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Vanity of life (poem by flames)

Vanity of life (poem by flames)

By Cool in 23 Jan 2015 | 18:23
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As I looked up to the sky everywhere was dark So dark that I cannot see the sky The sky seemed to be co'er'd with thick cloud So thick that everywhere was dark
But as I leaned on the wall for support in the dark so that I can get out from the dark I felt someone there with me.
I went over to the person whom I felt on the wall He seemed to be the person that I saw the previous day The person I mourned his death.
The man I saw made the memory come anew This made me try to cry But the man came o'er to console me telling me that I cannot cry for I was in the land of the dead.
Then it alerted my my memory that I am dead and that am in the land of the dead Inside the tunnel of the dead.
'My brother',he said to me Yesterday you mourned for me but today you are here with me come let us stay and enjoy.
I thought of my properties,wife and children also including my wealth I mourned for the days of my unfulfilled life but the man came to me and told me, that life is vanity

Written in d memory of my late uncle. Et animea ominium fidelorum defunctorum,et misericordia dei requiescat in pace. Amen
23 Jan 2015 | 18:23
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Its a very lovely write up.... It makes me think of my long lost 4rnd... A brother 4rm anoda mother... Thinking of him makes me wonder aw cruel wrld could be.... More 4rm u Flames....
1 Feb 2015 | 04:14
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....yeah..its true comments (reasonable ones @ dat) encourage ppl 2 do more... I guess datz what is making me think b4 sending my oda poems 2 val.... But den... Dere is no need 2 be discouraged....
8 Feb 2015 | 18:27
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hmmn reminds me of my late mom. kinda scary 1. nyc
14 Feb 2015 | 01:36
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