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**WOULD YOU CHANGE**

**WOULD YOU CHANGE**

By Tommie1704 in 17 Sep 2016 | 07:39
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[b]I really want to apologize for not posting it yesterday please guys pardon me, am sorry.



Even though they're not good enough, I hastely compose it, pls u guys should manage it, I know it's not a sweet piece.
1. WOULD YOU CHANGE???
Would you change anything in your life,
Past present or history,
Would you make a different choice,
On who you chose to see,
Would you change your childhood dream,
One little change,
Could put you,
Where you don't want to be,
I've made my choices,
Good or bad,
Sometimes it's a choice,
I felt I had to have,
If I changed something,
I might not be here today,
God gave me obstacles,
As I fought,
Or tried,
And I continue my days,
Nobody made my choices,
But I did have some help,
To change where I am today,
I don't believe I would want it any other way,
I've lost some good friends,
And family too,
But I pray every night to god,
And he does help me through,
I believed,
Hoped,
And have faith,
That someday god would rein upon me,
I have a good husband,
My kids,
Best friends,
And happy as I can be,
I have a good family,
Would I change,
For any different,
I have a friends,
Family,
And a good life,
As god allow me,
Another day I live,
To take a breath,
Enjoy your past present and future,
Remember what we've had,
And still to this day,
You never know what can happen,
If you would decide to make a change.
2.COOLVAL CITY (home away from home)
In the start so much seems to be Okay
Thought everything will finely
Grew to be fine
But things weren't as thought, Okay
With my thin voice I tried to redesign my teary world
Make sure it's grew Okay
But my voice only echoed back to me in my own crying tunes.
My own heart before me.
Yes, I saw it melted before my selfless self as it wasn't what I thought Okay
It did flicked me out thousand times at the realisation that it wasn't Okay
I want to make it Okay
But you never gave me chance to redeem my lost world.
All in all,
I thought it was just mere dreams
Perhaps when I wake up from my slumber all will be dead gone.
Gone!
I thought, but hell No!
That was just mere thinking.
As it wasn't really Okay
Wondering why you kicked my defenceless self out deserted.
With me now rooming streets in a cloud of my own sorry life!
Now instead of love, thorns of hatred became my companion
No-one seems to be of help.
Trying to reconnect my life back to something resembling normal
But network coverage seems to be failing me instead.
Now my calls couldn't be heard anymore
My SMS ends on voice mails
All now seems in limbo.
Surprised was understatement;
But the reality was much a blunder.
Tearing me part by part
Mercilessly I cried in my own thundering voice
Yet no-one to console me.
I was left un-heard in a cold forest of my own crying voice
Wailing in self pity .
But then
How could that be?
When my voice sound real
I couldn't fathom nor did I understand either.
Perhaps I need a walk
Miles away from not Okay
To the only place
Where my voice could be heard
And there, I could make it Okay
But that would happen
Only in one CITY
Where smiles never size fire
Home where things seems never to stop being Okay
And guess!
Where.?.
coolval22.com city
The only home away from home
Where love flows till thy-kingdom-come.
Yes till eternity.
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17 Sep 2016 | 07:39
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So nice.
17 Sep 2016 | 07:43
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Nice piece
17 Sep 2016 | 07:46
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nice
17 Sep 2016 | 08:43
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@froshberry-2 seriously you get craze for head. You just dry change name and pic.
17 Sep 2016 | 11:41
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You get :mail: shiko for brain to dey check the woman for the dp..or do you want her? @john451
17 Sep 2016 | 12:00
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Hahaha @Froshberry when did you turn to woman??
17 Sep 2016 | 12:05
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Today noni! @tomilayoadebukola
17 Sep 2016 | 12:24
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Nice
17 Sep 2016 | 13:02
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@froshberry-2 kukukukuku me get Shiro for head if I catch you ehn in fact kneel down where you are.
17 Sep 2016 | 14:26
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@john451 :mail: Kneel down ko! Down kneel ni!
17 Sep 2016 | 15:14
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nice
18 Sep 2016 | 07:18
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nice
18 Sep 2016 | 07:51
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Nice
18 Sep 2016 | 09:17
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nice one.. @froshberry-2 u don high! :yes: b4 na Singh nw na anonymous... o gbadun fa
18 Sep 2016 | 10:12
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Ummm... Nice one
18 Sep 2016 | 10:27
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@idrowest n @Samnolimit where have you guys been?
18 Sep 2016 | 11:00
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Wao oooo..... so impresive
18 Sep 2016 | 16:41
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great
18 Sep 2016 | 17:43
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