep 2016 | 06:30
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You Guys Should Not Be Too Surprised That Is The Problem With Dating A Rich Girl They Are Just Too Proud And Arogant, Hope You All Remember "Clara The Governor Daughter"
2 Sep 2016 | 07:09
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Mirabel, wat with u nw congrat dear
2 Sep 2016 | 07:21
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Yawa don gas
2 Sep 2016 | 08:09
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Hmm...fred has poisoned marible's mind...
2 Sep 2016 | 10:45
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Guy!.. When this story go finish nah!.. Nah now you dey make story long!.. For the past 6 months weda na 7months now i dey read 1 story @vict-vames
2 Sep 2016 | 11:51
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I hope Mirabel haven't started to dey smoke gbana
2 Sep 2016 | 12:12
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What's her problem?
2 Sep 2016 | 12:56
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Hmmmmm
2 Sep 2016 | 13:46
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mehn! this is a serious challenge o, I just hope things work out the other way round......Mirabel, just take things easy with victor, he's been what good and responsible guys are, I know such thoughts can easily pop up in your mind seeing the content of the Promise's dairy but, you've got to trust you man, so far there hasn't been any reason for you to doubt him in your relationship. Mirabel, please don't do anything nasty or take decisions out of an unclear mind, it's always regrettable, so just keep your calm, you just listen to whatever explanation he's got and understand him as you have always done..........kudos vict-vames!
2 Sep 2016 | 15:36
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la wa oh....
3 Sep 2016 | 01:07
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she nor day understand anything again because of anger and i still blame victor one way shall because how wish say he nor commot leave mirabel dat day Mata for nor b like dis
3 Sep 2016 | 04:46
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my god this is serious
3 Sep 2016 | 08:42
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some people are just annoying,,why are they advising the characters in the story? Kai it's a story
3 Sep 2016 | 09:32
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something is wrong somewhere. this is not Mirabel victor has been talking about..... well, we can't tell. humans do change over night... next uncle brother vict-vame
3 Sep 2016 | 09:49
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Hmm sand don enter ur garri o
3 Sep 2016 | 11:46
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Continueeeee
3 Sep 2016 | 11:56
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nawa o..she's possessive.
3 Sep 2016 | 13:41
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Hmmm
3 Sep 2016 | 17:04
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God plz intervene ooooo
3 Sep 2016 | 18:25
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The most wanted part I have been waiting for right from the beginning of the story
4 Sep 2016 | 02:26
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lobatan
4 Sep 2016 | 10:52
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I reserve my comment
4 Sep 2016 | 11:18
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gey mirabel...y nw??
4 Sep 2016 | 12:17
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haha mirable better learn how to trust
4 Sep 2016 | 15:59
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come on mirabel,,,,whats going on?
4 Sep 2016 | 19:59
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Awaiting Moderator
5 Sep 2016 | 05:31
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chai nawa oo i guess dats her true colour coz all girls are like waec examination No.1a a.i ii iii iv nd so on till num 10.
5 Sep 2016 | 10:03
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Hmmm...things are getting more complicated...
5 Sep 2016 | 20:18
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Yes Mulikaht , how do you want us to help you?
6 Sep 2016 | 03:56
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Mimi dey vex me oooo
6 Sep 2016 | 04:41
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[color=blue]Dedicating this episode to all my readers, appreciating your views of this season of the story... 500,000[/color] [b][color=blue]EPISODE 54[/color] I quickly dashed to the kitchen and turned off the gas cooker, from there to the room where I met Mirabel picking her stuffs. Me: Mirabel what are you doing? Mirabel: **picking her stuffs ignoring me** I went to her and stopped her from taking her things… Mirabel: Let me go Me: Look… I know how you feel, believe me… but you’re taking this thing too far, trust me I have absolute nothing to do with her Mirabel: Can you say the same for her? She confessed her undying love for you in that diary, all this while I saw both of you as just friends, not knowing something like this has been going on Me: Nothing has been going on, why can’t you believe me? You’re the only woman I love and who I want to spend the rest of my life with… Please don’t stop the wedding I beg you Mirabel: The wedding can only push through on one condition Me: Which is? Mirabel: Promise has to leave Me: What? Mirabel: Yes! Let her go away from our lives and forget about the love she claim to have for you Me: Mirabel… Mirabel: That’s the only way, it’s either she leaves or I leave… Me: It doesn’t have to be like this Mirabel: Is she leaving or not?! Me: **Speechless** Mirabel: I’ll take that as a yes **walks out of the room** I watched her stormed out of the room while I sat down on the bed hitting my head so hard. What’s going on? How did it come to this?? What can I do??? I can’t turn my back on Promise and I can’t let Mirabel leave… what a dilemma. Before I knew what was happening, Mirabel had Promise leave the house and I couldn’t do anything because I want to save my relationship with Mirabel. I stood and watched Promise leaving the house in tears; she was looking at me but I couldn’t do or say anything till she left. Mirabel warned that Promise must not attend her wedding. When Nancy arrived and I told her what happened earlier while we both sat at the veranda, she got so surprised and shocked for how things turned out in such a little time; she wasn’t cool with Mirabel’s action though. Nancy: So I’ll be living here alone or what’s going to happen? Me: Well… you can bring a friend to stay with you Nancy: Promise is much better to live with Me: But you can’t live with her anymore, you know what happened Nancy: Where will she go to now? I don’t think she has any place to stay in Abuja Me: I really dunno what got into Mirabel to go to that extent Nancy: Let’s ask Vincent to talk to her Me: No, he can’t know about this Nancy: Why? Me: I don’t want to raise any issue, if letting Promise go will make our relationship work without any squabble, then I have no option. Nancy: Senior bro that’s not cool, you can’t possibly let Promise go like that na, she’s a good person Me: Nancy you don’t understand, you think it’s easy for me? I just want my relationship to go back to how it used to be and even better when we get married Nancy: Is there no other way this can go without anyone getting hurt? What do you think Promise will be feeling right now? Me: I’m just so confused right now, I dunno what to do Nancy: Please do something about Promise; she must be very hurt about this Me: I’ll talk to her Nancy: Ermmm…. Do you like have any uhmmm… feelings for her? Me: Nancy, stop that Nancy: Sorry… just being curious Me: It’s okay… Nancy: Lemme go and prepare something since you guys couldn’t eat this afternoon Me: Seriously, that food I expected to eat comfortably just got burnt Nancy: I dunno you’ll still be hungry after everything that happened today Me: Are you trying to mock me? Nancy: Ah! Noooo… She went back into the house while I remained outside cogitating and worried. Talking about having feelings for Promise, I think I truly have something hidden deep in my heart for her. **TWO YEARS - FOUR MONTHS LATER** A lot has happen… The President won the election victoriously and remained in office; He appointed my father minister of finance and my mother kept rolling with the first lady. I got my result and I graduated with second class upper; I couldn’t get first class because of many distractions that took place then and the running of my website. It was Nancy that graduated with first class… because she wasn’t distracted na. Mirabel and I got married then travelled to the U.S as we planned. We learnt everything we needed to learn in order to build the Vames Empire and it all went well. I started my company with Mirabel by my side, with Ike’s partnership and his support technically and financially, and investors that invested in my Company. I got business connections worldwide, but I’m yet to achieve to my dream, which is building a very big business empire… although I’m getting there, it’s all about time. Nancy and Vincent are yet to get married, they’ve been fighting for their love because… there have been some kind of disagreement about their relationship from some family members due to the fact that Mirabel and I are already married. I have a Daughter with Mirabel, I named her Vanessa, and now Mirabel is heavily pregnant carrying my second child. Our plan was to rush our children so she can join me in running the Empire while the children are already growing up. I lost contact with Promise immediately she left the house that day; I tried to call her two days after she left when I went back to our Family house, I couldn’t find her number in my phone, and all the text messages and WhatsApp conversation we had were all gone. I knew Mirabel did it because she alone knows my phone password as part of our agreement not to hide anything from each other, so she has access to my phone and I also have access to hers. After the discovery, I immediately called Nancy to give Promise’ number of which she did, but the number didn’t go through till today. I planned on visiting Nigeria only when my office building there would be completed and ready for operations, so now I have about two months to return back to Nigeria, that’s the time my contractor assured me of completing everything, and it’s the same time Mirabel is expected to deliver our baby. ********** I came back to my house after I’ve been away for five days on a business trip; I so much missed my wife and my daughter. I stepped into the house, the next thing I saw was my wife falling down from the stairs. I immediately rushed to get her but she didn’t respond; I had to rush her to the hospital. The Doctor said that she’s in a critical condition; the fall affected the pregnancy so bad that she will have to undergo a premature delivery, and she has lost so much blood. So… she’d need a blood transfusion. The worst thing was that, her blood group is very rare. [color=red]TO BE CONTINUED…[/color][/b]
6 Sep 2016 | 06:05
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wao.......so sorry bro.
6 Sep 2016 | 06:16
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Following
6 Sep 2016 | 06:22
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Bt Guys Pls Is It Ryt 4 Nancy Nd Vincent To Marry
6 Sep 2016 | 06:25
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And Promise blood will match
6 Sep 2016 | 06:27
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And now u ll need promise... Mirabel shouldn't have behaved to her like that. It's awe
6 Sep 2016 | 06:33
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u can just call on me as i am a universal donor, I will donate as much as she needed to survive d accident
6 Sep 2016 | 06:41
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Wow! Interesting. Poor Promise
6 Sep 2016 | 06:42
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you see not good to be harsh toward one another cause u Neva know who catches u wen u fall down.
6 Sep 2016 | 06:43
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What! Too bad...
6 Sep 2016 | 06:46
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promise will be d blood donor.. Abi
6 Sep 2016 | 07:07
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And promise has the same type i guess. Interesting
6 Sep 2016 | 07:10
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I can't believe this promise out of your life
6 Sep 2016 | 07:27
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[b]The day Promise would revenge, i'd just be looking at Mirabel... Now who'd donate his/her blood for Mirabel??[/b]
6 Sep 2016 | 07:33
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[b]Sometimes her character would be cool While at times, so would be uncool to go with[/b]
6 Sep 2016 | 07:35
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And guess wat, Promise z ha only saviour......... U can't eat ua cake and have it babes
6 Sep 2016 | 07:54
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Thats when promise will come to save her
6 Sep 2016 | 07:59
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Hmmm I fink promise will be d 1 to donate 4 her,but am waiting sha
6 Sep 2016 | 08:11
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it only Promzy DAT can save her
6 Sep 2016 | 08:21
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Seems like season finale is near
6 Sep 2016 | 08:36
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Promise blood group is compatible with Mirabel's own.
6 Sep 2016 | 08:38
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Look for promise now because she is your saviour
6 Sep 2016 | 08:44
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hmmnn ........ Now is when she needs promise
6 Sep 2016 | 08:46
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Uhm uhm
6 Sep 2016 | 08:49
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Rare... I knew it thats where promise will come back to the picture, alot will be discovered,
6 Sep 2016 | 08:55
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Hope she won't die o,
6 Sep 2016 | 09:02
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Kikikikikiki, dat mirabel is in trouble. Only promise might save her
6 Sep 2016 | 09:15
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hmmm next
6 Sep 2016 | 09:25
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hmmm.
6 Sep 2016 | 09:31
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oh ny God, save her please.
6 Sep 2016 | 09:38
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maybe promise will be the one to save her this time around [color =red]what a world[/color]
6 Sep 2016 | 09:40
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Let me guess. promise is a match. out of the blues she'll show up and donate to mirabel. nice story bro.
6 Sep 2016 | 09:42
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Hmmmm perhaps only promise can be of help
6 Sep 2016 | 09:47
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hmmmmm, frm my own p.o.v promise and mirabel blood can b dsame
6 Sep 2016 | 09:59
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reserve my comment
6 Sep 2016 | 10:42
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another war again........ better save her, she must not die
6 Sep 2016 | 10:42
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I dnt understand anymore rili..... @victvames i'm getting very confused....i....i thut Victor loves Mirabel very much....how come he's just finding out that he feels something special for Promise and i hope d end of d story is nt going to be dat they couldnt find a match for Mirabel and she lost the baby and she died and he ended up with Promise......nt after everything he passed through with Mirabel please.....d story's name is THE PRESIDENT'S DAUGHTER AND I and it should end with THE PRESIDENT'S DAUGHTER AND I. Not trying to tell u what to write tho.....just my thought.... Thanks
6 Sep 2016 | 10:47
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Wow what a world.
6 Sep 2016 | 10:52
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heeeeeyyy! I wouldn't love this story if it ends with what I'm thinking o.....
6 Sep 2016 | 11:19
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*tongue awt* daydreaming,,,,he's in U.S.A indeed,,,d guy I saw yesterday
6 Sep 2016 | 11:30
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I think i knw wer this is going only promise will have the same blood type if I'm right
6 Sep 2016 | 11:31
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nawao I feel bad y did Mirabel has to do that too bad of her
6 Sep 2016 | 11:33
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Still following...
6 Sep 2016 | 11:44
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oww!!! so sad
6 Sep 2016 | 11:47
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Huh....
6 Sep 2016 | 11:54
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Nxt please
6 Sep 2016 | 12:11
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Hmmmm.. Enjoying the story lyk seriously.
6 Sep 2016 | 12:20
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hmm I feel promise might appear ND help out for d love she has for vames
6 Sep 2016 | 12:34
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next
6 Sep 2016 | 12:35
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Mirable,i pray it's not promise dht has same blood group with u
6 Sep 2016 | 12:47
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Hmmmmmmmmmmm........................................ Hope it's not wot i'm thinking
6 Sep 2016 | 13:02
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Xo rare bt u gat 2 search i it nxt bro
6 Sep 2016 | 13:20
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Chia,y Na,y Wil U Let Promzy Go,
6 Sep 2016 | 13:49
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Hmmmmn na wa ooo next sha
6 Sep 2016 | 14:15
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guess promise is back
6 Sep 2016 | 14:51
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Hmmmmmm,that's terrible
6 Sep 2016 | 15:17
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I guess promise will be d match donor
6 Sep 2016 | 15:28
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Promise is truly back
6 Sep 2016 | 15:34
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This ia wat i personally call PERIODICAL SUSPENSE. Cos in d beginin it seems d story will end in des episode, bt diaris stil anoda CHALLENGe @d end. ogao
6 Sep 2016 | 15:43
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promise will match hers
6 Sep 2016 | 15:53
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I just hope Mirabel won't have to die for promise to marry Victor.
6 Sep 2016 | 16:06
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Buh y ll mirabel do dx, t totally unfair... Haba..... U c life now rare blood type and am pretty sure t promise dat also share d same blood grup wit ha.... Now where s d promise... Hope she finds ha
6 Sep 2016 | 16:37
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hmmm am observing i just hope isnt wot am think
6 Sep 2016 | 16:39
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Woooo a lot has realy happend in this episod, Mirabel didn't do wel at al nd nw she's in problem n her saviour might be d same Promise she chased away.
6 Sep 2016 | 16:40
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Hmm..... If i may ask? @vict did yhu permit my question?
6 Sep 2016 | 16:53
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Hmmm..
6 Sep 2016 | 17:11
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Make e no b watin i d tink o say na promise wan giv am blood
6 Sep 2016 | 17:31
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Na only promise get her blood group
6 Sep 2016 | 17:33
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Eyah pele
6 Sep 2016 | 18:06
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I tink it's tym 2 look for promise..
6 Sep 2016 | 18:36
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I beg find promise oo
6 Sep 2016 | 18:39
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this story ehnn
6 Sep 2016 | 18:54
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Yeepieee I made it here! A lot really happened while i was away Waiting patiently.. Kudos to you vames
6 Sep 2016 | 19:21
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Loving this story everyday . . And I guess only promise blood will save her . . Let see what go happen next
6 Sep 2016 | 20:23
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Hmmmmm... This is getting really hot.. Am sure promise will pop up soon..
6 Sep 2016 | 20:42
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chai......pls next o
6 Sep 2016 | 20:53
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Too bad pry they find a match for her nth shld happen to her
7 Sep 2016 | 01:01
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Her blood group is very rare but I think Promzy might have same blood group with her which means Promzy is still going to come into their lives as fate will have it.
7 Sep 2016 | 02:25
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promise might be off help
7 Sep 2016 | 02:53
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Abeg make una come test my blood, it might be compatible with mirabel who knows?
7 Sep 2016 | 03:13
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ehn...hope no bad news dz tym??
7 Sep 2016 | 04:28
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God help u victor
7 Sep 2016 | 04:30
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i tink d one dat wil b d donor wil b no other dan promise# dats wot i tink oooo#
7 Sep 2016 | 05:44
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wow! I think i no wer dis is hearding 2
7 Sep 2016 | 05:56
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At last I am here I have really miss alot wen I wasn't around
7 Sep 2016 | 06:45
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Nxt pls
7 Sep 2016 | 09:23
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Vic my man... U've not finished this story? I'm back for it sha. Gosh! Mirabel chasing Promise away? And Promise self! Must she love this guy? Mtcheew! When I thought their weddin will end d story, clearly there's more to come. And wetin fall Mira from stairs na? She go come die now Vic go come go look for Promise n maybe find out she's already married then she'll get a divorce to be with d guy she loves or if he's lucky, she won't be married. But na wa o. Must tragedy enter the story? Mirabel reallllllly did wrong. But she did well to protect her relationship sha.
7 Sep 2016 | 11:14
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Interestinq, :whistle:
7 Sep 2016 | 11:17
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Wish Mirabel quick recovery
7 Sep 2016 | 11:42
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[b][color=blue]EPISODE 55[/color] The Doctor had me tested but my blood type did not match with hers, he advised me to go get a close relative as they don’t have the type of Mirabel’s blood in their blood bank. The first thing I did was to call Mirabel’s oldest sibling Adesuwa who also resides there in America but in another state in Oklahoma. She promised to take the next available flight to Nevada where we reside. I also called Mirabel’s father – the president and informed him about the situation at hand, I told him about Adesuwa’s coming, but he insisted on coming as soon as possible in case if Adesuwa’s blood won’t be enough. I also called my Parents to inform them, they were terrified especially my mother. I called Vincent and told him about it, that he should start praying seriously for Mirabel. I was so worried; I didn’t know what else to do… I moved from one place to another looking for a donor but couldn’t find any. I was left with no other choice but to wait for Adesuwa. I dunno if Ike’s blood will match with hers, and he is not even in America, he is currently in China doing his thing. Adesuwa finally came about two hours later and a test was conducted on her to be sure if her blood will match with Mirabel’s. Unfortunately, it didn’t match. We were so surprise on why their blood type did not match. We had to wait for a couple of hours till the President arrived with the first lady and Vincent. The President told the Doctor to start taking his blood immediately, but the Doctor insisted that they get his blood tested first before that can happen. The President had no choice but to allow them to run the test on him. After waiting impatiently for many minutes, the Doctor came back and said their blood did not match. President: What are you talking about? She’s my daughter! Doctor: Are you sure about that? President: Yes she’s my youngest child Doctor: I’m afraid she can’t be your daughter because she doesn’t have your blood President: You must be mistaken Doctor: Sorry sir, there’s no room for such mistake here. We can conduct a DNA test if you want First lady: DNA test for what, Doctor? She’s our daughter, I gave birth to her! Doctor: Just to be sure, she’s dying and we don’t have all the time Vincent: Please Doctor have me tested too, my blood might match with hers First lady: And mine too… Doctor: Ok follow me They followed the Doctor to the lab and left me wondering what’s going on, how can Mirabel’s blood not match with her father’s? What is happening? Where did she even get that kind of blood from? God have mercy, that devil is a liar! The President, the first lady and Vincent came back to the lobby from the lab. The President quietly sat down looking tense while the First lady kept saying that she knows Mirabel is her daughter and she’s very sure about it, that she carried her in her womb for nine months bla bla bla…  The Doctor came back again saying the first lady and Vincent’s blood still did not match with Mirabel and the DNA results will be available in two days. The Doctor also advised us to go look for donors whose blood might match with Mirabel’s, and that he’ll also help us checking in blood banks elsewhere. The President left the hospital in confusion and the first lady followed him asking him some kind of questions. Adesuwa and Vincent remained with me there in the hospital. I went to the ward where they kept Mirabel; I stood outside and watched Mirabel through the window. I didn’t know when tears started dripping down from my eyes. Vincent came to me and placed his hand on shoulder telling me everything will be alright; that I should not be scared of what the Doctor is saying and all. Me: Look at her, does she deserve this? Vincent: Don’t think that way, just look at the positive side that this will be a testimony, have that in mind Me: I don’t understand why her blood doesn’t match your Dad’s Vincent: I’m also surprised; this is the devil at work Me: What are we going to do now? Vincent: Just pray and have faith in God Me: **Silence** Vincent: Where is Vanessa? Me: She must be with the nanny; I didn’t even see when I came back from my trip Vincent: But how did this happen? Me: I just stepped into the house and saw her falling down from the stairs; I dunno what might have happened to her Vincent: Or could it be… it was because she heard your presence then she was like rushing to meet you? Me: I just don’t know, ah my God! Vincent: Just take it easy, everything will be fine Me: Hhmmm… Vincent: Come on, let’s go Me: Go where? Vincent: To your house so you’ll freshen up at least Me: I’m not going anywhere Vincent: You have to, I mean look at you; you look stressed Me: What about Mirabel that’s fighting for her life? No, I’m not leaving her Vincent: You have to be strong for her and Vanessa Me: Don’t waste your time trying to convince because I’m not leaving here Vincent: You need to go check on Vanessa Me: She’s fine Vincent: She should be here with you Me: You can go and bring here, I’m not leaving Mirabel not even for a second Vincent: I dunno your house, and besides, I’m not familiar with this place Me: You can ask Adesuwa to take you there; she needs to rest too… Vincent: Alright then, I’ll be back Me: **Silence** Immediately they left, the Doctor came to me and told me he has found a blood match for Mirabel and that it’s on the way coming… I appreciated him for his effort. Not long after that, The President also came in with some donors, about six of them. They had them tested and three of them have the same blood type with Mirabel but two of them had some sickness in them, so we have one donor plus the other one the Doctor ordered for from a blood bank. I just had this excitement and hope within me when we found this rare type of blood for Mirabel. By then, Vanessa was already with me. Frank (Mirabel’s former bodyguard) called me; he said he heard what happened. We talked for a little while before we ended the call. Lest I forget, Jummy retired from the service immediately Mirabel and I got married so she’ll be a full house-wife and start having children for her husband – Frank. And as for Frank, he continued the service as the first lady’s bodyguard. They started the transfusion without wasting time and the delivery of the baby through CS (Caesarean section) We waited impatiently for almost two hours praying that she and the baby will fine until the Doctor came out with a sad look on his face. We immediately rushed him and started bombarding him with questions… How did it go? How is she? How’s the operation? Is the blood enough? The Doctor stunned us with a shocking news that we lost both of them in the process after telling us some medical bla bla bla that I can’t even remember. I was short of words, I was extremely shocked! It happened just like a dream, I was lost on earth. The feeling was out of this world. We arrived in Nigeria the following day with Mirabel’s body using the Presidential jet. By then, the bad news has gotten to the media. Her body was deposited to the mortuary for days before she was laid to rest. That moment I felt like my life has come to an end. I just dunno what to do and what to feel. The DNA result reached the President and it’s discovered that Mirabel is not his biological daughter, because her result was negative while Vincent’s and Adesuwa’s were positive. How? Nobody knows as the first lady kept defending herself that she never cheated on the President, but she carried a pregnancy for nine months and delivered a baby. An idea came in, so they went back to the hospital where they delivered their baby and started an investigation on what might have happened. They checked the hospital’s record of babies born on that specific date, and then they started investigating around looking for those who were born on that particular date from that hospital…. searching for the real President’s daughter. This also means I’m not a true President’s in law and my daughter with Mirabel is not the President’s grandchild. What kind of misfortune is this? Chai! ************ A couple of months later, i finally got in touch with Promise and she seems to be doing well. I tried apologizing to her but she said she has long forgiven me, that it was actually her fault and not mine. She also sympathized with me over Mirabel’s death. A while after the reunion between me and Promise, I started trying to woo her since she has always loved me. She declared that it’s too late, that she’s already married. I acted cool and I was like, I’m happy for her and all that. But I felt bad about it, and then I started wondering…. • What did I do to deserve this? • What will be my fate now that I’ve lost the two women that’s for good me? • Who will mother Vanessa? • Where will I start searching for someone like Mirabel or Promise? • Where do I go from here? • What will happen to me and Vanessa since Mirabel is not the real daughter of the President? • Why is all this happening to me? Why?? Why??? [color=red]••• TO BE CONTINUED ON THE LAST EPISODE OF “THE PRESIDENT’S DAUGHTER AND I” BY: VICTOR U. JAMES {VictVames}  NEW BBM PIN: d1ef38e2 ••• [/color][/b] [color=blue]The final episode drops on Monday.... So relax and drop your view of the story so far. Ghost readers it's time to come out and say something now oh biko... I will like everyone that's been following this story to comment/criticize on the story so far and also predict all you can on the last episode that is dropping on Monday. Thanks and God bless you all. Your comments may allow me shortened when i'll drop the final episode.[/color]
7 Sep 2016 | 12:05
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I Think Promise Is The True Daughter Of The Presido, Anyways Just Guessing, Next O
7 Sep 2016 | 12:21
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Waooo First To Comment.Chai Will Miss Mirabel.I Think Promise Is The President Daughter Since They Were Born On The Same Day
7 Sep 2016 | 12:36
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Dis story is a little peace of shit ah luv it
7 Sep 2016 | 12:37
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@vict-vames Pls Monday Is Too Far
7 Sep 2016 | 12:38
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cool
7 Sep 2016 | 12:40
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Wow. Thumb. Up bro. U are d best
7 Sep 2016 | 12:42
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me I think promise is the real daughter of the President o. Come to think of it her family background was never mentioned all throughout the story
7 Sep 2016 | 12:56
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hey bro, monday is too far oooo....well promise will b the real daughter of the president
7 Sep 2016 | 13:05
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Lol. No doubt that Promise is the true daughter of the president and she's not married #winks . Until then fingers crossed...
7 Sep 2016 | 13:08
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wow kudos VictVames promise is the real daughter of the president
7 Sep 2016 | 13:11
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I already conjure it in my mind dat Mirabel might die bt I dunno u won't marry promise bt all the Mirabel (the president daughter) dat I knw Rip
7 Sep 2016 | 13:15
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i felt promise is the real president daughter just an imagination
7 Sep 2016 | 13:21
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so sorry for that, but I think promise is the real president daughter
7 Sep 2016 | 13:25
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Never knew this story is gonna be taking another dimension.. Well,life ain't always a bed of roses.
7 Sep 2016 | 13:27
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bravo @Vict Vame u too much. I rate you 100%. you be correct padi. hope you we start another interesting story after this one?
7 Sep 2016 | 13:28
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jeez....m speechless oooo
7 Sep 2016 | 13:47
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No doubt_____promise(promzy) is d w(r)eal VVIP
7 Sep 2016 | 13:48
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just months later you started wooing smn....are you sure you really loved ur mira?
7 Sep 2016 | 13:49
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@blair ____mirable is gone.... Vict must nt. Mourn till eternity to shw dat he loved mirable
7 Sep 2016 | 13:55
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I will go with what @IjigaGbrain said ND I think promise might be d biological daughter of d president cos dey wia interchange on dia birth. ND I can see vict marrying promise.. by @vict-vames Monday too far.
7 Sep 2016 | 14:03
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Hmmmm... (dropin tears)... R. I. P. P. Mirabel... Wish dx neva appen so soon... Take heart vic, sorri u loss at both ladies... M pretty sure promise isnt married yet nd she s d REAL PRESIDENT'S DAUGHTER... [Just guessin] Torh now lukin 4 d president REAL CHILD.... Who cud t b...
7 Sep 2016 | 14:03
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The only prediction is that promise is the president's daughter. Simple. Nice work, keep it up.
7 Sep 2016 | 14:13
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wow story so far fantastic fabulous kudos
7 Sep 2016 | 14:27
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Wow dis story is so so sweet,nice update tanx so much
7 Sep 2016 | 14:34
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eyaah so sorry for the loss
7 Sep 2016 | 14:44
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if you are not a president 'S in-law your sister will make you one.
7 Sep 2016 | 15:04
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Nawaoh,wat a loss, maybe promise is d real daughter of d president.keep it up dear, i luv dis story
7 Sep 2016 | 15:06
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I hope no be promise you wan call the president daughter
7 Sep 2016 | 15:06
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Gosh! Vames why did you kill her na,its unfair o Rip mira Waiting for the next Nice work so far
7 Sep 2016 | 15:14
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Am d chairman of ghost readers association (G.R.A) i want use dis opportunity to thank u for a wonderful story we d ghost readers av promise to vote dis story as d best story of d year. Sign: Chairman (G.R.A)
7 Sep 2016 | 15:26
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hmmmmmm all this while Mirabel is not dey president daughter what a life Vames tongue out
7 Sep 2016 | 15:27
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Hmmmmmmm......wat a mess
7 Sep 2016 | 15:30
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vam I never think this story is going to end like this if not I would have stop reading it, Victor vem y Mirabel death now,I never think of Mirabel will be dead in this story.
7 Sep 2016 | 15:32
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Promise is the real child and you are getting to promise
7 Sep 2016 | 15:39
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Ehyeaa..rest in peace mirable.wat a great loss.I think promise isn't married she's jst saying that so dat victor will nt tink that she still ve feelings for him.( promise weds victor on point)...
7 Sep 2016 | 15:42
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I suspect promise as the president daughter @ my thought though...
7 Sep 2016 | 15:45
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I guess promise is the real daughter of the president
7 Sep 2016 | 16:08
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Not happy with the ending
7 Sep 2016 | 16:11
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I knew Promise will be married when he finds her. But I dnt knw if she will get a divorce @ d end though. Too sad an almost ending. Just waiting to see the end. This story is very very good!
7 Sep 2016 | 16:26
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whoa :g this is becoming interesting
7 Sep 2016 | 16:26
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promise is the true daughter of Mr President.. I think the first lady cheated on him or she was raped ... and for what might end the story, I think u and promise can still be united as husband and WiFi... RIP Mirabel . we love u buh God love u more...... thumbs up bro, I really appreciate this wonderful and educative story u shared with us....
7 Sep 2016 | 16:52
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thank you for this story
7 Sep 2016 | 16:54
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dis is just so awesome
7 Sep 2016 | 17:04
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Nice 1 bro
7 Sep 2016 | 17:13
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nah promise b daughter of pressy
7 Sep 2016 | 17:16
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this just gave me a heartbreak! Mirabel dead! too bad??
7 Sep 2016 | 17:19
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Nice write up bro... Bt no kill us with suspense oh.
7 Sep 2016 | 17:21
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What a twist. we all thought promise will come donate blood for Mirabel. It didn't happen that way. I don't think promise is the president's daughter. there will be a twist again. I may be wrong though. let's wait n see. but bro Monday far o
7 Sep 2016 | 17:30
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Well my confession is that I'm one of the ghost readers.... sincerely you doing a good job. the story is very very interesting. infact all your stories are usually captivating. you are always on points. I love to read your stories because you always complete your own stories!!!! my prayers are with you!!! thumb up!!!!
7 Sep 2016 | 17:31
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hmm can't wait 4 d last episode
7 Sep 2016 | 17:34
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humm this is serious am speechless
7 Sep 2016 | 17:37
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I hate d turn out of things! I really do. Now wats gonna happen?
7 Sep 2016 | 17:44
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Promzy Z D Presido Daughter,she Was Switched,,,nice 1,i'm Really Curious,wana Kno D Finishin So Anxious
7 Sep 2016 | 17:52
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omg! so sorry for ur lost. unfortunately, not the president's son-in-law. what a world! i dnt think promise has married o! jst try ur luck shaa
7 Sep 2016 | 18:04
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I rest my case ooooo@Okoro
7 Sep 2016 | 18:06
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promzy is d president daughter nd i knw dat promise is just lieing abt being married sha bt am still observing to knw how thing is going to turn out nxt plz monday is too far
7 Sep 2016 | 18:06
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Wow.... Nice nice story so far... That means mirable was switched at birth
7 Sep 2016 | 18:07
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I can't still believe Mirabel is dead Could it be that Mirabel was switched at childbirth or the first ladg cheated on her hubby? So sorry for your lost coolval bro
7 Sep 2016 | 18:17
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Boss u are d best And dis is d best story of the century
7 Sep 2016 | 18:22
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Myb promise is d president daughter... Bth babies wer switched...
7 Sep 2016 | 18:23
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Oh my gosh everything is now complicated
7 Sep 2016 | 18:24
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RIP Mimi... wil miss u
7 Sep 2016 | 18:25
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So sad
7 Sep 2016 | 18:41
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eeya sorry about the lost. rest in peace mirable. and vector don't worry am not sure promise have marry she's just pulling your leg and am sure she's the 1 you will marry she might even be the real president daughter .
7 Sep 2016 | 18:41
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can't even guess anything ....but so painful Mirabel is dead and promise is married....
7 Sep 2016 | 18:42
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rest in peace@mira
7 Sep 2016 | 18:42
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A ghost reader here....promise is the daughter of the president....thats just it
7 Sep 2016 | 18:45
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Interesting, so painful 2 hear that, hope u find some 1 with good hrt
7 Sep 2016 | 18:56
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Where is the end of this story please
7 Sep 2016 | 19:10
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Speechless
7 Sep 2016 | 19:11
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[i]I pray it turn out to be a dream[/i]
7 Sep 2016 | 19:12
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Hmmmmm. This story z really touching. Hw can Mirabel not be d president daughter? Waiting for d last episode. It's so disheartening that Mirabel died..
7 Sep 2016 | 19:15
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Soo painful . . Sorry for ur loss . . Won't guess . . Let wait for the last epi.
7 Sep 2016 | 19:31
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this story is full of suspense, now I can't even predict the outcome anymore, but I think promise might be the president's daughter
7 Sep 2016 | 19:32
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This is so serious..... Dnt even knw what to type anymore. Mirabel RIP
7 Sep 2016 | 19:33
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Its been a wonderful journey and a great ride all through. I think Promise will be the lucky woman to mother the rest of Victor's children. I also think she's the real Presidents daughter, and was exchanged during her birth by the nurses
7 Sep 2016 | 19:34
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First of all.........RIP 2 Mirabel.............it's quite obvious dat promise x d real president daughter.........kudos 2 vict-james 4 dis nyce story
7 Sep 2016 | 19:40
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This strong oo eleyi giddy gan
7 Sep 2016 | 19:40
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More Grease to ur elbow
7 Sep 2016 | 19:46
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promise is the real daughter of the President
7 Sep 2016 | 19:47
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Ah!monday is too far bro
7 Sep 2016 | 19:48
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mhen wat kind of story is dis nah . hw can mirabel die ehh(crying).
7 Sep 2016 | 20:02
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Ohhh my! Why did Mirable died?
7 Sep 2016 | 20:10
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nice story so far never believe it will end up like this mirabel dead wow the only thing that will keep the PRESIDENT'S favour to your house is your sister superb story tho. ghost reader no 1
7 Sep 2016 | 21:06
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simply unpredictable
7 Sep 2016 | 22:16
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ι'м really ѕorry ғor мιraвel,вυн proмιѕe вeιng da preѕιdenт daυgнтer ιѕ ѕυмтyn ι dnт wanт тo gυeѕѕ. ι ғynĸ doroтнy ιѕ da prѕdo daυgнтer. ι'м jхт gυeѕѕιng ooo. nyc ѕтory вy all ѕтandard, υ do ιт all вro. нope υ go coмe oυт wιd anoтнer ιnтereѕтιng one agaιn.
7 Sep 2016 | 22:54
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Oh, what a lovely story, cant wait for the final, but cum oh, i still blv sumtin gonna happen with dat promise, waiting to see....
8 Sep 2016 | 00:42
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Nice story bro..... Keep looking for promise, I don't think she is married
8 Sep 2016 | 01:59
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Honestly I dnt like d way dis story is ending, Mirabel shouldn't have died, nt afta passing tru all tough tyms to get married to him
8 Sep 2016 | 02:01
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i think promise z d real president daughter nyce story
8 Sep 2016 | 02:20
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The story so far is intresting, and I pray its nt just a dream, but predictin dis story it might be as a result of child exchange in the hospital. For sure promise and vames will later reunite. Hw I wish the story av a season three. Vict's vames. Kudos........ Gbayi baba
8 Sep 2016 | 02:23
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The story so far is intresting, and I pray its nt just a dream, but predictin dis story it might be as a result of child exchange in the hospital. For sure promise and vames will later reunite. And promise might even be the president's daughter. Hw I wish the story av a season three. Vict's vames. Kudos........ Gbayi baba
8 Sep 2016 | 02:39
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Promise is d real child of oga presido nd is nt married yet... She nd vic go marry demselves 4 d end
8 Sep 2016 | 04:40
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Wow!!! It indeed a misfortune my mind says may be promise is the real daughter of the president.
8 Sep 2016 | 04:45
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i really liked mirable wish she didn't die
8 Sep 2016 | 04:45
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In the end I see Promise being discovered as the real daughter of the President.
8 Sep 2016 | 05:05
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Noooooooooooooooooo, mirabel didn't deserve 2 die
8 Sep 2016 | 05:07
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You're really doing good here bro... Quietly keeping tabs on the story... Reading with ravenous savagery
8 Sep 2016 | 05:37
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Promise z d real president daughter
8 Sep 2016 | 06:10
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eheheheh .... I think promise is the real presidents daughter
8 Sep 2016 | 06:15
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Nyc and vry interesting story.
8 Sep 2016 | 06:22
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uhmmmn...rip mirable nd pls accpt ma condolence vict
8 Sep 2016 | 06:25
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Nice story ..Season finale on monday.. Already dreaming about it
8 Sep 2016 | 06:32
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Lola first die I take heart now Mirabel My Love is dead, wetin again dey this world to enjoy... But to predict the story, Victor if you ask me na who I go ask?
8 Sep 2016 | 07:01
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R.I.P Mirabel, May her soul rest in perfect peace, tears dropping down my eyes... Promise is the real daughter of the President, this world nah wa oo, what goes around comes around
8 Sep 2016 | 07:04
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[b]Hmmmm....With the turnout of happenings, i think Mirabel isn't realy dead and with the events of things, someone close to you is the REAL president's daughter, and that person is PROMISE i guess[/b]
8 Sep 2016 | 07:21
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[b]Hmmmm.....With the turnout of happenings, i think Mirabel isn't realy dead and with the events of things, someone close to you is the REAL president's daughter, and that person is PROMISE i guess[/b]
8 Sep 2016 | 07:21
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wow! can't wait.
8 Sep 2016 | 07:53
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omg. ...all is well sha
8 Sep 2016 | 07:58
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What a pathetic episode.
8 Sep 2016 | 08:22
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Dnt tell me dat mirabel is dead..no,she doesnt deserve dat..victor neither..just hope that a miracle might happen and she lives...
8 Sep 2016 | 09:34
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i think promise is the president daughter
8 Sep 2016 | 09:35
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Promise is the president daughter
8 Sep 2016 | 09:38
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i sent you a massage to add me to ur whatsapp gruop xo i can vote for you but you have not done it since i have been reading ur story from season 1 to season 2 episode55 i wont comment until you add me to your whatsapp group
8 Sep 2016 | 09:38
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_Hmmm This Is Serious Ooo _promise Might Be Froming _And This Might Be A Dream
8 Sep 2016 | 09:44
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Hmmm! Getting more tensed! Dunno what to predict anymore.
8 Sep 2016 | 09:59
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Nice keep it up............ more kerosine to your Armpit
8 Sep 2016 | 10:01
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I think he will commit suicide.
8 Sep 2016 | 10:09
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Nice and wonderful piece. kudos... can't wait for the final saga.
8 Sep 2016 | 10:34
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A story which contains more mentions of Hollandia yogurt than sell and Romance any way I hope say Hollandia yogurt dey pay u 4 this long advert wey u dey run 4 them? Help me tell them say I jst finish 2 belleful(indomie) and - cartom of hollandia,that yogurt too cost joor 5H.
8 Sep 2016 | 10:37
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Wow, dz looks stuffy, but I suspect there was a sort of child xchange when mirabel was given birth to- this is tragedic
8 Sep 2016 | 11:09
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I guess promise is d real President daughter. keepin my fingers cross
8 Sep 2016 | 12:29
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Wow!!! Vick, I think dis is d first time i'll comment on dis story.... and i tell u what? it's amazing... ur dictions are close 2 perfect, safe 4 some errors of omission which i think all writers are guilty of.
8 Sep 2016 | 12:45
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U are good at dis ur romance/tragedy stories.. Abeg i wan make u write more of dis stories. Maybe our women 4 naija go stop 2 dey waste our money 4 all these philipino, korean, indian and mexican telenovelas wey dey reach season 25. Chai! i hate those films with passion. I dey wonder how human being go sit don watch from season 1 to 25. cheesus! when u no be baby rubber! If I try am i go old b4 i watch am finish... infact ehn, u fit sentence me 2 death by watching film... i sure say i no go reach season 12 b4 i pkeme!
8 Sep 2016 | 13:13
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so far so good @vict-vames na u be god for the story so make your will be done
8 Sep 2016 | 13:14
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My goodness!!! Diz is nothing short of a blockbuster. I was expecting Mirabel to experience a bad fate eida way nt bcoz i disliked her buh bcoz lyf on itz own is tragic. So Promise wil turn out to be d true president's daughter and i c im marrying Victor at d end of d day. #A man's unavoidable destiny i wud say. BEST STORY EVER!!!
8 Sep 2016 | 13:26
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chaiii my favorite Mirabel is gone, what a tragedy .
8 Sep 2016 | 13:50
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followin............. .................. ............. ........ ..... ... .. .
8 Sep 2016 | 14:52
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So mirabel died...*sobs*
8 Sep 2016 | 14:55
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Nice one. I think promise is the president's real daughter and she was swapped with mirabel
8 Sep 2016 | 14:59
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Bro you can have my thumb
8 Sep 2016 | 15:04
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Rip miracle...... Hope promise is not the real child of the president... Can't wait till Monday and please ad me on the register. Thanks
8 Sep 2016 | 15:52
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nice one, I really enjoy the story from The Start and it's indeed an interesting one
8 Sep 2016 | 16:05
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Promise is d real daughter of d president
8 Sep 2016 | 16:05
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so sad Mirabel had to die,but I think promise is not married and she will later marry Victor,she might be d real president daughter n victor will finally be the real president son inlaw.
8 Sep 2016 | 16:06
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Mr @vict-vames I doff my hat for una,u deserve an award for dis tori.
8 Sep 2016 | 16:10
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@last, nice trip so far, more greeze to your elbow... happy married life to victor n promise because its either promise is lying about her marriage or she divorce...gbam!!
8 Sep 2016 | 16:20
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more data to your phone @vames waiting for the next episode
8 Sep 2016 | 16:36
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I think Dorothy is the presidents daughter ooo. well let's wait n c wat happens
8 Sep 2016 | 18:31
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wow the story is interest,touching,power and fun. I love the story
8 Sep 2016 | 19:34
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Good job,I guess promise is the real daughter of the President plus u will marry promise at the end
8 Sep 2016 | 19:37
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The suspense is real...
8 Sep 2016 | 20:43
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Don't come back and tell me promise is the real President daughter oooo
8 Sep 2016 | 20:44
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Ohhh!! Wah a pity Mirabel's dead..o ma se o
9 Sep 2016 | 02:41
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I think promise is the daughter
9 Sep 2016 | 04:16
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I now know how its gonna end. " I think Promise will later become the missing & the real President daughter and not Mirabel" Truly Victor U really missed Ur luck by chosen d wrong person!!
9 Sep 2016 | 06:30
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promise is the real biological daughter.... its like they switch them in the hospital..
9 Sep 2016 | 08:29
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Oh my, so sad they were not together for so long... Pls post the final episode, can't wait.
9 Sep 2016 | 08:53
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promise is the real daughter...I don't think she's married...she's avoiding you.
9 Sep 2016 | 11:58
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hmmm.... Oga ooo..RIP MIRABEL... So sad...
9 Sep 2016 | 15:09
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Woooo this is too pathetic, Mirabel is goon, maybe she stil not would hv bear it that she wasn't the real daughter of the president if she was alive. Promise is the real daughter that was the feelins u onec feel for her
9 Sep 2016 | 16:35
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It a nice tory,even if it's 100% fiction i feel for victor mirable shudnt hv died well her death is gonna reavael a secrt i hope she isnt realeted to vic
9 Sep 2016 | 19:00
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i hope promise is only kidding ooo...didn't even expect Mirabel to die...thought promise would be the donor and that would end the feud between them... RIP MIRABEL!!! Can't wait to read the last episode... Kudos bro
9 Sep 2016 | 19:40
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wow !lovely one cnt wait for the last episode
9 Sep 2016 | 21:07
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Nice one bro... Keep it rolling. :whistle:
10 Sep 2016 | 01:55
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Mirabel isn't dead and Promise is the president's daughter.. Next victor..
10 Sep 2016 | 04:02
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Hmmm.....i hope victor wil nt end up being misrable...kudos 2 d writer
10 Sep 2016 | 05:40
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Hnmm
10 Sep 2016 | 07:14
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hmm I dont think promise is married
10 Sep 2016 | 11:06
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Oh jst 2 sad, hw come mirable would jst die lyk dat, well I tink promise is d really president daughter, wow lets jst wait nd c d end
10 Sep 2016 | 12:04
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[IMG]http://t3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSGA-sFHVpmvTrTU7nsBbSHgXmHa909XM-3RurAlJ48zy16WDbT91YP4g[/IMG] interesting so far!!
10 Sep 2016 | 12:33
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nice story I guess promise might be the through daughter of the president
10 Sep 2016 | 12:37
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R.i.p Mira
11 Sep 2016 | 04:30
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nice one sha
11 Sep 2016 | 12:42
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wat a fascinating story.....
11 Sep 2016 | 14:41
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This Story Swit Pass @vict-vames ""MORE PALM WINE TO YOUR CUP AND ALSO MORE MONEY TO YOUR BANK ACCOUNT"" Nice Piece
11 Sep 2016 | 17:33
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nice story uve got,,ma best 4 nw
12 Sep 2016 | 02:44
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victor dnt come ere nd tell me ure d real child o who no like beta tin sha.,,, #walks away
12 Sep 2016 | 02:46
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waiting @vict-vames
12 Sep 2016 | 04:12
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wow....is such a wonderful story I have read online and I give you kudus for a job well done so sad to hear that Mirabel is not the president daughter and her death.... Who is Now The president daughter, could it be promise??? :g
12 Sep 2016 | 07:23
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Ride on guy its a wonderful story dat deserves a stading ovation... lets read d final episode plzz....
12 Sep 2016 | 11:09
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Vict , everyone is set for the final episode oo, sipping my tea
12 Sep 2016 | 12:09
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[b][color=blue]EPISODE 56[/color] [color=red]{Finale}[/color] While wondering and thinking deeply on how my life will turn out, then I started realizing something, I have met with Promise about three times and I didn’t see or notice any wedding ring on her finger. Could it be that she lied to me? Why would she lie to me? After all, she’s supposed to be married by now. I just set my mind to investigate if she’s truly married or not. I think of Mirabel every day, all the good memories about her and all we shared, all she did to get me and my family to a higher level. Who would’ve thought she’d die like that? Two years of marriage is just too soon. Of course I can’t question God because he knows the best. Why would God punish me after all the favours I’ve been getting from Him since I gave my life fully to him? It’s not possible! The plan of God over His people is always of good and not of evil. So… the question now is what is God’s plan on my life now? I stayed in my Father’s other house as a single Dad, I made sure I took care and spend quality time with Vanessa even with my tight schedule as I’ve started my business operations in Nigeria and it wasn’t easy, it takes time and efforts to get a new company established. I was too busy and focused on establishing my company that I couldn’t look at any woman, and that means I’m not re-marrying any sooner especially if Promise is truly married. I was just seated in my office one afternoon resting and cooling my mind with a cool hollandia yoghurt when Nancy called me and she sounded so happy… Nancy: Hello Bro Me: Nancy how you doing? Nancy: I’m super fine! Me: That’s good… how’s Dad and Mum? Nancy: Their Fine too…. Bro guess what? Me: What? Nancy: Guess na, shebi you’re good at guessing? Me: Okay uhmmm… you got promoted? Nancy: No nah… Me: Is it just about you or the Family? Nancy: It’s about the entire Families Me: I dunno, just tell me Nancy: Both Families have approved our marriage!! Me: **Surprised** Whoa… that’s good, how did it happen? Nancy: Well, ermm… since Mirabel, you know uhmm… yea, and having being discovered as not the biological daughter of the President, Vincent went around convincing both families and made his points known to them, so they agreed and approve our marriage Me: Okay… Nancy: So Vincent and his Family will be coming to the house in two days for introduction and to fix the date for the wedding, and you know that you have to be there Me: Yea… no problem, good thing it will be on a Saturday Nancy: Yeah Me: Alright till then, I’m very happy for you Nancy: Thanks bro,,, kiss Vanessa for me please… Me: No I won’t this time Nancy: Hahahaha… why na? Me: You know why Nancy: I’m sorry… but you know its work that has been hindering my visit Me: Always using work as an excuse, can’t you make your own time? Nancy: Ok on Sunday I promise Me: Don’t make a promise you can’t keep, bye-bye I have work to do Nancy: I will come by God’s grace; I miss my little cutie so much Me: I’m hanging up Nancy: Okay bye… see you on Saturday Me: Alright **hangs up** Nancy started working at our Dad’s company after she completed her NYSC, she got qualified to be a Chartered Accountant after she passed the ICAN exams while under our Father. Vincent has officially started his ministry to be a Pastor, he built his own Church and it’s growing pretty well. *********** Saturday came as both Families meet at my Father’s house, discussions were made and we reached an agreement for the wedding to take place in three weeks’ time and all preparations starts from now. There’s money, so no time to waste. The day of the traditional marriage came and everything went so well and successful with many elites of the country in attendance. The white wedding was also great; Vincent honoured me during his speech at the reception. How I watched over Nancy and made sure no guy messed around with her until the destined one came along. I also felt proud of myself, all my efforts in protecting my sister turned out great and fruitful. It’s my joy for my sister to get married a virgin and to the right man. I was happy to see Promise at the wedding; I went closer to her and had a chat with her. I observed her finger till I saw a ring on it. I got sad… she wasn’t lying after all, but I still want to see that husband of hers, because she’s never said something about him whenever we have a chat. All she talks about is work, work and work. I carried on with plans of getting to know the husband of Promise, I asked her many times to let me visit her house, but she kept giving one excuse or the other, she boldly refused to give her house address and these kept rising my suspicion that she’s not really married, what’s confusing me is the wedding ring on her finger. My background check on her proves my suspicion right, she’s definitely not married and she’s successful and also living alone. She’s been lying to me that she’s married which made me to think that she doesn’t have feelings for me anymore and she don’t want to get involved with me. I started thinking of what to do to win her, my thinking led me to meet with a close friend of hers who should know what’s going on in her life. I got in touch with someone close to her, I was able to persuade her to answer my questions and she told me everything after I told her my intensions. She said, Promise has been in a relationship with a man for over a year now and he hasn’t said anything about marriage, she said she doesn’t trust the guy at all, that she doesn’t think the man is serious with Promise. That gave me lots of hope, I felt very happy inside me. From all the information about her, I prepared myself to pay her an unannounced visit in the evening. She opened her door and was surprised to see me. Promise: How did you get to know where I live? Me: I just did a little background check, can I come in? Promise: **Hesitating** Me: Please…? She quietly let me in. Surprisingly, she offered me hollandia yoghurt… then from one talk led to another, I started talking to her to marry me. I told her I’m aware that she isn’t married, I talked to her about the past, the present and the future till she got emotional and tears started dripping down from her eyes. I went down on my knees before her and started giving her promises which I’m very ready to fulfill. I begged and begged her to agree to marry me, that I’ll start arrangement to marry her in one month or maybe less once she agrees to marry me. I reach my hand into my pocket and brought out the ring I came with; she started crying immediately I presented to her, I took her hand and she didn’t withdraw her hand till I successfully placed the ring on her finger. Before I knew what was happening, she flung herself on me in a tight embrace. Me: What about your boyfriend? Promise: He has lost me… he’s not ready to marry me, even though I’ve been pressuring him to, I was ready to sponsor the wedding out of desperation to get married. Yet he kept giving one excuse or the other. Me: That’s fate wanting us to end up together Promise: How’d you know about him? Me: Salome Promise: That girl! I should’ve known it was her Me: Hope you’re not gonna scold her? Promise: No, of course not We talked and stared at each other for a while before I left feeling happy. *********** We got married months later in a simple traditional marriage and a court wedding with only close family members in attendance. Although, I made the President and the first lady aware of my marriage, they understood and gave me their blessings but couldn’t attend; I didn’t want them to attend anyway since I wanted the wedding to be on a low-key. They said I’m too young to remain a widower and I need someone to take care of Vanessa. Before we got married, I made a discovery which is one of the reasons that made me rushed the wedding. Because… when we were discussing (that’s before we got married) I found out she was born in the same hospital where Mirabel was also born. Although I know they shared the same birth date which was one of the reasons why Mirabel got to like her so much back then. I suspected something and did a DNA test without her knowledge and it was positive. I was shocked and dumbfounded immediately I saw it, so I kept it a secret and rushed our wedding so it won’t be disapproved if they find out the truth. So my plan is to tell them the truth months after the wedding. Just a week after the wedding, the President invited me to come with my new wife to the Presidential villa; I honoured his invitation by going there at the expected time. After a while there, The President started talking about Mirabel not being his real daughter, how the investigation of finding his child has been going, he then handed a paper to me. I looked at it and it’s exactly the same as the DNA test result of Promise I did secretly. I asked surprisingly like I didn’t know… Me: So… what does this mean? President: Promise is my daughter Me: What? How is that possible? He explained how it all happened. What happened was that, a lady gave birth to a stillborn and she really needs a child for her husband and his family that has been pressuring her to give birth. So she connived with a nurse there to get her a child. The nurse took baby Promise and gave her to the woman, when she learned about whose child the baby was, (The President wasn’t the President then, but he is very influential) she couldn’t return baby Promise to them because she didn’t have the chance, so she took a random baby and gave to the first lady which was Mirabel and gave the stillborn to Mirabel’s real mother. Promise: (crying) my mother did that? Is this true? First lady: It is my dear, we’re your true family; I gave birth to you (crying) Promise couldn’t believe the woman the thought was her mother did such kind of evil, and the woman loved her so much as her only child. Promise accepted her true parents and pleaded with them not to let her supposed-mother to suffer for her mistakes because she took care of her like her own child. Her wish was granted and the woman was spared, but her supposed father refused to spare her as he sent her packing from his house. The Nurse was dealt with a little before they let her go after disgracing her. Everyone was surprised about this whole thing. The President threw a party for the return of his lost daughter and I was also honoured, I stood by her as her husband; so I remained the President’s in-law. ***TEN YEARS LATER*** My dreams came true as I built my business empire and became one of African’s richest. My business operations were all over the continent with my headquarters in Nigeria. I had three children with Promise while Vanessa make them four; two boys and two girls, and they grow up to join the Vames Empire. [color=red]••• THE END •••[/color] [color=blue]©2016 Victor U. James {Vict-Vames}[/color] [color=red]This story is solely written and owned by Victor U. James ………… No part of it is allowed to be reproduced on any form, or copied to any website, page, and group without the approval of the Author.[/color] For enquiries contact the author via…. [email protected] [email protected] +2347060981481 BBM d1ef38e2[/b] [color=red]Any illegal use of this story will face prosecution![/color] [color=blue]Don’t forget to say a thing or two before leaving this page; please drop your comments as long as you follow this story till now. Thanks and God bless you all for reading, till I return with something new.[/color] [color=blue]BYE FOR NOW.[/color]
12 Sep 2016 | 12:22
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You guys predicted extremely well.... kudos
12 Sep 2016 | 12:39
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OMG i lyk diz story.........well we r here finally nice long ride thumb up bro
12 Sep 2016 | 12:54
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Nice one vic
12 Sep 2016 | 13:00
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Best story of the month...thanks for this vict and when should we be expecting ur next story...kudos
12 Sep 2016 | 13:01
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boooooom .... this is great ... nice one bro son forget I'm expecting your next story soonest
12 Sep 2016 | 13:01
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best story so far kudos to u vames
12 Sep 2016 | 13:13
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Thanks @Vict-Vames [ President In-Law ] for a wonderful story like this . . . It remain One of de BEST coolval production.
12 Sep 2016 | 13:17
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wonderful. Thanks for this piece
12 Sep 2016 | 13:23
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Yeee If U See As Stomach Z Sweetin Me Ehn,nic 1 Bro,more Ba3 2 Ur Phone
12 Sep 2016 | 13:30
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nice story
12 Sep 2016 | 13:30
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Whao :b well done bro Nice write up God bless u
12 Sep 2016 | 13:31
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Oga @vict-vames U 4 Dash Me Sumtin 4 Guessin Promise Is D Presido Daughter
12 Sep 2016 | 13:31
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nice one bro More greace 2 ur pen
12 Sep 2016 | 13:33
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Kudos Vic-vame may God almighty bless your memory the more
12 Sep 2016 | 13:34
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Nyc 1 vict damn dis story is a hit
12 Sep 2016 | 13:41
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first to comentbon d final episode, congrats victor.
12 Sep 2016 | 13:43
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Congrats. it was a nice one
12 Sep 2016 | 13:48
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finally but in my place it is an abomination for a brother and sister to marry from thesame imidiate famiy welldone
12 Sep 2016 | 13:51
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Lovely stowie....I really love d turn out. Kudos!!!!
12 Sep 2016 | 14:03
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Wow so interesting.. More ink to ur Pen.. This a good work..
12 Sep 2016 | 14:14
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Nice one. I knew it ws gonna turn out dis way, am happy 4 promise. Thumbs up vict
12 Sep 2016 | 14:19
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I knew it, good 4 u vic
12 Sep 2016 | 14:22
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mehn u are the MVP. This story was a bomb. And nice ending.
12 Sep 2016 | 14:28
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really enjoyed it
12 Sep 2016 | 14:30
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Sweet end ...... Just like the ''sisters bond'' by victorious child
12 Sep 2016 | 14:40
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hmm promise the president's daughter. what a happy ending
12 Sep 2016 | 14:52
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Wow, I'm so hapi cos of d way dis story ended, bt a little sad cos of mirabel's death
12 Sep 2016 | 14:53
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A nice story so far
12 Sep 2016 | 14:54
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Yea dancing shoki. Kudos @Vict-Vames. Nice job, expecting more frm you
12 Sep 2016 | 14:55
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kudos to u
12 Sep 2016 | 15:08
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waoh tnks 4ending it successful. vict vames all the way.
12 Sep 2016 | 15:15
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so u finally woke up from this sleep. thank God ooo. all d same gud one, I give u 95%
12 Sep 2016 | 15:18
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great story more ink to ur pen have been a ghost reader all this while
12 Sep 2016 | 15:18
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wow! ..... Atlast
12 Sep 2016 | 15:18
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Great story..am sad bc mirabel died..bt happy ending
12 Sep 2016 | 15:21
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wow... what a happy ending
12 Sep 2016 | 15:27
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I also predicted well too @ Vict One of the best stories I have ever read
12 Sep 2016 | 15:33
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Good story from the Vames Empire.
12 Sep 2016 | 15:33
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oh my goodness I love this story like mofelowo kudos to the writer u did a wonderful job
12 Sep 2016 | 15:34
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Good one more knowledge and wisdom to you
12 Sep 2016 | 15:38
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Nice story.
12 Sep 2016 | 15:38
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Wow! Wat a happy ending..i love this story like kilode...@vict vames tanks for making out time to post this wounderful and fantastic story...more wisdom to you bro.
12 Sep 2016 | 15:47
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wow i love this how i wish the story will never end i will be happy about that. am really happy for you victor. this really a nice and cool story thanks gor given us this type of story nice job bro keep it up.
12 Sep 2016 | 15:48
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I'm short of words... kudos to you Vict-Vames😐👍 What a happy ending
12 Sep 2016 | 15:51
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Well done
12 Sep 2016 | 15:55
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It was superb.
12 Sep 2016 | 15:59
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Nice story
12 Sep 2016 | 16:06
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good joy guy
12 Sep 2016 | 16:07
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abi naa...i never guess wrong....nice story vict-vames.... Are you writing a new story or you wanna rest for awhile???:g
12 Sep 2016 | 16:13
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Nice one bro. It's been an awesome ride throughout the course of this story. Nice ending. More grease to ur elbow
12 Sep 2016 | 16:23
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wow,,,@last,, victor hope uve woken frm ur drm @vict-vames ,,may it come to pass iJn amen
12 Sep 2016 | 16:28
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finally the story is finished, how I wish it could be continued
12 Sep 2016 | 16:29
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wow wow wow,i so much love this story thumbs up bro.
12 Sep 2016 | 16:33
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nyc 1 bro,more power 2 ur elbow
12 Sep 2016 | 16:36
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Nawaaoo Mirable shouldnt ave died nah nd I even thought Promise will b d donor sef
12 Sep 2016 | 16:43
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kudus to u vict vames more grease to ur elbow
12 Sep 2016 | 16:47
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wow has it really end? omg cnt bliv dis a vry big kudos to our honourable writer vict - vames my best story story so far just dat I feel vry sad abt mirable Thumb Up victor
12 Sep 2016 | 16:49
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Omg i like dis story 200%...... more grace to u
12 Sep 2016 | 16:52
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wow,,,,,, a nice long ride
12 Sep 2016 | 16:55
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Finally Finally The Story Ended Awesome Though
12 Sep 2016 | 16:57
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I love this story... nice write up bro......
12 Sep 2016 | 17:02
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тнaт waѕ a joυrney oғ тнoυѕand мιleѕ. вro vaмeѕ υ do ιd all, ι cнecĸ dιѕ ѕтory dιe, ѕaĸeov da wrιтer ѕelғ na вι capon, nyc rιde вoѕѕ
12 Sep 2016 | 17:03
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Woooow interesting tnx Vames u ar really great I cnt wait 4 ur next super hit. Keep it up dear.
12 Sep 2016 | 17:06
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I salute ooo vict vames.I enjoyed every bit of it.
12 Sep 2016 | 17:06
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am impress it was interesting all the way
12 Sep 2016 | 17:06
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wow finally end
12 Sep 2016 | 17:18
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Just so incredible lost of speech. More bullet to ur gun ooo
12 Sep 2016 | 17:20
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Wow.. So nice, i cn read dis story over nd over again, i cnt jux get tired of it...
12 Sep 2016 | 17:23
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u have seriously landed my guy
12 Sep 2016 | 17:25
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Wow!I love this story like seriously more grease to your elbow
12 Sep 2016 | 17:33
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what a nice story.tanks very much
12 Sep 2016 | 17:35
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I love this story. but the suspense was too much
12 Sep 2016 | 17:38
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what can i say, i jux love all part of it. Vames keep it up n i also pray for God's blessings upon ur life. T@nk you.
12 Sep 2016 | 17:39
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wow
12 Sep 2016 | 17:40
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I'm A ghost Reader Before But Upon stumbling On This Hilarious, Fascinating And Full Of Suspense Story, I Was Forced To Reg. I Love Your Creativity @Vic-vames
12 Sep 2016 | 17:42
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good job keep it up
12 Sep 2016 | 17:53
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Nice story . . Nice ending . . Infact I love this story . . Kudos to u
12 Sep 2016 | 18:05
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Wow. Nice story.
12 Sep 2016 | 18:14
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thumb up (5 star)
12 Sep 2016 | 18:24
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Nice story ....God bless u bro
12 Sep 2016 | 18:25
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Wow! Wow!! Wow!!! . Nice story
12 Sep 2016 | 18:32
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love you
12 Sep 2016 | 18:55
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best story of the year
12 Sep 2016 | 18:56
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Nice one, where is my wife @jummybabe!
12 Sep 2016 | 18:56
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9ice 1
12 Sep 2016 | 18:57
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woooow nice one there. u really are great. more grace
12 Sep 2016 | 18:58
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At long last da battle has ended. Very interesting story. Love every bit of dis story.
12 Sep 2016 | 19:09
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wao! wat ah lon....ng ride. more ink to ur pen bro. ND more knowledge to ur brain.
12 Sep 2016 | 19:10
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Nice story! Better than the rest. . Best of it's kind. Kudos Vic!
12 Sep 2016 | 19:26
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wow what an awesome and interesting story kudos to you vames
12 Sep 2016 | 19:34
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@Vict_vames before I go, I'll like to add to the uprising or the already existing criticism.... Though mine is just analytical criticism.... 1. The reason why I love following Audrey Timms stories is because of her mere literary creation of reality.... Her imagination do create a real world happenings to the sense of reader and that's why I rate her 'the best coolval writer of all time'... Your story,'The President daughter and me', though rightly called a fictional story does not appeal to the sense of real world experiences.... If love were to be that juicy, why would there be some guys who believes there's nothing like love... As juicy as you would like to paint love, do not let it escape your mind that Love is like a battle field and only the bravests scale through... I will just rate your story within the realm of imagination or fantasies not realities because your description of love only happens in stories like this.... Criticism though.... You did well taking us for such a long ride... Bravo :b
12 Sep 2016 | 19:45
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Nice nice story.... Thumbs up :g
12 Sep 2016 | 20:02
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I knw it's goin to have a happy endin are u the dangote off today man?
12 Sep 2016 | 21:03
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hmmmmm what else do I need to say than to give u a very gigantic kudos bro.... its really been a nice job ... more ink to ur pen, waiting for another superb story from u bro.
12 Sep 2016 | 21:10
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nice story with happy ending.
12 Sep 2016 | 21:36
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wow wow wow wow wow wow wow I was captivated by this story from the beginning to the end more everything to your everything :g
12 Sep 2016 | 22:08
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thump up to this story.
13 Sep 2016 | 00:51
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Finally.. i tou as much i just pry all these ur dream of bcoming d president inlaw come to pass
13 Sep 2016 | 02:07
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Nice story... perfect ending hmmm RIP mimi miss u so much
13 Sep 2016 | 02:09
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wow what a beautiful ending
13 Sep 2016 | 02:16
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OMG, what a very nice and interesting job. Keep it up cos d sky is not ur limit but ur starting point..
13 Sep 2016 | 02:48
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finally finally. ... this story is just wonderful
13 Sep 2016 | 02:59
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Happy ending
13 Sep 2016 | 04:04
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wow this story is so superlicious kikiki my prediction later come to pass nice story Vames u extremely well thanks for sharing
13 Sep 2016 | 05:01
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wow nice story
13 Sep 2016 | 05:22
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Wow,wow,wow,wow. This story is soooooooooooo, lemme reserve my comment. Nice one vict vames. More grease to your elbow
13 Sep 2016 | 05:28
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Am here o honeybee @Frank
13 Sep 2016 | 05:32
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Very nice story,,,,from season1 to season2 was a hit back to back
13 Sep 2016 | 05:42
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awesome story
13 Sep 2016 | 06:16
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Back in business..... the end
13 Sep 2016 | 07:06
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Wow,Wow,Wow.... So captivating. I love it. Keep it up Bro!
13 Sep 2016 | 08:05
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waooo nice story dear kudos to you dear
13 Sep 2016 | 08:42
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AWWW SO NICE STORY WITH A NICE ENDING KUDOS TO YOU VICTOR
13 Sep 2016 | 09:02
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Wooooo! Superb
13 Sep 2016 | 09:17
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Wow..nice happy ending..kudos to vames.
13 Sep 2016 | 09:34
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Wat a nice story, thumb up bro
13 Sep 2016 | 09:41
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Thumb up
13 Sep 2016 | 10:41
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Wow, Nice Ending To One Of, If Not The Most Interesting Story, I Have Ever Read, Kudos To You Mr Writer
13 Sep 2016 | 10:49
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Wow, I love dis, expecting more @Vict-Vames
13 Sep 2016 | 12:21
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at last u're through with dis our story of urs bt 2b sincere am nt happy abwt d way Mirabel's story ends---;g anyways kudos 2u bro n pls start another interesting one on tym #9c story bro kip it up
13 Sep 2016 | 13:40
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nice one thumb up to d writer
13 Sep 2016 | 14:39
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Cool story. Perfect ending
13 Sep 2016 | 15:50
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may God bless you @vames for this wonderful story
13 Sep 2016 | 15:56
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Thumb up Bro.... LOVE d story much
13 Sep 2016 | 16:00
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Oh oh oh oh!!!!!! T lyk d end shudnt come... Chai @vict-vames come continue abeg... Am happy u guys are back 2geda, wit promise. Happy 4 Nancy nd Vincent... And really glad about the reunion... Kudos bro... Expecting more from you...
13 Sep 2016 | 16:17
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It's such an big creativity, full of moral impacts in life and how to go about them... Congratulations!, you've create one of the most educated and intriguing write-up so far.
13 Sep 2016 | 16:50
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Nice one. Thumbs up bro More ink to your pen
13 Sep 2016 | 17:39
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CONGRATULATIONS SNR MAN
13 Sep 2016 | 17:40
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Wow so amazed by u vames nice one keep it up.....
13 Sep 2016 | 18:33
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Nawa o
13 Sep 2016 | 19:07
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Why? Maybe Promise Ȋ̝̊̅§ the real thing..... As I̶̲̥̅̊n̶̲̥̅̊ President child
13 Sep 2016 | 19:28
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[b]conductor, I don reach my bus stop... nice ride all the way from season one country to the last episode country.. my change oooo..... oga @vict-vames more ink to that wonderful pen[/b]
13 Sep 2016 | 19:50
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@kene didn't u read the last episode about promise?
13 Sep 2016 | 19:53
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ℓ̊ knew it....... Thank God your dreams came to pass. So shall mine come to pass IJN, Amen
13 Sep 2016 | 19:54
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Nice job broda @Vames,
13 Sep 2016 | 20:02
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A fine clap and a round of applause to you man. This is what I call A State Of The Art Masterpiece
13 Sep 2016 | 22:28
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Wow..Really Great..
14 Sep 2016 | 00:46
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Kukukukuku nice story all the way up. go to Facebook then you'll see your story has been copied a long way from the beginning.
14 Sep 2016 | 05:41
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@vict-vames, 9ce beginning and 9ce ending. kudos to you
14 Sep 2016 | 06:49
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What a nice write up..... So interesting
14 Sep 2016 | 10:34
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Wow,thumb up vict vames,nice 1
14 Sep 2016 | 10:44
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Wow wow wow I really enjoy this story story lyk seriously So interesting, fascinating, captivating and Educative Kudos to to you @vict-vames 😃😃😃😁
14 Sep 2016 | 14:44
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Waow! Finally Nice one dude!
14 Sep 2016 | 17:50
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What a nice write-up. Kudos @vict-vames
14 Sep 2016 | 18:14
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bro........! infact to be candid, you really did a great job in writing and posting this intresting nd touching story, more grease to your elbow.
14 Sep 2016 | 19:42
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Wow, lyk seriously so, promise is d real daughter nice story vict, kudos
15 Sep 2016 | 11:36
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Nice ending... Thumb up.
15 Sep 2016 | 17:31
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Woooow!! @Vict-vames Realy did a nice job with the story.. Happy ending too...
15 Sep 2016 | 17:58
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Thumbs_up too.. Kudos bro.. Expecting something new..
15 Sep 2016 | 17:59
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OMG! At last. what a reunion! so lovely keep it up vames!
15 Sep 2016 | 21:09
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wow am really speechless
16 Sep 2016 | 20:54
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One of the best story so far...
17 Sep 2016 | 04:39
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Kudos for the job well done bro
17 Sep 2016 | 04:41
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very intresting
17 Sep 2016 | 17:54
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And d final wisthle was blown so Promise nd d president daughter... Omo dis story is killing... Kudus to d Author/writter and bravo to we d readers...
17 Sep 2016 | 20:10
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I thought as much, the story is such an interesting one kudos to @Vict-Vame
18 Sep 2016 | 10:53
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bro u too much. nice story this one of the story so far
20 Sep 2016 | 02:12
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good job dear
20 Sep 2016 | 02:13
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Mirabel's memory still lives on, u wouldn't av become what u are today if not for her in ur life
20 Sep 2016 | 07:35
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Wow! Love dis story so much,mueh...kudos bro,more ink to ur pen
20 Sep 2016 | 15:40
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Thanks luv 4 d story,more grease 2 ur elbows
21 Sep 2016 | 02:41
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Nice one mahn keep it up
21 Sep 2016 | 05:53
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Well, Nancy is gonna help you guys spread the gospel about you two with her talky(ing) mouth.
22 Sep 2016 | 09:30
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Ogbeni Vicky, you better no let konji kill you o, you'd better sleep now
22 Sep 2016 | 12:09
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Even in the hospital. Well most guys like kissing sha, as it is healthy to do. Has a postive advantage though....
22 Sep 2016 | 12:25
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woow... five star bro 4 putting up diz kind of story... thumbs up...
22 Sep 2016 | 18:03
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I love this story, it interests me alot. Kudos to u Vict.Vames
23 Sep 2016 | 05:34
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I trust that her(Nancy) pa
23 Sep 2016 | 16:50
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waoooo....nyc one I really enjoyed it
24 Sep 2016 | 16:48
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This is a very nice story and am going to recomend it to all my friend,Kudos to you Vict-vames
26 Sep 2016 | 07:42
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I followed diz story for s1 epi1 to d end....best story,best ending...kudos bro
26 Sep 2016 | 22:45
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omo dis story is really touching
28 Sep 2016 | 08:39
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wow,this story is so interesting.
28 Sep 2016 | 12:03
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omo see gobe
28 Sep 2016 | 17:24
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wow mayb Princess is d president daughter..... Last episode, let's go dia
28 Sep 2016 | 17:50
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kudos to u guy... What a lovely ending kip it up
28 Sep 2016 | 18:11
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congratulations to U victor on this story line, believe me I.followed it to the last episode. Kudos to U my man but...... accept my coolval friend request na
29 Sep 2016 | 02:16
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I would have preferred it if Mirabel was the real president's daughter and still alive
29 Sep 2016 | 04:30
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Vict Vames the man! You're good! Great story.
29 Sep 2016 | 13:36
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Waooo, dis story make sence o. I love it.
30 Sep 2016 | 09:59
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Mehn... Broe U a genius God bless yu for this wonderful story.. More oil to ur lamp broe
1 Oct 2016 | 20:39
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Am happy to read this story.....thanks to you #VAMES
2 Oct 2016 | 12:17
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Kudos to you my guy..... u really tried.... interesting
3 Oct 2016 | 09:32
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y e b say ur wahala nr de finish
6 Oct 2016 | 20:13
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Wow wow wow wow wow.... Babe I love this story die, so interesting. More wisdom and knowledge of God.. #Kisses
7 Oct 2016 | 14:12
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I love the story cos its full of suspense and thats what i love in ready stories. Well, i believe Victor should just wait for another person to come by or better still, maybe Promise is only pulling his legs and not that she's married. Its just that she cant just give in like that. And also, maybe Promise and Mirabel are the ones mistakenly exchanged when given birth to.. Just maybe o...
12 Oct 2016 | 06:59
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I love this story o... How i wish i can see another one like this... Cos i have been reading and re-reading all days
12 Oct 2016 | 07:15
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nice story so sweet
17 Oct 2016 | 07:12
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micoseiaquarius @gmail.com
22 Oct 2016 | 05:27
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Lovely write up,,,,, really love dis story,,,but am soo sorry for mirabell what a lovely girl she is,,,nd am api for prezzy she is a wonderful girl
30 Oct 2016 | 19:58
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wow.....nice work bro. love loving it
3 Nov 2016 | 14:34
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Thanks y'all I appreciate
25 Nov 2016 | 10:28
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You're welc0me.
25 Nov 2016 | 10:30
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nice one
14 Dec 2016 | 07:23
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This is a nice story. kudos 2 d writer. Infact this is a Wow
15 Dec 2016 | 23:25
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what a nice story. I really enjoyed it
22 Dec 2016 | 17:51
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this story should be published, printed, and sold.
8 Jan 2017 | 00:19
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See Gobe this is what u get 4rm a friend whose overhead wif u
18 Jan 2017 | 12:17
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She is up to something, just lyk Iyanya nd Don Jazzy
18 Jan 2017 | 12:20
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Re u mad, why would you even think if drinking talk less of dancing with girls. I mean d video will go on YouTube
18 Jan 2017 | 12:20
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Nice story, all through it was thought provoking, intriguing, suspense filled, highly emotional, nd above a very bright story.
18 Jan 2017 | 12:57
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Wow! Wow!! Wow!!! I love this story so much. I'm sorry for just reading it now but I'm happy I did. @vict-vames this is a rare story. Some writer would have made it end with you marrying the President's daughter but you did something different with all your twists and turns. Kudos to the story and the author.
26 Feb 2017 | 05:41
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wow...heart dis story like crazy......kudos vict more ink 2 ya pen
26 Feb 2017 | 18:49
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wow.....1daful endin
26 Feb 2017 | 18:51
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nice one
3 Mar 2017 | 17:18
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Best story ever, thumbs up bro
6 Mar 2017 | 08:35
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@vict-vames you are destined to be the President's in-law. Congratulations! Though I was close to tears over Lola's and Mirabel's death and at the revelation that Mirabel is not related to the President. But destiny has a way of playing with us all. Nice story.
5 Apr 2017 | 13:20
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Yes, the story worth award winning, it an interesting one ,keep up the spirit,God bless you as you continue in ur write uos
14 Apr 2017 | 01:44
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Nice story, super cool, I love it.
7 May 2017 | 10:39
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please, help me out am new here, am clicking on the story but its only advert am seeing. Thanks
17 May 2017 | 02:07
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#9ice story so far Bruh
30 May 2017 | 20:14
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Nice story........
2 Jun 2017 | 19:49
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Hmmmmm. Ds is Wat I call Epic. Got me hook 4 a full day. Love how it ended. Nice one.
13 Jun 2017 | 19:03
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Waow. I love the story. it's very educative.
18 Jun 2017 | 01:32
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Wow. Just amazed how the President has released 100s of C. I. D.s and armies for the safety of his daughter. Then just imagine what God the Creator is doing for His children.
20 Jun 2017 | 01:35
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Am thinking the President's biological daughter would be Promise ooo.
20 Jun 2017 | 04:46
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Pls am new here how can i continue to read d president daughter i stopped at episode 21 but the person sending it to me is no longer sending it
25 Jul 2017 | 02:30
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Interesting story. Thumbs up
22 Aug 2017 | 23:12
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This is cool
19 Sep 2017 | 02:54
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Welldone bro
1 Oct 2017 | 01:58
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thumb up bro nice one keep it up reading it over and over again
5 Oct 2017 | 12:23
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nice one bro im just pickin sum lines to use. lol
10 Oct 2017 | 09:37
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weldon sir.
10 Oct 2017 | 09:46
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na lie
10 Oct 2017 | 16:56
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nice one bro na today i read am finish oh
11 Oct 2017 | 10:25
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congrats
26 Oct 2017 | 15:37
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You did well but what about macus?
6 Dec 2017 | 10:44
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nice episode,not easy to date a first class girl
15 Dec 2017 | 01:21
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very nice story God bless the writer
15 Dec 2017 | 06:39
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Gud wrk eno Easy... God bles
16 Dec 2017 | 18:33
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Hmmm
26 Dec 2017 | 20:35
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breathtaking worth the wait tho
11 Jan 2018 | 23:15
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wow tines changing
22 Jan 2018 | 05:55
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mahn you the best
22 Jan 2018 | 07:19
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This is an awesome story. Thumps up my man.
24 Jan 2018 | 00:11
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I don't think he mean what he just sent to Victor maybe he is looking for another way
4 Mar 2018 | 00:44
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What a happy ending...good job sir.
6 Apr 2018 | 02:58
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Whaj A Touching And Emotional Story Well Done
16 Apr 2018 | 03:14
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Most intresting story ever
20 Apr 2018 | 16:00
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Nice write up vames
14 May 2018 | 02:44
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Good My Manny.... Ride On
25 Jul 2018 | 10:10
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Omg! :yes:
26 Jul 2018 | 13:21
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Happy birth day
20 Sep 2018 | 02:20
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Very very carefull
25 Oct 2018 | 02:27
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Wow...dix story is gr8 even though dix is my 1st time on dix site...#kudos 2 u bro..more ink to ur #pen
14 Dec 2018 | 18:56
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Bro, u really try. The story was interesting
5 Jan 2019 | 21:58
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NICE
10 Jan 2019 | 21:55
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Is all the handwork of lola.....
13 Jan 2019 | 01:28
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Wow.... I love it
13 Jan 2019 | 01:33
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Mirabel shldnt av acted dah way
14 Jan 2019 | 01:55
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I agree with u oo chaii upon all dis.......
14 Jan 2019 | 04:03
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Chaii i love this at last u made it.....
14 Jan 2019 | 04:15
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mhen...this story is a blast! love every single bit of it
23 Jan 2019 | 12:04
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Wow 9ice
12 Apr 2019 | 11:32
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Cool Nice Story
23 May 2019 | 11:02
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Happy birthday....
14 Sep 2019 | 03:00
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Why give him a second chance ,
14 Sep 2019 | 03:15
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The devil so closer
15 Sep 2019 | 11:15
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Chai Fred why nah
17 Sep 2019 | 02:44
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Lol u still b presido inlaw
25 Feb 2020 | 17:36
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Wow. Best story so far
12 Apr 2020 | 13:56
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Try to b sincere with ur love to avoid more problem
14 May 2020 | 09:20
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Nice story. I wish i have joined u guys early
29 May 2020 | 15:22
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If not the best or one of the best stories on Coolval,my rating is 10/10
30 May 2020 | 20:02
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Better not use that condom
3 Jul 2021 | 20:06
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Tell her you're not interested.
4 Jul 2021 | 06:50
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Come on, am I the only one seeing this as a taboo?
5 Jul 2021 | 12:16
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But in the story u said mirabel looks like the first lady how is that possible
10 Sep 2021 | 14:58
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